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Nice update bro weting for next update jaldi dana bro

वाह
सारे अंधेरे दुर हो गए
सारे षडयंत्र के भेद खुल गए
पर बृजेश के लिए बहुत देर हो चुकी है क्यूंकि अब भावना तो वापस आने से रही
करुणेष अब अपने घर से निकल चुका है अब कि बार षडयंत्र की खिचड़ी बाप बेटे मील कर पकायेंगे
खैर वीर के आगे कहाँ तक और कब तक टिक पाएंगे
तेज़ बेचारी जलन की मारी
अब उसे हर लड़की से असुरक्षा सा महसूस होगा
जाहिर है यह वीर के प्रति उसका तीव्र आकर्षण है
वीर के इर्द गिर्द ल़डकियों और रिश्तेदारों का संख्या बढ़ता ही जा रहा है
सब के सब मुहँ फूलाने वाले और वीर सब को अपने तरीके से समझाता फिरेगा
खैर अंत में वीर को एक मैसेज मिला
अब खेल शुरु होगा
अब वीर के लिए चैलेंजेस बढ़ता ही जायेगा
कैसे निपटेगा यह देखना दिलचस्प रहेगा
बढ़िया अपडेट था Werewolf भाई

Jabardast update bhai

Subha Subha Din Ban Gaya Update Padhke

Mast update h bhai...

Kitne din ka break he bhai

Sorry my bad maine galat tarike se samjha
Or ye to obviously hai ki sabhi k liye veer ne soch bhi Rakha hoga

Super update hai Bhai

nice update .shweta to sahi soch me aage badh rahi hai veer ke paas jaane ke liye .

tej ko jhatka lag gaya jab usne veer ki mahangi gadi dekhi ,aur veer ka kehna ki ye gift me mili hai ..
par usko shak ho raha hai ki veer ka kahi chakkar to nahi chal raha kisi shadishuda ke saath isliye sawalo ke dher laga diye veer ke saamne aur veer ne bhi kuch baate raaz rakhke sab bata diya .

kavya aur arohi to pareshan ho gayi thi ye jaankar ki unke baap ne kitna bada kaand kiya hai ,veer ne dono ko pyar se samjha diya ye achchi baat lagi ..

karunesh ne sab ugal hi diya ki kaise uske dil me nafrat paida huyi property ko lekar ,aur baadme bhanu aur harikiran ne uske kaan bhar diye aur bhawna ko ghar se nikal diya .

ab ye mesaage lagta hai usine bheja hai begin wala ..

system ki level abhi 8 par hi hai kya itne se veer us insan ka mukabla karne ke kaabil hai .

Nyc update bhai ji but ye nays kya hain

solid update bhai sari sacchai aa hi gai sabke samne aur usi k sath new arc bhi shuru ho gaya ya hone wala hai ab dekho kya karta hai veer kaise bachata hai sabko aur khudko isi bich use kiara ko bhi thik karna hai warna wo apne emotions kabhi nahi pa sakegi aur waqt bhi kam bacha hai iske liye ab dekhna ye hai k veer itne tension k bich uski help kar pata hai ya nahi

खुद को खुद में ही छुपा लेते हैं कुछ लोग

कोई और पाता है जिनके जुल्मों की सजा
कुछ इस तरह ज़िन्दगी का मज़ा लेते हैं कुछ लोग

किसी के आँसुओं पे खुशियों की दुनिया बसा लेते हैं लोग
किसी की तन्हाइयों पे अपनी महफिलें सजा लेते हैं लोग

और हो जिनपे यकीं कि जान दे देंगें एक दिन तुम्हारे लिए
अक्सर आस्तीन में खंजर छुपा लेते हैं वो लोग

एक चेहरे पे कई चेहरे लगा लेते हैं कुछ लोग
खुद को खुद में ही छुपा लेते हैं कुछ लोग....

Yha Har chehre ke pichhe koi na koi kahani hai,
Vidambna ye hai ki sunaye to sunaye Kaise...
Are Mai chahta hu ki har Vo kahani bahar aaye pr,
Us kahani ko bahar aane ka rasta btaye to btaye kaise...

Tej ka veer se aise baat Karna or veer ka uske sare savalo pr jvab dena, yah dono ke liye hi pahli baar tha jaha veer kuchh is tarah se soch kr khush ho rha hoga ki uski bahan ne kitne hak se usse sawal jvab kiye hai kash ye bachpan se hua hota, kitna apnapan sa feel ho rha hai Aise baat karke, ki Vo mujhse puchh rhi hai mere jindgi me kya chal rha hai...

Vahi tej soch rhi hogi man me ki usne apne Chote bhai ke sath frankly hak se daant bhi sakti hai puchh bhi sakti hai...

Hamko aisi talks or bhi kai baar dekhni hai Jaise Sonali bedhadak kuchh bhi Bol kr puchh leti hai kuchh Vaise hi tej ko bhi rakhiyega, jo darsata hai ki tej veer ki badi bahan hai or vo Kabhi bhi kuchh bhi puchh sakti hai hak se bejhijhak...

Arohi Kavya ka aise bilakh kr apne bhai veer ki baho me Rona banta hai, ek tarah se unki jindgi ki niv hi hil gyi pr veer ne unhe samhal liya ki kuchh bhi ho jaye Isse unke riste me koi bhi fark nhi padega, sumitra ji ka past bhi koi Bahut khushiyo bhara nhi rha, Jaisa ki Hamne dekha ki karunesh kya karta tha unke sath, or ab pta Chal rha hai ki unke jeth ka ghar ujadne vala unka pati hi tha to unhe sadma lgna to tay Hi tha or ab vo bhavna or veer se mafi bhi mangengi, Jaisa unka swabhav hai or unhone to veer ki bachpan me madad bhi ki hai purvi ke pass lejakr...

Idhar vivek pranjal or karunesh tino hi milkr kam se kam ek baar to veer ko thikane lgane ka prayash karenge hi Sayad, veer ho sakta hai Madhuri ko milva de pranjal se... yhi naam to tha na

Pahle bhavna ko ghar se bahar nikala fir veer ko Ghar se bahar nikala uske baad pranjal ko Ghar se bahar kiya fir sweta ko or ab karunesh ko... yaar is ghar me sab bahar hi kyo nikal dete hai har baar chahe galti ke tarike kitne bhi different ho, (just joking) pr sochne vali baat hai ki is ghar se log galti karne pr Ghar se bahar hi nikalte hai...

Past illustration bhi sayad update hua hai, or veer ne bhanu or uske baap ka past bhi dekh liya hai or use sari planning bhi pta Chal gyi...

Veer ki 3 familiar hai Jisme 102, 104 or 112 hai, ab takrav 104 va 112 me hona hai badhiya hai dono maye apas me apne bete ke liye kuchh Kahengi or kuchh sunegi, maza aane vala hai aage or ab to msg bhi aa gya hai, aane vala time veer ka kafi tough hone vala hai...

Vo nyi 3 mahilaye servant hi hai vo slave banne layak nhi hai pr veer unke sath kuchh naughty naughty karta rah sakta hai vahi saili uske bare me kya kahu, sikhne ke baad Dhamal machane vali hai Vo black beauty...

Dekha jaye to veer ki is gadi me 1st drive thi vahi tej ki bhi pr tension ki vajah se vo dono bhi iska maza nhi le sake, koi na kisi din fresh mood me long drive pr le kr Jane ka tej ko... Mahaul khushnuma hone pr to Kavya hak se bolegi ki mujhe bhi sikhao tej se ya veer se vahi juhi to veer ki godi me baith kr hi sari khusiya pa leti hai, Uski to duniya jahan hi uske veer mamu, MA or mausi ke bich hai...

Sayad aapne fame points nhi dikhaye pr veer ye baki ke points bcha kr rakh rha hai Taki samay aane pe vo system vale bande ke liye koi defence ya attack buy kr sake...

Veer ko one time use ke liye bhi mila hai or vo unki details nye arc me show karvane vala hai dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...

Superb bhai lajvab amazing Jabardast sandar update with awesome writing skills bhai

There is a saying:"Destruction is needed prior to Construction" and in Hindi"जो दूसरा के लिए गड्डा खोदता है वो अपने ही गले लग जाता है "। ये पूरा के पूरा यहाँ फिट बैठता है। थोड़ा दुखद है लेकिन इस पर्ब का समाप्ति ठीक है। आखिर करुनेश के साथ वही हुआ जो होना चाहिए था। अच्छा हुआ बाप बेटा को उस घर से ही भागा दिया गया है। लेकिन उस हारामी प्रांजल का कोई भरोसा नहीं। वो जो कब क्या करेगा कोई ठीक नहीं। चलिये पहले इस arc मे kaera का जॉब वीर के द्वारा कैसे सम्पन्न होता है उसके तरफ नज़र डाला जाये। ये कहानी एक अति उत्तम कहानी मे से है। समस्त मित्रों से अनुरोध रहेगा की लेखक को अपनी गति से सुचारु रूप से लिखने दिया जाये। अनुच्छेद के बीच का अंतराल को नज़रअंदाज़ करने मे कोई खेद नहीं क्योंकि बदले मे जो मिल रहा है वो बहुत ही सुंदर है। धन्यबाद। इस कहानी के अगला arc का अगला अनुछेद के लिए बेसब्री से इंतज़ार करेंगे।

Superb Jabardast update

Nice update

Bahut hi behtareen aur lajawab update Werewolf bhai..

Nice...and suspenseful update....ab kya began hona wala hn..wolfy bro....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Black bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Super update

awesome bhai take ur time

Bhai aare you ssooooooo greaaattt bhai 4th mega update bhai thanks bhai thanks broo isbaar bhi humara intezaar safal huva yaar wolfi broo yaar tumhare jesa whriter aaj tak koi paida nahi huva yaar aakhir kese itna achchi ghatnaye soch lete ho yaar hum to aisa kuch soch bhi nahi pate broo kya hi gazab likhte or sochte ho bhai

Sach main

To veer and gang wapas mumbai aachukihai or bhavna ne ek dum correct faisla liya hai ab ayega maza shweta ke pass ek baar fir platinum opportunity hai dekhte hai wo kya karegi

Veer or bhavna mujhe lagta hai bhai aapko indono ko ab pass lana chahiye joki hai hi but aapko or sab readers ko pata hai ki 20 saal ki tadap sir kuch palo main nahi mitti saath hi sath shweta ke prati bhi kuch narmi honi chahiye or bhumika ke prati bhi

Par mujhe lagta hai bhumika or veer ke raste main tej ek atoot diwaar ki tarah khadi hai veer or bhumika ka bhi milan dekhne layak hoga


Well kavya or arohi ka to jese sabkuch khatam hogya but usse jyada dukh to sumitra ko huva hai bechari ka to sansaar hi ujad gaya hai or uper se wo hi thi jo karunesh ki haivaaniyat sehti thi uper se uske do jigar ke tukde bhi aise hi hai sivay kavya or arohi ke

Well mujhe nahi lagta ki vivek veer ka wo wala roop dekh kar kuch karega veer ke khilaf wo to mujhe lagta hai apna hi sochega ab wo bhala or uski company bhali or uska bacha kucha parivaar or jindgi bhali

Or bhai brijesh or manorath ne kya hi dhoya hai sahiwala mouj aagyi brijesh bichara uski bhi puri duniya ujad gayi bada muskil hota hai bina aourat ke apni jindgi akele bitana but kasoor bhi uska hi hai bhavna ke sath jo galti usne ki thi trust na karne ki wahi wali galti usne shweta wale case mqin bhi ki thi khair ab pachtave hoega kya jab billi kaat gayi gaand

To is baar hume weer ka full status dekhne ko mila jo ki kafi demand main tha Well ab kya karegi sumitra kya wo bhi ab ragini ke ghar jayegi ya apne sasur or jeth ki sewa karegi vivek or ragini ka to mujhe dur dur tak koi relation ab nahi dikhta or dikhna bhi nahi mangta hai

Well ab thoda veer business main time dene wala tha but uske pehle use ek dinosaur ko pachadna hoga jiska msg aachuka hai crimson festival ki taiyariya shuru hone wali hai ab dekhna ye hai ki kya ye arc baki ke sare arcs ko pachad payega

But bro jesa ki hume pata hai ki veer ko crimson festival main kahi bahar to jana hi hoga kyu ki ye mumbai main to posibal nahi hai or uske baad china town arc main China jana hoga kya veer in tour ke chalte apna business badha payega kya wo apni dono maao ke or sabhi behno ke or ragini se apni nazdikiya bahut jyada badha payega

Sawaal jantahu kafi khade kiye mene but inka jawab hume update denge kyu wolfi sahi kaha na baki to aap bhi kuchna kuch to replye denge hi

Baki sach main ye outstanding update tha maza aaya bhai wese kitna break loge jald loutna tumhara update humare liye
Oxygen jitna jaruri hogya hai

Jabardast update bhai..

maza aa gaya bhai

Maza aa gaya bhai
Waiting for crimson

Zabardast bhaaya bht shandar update ab finally crimson arc shuru hoga ab keara sonia eva ki dubara entry hogi intezar rahega

Fantastic mind blowing update

Jalan ,dwesh ki bhavana insan ko bure karm karne ke liye majbur kar dete hai....karunesh,Pranjal iske satik exp. Hai
Ab dekhana hai ki story me aage inka koi rol hai ya fir nahi???
Lagata hai Veer k naye dusmen ne kuch kand kiya hai...
Shandar update bhai.

Bai Kuc skill Hume be de do
Jabardast

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Nice update bro

Superb update fantastic update

Woah!!! ...wt a update man.. Damnn, mza aa gya bro bs aise hi mze dilate rho.. Baaki big up bro n all the best for the next.. Big love

Kyaa Update diyaa h warewolf bhai mjjaa aa gyaa pdh k itni baate jo ghti h sbke beech m or purvi ka baat krnaa or frrr tej kaa veer se itna open conversation krnaa or thodi bossy tone m question poochna jo kabhii veer k saath kisi ne nhii kiyaaaa pdhkrr mjjaa aaya or. Frrr ghrr jaake karunesh kaa wo sb bolnaa lekin mujhe lgtaa h karunesh or pranjal abhii bhii haar nhii maanenge plt k jrur aayenge or pranjal abhi tk underground h. Whii doosri trf abhii ek mission baaki h veer kaa jo lgtaa h aage jrur poora hogaa or soniaa kaira or suhana lautenge wpss story m crimson arc m
Nidhi juhi or shreyaa ko miss krr rha hu update m or veer ka bussiness bhii abhii wesa hi h wo upgrade hotee huyee bhii dikhaane ki icchhaa rkhtaa hu aage crimson arc k liye eagerly waiting

Superb awesome update brother

Jabardasttt Updateeee

Mazedar

SUPER DUPER UPDATE

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update fabulous outstanding excellent quality update

Fantastic update bro
Ab game start ho gaya hai ab aayega asli maja

Nice update

amazing update

Tej ko abhi sirf veer ki soniya or suhana se dosti ko hi nhi pach pa rhi h tab kya hoga jab use pta chlega ki keara se bhi dosti h veer ki keara ki company to
soniya ki compani se bhi badi hai

Bhai kiyara ka mission jo one month main pura karna tha bo bi pura karo

Superb update

Simply superb, bro. Bahut hi shaandaar update ke Saath is arc ko khatam Kiya hai Aapne, bro. Well done and congrats for this. Karunesh ki chalava ki rahasya Ka khulaasa - kya hi kehna is asthin ke saamp ke baare mein - usko Ghar se baahar Kar Diya lekin uski biwi aur Bacchiyon Ka kya, yeh toh Tay hone se Raha, aage chalke dekhen inke Saath kya honewaala hai, Veer kya nirnay leta hai - aur aage aanewaale musibaten kya Hain, kaise, kisse aur kahaan se in sabka pardapaash hone Ka intezaar rahega hamein - aur Veer in sabka saama kaise karnewaala hai, yeh bhhi jaaneka avasar hamein bahut jald milnewaala hai aanewaale Crimson arc mein - take care of Ur health dear bro, please. Regards.

