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[Werewolf]

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[raajjkumar]

Zakkas

 

[Sidd19]

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[shivpatil]

Waiting for Our little festival

 

[mmmmmmmmm]

Koi chance nahi hai

Werewolf bhai next update kab Tak aayega

 

[Werewolf]

‎Review start karne se pahle me khud hi is title ko predict karne ka credit lena chahunga , kai logo ke chehre ke naqab jal chuke hai aur jinke baaki hai unke bhi jaldi utar jaayenge…
‎Chalo ab review start karte hai

Isliye maine kaha tha ki ju apne words yaad rakhiyo. Titles most of the time already pehle se hi decided hote hai. Jaise next chapter ka title bhi decided hai abhi. Saare updates ke nahi, ek baar me ek update ka title decide karta hu mein.

Abhi next update ka decided hai. Uske baad waale ka next update dene ke baad decide kar lunga.

‎Seedha bolu to ye update padhke kuch der tak bas me yahi sochta raha ke jab mene is kahani ko padhna shuru kiya tha tab kabhi ye nhi socha tha ke is kahani me mujhe itne different shades dekhne ko milenge. Bahut khubsurati se likhte ho yaar, jese har shabd ko bahut soch samajh ke likha gaya ho, Kuch cheezein andar tak mahsus hoti hai..
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Dhanyavad bhai. Socha toh maine bhi nahi tha ki itna lamba aayenge hum. Socha tha jald hi finish ho jaayegi but kaam...
Load badhta gaya, updates ki frequency kam hoti chali gayi. Aur, use compensate karne ke liye maine length badha di.

‎Gaurav ki arrest se shuruat kare to jo cheez mujhe sabse jyada achi lagi wo ye thi ki usne resist nahi kiya. Ek baar bhi nahi. Wo banda itna bada tha apni nazar me ki use lagta tha ki police use arrest karke uska kuch nhi bigad sakti. Ye system, police, media sab uske control me hai aur uska kuch nhi bigad sakte. Uska ego use jhukne nhi de raha. Use abhi bhi yahi lagta hai ke wo is sab se bahar nikal jayega. Ese logo ko dekh ke ek kahawat yaad aati hai ke "gand fatte to fatte par nawabi naa ghate"
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Guroor bhai. Guroor. Ego. Use lagta hai woh chhooth jaayega.

‎Ab ham sabki Jaan Suhana par aate hai. Bhai yaha dil tut jaata hai, itni female characters hai but Suhana alag hi hai yaar, aaj bhi wo uska first scene yaad hai mujhe jab wo aur Sonia RR se utarti hai, uska wo hotel prestige wala scene jab wo Veer ki insult karti hai, kitni egostic ladki thi jisse lagta tha ke paisa hai to sab kuch hai aur paise se sab kuch hasil kiya jaa sakta hai aur jab aaj Suhana ko dekhta hu to ye lagta hi nhi ke wo ek ghamandi ladki rahi hogi

Suhana ka character development kaafi badhiya raha hai. I will agree as well.
Kaaran raha hai uska constant footage. Wo slogan arc se poore HOK arc me rahi hai. Not to mention even Aatish arc se hi wo active ho gayi thi. Isliye, uske character ka turnaround dekhne me hume maza aaya.

Abhi aur bhi characters hai jinka hume turnaround dekhna hai. Turnaround toh nahi kahunga exactly but- yeah, character development zaroor dekhne ko milega aur bhi.

Ab scene par aate hai, Wo cake kaat rahi thi. Uska bday hai Aur uske bday ke din hi uska sab kuch bikhar jata hai. Jo us ne saalon tak bardaasht kiya, jo wo khud se bhi chhupaati rahi wo sab us raat ek saath saamne aa gaya. Aaj Tak wo ek jhuth ko jeeti aa rahi thi, sab kuch jese khatam ho gaya tha. Uska wo bhaagna, car me ghus ke darwaza band karna, steering wheel ko kass ke pakadna — ye sab padhke laga ki insaan jab toot ta hai to woh chillata nahi, woh bas bhaagta hai. Kahin bhi. Bas wahan se door. Aur phir uska wo rona . Aise insaan tabhi rota hai jab puri duniya se chupke rona chahta ho. Akele car me aur wo jo line thi ke "Kyunki koi use sunne waala nahi tha" ye ek line itni bhaari thi ki bas kuch nahi kehna iske baare me. Kabhi kabhi kuch feelings shabdon me nhi likhi jaa sakti, unhe sirf mahsus kiya jaa sakta hai.

