Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 130 ~ The Purpose​

Ab tak...

*Ring*

Uske phone par ek notification aaya.

'Hmm?'

Screen on kar jaise hi usne message dekha uske raungte khade ho gaye.

Ek Message tha.

Jisme bas teen shabd hi likhe the.

"It has begun!"

Ab aage...

"Subah ki daud ke liye jaa rahe ho?"

Awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo muskura kar hall me baithi akhbaar padh rahi thi. Aur awaaz kendrit thi Veer ki orr jo apna tracksuit pehne upar apne kamre se neeche aa raha tha.

Veer : Itni jaldi uth gayi aap? Subah ke 6 baj rahe hai.

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein jaldi hi uthati hu beta. Toh? Jogging?

Veer : Jogging bhi aur kasrat bhi.

Bhavna dhyaan se apne bete ko dekhti rahi. Kese tracksuit uske gatheele jism se kass ke chipka hua tha.

Bhavna : Tumne gym kiya hai?

Veer : !!? Nahi toh! Kyu?

Bhavna : Toh aisi fitness?

Veer (smiles) : Aapko pasand nahi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Ye sawaal apni girlfriend se karna.

Veer (shrugs) : I don't have one.

Bhavna : Jese ki mein vishvaas karungi.

Veer : I really don't-

Bhavna : Mujhse kya chhipaana? Bata do! Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Nahi! Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. I really don't have-

Bhavna (sighs) : Aaj kal ke bacche! Pata nahi itna sharmaate kyu hai apne parents se baate share karne me.

Veer : No wait-

Bhavna : Theek hai! Jab sahi lage tab bata dena.

Veer ne ek aah bhari aur sarr hila ke woh baahar ko jaane laga. Toh,

Bhavna : Veer!

Veer (turns back) : Hmm?

Bhavna (frowns) : Ek zaroori baat karni hai. Tum hoke aao. Fir saath me baithate hai.

Veer : Alright.

Aur woh baahar nikal gaya.

***

Ek bohut bada toofaan aane waala tha. Aur uska sanket usse uss message ke zariye mil chuka tha.

"IT HAS BEGUN!"

Uss anjaan aadmi ka message jisne Veer ki neend haraam kar ke rakhi hui thi. Crimson Festival shuru ho chuka tha ye bataane ke liye woh message tha. Dusre shabdo me, woh aadmi ye bhi batlaana chaah raha tha ki Veer ki maut ka countdown bhi shuru ho chuka hai.

Aur Veer ek pal bhi barbaad nahi jaane de sakta tha. Apni maa aur unke ateet ka itna bada raaz jaan'ne ke baad ye masla woh suljha chuka tha. Ab samay tha aage aane waali musibat ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne ka. Aur yahi woh kar raha tha.

Subah ka uska routine hi exercise se shuru hota. Na sirf woh running karta balki Intermediate Martial Arts ko perfect karna bhi uska maqsad rehta.

Kyuki jitni jaldi ye perfect hogi utni hi jald woh Advanced Martial Arts khareed payega. Aur woh ye baat jaanta tha ki iss anjaan bande se ladne ke liye sirf Intermediate Martial Arts se kuch nahi hone waala tha.

Din me kabhi woh Balhaar ke aadmiyo ke sang fight leta. Jaha woh khud akela rehta aur saamne 10 se 15 log. Aur dheere dheere woh numbers ko badhaane laga.

Abhi woh park me baithe ek break le hi raha tha jab usse dhyaan aaya ki usne iss scroll ka use aaj tak nahi kiya.

'Pari!'

[Yes Master!]

'Profit Path humne aaj tak use nahi kiya. Hai na?'

[Yes!]

'Toh use karo.'

[It will take 100 Fame Points Master.]

'What? Scroll khareedne ke liye hi kitne points waste karne padte hai. Aur tum keh rahi ho ki ab ussi scroll ko use karne ke liye mujhe aur fame points spend karne padenge?'

[Yes! Par sirf iss scroll ke liye master. Aapko Mystic Touch ke liye toh kabhi bhi kuch spend nahi karna pada na?]

'Yeah! Lekin woh apne aap hi activate hota hai.'

[Kya aap chaahte hai woh harr samay on rahe?]

'Nahi! Fir toh woh samasya ban jayega Pari.'

[Hmm! Isliye ye wala scroll thoda special hai. Aap points use kariye. Aur khud dekhiye.]

'Alright do it then!'

*Ding*

[100 Fame Points have been used in Profit Path.]

*Ding*

Aur agle hi pal Veer ke mann me saamne ek window khul gayi. Veer usse padh ek soch me pad gaya.



'This is-'

[Yahi hai Profit Path Master. Usne Path de diya hai. Usse samajhna aur execute karna aapke upar hai.]

Path ko dekhte hi Veer muskuraaya.

'Awesome! This is awesome! Halaki isme se bohut kuch mene pehle hi soch liya tha. Lekin Perfumes, Farmers, Land aur supply. These are good ideas. I got it. Too good! Toh ye kaam karta hai Profit Path.'

[Yes! Ek aur note master.]

'What is it?'

[Jab tak aap isse execute nahi karte. Aap dusra path nahi draw kar sakte.]

'Ohh!'

[So do execute it please. Kyuki humare paas bilkul time nahi hai Master. Unknown person kabhi bhi kahi se bhi attack kar sakta hai. Mein kehna nahi chaahti. But we are weak.]

'I know!'

[Aur ek baat-]

'Say!'

[Master! We have to move smartly. Sabse pehla sawaal. Uss insaan ka maqsad kya hai? What is his purpose?]

'Purpose huh!'

[Yes! Kya humne usse kisi tarah se provoke kiya hai?]

'Honestly Pari, mujhe waqai nahi pata. Only guess I can make is somehow I may have provoked him by exposing house of the killers. Par kya woh house of the killers se related tha? Kya isliye badle me woh mujhe maarna chaahta hai kyuki mene house of the killers ke bade criminals ka safaaya kar diya?'

[Agar aisa hai toh fir usne aapko uss time maara kyu nahi? Woh asaani se maar sakta tha. We were surrounded. Kya Suhana ko nuksaan bhi ussi ne pohuchaaya tha? We must know every detail.]

'Yahi samajh nahi aa raha Pari. Isliye mein Aatish ya Slogan ke matter se bhi zyada anxious hu. Woh dono mere peeche kyu pade the mein jaanta tha. Par yaha- I have no clue at all. Upar se uske paas bhi system hai.'

[And a stronger one at that.]

'Right!'

[Isliye Master. We have to get strong as soon as possible.]

'Yeah! Anyways, let's go! Maa ko kuch baat karni thi.'

Ghar lautate hi Veer Bhavna ke kamre me gaya.

Jo ki asal me Ragini ka kamra tha jo usne Bhavna ko de diya tha.

'Shayad ab naya ghar lena hi padega.'

*Knock* *Knock*

Darwaaze khat-khataate hi andar se awaaz aayi,

"Aa jao Veer!" Woh ye sunn andar daakhil hua.

Veer : Aapko pata tha mein hu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Aur kaun ho sakta tha?

Veer : Ghar me itne log hai. Koi bhi ho sakta tha.

Bhavna (smiles) : Ragini toh so rahi hogi. Tumhari sauteli maa 7:30 baje ke aas paas uthi thi kal. Toh aaj bhi shayad utne hi samay uthengi!?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Aabha jaldi uthati hai. Aur woh nahane dhone me lag jaati hai. Sonali so rahi hogi. Rahi baat Suman ki toh woh zaroor uth ke naha dho ke ghar ke kaamo me lag gayi hogi.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Tej ki subah ki aadat mein jaanti hu. Aur Bhumika kal hotel ke liye 8 baje uthi thi. Shayad wahi uska time hai? Bache tum! Jis se mene kaha tha kuch derr pehle ki mujhse baat karne aana. Toh? Kya lagta hai? Aur kaun ho sakta hai?

Woh muskuraayi.

Veer : Spot on.

Bhavna (smiles) : Idhar aao. Mere paas baitho.

Usne hatheli se apne bagal ki jagah ko thap-thapa kar usse bulaaya. Veer chup chaap aake apni maa ke bagal se virajmaan ho gaya.

Bhavna : Tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai. Shayad ek nahi. Ek se zyada hongi.

Veer : Kahiye!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kaisi chal rahi hai tumhari college life?

Veer : Huh? Ye puchna tha?

Bhavna : Mm-Hmm!

Veer : Mujhe nahi pata.

Bhavna : Kya matlab?

Veer : Matlab ye ki mein sirf exams dene jaata hu.

Bhavna : Aur baaki ka tumhari Nidhi ma'am sambhaal leti hai.

Veer : Yeah! Ehhh!?? Wait- I mean- I mean aapko kese? Ohh! Teju dii! Yeah! Wo- Wo meri attendance dekh leti hai. Mere sessionals ka dhyaan rakh leti hai.

Bhavna : Mujhe milna hoga unse jald hi.

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Unhe thank you kehne aur kis liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Bhavna : Aur baaki time kya karte ho?

Veer : Bhabhi ne bataya nahi aapko? Food truck shuru kiya hai mene. Sonali aur workers sambhaalte hai.

Bhavna : Bataya tha. Par tumhare muh se sunn'na tha. Jab woh sab sambhaalti hai toh tum kya karte ho?

Veer : I look for other business opportunities.

Nazre ferr Veer ne jawaab diya.

Bhavna : Sach?

Veer : H-Haan!

Bhavna : Kitna paisa kama rahe ho beta?

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna : Kya nahi puch sakti?

Veer : Itna samajhiye ki abhi laakho me kama raha hu.

Bhavna : Itna paisa sirf food truck se?

Veer : Nahi! Shares khareede hai kuch. Companies me invest karna shuru kiya hai.

Bhavna : Inn sab me madad toh kii hogi kisi ne.

Veer : Hmm!

Bhavna : Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Aapko kyu jaan'na hai?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke shubh-chintak hai. Jaan'na toh hoga hi na?

Veer : Hai kuch log. Badi family se hai. Kaafi badi. Luckily hum familiar hai ek dusre se. Aur ek dusre ki madad karte rehte hai.

Bhavna : Tumhara uddeshya kya hai?

Veer : Huh?

Bhavna : Tumhare jeevan ka uddeshya!? Purpose!? Aim!?

Veer ki haalat abhi aisi thi jese kisi pareeksha me baithe vidyaarthi ke paper me syllabus ke baahar ka prashn aa gaya ho.

Thodi hi derr pehle woh Pari se anjaan aadmi ke purpose ko lekar baat kar raha tha.

Par uska khud ka purpose kya tha? Uski zindagi ka lakshya? Veer ke mann me ek uttar aaya. Par iske pehle ki woh jawaab de paata, Bhavna ne apni baat rakh uski bolti hi band kar dii.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana? Aur adhik paisa kamaana? Fir aur adhik? Acchi patni paana? Sundar baal bacche hona? Naya ghar, nayi gaadi, samaaj me izzat? Yahi sab?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Bolo? Yahi sab na?

Veer : Haan! Bilkul! Toh kya ye galat hai? Harr aadmi toh inhe hi paana chaahta hai na? Fir jeevan ke uddeshya ka matlab hi kya? Paisa hoga toh aap aaj ke sansaar me jee paoge. Acchi patni hogi toh ghar baar ko acche se sambhaal payegi. Baal bacche honge toh aage ki peedhi ko badhayenge. Iske alaawa aur kya uddeshya hai jeevan ka?

Bhavna apne bete ki thodi tezz awaaz sunn haule se muskuraayi aur kuch shan tak bas usse dekhti rahi.

Veer : Boliye!?

Usne nazre neeche kar ahista se fir bolna shuru kiya,

Bhavna : Mujhe ek baat batao Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Sansaar me abaadi kitni hogi abhi?

Veer : Around 8 billion!?

Bhavna : Mujhe batao ki lagbhag harr insaan inhi 5-6 cheezo ke peeche kyu bhaag raha hai? Padhayi! Paisa! Shaadi! Bacche! Ghoomna firna! Khaana peena!?

Veer : Aap aise keh rahi ho jese ye sab galat hai.

Bhavna : Mene toh kaha hi nahi Veer ki ye galat hai.

Veer : Toh fir ye sawaal kyu?

Bhavna : Tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi lagta?

Veer : Ajeeb kya?

Bhavna : Ki duniya ka lagbhag harr insaan bas inn 4-5 chuninda cheezo ke peeche hi bhaag raha hai? Kuch samajh aaya?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Kyuki samaaj ne insaano ko aaj wesa banaaya hua hai Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Acchi shiksha nahi hogi toh naukri nahi milegi. Naukri nahi hogi toh shaadi nahi. Shaadi nahi toh fir bacche nahi. Fir kya ghoomna firrna aur kya khaana peena. Zindagi khokli ho jayegi. Yahi na?

Veer : I-

Bhavna : Kabhi iss nazariye se nahi dekha ki yahi samaaj hume majboor karta jaa raha hai. Ek sa raasta apnaane ke liye hume dhakel raha hai.

Veer : Toh aap kya chaahti hai?

Bhavna : Mein chaahti hu ki tum apna lakshya dhundho mere bacche. Tum duniya me aaye ho. Kya sirf yahi karne? Jin baato ko mene ginaaya!?

Maa ki baat ka bodh hote hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Ek ek shabd sach tha. Usne ab tak iss nazariye se kyu nahi dekha tha? Kya waqai sirf yahi zindagi hai?

Veer : I see! Samajh gaya. Aap chaahti hai ki mein apne jeevan ka uddeshya dhundhu? Toh mein usse dhundhunga. Aur woh paisa kamaane se alag hoga.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana buri baat nahi hai Veer. Kamao! Khoob kamao! Par ek lakshya hona zaroori hai.

Veer : Aapka lakshya kya hai?

Bhavna : Mera lakshya? Woh mitt gaya. Ab jo bache kuche uddeshya hai woh hai ek maa ki zimmedari nibhaana. Aur itihaas ke panno ki sachhaayi jaan'na.

Veer : Excavation and Research...!?

Bhavna : Hmm! Ab ek akhiri sawaal. Tum kaun ho?

Veer : What?

Bhavna : Kaun ho tum?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna : Agar ye kehne jaa rahe ho ki mere aur Brijesh ki santaan ho, naam Veer hai, iss iss parivaar se ho toh abhi theher jao Veer. Mein apne bete se better expect karti hu. Toh ab batao. Kaun ho tum?

Veer shaant reh gaya.

Bhavna (smiles) : Tum nahi bata sakte.

Woh sahi thi. Veer ke muh se kuch na nikla. System ke baare me woh bata nahi sakta tha. Aur ye bhi nahi keh sakta tha ki woh Bhavna ka beta hai. Toh kaun tha Veer? Uske muh par jese taala lag gaya. Itna asahaay usne apne aap ko kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha. Woh apni hi pehchaan nahi bata paa raha tha?

Bhavna : Tumhe pata hai tum kyu iska jawaab nahi de paa rahe?

Veer : N-No I don't-

Bhavna : Kyuki tumhe tumhara uddeshya hi nahi pata beta. Jis din tum ye pata laga loge ki tumhara uddeshya kya hai. Tum ye bhi pata loge ki tum kaun ho.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Subah subah inn baato se tumhare dil ko chot pohuchaane ke liye maaf karna mujhe. Par mujhe yahi samay mila akele me tumse baat karne ke liye.

Veer : N-Nahi! Sorry kehne ki aapko zaroorat nahi. Aap sahi ho. I guess I never got time to think about this.

Bhavna (smiles) : You have time now!

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Bhavna : And me too!

Veer ko apne gaal pe ek narm hatheli mehsoos hui.

'Huhhh!!?'

Veer : Th-Thank you!

Aur uski aankhein namm ho gayi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Jab bhi lage ki koi uljhan hai. Toh bin soche samjhe aa jaana. Mein yahi milungi.

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Woh utha aur baahar jaane ko hua toh ek baar fir Bhavna ne usse pukaarte hue roka,

Bhavna : Ek antim baat yaad rakhna Veer!

Veer : !!

Bhavna : Tumhe paisa banaana hai mere bacche. Paisa tumhe banaaye, aisa na bann jaana.

Veer : Mein yaad rakhunga. Maa!

Bol woh nikal gaya.

***

Raat hui aur kal ki tarah jo nahi hona chahiye tha wahi hua. Tej aur Bhumika ki maun ladaayi.

Hotel se aane ke baad, Bhumika Tej se jab pehli baar mili toh aisa laga jese ye ladki usse abhi jaan se maar degi.

Woh usse ghoorti rahi. Par baato ke maamle me dono ke muh se ek chu tak nahi nikla. Aur ye ghar ke baaki sadasyo ko duwidha me daale hue tha.

Jese tese dinner ke baad sab apne apne kamre me pohuche.

Veer apne kamre ko vyavasthit karne me laga tha jab Tej achanak se uske kamre me aa gayi.

Tej : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Tej (smiles) : Hum saath me hi so rahe hai na?

Veer : Huh?

Tej : T-Tum mere saath nahi sona chaahte?

Veer : Umm! Nahi! Baat wo nahi hai-

Tej : Toh?

Veer : Alright! Aaiye!

Tej muskura ke waapas palti aur bhaagti hui apna kuch zaroori samaan lene chali gayi. Uske poore gaal laal ho rakhe the. Itni himmat karke usne ye pucha tha. Directly baat karna asaan dikhta tha. Par tha nahi. Jo sharm-o-hayaa wo mehsoos kar rahi thi ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Idhar Veer uske jaane se confused reh gaya. Tejal dii aa rahi thi ya nahi? Bhaag kyu gayi? Kya unhe ab nahi sona?

Wahi Shweta apne kamre me apni beti Bhumika ko jhatke pe jhatke dene me lagi hui thi.

Shweta : Ye lo!!! Jao ab jaldi se!

Usne Bhumika ke haatho me uska takiya pakdaate hue kaha.

Bhumika : W-What? Mom?

Wo bechaari asmanjas me reh gayi. Ye uski maa ko achanak se aaj ho kya gaya tha?

Shweta : Aise muh faad ke mat dekho mujhe. Jao jaldi! Kya tumhe apne bhai ke saath nahi sona? Sharm aati hai?

Bhumika : Mom! A-Aapko ye kya ho gaya hai? Achanak se aap-

Shweta : Chup kar! Wo Tejal apne bhai ke saath chipakne me lagi hui hai. Agar tumne ab pahal nahi kari na toh woh Veer ko apni mutthi me kar legi. Chalo ab jaldi! Tum bhi uski behan ho. Unke beech jao! Wese hi tumhari baat Veer se naa ke barabar hi hoti hai. Apne gile shikwe dur karo. Yahi sahi mauka hai. Jao!

Bhumika : M-Mom par-

Par Shweta kaha maan'ne waali thi? Usne Bhumika ko peeth par dhakka deke apne kamre se baahar nikaal diya.

Shweta (smiles) : Good Luck! Khoob chipak ke sona!

Bhumika : E-Ehhhh? Wh-What? Mom?? Mom wait-

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza peeche se band ho gaya.

Bhumika bechain hoti hui Veer ke kamre ke paas pohuchi. Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par aa kar wo khadi Veer ko dekhi jo apne bistar par saaf bedsheet bichhaane me laga hua tha.

Bhumika : V-Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Palat ke Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki uski wo behan uske saamne thi jisne kabhi usse pehchaan'ne se hi mana kar diya tha.

Veer : Ohh!? Aap yaha? Ghar me hi kahi raasta to nahi bhatak gayi?

Bhumika : Mein- woh...!

Sharmindagi se Bhumika ne apna sarr jhuka liya. Veer waapas se bedsheet vyavasthit karne me lag gaya.

Veer : Unless you have some matter, you wouldn't be here, right?

Uski baat sunn woh apne takiye ko kass ke apne seene me daba lii.

Yahi wo pal hote the jinse Bhumika hamesha dur rehna prefer karti thi. Kyuki wo glaani ke bhaar ko sambhaalne me behad hi kacchi thi. Ek naazuk eet ki tarah thi woh jispar glaani ki poori imaarat dabaav daale hue thi.

Na jaane... Kab toot ke bikhar jaaye.

Shayad Veer se zyada baat na hona hi ek kaaran tha jo ab tak usse tootne se bachaaye hue tha.

Uski aankhein apne aap dhundhli ho chali.

Bhumika : M-Mein kuch kehna chaahti hu.

Veer : Hmm?

Bhumika : M-Mera iraada kabhi bhi tumhare dil ko thes pohuchana nahi tha Veer. Meri baato ka... I... I know tum meri baat ka vishvaas nahi karoge. Jo kuch bhi mene kiya. Wo jaan boojh ke nahi kiya tha. Aur agar majboori me bhi tha. Toh- Toh uski zimmedar hamesha mein khud hi rahungi.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Tumne jo kuch bhi mere aur Mom ke liye kiya uske liye 'thank you' shabd bhi ab mazaak jesa lagta hai. Koi bhi insaan itna hone ke baad aisa nahi kar sakta jo tumne kiya hai. And I acknowledge it.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : But apart from regret, I don't know what to do. Sh-Shayad... Yahi meri destiny hai? Jeevan bhar repent karna. Ehsaas karte rehna ki kitni zyaadti ki hai hum maa beti ne tumhare upar. Aur-

Veer : Come in!

Bhumika : Huh!???

Achanak Veer ke shabd sunn, Bhumika bhauchakki reh gayi. Uska badan hil gaya.

Veer apni peeth uski orr kiye tha toh uske chehre par iss waqt kya haav bhaav the ye woh dekh na saki.

Veer (turns) : I said come in!

Bhumika ne ek gehri lambi saans lii. Dil uska zorro se dhadak raha tha. Kya uska bhai gusse me tha? Kya woh kuch usse sunaane waala tha? Aise tamaam vichaar uske mann me ek shan me aake guzar gaye.

Ghabrahat ko saath liye woh aage badhi. Ye soch ke ki Veer jo kuch bhi karega woh uska virodh nahi karegi. Kyuki galti hamesha se uski hi rahi hai.

Par Veer ne aisa kuch bhi na kiya,

Veer : Now say! Kyu aayi ho aap yaha?

Sawaal sunn Bhumika ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Woh jo soch rahi thi wesa kuch bhi nahi tha.

Bhumika : Mein-

Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm!

Bhumika : C-Can-

Veer : Yeah!?

Bhumika (blushes) : C-Can I sleep with you?

Usne tapaak se bol diya. Par fauran hi waapas se niraasha uske chehre par jhalki,

Bhumika : N-No! Forget what I just said. Mein... Mein chalti hu.

Mudke ek qadam hi aage badhaya tha ki,

Veer : Wait!

Bhumika (turns) : ??

Veer : Aaj achanak se kyu aapko mere saath sona hai?

Kaash koi bil hota, jisme Bhumika apna sarr de paati. Jo hayaa woh abhi mehsoos kar rahi thi woh aseem thi.

Bhumika : W-Woh... Woh Ragini bhabhi ne apna room tumhari mom ko diya hai. Aur Suman aunty meri mom ke kamre me soyengi unke saath. Toh isliye shayad unhone mujhe yaha-

Ye Bhumika ka logic tha. Par asal baat toh kuch aur hi thi.

Veer ka khayaal turant hi iss ghatna ko anjaam dene waali mahila par gaya.

'I knew it. It was her indeed!'

Shweta!!!

Bhumika : I'm- I'm sorry! Mein chalti hu.

Veer : Aap so sakti ho.

Bhumika : Huhhh!!!???

Veer : Mene kaha aap so sakti ho.

Usne nazre ferrte hue jawaab diya. Pehle wo mana karne wala tha par uski Teju dii bina koi confirmation diye bhaag gayi thi toh mana karne ka koi reason hi nahi tha Veer ke paas.

Veer ki qismat aksar uske mazze liya karti thi. Aaj bhi wahi hua. Yaha usne Bhumika ko manzoori dii aur waha se Tej apna zaroori samaan haatho me liye daudti hui uske kamre me aa dhamki.

Tej : Aa gayi mein... Hmm!!!??

Ab manzar kuch aisa tha ki teeno ek dusre ko hairaani me dekh rahe the.

*Silence*

'Shit!!!'

Jab se Bhumika aur Tej aapas me mili thi. Tab se hi dono ke beech ek adrishya takraav janm le chuka tha. Tej ne Bhumika ke saath wesa bartaav toh nahi kiya jesa usne Shweta ke sang kiya tha par dono me dosti bhi nahi thi. Nazro se nazre hi takraati thi bas aur ek khamoshi fel jaati thi.

Tej (frowns) : Why is she here?

Kamaal ki baat ye thi ki Bhumika Tej se umr me badi thi. Uske baad bhi Tej kahi se bhi kamzor prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Ulta woh Bhumika par haavi hi nazar aati thi.

Veer : Mujhe laga aap chali gayi. Aur inhe bhi mere saath sona tha toh-

Tej (suprised) : Aur tumne haan keh diya?

Veer : Why won't I?

Tej : That-

Woh maun reh gayi. Haan keh diya toh usme kya? Tej ye baat bhul rahi thi ki Bhumika Veer ke sang kayi mahino se reh rahi thi. Wahi usse toh abhi kuch hi din hue the apne bhai ke aas paas rehte hue.

Tej (smiles) : Theek hai! Toh mein beech me soungi.

Woh muskuraayi. Jo asal me ek muskuraahat nahi thi. Tarqeeb lagayi thi usne. Zaahir hai aisa karne se Veer fir Bhumika ke bagal se nahi so payega.

Bhumika : N-No! V-Veer ko beech me sona chahiye.

Veer : Of course I will. Warna na jaane kya hoyega aap dono ke beech.

Tej : You-!!!!

Be-mann se Tej Veer ke daayi orr laiti toh wahi Bhumika uske baayi orr. Ek ajeeb sa sannaata chhaaya hua tha. Kamra awkwardness se bhar gaya.

Dono behno ke bagal se laite Veer unke badan ki mehak ko soongh paa raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar lii.

Tej apni chot ka bahaana kar Veer ki taraf mudi aur uske seene par apna haath rakh dii. Kitni mazboot chhaathi thi. Usse mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh pal yaad aaya jab usne pehli baar Veer ko bina shirt ke dekha tha. Fir woh pal jab Shyaam ke ghar me woh washroom se nikla tha.

'Kya abhi bhi wahi khusbhu-!?'

Mann me ek vichaar aaya uske. Aage badh usne Veer ki gardan ke sameep apna chehra kiya aur,

*sniff*

'Ahhh!!!'

Ye wahi khushbu thi. Tej ko na jaane andar se kya hua par uski pakad Veer ki chaathi par mazboot ho gayi.

Usne apni ek taang utha ke Veer ki tango par chadhaayi. Aur chipke chipke wo uss khushboo ko punaah sunghne me lag gayi.

'What- What is this fragrance? *sniff* It's so good!!!'

Idhar Bhumika bhi badi himmat karke veer ke seene par haath rakhi. Par Tej jo lagataar haath firaaye jaa rahi thi, uska haath Bhumika ke haath se takra gaya.

Dono behno ko ek jhatka laga aur dono hi ek dusre ko dekhi.

Gusse me aake Tej ne Bhumika ka haath pakad seedha Veer ke seene se alag kar diya. Aur khud chipak gayi.

Bhumika : !!??

Ek kheecha taani shuru hui. Bhumika lagataar koshish kar kar ke apne haath perr Veer par jamaati aur Tej baar baar Bhumika ke haath aur perr ko pakad ke unhe hata deti. Ye bin awaaz ki ladaayi kayi minto tak chalti gayi.

Aam taur par Veer ko aankh kholne par upar ki ceiling nazar aani chahiye thi. Parantu usse abhi do haath aapas me ladte hue dikhaayi de rahe the jo kisi billiyo ki haathapaayi se kam nahi tha.

Aur agle hi shan,

*Thucccccckkkkkkkk*

*Thuuuuccckkkkkk*

"Ahhhhhnnnn!"

"Nnnn~"

Usne uth ke apne takiye se dono ke sarr par tapli de maari.

Tej : K-Kyu?

Veer : Ab agar aap dono chup chaap soyi nahi na. Toh dono room ke baahar hongi.

Tej apne honth daato tale dabaaye chaadar ke andar dubak ke ghus gayi. Toh wahi Bhumika ne apne perr sikod aankhein band kar lii.

Ek raahat ki saas lete hue Veer fir soya.

Lekin raat ke 2 baje ye uski gardan ko kaun chaba raha tha?

'Huhhh!?'

Neend khuli toh nazara dekh wo hakka bakka reh gaya. Uske upar Bhumika laiti hui thi. Usse kass ke jakde wo uski gardan hontho se chabaane me lagi hui thi.

Uski laar behke Veer ke seene tak behti chali gayi. Jis vajah se Veer ki neend khul gayi.

'What the fuck!!!?'

Bhumika poori tarah se neend me thi. Uske sudol uroj Veer ki seene se kass ke dabe hue the.

'Wait! Ye toh... Ye toh neend me hai completely.'

Veer : Hey!!! Hey!! Bhumika dii!?

Par uske jhunjhlaane par bhi Bhumika na uthi. Na jaane kya bad-badaaye jaa rahi thi.

Usse side me waapas lita ke jab Veer dobaara apni position pe aaya toh Bhumika fir chipak gayi.

'Ek minute! Don't tell me... Inko... Inko bimaari hai iski. Neend me idhar udhar hone ki aadat!? Toh Shweta ne isliye...!? Shit!!!! What is she trying to achieve?'

Par achanak se,

"Mamma mat karo na... Veer ko..."

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Crimson arc shuru ho gaya hai. 2-3 updates aise slow jayenge aur uske baad arc ka main plot pace pakdega. Meri tabiyat abhi kharaab hi hai. Toh schedule upar neeche ho sakta hai uska dhyaan rakhiyega. Baaki likes thok ke jaane ka aur apne revos rakhne ka. Pata hai na!?
Dhanyavaad!

Fantastic update

 

[Werewolf]

Mega Update

Update - 131 ~ Ragini's Raag​

Ab tak...

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'

Ab aage...

"Yeh hai tum logo ka ghar. Aao!" Veer ne ek bade ghar ka darwaaza kholte hue kuch aurto ko andar bulaaya.

Ye sab wahi thi. Parijaat ghar ki aurte. Mukta, Sudha, Varsha aur Saili. Chaaro Mumbai nagri padhaar chuki thi aur apne naye rukne ke sthaan ko dekh woh sabhi taajub me reh gayi. Ghar kaafi bada tha aur pehle se grehesti ki kayi cheeze maujood thi.

Ghar kisi aur ka nahi, Rajat ka hi tha. Jo ab Veer ka ho chuka tha. Balhaar ke aadmiyo ne milke ghar se Rajat aur uski maa ke kapde latte, photo frames, athwa kayi anya cheezo ko alag kar diya tha. Aur Parijaat ki mahilao ke liye ek badhiya niwaas sthaan me tabdeel kar diya tha.

Sudha : Maalik! Ghar toh kaafi bada hai.

Veer : Ab tum sab yahi thehrogi.

Mukta : Jii maalik!

Veer : Samaan rakh do! Mujhe tum sab se kuch baat karni hai.

Veer sofe par baitha aur sabhi mahilao ko usne baithne ke liye kaha. Woh sab uske saamne ek palang par virajmaan ho gayi.

Varsha : Kya baat hai maalik?

Veer : Mein tum sab ki madad chaahta hu.

Mukta : Madad? Kaisi madad?

