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Last date for posting reviews for the award of best reader is also increased, now you can post your reviews to feature in the best reader award till 15 th March 2023 11:59 Pm.You can also post your reviews After that deadline but they won't be counted for the best readers award. So Cheers.
 

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Shukriya dear .. means a lot u have read and reviewed my story .. 💋💋💋💋💋💋💋
Title - AnandBhavan - Ek Erotic-Horror Kahani
Writer - HusnKiMallika
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Excellent story Mallika Madam...the suspense was just too good..midway to the story, I was wondering...how come it was "erotic horror"...but then came the twist..
The Halloween angle was the surprise and the 2nd time when she was about to leave the house.. All the same, an engaging story...
 

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❌Double Cross❌

Is waqt ghadi me shaam ke 6 baj rahe the..

Bollywood Super star Shashi Khanna apni nayi film ‘Divyastra’ ke premier ke liye tayar ho raha tha itne me hi monty, uska secratery aaya aur use bola “boss gate par Lucky Langda aaya hai… aapse milna chahta hai..?”

Lucky ka naam sunte hi Shashi ke mathe par shikan aa gayi.. apne career ki shuruwat me films me lead role paane ke liye shashi me underworld ke sath hath milaya tha aur ab uska wo underworld connection uska picha nahi chhod raha tha.. aaj Lucky langde jaise chote mote gunde malaysia me baithe ‘Bhai’ ke liye Mumbai ka kaam sambhal rahe the aur hamesha logo ke kaam me taang adate rehte the

“tu theatre par pahuch mai use niptake aata hu” shashi ne kaha

“ok boss” aur itna bol ke monty waha se chala gaya

Divyaastra ye Shashi ke career 75th movie thi lekin as a villain ye uski pehli film thi.. umra ke 50 saal paar kar jane ke baad ab shashi ke liye filmo me main lead ka role paana mushkil tha isiliye jab divyastra ke makers ne use contact kiya aur script sunayi aur movie offer ki to usme ka villain ka role sunkar shashi ko aisa laga ke ye ek iconic villain ka role ban sakta hai, ye character gabbbar mogambo jaisa famous ho sakta hai jisse wo wapis limelight me aa jayega aur career revive hoga isiliye apni second inning ke liye shashi ne ye fil accept kar li aur ab jab us film ka premier hone ja raha tha aise me ye do kaudi ke langde ke aane par use gussa aa raha tha…

Ander ghuste hi “kaisa hai actor” bol ke Lucky langda shashi ke gale lag gaya…

Apne chehre par ek jhuthi muskan late huye shashi ne use apne aap se alag kiya..

Lucky – actor apun agle hafte Bhai se milne malaysia nikal raha hai mai suna tera naya picture aa raha to socha tumko jate jate naya picture ke vaste all the best bol du iske vaste aaya main

Shashi – thank you, Bhai ko mera namaste kehna mai bhi aane wala bhi Bhai se milne agle hafte

Baad me wo log thodi der baith kar baate karte rahe aur jab Lucky langda waha se gaya tab tak shashi ka mood kafi kharab ho chuka tha

Shashi apne bedroom me aaya usne apne cupboard me ek secret case khola aur usme rakhi ghadi baahar nikali

Wo ek hire jadi huyi golden Rolex watch thi..

Shashi ke swargiya pitaji 70s ke jamane me America se wo ghadi lekar aaye the aur aajki tareekh me us ghadi ki keemat 5 se 6 crore ke aaspaas thi..

24 caret sone ke dial wali us ghadi me chote chote aneko hire jade huye the aur us ghadi ke liye har saal kuch lakh rupayo ka insurance bhara jata tha.

Shashi ke pitaji Rajendra Khanna jo apne jamane ke mashoor abhineta is ghadi ko special occasions par pehante the unke jane ke baad shashi bhi us ghadi ka istamal bas khas mauko par hi karta tha..

Shashi ne apne hath me us ghadi ko pehna fir se apne aapko aaine me dekha aur premier ke liye nikal gaya

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Time 6:20

Abdul aur Shakib apne footpath ke katte par baithkar bakchodi kar rahe the itne me Shakib ka phone baja.. shakib ne thoda gusse me phone uthaya aur bola.. “ ha ha yaad hai paisa bhejna hai, kar raha hu bandobast ab baar baar phone karne se paisa nahi ayega na.. tum phone rakho karta hu kuch”

Abdul – gussa karke kya hoga be, kuch na kuch intajam karna to padega hi.. chal aaja aaj ek film ki opening hai kismat rahi to ekad hath maar lenge…

Idhar dusri taraf Regal Cinemas the iconic talkies in Mumbai lightings ki roshnai se chamak raha tha, bahar bada sa ‘Divyastra’ ka poster laga hua tha uske aaju baju hero heroine aur villain ke 20-20 foot ke cutouts lage huye the..

Shashi apne cutouts dekh kar kafi khush hua ye sab uske debut film se bhi jyada hai aisa use lagne laga, theatre ke saamne logo ki bhari bheed jami huyi thi, stars ki gaadiyo ke aane pe log waha chillam chot macha rahe the, stars apne fans ke reaction ka has kar swagat kar rahe the..

Shashi ke aate hi use dekhte hi public bekabu hone lagi aur public ko handel karne ko police ko kafi mehnat karni pad rahi thi…

Ander theatre ki lobby me saare stars jame huye the.. reporters ke camera flashes fatafat chamak rahe the sabse mel mulakat hone ke baad ander film ka show shuru hua…

Takreeban aath sadhe aath ke darmayan saare celebrity log baahar nikalne lage…

Reporters celebrities ko film ke baare me sawal puch rahe the jise koi hatho se V ka ishara kar raha tha koi super hit bata raha tha film ko to koi 1000cr ke business ki baat kar raha tha.. koi movie ke treatment ki baat kar raha tha to koi shashi ki acting ki to koi film ki jabardast kahani ki baat kar raha tha, monty ke sath jab shashi baahar aaya tab wo apne aap ki aur apni second innings ki success par kafi khush tha

Thretre ke baahar fans ki tufan bheed thi, fans shashi ke sath selfie khichane ke liye khoshish me jute huye the koi hand shake ki koshish kar rahe the

Apne fans ke reactions dekh kar shashi ko khushi huyi, public ko sambhalna mushkil ko raha tha aur aakhir me police ko protection ke sath shashi ko uski gaadi tak chhodna pada.

Shashi gaadi me baitha aur gaadi Centor Hotel ki or badhne lagi jaha Divyastra film ke producers ne premier ki khusi me ek badi party ka ayojan kiya tha…

Abhi use gaadi me baithe bas 2 minue hi huye the ke shashi ke dhyan me aaya ke uske hath me uski ghadi nahi hai, usne fir se ek baar check kiya aur monty se bola..

“monty bheed me kisi ne to rolex udayi”

“kyaaa!!!” shashi ki baat sunkar monty cheekh pada

Shashi – ha! kisi ne to bheed ka fayda lekar rolex par hath saaf kiya hai

Ek pal ko dono me se koi kuch nahi bola

Monty – sabse pehle chal kar FIR likhwate hai iski..

Lekin shashi ne hath ka ishara karke use rok diya..

Shashi – nahi, is news ko abhi media me uchalna theek nahi hoga, Bollywood me abhi Divyastra ki kafi charcha hai aise me agar rolex chori ki news saamne aa gayi to media focus shift ho jayega, picture ke collection pe asar padega aisa karte hai party me singh sahab se baat karte hai unki police aur politics me kafi pehchan hai wo kuch rasta nikalenge…

Singh sahab bollywood ki ek purani aur jaani mani hasti… unki underworld se lekar police politics sab jagah pehchan thi aur unki baat ko patthar ko lakeer samajhne wale kafi log the.. unki baat me hamesha vajan hota tha..

Wahi dusri tarah abdul aur shakib gardi se baahar aaye aur dur tak chalte huye nikal gaye aur jab wo sure huye ke aaju baju koi nahi hai aur unke koi nahi dekh raha to shakib ne dheere se apni jeb se wo ghadi baahar nikali jise dekh kar un dono ki aankhe chaundhiya gayi..

Shakib – iski maa ki aankh sala kya chiz hai yaar..

Abdul – dikha dikha…. Behanchod.. is se pehle kabhi aisi chiz nahi udayi, iske to lawda mushtak bhai se kam se kam pacchis lenge..

Wahi idhar Centor me pahute sath hi shashi jaldi se singh sahab ke paas pahucha aur unhe side me lekar saari ghanta batayi

Singh – My god.! Rajan babu kafi possessive the is ghadi ke liye aur ho bhi kyu na 70s me kuch 12-13 lakh kharch kar America se laye the.. badi pyari aur mehngi chiz thi aaj dekho to uski keemat croro me jayegi..

Shashi – Singh sahab sawal paiso ka nahi hai wo ghadi mere paas pappaji ki nishani thi, amanat thi hamare sentiments jude hai uske sath

Singh – Arey ha bhai jaanta hu mai aao kuch karte hai iska

Itna bol kar singh sahab shashi ko lekar party me aaye…

Centor hotel ke us hall me party shuru ho chuki thi, party kafi lavishly arrenge ki gayi thi, stage par maujud orchestra kafi madhur sangeet baja raha tha aur south sensation item girl najma adhe adhure kapdo me stage par thirak rahi thi.. party me film industry ke logo ke sath sath media ke log high ranked police officers aur sath hi kuch politicions bhi aaye huye the

Singh sahab shashi ko lekar ek young politicion ke paas aaye ko state ke gruh rajyamantri Patil the.. Singh sahab ne Patil aur shashi ki pehchan karayi

Patil – arey singh sahab inko kaun nahi jaanta hai, inki filme dekh kar to hum bade huye hai.. inke dialogues to hame aaj bhi yaad hai.. mere to baba bhi inke pitaji ke bahut bade fan the..

Baaato ke darmiyan singh sahab ne shashi ke sath huyi ghanta Patil sahab ke kano par dali aur request ki ke is mamle me confidentiality bahut jaruri hai kyuki ye news media me leak ho gayi to media focus shift ho jayega aur iska film ke collection pe asar padega

Singh sahab ki baat ki gambhirta samajhte huye Patil ne jald hi varishth police adhikariyo se charcha ki

‘bade logo ki baat ki kuch aur hoti hain a unke sab kaam jaldi ho jate hai.’

Jaldi jaldi is mamle me surta hilne lage aur agle 15 minute me hi Inspector Chandrakant Deshpande centor hotel me maujud the.

Centor hotel me hi FIR likhi gayi aur FIR ki ek copy wahi shashi ko di gayi

Shashi ne “thanks” kehte huye jab Inspector Deshpande se hath milaya to itne bade star se hath milane ke baad Deshpande to saatve aasman par tha

“sir, jald hi aapse dobara mulakat hogi” Deshpande ne kaha aur waha se nikal gaya

Wahi dusri taraf abdul aur shakib mushtak bhai ke ghar ka darwaja khatkhatane lage us waqt raat ke kuch 10 baj rahe the

Mushtak ne “itni raat ko kaun aaya hai BC” bolte huye darwaja khola

“arey abhi raat kaha huyi hai abhi to 10 hi Baje hai mushtak bhai” Shakib ne kaha

Mushtak – wo baat nahi hai subah 4 baje Bangkok nikalneka hai to jaldi soya tha, acha bolo kya kaam hai

shakib- Bhai ek chiz uda ke laye hai aap dekhoge to hairan reh jaoge

aur ye bol ke shakib me wo ghadi mushtak ke samne rakhi

Rolex ko dekh ke mushtak ki aankhe fail gayi lekin wo bhi banda tha pakka businessman usne apne chenre se kuch mehsus nahi hone diya

ghadi ko hath me pakadte huye mushtak bola

Mushtak – Ulhasnagar se khadiri kya?

Abdul – kya baat karte ho Bhai kisi bade aadmi ke hath se udayi hai..

Mushtak – kahi se bhi udayi ho lekin hai duplicate

Mustak man hi man muskuraya aur socha ke “chuho ne hira churaya hai ab na to ye use nigal sakte hai na pehan sakte hai”

Abdul – Acha chhodo ye batao kitne me rakh lenge?

Mushtak ne thoda socha thodi der ruka aur fir bola

Mushtak – jyada se jyada 10 isse ek rupaya jasti nahi.

Shakib – kya mushtak bhai hum to soch ke aaye the ke kam se kam pacchis lenge aur aap 10 me vata rahe apne ko.

Mushtak – dekh chokre ye chiz mai aage bech ke paisa kamani ke waste nahi le raha hu chiz pasand aayi theek lagi to kabi kabar khas mauke pe pehan ke raub jhadne ke liye le raha hu theek lagta hai to chhod jao nahi to khuda hafiz mereko jaldi hai maine bola na subah me Bangkok nikalneka hai

Ab shakib aur abdul karte bhi to kya aur aakhir me thoda baat chit karke ghadi ka sauda 15 hajar me done hua usme bhi mushtak me tang adayi ke abhi 10 le jao bache huye 5 bangkok se aake de dunga

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Raat ke takreeban 10.30 baj rahe the inspector Chandrakant Deshpande ne apne do vishwasapatra sehkarmiyo ko bulaya

Deshpande – sub inspector kadam aur mohile mai tumko ye case de raha hu is case ke bare me ek shabd bhi baahar leak nahi hona chahiye, patil sahab ki sakht hidayat hai isiliye jab tak chori ka maal pakda nahi jata ye baat bahar nahi jayegi ye tumhari jimmedari, apne sare khabriyo ko kaam pe lagao sare sabut jama karo aropi jaha kahi bhi ho dhar dabocho bhosdiwale ko

Mohile – sir, ye kaam bhuse ke dher me rai ka dana dhundhne jaisa hai..

Deshpande – Mohile hum log Mumbai police hai ye baat nahi bhulne ka. 50 saal pehle aisi hi ek case isi Mumbai me huya tha tab hero rajkumar ki aisi hi ek mehngi ghadi choro ne gayab ki thi aur inspector Prakash Godse ne 12 ghanto me choro ko dhar dabocha tha aaj wapis waisa hi kuch case aaya hai dikha do ke hum bhi kuch kam nahi

Deshpande ki baat sunkar kadam aur mohile kadak salute karte huye “yes sir” bole..

Mohile aur kadam ki baat sahi thi kaam sach me bhuse ke dher me raai dhundhne jaisa tha lekin unhone ye case accept kiya

**

Raat ke 11 baj rahe the

Alag alag ilako ke khabriyo ko instructions diye gaye the aur jaldi se report karne bola gaya tha

Sub inspector kadam ne un sare reporters ko phone kiya jinhone premire cover kiya tha aur unse video footage bula liye, news paper ke photographers ko phone karke photo snaps bula liye gaye aur ek ek video photo dekhne ki shuruwat huyi..