Awesome update Bhai

Awesome and fantastic update bhai ab dekhna ye hoga k veer apne jaise ya usse bhi advance system ko kaise haraiga ya wo khud haarega

Bohat he zabaradast update tha Kaha v3er ki yeh ke sath nazdeekiya bash rahi hy wahi krunesh Ka b Lisa filhal khatam hua or ye message zaroor us unknown bandy ne bheja hy ab veer Kuch plan krna Hoga ane wali musibat se bachne k liye

Mujhe lagta h ki dusara system wala aadmi slogan ka sathi rha hoga or usne veer ke bayo me pad liya hoga ki veer ne hi slogan ko mara h Quki jab veer or slogan pahli baar mile the or veer ne slogan ki gaadi roki thi to slogan ne kha rha ki tumhe kya mission Mila huaa h kya or jab veer keara ko slogan ke changul se churane gya tha to slogan n kha tha ki mujhe pata h ki tum jarur aayoge sayad slogan ko system ke bare m kuch to pata tha

parijaat ghar ki raaslela ki vajah se sabhi ladies naraz hai thoda bahut or thodi sharam bhi hai veer se .. Par kurnesh ki sachai jaan kar sab ka dhyan uss taraf hai.. arohi or kavya dono ko baar baar sabke samne sharmida hona padta hai.. uska bhai to tha hi aisa ab baap bhi vaisa nikal.. veer or baki sab ne mil kar sambhal liya dono ko.

tej ko to veer ki har ek shiz or baat..sab kuch janna hai. Lagta hai pyaar ya attraction ki wajah se kisi bhi ladki ya aurat ka veer se sambandh kyu hai? Kya hai? Ye janne ki koshish kar rahi hai hai or jall rahi hai..

krunesh or pranjal dono ab ghar se bahar nikale gaye.. or dono hi dolat,sohharat ki lalash ki wajah se aaj iss mode par pahoch gaye.
khair vaise bhi ab dono ki hi ab buddhi to aane se rahi to sudhrenge to nahi to dono baap-bete mil kar planing karenge ab.
inke karmo ki saza sumitra, arohi,kavya ko bhugat na pad raha hai.

past life ka chapter khatm hua ab present time me dekhte hai Kya kya hota hai.. veer ke paas kiska msg aaya hai? Kya ab khatra aane wala hai ?

Awesome superb update Bhai.

nice1

Updet Bahut saandaar raha SIR JI

Awesome Brilliant update

वो आ गया ।
अब ओर भी रोचक होगा

Bahut hi romanchak aur shandar update bhai
Bahut sukriya Bhai lagatar 4 mega update Dene k liye

Amazing story sir Awesome

bhut Shandar update bro

Bahot badhiya

veer ko pending quest jaldi poory karney padengeyany walley khatrey sey nibetney key ley maja ayga

mind blowing .. awesome ...
bahut badiya ...

keep rocking

Jabardast lekhni nice update

Bilkul sahi bt he bhai har 1 character itna important aur itna bariya he ke sb pe alag se story ban sakti he also har character ka kahi na kahi puri story se jura hua he you are a brilliant writer man superb

bhai abi last update me bavna ke athit ke raj khul gaye veer ko bhi pata chal gaya ki uski ma ne use q bachpan me cod diya tha par bhai kya veer he sab jane ke bad bhi apne ma ko maf kar payrga q ki usne jo bacpan me jo jela he ho itane jaldi to nahi bul payega or age kaya Kare ga he to ap hamse behetar jante he par muje lagta he ki veer intne jladi to nhi bulega eas par bhai toda parksh dale...

करूणेश ने दौलत के लालच मे पड़कर प्रेम चोपड़ा और रंजीत का साथ दिया था । एच के साहब और वी पी साहब कोई प्रेम चोपड़ा सर और रंजीत सर के निभाए गए फिल्मी विलेन किरदारों से कम थोड़ी न थे !
धन दौलत के चक्कर मे परिवार के बीच झगड़े होते ही है और कभी-कभार तो खून खराबे तक हो जाते है। लेकिन मुझे लगता है करूणेश की भूमिका इस मामले मे कोई बहुत बड़ा भी नही था। उसने सिर्फ हरिकिरण के आदमी को भावना के कमरे मे दाखिल कराने मे मदद मात्र की थी।
आदमी हरिकिरण का , तस्वीरें खिंची भानु प्रताप ने , स्कीम बनाया इन्ही बाप बेटे ने , करूणेश का ब्रेन वाश किया इन्ही लोगो ने । करूणेश सिर्फ एक छोटा सा मोहरा ही था जिसका कार्य बहुत सीमित था।
लेकिन करूणेश का अपनी पत्नि को प्रताड़ित करना , हाथ उठाना , अभद्र भाषा का प्रयोग करना बहुत बहुत गलत था। पत्नि कोई बंधुआ मजदूर नही होती । वैसे भी बंधुआ मजदूर के दिन भी अब लद गए है।
शारीरिक उत्पीड़न कानूनन अपराध है , भले ही घर के भीतर रिश्तेदारों के बीच ही क्यों न हो।

बहुत बुरा लगता है सुमित्रा देवी और उनके लड़कियों के लिए। खासकर आरोही और काव्या के लिए । इन बेचारों की उम्र ही कितनी है ! और इसी उम्र मे ही उन्हे यह सब देखना पड़ा , सहना पड़ा । करूणेश खुदगर्ज और बेईमान , विवेक भी खुदगर्ज और नाकारा , प्रांजल एक मनोरोगी और साजिश कर्ता । विवेक का अपनी पत्नि से सम्बन्ध विच्छेद।

मनोरथ विला से पहले वीर की बिदाई , फिर उनके भाभी रागिनी की बिदाई , फिर श्वेता एवं उसकी बेटी की बिदाई , फिर प्रांजल की बिदाई और अब करूणेश की बिदाई।
घर परिवार से बनता है लेकिन यहां परिवार बिखर रहा है , टूट रहा है।
अच्छा होता भटके हुए लोग सद बुद्धि पाए और नेक इंसान बनकर फिर से इस परिवार का हिस्सा बनें !

वीर की ड्यूटी अब यहां से शुरू होती है कि वो क्या ऐसा करे जिससे सुमित्रा और उनकी लडकियां मानसिक रूप से टूट न पाए और मुस्कान उनके चेहरे पर हमेशा बनी रहे !
फिलहाल भावना , तेज और रागिनी से भी अधिक तवज्जो देने की जरूरत इन महिलाओ की है।

वैसे आरोही और काव्या का यह सोचना कि वो भी अपने बाप और भाई के पाप की भागीदार है , बिल्कुल ही गलत है। उन्हे तो सपने मे भी गुमान न था कि उनके बाप और भाई कैसा कैसा षड्यंत्र रच रहे है। वो बिल्कुल ही गंगा की तरह पाक और बेदाग हैं।

वीर और पुर्वी के कन्वर्सेशन के दौरान वीर ने कहा , पारिजात हाउस कांड उसके स्कीम का पार्ट था , उसका फेंका हुआ पाशा था। न तो पूर्वी संतुष्ट हुई उसकी बातों से और न ही मै।
देखते है उसके पाशे मे कितना दम है !

तेज और वीर का संवाद एक भाई बहन के बीच का संवाद था जहां तेज अभी भी वीर को समझने की कोशिश कर रही है। बहुत बढ़िया कन्वर्सेशन था दोनो का।

अपडेट हमेशा की तरह बहुत खुबसूरत और जगमग जगमग था वोल्फी भाई।

nice update bro

Superb shaandaar lajavaab

Boht Zabardast update

Etna bada update deney key liye dhanyawad Bro

Lgta hai ab 2-3 week update nhi aayega esliye etna bda update diya

Zabardast update

Fabulous update

Superb update brother waiting for more...

Superb update

Excellent update

Veer ne apni teju di ko suhana ka zikra to kr dia.. K wo kitne Jaane maane logo se taaluq rkhta h but abi Kiara ka name ni Lia.. Well kaafi exciting hoga ye..and obviously tej ko jb suhana ka Naam pta h to Kiara ko b definitely janti hogi.. She's a gem business woman... Mza aayega

Update please Bhai kab tak aaya ga

Awesome updates

Tab tak key liye hum bhi off lete hai xforum se .....
After update Please Quote Me please

Behad hi shandar or dilchasp update bhai or last me suspense.
Bahut khoob superb

Amazing update

Boht achi update thi, sab wapis aa gaye hen, Parijat Ghar ki ladies ko alag ghar mil gya or Veer ko fun k liye aik thikana, Tej k tu hosh urty jaien gy jesy jesy oss k samny Veer ki female Friends any lagy gi lekin mujhy laGta ahy k Bhavana bhi aik mashoor Archaeologist hay tu kahi na kahi Suhana ya Kaira zaroor janti hongi or Veer ki Maa ki hasiyat say Bhavana ka image or powerful hoga. Pringal Ghayab hay dekhty hien Crimson Arc ma os ka koi role hay ya nahi ye tu aany wali updates hi batien gi. Kaafi time say Nidhi Maam bhi nazer nahi aai tu Veer k Ghar ya Bhumika k Hotel ma aik Get to Geather Party honi chaye jis mien Veer k present friends ka intro Bhavana n Tej waghra say ho to acha lagy ga. anyways writer knows better how to deal with chracters and Story.

अपडेट की उम्मीद है

werewolf bhai....agar lamba update dete ho to kya koi ehsaan karte ho..just joking bhai....aapka bahot bada ehsaan hai kyunki lekhak ko kahani likhne ke kya koi paise milte hain ..nahi na...lekhak to apne sauk ke liye kahani likhte hai...aur hamaare jaise chutiya readers ka manoranjan karte hain....lamba break lo bhai ..ab jab dobara update dena to dhamaal macha dena........milte hain ek break ke baad ....

Nice update

AWESOME STORY

Bro aapki story bahut mast hai bolne walo ka kya vo to bolte rahte hai bhai aap apna time lo


Apki story to ese hai agar aap type karke ise book banwa kar bhi release Karo GE to bhi bikegi yha par to etni badiya free me mil rhi hai

Bhai ye break kitne dino ka hoga...kuch andaza bata do...ham bhi xf se utne dino ke liye break par chale jayenge kyuki aapke aur Sandeep Bhai ke story ke alawa koi badhia story aa nahi rahi xf pe

Bhaiya ji aap samay bta do kab doge update,. Waise bhi mujhe bhi exam ki tyari karni hai


Aur bhai ragni ka bhi Kalyan karo bhai

Jabardast update

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Bhai update 116 me notification aaya.. Ki allow me to serving u master..ye pari ki paheli kb suljegi

Waiting for Crimson

Waiting for next update

Ek khubsurat ant ek khubsurat arc ka.....
Bhavna ko apna beta chahiye tha. Use wo mil gya. Veer ko ek maa chahiye thi. Use wo mil gyi. Double double mil gyi... Tej ko ek bhai chahiye tha. Use wo mil gya.

At the end veer ki family ban gyi. Aur uske saath bura karne wale logo k saath bhi bura hi hua... Ek beautiful end iss arc ka. Loved it Sir.

Fir se wo unknown person saamne h... Message usi ne bheja hoga obviously. Peecha hi nhi chodh rha Veer ka. Are bhai kya problem h? Veer ko maarna kyu h? Milega kya uss se?

Ek dangerous arc shuru hone wala h.... According to u. Bcoz aapne hi aisa kaha h... Aur main khoob zyada excited hu...

Ava Kaera aur Sonia ko ek sath dekhna h mujhe. Veer ka business grow karte dekhna h. Aur fight k liye bhi excited hu. Just imagine veer uss person se ladega to fight kesi hogi? Slogan ki fight hi kitni khatarnak thi. Goosebumps aa gye the tab literally...

To ab kya hoga.... Eagerly waiting sir.... Kya kahani aur next level jaegi? Itne upar level pe to hum aa hi chuke h ki expectations bahut rehti h ... Aapne standard hi apna aisa bana k rakha h .... Bar hi itna set kar dia h ki normal update low level ka lagta h... Kyuki expectations hi itni badha dete ho aap ...

To ab hum sab wait kar rhe h sir... Crimson arc hila k rakh de... Aisa hi hona chahiye.... Feeka nhi.

Waiting eagerly for the new arc... Keep writing. Love your work.

Intjaar....

Waiting for new arc

Update bhaut jada hi khubsurat hai

Waiting for next update

Bhai Eva or Ava ki entry hogi ya uska role khatm h story me

Just just! Holy mind blowing. Bhut hi mazy ki story hai maine almost 10 dino main fully read kr li hai jitni tareef kro utni kam hai Vro aapky likhny ka andaaz wonderful.... I have no words to express. Bas ab raha ni ja raha bas jald se jald update do ab tuu ,

Bc kitne update aa gaye idhar. 114 ya 15 tak padha tha shayad?

Famiglia Arc [Ongoing] kya ye Arc Abhi complete nhi hua kya.....

Nice update

Shaandaar dhamaake daar updates thaa bhai late padha mai isliye aur dhamake daar laga parizaat ghar ,. Kya khub racha hai ,. Saili , ka aage role hoga to jaise suman ki beti ka hai food truck mai bole to jhakkkas

abhi to kiara ka batana hai teju di ko than wo american pop singer .. teju ki kya haalat hone wali hai .. here jealousy turns teju towards incest may be

Ak dum Shandaar Story hai bhai aapki mene 1 update se padhi hai 1 update bhi boring nahi lga keep going bro
And next update jldi upload kro

Bahut bahut badhai aapko

nice bhai jaldi se bookbinding krwa key padhao

Nice bhai waiting for new update

Update kab tak???

Hafte mai ek hi update de rho ho
It's not fair with us

Superb update bro

Nice update. Waiting for next update

Aapka vanvaas kab katm hoga or hame kab action dekhne ko milega

Waiting

Kab tak aayega update bhai ji

Waiting for next update

Kya slogan ki beti to mar chuki hai pahadi se to kya uski era ya atma bhi story main dikh sakti hai.

excited waiting for update!!

LAJAWAAB EXCELLENT JABARDUST MIND BLOWING EMOTIONAL AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Slogan ki wife shweta hoti n pahadi se kudne wali ladki bhumika hoti ki kya hota ?