Veer : Tum sab apne apne chhetro me nipud ho. Kaabil ho. Mujhe unhi chhetro me tumhari madad chahiye. Saral shabdo me, Mukta mujhe tumhari madad Rajasthani khaane me chaahiye, Varsha tumhari madad aushdhiyo aur sugandho me chahiye, Sudha tumhari madad kapdo ke vyapaar me chahiye aur Saili! Tumhare liye bhi kuch socha hai mene. Toh kya tum sab madad karogi?

Woh sabhi ek dusre ko dekhi aur fir haami me sarr hilaate hue boli,

"Hum taiyaar hai maalik!"

Veer (smiles) : Good! Ab jab tak mein tum logo ko jankaari nahi deta tab tak yahi ruko. Ghar me harr samaan uplabdh hai. Baahar jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Baad me mein khud bataunga tumhe kya karna hai.

Sabhi ek saath : Jii maalik!

Veer fir waha se nikal gaya. Aur wo sabhi apne naye maalik ke sanrakshan me aate hi unki tareefo ke pul baandhne lagi.

Mukta : Maalik kitne acche hai na? Woh hume kaam de rahe hai.

Varsha : Sach kaha. Yahi toh mein chaahti thi. Agar maalik sirf mere shareer ke liye mera upyog karte toh andar hi andar mujhe behad niraasha hoti. Parantu unhone hum sab ke liye kaam dhundha hai. Iss se behtar aur kuch bhi nahi ho sakta. Woh hamari shamta se waaqif hai.

Sudha : Ekdum sahi kaha Varsha. Agar koi aur hota to keval hamaare tann ko bhogta. Aur shayad hume jaanvaro ki tarah rakhta. Kya kuch nahi karta. Par maalik alag hai. Hume unki tann mann dhan se seva karni hai.

Varsha : Hmm!

Mukta : Bilkul!

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Waha Veer unn mahilao ki vyavastha me laga hua tha toh yaha ghar par Ragini apna plan set kar rahi thi. Sabhi ko chai ka ek ek cup pakdaate hue woh ek kursi par aa kar baithi,

Ragini : Mujhe aap sab se baat karni hai.

Usne sabhi ka dhyaan kheechte hue kaha.

Ragini : Dekhiye! Veer ka janmdin abhi abhi nikla hai. Par humne uske liye kuch bhi nahi kiya. Uska birthday celebrate hi nahi kiya humne. Pichle saal bhi hum nahi kar paaye the kyuki woh ghar par hi nahi tha.

Saamne baithi Bhavna ne ye jab suna toh apne bete Veer ki baat usse yaad aa gayi. Uss waqt woh jaipur me tha. Aur woh khud uss se mili thi. Par pehchaan na paayi. Aaj ek saal baad woh uske saath hai. Ragini ki baat Bhavna ko ekdum sahi lagi. Jab itna kuch Veer ne sab ke liye kiya hai toh uska janmdin dhoom dhaam se manaana bhi sab ka farz banta hai.

Bhavna : Tum sahi keh rahi ho.

Shweta : H-Haan! Veer ka birthday hume zaroor celebrate karna chaahiye. Bhumika abhi hotel me inform kar do ki-

Ragini : Aise nahi Tai ji!

Shweta : Huh!?

Ragini : Apni hi hotel me aap party rakhogi?

Shweta : Toh isme kya buraayi hai?

Ragini : Maana ki hamaari hotel acchi hai par thoda sochiye toh-

Bhumika : Mere khyaal se Bhabhi theek keh rahi hai. Hume kisi aur acchi hotel me party rakhni chahiye.

Shweta : Bhumi?? Tu keh rahi hai hamaari hotel kharaab hai?

Shweta ke dil me dard utha. Itne saalo se usne apni dusri beti ki tarah paala tha hotel ko. Toh aise me koi hotel ki buraayi kare toh dard toh hona hi tha.

Bhumika : Mom! Ye baat aap bhi jaanti hai ki city me hamaari hotel se kayi guna acchi aur bhi hotels maujood hai. Hum outdated ho rahe hai. Itna dramatic mat banaaiye isse please.

Shweta : Outdated-!? Dramatic? Hey bhagwaan! Ab meri hotel ka kya hoga?

Bhumika : Ugh~ Mom! Firse shuru mat hona please!

Tej : Toh iska matlab ek surpise party? Veer ko accha lagega. Mom? Aap kya kehti ho?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh taiyaar hi hu na.

Tej : Mere bhai ka b'day theek se kabhi manaaya hi nahi gaya hai. Ye b'day uske liye sabse special hona chahiye. Mein ek bohut acchi hotel me uske liye party rakhungi.

Ragini : Mein nahi Tejal! Hum! Hum uske liye party rakhenge. Isliye toh aap sabke saamne mene ye baat rakhi hai.

Tej : Toh? Fir kya karna hai?

Ragini : Sabse pehla task. Jo ki mushqil hai...

Woh sabhi kaan lagaaye usse dekhne lagi.

Ragini : Hum me se kisi ko Veer ko ghar se dur rakhna hoga raat tak ke liye. Warna usse sab pata chal jayega.

Tej : Ohh! Sure! Ye kaam mein-

Ragini : Nahi Tejal!

Tej : Huh?

Ragini : Ye kaam mein karungi. Tumhare muh se galti se bhi kuch nikla toh dikkat ho jayegi.

Tej : Nahi! Mein itni asaani se-

Ragini : Ye kaam kathin hai. Din bhar Veer ko kaamo me fassa ke rakhna hoga. Mein ye kaam bakhubi kar lungi. Mujhe uski pasand na-pasand ke baare me sab maalum hai. Usse kese vyast rakhna hai mein jaanti hu. Toh ye kaam aap sab mujh par chorr do.

Suman : Theek hai! Ab hamaara kaam bhi hume bata dijiye Ragini jii!

Ragini : Tejal aur Bhumika. Aur aap dono tai jii.

Bhavna aur Shweta : Hmm?

Ragini : Aap chaaro hotel ka kaam sambhaalengi. Kaun sii hotel karni hai, kya decoration rakhna hai, kya menu hona chahiye ye sab mein aap par chorrti hu.

Bhavna : Theek hai!

Shweta : O-Ok!

Pal bhar ke liye Bhavna aur Shweta ne ek dusre ko dekha, Shweta 'hmph' kar apna muh ferr lii, toh wahi Bhavna bas haule se muskura baithi.

Tej aur Bhumika bhi ek dusre ko dekhi, par boli kuch nahi.

Ragini : Suman jii?

Suman : Hmm?

Ragini : Aabha aur aap, nimantran dengi. Aapko pata hai na kis kis ko bulaana hai?

Suman (muskuraate hue) : Jii!

Aabha : Maa jii? Mera kya kaam hai isme?

Suman : Baat tum hi karogi Aabha. Mein sirf tumhe phone laga ke dungi jinhe hume bulaana hai.

Aabha : Ohh!

Ragini (smiles) : Bohut khoob! Aur aap hi dono ko ye dekhna hai ki sabhi log samay se taiyaar hoke pohuche. Hamaare ghar se bhi. Theek hai?

Aabha aur Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Sonali tum!

Sonali : Ehh?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara kaam hai-

Sonali : *gulps*

Ragini (smiles) : Cake laana!

Sonali : C-Cake?

Ragini : Haan baba cake! Cake katega tabhi toh b'day manega na? Bina cake ke kesa b'day? Tumhara kaam hai ki ek accha sa cake banwa ke lao. Veer ko chocolate pasand hai. Madad ke liye Tejal ya Bhumika se puch sakti ho ki kesa banwana hai. Cake bada hona chahiye. Theek?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : Toh usse chocolate pasand hai...!

Sonali : Ugh! Itni badi zimmedaari mujhe kyu-!?

Ragini : Aisa kuch nahi hai. Kaam sabhi apna apna acche se karna.

Sonali : Kahi Cake mere haath se gir gaya toh? Kahi kuch kharaab ho gaya toh? Woh geedad mujhe nahi chorrega.

Ragini : Toh sab taiyaar hai na?

Sonali : Waaaaa~ Meri koi sunn hi nahi raha hai.

Sabhi ne prafullit hoke haami bhar Ragini ko apna aasvaashan diya. Siwaye Sonali ke. Usse lag raha tha sabse bada aur bhaari bora uske hi sarr laada gaya tha.

Ragini ke nirdesh milne ke baad sabhi apne kaamo me lag gayi. Ragini gaana gun-gunaate hue kitchen ki orr jaane lagi jab ek peeche se aayi awaaz ne usse rok liya,

"Mere bete ke sang-! Kab se reh rahi ho?"

Palat ke usne dekha toh paaya ki Bhavna khadi hui thi.

Ragini : T-Tai jii! A-Aap-

Bhavna : Tumne jawaab nahi diya!?

Ragini : H-Huh!!?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke sang iss ghar me kabse reh rahi ho?

Achanak iss sawaal ko sunn woh thoda ghabra gayi.

Ragini : L-Lagbhag ek saal ho gaya. Shuruaat me sirf mein aur Veer the, uske baad-

Bhavna : Sirf tum aur Veer? Ek devar aur bhabhi? Akele? Ek chhat ke neeche?

Ragini : W-Woh-

Bhavna : Hmm?

Ragini : Mein- Mein woh-

Bhavna : Mein woh kya?

Ragini : Ummm- B-Baad me Suman jii aur baaki sab bhi jud gayi, fir Tai jii aayi aur Bhumika bhi. Aur ab aap sab.

Bhavna : Par shuruaat me toh sirf tum aur Veer hi the na?

Ragini : J-Jii!

Bhavna : Toh tum hi batao, aise me ek devar bhabhi ka ghar me akele rehna...! Kya sahi hai?

Ragini ne kuch bhaanpa aur fir apni ghabraahat dur kar woh nidar hoke puchi,

Ragini : Aap kehna kya chaah rahi hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh sirf puch rahi hu!

Ragini : Kya aap mujhpe aarop laga rahi hai?

Bhavna shaant rahi, bas muskura ke Ragini ko dekhti rahi.

Ragini : Veer ne mujhe ek nayi zindagi dii hai. Uski wajah se iss Ragini ko ek naya jeevandaan mila hai. Agar wo na hota toh shayad aaj mein aur mera parivaar bhi zinda na hote. Usne hi mujhe ehsaas dilaya ki jis raah par mein chal rahi thi woh prem ki ek jhoothi raah thi. Ye ghar sirf ghar nahi hai. Meri aur Veer ki iss se yaadein judi hai. Bhale hi humne abhi zyaada waqt nahi guzaara hai yaha. Par kathin paristhitiyo se nikalte waqt iss ghar ne hume chhaav dii hai.

Bhavna : ...

Ragini : Aur isliye, mere dil me uske liye aadar bhi hai, prem bhi aur parvaah bhi. Ab aage aap jo samajhna chaahe samjhe.

Kehte hue wo palti, na hi fir usne Bhavna ko palat ke dekha aur na hi woh fir ruki. Peeche khadi Bhavna bas usse jaate dekhti rahi. Parantu, hontho par ek ajeeb muskaan thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Toh wahi yaha Bhumika aur Tej ki ladaayi harr baar ki tarah jaari hi thi.

Tej : Mene kaha na ye hotel kar rahe hai hum.

Bhumika : Nahi! Iss hotel ki service achhi nahi hai. Mein keh rahi hu na-

Tej : What do you mean 'acchi nahi hai'? Literally, 4.5 star rating hai.

Bhumika : Ratings par mat jao, woh badha dii jaati hai unke hi staff dwaara. Mein khud hotel sambhaalti hu, mujhe pata hai waha kesi service hai. Why are you not trusting me?

Tej : Because you are not trustworthy!

Bhumika : T-Tum-

Tej : What?

Bhumika : Tum bohut ziddi ho!

Tej : Huhhhhh!!? Excuse me??? Kya kaha aapne? Mein ziddi hu? Haan? Mein ziddi hu?

Aabha : Agar aap dono aise hi jhagadti rahi, toh shaam ho jayegi. Aur fir mein aamantran kese dungi logo ko?

Tej : Toh inhe samjhao Aabha, ki mujhe mere bhai ka b'day celebrate karne ke liye inki help ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aur na hi inki recommended hotel me hume jaane ki zaroorat hai.

Aabha bechaari dono ka jhagda dekh seham ke chup chaap khadi reh gayi. Dono abhi bhi jhagadne me lagi hui thi jab achanak hi waha Veer aa gaya. Aur saamne ka nazaara dekh hairat me reh gaya. Tej aur Bhumika dono ke haatho me ek tablet tha jisse dono chhinaane me lagi hui thi. Aur dono kisi junglee billiyo se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer : Aap ab tak hotel nahi gayi?

Bhumika : Ahh! Wo-

Iss se pehle ki Bhumika Veer ke prashn me phassti, Tej ne achanak hi Bhumika ko bagal se apne gala se laga liya,

Bhumika : Ahhh!!!?

Tej : K-Kuch nahi Veer! Hum aapas me dosti kar rahe the. Hai na?

Bhumika : E-Ehhhhhh!?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : What are you doing???? Hug me!!!! Hug me nowwwww!!!

Bhumika (nods) : O-Okay!

Tej ki khuspusaahat sunn, ishaara samajh Bhumika ne bhi apne haath uski kamar par lapet diye. Aur dono ke gaal ek dusre se lag gaye. Woh dono farzi muskaan Veer ko dikhaane ma lagi hui thi.

Tej : Hehe~

Bhumika : Ahaha~

Veer :

Tej : Heh~

Bhumika : Aha~

Veer (frowns) : You two seem a little too close. Don't you?

Tej : Hehehe~ N-Nahi toh? Hai na? Hum toh bas friendship kar rahe hai.

Bhumika (nods) : R-Right!

Tej : Aur tumhe toh khush hona chahiye na ki hum dono aapas me qareeb aa rahe hai!?

Veer : Well-

Inki pol khulti ki tabhi waha Ragini inhe bachaane aa gayi,

Ragini : Veer! Tum aa gaye.

Veer : Hmm! Kuch kaam tha?

Ragini : Haan! Free ho na?

Veer : Free toh nahi, par kahiye. Kya kaam hai?

Ragini : Toh tum mujhe shopping par leke chal rahe ho. Abhi!!

Veer : Abhi??

Ragini : Kyu? Nahi le jaoge?

Veer (smiles) : Chaliye!

Ragini (smiles) : Thank you so much!

*Chu~*

Agle hi pal Ragini ke laal raseele honth Veer ke gaal par the. Peeche baithi Tej ne jab ye dekha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Tej : Y-You-??

Lekin Ragini toh aaj full planning me thi. Dono behno ko aankh maarte hue woh Veer ko waha se leke ravaana ho gayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost hi nikaali hui thi.

Dono kisi couple se kam nahi lag rahe the. Ragini aaj behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi. Peeli saree pehne, laalam laal raseele honth liye, woh poori haseena sii prateet ho rahi thi.

Veer : Aaj aap bohut sundar lag rahi ho Bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi?

Veer (smiles) : Ragini!

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe dobaara yaad na dilana pade.

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Ragini : Good!

Veer : Toh? Aaj kya khareed-daari karne chal rahe hai hum?

Ragini ne ekdum se Veer ke haath ke upar apna haath rakha,

Veer : ??

Ragini (seductively) : Tumhe sach me lagta hai mene tumhe shopping ke liye ghar se baahar nikaala?

Jab Veer ko samajh aaya ki Ragini ke iraade kya the toh uske lund ne apne aap ek jhatka maar diya. Muh me maujood thook gutak woh Ragini ko dekha,

Veer : You mean~

Ragini : Kya kaha tha tumne? Mein laut ke aa jaunga toh apna jawaab aapko de dunga.

Veer : Y-Yes!

Ragini : Kaha hai tumhara jawaab?

Veer : Mein-

Ragini: Bohut hi mazaa aaya tha na tumhe jab mere saath wo kar ke gaye the? Aur mein tumhaari yaado me raato raat tadapti rahi. Huh?

Veer : K-Kya kar ke gaya tha mein?

Ragini : Bhole bann rahe ho Veer?

Woh aur nazdeek aayi aur Veer ke chehre se ek inch ke faasle se boli,

Ragini : Apni Bhabhi ki choot par muh maar kar gaye the tum. Bhool gaye? Ya yaad dilau?

Veer : Ahem-

Ragini (smiles) : Ab jaha mein le jaa rahi hu, waha chup chaap chalo. Okay?

Veer : Yes ma'am!!!

Ragini : Good!

Ragini ke bataaye gaye sthaan par jab dono pohuche toh Veer aashcharya me tha.

Veer : Ye hotel!?

Ragini : Tumhe pasand aayi?

Veer : Yeah! Kaafi badi hai.

Ragini : Raat tak ke liye hamaara room booked hai.

Uske kehne par Veer sharmaate hue usse dekha. Ragini bhi andar se sharma rahi thi, par dikhaana nahi chaahti thi kyuki woh badi thi umr me. Usne haule se Veer ka haath thaama,

Ragini : Aaj koi disturb nahi karega. Sirf tum hoge, aur mein!

Veer : Do you really want this?

Ragini : Yes!! Yessss!!! Mere judgement ko ab aur clouded mat karo Veer. Mein poore hosho-hawaas me hu aur jaanti hu mujhe kya chahiye.

Wo Veer ko thaami aur usse apne hatho me pakde hotel ke andar ghus gayi. Room me aate hi Veer ke saamne khidki se Juhu beach ka shandaar nazaara tha.

Veer : Beautiful! Par kaafi mehnga pada hoga.

Ragini : Tumse keemti kuch nahi mere liye ab.

Usne apna samaan rakha aur kamre ko andar se lock kar woh Veer ke peeche peeche aayi aur uske seene me apne haath daalte hue uski peeth se lag ke khadi ho gayi. Dono ek dusre ke badan ki khushboo ko soongh paa rahe the.

Veer : Aazmaaiye mat! Warna aapa kho dunga mein!

Ragini : Yahi toh chaahti hu mein!

Kehte hue usne apne tapte honth Veer ki gardan se laga diye,

Veer : Ssssss~

Achanak ke hamle se Veer apni gardan sikodne par majboor reh gaya.

*Chu~* *Chu~*

*slurp* *slurp*

*puch* *puch*

Ragini kisi bhookhi sherni ki tarah apna ahaar dhoondhne lagi.

Veer ne palat ke uski patli kamar ko thaama aur kheench ke usse apne seene se laga liya. Dono ek dusre ke qareeb aaye aur jese hi 1 cm ki duri bachi thi, dono chumbak ke bhaati ek dusre ke hontho ki taraf khiche aur fir jaanvaro ki tarah ek dooje ko choomne lage.

"Ummmmmm~" "Sssssssss~" "Aahhhhnnnnnn~" "Nommmmmmm~~~"

"Mmmmmmmm~' *slurp* *kiss*

Veer ko dhakka deke woh bistar par baithi, aur dheere dheere apne ango se usne kapde nikaalna shuru kar diye. Pehle saree, fir petticoat, fir bra aur ant me panty.

Usne sab kuch utaar diya. Bas baaki tha toh woh tha uska shringaar. Haatho me bangles, gale me Veer dwaara pehnaya gaya pendant, aur maathe par bindi.



Ragini apne perr sikode Veer ko dekhi. Veer mantra-mugdh tha. Aisi khubsoorti alaukik thi. Usse vishvaas nahi ho raha tha ki woh Ragini jesi sundar naari ko bhogne jaa raha tha.

Uske baad apni dono taange khol Ragini ne apne dwaar ke darshan diye, aur apni muniya par ungli pherr woh Veer ko rujhaane lagi,



Ragini : Isse hi bhog ke gaye the na tum? Ab aaj firse mauka hai tumhare paas. Isse sahi se bhogne ka.

Veer : Are you sure aap ye yahi karna chaahti ho?

Ragini : Toh aur kaha? Tum chaahte ho ye hum ghar par kare?

Veer : Hotel me hidden cameras bhi toh ho sakte hai?

Ragini : Ye ek reputed hotel hai, toh tumhe iss baat ki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.

Veer : So, you have made up your mind huh!?

Ragini : Yes! Now come and fuck me Veer!!! FUCK ME!!!

Woh apna nanga badan prastut kar uttejna me boli.



Veer fir na ruka. Usne kayi mauke diye the Ragini ko aur gehraayi me sochne ke liye. Par, Ragini ka faisla adig tha. Aur jab saamne se baar baar nyota diya jaaye, toh Veer usse kadaapi thukraane waala nahi tha.

Woh kooda aur Ragini ki choot par toot pada. Woh raseeli choot usse aamantran de rahi thi. Apni jeebh ka behatreen istemaal kar Veer ne apna poora muh Ragini ki choot me de maara.



"Ahhhhnnnnnnnn maaaaaaaaaaa~"

Sisakte hue Ragini ne Veer ke baalo ko apne haatho me jakad liya. Veer apna ek haath upar le gaya aur unn swaadisht aamo ko bhi usne nichodna shuru kar diya.

Ye uski bhabhi ki choot thi. Kabhi Veer ne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki uss se baat tak na karne waali wahi bhabhi aaj uske saamne nangi hoke chudne ko kahegi.

Aaj kahi na kahi, Veer ka ego high tha. Usse khud par proud bhi tha. Taang utha ke Veer ne choot ko aur zorr se chaatna shuru kiya to Ragini madhosh hoke reh gayi. Issi...! Issi ehsaas ke liye toh woh raato raat tadpi thi.



Jese hi uska paani nikla, Ragini ka badan jhatke khaa kar reh gaya. Veer utha aur apne kapde utaar usne apna lund prastut kiya. Ab Ragini ki baari thi seva karne ki.

Woh Veer ke lund ko dekhi. Ye pehli baar tha jab woh Veer ko nagn awastha me dekh rahi thi. Dekh ke hi uske hosh ude hue the.

'I-Itna bada? Kya mein isse andar le bhi paungi?'

Aage badh usne Veer ke lund ko thaama aur uske supaade ko pehle chooma.

*Chu~*



"H-Haaahhhh!" Veer ke muh se ek siski choothi. Ragini uske supaade ko pyaar se choom rahi thi.

Ragini : Mujhe blowjob ka utna experience nahi hai Veer! Par tumhe de de ke hi seekhungi.

Veer : You are already doing good!

Wo muskuraayi, aur muh khol poora supaada usne apne muh me bhar liya. Veer ke liye blowjob toh kya woh kuch bhi karne taiyaar thi.



"Urrghh~' Karaahte hue Veer uske sarr par haath rakh usse guide karta gaya. Aur Ragini acchi tarah se choosti gayi. Par jharrne se pehle, Veer ne Ragini ko kutiya banaaya aur uske peeche aake khada ho gaya.

Ragini : Don't think now Veer my baby, just put it in!!!

Veer ne supaada choot ki deewaaro ko khol andar lagaaya. Ragini ka badan thitur gaya. Aur agle hi shan,

*Khaachhhhh*

Usne dhakka maar lund andar pel diya.



Ragini ke dono haath mutthi bann bedsheet par kass gaye. Uski aankho se aasu nikal aaye. Ye dard ke bhi the, khushi ke bhi aur dukh ke bhi.

Khushi iss baat ki, ki akhir kaar usne apne aap ko Veer ko saunp diya tha aur Veer ne usse swekaar liya tha. Dukh iss baat ka ki woh kabhi Veer ko apna anchhua youvan pesh na kar paayi. Koi aur usse pehle bhog chuka tha. Koi aisa jiske baare me sochke bhi usse ghin aati thi. Aur dard iska ki Veer ka ling uske liye ab tak ka sabse bada ling tha. Toh deewaare aur chaudi ho rahi thi. Dard toh laazmi hi tha.

Ragini ke sambhal jaane ke baad, Veer ne fir tabadtod dhakke maare,

'Nghhhhhhh~ V-Veer!! Veeeeerrrr! ohhh Veeeer!!! Claim me Veer!"

"Mere ang ang par apni chhaap chorr do Veeer! Aaaaahhhnnn maaaaaaa~"

"Y-Yesssssss Ohh godddddd!!!!"

*phattttt* *phatttt* *phatttttt*

Uske baalo ko haath me qaid kiye, Veer Ragini ko ghodi bana ke uski choot maarne me laga tha.



Ye ek show tha ki Veer kese Ragini ko ek mard k tarah claim kar raha tha. Ragini ne aaj jo raag gaaya tha, woh usse aur saath hi saath inn chaar deewaaro ko bhi yaad rehne waala tha.

"P-Please Veeer! A-Andar! Andar! I want it inside!!!"

Uski ichhaa ko poora kar Veer ne apna veerya uski choot ke andar hi udel diya. Issi ke saath woh bhi jharr gayi aur dono aapas me chipak ke lait gaye. Ragini uske seene par sarr rakh laiti hui thi.

Usne Veer ka haath apne haatho me liya, usse dekha aur boli,

Ragini : Mene tumse shaadi kyu nahi kii Veer?

Veer : Because I was too young.

Ragini : Kaash mein bhi tumhaari tarah young hoti.

Unn baato me ek ajeeb sa dard tha jo Veer ko bhi mehsoos hua.

Veer : Aap young hi ho!

Ragini : Kaash tumhari ham-umr ki hoti.

Veer : ...

Ragini : Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Aaj mein bohut khush hu. Thanks for doing it. Thanks for not neglecting me. Thanks for accepting me. And...

Veer : ??

Ragini : I love you~

Usne punaah Veer ke honth choom liye.

Parantu Veer ki bauhe chintan me sikudi hui thi. Kya woh bata de ki Parijaat me kya hua tha? Kya bata de ki aage bhi uske relations kayi aurto ke sang bann sakte hai?

Par Ragini ki muskaan, uski khushi dekh Veer ki himmat na hui. Aur aaj usne bataane se khud ko peeche kar liya. Kisi aur samay...!

Ragini : Tumhari liye ek surprise hai. Fufu~

Veer : Surprise? Kaisa surprise?

Ragini : Hehe~

***

Aur na jaane kab samay yu hi guzar gaya. Ragini ne Veer ko uske kapde dilvaaye aur khud bhi dherr saari shopping kii.

Jab shaam ke 7:30 baj gaye toh woh usse dusri hotel leke pohuch gayi. Veer totally clueless tha. Usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala Ragini ne aur kitne plans banaaye hue the.

Parantu jese hi woh hotel ke andar pohucha,

*Pop* *plop* *Pop*

Party poppers zorr zorr se shor karke phoote aur upar se chamkeele paper ke tukde harr jagah girne lage. Jab saamne ka nazaara Veer ne dekha toh woh bhaavuk reh gaya.

Saamne harr koi maujood tha. Uski maa se leke, Arohi Kavya, uske Dada jii, Sumitra, yaha tak ki Karan aur Kritika bhi aaye hue the.

Siwaaye Vivek aur Brijesh ke. Unhe wese hi invite nahi kiya gaya tha. Aur agar kara bhi jaata toh shayad hi woh aate. Brijesh toh shayad aa bhi jaata par Vivek ke baare me yahi kehna mushqil tha.

Veer : Y-Ye sab-!?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara b'day kabhi dhang se celebrate nahi kiya gaya. Ye hamaari orr se hai. Veer! Happy birthday!

Ek aasu ki boond uske gaal se hoke guzri toh Ragini ne turant hi apne anguthe se uske aasu poch diye.

Ragini : It's time to enjoy paagal. Rote nahi hai-

Veer : I-

Ragini : Rou mat warna mein bhi rone lagungi paagal!

Woh nishabd tha. Ye kabhi bhi usne expect nahi kiya tha. Koi uska b'day aise manaaye? Aaj tak kabhi usse photographs me saath nahi liya jaata tha. Par aaj ye sab maujood the. Uske sang, uska beeta hua janmdin manaane.

"Bhaiyyyyaaaaa~"

Kavya harr baar ki tarah daudti hui aayi aur uske seene se lag gayi.

Veer : K-Kavya!!!

Kavya : Bhaiyaa! Happy Birthday!

Golden frock me woh kisi Pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you! Kavya!

Peeche se Arohi bhi chalti hui aayi. Uske haatho me ek gift tha. Usne seedha aage badha ke woh Veer ko thama diya.

Arohi : For you~

Veer : Huh?

Arohi (smiles) : Happy Birthday!

Aur sharma ke usne ahista se Veer ko gaal pe ek chota sa par meetha sa kiss kar diya.

Veer (blushes) : Thank you! Arohi dii! Par aap sab aise achanak se~

Itne me Sumitra bhi aage aayi. Uski aankho ke neeche jhaaiyaa thi. Karunesh aur Pranjal ke jaane ke baad uski haalat behad kharaab ho gayi thi. Jese tese Arohi aur Kavya ne usse sambhaala. Par ab aage toh badhna hi padega. Apni santaano ko chorr kaha jaa sakti thi woh.

Sumitra : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer.

Woh aage aayi. Veer ne jab perr padna chaahe toh usne Veer ko gale se laga liya.

Aur sahi samay dekh ke Veer ne apni baat Sumitra ke kaano me dheere se rakh dii,

Veer : Aisa mat sochna ki Chacha ke jaane se aap toot gayi ho aur ab kuch nahi bacha chachi. Mein hu abhi. Jab tak mein rahunga...! Arohi dii aur Kavya ki chinta aapko karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Aapko kabhi bhi koi bhi zaroorat pade. Aap mujhe keh sakti ho.

Shabd kuch hi the. Par unme taaqat behad thi. Unka bhaar atyadhik tha. Sirf bolne ke liye hi himmat lagti thi aaj ke zamaane me.

Sumitra ki pakad Veer pe aur mazboot ho gayi. Woh apne aasu poch, sarr haan me hila ke peeche ho gayi.

Manorath bhi aage aaye toh Veer ne unke perr chhuye,

Veer (smiles) : Ab kaisi hai aapki tabiyat?

Manorath : Mujhe kya hua? Arre jab tak apne pote ki shaadi nahi dekh leta tab tak koi mujhe iss duniya se nahi le jaa sakta. Hahahaha~

Dono hass pade. Manorath ne fir ek sone ki chain Veer ko thamaayi aur saath hi shagun ka ek lifaafa bhi.

Itne me Ragini ke Mata-pita aage aaye. Dinesh aur Rohini! Wo bhi aaye hue the.

Dono ke perr Veer ne chhuye toh Dinesh ne ashirvaad dete hue kaha,

Dinesh : Mujhe yaad hai acche se. Woh tum hi the jisne hume bachaaya tha. Rohini! Ye dekho! Yahi hai Veer. Hahaha~

Rohini : Haan haan! Ek baar mil chuki hu. Aap toh aise bata rahe ho jese hum pehli baar mil rahe hai. Hmph~

Dinesh : Ehh? Mil chuki ho? Arre bhai mujhe yaad kyu nahi aa raha kuch?

Rohini : Badaam khaaya karo. Roz bolti hu par khaana nahi hai aapko.

Ragini apne maata pita ki harqato ko dekh sharma ke sarr jhuka lii. Par Veer aur baaki sab unki inn harqato ko poori tarah se enjoy kar rahe the.

Rohini (smiles) : Arre mein jaanti hu acche se Veer ko. Mere ghar ke deepak ko bujhne se bachaaya hai isne. Jug jug jiyo mere bacche. Khoob tarakki karo.

*Muaaahhh*

Aur usne Veer ke gaal ko choom liya. Fir apni orr se usse gift deke wo dono bhi side ho gaye.

Ye dekh, Ragini ne Veer ke baazu me chikauti kaati,

Ragini : Getting too many kisses huh?