Idhar party khatam karke Shashi ghar par aa chuka tha tab tak raat ke 11.30 baj rahe the

Rolex chori ho gayi hai ye bat Delhi me maa saheb ko bata de aisa khayal shashi ke man me aaya lekin fir usne socha ke waise bhi piche 5-6 saalo me maa saheb se usse sare naate tod hi liye hai to ab bat karke kya fayda
Apni life se ab unka koi lena dena nahi hai, ‘ye Shashi khanna star hai star use kisi ki jarurat nahi hai’ ye soch ke shashi ne maa sahab ka khayal apne dimag se nikal diya aur kuch sochne laga

Achanak uski aankho me chamak aa gayi aur dimag me ek idea ne janm liya
Shashi jaldi jaldi apne bangle ke CCTV control room me aaya aur usne uski aur Lucky lagnde ki meeting ki sari footage delete kar di aur fir apne dimag me aage ke plan ko anjam dene ka sochne laga, shashi apne drawing room me bane bar me aaya aur usne apne liye ek peg banaya

"Cheers shashi for second innings and new plan"
**

Raat ke kuch 3 baj rahe honge itne me Deshpande ke phone par kadam ka call aaya

Kadam – sir, kuch photos aur video me ghadi chori hoti huyi dikh rahi hai lekin gardi ki wajah se chor ka chehra saaf nahi dikh pa raha hai
Deshpande – par chehra dikh to Raha hai na? Wo chehra apne pantaro ko dikhao wo barabar bata denge, good job kadam subah dekhte hai ab isko..

**
Raat ke teen baj rahe hai mushtak airport pe check in kar raha hai, kahi apan Rolex ke sath pakde to nahi jayenge iska darr usme man me baitha hua hai uske chehre par chinta ki lakire umti huyi hai,
Usne screening machine par Rolex kuch is tarah se rakhi ke uske dial na dikhe sirf belt dikhe
Rolex rakha hua tray dheere dheere screening machine me aage sarak raha hai sath hi mushtak ke dil ki dhadkan bhi badhi hui hai aur achanak machine ruk gai....

Police ne ek bag uthayi aur pucha "ye kiski bag hai"

Mushtak ki darr se halat kharab thi, usne us bag ko dekha to wo uski bag nahi thi mushtak ne rahat ki saas li aur apni bag utha kar waha se nikal gaya, mushtak sahi salamat Rolex ke sath flight me aakar baith gaya tha,

Idhar raat ke 3 baj rahe hai aur shakib ko neend nahi aa rahi thi usne apna phone nikala aur usme khicha hua us Rolex ka photo khol ka dekhne laga, us photo ko dekhte huye usne abdul ko jagaya

Shakib – Abe abdul mereko lagta hai us mushtak me apun ko fasaya hai bc apan ne lakho ki chiz kaudiyo me bech di

Abdul – Abe so ja yaar sabere dekhte hai isko

Shakib – sabere kya fayda be chidiya to Bangkok ud gayi

Abdul – to wapis bhi to ayegi kal kisi showroom me Jake iska bhav puch ayenge fir mushtak ke lode lagayenge

Fir bhi Shakib ki aankho se neend koso dur thi, wo raat bhar karwate badalta raha

Idhar agli subah Inspector Deshpande ne sub inspector kadam ke dikhaye sabhi photos videos dekh kar unke kaam ki tarif ki

Deshpande – apne punters ko bata diya hai na?

Kadam – ha sir aur chori ka maal kharidane wale sabhi ko bhi warn kar diya hai

Deshpande – good but maintain the secracy

Kadam – ofcourse

Deshpande – mohile kabhi kisi star ka ghar dekha hai kya,? Ha kadam?

Mohile – sir waisa kabhi mauka hi nahi mila

Kadam – mai to aisa case hi pehle baar handel kar raha

Deshpande – to chalo fir aaj tumko superstar Shashi Khanna ke ghar coffee pilata hu.. chalo..

Inspector Deshpande jab subah kadam aur mobile ke sath shashi ke ghar pahuche tab wo neend se jaga bhi nahi tha lekin jaise hi shashi ko monty me inspector ke aane ki khabar di to wo jhat se uth kar drawing room me aaya thodi formal hi hello ke baad inspector deshpande ne shashi ko kal raat ke sare video aur photos dikhaye aur itne me hi ek sunder waitress un sab ke liye coffee ki tray lekar aayi

Deshpande – sir , kya aap in ladko ki shinakht kar payenge?

Shashi – mushkil hai, bheed bahut thi mai un logo ka chehra theek se nahi dekh paya warna wahi pe daboch na leta

Deshpande – koi baat nahi hum koshish me lage hai jald hi um haramiyo ko maal ke sath pakad lenge

Fir un logo ne apni coffee khatam ki aur jane hi wale the ke shashi deshpande se bola

Shashi – Inspector sahab agar aapko aitraaz na ho to kya ye video aur photos mai rakh sakta hu?

Deshpande – jaroor

Aur unlogo ke jate hi shashi monty se bola

Shashi – apne lawyer ko jaldi se bula lo kyuki 24 ghante ke ander hi hame Rolex ka insurance claim karna hai jyada time nahi waste karna

Subah ke is waqt 10 baj rahe the

Shakib ne post office se apne gaon me bihar me 2000 ka money order Kiya aur bahar nikal kar abdul se bola

Shakib – chal Andheri me kisi bade ghadi ke showroom me jake maal ki kimat pata karte hai

Abdul – ha lekin waha nahi jana hai jaha jyada bheed ho logo ko Shaq nahi hona chahiye apne pe

Kuch samay baad wo ek ‘Faithful Ticker’ naam ke ek ghadiyo ke showroom ke saamne pahuche, wo ek parsi aadmi ka showroom tha aur counter par ek umradaraj parsi malak baitha hua tha aur shop me bas 1-2 customers hi the

Shakib counter pe baithe us parsi aadmi jiska naam Jaal Daruwala tha uske paas pahucha aur apna mobile nikal kar use Rolex ki apne phone me khichi huyi photo dikhayi aur pucha

Shakib – ye ghadi ki keemat kya hogi?

Ghadi ki photo dekh kar us Jaal me pehle to un dono chapriyo ko dekha aur fir shaki najro se shakib se pucha

Jaal – tereko ye kharidne ki hai be bechne ki?

Shakib – nahi aise hi jankari ke liye puch raha hu

Jaal – kya karega jaankari lekar lakho croro ki hoti hai ye

Shakib – lakho croro ki ?

Jaal – ha babu ha, lakho croro ki ab bata kya karna hai tereko isse

Budhe ki baat sun ke Shakib chap chapaya aur wo dono fat se us dukan se bahar nikle , unhe jata dekh kar wo parsi aadmi apne naukar se bola

Jaal - Ramesh mereku lagta hai ye dono kahi hath maar ke aaye hai

Agle 15-20 minute wo aadmi wahi kuch sochta raha aur fir usne Andheri East police station me phone laga diya
Idhar Showroom se nikalte hi shakib abdul se bola

Shakib – dekha maine bola tha na sala mushtak chuna laga gaya apun ko harami ne lakho ki chiz bas 15 me kharidi. aane de harami ko

Abdul – ab wo 4-5 din baad hi ayega

Shakib – lekin ayega to sahi

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Idhar monty hushi khusi shashi ke paas aaya

“congratulations boss, good news hai aapki film ne opening day me 40cr ka aakda paar kiya hai aur trade pandito ka kehna hai ke weekend tak film 200cr cross kar jayegi..”

Shashi – that’s a very good news, pata hai monty picture sign karte time hi mujhe lag raha tha ke ye south ka director hai to south style film banayega lekin jab uski taking aur treatment dekhi to mujhe laga hi tha ke ye kuch hatke bana raha hai, acha mera schedule kya hai??

Monty – aaj 2 baje se filmcity me shift hai.. kal aur parso hydrabaad me ramoji film city me shoot hai fir 1 din ka brake hai aur uske baad aap 15 dino ke liye out of india ja rahe hai shoot ke liye XF productions ke sath..

Itne me hi waha shashi ka wakeel Aakash khurana aaya

Shashi – aaiye khurana sahab dekhiye mai aaj ke din Mumbai me hu fir do din hydrabad uske baad 1 din yaha rahunga aur baad me 15 din abroad, mere kehne ka matlab ye hai ke insurance ke jo jo bhi documents aapne bataye the wo sab tayar hai aap dekh lijiye aur ye mamle jaldi niptaiye

Khurana ne shashi ke bataye sare papers check kiya aur kuch forms par shashi ke signature liye

Khurana – aisa hai shashi sir, claim to aaj hi file ho jayega lekin aage ki karyawahi tab hi hogi jab police case close karegi

Shashi – theek hai lekin insurance walo ko boliyega ke is news ko jyada uchale nahi

Fir khurana aur monty waha se chale gaye jiske baad shashi ne ek cigarette jalayi aur aage ke plan ke bare me sochne laga

Idhar Andheri east police station ka phone baja aur sub inspector tawde ne phone uthaya

“hello main Faithfull Ticker watch showroom se Jaal Daruwala bol raha hu, aapke paas kisi rolex ghadi ke chori ki complaint aayi hai kya? Abhi abhi do tapori mere showroom me wo dikhane aaye the..”

Tawde – nahi aisi koi complaint hamare yaha darj nahi huyi..

“acha, mamla lakho croro ka lagta hai sahab aap aapke baki police thano me khabar kar de mere CCTV me un dono ke photo hai jab bhi jarurat ho le jaiye.”

Tawde – theek theek

Sub inspector ne socha ke kaha sabko phone kare to usme ek message type kiya aur whatsapp par bheja jisme likha tha :Andheri east police station me Faithful Ticker naam ke ghadi ke showroom se phone aaya tha unke paas 2 tapori mehngi ghadi ke bare me puchtach kar rahe the dukandar ko shak hai ke unhone wo ghadi churayi hai agar aapke paas aise kisi ghadi ki chori ki report aayi ho to us dukandaar se sampark kare:

Sath me dukan ka address aur number diya hua tha

Ye whatsapp message apne sub inspector kadam tak bhi pahuch gaya aur unhone jhat se diye gaye number par phone kiya aur Andheri east ki taraf ko njikal liye

Us showroom se mile video footage ko Divyastra ke premire ki raat reporters se liye gaye photos aur videos se mila kar dekhe aur sub inspector sure ho gaye ke ye dono wahi hai jinhone shashi ki rolex udayi hai aur bagair ek pal gawaye unhone apne punters ko wo photo bhej diye

Raat ke 9 baj rahe the.. rolex ko chori huye lagbhag 24 ghante beet chuke the aur hath me sirf do choro ke photo aaye the

Kadam ne insector Deshpande ko dinbhar ka report bataya aur thoda naraji ke sur me bole “sir we are sorry hum pichla record nahi tod paye”

Deshpande – never mind boys, wo time alag tha aur us jamane me aur aajke timer me jamin aasman ka fark hai us time ki Mumbai ki loksankhya aur aajki Mumbai me bahut fark hai, public to police ratio alag hai nothing is comparable so don’t take it seriously apna kaam tumne sahi kiya hai

Itne me kadam ka phone baja, dusri taraf se unka khabri bol raha tha “saab wo dono ladke abi Andheri west ke urwashi dance bar me aaye hai aap jaldi aao to pakad sakte unko”

Aur bagair ek pal gawaye kadam aur mohile Andheri west ki taraf nikal pade

Urvashi dance bar me pahuchte pahuchte kadam ko 10.15 baj gaye the, kadam aur mohile dance bar me ghus ke ek kona pakad ke baith gaye

Dance bar me 7-8 ladkiya filmi gano par apni kamar hila rahi thi, shaukeen log unhe apne paas bulate apne se chipakne ke liyue unke uppar paise uda rahe the

Kadam ne make sure kiya ke waha wo dono chor maujud ho aur bahar nikal kar unke aane ka wait karne lage, mohile ne ek waiter ko pakad ke un dono ko baahar bhejne bola

Jaise hi wo dono baahar aaye unpar najkar rakhi police party ne dhawa bol diya thodi jhatpat huyi lekin police ne un dono ko pakad liya tha aur thane me do dande padte hi shakib aur abdul me sab ugalna shuru kar diya aur ghadi ko mushtak ko bheche jane ki baat bata di.

Jab sub inspectoer kadam un dono ko leke mushtak ke ghar par pahuche to raat ke 11.30 baj rahe the

Mushtak Bangkok gaya hai ye unhe pata tha lekin use Bangkok me dhundhe kaha ye sabse badi samasya thi

Kadam ne sari baat inspector Deshpande ko batayi

Deshpande – kadam mai tumhari Bangkok jane ki vyavastha karta hu tum waha subah subah pahuchoge mushtak ki biwi ko uthake thane lao lady police sath rakho ye mushtak ghar me jarur phone karega to jaise hi uska thikana pata chalega mai tumko bata dunga

Kadam – but sir, dusre desh me use kaise pakdenge,? law?

Deshpande – arey wo businessman hai terrorist nahi uski biwi police custody me hai ye sunte hi wo chup chap ayega tumhare sath to uski fikra mat karo

Agli subah Thailand ke time ke hisab se 8 baje kadam Bangkok ke swarnabhoomi airport par land kiye waise hi unhe deshpande ka whatsapp call aaya ke mushtak ki biwi ne uske sare details bata diye hai aur wo unke wahtsapp par unhe mil jayenge unka booking usi hotel me tha jaha mushtak ruka hua tha aur clear order the ke mushtak ko pakdo aur Mumbai leke aao

Hotel Royal Palace Thailand

Mushtak jaha ruka tha wo jyada bada hotel nahi tha lekin acha tha kadam ne checkin kiya aur fresh hokar reception par aaye

Counter par ke thai girl ne pucha “may I help you?”

Kadam – may I know about my friend mushtak, which room is he staying?

Thai girl – sorry sir we can’t disclose any information about our esteemed customer

Itme me Deshpande ka unhe whatsapp call aaya

Deshpande – kadam sham tak aaram karo information hai ke mushtak fuket gaya hai sham tak ayega but be aleart

Kadam – ok sir

Sham ke 6 baje se kadam mushtak ke liye fielding laga ke baithe the aur ek pal ko unki najar hati hogi ke unhone dekha ke mushtak taxi pakad ke kahi tobhi ja raha hai kadam ne bagair deri kiye dusri taxi pakdi aur uske piche chale gaye

Kuch 40 minute baad mushtak ek night club me ghusa uske piche piche kadam bhi ander gaye, club me beechobech ek stage bana hua tha aur uske aaju baju baithne ki vyavastha ki gayi thi

Wo ek strip club tha jo logo se khacha khach bhara hua tha, khubsurat thai ladkiya logo ki baaho me baith kar unhe sharab ke ghoot pila rahi thi stage par live performance shuru tha jaha koi noorjaha naam ki dancer perform kar rahi thi..

