★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2026 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

[Mahi Maurya]

Mahi aunty

एंटी

 

[Raj_sharma]

Apan ki kahani sabhi ko pasand aayi ​

Yeah, a good story

 

[Dungeon Master]

Sorry bhai pata nahi tha
Jaha story padhi usi thread me review de diya, aage se dhyan rakhunga.

No issues man

 

[Dungeon Master]

एंटी

gyaan ki kami hai uske paas Bhaari maal ko halua samjh raha

 

[Raj_sharma]

Khatiya lagi hui thi, har section se bakhlol log baithe the. Shivani guptaa bhi cuntest me utarne ki taiyaari me thi. Par bechari ko character likhne me taqleef ho rahi thi...

Shivani : Yaar ye ladko ka toh mujhe kuchh samajh hi nahi aata.

Black : Kya hui?

Shivani : Kahani likh rahi hu, par bo ladke log ko kaise dikhau samajh ni aa raha...

Black : Kya dikhana hai?

Shivani : Meri kahani ka hero ek ladka hai... Ek scene me mujhe dikhana hai bo kaise nahaata hai... Ab mujhe ni pata tum ladke log kaise nahaate ho.

Black : Kaise nahaate matlab? Paani se.

Raju : Khikhikhi

Black : Hasa kyu bey?

Raju : Mujhe laga phenyl se nahaate hai.

Black :

Shivani : Arey mera matlab... Dekho... Hum ladkiyaan, mehnge products lagaati hai. Fir nahaane ke baad ek towel sarr pe aur ek towel badan par... Aise nahaati hai. Tum log kaise karte ho?

Black : Dekho, sabse pehle toh hum logan nahaate hi ni...

Raju : Abey-

Black : Mera matlab hai... Sarr se paani daala, sabun lagaya aur dho liya. Tauliya lapet liya. Ho gaya.

Shivani : Ek hi tauliya?

Black : H-Haan ek hi toh lagayenge na?

Shivani : Ni matlab... Tumlog neeche bhi toh saaf karte hoge na?

Black : Haan karte hai.

Shivani : Phir... Muh bhi karte hoge?

Black : Haan karte hai.

Shivani : Toh...

Black : Pehle muh saaf karte hai, phir gotey saaf karte hai. Ho gaya. Agli subah tak tauliya sab bhool jaati hai.

Shivani : Chhhiiiiiiii

Shivani bhaag gayi.

Black : Arey? Arey isko kya hua? Koi mere se baat ni karta. Mein sabko bura lagta hu. Bc mere pe case bhi kar diye...

Kalwa udaas hote hue gaana gaane laga...

Hum kaale hai toh kya hua dilwaale hain~
Hum kaale hai toh kya hua dilwaale hain~

Shivani wapas aayi...

Black : Hum tere tere tere chaahne waale hain ~

Shivani : Tumne 'tere' 3 baar kyun bola?

Mein : Tum nahi samjhogi chhiwani.

Black : Bhediya bhai

Mein : Koi na koi na...

Aur isliye... Shivani Kahani kabhi na likh saki.

Black Mr Sinister Raj_sharma vihan27 Aakash.

Bc ye hui na chhillayi story, bc maja aaya, aisa hi estory usc me daalna tha.

 

[Werewolf]

Bc ye hui na chhillayi story, bc maja aaya, aisa hi estory usc me daalna tha.

Daal di USC me. Par sci fi hai.

 

[Black]

gyaan ki kami hai uske paas Bhaari maal ko halua samjh raha

Wohi toh samajhta nahi hai yaar

 

[Black]

 

[Yug Purush]

 

[Mak]