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Thanks for this lovely feedback on my review sir... Main bas itna kahna chahta tha ki un information ko thoda sa short kiya ja sakta tha... Like 10 konse me se 2 lines ko trim... Aur Mr. Kapoor ka role writer se behtar koi nahi jan sakta... Bas mujhe unka role important laga isiliye bola tha.Thank you for the review
mrs kapoor ka role hi utna tha unko aur kaise explore karte? 8k words me main focus mrs kapoor pe nahi tha, uska kaam ek jaan bacha ke waahwaahi lena tha usne wo kiya
stretch feel possible hai, har kisi ko padhne me feel alag aata hai, dr sameer ke thoughts hi unke guilt ko badhawa dete hai, antardwand hai wo, usko trim karna mujhe nahi samajh aaya, lekin nanobots ki info hata deta to wo term kaise samajh aati? har koi google info nahi dhundhta uspar. abhimanyu hi dr sameer ka sabse bada guilt hai, wo agar guilt laga to story success rahi meri
thank you for the review
Koi sense hai iss baat mein ?Tum pr toh nhi maari mtlb tum idiot ho

Tumhari reply me thaKoi sense hai iss baat mein ?![]()

Smart ladka dekha nahi line maarna chaalu![]()
Jaane do ab agar tum apni baat se peeche hat rahe ho toShayar saab kyon aag lagane par tule ho... Hamari toh rare case me hi baat hoti hai... Aur waise bhi abhi mera koi mood nahi hai ladai ka... Abhi happy hun main.![]()
