• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,195 83.0%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 13.1%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,440

Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
Supreme
11,164
88,181
259
Last edited:

Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
Supreme
11,164
88,181
259
Update - 133 ~ Labyrinth and Invitation

Ab tak...

Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’


Ab aage...

Veer ne apni aankhein band kii ya yu kahe ki uski aankhein apne aap hi band ho gayi. Uske shareer ko ek jhatka laga aur uski consciousness drift hoke kahi aur hi chali gayi.

‘Ye- Ye kaha hu mein?’

Usse kuch bhi dikhaayi nahi diya. Chaaro orr andhkaar hi andhkaar faila hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano woh andhere me doobe kisi space me ho.

‘P-Pari? Pariiii???’

[M-Maaste…. r…. Maaste….. r…. K…y….a a…a…p m… u…. j… h… e……………….]

‘Pari?????’

Jo awaaz Veer ko Pari ki sunaayi de rahi thi, woh dheere dheere gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek ghanghor sannaata chhaa gaya. Woh na hi kuch sunn paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Woh apne badan ke ango ko bhi mehsoos nahi kar paa raha tha.

Ek bhayanak ghabrahat janm lii.

‘Pariiiiiiiii????????’

Pari ko pukaarne ka koi fayda na hua. Aisa laga jaise woh poori tarah se uss se alag ho chuka tha.

‘Calm down Veer! Calm yourself down!’

Usne ek lambi saans lii aur khud ko shaant kiya. Apni tezz dhadkano ko thoda thaam usne dhyaan lagaaya.

‘Pari mujhe sunn nahi paa rahi. Aur na hi Pari ko mein. Iska matlab hamaare connection ke beech kuch aisa hai jo hume ek dusre se baat karne se rok raha hai.’

Usne fauran hi apni sthiti ka aaklan kiya. Usse yaad aaya ki chand palo pehle woh Pari ko nirdesh de raha tha.


‘Do it Pari!’

[P-Par Master!? Finally aapke paas mauka hai apne pendant ke raaz ke baare me jaan’ne ka. Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi.]

‘Mene kaha na! Do it!’

[P-Par-]

‘Pariiii!!!!!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]


Yahi hua tha. Haan! Yahi toh hua tha.

Veer ko yaad tha acche se. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Pari ne Seer Vision ke baare me kya bataya tha.

[Seer Vision ~

Description : Grants the vision of a seer. The skill allows the user to instantly witness the past related to anything. Beware! Mental pain is guaranteed. If the user fails to reclaim the memory, skill will terminate automatically.]

Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha. Ye woh legendary skill thi jo usse kisi bhi vastu se sambandhit uska ateet poora ka poora dikha sakti thi.

Ek prakaar se ye uske ‘Check’ function ki tarah hi thi. Par uss se kahi zyaada aadhunik. Jo check function nahi dekh sakta tha woh Seer Vision dekh sakta tha.

Ab usse samajh aaya ki kyu Pari itne peeche lagi hui thi ki woh isse apne pendant par istemaal kare. Agar usne aisa kiya hota, toh pendant ka raaz ek jhatke me khul ke saamne aa jaata. Lekin kya pendant ka raaz Miss Kaera se zyada zaroori tha?

Veer ke liye ~ Nahi!

Aur isliye, usne aisi skill ko daav par lagaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha.

Dikkat yahi thi ki iske istemaal ke saath saath aane waale bhayanak maansik dard ko bhi jhelna tha. Aur itna hi nahi, agar kisi kaaran vash wo chhipi hui yaad ko paane me nakaam hota hai toh skill wahi apne aap band ho jayegi.

Dusre shabdo me, skill barbaad chali jayegi.

Ye bohut risky tha. Kyuki jokhim bhi tha aur safalta ki koi guarantee bhi nahi.

‘Agar description ko dhyaan me rakha jaaye toh mujhe memory retrieve karni hai. That’s right! Mujhe sirf uss par hi dhyaan dena hai.’

Veer ne sahi disha me sochna shuru kiya.

Usne ye skill uss diary par istemaal ki thi jo usse Kaera ke puraane ghar me kahi chhipi hui mili thi.

Veer ke mann me kayi sawaal the. Jese ki woh diary waha kar kya rahi thi? Kya kabhi Kaera ya kisi aur ko iss diary ke baare me pata nahi laga? Aise aneko sawaal se woh joojh raha tha. Par filhaal inke liye samay nahi tha.

Kaera ke emotions ko baahar laane ke liye usse ek strong emotional impact dena zaroori tha. Ek prakaar ka emotional breakdown. Jab diary khol Veer ne andar dekha toh woh samajh gaya tha usse kya karna hai.

Abhi usne khud ko sambhaala hi tha ki tabhi,

‘Urghhh~’

Achanak se ek baar phir uski consciousness kahi drift hone lagi.



‘Aaaarrgghh~’

Aisa laga maano jese usse koi kheech ke kahi le jaa raha tha. Uske mastishk me ek bhayanak dard utha.

Dard ke maare usne aankhein band kar lii, aur jab sab kuch shaant hone ke baad usne aankh khol dekha toh,



Uske saamne ek labyrinth maujood tha. Yaani ek bhool-bhulaiyaa. Ek prakaar ka maze.

‘Ye toh ek-!!?’

Woh ashcharya-chakit reh gaya. Aas paas usne dekha, dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Sirf ek hi raasta tha uske liye aur woh tha iss labyrinth me ghusna.

‘Shayad isliye skill me likha hua tha ki agar memory retrieve karne me fail huye toh ye band ho jayegi. I get it now. Samajh gaya ye tough kyu hai itna.’

‘But know this… I’m not gonna fall back!’

Nidar hoke woh andar chal diya.

Andar ghuste hi,


“Eaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhh~”

*Screeeeeeeechhhhhhhh*

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

“Die! Die! Die!!!!”

“Noooooooooo~”


Kaan ke parde faad dene waali alag alag cheenkhe aur awaazein sunaayi padne lagi. Apne kaano par haath rakh woh aage badha,

*hic* *hic*

“Uwaaaaaa~”


Kahi kisi chhote se bacche ki rone ki awaaz usse sunaayi deti, toh kahi kisi mahila ke rone ki. Ye jagah kisi bhootiya jagah se kam nahi thi.

‘Kya ye sab? Kaera ki yaado ka hissa hai? Ya fir diary ki?’

Ek bada sawaal aur khada hua.

Woh chal hi raha tha jab uske saamne achanak ek kaali dhundh si chhaane lagi. Bhayanak kaala dhua ikhatta hua aur uska ekmaatr raasta rok diya.

‘This still won’t stop me!’

Bina ghabraaye woh uss kaale dhue me ghus gaya. Aur ghuste hi,

“Aaaaaaaaaarggghhhhhhhhh!!”

Uski dard ke maare cheekh nikalni shuru ho gayi. Phir agle hi shan,


“Pagal ladki!”

“Hahahahaha!!”

“Tum ajeeb ho! Ajeeb! Hume tumse dosti nahi karni! Hato meri bench se!!”

“Mummy dekho! Woh ladki kitni ajeeb hai.”

“Arre ye ladki pagal hai. Hehehe~ Kuch bolti hi nahi hai.”

“Oye iski choti kheecho dekho kaise royegi hehe”

“Hey dekho toh kitna paisa hai saali ke paas.”

“Mene suna hai iske papa bohut bade businessman hai.”

“Tabhi toh paiso pe aish karti hai. Hmph! I hate such people.”

“Sahi kaha. Ghamand toh dekho! Jese apne aap ko koi maharani samajhti ho.”

“Baap ne zaroor teachers, principal ko paise diye honge. Tabhi toh kabhi kuch bolte nahi hai isko.”

“Kya hi kar legi itna padh ke? Raub toh dekho zara iska. Dekho toh, kaise car se utar rahi hai. Jaise duniya me iske hi paas mehngi car hai.”

“Saali par hai bohut hot yaar! Iska baap agar itna wazandaar na hota toh apne laude pe baithaya hota mene isse. Hahahaha!”


Kuch aisi anek baate Veer ke kaano me goonjne lagi. Woh haafte hue jaise hi uss dhundh se baahar aaya, uski saansein ukhadne lagi.

Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Saath hi gussa bhi.

‘Kya ye Kaera ki buri yaadein hai? I-Iska matlab Seer Vision mujhe sirf diary ki hi nahi, diary se jude insaan ki bhi yaadein dikha sakta hai?’

Dheere dheere Veer ke kaano se woh awaazein gaayab hui.

‘Aise aur kitne dard aap apne seene me daba ke rakhi ho huh?’

Woh bhool-bhulaiyaa me anumaan laga ke raasto par mudta gaya.

Abhi kuch derr hi hui thi jab saamne usse ek choti bacchi dikhaayi dii. Woh frock pehne neeche zameen par baithe apna sarr jhuka ke ro rahi thi.


*hic* *hic*

“Mamma!”


Veer ko zaroorat nahi thi ye samajhne ki ki saamne baithi ye chhoti si bacchi kaun thi.

“Mamma! Mein ajeeb hu kya? Sab mujhe ajeeb kyu kehte hai? *hic* Sab mujh se dur kyu bhaagte hai? *hic* Mamma! Wapas aa jao na! Mein ab bilkul shaitani nahi karungi. *hic* Mamma!”

Veer aage badha,

“Nahi! Nahi Kaera! Tum bilkul ajeeb nahi ho.”

Woh kehte hue aage aaya. Usne Kaera ko chheena chaaha par uske chheete hi woh ladki ek dhue me tabdeel ho gayi.

Labyrinth uske saath jese khel raha tha.

Aise kayi kaali dhundh se guzarte hue aur dard pe dard sehte hue woh jese tese apni manzil ke qareeb pohuch hi gaya.

Iss baar uske saamne koi kaali dhundh nahi thi. Saamne tha ek ujaala. Peela prakaash jo uski aankho ko chaka-chaundh kiye hue tha.

Woh uss prakaash ki orr badha aur jese hi roshni ki kiran ke sampark me woh aaya, ek baar phir woh khichta hua kahi aur chala gaya.

Fir sab kuch. Usse sab kuch nazar aa gaya. Memory retrieve ho chuki thi. Aur uske baad,

*huff* *huff* *huff*

[Maaasteerrr!!]

Uske kaano me awaaz aayi. Woh waapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha. Par uski haalat ab bigad rahi thi. Sarr bhanna raha tha.

[Master you did it! You finally did it.]

Woh paseene se lathpath tha. Pari ko jawaab dene tak ke liye wo apni saasein durust nahi kar paa raha tha.

Aankho me nami bhi thi. Usne apne haatho me maujood uss diary ko dekha aur apni t-shirt ke andar daba ke chhupa liya.

Kaera jisse Veer ki absence ke baare me jab dhyaan aaya, woh fauran hi usse dhundhte hue waha aayi,

Kaera : You are here!? What happened?

Veer : N-Nothing! Mera bas perr fisal gaya tha.

Woh haafte hue utha.

[Master! This is bad! Jald hi skill ke side-effects aapko hit karenge. Aap yu hi yaha khade nahi reh paoge. Jaldi se nikaliye yaha se. Quick!]

Veer ne wahi kiya bhi! Usne apni himmat baandh khud ko zara bhi exhausted show nahi kiya. Par andar se usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uski saari shakti kisi ne choos lii ho.

[Hang in there Master! Bas thodi derr aur!]

Veer jese tese apne ghar pohucha. Kismat ki baat thi ye ki tab hall me koi bhi maujood nahi tha. Aur darwaza bhi lock nahi tha. Shayad saara mahila mandal ek kamre me baith gupshup me laga hua tha. Iska fayda utha ke Veer seedha apne kamre me ghusa,

*Click*

Darwaza lock karte hi usne sabse pehle diary ko chhipa ke rakha. Woh jaanta tha uske saath usse kya karna tha. Par ab aur nahi,

[Master!!!]

Woh ladkhadaya aur apne bistar par gir behosh ho gaya.

Woh shaam tak behoshi me hi tha. Aur usse hosh bhi aaya toh darwaze peetne ke shor se.

*Bammmmm* *Baaammmmm*

“Veeeeeeer!!!! Veer kholo! Veer???”

Awaaz Tej ki thi.

Fauran uth usne darwaza khola. Aur apne bhai ko sahi salamat dekh Tej ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Veer ye dekh ke bhi hairat me tha ki sabhi log uske darwaaze ke baahar khade hue the.

Uski maa, Shweta, Aabha, Suman, Ragini. Sonali aur Bhumika bas nahi thi kyuki iss samay woh dono hi kaam par gayi hui thi.

Veer : Aap sab yaha?

Tej : Aur nahi toh kya? Jab hume pata chala ki tum ghar aa gaye ho toh tumhe awaaz lagaayi par tumne darwaza khola hi nahi.

Bhavna : Hume laga ki tum so rahe hoge beta. Par jab shaam hui toh Tej ke saath saath fir hume bhi chinta hone lagi aur isliye-

Veer : Ahhh! Samjha! Nahi! Actually mein so hi raha tha.

Tej (frowns) : Really?

Veer : Of course!

Bhavna : Accha chalo! Ab uth gaye ho toh haath muh dholo. Aur neeche aa jao. Suman! Chai bana lo.

Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Arre? Aap kyu taqleef karti ho? Mein hu na! Mein banaati hu.

Jaate jaate Ragini ne Veer ko dekha aur sharma ke waha se nikal gayi. Apne hi haatho ki chai woh Veer ko pilaana chaahti thi.

Veer : M-Mein aata hu. Aap sab chaliye!

Sab waha se neeche chal diye. Siwaye Aabha ke. Woh nazre jhukaaye wahi khadi rahi.

Aabha : A-Aap! Aap ne jhooth kaha na?

Veer jo haath muh dhone washroom jaa hi raha tha, achanak hi uske qadam ye sunn wahi rukk gaye.

Wo palta aur Aabha ko dekha,

Aabha : W-Wo mein jab sabke liye paani upar leke jaa rahi thi tab aapko ladkhadate hue apne kamre me jaate dekha tha. A-Aap theek toh ho na?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha, Aabha ghabraate hue peeche hui aur deewaar se jaa bhidi. Uske saamne aake Veer ne apna ek haath zorr se deewaar par maara jo Aabha ke kaan ke bagal se hoke guzra.

Bechari darr ke maare kisi chhipkali ki tarah deewaar se chipak ke reh gayi.

Aage uske kaan ki taraf Veer jhuka,

Veer : Aur ye baat kisi ko pata lagne na paaye. Hmm?

Aabha ne zorr se apna sarr haan me hilaaya. Yaha vaastav me usne Veer ki chori pakdi thi, par lag aisa raha tha jese woh khud Veer ke changul me phassi ho.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Aabha ki chin ko haath me leke usne uska chehra upar kiya aur unn gulabi hontho ko apni giraft me le liya. Woh kasmasa ke reh gayi.

“Nnnnnn~”

Jab tak Veer ka mann na bhar gaya tab tak usne unn raseele hontho ka acche se rasspaan kiya.

Aabha ko chorr woh fresh up hoke jab neeche aaya, toh sab saath baithe chai pee rahe the. Woh bhi apni jagah par baith chai peene laga aur apni soch me pad gaya.

[Kya aapne decide kar liya hai?]

‘Hmm!’

[Aap ye waali skill lena chaahte ho na?]

‘Yes Pari!’

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[5000 points have been used.]

[Kaafi mehngi hai par useful hai.]

‘Thanks!’

[Ab aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?]

‘Tum jaanti toh ho. Fir kyu puch rahi ho?’

[Kyuki mein bina aapki permission ke aapke mann me nahi jhaakna chaahti. Physically toh mein jaanti hu aap theek ho ab. But mentally? Uska jawaab aap hi mujhe dijiye.]

‘Mein theek hu Pari!’

[Ek legendary skill hamesha ek keemat ke saath hi aati hai Master.]

‘I know!’

[Aapko yaad hai na? Pitcher ko maarte samay bhi aapne legendary skill use kii thi.]

‘Woh legendary skill thi?’

[Of course Master! Sylvia’s venom cure!! Ek legendary skill hi toh thi. Farq sirf itna hai ki tab aap asaani se legendary skill ko purchase kar sakte the kyuki tab system meharban tha. Par ab sirf mission ke zariye hi ye mil sakti hai.]

‘I see!’

[Aur aapko yaad hai na Sylvia’s venom cure ko istemaal karne ke baad aapke saath kya hua tha?]

‘Yeah! I remember! White blood cells zyada maatra me badh gaye the aur poison ko baahar kiye the. I suffered a lot of pain. Mujhe acche se yaad hai. Haha! Divya ka chehra tab dekhne laayak tha. And- Miss Suhana too!’

Suhana ki ek chhavi uske dimaag me aayi.

[Yes! Toh ab yaad rakhiyega kisi bhi legendary skill ko istemaal karne se pehle. Kuch na kuch side-effects hote hi hai inke. Kyuki ye aapke planet ke laws ke against jaati hai. They are too powerful. Aap dekh hi chuke ho.]

‘Laws ke against toh tum bhi ho Pari!’

[Well! Yes!]

Veer muskuraya,

‘Mein dhyaan rakhunga Pari!’

[Good thing!]

3 din guzar gaye. Aur Veer apne uss ek kaam me laga raha. Aur ant me woh Kaera ke paas gaya aur usse diary thama aaya.

2 din aur guzre. Kaera ke mission ki last date khatam ho chuki thi. Par system ki taraf se koi bhi message nahi aaya tha mission ke liye. Jo aaya tha woh tha ek notification.

Jisse padh Veer aur chinta me doob chuka tha. Kaera ki favorability ghat ke 50 par aa chuki thi. Ye sab ho kya raha tha?

Notification kyu nahi aa raha tha.

‘Pari? What the hell is going on?’

[Mein bhi confused hu Master. Notification aa jaana chahiye tha.]

‘Agar woh mujhe hate karne lagi hai toh mujhe chalega Pari par unke saath kuch galat nahi hona chahiye. I cannot see her fall like this.’

[Shayad-]

‘Shayad kya Pari please bolo. Mein bechain hu yaha. Woh theek hai na?’

[Master! Aapne apna kaam kar diya hai. Don’t worry!]

‘Don’t worry? Karan ka message aaya hai mujhe Pari ki Miss Kaera ne khud ko 2 din tak andar room me band kar ke rakha tha. Aur fir achanak se unki favorability kam ho jaana. Ye sab kya hai? Keh do ki woh mujhe hate kar rahi hai. Na ki unke emotions hamesha hamesha ke liye chale gaye hai.’

[Master aisa ho sakta hai ki-]

‘K-Kya?’

[Shayad wo cheezo ko process kar rahi hai. Aur abhi tak kisi decision par nahi pohuchi hai. Shayad unhone kuch socha hai par abhi uss par poori tarah se atal nahi hai. Aur isliye mission clear ka notification hume nahi mila hai.]

‘....’

[Yes! Yahi kaaran hai Master! Ab aap ready rahiyega!]

‘Huh?’

[Woh aapko hate bhi kar sakti hai. Ya pyaar bhi. Hume jald pata lag jayega.]

‘I hope wo theek ho jaaye!’

***

Agli subaah Veer ki aankh jab khuli toh Bhumika uske seene se zorr se lagi hui thi. Aur usne khud ne Bhumika ko apne seene me kass ke bheencha hua tha. Uske doodh veer ki chaathi me dhasse hue the.

Veer maan’na toh nahi chaahta tha par ye ehsaas alaukik tha.

Uske bagal se Tej bhi laiti thi par woh ghode bech ke odhne wali chaadar ke upar hi so rahi thi.

Veer ne alag hone ka prayaas kiya ki itne me hi,

Bhumika ki aankhein khul gayi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Aur jab kuch derr baad unhe dhyaan aaya, toh fir toota unpe sharm ka pahaad.

Veer (blushes) : I-I’m sorry! Mein wo neend me-

Bhumika (blushes) : I-It’s okay! Y-You can hold me i-if you want.

Veer : Eh?

Veer hakka bakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna? Veer ne uski baat maan usse jakde rakha.

Veer : Aap mujhse kuch- akele me baat karna chaahti thi?

Bhumika : Hmm? H-Haan! Mene kuch decide kiya hai. Kya hum raat me baat kar sakte hai?

Veer : S-Sure!

Aur uske baad uski haya firse laut aayi. Surkh laal gaal liye woh chhat-pataati palko ko upar kar kabhi Veer ko dekhti toh kabhi kahi orr. Par dono kuch derr tak yu hi ek dusre ki baaho me bane rahe jab tak neeche shorgul na machne laga.

Kya kabhi aisi subaah Veer ke ghar me ho sakti hai jab chehel pehel na ho?

Aaj ki subah Sonali behek chuki thi.

Dining table par baithe Veer ko woh jhunjhlaaye jaa rahi thi.

Sonali : O-Oye!! Tum sunn rahe ho na meri baat?

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Sonali : Fir bhi tumhaare kaano me juu nahi reng rahi? Arree! Mein keh rahi hu hamare truck ke karmchaari kaam chodh bhaag rahe hai. Unka aatmvishvaas gir raha hai. A-Aur- Aur aaj koi aane waala hai. Koi badi hasti. Mujhe Prachi ne bataya hai. Oyeeee!

Prachi Veer ke food truck me kaam karne waali ek ladki thi. Woh sonali ki madad karwaati thi. Aur kuch kuch recipes bhi bana leti thi.

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Veer ke lagatar iss ignorant attitude ko dekh Sonali ka maatha aur thanak utha.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!! Jao! Bhaad me jao! Hmph! Mera kaam tha bataana, mene bata diya. Aage tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane.

Aur agle hi pal woh muh fula ke baith bad-badaane lagi,

“Ek toh madad karo, upar se mahashay ko koi parvaah nahi hai. Mein koi kaam waali bai hu? Jo itna kaam thopte hi jaa rahe ho. Agar kisi din ye kaam ka bojh meri jaan le liya toh bhi mujhe aashcharya nahi hoga. Koi naazuk sii ladki ko itna kaam deta hai bhala? Itni badi zimmedaari koi khud bhi akele nahi uthaata, par yaha dekho. Mein hu! Jo-”

Uske non-stop radio ko sunn Veer ne uski orr dekha,

Veer : Tumhara naashta thanda ho raha hai!

Sonali : H-Huh? *blushes* h-haan toh khaa rahi hu. Naashta yahi hai, kahi udd ke nahi chala jayega.

Veer mand mand muskuraate hue uske iss chulbule-pann ka lutf leta gaya.

Aur naashta khatam karte hi woh utha.

Veer : Chalo!

Sonali : Huh?? Kaha?

Veer : Food truck ke liye, aur kaha? Abhi thodi derr pehle tum hi toh chillaa rahi thi na?

Sonali : O-Oohh!

Tej : Veer kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Business time Teju dii! Aap waha bore ho jaogi. Mein aapke liye laut ke kuch launga na. *smiles*

Tej (blushes) : Theek hai! Mein wait karungi!

Ragini : A-Aur mere liye Veer?

Veer (smiles) : Aapke liye bhi launga bhabhi!

Ragini (blushes) : Mujhe intezaar rahega!

Dur baithi Bhavna iss conversation exchange ko bade hi gaur se sunn rahi thi aur dekh bhi rahi thi.

Idhar Sonali Veer ka peecha karta hue fauran hi baahar aayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost nikaali hui thi. Sonali jab andar baithi toh car ki khubsoorti ko dekhti reh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Woh- Mein pehli baar baith rahi hu isme.

Veer : Ohh!

Jald hi woh dono food truck ke saamne the. Ye Veer ka pehla waala food truck tha jo usne sabse pehle khareeda tha. Aur Sonali bhi issi me kaam karti thi.

Dono utar ke jab truck par pohuche toh Sonali ne chaavi se truck ko khola. Veer fir usse leke city side chal diya.

Daily ki apni jagah par truck ko laga ke set karne ke baad, woh customers ke aane ka intezaar karne lage.

Jab Prachi aur baaki sabhi ne Veer ko dekha toh woh sab hairaan reh gaye. Veer kabhi bhi iss tarah unke truck ke andar nahi aata tha. Aaj aisa kya special tha?

Veer : Toh baat kya hai?

Sonali : Woh-

Prachi : Sir mein batau?

Veer : Sure!