Yeah. Suhana ko laga tha ki woh akeli thi. Isliye, wo jee bhar ke royi. Kyunki, use pata tha ki wo sabhi ko peechhe chhor aayi hai. Sonia se woh cheezein chhipaati aayi thi. Maa baap se chhipaati aayi thi. Uske baare me koi nahi jaanta tha siwaaye Divya ke. Lekin, Divya khud bhi fasi hui thi. Antatah sab saamne aa gaya. Lekin, ab roye kiske saamne?

Isliye, woh yahi soch akeli royi. But we know she wasn't alone at all.

‎Fir as always wolfy ka twist— Veer ka car me hona. Typical Bollywood wali entry. Me to yahi soch raha tha ke bc ye car me kab aaya, fir socha koi skill to nhi mil gayi gayab hoke kahi bhi pahuchne ki

System holder hai Bhai woh.
Suhana ke senses se bachkar use follow kar car me ghusna uske liye koi bada kaam toh nahi. Use koi special skills ki zaroorat nahi. As Veer himself said to Suhana ki woh apne senses me nahi thi. Ro rahi thi. Aankhein bheegi thi. Dhundhli thi. Dhyaan kahi aur.

It was obvious that if a normal person too would have done that, suhana might not have noticed it. Forget about system holder.

but itna samajh aa gaya tha ke wo aayega jarur kyuki Veer kuch explain nahi karta kabhi, wo bas wahan hota hai jaha use us time hona chahiye. Aur usne koi badi baat nahi ki na koi emotional speech di kyuki jisse hamari parvah hoti hai wo badi badi baatein nhi karta wo us time pe hamare sath hota hai. Ek insaan jo samajhta hai ki kabhi kabhi chup rehna hi sabse badi baat hoti hai. Then Veer ka use painting gift karna, kis haad tak Veer Suhana ki parvah karta hai. Usne suhana ko wo chiz gift ki jisse milne ki ummid khatam ho chuki thi. And last me jab Suhana Veer ko kiss karti hai, bina puche, bina soche, kahi na kahi ye jaruri tha kyuki hamesha Suhana ne khud ko roka, control kiya but yaha sab kuch wo apne Mann se kar rahi thi, bina kisi dar ke.

She knew it was time to let go. And accept what she had wanted all along.

‎Veer aur Kaera wala scene acha tha. Me to kahta hu har update me chota hi sahi but Kaera ka ek scene rakha karo. Vese Kaera ko dekh ke lagta hai ke ab wo badal rahi hai. Wo hasti hai, roti hai, kuch hadd tak emotions ko feel karne lagi hai. Wo jab Veer ko dekh ke muskurati hai, haaye .
‎But wo undefined promise, bhai esa kyu lag raha hai ke ye aage jaak Veer ko bahut bhaari padne wala hai.

Undefined promises humesha hi bhaari padte hai. Hum kitni baar dekhte aaye hai.

Notice kiya kuchh? Ye favor waala kaam Suhana karti thi. Aur aaj birthday par usne jaan boojh ke Kaera ko nahi bulaaya tha because she didn't give her that painting to her.

Aur, ab Kaera ne kya kiya? Veer ko woh painting toh di hi par saath hi iss baar use favor ki debt me baandh diya. Theek waise hi jaise Suhana karti thi. It's a way of saying ki tum painting rakh lo, mein Veer ko rakhungi. All of this was done unintentionally by her but...I just think I should let the readers know about the thought process behind writing such scenes.

