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Bas kuchh hi der me. It's completed. Kuchh pictures dekh raha hu.Dear werewolf bhai
Aap kese ho
Aaj update ayega kya??
Let night ka bol rahe the isliye
Intjar kar raha hu
Aap ki writing ka fan
Max pinak
Ye konsi story hBhai koi vj4u ki story b ap hi complet krdo yr galahat vo story b kbse adhuri hai agr ho ske if u have some time to dekhlo bhai yr plzzz
Maine wo story nahi padhi bhai. Aur, waise bhi- koi bhi writer apni story aise kisi ko nahi deta. Aur, na hi mein kisi ke incomplete projects ko utha ke unhe complete karne ka kaam karta hu. Writer ko agar time milega, toh woh likhega, warna story incomplete hi rahegi. Unless writer decides to give his creation to someone elseBhai koi vj4u ki story b ap hi complet krdo yr galahat vo story b kbse adhuri hai agr ho ske if u have some time to dekhlo bhai yr plzzz

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Acha bahut hi majedar update bro![]()
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Fantastic update
Like always the update was superb, well explained how Veer had planned everything.I was expecting that scene between Veer & Suhana and I was curious how you would coney that, it was same as I thought, I loved that it was written perfectly.Next comes 'the interrogation' wese kon kiska le rha tha? Loved that too, it was well I mean jesa hona chiye tha was actually like that.Nik ko capture krna awesome scene well shown.While reading I feel like I'm the 3rd eye watching everything, this makes your writing living."Julia ki ankhon me chamak" muje nhi lgta yeh Kaera se related kuch hai, curious to know about that hope soon revealed.Lastly, thanks for this update
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As expected bhai
Amazing update
Swqd aq gya
Abhi bhavana veer ki kya baat hogi iska kuch bhi hint ni h
Bakk kaffi chijo ki clarity milli aur kaffi abhi pending bhi b
But that's how story goes on
So waiting for next
Mast update bhai![]()
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Great update as always brother.
I generally do not leave comments (do like it asap even before reading) or talk about charectors much as every charector in this story has its own importance, but Kaera is just 10/10. Its just something about her, as she is still seems mysterious. Also, the mission releated to her which veer got is pending as i recall. Would be great to see how that would turn out.
Can't wait for the next amazing update...Thanks for writing this beatiful masterpiece. One day, this story will be converted into pdf form & will be GOT level art for the viewers/readers.
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Bahut hi shandar update aakhirkar suhana aur veer ki kissing ho hi gayi![]()
amazing update suhana and veers ka kiss wow. Rohan aur veer ka interrogation scene wah. I think abb kahani speed up hojaey gi.
Ab kehne ki jaroorat nahi, again a great update. Jab tak do - teen baar padh kar update ka vimochan nahi kar loon, reply dene me maza nahi aata. Detail me baad mein. Pehle Suhana ke saath ka scene bahut emotional tha. Phir Nik ki gaadi ki chase ke to kya kehne. Jumping the scenes ne to usme chaar chand laga diye. Phir kaise past ko reconstruct kiya, aisi skill banana, very creative. Kaera ka scene bhi bahut interesting tha. Bass, agar weh kabhi Suhana ko chhodne ko maang le, toh dil toot jayega. Waise to uska competition Sonia se hai.
मज़ा आ गया Werewolf भाई।।।
धीरे धीरे वीर सभी से वादें करता जा रहा है जो आगे उसके लिए परेशानी बढ़ा सकते हैं और माहौल को देख कर लग रहा है कि सभी लड़कियां वीर को बस अपना बना कर रखना चाहती हैं।।
Wonderful update bhai![]()
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Zabardast update
Bhot dhasu update bro keep writing
Waiting for next update![]()
Nice update werewolf bhai
Fabulous update keep it going
Waiting for next
Nice one update bro
Shandar jabardast Dhamakedar update![]()
Faadu, jhakkas update
fucking awesome update bhaiamezing... review kal dunga ... lappy se
Awesome update
Fantastic fabulous update loved it answered mamy questions and created new curiosities... like how he will deal with police![]()
Shandar update bro..
Akhir kar suhana aur divya azad ho gayin..