Kareeb 3 ghante baad mushtak noorjaha ke sath apne hotel wapis aane ke liye nikla, kadam bhi uske piche hi the

Mushtak noorjaha ko lekar apne room me gaya aur kuch 15-20 minute baad kadam ne mushtak ke room par knock kiya

“behanchod is waqt kaun hai” aisa bolte huye mushtak ne darwaja khola

Kadam – Mumbai police.. mushtak .. jitna tu aaram se cooperate karega bhabhiji ko utni takleef kam hogi

Aisa bolte huye kadam ne use uski biwi ka behind the bar photo dikhaya

Okay okay bolte huye mushtak thoda piche hata aur ander room me aakar sofe par baith gaya wahi uske room me noorjaha bed par leti thi, ya yu kahe ke leta tha bc kya bole sala usko, uske upar to tarbooj lage huye the par niche kela bhi latak raha tha jiske dekh ke kadam ne apne par pe hath maar liya aur socha ke betichod kya kya shauk hote hai logo ke..

Kadam ne sahi time par mushtak ko pakad litya tha wo aaj raat ko wo rolex ghadi noorjaha ko present karne wala tha aur agar wo ghadi noorjaha ke hath lag jati to fir uska milna mushkil tha.

Mushtak ko chori ke maal ke sath Mumbai laya gaya aur inspector Deshpande ne shashi ko bula liya aur shashi apne wakeel khurana ke sath waha pahuch gaya.

Police ne ghadi dhundh li hai ye pata chalte hi insurance company ne raahat ki saas li kyuki us ghadi ka inshurance 5 crore ka tha aur agar wo na milti to 5 cr dene padte isiliye insurance company ka ek aadmi bhi waha aaya

Inspector Deshpande ghadi original hai ye dekhne ke liye shashi ko di

Shashi ne us ghadi ko parakh kar dekha, fir uska wajan feel kiya fir use hath par bandh kar dekha do char baar hila kar dekha aur fir ek baar gaur se dekhne ke baad use Deshpande ko wapis dete huye bola

Shashi – no its not mine, inspector ye meri rolex nahi hai

Kadam ko toi bas chakkar aane baki the

Unhone 60 ghante bhukh pyas bhul kar us ghadi ko dhundha tha aur ye wo ghadi hi nahi bc?

Deshpande – what do you mean??

Shashi – I mean its duiplicate, meri rolex me asli hire jade huye hai 24 caret sone ka dial hai, aap kisi johri ko yaha bulaiye aur tasalli kar lijiye

Dusra option bhi nahi tha fir diamond market se ek parkhi johri ko bulaya gaya usne 20-25 minute bariki se dekhne ke baad kaha ke ye sadhe american diamond hai original diamond nahi hai aur dial bhi sirf gold plated hai original gold nahi



Inspector Deshpande ne photos videos me jo ghadi hai wo yahi hai kya ye dobara dekha jo hubehub match ho raha tha lekin shashi ke anusar ye uski ghadi nahi thi

Ye ek nayi bhasad thi

Shashi ke statement se insurance company ko to dhakka laga hi sath hi is case ka pura focus ab mushtak par shift ho gaya

Deshpande apni jagah se uthe aur kadam ko side me lekar unhone phone karke Faithfull Ticker ke parsi malik ko bulwa liya

Deshpande – kadam ye to ekdum shocking news hai tumko kya lagta hai?

Kadam – sir agar focus mushtak par shift hua hai tab bhi usne 48 ghanto me maan lo ke rolex badal bhi di to tab bhi itni hubehub rolex milna mushkil hai

Deshpande – kadam chor bajar me dhanda karne wale kuch bhi kar sakte hai, khair apan ne apna kaam theek kiya sirf 60 ghanto me rolex hasil ki wo bhi abroad jakar this is proud thing for mumbai police ab bas us daruwala se pata chale ye kya gadbad hai aur fir case close kar denge.

Kadam – sir par original rolex mile bagair case kaise band karenge ?

Deshpande – wo hamara problem nahi hai ab ghadi ke owner aur insurance walo ko decide karne do mushtak ke khilaf court me kaun ladega

Jab Faithful Ticker ka malik Jaal Daruwala police station me aaya aur usne us ghadi ko parakh ne ke baad bata diya ke wo ek duplicate rolex hai

Deshpande – lekin jya itni perfect duplicate copy ho sakti hai?

Daruwala – ho sakti hai nahi haesha banayi gayi hai, bilkul shuru se yani 50-60 saalo se rolex ki duplicate copy banti gayi.. dekhiye aisi ghadiya hatho se banayi jaati thi, they used to make it manually, ye sab hire ka kaam kisi artist ki tarah karna padta hai, hamare Ulhasnagar me bhi kitni chizo ki duplicate banayi jati hai lekin khair ye Ulhasnagar walo ka kaam nahi hai aisi duplicate usi desh me banti hai jaha original banti hai ab kuch log shaukiya taur par original ghadi kharidte the to kuch chori ke darr se duplicate.

Us aadmi ki bat sunkar sab ko samajh aa gaya tha ke ye bhi ho sakta hai

Aakhir me Deshpande bole

Deshpande – gentalman humne apni jaan laga kar sirf 60 ghanto me aropi ko pakad liya hai, ab wo chiz original hai ya duplicate ye decide karna hamara kaam nahi hai isiliye Mr. Shashi Khanna mai ye ghadi aapko saup kar case band karna chahta hu

Shashi – lekin inspector sahab jab ye rolex meri hai hi nahi to mai ise kaise lu? Aapko case band karna hai to kijiye lekin report me likhiye ke original rolex nahi mili isiliye case band ho raha hai.

Insurance agent – nahi aa paisa nahi kar sakte.

Shashi – kyu Bhai? Dekho hum aur mere pitaji ke jamane se inska insurane aapki company se kara rahe hai, aajtak lakho ki rakam aapko mili hai aur aaj claim ki bari aayi to aap piche nahi hat sakte

Shashi ka para chadhta dekh Shashi ko lekar uska wakeel baju me aaya aur uske kaam me kuch kaha jisse sun shashi me ha me garden hilayi

Khurana – inspector sahab aapka aur aapki team ka bahut bahut shukriya, aap aaj ki jo bhi stithi hai uspar report bana dijiye wo hame manjur hai baki hum aur insurance wale apni ladayi court me ladenge

Inspector Deshpande ne report banayi aur us report par shashi, hire parakhne wala johri, watch expert Daruwala ki signature li chori ka maal aur report seal ki aur recoed room me bhej di aur report ki copy lekar shashi aur uska wakeel bahar aa gaye..

Us raat shashi XF productions ki film ke liye 15 dino ke liye bharat se baahar jane wala tha aur shooting khatam hone ke baad wo 2-3 din wahi aaram karke bharat me wapis aane wala tha

Raat 8 baje khurana case ki file lekar aaye aur uska draft shashi ko padh kar sunaya aur shashi ne un papers par sign kiya aur pucha

Shashi – wakeel sahab aapko kitni guarantee hai ke hum ye case jheet jayenge?

Khurana – 200%

Jispar shashi muskura diya

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Malaysia ke kuala lampur airport par jab shashi utra tab shaam ke 7 baj rahe the.. malaysia me baithe underworld don ‘Bhai’ ko birthday wish karne ke liye shashi chupke se yaha aaya tha aur Bhai se milke jald hi film shooting ke liye euope me Austria nikalne wala tha

Airport se bahar aate hi Bhai ne bheji huyi black Mercedes par uski najar padi, shashi jaise hi car me baitha ander baithe bodyguard ne uska phone mang liya, shashi me band mobile aur dono sim card use de diya jispar wo hasa aur “very good” bola

Shashi – mai jab bhi baahar jata hu to plane me baithne se pehle hi sim card phone se nikaal deta hu aur phone band kar deta hu tab tak jab tak mai destination na pahuch jau

Bodyguard – good practice, pata nahi chalna chahiye ke admi kaha hai

Bhai ke aalisham flat par jab shashi pahucha to raat ke 9 baj rahe the Bhai malayaia me underground hokar rehta tha isiliye party wagaira nahi karta tha ya ki bhi to jyada ho halla nahi karta tha aur 9 baje tak party khatam karni padti thi jisse wo logo ki najar me na aaye

Shashi Bhai se jakar mila aur uske pair chuye fir uske hath ko chuma aur bola “happy birthday BHAI aap 100 saal jiye sur tandrust rahe aur aapka hath hamare sar par rahe”

Shashi ki baat me Bhai hasa aur bola

Bhai – kayko jine ka re itne din, saala paisa hai power hai lekin mu chipake rehna padta hai, acha shashi tera janmdin ka taufa mil gaya, mai bahut khcsh hua aur ander se rona bhi aaya

Wahi shashi confuse tha ke apan se isko kaunsa gift bhej diya

Shashi – Bhai mai kuch samjha nahi

itne me Bhai se apne coat ki jeb se rolex nikal kar shashi ko di aur Bhavuk hoke bola

Bhai – Shashi ye bade saab ki nishani hai, mere dil me raj saab ki alag jaga hai mai unki barabari nai kar sakta ye tohfa bhej ke tune meri ijjat badhayi hai lekin iska hakdar main nai tu hai

Itna bolke Bhai ne wo ghadi shashi ke hath par bandh di..

(confused ke rolex waha kaise pahuchi?? Aao flashback me chale)

Is waqt ghadi me shaam ke 6 baj rahe the

Bollywood Super star Shashi Khanna apni nayi film Divyastra ke premier ke liye tayar ho raha tha itne me hi monty, uska secratery aaya aur use bola “boss gate par Lucky Langda aaya hai… aapse milna chahta hai..?”

Lucky ka naam sunte hi Shashi ke mathe par shikan aa gayi.. apne career ki shuruwat me films me lead role paane ke liye shashi ne underworld ke sath hath milaya tha aur ab uska wo underworld connection uska picha nahi chhod raha tha.. aaj Lucky langde jaise chote mote gunde malaysia me baithe ‘Bhai’ ke liye Mumbai ka kaam sambhal rahe the aur hamesha logo ke kaam me taang adate rehte the

“tu theatre par pahuch mai use niptake aata hu” shashi ne kaha

“ok boss” aur itna bol ke monty waha se chala gaya

Ander ghuste hi “kaisa hai actor” bol ke Lucky langda shashi ke gale lag gaya…

Apne chehre par ek jhuthi muskan late huye shashi ne use apne aap se alag kiya..

Lucky – actor apun agle hafte Bhai se milne malaysia nikal raha hai mai suna tera naya picture aa raha to socha tumko jate jate naya picture ke vaste all the best bol du iske vaste aaya main

Shashi – thank you, Bhai ko mera namaste kehna mai bhi aane wala bhi Bhai se milne agle hafte

Samne hi table par ek bahut sunder box rakha hua tha , Lucky langde ne us box ko khola aur uske ander rakhi rolex ko dekhte hi bola

Lucky – wow, Bhai ke waste janam din ka mast tohfa hai ye Bhai bahut khush hoyga tumhara ye tohfa dekh ke

Shashi ko kya bole samajh nahi aa raha tha, ha bole to itni mehngi antique ghadi hath se jayegi aur na bola to ye sala tapori kuch ulta siddha bol ke Bhai ke kaan bhar sakta tha shashi na chahte huye bhi chup raha aur langda rolex leke chala gaya

Lucky langda waha se gaya tab tak shashi ka mood kafi kharab ho chuka tha

Shashi apne bedroom me aaya usne apne cupboard me ek secret case khola aur usme rakhi ghadi baahar nikali

Wo ek hire jadi huyi golden Rolex watch thi..

Par wo duplicate rolex thi.

Shashi ke pitaji Rajenndra Khanna ne kuch saalo pehle ye duplicate ghadi khas Switzerland ke ek karigar se banwayi thi aur wo itna hubehub tha ke sirf jaakaar aadmi hi samajh sakta tha, is ghadi ka upyog sirf Raj sahab emergency me karte the aur original Rolex hamesha bank locker me rehti thi jis din use pehanna ho use bank locker se laya jata tha aur duplicate rolex ghar me cupboard ke safe me rehti thi..

XF films ke untitled movie ka Austria schedule khatam karke shashi oman ke prince se milne muscat pahucha

Divyastra film milne ke pehle shashi ka career down chal raha tha. Jo bhi paisa tha wo sab real estate aur shares me laga hua tha paiso ki tangi thi isiliye usne Saudi ke ek aadmi ke through Rolex ka sauda tay kiya tha itni badi kimat ki antique ghadi lene ki kshamata kisi shaikh me hi thi aur 15 din pehle ek deal muscat ke prince ke sath fix huyi thi.

10 lakh doller mauritius me transfer karne ke baad shashi watch handover karega aisa decide hua lekin jab langda ghadi lekar gaya tab is saude ka kya kare ye shashi ke samne sawal tha, Bhai ke hath se ghadi nikalne yani bhuke sher ke muh se maas chin ne jaisa tha isiliye rolex chori huyi tab shashi ko itna dukh nahi hua par Khushi huyi kyuki kam se kam 5 crore ki insurance ki rakam to confirm use milne wali thi, aur ab yaha to andhe ne ek aankh chahi thi do mil gayi, shashi ne watch handover ki, shahi daawat ka maja liya aur apne hotel par janeke liye nikla.

Wo hotel par pahucha hi tha ke khurana ka call aa gaya

Khurana – congratulations shashi insurance company ne hamara rolex claim pass kar diya hai

Shashi – badhai to aapko deni chahiye khurana sahab kaise kar liya aapne ye.?

Khurana – wo sab India aane ke baad baat karenge

Shashi- ok bye

Shashi ne aasman ki taraf dekha aur bola

“thank you pappa, aap bade dur ki sochte the lekin mai bhi aap hi ka beta hu aur mai bhi kam nahi hu dekha kaise rolex ka double cross karke paisa banaya na..!


Khatam.. ab jao reviw do.
Jabardasttt Kahani thi. Maza aagaya padh ke.

Shashi khanna ki kismat achhi thi isiliye usse uski woh Rolex mil gayi jiska sauda usne kiya tha. Aur nakli waale ka 5 crore bhi mil gaya. Matlab chit bhi uska raha aur pat bhi uska hi raha. Shashi khanna ne Insurance company ke saath sahi mein hi double cross kardiya. Becharo ko 5 crore ka claim approve karna padha.

Bahot achhi kahani thi. Maza aaya padh ke
 

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Jabardasttt Kahani thi. Maza aagaya padh ke.

Shashi khanna ki kismat achhi thi isiliye usse uski woh Rolex mil gayi jiska sauda usne kiya tha. Aur nakli waale ka 5 crore bhi mil gaya. Matlab chit bhi uska raha aur pat bhi uska hi raha. Shashi khanna ne Insurance company ke saath sahi mein hi double cross kardiya. Becharo ko 5 crore ka claim approve karna padha.

Bahot achhi kahani thi. Maza aaya padh ke
Well, Thank you so much for your valuable review my friend.
 