‎‎Rohan wala scene kamal tha yaar. Rohan ye bardasht hi nhi kar paa raha ke bc ek 22 saal ka ladka pure system ko, businessman ko, underworld ko apni ungaliyon par nacha raha hai. Wo ek powerful DGP hai jo chilla raha hai, dhamki de raha hai, table pe haath maar raha hai. Doosri taraf ek ladka jo kursi pe peechhe jhuk ke muskura raha hai. Koi DGP ke saamne itna calm kaise rehta hai? Lekin Veer wo alag hai. ‎Aur jab usne Rohan ke kaan me kaha "Nik mere paas hai" bc Rohan ke rongte khade ho gaye ke ye ladka chiz kya hai. Aur wo jab vaha se nikalta hai that line "Kal ghar aa jaana. Bina wardi ke." Aur nikal gaya. Bc DGP hai bhai koi chaprasi nhi. Top notch. Kahi na kahi ye sab scene Veer ka aura dikhate hai. Ek ladka jisse ghar se bahar nikal diya tha, jiske pass apna kahne ko koi nhi tha aaj wo kaha pahuch gaya, is puri journey me hamne Veer ko change hote dekha hai. Uske dialogues, uska chalna, situation ko handle karna sab kuch badal chuka hai.

Reasons simple hai.
Rohan Veer ke khilaaf kuchh karne ke liye hota bhi hai toh- Veer bas Trisha ko yaad dila deta tha. Aur, bas wahi se game palat jaata hai har baar. Iss update me wahi dikhaaya gaya hai baar baar ki Rohan kayi kaarno ke chalte majboor hai.

In fact, woh toh ye bhi kehta hai ki abhi chaahe toh third degree yuhi de de Veer ko, koi tokega bhi nahi use. Aur, ye baat sach hai. Par, tabhi Veer Trisha ko wo picture yaad dilaata hai aur Trisha Rohan ko mana kar deti hai.

Ab bhale hi kuchh bhi ho, par Trisha uski patni hai bhai. Aur ek DSP bhi. Upar se Veer ke unknown connections aur uske itne bade bade rehesyamayi karnaame.

Rohan ko majboor kar rahe hai. Warna woh apni taraf se kya kuchh na kar de.

Aur wo nikcuck bc uska chase seen bahut acha likha but haa mere liye abhi bhi slogan wala chase scene top pe hai. Nik bc sab tikdam laga diya ke kese in sab se Bach jaaye but Veer to Veer hai. Wo pahle se hi sab soch ke betha tha. Use pata tha ke ye kaha kaha Jaa sakta hai aur usne pahle se hi uski fielding set karke rakhi thi. Nik ki saari bhagdoud, sari planning dhari ki dhari rah gayi. Ye pura scene ek movie ki tarah tha, pure cinematic experience.

Ye chase scene intentional nahi tha. Mein dual scene switching ko lekar experiment kar raha tha. Bas chase scene ko ek experiment ke taur par use kiya gaya hai. Dekh ke achha laga ki dual switch scene readers ko bahut pasand aaya. Iss se mein aage kabhi bhi use pesh kar sakta hu bina jhijhak ke.

Fir wo car scene, sab natural tha, koi forceful nhi. Erica aur Garofano ka ek dusre ko roast karna kafi entertaining tha. Humour bhi kahi na kahi hona chahiye. Bhai har update me try kiya kar ke thoda bahut humour add kar sake. But uske baad jab Ava ki wo line "I couldn't do anything" usne goli khayi thi Tej ke liye fir bhi wo bechari khud ko useless samajh rahi hai ke sab Veer ke liye kuch na kuch kar rahe hai but ek vahi hai jo uske koi kaam nhi aa rahi. Wo chahti hai ke wo hamesha Veer ke pass rahe, uska sath de aur kahi na kahi Veer bhi uski feelings ko samajh raha hai. Veer jab use kahta hai ke usne uski family ke liye goli khayi hai it shows ke Veer janta hai Ava bahut jaruri hai uske liye. Aur jese hi wo Ava ko apni family se milane ki baat karta hai ye jese Ava ke liye bahut badi baat thi. Ab dekhte hai ke jab Ava Veer ki family se milegi to kya kya dekhne ko milega. Bc fir Tej ki vahi possessiveness dekhne ko milegi. Maza aayega but haa bechari hamari Ava bholi hai. Dekhte hai kya hota hai

That's what I'm trying. Kahi na kahi, jitna bhi ho sake, halka fulka humor aata rahega. Agle update me bhi rahega.