Veer (smiles) : Ohh! Are you getting jealous?

Ragini (blushes) : Wh-Whaaaattttt? N-No!!! Paagal!!!

Usne agle aane waale logo ko dekha toh paaya saamne Karan aur Kritika the.

Karan : Koi information nahi. Koi thikaana nahi. Ye bhi koi dosti hai? Like mujhe aana padta hai tumhari khabar lene. Look at me! Karan! Mein Karan tumhare peeche peeche bhaag raha hu. Dad dekhenge toh haddi pasli ek kar denge meri.

Veer : It's your honour. Respect it.

Karan : Respect my ass-

Ragini (frowns) : Karan!

Karan : Ahem! Sorry for the language Bhabhi!! Hmph~ Wese mein yaha aata nahi. But you know...! I-I came for the food.

Uski nazre bagal me khadi Kritika ki orr gayi toh bechaari woh sharma ke reh gayi. Unn dono ke beech me khil rahe gulaab ko Veer idhar turant hi bhaanp gaya,

Veer : You came for the food or you came for the mood?

Karan : *cough* *cough*

Achanak hi bechaare ko thaska lag gaya.

Karan (blushes) : Wh-What blasphemy!! Hmph~ Mein...! Mein obviously food ke liye aaya hu. Suna hai yaha ka food accha hai. A-Aur ye raha tumhara gift. Hmph!!

Usne Veer ke haatho me zorr se ek gift ka package thamaaya. Aur bina kuch kahe, wo palat ke waha se dur nikal gaya.

Veer : Ye ladka bhi na...! *sighs* Roothi hui gf ki tarah act karta hai.

Ragini (giggles) : Fufufu~

Kritika (blushes) : V-Veer bhaiya!! Y-Ye meri taraf se. Happy Birthday!

Veer : Ohh! Thank you Kritika! You're looking gorgeous.

Na jaane Veer ko kya soojha par uske hontho par ek kutil muskaan sajj gayi. Usne gift lete hue Kritika ko kass ke hug kar liya. Aur beshaq, jese hi uski nazre Karan se mili.

'Youuuu fuckkkkerrrr!!!Damnnn you Veeerrrrr!!!' Karan mann me chillaaya. Uska chehra dekhne laayak tha.

Mann hi mann hasste hue Veer ne Kritika ko chorra. Par uss bechaari ke gaal sharm ke maare poore tamatar ki tarah laal pad chuke the.

"Maaaaammmuuuuuuu~" Ye awaaz sunn Veer ko sochne ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi ki ye kaun tha.

Ye toh uski laadli thi. Sabse chaheeti. Uski sabse pyaari Juhi!!

Veer (smiles) : Juhiiii!!!

Juhi : Maaamuuuu!!!

Woh daud ke aayi aur Veer ki taang se chipak gayi. Veer ne fauran hi usse upar ko uthaaya aur apne kandho par baitha liya.

Saamne se Nidhi ma'am aur Shreya bhi aa rahi thi. Nidhi ke haatho me Dhruv bhi maujood tha.

Jese hi Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha woh unhe dekhta hi reh gaya. Aaj kaali saree me woh maujood thi. Iske pehle usne aaj tak Nidhi ko kaali saree me kabhi nahi dekha tha. Kyuki Nidhi pehanti hi nahi thi. College, pados, aate jaate raasto me gandi nazro se bachne ke liye woh ye rang kabhi bhi nahi pehenti thi.



Par aaj...! Aaj usne pehna hua tha. Aur Veer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki aisa woh kyu karti thi. Kaale rang me woh qayamat jo lagti thi.

Nidhi (smiles) : Happy Birthday Veer!!!

Veer : Thank you! Ma'am!!

Aaj bhi wahi khumaari thi. Chaahe kitna hi samay kyu na beet gaya ho. Nidhi ko dekh aaj bhi Veer ki dhadkane tezz hoti thi. Aur Nidhi ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Veer : Aap bohut khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Sunte hi Nidhi laaj ke maare nazre ferr lii.

Shreya : Hai na? Mein bhi dii ko kabse yahi keh rahi hu ki Black unko bohut suit karta hai aur unhe aksar pehan'na chahiye. Par ye keh rahi thi ki ye sirf aaj ke liye hai.

Shreya ne jab sachhaayi bataayi toh Nidhi ki sharm aur badh gayi aur woh kisi bacchi ki tarah sarr jhuka ke khadi rahi jese maano uski chori pakdi gayi ho.

Shreya : Hey hey! By the way! Tumhari toh mast party ho gayi yaar! Haan?

Veer (smiles) : Daba ke khaana!

Shreya : Hehehe of course! of course! You know me so well!

Uske baazu par haath maarte hue usne apna gift thamaaya aur woh side ho gayi. Siwaaye Juhi ke. Woh abhi bhi apne maamu ke kandho par baithi hui thi.

Uske baad Veer ke apne log aage aaye. Shweta pehle thi.

Shweta : V-Veer! Happy Birthday mere bacche!!

Usne gift thamaaya aur uske gale se lag gayi.

Veer : Thank you!

Bhumika ne bhi kuch prepare kiya tha. Chota sa gift tha par packaging badi hi pyaari thi.

Bhumika : Happy Birthday Veer! This is for you!

Veer : Ohh! Thanks a lot!

Suman aur Aabha bhi aage aayi. Sabhi ko nimantran unhone hi toh diya tha.

Suman : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer jii! Ye meri aur meri beti Aabha ki orr se.

Aabha : Janmdin mubaarak ho Veer jii!

Veer (smiles) : Shukriya!!!

Akhir me Bhavna aur Tej aage aayi. Tej ne aate hi usse apne gale se laga liya,

Veer : Ye sab aapne prepare kiya tha?

Tej : Idea Ragini bhabhi ka tha. Par prepare hum sab ne kiya. Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Tej (smiles) : That's what matters to me.

Bhavna (smiles) : Happy Birthday beta.

Veer : M-Maa!

Veer khud aage aake Bhavna ke gale se lag gaya.

Bhavna : Ye gift meri taraf se.

Usne ek khubsoorat sa package uske haatho me diya.

Tej : Aur ye meri taraf se.

Veer ke haatho me gifts hi gifts the. Toh uska ye haal dekh Ragini ne uski madad kii.

Gifts ko rakh uski nazre kisi ko dhundne lagi aur jese uss shaks ki bhi lambi umr thi. Kyuki tabhi woh shaks bhi aa gaya,

"Phew!!! Pohuch gaye!!!"

Veer (smiles) : Maasi!

Purvi : Hey bhagwaan! Late toh nahi hui na?

Veer : No! You are just on time.

Purvi : Thank God!!!

Woh aage aayi. Bagal se uska pati Arun bhi saath me tha.

Purvi : Veer! Ye tumhaare mausa jii hai.

Veer ne perr chhuye toh Arun ne gale se laga liya,

Arun : Tumhe bachpan me dekha tha beta. Aaj tum itne bade ho gaye ho. Tumhe dekh mujhe bohut khushi hui.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe bhi!

Purvi aage badhi aur Veer ke maathe aur gaalo ko choom lii,

Purvi : Happy Birthday betu. Bhale hi belated happy birthday hai. Lekin tumhe enjoy aise karna hai jese ye real ho okay?!

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Thank you maasi.

Uske baad ab cake katna tha. Par jese hi sab log saamne aaye toh dekha cake toh abhi tak laga hi nahi tha.

"Aa gayi mein~ Mein aa gayi... Haah haah haah!!" Sonali daudti hui ekdum se aayi. Uske haatho me cake tha.

Uski haalat dekh Veer andar hi andar muskura baitha.

Sonali : Y-Ye- Ye lo bhai cake. Haah haah!!!

Cake rakhte hi woh kisi bhains ki tarah kursi par pasar gayi. Usse ab koi matlab nahi tha deen duniya se ki kya ho raha tha. Woh bas lambi saasein liye khud ko durust karne me lag gayi.

Sonali : O-Oye!!

Waiter : Yes ma'am!?

Sonali : Kuch thanda lao *huff* Abhi!!!

Waiter : Sure ma'am!

Sonali : *huff* *huff* Mein jaanti thi. Ye sabse badi zimmedari wala kaam mere hi sarr pe thopa gaya hai. *huff* *huff* Ab agar kisi ne kaha na ki cake ghatiya hai ya ye kami hai woh kami hai. Kasam se... Mene unki haddiya tod deni hai. *huff*

Cake kata, aur sabhi ne Veer ke liye happy birthday song gaaya. Juhi abhi bhi kandho par sawaar thi. Usse mazaa aa raha tha. Nidhi ke laakh manaane ke baad bhi woh neeche na aayi.

Cake sach me bohut accha tha. Veer ko baari baari sabhi ne cake khilaaya. Aur uske baad khaana peena shuru hua.

Sab khaane me jut gaye, toh Veer cake ke kuch pieces leke Sonali ke paas aaya.

Veer (smiles) : Cake ke liye shukriya. Ye lo!

Sonali ek pal ke liye usse dekhi fir uske haath se katori leke woh cake khaane me lag gayi.

Sonali : Cake theek hai na?

Veer : Hmm? Bohut accha hai. Kyu? Kya hua?

Sonali : Nahi! Bas wahi puchna tha.

Veer (smiles) : Aur agar mein kehta ki utna accha nahi hai toh?

Sonali : Toh tumhara muh noch leti.

Veer : Hahahahahaha!!!

Veer hasste hue utha aur wo Karan ke paas gaya jo Kritika ko khaana parosne me laga hua tha.

Karan : You know ye dish bohut acchi hai. Isse pehle boil kiya jaata hai aur fir-

Karan ne poori khaane ki process bata daali uss dish ki. Aur Kritika bhi uski harr baat sunn rahi thi.

Veer : Abe itni derr me toh khaana thanda hi ho jayega jitni derr me tu ye sunayega.

Kritika : Pfftt~

Karan : Tujhe taang adaane ke alaawa kuch aata hai?

Veer : Haan! Aata hai! Teri tarah fizool ke baate na karna.

Karan : Hmph!

Veer : Miss Kaera nahi aayi?

Karan (frowns) : Mene unhe bataaya nahi.

Veer : Huh?

Karan : Don't take me wrong par mene unki bhalaayi ke liye kiya ye. Aaj kuch important guests aaye hue hai ghar me. Agar mein unhe bataata toh woh yaha aati. Baad me Dad se unhe daant padti. So I-

Veer : It's okay!

Karan : Hmm! Isliye mein aaya. Mujhe khud bahana bana ke aana pada. Zaroor Raghu aur Jassi ko mere peeche bheja hoga Dad ne. But thanks to our friendship. Wo dono meri complaint nahi karenge.

Veer : I see!

Karan : Agar tum didi se milna chaahte ho toh kal mil sakte ho. Kal wo thodi derr ke liye free rahengi.

Veer : Yes! I do want to meet her. Urgently.

Karan : Kal ghar chale jaana then. Mein nahi rahunga. I'll be busy tomorrow.

Veer : Sure!

Veer Kaera ki khabar leke jab ek orr badha toh uske perr jamm ke reh gaye. Dur baithi Nidhi apna blouse theek karne me lagi hui thi. Shayad usne Dhruv ko doodh pilaaya tha abhi abhi.

Veer jese hi uske peeche aaya toh aahat paake woh peech ko halka sa mudi,

Nidhi : Veer?



Veer ke saamne Nidhi ki nangi gori makhmali peeth thi. Aaj bhi Rajat Veer ki aankho me ek chutiya hi tha jo aisi sundar biwi ko apne haatho kho baitha. Par shukriya uska kam se kam Veer ke paas ab ek chance tha.

Veer dheere se ek kursi par baitha,

Veer : Aapko pata hai aap kya keher dhaa rahi ho aaj?

Nidhi : Maska laga rahe ho Veer?

Veer : Maska? Nahi toh!? Mein toh sach keh raha hu.

Nidhi : Sessionals utne hi milenge jitne mein dungi. Tumhare maska lagaane se kuch nahi hoga.

Veer soch me pad gaya. Fir usse andar hi andar hassi aayi. Kya uski ye nadaan ma'am sach me ye samajh rahi thi ki woh yaha apne sessionals badhwaane aaya hai?

Veer : Become mine!

*Silence*

Unn do shabdo ko sunte hi Nidhi ka shareer kaanp utha. Woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Kya kaha Veer ne?

Woh eka-ek jhatt se palti aur usse dekhi,



Nidhi : Kya?

Veer ne par kuch na kaha bas muskuraaya.

Nidhi : A-Ahinda se aisa mazaak mat karna Veer.

Woh khadi hui aur sarr jhuka ke waha se nikal gayi. Uski dhadkane behad tezz thi. Veer jaanta tha ki Nidhi ke khud ke dil me kya tha. Kya woh waaqif nahi tha? Zaroor tha. Tabhi toh himmat kar aaj usne ye keh diya. Agar pehle ki Nidhi hoti toh ek thappad raseed deti. Par aaj ki Nidhi...! Sirf usse ek choti moti dhamki deke nikal gayi. Kyuki woh khud andar se uss se pyaar karne lagi hai. Veer ko abhaad ho chuka tha. Par sahi samay ka intezaar karna tha usse.

Dhoom dhaam se bade hi acche e Veer ka ye janmdin guzra. Ek ek karke sabhi apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.

Bache the toh sirf Arohi aur Veer, jo gaadi me gifts laad rahe the. Tej baaki ko leke ghar nikal gayi thi.

Arohi : Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer : Kya?

Arohi : Aaj ka celebration?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Woh muskuraayi aur Veer ke sang gifts ko utha ke gaadi me rakhne lagi.

Woh dono behad qareeb the,

Arohi : Mein ye keh rahi thi ki-

Veer : Hmm? Kya-

Arohi ki baat sunn'ne Veer jab ekdum se palta toh kam space hone ki wajah se ek baar fir,

[Oh damn!]

Jo nahi hona chahiye tha woh ho gaya. Dono ke honth aapas me takra gaye. Arohi ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jese garmi me tapmaan chadhta hai. Woh ekdum se peeche hui aur daud ke seedhe car ke andar jaa ke baith gayi.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

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'Please tell me. It was again an accident. Right?'

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'Right...???'

[....]

'Fuuucckkkkk!!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update short me nipatne waala tha normal update ki tarah. Par chuki isme slice of life scenes the. Isliye mene isse acche se aur bade me likha. Kyuki mere mann me aaya ki inn scenes ko aur acche se dikhaana chaahiye. Toh 2 updates aur aise rahenge jo abhi Crimson arc ke main plot se alag honge. Aur 2 updates ke turant baad humara main plot Crimson Festival ka shuru ho jayega. Toh likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ju logo ke liye hi mega update diya hai.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Werewolf]

Awesome come back

Brilliant update

Superb update, maja aya donovan bili yo ko jagdte deck kar

Mazedqr

Superb update

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya hai


Waiting for the next update bro

Let's start the incest

Nice update bro

Jabardast mind blowing

Nice update...

Mazadar update hai
Bhavana - veer baat chit bhout achi lagi
Ya sawal karna khud sa bhout jaruri hai ma koun hu life ka goal hona jaruri hai

Nice update

Sandar update bhai 2 billiyon ki ladayi majedar rahi dono apna mahatv jata rahi he or veer ki hava tait kar rahi he or ek or se gumnam dusman jiske bare me kuch bhi pata nahi he vo ghat lagaye betha he jo jyada khatarnak hosakta he kyunki vo veer ke bare me janta he or veer ko koi idea nahi he .wait for next update and get well soon.

Hmm bahut badhiya update tha bhai bhavna ne aate hi apni maa ki jimmedari shuru kardi apne bachche ko jivan ke bare main bodh karana or usne ye bakhubi kiya Well bhai ek baat itne saal hogye veer ko bhavna se bichde par usne ek baar bhi apne beee ko ekbaar seene se lagakar sulane ki ichcha nahi jatayi main to ye dekhna chahta tha

Bhavvna veer ko apne seene se lagakar sulaye 1 baar ye meri request hai or room khula ho or shweta dekhe par dono maa bete ke pass jane ki himmat na kare bas ek baar hume bhavna or veer ka aisa pyaar dekhna hai

Or bhai agar veer bhavna ke sath intimate hoye to puri tarah wo scene pyaar bhara hona caiye naki gali galochh wala ha baki sabke sath jesa cahe rakho

Well yaha ghar main to world war 3 chid chuki hai ek taraf hai bhavna or tejal or ek taraf hai shweta or bhumika haal ki situation dekh ke lagta hai tej ka paloda bhari hai par kab tak ye nahi kaha ja sakta

Bhai bhumika ko kya nind main pyaar karne ki bimari hai kya or jese usne shweta ka name leke ye kiya veer ke sath mujhe to lagta hai wo lesbian hai shweta ke sathv

Bhai mene suna hai ki tum incest jyada pasand nahi karte but hum 75 readers veer ko bhavna ke sath intimate hote or veer ko bhavna ka doodh pite sote dekhna chahte hai story main bhavna veer ke taraf attract ho sakti hai kyu ki bhavnabsaalo se bina sex ke rahi hai or jab samne veer jesa naujavan ho to kese control kare isme ek chiz sex ko hara sakti hai wo hai maa ka pyaar but agar sex ki in cha or maa ka pyaar mill jaye to ultimate love janam leta hai dono ke bich

Baki to aapki story hau aap jyada jante hai wese bro kya itna bata sakte ho ye pura arc kiss jagah par chalega imean mumbai main hi chalega ya kahi or foreign main itna to bata hi sakte ho

Baki fantastic and masaledaar update bhai

Till then take care or your self jaldi theek honeka or or fir xf par dhamaal machane ka brother

Good Update, Jis terha Tej or Bhumika Veer k sath chipt k sony lagi hen kal ko kuch ghalt bhi ho sakta hay, after all Veer bhi mard hay. hahaha, aagy dekhty hen next updates ma ky family relations kis direction ma jaty hen. Kaera or Sonia ki entery kafi time say nahi hoi Karan bhi na jany kahan busy hay. Kaera ka mission solve ho tu Veer ko points n skills mily gi jo aagy wo apny kaam la sakta hay kisi terha Levels oper kar k opponant system ko fight day saky ga.

Excellent update

Mast update bro and please incest romance bhi add kro

Fantastic update bro
Lakshya tay karna hai kya karna hai
Rakshak bannna hai ya or kuch

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and beautiful update....

Zabardast awesome update

Agle update ka intezar rahega or. Update bahut achhe tha

Incest

Sahi kaha bhai

Nice

Adhbhut..mza aa gya bhai, arc bdia tarah se suru hua hai & it's going well.. Although pace is slow a bit as u said but koi na story dhire dhire speed pkdegi..
Also veer system milne ke bad se poori tarah se uspe dependent rhta h but aaj uski maa ne use kuch hi minutes me zindagi ka asli saar btaya k life sirf aisi hi ni h jaisi k ye duniya dikhana chahti h balki isse kahi zda h or alag b ...which is true, veer ko apni life ka asli maqsad dhundhna hoga or bhawna ne ye prove kr dia k khud ke experience se Insaan jitna paripkva hota utna kisi dusre pe depend hokr ni ho skta or ye baat veer ko aaj malum ho gyi.. Akhir maa to maa hi hoti h usne veer ko wo nazariya dia h jo system ne b ni dia..or dusri taraf veer ke room me hi uski do bahene uske pass zda se zda aane ka try kr ri h ab mza aane wala h... Well mai to kahta hu k abi ek ya do updates to veer ke close ones ke ird-gird hi ghumna chaiye.... Baaki lots of love bro n keep entertain us as always... Big love

Superb update

Jo khatra aane wala hai uske liye veer apne aap ko taiyar kar raha hai. Samne wala dushman jyada taqtwar hai to veer ko jaldi hi system ko no or uper lejana hoga.

veer ki maa ke sawalo ke jawab hi nahi the veer ke paas or sahi kiya bhavna ne akhir kar veer ko duniya dari ki sachai batai. Har insaan paisa ke piche hi bhagta rehta hai or ye ek katu satya hai paiso ke bina zindagi nahi chal sakti..
par sirf Paisa kamana hi ek kam hai Kya.. ?. Khair ab apna maqsad kya hai ye pata lagana hai veer ko .. Or dushman ka maqsad kya hai ye bhi pata karna hai.. kyu veer ke piche pada hai?

Superb Update bhai.

Fantastic mind blowing update

Bahut hi romanchak aur shandar update bhai

माफ करना मित्र। आप इस अनुच्छेद को स्लो क्यूँ बोल रहे हैं। आपका इस अनुच्छेद बहुत सारे अनुच्छेदों पर भारी है। सही माने मे वीर को माँ का प्यार भरा डांट पड़ा। यह अनुच्छेद पड़ते समय बहुत सारे सवाल का जवाब मै भी नहीं दे पाया मित्र। ज़िंदगी इतनी नज़दीकियों से आप देखे हैं जिसका फसल है यह अनुच्छेद। यह तेज और भूमिका का बीच और ज्यादा नोकझोंक मै सोचा था। आज इस अनुच्छेद मे घर के सदस्या रागिनिजी का उपस्थिती दर्ज़ नहीं हुआ। हो सकता है आगे अलग से कोई अनुच्छेद केवल उनके नाम मिले हमे क्योंकि बहुत दिन से इसके लिए आस लगाए बैठे है। देखते है क्या होता है। मेरे हिसाब से उस अंजान आदमी से भिड़ने से पहले काएरा का मसला साफ करना होगा क्योंकि उस काम के लिए समय घटते जा रहा है। चलिये आपको बहुत धन्यबाद ऐसा एक सुंदर मननशील अनुच्छेद हमे उफार देने के लिए। आगे का अनुच्छेद देने के पहले आप अपना तबीयत ठीक जरूर कर लीजिये क्योकी इसके बाद आपसे कहानी के लिए अपेक्षा बड़ते ही जाएगा हम पाठककुल का। इस कहानी जैसा कोई दूजा शायद नहीं है इस फॉरम मे।

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update

Jabardast update bhai

As expected superb update bro bhavna ke aane se veer ki life aur bhtr hogi jis trha se wo use guide kar rahi he veer ko 1 guidance ki zarorat bhi thi ab veer aur focused hojaye ga, again brilliant thought bro amazing writing

Mast update h bhai...

Beautiful update bhai

Nice update

Nice update bhai

Brilliant update bhai. Aur ek baat aur bhale hi shweta kuch bhi chahti ho Bhumika ko veer se relations behtar karao kyuki jaha tak uska sawal h wo ek situation ki Hari huyi ladki jise uski maa ne apni ungliyo par chalaya h. Please if possible address it.

Wah!!! kya dhamakedar shuruat kari hai crimson arc ki.
1. Dusre system wale aadmi ke baare me to pata tha ki weh veer ke peeche aayega, yeh bhi pata tha ki uska system veer se jyada powerful hai, tabhi veer uske baare me kuch padh nahi paya tha, lekin yeh pata nahi ki veer ne kab anjane me uske ungali ker di. ye bhi ho sakta hai ki yeh mahaz 'sibling rivalry' ho, mera system jyada takatwar hai aur weh apne liye koi competition nahi chhodna chahta. veer ko teji se points batorne hain, iske liye agar usko sex bhi kerna pade, theek hai. waise bhi uske charon taraf oppurtunity bikhri padi hain.
2.Profit path shayad bussiness badhane ka rasta hai. Arohi, Ragini, Bhumika kushal hain, aur Mukta, Sudha aur Versha ke saath to pichle update me khud veer ne kaha tha ki usne kuch soch rakha hai. kis fields me kaam kerna hai, weh bhi clear hai. kahan kerna hai, weh bhi bata diya hai. ab Saili aur Kaera ke sath to sab kuch kerna hai. aur haan, Kaera ke emotions ke jagane ka time bhi nikla ja raha hai. ab ye naya '?' kaun tapak pada, kya yahi weh teele wali ladki hai, ya fir Ava.
Veer ne yeh sab pehle se hi soch rakha tha, lekin ab usko confirm ho gaya hai.
3.Khushi ki baat yeh hai ki ab Bhavna uske saath hai ho usko bhatakne nahi degi.
4.Sonia, Suhana aur Kavya gayab??? No jikar!!!
5.Ghayal saanp jyada khatarnak ho jata hai. Karunesh, Pranjal, Niharika aur shayad Rajat bhi is category me hain.
6.Chalo, Tej aur Bhumika ki pillow fight se unki dosti bhi shuru hogi, kuch touching - vouching bhi. ab kahan tak jati hai, yeh pata nahi. Boss, bada comptition hai. aur Ragani...
7.Bhumika ka neend me badbadana, uski guilt hai ya ateet...
8.Pehle hi update me prashn hi prashn hain, maza aayega. lagta hai is arc me chase hai, thrill hai, sex bhi hai, aur kafi spoilers ke uttar bhi milenga.
Too good. keep it up. Haan lekin apni sehat ka dhyan rakhte huye.

Haha...Tej aur uski ladaiya
Maja aayega.
Veer ko ab parwar ki kami nahi khalegi ab uske dil aur dimag ko thodi shanti milegi...

Dil or dimag ko kitni santi milegi yah Aapko bhi jald hi pta Chal jayega ...

Abhi to maza aana suru hua hai family drama se bharpur

Super Duper fantabulous update Werewolf bhai..

Nice update

What a update. Totally mesmerizing. Aapka lekhan shaili aisa h ki lg rha tha ki sari ghatnayen aankho ke samne ghatit ho rhi ho. Aur esa jadu bahut kam writers hi kr pate h. Aur un sab me se aap sabse best jadugar ho.
Mera most favourite part tha bhavan aur veer ke bich ka vo conversation jo veer ke sath hum readers ko bhi bahut kuch sikha gya.

Wao! Kya hi classic situation pr update ko likha gya hai grantho me Ise hi grihast jivan ke sukh kaha gya hai bhavna or veer ke drisya jaha ek taraf imotional the Vahi dusri taraf cute bhi, jivan bhar apni ma ki kahi bato me rahi na apne acche dost bna paye jo uski duniya me rahkr use bta sake ki family ke sath Kaise social hoye or Kaise na ho...

Tejal aaj veer ke kamre me sone vali hai ye baat sweta ko kaise pta chali,
Tejal or bhumika ke bich ki silent fight or uske baad veer ka takiya se dono ke hi sar me tapli marna Bahut hi khubsurati ke sath darsaya aapne dil ko lubhane vala...

Bhavna Ji ne Aaj veer ko 2 Bahut hi jyada jaruri bate sikhai hai jo Har kisi ke jivan me Bahut hi jaruri hai,

Tum rupay bnana pr rupay tumhe bnaye aisa kabhi mat hone dena.

Tumhari pahchan kya hai Ya ho Kon tum yah aisa sawal Jiska jvaab tb milega jb ham yah jaan sake ki hmara uddeshya kya hai.

In do bato ne hi veer ko bahut kuchh samjha diya or last me bhavna ka kahna ki ab vo hai uske pass to kabhi bhi aakr puchh sakta hai vo... Un sabdo me Bahut hi vishist Bhavnaye thi jinki gahrai ko nhi jana ja sakta sirf anuman hi lga sakte hai...

Veer ne profit path ko use kr liya hai or use bahut hi jabarjast sujhav mile hai path ke rup me...

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing with awesome writing skills bhai

Awesome updates

Superb update

Super bro nice

bahut sundar superb update sandaar agaaz dono bahen ki nokjhok lajawab thi maja aa gaya best part of this update

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next update

Super update hai Bhai

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Bahut badiya update Bhai

Boht Zabardast update

Nice move…

Super update

Bhai raaat ke 12 baje apni neend haram karke tumhara ye update pad raha tha aur tumhark. Bhavna ne aadha update life ki bakchodiyo me nikal diya. Mujhse pucho to apni life me khush rahna chahta hu bas koi fark nahi padta me kaun agar me khush hu to

Thanks Bhai ek ap hi ho jo atleast top class stories me ek reguler interval me updates de rahe ho, please Bhai,story complete karna nehi to dil bahut dukhta hei.Manta hu sabko problem ho sakta hei,lekin reader ko thora to hints dena chahiye story bij me hi rokne ka.

Awesome update bhai ab dekhna ye hoga ki veer ki anjan shaks se mulaqat kaise hogi

Superb update bro and bhai thoda haalchal kaira ka bhi dikhado ab kya haalchal h uske kafi time se zikar na hua uska bs Aaj profit path me dikha uska name

Bahut badhiya updat SIR JI

Nice update bro aag laga di hai

Supper fantastic update janab

Aate hi kahar da diye aur do billiyon ki ladai bhi suru ho gayi waise aage dekhte hai kya hota hai lekin ek baat veer ne sahi kaha ek ghar lena hoga

Waise abhi kiara ka mission itni jaldi kaise karega veer ?
Or uper se system k sath uske g@nd Marne alag baitha hai wo londa
Alag se use apne aap ko or grow karne k liye path bhi mil gya hai
Ab dekhna hai ki in sab uljhno ko veer kis prakar par karega
Waise Trinity ka entry dhamakedar ho or unexpected entry ho to us moment k kya hi kahne bas ye Trinity wala part dhamakedar ho mai itna expect to kar hi sakta hoo bhaya

1. Bhai etne jaldi mat kharidana ghar. Kyu ki ab jakar maja aara hai.jese ki tej our bhumika ki ladai . bhumika ab jaker veer ke liye react ho rahi hai. Jo pahle arohi jesi behave karti thi. Use khulne ke liye to veer ke pass hona chahiye.
Maa our beti ab tak akeli thi . na baap ka pyar bas naam ke liye.
Aur ab shaweta ne jo moka bhumika ke liye banaya. Wah uske chupe dard ko bahar nikalega. Ek bahan ke adhikar veer per tej jesa woh bhi chahegi.
Use bhi mokka mile bhai se jed karne ka baate kaene ka ya masti karne ka . our wah ek naya. Ghar ane se asan nahi hoga. Thoda time to do.
2.bhawana bhi pakka detective hai wah veer kab tab chupa payega. Yeh dekhana hoga.
3.bhai kaira ka mission ka kya stutes hai. Samay kam ho ra hai.

Bahutt jabardstt update Werewolf bhai mjjaa aagyaa pdhh k crimson festival sbko ptaa h blood red ki trh hone wala h bhtt intense or thriller...
Great work brother

Further to my message above, ab veer ko pura dhyan Kaera ke uper lagana chahiye, uske emotions jo jagane hain. Uska yeh task pending hai, pura kerne per points milenge, shayad system bhi updrade ho jaye. ab veer itni sunder ladkityon, mahilaon se ghira hai ki main bhi apne kadam sambhal ker chalne laga hoon, kahin kisi ka dil na pairon ke neeche aa jaye. waise bhi mere liye to kaera ayr veer hi main character hain.

