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Awesome update bhai
Aaryan ke saath aakriti thi use samay slaka ke bhesh mei aur usne amrit bhi pi liya kya?
Aaryan ke saath aakriti thi use samay slaka ke bhesh mei aur usne amrit bhi pi liya kya?
Avaran
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150 Update
Alien ya Dusre Planet Ke Log ke Bare Me Kuch cheeze Samne Aagayi Hain ,
Pehli Baat Samay Chakra , Nakstra aur Prince Oras Kya Teeno Ek Hi Hain Ya Oras Koi Dusra Vyakti Hain Jiske Pass Samay Shakti Hain
Ju ko Yaad Me Chapter Mention Ka Keh Raha Thaa Ki Mujhe Janna Hain Kis Kis Din Kya Huwa Ek Tarah Time Line Isse Mujhe Janna Thaa Ki Samay Shakti Kis Tarah Use huwi , Kya Jenith Ne Hi Usee Ki Thee Aisa Kuch Ya Koi Aur Bhi Thaa Samay Shakti Usee Wala
Mujhe Pehle Laga Apne Vega Kaha Se Connect ho story me Kya Role Hoga Kahi aisa To Nahi Oras Hi vega Ho Jiska Hi Shakti Samay Chhakra Namak Yantra me Ho .
Iski Mujhe Possibility kam Lagi Lekin Vega ka Role Abhi Clear Nahi Huwa na issilye Usko Alien Se Jodd kar Dekha shayad Waha scope hain .
Aur Ye Jo Log
( Me Keh Raha Thaa Ki Kuch Suprise Dundha Mene Ye Wahi Suprise Thaa )
Andronika shakti aakhir Kya Hain Jo Wo Allanka Itna Desperate Thaa Shaktiyo Lekar , aur Ye arena (orena ) kon Aggressive ladki aagayi
Ye Ariyan Ke Yodha To atlas ke Alliance Thee Na Yani Space Ki Ladai ME ariyan Ke Soldier bahut Kaam Aayege achi Ki Jeet Ke Liye
Remember Ulka Pind Bhi Gira Thaa Kuch Din Pehle Jarur Ye New aaksh Ganga Wale Oras Ko Dhunde Wale Hi Log Hoge.
Aur Vidumna Ka Shayad Bahut se Reader Ne point Miss Kiya Hoga lekin Me Thehra James Bond Se Bhi Khatarnaak sari Story Ek Dum Bariki Se Padhta Hu Issilye Vidhumna Ye Kaalbuhu Ki Maa hi Hain .
Wo Trishal Aur kalika Jisko Pakdne Gaye Wahi wali
Lekin Main Baat Jab Iss Update Me Vidhumna Ekdum Manavta ki Rakshak Jo Duniya Ka Bhala Chahti Hain Shanti isthapit Karna Chahti Hain To Jo hamne Pehle kuch Update Me Vidhumna Dekha Wo Kya Thee Jo Putra Moohh Me galat Kar Rahi Thee .
Shayad Shakti Aajane Se Vidumna Apne Marg Se Batak Gayi Thee Even Kuch Update Pehle Vidumna ne Trishal Se Kaha Thaa Prithvi pe Raksha Aur Devta ka Santulan Rokhna MAKSHAD hain Lekin Sarp Lene Ke Baad Bhi Abhi Tak Apna Lakshya Hasil Nahi Ki .
Ye Sarp Dand Kahi Aisa To Nahi Kisi Ne Vidumna se Cheen liya Current Me , Kya Bannketu Sajjan Mahushya Hain Ya Ye Chalak khopdi vidhumna ko Phashya Shakti ke Lalach Me .
Overall shandaar Update Hamesha Ki Tarah
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Lets Review Newala Aur Octopus wala Update
Jindgi me Kabhi Pysics Samjh Nahi Aayi Lekin yaha Physics Ke Teacher Raj sharma Ne Bahut Ache Se explain Kiya Rotation Cycle
Sath Hi Pehli ka Jawab easy Lag Raha Ki Chhakar Hi Lagana Hain Lekin Tilism Ka Twist Ne Sochne Pe Majboor Kiya Ki Kese Nelva ko paar Kare
Cristi Aur Alex ka masti Bhara Andaaz ek Baar Fir Dikha
Sath hi Suyash and Company ki Chalaki dinn Ba Dinn Increase Hote Jarahi Hain.
