mat do update, waisi bhi is kahani ko ab kam hi log padhte hain pehle ke mukabale....... Iski wajah ye hai ki aap story me ragini ke character ko degrade karte rahe ho , pehli baat to first person me story narration kar rahe ho aur phir ek bete ke muh se uski maa ki chudai ka varnan kar rahe ho vo bhi kisi aur ke saath..... Ye sab kaun padhega bhala,,,,,,,, incest readers ye sab nahi padhte aur jo adultery padhte hain vo bhi ye sab third person narration me padhte hain, mai aapko Gyan nahi de raha bura lage to maaf kijiyega , aapne bilkul sahi faisla kiya hai jab mann ho update de dena jisko padhna hoga padh lega, waisi bhi story me sirf sex elements hain aur aapke readers bhi aise hain jo sirf kuch seconds ke mehmaan hote hain aur ye story bhi bas aise hilane wale readers ke liye bani hai to phir baaki ke readers kahan se aayenge.... ek example le lo xforum par hi ek story chal rahi hai "papa ne mujhe ghar ka mard banaya" by akashx11 is writer ki writing style aapse bhi third class hogi lekin readers iski story ke deewane hain kyunki iski story me plot aur direction hai aur story me sex, drama aur suspense ke saath saath thrill elements bhi hain isliye iski story par readers pratikriya dete hain aur aapki story par hila ke nikal lete hain.... Beej boye ho kathal ka aur chahiye aapko anaar aisa nahi hota na bhai....