Shandar update

Waiting for next update bhaiya ji

सुंदर
उम्दा
उत्तम

वीर अब कुछ घर मोह में , ओर कुछ अपने लक्ष्य को जानेगा।

उद्देश्य ओर लशय

Fantastic update Werewolf

I need help bro message me plz urgent

It is MADMAX bro

MADMAX tu ho par kiya Help chaye thi wo tu btao Werewolf Bhai ko

Bahut time baad yaha aana hua lekin maja aaya

Ye story kitni achi hai ye to batane ka matlab hi nahi hai fir bhi let's talk

Start karte hai veer se
Suruvaat me veer ka emotional side bahut dikhaya gaya tha I still remember him crying for kaera and calling her idiot
Lekin ab he is more like a matured guy who knows everything still show nothing
Uske character development jo ki hai aapne is top notch I mean after all he the hero of the story but still you have done out standing job


Ragini on the other hand is totally opposite of what veer is right now
Uske emotions uske samarpan veer ke liye padhte waqt ek ajeeb dard de jata hai
Don't know why but this is what it is
Thoda personal lagta hai ragini ka dard mujhe
I wish usse uske hisse ki khushi mile

Suman is the only character in this story that I don't like it
I just don't like her at all
Reason kuch bhi ho lekin main uske mostly conversations ignore kar deta hu
You called her slave but she never behaves like one may be that's the reason or may be because vo veer ka stand har jagah veer se pehle le leti hai and I wanted veer to speak
I don't know but I don't like her
Sorry

Kavya to best hai hi but now I want arohi and veer conversation
A beautiful long conversation
A conversation jo unke bhai behan aur lovers wale bridge ke beech se aaye
Unka koe bhi intimate scene se pehle agar unki ek badiya conversation nahi aaye to it will be little disappointed

Tej behavior is much more like a younger sister jo apne bhai par sirf apna hi hak samjhti hai but yaha to ulta hai vo elder hai fir bhi act like a kid(just in front of her brother)
Sayad pehli baar bhai ke etni pass aaye hai to khone ka dar to rahega hi
Enki conversation alag hi hoti hai
Yaha tej sab janana chahti hai to veer sab batane ko raaji hai
Bhai behan ka pure bond dikhta hai vaha par
Tej veer se chhoti hoti to jada maja aata kyuki jidd chhote par jada suit karti hai aur yaha veer koe jidd karega nahi tej ke samne
But over too good for a character
Loved every bit of tej presence

Bhavna is just like what a mother is supposed to be

And who the hell is Saili?
Did I missed something?
And that ? Is that Eva aur someone else is coming?

Thoda Sonia ko bhi dikhao bhai aapne kaira ke baad Sonia ko dikhaya tha fir suhana ke sath Vegas ghuma diya aur Sonia ko mumbai ki local bhi nahi dikhaye?
Bahut na insafi hai Sonia ke sath
Thoda update suhana ke health se related aur ek mulakat Sonia ke sath will be nice

I feel like kaira ko emotions dikhana thoda jaldi aa gaya
Abhi to story developing phase me hai aur etni jaldi kaira me feelings nahi aani chahiye thi
Usko vohi attitude best lagta hai but I know aap kuch bhi all of the sudden nahi karoge
Vo feel jarur karegi but she will act like kaira only

Koe aur bach gaya kya?

That guy system wala
What was is name again?

I feel like is arc me tej bahut kuch jaan jayegi veer ke bare me kyuki veer bahar hurt hoke aayega to tej ke sawalo se bach nahi payega vo
Eagerly waiting for those scenes

Bhumika bhi to bach gaye
Kuch past ka pata chale to batao
Vaise jaldi hi apni maa ki tarah ye bhi apne bhai ko apna dood pilane wali hai(just a felling)
Vaise bhi emotions dikhane ke liye kavya arohi tej hai hi to yaha erotica dikha diya jaye to acha hi hoga

Vo vegas wali ladki Divya naam tha sayad vo vapas aayegi kya?
Character tha vo bhi pura

Ek sawal hai jo baar baar dimag me aa raha hai
Who is going to betray veer?
Pehle to Shweta lagti thi i mean abhi bhi lag rahi hai
But kya koe aur hai?
Ragini hue to dil etne tukdo me totega ki jode na judega
Fir bhavna arohi kavya tej kaera and suhana too is out of this list
So who?
Kon hai jiska etna bada raaj chhupa rakha hai aapne apne dimag ke ander?
Suman hogi to maja hi aa jayega vaise

Nidhi ma'am aur juhi kaha hai dikhaye nahi de rahe?
Ma'am ka sarmana, blush karna dekhna to hum bhi deserve karte hai sath me juhi ka bachpana to milega hi

Anyway a very good story
You're doing great work by writing such stuff
I know it takes time and require a hell lot of efforts
So hats of to you for that
Keep the good work flowing
Much love

Are yr mera MADMAX account login ni ho rha hai jb bi login kr rha ho to notify me already login aarha hai yr you bta bhai ky kro idea de yr
.
Tbi personal me socha pocho shi se yha comments me ky deatil pocho tbi

Really amazing n outstanding update

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Nice update bro

nice1

A good update to start crimson arc, sweta has made a rivalry with veer's mother ans sister which is a little funny and sme time childish. Miss kaera ka task jo system se mila tha uska bi time nikal raha hai i think.

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

भावना ने जिस तरह से वीर को समझाया है, वो एकदम वैसा ही था जैसा वीर को चाहिए था, कोई ऐसा जो उसे गलत रास्ते पर जाने से रोके, जो उसे गाइड कर सके।
ठीक है वीर के पास सिस्टम है लेकिन तजुर्बे का कोई मुकाबला नहीं होता, और वीर की आंखों में आसूं का कही न कही एक कारण ये भी रहा हो की आज तक कभी किसी ने उसे ऐसे गाइड नही किया होगा जैसा उसकी मां ने किया

भावना के point of view से मुझे लगा की भावना का यूं अपने बेटे को अचानक से समझाना डर की वजह से होगा,
जिस तरह भानुप्रताप और उसके बाप को मारते वक्त उसके हाथ एक बार भी नही कापे, कही ना कही भावना के मन में डर पैदा कर गया होगा की उसका बेटा गलत राह पर ना निकल गया हो,

तेज का वीर के लिए possessive होना समझ आ रहा, एक तो वो बचपन से अकेली थी, जब सामने देखती होगी की कैसे लोग अपने भाई बहन से लड़ रहे है प्यार कर रहे है तो मायूस तो होती ही होगी, फिर उसे पता चला कि उसका एक भाई है, उसे imagine की होगी की उसका भाई ऐसा होगा वैसे होगा लेकिन अंततः

तेज ने जैसे भाई की कामना की होगी उससे thousand times better भाई मिला है उसे,
Look, physique, intelligence,careing, independent and well mannered
इतना तो शायद तेज ने भी expect किया होगा, कही ना कही दुख भी होगा की वो ऐसे भाई से 21 साल दूर रही और एक guilt की उसके बुरे समय में वह अकेला लड़ रहा था

तो कुछ भी करके जल्दी से जल्दी अपने भाई के life का most important हिस्सा बनना चाहती है, भावना के उलट, भावना को जल्दबाजी नहीं उनमें patience है लेकिन तेज अपना possession show करने से पीछे नहीं हटती
और जिस तरह से वो लड़ झगड़ कर वीर से हर चीज पूछ लेती है वीर को बहुत अच्छा तो लगता होगा
आखिर इन्ही चीजों को तो miss करता आया था, शायद इसलिए वो तेज की कुछ कुछ गलत चीज़ों को नजरंदाज कर देता है afterall उसकी बड़ी बहन हैं और वो भी सगी तो इतना advantage तो उसे देता ही है।

एक चीज और, वीर को भानु प्रताप और उसके बाप को मारने के reward के रूप में तेज,भावना और पूर्वी का fixed 100 favorability मिलना था अब पूर्वी और भावना के तो है लेकिन तेज के 91 मुझे समझ नही आया

स्वेता का character मुझे शुरू से ही कुछ खास नहीं रहा specially जब वीर सुहाना के साथ उसके होटल गया था और उसने पहचानने से इंकार कर दिया था, शायद यही वजह है की वो जो कुछ भी करती है मुझे intrest नही आता but अब कहानी है तो सब को लेकर चलना पड़ेगा।

Kaira personally मेरी इस कहानी का one of the most favourite character है या यूं कहूं की इस कहानी में मेरा crush है तो गलत नही होगा लेकिन kaira अभी तक इस कहानी में ज्यादा दिखी नहीं है और फिर इस arc के बाद वैसे भी उसका रोल कम हो जायेगा वीर अपनी incest life की ओर मुड़ जायेगा,

पर kaira के साथ मुझे अभी भी बहुत कुछ missing लगा जैसे वीर और उसका अभी तक अकेले में कोई भी ढंग सा conversation नहीं है, almost हर time वो किसी न किसी से घिरी ही रहती है so i hope इस arc में अच्छे से देखने को मिलेगी

वैसे तो मुझे मां बेटे का incest कुछ खास पसंद नही, so मैं personally तो बिलकुल यही चाहूंगा की at least वीर और भावना का pure मां बेटे का रिश्ता limit cross ना करे, ठीक है बादशाह के हरम में खूब सारी बेगम रहती है लेकिन बादशाह के महल में मां भी तो रहती है, but आप इसे अपने हिसाब से ही चलाना

And sorry भाई आज कल advisement की वजह से ना तो कुछ कमेंट करने का मन करता है ना reviews देने का, उल्टे सीधे tab open हो जाते है,
I hope की एडमिन ये तब वाली समस्या का जल्दी समाधान करे

बाकी तो keep it up, you're doing wonderful
And waiting for next update

Superbbb Updatee

" प्रॉफिट पथ " का पहला चरण शायद वीर के प्रोफेशन का स्टार्टिंग फेज से है। जो शायद लैंड , एग्रीकल्चर , सप्लाई , सम क्लोथ, फूड्स , मेडिसिन, परफ्यूम से सम्बंधित है।
इस ग्राफ मे जिन लोगो के नाम का जिक्र हुआ है , वो शायद इस क्षेत्र मे वीर की मदद करें !
अगर पहला फेज सक्सेस रहा तब दूसरे फेज पर काम शुरू होगा।

भावना ने बातो बातो मे वीर को गहरी नसीहत दे गई। बिना लक्ष्य के इंसान रीढ़ विहीन एक लाचार एवं मशीनी इंसान ही है। धन दौलत की कामना करना बुराई नही है लेकिन धन दौलत प्राप्त करने के दौड़ मे खुद को और अपने संस्कार को भुला देना बुरी बात है। इसके लिए सबसे अधिक महत्वपूर्ण है अनुशासन और एक नेक लक्ष्य।

भूमिका और तेजल का वीर के साथ उसके बिस्तर पर सोने के लिए जिद्द करना बेहद फनी था। दोनो कोई बच्ची नही थी कि उन्हे अकेले सोने मे डर लगता हो , या रात मे कोई राजा रानी की कहानी सुनना हो। वो जवान और बालिग थी। और सबसे महत्वपूर्ण कि वीर भी एक जवान और तंदुरुस्त नौजवान था।
जवानी का जोश कब उबाल मारना शुरू कर दे , कोई नही जानता।
एक बार तो मुझे लगा कहीं भूमिका ड्रैकुला तो नही बन गई है , जब वो वीर के गर्दन को अपने दांतो से जकड़ रखी थी।
वैसे तीनो का एक साथ लिपटकर सोना बहुत मस्त था। शायद जल्द ही वीर की इन्सेस्टियस जर्नी स्टार्ट होने वाली है।

बेहतरीन और जबरदस्त अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
और जगमग जगमग भी।
अपने शरीर का ध्यान रखिए। क्योकि स्वास्थ्य ही वास्तविक धन है।

Bilkul bhai sahi kaha is conversation se veer ko buhat si cheezein clear hogai he aur profit path ki waja se bhi use kafi help hogi abh

Superb update

What a beautiful way to start a new arc.
Bhavna and Veer ka conversation itna pyara tha ki main bta bhi nhi sakti....
Bhavna k questions mne real life me apne aap se kiye to main bhi mute reh gyi. What a strong lesson it was given by Bhavna.

Who am I? Answer k liye mere mann me bhi vahi aaya tha jo Veer k mann me aaya tha. Ki main apne parents ki beti hu... Ya fir iski dost, iski behan, etc. Par real answer kya ho sakta h? I really don't know. I am someone who enjoys life? Enjoying my time with my family and friends? But who am I? I'm speechless.

Sach me... Itna simple sa question h... Aur main answer bhi nhi kar paayi. Kitne logo ko sharm aayi hogi jo ye na bata paaye. Usme main bhi ek hu ....

Tej aur Bhumika ki cat fight pyaari thi. Mujhe Kaera ka intizar h... I want to see her. Waiting eagerly for the next update. Or next episode... Keep writing. Love your work.

Bhai ji aapki lekhni adhbhut or Jabardast update

Bahut jabardast update Bhai....mai review kabhi nahi karta magar ye update ka ek hi question sochne par majbur kar diya, who am I??
At the age of 28 I m still searching the answer.

Bahut hi gajab ka maa bete ke bich samvad...aur do bahno ke bich Bhai ko lekar ladai...bahut hi umda lekhan

Next kaera ka intjaar ...aur kya hoga jab uska emotions vapis aayenge

Superb awesome update brother

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY MIND BLOWING MARVELOUS AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Waiting for next update bhai

Aaj aayega update??

Wating for next update

Vese yeh naya crimson arc photo laag sexy rha hai

Bhai aap ki story me suruse padraha hu. Mujhe aap ki story ki system upgrade concept bohot pasand he. Xforum me account na hone ki bajase koi reply nehi kar paya. Aab her update pe mera reply aayga.

130 completed

Waiting for next

Awesome story

Zabardast update

Awesome update bhai.. get well soon aur bade update Dena....

hello xforum members abhi is site par kiya ho rahahai site open karne pe sidha ad hi aajati hay
site open hi nahi horahi

Bhai aapki story mind-blowing he mai to bohat bda fan hogaya hoo aapka ..
Bhai veer ka aage bhavna & tej ke saath bhi sex relation dikhana it's request..!!

वेटिंग

Waiting

Time

Abhi de de bhai

Zabardast update

Brilliant update Bhai

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Swasthya ka dhyan rakhen aap....

waiting

प्रतिक्षा.....

update kb tak aaye ga?

Waiting for next update sir g

Bro 2:30min to ho gye ab subah me update aayegi kya

Intejaar

Waiting sir

Waiting for next update eagerly

Lekhak mahodya ko itni itni sari demand aa gayee ki kis kis ko puri kare
Isliye let ho raha hai

Waiting

super duper ..
keep rocking

Waiting!!

Update 131 has been posted.

 

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Mega Update

Update - 131 ~ Ragini's Raag​

Ab tak...

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'

Ab aage...

"Yeh hai tum logo ka ghar. Aao!" Veer ne ek bade ghar ka darwaaza kholte hue kuch aurto ko andar bulaaya.

Ye sab wahi thi. Parijaat ghar ki aurte. Mukta, Sudha, Varsha aur Saili. Chaaro Mumbai nagri padhaar chuki thi aur apne naye rukne ke sthaan ko dekh woh sabhi taajub me reh gayi. Ghar kaafi bada tha aur pehle se grehesti ki kayi cheeze maujood thi.

Ghar kisi aur ka nahi, Rajat ka hi tha. Jo ab Veer ka ho chuka tha. Balhaar ke aadmiyo ne milke ghar se Rajat aur uski maa ke kapde latte, photo frames, athwa kayi anya cheezo ko alag kar diya tha. Aur Parijaat ki mahilao ke liye ek badhiya niwaas sthaan me tabdeel kar diya tha.

Sudha : Maalik! Ghar toh kaafi bada hai.

Veer : Ab tum sab yahi thehrogi.

Mukta : Jii maalik!

Veer : Samaan rakh do! Mujhe tum sab se kuch baat karni hai.

Veer sofe par baitha aur sabhi mahilao ko usne baithne ke liye kaha. Woh sab uske saamne ek palang par virajmaan ho gayi.

Varsha : Kya baat hai maalik?

Veer : Mein tum sab ki madad chaahta hu.

Mukta : Madad? Kaisi madad?

Veer : Tum sab apne apne chhetro me nipud ho. Kaabil ho. Mujhe unhi chhetro me tumhari madad chahiye. Saral shabdo me, Mukta mujhe tumhari madad Rajasthani khaane me chaahiye, Varsha tumhari madad aushdhiyo aur sugandho me chahiye, Sudha tumhari madad kapdo ke vyapaar me chahiye aur Saili! Tumhare liye bhi kuch socha hai mene. Toh kya tum sab madad karogi?

Woh sabhi ek dusre ko dekhi aur fir haami me sarr hilaate hue boli,

"Hum taiyaar hai maalik!"

Veer (smiles) : Good! Ab jab tak mein tum logo ko jankaari nahi deta tab tak yahi ruko. Ghar me harr samaan uplabdh hai. Baahar jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Baad me mein khud bataunga tumhe kya karna hai.

Sabhi ek saath : Jii maalik!

Veer fir waha se nikal gaya. Aur wo sabhi apne naye maalik ke sanrakshan me aate hi unki tareefo ke pul baandhne lagi.

Mukta : Maalik kitne acche hai na? Woh hume kaam de rahe hai.

Varsha : Sach kaha. Yahi toh mein chaahti thi. Agar maalik sirf mere shareer ke liye mera upyog karte toh andar hi andar mujhe behad niraasha hoti. Parantu unhone hum sab ke liye kaam dhundha hai. Iss se behtar aur kuch bhi nahi ho sakta. Woh hamari shamta se waaqif hai.

Sudha : Ekdum sahi kaha Varsha. Agar koi aur hota to keval hamaare tann ko bhogta. Aur shayad hume jaanvaro ki tarah rakhta. Kya kuch nahi karta. Par maalik alag hai. Hume unki tann mann dhan se seva karni hai.

Varsha : Hmm!

Mukta : Bilkul!

***

Waha Veer unn mahilao ki vyavastha me laga hua tha toh yaha ghar par Ragini apna plan set kar rahi thi. Sabhi ko chai ka ek ek cup pakdaate hue woh ek kursi par aa kar baithi,

Ragini : Mujhe aap sab se baat karni hai.

Usne sabhi ka dhyaan kheechte hue kaha.

Ragini : Dekhiye! Veer ka janmdin abhi abhi nikla hai. Par humne uske liye kuch bhi nahi kiya. Uska birthday celebrate hi nahi kiya humne. Pichle saal bhi hum nahi kar paaye the kyuki woh ghar par hi nahi tha.

Saamne baithi Bhavna ne ye jab suna toh apne bete Veer ki baat usse yaad aa gayi. Uss waqt woh jaipur me tha. Aur woh khud uss se mili thi. Par pehchaan na paayi. Aaj ek saal baad woh uske saath hai. Ragini ki baat Bhavna ko ekdum sahi lagi. Jab itna kuch Veer ne sab ke liye kiya hai toh uska janmdin dhoom dhaam se manaana bhi sab ka farz banta hai.

Bhavna : Tum sahi keh rahi ho.

Shweta : H-Haan! Veer ka birthday hume zaroor celebrate karna chaahiye. Bhumika abhi hotel me inform kar do ki-

Ragini : Aise nahi Tai ji!

Shweta : Huh!?

Ragini : Apni hi hotel me aap party rakhogi?

Shweta : Toh isme kya buraayi hai?

Ragini : Maana ki hamaari hotel acchi hai par thoda sochiye toh-

Bhumika : Mere khyaal se Bhabhi theek keh rahi hai. Hume kisi aur acchi hotel me party rakhni chahiye.

Shweta : Bhumi?? Tu keh rahi hai hamaari hotel kharaab hai?

Shweta ke dil me dard utha. Itne saalo se usne apni dusri beti ki tarah paala tha hotel ko. Toh aise me koi hotel ki buraayi kare toh dard toh hona hi tha.

Bhumika : Mom! Ye baat aap bhi jaanti hai ki city me hamaari hotel se kayi guna acchi aur bhi hotels maujood hai. Hum outdated ho rahe hai. Itna dramatic mat banaaiye isse please.

Shweta : Outdated-!? Dramatic? Hey bhagwaan! Ab meri hotel ka kya hoga?

Bhumika : Ugh~ Mom! Firse shuru mat hona please!

Tej : Toh iska matlab ek surpise party? Veer ko accha lagega. Mom? Aap kya kehti ho?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh taiyaar hi hu na.

Tej : Mere bhai ka b'day theek se kabhi manaaya hi nahi gaya hai. Ye b'day uske liye sabse special hona chahiye. Mein ek bohut acchi hotel me uske liye party rakhungi.

Ragini : Mein nahi Tejal! Hum! Hum uske liye party rakhenge. Isliye toh aap sabke saamne mene ye baat rakhi hai.

Tej : Toh? Fir kya karna hai?

Ragini : Sabse pehla task. Jo ki mushqil hai...

Woh sabhi kaan lagaaye usse dekhne lagi.

Ragini : Hum me se kisi ko Veer ko ghar se dur rakhna hoga raat tak ke liye. Warna usse sab pata chal jayega.

Tej : Ohh! Sure! Ye kaam mein-

Ragini : Nahi Tejal!

Tej : Huh?

Ragini : Ye kaam mein karungi. Tumhare muh se galti se bhi kuch nikla toh dikkat ho jayegi.

Tej : Nahi! Mein itni asaani se-

Ragini : Ye kaam kathin hai. Din bhar Veer ko kaamo me fassa ke rakhna hoga. Mein ye kaam bakhubi kar lungi. Mujhe uski pasand na-pasand ke baare me sab maalum hai. Usse kese vyast rakhna hai mein jaanti hu. Toh ye kaam aap sab mujh par chorr do.

Suman : Theek hai! Ab hamaara kaam bhi hume bata dijiye Ragini jii!

Ragini : Tejal aur Bhumika. Aur aap dono tai jii.

Bhavna aur Shweta : Hmm?

Ragini : Aap chaaro hotel ka kaam sambhaalengi. Kaun sii hotel karni hai, kya decoration rakhna hai, kya menu hona chahiye ye sab mein aap par chorrti hu.

Bhavna : Theek hai!

Shweta : O-Ok!

Pal bhar ke liye Bhavna aur Shweta ne ek dusre ko dekha, Shweta 'hmph' kar apna muh ferr lii, toh wahi Bhavna bas haule se muskura baithi.

Tej aur Bhumika bhi ek dusre ko dekhi, par boli kuch nahi.

Ragini : Suman jii?

Suman : Hmm?

Ragini : Aabha aur aap, nimantran dengi. Aapko pata hai na kis kis ko bulaana hai?

Suman (muskuraate hue) : Jii!

Aabha : Maa jii? Mera kya kaam hai isme?

Suman : Baat tum hi karogi Aabha. Mein sirf tumhe phone laga ke dungi jinhe hume bulaana hai.

Aabha : Ohh!

Ragini (smiles) : Bohut khoob! Aur aap hi dono ko ye dekhna hai ki sabhi log samay se taiyaar hoke pohuche. Hamaare ghar se bhi. Theek hai?

Aabha aur Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Sonali tum!

Sonali : Ehh?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara kaam hai-

Sonali : *gulps*

Ragini (smiles) : Cake laana!

Sonali : C-Cake?

Ragini : Haan baba cake! Cake katega tabhi toh b'day manega na? Bina cake ke kesa b'day? Tumhara kaam hai ki ek accha sa cake banwa ke lao. Veer ko chocolate pasand hai. Madad ke liye Tejal ya Bhumika se puch sakti ho ki kesa banwana hai. Cake bada hona chahiye. Theek?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : Toh usse chocolate pasand hai...!

Sonali : Ugh! Itni badi zimmedaari mujhe kyu-!?

Ragini : Aisa kuch nahi hai. Kaam sabhi apna apna acche se karna.

Sonali : Kahi Cake mere haath se gir gaya toh? Kahi kuch kharaab ho gaya toh? Woh geedad mujhe nahi chorrega.

Ragini : Toh sab taiyaar hai na?

Sonali : Waaaaa~ Meri koi sunn hi nahi raha hai.

Sabhi ne prafullit hoke haami bhar Ragini ko apna aasvaashan diya. Siwaye Sonali ke. Usse lag raha tha sabse bada aur bhaari bora uske hi sarr laada gaya tha.

Ragini ke nirdesh milne ke baad sabhi apne kaamo me lag gayi. Ragini gaana gun-gunaate hue kitchen ki orr jaane lagi jab ek peeche se aayi awaaz ne usse rok liya,

"Mere bete ke sang-! Kab se reh rahi ho?"

Palat ke usne dekha toh paaya ki Bhavna khadi hui thi.

Ragini : T-Tai jii! A-Aap-

Bhavna : Tumne jawaab nahi diya!?

Ragini : H-Huh!!?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke sang iss ghar me kabse reh rahi ho?

Achanak iss sawaal ko sunn woh thoda ghabra gayi.

Ragini : L-Lagbhag ek saal ho gaya. Shuruaat me sirf mein aur Veer the, uske baad-

Bhavna : Sirf tum aur Veer? Ek devar aur bhabhi? Akele? Ek chhat ke neeche?

Ragini : W-Woh-

Bhavna : Hmm?

Ragini : Mein- Mein woh-

Bhavna : Mein woh kya?

Ragini : Ummm- B-Baad me Suman jii aur baaki sab bhi jud gayi, fir Tai jii aayi aur Bhumika bhi. Aur ab aap sab.

Bhavna : Par shuruaat me toh sirf tum aur Veer hi the na?

Ragini : J-Jii!

Bhavna : Toh tum hi batao, aise me ek devar bhabhi ka ghar me akele rehna...! Kya sahi hai?

Ragini ne kuch bhaanpa aur fir apni ghabraahat dur kar woh nidar hoke puchi,

Ragini : Aap kehna kya chaah rahi hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh sirf puch rahi hu!

Ragini : Kya aap mujhpe aarop laga rahi hai?

Bhavna shaant rahi, bas muskura ke Ragini ko dekhti rahi.

Ragini : Veer ne mujhe ek nayi zindagi dii hai. Uski wajah se iss Ragini ko ek naya jeevandaan mila hai. Agar wo na hota toh shayad aaj mein aur mera parivaar bhi zinda na hote. Usne hi mujhe ehsaas dilaya ki jis raah par mein chal rahi thi woh prem ki ek jhoothi raah thi. Ye ghar sirf ghar nahi hai. Meri aur Veer ki iss se yaadein judi hai. Bhale hi humne abhi zyaada waqt nahi guzaara hai yaha. Par kathin paristhitiyo se nikalte waqt iss ghar ne hume chhaav dii hai.

Bhavna : ...

Ragini : Aur isliye, mere dil me uske liye aadar bhi hai, prem bhi aur parvaah bhi. Ab aage aap jo samajhna chaahe samjhe.

Kehte hue wo palti, na hi fir usne Bhavna ko palat ke dekha aur na hi woh fir ruki. Peeche khadi Bhavna bas usse jaate dekhti rahi. Parantu, hontho par ek ajeeb muskaan thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Toh wahi yaha Bhumika aur Tej ki ladaayi harr baar ki tarah jaari hi thi.

Tej : Mene kaha na ye hotel kar rahe hai hum.

Bhumika : Nahi! Iss hotel ki service achhi nahi hai. Mein keh rahi hu na-

Tej : What do you mean 'acchi nahi hai'? Literally, 4.5 star rating hai.

Bhumika : Ratings par mat jao, woh badha dii jaati hai unke hi staff dwaara. Mein khud hotel sambhaalti hu, mujhe pata hai waha kesi service hai. Why are you not trusting me?

Tej : Because you are not trustworthy!

Bhumika : T-Tum-

Tej : What?

Bhumika : Tum bohut ziddi ho!

Tej : Huhhhhh!!? Excuse me??? Kya kaha aapne? Mein ziddi hu? Haan? Mein ziddi hu?

Aabha : Agar aap dono aise hi jhagadti rahi, toh shaam ho jayegi. Aur fir mein aamantran kese dungi logo ko?

Tej : Toh inhe samjhao Aabha, ki mujhe mere bhai ka b'day celebrate karne ke liye inki help ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aur na hi inki recommended hotel me hume jaane ki zaroorat hai.

Aabha bechaari dono ka jhagda dekh seham ke chup chaap khadi reh gayi. Dono abhi bhi jhagadne me lagi hui thi jab achanak hi waha Veer aa gaya. Aur saamne ka nazaara dekh hairat me reh gaya. Tej aur Bhumika dono ke haatho me ek tablet tha jisse dono chhinaane me lagi hui thi. Aur dono kisi junglee billiyo se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer : Aap ab tak hotel nahi gayi?

Bhumika : Ahh! Wo-

Iss se pehle ki Bhumika Veer ke prashn me phassti, Tej ne achanak hi Bhumika ko bagal se apne gala se laga liya,

Bhumika : Ahhh!!!?

Tej : K-Kuch nahi Veer! Hum aapas me dosti kar rahe the. Hai na?

Bhumika : E-Ehhhhhh!?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : What are you doing???? Hug me!!!! Hug me nowwwww!!!

Bhumika (nods) : O-Okay!

Tej ki khuspusaahat sunn, ishaara samajh Bhumika ne bhi apne haath uski kamar par lapet diye. Aur dono ke gaal ek dusre se lag gaye. Woh dono farzi muskaan Veer ko dikhaane ma lagi hui thi.

Tej : Hehe~

Bhumika : Ahaha~

Veer :

Tej : Heh~

Bhumika : Aha~

Veer (frowns) : You two seem a little too close. Don't you?

Tej : Hehehe~ N-Nahi toh? Hai na? Hum toh bas friendship kar rahe hai.

Bhumika (nods) : R-Right!

Tej : Aur tumhe toh khush hona chahiye na ki hum dono aapas me qareeb aa rahe hai!?

Veer : Well-

Inki pol khulti ki tabhi waha Ragini inhe bachaane aa gayi,

Ragini : Veer! Tum aa gaye.

Veer : Hmm! Kuch kaam tha?

Ragini : Haan! Free ho na?

Veer : Free toh nahi, par kahiye. Kya kaam hai?

Ragini : Toh tum mujhe shopping par leke chal rahe ho. Abhi!!

Veer : Abhi??

Ragini : Kyu? Nahi le jaoge?

Veer (smiles) : Chaliye!

Ragini (smiles) : Thank you so much!

*Chu~*

Agle hi pal Ragini ke laal raseele honth Veer ke gaal par the. Peeche baithi Tej ne jab ye dekha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Tej : Y-You-??

Lekin Ragini toh aaj full planning me thi. Dono behno ko aankh maarte hue woh Veer ko waha se leke ravaana ho gayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost hi nikaali hui thi.

Dono kisi couple se kam nahi lag rahe the. Ragini aaj behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi. Peeli saree pehne, laalam laal raseele honth liye, woh poori haseena sii prateet ho rahi thi.

Veer : Aaj aap bohut sundar lag rahi ho Bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi?

Veer (smiles) : Ragini!

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe dobaara yaad na dilana pade.

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Ragini : Good!

Veer : Toh? Aaj kya khareed-daari karne chal rahe hai hum?

Ragini ne ekdum se Veer ke haath ke upar apna haath rakha,

Veer : ??

Ragini (seductively) : Tumhe sach me lagta hai mene tumhe shopping ke liye ghar se baahar nikaala?

Jab Veer ko samajh aaya ki Ragini ke iraade kya the toh uske lund ne apne aap ek jhatka maar diya. Muh me maujood thook gutak woh Ragini ko dekha,

Veer : You mean~

Ragini : Kya kaha tha tumne? Mein laut ke aa jaunga toh apna jawaab aapko de dunga.

Veer : Y-Yes!

Ragini : Kaha hai tumhara jawaab?

Veer : Mein-

Ragini: Bohut hi mazaa aaya tha na tumhe jab mere saath wo kar ke gaye the? Aur mein tumhaari yaado me raato raat tadapti rahi. Huh?

Veer : K-Kya kar ke gaya tha mein?

Ragini : Bhole bann rahe ho Veer?