Prachi : Baat ye hai ki ladko me motivation gir raha hai. Woh food truck ki jagah kahi aur bhaag rahe hai. Unhe ye kaam nahi karna. Unka kehna hai ki yaha kaam kiya toh hamesha ke liye yahi fasse reh jayenge. Kuch kar nahi payenge.

Sonali : Dekha jaaye toh unki baat sahi bhi hai. Mujhe hi dekh lo!

Usne taunt maara. Veer ne jab usse ghoor ke dekha toh woh shaant ho gayi.

Veer : Samjha! Kya tum me se kisi ne unhe ye nahi bataaya ki jald hi hamara business bohut badhne wala hai?

Sonali : Ehh?? Ye kya nayi nayi tum fek rahe ho ab?

Veer : Ohh! Iss nadaan ladki ko bhi nahi maalum.

Sonali (bhadakte hue) : Oyeee! Nadaan kisse kaha?

Veer : Anyways! Prachi! Mein tumhe bata du ki jald hi hamara business badhne wala hai.

Prachi : Ye toh acchi baat hai sir! Toh kya mein unhe phone kar ye bata du? Mujhe yakeen hai woh waapas laut aayenge.

Veer (smiles) : Aur yahi toh mein nahi chaahta!

Prachi : Huh?

Veer : Jo log ek acche khaase chalte business se abhi bhaag gaye, zara socho ki jab business sach me kabhi agar manda pad gaya toh kya karenge woh?

Prachi : W-Woh-!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye accha hua ki woh chale gaye. Hume unki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : Par unke jaane se baaki logo me aatmvishvaas gir gaya hai. Aur unka mann machal raha hai kaam chhodhne ke liye.

Veer : Toh uska hal hai unka aatmvishvaas badhaana!

Prachi : W-Woh kaise?

Veer (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh mein aaya hu yaha!

Kehte hue usne apni shirt utaar ke apni kamar par baandh lii, aur bas ek black t-shirt me aa gaya.

Veer : Aaj unhe bataya jayega ki ek chef hona kitni responsibility ka kaam hota hai.

Jab uski aankho me woh Tej Prachi ne dekha toh woh mantra-mugdh hoke reh gayi.

Prachi : S-So cool!

Veer : Sonali! Saare food trucks par call kar unhe yaha bulao.

Sonali ne baat maan sabhi ko waha bula liya. Ladke aur ladkiya sabhi log the. Ye sabhi mil ke Veer ke alag alag food trucks ko sambhaalte the. Prachi inn sab se hisaab liya karti thi aur Sonali ko deti thi. Aur baad me Sonali usse manage kar Veer ko saupti thi.

Kuch iss tarah se ye chain kaam karti thi. Khaas baat ye thi ki Veer ke food trucks bhalayi dikhne me ek jaise the parantu sabhi ke menus alag alag hua karte the.

Koi sirf subaah ko lagta tha aur naashta serve karta tha toh koi din me lag ke thaali system par based tha. Koi fast food serve karta tha toh koi shakes and blends ke liye tha. Uske paas harr tarah ki variety maujood thi.

Jab sabhi ekatr hue toh Veer ne unhe ek lecture diya ki chef hona apne aap me kitna zimmedaari waala kaam tha. Aaj woh unn sab ko karke dikhaane waala tha.

Line se sabhi trucks lag gaye.

Shuruaat me toh gine chune log hi aaye par jaise hi logo ki dincharya ke working hours khatam hone ka samay hua, jab sooraj ki kirane ahista ahista chhatati gayi toh ilaake me chehel pehel badh gayi. Mausam bhi thoda sheetal ho utha.

Thaka haara aadmi kaam ke baad apne colleagues ke saath khaane peene ke liye nikalne laga. Aur fir Veer ne shuru kiya apna jaadu.

Jaise hi uske haath kitchen ke samaano par pade woh jaise ek alag hi duniya me chala gaya.

Bohut hi kam mauka milta tha usse apni cooking skills dikhaane ka. Of course! Uske paas wo jo thi!

Absolute Chef!!!!

Prachi (in shock) : S-Sir ko cook karna bhi aata hai??

Sonali : Haan!

Sonali ye maan’na toh nahi chaahti thi par daant peeste hue usse ye maan’na hi pada ki poore ghar me Veer se behtar khaana koi nahi bana paata tha.

Prachi ek student ki tarah Veer ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Wo notes le rahi thi.
Prachi : Ahh? Oil ke saath butter?

Veer : Butter excessive heat me jaldi jal jaata hai Prachi. Toh usse thoda bachaane ke liye ye oil.

Prachi : Ohhhh!

Usne fauran hi apne notepad me usse notedown kar liya. Woh Veer ko prashansa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Itne me do office ki ladkiya aayi aur Veer ko uska pehla order bhi mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

Veer ke bareek se bareek cheez ko dekh aur uski precise culinary skills ko dekh, na sirf waha maujood Prachi aur anya, balki Sonali bhi uski iss adaa par mohit ho gayi.

Woh ab sirf khaana nahi bana raha tha, woh ab ek artist ki tarah tha jiski kalaa ka pradarshan wo sabhi dekh paa rahe the.

Veer ne jab wo order unn ladkiyo ko diya toh dono excited hoke jaake khaane me lag gayi.

“Ohhhh my goddddd!!! Kitna tasty hai~”

“Hmm~ Par tumne usse nahi dekha? Chef ko? Wo to aur tasty hoga.”

“Hehehehehe~ Haan!”

Dekhte hi dekhte bheed jama hone lag gayi aur Veer ke food trucks bhaari vyast ho gaye. Woh idhar se udhar order complete karne me hi lag gaye.

Prachi bhaavuk ho uthi. Aaj tak usne itni bheed kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Harr guzarte pal Veer ke liye uski izzat badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Prachi!! Inhe fryer me daalo!!!

Prachi : Yessss Sirrrr~

Veer : Sonali! Rolls ko wrap karo!

Sonali : Haan! K-Kar rahi hu!

Veer : Ek accha chef apne swaarth ke liye nahi, dusro ke liye cook karta hai. Samjhe???

“Yesssss Sirrrr!!!!!”

Veer ne aate hi apni upasthiti se poori kaaya palat kar dii thi.

Prachi baahar jaake logo se jab feedback lene gayi toh yaha Veer ne mauka dekh achanak se Sonali ko peeche se pakad liya.

Woh fryer se french fries nikaal rahi thi, par Veer uski kamar ko pakde apna chehra uske kandho par jhukaaye khada tha.

Akasmaat iss hamle se Sonali bhauchakki si reh gayi. Iske pehle ki Veer ko woh mana kar paati, Veer ka haath upar chala gaya aur Sonali murti ki tarah jamm ke reh gayi.

Uska haath sonali ke doodh par tha.

Sonali ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jaise maano usse bukhaar aa gaya ho.

Sonali (blushes) : Chorro! Ch-Chorro warna mein- muh tod dungi tumhara.

Par Veer uske urojo ko masalne me laga hua tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab kya kehna hai tumhara? Tum keh rahi thi business me mandi aa rahi hai? Log jaa rahe hai. Hmm? Toh ye bheed kaisi hai?

Sonali (blushes) : Nnnn~ Haaa~ Haaa~ Chhorro! J-Jaldi~ Prachi aati hogi! Chorro!!!

Veer : Nahi chorrunga!

Sonali : Kutte kameene!!!! Chorrr!! Ahhnnn~ Nnnnn~

Veer poori lagan se unn thano ko masalne laga. Usne Sonali ko pehli baar chhua tha aur wo zara bhi naraaz nahi tha.

Par usse jald hi Sonali ko chorrna pada kyuki Prachi aa rahi thi.

Prachi : S-Sir! Buri khabar! Woh famous hasti aa chuki hai aur aapse milna chaahti hai.

Veer jab baahar aaya toh uske saamne ek business suit me lady car ke paas khadi hui thi.

Uske paas aate hi usne khud hi haath aage badhaaya,

“Mister Veer?”

Veer : Yes! Aur aap?

Wese toh usne pehle hi check kar liya tha par formality karna toh zaroori tha.

“Mein tamanna!”

Woh boli aur apne haath mod khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?

Tamanna : Do you know who I am?

Veer : No!

Veer ke knowledge par hasste hue woh guroor me boli,

Tamanna : Mein ek food critic hu.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tamanna : Mera kaam hai famous hotels, restaurants me jaake waha ka khaana taste karna aur uske baare me likhna. Apne reviews dena. Mera ek review acche khaase chalte firrte hotel ko sadak par laa sakta hai.

Veer shaant tha. Kyuki wo sach keh rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein khud Mumbai se hu. Abhi tak baahar thi, kuch hafte pehle hi lauti hu. Mein aksar travel karti rehti hu. Iss food truck ko mene pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. I guess ye abhi haal hi me khula hai!?

Veer : Jii!

Tamanna : Kal mein yaha se guzri toh by chance yaha aayi. Menu par ek signature dish dekh mene uski demand ki toh pata laga ki wo dish sirf truck ke owner ko hi banaani aati hai. Worker ne kaha tha ki mein kal aau toh isliye yaha aayi hu.

Veer : Then come, please!

Tamanna : Uss se pehle, ek walk ho jaaye?

Veer : Kyu nahi!

Veer jaanta tha woh kya karna chaah rahi thi. Woh owner se pehle baate karti thi, unke ravaiyye ko notice karti, unhe jaan boojh ke gussa bhi dilaati thi taaki wo uske jaal me phass jaaye aur fir wo unke baare me sab kuch likh sake. Veer ke saath bhi wo wahi karne waali thi.

Tamanna : Tum jaante ho mein number 1 food kis desh ka maanti hu?

[Huh? What the hell? Master? Hume iski bakwaas kyu sunn’na pad raha hai?]

‘Shaant Pari!’

Veer : Kis desh ka ma’am?

Tamanna (smiles) : Of course, Italy! Italian food best hai!

Veer : Aur second pe?

Tamanna : Mexican food!

Veer : Third?

Tamanna : Of course! It’s French food and spanish food!

Veer : Aur hamara Indian food?

Tamanna : Fourth!

Veer : Fourth kyu?

Tamanna : Apne saamne dekho!

Chalte chalte woh dono hi ek chaupaati ke nazdeek pohuch chuke the.

Tamanna : Dekho logo ko! Kaise thoos rahe hai! Hygiene dekho! Saaf safaayi dekho!

Veer : Par kuch log toh gloves pehne hai. Unke stalls bhi saaf hai.

Tamanna : Yahi to dikkat hai na. Sirf kuch log Mister Veer! Pata nahi logo ko sense kab aayega. Pata nahi ye sab kab sudhrenge. Food ko kachre ki tarah treat nahi kiya jaata. It should be handled delicately with hygiene.

Woh kareeb 15 minute tak bad-badaati rahi. Jab Veer ne usse achanak se rok diya,

Veer : One day!

Tamanna : Huh?

Veer : I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry.

Tamanna : What?????

Veer palta aur apne jeb me haath daal chal diya,

Veer : Come! I’ll show you what the real food is!

Veer ne Tamanna ko fir apni ek signature dish bana ke dii. Jo ki kuch nahi ek roll tha.

Tamanna disappoint hote hue wo roll uthaayi aur apne muh me daali. Jaise hi swaad, woh flavour uske taste buds ko hit kiye, wo wahi jamm gayi.

Veer : Tamanna ma’am??

Par koi jawaab nahi aaya. Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~


“I need you! ASAP!”
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update 5.3k words ka hai. Toh mujhe bolna na pade. Daba ke likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Agle update se crimson arc ka main plot shuru ho jayega. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad! :shakehands:
 
Last edited:

Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
Supreme
11,164
88,181
259
Wow gosh your talented.so atleast puri story padh li maine and what a rollercoaster ride it has been.
Jis tarah se veer ka character grow hua h it's been amazing and Kudos to the pic you have added it's make more connected.
Yr mai bahot bura feel karti hu when I see keara the girl with such a talented but still she doesn't have a clue what is life it's really sucks.
Now about soina i think usko thoda aur focus me Lana chahiye tha but jitna bhi padhi hu she is very interesting especially her inferiority complex i want se her more

Now Nidhi ma'am my god (yea my favourite character) she has been so much i literally got tear in my ear jb she usne paper par sign kiye and when she held her son
Yes mai chahti hu nidhi should accept him they must be look great together

Suhana that women deserve some love she has been through a lot the growth of her character is amazing ek rich arrogant se cute caring suhana love your writing skill sir

Especial mention to our cute si jhuhi ek din chocolate ki factory jarur hogi hehe

Raghni(yea she is in my top three) the most focused female character i guess she does has her charms and jis tarah se she care, love and adore veer make me smile 😊

Kavya she is such a doll i totally adore her

Lol kuch jadha hi likh diya hehe once again i loved your story aur most importantly those characters feels relatable that make your story the best

Paaka ye last line h mai ek baar especial mention karna chati thi bhavna,tajak and shweta
And thanks a lot for this amazing and wonderful story huge respect for you sir.

Superb update

Mast update h bhai...🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Again amazing and lovely update
Buhat sare suspense create hogye bhaya is update me 1 us dairy me kiya he, 2nd veer ne jo skill us ki wo kis trha ki skill he, 3rd veer ka behosh hona, 4th mission fail kese hogya, 5th kaera ki favorability drop hui he us ka kiya raaz he, and last agr mission fail hua he to ab veer kiya kare ka kiya kaera ko hamesha ke liye kho dega ya kuch aur dekhne ko mile ga,
Jo bhi he aage hume sare jawab mil jaye ge to me aap se poch ke suspense kharb nhi karu ga kyu ke i know aap ne aage kuch bariya hi socha hoga,
Baqi tej aur bhumika ki cat fight amazing thi aur suhana ko bhi aap ne dekha ke vegas me kiya chal raha he sonia wapis india arhi he to maybe aage hume wo bhi dekhe aur prakash ne suhana ke kaan me kiya kaha he us ki bhi curiosity he aab aage dekhte he kiya hota he aur finally 1 aur update ke bad crimson finally shuru hojaye ga to intezar rahe ga shiddat se,
Amazing work bro aap time lete ho but update bhi phir aisa aata he ke kuch kehne layak hi nhi rehte,
Shandar update tha maza agya.

Awesome Updateee

Shandar update bhai.....
To kiara ka misson shuru bhi hua khatam bhi ...but kuch confussion k sath
Aage dekhate hai kya hota hai.

Nice update bro

Bhut hi shandar update bhai

Kya ye mission fel ho gya Ab kya keara veer se dur ho jayegi kya ab kya story m keara ko veer se sath dekhne ko bhi nhi milega kya

Bai story ko compiled karke
Kitab bahar nikal na.
Bohot calege 😇

Khatarnak update bhai 👌👌

Agar ho sake to Update me images thodi jyada daloge to achha lagega

Suhana or Sonia ke bichka pyar Tejal or Bhumika ke bichka cat fight mujhe bohot acha laga. Beauty × Brain = Kaera aapna hero ajbhi uske samne pani kam chay lagtahe . Bas akhirme thora confuse ho gaya purane gharse kia mila diary ya skill pari kehrehihe skill aap bol raheho diary kia Kaera ke pasbhi system he ooohhhhhhh bhai clear kardo.
update mast tha bhai
waiting for next

गजब का अनुच्छेद मित्र। आपका इस अनुच्छेद के अंतराल ज्यादा थी लेकिन उसके बाद जो मिला वो बहुत सही है। शुरू होता ही है सोनिया से। दोनों बहनों मे वार्तालाप थोड़ा अलग ही है। ऊपर से एक साइकोलोजिस्ट का प्रवेश। जिससे पता चलता है की सुहाना अपना दोहरी मानसिकता के वारे मे वाकिफ है लेकिन प्रकाश नहीं करती। बात बात मे आखिर सोनिया एक तरह से स्वीकार कर ही लिया की उसकी किसी के ऊपर नज़र है जो उस की मन को थोड़ा सा शांत कर सकता है। एकदम अभाबनीय परिदृश्य। अभी सोनिया अपने आप से कितना दिन झूठी तसल्ली दे पाएगी ये देखने लायक होगा। आते है मुंबई मे। आते ही दोनों बहनों के बीच बिल्लियों के तरह लड़ते देखना। क्या बात। बोला जाता है की प्यार होने से पहले लड़ाई और वो भी जबर्दस्त होना जरूरी है तभी वो रिस्ता और मजबूत होता है। देखते है क्या होता है। आते है आज का सबसे महत्वपूर्ण बिषय पर जो काएरा से संबन्धित है। एक बात मानना ही होगा की आप जहां से भी फोटो लिए है वहाँ पर बहुत समय लगाए होंगे नहीं तो ऐसा फोटो कभी सामने नहीं आया है काएरा के ऊपर। चलिये एक बात समझ मे नहीं आया की वीर के कोशिश के वाब्जूद यह मिशन फ़ेल हुआ की नहीं क्योंकि कोई नोटिस नहीं आया वीर के पास। एक बात बोलिएगा की ये डाइरी मे क्या है? परी का वार्निंग देने के वाब्जूद,अपना कोई एक स्किल(जो की जरूर अहम होगा) को बली चड़ा दिया उस राज़ के बारे मे जानने के लिए। और अंत मे उस डाइरी मे क्या राज़ छुपा है की काएरा का favoribility नीचे आ गया है। यह चीज पहले एक ही बार देखे है जब आतिश के हाथो मे वीर का दोस्त का मौत हुआ था,तब। लेकिन मुझे लग रहा है की यह डाइरी आपने आप बहुत कुछ गुत्थी सुलझा दिया होगा जिसके चलते काएरा का मनोदशा ऐसे नीचे आया है वीर के प्रति। मुझे लगता है की मिशन फ़ेल नहीं हुआ और काएरा स्वाभाबिक हालत मे लौटेंगी। और उसी दिशा मे पहला पदक्षेप है अपना मनोदशा का दर्शाना। क्या पता आपके मन मे क्या चल रहा है इस कहानी को लेकर। इस बार कोशिश कीजिएगा थोड़ा जल्द अनुच्छेद देने के लिए। आपका अगला अनुच्छेद शायद इस दिशा मे बहुत कुछ पर्दा उठाएगा। देखते है क्या होता है। अगला अनुच्छेद के लिए बेसब्री से इंतज़ार करेंगे। धन्यबाद।

Awesome update bro 💗💗

Bhai ye kya hua kaera ki favourites diary ki wajah se gyi hai to diary ka kuch lafda hoga jo ki past main uski mom ya dad ne likhe honge waise main silent reader hun but

Update read ki kuch Confusing lagi again read kron ga

Nice update

Superb update

Bhaya mujhe lag raha he ke mission to complete hogya he aur shayd kaera me emotions bhi agye he aur isi waja se kaera ki favorability drop hui he kyu ke veer ne us ke sth sex kiya he us wqt to kaera koi bhi emotions nhi smjh pati thi to use fark hi nhi para lakin ab maybe us ke andr emotions agye he to ab use bura laga ho ye meri thinking he baqi bhaya aap behtr jante ho

Bhai ye kya tha

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Jabardast update bhai 👏👏😊😊🥰👍

तो एक लंबे इंतजार के बाद आखिरकार अपडेट आ ही गया,
इस अपडेट में फिलहाल कुछ कमेंट करने लायक नही है

अभी इस अपडेट के बारे में कुछ बोलना जल्दीबाजी होगी, इतंजार रहेगा अगले अपडेट का तभी कोई conclusion निकालना सही होगा।


literally तेज एक बड़ी बहन की तरह नही एक boss की तरह behave करती है, शायद ही कोई होगा जो वीर से ऐसे interrogation way में बात करता हो, अगर तेज का बस चले तो बिना permission वीर को सांस तक न लेने दे।
but quite surprise की वीर भी उसकी बातों का जवाब बिना गुस्से के दे देता है,
अगर कोई और उस से ऐसे सवाल जवाब करता तो वो उसके दांत तोड़ देता but बड़ी बहन होने का full फायदा उठा रही है तेज


तो वही हुआ जिसका अंदाजा था kaira वीर से ज्यादा intelligent इस वजह से वीर उसके status देख नही पा रहा था। पर मुझे लगा नही था की kaira इस कहानी में अब तक सबसे ज्यादा intelligent हैं, जितनी आसानी से वो स्लोगन के चंगुल में फस जाती थी लगा नही था की उसकी intelligence 150 होगी
खैर देखते है वीर का intelligence aur apperance कब kaira के बराबर होगा

ऐसा लग रहा है की mission complete हो गया है लेकिन अचानक ही सारे emotions तो वापस आयेंगे नही , धीरे धीरे करके होगा शायद इसलिए rewards और mission successful का notification नही आया है

लेकिन favorability का drop होना इस बात का सबूत है की kaira का emotions वापस तो आए वो अलग बात है negetive way में है।

Kaira की favorability फिर से 84 करने में वीर को बहुत मेहनत करना पड़ेगा, वीर को सोनिया या ava के साथ देख कर kaira jealousy जैसे feeling से गुजरे तो शायद chances है की थोड़े बहुत बढ़े लेकिन वापस उसी digit पर करने के लिए at least एक death type situation तक तो जाना ही पड़ेगा जैसे स्लोगन से बचाते वक्त पहुंचा था

इस पूरे अपडेट में मुझे एक ही चीज ने curious किया

मुझे बस इस बात का उत्तर चाहिए

Kaira ने ऐसा क्यों कहा की वीर के लिए स्टाफ ढूंढना आसान है?? क्या ये वीर के looks की वजह से था या उसकी intelligece की वजह से या कोई और वजह है


और क्या kaira सच में smile कर रही थी या बस वीर को dig कर रही थी?
I hope इसका answer reply में ही मिल जायेगा

उस समय का इंतजार है जब kaira और sonia के बीच वीर के लिए लड़ाई शुरू होगी, coz I guess तब तक वीर की intelligence और apperance शायद 150+ होगी, फिर ऐसे लड़के के लिए दोनो के फाइट होना स्वाभाविक है

क्योंकि kaira जो भी करती best ही करती है ऐसे में यदि वो अपने लिए लड़का ढूंढेगी तो जाहिर है की best ही ढूंढेगी और वीर से अच्छा लड़का कहा मिलेगा उसे जिसके पास वो secure feel करे, जिसके होने से freedom मिले bodyguards से और बाकी लोगो से

रही बात सोनिया की तो बाकी के लिए तो भले ही सोनिया छोड़ देती लेकिन वीर को पाने के लिए तो वो भी जमीन आसमान एक कर देगी।
अभी इसमें ava को add नहीं किया है क्योंकि उसके बारे ज्यादा कुछ मालूम नहीं, may be वो kaira के लिए compitition बढ़ा दे, but kaira के पास advantage है वीर का उसके लिए feelings और उस से भी जरूरी की वीर को इस feeling के बारे के अच्छे से मालूम है लेकिन सोनिया भी वीर का सुहाना के दिए गए favour का advantage ले सकती है but
Well let's see

किशोर ने जिस तरह से स्वाति के साथ किया उस हिसाब से किशोर भी स्लोगन के इतना गुनहगार है, may be कभी करन और kaira को इस बारे में मालूम चले।



और भाई please जब अपडेट पूरी तरह complete हो जाए, जब आपको लगे की और कांट छांट नही करनी है, पोस्ट करने के लिए ready है, तब time declare किया करे, 2 दिन पेज refresh मार मार के दिमाग खराब हो गया था
एंड ज्यादा better रहेगा की आप time ही declare ना करो, सीधा post कर दो फिर notification

And thanks for update

And as always waiting for next update ❣️

Fantastic update ab ye kya hua
Dekhte aage

Wait What happened? Itna Bada cliffhanger??? Eagarly want to know what happened. Kiara's episodes are also very fascinating and different from others, it has some class. Jab kiara ka part chlta to lgta h bas chlte rhe.
Bhumika aur tej wala part to ab har episode ne permanent kar do mja aata h dono ki catfight me.
Lovely update and eagarly waiting for next

Aur veer ka Mission v pura hua kyoki kiara ki favourability achanak se km hui h to iska matlab yahi h ki uske emotions kuch kuch active ho gae h. Aur dhire dhire active honge

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

BHAI SACH main bahut jyada mestrious update tha ye wala

Prakash ne akhir aisa bhi kya kaha jo suhana ko hilaa ke rakh diya or suhana ne ye kaha ki accha huva mene promish nahi kiya bhai aakhir ye sab hai kya sach main yaar crimson arc ne dimaag hilana shuru kar diya hai

Now time for the queen keara usne veer se milte hi apne aapko ek professional lady hone ka sabut de diya sach main maza aaya indono ka convo dekh kar

Or fir keara ke old home main jaha kai sari ghatnaye ghati thi jese ki keara ne bataya ye teeno ghatnaye bahut jyada aajeeb thi or pechida thi or bhai aakhir veer ne kya dekha us dairy main seer vision ki madad se or ye seer vision hai kya bala

Or aakhir us dairy main aisa kya tha jo veer ke bhi rongte khade hogye 120 ya 130 ki super strength wala veer itna kamjor hogya or keara ne apne aap ko room main badh karliya or sabse main baat aakhir kyu keara ki favorebillity dropp huyi aakhir kya tha us dairy main

Sawal bahut saare hai but hume uske liye bahut intezaar karna padega Well wolfi is wale arc main indazan kitne update lagenge

Or bhai wo dusre system wala saksh kab samne ayega or wo pahad wali ladki ka sach konse arc main dikhega jo slogan ko marte wqat waha thi pahad par

Well superb update bhai maza aaya or dimaag hila wo alag or bhai ho sake to update jaldi diya karo main force nahi karta bas main request kar raha hu

Kyu ki arcs bade intresting laate ho jiski wajah se 4 din ka wait aisa lagta hai jese 4 saal ho or is fouram par ab koi aisi atory bhi nahi jisme maza aaye bas ek hai jo aapki stpry ke baad padhta hu jo hai ankit srivastava bhai ki

Well waiting and take care

Thanks for update.
Update was awesome.
And as always waiting for next update

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update

Ye dono billiya Kab zagdana band nhi krengi lagta hey jab dekho tab ek dusre ko panja marte rehati hey...