I'll try.

‎Kuch scenes jo miss kiye usme ‎Shailendra ka apology karna. Esa lag raha hai jese wo abhi bhi ye maan raha hai ke ye koi saazish ho aur paise ke dam pe wo sab kuch theek kar dega but lagta hai uski galatfahmi bhi jaldi dur ho jayegi. Trisha ki guilt abhi bhi wahi hai aur jo shayad Veer ke liye bahut kaam aa rahi hai. Sonia ka ek bhi shabd nahi nikla poore scene me — aur woh khamoshi bhi ek tarah ka toota hua hona tha

Jo ki sahi hai actually.

Woh Veer ko kabse jaanta hai? Jaanta hi nahi. Woh Gaurav ko kabse jaanta hai? Lambe time se.

Yahi difference hai. Koi aera-gera aake uske damaad ke khilaaf kuchh saboot pesh kar diya toh kya woh pushti nahi karega?

Bilkul karega. Ab uski ek pushti toh uski beti, Suhana ne hi kar di hai. Ye dikha ke ki woh kitna tang aa chuki thi Gaurav se. Dusri pushti use Rohan ke zariye aur proofs ki validity ko dekhkar ho jaayegi. But all in all... Shailendra bhi apni jagah sahi hai.

Dekha jaaye toh Veer ne uski image par bhi sabke saamne laanchhan lagaaya hai. Agla aadmi kya bolega? Ki arey ye toh wahi Elite Group ke maalik ka damaad hai. Toh yaha beizzati kiski? Shailendra ki.

Apni jagah woh bhi sahi hai.

‎Ye update emotionally exhausting tha. Lekin achhe wale tarike se. Tumne kaha tha ke ab itne bade update nhi doge but de hi diya aur mujhe lagta hai ke Target bhi jaldi pura ho jayega. ‎Aaj tumhari tarah bhavnao me aake mene bhi kuch jyada hi chep diya.‎ I hope next update jaldi hi aaye.. superbb brother Werewolf

Koi na. Long reviews are always welcome. Haan, maine decide toh yahi kiya tha ki updates ab 12k length tak nahi le jaaunga. But jab update waha tak jaa hi raha ho, toh mein bhi usme kuchh nahi kar sakta.

Ye sab kuchh ek hi update me dikhaana tha. Ab kya ghataata isme? Dual switch scene se kuchh ghataata toh uska impact kam ho jaata. Suhana ke scene se kuchh hataata toh uska impact kam ho jaata.

Kaera ka scene hota hi dynamic hai. Isliye, words zyada hote chale gaye. Don't worry, next waala itna bada nahi hai. Mein use normal hi rakhne waala hu.

Anyways, thanks a lot for the revo and keep supporting as usual.

 

[Werewolf]

Werewolf bhai next update kab Tak aayega

Bhai abhi 2.7k words ready hue hai. Do scenes likhe hai abhi. Kal third scene likhunga. So, it will take some time.

 

[Rider07]

Bhai waiting for next update

 

[Werewolf]

As always bhai , suspense dena nahi bhule agle update k liye!
Suhana aur Veer ka kissing scene unexpected tha, atleast is update me! Aur Veer ka bhi usko kiss karna ...
Mujhe jab last ka scene aaya tab Bhavan ki jagha Tejal k hone ki possibility lag rahi thi . Anyhow, amazing update bro , hope agla update bhi jaldi a jaye !

Thanks a lot Bhai. Keep supporting.

Superb, amazing, wonderful, absolutely brilliant! Am at a loss for words to describe it! Story'll be taking a splendid breathtaking turn hereafter, I guess so, from this update onwards! Well, I think we are getting ready for the upcoming enchanting encounters, dear bro .

Yes. We are preparing to go into the summit arc now. Very soon. So, the shift will happen. Thanks and keep supporting.

Amazing chapter!

So much information. Feel like reading the last part again and then this one. Veer’s quiet confidence is growing, he is truly becoming the alpha in the pack now.

Shana mentioned about spending the night with her two favorite people. Am I reading too much into it or is there something more? Considering Divya’s reaction - maybe I’m on the right track.