Sath Hi Octapus Me Kiss Tarah Ki Problem aayegi Kya octapos ki sare Pair Se Inke Ladai hogi Ya octopus Inko Jakad Lega Jissse Inko Bachna Hoga .
Overall Shandaar Update Hamesha Ki Tarah .
Lets review start Today Update
Vedant Rahasya khul Jane Se Bahut Se sawal Ka Jawab MilGaya Bhai .
Suyash ko Jab Pata Chala Hoga Ki Aakriti ne Jo Dhoke diya Aur Uske sath Jo bhi Huwa Uska guilty Hi Hoga Jo Usne Apne Mout Ka swikar Kiya .
Yani Aakriti Shuru Se Chalak Thee Jo Suysh Ke Sath Itna Bada Game Khel Diya usne
Wese uss Samay Suyash Ne Aakriti Ko Pehchana Kyu Nahi Kya Uss Samay Usne Roop Badal Rakha Thaa Jo aakriti ka Chehra Abhi Shalaka Jesa Thaa wo Chehra uss Samy Se hi usne Dharan Kiya Thaa .
Yani 5000 hazar Saal se Aakriti Shakala Ke Chehre Ke Sath Ghum Rahi Hain Aur Dusri aakriti shayad Amratav ko Ghahan Ki Aur Jo Suyash Ke hisse Ka Amaratav Thaa Wo Amu Ne Gharhan Kiya .
Isse Sidha Hota Hain Ammu Ko Amartav kA Vardan Hain
Sath Hi Jo Ending Me Shalaka Ne Aage Ki Book Band Ki Kahi Aisa Nahi Ho Ki Kuch Raaz Abhi Bhi Baki Ho Jo Shalaka Gusse me Dhyan Nahi Diye .
Ye Shalaka Ke Gusse me Kya Aakriti Fasegi Ya Suyash Ko Iss Sab Ka kasurwar manegi Bahut Badi Turning Point aagayi Story me Ya Ek perfect side Love relationship Arc create Kiya JARARA Jisme Sab Kuch Muskil Hi Hain.
Wo past Ke Garden Wale Scene Bahut Hi Badhiya Hi Describe Kiya Bhai , Chhoti Chhoti Scene Se Bahut Kuch Prenadayak scene Dikha Dete Ho Ab Yaha Insan Aur Janwaar Ki Feeling Hi Samjhaa Diye .
Ek Hi Shabad aakriti ke Liye iss ladki Ki Lalach Ne Bada Kand Kiya , Na ye Suyash Ke Piche Jati Na Suyash shalaka Ka Jewan Itna Problematic Rehta .
Wese Kya Ju Ne Bata Diya Ki aakriti Ne Chhera Kese Shalaka Me Badla Ya Abhi Ye Sach Revel Nahi Huwa .
Iss Update ka Sabse Bada Sawal Shalaka Gussa Kitna Nukshan Dayak Hoga
Overall Hamesha Ki Tarah shandaar Khatarnaak Update
Waiting for More
Raj_sharma Review Aagaya
150 Update
Alien ya Dusre Planet Ke Log ke Bare Me Kuch cheeze Samne Aagayi Hain ,
Pehli Baat Samay Chakra , Nakstra aur Prince Oras Kya Teeno Ek Hi Hain Ya Oras Koi Dusra Vyakti Hain Jiske Pass Samay Shakti Hain
Ju ko Yaad Me Chapter Mention Ka Keh Raha Thaa Ki Mujhe Janna Hain Kis Kis Din Kya Huwa Ek Tarah Time Line Isse Mujhe Janna Thaa Ki Samay Shakti Kis Tarah Use huwi , Kya Jenith Ne Hi Usee Ki Thee Aisa Kuch Ya Koi Aur Bhi Thaa Samay Shakti Usee Wala
Mujhe Pehle Laga Apne Vega Kaha Se Connect ho story me Kya Role Hoga Kahi aisa To Nahi Oras Hi vega Ho Jiska Hi Shakti Samay Chhakra Namak Yantra me Ho .
Iski Mujhe Possibility kam Lagi Lekin Vega ka Role Abhi Clear Nahi Huwa na issilye Usko Alien Se Jodd kar Dekha shayad Waha scope hain .