Aur ye veer business ko leke to bohot hi confident hey to ohh success krega lagata hey aisa lag raha tha but.....

Aur kaira ke ghar mey jane ke bad usko ohh diary mili hey but usmey Asia kya hey jo ki Veer ko itna tensed hogya tha..

Our do din ke bad Kiara ko dene ke bad Kiara bhi do din tak padti rahi par uski kuch faayda huva ki nhi ye ab agle update mey dekhna padega kya hota hey..


Aur veer ka mission bhi sala pura nhi huva lagta hey man uske bade vale L... Lagye hey aisa bashit hota hey..

Aur kaira ko Aisa kya pata chala veer ki favorability itni gir gayi hey ye bada valaa zatka tha veer keliye...

Ab age dekhne mey bada majedar hone valaa hey...

Ye kya bkchodi h bhai...ye last me kya kr die aap, totally find fck bro🤯😱...veer ko jhatke pe jhatke mil rhe h😵.. Phle wo precious skill(one & only)...and then Kiara's favourability decreasement or wo b 50...my god🥴🤦‍♂️..dis is going insane bro...meko lgta h ab zda khusi veer ke hisse me h ni😁...fir suru ho gya uski zindagi me laude lgne ka silsila😏... Khair ye to veer ki kismat hi h..hum kuch ni kr skte.. Well, now I'm really excited to know wts gonna be happen in next update🙄.. Eagerly waiting🧐, much love bro 😍👍💯🙏

Toh sab se phele toh a fantastic update. Aur jo starting Teen-char lines padh kar ko ase laga ki naya character aa gya story mien lekin prakash uncle wali line se samaj aagya ki yeh sonia aur suhaana hai 😂. Lekin bechari sonia kar apni behn ko comfort rahi thi lekin suhaana ko uss baat ka majak aur banne laag gyi lekin sonia aur suhaana dono apni apni jagah sahi thi lekin inn dono thi nok jok padh kar maja bhot aaya. Lekin mere ko yeh samaj nhi if suhaana is healthy then why she is not coming back to India with sonia.and why she is want more information about kaera and what the parkash uncle said in her ear? Many questions and answers only know by one and only werewolf.

Aur uss ke baad jo cheez mujhe starting mien padh le laga ki hoyega vo ab hua a new character introduced aur uss ke dialouge padh kar hi laga ki yeh ek caretaker toh nhi ho sakti aur uss ke pata laag hi gya ki yeh ek psychologists aur vo bhi suhaana ki personal lekin in dono ki conversation padh kar sahi mien hassi aa gyi thi lekin suhaana kya bata thi ashita ko veer ki taraf attract hogyi hai yeh phir pheli baar kisi se pyaar kar batti hai aur ussi ne uss ke gusse par control karwaya. But i am quite impressed from you werewolf bro ekdam wese hi jese psychologists soch ke hai wese hi you written the character of ashita. Kyuki ashita ne ek baari ko suhaana ke muh se veer ka naam nikla hi liya tha.

Aur uss ke baad tej aur bhumika ka gift kholna jo dekha jaye toh gift faadna tha aur agar veer na aaya hota toh saare gift faat yeh tuk fuk jate aur tej ka veer ko badi bhen ki tarah comfort karna aur question puchna lekin bhumika ko kya baat karni hai veer se vo bhi privately ? Kya ho sakti hai vo baat? Kyu bhumika ne veer toh akele baat karne ke liye kah hai?


Aur uss ke baad finally humein vo dekhne toh mili jis toh dekhna ke liye ankhein tarash gyi thi sarre reader ki miss kaera lekin uss ke phele veer ekdam sahi soch raha tha ki yeh ghar nhi yeh ek skyscraper hai sahi mien teen logo ki family ke liye itne workers fuck. Aur uss ke veer finally kaera ke kamre mien gya and finally usse kaera mili aur kaera ke baat karne ke style aur business intelligence se hi pata chal tha hai ki kaera ki intelligence above 100 hai lekin thodi der baad kaera ke stats dikha diye. Aur kaera ka veer se conversation karna ke style was damm good. Lekin ek baat toh hai ki kaera sundar toh hai veer toh kya ek baari ko mien bhi kho jaata hu kaera ki photo dekh kar. Lekin veer ko yeh baat pata honi chahiye ki kaera is very rich so she will not wear a top of few thousands she will wear clothes in lakhs.
Lekin jo bhi ho veer ko ek business partner bhi mil gyi aur thoda experience bhi aur kaera ki thodi si daand 😁.
Lekin veer ko ase diary mien kya dikh gya (seer vision) ki vo teen din tak behosh hogya aur sab se harani ki baat yeh hai ki teen din veer behosh tha lekin uss ke Garhwale ka koi seen nahi dikhya gya kya next update mien dikhaya jayega?
lekin uss ke bhi harani ki baat yeh diary padh kar kaera ne bhi apne aap ko lock kar liya. Lekin veer ke sath acha nhi hua vo soch rha ki kaera wala mission finish hogya lekin ulta Favourbility drop ho gyi. Kya jassi ne kaera ke baap ko baata diya ki kaera aur veer kha gaye tha aur kaera ke room ke nikle ke hi uss ke baap ne uss se kuch kha aur iss vajah ke Favourbility kam hogyi kya yeh wajah hai?

Lekin kya veer kaera ko kho deda?aur kaera ke emotions kabhi vapas nhi aa payega? Kya veer aur karan ka connection bhi tuk jayega? Kya veer aur kaera kabhi eksath nhi aapayega?.
God knows what will happened in next update.

Edit : werewolf also know what will happened.
Aur agle update mien kaand hone wale hai

Mast update h bhai...🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Nice update

Fantastic shaandaar update

Zabardast fantastic update 👍👍👍👍👍

Fantastic mind blowing update 🤩🤩🤩

Extraordinary update sir g,

Shocking update...

Bohat he zabaradast lajawab update kaeera ne khud ko kamre band krdiya Kia usne wo diary parhi hogi shayad ye diary uski mom se related hy

nicely updated bro

Ye baut bada kand ho gaya aage kya hota hai ye dilchasp hoga

Behtareen aur suspence full update Werewolf bhai...

Awesome update Bhai 😊☺️

Sandar update hai bhai

fantastic Awesome update :bounce:

Awesome update

Zabardast update

Nice update...

Suhana ke mental health me sudhar aa gaya veer ki vajah se shayad..
veer ki dono behne ka to chalu hai tu-tu-me-me. Ab gift kholne ke liye bhi koi ladta hai bhala?
" chhoti bachhi ho kya?".😂

khair veer kaera se milne gaya or business start karne ka plan bana liya .. veer chote level ka business start karne wala tha par kaera ki personality ki vajah se kaera aise chote mete business me investing nahi karegi.. Khair uska apna alag rutba hai to veer bhaiya ko uski baat maan ni padi.

ye kon si book de aaya veer jisko padh kar favo..kam ho gay? Or missions complete hua ya incomplete kuch notification bhi nahi aaya veer ke paas.

Superb Update bhai.

Nice update

सच ही कहा किसने इंसान को खुद भी कुछ करना चाहिए।


वीर परी पर निर्भर होता जा रहा है।

डायरी से बेहतर खुद कुछ करे।

Sonia ka apni bahen ke liye pyar bahut sunder dhang se dikhaya hai

Another example of her love

ye kya suspense hai. akhir kya aur kiske baare me bataya. kahin veer ki birthday party ke baare me to nahi?

ye to gayi...

Tej aur Bhumika ki nok-jhok me maza aaya. dono badi bahne Veer ke liye protective hain. Jab in dono ki jamegi to maza aa jayega.

Kaera ki emotionless jindagi, ek line me khubi se batayi hai.

Is samay to Kaera Veer se kafi close thi jo apni jindagi ki sabse badi tragedies ko share ker rahi thi.

Seer Vision kya hai, shayad ghati huyi aur aane wali bhavashyavani ko Seer ki tarah batata hai.

Dairy me kya tha jise jaan ker Veer behosh ho gaya. Kya Kaera ke saath ghatit pareshaniyon ko dekh nahi paya.

Ab ye kya ho gaya. Kya mission fail ho gaya aur Veer ne Kaera ko kho diya. Ya yeh bhi ho sakta hai ki Kaera ke emotions jag gaye aur use ab Veer se ghrina hone lagi kyonki Veer ne uske saath behoshi ki halat me sambhog kiya tha. Ya kuch aur... Dimag ka dahi bana diya, raat bhar neend nahi aayi.

Excellent update 😍😍

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Lajavab update aage kya hoga veer kaera ke bich dairy me asa kya tha ji se padha kar karta ki favorability 50 kam ho gaye maja ayega next update me ye jann ne me

awesome another twist

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Update sahi tha bhai.
1. Ab jaker bhumika apna bhai wala hak jama rahi hai. Our badi baat to yah ki bachpan se abtak bhumika ka apne maa ke kehne pe chali. Per ab wah apne man se kar rahi hai. Ya kahe Yah chije use ho rahi hai. Karan hai veer ke prati badhata lagav.
Bhumika ab badi bahan jesa behev karna chalu kar rahi hai.
2. Ek kavya kam thi. Ab esmain ager ham tej ,bhumika ,sonali our little juhu add kare to bhaya socho veer ka kya hoga.
3. Misson ka kuch samj nahi aya wah diary padh ne ke bad shaday veer ke februality to kam honi thi karan diary ne apna kam shuru kiya hai.
A) use ab soniya our eva ki yad ati hogi.
B) uska wah bachpan jo diary ke trow use ke same aga hai . jo wah bhul chuki thi.
C) rahi baat veer ki to pahle soniya our eva thi. Pahle unka ana jaruri tha .
D) ab shayad kaira our karan ka rishata ek normal bhai bahen jesa hoga. Per yeh chije mukesh ke liye sahi hogi.
E) yeh mission na fale huva hota to veer ko kaira ko kho deta per asa nahi hai.
F) emotion hamesh ka. Karte hai. Kaira ke sath wahi ho raha hai. To bhaya time to lagega . socho
Captan america jab jaga to kya feel kiya usne . sab chenge ho gaya tha. To kira ke mare emotion ab usper havi hoge to veer ko hi sambhalna hogaa. Us main soniya bhi madat karegi.

4. Ab to soniya or eva ka ana banta hai. Khuki crisem are start hoga . to usme soniya ka roll najar aa raha hai., uske baad to kaira veer ko kha jayegi per soniya kaha piche rahegi . jo.aaj bhumika our tej kar rahi hai wahi dono keregi . veerr to gaya.

5. Suhana ka case veer ne 50% slow kiya personaly bahar na ana yeh astha ke liye khushi ki baat hai. Matlab wah wab thik ho rahi hai. Kya ab astha ke liye suhana ka ellaj asan hoga .

Ab kaira veer ko jab emotinal blackmale kare our soniya bhi to kya hoga

Mast update

awesome update bro aapke sabhi update super hay bhai

Kaera my favorite character hai story mai. Veer aur kaera ki jodi sub achi lagti hy. Is liya bro Kaera ko thora zada time do story mai.
Baki mast update tha. Aur is xforum ki sub achi story b.
Ap ki sub sr achi bat ye lagti hai k har 1 character ko pura time datey ho,
Puri details k sath likhty ho.
Love action sex. Har cheez hai story mai.
Sex nah b tab be story mast hai.
Bs yahi requst hai k kaera ko time zada doh story mai.
Thanks bro.
From Oman🇴🇲🇵🇰

Nice update

Nice update

काइरा का नया घर एक आलिशान भूलभुलैया के जैसा लगा मुझे तो उसका पुराना घर एक रहस्यमय तिलस्मी मकान के जैसा।
पुराने घर मे ही एक ढोंगी बाबा ने अपने कारनामे से किशोर साहब को सम्मोहित कर रखा था। उसी मकान मे एक मौत हुई थी । और काइरा की मां की भी रहस्यमय मौत उसी मकान मे ही हुई थी। इसके अलावा घर मे आग लगने की दुर्घटना भी हुई।
इसी मकान ने काइरा को हिप्नोटिज्म करके एक मशीनी इंसान भी बना दिया था।
इतने सारे अनहोनी हो तो उस मकान को तिलिस्म नही कहेंगे तो क्या कहेंगे !

कई साल के बाद इस मकान ने एक बार फिर से अपने चमत्कार को दिखाना प्रारम्भ कर दिया।
उस घर से एक ऐसी किताब निकलती है जिसे देखकर वीर और परी एक गम्भीर वार्तालाप मे जुट जाते है।
एक ऐसी किताब जो वीर के उस पेन्डेन्ट का राज खोल सकती है जिसे कोई भी नही कर पाया।
एक ऐसी किताब जिसे मात्र देखने भर से वीर जैसा स्वस्थ नौजवान तीन दिन तक बेहोशी के आलम मे रहा।
एक ऐसी किताब जिसे पढ़ते ही काइरा की विश्वसनीयता वीर के प्रति अचानक से बहुत कम हो जाती है।

ये फिर से कैसा खतरनाक सस्पेंस लेकर आ गए है वोल्फी ब्रो ? इस सस्पेंस से जल्द ही पर्दा उठाइए।

इसके पूर्व काइरा और वीर के दरम्यान कारोबार सम्बन्धित बाते हुई थी और वीर ने कपड़े की मिल्स लगाने की मंशा जाहिर की थी।
व्यापार के महत्वपूर्ण अंग है -- ट्रेड , इन्डस्ट्री और कॉमर्स।
ट्रेड का अर्थ ट्रेडिंग से और इंडस्ट्रीज का तात्पर्य मैन्यूफैक्चरिंग से एवं कॉमर्स का तात्पर्य सर्विस सेक्टर से होता है। लोग अपनी योग्यता और फाइनेंशियल क्षमता अनुसार डिसाइड करते है कि उन्हे किस क्षेत्र मे जाना है।
लेकिन मैन्यूफैक्चरिंग एक ऐसा क्षेत्र है जहां रिस्क भी अधिक है , इन्कम भी अधिक है और हानि भी अधिक है।

अपडेट के प्रारम्भ मे एक बार फिर दोनो कजन बहने आपस मे गिफ्ट को लेकर ' तू तू मै मै ' करना शुरू कर दी थी। मै तो कहता हूं कि दोनो की शादी एक ही मर्द के साथ करवा दीजिए। दोनो सौतन बनकर जरूर एक दुसरे की बेस्ट फ्रैंड बन जायेगी। :D

और जहां तक डाक्टर साहिबा अशिता की बात करें तो निस्संदेह वो सुहाना की शुभचिंतक नही है। इनके पीछे कौन खड़ा है , ये तहकीकात का विषय है। कोई है जो नही चाहता , सुहाना स्वस्थ एवं दीर्घायु हो।

एक और बेहतरीन अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग और जगमग जगमग भी।

bhai story contest firse aaya hai

Well well well this ends in an interesting way.
kaera favourability drop to 50 i guess now atleast some of her emotions have triggered well i hope so 🤞

I think veer ne apni legendary skill use ki thi dairy pe sorry I forgot the name that one time skill Jo usse harikishan se revenge mission complete hone pe mili thi....kya mai sahi guess kr rhi hu?

Coming to tejal and bhumika hehe you should open a gift wrap in proper way lol and those fight between them will make their bond more close i can be wrong

Coming to kaera again my god she is genius indeed love that line you can go to Sonia haha
Her inteligence is 150 and still it's growing now we know why she is always first in everything

The bonding between Sonia and suhana is very pure dekh ke accha laga how much love is between two sisters

I already told you big fan of your writing skill really loved it thanks for this amazing story

Super bro nice updates

Areeeee ye kya ho gaya???? :what1:
System ne mission complete hone par notification kyu nhi diya??? System maintenance pe chala gaya kya?? 😂 Ye pari so gayi kya? Kuch clue to de jaati :sad:

Wating for next update Werewolf bhai

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya

What how is it possible 🤔🧐 there is something intentionally wrong find it and correct the mistake

Congratulations on 2700 Pages! Nice and superb update.... 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Congratulations on 2700 Pages

Mera Rajesh bhai se nivedan hai ki agla update jald dene ki kripa karen mahaan kripa hogi

Ek mahaan kripa aap bhi kar dijiye Rahul bhai ki ye Rajesh bhai kaun hai ? :D

Nice update

Super update hai Bhai

Congrats on 2700 pages

Congratulations on 2700 pages.

Nice story writing skills

Keep up with the good work dear

Great update! I think now Kaera got her emotions back and she's just angry at Veer that's why his favourability got low just like when Nidhi was angry with him.

Congratulations bhai for 2700

Congratulations for 2700 pages

Waah bhai kuch bada hi kand ho gya lagta hai ab to....veer ke l lag gye:ban2::naa::beer3:

Jabardast update bhai
& Congratulation for 2700 pages


:congrats: For completed 2700 pages on your story thread.....

Waiting for next

Congrats for 2700 pages

Congratulations for 2700

Congratulations for completing 2700 pges

Superb update bro 💯❣️

Next updaye kab aayega

Wa

Wait rahta hai Sunday ko 2 chij ka ek apke update ka ek one piece ke update ka both update Sunday milta hai waise apka update week main 2 hota hai but jahan tak main dekh raha hun Sunday probably update a hin jata
By the way waiting for update suspence clear kijiye

:spicy:. Zoot bolta ha .

Fantastic update Werewolf bhai

What a wonderful and shocking update....

Bhai es update ke baad crimson arc start ho jayega... So esi update me sb doubts clear kr dena
1 - veer ki us skil ke bare me
2 - veer ko jo dairy mili usme easa kya likha tha
3 - kiara ki fev down kese aai.. Kya wo ab veer se naraj h..
4 - prakash uncle ne suhana ke kaan me kya bola tha.. Or bi sb btana bhai.. Koi doubt na rahe next arc me jane se pahle..

Congratulations bro

Skill used, favor ability list! 🤯🤯🤯

Awesome writing! Can’t wait for next update!!!!!

i think kaera ka mission to pura ho gaya hoga per veer ne jo uske saath shuru me hi sex kiya tha uski wajah se uski favourability drop ho gayi hogi

waise ek baat mujhe jo nahin samajh me aayi wo ye ki jab veer ko marne wale ka pura past dikh jata hai to aatish ke marne ke baad veer ko slogan ke bare me kyun nahin pata chala veer ke liye slogan totaly unknown tha how it is possible usne aatish ke past me usko bhi dekha hoga aur jo bhi

Slogan ka past veer ne jana tha mar ne ka baad tabhi to use sandhya ka patta chala.
Muze lagta hai. Ek possibility ho sakti hai.
1.,slogen mara nahi.
2.,jese pari veer ka syatem hai.
3. To shayad yaha sandhya ke sprit ne slogan ko bachaya ho.
4. Ya pari jese hi sandhya bhi system main convert ho gayi ho.
5. Mission fale matleb slogen apni beti ko khota.
6. Jese nil mani ek rahasya hai. Vese hi writer sandhay ke jaariye . kuch nil mani jese kuch create kare.
Yeh spoller creat ho sakte hai.

Bhaya starting me veer khali past parh sakta tha baad me skill upgrade hui thi to wo ab past dekh bhi sakta he aatish ke time pe veer khali past parh sakta tha

Superb awesome update luvd it

Waiting bro

From last three updates, notifications are not coming to Veer for any mission completing??

Bhai abhi update aayega ya nhi Werewolf bhai

Ava story me wapas aayegi ya nahi


Veer ne apna one time use only seer vision skill use ki us pustak pr or uske baad vo ladkhadata hua ghar aaya, apne kamre me gya or 3 din tk bahar nhi aaya, akhir aisa kya tha us dairy me Jiska past dekh kr Veer ki aisi halat ho gyi or veer ne vo dairy kaera ko di, pr use thoda hi padh kr kaera ek alag kamre me kyo chali gyi, veer soche baitha tha ki mission accomplished ka notification aayega pr aaya kaera ki favourability reduce ka Jo 50 point kam ho gyi hai...

Kya iska yah parinam hua ki veer ka mission fail ho gya hai ya fir vo mission compite hone ke side effects the Jo aage chal kr khatm ho jayenge, ho sakta hai vo kaera ke real form awake Ho Jane pr jo veer ne kaera ke sath pahli baar me kiya tha uska hi Ye result ho points reduce, baki mission accomplished Ho gya ho...


Veer ko hi kyo Lagbhag sabhi ko hi kaera apni taraf attract karti pratit hogi, Uski personality hi aisi Bnai gyi hai bachpan se, Lekin ab jo veer ne kiya hai uske baad se hi kaera ki real groth start hui hai, aisa mujhe lagta hai or ab vo kayamat dhaane vali hai...

Veer ne apne business ke liye building chuse kr liya hai or kaera se contact sign karne vala tha kuchh din baad pr ab favourability kam ho jane pr Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...

Idhar suhana soniya se chhup kr apni personal psychytrist ko bulva liya hai or jb usne test liya or uske result dekhe to shock rah gyi, suhana ab Pahle se bahut jyada Thik ho gyi hai, suhana se baar baar puchh rhi hai ki Kon hai Vo ladka Jisne Uski bimari ko sudhar diya pr suhana ne kuchh nhi btaya, Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...

Aapne to suspense me hi daal diya kaera ke sambandh me...

Superb bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab wonderful amazing update with awesome writing skills bhai

Bhai kuch time bataa dete toh sahi rehta :sip:

Der na ho jaye kahi der na ho jaye .....
Update 133 has been posted. ✨
 

jess175

TATAKAE!
74
234
33
Update - 133 ~ Labyrinth and Invitation

Ab tak...

Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’


Ab aage...

Veer ne apni aankhein band kii ya yu kahe ki uski aankhein apne aap hi band ho gayi. Uske shareer ko ek jhatka laga aur uski consciousness drift hoke kahi aur hi chali gayi.

‘Ye- Ye kaha hu mein?’

Usse kuch bhi dikhaayi nahi diya. Chaaro orr andhkaar hi andhkaar faila hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano woh andhere me doobe kisi space me ho.

‘P-Pari? Pariiii???’

[M-Maaste…. r…. Maaste….. r…. K…y….a a…a…p m… u…. j… h… e……………….]

‘Pari?????’

Jo awaaz Veer ko Pari ki sunaayi de rahi thi, woh dheere dheere gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek ghanghor sannaata chhaa gaya. Woh na hi kuch sunn paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Woh apne badan ke ango ko bhi mehsoos nahi kar paa raha tha.

Ek bhayanak ghabrahat janm lii.

‘Pariiiiiiiii????????’

Pari ko pukaarne ka koi fayda na hua. Aisa laga jaise woh poori tarah se uss se alag ho chuka tha.