Nik’s chasing scene and the transitions were so well written. If you ever think about preparing a book - I will gladly buy it. Feels like a novel.

Keep up the good work! Waiting for next chapter

Haha. No. They're not lesbians. (For now at least. Who knows about the future. )
But yeah, they are straight. Two favourite people means Veer and Divya. They both are her two most favorite persons. So, she wanted to spend rest of the night with them. (Nothing sexual.) Just being with them. That's all.

Dual switch scene was an experiment. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks and keep supporting.

Dear wherewolf bhai
Update ke liye बहुत-बहुत shukriya
Gaurav ka expose, Suhana ki stability, aur sabse anxiety wali aeva ka family se introduction Jo Shayad agale update mein hoga
Dekhne layak hoga uski family ka reaction
Rohan aur Trisha Ka veer ke sath colab ??
Sab kuchh bahut badhiya tha
Agali update Ka intezar rahega

Aapki writing ka fan
Max Pinak

Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhai. Haan, agle update me Ava ka hi scene hai. Wait karo tab tak. Saath bane rehne ka.

Werewolf bhai u r truly amezing writer.... nik chasing scene n interrogation scene
both merged awesomely ... agar koi aam writer hota to wo itna bkhubi na likh pata

may be makes it worst

but u ... bow down towards you

Dhanyavad bhai.
Jaan ke achha laga ki sabko wo scene pasand aaya. Aage aise hi aur bhi switching scenes sahi samay par laaunga.

rohan n trisha is helpless towards veer ... but they will not going easy on veer ... which may create a little trouble for veer on future

that chasing scene beautifully described... feel like real movie watching

Abhi agla update dekho bhai. Paasa palatne waala hai.

first nidhi now suhana

both finally accepted their love towards veer openly .... suhana kiss to veer is not only sign of love .... its sign of freedom... like she is now free from any burden or boundaries... she not even hesitate to divya

Yes. She accepted her feelings. And, she kissed in front of Divya for a reason. You'll come to know later.

nor divya surprised to suhana while she kissed veer ... because she feels pain n love of suhana

Ye bhi pata chalega ki Divya kyun surprised nahi thi. Sahi samay par.

both suffered a lot ... only person is most important for them is veer ... may be we see more intimate scenes between suhana n veer in future

Time will tell.

also hopefully soon we see veer n nidhi kiss .... suhana kiss is satisfying... sonia ja i don't know but i think ava is most suitable partner for veer .... because she is system holder tooo ... veer not needs to hide from her ... she can understand veer most

Veer isn't hiding from Ava. It's Ava, who's afraid of getting rejected. That's why she hasn't proposed yet. The guilt factor is strong.

Thanks a lot and keep supporting as usual.

 

[Werewolf]

Zabar
Zabardast update bhai love you hgya... Aysy cliffhanger pe update end ki hy k ab agli update ka wait krna mushkil hogya hy. I want to see the situation of jealousy between veer's sister and system holders at family meeting. Request meri yehi hy k ap update pe kaam shuru krdo q k likes tu pure ho jaengy but ham sy ziyada wait na hoga

Kaafi badhiya scene ka zikr kiya hai.
Dekhne laayak hogi ye meeting. Bas intezar karne ka. Aa jaayega jald hi. Dhanyavad.

As always the update was superb and amazing

Veer ne suhana aur Divya dono ko gourav aur nik ke changul se azad kar diya

The kissing scene between Veer and suhana was lovely

The part between Veer and keara is awesome too
Inka scene padhne me hamesha hi ek excitement aata hai
Veer ab keara ko do promise owe karta hai

NIk ko pakdane wale part me bhi maja aaya
Veer ne nik ki soch se aage badkar usko pakdane ka plan banaya tha

Overall ek bhut hi badhiya update
Ab agle update ka intezar rahega

Dhanyavad. Agla update March end ke pehle aa jaayega. At least koshish toh yahi hai. And most probably aa bhi jaayega.
Aise hi saath bane rehne ka. Reviews dete rehne ka.

Bhai kya hi update tha



I love it ❤❤❤



Bhai keep it up



You are the very very good writer bhai

Dhanyavad.

