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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Bahut time baad yaha aana hua lekin maja aaya
Ye story kitni achi hai ye to batane ka matlab hi nahi hai fir bhi let's talk
Start karte hai veer se
Suruvaat me veer ka emotional side bahut dikhaya gaya tha I still remember him crying for kaera and calling her idiot
Lekin ab he is more like a matured guy who knows everything still show nothing
Uske character development jo ki hai aapne is top notch I mean after all he the hero of the story but still you have done out standing job
Ragini on the other hand is totally opposite of what veer is right now
Uske emotions uske samarpan veer ke liye padhte waqt ek ajeeb dard de jata hai
Don't know why but this is what it is
Thoda personal lagta hai ragini ka dard mujhe
I wish usse uske hisse ki khushi mile
Suman is the only character in this story that I don't like it
I just don't like her at all
Reason kuch bhi ho lekin main uske mostly conversations ignore kar deta hu
You called her slave but she never behaves like one may be that's the reason or may be because vo veer ka stand har jagah veer se pehle le leti hai and I wanted veer to speak
I don't know but I don't like her
Sorry
Kavya to best hai hi but now I want arohi and veer conversation
A beautiful long conversation
A conversation jo unke bhai behan aur lovers wale bridge ke beech se aaye
Unka koe bhi intimate scene se pehle agar unki ek badiya conversation nahi aaye to it will be little disappointed
Tej behavior is much more like a younger sister jo apne bhai par sirf apna hi hak samjhti hai but yaha to ulta hai vo elder hai fir bhi act like a kid(just in front of her brother)
Sayad pehli baar bhai ke etni pass aaye hai to khone ka dar to rahega hi
Enki conversation alag hi hoti hai
Yaha tej sab janana chahti hai to veer sab batane ko raaji hai
Bhai behan ka pure bond dikhta hai vaha par
Tej veer se chhoti hoti to jada maja aata kyuki jidd chhote par jada suit karti hai aur yaha veer koe jidd karega nahi tej ke samne
But over too good for a character
Loved every bit of tej presence
Bhavna is just like what a mother is supposed to be
And who the hell is Saili?
Did I missed something?
And that ? Is that Eva aur someone else is coming?
Thoda Sonia ko bhi dikhao bhai aapne kaira ke baad Sonia ko dikhaya tha fir suhana ke sath Vegas ghuma diya aur Sonia ko mumbai ki local bhi nahi dikhaye?
Bahut na insafi hai Sonia ke sath
Thoda update suhana ke health se related aur ek mulakat Sonia ke sath will be nice
I feel like kaira ko emotions dikhana thoda jaldi aa gaya
Abhi to story developing phase me hai aur etni jaldi kaira me feelings nahi aani chahiye thi
Usko vohi attitude best lagta hai but I know aap kuch bhi all of the sudden nahi karoge
Vo feel jarur karegi but she will act like kaira only
Koe aur bach gaya kya?
That guy system wala
What was is name again?
I feel like is arc me tej bahut kuch jaan jayegi veer ke bare me kyuki veer bahar hurt hoke aayega to tej ke sawalo se bach nahi payega vo
Eagerly waiting for those scenes
Bhumika bhi to bach gaye
Kuch past ka pata chale to batao
Vaise jaldi hi apni maa ki tarah ye bhi apne bhai ko apna dood pilane wali hai(just a felling)
Vaise bhi emotions dikhane ke liye kavya arohi tej hai hi to yaha erotica dikha diya jaye to acha hi hoga
Vo vegas wali ladki Divya naam tha sayad vo vapas aayegi kya?
Character tha vo bhi pura
Ek sawal hai jo baar baar dimag me aa raha hai
Who is going to betray veer?
Pehle to Shweta lagti thi i mean abhi bhi lag rahi hai
But kya koe aur hai?
Ragini hue to dil etne tukdo me totega ki jode na judega
Fir bhavna arohi kavya tej kaera and suhana too is out of this list
So who?
Kon hai jiska etna bada raaj chhupa rakha hai aapne apne dimag ke ander?
Suman hogi to maja hi aa jayega vaise
Nidhi ma'am aur juhi kaha hai dikhaye nahi de rahe?