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Story: Lost In Island Paradise
Writer: HusnKiMallika
Review:
Good story Mallika ji...its a slow burner...but when things gets hot..it really takes off!!
You described Rohit's hesitation with Anjali in the begining very well which is very correct.....but being alone on island for a very long time has its "consequences" :)
Good read though. Only issue i see..its a bit long...could have reduced it and make it more concise. Never mind...excellent try!!
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Let Us Sleep.. 😩


(Inspired by true events)

Location :- Mehmano se khachakhach bhara hua ek ghar.

Shaadi me aaye dahej.. sorry.. gifts se bhara hua ek tempo ghar ke niche parking me safe jagah par khali karke thake haare apne dono potte jaise taise seedhiya chadh kar ghar me aaye..

Unke thobde dekh ke koi bhi bata sakta tha ke tempo ke aalsi aur chatur driver ne dahej.. sorry gift me aaye almari, palang, dining table, sofa aur bhi bahut kuch in dono namuno ke hatho khali karwaya tha aur in dono ne bhi uski har baat maan ke sara saaman tempo se utara tha lekin jab sab kaam ho chuka tab inke dhyan me aaya ke apan bc driver ka kaam kar rahe the fir kya usse raat me jhagad kar adhe paise use pakda kar use waha se bhaga diya..

Dono upar chadhe aur apne paas ki chabi se ghar ka darwaja khol kar ander ghuse, dono ki aankhe adhi band thi aur usi haalat me dono bewdo mafik jhulte huye ghar ke hall me pahuche,

Waise to ghar bada tha 3BHK tha lekin mehman hi itne aaye huye the ke sone ke liye jagah kam pad rahi thi,

Ek minute ek minute in dono ke naam batana to mai bhul hi gaya, to ye dono bhai the, mausere bhai jo bada tha uska ye ghar tha aur usi ke bade bhai ki aaj shadi thi, iska naam, Jitu aur jo dusra tha wo isse 1 saal chota Animesh jo is shadi ke chalte pichle mahine bhar se yahi jama hua tha, is pariwaar me inhi dono namuno ki aapas jyada banti thi aur aaj bhi marriage hall se sabse aakhir me yahi aaye the

Is waqt ghadi ka chota kata 12 pe aur bada kata 1 pe tha.

Ghar me ghuste ghuste hi Jitu ka pair kisi chiz se takraya aur wo girne hi wala tha ke Animesh ne use pakad liya aur sidha khada kiya..

"Abe bc papa ne kya ghar me speed breaker bana diye hai kya ek din me." Jitu ne aankhe malte huye mathe par bal lakar Animesh se pucha

"Nahi be, uncle speed breaker kyu banane lage wo bhi ghar me, ye kuch alag jhol hai" Animesh ne apni adhi band aankhe puri kholte huye kaha

"Ha be speed breaker to kadak hota hai ye kuch naram naram tha bc " Jitu ne andhere me aankh malke animesh ko dekhte huye kaha

“wahi to bhai, ruk main dekhta hu” animesh ne Jitu se baat karte huye niche jhuk ke Jitu ke aas paas ki chiz tatolte huye kaha

“abe anya mila kya be bina cement ka speedbreaker ?”

“bhai ye kuch alag hi locha hai be” animesh ne chauk ke Jitu se kaha

“ruk light lagata hu main bc pata to chale kya hai ghar me” Jitu ne animesh se baat karte huye andhere me switchboard dhundhna shuru kiya aur pehla button dabaya

“iski maa ki aankh!!” Jitu ke button dabate hi dim light wala bulb jal gaya jisse pure hall me halki peeli roshni fail gayi aur usi light ki roshni me Jitu ne jo dekha use dekh ke uske muh ke ye shabd nikle..

“bhai kya hu….” Animesh Jitu ne shirt ko pakad ke uth hi raha tha ke samne ka najara dekh ke wo bhi shock ho gaya aur uski awaj hi na nikli

“abe yaha to dadar station se bhi jyada gardi hai bc! mere bapu ne aur tere mausaji ne kya ghar me dharamshala khol li hai kya” saamne akkhe hall me bhar bhar ke pakki neend me soye huye mehmano ko dekhte huye Jitu ne animesh ko dekha..

Jitu ka pair uske dur ke fufaji se takraya tha, unka wo pair hi inke raste me aane wala speedbreaker tha..

“bhai apne hi mehman log hai be, ye sara majma shadi me tha aaj” animesh ne Jitu ko satya se avgat karaya

“abe to kya inke ghar kya jameen me dhas gaye kya bc shadi ho gayi ab jao apne apne ghar yaha aise adhe tedhe pasre hai, ye kaha ka niyam hai bc ke jaha shadi ko wahi jake raho :redface:” Jitu

Jitu aaj dinbhar shadi me bam thak gaya tha aur achi neend ki aas me ghar me ghusne ke baad saamne ki gardi dekh ke aur pareshan ho gaya tha

“bhai apni kismet hi gadhe ki puch se likhi hai be, socha tha mast naram gadde pe aaram karenge pura ghar khali hoga gine chune mehman honge mast tanna denge lekin yaha to kuch aur hi bhayanakta faili hai bc” animesh bhi shadi ke kamo se pura thak gaya tha

“jane de apan waise bhi mere room me sote hai udhar chal mast darwaja lock karke kal dophar tak tanna denge ye jane inka kaam jane” Jitu ne khush hote huye kaha aur animesh ke kandhe par hath rakh ke hall bhar pasre(soye) huye mehmano me se rasta nikalte huye apne room ke saamne aake ruka

Dono ne khush hoke ek dusre ki taraf dekha.. fir darwaje ki taraf dekha ab kahi jake din bhar baad unhe aaram milne wala tha, naram gadde par gir ke dono sapno me khone wale the

Jitu ne darwaje ka latch ghuma ke darwaja ander dhakela aur khushi khushi room me kadam rakha

Butt :booty: butt :booty: butt :booty:

jaise hi usne ek aur kadam aage badhaya wahi ghar me ghuste time mila speed breaker wala feel use mehsus hua

“animesh ek minute” Jitu ne animesh ko piche rukne kaha fir apna phone nikal ke torch on karke jaise hi usne roshni room me ghumayi waise hi uski kuch der pehle ki khushi gam me tabdeel ho gayi

“kya hua be.. chal na ander, bahut neend aa rahi men” piche darwaje ke paas khade animesh ne Jitu ke kandhe par hath rakhte huye bola

Wahi Jitu jaise ander gaya tha waise hi wapis bahar aa gaya aur darwaja band kar diya

“Jitu, tu bahar kyu aaya be, tere ko neend me chalne ki adat to nahi lag gayi na, abe apne ko ander jana hai baahar nahi, tu ander jane ke badle baahar aa gaya” animesh ko lag raha tha ke Jitu full neend me hai isiliye aisa kar raha hai

“animesh, apni room gayi be.. waha ye jo baahar so rahe hai inki biwiya kharrate bhar rahi hai.. apne akkhe room pe kabja kar liya hai un logo ne :cry: aur bhai ke room me bhabhi maa wagaira honge to waha jane ka bhi chance nahi hai :frown:

“bhai iska matlab apna chhat chala gaya :sad: ” animesh ne kaha jise sun ke Jitu ne ha me gardan hilayi

“to bc ab apan kaha soye ab” animesh ne sar khujate huye pucha

“chal karte hai kuch prabandh apne liye”

Dono ne murjhaye chenre ke sath hall me najar daudayi ke kahi to jara to jaga mile sone ke liye

“bhai mere ko nahi lagta ke yaha apna jugad lagega kitchen me chale kya waha koi nahi hoga” hall ki bheed ko dekhte huye animesh ne Jitu se kaha

“ha chal waha dekhte hai apne ko kya bas sone ke liye jagah mile kafi hai” Jitu ne bhi uski baat ka samarthan kiya

“abe abe ruk, kitchen me chale to jayenge lekin soyenge kispar, thande farsh pe? subah uthne ke baad masi ko kitchen ke farsh pe do large size ice candy milegi direct thande fark pe soye to” animesh ne subah hone wali unki haalat imagine karte huye kaha

"o bc nahi nahi.. ruk dhunte hai kuch bichane ke liye fir mast shanti se soyenge” Jitu ne bhi un dono ki ice candy bante huye imagine kar li thi

Aur fir kya tha ye dono bhoot mehmano se bhare hall me aankhe barik karke koi gadda ya chadar dhundhne lage.. dim light shuru thi isiliye jyada andhera nahi tha isiliye neend ke nashe me jhulne wale in dono bewdo ko jyada dikkat nahi aa rahi thi hall me khoj been karne me

Ye dono dhundh hi rahe the ke animesh ki najar ek kambal par padi jo kisi ke to pair ke niche tha jiski abhi tak ghadi bhi nahi khuli thi usne Jitu ko bhi wo kambal dikhya par itni bheed me animesh kaha ishara kar raha hai use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha

“animesh, tere ko itni neend chadhi hai kya ke jo us baba ke kapdo ko tu odh ke soyega :redface: ” Jitu ko laga ke animesh waha soye kisi ki taraf ishara kar raha hai


“ye bhai hatt :yuck: mai kya pagal lagta hu kya teko bc jo kisi ke kapdo ko odh ke sounga, bc din bhar wo aadmi dhup me ghum raha tha pasine se nahate huye, soch kya jaan leva khushboo rahe honge uske kapde, soch :yuck: mai uske bagal wale ko ishara kar raha"

“ohhh.. mere ko laga.. jane de chhod.. chal wo kambal lete hai, dubte laundo ko kitchen ka sahara bc” Jitu ko bikkat neend aa rahi thi aur uski baato se ye saaf tha

“bhai tu rehne de tera dimag thikane pe nahi hai kuch bhi bol raha tu chal kambal leke aate” animesh ne Jitu ka kandha thap thapate huye kaha aur dono dheere dheere manjil ki or badhne lage

“abe kya ye log ameba jaise adhe tedhe fail ke soye hai be 😩 waha tak jane ko rasta bhi nahi hai “ Jitu soye huye logo ki bheed me rasta banate huye bola

“mere ko to inse railway station wala vide aa raha bhai udhar bhi aise ho soye rehte log” animesh

Soye huye apne hi rishtedaaro ko ulta siddha bolte huye ye log jaise taise kambal tak pahuche aur use utha hi rahe the lekin wo kambal inse uth hi nahi raha tha

“bhai ye kambal itna bhari kyu hai be uthaye hi nahi ja raha ye kambal lohe ka hai kya bc” animesh kambal kheechte huye dheeme awaj me bola

“abe ye to dekh pehle manushya rupi hathi ka itna bada pair rakha hua hai us kambal pe, itna aasan nahi hai ise paana, apne ko ye kaka ka pair baju me hatana padega tab kahi jake kambal milega re… ek kaam karte hai mai ye hathi ka pair uthata hu tu jhat se kambal kheech ke side me lele” Jitu ne plan banaya aur animesh ne apni mundi hilake hami bhari

Jitu ne us aadmi ka pair uthane ki koshish kari lekin use tas se mas nahi kar paya to dono ne chauk ke ek dusre ko dekha

“bhai tu hi bola na manushya rupi hathi ka pair hai thodi jyada taakat laga, le prabhu ka kaam aur utha is parbat ko”

“hmm.. correct.. maine hi underestimate kiya hai is hathi ko.. dum laga ke..”

“haishaa..”

“dum laga ke..”

“haishaa.”

“huppa huiyaaa…”

“jai bajranga… Admin baba ki..”

“Jai…”

“sumo maharaj ki..”

“jai..”

“mods….” Animesh aage bolne hi wala tha ke Jitu ne use rok diya

“ abe kya saara dum aaj hi lagwa dega kya bc aaram se be thoda.. ek hi pair uthane ka hai apne ko jyada dum laga diya to kahi aadmi na uth jaye bc, ghoshnao ko aaram de mere bhai” Jitu

Jitu ki baat ko gambhirta se lete huye animesh ne apni mundi hilayi

Idhar Jitu ne uske sharir me jitni thi utni shakti lagake apne dur ke double decker chacha ka pair uthaya aur waise hi animesh ne furti ke sath wo kambal apni taraf khicha lekin abhi adha hi kambal khich paya tha ke Jitu ke hath se wo pair chhut gaya aur bache huye kambal par gir gaya

“mar gaya bc..” Jitu

Jitu ne saari takat jhonk di thi par us ek pair ke aage uski sari shakti kam pad gayi aur wo pair uske hath se chhut gaya..

Jitni der tak Jitu ne un uncle ka pair uthaya hua tha uska chehra tamatar jaisa laal ho gaya tha itni taakat lagayi thi usne

Pair gir gaya aur kambal atak gaya, animesh ne utre chehre ke sath Jitu ko dekha aur bola “wapis try karte hai”

Is baar Jitu se mansik aur sharirik tayari kar li aur dobara un uncle ka pair uthaya animesh bhi kambal kheechne ke liye tayar hi tha jaise hi pair upar utha waise hi kambal baahar kheech liya gaya aur animesh ne battesi nikal kar Jitu ko dekha aur Jitu ne bhi pair chhod diya aur haafne laga, fir dono bhai wo tedha medha raasta paar karke wapis bedroom ke darwaje ke paas aaye..

Kambal milne se dono kafi khush ho gaye the ke ab kam se kam subah unki kulfi nahi jamne wali thi lekin jab is kambal ke liye ki gayi mehnat dono ne yaad ki to wapis irritate ho gaye

“kya hi kharab time aa gaya hai bc khud ke hi ghar ne sone ke liye room room bhatakna pad raha hai” Jitu ne chidchid karte huye kitchen ki or rukh kiya

Is baar animesh aage chal raha tha aur Jitu uske piche aur dono jab kitchen ki taraf aa rahe the tab unko toilet ka darwaja band hone ka awaj aaya ab itni badi gardi me koi utha hoga isiliye unhone dhyan nahi diya aur animesh ne jaise hi apne phone ka torch kitchen me mara dono ke saare sapne toot gaye..