Kaera ka promise bohat khatarnak lag raha mujhy..pata nahi kyun mujhy lagta hai wo veer ko sirf us ko apnanay ka boly gi aur yeh veer ke liye sub se mushkil decision ho ga..lets see
Interogation wala scene bohat intense tha..khair rohan veer ki jan itni asani se nahi chorny wala..bhala to is me hi hai ke wo aik sath mil jayen but rohan bhi ziddi hai..
Nik wala bomb bhi veer ne rohan pe phor dia hai...ab dekho kia hota
I hope ke is bar bhi target timely complete ho jaye ga...btw thanks for giving 12k words update
Fantastic work brilliant update![]()
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Bhai kya hi update tha
I love it ❤❤❤
Bhai keep it up
You are the very very good writer bhai
Nice update bro
Shaandar Update
Awasome update bro
Nice update bro
150 likes pending guys thoda jaldi kar do bhai log let we make it by today 7 pm
Super duper update
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
Hlo Werewolf bhai ye toh miracle kr dia aapne itni jldi update or wo bhi itna bda thank you so much bhaikaera ki personality puri trh change ho gyi h veer jesa system holder k bhi samjh se bhr h pr jesa ki mujhe ummeed thi ki kaera veer se jrur sawal kregi ki usne use dhokha kyu dia suhana k sath ky chakkar h uska but esa kuch nhi kia usne toh ye thoda strange tha or update toh lajawab tha pr bhai veer ne kaafi time ragini k upr koi dhyan nhi dia h syaad next update m kuch cameo dekhne ko mile and honestly veer and tejal relationship m aage ky hota h sbse jyada intejar isi ka h.... Once again nice update... And hope next update will coming soon...
Zabar
Zabardast update bhai love you hgya... Aysy cliffhanger pe update end ki hy k ab agli update ka wait krna mushkil hogya hy. I want to see the situation of jealousy between veer's sister and system holders at family meeting. Request meri yehi hy k ap update pe kaam shuru krdo q k likes tu pure ho jaengy but ham sy ziyada wait na hoga
Superb update bro
Nice update...
Bahut shanddar or unmda update
I realy like it
Bus aise hi updates dete raho
Awesome Update
Awesome Update![]()
Jabardast update bhai
In just 20hours we had done 50% target Werewolf bhai please start next part
Super update
As always the update was superb and amazing
Veer ne suhana aur Divya dono ko gourav aur nik ke changul se azad kar diya
The kissing scene between Veer and suhana was lovely
The part between Veer and keara is awesome too
Inka scene padhne me hamesha hi ek excitement aata hai
Veer ab keara ko do promise owe karta hai
NIk ko pakdane wale part me bhi maja aaya
Veer ne nik ki soch se aage badkar usko pakdane ka plan banaya tha
Overall ek bhut hi badhiya update
Ab agle update ka intezar rahega
Wow awesome update bhai
SUPER SE UPAR
Bahut hi shandar
Mind blowing update
Fabulous Update Werewolf Brother![]()
Fantastic fabulous fantabalus awesome
Superb
Incrediblegorgeous
Superbly written bro
Very very fabulous and amazing update![]()
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Greatjabardast
Very nice work superb update bro
Superb update
Mza aa gya❤❤
Jabardast update bro
Jabardast update bro
Werewolf bhai u r truly amezing writer.... nik chasing scene n interrogation scene
both merged awesomely ... agar koi aam writer hota to wo itna bkhubi na likh pata
may be makes it worst
but u ... bow down towards you
rohan n trisha is helpless towards veer ... but they will not going easy on veer ... which may create a little trouble for veer on future
that chasing scene beautifully described... feel like real movie watching
first nidhi now suhana
both finally accepted their love towards veer openly .... suhana kiss to veer is not only sign of love .... its sign of freedom... like she is now free from any burden or boundaries... she not even hesitate to divya
nor divya surprised to suhana while she kissed veer ... because she feels pain n love of suhana
both suffered a lot ... only person is most important for them is veer ... may be we see more intimate scenes between suhana n veer in future
also hopefully soon we see veer n nidhi kiss .... suhana kiss is satisfying... sonia ja i don't know but i think ava is most suitable partner for veer .... because she is system holder tooo ... veer not needs to hide from her ... she can understand veer most
Amazing chapter!