‘Calm down Veer! Calm yourself down!’

Usne ek lambi saans lii aur khud ko shaant kiya. Apni tezz dhadkano ko thoda thaam usne dhyaan lagaaya.

‘Pari mujhe sunn nahi paa rahi. Aur na hi Pari ko mein. Iska matlab hamaare connection ke beech kuch aisa hai jo hume ek dusre se baat karne se rok raha hai.’

Usne fauran hi apni sthiti ka aaklan kiya. Usse yaad aaya ki chand palo pehle woh Pari ko nirdesh de raha tha.


‘Do it Pari!’

[P-Par Master!? Finally aapke paas mauka hai apne pendant ke raaz ke baare me jaan’ne ka. Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi.]

‘Mene kaha na! Do it!’

[P-Par-]

‘Pariiii!!!!!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]


Yahi hua tha. Haan! Yahi toh hua tha.

Veer ko yaad tha acche se. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Pari ne Seer Vision ke baare me kya bataya tha.

[Seer Vision ~

Description : Grants the vision of a seer. The skill allows the user to instantly witness the past related to anything. Beware! Mental pain is guaranteed. If the user fails to reclaim the memory, skill will terminate automatically.]

Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha. Ye woh legendary skill thi jo usse kisi bhi vastu se sambandhit uska ateet poora ka poora dikha sakti thi.

Ek prakaar se ye uske ‘Check’ function ki tarah hi thi. Par uss se kahi zyaada aadhunik. Jo check function nahi dekh sakta tha woh Seer Vision dekh sakta tha.

Ab usse samajh aaya ki kyu Pari itne peeche lagi hui thi ki woh isse apne pendant par istemaal kare. Agar usne aisa kiya hota, toh pendant ka raaz ek jhatke me khul ke saamne aa jaata. Lekin kya pendant ka raaz Miss Kaera se zyada zaroori tha?

Veer ke liye ~ Nahi!

Aur isliye, usne aisi skill ko daav par lagaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha.

Dikkat yahi thi ki iske istemaal ke saath saath aane waale bhayanak maansik dard ko bhi jhelna tha. Aur itna hi nahi, agar kisi kaaran vash wo chhipi hui yaad ko paane me nakaam hota hai toh skill wahi apne aap band ho jayegi.

Dusre shabdo me, skill barbaad chali jayegi.

Ye bohut risky tha. Kyuki jokhim bhi tha aur safalta ki koi guarantee bhi nahi.

‘Agar description ko dhyaan me rakha jaaye toh mujhe memory retrieve karni hai. That’s right! Mujhe sirf uss par hi dhyaan dena hai.’

Veer ne sahi disha me sochna shuru kiya.

Usne ye skill uss diary par istemaal ki thi jo usse Kaera ke puraane ghar me kahi chhipi hui mili thi.

Veer ke mann me kayi sawaal the. Jese ki woh diary waha kar kya rahi thi? Kya kabhi Kaera ya kisi aur ko iss diary ke baare me pata nahi laga? Aise aneko sawaal se woh joojh raha tha. Par filhaal inke liye samay nahi tha.

Kaera ke emotions ko baahar laane ke liye usse ek strong emotional impact dena zaroori tha. Ek prakaar ka emotional breakdown. Jab diary khol Veer ne andar dekha toh woh samajh gaya tha usse kya karna hai.

Abhi usne khud ko sambhaala hi tha ki tabhi,

‘Urghhh~’

Achanak se ek baar phir uski consciousness kahi drift hone lagi.



‘Aaaarrgghh~’

Aisa laga maano jese usse koi kheech ke kahi le jaa raha tha. Uske mastishk me ek bhayanak dard utha.

Dard ke maare usne aankhein band kar lii, aur jab sab kuch shaant hone ke baad usne aankh khol dekha toh,



Uske saamne ek labyrinth maujood tha. Yaani ek bhool-bhulaiyaa. Ek prakaar ka maze.

‘Ye toh ek-!!?’

Woh ashcharya-chakit reh gaya. Aas paas usne dekha, dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Sirf ek hi raasta tha uske liye aur woh tha iss labyrinth me ghusna.

‘Shayad isliye skill me likha hua tha ki agar memory retrieve karne me fail huye toh ye band ho jayegi. I get it now. Samajh gaya ye tough kyu hai itna.’

‘But know this… I’m not gonna fall back!’

Nidar hoke woh andar chal diya.

Andar ghuste hi,


“Eaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhh~”

*Screeeeeeeechhhhhhhh*

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

“Die! Die! Die!!!!”

“Noooooooooo~”


Kaan ke parde faad dene waali alag alag cheenkhe aur awaazein sunaayi padne lagi. Apne kaano par haath rakh woh aage badha,

*hic* *hic*

“Uwaaaaaa~”


Kahi kisi chhote se bacche ki rone ki awaaz usse sunaayi deti, toh kahi kisi mahila ke rone ki. Ye jagah kisi bhootiya jagah se kam nahi thi.

‘Kya ye sab? Kaera ki yaado ka hissa hai? Ya fir diary ki?’

Ek bada sawaal aur khada hua.

Woh chal hi raha tha jab uske saamne achanak ek kaali dhundh si chhaane lagi. Bhayanak kaala dhua ikhatta hua aur uska ekmaatr raasta rok diya.

‘This still won’t stop me!’

Bina ghabraaye woh uss kaale dhue me ghus gaya. Aur ghuste hi,

“Aaaaaaaaaarggghhhhhhhhh!!”

Uski dard ke maare cheekh nikalni shuru ho gayi. Phir agle hi shan,


“Pagal ladki!”

“Hahahahaha!!”

“Tum ajeeb ho! Ajeeb! Hume tumse dosti nahi karni! Hato meri bench se!!”

“Mummy dekho! Woh ladki kitni ajeeb hai.”

“Arre ye ladki pagal hai. Hehehe~ Kuch bolti hi nahi hai.”

“Oye iski choti kheecho dekho kaise royegi hehe”

“Hey dekho toh kitna paisa hai saali ke paas.”

“Mene suna hai iske papa bohut bade businessman hai.”

“Tabhi toh paiso pe aish karti hai. Hmph! I hate such people.”

“Sahi kaha. Ghamand toh dekho! Jese apne aap ko koi maharani samajhti ho.”

“Baap ne zaroor teachers, principal ko paise diye honge. Tabhi toh kabhi kuch bolte nahi hai isko.”

“Kya hi kar legi itna padh ke? Raub toh dekho zara iska. Dekho toh, kaise car se utar rahi hai. Jaise duniya me iske hi paas mehngi car hai.”

“Saali par hai bohut hot yaar! Iska baap agar itna wazandaar na hota toh apne laude pe baithaya hota mene isse. Hahahaha!”


Kuch aisi anek baate Veer ke kaano me goonjne lagi. Woh haafte hue jaise hi uss dhundh se baahar aaya, uski saansein ukhadne lagi.

Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Saath hi gussa bhi.

‘Kya ye Kaera ki buri yaadein hai? I-Iska matlab Seer Vision mujhe sirf diary ki hi nahi, diary se jude insaan ki bhi yaadein dikha sakta hai?’

Dheere dheere Veer ke kaano se woh awaazein gaayab hui.

‘Aise aur kitne dard aap apne seene me daba ke rakhi ho huh?’

Woh bhool-bhulaiyaa me anumaan laga ke raasto par mudta gaya.

Abhi kuch derr hi hui thi jab saamne usse ek choti bacchi dikhaayi dii. Woh frock pehne neeche zameen par baithe apna sarr jhuka ke ro rahi thi.


*hic* *hic*

“Mamma!”


Veer ko zaroorat nahi thi ye samajhne ki ki saamne baithi ye chhoti si bacchi kaun thi.

“Mamma! Mein ajeeb hu kya? Sab mujhe ajeeb kyu kehte hai? *hic* Sab mujh se dur kyu bhaagte hai? *hic* Mamma! Wapas aa jao na! Mein ab bilkul shaitani nahi karungi. *hic* Mamma!”

Veer aage badha,

“Nahi! Nahi Kaera! Tum bilkul ajeeb nahi ho.”

Woh kehte hue aage aaya. Usne Kaera ko chheena chaaha par uske chheete hi woh ladki ek dhue me tabdeel ho gayi.

Labyrinth uske saath jese khel raha tha.

Aise kayi kaali dhundh se guzarte hue aur dard pe dard sehte hue woh jese tese apni manzil ke qareeb pohuch hi gaya.

Iss baar uske saamne koi kaali dhundh nahi thi. Saamne tha ek ujaala. Peela prakaash jo uski aankho ko chaka-chaundh kiye hue tha.

Woh uss prakaash ki orr badha aur jese hi roshni ki kiran ke sampark me woh aaya, ek baar phir woh khichta hua kahi aur chala gaya.

Fir sab kuch. Usse sab kuch nazar aa gaya. Memory retrieve ho chuki thi. Aur uske baad,

*huff* *huff* *huff*

[Maaasteerrr!!]

Uske kaano me awaaz aayi. Woh waapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha. Par uski haalat ab bigad rahi thi. Sarr bhanna raha tha.

[Master you did it! You finally did it.]

Woh paseene se lathpath tha. Pari ko jawaab dene tak ke liye wo apni saasein durust nahi kar paa raha tha.

Aankho me nami bhi thi. Usne apne haatho me maujood uss diary ko dekha aur apni t-shirt ke andar daba ke chhupa liya.

Kaera jisse Veer ki absence ke baare me jab dhyaan aaya, woh fauran hi usse dhundhte hue waha aayi,

Kaera : You are here!? What happened?

Veer : N-Nothing! Mera bas perr fisal gaya tha.

Woh haafte hue utha.

[Master! This is bad! Jald hi skill ke side-effects aapko hit karenge. Aap yu hi yaha khade nahi reh paoge. Jaldi se nikaliye yaha se. Quick!]

Veer ne wahi kiya bhi! Usne apni himmat baandh khud ko zara bhi exhausted show nahi kiya. Par andar se usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uski saari shakti kisi ne choos lii ho.

[Hang in there Master! Bas thodi derr aur!]

Veer jese tese apne ghar pohucha. Kismat ki baat thi ye ki tab hall me koi bhi maujood nahi tha. Aur darwaza bhi lock nahi tha. Shayad saara mahila mandal ek kamre me baith gupshup me laga hua tha. Iska fayda utha ke Veer seedha apne kamre me ghusa,

*Click*

Darwaza lock karte hi usne sabse pehle diary ko chhipa ke rakha. Woh jaanta tha uske saath usse kya karna tha. Par ab aur nahi,

[Master!!!]

Woh ladkhadaya aur apne bistar par gir behosh ho gaya.

Woh shaam tak behoshi me hi tha. Aur usse hosh bhi aaya toh darwaze peetne ke shor se.

*Bammmmm* *Baaammmmm*

“Veeeeeeer!!!! Veer kholo! Veer???”

Awaaz Tej ki thi.

Fauran uth usne darwaza khola. Aur apne bhai ko sahi salamat dekh Tej ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Veer ye dekh ke bhi hairat me tha ki sabhi log uske darwaaze ke baahar khade hue the.

Uski maa, Shweta, Aabha, Suman, Ragini. Sonali aur Bhumika bas nahi thi kyuki iss samay woh dono hi kaam par gayi hui thi.

Veer : Aap sab yaha?

Tej : Aur nahi toh kya? Jab hume pata chala ki tum ghar aa gaye ho toh tumhe awaaz lagaayi par tumne darwaza khola hi nahi.

Bhavna : Hume laga ki tum so rahe hoge beta. Par jab shaam hui toh Tej ke saath saath fir hume bhi chinta hone lagi aur isliye-

Veer : Ahhh! Samjha! Nahi! Actually mein so hi raha tha.

Tej (frowns) : Really?

Veer : Of course!

Bhavna : Accha chalo! Ab uth gaye ho toh haath muh dholo. Aur neeche aa jao. Suman! Chai bana lo.

Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Arre? Aap kyu taqleef karti ho? Mein hu na! Mein banaati hu.

Jaate jaate Ragini ne Veer ko dekha aur sharma ke waha se nikal gayi. Apne hi haatho ki chai woh Veer ko pilaana chaahti thi.

Veer : M-Mein aata hu. Aap sab chaliye!

Sab waha se neeche chal diye. Siwaye Aabha ke. Woh nazre jhukaaye wahi khadi rahi.

Aabha : A-Aap! Aap ne jhooth kaha na?

Veer jo haath muh dhone washroom jaa hi raha tha, achanak hi uske qadam ye sunn wahi rukk gaye.

Wo palta aur Aabha ko dekha,

Aabha : W-Wo mein jab sabke liye paani upar leke jaa rahi thi tab aapko ladkhadate hue apne kamre me jaate dekha tha. A-Aap theek toh ho na?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha, Aabha ghabraate hue peeche hui aur deewaar se jaa bhidi. Uske saamne aake Veer ne apna ek haath zorr se deewaar par maara jo Aabha ke kaan ke bagal se hoke guzra.

Bechari darr ke maare kisi chhipkali ki tarah deewaar se chipak ke reh gayi.

Aage uske kaan ki taraf Veer jhuka,

Veer : Aur ye baat kisi ko pata lagne na paaye. Hmm?

Aabha ne zorr se apna sarr haan me hilaaya. Yaha vaastav me usne Veer ki chori pakdi thi, par lag aisa raha tha jese woh khud Veer ke changul me phassi ho.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Aabha ki chin ko haath me leke usne uska chehra upar kiya aur unn gulabi hontho ko apni giraft me le liya. Woh kasmasa ke reh gayi.

“Nnnnnn~”

Jab tak Veer ka mann na bhar gaya tab tak usne unn raseele hontho ka acche se rasspaan kiya.

Aabha ko chorr woh fresh up hoke jab neeche aaya, toh sab saath baithe chai pee rahe the. Woh bhi apni jagah par baith chai peene laga aur apni soch me pad gaya.

[Kya aapne decide kar liya hai?]

‘Hmm!’

[Aap ye waali skill lena chaahte ho na?]

‘Yes Pari!’

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[5000 points have been used.]

[Kaafi mehngi hai par useful hai.]

‘Thanks!’

[Ab aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?]

‘Tum jaanti toh ho. Fir kyu puch rahi ho?’

[Kyuki mein bina aapki permission ke aapke mann me nahi jhaakna chaahti. Physically toh mein jaanti hu aap theek ho ab. But mentally? Uska jawaab aap hi mujhe dijiye.]

‘Mein theek hu Pari!’

[Ek legendary skill hamesha ek keemat ke saath hi aati hai Master.]

‘I know!’

[Aapko yaad hai na? Pitcher ko maarte samay bhi aapne legendary skill use kii thi.]

‘Woh legendary skill thi?’

[Of course Master! Sylvia’s venom cure!! Ek legendary skill hi toh thi. Farq sirf itna hai ki tab aap asaani se legendary skill ko purchase kar sakte the kyuki tab system meharban tha. Par ab sirf mission ke zariye hi ye mil sakti hai.]

‘I see!’

[Aur aapko yaad hai na Sylvia’s venom cure ko istemaal karne ke baad aapke saath kya hua tha?]

‘Yeah! I remember! White blood cells zyada maatra me badh gaye the aur poison ko baahar kiye the. I suffered a lot of pain. Mujhe acche se yaad hai. Haha! Divya ka chehra tab dekhne laayak tha. And- Miss Suhana too!’

Suhana ki ek chhavi uske dimaag me aayi.

[Yes! Toh ab yaad rakhiyega kisi bhi legendary skill ko istemaal karne se pehle. Kuch na kuch side-effects hote hi hai inke. Kyuki ye aapke planet ke laws ke against jaati hai. They are too powerful. Aap dekh hi chuke ho.]

‘Laws ke against toh tum bhi ho Pari!’

[Well! Yes!]

Veer muskuraya,

‘Mein dhyaan rakhunga Pari!’

[Good thing!]

3 din guzar gaye. Aur Veer apne uss ek kaam me laga raha. Aur ant me woh Kaera ke paas gaya aur usse diary thama aaya.

2 din aur guzre. Kaera ke mission ki last date khatam ho chuki thi. Par system ki taraf se koi bhi message nahi aaya tha mission ke liye. Jo aaya tha woh tha ek notification.

Jisse padh Veer aur chinta me doob chuka tha. Kaera ki favorability ghat ke 50 par aa chuki thi. Ye sab ho kya raha tha?

Notification kyu nahi aa raha tha.

‘Pari? What the hell is going on?’

[Mein bhi confused hu Master. Notification aa jaana chahiye tha.]

‘Agar woh mujhe hate karne lagi hai toh mujhe chalega Pari par unke saath kuch galat nahi hona chahiye. I cannot see her fall like this.’

[Shayad-]

‘Shayad kya Pari please bolo. Mein bechain hu yaha. Woh theek hai na?’

[Master! Aapne apna kaam kar diya hai. Don’t worry!]

‘Don’t worry? Karan ka message aaya hai mujhe Pari ki Miss Kaera ne khud ko 2 din tak andar room me band kar ke rakha tha. Aur fir achanak se unki favorability kam ho jaana. Ye sab kya hai? Keh do ki woh mujhe hate kar rahi hai. Na ki unke emotions hamesha hamesha ke liye chale gaye hai.’

[Master aisa ho sakta hai ki-]

‘K-Kya?’

[Shayad wo cheezo ko process kar rahi hai. Aur abhi tak kisi decision par nahi pohuchi hai. Shayad unhone kuch socha hai par abhi uss par poori tarah se atal nahi hai. Aur isliye mission clear ka notification hume nahi mila hai.]

‘....’

[Yes! Yahi kaaran hai Master! Ab aap ready rahiyega!]

‘Huh?’

[Woh aapko hate bhi kar sakti hai. Ya pyaar bhi. Hume jald pata lag jayega.]

‘I hope wo theek ho jaaye!’

***

Agli subaah Veer ki aankh jab khuli toh Bhumika uske seene se zorr se lagi hui thi. Aur usne khud ne Bhumika ko apne seene me kass ke bheencha hua tha. Uske doodh veer ki chaathi me dhasse hue the.

Veer maan’na toh nahi chaahta tha par ye ehsaas alaukik tha.

Uske bagal se Tej bhi laiti thi par woh ghode bech ke odhne wali chaadar ke upar hi so rahi thi.

Veer ne alag hone ka prayaas kiya ki itne me hi,

Bhumika ki aankhein khul gayi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Aur jab kuch derr baad unhe dhyaan aaya, toh fir toota unpe sharm ka pahaad.

Veer (blushes) : I-I’m sorry! Mein wo neend me-

Bhumika (blushes) : I-It’s okay! Y-You can hold me i-if you want.

Veer : Eh?

Veer hakka bakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna? Veer ne uski baat maan usse jakde rakha.

Veer : Aap mujhse kuch- akele me baat karna chaahti thi?

Bhumika : Hmm? H-Haan! Mene kuch decide kiya hai. Kya hum raat me baat kar sakte hai?

Veer : S-Sure!

Aur uske baad uski haya firse laut aayi. Surkh laal gaal liye woh chhat-pataati palko ko upar kar kabhi Veer ko dekhti toh kabhi kahi orr. Par dono kuch derr tak yu hi ek dusre ki baaho me bane rahe jab tak neeche shorgul na machne laga.

Kya kabhi aisi subaah Veer ke ghar me ho sakti hai jab chehel pehel na ho?

Aaj ki subah Sonali behek chuki thi.

Dining table par baithe Veer ko woh jhunjhlaaye jaa rahi thi.

Sonali : O-Oye!! Tum sunn rahe ho na meri baat?

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Sonali : Fir bhi tumhaare kaano me juu nahi reng rahi? Arree! Mein keh rahi hu hamare truck ke karmchaari kaam chodh bhaag rahe hai. Unka aatmvishvaas gir raha hai. A-Aur- Aur aaj koi aane waala hai. Koi badi hasti. Mujhe Prachi ne bataya hai. Oyeeee!

Prachi Veer ke food truck me kaam karne waali ek ladki thi. Woh sonali ki madad karwaati thi. Aur kuch kuch recipes bhi bana leti thi.

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Veer ke lagatar iss ignorant attitude ko dekh Sonali ka maatha aur thanak utha.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!! Jao! Bhaad me jao! Hmph! Mera kaam tha bataana, mene bata diya. Aage tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane.

Aur agle hi pal woh muh fula ke baith bad-badaane lagi,

“Ek toh madad karo, upar se mahashay ko koi parvaah nahi hai. Mein koi kaam waali bai hu? Jo itna kaam thopte hi jaa rahe ho. Agar kisi din ye kaam ka bojh meri jaan le liya toh bhi mujhe aashcharya nahi hoga. Koi naazuk sii ladki ko itna kaam deta hai bhala? Itni badi zimmedaari koi khud bhi akele nahi uthaata, par yaha dekho. Mein hu! Jo-”

Uske non-stop radio ko sunn Veer ne uski orr dekha,

Veer : Tumhara naashta thanda ho raha hai!

Sonali : H-Huh? *blushes* h-haan toh khaa rahi hu. Naashta yahi hai, kahi udd ke nahi chala jayega.

Veer mand mand muskuraate hue uske iss chulbule-pann ka lutf leta gaya.

Aur naashta khatam karte hi woh utha.

Veer : Chalo!

Sonali : Huh?? Kaha?

Veer : Food truck ke liye, aur kaha? Abhi thodi derr pehle tum hi toh chillaa rahi thi na?

Sonali : O-Oohh!

Tej : Veer kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Business time Teju dii! Aap waha bore ho jaogi. Mein aapke liye laut ke kuch launga na. *smiles*

Tej (blushes) : Theek hai! Mein wait karungi!

Ragini : A-Aur mere liye Veer?

Veer (smiles) : Aapke liye bhi launga bhabhi!

Ragini (blushes) : Mujhe intezaar rahega!

Dur baithi Bhavna iss conversation exchange ko bade hi gaur se sunn rahi thi aur dekh bhi rahi thi.

Idhar Sonali Veer ka peecha karta hue fauran hi baahar aayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost nikaali hui thi. Sonali jab andar baithi toh car ki khubsoorti ko dekhti reh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Woh- Mein pehli baar baith rahi hu isme.

Veer : Ohh!

Jald hi woh dono food truck ke saamne the. Ye Veer ka pehla waala food truck tha jo usne sabse pehle khareeda tha. Aur Sonali bhi issi me kaam karti thi.

Dono utar ke jab truck par pohuche toh Sonali ne chaavi se truck ko khola. Veer fir usse leke city side chal diya.

Daily ki apni jagah par truck ko laga ke set karne ke baad, woh customers ke aane ka intezaar karne lage.

Jab Prachi aur baaki sabhi ne Veer ko dekha toh woh sab hairaan reh gaye. Veer kabhi bhi iss tarah unke truck ke andar nahi aata tha. Aaj aisa kya special tha?

Veer : Toh baat kya hai?

Sonali : Woh-

Prachi : Sir mein batau?

Veer : Sure!

Prachi : Baat ye hai ki ladko me motivation gir raha hai. Woh food truck ki jagah kahi aur bhaag rahe hai. Unhe ye kaam nahi karna. Unka kehna hai ki yaha kaam kiya toh hamesha ke liye yahi fasse reh jayenge. Kuch kar nahi payenge.

Sonali : Dekha jaaye toh unki baat sahi bhi hai. Mujhe hi dekh lo!

Usne taunt maara. Veer ne jab usse ghoor ke dekha toh woh shaant ho gayi.

Veer : Samjha! Kya tum me se kisi ne unhe ye nahi bataaya ki jald hi hamara business bohut badhne wala hai?

Sonali : Ehh?? Ye kya nayi nayi tum fek rahe ho ab?

Veer : Ohh! Iss nadaan ladki ko bhi nahi maalum.

Sonali (bhadakte hue) : Oyeee! Nadaan kisse kaha?

Veer : Anyways! Prachi! Mein tumhe bata du ki jald hi hamara business badhne wala hai.

Prachi : Ye toh acchi baat hai sir! Toh kya mein unhe phone kar ye bata du? Mujhe yakeen hai woh waapas laut aayenge.

Veer (smiles) : Aur yahi toh mein nahi chaahta!

Prachi : Huh?

Veer : Jo log ek acche khaase chalte business se abhi bhaag gaye, zara socho ki jab business sach me kabhi agar manda pad gaya toh kya karenge woh?