Kitchen ki haalat bhi waisi hi thi jaisi hall aur bedroom ki thi waha bhi local train jaisi gardi ho rakhi thi jise dekh animesh jaise aaya tha waise hi wapis ghum gaya, Jitu ko bhi samajh aa chuka tha fir bhi usne kitchen me jhak kar dekha hi aur dono namune wapis bedroom ke darwaje ke paas hall me aa gaye

Dono ne ek baar haal par najar ghumayi, umeed to nahi thi ke kahi jagah milegi

Butt :booty: butt :booty: butt :booty:

Is baar bhagwan adinand ki kripa unpar barsi aur unlogo ko ek sofa pura akkha bandha khali dikh gaya, kuch time pehle to sofe par koi tha lekin abhi wo khali dikh raha tha

Sofe ko dekh ke to dono ki khushi ka thikana nahi raha bhale hi ek hi sofa tha lekin dono me se kisi ek ka jugad ho gaya tha

“bhai tu bhi wahi dekh raha hai kya jo main dekh raha hu” animesh ne apne bhai se pucha

“hao be anya main bhi wahi dekh raha hu jo tu dekh raha hai” Jitu ne khush hote huye kaha

“sofa..” dono khushi se cheekhe lekin dheeme awaj me

“sofa to theek hai lekin uspe soyega kaun 🤔” animesh ne deri se hi sahi lekin sahi sawal pucha

“kaun kya tu soyega aur kaun 😌” Jitu ne bhi bade aaram se kaha

“na bhai tu soja, mere se jyada thaka hua hai tu aaj” animesh ne Jitu ke kandhe pe hath rakhte huye kaha

“oye chomtiye chup chap jake so ja sofe pe samjha na baado ki baat mana kar 😏” Jitu ne uska hath apne kandhe se hata kar khud ka hath uske kandhe par rakhte huye kaha

“na tu soyega sofe pe final nahi to abhi ruk chilla ke ye sari bheed ho jagata hu idharich 😤

“oye chomtiye, chup 🙄, ye public jaag gayi to L lag jayenge, chal abhi wapis sofe tak pahuchne me mehnat karni padegi”

Dono wapis raste me aane wale sabhi speed breakers ko paar karte huye sofe tak pahuche

Jitu sofe par baith gaya aur animesh aaju baju me wo adjust ho paye aisi jagah khojne laga aur Jitu bhi baithe baithe jagah khojne laga

“ani jara soch abhi agar kisi ki aankh khuli aur usne apne ko aise dekha to usko to lagega ke ghar me bhoot ghum rahe bc 😂” Jitu ne haste huye kaha jise sun ke animesh ho bhi hasi aa gayi

“bhai wo dekh mama ke baju me jagah hai thodi apun fit ho jayega udhar 😎” animesh ko jagah mil gayi

“aah yeah gajab ja jaldi jake so udhar waise bhi bam der ho gayi hai” bolte huye Jitu sofe par aada ho gaya

Abhi in logo ko settle huye bas 3 hi minute huye the ke animesh jis aadmi ke baju me leta tha waha se apni naak ko ungliyo se band karke utha

“Jituuuuu…..bhaiiii!”

“kya hua be ani aur tu naak kyu band kiya hai be..”

“bhai tereko kisi chiz ki baas nahi aa rahi kya 🤢” animesh ne naak dabake hi bola aur tab Jitu ki batti jali

“abe.. yuck.. hatt.. chiiii.. :yuck: abe kya hai ye.. mere naak ke baal jal gaye bc..🤢” animesh ke puchte hi Jitu ne apni gardan thodi aage karke sungh ke dekha aur wo durgandh bhak se uske naak me ghusi jisse ab wo bhi apna naak dabake baitha tha

“shadi me ke manchurian hai ye.. maine dekha tha ye mama ko khana shuru hote hi manchurion pe dhava bolte huye, apne adhe manchurian to inhone hi khatam kiye hai” animesh ne shadi me dekha hua scene sara Jitu ko bata diya

“abe to bsdk uski saja hum kyu bhugte” Jitu ne chidh kar apne dur ke mama ki taraf dekha

“bhai ye inka manchurian pachane ke chakkar me apna khaya hua muh ke through baahar nikalenge aisi strong feeling aari meko 🤮” animesh ho apna darr bataya

“tu pehala uth waha apan dusri taraf dhundhte hai tere liye jagah.. uth” Jitu ne animesh ko waha se uthaya aur ab wapis namune jagah dhundhne lage

“animesh mai abhi bhi bol raha hu so ja sofe pe mai dekh lunga jagah”

“bhai apna decided hai tuhi soyega waha mere liye dekhte hai apan jagah” is baar bhi animesh ne Jitu ki nahi suni..

“oye waha dekh wo chacha ke baju me badhiya jagah hai tu aaram se fit ho jayega udhar” Jitu ne ek taraf ishara kiya

Ab finally animesh ke liye jagah ka jugad ho gaya tha.. animesh height aur sharir me Jitu se bhi jyada barik tha isiliye uske liye wo jagah perfect thi.

Animesh waha jake so gaya aur Jitu sofe pe pasar gaya aur dono ne aankhe mund li..


Kuch 18 minute beete honge ke Jitu ko aisa laga mano koi use pukaar raha ho… Jitu ne apni neend se bhari huye aankhe kholi aur charo taraf najar ghumayi to uski najar ek jagah ruk gayi..

“bh… bhaiii… bhaii” ye animesh tha jo ek bhari bharkam mote se hath ke niche daba hua tha, wo hath uske gale pe tha jisse uski awaj kam nikal rahi thi

Jitu ne jaise hi ye dekha tadkan uth ke uske paas pahucha aur jor laga ke wo hath baju me hataya

Animesh mano koi marathon daud ke aaya ho aise haaf raha tha.. Jitu ne uski peeth par hath ghuma kar use normal hone me madad ki

“feeling better?” Jitu ne animesh se pucha

“bc kya bhari hath tha bhai, sunny paji ka to dhai kilo ka hai ye top 5 kilo ka tha, kya khane me kya dumbles khate kya lawda” animesh apne gale pe hath rakh ke aankhe badi karke bola wahi Jitu uski baat sun ke hasne laga, abhi animesh us hath ke niche daba hua chuha lag raha tha

“isiliye main bol raha tha ke tu sofe pe jo ja nahi to yaha kisi ke hath ya pair ke niche dab jayega pata bi nahi chalega abhi kam se kam awaj to nikal rahi tha teri dobara to aisa hua to awaj bhi gale me hi dab jayegi” Jitu ne aakhir animesh ko sofe pe sone ke liye convince kar hi liya tha

“sofe pe sone me hi bhalai hai be abhi to shadi bhi nahi huyi meri itne me bhagwan ke paas nahi jana mereko apne hath se maut ko kahe bulawa de” animesh badbadate huye sofe pe jake baith gaya

“that’s better :D: ” Jitu uski badbad se hasne laga tha

“Jitu aise maha bhayankar rishtedaar kaha se leke aaya bhai.. ek baas maar raha ek jaan lene ki koshish kar raha aur najane kaise kaise prani dekhne baki hai is raat me abhi to maine khali trailer dekha hai tujhe puri film na dekhne mile to hi acha” animesh ko ab Jitu ka tension aa raha aur is trailer ki film kaisi hogi wo soch raha tha..

“dekhte hai jo uparwale ki marji ab to uska hi sahara hai” aur wo dono ab Jitu ke liye jagah dhundhne lage aur barabar dedh minute ki mehnat ke baad ek jagah dikhi, bagal wala aadmi bhi normal tha isiliye Jitu bhi uske baju me letne ke liye ready ho gaya

Jitu aur animesh ab jagah mil gayi hai is khushi me aaram se so gaye the.. Jitu ne apni aankhe band ki..

Butt :booty: butt :booty: butt :booty:

Jaise hi Jitu ne karwat badli aur bagal wale aadmi ki taraf muh kiya waise hi adhe second me uski naak me ek aur durgandh ghusi jisse Jitu ke rongte khade ho gaye usne jhat se apni aankhe kholi aur uth ke khada ho gaya..

Animesh ko bhi kuch hulchal ka awaj aaya usne apni aankhe adhi kholi to use Jitu khada dikha jise dekh ke wo bhi uth gaya

“ab kya hoya bhai tu khada kahe hai?” animesh

“abe wapis baas aa raha be” Jitu

“firse manchurian?”

“nahi..”

“to is baar kaunsa dish hai?” animesh

“dish nahi hai be.. gobar hai.. 🤢

“whaatttt!! howwww!!”

“I don’t know, mereko lagta hai ye inke sharir ki badbu hai.. maine jaise hi karwat badli naak me bhap se badbu ghusi..😩

“abe ye to apna vimal mama hai”

“ab bol ke dane dane me iske kesar ka dum bhi hai, bsdk 😒” Jitu

“abe bhai majak nahi kar raha tere ko yaad hai apan jab bachpane me mama ke yaha jate the tab waha mama ke sath ek aadmi kaam karta tha jise apni bhains jaan se jyada pyari thi…” animesh ne Jitu ko yaad dilane ki koshish ki

“ha ha tha aisa ek aadmi use sab uski bhains ke naam se jaante the” Jitu ne dimag pe jor dala

“exactly wahi hai wo inki bhains ka naam vimal hai :laughing: ” animesh sofe pe kudte huye bola

“tabhi jaise hi mai ghuma gobar ka baas aaya” Jitu ne niche soye huye vimal mama ki taraf dekha

“yup”

“abe par ani agar mai yaha soya to sapne me bhi bhainse hi dikhengi be upar se is gobar ki badbu ko raat bhar sehna padega wo alag jo apne se na hoga🥴” Jitu ne pareshan hoke kaha

“to bhai wapis jagah change usme kya hai ab to adat ho gayi apne ko iski 🥴

“wahi to kar rahe to apan tabse aur lagta hai raatbhar yahi karte rehna padega ye khel lamba chalega 🤐” Jitu ne irritate hoke kaha ek to wo dinbhar kaam karke thaka hua tha raat me mast chain ki neend soyenge is aas me pura din bitaya tha aur ab ghar aane par sone ke liye sangarsh chal raha tha

“mil jayegi be jaga rukh dekhte hai apan” animesh

Aur kuch hi samay baad unhe wapis ek jagah dikhi par waha jara dhoka jyada tha, baju me ek mast pehalwan soya hua tha par ab uske alawa option nahi tha kyuki aankho me neend ka nasha chadh raha tha bas fir Jitu ne wo jagah pakdi aur let gaya…

Kuch samay baad…

Ghadi me 3 baj ke 22 minute huye the wo karwat ke bal leta hua pehalwan sidha hua aur jaise hi wo siddha hua adha Jitu uske niche dab gaya.

Jitu ke muh se awaj bhi nahi nikal raha tha, bagal wale aadmi par do char baar hath mara to usne bhi tali baja ke macchar mare aur hath hawa me ghumake so gaya aur usko aise hath hilate dekh Jitu ko apna sar fod lene ki icha huyi, Jitu ne us pehalwan ko apne se hatane ki koshish ki lekin koshish vifal rahi wo jara nahi hila ulta energy khatam huyi alag

Jitu ne man hi man us aadmi ko bhar bhar ke gaaliya baki aur dimag chala shuru kiya aur uske dimag ki batti jali, usne jeb se apna phone nikala aur animesh ka number dial kiya, animesh ka phone silent par tha. Jitu ne phone laga ke sofe par dekha lekin koi hulchal nahi koi awaj nahi fir dobara phone lagaya, idhar phone ke vibration se animesh ki neend khuli aur phone band, Jitu ne teesri baar call lagaya to animesh ne phone nikal ke dekha to screen par Jitu ka naam dekh ke usne aankhe mali fir dobara check kiya fir jaha Jitu soya tha us taraf dekh aur tan kan uth ke bath gaya

“abe bhai tu ye road roller ke niche kaise dab gaya bc” animesh ne baithi jagah se aankhe badi karke Jitu se pucha

Jitu se bola nahi ja raha tha isiliye usne ishare se wo fas gaya hai aisa bataya par animesh ke samajh me kuch nahi aaya

“abe mai thodese se bacha tha tu samjh ke liyo jara nahi to subah ya to tera papad banega ya tu duniya se uthega” aur haste huye tali dene ke liye apna hath Jitu ki taraf badhaya lekin uske expressions dekh ke hath piche le liya

Jitu ne ghur ke animesh ko dekha aur uska ishara samajh ke animesh use us pehalwan ke shikanje se baahar nikalne ke liye kheechne laga, Jitu bhi jor laga raha tha lekin koi fayda nahi ho raha tha itne me animesh ke dimag me ek idea aaya usne Jitu ko aankh mari aur waha se nikal gaya.. ghar me show ke ek vaas me kuch morpankh rakhe huye the usme se ek mor pankh leke animesh waha aaya aur us pehalwan ke chenre ke paas baitha

Animesh ne wo morpankh us pehalwan ek chehre par se halke se ghumaya jisse us aadmi ke chhehre par ek vichitra muskurahat aa gayi aur gayab bhi ho gayi jise Jitu aur animesh dono ne dekha fir dusri baar animesh ne usi mor pankh se uski naak me gud gudi kari jisse usne apni naak masli aur wapis so gaya aur isse animesh aur Jitu ne roti shakal ke sath ek dusre ko dekha.. ab bari thi aakhri hamle ki animesh ne us bande ke kaam me gud gudi karna shuru kiya jisse wo apne kaan khujlate huye uth ke baith gaya lekin uski aankhe abhi bhi band thi par chehra bigad chuka tha

Jaise hi wo aadmi utha Jitu ajad ho gaya aur baju me sarak gaya par uske uth ke baithne se dono ki gand fat chuki thi, Jitu ne thoda jhuk ke dekha to us aadmi ki aankhe ab bhi band thi fir Jitu ne dheere dheere use wapis letaya

“bhai isko sulane ke liye lori gaaye kya apan :idea: ” ye idea animesh babu ke dimag aaya

“kyu tu kya iski aaya hai kya bc yaha khud ki neend ke bara baje hai aur ye chale hai dusro ko lori sunane” Jitu ab acha khasa bhadak gaya tha

“abe to naraj kayko hota hai mai kya bolta hu isko uthake waha main door ke paas sula aate hai waise bhi do logo ki jagah gher rakhi hai isne apan yaha aaram se aa jayenge” animesh ne apna khali dimag chalaya

“animesh mere bete aaj kuch khane me alag aa gaya tha kya.. aisa bigboss dekhne walo jaise harkate kyu kar raha tu, abe bsdk usko dekh apne ko dekh ye kya koi tv ka remote hai kya yaha se uthake waha rakhne ko bc, tu chhatak bhar ka mai 75 gms ka aur ye 1 kilo ka bojh kaise uthayenge be apan kyu bc yamdut ko bulawa dena”

“ha be ye bhi hai pilan cancel” Jitu ki baat sun ke animesh se apna plan cancel kar diya aur ab dono wapis jagah dhundhne lage

“bhai pyas lag ri be” animesh

“ha be yaha neend kam aur bhagam bhag jyada ho ri chal pehle kitchen se pani pike aate fir dhundhenge jagah” Jitu ne kaha aur dono apna kambal uthke kitchen me paani pine gaye, pani pite huye unhe wapis toilet ke darwaje ka awaj aaya, ek to sone ki jagah nahi mil rahi usse dono pareshan tha isiliye is baar bhi unhone us awaj ko ignore kar diya

Pani pike jab ye dono namune baahar aaye waise hi inko ko ek aadmi apna sar khujate huye waha dikhai diya, in namuno ko laga ke koi chor ghar me ghus aaya hai dono ne ekdusre ki shakle dekhi fir apne hath me ke kambal ko dekha aur fir us chor ko dekha aur fir kambal ko khol ke jaise hi us aadmi par daalne wale the us aadmi ki badbad inko sunai di


"Kya be sandas me gaya aur baithe baithe wahi so gaya, dinbhar jo bhi shadi me bhukhe jaise khaya tha sab baahar nikal gaya aur thakan to saala aaj aisi huyi ke wahi so gaya ab neend khuli hai to chalke apni jagah pe sote hai mast"

Aur ubasi lete huye wo aadmi aage badh gaya inhi ka bulaya mehman tha wo, din bhar shadi me free ka maal thusa aur thak ke sandas me hi so gaya

Ye jab ghar me ghuse the tab bedroom jate huye jo awaj aaya tha wo yahi mahanubhav the jo tab toilet me ghuse the jo ab jake nikle the.