Woh aur nazdeek aayi aur Veer ke chehre se ek inch ke faasle se boli,

Ragini : Apni Bhabhi ki choot par muh maar kar gaye the tum. Bhool gaye? Ya yaad dilau?

Veer : Ahem-

Ragini (smiles) : Ab jaha mein le jaa rahi hu, waha chup chaap chalo. Okay?

Veer : Yes ma'am!!!

Ragini : Good!

Ragini ke bataaye gaye sthaan par jab dono pohuche toh Veer aashcharya me tha.

Veer : Ye hotel!?

Ragini : Tumhe pasand aayi?

Veer : Yeah! Kaafi badi hai.

Ragini : Raat tak ke liye hamaara room booked hai.

Uske kehne par Veer sharmaate hue usse dekha. Ragini bhi andar se sharma rahi thi, par dikhaana nahi chaahti thi kyuki woh badi thi umr me. Usne haule se Veer ka haath thaama,

Ragini : Aaj koi disturb nahi karega. Sirf tum hoge, aur mein!

Veer : Do you really want this?

Ragini : Yes!! Yessss!!! Mere judgement ko ab aur clouded mat karo Veer. Mein poore hosho-hawaas me hu aur jaanti hu mujhe kya chahiye.

Wo Veer ko thaami aur usse apne hatho me pakde hotel ke andar ghus gayi. Room me aate hi Veer ke saamne khidki se Juhu beach ka shandaar nazaara tha.

Veer : Beautiful! Par kaafi mehnga pada hoga.

Ragini : Tumse keemti kuch nahi mere liye ab.

Usne apna samaan rakha aur kamre ko andar se lock kar woh Veer ke peeche peeche aayi aur uske seene me apne haath daalte hue uski peeth se lag ke khadi ho gayi. Dono ek dusre ke badan ki khushboo ko soongh paa rahe the.

Veer : Aazmaaiye mat! Warna aapa kho dunga mein!

Ragini : Yahi toh chaahti hu mein!

Kehte hue usne apne tapte honth Veer ki gardan se laga diye,

Veer : Ssssss~

Achanak ke hamle se Veer apni gardan sikodne par majboor reh gaya.

*Chu~* *Chu~*

*slurp* *slurp*

*puch* *puch*

Ragini kisi bhookhi sherni ki tarah apna ahaar dhoondhne lagi.

Veer ne palat ke uski patli kamar ko thaama aur kheench ke usse apne seene se laga liya. Dono ek dusre ke qareeb aaye aur jese hi 1 cm ki duri bachi thi, dono chumbak ke bhaati ek dusre ke hontho ki taraf khiche aur fir jaanvaro ki tarah ek dooje ko choomne lage.

"Ummmmmm~" "Sssssssss~" "Aahhhhnnnnnn~" "Nommmmmmm~~~"

"Mmmmmmmm~' *slurp* *kiss*

Veer ko dhakka deke woh bistar par baithi, aur dheere dheere apne ango se usne kapde nikaalna shuru kar diye. Pehle saree, fir petticoat, fir bra aur ant me panty.

Usne sab kuch utaar diya. Bas baaki tha toh woh tha uska shringaar. Haatho me bangles, gale me Veer dwaara pehnaya gaya pendant, aur maathe par bindi.



Ragini apne perr sikode Veer ko dekhi. Veer mantra-mugdh tha. Aisi khubsoorti alaukik thi. Usse vishvaas nahi ho raha tha ki woh Ragini jesi sundar naari ko bhogne jaa raha tha.

Uske baad apni dono taange khol Ragini ne apne dwaar ke darshan diye, aur apni muniya par ungli pherr woh Veer ko rujhaane lagi,



Ragini : Isse hi bhog ke gaye the na tum? Ab aaj firse mauka hai tumhare paas. Isse sahi se bhogne ka.

Veer : Are you sure aap ye yahi karna chaahti ho?

Ragini : Toh aur kaha? Tum chaahte ho ye hum ghar par kare?

Veer : Hotel me hidden cameras bhi toh ho sakte hai?

Ragini : Ye ek reputed hotel hai, toh tumhe iss baat ki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.

Veer : So, you have made up your mind huh!?

Ragini : Yes! Now come and fuck me Veer!!! FUCK ME!!!

Woh apna nanga badan prastut kar uttejna me boli.



Veer fir na ruka. Usne kayi mauke diye the Ragini ko aur gehraayi me sochne ke liye. Par, Ragini ka faisla adig tha. Aur jab saamne se baar baar nyota diya jaaye, toh Veer usse kadaapi thukraane waala nahi tha.

Woh kooda aur Ragini ki choot par toot pada. Woh raseeli choot usse aamantran de rahi thi. Apni jeebh ka behatreen istemaal kar Veer ne apna poora muh Ragini ki choot me de maara.



"Ahhhhnnnnnnnn maaaaaaaaaaa~"

Sisakte hue Ragini ne Veer ke baalo ko apne haatho me jakad liya. Veer apna ek haath upar le gaya aur unn swaadisht aamo ko bhi usne nichodna shuru kar diya.

Ye uski bhabhi ki choot thi. Kabhi Veer ne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki uss se baat tak na karne waali wahi bhabhi aaj uske saamne nangi hoke chudne ko kahegi.

Aaj kahi na kahi, Veer ka ego high tha. Usse khud par proud bhi tha. Taang utha ke Veer ne choot ko aur zorr se chaatna shuru kiya to Ragini madhosh hoke reh gayi. Issi...! Issi ehsaas ke liye toh woh raato raat tadpi thi.



Jese hi uska paani nikla, Ragini ka badan jhatke khaa kar reh gaya. Veer utha aur apne kapde utaar usne apna lund prastut kiya. Ab Ragini ki baari thi seva karne ki.

Woh Veer ke lund ko dekhi. Ye pehli baar tha jab woh Veer ko nagn awastha me dekh rahi thi. Dekh ke hi uske hosh ude hue the.

'I-Itna bada? Kya mein isse andar le bhi paungi?'

Aage badh usne Veer ke lund ko thaama aur uske supaade ko pehle chooma.

*Chu~*



"H-Haaahhhh!" Veer ke muh se ek siski choothi. Ragini uske supaade ko pyaar se choom rahi thi.

Ragini : Mujhe blowjob ka utna experience nahi hai Veer! Par tumhe de de ke hi seekhungi.

Veer : You are already doing good!

Wo muskuraayi, aur muh khol poora supaada usne apne muh me bhar liya. Veer ke liye blowjob toh kya woh kuch bhi karne taiyaar thi.



"Urrghh~' Karaahte hue Veer uske sarr par haath rakh usse guide karta gaya. Aur Ragini acchi tarah se choosti gayi. Par jharrne se pehle, Veer ne Ragini ko kutiya banaaya aur uske peeche aake khada ho gaya.

Ragini : Don't think now Veer my baby, just put it in!!!

Veer ne supaada choot ki deewaaro ko khol andar lagaaya. Ragini ka badan thitur gaya. Aur agle hi shan,

*Khaachhhhh*

Usne dhakka maar lund andar pel diya.



Ragini ke dono haath mutthi bann bedsheet par kass gaye. Uski aankho se aasu nikal aaye. Ye dard ke bhi the, khushi ke bhi aur dukh ke bhi.

Khushi iss baat ki, ki akhir kaar usne apne aap ko Veer ko saunp diya tha aur Veer ne usse swekaar liya tha. Dukh iss baat ka ki woh kabhi Veer ko apna anchhua youvan pesh na kar paayi. Koi aur usse pehle bhog chuka tha. Koi aisa jiske baare me sochke bhi usse ghin aati thi. Aur dard iska ki Veer ka ling uske liye ab tak ka sabse bada ling tha. Toh deewaare aur chaudi ho rahi thi. Dard toh laazmi hi tha.

Ragini ke sambhal jaane ke baad, Veer ne fir tabadtod dhakke maare,

'Nghhhhhhh~ V-Veer!! Veeeeerrrr! ohhh Veeeer!!! Claim me Veer!"

"Mere ang ang par apni chhaap chorr do Veeer! Aaaaahhhnnn maaaaaaa~"

"Y-Yesssssss Ohh godddddd!!!!"

*phattttt* *phatttt* *phatttttt*

Uske baalo ko haath me qaid kiye, Veer Ragini ko ghodi bana ke uski choot maarne me laga tha.



Ye ek show tha ki Veer kese Ragini ko ek mard k tarah claim kar raha tha. Ragini ne aaj jo raag gaaya tha, woh usse aur saath hi saath inn chaar deewaaro ko bhi yaad rehne waala tha.

"P-Please Veeer! A-Andar! Andar! I want it inside!!!"

Uski ichhaa ko poora kar Veer ne apna veerya uski choot ke andar hi udel diya. Issi ke saath woh bhi jharr gayi aur dono aapas me chipak ke lait gaye. Ragini uske seene par sarr rakh laiti hui thi.

Usne Veer ka haath apne haatho me liya, usse dekha aur boli,

Ragini : Mene tumse shaadi kyu nahi kii Veer?

Veer : Because I was too young.

Ragini : Kaash mein bhi tumhaari tarah young hoti.

Unn baato me ek ajeeb sa dard tha jo Veer ko bhi mehsoos hua.

Veer : Aap young hi ho!

Ragini : Kaash tumhari ham-umr ki hoti.

Veer : ...

Ragini : Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Aaj mein bohut khush hu. Thanks for doing it. Thanks for not neglecting me. Thanks for accepting me. And...

Veer : ??

Ragini : I love you~

Usne punaah Veer ke honth choom liye.

Parantu Veer ki bauhe chintan me sikudi hui thi. Kya woh bata de ki Parijaat me kya hua tha? Kya bata de ki aage bhi uske relations kayi aurto ke sang bann sakte hai?

Par Ragini ki muskaan, uski khushi dekh Veer ki himmat na hui. Aur aaj usne bataane se khud ko peeche kar liya. Kisi aur samay...!

Ragini : Tumhari liye ek surprise hai. Fufu~

Veer : Surprise? Kaisa surprise?

Ragini : Hehe~

***

Aur na jaane kab samay yu hi guzar gaya. Ragini ne Veer ko uske kapde dilvaaye aur khud bhi dherr saari shopping kii.

Jab shaam ke 7:30 baj gaye toh woh usse dusri hotel leke pohuch gayi. Veer totally clueless tha. Usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala Ragini ne aur kitne plans banaaye hue the.

Parantu jese hi woh hotel ke andar pohucha,

*Pop* *plop* *Pop*

Party poppers zorr zorr se shor karke phoote aur upar se chamkeele paper ke tukde harr jagah girne lage. Jab saamne ka nazaara Veer ne dekha toh woh bhaavuk reh gaya.

Saamne harr koi maujood tha. Uski maa se leke, Arohi Kavya, uske Dada jii, Sumitra, yaha tak ki Karan aur Kritika bhi aaye hue the.

Siwaaye Vivek aur Brijesh ke. Unhe wese hi invite nahi kiya gaya tha. Aur agar kara bhi jaata toh shayad hi woh aate. Brijesh toh shayad aa bhi jaata par Vivek ke baare me yahi kehna mushqil tha.

Veer : Y-Ye sab-!?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara b'day kabhi dhang se celebrate nahi kiya gaya. Ye hamaari orr se hai. Veer! Happy birthday!

Ek aasu ki boond uske gaal se hoke guzri toh Ragini ne turant hi apne anguthe se uske aasu poch diye.

Ragini : It's time to enjoy paagal. Rote nahi hai-

Veer : I-

Ragini : Rou mat warna mein bhi rone lagungi paagal!

Woh nishabd tha. Ye kabhi bhi usne expect nahi kiya tha. Koi uska b'day aise manaaye? Aaj tak kabhi usse photographs me saath nahi liya jaata tha. Par aaj ye sab maujood the. Uske sang, uska beeta hua janmdin manaane.

"Bhaiyyyyaaaaa~"

Kavya harr baar ki tarah daudti hui aayi aur uske seene se lag gayi.

Veer : K-Kavya!!!

Kavya : Bhaiyaa! Happy Birthday!

Golden frock me woh kisi Pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you! Kavya!

Peeche se Arohi bhi chalti hui aayi. Uske haatho me ek gift tha. Usne seedha aage badha ke woh Veer ko thama diya.

Arohi : For you~

Veer : Huh?

Arohi (smiles) : Happy Birthday!

Aur sharma ke usne ahista se Veer ko gaal pe ek chota sa par meetha sa kiss kar diya.

Veer (blushes) : Thank you! Arohi dii! Par aap sab aise achanak se~

Itne me Sumitra bhi aage aayi. Uski aankho ke neeche jhaaiyaa thi. Karunesh aur Pranjal ke jaane ke baad uski haalat behad kharaab ho gayi thi. Jese tese Arohi aur Kavya ne usse sambhaala. Par ab aage toh badhna hi padega. Apni santaano ko chorr kaha jaa sakti thi woh.

Sumitra : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer.

Woh aage aayi. Veer ne jab perr padna chaahe toh usne Veer ko gale se laga liya.

Aur sahi samay dekh ke Veer ne apni baat Sumitra ke kaano me dheere se rakh dii,

Veer : Aisa mat sochna ki Chacha ke jaane se aap toot gayi ho aur ab kuch nahi bacha chachi. Mein hu abhi. Jab tak mein rahunga...! Arohi dii aur Kavya ki chinta aapko karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Aapko kabhi bhi koi bhi zaroorat pade. Aap mujhe keh sakti ho.

Shabd kuch hi the. Par unme taaqat behad thi. Unka bhaar atyadhik tha. Sirf bolne ke liye hi himmat lagti thi aaj ke zamaane me.

Sumitra ki pakad Veer pe aur mazboot ho gayi. Woh apne aasu poch, sarr haan me hila ke peeche ho gayi.

Manorath bhi aage aaye toh Veer ne unke perr chhuye,

Veer (smiles) : Ab kaisi hai aapki tabiyat?

Manorath : Mujhe kya hua? Arre jab tak apne pote ki shaadi nahi dekh leta tab tak koi mujhe iss duniya se nahi le jaa sakta. Hahahaha~

Dono hass pade. Manorath ne fir ek sone ki chain Veer ko thamaayi aur saath hi shagun ka ek lifaafa bhi.

Itne me Ragini ke Mata-pita aage aaye. Dinesh aur Rohini! Wo bhi aaye hue the.

Dono ke perr Veer ne chhuye toh Dinesh ne ashirvaad dete hue kaha,

Dinesh : Mujhe yaad hai acche se. Woh tum hi the jisne hume bachaaya tha. Rohini! Ye dekho! Yahi hai Veer. Hahaha~

Rohini : Haan haan! Ek baar mil chuki hu. Aap toh aise bata rahe ho jese hum pehli baar mil rahe hai. Hmph~

Dinesh : Ehh? Mil chuki ho? Arre bhai mujhe yaad kyu nahi aa raha kuch?

Rohini : Badaam khaaya karo. Roz bolti hu par khaana nahi hai aapko.

Ragini apne maata pita ki harqato ko dekh sharma ke sarr jhuka lii. Par Veer aur baaki sab unki inn harqato ko poori tarah se enjoy kar rahe the.

Rohini (smiles) : Arre mein jaanti hu acche se Veer ko. Mere ghar ke deepak ko bujhne se bachaaya hai isne. Jug jug jiyo mere bacche. Khoob tarakki karo.

*Muaaahhh*

Aur usne Veer ke gaal ko choom liya. Fir apni orr se usse gift deke wo dono bhi side ho gaye.

Ye dekh, Ragini ne Veer ke baazu me chikauti kaati,

Ragini : Getting too many kisses huh?

Veer (smiles) : Ohh! Are you getting jealous?

Ragini (blushes) : Wh-Whaaaattttt? N-No!!! Paagal!!!

Usne agle aane waale logo ko dekha toh paaya saamne Karan aur Kritika the.

Karan : Koi information nahi. Koi thikaana nahi. Ye bhi koi dosti hai? Like mujhe aana padta hai tumhari khabar lene. Look at me! Karan! Mein Karan tumhare peeche peeche bhaag raha hu. Dad dekhenge toh haddi pasli ek kar denge meri.

Veer : It's your honour. Respect it.

Karan : Respect my ass-

Ragini (frowns) : Karan!

Karan : Ahem! Sorry for the language Bhabhi!! Hmph~ Wese mein yaha aata nahi. But you know...! I-I came for the food.

Uski nazre bagal me khadi Kritika ki orr gayi toh bechaari woh sharma ke reh gayi. Unn dono ke beech me khil rahe gulaab ko Veer idhar turant hi bhaanp gaya,

Veer : You came for the food or you came for the mood?

Karan : *cough* *cough*

Achanak hi bechaare ko thaska lag gaya.

Karan (blushes) : Wh-What blasphemy!! Hmph~ Mein...! Mein obviously food ke liye aaya hu. Suna hai yaha ka food accha hai. A-Aur ye raha tumhara gift. Hmph!!

Usne Veer ke haatho me zorr se ek gift ka package thamaaya. Aur bina kuch kahe, wo palat ke waha se dur nikal gaya.

Veer : Ye ladka bhi na...! *sighs* Roothi hui gf ki tarah act karta hai.

Ragini (giggles) : Fufufu~

Kritika (blushes) : V-Veer bhaiya!! Y-Ye meri taraf se. Happy Birthday!

Veer : Ohh! Thank you Kritika! You're looking gorgeous.

Na jaane Veer ko kya soojha par uske hontho par ek kutil muskaan sajj gayi. Usne gift lete hue Kritika ko kass ke hug kar liya. Aur beshaq, jese hi uski nazre Karan se mili.

'Youuuu fuckkkkerrrr!!!Damnnn you Veeerrrrr!!!' Karan mann me chillaaya. Uska chehra dekhne laayak tha.

Mann hi mann hasste hue Veer ne Kritika ko chorra. Par uss bechaari ke gaal sharm ke maare poore tamatar ki tarah laal pad chuke the.

"Maaaaammmuuuuuuu~" Ye awaaz sunn Veer ko sochne ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi ki ye kaun tha.

Ye toh uski laadli thi. Sabse chaheeti. Uski sabse pyaari Juhi!!

Veer (smiles) : Juhiiii!!!

Juhi : Maaamuuuu!!!

Woh daud ke aayi aur Veer ki taang se chipak gayi. Veer ne fauran hi usse upar ko uthaaya aur apne kandho par baitha liya.

Saamne se Nidhi ma'am aur Shreya bhi aa rahi thi. Nidhi ke haatho me Dhruv bhi maujood tha.

Jese hi Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha woh unhe dekhta hi reh gaya. Aaj kaali saree me woh maujood thi. Iske pehle usne aaj tak Nidhi ko kaali saree me kabhi nahi dekha tha. Kyuki Nidhi pehanti hi nahi thi. College, pados, aate jaate raasto me gandi nazro se bachne ke liye woh ye rang kabhi bhi nahi pehenti thi.



Par aaj...! Aaj usne pehna hua tha. Aur Veer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki aisa woh kyu karti thi. Kaale rang me woh qayamat jo lagti thi.

Nidhi (smiles) : Happy Birthday Veer!!!

Veer : Thank you! Ma'am!!

Aaj bhi wahi khumaari thi. Chaahe kitna hi samay kyu na beet gaya ho. Nidhi ko dekh aaj bhi Veer ki dhadkane tezz hoti thi. Aur Nidhi ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Veer : Aap bohut khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Sunte hi Nidhi laaj ke maare nazre ferr lii.

Shreya : Hai na? Mein bhi dii ko kabse yahi keh rahi hu ki Black unko bohut suit karta hai aur unhe aksar pehan'na chahiye. Par ye keh rahi thi ki ye sirf aaj ke liye hai.

Shreya ne jab sachhaayi bataayi toh Nidhi ki sharm aur badh gayi aur woh kisi bacchi ki tarah sarr jhuka ke khadi rahi jese maano uski chori pakdi gayi ho.

Shreya : Hey hey! By the way! Tumhari toh mast party ho gayi yaar! Haan?

Veer (smiles) : Daba ke khaana!

Shreya : Hehehe of course! of course! You know me so well!

Uske baazu par haath maarte hue usne apna gift thamaaya aur woh side ho gayi. Siwaaye Juhi ke. Woh abhi bhi apne maamu ke kandho par baithi hui thi.

Uske baad Veer ke apne log aage aaye. Shweta pehle thi.

Shweta : V-Veer! Happy Birthday mere bacche!!

Usne gift thamaaya aur uske gale se lag gayi.

Veer : Thank you!

Bhumika ne bhi kuch prepare kiya tha. Chota sa gift tha par packaging badi hi pyaari thi.

Bhumika : Happy Birthday Veer! This is for you!

Veer : Ohh! Thanks a lot!

Suman aur Aabha bhi aage aayi. Sabhi ko nimantran unhone hi toh diya tha.

Suman : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer jii! Ye meri aur meri beti Aabha ki orr se.

Aabha : Janmdin mubaarak ho Veer jii!

Veer (smiles) : Shukriya!!!

Akhir me Bhavna aur Tej aage aayi. Tej ne aate hi usse apne gale se laga liya,

Veer : Ye sab aapne prepare kiya tha?

Tej : Idea Ragini bhabhi ka tha. Par prepare hum sab ne kiya. Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Tej (smiles) : That's what matters to me.

Bhavna (smiles) : Happy Birthday beta.

Veer : M-Maa!

Veer khud aage aake Bhavna ke gale se lag gaya.

Bhavna : Ye gift meri taraf se.

Usne ek khubsoorat sa package uske haatho me diya.

Tej : Aur ye meri taraf se.

Veer ke haatho me gifts hi gifts the. Toh uska ye haal dekh Ragini ne uski madad kii.

Gifts ko rakh uski nazre kisi ko dhundne lagi aur jese uss shaks ki bhi lambi umr thi. Kyuki tabhi woh shaks bhi aa gaya,

"Phew!!! Pohuch gaye!!!"

Veer (smiles) : Maasi!

Purvi : Hey bhagwaan! Late toh nahi hui na?

Veer : No! You are just on time.

Purvi : Thank God!!!

Woh aage aayi. Bagal se uska pati Arun bhi saath me tha.

Purvi : Veer! Ye tumhaare mausa jii hai.

Veer ne perr chhuye toh Arun ne gale se laga liya,

Arun : Tumhe bachpan me dekha tha beta. Aaj tum itne bade ho gaye ho. Tumhe dekh mujhe bohut khushi hui.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe bhi!

Purvi aage badhi aur Veer ke maathe aur gaalo ko choom lii,

Purvi : Happy Birthday betu. Bhale hi belated happy birthday hai. Lekin tumhe enjoy aise karna hai jese ye real ho okay?!

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Thank you maasi.

Uske baad ab cake katna tha. Par jese hi sab log saamne aaye toh dekha cake toh abhi tak laga hi nahi tha.

"Aa gayi mein~ Mein aa gayi... Haah haah haah!!" Sonali daudti hui ekdum se aayi. Uske haatho me cake tha.

Uski haalat dekh Veer andar hi andar muskura baitha.

Sonali : Y-Ye- Ye lo bhai cake. Haah haah!!!

Cake rakhte hi woh kisi bhains ki tarah kursi par pasar gayi. Usse ab koi matlab nahi tha deen duniya se ki kya ho raha tha. Woh bas lambi saasein liye khud ko durust karne me lag gayi.

Sonali : O-Oye!!

Waiter : Yes ma'am!?

Sonali : Kuch thanda lao *huff* Abhi!!!

Waiter : Sure ma'am!

Sonali : *huff* *huff* Mein jaanti thi. Ye sabse badi zimmedari wala kaam mere hi sarr pe thopa gaya hai. *huff* *huff* Ab agar kisi ne kaha na ki cake ghatiya hai ya ye kami hai woh kami hai. Kasam se... Mene unki haddiya tod deni hai. *huff*

Cake kata, aur sabhi ne Veer ke liye happy birthday song gaaya. Juhi abhi bhi kandho par sawaar thi. Usse mazaa aa raha tha. Nidhi ke laakh manaane ke baad bhi woh neeche na aayi.

Cake sach me bohut accha tha. Veer ko baari baari sabhi ne cake khilaaya. Aur uske baad khaana peena shuru hua.

Sab khaane me jut gaye, toh Veer cake ke kuch pieces leke Sonali ke paas aaya.

Veer (smiles) : Cake ke liye shukriya. Ye lo!

Sonali ek pal ke liye usse dekhi fir uske haath se katori leke woh cake khaane me lag gayi.

Sonali : Cake theek hai na?

Veer : Hmm? Bohut accha hai. Kyu? Kya hua?

Sonali : Nahi! Bas wahi puchna tha.

Veer (smiles) : Aur agar mein kehta ki utna accha nahi hai toh?

Sonali : Toh tumhara muh noch leti.

Veer : Hahahahahaha!!!

Veer hasste hue utha aur wo Karan ke paas gaya jo Kritika ko khaana parosne me laga hua tha.

Karan : You know ye dish bohut acchi hai. Isse pehle boil kiya jaata hai aur fir-

Karan ne poori khaane ki process bata daali uss dish ki. Aur Kritika bhi uski harr baat sunn rahi thi.

Veer : Abe itni derr me toh khaana thanda hi ho jayega jitni derr me tu ye sunayega.

Kritika : Pfftt~

Karan : Tujhe taang adaane ke alaawa kuch aata hai?

Veer : Haan! Aata hai! Teri tarah fizool ke baate na karna.

Karan : Hmph!

Veer : Miss Kaera nahi aayi?

Karan (frowns) : Mene unhe bataaya nahi.

Veer : Huh?

Karan : Don't take me wrong par mene unki bhalaayi ke liye kiya ye. Aaj kuch important guests aaye hue hai ghar me. Agar mein unhe bataata toh woh yaha aati. Baad me Dad se unhe daant padti. So I-

Veer : It's okay!

Karan : Hmm! Isliye mein aaya. Mujhe khud bahana bana ke aana pada. Zaroor Raghu aur Jassi ko mere peeche bheja hoga Dad ne. But thanks to our friendship. Wo dono meri complaint nahi karenge.

Veer : I see!

Karan : Agar tum didi se milna chaahte ho toh kal mil sakte ho. Kal wo thodi derr ke liye free rahengi.

Veer : Yes! I do want to meet her. Urgently.

Karan : Kal ghar chale jaana then. Mein nahi rahunga. I'll be busy tomorrow.

Veer : Sure!

Veer Kaera ki khabar leke jab ek orr badha toh uske perr jamm ke reh gaye. Dur baithi Nidhi apna blouse theek karne me lagi hui thi. Shayad usne Dhruv ko doodh pilaaya tha abhi abhi.

Veer jese hi uske peeche aaya toh aahat paake woh peech ko halka sa mudi,

Nidhi : Veer?



Veer ke saamne Nidhi ki nangi gori makhmali peeth thi. Aaj bhi Rajat Veer ki aankho me ek chutiya hi tha jo aisi sundar biwi ko apne haatho kho baitha. Par shukriya uska kam se kam Veer ke paas ab ek chance tha.

Veer dheere se ek kursi par baitha,

Veer : Aapko pata hai aap kya keher dhaa rahi ho aaj?

Nidhi : Maska laga rahe ho Veer?

Veer : Maska? Nahi toh!? Mein toh sach keh raha hu.

Nidhi : Sessionals utne hi milenge jitne mein dungi. Tumhare maska lagaane se kuch nahi hoga.

Veer soch me pad gaya. Fir usse andar hi andar hassi aayi. Kya uski ye nadaan ma'am sach me ye samajh rahi thi ki woh yaha apne sessionals badhwaane aaya hai?

Veer : Become mine!

*Silence*

Unn do shabdo ko sunte hi Nidhi ka shareer kaanp utha. Woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Kya kaha Veer ne?

Woh eka-ek jhatt se palti aur usse dekhi,



Nidhi : Kya?

Veer ne par kuch na kaha bas muskuraaya.

Nidhi : A-Ahinda se aisa mazaak mat karna Veer.

Woh khadi hui aur sarr jhuka ke waha se nikal gayi. Uski dhadkane behad tezz thi. Veer jaanta tha ki Nidhi ke khud ke dil me kya tha. Kya woh waaqif nahi tha? Zaroor tha. Tabhi toh himmat kar aaj usne ye keh diya. Agar pehle ki Nidhi hoti toh ek thappad raseed deti. Par aaj ki Nidhi...! Sirf usse ek choti moti dhamki deke nikal gayi. Kyuki woh khud andar se uss se pyaar karne lagi hai. Veer ko abhaad ho chuka tha. Par sahi samay ka intezaar karna tha usse.

Dhoom dhaam se bade hi acche e Veer ka ye janmdin guzra. Ek ek karke sabhi apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.

Bache the toh sirf Arohi aur Veer, jo gaadi me gifts laad rahe the. Tej baaki ko leke ghar nikal gayi thi.

Arohi : Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer : Kya?

Arohi : Aaj ka celebration?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Woh muskuraayi aur Veer ke sang gifts ko utha ke gaadi me rakhne lagi.

Woh dono behad qareeb the,

Arohi : Mein ye keh rahi thi ki-

Veer : Hmm? Kya-

Arohi ki baat sunn'ne Veer jab ekdum se palta toh kam space hone ki wajah se ek baar fir,

[Oh damn!]

Jo nahi hona chahiye tha woh ho gaya. Dono ke honth aapas me takra gaye. Arohi ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jese garmi me tapmaan chadhta hai. Woh ekdum se peeche hui aur daud ke seedhe car ke andar jaa ke baith gayi.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

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'Please tell me. It was again an accident. Right?'

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'Right...???'

[....]

'Fuuucckkkkk!!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update short me nipatne waala tha normal update ki tarah. Par chuki isme slice of life scenes the. Isliye mene isse acche se aur bade me likha. Kyuki mere mann me aaya ki inn scenes ko aur acche se dikhaana chaahiye. Toh 2 updates aur aise rahenge jo abhi Crimson arc ke main plot se alag honge. Aur 2 updates ke turant baad humara main plot Crimson Festival ka shuru ho jayega. Toh likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ju logo ke liye hi mega update diya hai.
Dhanyavaad!

Mast update h bhai...

 

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Superb update

 

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Mega Update

Update - 131 ~ Ragini's Raag​

Ab tak...

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'

Ab aage...

"Yeh hai tum logo ka ghar. Aao!" Veer ne ek bade ghar ka darwaaza kholte hue kuch aurto ko andar bulaaya.

Ye sab wahi thi. Parijaat ghar ki aurte. Mukta, Sudha, Varsha aur Saili. Chaaro Mumbai nagri padhaar chuki thi aur apne naye rukne ke sthaan ko dekh woh sabhi taajub me reh gayi. Ghar kaafi bada tha aur pehle se grehesti ki kayi cheeze maujood thi.

Ghar kisi aur ka nahi, Rajat ka hi tha. Jo ab Veer ka ho chuka tha. Balhaar ke aadmiyo ne milke ghar se Rajat aur uski maa ke kapde latte, photo frames, athwa kayi anya cheezo ko alag kar diya tha. Aur Parijaat ki mahilao ke liye ek badhiya niwaas sthaan me tabdeel kar diya tha.

Sudha : Maalik! Ghar toh kaafi bada hai.

Veer : Ab tum sab yahi thehrogi.

Mukta : Jii maalik!

Veer : Samaan rakh do! Mujhe tum sab se kuch baat karni hai.