Prachi : W-Woh-!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye accha hua ki woh chale gaye. Hume unki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : Par unke jaane se baaki logo me aatmvishvaas gir gaya hai. Aur unka mann machal raha hai kaam chhodhne ke liye.

Veer : Toh uska hal hai unka aatmvishvaas badhaana!

Prachi : W-Woh kaise?

Veer (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh mein aaya hu yaha!

Kehte hue usne apni shirt utaar ke apni kamar par baandh lii, aur bas ek black t-shirt me aa gaya.

Veer : Aaj unhe bataya jayega ki ek chef hona kitni responsibility ka kaam hota hai.

Jab uski aankho me woh Tej Prachi ne dekha toh woh mantra-mugdh hoke reh gayi.

Prachi : S-So cool!

Veer : Sonali! Saare food trucks par call kar unhe yaha bulao.

Sonali ne baat maan sabhi ko waha bula liya. Ladke aur ladkiya sabhi log the. Ye sabhi mil ke Veer ke alag alag food trucks ko sambhaalte the. Prachi inn sab se hisaab liya karti thi aur Sonali ko deti thi. Aur baad me Sonali usse manage kar Veer ko saupti thi.

Kuch iss tarah se ye chain kaam karti thi. Khaas baat ye thi ki Veer ke food trucks bhalayi dikhne me ek jaise the parantu sabhi ke menus alag alag hua karte the.

Koi sirf subaah ko lagta tha aur naashta serve karta tha toh koi din me lag ke thaali system par based tha. Koi fast food serve karta tha toh koi shakes and blends ke liye tha. Uske paas harr tarah ki variety maujood thi.

Jab sabhi ekatr hue toh Veer ne unhe ek lecture diya ki chef hona apne aap me kitna zimmedaari waala kaam tha. Aaj woh unn sab ko karke dikhaane waala tha.

Line se sabhi trucks lag gaye.

Shuruaat me toh gine chune log hi aaye par jaise hi logo ki dincharya ke working hours khatam hone ka samay hua, jab sooraj ki kirane ahista ahista chhatati gayi toh ilaake me chehel pehel badh gayi. Mausam bhi thoda sheetal ho utha.

Thaka haara aadmi kaam ke baad apne colleagues ke saath khaane peene ke liye nikalne laga. Aur fir Veer ne shuru kiya apna jaadu.

Jaise hi uske haath kitchen ke samaano par pade woh jaise ek alag hi duniya me chala gaya.

Bohut hi kam mauka milta tha usse apni cooking skills dikhaane ka. Of course! Uske paas wo jo thi!

Absolute Chef!!!!

Prachi (in shock) : S-Sir ko cook karna bhi aata hai??

Sonali : Haan!

Sonali ye maan’na toh nahi chaahti thi par daant peeste hue usse ye maan’na hi pada ki poore ghar me Veer se behtar khaana koi nahi bana paata tha.

Prachi ek student ki tarah Veer ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Wo notes le rahi thi.
Prachi : Ahh? Oil ke saath butter?

Veer : Butter excessive heat me jaldi jal jaata hai Prachi. Toh usse thoda bachaane ke liye ye oil.

Prachi : Ohhhh!

Usne fauran hi apne notepad me usse notedown kar liya. Woh Veer ko prashansa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Itne me do office ki ladkiya aayi aur Veer ko uska pehla order bhi mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

Veer ke bareek se bareek cheez ko dekh aur uski precise culinary skills ko dekh, na sirf waha maujood Prachi aur anya, balki Sonali bhi uski iss adaa par mohit ho gayi.

Woh ab sirf khaana nahi bana raha tha, woh ab ek artist ki tarah tha jiski kalaa ka pradarshan wo sabhi dekh paa rahe the.

Veer ne jab wo order unn ladkiyo ko diya toh dono excited hoke jaake khaane me lag gayi.

“Ohhhh my goddddd!!! Kitna tasty hai~”

“Hmm~ Par tumne usse nahi dekha? Chef ko? Wo to aur tasty hoga.”

“Hehehehehe~ Haan!”

Dekhte hi dekhte bheed jama hone lag gayi aur Veer ke food trucks bhaari vyast ho gaye. Woh idhar se udhar order complete karne me hi lag gaye.

Prachi bhaavuk ho uthi. Aaj tak usne itni bheed kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Harr guzarte pal Veer ke liye uski izzat badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Prachi!! Inhe fryer me daalo!!!

Prachi : Yessss Sirrrr~

Veer : Sonali! Rolls ko wrap karo!

Sonali : Haan! K-Kar rahi hu!

Veer : Ek accha chef apne swaarth ke liye nahi, dusro ke liye cook karta hai. Samjhe???

“Yesssss Sirrrr!!!!!”

Veer ne aate hi apni upasthiti se poori kaaya palat kar dii thi.

Prachi baahar jaake logo se jab feedback lene gayi toh yaha Veer ne mauka dekh achanak se Sonali ko peeche se pakad liya.

Woh fryer se french fries nikaal rahi thi, par Veer uski kamar ko pakde apna chehra uske kandho par jhukaaye khada tha.

Akasmaat iss hamle se Sonali bhauchakki si reh gayi. Iske pehle ki Veer ko woh mana kar paati, Veer ka haath upar chala gaya aur Sonali murti ki tarah jamm ke reh gayi.

Uska haath sonali ke doodh par tha.

Sonali ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jaise maano usse bukhaar aa gaya ho.

Sonali (blushes) : Chorro! Ch-Chorro warna mein- muh tod dungi tumhara.

Par Veer uske urojo ko masalne me laga hua tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab kya kehna hai tumhara? Tum keh rahi thi business me mandi aa rahi hai? Log jaa rahe hai. Hmm? Toh ye bheed kaisi hai?

Sonali (blushes) : Nnnn~ Haaa~ Haaa~ Chhorro! J-Jaldi~ Prachi aati hogi! Chorro!!!

Veer : Nahi chorrunga!

Sonali : Kutte kameene!!!! Chorrr!! Ahhnnn~ Nnnnn~

Veer poori lagan se unn thano ko masalne laga. Usne Sonali ko pehli baar chhua tha aur wo zara bhi naraaz nahi tha.

Par usse jald hi Sonali ko chorrna pada kyuki Prachi aa rahi thi.

Prachi : S-Sir! Buri khabar! Woh famous hasti aa chuki hai aur aapse milna chaahti hai.

Veer jab baahar aaya toh uske saamne ek business suit me lady car ke paas khadi hui thi.

Uske paas aate hi usne khud hi haath aage badhaaya,

“Mister Veer?”

Veer : Yes! Aur aap?

Wese toh usne pehle hi check kar liya tha par formality karna toh zaroori tha.

“Mein tamanna!”

Woh boli aur apne haath mod khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?

Tamanna : Do you know who I am?

Veer : No!

Veer ke knowledge par hasste hue woh guroor me boli,

Tamanna : Mein ek food critic hu.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tamanna : Mera kaam hai famous hotels, restaurants me jaake waha ka khaana taste karna aur uske baare me likhna. Apne reviews dena. Mera ek review acche khaase chalte firrte hotel ko sadak par laa sakta hai.

Veer shaant tha. Kyuki wo sach keh rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein khud Mumbai se hu. Abhi tak baahar thi, kuch hafte pehle hi lauti hu. Mein aksar travel karti rehti hu. Iss food truck ko mene pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. I guess ye abhi haal hi me khula hai!?

Veer : Jii!

Tamanna : Kal mein yaha se guzri toh by chance yaha aayi. Menu par ek signature dish dekh mene uski demand ki toh pata laga ki wo dish sirf truck ke owner ko hi banaani aati hai. Worker ne kaha tha ki mein kal aau toh isliye yaha aayi hu.

Veer : Then come, please!

Tamanna : Uss se pehle, ek walk ho jaaye?

Veer : Kyu nahi!

Veer jaanta tha woh kya karna chaah rahi thi. Woh owner se pehle baate karti thi, unke ravaiyye ko notice karti, unhe jaan boojh ke gussa bhi dilaati thi taaki wo uske jaal me phass jaaye aur fir wo unke baare me sab kuch likh sake. Veer ke saath bhi wo wahi karne waali thi.

Tamanna : Tum jaante ho mein number 1 food kis desh ka maanti hu?

[Huh? What the hell? Master? Hume iski bakwaas kyu sunn’na pad raha hai?]

‘Shaant Pari!’

Veer : Kis desh ka ma’am?

Tamanna (smiles) : Of course, Italy! Italian food best hai!

Veer : Aur second pe?

Tamanna : Mexican food!

Veer : Third?

Tamanna : Of course! It’s French food and spanish food!

Veer : Aur hamara Indian food?

Tamanna : Fourth!

Veer : Fourth kyu?

Tamanna : Apne saamne dekho!

Chalte chalte woh dono hi ek chaupaati ke nazdeek pohuch chuke the.

Tamanna : Dekho logo ko! Kaise thoos rahe hai! Hygiene dekho! Saaf safaayi dekho!

Veer : Par kuch log toh gloves pehne hai. Unke stalls bhi saaf hai.

Tamanna : Yahi to dikkat hai na. Sirf kuch log Mister Veer! Pata nahi logo ko sense kab aayega. Pata nahi ye sab kab sudhrenge. Food ko kachre ki tarah treat nahi kiya jaata. It should be handled delicately with hygiene.

Woh kareeb 15 minute tak bad-badaati rahi. Jab Veer ne usse achanak se rok diya,

Veer : One day!

Tamanna : Huh?

Veer : I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry.

Tamanna : What?????

Veer palta aur apne jeb me haath daal chal diya,

Veer : Come! I’ll show you what the real food is!

Veer ne Tamanna ko fir apni ek signature dish bana ke dii. Jo ki kuch nahi ek roll tha.

Tamanna disappoint hote hue wo roll uthaayi aur apne muh me daali. Jaise hi swaad, woh flavour uske taste buds ko hit kiye, wo wahi jamm gayi.

Veer : Tamanna ma’am??

Par koi jawaab nahi aaya. Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~


“I need you! ASAP!”
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update 5.3k words ka hai. Toh mujhe bolna na pade. Daba ke likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Agle update se crimson arc ka main plot shuru ho jayega. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad! :shakehands:
Awesome update!! Kaera's past was painful. Veer showed everyone that he is the boss. I think in last part maybe Kaera made her decision..
 

Hyper king

Member
277
354
79
Update - 133 ~ Labyrinth and Invitation

Ab tak...

Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’


Ab aage...

Veer ne apni aankhein band kii ya yu kahe ki uski aankhein apne aap hi band ho gayi. Uske shareer ko ek jhatka laga aur uski consciousness drift hoke kahi aur hi chali gayi.

‘Ye- Ye kaha hu mein?’

Usse kuch bhi dikhaayi nahi diya. Chaaro orr andhkaar hi andhkaar faila hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano woh andhere me doobe kisi space me ho.

‘P-Pari? Pariiii???’

[M-Maaste…. r…. Maaste….. r…. K…y….a a…a…p m… u…. j… h… e……………….]

‘Pari?????’

Jo awaaz Veer ko Pari ki sunaayi de rahi thi, woh dheere dheere gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek ghanghor sannaata chhaa gaya. Woh na hi kuch sunn paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Woh apne badan ke ango ko bhi mehsoos nahi kar paa raha tha.

Ek bhayanak ghabrahat janm lii.

‘Pariiiiiiiii????????’

Pari ko pukaarne ka koi fayda na hua. Aisa laga jaise woh poori tarah se uss se alag ho chuka tha.

‘Calm down Veer! Calm yourself down!’

Usne ek lambi saans lii aur khud ko shaant kiya. Apni tezz dhadkano ko thoda thaam usne dhyaan lagaaya.

‘Pari mujhe sunn nahi paa rahi. Aur na hi Pari ko mein. Iska matlab hamaare connection ke beech kuch aisa hai jo hume ek dusre se baat karne se rok raha hai.’

Usne fauran hi apni sthiti ka aaklan kiya. Usse yaad aaya ki chand palo pehle woh Pari ko nirdesh de raha tha.


‘Do it Pari!’

[P-Par Master!? Finally aapke paas mauka hai apne pendant ke raaz ke baare me jaan’ne ka. Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi.]

‘Mene kaha na! Do it!’

[P-Par-]

‘Pariiii!!!!!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]


Yahi hua tha. Haan! Yahi toh hua tha.

Veer ko yaad tha acche se. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Pari ne Seer Vision ke baare me kya bataya tha.

[Seer Vision ~

Description : Grants the vision of a seer. The skill allows the user to instantly witness the past related to anything. Beware! Mental pain is guaranteed. If the user fails to reclaim the memory, skill will terminate automatically.]

Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha. Ye woh legendary skill thi jo usse kisi bhi vastu se sambandhit uska ateet poora ka poora dikha sakti thi.

Ek prakaar se ye uske ‘Check’ function ki tarah hi thi. Par uss se kahi zyaada aadhunik. Jo check function nahi dekh sakta tha woh Seer Vision dekh sakta tha.

Ab usse samajh aaya ki kyu Pari itne peeche lagi hui thi ki woh isse apne pendant par istemaal kare. Agar usne aisa kiya hota, toh pendant ka raaz ek jhatke me khul ke saamne aa jaata. Lekin kya pendant ka raaz Miss Kaera se zyada zaroori tha?

Veer ke liye ~ Nahi!

Aur isliye, usne aisi skill ko daav par lagaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha.

Dikkat yahi thi ki iske istemaal ke saath saath aane waale bhayanak maansik dard ko bhi jhelna tha. Aur itna hi nahi, agar kisi kaaran vash wo chhipi hui yaad ko paane me nakaam hota hai toh skill wahi apne aap band ho jayegi.

Dusre shabdo me, skill barbaad chali jayegi.

Ye bohut risky tha. Kyuki jokhim bhi tha aur safalta ki koi guarantee bhi nahi.

‘Agar description ko dhyaan me rakha jaaye toh mujhe memory retrieve karni hai. That’s right! Mujhe sirf uss par hi dhyaan dena hai.’

Veer ne sahi disha me sochna shuru kiya.

Usne ye skill uss diary par istemaal ki thi jo usse Kaera ke puraane ghar me kahi chhipi hui mili thi.

Veer ke mann me kayi sawaal the. Jese ki woh diary waha kar kya rahi thi? Kya kabhi Kaera ya kisi aur ko iss diary ke baare me pata nahi laga? Aise aneko sawaal se woh joojh raha tha. Par filhaal inke liye samay nahi tha.

Kaera ke emotions ko baahar laane ke liye usse ek strong emotional impact dena zaroori tha. Ek prakaar ka emotional breakdown. Jab diary khol Veer ne andar dekha toh woh samajh gaya tha usse kya karna hai.

Abhi usne khud ko sambhaala hi tha ki tabhi,

‘Urghhh~’

Achanak se ek baar phir uski consciousness kahi drift hone lagi.



‘Aaaarrgghh~’

Aisa laga maano jese usse koi kheech ke kahi le jaa raha tha. Uske mastishk me ek bhayanak dard utha.

Dard ke maare usne aankhein band kar lii, aur jab sab kuch shaant hone ke baad usne aankh khol dekha toh,



Uske saamne ek labyrinth maujood tha. Yaani ek bhool-bhulaiyaa. Ek prakaar ka maze.

‘Ye toh ek-!!?’

Woh ashcharya-chakit reh gaya. Aas paas usne dekha, dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Sirf ek hi raasta tha uske liye aur woh tha iss labyrinth me ghusna.

‘Shayad isliye skill me likha hua tha ki agar memory retrieve karne me fail huye toh ye band ho jayegi. I get it now. Samajh gaya ye tough kyu hai itna.’

‘But know this… I’m not gonna fall back!’

Nidar hoke woh andar chal diya.

Andar ghuste hi,


“Eaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhh~”

*Screeeeeeeechhhhhhhh*

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

“Die! Die! Die!!!!”

“Noooooooooo~”


Kaan ke parde faad dene waali alag alag cheenkhe aur awaazein sunaayi padne lagi. Apne kaano par haath rakh woh aage badha,

*hic* *hic*

“Uwaaaaaa~”


Kahi kisi chhote se bacche ki rone ki awaaz usse sunaayi deti, toh kahi kisi mahila ke rone ki. Ye jagah kisi bhootiya jagah se kam nahi thi.

‘Kya ye sab? Kaera ki yaado ka hissa hai? Ya fir diary ki?’

Ek bada sawaal aur khada hua.

Woh chal hi raha tha jab uske saamne achanak ek kaali dhundh si chhaane lagi. Bhayanak kaala dhua ikhatta hua aur uska ekmaatr raasta rok diya.

‘This still won’t stop me!’

Bina ghabraaye woh uss kaale dhue me ghus gaya. Aur ghuste hi,

“Aaaaaaaaaarggghhhhhhhhh!!”

Uski dard ke maare cheekh nikalni shuru ho gayi. Phir agle hi shan,


“Pagal ladki!”

“Hahahahaha!!”

“Tum ajeeb ho! Ajeeb! Hume tumse dosti nahi karni! Hato meri bench se!!”

“Mummy dekho! Woh ladki kitni ajeeb hai.”

“Arre ye ladki pagal hai. Hehehe~ Kuch bolti hi nahi hai.”

“Oye iski choti kheecho dekho kaise royegi hehe”

“Hey dekho toh kitna paisa hai saali ke paas.”

“Mene suna hai iske papa bohut bade businessman hai.”

“Tabhi toh paiso pe aish karti hai. Hmph! I hate such people.”

“Sahi kaha. Ghamand toh dekho! Jese apne aap ko koi maharani samajhti ho.”

“Baap ne zaroor teachers, principal ko paise diye honge. Tabhi toh kabhi kuch bolte nahi hai isko.”

“Kya hi kar legi itna padh ke? Raub toh dekho zara iska. Dekho toh, kaise car se utar rahi hai. Jaise duniya me iske hi paas mehngi car hai.”

“Saali par hai bohut hot yaar! Iska baap agar itna wazandaar na hota toh apne laude pe baithaya hota mene isse. Hahahaha!”


Kuch aisi anek baate Veer ke kaano me goonjne lagi. Woh haafte hue jaise hi uss dhundh se baahar aaya, uski saansein ukhadne lagi.

Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Saath hi gussa bhi.

‘Kya ye Kaera ki buri yaadein hai? I-Iska matlab Seer Vision mujhe sirf diary ki hi nahi, diary se jude insaan ki bhi yaadein dikha sakta hai?’

Dheere dheere Veer ke kaano se woh awaazein gaayab hui.

‘Aise aur kitne dard aap apne seene me daba ke rakhi ho huh?’

Woh bhool-bhulaiyaa me anumaan laga ke raasto par mudta gaya.

Abhi kuch derr hi hui thi jab saamne usse ek choti bacchi dikhaayi dii. Woh frock pehne neeche zameen par baithe apna sarr jhuka ke ro rahi thi.


*hic* *hic*

“Mamma!”


Veer ko zaroorat nahi thi ye samajhne ki ki saamne baithi ye chhoti si bacchi kaun thi.

“Mamma! Mein ajeeb hu kya? Sab mujhe ajeeb kyu kehte hai? *hic* Sab mujh se dur kyu bhaagte hai? *hic* Mamma! Wapas aa jao na! Mein ab bilkul shaitani nahi karungi. *hic* Mamma!”

Veer aage badha,

“Nahi! Nahi Kaera! Tum bilkul ajeeb nahi ho.”

Woh kehte hue aage aaya. Usne Kaera ko chheena chaaha par uske chheete hi woh ladki ek dhue me tabdeel ho gayi.

Labyrinth uske saath jese khel raha tha.

Aise kayi kaali dhundh se guzarte hue aur dard pe dard sehte hue woh jese tese apni manzil ke qareeb pohuch hi gaya.

Iss baar uske saamne koi kaali dhundh nahi thi. Saamne tha ek ujaala. Peela prakaash jo uski aankho ko chaka-chaundh kiye hue tha.

Woh uss prakaash ki orr badha aur jese hi roshni ki kiran ke sampark me woh aaya, ek baar phir woh khichta hua kahi aur chala gaya.

Fir sab kuch. Usse sab kuch nazar aa gaya. Memory retrieve ho chuki thi. Aur uske baad,

*huff* *huff* *huff*

[Maaasteerrr!!]

Uske kaano me awaaz aayi. Woh waapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha. Par uski haalat ab bigad rahi thi. Sarr bhanna raha tha.

[Master you did it! You finally did it.]

Woh paseene se lathpath tha. Pari ko jawaab dene tak ke liye wo apni saasein durust nahi kar paa raha tha.

Aankho me nami bhi thi. Usne apne haatho me maujood uss diary ko dekha aur apni t-shirt ke andar daba ke chhupa liya.

Kaera jisse Veer ki absence ke baare me jab dhyaan aaya, woh fauran hi usse dhundhte hue waha aayi,

Kaera : You are here!? What happened?

Veer : N-Nothing! Mera bas perr fisal gaya tha.

Woh haafte hue utha.

[Master! This is bad! Jald hi skill ke side-effects aapko hit karenge. Aap yu hi yaha khade nahi reh paoge. Jaldi se nikaliye yaha se. Quick!]

Veer ne wahi kiya bhi! Usne apni himmat baandh khud ko zara bhi exhausted show nahi kiya. Par andar se usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uski saari shakti kisi ne choos lii ho.

[Hang in there Master! Bas thodi derr aur!]

Veer jese tese apne ghar pohucha. Kismat ki baat thi ye ki tab hall me koi bhi maujood nahi tha. Aur darwaza bhi lock nahi tha. Shayad saara mahila mandal ek kamre me baith gupshup me laga hua tha. Iska fayda utha ke Veer seedha apne kamre me ghusa,

*Click*

Darwaza lock karte hi usne sabse pehle diary ko chhipa ke rakha. Woh jaanta tha uske saath usse kya karna tha. Par ab aur nahi,

[Master!!!]

Woh ladkhadaya aur apne bistar par gir behosh ho gaya.

Woh shaam tak behoshi me hi tha. Aur usse hosh bhi aaya toh darwaze peetne ke shor se.

*Bammmmm* *Baaammmmm*

“Veeeeeeer!!!! Veer kholo! Veer???”

Awaaz Tej ki thi.

Fauran uth usne darwaza khola. Aur apne bhai ko sahi salamat dekh Tej ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Veer ye dekh ke bhi hairat me tha ki sabhi log uske darwaaze ke baahar khade hue the.

Uski maa, Shweta, Aabha, Suman, Ragini. Sonali aur Bhumika bas nahi thi kyuki iss samay woh dono hi kaam par gayi hui thi.

Veer : Aap sab yaha?

Tej : Aur nahi toh kya? Jab hume pata chala ki tum ghar aa gaye ho toh tumhe awaaz lagaayi par tumne darwaza khola hi nahi.

Bhavna : Hume laga ki tum so rahe hoge beta. Par jab shaam hui toh Tej ke saath saath fir hume bhi chinta hone lagi aur isliye-

Veer : Ahhh! Samjha! Nahi! Actually mein so hi raha tha.

Tej (frowns) : Really?

Veer : Of course!

Bhavna : Accha chalo! Ab uth gaye ho toh haath muh dholo. Aur neeche aa jao. Suman! Chai bana lo.

Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Arre? Aap kyu taqleef karti ho? Mein hu na! Mein banaati hu.

Jaate jaate Ragini ne Veer ko dekha aur sharma ke waha se nikal gayi. Apne hi haatho ki chai woh Veer ko pilaana chaahti thi.

Veer : M-Mein aata hu. Aap sab chaliye!

Sab waha se neeche chal diye. Siwaye Aabha ke. Woh nazre jhukaaye wahi khadi rahi.

Aabha : A-Aap! Aap ne jhooth kaha na?

Veer jo haath muh dhone washroom jaa hi raha tha, achanak hi uske qadam ye sunn wahi rukk gaye.

Wo palta aur Aabha ko dekha,

Aabha : W-Wo mein jab sabke liye paani upar leke jaa rahi thi tab aapko ladkhadate hue apne kamre me jaate dekha tha. A-Aap theek toh ho na?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha, Aabha ghabraate hue peeche hui aur deewaar se jaa bhidi. Uske saamne aake Veer ne apna ek haath zorr se deewaar par maara jo Aabha ke kaan ke bagal se hoke guzra.