So much information. Feel like reading the last part again and then this one. Veer’s quiet confidence is growing, he is truly becoming the alpha in the pack now.
Shana mentioned about spending the night with her two favorite people. Am I reading too much into it or is there something more? Considering Divya’s reaction - maybe I’m on the right track.
Nik’s chasing scene and the transitions were so well written. If you ever think about preparing a book - I will gladly buy it. Feels like a novel.
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Dear wherewolf bhai
Update ke liye बहुत-बहुत shukriya
Gaurav ka expose, Suhana ki stability, aur sabse anxiety wali aeva ka family se introduction Jo Shayad agale update mein hoga
Dekhne layak hoga uski family ka reaction
Rohan aur Trisha Ka veer ke sath colab ??
Sab kuchh bahut badhiya tha
Agali update Ka intezar rahega
Aapki writing ka fan
Max Pinak
nice update
70% likes done
70% likes done only 30% left guys 75 likes are pending please be fast
Acch
अच्छा अपडेट है
Bhot he khoob surat bhai..... Mza agya
As always bhai , suspense dena nahi bhuleagle update k liye!
Suhana aur Veer ka kissing sceneunexpected tha, atleast is update me! Aur Veer ka bhi usko kiss karna
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Mujhe jab last ka scene aaya tab Bhavan ki jagha Tejal k hone ki possibility lag rahi thi. Anyhow, amazing update bro
, hope agla update bhi jaldi a jaye
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Again wonderful chapter....
Super dhamakedar update bhai![]()
It
It,s just awesome update
Superb, amazing, wonderful, absolutely brilliant! Am at a loss for words to describe it! Story'll be taking a splendid breathtaking turn hereafter, I guess so, from this update onwards! Well, I think we are getting ready for the upcoming enchanting encounters, dear bro.
Nice update
Wow……what a imagination… incredible and mind blowing update…waiting next…
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Bhai log 43 likes bache hai please thoda jaldi karwa do
Kaha kab? Woh toh hypothetically huya hai, apna ko chahie scenarioz![]()
Arre mera matlab tha nik watches![]()
Superb update
Great Work
Wow Superb Fantastic fabulouswork bro
Hats off you
Jabardast update shandar likha hai![]()
Mind blowing performance![]()
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fantastic creation
Incredible update
Waiting for next update
highly appreciated work
Dynamic update
Very nice n beautiful update love it![]()
Fabulous bahut hi katil update
This the audiance has really liked the update look at the likes in just 2 days
Ex
Excellent update.
Try to add gif and pictures.
Not that big.
Small frame.
सुहाना आखिर कार उसे, उन्मुक्त जीने का अब मौका मिलेगा । अब वो फिर से इस जाल में नहीं फसेगी।
निक भी पकड़ लिया गया है। देखते वीर उसको क्या डोज में देगा।
हल्के में ले रहा है। ये अधिकारी वीर को,
Awesome update
Interogation scene aur car chasing scene jo switch horaha amazing... That was very interesting.
Nice update bhai kafhi majha aaya lekin ye Rohan kafhi tang ada raha he kuch jyada hi veer pe bhadak raha he
Fantastic update
The chase scene, Suhana Veer moments, Chemistry with Kaera, and in the last what will Veer say to his mother.
Bhai yarnia ka aage kuch ni hona k??
Shaandar update
Outstanding![]()
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Very nice and very beautiful update![]()
Fabulous and excellent![]()
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Rocking lajavab shandar
Baytari
250 likes pure ho chuke h , Targetis complete . Aaj se agle update ki preparation shuru kar di
Superbly fantastic update bro maza aa gaya
Superb & fantastic update bro,
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Aisa nahi bolna tha
Akshay Kumar wala dialog - Ha malum hai apne b**p ko mat sikha
Ya fir Animal movie wala - Dikhai de raha hai andha nahi hoon main
(Ayush just for kidding)
Target complete ho gya ab aap next update ke baare main sochiye bro
Bhai waiting for the update....![]()
Baat to sach ho gyi![]()
4 din lage target pura karne me, ab 4 din me update bhi de do![]()
To bhaya ab to dedo update ka update
Kya hi next level k update hai bhaii
Maza aa gya padhke
Shandar update Bhai....
Really enjoyed. Waiting for next.