Ma'am ka sarmana, blush karna dekhna to hum bhi deserve karte hai sath me juhi ka bachpana to milega hi
Anyway a very good story
You're doing great work by writing such stuff
I know it takes time and require a hell lot of efforts
So hats of to you for that
Keep the good work flowing
Much love
Ye story kitni achi hai ye to batane ka matlab hi nahi hai fir bhi let's talk
Start karte hai veer se
Suruvaat me veer ka emotional side bahut dikhaya gaya tha I still remember him crying for kaera and calling her idiot
Lekin ab he is more like a matured guy who knows everything still show nothing
Uske character development jo ki hai aapne is top notch I mean after all he the hero of the story but still you have done out standing job
Ragini on the other hand is totally opposite of what veer is right now
Uske emotions uske samarpan veer ke liye padhte waqt ek ajeeb dard de jata hai
Don't know why but this is what it is
Thoda personal lagta hai ragini ka dard mujhe
I wish usse uske hisse ki khushi mile
Suman is the only character in this story that I don't like it
I just don't like her at all
Reason kuch bhi ho lekin main uske mostly conversations ignore kar deta hu
You called her slave but she never behaves like one may be that's the reason or may be because vo veer ka stand har jagah veer se pehle le leti hai and I wanted veer to speak
I don't know but I don't like her
Sorry
Kavya to best hai hi but now I want arohi and veer conversation
A beautiful long conversation
A conversation jo unke bhai behan aur lovers wale bridge ke beech se aaye
Unka koe bhi intimate scene se pehle agar unki ek badiya conversation nahi aaye to it will be little disappointed
Tej behavior is much more like a younger sister jo apne bhai par sirf apna hi hak samjhti hai but yaha to ulta hai vo elder hai fir bhi act like a kid(just in front of her brother)
Sayad pehli baar bhai ke etni pass aaye hai to khone ka dar to rahega hi
Enki conversation alag hi hoti hai
Yaha tej sab janana chahti hai to veer sab batane ko raaji hai
Bhai behan ka pure bond dikhta hai vaha par
Tej veer se chhoti hoti to jada maja aata kyuki jidd chhote par jada suit karti hai aur yaha veer koe jidd karega nahi tej ke samne
But over too good for a character
Loved every bit of tej presence
Bhavna is just like what a mother is supposed to be
And who the hell is Saili?
Did I missed something?
And that ? Is that Eva aur someone else is coming?
Thoda Sonia ko bhi dikhao bhai aapne kaira ke baad Sonia ko dikhaya tha fir suhana ke sath Vegas ghuma diya aur Sonia ko mumbai ki local bhi nahi dikhaye?
Bahut na insafi hai Sonia ke sath
Thoda update suhana ke health se related aur ek mulakat Sonia ke sath will be nice
I feel like kaira ko emotions dikhana thoda jaldi aa gaya
Abhi to story developing phase me hai aur etni jaldi kaira me feelings nahi aani chahiye thi
Usko vohi attitude best lagta hai but I know aap kuch bhi all of the sudden nahi karoge
Vo feel jarur karegi but she will act like kaira only
Koe aur bach gaya kya?
That guy system wala
What was is name again?
I feel like is arc me tej bahut kuch jaan jayegi veer ke bare me kyuki veer bahar hurt hoke aayega to tej ke sawalo se bach nahi payega vo
Eagerly waiting for those scenes
Bhumika bhi to bach gaye
Kuch past ka pata chale to batao
Vaise jaldi hi apni maa ki tarah ye bhi apne bhai ko apna dood pilane wali hai(just a felling)
Vaise bhi emotions dikhane ke liye kavya arohi tej hai hi to yaha erotica dikha diya jaye to acha hi hoga
Vo vegas wali ladki Divya naam tha sayad vo vapas aayegi kya?
Character tha vo bhi pura
Ek sawal hai jo baar baar dimag me aa raha hai
Who is going to betray veer?
Pehle to Shweta lagti thi i mean abhi bhi lag rahi hai
But kya koe aur hai?
Ragini hue to dil etne tukdo me totega ki jode na judega
Fir bhavna arohi kavya tej kaera and suhana too is out of this list
So who?
Kon hai jiska etna bada raaj chhupa rakha hai aapne apne dimag ke ander?
Suman hogi to maja hi aa jayega vaise
Nidhi ma'am aur juhi kaha hai dikhaye nahi de rahe?