Bechari darr ke maare kisi chhipkali ki tarah deewaar se chipak ke reh gayi.

Aage uske kaan ki taraf Veer jhuka,

Veer : Aur ye baat kisi ko pata lagne na paaye. Hmm?

Aabha ne zorr se apna sarr haan me hilaaya. Yaha vaastav me usne Veer ki chori pakdi thi, par lag aisa raha tha jese woh khud Veer ke changul me phassi ho.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Aabha ki chin ko haath me leke usne uska chehra upar kiya aur unn gulabi hontho ko apni giraft me le liya. Woh kasmasa ke reh gayi.

“Nnnnnn~”

Jab tak Veer ka mann na bhar gaya tab tak usne unn raseele hontho ka acche se rasspaan kiya.

Aabha ko chorr woh fresh up hoke jab neeche aaya, toh sab saath baithe chai pee rahe the. Woh bhi apni jagah par baith chai peene laga aur apni soch me pad gaya.

[Kya aapne decide kar liya hai?]

‘Hmm!’

[Aap ye waali skill lena chaahte ho na?]

‘Yes Pari!’

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[5000 points have been used.]

[Kaafi mehngi hai par useful hai.]

‘Thanks!’

[Ab aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?]

‘Tum jaanti toh ho. Fir kyu puch rahi ho?’

[Kyuki mein bina aapki permission ke aapke mann me nahi jhaakna chaahti. Physically toh mein jaanti hu aap theek ho ab. But mentally? Uska jawaab aap hi mujhe dijiye.]

‘Mein theek hu Pari!’

[Ek legendary skill hamesha ek keemat ke saath hi aati hai Master.]

‘I know!’

[Aapko yaad hai na? Pitcher ko maarte samay bhi aapne legendary skill use kii thi.]

‘Woh legendary skill thi?’

[Of course Master! Sylvia’s venom cure!! Ek legendary skill hi toh thi. Farq sirf itna hai ki tab aap asaani se legendary skill ko purchase kar sakte the kyuki tab system meharban tha. Par ab sirf mission ke zariye hi ye mil sakti hai.]

‘I see!’

[Aur aapko yaad hai na Sylvia’s venom cure ko istemaal karne ke baad aapke saath kya hua tha?]

‘Yeah! I remember! White blood cells zyada maatra me badh gaye the aur poison ko baahar kiye the. I suffered a lot of pain. Mujhe acche se yaad hai. Haha! Divya ka chehra tab dekhne laayak tha. And- Miss Suhana too!’

Suhana ki ek chhavi uske dimaag me aayi.

[Yes! Toh ab yaad rakhiyega kisi bhi legendary skill ko istemaal karne se pehle. Kuch na kuch side-effects hote hi hai inke. Kyuki ye aapke planet ke laws ke against jaati hai. They are too powerful. Aap dekh hi chuke ho.]

‘Laws ke against toh tum bhi ho Pari!’

[Well! Yes!]

Veer muskuraya,

‘Mein dhyaan rakhunga Pari!’

[Good thing!]

3 din guzar gaye. Aur Veer apne uss ek kaam me laga raha. Aur ant me woh Kaera ke paas gaya aur usse diary thama aaya.

2 din aur guzre. Kaera ke mission ki last date khatam ho chuki thi. Par system ki taraf se koi bhi message nahi aaya tha mission ke liye. Jo aaya tha woh tha ek notification.

Jisse padh Veer aur chinta me doob chuka tha. Kaera ki favorability ghat ke 50 par aa chuki thi. Ye sab ho kya raha tha?

Notification kyu nahi aa raha tha.

‘Pari? What the hell is going on?’

[Mein bhi confused hu Master. Notification aa jaana chahiye tha.]

‘Agar woh mujhe hate karne lagi hai toh mujhe chalega Pari par unke saath kuch galat nahi hona chahiye. I cannot see her fall like this.’

[Shayad-]

‘Shayad kya Pari please bolo. Mein bechain hu yaha. Woh theek hai na?’

[Master! Aapne apna kaam kar diya hai. Don’t worry!]

‘Don’t worry? Karan ka message aaya hai mujhe Pari ki Miss Kaera ne khud ko 2 din tak andar room me band kar ke rakha tha. Aur fir achanak se unki favorability kam ho jaana. Ye sab kya hai? Keh do ki woh mujhe hate kar rahi hai. Na ki unke emotions hamesha hamesha ke liye chale gaye hai.’

[Master aisa ho sakta hai ki-]

‘K-Kya?’

[Shayad wo cheezo ko process kar rahi hai. Aur abhi tak kisi decision par nahi pohuchi hai. Shayad unhone kuch socha hai par abhi uss par poori tarah se atal nahi hai. Aur isliye mission clear ka notification hume nahi mila hai.]

‘....’

[Yes! Yahi kaaran hai Master! Ab aap ready rahiyega!]

‘Huh?’

[Woh aapko hate bhi kar sakti hai. Ya pyaar bhi. Hume jald pata lag jayega.]

‘I hope wo theek ho jaaye!’

***

Agli subaah Veer ki aankh jab khuli toh Bhumika uske seene se zorr se lagi hui thi. Aur usne khud ne Bhumika ko apne seene me kass ke bheencha hua tha. Uske doodh veer ki chaathi me dhasse hue the.

Veer maan’na toh nahi chaahta tha par ye ehsaas alaukik tha.

Uske bagal se Tej bhi laiti thi par woh ghode bech ke odhne wali chaadar ke upar hi so rahi thi.

Veer ne alag hone ka prayaas kiya ki itne me hi,

Bhumika ki aankhein khul gayi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Aur jab kuch derr baad unhe dhyaan aaya, toh fir toota unpe sharm ka pahaad.

Veer (blushes) : I-I’m sorry! Mein wo neend me-

Bhumika (blushes) : I-It’s okay! Y-You can hold me i-if you want.

Veer : Eh?

Veer hakka bakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna? Veer ne uski baat maan usse jakde rakha.

Veer : Aap mujhse kuch- akele me baat karna chaahti thi?

Bhumika : Hmm? H-Haan! Mene kuch decide kiya hai. Kya hum raat me baat kar sakte hai?

Veer : S-Sure!

Aur uske baad uski haya firse laut aayi. Surkh laal gaal liye woh chhat-pataati palko ko upar kar kabhi Veer ko dekhti toh kabhi kahi orr. Par dono kuch derr tak yu hi ek dusre ki baaho me bane rahe jab tak neeche shorgul na machne laga.

Kya kabhi aisi subaah Veer ke ghar me ho sakti hai jab chehel pehel na ho?

Aaj ki subah Sonali behek chuki thi.

Dining table par baithe Veer ko woh jhunjhlaaye jaa rahi thi.

Sonali : O-Oye!! Tum sunn rahe ho na meri baat?

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Sonali : Fir bhi tumhaare kaano me juu nahi reng rahi? Arree! Mein keh rahi hu hamare truck ke karmchaari kaam chodh bhaag rahe hai. Unka aatmvishvaas gir raha hai. A-Aur- Aur aaj koi aane waala hai. Koi badi hasti. Mujhe Prachi ne bataya hai. Oyeeee!

Prachi Veer ke food truck me kaam karne waali ek ladki thi. Woh sonali ki madad karwaati thi. Aur kuch kuch recipes bhi bana leti thi.

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Veer ke lagatar iss ignorant attitude ko dekh Sonali ka maatha aur thanak utha.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!! Jao! Bhaad me jao! Hmph! Mera kaam tha bataana, mene bata diya. Aage tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane.

Aur agle hi pal woh muh fula ke baith bad-badaane lagi,

“Ek toh madad karo, upar se mahashay ko koi parvaah nahi hai. Mein koi kaam waali bai hu? Jo itna kaam thopte hi jaa rahe ho. Agar kisi din ye kaam ka bojh meri jaan le liya toh bhi mujhe aashcharya nahi hoga. Koi naazuk sii ladki ko itna kaam deta hai bhala? Itni badi zimmedaari koi khud bhi akele nahi uthaata, par yaha dekho. Mein hu! Jo-”

Uske non-stop radio ko sunn Veer ne uski orr dekha,

Veer : Tumhara naashta thanda ho raha hai!

Sonali : H-Huh? *blushes* h-haan toh khaa rahi hu. Naashta yahi hai, kahi udd ke nahi chala jayega.

Veer mand mand muskuraate hue uske iss chulbule-pann ka lutf leta gaya.

Aur naashta khatam karte hi woh utha.

Veer : Chalo!

Sonali : Huh?? Kaha?

Veer : Food truck ke liye, aur kaha? Abhi thodi derr pehle tum hi toh chillaa rahi thi na?

Sonali : O-Oohh!

Tej : Veer kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Business time Teju dii! Aap waha bore ho jaogi. Mein aapke liye laut ke kuch launga na. *smiles*

Tej (blushes) : Theek hai! Mein wait karungi!

Ragini : A-Aur mere liye Veer?

Veer (smiles) : Aapke liye bhi launga bhabhi!

Ragini (blushes) : Mujhe intezaar rahega!

Dur baithi Bhavna iss conversation exchange ko bade hi gaur se sunn rahi thi aur dekh bhi rahi thi.

Idhar Sonali Veer ka peecha karta hue fauran hi baahar aayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost nikaali hui thi. Sonali jab andar baithi toh car ki khubsoorti ko dekhti reh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Woh- Mein pehli baar baith rahi hu isme.

Veer : Ohh!

Jald hi woh dono food truck ke saamne the. Ye Veer ka pehla waala food truck tha jo usne sabse pehle khareeda tha. Aur Sonali bhi issi me kaam karti thi.

Dono utar ke jab truck par pohuche toh Sonali ne chaavi se truck ko khola. Veer fir usse leke city side chal diya.

Daily ki apni jagah par truck ko laga ke set karne ke baad, woh customers ke aane ka intezaar karne lage.

Jab Prachi aur baaki sabhi ne Veer ko dekha toh woh sab hairaan reh gaye. Veer kabhi bhi iss tarah unke truck ke andar nahi aata tha. Aaj aisa kya special tha?

Veer : Toh baat kya hai?

Sonali : Woh-

Prachi : Sir mein batau?

Veer : Sure!

Prachi : Baat ye hai ki ladko me motivation gir raha hai. Woh food truck ki jagah kahi aur bhaag rahe hai. Unhe ye kaam nahi karna. Unka kehna hai ki yaha kaam kiya toh hamesha ke liye yahi fasse reh jayenge. Kuch kar nahi payenge.

Sonali : Dekha jaaye toh unki baat sahi bhi hai. Mujhe hi dekh lo!

Usne taunt maara. Veer ne jab usse ghoor ke dekha toh woh shaant ho gayi.

Veer : Samjha! Kya tum me se kisi ne unhe ye nahi bataaya ki jald hi hamara business bohut badhne wala hai?

Sonali : Ehh?? Ye kya nayi nayi tum fek rahe ho ab?

Veer : Ohh! Iss nadaan ladki ko bhi nahi maalum.

Sonali (bhadakte hue) : Oyeee! Nadaan kisse kaha?

Veer : Anyways! Prachi! Mein tumhe bata du ki jald hi hamara business badhne wala hai.

Prachi : Ye toh acchi baat hai sir! Toh kya mein unhe phone kar ye bata du? Mujhe yakeen hai woh waapas laut aayenge.

Veer (smiles) : Aur yahi toh mein nahi chaahta!

Prachi : Huh?

Veer : Jo log ek acche khaase chalte business se abhi bhaag gaye, zara socho ki jab business sach me kabhi agar manda pad gaya toh kya karenge woh?

Prachi : W-Woh-!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye accha hua ki woh chale gaye. Hume unki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : Par unke jaane se baaki logo me aatmvishvaas gir gaya hai. Aur unka mann machal raha hai kaam chhodhne ke liye.

Veer : Toh uska hal hai unka aatmvishvaas badhaana!

Prachi : W-Woh kaise?

Veer (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh mein aaya hu yaha!

Kehte hue usne apni shirt utaar ke apni kamar par baandh lii, aur bas ek black t-shirt me aa gaya.

Veer : Aaj unhe bataya jayega ki ek chef hona kitni responsibility ka kaam hota hai.

Jab uski aankho me woh Tej Prachi ne dekha toh woh mantra-mugdh hoke reh gayi.

Prachi : S-So cool!

Veer : Sonali! Saare food trucks par call kar unhe yaha bulao.

Sonali ne baat maan sabhi ko waha bula liya. Ladke aur ladkiya sabhi log the. Ye sabhi mil ke Veer ke alag alag food trucks ko sambhaalte the. Prachi inn sab se hisaab liya karti thi aur Sonali ko deti thi. Aur baad me Sonali usse manage kar Veer ko saupti thi.

Kuch iss tarah se ye chain kaam karti thi. Khaas baat ye thi ki Veer ke food trucks bhalayi dikhne me ek jaise the parantu sabhi ke menus alag alag hua karte the.

Koi sirf subaah ko lagta tha aur naashta serve karta tha toh koi din me lag ke thaali system par based tha. Koi fast food serve karta tha toh koi shakes and blends ke liye tha. Uske paas harr tarah ki variety maujood thi.

Jab sabhi ekatr hue toh Veer ne unhe ek lecture diya ki chef hona apne aap me kitna zimmedaari waala kaam tha. Aaj woh unn sab ko karke dikhaane waala tha.

Line se sabhi trucks lag gaye.

Shuruaat me toh gine chune log hi aaye par jaise hi logo ki dincharya ke working hours khatam hone ka samay hua, jab sooraj ki kirane ahista ahista chhatati gayi toh ilaake me chehel pehel badh gayi. Mausam bhi thoda sheetal ho utha.

Thaka haara aadmi kaam ke baad apne colleagues ke saath khaane peene ke liye nikalne laga. Aur fir Veer ne shuru kiya apna jaadu.

Jaise hi uske haath kitchen ke samaano par pade woh jaise ek alag hi duniya me chala gaya.

Bohut hi kam mauka milta tha usse apni cooking skills dikhaane ka. Of course! Uske paas wo jo thi!

Absolute Chef!!!!

Prachi (in shock) : S-Sir ko cook karna bhi aata hai??

Sonali : Haan!

Sonali ye maan’na toh nahi chaahti thi par daant peeste hue usse ye maan’na hi pada ki poore ghar me Veer se behtar khaana koi nahi bana paata tha.

Prachi ek student ki tarah Veer ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Wo notes le rahi thi.
Prachi : Ahh? Oil ke saath butter?

Veer : Butter excessive heat me jaldi jal jaata hai Prachi. Toh usse thoda bachaane ke liye ye oil.

Prachi : Ohhhh!

Usne fauran hi apne notepad me usse notedown kar liya. Woh Veer ko prashansa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Itne me do office ki ladkiya aayi aur Veer ko uska pehla order bhi mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

Veer ke bareek se bareek cheez ko dekh aur uski precise culinary skills ko dekh, na sirf waha maujood Prachi aur anya, balki Sonali bhi uski iss adaa par mohit ho gayi.

Woh ab sirf khaana nahi bana raha tha, woh ab ek artist ki tarah tha jiski kalaa ka pradarshan wo sabhi dekh paa rahe the.

Veer ne jab wo order unn ladkiyo ko diya toh dono excited hoke jaake khaane me lag gayi.

“Ohhhh my goddddd!!! Kitna tasty hai~”

“Hmm~ Par tumne usse nahi dekha? Chef ko? Wo to aur tasty hoga.”

“Hehehehehe~ Haan!”

Dekhte hi dekhte bheed jama hone lag gayi aur Veer ke food trucks bhaari vyast ho gaye. Woh idhar se udhar order complete karne me hi lag gaye.

Prachi bhaavuk ho uthi. Aaj tak usne itni bheed kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Harr guzarte pal Veer ke liye uski izzat badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Prachi!! Inhe fryer me daalo!!!

Prachi : Yessss Sirrrr~

Veer : Sonali! Rolls ko wrap karo!

Sonali : Haan! K-Kar rahi hu!

Veer : Ek accha chef apne swaarth ke liye nahi, dusro ke liye cook karta hai. Samjhe???

“Yesssss Sirrrr!!!!!”

Veer ne aate hi apni upasthiti se poori kaaya palat kar dii thi.

Prachi baahar jaake logo se jab feedback lene gayi toh yaha Veer ne mauka dekh achanak se Sonali ko peeche se pakad liya.

Woh fryer se french fries nikaal rahi thi, par Veer uski kamar ko pakde apna chehra uske kandho par jhukaaye khada tha.

Akasmaat iss hamle se Sonali bhauchakki si reh gayi. Iske pehle ki Veer ko woh mana kar paati, Veer ka haath upar chala gaya aur Sonali murti ki tarah jamm ke reh gayi.

Uska haath sonali ke doodh par tha.

Sonali ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jaise maano usse bukhaar aa gaya ho.

Sonali (blushes) : Chorro! Ch-Chorro warna mein- muh tod dungi tumhara.

Par Veer uske urojo ko masalne me laga hua tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab kya kehna hai tumhara? Tum keh rahi thi business me mandi aa rahi hai? Log jaa rahe hai. Hmm? Toh ye bheed kaisi hai?

Sonali (blushes) : Nnnn~ Haaa~ Haaa~ Chhorro! J-Jaldi~ Prachi aati hogi! Chorro!!!

Veer : Nahi chorrunga!

Sonali : Kutte kameene!!!! Chorrr!! Ahhnnn~ Nnnnn~

Veer poori lagan se unn thano ko masalne laga. Usne Sonali ko pehli baar chhua tha aur wo zara bhi naraaz nahi tha.

Par usse jald hi Sonali ko chorrna pada kyuki Prachi aa rahi thi.

Prachi : S-Sir! Buri khabar! Woh famous hasti aa chuki hai aur aapse milna chaahti hai.

Veer jab baahar aaya toh uske saamne ek business suit me lady car ke paas khadi hui thi.

Uske paas aate hi usne khud hi haath aage badhaaya,

“Mister Veer?”

Veer : Yes! Aur aap?

Wese toh usne pehle hi check kar liya tha par formality karna toh zaroori tha.

“Mein tamanna!”

Woh boli aur apne haath mod khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?

Tamanna : Do you know who I am?

Veer : No!

Veer ke knowledge par hasste hue woh guroor me boli,

Tamanna : Mein ek food critic hu.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tamanna : Mera kaam hai famous hotels, restaurants me jaake waha ka khaana taste karna aur uske baare me likhna. Apne reviews dena. Mera ek review acche khaase chalte firrte hotel ko sadak par laa sakta hai.

Veer shaant tha. Kyuki wo sach keh rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein khud Mumbai se hu. Abhi tak baahar thi, kuch hafte pehle hi lauti hu. Mein aksar travel karti rehti hu. Iss food truck ko mene pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. I guess ye abhi haal hi me khula hai!?

Veer : Jii!

Tamanna : Kal mein yaha se guzri toh by chance yaha aayi. Menu par ek signature dish dekh mene uski demand ki toh pata laga ki wo dish sirf truck ke owner ko hi banaani aati hai. Worker ne kaha tha ki mein kal aau toh isliye yaha aayi hu.

Veer : Then come, please!

Tamanna : Uss se pehle, ek walk ho jaaye?

Veer : Kyu nahi!

Veer jaanta tha woh kya karna chaah rahi thi. Woh owner se pehle baate karti thi, unke ravaiyye ko notice karti, unhe jaan boojh ke gussa bhi dilaati thi taaki wo uske jaal me phass jaaye aur fir wo unke baare me sab kuch likh sake. Veer ke saath bhi wo wahi karne waali thi.

Tamanna : Tum jaante ho mein number 1 food kis desh ka maanti hu?

[Huh? What the hell? Master? Hume iski bakwaas kyu sunn’na pad raha hai?]

‘Shaant Pari!’

Veer : Kis desh ka ma’am?

Tamanna (smiles) : Of course, Italy! Italian food best hai!

Veer : Aur second pe?

Tamanna : Mexican food!

Veer : Third?

Tamanna : Of course! It’s French food and spanish food!

Veer : Aur hamara Indian food?

Tamanna : Fourth!

Veer : Fourth kyu?

Tamanna : Apne saamne dekho!

Chalte chalte woh dono hi ek chaupaati ke nazdeek pohuch chuke the.

Tamanna : Dekho logo ko! Kaise thoos rahe hai! Hygiene dekho! Saaf safaayi dekho!

Veer : Par kuch log toh gloves pehne hai. Unke stalls bhi saaf hai.

Tamanna : Yahi to dikkat hai na. Sirf kuch log Mister Veer! Pata nahi logo ko sense kab aayega. Pata nahi ye sab kab sudhrenge. Food ko kachre ki tarah treat nahi kiya jaata. It should be handled delicately with hygiene.

Woh kareeb 15 minute tak bad-badaati rahi. Jab Veer ne usse achanak se rok diya,

Veer : One day!

Tamanna : Huh?

Veer : I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry.

Tamanna : What?????

Veer palta aur apne jeb me haath daal chal diya,

Veer : Come! I’ll show you what the real food is!

Veer ne Tamanna ko fir apni ek signature dish bana ke dii. Jo ki kuch nahi ek roll tha.

Tamanna disappoint hote hue wo roll uthaayi aur apne muh me daali. Jaise hi swaad, woh flavour uske taste buds ko hit kiye, wo wahi jamm gayi.

Veer : Tamanna ma’am??

Par koi jawaab nahi aaya. Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~


“I need you! ASAP!”
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update 5.3k words ka hai. Toh mujhe bolna na pade. Daba ke likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Agle update se crimson arc ka main plot shuru ho jayega. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad! :shakehands:
wow....
update khtm kb hojata h pta bhi ni lgta. hr episode me aisa feel krana jese saamne screen p sb video form me chl ra ho.its amazing.
 
99
479
53
Update - 133 ~ Labyrinth and Invitation

Ab tak...

Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’


Ab aage...

Veer ne apni aankhein band kii ya yu kahe ki uski aankhein apne aap hi band ho gayi. Uske shareer ko ek jhatka laga aur uski consciousness drift hoke kahi aur hi chali gayi.

‘Ye- Ye kaha hu mein?’

Usse kuch bhi dikhaayi nahi diya. Chaaro orr andhkaar hi andhkaar faila hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano woh andhere me doobe kisi space me ho.

‘P-Pari? Pariiii???’

[M-Maaste…. r…. Maaste….. r…. K…y….a a…a…p m… u…. j… h… e……………….]

‘Pari?????’

Jo awaaz Veer ko Pari ki sunaayi de rahi thi, woh dheere dheere gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek ghanghor sannaata chhaa gaya. Woh na hi kuch sunn paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Woh apne badan ke ango ko bhi mehsoos nahi kar paa raha tha.

Ek bhayanak ghabrahat janm lii.

‘Pariiiiiiiii????????’

Pari ko pukaarne ka koi fayda na hua. Aisa laga jaise woh poori tarah se uss se alag ho chuka tha.

‘Calm down Veer! Calm yourself down!’

Usne ek lambi saans lii aur khud ko shaant kiya. Apni tezz dhadkano ko thoda thaam usne dhyaan lagaaya.

‘Pari mujhe sunn nahi paa rahi. Aur na hi Pari ko mein. Iska matlab hamaare connection ke beech kuch aisa hai jo hume ek dusre se baat karne se rok raha hai.’

Usne fauran hi apni sthiti ka aaklan kiya. Usse yaad aaya ki chand palo pehle woh Pari ko nirdesh de raha tha.


‘Do it Pari!’

[P-Par Master!? Finally aapke paas mauka hai apne pendant ke raaz ke baare me jaan’ne ka. Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi.]

‘Mene kaha na! Do it!’

[P-Par-]

‘Pariiii!!!!!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]


Yahi hua tha. Haan! Yahi toh hua tha.

Veer ko yaad tha acche se. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Pari ne Seer Vision ke baare me kya bataya tha.

[Seer Vision ~

Description : Grants the vision of a seer. The skill allows the user to instantly witness the past related to anything. Beware! Mental pain is guaranteed. If the user fails to reclaim the memory, skill will terminate automatically.]

Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha. Ye woh legendary skill thi jo usse kisi bhi vastu se sambandhit uska ateet poora ka poora dikha sakti thi.