Waise kab tak aayega bhai
Sayad 31 march ke pahele next update nahi ane wala... April first week maan k chalo... Taki expectations se jald mile...
Bahut shandar update diya hai bro maza aagya![]()
Thank you, dear Wolf Bhai for your kind perusal and reply. Yeh Dil hai ki maanta nahin ki update ke liye jitna bhi waqt lagta hai, utna hi badiya rahega - yeh hi haqikat hai but our hearts don't listen to us but keep demanding more and more - kindly excuse us for that and take your own time , please and continue to give us your better and superb updates as usual, in your unique and inimitable style, always, please
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Awesome bhai badiya update diye hai thanks
Nice Update.
Arc should also be updated.
Whether it will be completed by 400 Update or it will further extended to complete the thread.
Nice update
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As always great update...
Keep writing![]()
Update Sunday Tak hi aayega ?
Happy Birthday bro, you're the only consistent one on this platform and this story is the reason why I keep checking this site. Appreciate your work
Happy birthday bhai Werewolf ... Sirf 1 min bcha h ... Jldi se wish kr deta hu
Happy birthday bro
Happy birthday Werewolf my friendGuess I am late by 2 hours here..
(hamesha derr kar deta hun main)
Happy birthday Werewolf bhai,Kal jyada hi jaldi so gaya tha
Happy birthdaybro
Wish you happy birthday writer saab.
Have a wonderful day with your family.
Many many Happy returns OF The day
Werewolf bhai
Happy birthday writer bhai...
Happy birthday bro
Bhagwan apki saari iksha puri karein
Happy birthday Werewolf bhai.....
Aap toh birthday party ki jagah hume aagla update hi dede...
Werewolf be lated happy birthday bhai.... waiting for the next update early.
Iss weekend koi chance hai?
Janam din ki bahuat bahuat badhai hoo wolfee bahi
Be lated Happy Birthday
Werewolf bro
Ye story apne kahi se inspire hoke likhi hai ya fhir ye apki dimag ki hi upaj hai
लेट है
लेकिन
आपको आपके जन्मदिवस की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं
लेखक महोदय
Warewolf vai aj EID ka din,, kya aj update milne ka koi chance hay
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Vary nice story
Orphana group ke bare me koi news h kya
Bohat uccha khel khela hai Gaurav ke against but as he said ki isse kuch bhi sabit nahi ho payega kanooni taur per. Aur Gaurav saaf bach ke nikal jayega.
Mujhe pata hai because I am a bhavna paglu you know that model is monalisa
Werewolf Atish aur Slogan Arc sabse bada tha aur aab bohot chote arcs aa rahe hai like Chinatown sirf 10 update mein nipat gya , crimson arc 20 update mein jabki slogan arc 40+ update ka tha aur arish ka bhi
Ju Kaise dekhte hai kiska kitna views hai batao pls
waiting
waiting sir
Waiting for the update![]()
Veer bhaiya ki to Bhavna kas kar class lene wali hai. Ragini, apni bhabhi ke saath affair. Sharirik sambandh ki baat to alag hai, lekin affair... Mujhe lagta hai ki weh itni bholi-bhali nahi hai, usko Tejal aur Bhumika ke rujhaan ki mahak bhi pahunch chuki hogi. Ab kal Ava jaisi sundari ko ghar layega, tab to aag hi lag jayegi.
Ek baat samajh nahi aayi, car me jab sab system wale dost bata rahe the ki unko kya skill mili. Aisa lag raha hai ki koi task pura karne ke baad mili hain. Mujhe aisa laga ki Pushkar ke task ko pura karne me sahayta karne ke liye in logon ko bhi task mile hoge. Lekin Erica ki Parts skill, jisko use karke usne Pushkar, Nik aur Gaurav ke past ko kuch images se, kuch audio se mila kar reconstruct kiya tha, weh skill to uske pass pehle se hogi.
Kuch bhi kaho, Suhana ka Veer ko kiss karna bahut romantic tha.
Bro aj kya update ayega
waiting
Dear werewolf bhai
Aap kese ho
Aaj update ayega kya??
Let night ka bol rahe the isliye
Intjar kar raha hu
Aap ki writing ka fan
Max pinak
@Evaran Eternity