Wo aadmi jake sofe ke paas ruka usne ek najar saamne ajgar jaisi faili huyi bheed par mari to us bheed ke pare use do log andhere me jhulte huye dikhe jinko dekh ke uske halak se to kuch nahi nikla lekin unko bhoot samajh ke wo behosh hoke sofe pe gir gaya..

Is aadmi ka waha khade khade badbadana apne potto ne saaf suna tha aur dono vichitra najro se ek dusre ko dekh rahe the..

"Bhai toilet me koi kaise so sakta hai bc :yuck: "

"Ye kya ye maahan prani jo apne samne hai usse puch experience hoga unko ye mahanubhav kahi bhi so sakte hai 🤢"

"Abe par ye aadmi to aake sofe pe so gaya ab, ab wapis shuru se shuru karna padega dono ke liye jagah dekhni padegi 😩"

In dono ko khabar bhi nahi thi ke wo aadmi inko bhoot samajh ke behosh hua pada hai

"Chal bhai dekhte hai kuch milta kya to nahi to aakhri option bachega bas" Jitu ne kaha jispar Animesh ne mundi hilayi

Ghadi me subah ke sadhe chaar baj rahe the dono ko ek jagah dikhi jaha do log nahi 1.5 log jam sakte the ab marta kya na karta dono jaise taise waha adjust huye lekin kuch 9 minute baad hi Animesh ko kuch uncomfortable lagne laga

“Jitu, bhai sun na.. ye baju wala chipak raha be mere se"

"Kuch nahi be sapna hoga so ja tu"

Fir kuch time tak Animesh ko bhi kuch mehsus nahi hua to wo bhi so gaya lekin kuch samay baad wapis waisa hi lagne laga usne dekha to uske baju me soya hua uska ek cousin usse chipak raha tha aur kuch badbada raha tha.. Animesh ne apna kaan uske paas sarkaya aur sunne ki koshish karne laga

"Shona.. kaha ja rahi ho babu tum.. idhar mere paas aao naa... ek kiss do na baby.. janu paas aao naa.."

Wo Banda neend me apni babu ko yaad kar raha tha lekin idhar apne Animesh maharaj ki neend hi ud gayi thi kyuki bhale hi wo yaad uski babu ko kar raha tha lekin feel to Animesh ka le raha tha na.. 🤐😂

"Behanchod yaha to ijjat ke lawde lag jayenge be Jitu uth bhai ijjaat khatre me hai meri lawda.. hatt...." Animesh ne Jitu ko jor se hilake jagaya jisse Jitu bhi hadbada ke utha

"Kya hai be ek to raat bhar baad jaga mili thi bc usme bhi dikkat hai ab"

"Dikkat chhod bc yaha ijjat khatre me lawda" Animesh ne Jitu ko kheechte huye main door tak laya

Jitu ko ab bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye aisa kyu behave kar raha hai

"Anya pagal pan ke daure pad rahe kya tereko ? kya hoya?"

"Bhai abhi mai lut jata barbad ho jata agar tu time pe na uth ta to"

Fir Animesh ne Jitu ko saari baat batayi jise sun ke Jitu se uski hasi control ho nahi ho rahi thi wahi Animesh ghur ke usko dekh raha tha

"Bhai gandu kismat hai be apni. Jane de chal aakhri rasta bacha hai apne paas ab yaha to neend milne se rahi"

"Abe par jayenge kaha??

"Parking..😌"

Aur aakhir kaar jab dono ko ghar me sahara nahi mila to dahej... I mean gift me aaye parking me rakhe palang pe aake dono so gaye.. 😌

Khatam...
Niklo ab
waise ye koi story nahi hai kissa hai na jinko ise story manna hai maan sakte ho.. jaise maine kaha tha inspired by true events jise maine bas thoda ya kaho thoda jyada masala laga ke parosa hai taste acha laga to review thread me chaar line likh dene ka..



Tata. :ciao:
Bahot hi jabardasttt story thiii. Har ek scene mein bahot hasi aayi. Mast kahani thi.

Aur aisa scene aksar har shaadi ke ghar mein dekhne ko milta hai jaha mehmaano se bhare ghar mein sone ke liye jagah hi nhi milti aur jaha milti hai waha hum comfortable nhi ho paate. Story ekdum real life se match karti hai. Bahot maza aayaa padhke.
 

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Love never die..

“Rohan ye saaf saaf paagalpan hai”

“usse kuch farak nahi padta vijay”

“par uske mummy papa iski ijajat kabhi nahi denge”

“maine kaha na kuch fark nahi padta hai maine jo decide kar liya hai mai wo hi karunga”

“par main tumhe ye paagalpan nahi karne dunga”

“Rashmi ki jaan bachane ke liye to mai kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hu aur tum mujhe nahi rok sakte”

“for god sake Rohan tum padhe likhe ho fir bhi aisi baat kar rahe ho, mujhe yakin nahi hota”

“jaha science apne hath tek deta haina wahi se shraddha ki shuruwat hoti hai isiliye mera decision ekdum sahi hai” aur vijay ki aage ki baat sune bagair Rohan waha se nikal gaya..



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Rohan aur Rashmi ek dusre se pyaar karte the dono ki shadi bhi fix ho chuki thi do mahine baad dono shadi ke pavitra bandhan me bandhne wale the, dono ke gharwale bhi dono ke rishte se kafi khush the.. bas wo samay hi thoda kharab tha jisme ye sab kuch hua tha..



Rashmi, Kolhapur ki rehne wali ladki jisne apna higher education pune se complete kiya tha aur MBA karne ke baad use Mumbai me naukri mil gayi thi, sabke sapne puri karne wali Mumbai apne bhi sapne pure karegi aisa Rashmi ko vishwas tha.. shuruwat bhi sahi huyi thi, naukri to achi thi hi sath hi company ne rehne ke liye 1 BHK ka flat bhi diya tha, naukri me 6 mahino me hi Rashmi ache se ghul mil gayi thi usme uski dosti huyi Rohan ke sath..



Rohan dikhne ke kafi handsome tha, gym karke sharir bhi acha banaya hua tha usme swabhav se bhi Hasmukh aur milansaar tha bas fir kya tha dheere dheere unki dosti pyaar me badal gayi, Mumbai ki itni bheed usme bhi bhaag daud me bhi logo ko apna pyaar mil hi jata hai.. aur wo pyaar rang bhi laata hai.. bheed me ekant kaise dhundhe ye Mumbai walo ko ache se pata hota hai..

Ab aage ki jindagi ek dusre ke sath bitane ka man bana chuke dono ne apne relationship ke baare me apne apne ghar par bhi bata diya tha..

Rohan ke ghar par to koi dikkat thi hi nahi lekin Rashmi ke gharwalo ko ye pasand nahi aaya tha, un logo ko is alliance se dikkat thi aur jab Rohan ko is bare me pata chala to wo khud kohlapur gaya aur usne Rashmi ke gharwalo ko samjhaya unka bharosa jeeta aur fir unse Rashmi ka hath manga, Rohan ke aise karne se Rashmi uske pyaar me aur bhi jyada dubti chali gayi.

Mumbai aapke saare sapne to pure kar deti hai lekin uski keemat bhi aapse barabar wasulti hai

Aise hi ek din kaam par jaate huye Rashmi local train ke gate par khadi thi, use waha khade rehna bilkul pasand nahi tha lekin aaj uski hamesha ki local cancel ho gayi thi isiliye majburi me use bheed me gate par khade rehna pada, Rashmi darwaje ke rod ko pakad kar khadi thi, train chal rahi thi aur achanak kisi paagal sarfire ne ladies dabbe ke upar patthar feka aur badkismati se wo patthar darwaje par khadi Rashmi ke sar par ja laga jisse uske sar par acha khasa ghav ho gaya aur uska hath chhut gaya aur Rashmi gaadi se niche gir padi, is pure wakye me bas uski kismet ne uska itna sath diya ke Rashmi train ke patri par nahi giri, gaadi me ke passengers ne turant hi chain kheech kar train rukwai aur Rashmi ko jald hi kareebi hospital ne admit kar diya gaya..



ICU ke bahar Rashmi ke maa papa hatash hokar baithe the, 24 ghante beet chuke the par Rashmi ki haalat me kuch sudhar nahi tha brain me jame huye blood clots to doctors ne nikaal diye the lekin operation successful hua hai ya nahi ye koi nahi bata raha tha, Rohan unke paas aaya aur Rashmi ke papa ke kandhe par hath rakha

“chinta mat kijiye papa, Rashmi meri jimmedari hai”

Rohan ka ye bolna tha ke Rashmi ke pita ka sabra ka bandh tut gaya, apni beti ko itna chahne wala ladka mila hai iska unhone bhagwan ko shukriya ada kiya, wo bas yahi chahte the ke Rashmi theek ho jaye

“Rohan tum doctors se baat karo na wo hame kuch nahi bata rahe” Rashmi ki maa ne Rohan se kaha

“wo koshish kar rahe hai maa, khud senior doctor Desai dad ke dost hai wo isme mamle me pura dhyan de rahe hai”

“kya bol rahe hai wo” papa ne pucha

Rohan Rashmi ke papa ko kya jawan dega ye sunne ke liye Rashmi ke maa papa dono aatur the, unhe pata tha ke Rashmi ki maujuda medical condition ke bare me Rohan unse jyada jaanta hai.

“papa aap shant ho jaiye pehle sab theek hoga” ispar papa kuch bolte tabhi saamne se unhe police aate huye dikhai di, wo sidhe Rohan ke paas aaye

“hello main inspector shinde, humne us aadmi ko pakad liya hai jisne train par patthar feka tha, usne gunah Kabul kar liya hai railway line ke baju me hi illegal jhopdi hatane ke liye jo karyawahi ki ja rahi hai uske virodh me usne train par patthar feka tha”

“usse kadi saja dijiyega sir uski wajah se meri beti ki jindagi barbad ho gayi hai” Rashmi ki maa ne kaha

“aap bas use mere saamne le aaiye mai…..”

“dekhiye aap log shant ho jaiye, kanoon use barabar saja dega” inspector ne Rashmi ke papa ko shant karne ki koshish ki

“hamari or se koi madad?” Rohan ne pucha

“’hmm, aapko ek proper report likhwani hogi usi ke aadhar par hum aage karyawahi kar payenge”

“ab complaint karke meri beti ki takleef to kam nahi hogi na” Rashmi ki maa ne kaha

“ek minute maa, sir, main sham me aakar ek complaint likhwa dunga, ab kya fayda soch kar hum karyawahi nahi karte aur gunehgaar chhut jate hai aur fir wapis aise hi hadse ho sakte hai. Inspector sahab mai aa jaunga sham me” Rohan ne kaha

“thik hai, mai raah dekhunga, take care, ladki ko jaise hi hosh aaye hame bataiyega unka statement bhi lena padega” inspector chala gaya aur Rashmi ke maa papa wahi bench par baith gaye aur Rohan waha se jane laga

“Rohan, doctor ne kya kaha?” jate huye Rohan se papa ne pucha

“kuch nahi sab theek hoga”

“Rohan, mujhe jhutha dilasa nahi chahiye beta jo sach hoga wo batao mai sach sambhal sakta hu”

Rohan kuch nahi bola

“Rohan sankoch mat karo beta jo bhi hoga kitna bhi bhayanak kyu na ho fir bhi batao mujhe, bas main koi jhuthi umeed nahi chahta” papa ne kaha

Rohan ne ek lambi saas li papa ki aankho me dekh kar bolne ki uski himmat nahi thi mundi niche karke usne bolna shuru kiya

“papa brain me ke blood clots nikal diye hai but brain ko bahut jyada nuksaan pahucha hai jisse uske bachne ke chances bas 1% hai aur usse bhi bura ye hai ke agar wo bach jati hai to kabhi chal fir nahi payegi, she will be bedridden rest of her rife.”



Rohan ki baat sun kar maa papa stabdh ho gaye unhe kya kare kya nahi kuch nahi samajh aa raha tha

“papa mai Rashmi ko le jane ka soch raha tha” Rohan ki is baat par Rashmi ke maa papa uski taraf dekhne lage

“Kaha?”

“gaon me, waha ke tantrik hai jo uska ilaj kar sakta hai mujhe yakin hai wo theek ho jayegi”

“Rohan, ye kya murkho wali baat kar rahe ho? tum to padhe likhe ho fir bhi aisa keh rahe ho? Ye mujhe theek nahi lagta”

“papa jaha science haar jata hai wahi se to ye raasta shuru hota hai, Rashmi ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hu, barabar 3 mahine se uska birthday hai aur mujhe wo pal uske liye yaadgaar banana hai”

“par..”

“wo yaha rahi to ek jinda lash ban kar rahegi mai ye nahi chahta, sach kahu to agar aaj hamari shadi ho chuki hoti to main use gaon le ke jane ke liye aapse permission bhi nahi mangta par abhi..”

Rohan ki baat sun kar Rashmi ke papa kuch der ke liye soch me pad gaye fir kuch samay baad bole

“Rohan, beta tumhara jitna upkar manu kam hai, tum apni jimmedari chhod kar bhga sakte the par tum yaha koshish me lage ho tum jo chahte ho karo hamara tumko pura support hai” papa ne kaha aur maa ki taraf dekha jispar unhone bhi sehmati darsha di

“papa main wada karta hu ke Rashmi ke aane wale birthday par aap use dekh kar khush ho jaoge “ itna bol ke Rohan waha se nikal gaya aur Rashmi ke parents use jaate huye dekhne lage, bas 1% chance par bhi ye ladka ashawadi hai iska unhe ashcharya hua aur sat hi apni beti ki pasans par garv bhi..

Dekhte dekhte 3 mahine bhag daud me nikal gaye, aaj Rashmi ka birthday tha Rohan ne Rashmi ke birthday party ki badhiya tayari ki huyi thi karib 50-60 log party me maujud the.

“ye Rohan paagal ho gaya hai, Rashmi kaise ayegi yaha” ek ne kaha

“pichle 2 mahine se wo aisi hi paaglo jaisi harkate kar raha hai” dusre ne kaha

“par kuch bhi kaho Rohan ne us ladki se saccha pyaar kiya hai isiliye to ab bhi uske liye itna sab kar raha hai”

“par Rashmi to ab is duniya me nahi rahi fir ye birthday ka itna taam jham?”