Ek prakaar se ye uske ‘Check’ function ki tarah hi thi. Par uss se kahi zyaada aadhunik. Jo check function nahi dekh sakta tha woh Seer Vision dekh sakta tha.

Ab usse samajh aaya ki kyu Pari itne peeche lagi hui thi ki woh isse apne pendant par istemaal kare. Agar usne aisa kiya hota, toh pendant ka raaz ek jhatke me khul ke saamne aa jaata. Lekin kya pendant ka raaz Miss Kaera se zyada zaroori tha?

Veer ke liye ~ Nahi!

Aur isliye, usne aisi skill ko daav par lagaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha.

Dikkat yahi thi ki iske istemaal ke saath saath aane waale bhayanak maansik dard ko bhi jhelna tha. Aur itna hi nahi, agar kisi kaaran vash wo chhipi hui yaad ko paane me nakaam hota hai toh skill wahi apne aap band ho jayegi.

Dusre shabdo me, skill barbaad chali jayegi.

Ye bohut risky tha. Kyuki jokhim bhi tha aur safalta ki koi guarantee bhi nahi.

‘Agar description ko dhyaan me rakha jaaye toh mujhe memory retrieve karni hai. That’s right! Mujhe sirf uss par hi dhyaan dena hai.’

Veer ne sahi disha me sochna shuru kiya.

Usne ye skill uss diary par istemaal ki thi jo usse Kaera ke puraane ghar me kahi chhipi hui mili thi.

Veer ke mann me kayi sawaal the. Jese ki woh diary waha kar kya rahi thi? Kya kabhi Kaera ya kisi aur ko iss diary ke baare me pata nahi laga? Aise aneko sawaal se woh joojh raha tha. Par filhaal inke liye samay nahi tha.

Kaera ke emotions ko baahar laane ke liye usse ek strong emotional impact dena zaroori tha. Ek prakaar ka emotional breakdown. Jab diary khol Veer ne andar dekha toh woh samajh gaya tha usse kya karna hai.

Abhi usne khud ko sambhaala hi tha ki tabhi,

‘Urghhh~’

Achanak se ek baar phir uski consciousness kahi drift hone lagi.



‘Aaaarrgghh~’

Aisa laga maano jese usse koi kheech ke kahi le jaa raha tha. Uske mastishk me ek bhayanak dard utha.

Dard ke maare usne aankhein band kar lii, aur jab sab kuch shaant hone ke baad usne aankh khol dekha toh,



Uske saamne ek labyrinth maujood tha. Yaani ek bhool-bhulaiyaa. Ek prakaar ka maze.

‘Ye toh ek-!!?’

Woh ashcharya-chakit reh gaya. Aas paas usne dekha, dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Sirf ek hi raasta tha uske liye aur woh tha iss labyrinth me ghusna.

‘Shayad isliye skill me likha hua tha ki agar memory retrieve karne me fail huye toh ye band ho jayegi. I get it now. Samajh gaya ye tough kyu hai itna.’

‘But know this… I’m not gonna fall back!’

Nidar hoke woh andar chal diya.

Andar ghuste hi,


“Eaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhh~”

*Screeeeeeeechhhhhhhh*

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

“Die! Die! Die!!!!”

“Noooooooooo~”


Kaan ke parde faad dene waali alag alag cheenkhe aur awaazein sunaayi padne lagi. Apne kaano par haath rakh woh aage badha,

*hic* *hic*

“Uwaaaaaa~”


Kahi kisi chhote se bacche ki rone ki awaaz usse sunaayi deti, toh kahi kisi mahila ke rone ki. Ye jagah kisi bhootiya jagah se kam nahi thi.

‘Kya ye sab? Kaera ki yaado ka hissa hai? Ya fir diary ki?’

Ek bada sawaal aur khada hua.

Woh chal hi raha tha jab uske saamne achanak ek kaali dhundh si chhaane lagi. Bhayanak kaala dhua ikhatta hua aur uska ekmaatr raasta rok diya.

‘This still won’t stop me!’

Bina ghabraaye woh uss kaale dhue me ghus gaya. Aur ghuste hi,

“Aaaaaaaaaarggghhhhhhhhh!!”

Uski dard ke maare cheekh nikalni shuru ho gayi. Phir agle hi shan,


“Pagal ladki!”

“Hahahahaha!!”

“Tum ajeeb ho! Ajeeb! Hume tumse dosti nahi karni! Hato meri bench se!!”

“Mummy dekho! Woh ladki kitni ajeeb hai.”

“Arre ye ladki pagal hai. Hehehe~ Kuch bolti hi nahi hai.”

“Oye iski choti kheecho dekho kaise royegi hehe”

“Hey dekho toh kitna paisa hai saali ke paas.”

“Mene suna hai iske papa bohut bade businessman hai.”

“Tabhi toh paiso pe aish karti hai. Hmph! I hate such people.”

“Sahi kaha. Ghamand toh dekho! Jese apne aap ko koi maharani samajhti ho.”

“Baap ne zaroor teachers, principal ko paise diye honge. Tabhi toh kabhi kuch bolte nahi hai isko.”

“Kya hi kar legi itna padh ke? Raub toh dekho zara iska. Dekho toh, kaise car se utar rahi hai. Jaise duniya me iske hi paas mehngi car hai.”

“Saali par hai bohut hot yaar! Iska baap agar itna wazandaar na hota toh apne laude pe baithaya hota mene isse. Hahahaha!”


Kuch aisi anek baate Veer ke kaano me goonjne lagi. Woh haafte hue jaise hi uss dhundh se baahar aaya, uski saansein ukhadne lagi.

Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Saath hi gussa bhi.

‘Kya ye Kaera ki buri yaadein hai? I-Iska matlab Seer Vision mujhe sirf diary ki hi nahi, diary se jude insaan ki bhi yaadein dikha sakta hai?’

Dheere dheere Veer ke kaano se woh awaazein gaayab hui.

‘Aise aur kitne dard aap apne seene me daba ke rakhi ho huh?’

Woh bhool-bhulaiyaa me anumaan laga ke raasto par mudta gaya.

Abhi kuch derr hi hui thi jab saamne usse ek choti bacchi dikhaayi dii. Woh frock pehne neeche zameen par baithe apna sarr jhuka ke ro rahi thi.


*hic* *hic*

“Mamma!”


Veer ko zaroorat nahi thi ye samajhne ki ki saamne baithi ye chhoti si bacchi kaun thi.

“Mamma! Mein ajeeb hu kya? Sab mujhe ajeeb kyu kehte hai? *hic* Sab mujh se dur kyu bhaagte hai? *hic* Mamma! Wapas aa jao na! Mein ab bilkul shaitani nahi karungi. *hic* Mamma!”

Veer aage badha,

“Nahi! Nahi Kaera! Tum bilkul ajeeb nahi ho.”

Woh kehte hue aage aaya. Usne Kaera ko chheena chaaha par uske chheete hi woh ladki ek dhue me tabdeel ho gayi.

Labyrinth uske saath jese khel raha tha.

Aise kayi kaali dhundh se guzarte hue aur dard pe dard sehte hue woh jese tese apni manzil ke qareeb pohuch hi gaya.

Iss baar uske saamne koi kaali dhundh nahi thi. Saamne tha ek ujaala. Peela prakaash jo uski aankho ko chaka-chaundh kiye hue tha.

Woh uss prakaash ki orr badha aur jese hi roshni ki kiran ke sampark me woh aaya, ek baar phir woh khichta hua kahi aur chala gaya.

Fir sab kuch. Usse sab kuch nazar aa gaya. Memory retrieve ho chuki thi. Aur uske baad,

*huff* *huff* *huff*

[Maaasteerrr!!]

Uske kaano me awaaz aayi. Woh waapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha. Par uski haalat ab bigad rahi thi. Sarr bhanna raha tha.

[Master you did it! You finally did it.]

Woh paseene se lathpath tha. Pari ko jawaab dene tak ke liye wo apni saasein durust nahi kar paa raha tha.

Aankho me nami bhi thi. Usne apne haatho me maujood uss diary ko dekha aur apni t-shirt ke andar daba ke chhupa liya.

Kaera jisse Veer ki absence ke baare me jab dhyaan aaya, woh fauran hi usse dhundhte hue waha aayi,

Kaera : You are here!? What happened?

Veer : N-Nothing! Mera bas perr fisal gaya tha.

Woh haafte hue utha.

[Master! This is bad! Jald hi skill ke side-effects aapko hit karenge. Aap yu hi yaha khade nahi reh paoge. Jaldi se nikaliye yaha se. Quick!]

Veer ne wahi kiya bhi! Usne apni himmat baandh khud ko zara bhi exhausted show nahi kiya. Par andar se usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uski saari shakti kisi ne choos lii ho.

[Hang in there Master! Bas thodi derr aur!]

Veer jese tese apne ghar pohucha. Kismat ki baat thi ye ki tab hall me koi bhi maujood nahi tha. Aur darwaza bhi lock nahi tha. Shayad saara mahila mandal ek kamre me baith gupshup me laga hua tha. Iska fayda utha ke Veer seedha apne kamre me ghusa,

*Click*

Darwaza lock karte hi usne sabse pehle diary ko chhipa ke rakha. Woh jaanta tha uske saath usse kya karna tha. Par ab aur nahi,

[Master!!!]

Woh ladkhadaya aur apne bistar par gir behosh ho gaya.

Woh shaam tak behoshi me hi tha. Aur usse hosh bhi aaya toh darwaze peetne ke shor se.

*Bammmmm* *Baaammmmm*

“Veeeeeeer!!!! Veer kholo! Veer???”

Awaaz Tej ki thi.

Fauran uth usne darwaza khola. Aur apne bhai ko sahi salamat dekh Tej ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Veer ye dekh ke bhi hairat me tha ki sabhi log uske darwaaze ke baahar khade hue the.

Uski maa, Shweta, Aabha, Suman, Ragini. Sonali aur Bhumika bas nahi thi kyuki iss samay woh dono hi kaam par gayi hui thi.

Veer : Aap sab yaha?

Tej : Aur nahi toh kya? Jab hume pata chala ki tum ghar aa gaye ho toh tumhe awaaz lagaayi par tumne darwaza khola hi nahi.

Bhavna : Hume laga ki tum so rahe hoge beta. Par jab shaam hui toh Tej ke saath saath fir hume bhi chinta hone lagi aur isliye-

Veer : Ahhh! Samjha! Nahi! Actually mein so hi raha tha.

Tej (frowns) : Really?

Veer : Of course!

Bhavna : Accha chalo! Ab uth gaye ho toh haath muh dholo. Aur neeche aa jao. Suman! Chai bana lo.

Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Arre? Aap kyu taqleef karti ho? Mein hu na! Mein banaati hu.

Jaate jaate Ragini ne Veer ko dekha aur sharma ke waha se nikal gayi. Apne hi haatho ki chai woh Veer ko pilaana chaahti thi.

Veer : M-Mein aata hu. Aap sab chaliye!

Sab waha se neeche chal diye. Siwaye Aabha ke. Woh nazre jhukaaye wahi khadi rahi.

Aabha : A-Aap! Aap ne jhooth kaha na?

Veer jo haath muh dhone washroom jaa hi raha tha, achanak hi uske qadam ye sunn wahi rukk gaye.

Wo palta aur Aabha ko dekha,

Aabha : W-Wo mein jab sabke liye paani upar leke jaa rahi thi tab aapko ladkhadate hue apne kamre me jaate dekha tha. A-Aap theek toh ho na?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha, Aabha ghabraate hue peeche hui aur deewaar se jaa bhidi. Uske saamne aake Veer ne apna ek haath zorr se deewaar par maara jo Aabha ke kaan ke bagal se hoke guzra.

Bechari darr ke maare kisi chhipkali ki tarah deewaar se chipak ke reh gayi.

Aage uske kaan ki taraf Veer jhuka,

Veer : Aur ye baat kisi ko pata lagne na paaye. Hmm?

Aabha ne zorr se apna sarr haan me hilaaya. Yaha vaastav me usne Veer ki chori pakdi thi, par lag aisa raha tha jese woh khud Veer ke changul me phassi ho.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Aabha ki chin ko haath me leke usne uska chehra upar kiya aur unn gulabi hontho ko apni giraft me le liya. Woh kasmasa ke reh gayi.

“Nnnnnn~”

Jab tak Veer ka mann na bhar gaya tab tak usne unn raseele hontho ka acche se rasspaan kiya.

Aabha ko chorr woh fresh up hoke jab neeche aaya, toh sab saath baithe chai pee rahe the. Woh bhi apni jagah par baith chai peene laga aur apni soch me pad gaya.

[Kya aapne decide kar liya hai?]

‘Hmm!’

[Aap ye waali skill lena chaahte ho na?]

‘Yes Pari!’

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[5000 points have been used.]

[Kaafi mehngi hai par useful hai.]

‘Thanks!’

[Ab aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?]

‘Tum jaanti toh ho. Fir kyu puch rahi ho?’

[Kyuki mein bina aapki permission ke aapke mann me nahi jhaakna chaahti. Physically toh mein jaanti hu aap theek ho ab. But mentally? Uska jawaab aap hi mujhe dijiye.]

‘Mein theek hu Pari!’

[Ek legendary skill hamesha ek keemat ke saath hi aati hai Master.]

‘I know!’

[Aapko yaad hai na? Pitcher ko maarte samay bhi aapne legendary skill use kii thi.]

‘Woh legendary skill thi?’

[Of course Master! Sylvia’s venom cure!! Ek legendary skill hi toh thi. Farq sirf itna hai ki tab aap asaani se legendary skill ko purchase kar sakte the kyuki tab system meharban tha. Par ab sirf mission ke zariye hi ye mil sakti hai.]

‘I see!’

[Aur aapko yaad hai na Sylvia’s venom cure ko istemaal karne ke baad aapke saath kya hua tha?]

‘Yeah! I remember! White blood cells zyada maatra me badh gaye the aur poison ko baahar kiye the. I suffered a lot of pain. Mujhe acche se yaad hai. Haha! Divya ka chehra tab dekhne laayak tha. And- Miss Suhana too!’

Suhana ki ek chhavi uske dimaag me aayi.

[Yes! Toh ab yaad rakhiyega kisi bhi legendary skill ko istemaal karne se pehle. Kuch na kuch side-effects hote hi hai inke. Kyuki ye aapke planet ke laws ke against jaati hai. They are too powerful. Aap dekh hi chuke ho.]

‘Laws ke against toh tum bhi ho Pari!’

[Well! Yes!]

Veer muskuraya,

‘Mein dhyaan rakhunga Pari!’

[Good thing!]

3 din guzar gaye. Aur Veer apne uss ek kaam me laga raha. Aur ant me woh Kaera ke paas gaya aur usse diary thama aaya.

2 din aur guzre. Kaera ke mission ki last date khatam ho chuki thi. Par system ki taraf se koi bhi message nahi aaya tha mission ke liye. Jo aaya tha woh tha ek notification.

Jisse padh Veer aur chinta me doob chuka tha. Kaera ki favorability ghat ke 50 par aa chuki thi. Ye sab ho kya raha tha?

Notification kyu nahi aa raha tha.

‘Pari? What the hell is going on?’

[Mein bhi confused hu Master. Notification aa jaana chahiye tha.]

‘Agar woh mujhe hate karne lagi hai toh mujhe chalega Pari par unke saath kuch galat nahi hona chahiye. I cannot see her fall like this.’

[Shayad-]

‘Shayad kya Pari please bolo. Mein bechain hu yaha. Woh theek hai na?’

[Master! Aapne apna kaam kar diya hai. Don’t worry!]

‘Don’t worry? Karan ka message aaya hai mujhe Pari ki Miss Kaera ne khud ko 2 din tak andar room me band kar ke rakha tha. Aur fir achanak se unki favorability kam ho jaana. Ye sab kya hai? Keh do ki woh mujhe hate kar rahi hai. Na ki unke emotions hamesha hamesha ke liye chale gaye hai.’

[Master aisa ho sakta hai ki-]

‘K-Kya?’

[Shayad wo cheezo ko process kar rahi hai. Aur abhi tak kisi decision par nahi pohuchi hai. Shayad unhone kuch socha hai par abhi uss par poori tarah se atal nahi hai. Aur isliye mission clear ka notification hume nahi mila hai.]

‘....’

[Yes! Yahi kaaran hai Master! Ab aap ready rahiyega!]

‘Huh?’

[Woh aapko hate bhi kar sakti hai. Ya pyaar bhi. Hume jald pata lag jayega.]

‘I hope wo theek ho jaaye!’

***

Agli subaah Veer ki aankh jab khuli toh Bhumika uske seene se zorr se lagi hui thi. Aur usne khud ne Bhumika ko apne seene me kass ke bheencha hua tha. Uske doodh veer ki chaathi me dhasse hue the.

Veer maan’na toh nahi chaahta tha par ye ehsaas alaukik tha.

Uske bagal se Tej bhi laiti thi par woh ghode bech ke odhne wali chaadar ke upar hi so rahi thi.

Veer ne alag hone ka prayaas kiya ki itne me hi,

Bhumika ki aankhein khul gayi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Aur jab kuch derr baad unhe dhyaan aaya, toh fir toota unpe sharm ka pahaad.

Veer (blushes) : I-I’m sorry! Mein wo neend me-

Bhumika (blushes) : I-It’s okay! Y-You can hold me i-if you want.

Veer : Eh?

Veer hakka bakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna? Veer ne uski baat maan usse jakde rakha.

Veer : Aap mujhse kuch- akele me baat karna chaahti thi?

Bhumika : Hmm? H-Haan! Mene kuch decide kiya hai. Kya hum raat me baat kar sakte hai?

Veer : S-Sure!

Aur uske baad uski haya firse laut aayi. Surkh laal gaal liye woh chhat-pataati palko ko upar kar kabhi Veer ko dekhti toh kabhi kahi orr. Par dono kuch derr tak yu hi ek dusre ki baaho me bane rahe jab tak neeche shorgul na machne laga.

Kya kabhi aisi subaah Veer ke ghar me ho sakti hai jab chehel pehel na ho?

Aaj ki subah Sonali behek chuki thi.

Dining table par baithe Veer ko woh jhunjhlaaye jaa rahi thi.

Sonali : O-Oye!! Tum sunn rahe ho na meri baat?

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Sonali : Fir bhi tumhaare kaano me juu nahi reng rahi? Arree! Mein keh rahi hu hamare truck ke karmchaari kaam chodh bhaag rahe hai. Unka aatmvishvaas gir raha hai. A-Aur- Aur aaj koi aane waala hai. Koi badi hasti. Mujhe Prachi ne bataya hai. Oyeeee!

Prachi Veer ke food truck me kaam karne waali ek ladki thi. Woh sonali ki madad karwaati thi. Aur kuch kuch recipes bhi bana leti thi.

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Veer ke lagatar iss ignorant attitude ko dekh Sonali ka maatha aur thanak utha.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!! Jao! Bhaad me jao! Hmph! Mera kaam tha bataana, mene bata diya. Aage tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane.

Aur agle hi pal woh muh fula ke baith bad-badaane lagi,

“Ek toh madad karo, upar se mahashay ko koi parvaah nahi hai. Mein koi kaam waali bai hu? Jo itna kaam thopte hi jaa rahe ho. Agar kisi din ye kaam ka bojh meri jaan le liya toh bhi mujhe aashcharya nahi hoga. Koi naazuk sii ladki ko itna kaam deta hai bhala? Itni badi zimmedaari koi khud bhi akele nahi uthaata, par yaha dekho. Mein hu! Jo-”

Uske non-stop radio ko sunn Veer ne uski orr dekha,

Veer : Tumhara naashta thanda ho raha hai!

Sonali : H-Huh? *blushes* h-haan toh khaa rahi hu. Naashta yahi hai, kahi udd ke nahi chala jayega.

Veer mand mand muskuraate hue uske iss chulbule-pann ka lutf leta gaya.

Aur naashta khatam karte hi woh utha.

Veer : Chalo!

Sonali : Huh?? Kaha?

Veer : Food truck ke liye, aur kaha? Abhi thodi derr pehle tum hi toh chillaa rahi thi na?

Sonali : O-Oohh!

Tej : Veer kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Business time Teju dii! Aap waha bore ho jaogi. Mein aapke liye laut ke kuch launga na. *smiles*

Tej (blushes) : Theek hai! Mein wait karungi!

Ragini : A-Aur mere liye Veer?

Veer (smiles) : Aapke liye bhi launga bhabhi!

Ragini (blushes) : Mujhe intezaar rahega!

Dur baithi Bhavna iss conversation exchange ko bade hi gaur se sunn rahi thi aur dekh bhi rahi thi.

Idhar Sonali Veer ka peecha karta hue fauran hi baahar aayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost nikaali hui thi. Sonali jab andar baithi toh car ki khubsoorti ko dekhti reh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Woh- Mein pehli baar baith rahi hu isme.

Veer : Ohh!

Jald hi woh dono food truck ke saamne the. Ye Veer ka pehla waala food truck tha jo usne sabse pehle khareeda tha. Aur Sonali bhi issi me kaam karti thi.

Dono utar ke jab truck par pohuche toh Sonali ne chaavi se truck ko khola. Veer fir usse leke city side chal diya.

Daily ki apni jagah par truck ko laga ke set karne ke baad, woh customers ke aane ka intezaar karne lage.

Jab Prachi aur baaki sabhi ne Veer ko dekha toh woh sab hairaan reh gaye. Veer kabhi bhi iss tarah unke truck ke andar nahi aata tha. Aaj aisa kya special tha?

Veer : Toh baat kya hai?

Sonali : Woh-

Prachi : Sir mein batau?

Veer : Sure!

Prachi : Baat ye hai ki ladko me motivation gir raha hai. Woh food truck ki jagah kahi aur bhaag rahe hai. Unhe ye kaam nahi karna. Unka kehna hai ki yaha kaam kiya toh hamesha ke liye yahi fasse reh jayenge. Kuch kar nahi payenge.

Sonali : Dekha jaaye toh unki baat sahi bhi hai. Mujhe hi dekh lo!

Usne taunt maara. Veer ne jab usse ghoor ke dekha toh woh shaant ho gayi.

Veer : Samjha! Kya tum me se kisi ne unhe ye nahi bataaya ki jald hi hamara business bohut badhne wala hai?

Sonali : Ehh?? Ye kya nayi nayi tum fek rahe ho ab?

Veer : Ohh! Iss nadaan ladki ko bhi nahi maalum.

Sonali (bhadakte hue) : Oyeee! Nadaan kisse kaha?

Veer : Anyways! Prachi! Mein tumhe bata du ki jald hi hamara business badhne wala hai.

Prachi : Ye toh acchi baat hai sir! Toh kya mein unhe phone kar ye bata du? Mujhe yakeen hai woh waapas laut aayenge.

Veer (smiles) : Aur yahi toh mein nahi chaahta!

Prachi : Huh?

Veer : Jo log ek acche khaase chalte business se abhi bhaag gaye, zara socho ki jab business sach me kabhi agar manda pad gaya toh kya karenge woh?

Prachi : W-Woh-!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye accha hua ki woh chale gaye. Hume unki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : Par unke jaane se baaki logo me aatmvishvaas gir gaya hai. Aur unka mann machal raha hai kaam chhodhne ke liye.

Veer : Toh uska hal hai unka aatmvishvaas badhaana!

Prachi : W-Woh kaise?

Veer (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh mein aaya hu yaha!

Kehte hue usne apni shirt utaar ke apni kamar par baandh lii, aur bas ek black t-shirt me aa gaya.

Veer : Aaj unhe bataya jayega ki ek chef hona kitni responsibility ka kaam hota hai.

Jab uski aankho me woh Tej Prachi ne dekha toh woh mantra-mugdh hoke reh gayi.

Prachi : S-So cool!

Veer : Sonali! Saare food trucks par call kar unhe yaha bulao.

Sonali ne baat maan sabhi ko waha bula liya. Ladke aur ladkiya sabhi log the. Ye sabhi mil ke Veer ke alag alag food trucks ko sambhaalte the. Prachi inn sab se hisaab liya karti thi aur Sonali ko deti thi. Aur baad me Sonali usse manage kar Veer ko saupti thi.

Kuch iss tarah se ye chain kaam karti thi. Khaas baat ye thi ki Veer ke food trucks bhalayi dikhne me ek jaise the parantu sabhi ke menus alag alag hua karte the.