Aur Ye Jo Log
( Me Keh Raha Thaa Ki Kuch Suprise Dundha Mene Ye Wahi Suprise Thaa )
Andronika shakti aakhir Kya Hain Jo Wo Allanka Itna Desperate Thaa Shaktiyo Lekar , aur Ye arena (orena ) kon Aggressive ladki aagayi
Ye Ariyan Ke Yodha To atlas ke Alliance Thee Na Yani Space Ki Ladai ME ariyan Ke Soldier bahut Kaam Aayege achi Ki Jeet Ke Liye
Remember Ulka Pind Bhi Gira Thaa Kuch Din Pehle Jarur Ye New aaksh Ganga Wale Oras Ko Dhunde Wale Hi Log Hoge.
Aur Vidumna Ka Shayad Bahut se Reader Ne point Miss Kiya Hoga lekin Me Thehra James Bond Se Bhi Khatarnaak sari Story Ek Dum Bariki Se Padhta Hu Issilye Vidhumna Ye Kaalbuhu Ki Maa hi Hain .
Wo Trishal Aur kalika Jisko Pakdne Gaye Wahi wali
Lekin Main Baat Jab Iss Update Me Vidhumna Ekdum Manavta ki Rakshak Jo Duniya Ka Bhala Chahti Hain Shanti isthapit Karna Chahti Hain To Jo hamne Pehle kuch Update Me Vidhumna Dekha Wo Kya Thee Jo Putra Moohh Me galat Kar Rahi Thee .
Shayad Shakti Aajane Se Vidumna Apne Marg Se Batak Gayi Thee Even Kuch Update Pehle Vidumna ne Trishal Se Kaha Thaa Prithvi pe Raksha Aur Devta ka Santulan Rokhna MAKSHAD hain Lekin Sarp Lene Ke Baad Bhi Abhi Tak Apna Lakshya Hasil Nahi Ki .
Ye Sarp Dand Kahi Aisa To Nahi Kisi Ne Vidumna se Cheen liya Current Me , Kya Bannketu Sajjan Mahushya Hain Ya Ye Chalak khopdi vidhumna ko Phashya Shakti ke Lalach Me .
Vyom Bhaiya Yaha Aayege aur vidhumna Ko Marg Dikhayege Kyuki Vyom Bhaiya Ke Pass Bhi To panch Shol Hain Jo ki Mahashakti Hi Hain .
Overall shandaar Update Hamesha Ki Tarah
Waiting for More
Lets Review Newala Aur Octopus wala Update
Jindgi me Kabhi Pysics Samjh Nahi Aayi Lekin yaha Physics Ke Teacher Raj sharma Ne Bahut Ache Se explain Kiya Rotation Cycle
Sath Hi Pehli ka Jawab easy Lag Raha Ki Chhakar Hi Lagana Hain Lekin Tilism Ka Twist Ne Sochne Pe Majboor Kiya Ki Kese Nelva ko paar Kare
Cristi Aur Alex ka masti Bhara Andaaz ek Baar Fir Dikha
Sath hi Suyash and Company ki Chalaki dinn Ba Dinn Increase Hote Jarahi Hain.
Sath Hi Octapus Me Kiss Tarah Ki Problem aayegi Kya octapos ki sare Pair Se Inke Ladai hogi Ya octopus Inko Jakad Lega Jissse Inko Bachna Hoga .
Overall Shandaar Update Hamesha Ki Tarah .
Lets review start Today Update
Vedant Rahasya khul Jane Se Bahut Se sawal Ka Jawab MilGaya Bhai .
Suyash ko Jab Pata Chala Hoga Ki Aakriti ne Jo Dhoke diya Aur Uske sath Jo bhi Huwa Uska guilty Hi Hoga Jo Usne Apne Mout Ka swikar Kiya .
Yani Aakriti Shuru Se Chalak Thee Jo Suysh Ke Sath Itna Bada Game Khel Diya usne
Wese uss Samay Suyash Ne Aakriti Ko Pehchana Kyu Nahi Kya Uss Samay Usne Roop Badal Rakha Thaa Jo aakriti ka Chehra Abhi Shalaka Jesa Thaa wo Chehra uss Samy Se hi usne Dharan Kiya Thaa .
Yani 5000 hazar Saal se Aakriti Shakala Ke Chehre Ke Sath Ghum Rahi Hain Aur Dusri aakriti shayad Amratav ko Ghahan Ki Aur Jo Suyash Ke hisse Ka Amaratav Thaa Wo Amu Ne Gharhan Kiya .