“oye galti se bhi Rashmi mar gayi hai ye uske saamne mat kehna, hyper ho jata hai wo”

Itne me Rohan waha aaya, uske sath usme mom dad aur Rashmi ke maa papa the, usne aate hi sabka abhivadan kiya, sabki najre waha Rashmi ko dhundh rahi thi Rohan stage par gaya aur usne mic liya,

“namaskar!, mere invitation ka maan rakh kar aap sab yaha aaye isliye thank you. Aaj hum sab yaha hai Rashmi ka birthday celebrate karne ke liye, maine Rashmi ko tahe dil se pyaar kiya hai isiliye aaj wo hamare beech hai, mere pyaar ke sath sath main doctor desai ko bhi thanks kehna chahta hu jinki wajah se aaj hum ye pal dekh pa rahe hai jisme Rashmi hamare sath hai, doctor desai please stage par aaiye” same khurchi par baithe Dr. Desai stage par aaye aur Rohan ne unke hath me mic diya

“aaj main Rohan ki tarif karna chahta hu, iske himmat wale decisions ki wajah se aaj Rashmi hamare beech hai, ye aise decisions easy nahi hote hai par inhe sahi samay par lene se jindagi sarthak ho jati hai, Rohan ne jo decision liya aur usme Rashmi ke maa papa ne uska pura sath diya isiliye ye possible ho paya main dil se Rohan ko aage ki jindagi ke liye shubhkamnaye deta hu”

Talliya ke kadkadahat ke sath doctor stage se niche utre

Rohan ne wapis bolna shuru kiya

“is safar me kayi logo ne meri madad ki unke bagair main ye kaam pura nahi kar sakta tha aur usme ek important role nibhaya inspector shinde ne, mai inspector sahab ko stage par aane ki request karta hu” inspector shinde civil dress me stage par aaye

“kabhi kabhi hamari jindagi me kuch aisi asamnaya ghatnaye ghat ti hai jab hum police walo ko normal logo ko salute karne ka man karta hai, jab Rashmi ko hospital me laya gaya tha tab uski haalat najuk thi, 1% chance tha uske bachne ka aur usme bhi ek himmat wala decision liye Rohan ne, usne Rashmi ko hospital se discharge karaya aur use lekar apne gaon ke tantrik ke paas pahucha, Rohan ka ye decision kayiyo ko nahi jana, uske dost vijay ne bhi uska isme kafi virodh kiya tha, itna padha likha ladka aise kaise kar sakta hai is baat ne sabko chauka diya tha, us tantrik ne Rohan ho ek bacchi ki bali dene kaha, usne samjhaya ke kaal ne Rashmi par humla kiya hai Rashmi ko bachana hoga to ek narbali deni hogi aur sath me 5 lakh rupaye lagenge aur baki puja ka saaman bataya, Rashmi ko bachane ke liye Rohan kisi bhi hadd tak jane jo tayar tha isiliye usne bhi ha keh diya”

Hall me maujud logo me charcha shuru ho gayi, log aapas me khuspusane lage ye jaan kar inspector ruke

“kisi ko koi doubt?” inspector ne pucha

“ek narbali dene se Rashmi bachi?” ek guest ne darte darte sawal kiya jispar inspector hasne lage

“maut ek atal satya hai, hum sab ko ek na ek din marna hai, kisi aur ki jaan lekar agar hum bach sakte to aaj insaan amar hota har dusra aadmi kisi ko maar kar apni umra badha leta, khair Rohan is baat ke liye maan gaya, bali ki tayari usne tantrik ko karne kaha aur dusre din tay samay par sab saaman aur ventilator par Rashmi ko lekar wo shamshan pahucha, tantrik ne vidhi shuru ki aur bali dene ke liye ek behosh ladki ko le aaya wo use maarne hi wala tha ke police waha pahuch gayi aur us tantrik ko pakad liya gaya, wo aise hi gaon me logo ko bewakuf bana kar bali jaise kaand rachta tha lekin sabuto ki kami ki wajah se pakad me nahi aa raha tha isiliye us din Rashmi ki madad se is dhongi tantrik ko pakad liya gaya aur is himmat ke liye main Rohan aur Rashmi ke pariwar ki jitni karu utni tarif kam hai” itna bol kar inspector stage se niche utre

“fir rashmi ka kya hua?” ek guest ne pucha

“mai use ab stage par bulane wala hu” Rohan ne mic par kaha aur ishara karke sab lights band karne kaha, ek aadmi trolly ke sath ek bada cake lekar stage par aaya aur candels jalayi

“Rashmi please come on stage” Rohan ne kaha aur kisi ke kadmo ka awaj aane laga koi stage ki or chal kar aa raha tha ye us andhere me mehsus ho raha tha, stage ke paas pahuchne par ek choti bacchi candels ki roshni me dikhi, wo stage par jakar khadi ho gayi

“ye to Rashmi nahi hai” niche se koi chillaya

Mic abhi bhi Rohan ke hath me tha usne turant dobara request ki “rashmi please come on stage” firse kadmo ki awaj aayi koi stage ki or chal kar ja raha tha aur stage par pahuchne ke baad candels ki roshni me ek 25-26 saal ki ladki dikhi, uski umra Rashmi jitni hi thi lekin wo bhi Rashmi nahi thi..

“Rashmi kaha hai?” kisi ne kaha

“please come on stage Rashmi” utne hi saumya awaj me Rohan ne kaha

firse koi stage ki or jane laga aur is baar jyada log the, ek 45 saal ke uncle aur ek 35-36 ke aaspaas ki lady

“lights please..” Rohan ki awaj ke sath lights jal gayi aur ab Rohan ke sath stage par 4 log the

“Rashmi ab is duniya me nahi hai, ye baat kehte huye mujhe kitni takleef ho rahi hai mai hi jaanta hu par is satya ko swikarna hi hoga chahe wo kitna hi kadwa kyu na ho par in char logo me Rashmi ka ansh hai, ye Pallavi hai, choti si, ek bimari me iski aankhe chali gayi aaj ye Rashmi ki aankho se duniya dekh rahi hai, dusri hai mugdha, iske dil me ched tha, use Rashmi ka dil diya hai jisme kabhi mai basa karta tha, ye hai Solanki uncle, jinhe Rashmi ki kidneys lagi hai and last is Mrs. Fernandes jinhe Rashmi ka lever diya hai, hamari Rashmi yahi hai hamare beech in logo ke jariye jinda hai wo, mai aap charo se request karta hu ke please aap Rashmi ke birthday ka cake cut kijiye”

Un charo ne nam aankho ke sath cake cut kiya, hall me maujud sabki aankho me pani tha, Rohan apne chehre par muskan rakhe huye apne aansu rokne ki achi koshish kar raha tha, cake cut hone par Rohan ne wapis mic liya,

“maine pehle hi kaha tha ke birthday ka koi tohfa mat lana, maine stage ke baju me ek box rakha hai aapka man ho utne paise us box me daliye, hum jald hi Rashmi ke naam se ek trust shuru karne wale hai jisse jaruratmand ladkiyo ki madad kari jaye, har saal ye birthday aise hi manta rahega aur isi din un bacchiyo ki madad ki jayegi jinhe jarurat hogi” Rohan ki baat sun kar saara hall taliyo se gunj utha, sab log Rashmi ke parents ki aur Rohan ki tarif kar rahe the

“mujhe sach me laga tha ke tu us tantrik ke chakkar me pad gaya hai” vijay ne Rohan ke kandhe par hath rakhte huye kaha

“nahi re.. wo baat to Rashmi ko bhi kabhi achi nahi lagti, Rashmi ka accident hua tab mera to sab kuch hi khata, ho gaya tha, maine pehle khud ko sambhala fir sach ko accept kiya, itna aasan nahi tha ye sab, mai ghanto bathroom me roya hu bhai, apne aap ko sambhala, maine jab Rashmi ke bare me dad ko bataya tab gaon ke ek pandit ne us tantrik ka reference diya tha, mai samajh gaya tha ke ye andhashraddha ka khel hai, mujhe use range hath pakadwana tha isiliye wo sab kiya usme main Dr. Desai ke sath organ donation ke bare me baat kar chuka tha us tatrik ko pakadwane ke baad mai Rashmi ko lekar wapis aaya, uske jine ke chances kam the maine uski reports ke hisab se log dhundhe aur fir jab hamari sehmati se ventilator band kiya tab uske orgaons donate kiye gaye”

“tu sahi me great hai mere bhai”

“apna banda marne ke baad bhi apne beech rahe ye icha hogi to yahi upay hai mere bhai, hum jise chahte hai uske naam ke putle banana se acha hai organ daan karo jisse wo mar ke bhi hamare beech jinda hai” Rohan ne kaha

Kuch samay baad sab log waha se jane lage Rohan bhi sab kuch nipta kar sabse aakhir me baahar jane laga, usne sehaj ji piche palat kar stage ki or dekha to paya ke stage par se Rashmi uski or dekh kar muskura rahi hai…


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Bahot hi pyaara aur khubsoorat update thaa. Rohan aur Rashmi do sachhe premiyon ki kahani. Par inki badkismati dono jeevan bhar saath naa reh paaye. Par Rohan ne apne sachhe pyaar ka parichay diya hai jisse dekh kar mujhe bahot achha laga. Bahot kam dekhne ko milta hai aisa pyaar.

Bahot achha laga padhke. Story bahot achhi thi.
 

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Aaj nidhi aur rahul ke shadi ki 4th anniversary thi, Rahul subah kuch na bole huye hi baahar nikal gaya tha ab wo sach me anniversary bhul gaya tha ya usne jaanbujh ke aisa kiya ye nidhi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha, shayad shaam me aake wo koi surprise dega aisa nidhi ko lag raha tha

Nidhi ne dinbhar Rahul ki raah dekhi but ab raat ke 12 baj chuke the Rahul abhi tak ghar nahi aaya tha jisse nidhi ko ab nirasha hone lagi thi, aaj tak sab aise hi to hote aaya tha aur kam se kam aaj to apne ko mayus nahi hona padega isi bhram me nidhi Rahul ki raah dekh rahi thi, Rahul ne din bhar me ek baar bhi use phone nahi kiya tha na hi koi message kiya tha aur akhir me thak kar nidhi bagair kuch soche apne room me jakar so gayi

Nidhi ko waise to ab in sab ki aadat ho chuki thi lekin kahi na kahi wo Rahul se pyaar ki umeed karti thi, uske pyaar jatane ki bhasha nidhi kabhi samajh hi nahi payi thi par ab use samajh aane laga tha ke Rahul sirf raat me apni jarurat mitane uske paas aata tha, usne kabhi nidhi ke uski khushiyo ke bare me socha hi nahi tha, wo bas apni pyas bujha ke so jaya karta tha aur reh jati nidhi jo pyase man aur sharir ke sath raate kaat ti thi.

Nidhi ko is ghar me Rahul ke dil me uski kya jagah hai yahi samajh me nahi aata tha, ghar me saari sukh suvidhaye thi isiliye baahar jakar kaam karne ki jarurat nahi thi, use bhi aise kuch hobbies maintain karne ki adat nahi thi, ghar me sab kaamo ke liye naukar lage huye the isiliye ghar ka kaam bhi uske hisse me nahi aata tha, acha agar Rahul ke liye kuch banaya jaye to wo ghar par khana khayega ya nahi ye bhi nidhi ko pata nahi hota tha isiliye wo kitchen me jati tak nahi thi

Nayi nayi shadi ke baad uske man me jo utsah tha wo ab khatam ho chuka tha aur din dhakelne ka kaam chal raha tha

Rahul ne apni mehnat se sab kuch kamaya tha, uske hisab se wo nidhi ko sare sukh sari khushiya de raha tha, use ache se rakh raha tha aur ek hisab se ye sahi bhi tha lekin ab nidhi ko is sukh se chidh hone lagi thi use in sab se jyada jarurat kisi ke sath ki thi, use sirf Rahul chahiye tha jo use samjhhe uske bare me soche par in chaar saalo me apne sath ke alawa Rahul ne use sabkuch diya tha.

Rahul ki kaam ke sandarbh me kayi baar baahar parties hoti thi, use mahine me ek baar kaam ke liye 2-4 dino tak baahar jana padta tha, sath me office ke collegues hote the isiliye wo kabhi nidhi ko sath nahi le jata tha..

Sach kahu to ab nidhi ne bhi ye astitvaheen jindagi swikar kar li thi, Rahul ye sab apne liye hi kar raha hai ye use yakin tha,

Rahul bhi aisa nahi tha ke baahar kahi muh mare ya uska koi affair ho uski duniya bas jyada se jyada paise kamane tak hi seemit thi, uski duniya me dil ki, feelings ki koi keemat nahi thi,

Dono me na to kabhi koi jhagda hua na koi kisi se kabhi naraj hua, bagair mange Rahul nidhi ko sab de raha tha par nidhi ko sirf wo chahiye tha, nidhi ko chahiye tha ke Rahul apne kaam me se uske liye samay nikale, uske sath baate kare, kabhi to sirf wo dono kisi dinner date par jaye, par Rahul ke hisab se ye saari baate samay ki barbadi thi aur dheere dheere nidhi ne Rahul ke sath is baare me baat karna bhi band kar diya tha.

Kuch dino baad Rahul ne nidhi ke liye ek nayi car kharidi, uske liye apne office ke ek aadmi ke ladke piyush ko driver bolke kaam pe rakh liya..

Nidhi ka waise to kahi baahar jane ka mood nahi karta tha lekin Rahul use jaan bujh kar kisi na kisi bahane baahar bhejne laga, shuruwat me wo ready nahi hoti thi, use lagta tha Rahul uske sath chale dono mil kar kahi ghoom aaye par hamesha uska plan vifal ho jata tha

Wahi 22 saal ka Piyush bahut sidha aur badbad karne wala ladka tha, shuruwat me nidhi uske sath akele kahi jane me uncomfortable feel karti thi par Piyush continue kuch na kuch badbadate huye usse baat karta tha.. uske bhavishya ke sapne kafi bade the, padhai karte huye usne bahut si kalaye seekhi thi



“jindagi behte paani jaisi honi chahiye, hum uska bahaav control kar sakte hai to use ek jagah rok ke kharab kyu karna, jindagi ko jiyo use behne do” ye Piyush ki boli huyi baat nidhi ke man me ghar kar gayi thi, uski baate use achi lagne lagi thi

Hafte me do din nidhi ko baahar leke jana aisa Piyush ka kaam tha, wo subah 10 baje aata tha aur shaam ko 7 baje tak nidhi ko ghar chhod jata tha.. jana kaha hai ye Rahul use call par bata deta tha

Shuruwat me beman se jane wali nidhi ab khushi khushi Piyush ke sath ghumne jati thi.. bhale hi do din kyu na ho lekin ghum ke aane ke baad use acha lagta tha,

Dekhte dekhte ek do mahine beet gaye, Piyush ke sath uski achi jamne lagi thi, Piyush bhi apni had me reh kar usse ache se baat karta tha…

Nidhi ko ab ek bacche ki chah hone lagi thi aur baar baar bolne par bhi Rahul is mamle me tayar nahi ho raha tha, aur uske baar baar pareshan karne ki wajah se ab wo raat ka samay bhi use nahi deta tha… nidhi samajh nahi pa rahi thi ke Rahul aisa kyu kar raha hai?