Hey bro how are you acha story mein koi heroin ayye gi gis ko dekh ka apny hero ko lagy ka yehi hai wo

Toh.. Sab se phele a fantastic and lengthy update as always.
Toh ab aate hai review par
Mereko toh yeh car ki screeeeeeeeech wali cheez badiya lagti kyuki aap ek car ko bhi kahani se juda nhi karte.
Aur uss ke finally hamara veer vapis mumbai aagya aur aapne bhot saare question ke phir se answer de diye like dasiyan ka rahegi aur kab aayegi wagera.
Aur aate hi tej ka 7 crore ki car ko dekh kar harain hona aur question puchna veer se.
Aur uss ke baad kavya bechari ka aane wali pareshani ke baare mien soch rona aur veer ka arohi ko samajhana.
Aur veer ka sonali ke question ki woh nidhi mam ke pass jati hai ki nhi? jisse ek baat clear hogyi ki veer ko sonali par doubt tha ki kahi vo gyi na ho
Aur uss ke baad massi aur bhanje ke bich meethi aur pyar baari baat chit.
Aur veer ka tej ko comfort karna lekin bechare ko yeh nhi pata ka ki comfort karna itna baari padhega ki tej sawalo ka brahmastra chalne lageki. Aur tej ka harain hona ki uss ka bhai vegas ho aaya hai uss ke bhai ki dosti suhaana aur sonia jesi ladkiyon se hai.but I really want to see tej reaction when will get to know that veer also has friendship with kaera and one n only American pop singer ava. I really want to see this ASAP.
And uss ke bhot time baad veer ke stats samne aana and yes one thing hat's off werewolf bhai ki veer ke stats hamasa yaad rakh ke ho.
Aur uss ke baad veer, arohi, tej aur kavya ka purane ghar pochna aur sumitra ka darna aur haa veer ka ekdam sahi faisla karna ki wo kuch nhi karega chaye vo ussne kavya aur arohi ke liye hi na liya ho.
Aur uss ke baad brijesh ka karunesh ki gaand marna aur sach ugla wana. Aur ha karunesh ka bhi uss ke beta wala hal hona.
Aur akhir mein anjan aadmi ka message aana.
A very awesome update and sorry for smelling mistake if any .

Edit ( werewolf bhai itna baada update kese likh lete ho yeh review likhna mien haath dukh jata hai)

Bhai update please

Update kab thak ahh raha hai bhai

Intjaar....

Waiting.

129 completed


lage reho

Waiting wolf Bhai, apka Xforum ke Bahar koi contact ho to batana plz

Finally aaj update aayega na Werewolf bhai...

Wait for next update bhai

Werewolf
उत्तरायन की लालिमा लिए हुए इस नई सदी के 2023 साल मे कितने ही किरदारों को जानने के लिए हमने सारे अद्भूत अविस्मरणीय अंकों का पूर्ण लुफ्त लिए ..
ये विलेज आर्क की समाप्ती ने बहुत सी कडियों को जोड़ कर कई प्रश्नो के उत्तर पूर्ण करें
पूरा शमा बाँध दिया गया
अब तो इन्तेज़ार हैं कि आने वाले समय में क्रीमसन

आर्क क्या गुल खिलाता है देखते हैं...
अब तो शुरू करिए..

Abhi to de jaldi update

Itna intezar kar liya sir ab toh padhkar hee neend ka anand lenge

Site apne aap hi dusra page kholri hai kya problem hai

Shi me yrr ad shi kro bc

Parijaat ghar mai kuch to hai jo veer systemse cheak kiya hai.....?

Your device is infected. Install a good antivirus with cyber security which should be paid subscription.

Sahi he rest Lelo bro

koi na bhai update to baad m dete rehna.. phale apni tabiyat ka dhyan rekho.. Take care bro..

Ye kamai ke chakkar me itna ad dal diya hai admins ne ki pucho mat....itna bhi ad mat dalo admins/mods ki log aana hi chor de...

जब तक ऐड आते हैं पेज रिफ्रेश करते रहो

Get well soon brother..

Take care Bhai... Health comes first wishing for speedy recovery

Bhut gajab ki story bhai...

Take care
You are more important than updates

Lagta hai ek baar phir chai khali peeni padegi

Update 130 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

 

[Werewolf]

Arc ki shuruaat light way me hogi. Dheere dheere sequences intense hote jayenge. Iss baat ka dhyaan rakhiyega.

 

[pakibest]

Awesome come back

 

[PS10]

Brilliant update

 

[The angry man]

Update - 130 ~ The Purpose​

Ab tak...

*Ring*

Uske phone par ek notification aaya.

'Hmm?'

Screen on kar jaise hi usne message dekha uske raungte khade ho gaye.

Ek Message tha.

Jisme bas teen shabd hi likhe the.

"It has begun!"

Ab aage...

"Subah ki daud ke liye jaa rahe ho?"

Awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo muskura kar hall me baithi akhbaar padh rahi thi. Aur awaaz kendrit thi Veer ki orr jo apna tracksuit pehne upar apne kamre se neeche aa raha tha.

Veer : Itni jaldi uth gayi aap? Subah ke 6 baj rahe hai.

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein jaldi hi uthati hu beta. Toh? Jogging?

Veer : Jogging bhi aur kasrat bhi.

Bhavna dhyaan se apne bete ko dekhti rahi. Kese tracksuit uske gatheele jism se kass ke chipka hua tha.

Bhavna : Tumne gym kiya hai?

Veer : !!? Nahi toh! Kyu?

Bhavna : Toh aisi fitness?

Veer (smiles) : Aapko pasand nahi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Ye sawaal apni girlfriend se karna.

Veer (shrugs) : I don't have one.

Bhavna : Jese ki mein vishvaas karungi.

Veer : I really don't-

Bhavna : Mujhse kya chhipaana? Bata do! Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Nahi! Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. I really don't have-

Bhavna (sighs) : Aaj kal ke bacche! Pata nahi itna sharmaate kyu hai apne parents se baate share karne me.

Veer : No wait-

Bhavna : Theek hai! Jab sahi lage tab bata dena.

Veer ne ek aah bhari aur sarr hila ke woh baahar ko jaane laga. Toh,

Bhavna : Veer!

Veer (turns back) : Hmm?

Bhavna (frowns) : Ek zaroori baat karni hai. Tum hoke aao. Fir saath me baithate hai.

Veer : Alright.

Aur woh baahar nikal gaya.

***

Ek bohut bada toofaan aane waala tha. Aur uska sanket usse uss message ke zariye mil chuka tha.

"IT HAS BEGUN!"

Uss anjaan aadmi ka message jisne Veer ki neend haraam kar ke rakhi hui thi. Crimson Festival shuru ho chuka tha ye bataane ke liye woh message tha. Dusre shabdo me, woh aadmi ye bhi batlaana chaah raha tha ki Veer ki maut ka countdown bhi shuru ho chuka hai.

Aur Veer ek pal bhi barbaad nahi jaane de sakta tha. Apni maa aur unke ateet ka itna bada raaz jaan'ne ke baad ye masla woh suljha chuka tha. Ab samay tha aage aane waali musibat ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne ka. Aur yahi woh kar raha tha.

Subah ka uska routine hi exercise se shuru hota. Na sirf woh running karta balki Intermediate Martial Arts ko perfect karna bhi uska maqsad rehta.

Kyuki jitni jaldi ye perfect hogi utni hi jald woh Advanced Martial Arts khareed payega. Aur woh ye baat jaanta tha ki iss anjaan bande se ladne ke liye sirf Intermediate Martial Arts se kuch nahi hone waala tha.

Din me kabhi woh Balhaar ke aadmiyo ke sang fight leta. Jaha woh khud akela rehta aur saamne 10 se 15 log. Aur dheere dheere woh numbers ko badhaane laga.

Abhi woh park me baithe ek break le hi raha tha jab usse dhyaan aaya ki usne iss scroll ka use aaj tak nahi kiya.

'Pari!'

[Yes Master!]

'Profit Path humne aaj tak use nahi kiya. Hai na?'

[Yes!]

'Toh use karo.'

[It will take 100 Fame Points Master.]

'What? Scroll khareedne ke liye hi kitne points waste karne padte hai. Aur tum keh rahi ho ki ab ussi scroll ko use karne ke liye mujhe aur fame points spend karne padenge?'

[Yes! Par sirf iss scroll ke liye master. Aapko Mystic Touch ke liye toh kabhi bhi kuch spend nahi karna pada na?]

'Yeah! Lekin woh apne aap hi activate hota hai.'

[Kya aap chaahte hai woh harr samay on rahe?]

'Nahi! Fir toh woh samasya ban jayega Pari.'

[Hmm! Isliye ye wala scroll thoda special hai. Aap points use kariye. Aur khud dekhiye.]

'Alright do it then!'

*Ding*

[100 Fame Points have been used in Profit Path.]

*Ding*

Aur agle hi pal Veer ke mann me saamne ek window khul gayi. Veer usse padh ek soch me pad gaya.



'This is-'

[Yahi hai Profit Path Master. Usne Path de diya hai. Usse samajhna aur execute karna aapke upar hai.]

Path ko dekhte hi Veer muskuraaya.

'Awesome! This is awesome! Halaki isme se bohut kuch mene pehle hi soch liya tha. Lekin Perfumes, Farmers, Land aur supply. These are good ideas. I got it. Too good! Toh ye kaam karta hai Profit Path.'

[Yes! Ek aur note master.]

'What is it?'

[Jab tak aap isse execute nahi karte. Aap dusra path nahi draw kar sakte.]

'Ohh!'

[So do execute it please. Kyuki humare paas bilkul time nahi hai Master. Unknown person kabhi bhi kahi se bhi attack kar sakta hai. Mein kehna nahi chaahti. But we are weak.]

'I know!'

[Aur ek baat-]

'Say!'

[Master! We have to move smartly. Sabse pehla sawaal. Uss insaan ka maqsad kya hai? What is his purpose?]

'Purpose huh!'

[Yes! Kya humne usse kisi tarah se provoke kiya hai?]

'Honestly Pari, mujhe waqai nahi pata. Only guess I can make is somehow I may have provoked him by exposing house of the killers. Par kya woh house of the killers se related tha? Kya isliye badle me woh mujhe maarna chaahta hai kyuki mene house of the killers ke bade criminals ka safaaya kar diya?'

[Agar aisa hai toh fir usne aapko uss time maara kyu nahi? Woh asaani se maar sakta tha. We were surrounded. Kya Suhana ko nuksaan bhi ussi ne pohuchaaya tha? We must know every detail.]

'Yahi samajh nahi aa raha Pari. Isliye mein Aatish ya Slogan ke matter se bhi zyada anxious hu. Woh dono mere peeche kyu pade the mein jaanta tha. Par yaha- I have no clue at all. Upar se uske paas bhi system hai.'

[And a stronger one at that.]

'Right!'

[Isliye Master. We have to get strong as soon as possible.]

'Yeah! Anyways, let's go! Maa ko kuch baat karni thi.'

Ghar lautate hi Veer Bhavna ke kamre me gaya.

Jo ki asal me Ragini ka kamra tha jo usne Bhavna ko de diya tha.

'Shayad ab naya ghar lena hi padega.'

*Knock* *Knock*

Darwaaze khat-khataate hi andar se awaaz aayi,

"Aa jao Veer!" Woh ye sunn andar daakhil hua.

Veer : Aapko pata tha mein hu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Aur kaun ho sakta tha?

Veer : Ghar me itne log hai. Koi bhi ho sakta tha.

Bhavna (smiles) : Ragini toh so rahi hogi. Tumhari sauteli maa 7:30 baje ke aas paas uthi thi kal. Toh aaj bhi shayad utne hi samay uthengi!?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Aabha jaldi uthati hai. Aur woh nahane dhone me lag jaati hai. Sonali so rahi hogi. Rahi baat Suman ki toh woh zaroor uth ke naha dho ke ghar ke kaamo me lag gayi hogi.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Tej ki subah ki aadat mein jaanti hu. Aur Bhumika kal hotel ke liye 8 baje uthi thi. Shayad wahi uska time hai? Bache tum! Jis se mene kaha tha kuch derr pehle ki mujhse baat karne aana. Toh? Kya lagta hai? Aur kaun ho sakta hai?

Woh muskuraayi.

Veer : Spot on.

Bhavna (smiles) : Idhar aao. Mere paas baitho.

Usne hatheli se apne bagal ki jagah ko thap-thapa kar usse bulaaya. Veer chup chaap aake apni maa ke bagal se virajmaan ho gaya.

Bhavna : Tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai. Shayad ek nahi. Ek se zyada hongi.

Veer : Kahiye!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kaisi chal rahi hai tumhari college life?

Veer : Huh? Ye puchna tha?

Bhavna : Mm-Hmm!

Veer : Mujhe nahi pata.

Bhavna : Kya matlab?

Veer : Matlab ye ki mein sirf exams dene jaata hu.

Bhavna : Aur baaki ka tumhari Nidhi ma'am sambhaal leti hai.

Veer : Yeah! Ehhh!?? Wait- I mean- I mean aapko kese? Ohh! Teju dii! Yeah! Wo- Wo meri attendance dekh leti hai. Mere sessionals ka dhyaan rakh leti hai.

Bhavna : Mujhe milna hoga unse jald hi.

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Unhe thank you kehne aur kis liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Bhavna : Aur baaki time kya karte ho?

Veer : Bhabhi ne bataya nahi aapko? Food truck shuru kiya hai mene. Sonali aur workers sambhaalte hai.

Bhavna : Bataya tha. Par tumhare muh se sunn'na tha. Jab woh sab sambhaalti hai toh tum kya karte ho?

Veer : I look for other business opportunities.

Nazre ferr Veer ne jawaab diya.

Bhavna : Sach?

Veer : H-Haan!

Bhavna : Kitna paisa kama rahe ho beta?

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna : Kya nahi puch sakti?

Veer : Itna samajhiye ki abhi laakho me kama raha hu.

Bhavna : Itna paisa sirf food truck se?

Veer : Nahi! Shares khareede hai kuch. Companies me invest karna shuru kiya hai.

Bhavna : Inn sab me madad toh kii hogi kisi ne.

Veer : Hmm!

Bhavna : Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Aapko kyu jaan'na hai?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke shubh-chintak hai. Jaan'na toh hoga hi na?

Veer : Hai kuch log. Badi family se hai. Kaafi badi. Luckily hum familiar hai ek dusre se. Aur ek dusre ki madad karte rehte hai.

Bhavna : Tumhara uddeshya kya hai?

Veer : Huh?

Bhavna : Tumhare jeevan ka uddeshya!? Purpose!? Aim!?

Veer ki haalat abhi aisi thi jese kisi pareeksha me baithe vidyaarthi ke paper me syllabus ke baahar ka prashn aa gaya ho.

Thodi hi derr pehle woh Pari se anjaan aadmi ke purpose ko lekar baat kar raha tha.

Par uska khud ka purpose kya tha? Uski zindagi ka lakshya? Veer ke mann me ek uttar aaya. Par iske pehle ki woh jawaab de paata, Bhavna ne apni baat rakh uski bolti hi band kar dii.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana? Aur adhik paisa kamaana? Fir aur adhik? Acchi patni paana? Sundar baal bacche hona? Naya ghar, nayi gaadi, samaaj me izzat? Yahi sab?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Bolo? Yahi sab na?

Veer : Haan! Bilkul! Toh kya ye galat hai? Harr aadmi toh inhe hi paana chaahta hai na? Fir jeevan ke uddeshya ka matlab hi kya? Paisa hoga toh aap aaj ke sansaar me jee paoge. Acchi patni hogi toh ghar baar ko acche se sambhaal payegi. Baal bacche honge toh aage ki peedhi ko badhayenge. Iske alaawa aur kya uddeshya hai jeevan ka?

Bhavna apne bete ki thodi tezz awaaz sunn haule se muskuraayi aur kuch shan tak bas usse dekhti rahi.

Veer : Boliye!?

Usne nazre neeche kar ahista se fir bolna shuru kiya,

Bhavna : Mujhe ek baat batao Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Sansaar me abaadi kitni hogi abhi?

Veer : Around 8 billion!?

Bhavna : Mujhe batao ki lagbhag harr insaan inhi 5-6 cheezo ke peeche kyu bhaag raha hai? Padhayi! Paisa! Shaadi! Bacche! Ghoomna firna! Khaana peena!?

Veer : Aap aise keh rahi ho jese ye sab galat hai.

Bhavna : Mene toh kaha hi nahi Veer ki ye galat hai.

Veer : Toh fir ye sawaal kyu?

Bhavna : Tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi lagta?

Veer : Ajeeb kya?