Veer sofe par baitha aur sabhi mahilao ko usne baithne ke liye kaha. Woh sab uske saamne ek palang par virajmaan ho gayi.

Varsha : Kya baat hai maalik?

Veer : Mein tum sab ki madad chaahta hu.

Mukta : Madad? Kaisi madad?

Veer : Tum sab apne apne chhetro me nipud ho. Kaabil ho. Mujhe unhi chhetro me tumhari madad chahiye. Saral shabdo me, Mukta mujhe tumhari madad Rajasthani khaane me chaahiye, Varsha tumhari madad aushdhiyo aur sugandho me chahiye, Sudha tumhari madad kapdo ke vyapaar me chahiye aur Saili! Tumhare liye bhi kuch socha hai mene. Toh kya tum sab madad karogi?

Woh sabhi ek dusre ko dekhi aur fir haami me sarr hilaate hue boli,

"Hum taiyaar hai maalik!"

Veer (smiles) : Good! Ab jab tak mein tum logo ko jankaari nahi deta tab tak yahi ruko. Ghar me harr samaan uplabdh hai. Baahar jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Baad me mein khud bataunga tumhe kya karna hai.

Sabhi ek saath : Jii maalik!

Veer fir waha se nikal gaya. Aur wo sabhi apne naye maalik ke sanrakshan me aate hi unki tareefo ke pul baandhne lagi.

Mukta : Maalik kitne acche hai na? Woh hume kaam de rahe hai.

Varsha : Sach kaha. Yahi toh mein chaahti thi. Agar maalik sirf mere shareer ke liye mera upyog karte toh andar hi andar mujhe behad niraasha hoti. Parantu unhone hum sab ke liye kaam dhundha hai. Iss se behtar aur kuch bhi nahi ho sakta. Woh hamari shamta se waaqif hai.

Sudha : Ekdum sahi kaha Varsha. Agar koi aur hota to keval hamaare tann ko bhogta. Aur shayad hume jaanvaro ki tarah rakhta. Kya kuch nahi karta. Par maalik alag hai. Hume unki tann mann dhan se seva karni hai.

Varsha : Hmm!

Mukta : Bilkul!

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Waha Veer unn mahilao ki vyavastha me laga hua tha toh yaha ghar par Ragini apna plan set kar rahi thi. Sabhi ko chai ka ek ek cup pakdaate hue woh ek kursi par aa kar baithi,

Ragini : Mujhe aap sab se baat karni hai.

Usne sabhi ka dhyaan kheechte hue kaha.

Ragini : Dekhiye! Veer ka janmdin abhi abhi nikla hai. Par humne uske liye kuch bhi nahi kiya. Uska birthday celebrate hi nahi kiya humne. Pichle saal bhi hum nahi kar paaye the kyuki woh ghar par hi nahi tha.

Saamne baithi Bhavna ne ye jab suna toh apne bete Veer ki baat usse yaad aa gayi. Uss waqt woh jaipur me tha. Aur woh khud uss se mili thi. Par pehchaan na paayi. Aaj ek saal baad woh uske saath hai. Ragini ki baat Bhavna ko ekdum sahi lagi. Jab itna kuch Veer ne sab ke liye kiya hai toh uska janmdin dhoom dhaam se manaana bhi sab ka farz banta hai.

Bhavna : Tum sahi keh rahi ho.

Shweta : H-Haan! Veer ka birthday hume zaroor celebrate karna chaahiye. Bhumika abhi hotel me inform kar do ki-

Ragini : Aise nahi Tai ji!

Shweta : Huh!?

Ragini : Apni hi hotel me aap party rakhogi?

Shweta : Toh isme kya buraayi hai?

Ragini : Maana ki hamaari hotel acchi hai par thoda sochiye toh-

Bhumika : Mere khyaal se Bhabhi theek keh rahi hai. Hume kisi aur acchi hotel me party rakhni chahiye.

Shweta : Bhumi?? Tu keh rahi hai hamaari hotel kharaab hai?

Shweta ke dil me dard utha. Itne saalo se usne apni dusri beti ki tarah paala tha hotel ko. Toh aise me koi hotel ki buraayi kare toh dard toh hona hi tha.

Bhumika : Mom! Ye baat aap bhi jaanti hai ki city me hamaari hotel se kayi guna acchi aur bhi hotels maujood hai. Hum outdated ho rahe hai. Itna dramatic mat banaaiye isse please.

Shweta : Outdated-!? Dramatic? Hey bhagwaan! Ab meri hotel ka kya hoga?

Bhumika : Ugh~ Mom! Firse shuru mat hona please!

Tej : Toh iska matlab ek surpise party? Veer ko accha lagega. Mom? Aap kya kehti ho?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh taiyaar hi hu na.

Tej : Mere bhai ka b'day theek se kabhi manaaya hi nahi gaya hai. Ye b'day uske liye sabse special hona chahiye. Mein ek bohut acchi hotel me uske liye party rakhungi.

Ragini : Mein nahi Tejal! Hum! Hum uske liye party rakhenge. Isliye toh aap sabke saamne mene ye baat rakhi hai.

Tej : Toh? Fir kya karna hai?

Ragini : Sabse pehla task. Jo ki mushqil hai...

Woh sabhi kaan lagaaye usse dekhne lagi.

Ragini : Hum me se kisi ko Veer ko ghar se dur rakhna hoga raat tak ke liye. Warna usse sab pata chal jayega.

Tej : Ohh! Sure! Ye kaam mein-

Ragini : Nahi Tejal!

Tej : Huh?

Ragini : Ye kaam mein karungi. Tumhare muh se galti se bhi kuch nikla toh dikkat ho jayegi.

Tej : Nahi! Mein itni asaani se-

Ragini : Ye kaam kathin hai. Din bhar Veer ko kaamo me fassa ke rakhna hoga. Mein ye kaam bakhubi kar lungi. Mujhe uski pasand na-pasand ke baare me sab maalum hai. Usse kese vyast rakhna hai mein jaanti hu. Toh ye kaam aap sab mujh par chorr do.

Suman : Theek hai! Ab hamaara kaam bhi hume bata dijiye Ragini jii!

Ragini : Tejal aur Bhumika. Aur aap dono tai jii.

Bhavna aur Shweta : Hmm?

Ragini : Aap chaaro hotel ka kaam sambhaalengi. Kaun sii hotel karni hai, kya decoration rakhna hai, kya menu hona chahiye ye sab mein aap par chorrti hu.

Bhavna : Theek hai!

Shweta : O-Ok!

Pal bhar ke liye Bhavna aur Shweta ne ek dusre ko dekha, Shweta 'hmph' kar apna muh ferr lii, toh wahi Bhavna bas haule se muskura baithi.

Tej aur Bhumika bhi ek dusre ko dekhi, par boli kuch nahi.

Ragini : Suman jii?

Suman : Hmm?

Ragini : Aabha aur aap, nimantran dengi. Aapko pata hai na kis kis ko bulaana hai?

Suman (muskuraate hue) : Jii!

Aabha : Maa jii? Mera kya kaam hai isme?

Suman : Baat tum hi karogi Aabha. Mein sirf tumhe phone laga ke dungi jinhe hume bulaana hai.

Aabha : Ohh!

Ragini (smiles) : Bohut khoob! Aur aap hi dono ko ye dekhna hai ki sabhi log samay se taiyaar hoke pohuche. Hamaare ghar se bhi. Theek hai?

Aabha aur Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Sonali tum!

Sonali : Ehh?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara kaam hai-

Sonali : *gulps*

Ragini (smiles) : Cake laana!

Sonali : C-Cake?

Ragini : Haan baba cake! Cake katega tabhi toh b'day manega na? Bina cake ke kesa b'day? Tumhara kaam hai ki ek accha sa cake banwa ke lao. Veer ko chocolate pasand hai. Madad ke liye Tejal ya Bhumika se puch sakti ho ki kesa banwana hai. Cake bada hona chahiye. Theek?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : Toh usse chocolate pasand hai...!

Sonali : Ugh! Itni badi zimmedaari mujhe kyu-!?

Ragini : Aisa kuch nahi hai. Kaam sabhi apna apna acche se karna.

Sonali : Kahi Cake mere haath se gir gaya toh? Kahi kuch kharaab ho gaya toh? Woh geedad mujhe nahi chorrega.

Ragini : Toh sab taiyaar hai na?

Sonali : Waaaaa~ Meri koi sunn hi nahi raha hai.

Sabhi ne prafullit hoke haami bhar Ragini ko apna aasvaashan diya. Siwaye Sonali ke. Usse lag raha tha sabse bada aur bhaari bora uske hi sarr laada gaya tha.

Ragini ke nirdesh milne ke baad sabhi apne kaamo me lag gayi. Ragini gaana gun-gunaate hue kitchen ki orr jaane lagi jab ek peeche se aayi awaaz ne usse rok liya,

"Mere bete ke sang-! Kab se reh rahi ho?"

Palat ke usne dekha toh paaya ki Bhavna khadi hui thi.

Ragini : T-Tai jii! A-Aap-

Bhavna : Tumne jawaab nahi diya!?

Ragini : H-Huh!!?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke sang iss ghar me kabse reh rahi ho?

Achanak iss sawaal ko sunn woh thoda ghabra gayi.

Ragini : L-Lagbhag ek saal ho gaya. Shuruaat me sirf mein aur Veer the, uske baad-

Bhavna : Sirf tum aur Veer? Ek devar aur bhabhi? Akele? Ek chhat ke neeche?

Ragini : W-Woh-

Bhavna : Hmm?

Ragini : Mein- Mein woh-

Bhavna : Mein woh kya?

Ragini : Ummm- B-Baad me Suman jii aur baaki sab bhi jud gayi, fir Tai jii aayi aur Bhumika bhi. Aur ab aap sab.

Bhavna : Par shuruaat me toh sirf tum aur Veer hi the na?

Ragini : J-Jii!

Bhavna : Toh tum hi batao, aise me ek devar bhabhi ka ghar me akele rehna...! Kya sahi hai?

Ragini ne kuch bhaanpa aur fir apni ghabraahat dur kar woh nidar hoke puchi,

Ragini : Aap kehna kya chaah rahi hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh sirf puch rahi hu!

Ragini : Kya aap mujhpe aarop laga rahi hai?

Bhavna shaant rahi, bas muskura ke Ragini ko dekhti rahi.

Ragini : Veer ne mujhe ek nayi zindagi dii hai. Uski wajah se iss Ragini ko ek naya jeevandaan mila hai. Agar wo na hota toh shayad aaj mein aur mera parivaar bhi zinda na hote. Usne hi mujhe ehsaas dilaya ki jis raah par mein chal rahi thi woh prem ki ek jhoothi raah thi. Ye ghar sirf ghar nahi hai. Meri aur Veer ki iss se yaadein judi hai. Bhale hi humne abhi zyaada waqt nahi guzaara hai yaha. Par kathin paristhitiyo se nikalte waqt iss ghar ne hume chhaav dii hai.

Bhavna : ...

Ragini : Aur isliye, mere dil me uske liye aadar bhi hai, prem bhi aur parvaah bhi. Ab aage aap jo samajhna chaahe samjhe.

Kehte hue wo palti, na hi fir usne Bhavna ko palat ke dekha aur na hi woh fir ruki. Peeche khadi Bhavna bas usse jaate dekhti rahi. Parantu, hontho par ek ajeeb muskaan thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Toh wahi yaha Bhumika aur Tej ki ladaayi harr baar ki tarah jaari hi thi.

Tej : Mene kaha na ye hotel kar rahe hai hum.

Bhumika : Nahi! Iss hotel ki service achhi nahi hai. Mein keh rahi hu na-

Tej : What do you mean 'acchi nahi hai'? Literally, 4.5 star rating hai.

Bhumika : Ratings par mat jao, woh badha dii jaati hai unke hi staff dwaara. Mein khud hotel sambhaalti hu, mujhe pata hai waha kesi service hai. Why are you not trusting me?

Tej : Because you are not trustworthy!

Bhumika : T-Tum-

Tej : What?

Bhumika : Tum bohut ziddi ho!

Tej : Huhhhhh!!? Excuse me??? Kya kaha aapne? Mein ziddi hu? Haan? Mein ziddi hu?

Aabha : Agar aap dono aise hi jhagadti rahi, toh shaam ho jayegi. Aur fir mein aamantran kese dungi logo ko?

Tej : Toh inhe samjhao Aabha, ki mujhe mere bhai ka b'day celebrate karne ke liye inki help ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aur na hi inki recommended hotel me hume jaane ki zaroorat hai.

Aabha bechaari dono ka jhagda dekh seham ke chup chaap khadi reh gayi. Dono abhi bhi jhagadne me lagi hui thi jab achanak hi waha Veer aa gaya. Aur saamne ka nazaara dekh hairat me reh gaya. Tej aur Bhumika dono ke haatho me ek tablet tha jisse dono chhinaane me lagi hui thi. Aur dono kisi junglee billiyo se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer : Aap ab tak hotel nahi gayi?

Bhumika : Ahh! Wo-

Iss se pehle ki Bhumika Veer ke prashn me phassti, Tej ne achanak hi Bhumika ko bagal se apne gala se laga liya,

Bhumika : Ahhh!!!?

Tej : K-Kuch nahi Veer! Hum aapas me dosti kar rahe the. Hai na?

Bhumika : E-Ehhhhhh!?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : What are you doing???? Hug me!!!! Hug me nowwwww!!!

Bhumika (nods) : O-Okay!

Tej ki khuspusaahat sunn, ishaara samajh Bhumika ne bhi apne haath uski kamar par lapet diye. Aur dono ke gaal ek dusre se lag gaye. Woh dono farzi muskaan Veer ko dikhaane ma lagi hui thi.

Tej : Hehe~

Bhumika : Ahaha~

Veer :

Tej : Heh~

Bhumika : Aha~

Veer (frowns) : You two seem a little too close. Don't you?

Tej : Hehehe~ N-Nahi toh? Hai na? Hum toh bas friendship kar rahe hai.

Bhumika (nods) : R-Right!

Tej : Aur tumhe toh khush hona chahiye na ki hum dono aapas me qareeb aa rahe hai!?

Veer : Well-

Inki pol khulti ki tabhi waha Ragini inhe bachaane aa gayi,

Ragini : Veer! Tum aa gaye.

Veer : Hmm! Kuch kaam tha?

Ragini : Haan! Free ho na?

Veer : Free toh nahi, par kahiye. Kya kaam hai?

Ragini : Toh tum mujhe shopping par leke chal rahe ho. Abhi!!

Veer : Abhi??

Ragini : Kyu? Nahi le jaoge?

Veer (smiles) : Chaliye!

Ragini (smiles) : Thank you so much!

*Chu~*

Agle hi pal Ragini ke laal raseele honth Veer ke gaal par the. Peeche baithi Tej ne jab ye dekha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Tej : Y-You-??

Lekin Ragini toh aaj full planning me thi. Dono behno ko aankh maarte hue woh Veer ko waha se leke ravaana ho gayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost hi nikaali hui thi.

Dono kisi couple se kam nahi lag rahe the. Ragini aaj behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi. Peeli saree pehne, laalam laal raseele honth liye, woh poori haseena sii prateet ho rahi thi.

Veer : Aaj aap bohut sundar lag rahi ho Bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi?

Veer (smiles) : Ragini!

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe dobaara yaad na dilana pade.

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Ragini : Good!

Veer : Toh? Aaj kya khareed-daari karne chal rahe hai hum?

Ragini ne ekdum se Veer ke haath ke upar apna haath rakha,

Veer : ??

Ragini (seductively) : Tumhe sach me lagta hai mene tumhe shopping ke liye ghar se baahar nikaala?

Jab Veer ko samajh aaya ki Ragini ke iraade kya the toh uske lund ne apne aap ek jhatka maar diya. Muh me maujood thook gutak woh Ragini ko dekha,

Veer : You mean~

Ragini : Kya kaha tha tumne? Mein laut ke aa jaunga toh apna jawaab aapko de dunga.

Veer : Y-Yes!

Ragini : Kaha hai tumhara jawaab?

Veer : Mein-

Ragini: Bohut hi mazaa aaya tha na tumhe jab mere saath wo kar ke gaye the? Aur mein tumhaari yaado me raato raat tadapti rahi. Huh?

Veer : K-Kya kar ke gaya tha mein?

Ragini : Bhole bann rahe ho Veer?

Woh aur nazdeek aayi aur Veer ke chehre se ek inch ke faasle se boli,

Ragini : Apni Bhabhi ki choot par muh maar kar gaye the tum. Bhool gaye? Ya yaad dilau?

Veer : Ahem-

Ragini (smiles) : Ab jaha mein le jaa rahi hu, waha chup chaap chalo. Okay?

Veer : Yes ma'am!!!

Ragini : Good!

Ragini ke bataaye gaye sthaan par jab dono pohuche toh Veer aashcharya me tha.

Veer : Ye hotel!?

Ragini : Tumhe pasand aayi?

Veer : Yeah! Kaafi badi hai.

Ragini : Raat tak ke liye hamaara room booked hai.

Uske kehne par Veer sharmaate hue usse dekha. Ragini bhi andar se sharma rahi thi, par dikhaana nahi chaahti thi kyuki woh badi thi umr me. Usne haule se Veer ka haath thaama,

Ragini : Aaj koi disturb nahi karega. Sirf tum hoge, aur mein!

Veer : Do you really want this?

Ragini : Yes!! Yessss!!! Mere judgement ko ab aur clouded mat karo Veer. Mein poore hosho-hawaas me hu aur jaanti hu mujhe kya chahiye.

Wo Veer ko thaami aur usse apne hatho me pakde hotel ke andar ghus gayi. Room me aate hi Veer ke saamne khidki se Juhu beach ka shandaar nazaara tha.

Veer : Beautiful! Par kaafi mehnga pada hoga.

Ragini : Tumse keemti kuch nahi mere liye ab.

Usne apna samaan rakha aur kamre ko andar se lock kar woh Veer ke peeche peeche aayi aur uske seene me apne haath daalte hue uski peeth se lag ke khadi ho gayi. Dono ek dusre ke badan ki khushboo ko soongh paa rahe the.

Veer : Aazmaaiye mat! Warna aapa kho dunga mein!

Ragini : Yahi toh chaahti hu mein!

Kehte hue usne apne tapte honth Veer ki gardan se laga diye,

Veer : Ssssss~

Achanak ke hamle se Veer apni gardan sikodne par majboor reh gaya.

*Chu~* *Chu~*

*slurp* *slurp*

*puch* *puch*

Ragini kisi bhookhi sherni ki tarah apna ahaar dhoondhne lagi.

Veer ne palat ke uski patli kamar ko thaama aur kheench ke usse apne seene se laga liya. Dono ek dusre ke qareeb aaye aur jese hi 1 cm ki duri bachi thi, dono chumbak ke bhaati ek dusre ke hontho ki taraf khiche aur fir jaanvaro ki tarah ek dooje ko choomne lage.

"Ummmmmm~" "Sssssssss~" "Aahhhhnnnnnn~" "Nommmmmmm~~~"

"Mmmmmmmm~' *slurp* *kiss*

Veer ko dhakka deke woh bistar par baithi, aur dheere dheere apne ango se usne kapde nikaalna shuru kar diye. Pehle saree, fir petticoat, fir bra aur ant me panty.

Usne sab kuch utaar diya. Bas baaki tha toh woh tha uska shringaar. Haatho me bangles, gale me Veer dwaara pehnaya gaya pendant, aur maathe par bindi.



Ragini apne perr sikode Veer ko dekhi. Veer mantra-mugdh tha. Aisi khubsoorti alaukik thi. Usse vishvaas nahi ho raha tha ki woh Ragini jesi sundar naari ko bhogne jaa raha tha.

Uske baad apni dono taange khol Ragini ne apne dwaar ke darshan diye, aur apni muniya par ungli pherr woh Veer ko rujhaane lagi,



Ragini : Isse hi bhog ke gaye the na tum? Ab aaj firse mauka hai tumhare paas. Isse sahi se bhogne ka.

Veer : Are you sure aap ye yahi karna chaahti ho?

Ragini : Toh aur kaha? Tum chaahte ho ye hum ghar par kare?

Veer : Hotel me hidden cameras bhi toh ho sakte hai?

Ragini : Ye ek reputed hotel hai, toh tumhe iss baat ki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.

Veer : So, you have made up your mind huh!?

Ragini : Yes! Now come and fuck me Veer!!! FUCK ME!!!

Woh apna nanga badan prastut kar uttejna me boli.



Veer fir na ruka. Usne kayi mauke diye the Ragini ko aur gehraayi me sochne ke liye. Par, Ragini ka faisla adig tha. Aur jab saamne se baar baar nyota diya jaaye, toh Veer usse kadaapi thukraane waala nahi tha.

Woh kooda aur Ragini ki choot par toot pada. Woh raseeli choot usse aamantran de rahi thi. Apni jeebh ka behatreen istemaal kar Veer ne apna poora muh Ragini ki choot me de maara.



"Ahhhhnnnnnnnn maaaaaaaaaaa~"

Sisakte hue Ragini ne Veer ke baalo ko apne haatho me jakad liya. Veer apna ek haath upar le gaya aur unn swaadisht aamo ko bhi usne nichodna shuru kar diya.

Ye uski bhabhi ki choot thi. Kabhi Veer ne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki uss se baat tak na karne waali wahi bhabhi aaj uske saamne nangi hoke chudne ko kahegi.

Aaj kahi na kahi, Veer ka ego high tha. Usse khud par proud bhi tha. Taang utha ke Veer ne choot ko aur zorr se chaatna shuru kiya to Ragini madhosh hoke reh gayi. Issi...! Issi ehsaas ke liye toh woh raato raat tadpi thi.



Jese hi uska paani nikla, Ragini ka badan jhatke khaa kar reh gaya. Veer utha aur apne kapde utaar usne apna lund prastut kiya. Ab Ragini ki baari thi seva karne ki.

Woh Veer ke lund ko dekhi. Ye pehli baar tha jab woh Veer ko nagn awastha me dekh rahi thi. Dekh ke hi uske hosh ude hue the.

'I-Itna bada? Kya mein isse andar le bhi paungi?'

Aage badh usne Veer ke lund ko thaama aur uske supaade ko pehle chooma.

*Chu~*



"H-Haaahhhh!" Veer ke muh se ek siski choothi. Ragini uske supaade ko pyaar se choom rahi thi.

Ragini : Mujhe blowjob ka utna experience nahi hai Veer! Par tumhe de de ke hi seekhungi.

Veer : You are already doing good!

Wo muskuraayi, aur muh khol poora supaada usne apne muh me bhar liya. Veer ke liye blowjob toh kya woh kuch bhi karne taiyaar thi.



"Urrghh~' Karaahte hue Veer uske sarr par haath rakh usse guide karta gaya. Aur Ragini acchi tarah se choosti gayi. Par jharrne se pehle, Veer ne Ragini ko kutiya banaaya aur uske peeche aake khada ho gaya.

Ragini : Don't think now Veer my baby, just put it in!!!

Veer ne supaada choot ki deewaaro ko khol andar lagaaya. Ragini ka badan thitur gaya. Aur agle hi shan,

*Khaachhhhh*

Usne dhakka maar lund andar pel diya.



Ragini ke dono haath mutthi bann bedsheet par kass gaye. Uski aankho se aasu nikal aaye. Ye dard ke bhi the, khushi ke bhi aur dukh ke bhi.

Khushi iss baat ki, ki akhir kaar usne apne aap ko Veer ko saunp diya tha aur Veer ne usse swekaar liya tha. Dukh iss baat ka ki woh kabhi Veer ko apna anchhua youvan pesh na kar paayi. Koi aur usse pehle bhog chuka tha. Koi aisa jiske baare me sochke bhi usse ghin aati thi. Aur dard iska ki Veer ka ling uske liye ab tak ka sabse bada ling tha. Toh deewaare aur chaudi ho rahi thi. Dard toh laazmi hi tha.

Ragini ke sambhal jaane ke baad, Veer ne fir tabadtod dhakke maare,

'Nghhhhhhh~ V-Veer!! Veeeeerrrr! ohhh Veeeer!!! Claim me Veer!"

"Mere ang ang par apni chhaap chorr do Veeer! Aaaaahhhnnn maaaaaaa~"

"Y-Yesssssss Ohh godddddd!!!!"

*phattttt* *phatttt* *phatttttt*

Uske baalo ko haath me qaid kiye, Veer Ragini ko ghodi bana ke uski choot maarne me laga tha.



Ye ek show tha ki Veer kese Ragini ko ek mard k tarah claim kar raha tha. Ragini ne aaj jo raag gaaya tha, woh usse aur saath hi saath inn chaar deewaaro ko bhi yaad rehne waala tha.

"P-Please Veeer! A-Andar! Andar! I want it inside!!!"

Uski ichhaa ko poora kar Veer ne apna veerya uski choot ke andar hi udel diya. Issi ke saath woh bhi jharr gayi aur dono aapas me chipak ke lait gaye. Ragini uske seene par sarr rakh laiti hui thi.

Usne Veer ka haath apne haatho me liya, usse dekha aur boli,

Ragini : Mene tumse shaadi kyu nahi kii Veer?

Veer : Because I was too young.

Ragini : Kaash mein bhi tumhaari tarah young hoti.

Unn baato me ek ajeeb sa dard tha jo Veer ko bhi mehsoos hua.

Veer : Aap young hi ho!

Ragini : Kaash tumhari ham-umr ki hoti.

Veer : ...

Ragini : Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Aaj mein bohut khush hu. Thanks for doing it. Thanks for not neglecting me. Thanks for accepting me. And...

Veer : ??

Ragini : I love you~

Usne punaah Veer ke honth choom liye.

Parantu Veer ki bauhe chintan me sikudi hui thi. Kya woh bata de ki Parijaat me kya hua tha? Kya bata de ki aage bhi uske relations kayi aurto ke sang bann sakte hai?

Par Ragini ki muskaan, uski khushi dekh Veer ki himmat na hui. Aur aaj usne bataane se khud ko peeche kar liya. Kisi aur samay...!

Ragini : Tumhari liye ek surprise hai. Fufu~

Veer : Surprise? Kaisa surprise?

Ragini : Hehe~

***

Aur na jaane kab samay yu hi guzar gaya. Ragini ne Veer ko uske kapde dilvaaye aur khud bhi dherr saari shopping kii.

Jab shaam ke 7:30 baj gaye toh woh usse dusri hotel leke pohuch gayi. Veer totally clueless tha. Usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala Ragini ne aur kitne plans banaaye hue the.

Parantu jese hi woh hotel ke andar pohucha,

*Pop* *plop* *Pop*

Party poppers zorr zorr se shor karke phoote aur upar se chamkeele paper ke tukde harr jagah girne lage. Jab saamne ka nazaara Veer ne dekha toh woh bhaavuk reh gaya.

Saamne harr koi maujood tha. Uski maa se leke, Arohi Kavya, uske Dada jii, Sumitra, yaha tak ki Karan aur Kritika bhi aaye hue the.

Siwaaye Vivek aur Brijesh ke. Unhe wese hi invite nahi kiya gaya tha. Aur agar kara bhi jaata toh shayad hi woh aate. Brijesh toh shayad aa bhi jaata par Vivek ke baare me yahi kehna mushqil tha.

Veer : Y-Ye sab-!?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara b'day kabhi dhang se celebrate nahi kiya gaya. Ye hamaari orr se hai. Veer! Happy birthday!

Ek aasu ki boond uske gaal se hoke guzri toh Ragini ne turant hi apne anguthe se uske aasu poch diye.

Ragini : It's time to enjoy paagal. Rote nahi hai-

Veer : I-

Ragini : Rou mat warna mein bhi rone lagungi paagal!

Woh nishabd tha. Ye kabhi bhi usne expect nahi kiya tha. Koi uska b'day aise manaaye? Aaj tak kabhi usse photographs me saath nahi liya jaata tha. Par aaj ye sab maujood the. Uske sang, uska beeta hua janmdin manaane.

"Bhaiyyyyaaaaa~"

Kavya harr baar ki tarah daudti hui aayi aur uske seene se lag gayi.

Veer : K-Kavya!!!

Kavya : Bhaiyaa! Happy Birthday!

Golden frock me woh kisi Pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you! Kavya!

Peeche se Arohi bhi chalti hui aayi. Uske haatho me ek gift tha. Usne seedha aage badha ke woh Veer ko thama diya.

Arohi : For you~

Veer : Huh?

Arohi (smiles) : Happy Birthday!

Aur sharma ke usne ahista se Veer ko gaal pe ek chota sa par meetha sa kiss kar diya.

Veer (blushes) : Thank you! Arohi dii! Par aap sab aise achanak se~

Itne me Sumitra bhi aage aayi. Uski aankho ke neeche jhaaiyaa thi. Karunesh aur Pranjal ke jaane ke baad uski haalat behad kharaab ho gayi thi. Jese tese Arohi aur Kavya ne usse sambhaala. Par ab aage toh badhna hi padega. Apni santaano ko chorr kaha jaa sakti thi woh.

Sumitra : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer.

Woh aage aayi. Veer ne jab perr padna chaahe toh usne Veer ko gale se laga liya.

Aur sahi samay dekh ke Veer ne apni baat Sumitra ke kaano me dheere se rakh dii,

Veer : Aisa mat sochna ki Chacha ke jaane se aap toot gayi ho aur ab kuch nahi bacha chachi. Mein hu abhi. Jab tak mein rahunga...! Arohi dii aur Kavya ki chinta aapko karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Aapko kabhi bhi koi bhi zaroorat pade. Aap mujhe keh sakti ho.

Shabd kuch hi the. Par unme taaqat behad thi. Unka bhaar atyadhik tha. Sirf bolne ke liye hi himmat lagti thi aaj ke zamaane me.

Sumitra ki pakad Veer pe aur mazboot ho gayi. Woh apne aasu poch, sarr haan me hila ke peeche ho gayi.

Manorath bhi aage aaye toh Veer ne unke perr chhuye,

Veer (smiles) : Ab kaisi hai aapki tabiyat?

Manorath : Mujhe kya hua? Arre jab tak apne pote ki shaadi nahi dekh leta tab tak koi mujhe iss duniya se nahi le jaa sakta. Hahahaha~

Dono hass pade. Manorath ne fir ek sone ki chain Veer ko thamaayi aur saath hi shagun ka ek lifaafa bhi.

Itne me Ragini ke Mata-pita aage aaye. Dinesh aur Rohini! Wo bhi aaye hue the.

Dono ke perr Veer ne chhuye toh Dinesh ne ashirvaad dete hue kaha,

Dinesh : Mujhe yaad hai acche se. Woh tum hi the jisne hume bachaaya tha. Rohini! Ye dekho! Yahi hai Veer. Hahaha~

Rohini : Haan haan! Ek baar mil chuki hu. Aap toh aise bata rahe ho jese hum pehli baar mil rahe hai. Hmph~

Dinesh : Ehh? Mil chuki ho? Arre bhai mujhe yaad kyu nahi aa raha kuch?

Rohini : Badaam khaaya karo. Roz bolti hu par khaana nahi hai aapko.

Ragini apne maata pita ki harqato ko dekh sharma ke sarr jhuka lii. Par Veer aur baaki sab unki inn harqato ko poori tarah se enjoy kar rahe the.

Rohini (smiles) : Arre mein jaanti hu acche se Veer ko. Mere ghar ke deepak ko bujhne se bachaaya hai isne. Jug jug jiyo mere bacche. Khoob tarakki karo.