Wo usse pyar karta hai soche to wo uske paas tak nahi aa raha tha aur pyaar nahi hai soche to nidhi ki sari jarurate bhi puri kar raha tha.. nidhi ka man confuse state me tha

Us raat jab Rahul ghar aaya to usne wapis uske paas bacche ke bare me bat chedi aur hamesha ki tarah Rahul baat ko taal kar apne study room me sone chala gaya, nidhi se uska ye bartav sehan nahi hua aur wo raat bhar roti rahi..

Aaj Piyush gaadi lekar aane wala tha, uski baahar jane ki bilkul icha nahi thi usne Piyush se keh diya tha ke “aaj kahi baahar nahi jana hai tabiyat theek nahi hai tum wapis chale jao”

Piyush ko nidhi ka mesaage ek servent ne de diya tha lekin wo use dekhne ander chala aaya, Piyush aaya hai ye jab nidhi ko ek naukar ne bataya to wo jabardasti uth baithi aur baahar aayi, uska utra hua chehra dekh ke Piyush ghabraya aur bola “mam, docter ko bulau kya? Kya hua hai aapko? Mai sir ko call karta hu”

Waise hi nidhi cheekhi “nahi phone mat karo, kuch nahi hua hai mujhe tum jao theek hu main”

uske chillane se baki naukar daud kar waha pahuche unhe dekh kar nidhi unpar bhi cheekh padi “kya hai.. kya dekhne aaye hai kaam nahi hai kya kuch? Jao apna kaam karo”

aaj madam ko kya hua hai ye unhe bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha nidhi pehli baar unse aisi awaj me baat kar rahi thi, wo sab log waha se jane hi wale the ke nidhi chakkar kha kar wahi gir padi, sab use uthane aaye aur Piyush me Rahul ko call kiya.

Rahul ne use “main important meeting me hu tum dekh log kya hai to” bolke phone cut kar diya

Ek pal ko Piyush chauka lekin tabhi baki sab khayal dimag se nikal kar usne docter ko call lagaya, docter aaye, unhone nidhi ko check kiya “tanav ki wajah se chakkar aaye the baki kuch nahi hai, inka khayal rakhiye” itna bol ke dawaiyo ka prescription dekar docter chale gaye

Nidhi ne kuch samnay baad aankhe kholi ghar me ke do naukar aur Piyush ko saamne dekh kar usne ek saas chhodi aur ghar ke ek naukar Raghu ko pucha “saahab nahi aaye?”

Raghu ne nidhi ke sawal par na me gardan hila di nidhi ki aankho me pani aa gaya aur Raghu uske liye soup lene chala gaya, Piyush wahi khada tha nidhi ne use jane ke liye kaha to wo bhi waha se chala gaya, rahul ko batane ke liye use use call kiya to nidhi theek hai sunte hi Rahul ne bagair kuch puche phone kaat diya

Piyush ko dheere dheere sab samajh aa raha tha, ghar me ke raghu aur vilma ke saath thoda time wo baate karta raha aur unhone bhi use anjane me hi nidhi aur Rahul ke sambandh kaise hai iski idea de di.. nidhi kafi achi ladki thi aur Rahul bhi bura nahi tha lekin fir ye aisa kyu ye sawal Piyush ke dimag me uthne laga, usne man hi man decide kiya ke wo in dono ke beech ki duriya mitayega aur iske liye Raghu aur vimla ki madad lene ka usne socha

Idhar nidhi ko laga tha ke uski tabiyat ka sun kar Rahul uske liye dauda chala ayega lekin wo uski meeting me se uske liye samay nahi nikaal saka jiska nidhi ko kafi dukh hua, nidhi roye ja rahi thi, bas 26 saal ki thi wo aur is umra me ladkiya kya kya nahi karti lekin yaha wo sab kuch hokar bhi sukhi nahi thi samadhani nahi thi

Kya ek pati ka kaam apni biwi ko sari suvihdaye dena hi hota hai? Uska apni patni ke liye koi aur kartavya nahi hota kya?? In khayalo se use aur bhi jyada rona aa raha tha.. nidhi ka uska kareebi koi nahi tha jisse wo apna dukh baat sakti thi, uski maa ka swrgwaas ho chuka tha aur pita uski bhabhi ke darr me jee rahe the

Apne ki khayalo me use kab neend aayi use pata nahi chala, vimla do baar uske liye soup le aayi lekin wapis chali gayi

Agle din Rahul apne office ke liye ready hokar nikal gaya, nidhi kuch samay waise hi leti rahi aur fir kuch soch kar wo jhat se uthi.

Usne Piyush ko call karke bula liya aur ready hone lagi, aaj usne badhiya jeans top pehna hua tha,, halkasa makeup kiya hua tha baal khule chhod rakhe the apne aapko aaine me dekh kar wo halka sa muskurayi fir baahar aakar vimla se usne nashta lagane kaha..

Vimla uske liye soup aur pohe ka nashta lekar aayi aur nidhi ko dekhne lagi, ye roop ye atmavishwas wo kafi dino baad dekh rahi thi.. aaj apni malkin khush hai ye dekh kar use bhi acha laga.

Nidhi ko dekhte huye Piyush ki bhi wahi haalat thi jo vimla ki thi use use gaadi lekar mall me chalne kaha aur nidhi ne Piyush ko sath me lekar kafi saari shopping ki usi ke sath lunch kiya fir kafi jagah ghumne ke baad wo hamesha se thoda late ghar lauti wo bhi raat ka khana kha kar

Piyush aaj nidhi ka alag roop dekh raha tha, wo uske sath dosto jaisa behave kar rahi thi.. shopping karte samay usse puch kar kapde choose kar rahi thi

Paise ki to koi kami nahi thi aur ab na hi kisi ka bandhan tha.. pati kewal paise chhapne ki machine ban ke reh gaya tha, uske liye nidhi ki koi kimat nahi thi aur nidhi ne bhi in sab ko swikar karte huye uska khayal chhodte huye apni life dil khol kar jine ka rasta chun liya tha..

Ek hi ghar me rehte huye dono ek dusre ke liye paraye the

Rahul ab nidhi ki bacche ke liye hone wali kitkit band hone se man hi man khush tha

Shadhi aur shadi ke mayne dono ke liye badal chuke the, nidhi ko ye baate kabhi kabhi pareshan kar deti thi lekin isme wo akeli kuch nahi kar sakti thi

Hamesha sath rehne ki wajah se ab anjane me hi nidhi aur piyush paas aane lage the, dono ko vastavikta ki samajh thi lekin use bhul kar apni maryada sambhalte huye dono apna Rishta nibha rahe the.. nidhi ko jo chahiye the wo use Piyush ke sath me mil raha tha

Rahul apni hi duniya me magan tha.. uske hisab se nidhi bas uski jimmedari thi jise wo nibha raha tha, ek taraf koi Rishta na hokar bhi Piyush nidhi ko mansik aadhar de raha tha wahi Rahul jo uska sab kuch tha usse dur bhag raha tha aur itna hokar bhi dono ke man me kabhi ek dusre ko chhodne ka khayal nahi aaya tha dono apne apne rasto par chal rahe the

Ab isme galat kaun? Sahi kaun? Ye sare sawaal pare rakh kar nidhi Rahul aur Piyush apne apne rasto par chal rahe the

Samaj ka unki or dekhne ka najariya bhale hi acha na ho lekin unhe uski parwa nahi thi , Piyush aur nidhi ekdusre ke sath khush the. Apan Rahul ko dhoka de rahe hai iska kabhi kabhi nidhi ko dukh hota tha lekin Rahul ko uski jindagi me kya chal raha hai iski parwa nahi ye dhyan me aate hi wo apne rarte chup chap aage badh jati thi.



Pyar ka matlab kya hai ye use Piyush ke sath samajh aa raha tha piyush aur nidhi ko ek dusre ke sath se pata chal raha tha ke bas piaso ki jarurat puri karna yahi pyaar nahi hai jaha ek dusre ke man ka khayal na karte huye ki gayi koi bhi baat lagu nahi hoti, jaha ek hi chhat ke niche rehte huye agar jodidaar ek dusre se apne man ki baat na kar sake use kaise pyaar ka naam doge?

Nidhi ko uske astitva ki yaad dilane ka kaam Piyush ne kiya tha use jo chahiye tah wo easily use diya tha.. kuch sach aise hote hai jinme ek sathi ki jarurat hoti hai aur jab do dil milte hai wahi to nischal prem behta hai..

Din par din beet rahe the, Rahul ke office me ek nayi ladki join huyi thi alhad lekin hoshiyar aur apne kaam me tatpar, Mohini naam tha uska aur apne swavbhav ki wajah se wo jaldi hi office me ghul gayi thi

Rahul bhi uski or akarshit hone laga tha.. lekin wo apne kaam me busy rehti thi aur aise hi ek baar mauka dekh ke Rahul ne uske saamne apni feelings jahir ki jo Mohini ko acha nahi laga, uski shadi tay ho chuki thi jisse wo khush thi aur rahul ab usse apne liye samay chah raha tha, Mohini jaanti thi ke Rahul shadishuda hai lekin usne uski personal life me nahi jhaka tha

Rahul ne use apne bare me ek jhuthi image dikhayi thi, wo apni biwi ke sath khush nahi hai use Mohini jaise sathi ki jarurat hai aur Mohini uski wife banne ke liye kaise perfect hai ye wo hamesha use batate rehta tha

Rahul ke kayi baar kehne par bhi Mohini apne hone wale pati ko chhodne ko tayar nahi thi wo rahul ke kisi bhi baat ko response nahi deti thi aur Rahul se chhutkara pane ke liye usne resign kar diya tha aur usse dur chali gayi..

Rahul ko ab apne akele pan ka ehsaas hua.. jindagi me usne paisa to bahut kamaya tha lekin jindagi me paise ke sath pyaar bhi jaruri hai ye ab use samajh aa raha tha

Rahul ko ab nidhi ki yaad aane lagi, shadi ke baad ke unke sath bitaye pal use yaad aane lage, nidhi ka pyaar use nidhi ki or ab khich raha tha..

Itne saalo me usne kis tarah nidhi ko ignore kiya hai iska use ehsaas hua aur dusri taraf apan ne use sari sukh suvidhaye di hai iski khushi hone lagi, nidhi ka pati hone ke naate wo bas meri hai is baat ka use ehsaas hua



Rahul ko yaad aaya ke agle mahine uski shadi ki anniversary hai aur kuch yaad karke wo bahut dukhi hua, use ab tak ki sari anniversaries yaad aayi, nidhi us din kitni sundar tayar hoti thi lekin mujhe uski or dekhne tak ka samay nahi hota tha.. itne saalo me maine use kabhi wish bhi nahi kiya iska use dukh hone laga aur itna sab hokar bhi nidhi apna patni dharm nibhati rahi



Man hi man apne ko koste huye ab ye galti dobara na karne ka man Rahul bana chuka tha.. aajtak jo jo chize usne nahi kari thi unki bharpai kaise kare ye wo soch raha tha Rahul ka man ab thoda halka ho gaya tha.. Rahul ne dil hi dil me nidhi se mafi mangi aur “ab tumhe naye Rahul se milata hu jo sirf tumhara hoga aur ab yaha se apni jindagi naye se shuru karenge” is kjhayal se wo khush hua

Aur is change ki shuruwat jaldi karne ke liye usne pehle un dono ko ek dusre ke sath time mile isiliye 15 din ki singapur ki trip ka booking kiya aur nidhi ko surprise dene ke liye aaj jaldi ghar aaya..

Ghar me koi nahi tha.. naukro ko awaj dete huye wo uske room me gaya, waha bhi koi nahi tha.. Rahul chauka.. aaj to nidhi kahi bahar bhi nahi jane wali thi fir gayi kaha? Use thoda gussa aaya, aakhir male ego apna rang to dikhayega hi!

Wo baahar aaya aur usne nidhi ko phone lagaya lekin uska phone band tha.. wo chidhne laga, nidhi bagair bataye baahar kaise ja sakti hai is khayal se hi use gussa aane laga

Wo gusse me ghar me idhar udhar ghumne laga tab use table par ek kagaz diya jispar kuch likha hua tha.. usne jhat se use uthaya, akshar nidhi ke the.. Rahul use padhne laga

‘Rahul,

Mera ye letter jab aaptak pahuchega tab tak main bahut dur ja chuki houngi, tumhare ghar se bhi aur jindagi se bhi.. tum mujhe nahi dhundhoge jaanti hu kyuki itne saalo ke sath se mujhe samajh aa chuka hai ke tumhari jindagi me meri koi jagah nahi hai.. khair

Rahul, hamari shadi huyi tab se tumne mujhe sab kuch diya siway apne samay apne pyaar ke.. maine bhi ise hi niyati maan liya lekin man me kahi na kahi ek umeed thi ke tumhe kabhi to mere pyar ka ehsaas hoga kabhi to tumhara pyaar mujhe milega, par mera sapna sapna hi raha, mujhe baccha chahiye tha laga tha uske aane se to tum ghar me time doge par yaha bhi lagta hai mera pyar kam pad gaya..

Maine sab kuch accept kar liya tha kyuki mujhe viswas tha ke tum sirf mere ho aur kabhi na kabhi tumhe bhi mere hone ka ehsaas hoga aur ab jab mujhe pata chala ki tumhari jindagi me koi aur hai jise tum pasand karte ho to isiliye tumhara rasta saaf karne ke liye main tumhari jindagi se door ja rahi hu.

Mere man me tumhare liye koi gussa nahi hai kyuki hame hamari jindagi me sahi insan ki kitni jarurat hoti hai mai jaanti hu.. main tumhe mere bandhan se mukt kar rahi hu, cupboard me maine divorce papers sign karke rakhe hai, aapse mujhe kisi chiz ki asha nahi hai kyuki mere liye paisa sabkuch nahi hai.

Tum tumhari pasand ki ladki se shadi karke khush raho yahi bhagwan se mangti hu..

Nidhi’



Rahul ke liye ye sab anapekshit tha.. wo niche baith kar rone laga aur sirf rota raha.. jindagi me usne bahut kuch kamaya tha lekin aaj kafi kuch kho chuka tha..

Ab isme dosh tha kiska..? Rahul ka ya haalato ka..?

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Good story showing the reality of materialistic life of morden age, where ppl are becoming money making machine and forgets the real life.

Rating 8/10
 
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