Bhavna : Ki duniya ka lagbhag harr insaan bas inn 4-5 chuninda cheezo ke peeche hi bhaag raha hai? Kuch samajh aaya?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Kyuki samaaj ne insaano ko aaj wesa banaaya hua hai Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Acchi shiksha nahi hogi toh naukri nahi milegi. Naukri nahi hogi toh shaadi nahi. Shaadi nahi toh fir bacche nahi. Fir kya ghoomna firrna aur kya khaana peena. Zindagi khokli ho jayegi. Yahi na?

Veer : I-

Bhavna : Kabhi iss nazariye se nahi dekha ki yahi samaaj hume majboor karta jaa raha hai. Ek sa raasta apnaane ke liye hume dhakel raha hai.

Veer : Toh aap kya chaahti hai?

Bhavna : Mein chaahti hu ki tum apna lakshya dhundho mere bacche. Tum duniya me aaye ho. Kya sirf yahi karne? Jin baato ko mene ginaaya!?

Maa ki baat ka bodh hote hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Ek ek shabd sach tha. Usne ab tak iss nazariye se kyu nahi dekha tha? Kya waqai sirf yahi zindagi hai?

Veer : I see! Samajh gaya. Aap chaahti hai ki mein apne jeevan ka uddeshya dhundhu? Toh mein usse dhundhunga. Aur woh paisa kamaane se alag hoga.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana buri baat nahi hai Veer. Kamao! Khoob kamao! Par ek lakshya hona zaroori hai.

Veer : Aapka lakshya kya hai?

Bhavna : Mera lakshya? Woh mitt gaya. Ab jo bache kuche uddeshya hai woh hai ek maa ki zimmedari nibhaana. Aur itihaas ke panno ki sachhaayi jaan'na.

Veer : Excavation and Research...!?

Bhavna : Hmm! Ab ek akhiri sawaal. Tum kaun ho?

Veer : What?

Bhavna : Kaun ho tum?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna : Agar ye kehne jaa rahe ho ki mere aur Brijesh ki santaan ho, naam Veer hai, iss iss parivaar se ho toh abhi theher jao Veer. Mein apne bete se better expect karti hu. Toh ab batao. Kaun ho tum?

Veer shaant reh gaya.

Bhavna (smiles) : Tum nahi bata sakte.

Woh sahi thi. Veer ke muh se kuch na nikla. System ke baare me woh bata nahi sakta tha. Aur ye bhi nahi keh sakta tha ki woh Bhavna ka beta hai. Toh kaun tha Veer? Uske muh par jese taala lag gaya. Itna asahaay usne apne aap ko kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha. Woh apni hi pehchaan nahi bata paa raha tha?

Bhavna : Tumhe pata hai tum kyu iska jawaab nahi de paa rahe?

Veer : N-No I don't-

Bhavna : Kyuki tumhe tumhara uddeshya hi nahi pata beta. Jis din tum ye pata laga loge ki tumhara uddeshya kya hai. Tum ye bhi pata loge ki tum kaun ho.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Subah subah inn baato se tumhare dil ko chot pohuchaane ke liye maaf karna mujhe. Par mujhe yahi samay mila akele me tumse baat karne ke liye.

Veer : N-Nahi! Sorry kehne ki aapko zaroorat nahi. Aap sahi ho. I guess I never got time to think about this.

Bhavna (smiles) : You have time now!

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Bhavna : And me too!

Veer ko apne gaal pe ek narm hatheli mehsoos hui.

'Huhhh!!?'

Veer : Th-Thank you!

Aur uski aankhein namm ho gayi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Jab bhi lage ki koi uljhan hai. Toh bin soche samjhe aa jaana. Mein yahi milungi.

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Woh utha aur baahar jaane ko hua toh ek baar fir Bhavna ne usse pukaarte hue roka,

Bhavna : Ek antim baat yaad rakhna Veer!

Veer : !!

Bhavna : Tumhe paisa banaana hai mere bacche. Paisa tumhe banaaye, aisa na bann jaana.

Veer : Mein yaad rakhunga. Maa!

Bol woh nikal gaya.

***

Raat hui aur kal ki tarah jo nahi hona chahiye tha wahi hua. Tej aur Bhumika ki maun ladaayi.

Hotel se aane ke baad, Bhumika Tej se jab pehli baar mili toh aisa laga jese ye ladki usse abhi jaan se maar degi.

Woh usse ghoorti rahi. Par baato ke maamle me dono ke muh se ek chu tak nahi nikla. Aur ye ghar ke baaki sadasyo ko duwidha me daale hue tha.

Jese tese dinner ke baad sab apne apne kamre me pohuche.

Veer apne kamre ko vyavasthit karne me laga tha jab Tej achanak se uske kamre me aa gayi.

Tej : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Tej (smiles) : Hum saath me hi so rahe hai na?

Veer : Huh?

Tej : T-Tum mere saath nahi sona chaahte?

Veer : Umm! Nahi! Baat wo nahi hai-

Tej : Toh?

Veer : Alright! Aaiye!

Tej muskura ke waapas palti aur bhaagti hui apna kuch zaroori samaan lene chali gayi. Uske poore gaal laal ho rakhe the. Itni himmat karke usne ye pucha tha. Directly baat karna asaan dikhta tha. Par tha nahi. Jo sharm-o-hayaa wo mehsoos kar rahi thi ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Idhar Veer uske jaane se confused reh gaya. Tejal dii aa rahi thi ya nahi? Bhaag kyu gayi? Kya unhe ab nahi sona?

Wahi Shweta apne kamre me apni beti Bhumika ko jhatke pe jhatke dene me lagi hui thi.

Shweta : Ye lo!!! Jao ab jaldi se!

Usne Bhumika ke haatho me uska takiya pakdaate hue kaha.

Bhumika : W-What? Mom?

Wo bechaari asmanjas me reh gayi. Ye uski maa ko achanak se aaj ho kya gaya tha?

Shweta : Aise muh faad ke mat dekho mujhe. Jao jaldi! Kya tumhe apne bhai ke saath nahi sona? Sharm aati hai?

Bhumika : Mom! A-Aapko ye kya ho gaya hai? Achanak se aap-

Shweta : Chup kar! Wo Tejal apne bhai ke saath chipakne me lagi hui hai. Agar tumne ab pahal nahi kari na toh woh Veer ko apni mutthi me kar legi. Chalo ab jaldi! Tum bhi uski behan ho. Unke beech jao! Wese hi tumhari baat Veer se naa ke barabar hi hoti hai. Apne gile shikwe dur karo. Yahi sahi mauka hai. Jao!

Bhumika : M-Mom par-

Par Shweta kaha maan'ne waali thi? Usne Bhumika ko peeth par dhakka deke apne kamre se baahar nikaal diya.

Shweta (smiles) : Good Luck! Khoob chipak ke sona!

Bhumika : E-Ehhhh? Wh-What? Mom?? Mom wait-

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza peeche se band ho gaya.

Bhumika bechain hoti hui Veer ke kamre ke paas pohuchi. Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par aa kar wo khadi Veer ko dekhi jo apne bistar par saaf bedsheet bichhaane me laga hua tha.

Bhumika : V-Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Palat ke Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki uski wo behan uske saamne thi jisne kabhi usse pehchaan'ne se hi mana kar diya tha.

Veer : Ohh!? Aap yaha? Ghar me hi kahi raasta to nahi bhatak gayi?

Bhumika : Mein- woh...!

Sharmindagi se Bhumika ne apna sarr jhuka liya. Veer waapas se bedsheet vyavasthit karne me lag gaya.

Veer : Unless you have some matter, you wouldn't be here, right?

Uski baat sunn woh apne takiye ko kass ke apne seene me daba lii.

Yahi wo pal hote the jinse Bhumika hamesha dur rehna prefer karti thi. Kyuki wo glaani ke bhaar ko sambhaalne me behad hi kacchi thi. Ek naazuk eet ki tarah thi woh jispar glaani ki poori imaarat dabaav daale hue thi.

Na jaane... Kab toot ke bikhar jaaye.

Shayad Veer se zyada baat na hona hi ek kaaran tha jo ab tak usse tootne se bachaaye hue tha.

Uski aankhein apne aap dhundhli ho chali.

Bhumika : M-Mein kuch kehna chaahti hu.

Veer : Hmm?

Bhumika : M-Mera iraada kabhi bhi tumhare dil ko thes pohuchana nahi tha Veer. Meri baato ka... I... I know tum meri baat ka vishvaas nahi karoge. Jo kuch bhi mene kiya. Wo jaan boojh ke nahi kiya tha. Aur agar majboori me bhi tha. Toh- Toh uski zimmedar hamesha mein khud hi rahungi.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Tumne jo kuch bhi mere aur Mom ke liye kiya uske liye 'thank you' shabd bhi ab mazaak jesa lagta hai. Koi bhi insaan itna hone ke baad aisa nahi kar sakta jo tumne kiya hai. And I acknowledge it.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : But apart from regret, I don't know what to do. Sh-Shayad... Yahi meri destiny hai? Jeevan bhar repent karna. Ehsaas karte rehna ki kitni zyaadti ki hai hum maa beti ne tumhare upar. Aur-

Veer : Come in!

Bhumika : Huh!???

Achanak Veer ke shabd sunn, Bhumika bhauchakki reh gayi. Uska badan hil gaya.

Veer apni peeth uski orr kiye tha toh uske chehre par iss waqt kya haav bhaav the ye woh dekh na saki.

Veer (turns) : I said come in!

Bhumika ne ek gehri lambi saans lii. Dil uska zorro se dhadak raha tha. Kya uska bhai gusse me tha? Kya woh kuch usse sunaane waala tha? Aise tamaam vichaar uske mann me ek shan me aake guzar gaye.

Ghabrahat ko saath liye woh aage badhi. Ye soch ke ki Veer jo kuch bhi karega woh uska virodh nahi karegi. Kyuki galti hamesha se uski hi rahi hai.

Par Veer ne aisa kuch bhi na kiya,

Veer : Now say! Kyu aayi ho aap yaha?

Sawaal sunn Bhumika ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Woh jo soch rahi thi wesa kuch bhi nahi tha.

Bhumika : Mein-

Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm!

Bhumika : C-Can-

Veer : Yeah!?

Bhumika (blushes) : C-Can I sleep with you?

Usne tapaak se bol diya. Par fauran hi waapas se niraasha uske chehre par jhalki,

Bhumika : N-No! Forget what I just said. Mein... Mein chalti hu.

Mudke ek qadam hi aage badhaya tha ki,

Veer : Wait!

Bhumika (turns) : ??

Veer : Aaj achanak se kyu aapko mere saath sona hai?

Kaash koi bil hota, jisme Bhumika apna sarr de paati. Jo hayaa woh abhi mehsoos kar rahi thi woh aseem thi.

Bhumika : W-Woh... Woh Ragini bhabhi ne apna room tumhari mom ko diya hai. Aur Suman aunty meri mom ke kamre me soyengi unke saath. Toh isliye shayad unhone mujhe yaha-

Ye Bhumika ka logic tha. Par asal baat toh kuch aur hi thi.

Veer ka khayaal turant hi iss ghatna ko anjaam dene waali mahila par gaya.

'I knew it. It was her indeed!'

Shweta!!!

Bhumika : I'm- I'm sorry! Mein chalti hu.

Veer : Aap so sakti ho.

Bhumika : Huhhh!!!???

Veer : Mene kaha aap so sakti ho.

Usne nazre ferrte hue jawaab diya. Pehle wo mana karne wala tha par uski Teju dii bina koi confirmation diye bhaag gayi thi toh mana karne ka koi reason hi nahi tha Veer ke paas.

Veer ki qismat aksar uske mazze liya karti thi. Aaj bhi wahi hua. Yaha usne Bhumika ko manzoori dii aur waha se Tej apna zaroori samaan haatho me liye daudti hui uske kamre me aa dhamki.

Tej : Aa gayi mein... Hmm!!!??

Ab manzar kuch aisa tha ki teeno ek dusre ko hairaani me dekh rahe the.

*Silence*

'Shit!!!'

Jab se Bhumika aur Tej aapas me mili thi. Tab se hi dono ke beech ek adrishya takraav janm le chuka tha. Tej ne Bhumika ke saath wesa bartaav toh nahi kiya jesa usne Shweta ke sang kiya tha par dono me dosti bhi nahi thi. Nazro se nazre hi takraati thi bas aur ek khamoshi fel jaati thi.

Tej (frowns) : Why is she here?

Kamaal ki baat ye thi ki Bhumika Tej se umr me badi thi. Uske baad bhi Tej kahi se bhi kamzor prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Ulta woh Bhumika par haavi hi nazar aati thi.

Veer : Mujhe laga aap chali gayi. Aur inhe bhi mere saath sona tha toh-

Tej (suprised) : Aur tumne haan keh diya?

Veer : Why won't I?

Tej : That-

Woh maun reh gayi. Haan keh diya toh usme kya? Tej ye baat bhul rahi thi ki Bhumika Veer ke sang kayi mahino se reh rahi thi. Wahi usse toh abhi kuch hi din hue the apne bhai ke aas paas rehte hue.

Tej (smiles) : Theek hai! Toh mein beech me soungi.

Woh muskuraayi. Jo asal me ek muskuraahat nahi thi. Tarqeeb lagayi thi usne. Zaahir hai aisa karne se Veer fir Bhumika ke bagal se nahi so payega.

Bhumika : N-No! V-Veer ko beech me sona chahiye.

Veer : Of course I will. Warna na jaane kya hoyega aap dono ke beech.

Tej : You-!!!!

Be-mann se Tej Veer ke daayi orr laiti toh wahi Bhumika uske baayi orr. Ek ajeeb sa sannaata chhaaya hua tha. Kamra awkwardness se bhar gaya.

Dono behno ke bagal se laite Veer unke badan ki mehak ko soongh paa raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar lii.

Tej apni chot ka bahaana kar Veer ki taraf mudi aur uske seene par apna haath rakh dii. Kitni mazboot chhaathi thi. Usse mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh pal yaad aaya jab usne pehli baar Veer ko bina shirt ke dekha tha. Fir woh pal jab Shyaam ke ghar me woh washroom se nikla tha.

'Kya abhi bhi wahi khusbhu-!?'

Mann me ek vichaar aaya uske. Aage badh usne Veer ki gardan ke sameep apna chehra kiya aur,

*sniff*

'Ahhh!!!'

Ye wahi khushbu thi. Tej ko na jaane andar se kya hua par uski pakad Veer ki chaathi par mazboot ho gayi.

Usne apni ek taang utha ke Veer ki tango par chadhaayi. Aur chipke chipke wo uss khushboo ko punaah sunghne me lag gayi.

'What- What is this fragrance? *sniff* It's so good!!!'

Idhar Bhumika bhi badi himmat karke veer ke seene par haath rakhi. Par Tej jo lagataar haath firaaye jaa rahi thi, uska haath Bhumika ke haath se takra gaya.

Dono behno ko ek jhatka laga aur dono hi ek dusre ko dekhi.

Gusse me aake Tej ne Bhumika ka haath pakad seedha Veer ke seene se alag kar diya. Aur khud chipak gayi.

Bhumika : !!??

Ek kheecha taani shuru hui. Bhumika lagataar koshish kar kar ke apne haath perr Veer par jamaati aur Tej baar baar Bhumika ke haath aur perr ko pakad ke unhe hata deti. Ye bin awaaz ki ladaayi kayi minto tak chalti gayi.

Aam taur par Veer ko aankh kholne par upar ki ceiling nazar aani chahiye thi. Parantu usse abhi do haath aapas me ladte hue dikhaayi de rahe the jo kisi billiyo ki haathapaayi se kam nahi tha.

