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Update Sunday se pahle nahi aayengi.baaki kya puchhna hai.Kaise hoo jaani,, kya khabar h
Bss tumhra haalchal,,Update Sunday se pahle nahi aayengi.baaki kya puchhna hai.
Shukriya puchhne ke liye.Bss tumhra haalchal,,![]()
Bhaii ji L toh sbke lge h,, prr,,, Aapki lastline smjh me ni ayi yrr,, apun main character wala,, uska kya mtlb,, .Shukriya puchhne ke liye.
Vaise to Ye story likhni shuru ek fantasy ke taur par hi ki hai ,roj time nahi nikal pata likhne ko kyuki padhai ki vajah se kuch dimag lagane vaala karne ka man nahi karta aur kabhi likha bhi hai to vo UPDATEs mujhe hi pasand nahi aati.
Uske liye phir bhi kuch time nikal raha hu.Bich me family aur personal problem ke vajah se UPDATEs late ho gayi us vakt thoda sad tha tab bahut se ideas aaye story ke baare me.
jisme kuch kuch ideas aap sabko pasand aayenge, kuch sabko pasand nahi aayenge
Aisa mujhe lagta hai aur ho sakta hai shayad sabko pasand aaye Bass itna bol sakta hu ki ye twist bahut dark hoga.us plot ko hata bhi nahi sakta kyuki vo aage bhi carry karega story me.
Bass itna bol sakta hu ki ye plot bass existing characters ko aur achhe se set up karne ke liye hai.
baaki personally life kede Lage hue hai. Lekin kiske nahi lage. Apun main character hai galtiya apni hi hai jhelo phir.
Main apni problem ke baare me Bol raha tha, ab jhelana apne ko hi padega.Bhaii ji L toh sbke lge h,, prr,,, Aapki lastline smjh me ni ayi yrr,, apun main character wala,, uska kya mtlb,, .
Tum apne hisab se he likho sare twists dalo jo bhi shi lge
Ohh acha acha,,, haa wo toh h yrrMain apni problem ke baare me Bol raha tha, ab jhelana apne ko hi padega.