*Muaaahhh*

Aur usne Veer ke gaal ko choom liya. Fir apni orr se usse gift deke wo dono bhi side ho gaye.

Ye dekh, Ragini ne Veer ke baazu me chikauti kaati,

Ragini : Getting too many kisses huh?

Veer (smiles) : Ohh! Are you getting jealous?

Ragini (blushes) : Wh-Whaaaattttt? N-No!!! Paagal!!!

Usne agle aane waale logo ko dekha toh paaya saamne Karan aur Kritika the.

Karan : Koi information nahi. Koi thikaana nahi. Ye bhi koi dosti hai? Like mujhe aana padta hai tumhari khabar lene. Look at me! Karan! Mein Karan tumhare peeche peeche bhaag raha hu. Dad dekhenge toh haddi pasli ek kar denge meri.

Veer : It's your honour. Respect it.

Karan : Respect my ass-

Ragini (frowns) : Karan!

Karan : Ahem! Sorry for the language Bhabhi!! Hmph~ Wese mein yaha aata nahi. But you know...! I-I came for the food.

Uski nazre bagal me khadi Kritika ki orr gayi toh bechaari woh sharma ke reh gayi. Unn dono ke beech me khil rahe gulaab ko Veer idhar turant hi bhaanp gaya,

Veer : You came for the food or you came for the mood?

Karan : *cough* *cough*

Achanak hi bechaare ko thaska lag gaya.

Karan (blushes) : Wh-What blasphemy!! Hmph~ Mein...! Mein obviously food ke liye aaya hu. Suna hai yaha ka food accha hai. A-Aur ye raha tumhara gift. Hmph!!

Usne Veer ke haatho me zorr se ek gift ka package thamaaya. Aur bina kuch kahe, wo palat ke waha se dur nikal gaya.

Veer : Ye ladka bhi na...! *sighs* Roothi hui gf ki tarah act karta hai.

Ragini (giggles) : Fufufu~

Kritika (blushes) : V-Veer bhaiya!! Y-Ye meri taraf se. Happy Birthday!

Veer : Ohh! Thank you Kritika! You're looking gorgeous.

Na jaane Veer ko kya soojha par uske hontho par ek kutil muskaan sajj gayi. Usne gift lete hue Kritika ko kass ke hug kar liya. Aur beshaq, jese hi uski nazre Karan se mili.

'Youuuu fuckkkkerrrr!!!Damnnn you Veeerrrrr!!!' Karan mann me chillaaya. Uska chehra dekhne laayak tha.

Mann hi mann hasste hue Veer ne Kritika ko chorra. Par uss bechaari ke gaal sharm ke maare poore tamatar ki tarah laal pad chuke the.

"Maaaaammmuuuuuuu~" Ye awaaz sunn Veer ko sochne ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi ki ye kaun tha.

Ye toh uski laadli thi. Sabse chaheeti. Uski sabse pyaari Juhi!!

Veer (smiles) : Juhiiii!!!

Juhi : Maaamuuuu!!!

Woh daud ke aayi aur Veer ki taang se chipak gayi. Veer ne fauran hi usse upar ko uthaaya aur apne kandho par baitha liya.

Saamne se Nidhi ma'am aur Shreya bhi aa rahi thi. Nidhi ke haatho me Dhruv bhi maujood tha.

Jese hi Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha woh unhe dekhta hi reh gaya. Aaj kaali saree me woh maujood thi. Iske pehle usne aaj tak Nidhi ko kaali saree me kabhi nahi dekha tha. Kyuki Nidhi pehanti hi nahi thi. College, pados, aate jaate raasto me gandi nazro se bachne ke liye woh ye rang kabhi bhi nahi pehenti thi.



Par aaj...! Aaj usne pehna hua tha. Aur Veer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki aisa woh kyu karti thi. Kaale rang me woh qayamat jo lagti thi.

Nidhi (smiles) : Happy Birthday Veer!!!

Veer : Thank you! Ma'am!!

Aaj bhi wahi khumaari thi. Chaahe kitna hi samay kyu na beet gaya ho. Nidhi ko dekh aaj bhi Veer ki dhadkane tezz hoti thi. Aur Nidhi ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Veer : Aap bohut khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Sunte hi Nidhi laaj ke maare nazre ferr lii.

Shreya : Hai na? Mein bhi dii ko kabse yahi keh rahi hu ki Black unko bohut suit karta hai aur unhe aksar pehan'na chahiye. Par ye keh rahi thi ki ye sirf aaj ke liye hai.

Shreya ne jab sachhaayi bataayi toh Nidhi ki sharm aur badh gayi aur woh kisi bacchi ki tarah sarr jhuka ke khadi rahi jese maano uski chori pakdi gayi ho.

Shreya : Hey hey! By the way! Tumhari toh mast party ho gayi yaar! Haan?

Veer (smiles) : Daba ke khaana!

Shreya : Hehehe of course! of course! You know me so well!

Uske baazu par haath maarte hue usne apna gift thamaaya aur woh side ho gayi. Siwaaye Juhi ke. Woh abhi bhi apne maamu ke kandho par baithi hui thi.

Uske baad Veer ke apne log aage aaye. Shweta pehle thi.

Shweta : V-Veer! Happy Birthday mere bacche!!

Usne gift thamaaya aur uske gale se lag gayi.

Veer : Thank you!

Bhumika ne bhi kuch prepare kiya tha. Chota sa gift tha par packaging badi hi pyaari thi.

Bhumika : Happy Birthday Veer! This is for you!

Veer : Ohh! Thanks a lot!

Suman aur Aabha bhi aage aayi. Sabhi ko nimantran unhone hi toh diya tha.

Suman : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer jii! Ye meri aur meri beti Aabha ki orr se.

Aabha : Janmdin mubaarak ho Veer jii!

Veer (smiles) : Shukriya!!!

Akhir me Bhavna aur Tej aage aayi. Tej ne aate hi usse apne gale se laga liya,

Veer : Ye sab aapne prepare kiya tha?

Tej : Idea Ragini bhabhi ka tha. Par prepare hum sab ne kiya. Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Tej (smiles) : That's what matters to me.

Bhavna (smiles) : Happy Birthday beta.

Veer : M-Maa!

Veer khud aage aake Bhavna ke gale se lag gaya.

Bhavna : Ye gift meri taraf se.

Usne ek khubsoorat sa package uske haatho me diya.

Tej : Aur ye meri taraf se.

Veer ke haatho me gifts hi gifts the. Toh uska ye haal dekh Ragini ne uski madad kii.

Gifts ko rakh uski nazre kisi ko dhundne lagi aur jese uss shaks ki bhi lambi umr thi. Kyuki tabhi woh shaks bhi aa gaya,

"Phew!!! Pohuch gaye!!!"

Veer (smiles) : Maasi!

Purvi : Hey bhagwaan! Late toh nahi hui na?

Veer : No! You are just on time.

Purvi : Thank God!!!

Woh aage aayi. Bagal se uska pati Arun bhi saath me tha.

Purvi : Veer! Ye tumhaare mausa jii hai.

Veer ne perr chhuye toh Arun ne gale se laga liya,

Arun : Tumhe bachpan me dekha tha beta. Aaj tum itne bade ho gaye ho. Tumhe dekh mujhe bohut khushi hui.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe bhi!

Purvi aage badhi aur Veer ke maathe aur gaalo ko choom lii,

Purvi : Happy Birthday betu. Bhale hi belated happy birthday hai. Lekin tumhe enjoy aise karna hai jese ye real ho okay?!

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Thank you maasi.

Uske baad ab cake katna tha. Par jese hi sab log saamne aaye toh dekha cake toh abhi tak laga hi nahi tha.

"Aa gayi mein~ Mein aa gayi... Haah haah haah!!" Sonali daudti hui ekdum se aayi. Uske haatho me cake tha.

Uski haalat dekh Veer andar hi andar muskura baitha.

Sonali : Y-Ye- Ye lo bhai cake. Haah haah!!!

Cake rakhte hi woh kisi bhains ki tarah kursi par pasar gayi. Usse ab koi matlab nahi tha deen duniya se ki kya ho raha tha. Woh bas lambi saasein liye khud ko durust karne me lag gayi.

Sonali : O-Oye!!

Waiter : Yes ma'am!?

Sonali : Kuch thanda lao *huff* Abhi!!!

Waiter : Sure ma'am!

Sonali : *huff* *huff* Mein jaanti thi. Ye sabse badi zimmedari wala kaam mere hi sarr pe thopa gaya hai. *huff* *huff* Ab agar kisi ne kaha na ki cake ghatiya hai ya ye kami hai woh kami hai. Kasam se... Mene unki haddiya tod deni hai. *huff*

Cake kata, aur sabhi ne Veer ke liye happy birthday song gaaya. Juhi abhi bhi kandho par sawaar thi. Usse mazaa aa raha tha. Nidhi ke laakh manaane ke baad bhi woh neeche na aayi.

Cake sach me bohut accha tha. Veer ko baari baari sabhi ne cake khilaaya. Aur uske baad khaana peena shuru hua.

Sab khaane me jut gaye, toh Veer cake ke kuch pieces leke Sonali ke paas aaya.

Veer (smiles) : Cake ke liye shukriya. Ye lo!

Sonali ek pal ke liye usse dekhi fir uske haath se katori leke woh cake khaane me lag gayi.

Sonali : Cake theek hai na?

Veer : Hmm? Bohut accha hai. Kyu? Kya hua?

Sonali : Nahi! Bas wahi puchna tha.

Veer (smiles) : Aur agar mein kehta ki utna accha nahi hai toh?

Sonali : Toh tumhara muh noch leti.

Veer : Hahahahahaha!!!

Veer hasste hue utha aur wo Karan ke paas gaya jo Kritika ko khaana parosne me laga hua tha.

Karan : You know ye dish bohut acchi hai. Isse pehle boil kiya jaata hai aur fir-

Karan ne poori khaane ki process bata daali uss dish ki. Aur Kritika bhi uski harr baat sunn rahi thi.

Veer : Abe itni derr me toh khaana thanda hi ho jayega jitni derr me tu ye sunayega.

Kritika : Pfftt~

Karan : Tujhe taang adaane ke alaawa kuch aata hai?

Veer : Haan! Aata hai! Teri tarah fizool ke baate na karna.

Karan : Hmph!

Veer : Miss Kaera nahi aayi?

Karan (frowns) : Mene unhe bataaya nahi.

Veer : Huh?

Karan : Don't take me wrong par mene unki bhalaayi ke liye kiya ye. Aaj kuch important guests aaye hue hai ghar me. Agar mein unhe bataata toh woh yaha aati. Baad me Dad se unhe daant padti. So I-

Veer : It's okay!

Karan : Hmm! Isliye mein aaya. Mujhe khud bahana bana ke aana pada. Zaroor Raghu aur Jassi ko mere peeche bheja hoga Dad ne. But thanks to our friendship. Wo dono meri complaint nahi karenge.

Veer : I see!

Karan : Agar tum didi se milna chaahte ho toh kal mil sakte ho. Kal wo thodi derr ke liye free rahengi.

Veer : Yes! I do want to meet her. Urgently.

Karan : Kal ghar chale jaana then. Mein nahi rahunga. I'll be busy tomorrow.

Veer : Sure!

Veer Kaera ki khabar leke jab ek orr badha toh uske perr jamm ke reh gaye. Dur baithi Nidhi apna blouse theek karne me lagi hui thi. Shayad usne Dhruv ko doodh pilaaya tha abhi abhi.

Veer jese hi uske peeche aaya toh aahat paake woh peech ko halka sa mudi,

Nidhi : Veer?



Veer ke saamne Nidhi ki nangi gori makhmali peeth thi. Aaj bhi Rajat Veer ki aankho me ek chutiya hi tha jo aisi sundar biwi ko apne haatho kho baitha. Par shukriya uska kam se kam Veer ke paas ab ek chance tha.

Veer dheere se ek kursi par baitha,

Veer : Aapko pata hai aap kya keher dhaa rahi ho aaj?

Nidhi : Maska laga rahe ho Veer?

Veer : Maska? Nahi toh!? Mein toh sach keh raha hu.

Nidhi : Sessionals utne hi milenge jitne mein dungi. Tumhare maska lagaane se kuch nahi hoga.

Veer soch me pad gaya. Fir usse andar hi andar hassi aayi. Kya uski ye nadaan ma'am sach me ye samajh rahi thi ki woh yaha apne sessionals badhwaane aaya hai?

Veer : Become mine!

*Silence*

Unn do shabdo ko sunte hi Nidhi ka shareer kaanp utha. Woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Kya kaha Veer ne?

Woh eka-ek jhatt se palti aur usse dekhi,



Nidhi : Kya?

Veer ne par kuch na kaha bas muskuraaya.

Nidhi : A-Ahinda se aisa mazaak mat karna Veer.

Woh khadi hui aur sarr jhuka ke waha se nikal gayi. Uski dhadkane behad tezz thi. Veer jaanta tha ki Nidhi ke khud ke dil me kya tha. Kya woh waaqif nahi tha? Zaroor tha. Tabhi toh himmat kar aaj usne ye keh diya. Agar pehle ki Nidhi hoti toh ek thappad raseed deti. Par aaj ki Nidhi...! Sirf usse ek choti moti dhamki deke nikal gayi. Kyuki woh khud andar se uss se pyaar karne lagi hai. Veer ko abhaad ho chuka tha. Par sahi samay ka intezaar karna tha usse.

Dhoom dhaam se bade hi acche e Veer ka ye janmdin guzra. Ek ek karke sabhi apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.

Bache the toh sirf Arohi aur Veer, jo gaadi me gifts laad rahe the. Tej baaki ko leke ghar nikal gayi thi.

Arohi : Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer : Kya?

Arohi : Aaj ka celebration?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Woh muskuraayi aur Veer ke sang gifts ko utha ke gaadi me rakhne lagi.

Woh dono behad qareeb the,

Arohi : Mein ye keh rahi thi ki-

Veer : Hmm? Kya-

Arohi ki baat sunn'ne Veer jab ekdum se palta toh kam space hone ki wajah se ek baar fir,

[Oh damn!]

Jo nahi hona chahiye tha woh ho gaya. Dono ke honth aapas me takra gaye. Arohi ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jese garmi me tapmaan chadhta hai. Woh ekdum se peeche hui aur daud ke seedhe car ke andar jaa ke baith gayi.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

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'Please tell me. It was again an accident. Right?'

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'Right...???'

[....]

'Fuuucckkkkk!!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update short me nipatne waala tha normal update ki tarah. Par chuki isme slice of life scenes the. Isliye mene isse acche se aur bade me likha. Kyuki mere mann me aaya ki inn scenes ko aur acche se dikhaana chaahiye. Toh 2 updates aur aise rahenge jo abhi Crimson arc ke main plot se alag honge. Aur 2 updates ke turant baad humara main plot Crimson Festival ka shuru ho jayega. Toh likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ju logo ke liye hi mega update diya hai.
Dhanyavaad!

Boht sundar update!! Maza aa gya padh kar

 

[Krishdude]

Jabardast update bhai

 

[Luffy]

Mega Update

Update - 131 ~ Ragini's Raag​

Ab tak...

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'

Ab aage...

"Yeh hai tum logo ka ghar. Aao!" Veer ne ek bade ghar ka darwaaza kholte hue kuch aurto ko andar bulaaya.

Ye sab wahi thi. Parijaat ghar ki aurte. Mukta, Sudha, Varsha aur Saili. Chaaro Mumbai nagri padhaar chuki thi aur apne naye rukne ke sthaan ko dekh woh sabhi taajub me reh gayi. Ghar kaafi bada tha aur pehle se grehesti ki kayi cheeze maujood thi.

Ghar kisi aur ka nahi, Rajat ka hi tha. Jo ab Veer ka ho chuka tha. Balhaar ke aadmiyo ne milke ghar se Rajat aur uski maa ke kapde latte, photo frames, athwa kayi anya cheezo ko alag kar diya tha. Aur Parijaat ki mahilao ke liye ek badhiya niwaas sthaan me tabdeel kar diya tha.

Sudha : Maalik! Ghar toh kaafi bada hai.

Veer : Ab tum sab yahi thehrogi.

Mukta : Jii maalik!

Veer : Samaan rakh do! Mujhe tum sab se kuch baat karni hai.

Veer sofe par baitha aur sabhi mahilao ko usne baithne ke liye kaha. Woh sab uske saamne ek palang par virajmaan ho gayi.

Varsha : Kya baat hai maalik?

Veer : Mein tum sab ki madad chaahta hu.

Mukta : Madad? Kaisi madad?

Veer : Tum sab apne apne chhetro me nipud ho. Kaabil ho. Mujhe unhi chhetro me tumhari madad chahiye. Saral shabdo me, Mukta mujhe tumhari madad Rajasthani khaane me chaahiye, Varsha tumhari madad aushdhiyo aur sugandho me chahiye, Sudha tumhari madad kapdo ke vyapaar me chahiye aur Saili! Tumhare liye bhi kuch socha hai mene. Toh kya tum sab madad karogi?

Woh sabhi ek dusre ko dekhi aur fir haami me sarr hilaate hue boli,

"Hum taiyaar hai maalik!"

Veer (smiles) : Good! Ab jab tak mein tum logo ko jankaari nahi deta tab tak yahi ruko. Ghar me harr samaan uplabdh hai. Baahar jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Baad me mein khud bataunga tumhe kya karna hai.

Sabhi ek saath : Jii maalik!

Veer fir waha se nikal gaya. Aur wo sabhi apne naye maalik ke sanrakshan me aate hi unki tareefo ke pul baandhne lagi.

Mukta : Maalik kitne acche hai na? Woh hume kaam de rahe hai.

Varsha : Sach kaha. Yahi toh mein chaahti thi. Agar maalik sirf mere shareer ke liye mera upyog karte toh andar hi andar mujhe behad niraasha hoti. Parantu unhone hum sab ke liye kaam dhundha hai. Iss se behtar aur kuch bhi nahi ho sakta. Woh hamari shamta se waaqif hai.

Sudha : Ekdum sahi kaha Varsha. Agar koi aur hota to keval hamaare tann ko bhogta. Aur shayad hume jaanvaro ki tarah rakhta. Kya kuch nahi karta. Par maalik alag hai. Hume unki tann mann dhan se seva karni hai.

Varsha : Hmm!

Mukta : Bilkul!

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Waha Veer unn mahilao ki vyavastha me laga hua tha toh yaha ghar par Ragini apna plan set kar rahi thi. Sabhi ko chai ka ek ek cup pakdaate hue woh ek kursi par aa kar baithi,

Ragini : Mujhe aap sab se baat karni hai.

Usne sabhi ka dhyaan kheechte hue kaha.

Ragini : Dekhiye! Veer ka janmdin abhi abhi nikla hai. Par humne uske liye kuch bhi nahi kiya. Uska birthday celebrate hi nahi kiya humne. Pichle saal bhi hum nahi kar paaye the kyuki woh ghar par hi nahi tha.

Saamne baithi Bhavna ne ye jab suna toh apne bete Veer ki baat usse yaad aa gayi. Uss waqt woh jaipur me tha. Aur woh khud uss se mili thi. Par pehchaan na paayi. Aaj ek saal baad woh uske saath hai. Ragini ki baat Bhavna ko ekdum sahi lagi. Jab itna kuch Veer ne sab ke liye kiya hai toh uska janmdin dhoom dhaam se manaana bhi sab ka farz banta hai.

Bhavna : Tum sahi keh rahi ho.

Shweta : H-Haan! Veer ka birthday hume zaroor celebrate karna chaahiye. Bhumika abhi hotel me inform kar do ki-

Ragini : Aise nahi Tai ji!

Shweta : Huh!?

Ragini : Apni hi hotel me aap party rakhogi?

Shweta : Toh isme kya buraayi hai?

Ragini : Maana ki hamaari hotel acchi hai par thoda sochiye toh-

Bhumika : Mere khyaal se Bhabhi theek keh rahi hai. Hume kisi aur acchi hotel me party rakhni chahiye.

Shweta : Bhumi?? Tu keh rahi hai hamaari hotel kharaab hai?

Shweta ke dil me dard utha. Itne saalo se usne apni dusri beti ki tarah paala tha hotel ko. Toh aise me koi hotel ki buraayi kare toh dard toh hona hi tha.

Bhumika : Mom! Ye baat aap bhi jaanti hai ki city me hamaari hotel se kayi guna acchi aur bhi hotels maujood hai. Hum outdated ho rahe hai. Itna dramatic mat banaaiye isse please.

Shweta : Outdated-!? Dramatic? Hey bhagwaan! Ab meri hotel ka kya hoga?

Bhumika : Ugh~ Mom! Firse shuru mat hona please!

Tej : Toh iska matlab ek surpise party? Veer ko accha lagega. Mom? Aap kya kehti ho?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh taiyaar hi hu na.

Tej : Mere bhai ka b'day theek se kabhi manaaya hi nahi gaya hai. Ye b'day uske liye sabse special hona chahiye. Mein ek bohut acchi hotel me uske liye party rakhungi.

Ragini : Mein nahi Tejal! Hum! Hum uske liye party rakhenge. Isliye toh aap sabke saamne mene ye baat rakhi hai.

Tej : Toh? Fir kya karna hai?

Ragini : Sabse pehla task. Jo ki mushqil hai...

Woh sabhi kaan lagaaye usse dekhne lagi.

Ragini : Hum me se kisi ko Veer ko ghar se dur rakhna hoga raat tak ke liye. Warna usse sab pata chal jayega.

Tej : Ohh! Sure! Ye kaam mein-

Ragini : Nahi Tejal!

Tej : Huh?

Ragini : Ye kaam mein karungi. Tumhare muh se galti se bhi kuch nikla toh dikkat ho jayegi.

Tej : Nahi! Mein itni asaani se-

Ragini : Ye kaam kathin hai. Din bhar Veer ko kaamo me fassa ke rakhna hoga. Mein ye kaam bakhubi kar lungi. Mujhe uski pasand na-pasand ke baare me sab maalum hai. Usse kese vyast rakhna hai mein jaanti hu. Toh ye kaam aap sab mujh par chorr do.

Suman : Theek hai! Ab hamaara kaam bhi hume bata dijiye Ragini jii!

Ragini : Tejal aur Bhumika. Aur aap dono tai jii.

Bhavna aur Shweta : Hmm?

Ragini : Aap chaaro hotel ka kaam sambhaalengi. Kaun sii hotel karni hai, kya decoration rakhna hai, kya menu hona chahiye ye sab mein aap par chorrti hu.

Bhavna : Theek hai!

Shweta : O-Ok!

Pal bhar ke liye Bhavna aur Shweta ne ek dusre ko dekha, Shweta 'hmph' kar apna muh ferr lii, toh wahi Bhavna bas haule se muskura baithi.

Tej aur Bhumika bhi ek dusre ko dekhi, par boli kuch nahi.

Ragini : Suman jii?

Suman : Hmm?

Ragini : Aabha aur aap, nimantran dengi. Aapko pata hai na kis kis ko bulaana hai?

Suman (muskuraate hue) : Jii!

Aabha : Maa jii? Mera kya kaam hai isme?

Suman : Baat tum hi karogi Aabha. Mein sirf tumhe phone laga ke dungi jinhe hume bulaana hai.

Aabha : Ohh!

Ragini (smiles) : Bohut khoob! Aur aap hi dono ko ye dekhna hai ki sabhi log samay se taiyaar hoke pohuche. Hamaare ghar se bhi. Theek hai?

Aabha aur Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Sonali tum!

Sonali : Ehh?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara kaam hai-

Sonali : *gulps*

Ragini (smiles) : Cake laana!

Sonali : C-Cake?

Ragini : Haan baba cake! Cake katega tabhi toh b'day manega na? Bina cake ke kesa b'day? Tumhara kaam hai ki ek accha sa cake banwa ke lao. Veer ko chocolate pasand hai. Madad ke liye Tejal ya Bhumika se puch sakti ho ki kesa banwana hai. Cake bada hona chahiye. Theek?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : Toh usse chocolate pasand hai...!

Sonali : Ugh! Itni badi zimmedaari mujhe kyu-!?

Ragini : Aisa kuch nahi hai. Kaam sabhi apna apna acche se karna.

Sonali : Kahi Cake mere haath se gir gaya toh? Kahi kuch kharaab ho gaya toh? Woh geedad mujhe nahi chorrega.

Ragini : Toh sab taiyaar hai na?

Sonali : Waaaaa~ Meri koi sunn hi nahi raha hai.

Sabhi ne prafullit hoke haami bhar Ragini ko apna aasvaashan diya. Siwaye Sonali ke. Usse lag raha tha sabse bada aur bhaari bora uske hi sarr laada gaya tha.

Ragini ke nirdesh milne ke baad sabhi apne kaamo me lag gayi. Ragini gaana gun-gunaate hue kitchen ki orr jaane lagi jab ek peeche se aayi awaaz ne usse rok liya,

"Mere bete ke sang-! Kab se reh rahi ho?"

Palat ke usne dekha toh paaya ki Bhavna khadi hui thi.

Ragini : T-Tai jii! A-Aap-

Bhavna : Tumne jawaab nahi diya!?

Ragini : H-Huh!!?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke sang iss ghar me kabse reh rahi ho?

Achanak iss sawaal ko sunn woh thoda ghabra gayi.

Ragini : L-Lagbhag ek saal ho gaya. Shuruaat me sirf mein aur Veer the, uske baad-

Bhavna : Sirf tum aur Veer? Ek devar aur bhabhi? Akele? Ek chhat ke neeche?

Ragini : W-Woh-

Bhavna : Hmm?

Ragini : Mein- Mein woh-

Bhavna : Mein woh kya?

Ragini : Ummm- B-Baad me Suman jii aur baaki sab bhi jud gayi, fir Tai jii aayi aur Bhumika bhi. Aur ab aap sab.

Bhavna : Par shuruaat me toh sirf tum aur Veer hi the na?

Ragini : J-Jii!

Bhavna : Toh tum hi batao, aise me ek devar bhabhi ka ghar me akele rehna...! Kya sahi hai?

Ragini ne kuch bhaanpa aur fir apni ghabraahat dur kar woh nidar hoke puchi,

Ragini : Aap kehna kya chaah rahi hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein toh sirf puch rahi hu!

Ragini : Kya aap mujhpe aarop laga rahi hai?

Bhavna shaant rahi, bas muskura ke Ragini ko dekhti rahi.

Ragini : Veer ne mujhe ek nayi zindagi dii hai. Uski wajah se iss Ragini ko ek naya jeevandaan mila hai. Agar wo na hota toh shayad aaj mein aur mera parivaar bhi zinda na hote. Usne hi mujhe ehsaas dilaya ki jis raah par mein chal rahi thi woh prem ki ek jhoothi raah thi. Ye ghar sirf ghar nahi hai. Meri aur Veer ki iss se yaadein judi hai. Bhale hi humne abhi zyaada waqt nahi guzaara hai yaha. Par kathin paristhitiyo se nikalte waqt iss ghar ne hume chhaav dii hai.

Bhavna : ...

Ragini : Aur isliye, mere dil me uske liye aadar bhi hai, prem bhi aur parvaah bhi. Ab aage aap jo samajhna chaahe samjhe.

Kehte hue wo palti, na hi fir usne Bhavna ko palat ke dekha aur na hi woh fir ruki. Peeche khadi Bhavna bas usse jaate dekhti rahi. Parantu, hontho par ek ajeeb muskaan thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Toh wahi yaha Bhumika aur Tej ki ladaayi harr baar ki tarah jaari hi thi.

Tej : Mene kaha na ye hotel kar rahe hai hum.

Bhumika : Nahi! Iss hotel ki service achhi nahi hai. Mein keh rahi hu na-

Tej : What do you mean 'acchi nahi hai'? Literally, 4.5 star rating hai.

Bhumika : Ratings par mat jao, woh badha dii jaati hai unke hi staff dwaara. Mein khud hotel sambhaalti hu, mujhe pata hai waha kesi service hai. Why are you not trusting me?

Tej : Because you are not trustworthy!

Bhumika : T-Tum-

Tej : What?

Bhumika : Tum bohut ziddi ho!

Tej : Huhhhhh!!? Excuse me??? Kya kaha aapne? Mein ziddi hu? Haan? Mein ziddi hu?

Aabha : Agar aap dono aise hi jhagadti rahi, toh shaam ho jayegi. Aur fir mein aamantran kese dungi logo ko?

Tej : Toh inhe samjhao Aabha, ki mujhe mere bhai ka b'day celebrate karne ke liye inki help ki zaroorat nahi hai. Aur na hi inki recommended hotel me hume jaane ki zaroorat hai.

Aabha bechaari dono ka jhagda dekh seham ke chup chaap khadi reh gayi. Dono abhi bhi jhagadne me lagi hui thi jab achanak hi waha Veer aa gaya. Aur saamne ka nazaara dekh hairat me reh gaya. Tej aur Bhumika dono ke haatho me ek tablet tha jisse dono chhinaane me lagi hui thi. Aur dono kisi junglee billiyo se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer : Aap ab tak hotel nahi gayi?

Bhumika : Ahh! Wo-

Iss se pehle ki Bhumika Veer ke prashn me phassti, Tej ne achanak hi Bhumika ko bagal se apne gala se laga liya,

Bhumika : Ahhh!!!?

Tej : K-Kuch nahi Veer! Hum aapas me dosti kar rahe the. Hai na?

Bhumika : E-Ehhhhhh!?

Tej (khuspusaate hue) : What are you doing???? Hug me!!!! Hug me nowwwww!!!

Bhumika (nods) : O-Okay!

Tej ki khuspusaahat sunn, ishaara samajh Bhumika ne bhi apne haath uski kamar par lapet diye. Aur dono ke gaal ek dusre se lag gaye. Woh dono farzi muskaan Veer ko dikhaane ma lagi hui thi.

Tej : Hehe~

Bhumika : Ahaha~

Veer :

Tej : Heh~

Bhumika : Aha~

Veer (frowns) : You two seem a little too close. Don't you?

Tej : Hehehe~ N-Nahi toh? Hai na? Hum toh bas friendship kar rahe hai.

Bhumika (nods) : R-Right!

Tej : Aur tumhe toh khush hona chahiye na ki hum dono aapas me qareeb aa rahe hai!?

Veer : Well-

Inki pol khulti ki tabhi waha Ragini inhe bachaane aa gayi,

Ragini : Veer! Tum aa gaye.

Veer : Hmm! Kuch kaam tha?

Ragini : Haan! Free ho na?

Veer : Free toh nahi, par kahiye. Kya kaam hai?

Ragini : Toh tum mujhe shopping par leke chal rahe ho. Abhi!!

Veer : Abhi??

Ragini : Kyu? Nahi le jaoge?

Veer (smiles) : Chaliye!

Ragini (smiles) : Thank you so much!

*Chu~*

Agle hi pal Ragini ke laal raseele honth Veer ke gaal par the. Peeche baithi Tej ne jab ye dekha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Tej : Y-You-??

Lekin Ragini toh aaj full planning me thi. Dono behno ko aankh maarte hue woh Veer ko waha se leke ravaana ho gayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost hi nikaali hui thi.

Dono kisi couple se kam nahi lag rahe the. Ragini aaj behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi. Peeli saree pehne, laalam laal raseele honth liye, woh poori haseena sii prateet ho rahi thi.

Veer : Aaj aap bohut sundar lag rahi ho Bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi?