Aur agle hi shan,

*Thucccccckkkkkkkk*

*Thuuuuccckkkkkk*

"Ahhhhhnnnn!"

"Nnnn~"

Usne uth ke apne takiye se dono ke sarr par tapli de maari.

Tej : K-Kyu?

Veer : Ab agar aap dono chup chaap soyi nahi na. Toh dono room ke baahar hongi.

Tej apne honth daato tale dabaaye chaadar ke andar dubak ke ghus gayi. Toh wahi Bhumika ne apne perr sikod aankhein band kar lii.

Ek raahat ki saas lete hue Veer fir soya.

Lekin raat ke 2 baje ye uski gardan ko kaun chaba raha tha?

'Huhhh!?'

Neend khuli toh nazara dekh wo hakka bakka reh gaya. Uske upar Bhumika laiti hui thi. Usse kass ke jakde wo uski gardan hontho se chabaane me lagi hui thi.

Uski laar behke Veer ke seene tak behti chali gayi. Jis vajah se Veer ki neend khul gayi.

'What the fuck!!!?'

Bhumika poori tarah se neend me thi. Uske sudol uroj Veer ki seene se kass ke dabe hue the.

'Wait! Ye toh... Ye toh neend me hai completely.'

Veer : Hey!!! Hey!! Bhumika dii!?

Par uske jhunjhlaane par bhi Bhumika na uthi. Na jaane kya bad-badaaye jaa rahi thi.

Usse side me waapas lita ke jab Veer dobaara apni position pe aaya toh Bhumika fir chipak gayi.

'Ek minute! Don't tell me... Inko... Inko bimaari hai iski. Neend me idhar udhar hone ki aadat!? Toh Shweta ne isliye...!? Shit!!!! What is she trying to achieve?'

Par achanak se,

"Mamma mat karo na... Veer ko..."

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Crimson arc shuru ho gaya hai. 2-3 updates aise slow jayenge aur uske baad arc ka main plot pace pakdega. Meri tabiyat abhi kharaab hi hai. Toh schedule upar neeche ho sakta hai uska dhyaan rakhiyega. Baaki likes thok ke jaane ka aur apne revos rakhne ka. Pata hai na!?
Dhanyavaad!

Superb update, maja aya donovan bili yo ko jagdte deck kar

 

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Update - 130 ~ The Purpose​

Ab tak...

*Ring*

Uske phone par ek notification aaya.

'Hmm?'

Screen on kar jaise hi usne message dekha uske raungte khade ho gaye.

Ek Message tha.

Jisme bas teen shabd hi likhe the.

"It has begun!"

Ab aage...

"Subah ki daud ke liye jaa rahe ho?"

Awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo muskura kar hall me baithi akhbaar padh rahi thi. Aur awaaz kendrit thi Veer ki orr jo apna tracksuit pehne upar apne kamre se neeche aa raha tha.

Veer : Itni jaldi uth gayi aap? Subah ke 6 baj rahe hai.

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein jaldi hi uthati hu beta. Toh? Jogging?

Veer : Jogging bhi aur kasrat bhi.

Bhavna dhyaan se apne bete ko dekhti rahi. Kese tracksuit uske gatheele jism se kass ke chipka hua tha.

Bhavna : Tumne gym kiya hai?

Veer : !!? Nahi toh! Kyu?

Bhavna : Toh aisi fitness?

Veer (smiles) : Aapko pasand nahi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Ye sawaal apni girlfriend se karna.

Veer (shrugs) : I don't have one.

Bhavna : Jese ki mein vishvaas karungi.

Veer : I really don't-

Bhavna : Mujhse kya chhipaana? Bata do! Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Nahi! Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. I really don't have-

Bhavna (sighs) : Aaj kal ke bacche! Pata nahi itna sharmaate kyu hai apne parents se baate share karne me.

Veer : No wait-

Bhavna : Theek hai! Jab sahi lage tab bata dena.

Veer ne ek aah bhari aur sarr hila ke woh baahar ko jaane laga. Toh,

Bhavna : Veer!

Veer (turns back) : Hmm?

Bhavna (frowns) : Ek zaroori baat karni hai. Tum hoke aao. Fir saath me baithate hai.

Veer : Alright.

Aur woh baahar nikal gaya.

***

Ek bohut bada toofaan aane waala tha. Aur uska sanket usse uss message ke zariye mil chuka tha.

"IT HAS BEGUN!"

Uss anjaan aadmi ka message jisne Veer ki neend haraam kar ke rakhi hui thi. Crimson Festival shuru ho chuka tha ye bataane ke liye woh message tha. Dusre shabdo me, woh aadmi ye bhi batlaana chaah raha tha ki Veer ki maut ka countdown bhi shuru ho chuka hai.

Aur Veer ek pal bhi barbaad nahi jaane de sakta tha. Apni maa aur unke ateet ka itna bada raaz jaan'ne ke baad ye masla woh suljha chuka tha. Ab samay tha aage aane waali musibat ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne ka. Aur yahi woh kar raha tha.

Subah ka uska routine hi exercise se shuru hota. Na sirf woh running karta balki Intermediate Martial Arts ko perfect karna bhi uska maqsad rehta.

Kyuki jitni jaldi ye perfect hogi utni hi jald woh Advanced Martial Arts khareed payega. Aur woh ye baat jaanta tha ki iss anjaan bande se ladne ke liye sirf Intermediate Martial Arts se kuch nahi hone waala tha.

Din me kabhi woh Balhaar ke aadmiyo ke sang fight leta. Jaha woh khud akela rehta aur saamne 10 se 15 log. Aur dheere dheere woh numbers ko badhaane laga.

Abhi woh park me baithe ek break le hi raha tha jab usse dhyaan aaya ki usne iss scroll ka use aaj tak nahi kiya.

'Pari!'

[Yes Master!]

'Profit Path humne aaj tak use nahi kiya. Hai na?'

[Yes!]

'Toh use karo.'

[It will take 100 Fame Points Master.]

'What? Scroll khareedne ke liye hi kitne points waste karne padte hai. Aur tum keh rahi ho ki ab ussi scroll ko use karne ke liye mujhe aur fame points spend karne padenge?'

[Yes! Par sirf iss scroll ke liye master. Aapko Mystic Touch ke liye toh kabhi bhi kuch spend nahi karna pada na?]

'Yeah! Lekin woh apne aap hi activate hota hai.'

[Kya aap chaahte hai woh harr samay on rahe?]

'Nahi! Fir toh woh samasya ban jayega Pari.'

[Hmm! Isliye ye wala scroll thoda special hai. Aap points use kariye. Aur khud dekhiye.]

'Alright do it then!'

*Ding*

[100 Fame Points have been used in Profit Path.]

*Ding*

Aur agle hi pal Veer ke mann me saamne ek window khul gayi. Veer usse padh ek soch me pad gaya.



'This is-'

[Yahi hai Profit Path Master. Usne Path de diya hai. Usse samajhna aur execute karna aapke upar hai.]

Path ko dekhte hi Veer muskuraaya.

'Awesome! This is awesome! Halaki isme se bohut kuch mene pehle hi soch liya tha. Lekin Perfumes, Farmers, Land aur supply. These are good ideas. I got it. Too good! Toh ye kaam karta hai Profit Path.'

[Yes! Ek aur note master.]

'What is it?'

[Jab tak aap isse execute nahi karte. Aap dusra path nahi draw kar sakte.]

'Ohh!'

[So do execute it please. Kyuki humare paas bilkul time nahi hai Master. Unknown person kabhi bhi kahi se bhi attack kar sakta hai. Mein kehna nahi chaahti. But we are weak.]

'I know!'

[Aur ek baat-]

'Say!'

[Master! We have to move smartly. Sabse pehla sawaal. Uss insaan ka maqsad kya hai? What is his purpose?]

'Purpose huh!'

[Yes! Kya humne usse kisi tarah se provoke kiya hai?]

'Honestly Pari, mujhe waqai nahi pata. Only guess I can make is somehow I may have provoked him by exposing house of the killers. Par kya woh house of the killers se related tha? Kya isliye badle me woh mujhe maarna chaahta hai kyuki mene house of the killers ke bade criminals ka safaaya kar diya?'

[Agar aisa hai toh fir usne aapko uss time maara kyu nahi? Woh asaani se maar sakta tha. We were surrounded. Kya Suhana ko nuksaan bhi ussi ne pohuchaaya tha? We must know every detail.]

'Yahi samajh nahi aa raha Pari. Isliye mein Aatish ya Slogan ke matter se bhi zyada anxious hu. Woh dono mere peeche kyu pade the mein jaanta tha. Par yaha- I have no clue at all. Upar se uske paas bhi system hai.'

[And a stronger one at that.]

'Right!'

[Isliye Master. We have to get strong as soon as possible.]

'Yeah! Anyways, let's go! Maa ko kuch baat karni thi.'

Ghar lautate hi Veer Bhavna ke kamre me gaya.

Jo ki asal me Ragini ka kamra tha jo usne Bhavna ko de diya tha.

'Shayad ab naya ghar lena hi padega.'

*Knock* *Knock*

Darwaaze khat-khataate hi andar se awaaz aayi,

"Aa jao Veer!" Woh ye sunn andar daakhil hua.

Veer : Aapko pata tha mein hu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Aur kaun ho sakta tha?

Veer : Ghar me itne log hai. Koi bhi ho sakta tha.

Bhavna (smiles) : Ragini toh so rahi hogi. Tumhari sauteli maa 7:30 baje ke aas paas uthi thi kal. Toh aaj bhi shayad utne hi samay uthengi!?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Aabha jaldi uthati hai. Aur woh nahane dhone me lag jaati hai. Sonali so rahi hogi. Rahi baat Suman ki toh woh zaroor uth ke naha dho ke ghar ke kaamo me lag gayi hogi.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Tej ki subah ki aadat mein jaanti hu. Aur Bhumika kal hotel ke liye 8 baje uthi thi. Shayad wahi uska time hai? Bache tum! Jis se mene kaha tha kuch derr pehle ki mujhse baat karne aana. Toh? Kya lagta hai? Aur kaun ho sakta hai?

Woh muskuraayi.

Veer : Spot on.

Bhavna (smiles) : Idhar aao. Mere paas baitho.

Usne hatheli se apne bagal ki jagah ko thap-thapa kar usse bulaaya. Veer chup chaap aake apni maa ke bagal se virajmaan ho gaya.

Bhavna : Tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai. Shayad ek nahi. Ek se zyada hongi.

Veer : Kahiye!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kaisi chal rahi hai tumhari college life?

Veer : Huh? Ye puchna tha?

Bhavna : Mm-Hmm!

Veer : Mujhe nahi pata.

Bhavna : Kya matlab?

Veer : Matlab ye ki mein sirf exams dene jaata hu.

Bhavna : Aur baaki ka tumhari Nidhi ma'am sambhaal leti hai.

Veer : Yeah! Ehhh!?? Wait- I mean- I mean aapko kese? Ohh! Teju dii! Yeah! Wo- Wo meri attendance dekh leti hai. Mere sessionals ka dhyaan rakh leti hai.

Bhavna : Mujhe milna hoga unse jald hi.

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Unhe thank you kehne aur kis liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Bhavna : Aur baaki time kya karte ho?

Veer : Bhabhi ne bataya nahi aapko? Food truck shuru kiya hai mene. Sonali aur workers sambhaalte hai.

Bhavna : Bataya tha. Par tumhare muh se sunn'na tha. Jab woh sab sambhaalti hai toh tum kya karte ho?

Veer : I look for other business opportunities.

Nazre ferr Veer ne jawaab diya.

Bhavna : Sach?

Veer : H-Haan!

Bhavna : Kitna paisa kama rahe ho beta?

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna : Kya nahi puch sakti?

Veer : Itna samajhiye ki abhi laakho me kama raha hu.

Bhavna : Itna paisa sirf food truck se?

Veer : Nahi! Shares khareede hai kuch. Companies me invest karna shuru kiya hai.

Bhavna : Inn sab me madad toh kii hogi kisi ne.

Veer : Hmm!

Bhavna : Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Aapko kyu jaan'na hai?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke shubh-chintak hai. Jaan'na toh hoga hi na?

Veer : Hai kuch log. Badi family se hai. Kaafi badi. Luckily hum familiar hai ek dusre se. Aur ek dusre ki madad karte rehte hai.

Bhavna : Tumhara uddeshya kya hai?

Veer : Huh?

Bhavna : Tumhare jeevan ka uddeshya!? Purpose!? Aim!?

Veer ki haalat abhi aisi thi jese kisi pareeksha me baithe vidyaarthi ke paper me syllabus ke baahar ka prashn aa gaya ho.

Thodi hi derr pehle woh Pari se anjaan aadmi ke purpose ko lekar baat kar raha tha.

Par uska khud ka purpose kya tha? Uski zindagi ka lakshya? Veer ke mann me ek uttar aaya. Par iske pehle ki woh jawaab de paata, Bhavna ne apni baat rakh uski bolti hi band kar dii.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana? Aur adhik paisa kamaana? Fir aur adhik? Acchi patni paana? Sundar baal bacche hona? Naya ghar, nayi gaadi, samaaj me izzat? Yahi sab?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Bolo? Yahi sab na?

Veer : Haan! Bilkul! Toh kya ye galat hai? Harr aadmi toh inhe hi paana chaahta hai na? Fir jeevan ke uddeshya ka matlab hi kya? Paisa hoga toh aap aaj ke sansaar me jee paoge. Acchi patni hogi toh ghar baar ko acche se sambhaal payegi. Baal bacche honge toh aage ki peedhi ko badhayenge. Iske alaawa aur kya uddeshya hai jeevan ka?

Bhavna apne bete ki thodi tezz awaaz sunn haule se muskuraayi aur kuch shan tak bas usse dekhti rahi.

Veer : Boliye!?

Usne nazre neeche kar ahista se fir bolna shuru kiya,

Bhavna : Mujhe ek baat batao Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Sansaar me abaadi kitni hogi abhi?

Veer : Around 8 billion!?

Bhavna : Mujhe batao ki lagbhag harr insaan inhi 5-6 cheezo ke peeche kyu bhaag raha hai? Padhayi! Paisa! Shaadi! Bacche! Ghoomna firna! Khaana peena!?

Veer : Aap aise keh rahi ho jese ye sab galat hai.

Bhavna : Mene toh kaha hi nahi Veer ki ye galat hai.

Veer : Toh fir ye sawaal kyu?

Bhavna : Tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi lagta?

Veer : Ajeeb kya?

Bhavna : Ki duniya ka lagbhag harr insaan bas inn 4-5 chuninda cheezo ke peeche hi bhaag raha hai? Kuch samajh aaya?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Kyuki samaaj ne insaano ko aaj wesa banaaya hua hai Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Acchi shiksha nahi hogi toh naukri nahi milegi. Naukri nahi hogi toh shaadi nahi. Shaadi nahi toh fir bacche nahi. Fir kya ghoomna firrna aur kya khaana peena. Zindagi khokli ho jayegi. Yahi na?

Veer : I-

Bhavna : Kabhi iss nazariye se nahi dekha ki yahi samaaj hume majboor karta jaa raha hai. Ek sa raasta apnaane ke liye hume dhakel raha hai.

Veer : Toh aap kya chaahti hai?

Bhavna : Mein chaahti hu ki tum apna lakshya dhundho mere bacche. Tum duniya me aaye ho. Kya sirf yahi karne? Jin baato ko mene ginaaya!?

Maa ki baat ka bodh hote hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Ek ek shabd sach tha. Usne ab tak iss nazariye se kyu nahi dekha tha? Kya waqai sirf yahi zindagi hai?