Ma'am ka sarmana, blush karna dekhna to hum bhi deserve karte hai sath me juhi ka bachpana to milega hi
Anyway a very good story
You're doing great work by writing such stuff
I know it takes time and require a hell lot of efforts
So hats of to you for that
Keep the good work flowing
Much love
Kuchh logo k story ka starting hi itna hota haiBahut time baad yaha aana hua lekin maja aaya
Ye story kitni achi hai ye to batane ka matlab hi nahi hai fir bhi let's talk
Start karte hai veer se
Suruvaat me veer ka emotional side bahut dikhaya gaya tha I still remember him crying for kaera and calling her idiot
Lekin ab he is more like a matured guy who knows everything still show nothing
Uske character development jo ki hai aapne is top notch I mean after all he the hero of the story but still you have done out standing job
Ragini on the other hand is totally opposite of what veer is right now
Uske emotions uske samarpan veer ke liye padhte waqt ek ajeeb dard de jata hai
Don't know why but this is what it is
Thoda personal lagta hai ragini ka dard mujhe
I wish usse uske hisse ki khushi mile
Suman is the only character in this story that I don't like it
I just don't like her at all
Reason kuch bhi ho lekin main uske mostly conversations ignore kar deta hu
You called her slave but she never behaves like one may be that's the reason or may be because vo veer ka stand har jagah veer se pehle le leti hai and I wanted veer to speak
I don't know but I don't like her
Sorry
Kavya to best hai hi but now I want arohi and veer conversation
A beautiful long conversation
A conversation jo unke bhai behan aur lovers wale bridge ke beech se aaye
Unka koe bhi intimate scene se pehle agar unki ek badiya conversation nahi aaye to it will be little disappointed
Tej behavior is much more like a younger sister jo apne bhai par sirf apna hi hak samjhti hai but yaha to ulta hai vo elder hai fir bhi act like a kid(just in front of her brother)
Sayad pehli baar bhai ke etni pass aaye hai to khone ka dar to rahega hi
Enki conversation alag hi hoti hai
Yaha tej sab janana chahti hai to veer sab batane ko raaji hai
Bhai behan ka pure bond dikhta hai vaha par
Tej veer se chhoti hoti to jada maja aata kyuki jidd chhote par jada suit karti hai aur yaha veer koe jidd karega nahi tej ke samne
But over too good for a character
Loved every bit of tej presence
Bhavna is just like what a mother is supposed to be
And who the hell is Saili?
Did I missed something?
And that ? Is that Eva aur someone else is coming?
Thoda Sonia ko bhi dikhao bhai aapne kaira ke baad Sonia ko dikhaya tha fir suhana ke sath Vegas ghuma diya aur Sonia ko mumbai ki local bhi nahi dikhaye?
Bahut na insafi hai Sonia ke sath
Thoda update suhana ke health se related aur ek mulakat Sonia ke sath will be nice
I feel like kaira ko emotions dikhana thoda jaldi aa gaya
Abhi to story developing phase me hai aur etni jaldi kaira me feelings nahi aani chahiye thi
Usko vohi attitude best lagta hai but I know aap kuch bhi all of the sudden nahi karoge
Vo feel jarur karegi but she will act like kaira only
Koe aur bach gaya kya?
That guy system wala
What was is name again?
I feel like is arc me tej bahut kuch jaan jayegi veer ke bare me kyuki veer bahar hurt hoke aayega to tej ke sawalo se bach nahi payega vo
Eagerly waiting for those scenes
Bhumika bhi to bach gaye
Kuch past ka pata chale to batao
Vaise jaldi hi apni maa ki tarah ye bhi apne bhai ko apna dood pilane wali hai(just a felling)
Vaise bhi emotions dikhane ke liye kavya arohi tej hai hi to yaha erotica dikha diya jaye to acha hi hoga
Vo vegas wali ladki Divya naam tha sayad vo vapas aayegi kya?
Character tha vo bhi pura
Ek sawal hai jo baar baar dimag me aa raha hai
Who is going to betray veer?
Pehle to Shweta lagti thi i mean abhi bhi lag rahi hai
But kya koe aur hai?
Ragini hue to dil etne tukdo me totega ki jode na judega
Fir bhavna arohi kavya tej kaera and suhana too is out of this list
So who?
Kon hai jiska etna bada raaj chhupa rakha hai aapne apne dimag ke ander?
Suman hogi to maja hi aa jayega vaise
Nidhi ma'am aur juhi kaha hai dikhaye nahi de rahe?
Ma'am ka sarmana, blush karna dekhna to hum bhi deserve karte hai sath me juhi ka bachpana to milega hi
Anyway a very good story
You're doing great work by writing such stuff
I know it takes time and require a hell lot of efforts
So hats of to you for that
Keep the good work flowing
Much love
Tumne to update jitna review de diye bhaya
Lone survivor
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Bad habit I guess plus I'm not the one who likes to write good update nice update awesome updateKuchh logo k story ka starting hi itna hota hai
Tumne to update jitna review de diye bhaya
Agar likhna hai to feelings likho, kya acha laga kya bura laga vo likho
How can someone likes every fucking thing a writer wrote?
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Bhai aap galat way me le gaye hai maine to bas Bina soche samjhe aise hi likh diya tha
BTW Big fan bro
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Woh samay ke chalte aata jayega.
Rakshak? Kiska rakshak? Rakshak banke kya karega wo? Aur raksha kis se? Anjaan aadmi se? Anjaan aadmi ke jaane ke baad kya fir?
Dhanyavaad bhai. Ek baat batao. Ye ju aur Shanu ki AV ek jesi kyu hai?
Ye kya lafda chal rela hai haan? :Troll: Thanks a lot!
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