Veer (smiles) : Ragini!

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe dobaara yaad na dilana pade.

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Ragini : Good!

Veer : Toh? Aaj kya khareed-daari karne chal rahe hai hum?

Ragini ne ekdum se Veer ke haath ke upar apna haath rakha,

Veer : ??

Ragini (seductively) : Tumhe sach me lagta hai mene tumhe shopping ke liye ghar se baahar nikaala?

Jab Veer ko samajh aaya ki Ragini ke iraade kya the toh uske lund ne apne aap ek jhatka maar diya. Muh me maujood thook gutak woh Ragini ko dekha,

Veer : You mean~

Ragini : Kya kaha tha tumne? Mein laut ke aa jaunga toh apna jawaab aapko de dunga.

Veer : Y-Yes!

Ragini : Kaha hai tumhara jawaab?

Veer : Mein-

Ragini: Bohut hi mazaa aaya tha na tumhe jab mere saath wo kar ke gaye the? Aur mein tumhaari yaado me raato raat tadapti rahi. Huh?

Veer : K-Kya kar ke gaya tha mein?

Ragini : Bhole bann rahe ho Veer?

Woh aur nazdeek aayi aur Veer ke chehre se ek inch ke faasle se boli,

Ragini : Apni Bhabhi ki choot par muh maar kar gaye the tum. Bhool gaye? Ya yaad dilau?

Veer : Ahem-

Ragini (smiles) : Ab jaha mein le jaa rahi hu, waha chup chaap chalo. Okay?

Veer : Yes ma'am!!!

Ragini : Good!

Ragini ke bataaye gaye sthaan par jab dono pohuche toh Veer aashcharya me tha.

Veer : Ye hotel!?

Ragini : Tumhe pasand aayi?

Veer : Yeah! Kaafi badi hai.

Ragini : Raat tak ke liye hamaara room booked hai.

Uske kehne par Veer sharmaate hue usse dekha. Ragini bhi andar se sharma rahi thi, par dikhaana nahi chaahti thi kyuki woh badi thi umr me. Usne haule se Veer ka haath thaama,

Ragini : Aaj koi disturb nahi karega. Sirf tum hoge, aur mein!

Veer : Do you really want this?

Ragini : Yes!! Yessss!!! Mere judgement ko ab aur clouded mat karo Veer. Mein poore hosho-hawaas me hu aur jaanti hu mujhe kya chahiye.

Wo Veer ko thaami aur usse apne hatho me pakde hotel ke andar ghus gayi. Room me aate hi Veer ke saamne khidki se Juhu beach ka shandaar nazaara tha.

Veer : Beautiful! Par kaafi mehnga pada hoga.

Ragini : Tumse keemti kuch nahi mere liye ab.

Usne apna samaan rakha aur kamre ko andar se lock kar woh Veer ke peeche peeche aayi aur uske seene me apne haath daalte hue uski peeth se lag ke khadi ho gayi. Dono ek dusre ke badan ki khushboo ko soongh paa rahe the.

Veer : Aazmaaiye mat! Warna aapa kho dunga mein!

Ragini : Yahi toh chaahti hu mein!

Kehte hue usne apne tapte honth Veer ki gardan se laga diye,

Veer : Ssssss~

Achanak ke hamle se Veer apni gardan sikodne par majboor reh gaya.

*Chu~* *Chu~*

*slurp* *slurp*

*puch* *puch*

Ragini kisi bhookhi sherni ki tarah apna ahaar dhoondhne lagi.

Veer ne palat ke uski patli kamar ko thaama aur kheench ke usse apne seene se laga liya. Dono ek dusre ke qareeb aaye aur jese hi 1 cm ki duri bachi thi, dono chumbak ke bhaati ek dusre ke hontho ki taraf khiche aur fir jaanvaro ki tarah ek dooje ko choomne lage.

"Ummmmmm~" "Sssssssss~" "Aahhhhnnnnnn~" "Nommmmmmm~~~"

"Mmmmmmmm~' *slurp* *kiss*

Veer ko dhakka deke woh bistar par baithi, aur dheere dheere apne ango se usne kapde nikaalna shuru kar diye. Pehle saree, fir petticoat, fir bra aur ant me panty.

Usne sab kuch utaar diya. Bas baaki tha toh woh tha uska shringaar. Haatho me bangles, gale me Veer dwaara pehnaya gaya pendant, aur maathe par bindi.



Ragini apne perr sikode Veer ko dekhi. Veer mantra-mugdh tha. Aisi khubsoorti alaukik thi. Usse vishvaas nahi ho raha tha ki woh Ragini jesi sundar naari ko bhogne jaa raha tha.

Uske baad apni dono taange khol Ragini ne apne dwaar ke darshan diye, aur apni muniya par ungli pherr woh Veer ko rujhaane lagi,



Ragini : Isse hi bhog ke gaye the na tum? Ab aaj firse mauka hai tumhare paas. Isse sahi se bhogne ka.

Veer : Are you sure aap ye yahi karna chaahti ho?

Ragini : Toh aur kaha? Tum chaahte ho ye hum ghar par kare?

Veer : Hotel me hidden cameras bhi toh ho sakte hai?

Ragini : Ye ek reputed hotel hai, toh tumhe iss baat ki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.

Veer : So, you have made up your mind huh!?

Ragini : Yes! Now come and fuck me Veer!!! FUCK ME!!!

Woh apna nanga badan prastut kar uttejna me boli.



Veer fir na ruka. Usne kayi mauke diye the Ragini ko aur gehraayi me sochne ke liye. Par, Ragini ka faisla adig tha. Aur jab saamne se baar baar nyota diya jaaye, toh Veer usse kadaapi thukraane waala nahi tha.

Woh kooda aur Ragini ki choot par toot pada. Woh raseeli choot usse aamantran de rahi thi. Apni jeebh ka behatreen istemaal kar Veer ne apna poora muh Ragini ki choot me de maara.



"Ahhhhnnnnnnnn maaaaaaaaaaa~"

Sisakte hue Ragini ne Veer ke baalo ko apne haatho me jakad liya. Veer apna ek haath upar le gaya aur unn swaadisht aamo ko bhi usne nichodna shuru kar diya.

Ye uski bhabhi ki choot thi. Kabhi Veer ne apne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki uss se baat tak na karne waali wahi bhabhi aaj uske saamne nangi hoke chudne ko kahegi.

Aaj kahi na kahi, Veer ka ego high tha. Usse khud par proud bhi tha. Taang utha ke Veer ne choot ko aur zorr se chaatna shuru kiya to Ragini madhosh hoke reh gayi. Issi...! Issi ehsaas ke liye toh woh raato raat tadpi thi.



Jese hi uska paani nikla, Ragini ka badan jhatke khaa kar reh gaya. Veer utha aur apne kapde utaar usne apna lund prastut kiya. Ab Ragini ki baari thi seva karne ki.

Woh Veer ke lund ko dekhi. Ye pehli baar tha jab woh Veer ko nagn awastha me dekh rahi thi. Dekh ke hi uske hosh ude hue the.

'I-Itna bada? Kya mein isse andar le bhi paungi?'

Aage badh usne Veer ke lund ko thaama aur uske supaade ko pehle chooma.

*Chu~*



"H-Haaahhhh!" Veer ke muh se ek siski choothi. Ragini uske supaade ko pyaar se choom rahi thi.

Ragini : Mujhe blowjob ka utna experience nahi hai Veer! Par tumhe de de ke hi seekhungi.

Veer : You are already doing good!

Wo muskuraayi, aur muh khol poora supaada usne apne muh me bhar liya. Veer ke liye blowjob toh kya woh kuch bhi karne taiyaar thi.



"Urrghh~' Karaahte hue Veer uske sarr par haath rakh usse guide karta gaya. Aur Ragini acchi tarah se choosti gayi. Par jharrne se pehle, Veer ne Ragini ko kutiya banaaya aur uske peeche aake khada ho gaya.

Ragini : Don't think now Veer my baby, just put it in!!!

Veer ne supaada choot ki deewaaro ko khol andar lagaaya. Ragini ka badan thitur gaya. Aur agle hi shan,

*Khaachhhhh*

Usne dhakka maar lund andar pel diya.



Ragini ke dono haath mutthi bann bedsheet par kass gaye. Uski aankho se aasu nikal aaye. Ye dard ke bhi the, khushi ke bhi aur dukh ke bhi.

Khushi iss baat ki, ki akhir kaar usne apne aap ko Veer ko saunp diya tha aur Veer ne usse swekaar liya tha. Dukh iss baat ka ki woh kabhi Veer ko apna anchhua youvan pesh na kar paayi. Koi aur usse pehle bhog chuka tha. Koi aisa jiske baare me sochke bhi usse ghin aati thi. Aur dard iska ki Veer ka ling uske liye ab tak ka sabse bada ling tha. Toh deewaare aur chaudi ho rahi thi. Dard toh laazmi hi tha.

Ragini ke sambhal jaane ke baad, Veer ne fir tabadtod dhakke maare,

'Nghhhhhhh~ V-Veer!! Veeeeerrrr! ohhh Veeeer!!! Claim me Veer!"

"Mere ang ang par apni chhaap chorr do Veeer! Aaaaahhhnnn maaaaaaa~"

"Y-Yesssssss Ohh godddddd!!!!"

*phattttt* *phatttt* *phatttttt*

Uske baalo ko haath me qaid kiye, Veer Ragini ko ghodi bana ke uski choot maarne me laga tha.



Ye ek show tha ki Veer kese Ragini ko ek mard k tarah claim kar raha tha. Ragini ne aaj jo raag gaaya tha, woh usse aur saath hi saath inn chaar deewaaro ko bhi yaad rehne waala tha.

"P-Please Veeer! A-Andar! Andar! I want it inside!!!"

Uski ichhaa ko poora kar Veer ne apna veerya uski choot ke andar hi udel diya. Issi ke saath woh bhi jharr gayi aur dono aapas me chipak ke lait gaye. Ragini uske seene par sarr rakh laiti hui thi.

Usne Veer ka haath apne haatho me liya, usse dekha aur boli,

Ragini : Mene tumse shaadi kyu nahi kii Veer?

Veer : Because I was too young.

Ragini : Kaash mein bhi tumhaari tarah young hoti.

Unn baato me ek ajeeb sa dard tha jo Veer ko bhi mehsoos hua.

Veer : Aap young hi ho!

Ragini : Kaash tumhari ham-umr ki hoti.

Veer : ...

Ragini : Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Aaj mein bohut khush hu. Thanks for doing it. Thanks for not neglecting me. Thanks for accepting me. And...

Veer : ??

Ragini : I love you~

Usne punaah Veer ke honth choom liye.

Parantu Veer ki bauhe chintan me sikudi hui thi. Kya woh bata de ki Parijaat me kya hua tha? Kya bata de ki aage bhi uske relations kayi aurto ke sang bann sakte hai?

Par Ragini ki muskaan, uski khushi dekh Veer ki himmat na hui. Aur aaj usne bataane se khud ko peeche kar liya. Kisi aur samay...!

Ragini : Tumhari liye ek surprise hai. Fufu~

Veer : Surprise? Kaisa surprise?

Ragini : Hehe~

***

Aur na jaane kab samay yu hi guzar gaya. Ragini ne Veer ko uske kapde dilvaaye aur khud bhi dherr saari shopping kii.

Jab shaam ke 7:30 baj gaye toh woh usse dusri hotel leke pohuch gayi. Veer totally clueless tha. Usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala Ragini ne aur kitne plans banaaye hue the.

Parantu jese hi woh hotel ke andar pohucha,

*Pop* *plop* *Pop*

Party poppers zorr zorr se shor karke phoote aur upar se chamkeele paper ke tukde harr jagah girne lage. Jab saamne ka nazaara Veer ne dekha toh woh bhaavuk reh gaya.

Saamne harr koi maujood tha. Uski maa se leke, Arohi Kavya, uske Dada jii, Sumitra, yaha tak ki Karan aur Kritika bhi aaye hue the.

Siwaaye Vivek aur Brijesh ke. Unhe wese hi invite nahi kiya gaya tha. Aur agar kara bhi jaata toh shayad hi woh aate. Brijesh toh shayad aa bhi jaata par Vivek ke baare me yahi kehna mushqil tha.

Veer : Y-Ye sab-!?

Ragini (smiles) : Tumhara b'day kabhi dhang se celebrate nahi kiya gaya. Ye hamaari orr se hai. Veer! Happy birthday!

Ek aasu ki boond uske gaal se hoke guzri toh Ragini ne turant hi apne anguthe se uske aasu poch diye.

Ragini : It's time to enjoy paagal. Rote nahi hai-

Veer : I-

Ragini : Rou mat warna mein bhi rone lagungi paagal!

Woh nishabd tha. Ye kabhi bhi usne expect nahi kiya tha. Koi uska b'day aise manaaye? Aaj tak kabhi usse photographs me saath nahi liya jaata tha. Par aaj ye sab maujood the. Uske sang, uska beeta hua janmdin manaane.

"Bhaiyyyyaaaaa~"

Kavya harr baar ki tarah daudti hui aayi aur uske seene se lag gayi.

Veer : K-Kavya!!!

Kavya : Bhaiyaa! Happy Birthday!

Golden frock me woh kisi Pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you! Kavya!

Peeche se Arohi bhi chalti hui aayi. Uske haatho me ek gift tha. Usne seedha aage badha ke woh Veer ko thama diya.

Arohi : For you~

Veer : Huh?

Arohi (smiles) : Happy Birthday!

Aur sharma ke usne ahista se Veer ko gaal pe ek chota sa par meetha sa kiss kar diya.

Veer (blushes) : Thank you! Arohi dii! Par aap sab aise achanak se~

Itne me Sumitra bhi aage aayi. Uski aankho ke neeche jhaaiyaa thi. Karunesh aur Pranjal ke jaane ke baad uski haalat behad kharaab ho gayi thi. Jese tese Arohi aur Kavya ne usse sambhaala. Par ab aage toh badhna hi padega. Apni santaano ko chorr kaha jaa sakti thi woh.

Sumitra : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer.

Woh aage aayi. Veer ne jab perr padna chaahe toh usne Veer ko gale se laga liya.

Aur sahi samay dekh ke Veer ne apni baat Sumitra ke kaano me dheere se rakh dii,

Veer : Aisa mat sochna ki Chacha ke jaane se aap toot gayi ho aur ab kuch nahi bacha chachi. Mein hu abhi. Jab tak mein rahunga...! Arohi dii aur Kavya ki chinta aapko karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Aapko kabhi bhi koi bhi zaroorat pade. Aap mujhe keh sakti ho.

Shabd kuch hi the. Par unme taaqat behad thi. Unka bhaar atyadhik tha. Sirf bolne ke liye hi himmat lagti thi aaj ke zamaane me.

Sumitra ki pakad Veer pe aur mazboot ho gayi. Woh apne aasu poch, sarr haan me hila ke peeche ho gayi.

Manorath bhi aage aaye toh Veer ne unke perr chhuye,

Veer (smiles) : Ab kaisi hai aapki tabiyat?

Manorath : Mujhe kya hua? Arre jab tak apne pote ki shaadi nahi dekh leta tab tak koi mujhe iss duniya se nahi le jaa sakta. Hahahaha~

Dono hass pade. Manorath ne fir ek sone ki chain Veer ko thamaayi aur saath hi shagun ka ek lifaafa bhi.

Itne me Ragini ke Mata-pita aage aaye. Dinesh aur Rohini! Wo bhi aaye hue the.

Dono ke perr Veer ne chhuye toh Dinesh ne ashirvaad dete hue kaha,

Dinesh : Mujhe yaad hai acche se. Woh tum hi the jisne hume bachaaya tha. Rohini! Ye dekho! Yahi hai Veer. Hahaha~

Rohini : Haan haan! Ek baar mil chuki hu. Aap toh aise bata rahe ho jese hum pehli baar mil rahe hai. Hmph~

Dinesh : Ehh? Mil chuki ho? Arre bhai mujhe yaad kyu nahi aa raha kuch?

Rohini : Badaam khaaya karo. Roz bolti hu par khaana nahi hai aapko.

Ragini apne maata pita ki harqato ko dekh sharma ke sarr jhuka lii. Par Veer aur baaki sab unki inn harqato ko poori tarah se enjoy kar rahe the.

Rohini (smiles) : Arre mein jaanti hu acche se Veer ko. Mere ghar ke deepak ko bujhne se bachaaya hai isne. Jug jug jiyo mere bacche. Khoob tarakki karo.

*Muaaahhh*

Aur usne Veer ke gaal ko choom liya. Fir apni orr se usse gift deke wo dono bhi side ho gaye.

Ye dekh, Ragini ne Veer ke baazu me chikauti kaati,

Ragini : Getting too many kisses huh?

Veer (smiles) : Ohh! Are you getting jealous?

Ragini (blushes) : Wh-Whaaaattttt? N-No!!! Paagal!!!

Usne agle aane waale logo ko dekha toh paaya saamne Karan aur Kritika the.

Karan : Koi information nahi. Koi thikaana nahi. Ye bhi koi dosti hai? Like mujhe aana padta hai tumhari khabar lene. Look at me! Karan! Mein Karan tumhare peeche peeche bhaag raha hu. Dad dekhenge toh haddi pasli ek kar denge meri.

Veer : It's your honour. Respect it.

Karan : Respect my ass-

Ragini (frowns) : Karan!

Karan : Ahem! Sorry for the language Bhabhi!! Hmph~ Wese mein yaha aata nahi. But you know...! I-I came for the food.

Uski nazre bagal me khadi Kritika ki orr gayi toh bechaari woh sharma ke reh gayi. Unn dono ke beech me khil rahe gulaab ko Veer idhar turant hi bhaanp gaya,

Veer : You came for the food or you came for the mood?

Karan : *cough* *cough*

Achanak hi bechaare ko thaska lag gaya.

Karan (blushes) : Wh-What blasphemy!! Hmph~ Mein...! Mein obviously food ke liye aaya hu. Suna hai yaha ka food accha hai. A-Aur ye raha tumhara gift. Hmph!!

Usne Veer ke haatho me zorr se ek gift ka package thamaaya. Aur bina kuch kahe, wo palat ke waha se dur nikal gaya.

Veer : Ye ladka bhi na...! *sighs* Roothi hui gf ki tarah act karta hai.

Ragini (giggles) : Fufufu~

Kritika (blushes) : V-Veer bhaiya!! Y-Ye meri taraf se. Happy Birthday!

Veer : Ohh! Thank you Kritika! You're looking gorgeous.

Na jaane Veer ko kya soojha par uske hontho par ek kutil muskaan sajj gayi. Usne gift lete hue Kritika ko kass ke hug kar liya. Aur beshaq, jese hi uski nazre Karan se mili.

'Youuuu fuckkkkerrrr!!!Damnnn you Veeerrrrr!!!' Karan mann me chillaaya. Uska chehra dekhne laayak tha.

Mann hi mann hasste hue Veer ne Kritika ko chorra. Par uss bechaari ke gaal sharm ke maare poore tamatar ki tarah laal pad chuke the.

"Maaaaammmuuuuuuu~" Ye awaaz sunn Veer ko sochne ki bhi zaroorat nahi thi ki ye kaun tha.

Ye toh uski laadli thi. Sabse chaheeti. Uski sabse pyaari Juhi!!

Veer (smiles) : Juhiiii!!!

Juhi : Maaamuuuu!!!

Woh daud ke aayi aur Veer ki taang se chipak gayi. Veer ne fauran hi usse upar ko uthaaya aur apne kandho par baitha liya.

Saamne se Nidhi ma'am aur Shreya bhi aa rahi thi. Nidhi ke haatho me Dhruv bhi maujood tha.

Jese hi Veer ne Nidhi ko dekha woh unhe dekhta hi reh gaya. Aaj kaali saree me woh maujood thi. Iske pehle usne aaj tak Nidhi ko kaali saree me kabhi nahi dekha tha. Kyuki Nidhi pehanti hi nahi thi. College, pados, aate jaate raasto me gandi nazro se bachne ke liye woh ye rang kabhi bhi nahi pehenti thi.



Par aaj...! Aaj usne pehna hua tha. Aur Veer ko samajh aa gaya tha ki aisa woh kyu karti thi. Kaale rang me woh qayamat jo lagti thi.

Nidhi (smiles) : Happy Birthday Veer!!!

Veer : Thank you! Ma'am!!

Aaj bhi wahi khumaari thi. Chaahe kitna hi samay kyu na beet gaya ho. Nidhi ko dekh aaj bhi Veer ki dhadkane tezz hoti thi. Aur Nidhi ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Veer : Aap bohut khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Sunte hi Nidhi laaj ke maare nazre ferr lii.

Shreya : Hai na? Mein bhi dii ko kabse yahi keh rahi hu ki Black unko bohut suit karta hai aur unhe aksar pehan'na chahiye. Par ye keh rahi thi ki ye sirf aaj ke liye hai.

Shreya ne jab sachhaayi bataayi toh Nidhi ki sharm aur badh gayi aur woh kisi bacchi ki tarah sarr jhuka ke khadi rahi jese maano uski chori pakdi gayi ho.

Shreya : Hey hey! By the way! Tumhari toh mast party ho gayi yaar! Haan?

Veer (smiles) : Daba ke khaana!

Shreya : Hehehe of course! of course! You know me so well!

Uske baazu par haath maarte hue usne apna gift thamaaya aur woh side ho gayi. Siwaaye Juhi ke. Woh abhi bhi apne maamu ke kandho par baithi hui thi.

Uske baad Veer ke apne log aage aaye. Shweta pehle thi.

Shweta : V-Veer! Happy Birthday mere bacche!!

Usne gift thamaaya aur uske gale se lag gayi.

Veer : Thank you!

Bhumika ne bhi kuch prepare kiya tha. Chota sa gift tha par packaging badi hi pyaari thi.

Bhumika : Happy Birthday Veer! This is for you!

Veer : Ohh! Thanks a lot!

Suman aur Aabha bhi aage aayi. Sabhi ko nimantran unhone hi toh diya tha.

Suman : Janmdin ki shubhkamnaaye Veer jii! Ye meri aur meri beti Aabha ki orr se.

Aabha : Janmdin mubaarak ho Veer jii!

Veer (smiles) : Shukriya!!!

Akhir me Bhavna aur Tej aage aayi. Tej ne aate hi usse apne gale se laga liya,

Veer : Ye sab aapne prepare kiya tha?

Tej : Idea Ragini bhabhi ka tha. Par prepare hum sab ne kiya. Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Tej (smiles) : That's what matters to me.

Bhavna (smiles) : Happy Birthday beta.

Veer : M-Maa!

Veer khud aage aake Bhavna ke gale se lag gaya.

Bhavna : Ye gift meri taraf se.

Usne ek khubsoorat sa package uske haatho me diya.

Tej : Aur ye meri taraf se.

Veer ke haatho me gifts hi gifts the. Toh uska ye haal dekh Ragini ne uski madad kii.

Gifts ko rakh uski nazre kisi ko dhundne lagi aur jese uss shaks ki bhi lambi umr thi. Kyuki tabhi woh shaks bhi aa gaya,

"Phew!!! Pohuch gaye!!!"

Veer (smiles) : Maasi!

Purvi : Hey bhagwaan! Late toh nahi hui na?

Veer : No! You are just on time.

Purvi : Thank God!!!

Woh aage aayi. Bagal se uska pati Arun bhi saath me tha.

Purvi : Veer! Ye tumhaare mausa jii hai.

Veer ne perr chhuye toh Arun ne gale se laga liya,

Arun : Tumhe bachpan me dekha tha beta. Aaj tum itne bade ho gaye ho. Tumhe dekh mujhe bohut khushi hui.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe bhi!

Purvi aage badhi aur Veer ke maathe aur gaalo ko choom lii,

Purvi : Happy Birthday betu. Bhale hi belated happy birthday hai. Lekin tumhe enjoy aise karna hai jese ye real ho okay?!

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Thank you maasi.

Uske baad ab cake katna tha. Par jese hi sab log saamne aaye toh dekha cake toh abhi tak laga hi nahi tha.

"Aa gayi mein~ Mein aa gayi... Haah haah haah!!" Sonali daudti hui ekdum se aayi. Uske haatho me cake tha.

Uski haalat dekh Veer andar hi andar muskura baitha.

Sonali : Y-Ye- Ye lo bhai cake. Haah haah!!!

Cake rakhte hi woh kisi bhains ki tarah kursi par pasar gayi. Usse ab koi matlab nahi tha deen duniya se ki kya ho raha tha. Woh bas lambi saasein liye khud ko durust karne me lag gayi.

Sonali : O-Oye!!

Waiter : Yes ma'am!?

Sonali : Kuch thanda lao *huff* Abhi!!!

Waiter : Sure ma'am!

Sonali : *huff* *huff* Mein jaanti thi. Ye sabse badi zimmedari wala kaam mere hi sarr pe thopa gaya hai. *huff* *huff* Ab agar kisi ne kaha na ki cake ghatiya hai ya ye kami hai woh kami hai. Kasam se... Mene unki haddiya tod deni hai. *huff*

Cake kata, aur sabhi ne Veer ke liye happy birthday song gaaya. Juhi abhi bhi kandho par sawaar thi. Usse mazaa aa raha tha. Nidhi ke laakh manaane ke baad bhi woh neeche na aayi.

Cake sach me bohut accha tha. Veer ko baari baari sabhi ne cake khilaaya. Aur uske baad khaana peena shuru hua.

Sab khaane me jut gaye, toh Veer cake ke kuch pieces leke Sonali ke paas aaya.

Veer (smiles) : Cake ke liye shukriya. Ye lo!

Sonali ek pal ke liye usse dekhi fir uske haath se katori leke woh cake khaane me lag gayi.

Sonali : Cake theek hai na?

Veer : Hmm? Bohut accha hai. Kyu? Kya hua?

Sonali : Nahi! Bas wahi puchna tha.

Veer (smiles) : Aur agar mein kehta ki utna accha nahi hai toh?

Sonali : Toh tumhara muh noch leti.

Veer : Hahahahahaha!!!

Veer hasste hue utha aur wo Karan ke paas gaya jo Kritika ko khaana parosne me laga hua tha.

Karan : You know ye dish bohut acchi hai. Isse pehle boil kiya jaata hai aur fir-

Karan ne poori khaane ki process bata daali uss dish ki. Aur Kritika bhi uski harr baat sunn rahi thi.

Veer : Abe itni derr me toh khaana thanda hi ho jayega jitni derr me tu ye sunayega.

Kritika : Pfftt~

Karan : Tujhe taang adaane ke alaawa kuch aata hai?

Veer : Haan! Aata hai! Teri tarah fizool ke baate na karna.

Karan : Hmph!

Veer : Miss Kaera nahi aayi?

Karan (frowns) : Mene unhe bataaya nahi.

Veer : Huh?

Karan : Don't take me wrong par mene unki bhalaayi ke liye kiya ye. Aaj kuch important guests aaye hue hai ghar me. Agar mein unhe bataata toh woh yaha aati. Baad me Dad se unhe daant padti. So I-

Veer : It's okay!

Karan : Hmm! Isliye mein aaya. Mujhe khud bahana bana ke aana pada. Zaroor Raghu aur Jassi ko mere peeche bheja hoga Dad ne. But thanks to our friendship. Wo dono meri complaint nahi karenge.

Veer : I see!

Karan : Agar tum didi se milna chaahte ho toh kal mil sakte ho. Kal wo thodi derr ke liye free rahengi.

Veer : Yes! I do want to meet her. Urgently.

Karan : Kal ghar chale jaana then. Mein nahi rahunga. I'll be busy tomorrow.

Veer : Sure!

Veer Kaera ki khabar leke jab ek orr badha toh uske perr jamm ke reh gaye. Dur baithi Nidhi apna blouse theek karne me lagi hui thi. Shayad usne Dhruv ko doodh pilaaya tha abhi abhi.

Veer jese hi uske peeche aaya toh aahat paake woh peech ko halka sa mudi,

Nidhi : Veer?



Veer ke saamne Nidhi ki nangi gori makhmali peeth thi. Aaj bhi Rajat Veer ki aankho me ek chutiya hi tha jo aisi sundar biwi ko apne haatho kho baitha. Par shukriya uska kam se kam Veer ke paas ab ek chance tha.

Veer dheere se ek kursi par baitha,

Veer : Aapko pata hai aap kya keher dhaa rahi ho aaj?

Nidhi : Maska laga rahe ho Veer?

Veer : Maska? Nahi toh!? Mein toh sach keh raha hu.

Nidhi : Sessionals utne hi milenge jitne mein dungi. Tumhare maska lagaane se kuch nahi hoga.

Veer soch me pad gaya. Fir usse andar hi andar hassi aayi. Kya uski ye nadaan ma'am sach me ye samajh rahi thi ki woh yaha apne sessionals badhwaane aaya hai?

Veer : Become mine!

*Silence*

Unn do shabdo ko sunte hi Nidhi ka shareer kaanp utha. Woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Kya kaha Veer ne?

Woh eka-ek jhatt se palti aur usse dekhi,



Nidhi : Kya?

Veer ne par kuch na kaha bas muskuraaya.

Nidhi : A-Ahinda se aisa mazaak mat karna Veer.

Woh khadi hui aur sarr jhuka ke waha se nikal gayi. Uski dhadkane behad tezz thi. Veer jaanta tha ki Nidhi ke khud ke dil me kya tha. Kya woh waaqif nahi tha? Zaroor tha. Tabhi toh himmat kar aaj usne ye keh diya. Agar pehle ki Nidhi hoti toh ek thappad raseed deti. Par aaj ki Nidhi...! Sirf usse ek choti moti dhamki deke nikal gayi. Kyuki woh khud andar se uss se pyaar karne lagi hai. Veer ko abhaad ho chuka tha. Par sahi samay ka intezaar karna tha usse.

Dhoom dhaam se bade hi acche e Veer ka ye janmdin guzra. Ek ek karke sabhi apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.

Bache the toh sirf Arohi aur Veer, jo gaadi me gifts laad rahe the. Tej baaki ko leke ghar nikal gayi thi.

Arohi : Tumhe pasand aaya?

Veer : Kya?

Arohi : Aaj ka celebration?

Veer (smiles) : Bohut!

Woh muskuraayi aur Veer ke sang gifts ko utha ke gaadi me rakhne lagi.

Woh dono behad qareeb the,

Arohi : Mein ye keh rahi thi ki-

Veer : Hmm? Kya-

Arohi ki baat sunn'ne Veer jab ekdum se palta toh kam space hone ki wajah se ek baar fir,

[Oh damn!]

Jo nahi hona chahiye tha woh ho gaya. Dono ke honth aapas me takra gaye. Arohi ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jese garmi me tapmaan chadhta hai. Woh ekdum se peeche hui aur daud ke seedhe car ke andar jaa ke baith gayi.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

[...]

'Please tell me. It was again an accident. Right?'

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'Right...???'

[....]

'Fuuucckkkkk!!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update short me nipatne waala tha normal update ki tarah. Par chuki isme slice of life scenes the. Isliye mene isse acche se aur bade me likha. Kyuki mere mann me aaya ki inn scenes ko aur acche se dikhaana chaahiye. Toh 2 updates aur aise rahenge jo abhi Crimson arc ke main plot se alag honge. Aur 2 updates ke turant baad humara main plot Crimson Festival ka shuru ho jayega. Toh likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ju logo ke liye hi mega update diya hai.
Dhanyavaad!

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