Veer : I see! Samajh gaya. Aap chaahti hai ki mein apne jeevan ka uddeshya dhundhu? Toh mein usse dhundhunga. Aur woh paisa kamaane se alag hoga.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana buri baat nahi hai Veer. Kamao! Khoob kamao! Par ek lakshya hona zaroori hai.

Veer : Aapka lakshya kya hai?

Bhavna : Mera lakshya? Woh mitt gaya. Ab jo bache kuche uddeshya hai woh hai ek maa ki zimmedari nibhaana. Aur itihaas ke panno ki sachhaayi jaan'na.

Veer : Excavation and Research...!?

Bhavna : Hmm! Ab ek akhiri sawaal. Tum kaun ho?

Veer : What?

Bhavna : Kaun ho tum?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna : Agar ye kehne jaa rahe ho ki mere aur Brijesh ki santaan ho, naam Veer hai, iss iss parivaar se ho toh abhi theher jao Veer. Mein apne bete se better expect karti hu. Toh ab batao. Kaun ho tum?

Veer shaant reh gaya.

Bhavna (smiles) : Tum nahi bata sakte.

Woh sahi thi. Veer ke muh se kuch na nikla. System ke baare me woh bata nahi sakta tha. Aur ye bhi nahi keh sakta tha ki woh Bhavna ka beta hai. Toh kaun tha Veer? Uske muh par jese taala lag gaya. Itna asahaay usne apne aap ko kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha. Woh apni hi pehchaan nahi bata paa raha tha?

Bhavna : Tumhe pata hai tum kyu iska jawaab nahi de paa rahe?

Veer : N-No I don't-

Bhavna : Kyuki tumhe tumhara uddeshya hi nahi pata beta. Jis din tum ye pata laga loge ki tumhara uddeshya kya hai. Tum ye bhi pata loge ki tum kaun ho.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Subah subah inn baato se tumhare dil ko chot pohuchaane ke liye maaf karna mujhe. Par mujhe yahi samay mila akele me tumse baat karne ke liye.

Veer : N-Nahi! Sorry kehne ki aapko zaroorat nahi. Aap sahi ho. I guess I never got time to think about this.

Bhavna (smiles) : You have time now!

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Bhavna : And me too!

Veer ko apne gaal pe ek narm hatheli mehsoos hui.

'Huhhh!!?'

Veer : Th-Thank you!

Aur uski aankhein namm ho gayi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Jab bhi lage ki koi uljhan hai. Toh bin soche samjhe aa jaana. Mein yahi milungi.

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Woh utha aur baahar jaane ko hua toh ek baar fir Bhavna ne usse pukaarte hue roka,

Bhavna : Ek antim baat yaad rakhna Veer!

Veer : !!

Bhavna : Tumhe paisa banaana hai mere bacche. Paisa tumhe banaaye, aisa na bann jaana.

Veer : Mein yaad rakhunga. Maa!

Bol woh nikal gaya.

***

Raat hui aur kal ki tarah jo nahi hona chahiye tha wahi hua. Tej aur Bhumika ki maun ladaayi.

Hotel se aane ke baad, Bhumika Tej se jab pehli baar mili toh aisa laga jese ye ladki usse abhi jaan se maar degi.

Woh usse ghoorti rahi. Par baato ke maamle me dono ke muh se ek chu tak nahi nikla. Aur ye ghar ke baaki sadasyo ko duwidha me daale hue tha.

Jese tese dinner ke baad sab apne apne kamre me pohuche.

Veer apne kamre ko vyavasthit karne me laga tha jab Tej achanak se uske kamre me aa gayi.

Tej : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Tej (smiles) : Hum saath me hi so rahe hai na?

Veer : Huh?

Tej : T-Tum mere saath nahi sona chaahte?

Veer : Umm! Nahi! Baat wo nahi hai-

Tej : Toh?

Veer : Alright! Aaiye!

Tej muskura ke waapas palti aur bhaagti hui apna kuch zaroori samaan lene chali gayi. Uske poore gaal laal ho rakhe the. Itni himmat karke usne ye pucha tha. Directly baat karna asaan dikhta tha. Par tha nahi. Jo sharm-o-hayaa wo mehsoos kar rahi thi ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Idhar Veer uske jaane se confused reh gaya. Tejal dii aa rahi thi ya nahi? Bhaag kyu gayi? Kya unhe ab nahi sona?

Wahi Shweta apne kamre me apni beti Bhumika ko jhatke pe jhatke dene me lagi hui thi.

Shweta : Ye lo!!! Jao ab jaldi se!

Usne Bhumika ke haatho me uska takiya pakdaate hue kaha.

Bhumika : W-What? Mom?

Wo bechaari asmanjas me reh gayi. Ye uski maa ko achanak se aaj ho kya gaya tha?

Shweta : Aise muh faad ke mat dekho mujhe. Jao jaldi! Kya tumhe apne bhai ke saath nahi sona? Sharm aati hai?

Bhumika : Mom! A-Aapko ye kya ho gaya hai? Achanak se aap-

Shweta : Chup kar! Wo Tejal apne bhai ke saath chipakne me lagi hui hai. Agar tumne ab pahal nahi kari na toh woh Veer ko apni mutthi me kar legi. Chalo ab jaldi! Tum bhi uski behan ho. Unke beech jao! Wese hi tumhari baat Veer se naa ke barabar hi hoti hai. Apne gile shikwe dur karo. Yahi sahi mauka hai. Jao!

Bhumika : M-Mom par-

Par Shweta kaha maan'ne waali thi? Usne Bhumika ko peeth par dhakka deke apne kamre se baahar nikaal diya.

Shweta (smiles) : Good Luck! Khoob chipak ke sona!

Bhumika : E-Ehhhh? Wh-What? Mom?? Mom wait-

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza peeche se band ho gaya.

Bhumika bechain hoti hui Veer ke kamre ke paas pohuchi. Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par aa kar wo khadi Veer ko dekhi jo apne bistar par saaf bedsheet bichhaane me laga hua tha.

Bhumika : V-Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Palat ke Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki uski wo behan uske saamne thi jisne kabhi usse pehchaan'ne se hi mana kar diya tha.

Veer : Ohh!? Aap yaha? Ghar me hi kahi raasta to nahi bhatak gayi?

Bhumika : Mein- woh...!

Sharmindagi se Bhumika ne apna sarr jhuka liya. Veer waapas se bedsheet vyavasthit karne me lag gaya.

Veer : Unless you have some matter, you wouldn't be here, right?

Uski baat sunn woh apne takiye ko kass ke apne seene me daba lii.

Yahi wo pal hote the jinse Bhumika hamesha dur rehna prefer karti thi. Kyuki wo glaani ke bhaar ko sambhaalne me behad hi kacchi thi. Ek naazuk eet ki tarah thi woh jispar glaani ki poori imaarat dabaav daale hue thi.

Na jaane... Kab toot ke bikhar jaaye.

Shayad Veer se zyada baat na hona hi ek kaaran tha jo ab tak usse tootne se bachaaye hue tha.

Uski aankhein apne aap dhundhli ho chali.

Bhumika : M-Mein kuch kehna chaahti hu.

Veer : Hmm?

Bhumika : M-Mera iraada kabhi bhi tumhare dil ko thes pohuchana nahi tha Veer. Meri baato ka... I... I know tum meri baat ka vishvaas nahi karoge. Jo kuch bhi mene kiya. Wo jaan boojh ke nahi kiya tha. Aur agar majboori me bhi tha. Toh- Toh uski zimmedar hamesha mein khud hi rahungi.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Tumne jo kuch bhi mere aur Mom ke liye kiya uske liye 'thank you' shabd bhi ab mazaak jesa lagta hai. Koi bhi insaan itna hone ke baad aisa nahi kar sakta jo tumne kiya hai. And I acknowledge it.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : But apart from regret, I don't know what to do. Sh-Shayad... Yahi meri destiny hai? Jeevan bhar repent karna. Ehsaas karte rehna ki kitni zyaadti ki hai hum maa beti ne tumhare upar. Aur-

Veer : Come in!

Bhumika : Huh!???

Achanak Veer ke shabd sunn, Bhumika bhauchakki reh gayi. Uska badan hil gaya.

Veer apni peeth uski orr kiye tha toh uske chehre par iss waqt kya haav bhaav the ye woh dekh na saki.

Veer (turns) : I said come in!

Bhumika ne ek gehri lambi saans lii. Dil uska zorro se dhadak raha tha. Kya uska bhai gusse me tha? Kya woh kuch usse sunaane waala tha? Aise tamaam vichaar uske mann me ek shan me aake guzar gaye.

Ghabrahat ko saath liye woh aage badhi. Ye soch ke ki Veer jo kuch bhi karega woh uska virodh nahi karegi. Kyuki galti hamesha se uski hi rahi hai.

Par Veer ne aisa kuch bhi na kiya,

Veer : Now say! Kyu aayi ho aap yaha?

Sawaal sunn Bhumika ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Woh jo soch rahi thi wesa kuch bhi nahi tha.

Bhumika : Mein-

Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm!

Bhumika : C-Can-

Veer : Yeah!?

Bhumika (blushes) : C-Can I sleep with you?

Usne tapaak se bol diya. Par fauran hi waapas se niraasha uske chehre par jhalki,

Bhumika : N-No! Forget what I just said. Mein... Mein chalti hu.

Mudke ek qadam hi aage badhaya tha ki,

Veer : Wait!

Bhumika (turns) : ??

Veer : Aaj achanak se kyu aapko mere saath sona hai?

Kaash koi bil hota, jisme Bhumika apna sarr de paati. Jo hayaa woh abhi mehsoos kar rahi thi woh aseem thi.

Bhumika : W-Woh... Woh Ragini bhabhi ne apna room tumhari mom ko diya hai. Aur Suman aunty meri mom ke kamre me soyengi unke saath. Toh isliye shayad unhone mujhe yaha-

Ye Bhumika ka logic tha. Par asal baat toh kuch aur hi thi.

Veer ka khayaal turant hi iss ghatna ko anjaam dene waali mahila par gaya.

'I knew it. It was her indeed!'

Shweta!!!

Bhumika : I'm- I'm sorry! Mein chalti hu.

Veer : Aap so sakti ho.

Bhumika : Huhhh!!!???

Veer : Mene kaha aap so sakti ho.

Usne nazre ferrte hue jawaab diya. Pehle wo mana karne wala tha par uski Teju dii bina koi confirmation diye bhaag gayi thi toh mana karne ka koi reason hi nahi tha Veer ke paas.

Veer ki qismat aksar uske mazze liya karti thi. Aaj bhi wahi hua. Yaha usne Bhumika ko manzoori dii aur waha se Tej apna zaroori samaan haatho me liye daudti hui uske kamre me aa dhamki.

Tej : Aa gayi mein... Hmm!!!??

Ab manzar kuch aisa tha ki teeno ek dusre ko hairaani me dekh rahe the.

*Silence*

'Shit!!!'

Jab se Bhumika aur Tej aapas me mili thi. Tab se hi dono ke beech ek adrishya takraav janm le chuka tha. Tej ne Bhumika ke saath wesa bartaav toh nahi kiya jesa usne Shweta ke sang kiya tha par dono me dosti bhi nahi thi. Nazro se nazre hi takraati thi bas aur ek khamoshi fel jaati thi.

Tej (frowns) : Why is she here?

Kamaal ki baat ye thi ki Bhumika Tej se umr me badi thi. Uske baad bhi Tej kahi se bhi kamzor prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Ulta woh Bhumika par haavi hi nazar aati thi.

Veer : Mujhe laga aap chali gayi. Aur inhe bhi mere saath sona tha toh-

Tej (suprised) : Aur tumne haan keh diya?

Veer : Why won't I?

Tej : That-

Woh maun reh gayi. Haan keh diya toh usme kya? Tej ye baat bhul rahi thi ki Bhumika Veer ke sang kayi mahino se reh rahi thi. Wahi usse toh abhi kuch hi din hue the apne bhai ke aas paas rehte hue.

Tej (smiles) : Theek hai! Toh mein beech me soungi.

Woh muskuraayi. Jo asal me ek muskuraahat nahi thi. Tarqeeb lagayi thi usne. Zaahir hai aisa karne se Veer fir Bhumika ke bagal se nahi so payega.

Bhumika : N-No! V-Veer ko beech me sona chahiye.

Veer : Of course I will. Warna na jaane kya hoyega aap dono ke beech.

Tej : You-!!!!

Be-mann se Tej Veer ke daayi orr laiti toh wahi Bhumika uske baayi orr. Ek ajeeb sa sannaata chhaaya hua tha. Kamra awkwardness se bhar gaya.

Dono behno ke bagal se laite Veer unke badan ki mehak ko soongh paa raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar lii.

Tej apni chot ka bahaana kar Veer ki taraf mudi aur uske seene par apna haath rakh dii. Kitni mazboot chhaathi thi. Usse mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh pal yaad aaya jab usne pehli baar Veer ko bina shirt ke dekha tha. Fir woh pal jab Shyaam ke ghar me woh washroom se nikla tha.

'Kya abhi bhi wahi khusbhu-!?'

Mann me ek vichaar aaya uske. Aage badh usne Veer ki gardan ke sameep apna chehra kiya aur,

*sniff*

'Ahhh!!!'

Ye wahi khushbu thi. Tej ko na jaane andar se kya hua par uski pakad Veer ki chaathi par mazboot ho gayi.

Usne apni ek taang utha ke Veer ki tango par chadhaayi. Aur chipke chipke wo uss khushboo ko punaah sunghne me lag gayi.

'What- What is this fragrance? *sniff* It's so good!!!'

Idhar Bhumika bhi badi himmat karke veer ke seene par haath rakhi. Par Tej jo lagataar haath firaaye jaa rahi thi, uska haath Bhumika ke haath se takra gaya.

Dono behno ko ek jhatka laga aur dono hi ek dusre ko dekhi.

Gusse me aake Tej ne Bhumika ka haath pakad seedha Veer ke seene se alag kar diya. Aur khud chipak gayi.

Bhumika : !!??

Ek kheecha taani shuru hui. Bhumika lagataar koshish kar kar ke apne haath perr Veer par jamaati aur Tej baar baar Bhumika ke haath aur perr ko pakad ke unhe hata deti. Ye bin awaaz ki ladaayi kayi minto tak chalti gayi.

Aam taur par Veer ko aankh kholne par upar ki ceiling nazar aani chahiye thi. Parantu usse abhi do haath aapas me ladte hue dikhaayi de rahe the jo kisi billiyo ki haathapaayi se kam nahi tha.

Aur agle hi shan,

*Thucccccckkkkkkkk*

*Thuuuuccckkkkkk*

"Ahhhhhnnnn!"

"Nnnn~"

Usne uth ke apne takiye se dono ke sarr par tapli de maari.

Tej : K-Kyu?

Veer : Ab agar aap dono chup chaap soyi nahi na. Toh dono room ke baahar hongi.

Tej apne honth daato tale dabaaye chaadar ke andar dubak ke ghus gayi. Toh wahi Bhumika ne apne perr sikod aankhein band kar lii.

Ek raahat ki saas lete hue Veer fir soya.

Lekin raat ke 2 baje ye uski gardan ko kaun chaba raha tha?

'Huhhh!?'

Neend khuli toh nazara dekh wo hakka bakka reh gaya. Uske upar Bhumika laiti hui thi. Usse kass ke jakde wo uski gardan hontho se chabaane me lagi hui thi.

Uski laar behke Veer ke seene tak behti chali gayi. Jis vajah se Veer ki neend khul gayi.

'What the fuck!!!?'