Hlo Werewolf bhai ye toh miracle kr dia aapne itni jldi update or wo bhi itna bda thank you so much bhai kaera ki personality puri trh change ho gyi h veer jesa system holder k bhi samjh se bhr h pr jesa ki mujhe ummeed thi ki kaera veer se jrur sawal kregi ki usne use dhokha kyu dia suhana k sath ky chakkar h uska but esa kuch nhi kia usne toh ye thoda strange tha or update toh lajawab tha pr bhai veer ne kaafi time ragini k upr koi dhyan nhi dia h syaad next update m kuch cameo dekhne ko mile and honestly veer and tejal relationship m aage ky hota h sbse jyada intejar isi ka h.... Once again nice update... And hope next update will coming soon...

Maine bola hi tha bhai ki jitna jaldi target complete karoge utni jaldi mein likhna start karunga aur update dunga. Isliye wo jaldi aa gaya. Simple. Next waale ke liye maine inform kar hi Diya tha ki late aayega thoda.

Vyastata rahi hai March me kaafi. Bas isliye. Baaki, saath bane rehne ka. Dhanyavad.

Shandar update bro..
Akhir kar suhana aur divya azad ho gayin..
Kaera ka promise bohat khatarnak lag raha mujhy..pata nahi kyun mujhy lagta hai wo veer ko sirf us ko apnanay ka boly gi aur yeh veer ke liye sub se mushkil decision ho ga..lets see

Samay bataayega bhai. Let's see.

Interogation wala scene bohat intense tha..khair rohan veer ki jan itni asani se nahi chorny wala..bhala to is me hi hai ke wo aik sath mil jayen but rohan bhi ziddi hai..

Agla update sort out kar dega bahut kuchh.

Nik wala bomb bhi veer ne rohan pe phor dia hai...ab dekho kia hota

I hope ke is bar bhi target timely complete ho jaye ga...btw thanks for giving 12k words update

Dhanyavad bhai. Saath bane rehne ka.

Fantastic fabulous update loved it answered mamy questions and created new curiosities... like how he will deal with police

Thanks and keep supporting.

Great update as always brother.

I generally do not leave comments (do like it asap even before reading) or talk about charectors much as every charector in this story has its own importance, but Kaera is just 10/10. Its just something about her, as she is still seems mysterious. Also, the mission releated to her which veer got is pending as i recall. Would be great to see how that would turn out.

Can't wait for the next amazing update...Thanks for writing this beatiful masterpiece. One day, this story will be converted into pdf form & will be GOT level art for the viewers/readers.

Thanks a lot man.
Mission will be completed when Kaera will go back to her previous self completely. Experiencing all her emotions. That's when... She'll be truly awakened.

amazing update suhana and veers ka kiss wow. Rohan aur veer ka interrogation scene wah. I think abb kahani speed up hojaey gi.

Yes. Pace toh pakde hi hue hai kahani. Updates bas time lekar aate hai. Usme mein majboor hu.

Ab kehne ki jaroorat nahi, again a great update. Jab tak do - teen baar padh kar update ka vimochan nahi kar loon, reply dene me maza nahi aata. Detail me baad mein. Pehle Suhana ke saath ka scene bahut emotional tha. Phir Nik ki gaadi ki chase ke to kya kehne. Jumping the scenes ne to usme chaar chand laga diye. Phir kaise past ko reconstruct kiya, aisi skill banana, very creative. Kaera ka scene bhi bahut interesting tha. Bass, agar weh kabhi Suhana ko chhodne ko maang le, toh dil toot jayega. Waise to uska competition Sonia se hai.

Thanks a lot.
Switching scenes sabhi ko pasand aaye hai so, I'll keep that in mind.
Will wait for the upcoming reviews.
Keep supporting.

मज़ा आ गया Werewolf भाई।।।

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Phasega na bhai toh
Ye sab conflicts ko hi toh janm dengi.
Saara spider web banta jaa raha hai.

 

[ayush01111]

Phasega na bhai toh
Ye sab conflicts ko hi toh janm dengi.
Saara spider web banta jaa raha hai.

Bhai mujhe to jalan ho rahi hai sath me tension bhi ki hero karega ka kya