Isse Sidha Hota Hain Ammu Ko Amartav kA Vardan Hain
Sath Hi Jo Ending Me Shalaka Ne Aage Ki Book Band Ki Kahi Aisa Nahi Ho Ki Kuch Raaz Abhi Bhi Baki Ho Jo Shalaka Gusse me Dhyan Nahi Diye .
Ye Shalaka Ke Gusse me Kya Aakriti Fasegi Ya Suyash Ko Iss Sab Ka kasurwar manegi Bahut Badi Turning Point aagayi Story me Ya Ek perfect side Love relationship Arc create Kiya JARARA Jisme Sab Kuch Muskil Hi Hain.
Wo past Ke Garden Wale Scene Bahut Hi Badhiya Hi Describe Kiya Bhai , Chhoti Chhoti Scene Se Bahut Kuch Prenadayak scene Dikha Dete Ho Ab Yaha Insan Aur Janwaar Ki Feeling Hi Samjhaa Diye .
Ek Hi Shabad aakriti ke Liye iss ladki Ki Lalach Ne Bada Kand Kiya , Na ye Suyash Ke Piche Jati Na Suyash shalaka Ka Jewan Itna Problematic Rehta .
Wese Kya Ju Ne Bata Diya Ki aakriti Ne Chhera Kese Shalaka Me Badla Ya Abhi Ye Sach Revel Nahi Huwa .
Iss Update ka Sabse Bada Sawal Shalaka Gussa Kitna Nukshan Dayak Hoga
Overall Hamesha Ki Tarah shandaar Khatarnaak Update
Waiting for More
Raj_sharma Review Aagaya
Avaran
Ｓᴛᴀʀs ᴄᴀɴ’ᴛ sʜɪɴᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜᴏᴜᴛ ᴅᴀʀᴋɴᴇss.
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Wese Dekh Raha Hu Raj_sharma Bhai story par Kitni Mehnat Karta Hain Kitni Research Kiya Karta Hain Fir Bhi Itna Response Kam
Itna details me Wo Jata Hain Kabhi Physics lekar Aajata Hain Kabhi Usko Religious books padhne Padhti Hogi Kyuki Bina Research Kese Likhega .
Jo sirf Likes kiya karte Hain wo Todha Do chaar lines likh diya karo bhaiya
Writers khus HoJata Hain isse .
Writer ko khus karo Writer update dekar Ju logo ko khus kar dega update pe update dega .
Review likhna rocket science Todhe hain Jo Likhna Hi nahi aata
Bas update me Point pakdo aur unpe possibilities banao kya ye hosakta hain kya ye Nahi bas Easy Hain
Issiliye quality content ko uska sahi apprection Do Jo wo deserve karta hain
Itna details me Wo Jata Hain Kabhi Physics lekar Aajata Hain Kabhi Usko Religious books padhne Padhti Hogi Kyuki Bina Research Kese Likhega .
Jo sirf Likes kiya karte Hain wo Todha Do chaar lines likh diya karo bhaiya
Writers khus HoJata Hain isse .
Writer ko khus karo Writer update dekar Ju logo ko khus kar dega update pe update dega .
Review likhna rocket science Todhe hain Jo Likhna Hi nahi aata
Bas update me Point pakdo aur unpe possibilities banao kya ye hosakta hain kya ye Nahi bas Easy Hain
Issiliye quality content ko uska sahi apprection Do Jo wo deserve karta hain
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nice update. shalaka ne vedant rahasyam padhna shuru kar diya ..bahut soch samajhkar banaya gaya hai us kitab ko ,jab kisi panne ko chhuwo to us yaad me pahuch sakte hai .
shalaka ne bachpan ki yaad ko taaza kiya aaryan ke us waqt me jakar jaha wo prakriti ko mehsus karna sikhata hai shalaka ko .
chidiya ke saath khelnewala scene ekdam zabardast tha .
aryan ne amrit ki 2 bunde hasil ki hai jisse dono amar ho sakte hai par dusre din par taal diya peena ,shayad isise koi durghatna ho gayi ho jisse aryan ne apne aap ko maar diya ho .
shalaka ne bachpan ki yaad ko taaza kiya aaryan ke us waqt me jakar jaha wo prakriti ko mehsus karna sikhata hai shalaka ko .
chidiya ke saath khelnewala scene ekdam zabardast tha .
aryan ne amrit ki 2 bunde hasil ki hai jisse dono amar ho sakte hai par dusre din par taal diya peena ,shayad isise koi durghatna ho gayi ho jisse aryan ne apne aap ko maar diya ho .