Bhumika poori tarah se neend me thi. Uske sudol uroj Veer ki seene se kass ke dabe hue the.

'Wait! Ye toh... Ye toh neend me hai completely.'

Veer : Hey!!! Hey!! Bhumika dii!?

Par uske jhunjhlaane par bhi Bhumika na uthi. Na jaane kya bad-badaaye jaa rahi thi.

Usse side me waapas lita ke jab Veer dobaara apni position pe aaya toh Bhumika fir chipak gayi.

'Ek minute! Don't tell me... Inko... Inko bimaari hai iski. Neend me idhar udhar hone ki aadat!? Toh Shweta ne isliye...!? Shit!!!! What is she trying to achieve?'

Par achanak se,

"Mamma mat karo na... Veer ko..."

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Crimson arc shuru ho gaya hai. 2-3 updates aise slow jayenge aur uske baad arc ka main plot pace pakdega. Meri tabiyat abhi kharaab hi hai. Toh schedule upar neeche ho sakta hai uska dhyaan rakhiyega. Baaki likes thok ke jaane ka aur apne revos rakhne ka. Pata hai na!?
Dhanyavaad!

Mazedqr

 

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Superb update

 

[Rajesh]

Update - 130 ~ The Purpose​

Ab tak...

*Ring*

Uske phone par ek notification aaya.

'Hmm?'

Screen on kar jaise hi usne message dekha uske raungte khade ho gaye.

Ek Message tha.

Jisme bas teen shabd hi likhe the.

"It has begun!"

Ab aage...

"Subah ki daud ke liye jaa rahe ho?"

Awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo muskura kar hall me baithi akhbaar padh rahi thi. Aur awaaz kendrit thi Veer ki orr jo apna tracksuit pehne upar apne kamre se neeche aa raha tha.

Veer : Itni jaldi uth gayi aap? Subah ke 6 baj rahe hai.

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein jaldi hi uthati hu beta. Toh? Jogging?

Veer : Jogging bhi aur kasrat bhi.

Bhavna dhyaan se apne bete ko dekhti rahi. Kese tracksuit uske gatheele jism se kass ke chipka hua tha.

Bhavna : Tumne gym kiya hai?

Veer : !!? Nahi toh! Kyu?

Bhavna : Toh aisi fitness?

Veer (smiles) : Aapko pasand nahi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Ye sawaal apni girlfriend se karna.

Veer (shrugs) : I don't have one.

Bhavna : Jese ki mein vishvaas karungi.

Veer : I really don't-

Bhavna : Mujhse kya chhipaana? Bata do! Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Nahi! Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. I really don't have-

Bhavna (sighs) : Aaj kal ke bacche! Pata nahi itna sharmaate kyu hai apne parents se baate share karne me.

Veer : No wait-

Bhavna : Theek hai! Jab sahi lage tab bata dena.

Veer ne ek aah bhari aur sarr hila ke woh baahar ko jaane laga. Toh,

Bhavna : Veer!

Veer (turns back) : Hmm?

Bhavna (frowns) : Ek zaroori baat karni hai. Tum hoke aao. Fir saath me baithate hai.

Veer : Alright.

Aur woh baahar nikal gaya.

***

Ek bohut bada toofaan aane waala tha. Aur uska sanket usse uss message ke zariye mil chuka tha.

"IT HAS BEGUN!"

Uss anjaan aadmi ka message jisne Veer ki neend haraam kar ke rakhi hui thi. Crimson Festival shuru ho chuka tha ye bataane ke liye woh message tha. Dusre shabdo me, woh aadmi ye bhi batlaana chaah raha tha ki Veer ki maut ka countdown bhi shuru ho chuka hai.

Aur Veer ek pal bhi barbaad nahi jaane de sakta tha. Apni maa aur unke ateet ka itna bada raaz jaan'ne ke baad ye masla woh suljha chuka tha. Ab samay tha aage aane waali musibat ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne ka. Aur yahi woh kar raha tha.

Subah ka uska routine hi exercise se shuru hota. Na sirf woh running karta balki Intermediate Martial Arts ko perfect karna bhi uska maqsad rehta.

Kyuki jitni jaldi ye perfect hogi utni hi jald woh Advanced Martial Arts khareed payega. Aur woh ye baat jaanta tha ki iss anjaan bande se ladne ke liye sirf Intermediate Martial Arts se kuch nahi hone waala tha.

Din me kabhi woh Balhaar ke aadmiyo ke sang fight leta. Jaha woh khud akela rehta aur saamne 10 se 15 log. Aur dheere dheere woh numbers ko badhaane laga.

Abhi woh park me baithe ek break le hi raha tha jab usse dhyaan aaya ki usne iss scroll ka use aaj tak nahi kiya.

'Pari!'

[Yes Master!]

'Profit Path humne aaj tak use nahi kiya. Hai na?'

[Yes!]

'Toh use karo.'

[It will take 100 Fame Points Master.]

'What? Scroll khareedne ke liye hi kitne points waste karne padte hai. Aur tum keh rahi ho ki ab ussi scroll ko use karne ke liye mujhe aur fame points spend karne padenge?'

[Yes! Par sirf iss scroll ke liye master. Aapko Mystic Touch ke liye toh kabhi bhi kuch spend nahi karna pada na?]

'Yeah! Lekin woh apne aap hi activate hota hai.'

[Kya aap chaahte hai woh harr samay on rahe?]

'Nahi! Fir toh woh samasya ban jayega Pari.'

[Hmm! Isliye ye wala scroll thoda special hai. Aap points use kariye. Aur khud dekhiye.]

'Alright do it then!'

*Ding*

[100 Fame Points have been used in Profit Path.]

*Ding*

Aur agle hi pal Veer ke mann me saamne ek window khul gayi. Veer usse padh ek soch me pad gaya.



'This is-'

[Yahi hai Profit Path Master. Usne Path de diya hai. Usse samajhna aur execute karna aapke upar hai.]

Path ko dekhte hi Veer muskuraaya.

'Awesome! This is awesome! Halaki isme se bohut kuch mene pehle hi soch liya tha. Lekin Perfumes, Farmers, Land aur supply. These are good ideas. I got it. Too good! Toh ye kaam karta hai Profit Path.'

[Yes! Ek aur note master.]

'What is it?'

[Jab tak aap isse execute nahi karte. Aap dusra path nahi draw kar sakte.]

'Ohh!'

[So do execute it please. Kyuki humare paas bilkul time nahi hai Master. Unknown person kabhi bhi kahi se bhi attack kar sakta hai. Mein kehna nahi chaahti. But we are weak.]

'I know!'

[Aur ek baat-]

'Say!'

[Master! We have to move smartly. Sabse pehla sawaal. Uss insaan ka maqsad kya hai? What is his purpose?]

'Purpose huh!'

[Yes! Kya humne usse kisi tarah se provoke kiya hai?]

'Honestly Pari, mujhe waqai nahi pata. Only guess I can make is somehow I may have provoked him by exposing house of the killers. Par kya woh house of the killers se related tha? Kya isliye badle me woh mujhe maarna chaahta hai kyuki mene house of the killers ke bade criminals ka safaaya kar diya?'

[Agar aisa hai toh fir usne aapko uss time maara kyu nahi? Woh asaani se maar sakta tha. We were surrounded. Kya Suhana ko nuksaan bhi ussi ne pohuchaaya tha? We must know every detail.]

'Yahi samajh nahi aa raha Pari. Isliye mein Aatish ya Slogan ke matter se bhi zyada anxious hu. Woh dono mere peeche kyu pade the mein jaanta tha. Par yaha- I have no clue at all. Upar se uske paas bhi system hai.'

[And a stronger one at that.]

'Right!'

[Isliye Master. We have to get strong as soon as possible.]

'Yeah! Anyways, let's go! Maa ko kuch baat karni thi.'

Ghar lautate hi Veer Bhavna ke kamre me gaya.

Jo ki asal me Ragini ka kamra tha jo usne Bhavna ko de diya tha.

'Shayad ab naya ghar lena hi padega.'

*Knock* *Knock*

Darwaaze khat-khataate hi andar se awaaz aayi,

"Aa jao Veer!" Woh ye sunn andar daakhil hua.

Veer : Aapko pata tha mein hu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Aur kaun ho sakta tha?

Veer : Ghar me itne log hai. Koi bhi ho sakta tha.

Bhavna (smiles) : Ragini toh so rahi hogi. Tumhari sauteli maa 7:30 baje ke aas paas uthi thi kal. Toh aaj bhi shayad utne hi samay uthengi!?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Aabha jaldi uthati hai. Aur woh nahane dhone me lag jaati hai. Sonali so rahi hogi. Rahi baat Suman ki toh woh zaroor uth ke naha dho ke ghar ke kaamo me lag gayi hogi.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Tej ki subah ki aadat mein jaanti hu. Aur Bhumika kal hotel ke liye 8 baje uthi thi. Shayad wahi uska time hai? Bache tum! Jis se mene kaha tha kuch derr pehle ki mujhse baat karne aana. Toh? Kya lagta hai? Aur kaun ho sakta hai?

Woh muskuraayi.

Veer : Spot on.

Bhavna (smiles) : Idhar aao. Mere paas baitho.

Usne hatheli se apne bagal ki jagah ko thap-thapa kar usse bulaaya. Veer chup chaap aake apni maa ke bagal se virajmaan ho gaya.

Bhavna : Tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai. Shayad ek nahi. Ek se zyada hongi.

Veer : Kahiye!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kaisi chal rahi hai tumhari college life?

Veer : Huh? Ye puchna tha?

Bhavna : Mm-Hmm!

Veer : Mujhe nahi pata.

Bhavna : Kya matlab?

Veer : Matlab ye ki mein sirf exams dene jaata hu.

Bhavna : Aur baaki ka tumhari Nidhi ma'am sambhaal leti hai.

Veer : Yeah! Ehhh!?? Wait- I mean- I mean aapko kese? Ohh! Teju dii! Yeah! Wo- Wo meri attendance dekh leti hai. Mere sessionals ka dhyaan rakh leti hai.

Bhavna : Mujhe milna hoga unse jald hi.

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Unhe thank you kehne aur kis liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Bhavna : Aur baaki time kya karte ho?

Veer : Bhabhi ne bataya nahi aapko? Food truck shuru kiya hai mene. Sonali aur workers sambhaalte hai.

Bhavna : Bataya tha. Par tumhare muh se sunn'na tha. Jab woh sab sambhaalti hai toh tum kya karte ho?

Veer : I look for other business opportunities.

Nazre ferr Veer ne jawaab diya.

Bhavna : Sach?

Veer : H-Haan!

Bhavna : Kitna paisa kama rahe ho beta?

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna : Kya nahi puch sakti?

Veer : Itna samajhiye ki abhi laakho me kama raha hu.

Bhavna : Itna paisa sirf food truck se?

Veer : Nahi! Shares khareede hai kuch. Companies me invest karna shuru kiya hai.

Bhavna : Inn sab me madad toh kii hogi kisi ne.

Veer : Hmm!

Bhavna : Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Aapko kyu jaan'na hai?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke shubh-chintak hai. Jaan'na toh hoga hi na?

Veer : Hai kuch log. Badi family se hai. Kaafi badi. Luckily hum familiar hai ek dusre se. Aur ek dusre ki madad karte rehte hai.

Bhavna : Tumhara uddeshya kya hai?

Veer : Huh?

Bhavna : Tumhare jeevan ka uddeshya!? Purpose!? Aim!?

Veer ki haalat abhi aisi thi jese kisi pareeksha me baithe vidyaarthi ke paper me syllabus ke baahar ka prashn aa gaya ho.

Thodi hi derr pehle woh Pari se anjaan aadmi ke purpose ko lekar baat kar raha tha.

Par uska khud ka purpose kya tha? Uski zindagi ka lakshya? Veer ke mann me ek uttar aaya. Par iske pehle ki woh jawaab de paata, Bhavna ne apni baat rakh uski bolti hi band kar dii.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana? Aur adhik paisa kamaana? Fir aur adhik? Acchi patni paana? Sundar baal bacche hona? Naya ghar, nayi gaadi, samaaj me izzat? Yahi sab?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Bolo? Yahi sab na?

Veer : Haan! Bilkul! Toh kya ye galat hai? Harr aadmi toh inhe hi paana chaahta hai na? Fir jeevan ke uddeshya ka matlab hi kya? Paisa hoga toh aap aaj ke sansaar me jee paoge. Acchi patni hogi toh ghar baar ko acche se sambhaal payegi. Baal bacche honge toh aage ki peedhi ko badhayenge. Iske alaawa aur kya uddeshya hai jeevan ka?

Bhavna apne bete ki thodi tezz awaaz sunn haule se muskuraayi aur kuch shan tak bas usse dekhti rahi.

Veer : Boliye!?

Usne nazre neeche kar ahista se fir bolna shuru kiya,

Bhavna : Mujhe ek baat batao Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Sansaar me abaadi kitni hogi abhi?

Veer : Around 8 billion!?

Bhavna : Mujhe batao ki lagbhag harr insaan inhi 5-6 cheezo ke peeche kyu bhaag raha hai? Padhayi! Paisa! Shaadi! Bacche! Ghoomna firna! Khaana peena!?

Veer : Aap aise keh rahi ho jese ye sab galat hai.

Bhavna : Mene toh kaha hi nahi Veer ki ye galat hai.

Veer : Toh fir ye sawaal kyu?

Bhavna : Tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi lagta?

Veer : Ajeeb kya?

Bhavna : Ki duniya ka lagbhag harr insaan bas inn 4-5 chuninda cheezo ke peeche hi bhaag raha hai? Kuch samajh aaya?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Kyuki samaaj ne insaano ko aaj wesa banaaya hua hai Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Acchi shiksha nahi hogi toh naukri nahi milegi. Naukri nahi hogi toh shaadi nahi. Shaadi nahi toh fir bacche nahi. Fir kya ghoomna firrna aur kya khaana peena. Zindagi khokli ho jayegi. Yahi na?

Veer : I-

Bhavna : Kabhi iss nazariye se nahi dekha ki yahi samaaj hume majboor karta jaa raha hai. Ek sa raasta apnaane ke liye hume dhakel raha hai.

Veer : Toh aap kya chaahti hai?

Bhavna : Mein chaahti hu ki tum apna lakshya dhundho mere bacche. Tum duniya me aaye ho. Kya sirf yahi karne? Jin baato ko mene ginaaya!?

Maa ki baat ka bodh hote hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Ek ek shabd sach tha. Usne ab tak iss nazariye se kyu nahi dekha tha? Kya waqai sirf yahi zindagi hai?

Veer : I see! Samajh gaya. Aap chaahti hai ki mein apne jeevan ka uddeshya dhundhu? Toh mein usse dhundhunga. Aur woh paisa kamaane se alag hoga.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana buri baat nahi hai Veer. Kamao! Khoob kamao! Par ek lakshya hona zaroori hai.

Veer : Aapka lakshya kya hai?

Bhavna : Mera lakshya? Woh mitt gaya. Ab jo bache kuche uddeshya hai woh hai ek maa ki zimmedari nibhaana. Aur itihaas ke panno ki sachhaayi jaan'na.

Veer : Excavation and Research...!?

Bhavna : Hmm! Ab ek akhiri sawaal. Tum kaun ho?

Veer : What?

Bhavna : Kaun ho tum?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna : Agar ye kehne jaa rahe ho ki mere aur Brijesh ki santaan ho, naam Veer hai, iss iss parivaar se ho toh abhi theher jao Veer. Mein apne bete se better expect karti hu. Toh ab batao. Kaun ho tum?

Veer shaant reh gaya.

Bhavna (smiles) : Tum nahi bata sakte.

Woh sahi thi. Veer ke muh se kuch na nikla. System ke baare me woh bata nahi sakta tha. Aur ye bhi nahi keh sakta tha ki woh Bhavna ka beta hai. Toh kaun tha Veer? Uske muh par jese taala lag gaya. Itna asahaay usne apne aap ko kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha. Woh apni hi pehchaan nahi bata paa raha tha?

Bhavna : Tumhe pata hai tum kyu iska jawaab nahi de paa rahe?

Veer : N-No I don't-

Bhavna : Kyuki tumhe tumhara uddeshya hi nahi pata beta. Jis din tum ye pata laga loge ki tumhara uddeshya kya hai. Tum ye bhi pata loge ki tum kaun ho.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Subah subah inn baato se tumhare dil ko chot pohuchaane ke liye maaf karna mujhe. Par mujhe yahi samay mila akele me tumse baat karne ke liye.

Veer : N-Nahi! Sorry kehne ki aapko zaroorat nahi. Aap sahi ho. I guess I never got time to think about this.

Bhavna (smiles) : You have time now!

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Bhavna : And me too!

Veer ko apne gaal pe ek narm hatheli mehsoos hui.

'Huhhh!!?'

Veer : Th-Thank you!

Aur uski aankhein namm ho gayi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Jab bhi lage ki koi uljhan hai. Toh bin soche samjhe aa jaana. Mein yahi milungi.

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Woh utha aur baahar jaane ko hua toh ek baar fir Bhavna ne usse pukaarte hue roka,

Bhavna : Ek antim baat yaad rakhna Veer!

Veer : !!

Bhavna : Tumhe paisa banaana hai mere bacche. Paisa tumhe banaaye, aisa na bann jaana.

Veer : Mein yaad rakhunga. Maa!

Bol woh nikal gaya.

***

Raat hui aur kal ki tarah jo nahi hona chahiye tha wahi hua. Tej aur Bhumika ki maun ladaayi.

Hotel se aane ke baad, Bhumika Tej se jab pehli baar mili toh aisa laga jese ye ladki usse abhi jaan se maar degi.

Woh usse ghoorti rahi. Par baato ke maamle me dono ke muh se ek chu tak nahi nikla. Aur ye ghar ke baaki sadasyo ko duwidha me daale hue tha.

Jese tese dinner ke baad sab apne apne kamre me pohuche.

Veer apne kamre ko vyavasthit karne me laga tha jab Tej achanak se uske kamre me aa gayi.

Tej : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Tej (smiles) : Hum saath me hi so rahe hai na?

Veer : Huh?

Tej : T-Tum mere saath nahi sona chaahte?

Veer : Umm! Nahi! Baat wo nahi hai-

Tej : Toh?

Veer : Alright! Aaiye!

Tej muskura ke waapas palti aur bhaagti hui apna kuch zaroori samaan lene chali gayi. Uske poore gaal laal ho rakhe the. Itni himmat karke usne ye pucha tha. Directly baat karna asaan dikhta tha. Par tha nahi. Jo sharm-o-hayaa wo mehsoos kar rahi thi ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Idhar Veer uske jaane se confused reh gaya. Tejal dii aa rahi thi ya nahi? Bhaag kyu gayi? Kya unhe ab nahi sona?

Wahi Shweta apne kamre me apni beti Bhumika ko jhatke pe jhatke dene me lagi hui thi.

Shweta : Ye lo!!! Jao ab jaldi se!

Usne Bhumika ke haatho me uska takiya pakdaate hue kaha.

Bhumika : W-What? Mom?

Wo bechaari asmanjas me reh gayi. Ye uski maa ko achanak se aaj ho kya gaya tha?

Shweta : Aise muh faad ke mat dekho mujhe. Jao jaldi! Kya tumhe apne bhai ke saath nahi sona? Sharm aati hai?

Bhumika : Mom! A-Aapko ye kya ho gaya hai? Achanak se aap-

Shweta : Chup kar! Wo Tejal apne bhai ke saath chipakne me lagi hui hai. Agar tumne ab pahal nahi kari na toh woh Veer ko apni mutthi me kar legi. Chalo ab jaldi! Tum bhi uski behan ho. Unke beech jao! Wese hi tumhari baat Veer se naa ke barabar hi hoti hai. Apne gile shikwe dur karo. Yahi sahi mauka hai. Jao!

Bhumika : M-Mom par-

Par Shweta kaha maan'ne waali thi? Usne Bhumika ko peeth par dhakka deke apne kamre se baahar nikaal diya.

Shweta (smiles) : Good Luck! Khoob chipak ke sona!

Bhumika : E-Ehhhh? Wh-What? Mom?? Mom wait-

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza peeche se band ho gaya.

Bhumika bechain hoti hui Veer ke kamre ke paas pohuchi. Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par aa kar wo khadi Veer ko dekhi jo apne bistar par saaf bedsheet bichhaane me laga hua tha.

Bhumika : V-Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Palat ke Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki uski wo behan uske saamne thi jisne kabhi usse pehchaan'ne se hi mana kar diya tha.

Veer : Ohh!? Aap yaha? Ghar me hi kahi raasta to nahi bhatak gayi?

Bhumika : Mein- woh...!

Sharmindagi se Bhumika ne apna sarr jhuka liya. Veer waapas se bedsheet vyavasthit karne me lag gaya.

Veer : Unless you have some matter, you wouldn't be here, right?

Uski baat sunn woh apne takiye ko kass ke apne seene me daba lii.

Yahi wo pal hote the jinse Bhumika hamesha dur rehna prefer karti thi. Kyuki wo glaani ke bhaar ko sambhaalne me behad hi kacchi thi. Ek naazuk eet ki tarah thi woh jispar glaani ki poori imaarat dabaav daale hue thi.

Na jaane... Kab toot ke bikhar jaaye.

Shayad Veer se zyada baat na hona hi ek kaaran tha jo ab tak usse tootne se bachaaye hue tha.

Uski aankhein apne aap dhundhli ho chali.

Bhumika : M-Mein kuch kehna chaahti hu.

Veer : Hmm?

Bhumika : M-Mera iraada kabhi bhi tumhare dil ko thes pohuchana nahi tha Veer. Meri baato ka... I... I know tum meri baat ka vishvaas nahi karoge. Jo kuch bhi mene kiya. Wo jaan boojh ke nahi kiya tha. Aur agar majboori me bhi tha. Toh- Toh uski zimmedar hamesha mein khud hi rahungi.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Tumne jo kuch bhi mere aur Mom ke liye kiya uske liye 'thank you' shabd bhi ab mazaak jesa lagta hai. Koi bhi insaan itna hone ke baad aisa nahi kar sakta jo tumne kiya hai. And I acknowledge it.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : But apart from regret, I don't know what to do. Sh-Shayad... Yahi meri destiny hai? Jeevan bhar repent karna. Ehsaas karte rehna ki kitni zyaadti ki hai hum maa beti ne tumhare upar. Aur-

Veer : Come in!

Bhumika : Huh!???

Achanak Veer ke shabd sunn, Bhumika bhauchakki reh gayi. Uska badan hil gaya.

Veer apni peeth uski orr kiye tha toh uske chehre par iss waqt kya haav bhaav the ye woh dekh na saki.

Veer (turns) : I said come in!

Bhumika ne ek gehri lambi saans lii. Dil uska zorro se dhadak raha tha. Kya uska bhai gusse me tha? Kya woh kuch usse sunaane waala tha? Aise tamaam vichaar uske mann me ek shan me aake guzar gaye.

Ghabrahat ko saath liye woh aage badhi. Ye soch ke ki Veer jo kuch bhi karega woh uska virodh nahi karegi. Kyuki galti hamesha se uski hi rahi hai.

Par Veer ne aisa kuch bhi na kiya,

Veer : Now say! Kyu aayi ho aap yaha?

Sawaal sunn Bhumika ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Woh jo soch rahi thi wesa kuch bhi nahi tha.

Bhumika : Mein-

Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm!

Bhumika : C-Can-

Veer : Yeah!?

Bhumika (blushes) : C-Can I sleep with you?

Usne tapaak se bol diya. Par fauran hi waapas se niraasha uske chehre par jhalki,

Bhumika : N-No! Forget what I just said. Mein... Mein chalti hu.

Mudke ek qadam hi aage badhaya tha ki,

Veer : Wait!

Bhumika (turns) : ??

Veer : Aaj achanak se kyu aapko mere saath sona hai?

Kaash koi bil hota, jisme Bhumika apna sarr de paati. Jo hayaa woh abhi mehsoos kar rahi thi woh aseem thi.

Bhumika : W-Woh... Woh Ragini bhabhi ne apna room tumhari mom ko diya hai. Aur Suman aunty meri mom ke kamre me soyengi unke saath. Toh isliye shayad unhone mujhe yaha-

Ye Bhumika ka logic tha. Par asal baat toh kuch aur hi thi.

Veer ka khayaal turant hi iss ghatna ko anjaam dene waali mahila par gaya.

'I knew it. It was her indeed!'

Shweta!!!

Bhumika : I'm- I'm sorry! Mein chalti hu.

Veer : Aap so sakti ho.

Bhumika : Huhhh!!!???

Veer : Mene kaha aap so sakti ho.

Usne nazre ferrte hue jawaab diya. Pehle wo mana karne wala tha par uski Teju dii bina koi confirmation diye bhaag gayi thi toh mana karne ka koi reason hi nahi tha Veer ke paas.

Veer ki qismat aksar uske mazze liya karti thi. Aaj bhi wahi hua. Yaha usne Bhumika ko manzoori dii aur waha se Tej apna zaroori samaan haatho me liye daudti hui uske kamre me aa dhamki.

Tej : Aa gayi mein... Hmm!!!??

Ab manzar kuch aisa tha ki teeno ek dusre ko hairaani me dekh rahe the.

*Silence*

'Shit!!!'

Jab se Bhumika aur Tej aapas me mili thi. Tab se hi dono ke beech ek adrishya takraav janm le chuka tha. Tej ne Bhumika ke saath wesa bartaav toh nahi kiya jesa usne Shweta ke sang kiya tha par dono me dosti bhi nahi thi. Nazro se nazre hi takraati thi bas aur ek khamoshi fel jaati thi.

Tej (frowns) : Why is she here?

Kamaal ki baat ye thi ki Bhumika Tej se umr me badi thi. Uske baad bhi Tej kahi se bhi kamzor prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Ulta woh Bhumika par haavi hi nazar aati thi.

Veer : Mujhe laga aap chali gayi. Aur inhe bhi mere saath sona tha toh-

Tej (suprised) : Aur tumne haan keh diya?

Veer : Why won't I?

Tej : That-

Woh maun reh gayi. Haan keh diya toh usme kya? Tej ye baat bhul rahi thi ki Bhumika Veer ke sang kayi mahino se reh rahi thi. Wahi usse toh abhi kuch hi din hue the apne bhai ke aas paas rehte hue.

Tej (smiles) : Theek hai! Toh mein beech me soungi.

Woh muskuraayi. Jo asal me ek muskuraahat nahi thi. Tarqeeb lagayi thi usne. Zaahir hai aisa karne se Veer fir Bhumika ke bagal se nahi so payega.

Bhumika : N-No! V-Veer ko beech me sona chahiye.

Veer : Of course I will. Warna na jaane kya hoyega aap dono ke beech.

Tej : You-!!!!

Be-mann se Tej Veer ke daayi orr laiti toh wahi Bhumika uske baayi orr. Ek ajeeb sa sannaata chhaaya hua tha. Kamra awkwardness se bhar gaya.

Dono behno ke bagal se laite Veer unke badan ki mehak ko soongh paa raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar lii.

Tej apni chot ka bahaana kar Veer ki taraf mudi aur uske seene par apna haath rakh dii. Kitni mazboot chhaathi thi. Usse mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh pal yaad aaya jab usne pehli baar Veer ko bina shirt ke dekha tha. Fir woh pal jab Shyaam ke ghar me woh washroom se nikla tha.

'Kya abhi bhi wahi khusbhu-!?'

Mann me ek vichaar aaya uske. Aage badh usne Veer ki gardan ke sameep apna chehra kiya aur,

*sniff*

'Ahhh!!!'

Ye wahi khushbu thi. Tej ko na jaane andar se kya hua par uski pakad Veer ki chaathi par mazboot ho gayi.

Usne apni ek taang utha ke Veer ki tango par chadhaayi. Aur chipke chipke wo uss khushboo ko punaah sunghne me lag gayi.

'What- What is this fragrance? *sniff* It's so good!!!'

Idhar Bhumika bhi badi himmat karke veer ke seene par haath rakhi. Par Tej jo lagataar haath firaaye jaa rahi thi, uska haath Bhumika ke haath se takra gaya.

Dono behno ko ek jhatka laga aur dono hi ek dusre ko dekhi.

Gusse me aake Tej ne Bhumika ka haath pakad seedha Veer ke seene se alag kar diya. Aur khud chipak gayi.

Bhumika : !!??

Ek kheecha taani shuru hui. Bhumika lagataar koshish kar kar ke apne haath perr Veer par jamaati aur Tej baar baar Bhumika ke haath aur perr ko pakad ke unhe hata deti. Ye bin awaaz ki ladaayi kayi minto tak chalti gayi.

Aam taur par Veer ko aankh kholne par upar ki ceiling nazar aani chahiye thi. Parantu usse abhi do haath aapas me ladte hue dikhaayi de rahe the jo kisi billiyo ki haathapaayi se kam nahi tha.

Aur agle hi shan,

*Thucccccckkkkkkkk*

*Thuuuuccckkkkkk*

"Ahhhhhnnnn!"

"Nnnn~"

Usne uth ke apne takiye se dono ke sarr par tapli de maari.

Tej : K-Kyu?

Veer : Ab agar aap dono chup chaap soyi nahi na. Toh dono room ke baahar hongi.

Tej apne honth daato tale dabaaye chaadar ke andar dubak ke ghus gayi. Toh wahi Bhumika ne apne perr sikod aankhein band kar lii.

Ek raahat ki saas lete hue Veer fir soya.

Lekin raat ke 2 baje ye uski gardan ko kaun chaba raha tha?

'Huhhh!?'

Neend khuli toh nazara dekh wo hakka bakka reh gaya. Uske upar Bhumika laiti hui thi. Usse kass ke jakde wo uski gardan hontho se chabaane me lagi hui thi.

Uski laar behke Veer ke seene tak behti chali gayi. Jis vajah se Veer ki neend khul gayi.

'What the fuck!!!?'

Bhumika poori tarah se neend me thi. Uske sudol uroj Veer ki seene se kass ke dabe hue the.

'Wait! Ye toh... Ye toh neend me hai completely.'

Veer : Hey!!! Hey!! Bhumika dii!?

Par uske jhunjhlaane par bhi Bhumika na uthi. Na jaane kya bad-badaaye jaa rahi thi.

Usse side me waapas lita ke jab Veer dobaara apni position pe aaya toh Bhumika fir chipak gayi.

'Ek minute! Don't tell me... Inko... Inko bimaari hai iski. Neend me idhar udhar hone ki aadat!? Toh Shweta ne isliye...!? Shit!!!! What is she trying to achieve?'

Par achanak se,

"Mamma mat karo na... Veer ko..."

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Crimson arc shuru ho gaya hai. 2-3 updates aise slow jayenge aur uske baad arc ka main plot pace pakdega. Meri tabiyat abhi kharaab hi hai. Toh schedule upar neeche ho sakta hai uska dhyaan rakhiyega. Baaki likes thok ke jaane ka aur apne revos rakhne ka. Pata hai na!?
Dhanyavaad!

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya hai


Waiting for the next update bro

 

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