Koi sirf subaah ko lagta tha aur naashta serve karta tha toh koi din me lag ke thaali system par based tha. Koi fast food serve karta tha toh koi shakes and blends ke liye tha. Uske paas harr tarah ki variety maujood thi.

Jab sabhi ekatr hue toh Veer ne unhe ek lecture diya ki chef hona apne aap me kitna zimmedaari waala kaam tha. Aaj woh unn sab ko karke dikhaane waala tha.

Line se sabhi trucks lag gaye.

Shuruaat me toh gine chune log hi aaye par jaise hi logo ki dincharya ke working hours khatam hone ka samay hua, jab sooraj ki kirane ahista ahista chhatati gayi toh ilaake me chehel pehel badh gayi. Mausam bhi thoda sheetal ho utha.

Thaka haara aadmi kaam ke baad apne colleagues ke saath khaane peene ke liye nikalne laga. Aur fir Veer ne shuru kiya apna jaadu.

Jaise hi uske haath kitchen ke samaano par pade woh jaise ek alag hi duniya me chala gaya.

Bohut hi kam mauka milta tha usse apni cooking skills dikhaane ka. Of course! Uske paas wo jo thi!

Absolute Chef!!!!

Prachi (in shock) : S-Sir ko cook karna bhi aata hai??

Sonali : Haan!

Sonali ye maan’na toh nahi chaahti thi par daant peeste hue usse ye maan’na hi pada ki poore ghar me Veer se behtar khaana koi nahi bana paata tha.

Prachi ek student ki tarah Veer ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Wo notes le rahi thi.
Prachi : Ahh? Oil ke saath butter?

Veer : Butter excessive heat me jaldi jal jaata hai Prachi. Toh usse thoda bachaane ke liye ye oil.

Prachi : Ohhhh!

Usne fauran hi apne notepad me usse notedown kar liya. Woh Veer ko prashansa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Itne me do office ki ladkiya aayi aur Veer ko uska pehla order bhi mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

Veer ke bareek se bareek cheez ko dekh aur uski precise culinary skills ko dekh, na sirf waha maujood Prachi aur anya, balki Sonali bhi uski iss adaa par mohit ho gayi.

Woh ab sirf khaana nahi bana raha tha, woh ab ek artist ki tarah tha jiski kalaa ka pradarshan wo sabhi dekh paa rahe the.

Veer ne jab wo order unn ladkiyo ko diya toh dono excited hoke jaake khaane me lag gayi.

“Ohhhh my goddddd!!! Kitna tasty hai~”

“Hmm~ Par tumne usse nahi dekha? Chef ko? Wo to aur tasty hoga.”

“Hehehehehe~ Haan!”

Dekhte hi dekhte bheed jama hone lag gayi aur Veer ke food trucks bhaari vyast ho gaye. Woh idhar se udhar order complete karne me hi lag gaye.

Prachi bhaavuk ho uthi. Aaj tak usne itni bheed kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Harr guzarte pal Veer ke liye uski izzat badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Prachi!! Inhe fryer me daalo!!!

Prachi : Yessss Sirrrr~

Veer : Sonali! Rolls ko wrap karo!

Sonali : Haan! K-Kar rahi hu!

Veer : Ek accha chef apne swaarth ke liye nahi, dusro ke liye cook karta hai. Samjhe???

“Yesssss Sirrrr!!!!!”

Veer ne aate hi apni upasthiti se poori kaaya palat kar dii thi.

Prachi baahar jaake logo se jab feedback lene gayi toh yaha Veer ne mauka dekh achanak se Sonali ko peeche se pakad liya.

Woh fryer se french fries nikaal rahi thi, par Veer uski kamar ko pakde apna chehra uske kandho par jhukaaye khada tha.

Akasmaat iss hamle se Sonali bhauchakki si reh gayi. Iske pehle ki Veer ko woh mana kar paati, Veer ka haath upar chala gaya aur Sonali murti ki tarah jamm ke reh gayi.

Uska haath sonali ke doodh par tha.

Sonali ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jaise maano usse bukhaar aa gaya ho.

Sonali (blushes) : Chorro! Ch-Chorro warna mein- muh tod dungi tumhara.

Par Veer uske urojo ko masalne me laga hua tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab kya kehna hai tumhara? Tum keh rahi thi business me mandi aa rahi hai? Log jaa rahe hai. Hmm? Toh ye bheed kaisi hai?

Sonali (blushes) : Nnnn~ Haaa~ Haaa~ Chhorro! J-Jaldi~ Prachi aati hogi! Chorro!!!

Veer : Nahi chorrunga!

Sonali : Kutte kameene!!!! Chorrr!! Ahhnnn~ Nnnnn~

Veer poori lagan se unn thano ko masalne laga. Usne Sonali ko pehli baar chhua tha aur wo zara bhi naraaz nahi tha.

Par usse jald hi Sonali ko chorrna pada kyuki Prachi aa rahi thi.

Prachi : S-Sir! Buri khabar! Woh famous hasti aa chuki hai aur aapse milna chaahti hai.

Veer jab baahar aaya toh uske saamne ek business suit me lady car ke paas khadi hui thi.

Uske paas aate hi usne khud hi haath aage badhaaya,

“Mister Veer?”

Veer : Yes! Aur aap?

Wese toh usne pehle hi check kar liya tha par formality karna toh zaroori tha.

“Mein tamanna!”

Woh boli aur apne haath mod khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?

Tamanna : Do you know who I am?

Veer : No!

Veer ke knowledge par hasste hue woh guroor me boli,

Tamanna : Mein ek food critic hu.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tamanna : Mera kaam hai famous hotels, restaurants me jaake waha ka khaana taste karna aur uske baare me likhna. Apne reviews dena. Mera ek review acche khaase chalte firrte hotel ko sadak par laa sakta hai.

Veer shaant tha. Kyuki wo sach keh rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein khud Mumbai se hu. Abhi tak baahar thi, kuch hafte pehle hi lauti hu. Mein aksar travel karti rehti hu. Iss food truck ko mene pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. I guess ye abhi haal hi me khula hai!?

Veer : Jii!

Tamanna : Kal mein yaha se guzri toh by chance yaha aayi. Menu par ek signature dish dekh mene uski demand ki toh pata laga ki wo dish sirf truck ke owner ko hi banaani aati hai. Worker ne kaha tha ki mein kal aau toh isliye yaha aayi hu.

Veer : Then come, please!

Tamanna : Uss se pehle, ek walk ho jaaye?

Veer : Kyu nahi!

Veer jaanta tha woh kya karna chaah rahi thi. Woh owner se pehle baate karti thi, unke ravaiyye ko notice karti, unhe jaan boojh ke gussa bhi dilaati thi taaki wo uske jaal me phass jaaye aur fir wo unke baare me sab kuch likh sake. Veer ke saath bhi wo wahi karne waali thi.

Tamanna : Tum jaante ho mein number 1 food kis desh ka maanti hu?

[Huh? What the hell? Master? Hume iski bakwaas kyu sunn’na pad raha hai?]

‘Shaant Pari!’

Veer : Kis desh ka ma’am?

Tamanna (smiles) : Of course, Italy! Italian food best hai!

Veer : Aur second pe?

Tamanna : Mexican food!

Veer : Third?

Tamanna : Of course! It’s French food and spanish food!

Veer : Aur hamara Indian food?

Tamanna : Fourth!

Veer : Fourth kyu?

Tamanna : Apne saamne dekho!

Chalte chalte woh dono hi ek chaupaati ke nazdeek pohuch chuke the.

Tamanna : Dekho logo ko! Kaise thoos rahe hai! Hygiene dekho! Saaf safaayi dekho!

Veer : Par kuch log toh gloves pehne hai. Unke stalls bhi saaf hai.

Tamanna : Yahi to dikkat hai na. Sirf kuch log Mister Veer! Pata nahi logo ko sense kab aayega. Pata nahi ye sab kab sudhrenge. Food ko kachre ki tarah treat nahi kiya jaata. It should be handled delicately with hygiene.

Woh kareeb 15 minute tak bad-badaati rahi. Jab Veer ne usse achanak se rok diya,

Veer : One day!

Tamanna : Huh?

Veer : I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry.

Tamanna : What?????

Veer palta aur apne jeb me haath daal chal diya,

Veer : Come! I’ll show you what the real food is!

Veer ne Tamanna ko fir apni ek signature dish bana ke dii. Jo ki kuch nahi ek roll tha.

Tamanna disappoint hote hue wo roll uthaayi aur apne muh me daali. Jaise hi swaad, woh flavour uske taste buds ko hit kiye, wo wahi jamm gayi.

Veer : Tamanna ma’am??

Par koi jawaab nahi aaya. Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~


“I need you! ASAP!”
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update 5.3k words ka hai. Toh mujhe bolna na pade. Daba ke likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Agle update se crimson arc ka main plot shuru ho jayega. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad! :shakehands:
So finally legendary skill ka raaz khul gaya aur ye bhi pata vhal gaya ke notification na aane ki kiya possibility ho sakti he,

Bhumika aur veer ka relation bhi dheere dheere thik ho rha he, wahi sonali ka wohi andaz baat karne ka buhat hi acha tha,

Veer ka kafi time baad apne food truck pe aana he aur apne sbhi workers ko motivate karna aur ye 1 new character ka story me aana ab dekhte he ke ye tamanah kiya karti he aage,

Aur veer ka sonali ke sth first time physical hona aur sonali ka reaction dekhna ye he ke ab sonali aur veer ka relation aage kesa hota he,

And last me veer ko message aana, as expected aapka suspense create karna😂 ab agle update tak hum sub readers yahi sochte rahe ge ke kis ka message aaya he veer ko aur hum aap se pochte rahe ge aur aap hume suspense me hi rakhe ge😂 to hum poch hi nhi rahe he ab to hume bhi aadat hogai he suspense me rehne ki,

Aur kiya hi kahu aap har bar lajawab update dete ho shabad hi kam par jate he tareef karne ke liye,

Awesome bro you are amazing and your writing skills is insane keep it up bro maza agya🥰😘👍👌❤️.
 

Ramesh628

Active Member
502
1,354
138
Update - 133 ~ Labyrinth and Invitation

Ab tak...

Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’


Ab aage...

Veer ne apni aankhein band kii ya yu kahe ki uski aankhein apne aap hi band ho gayi. Uske shareer ko ek jhatka laga aur uski consciousness drift hoke kahi aur hi chali gayi.

‘Ye- Ye kaha hu mein?’

Usse kuch bhi dikhaayi nahi diya. Chaaro orr andhkaar hi andhkaar faila hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano woh andhere me doobe kisi space me ho.

‘P-Pari? Pariiii???’

[M-Maaste…. r…. Maaste….. r…. K…y….a a…a…p m… u…. j… h… e……………….]

‘Pari?????’

Jo awaaz Veer ko Pari ki sunaayi de rahi thi, woh dheere dheere gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek ghanghor sannaata chhaa gaya. Woh na hi kuch sunn paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Woh apne badan ke ango ko bhi mehsoos nahi kar paa raha tha.

Ek bhayanak ghabrahat janm lii.

‘Pariiiiiiiii????????’

Pari ko pukaarne ka koi fayda na hua. Aisa laga jaise woh poori tarah se uss se alag ho chuka tha.

‘Calm down Veer! Calm yourself down!’

Usne ek lambi saans lii aur khud ko shaant kiya. Apni tezz dhadkano ko thoda thaam usne dhyaan lagaaya.

‘Pari mujhe sunn nahi paa rahi. Aur na hi Pari ko mein. Iska matlab hamaare connection ke beech kuch aisa hai jo hume ek dusre se baat karne se rok raha hai.’

Usne fauran hi apni sthiti ka aaklan kiya. Usse yaad aaya ki chand palo pehle woh Pari ko nirdesh de raha tha.


‘Do it Pari!’

[P-Par Master!? Finally aapke paas mauka hai apne pendant ke raaz ke baare me jaan’ne ka. Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi.]

‘Mene kaha na! Do it!’

[P-Par-]

‘Pariiii!!!!!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]


Yahi hua tha. Haan! Yahi toh hua tha.

Veer ko yaad tha acche se. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Pari ne Seer Vision ke baare me kya bataya tha.

[Seer Vision ~

Description : Grants the vision of a seer. The skill allows the user to instantly witness the past related to anything. Beware! Mental pain is guaranteed. If the user fails to reclaim the memory, skill will terminate automatically.]

Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha. Ye woh legendary skill thi jo usse kisi bhi vastu se sambandhit uska ateet poora ka poora dikha sakti thi.

Ek prakaar se ye uske ‘Check’ function ki tarah hi thi. Par uss se kahi zyaada aadhunik. Jo check function nahi dekh sakta tha woh Seer Vision dekh sakta tha.

Ab usse samajh aaya ki kyu Pari itne peeche lagi hui thi ki woh isse apne pendant par istemaal kare. Agar usne aisa kiya hota, toh pendant ka raaz ek jhatke me khul ke saamne aa jaata. Lekin kya pendant ka raaz Miss Kaera se zyada zaroori tha?

Veer ke liye ~ Nahi!

Aur isliye, usne aisi skill ko daav par lagaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha.

Dikkat yahi thi ki iske istemaal ke saath saath aane waale bhayanak maansik dard ko bhi jhelna tha. Aur itna hi nahi, agar kisi kaaran vash wo chhipi hui yaad ko paane me nakaam hota hai toh skill wahi apne aap band ho jayegi.

Dusre shabdo me, skill barbaad chali jayegi.

Ye bohut risky tha. Kyuki jokhim bhi tha aur safalta ki koi guarantee bhi nahi.

‘Agar description ko dhyaan me rakha jaaye toh mujhe memory retrieve karni hai. That’s right! Mujhe sirf uss par hi dhyaan dena hai.’

Veer ne sahi disha me sochna shuru kiya.

Usne ye skill uss diary par istemaal ki thi jo usse Kaera ke puraane ghar me kahi chhipi hui mili thi.

Veer ke mann me kayi sawaal the. Jese ki woh diary waha kar kya rahi thi? Kya kabhi Kaera ya kisi aur ko iss diary ke baare me pata nahi laga? Aise aneko sawaal se woh joojh raha tha. Par filhaal inke liye samay nahi tha.

Kaera ke emotions ko baahar laane ke liye usse ek strong emotional impact dena zaroori tha. Ek prakaar ka emotional breakdown. Jab diary khol Veer ne andar dekha toh woh samajh gaya tha usse kya karna hai.

Abhi usne khud ko sambhaala hi tha ki tabhi,

‘Urghhh~’

Achanak se ek baar phir uski consciousness kahi drift hone lagi.



‘Aaaarrgghh~’

Aisa laga maano jese usse koi kheech ke kahi le jaa raha tha. Uske mastishk me ek bhayanak dard utha.

Dard ke maare usne aankhein band kar lii, aur jab sab kuch shaant hone ke baad usne aankh khol dekha toh,



Uske saamne ek labyrinth maujood tha. Yaani ek bhool-bhulaiyaa. Ek prakaar ka maze.

‘Ye toh ek-!!?’

Woh ashcharya-chakit reh gaya. Aas paas usne dekha, dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Sirf ek hi raasta tha uske liye aur woh tha iss labyrinth me ghusna.

‘Shayad isliye skill me likha hua tha ki agar memory retrieve karne me fail huye toh ye band ho jayegi. I get it now. Samajh gaya ye tough kyu hai itna.’

‘But know this… I’m not gonna fall back!’

Nidar hoke woh andar chal diya.

Andar ghuste hi,


“Eaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhh~”

*Screeeeeeeechhhhhhhh*

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

“Die! Die! Die!!!!”

“Noooooooooo~”


Kaan ke parde faad dene waali alag alag cheenkhe aur awaazein sunaayi padne lagi. Apne kaano par haath rakh woh aage badha,

*hic* *hic*

“Uwaaaaaa~”


Kahi kisi chhote se bacche ki rone ki awaaz usse sunaayi deti, toh kahi kisi mahila ke rone ki. Ye jagah kisi bhootiya jagah se kam nahi thi.

‘Kya ye sab? Kaera ki yaado ka hissa hai? Ya fir diary ki?’

Ek bada sawaal aur khada hua.

Woh chal hi raha tha jab uske saamne achanak ek kaali dhundh si chhaane lagi. Bhayanak kaala dhua ikhatta hua aur uska ekmaatr raasta rok diya.

‘This still won’t stop me!’

Bina ghabraaye woh uss kaale dhue me ghus gaya. Aur ghuste hi,

“Aaaaaaaaaarggghhhhhhhhh!!”

Uski dard ke maare cheekh nikalni shuru ho gayi. Phir agle hi shan,


“Pagal ladki!”

“Hahahahaha!!”

“Tum ajeeb ho! Ajeeb! Hume tumse dosti nahi karni! Hato meri bench se!!”

“Mummy dekho! Woh ladki kitni ajeeb hai.”

“Arre ye ladki pagal hai. Hehehe~ Kuch bolti hi nahi hai.”

“Oye iski choti kheecho dekho kaise royegi hehe”

“Hey dekho toh kitna paisa hai saali ke paas.”

“Mene suna hai iske papa bohut bade businessman hai.”

“Tabhi toh paiso pe aish karti hai. Hmph! I hate such people.”

“Sahi kaha. Ghamand toh dekho! Jese apne aap ko koi maharani samajhti ho.”

“Baap ne zaroor teachers, principal ko paise diye honge. Tabhi toh kabhi kuch bolte nahi hai isko.”

“Kya hi kar legi itna padh ke? Raub toh dekho zara iska. Dekho toh, kaise car se utar rahi hai. Jaise duniya me iske hi paas mehngi car hai.”

“Saali par hai bohut hot yaar! Iska baap agar itna wazandaar na hota toh apne laude pe baithaya hota mene isse. Hahahaha!”


Kuch aisi anek baate Veer ke kaano me goonjne lagi. Woh haafte hue jaise hi uss dhundh se baahar aaya, uski saansein ukhadne lagi.

Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Saath hi gussa bhi.

‘Kya ye Kaera ki buri yaadein hai? I-Iska matlab Seer Vision mujhe sirf diary ki hi nahi, diary se jude insaan ki bhi yaadein dikha sakta hai?’

Dheere dheere Veer ke kaano se woh awaazein gaayab hui.

‘Aise aur kitne dard aap apne seene me daba ke rakhi ho huh?’

Woh bhool-bhulaiyaa me anumaan laga ke raasto par mudta gaya.

Abhi kuch derr hi hui thi jab saamne usse ek choti bacchi dikhaayi dii. Woh frock pehne neeche zameen par baithe apna sarr jhuka ke ro rahi thi.


*hic* *hic*

“Mamma!”


Veer ko zaroorat nahi thi ye samajhne ki ki saamne baithi ye chhoti si bacchi kaun thi.

“Mamma! Mein ajeeb hu kya? Sab mujhe ajeeb kyu kehte hai? *hic* Sab mujh se dur kyu bhaagte hai? *hic* Mamma! Wapas aa jao na! Mein ab bilkul shaitani nahi karungi. *hic* Mamma!”

Veer aage badha,

“Nahi! Nahi Kaera! Tum bilkul ajeeb nahi ho.”

Woh kehte hue aage aaya. Usne Kaera ko chheena chaaha par uske chheete hi woh ladki ek dhue me tabdeel ho gayi.

Labyrinth uske saath jese khel raha tha.

Aise kayi kaali dhundh se guzarte hue aur dard pe dard sehte hue woh jese tese apni manzil ke qareeb pohuch hi gaya.

Iss baar uske saamne koi kaali dhundh nahi thi. Saamne tha ek ujaala. Peela prakaash jo uski aankho ko chaka-chaundh kiye hue tha.

Woh uss prakaash ki orr badha aur jese hi roshni ki kiran ke sampark me woh aaya, ek baar phir woh khichta hua kahi aur chala gaya.

Fir sab kuch. Usse sab kuch nazar aa gaya. Memory retrieve ho chuki thi. Aur uske baad,

*huff* *huff* *huff*

[Maaasteerrr!!]

Uske kaano me awaaz aayi. Woh waapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha. Par uski haalat ab bigad rahi thi. Sarr bhanna raha tha.

[Master you did it! You finally did it.]

Woh paseene se lathpath tha. Pari ko jawaab dene tak ke liye wo apni saasein durust nahi kar paa raha tha.

Aankho me nami bhi thi. Usne apne haatho me maujood uss diary ko dekha aur apni t-shirt ke andar daba ke chhupa liya.

Kaera jisse Veer ki absence ke baare me jab dhyaan aaya, woh fauran hi usse dhundhte hue waha aayi,

Kaera : You are here!? What happened?

Veer : N-Nothing! Mera bas perr fisal gaya tha.

Woh haafte hue utha.

[Master! This is bad! Jald hi skill ke side-effects aapko hit karenge. Aap yu hi yaha khade nahi reh paoge. Jaldi se nikaliye yaha se. Quick!]

Veer ne wahi kiya bhi! Usne apni himmat baandh khud ko zara bhi exhausted show nahi kiya. Par andar se usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uski saari shakti kisi ne choos lii ho.

[Hang in there Master! Bas thodi derr aur!]

Veer jese tese apne ghar pohucha. Kismat ki baat thi ye ki tab hall me koi bhi maujood nahi tha. Aur darwaza bhi lock nahi tha. Shayad saara mahila mandal ek kamre me baith gupshup me laga hua tha. Iska fayda utha ke Veer seedha apne kamre me ghusa,

*Click*

Darwaza lock karte hi usne sabse pehle diary ko chhipa ke rakha. Woh jaanta tha uske saath usse kya karna tha. Par ab aur nahi,

[Master!!!]

Woh ladkhadaya aur apne bistar par gir behosh ho gaya.

Woh shaam tak behoshi me hi tha. Aur usse hosh bhi aaya toh darwaze peetne ke shor se.

*Bammmmm* *Baaammmmm*

“Veeeeeeer!!!! Veer kholo! Veer???”

Awaaz Tej ki thi.

Fauran uth usne darwaza khola. Aur apne bhai ko sahi salamat dekh Tej ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Veer ye dekh ke bhi hairat me tha ki sabhi log uske darwaaze ke baahar khade hue the.

Uski maa, Shweta, Aabha, Suman, Ragini. Sonali aur Bhumika bas nahi thi kyuki iss samay woh dono hi kaam par gayi hui thi.

Veer : Aap sab yaha?

Tej : Aur nahi toh kya? Jab hume pata chala ki tum ghar aa gaye ho toh tumhe awaaz lagaayi par tumne darwaza khola hi nahi.

Bhavna : Hume laga ki tum so rahe hoge beta. Par jab shaam hui toh Tej ke saath saath fir hume bhi chinta hone lagi aur isliye-

Veer : Ahhh! Samjha! Nahi! Actually mein so hi raha tha.

Tej (frowns) : Really?

Veer : Of course!

Bhavna : Accha chalo! Ab uth gaye ho toh haath muh dholo. Aur neeche aa jao. Suman! Chai bana lo.

Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Arre? Aap kyu taqleef karti ho? Mein hu na! Mein banaati hu.

Jaate jaate Ragini ne Veer ko dekha aur sharma ke waha se nikal gayi. Apne hi haatho ki chai woh Veer ko pilaana chaahti thi.

Veer : M-Mein aata hu. Aap sab chaliye!

Sab waha se neeche chal diye. Siwaye Aabha ke. Woh nazre jhukaaye wahi khadi rahi.

Aabha : A-Aap! Aap ne jhooth kaha na?

Veer jo haath muh dhone washroom jaa hi raha tha, achanak hi uske qadam ye sunn wahi rukk gaye.

Wo palta aur Aabha ko dekha,

Aabha : W-Wo mein jab sabke liye paani upar leke jaa rahi thi tab aapko ladkhadate hue apne kamre me jaate dekha tha. A-Aap theek toh ho na?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha, Aabha ghabraate hue peeche hui aur deewaar se jaa bhidi. Uske saamne aake Veer ne apna ek haath zorr se deewaar par maara jo Aabha ke kaan ke bagal se hoke guzra.

Bechari darr ke maare kisi chhipkali ki tarah deewaar se chipak ke reh gayi.

Aage uske kaan ki taraf Veer jhuka,

Veer : Aur ye baat kisi ko pata lagne na paaye. Hmm?

Aabha ne zorr se apna sarr haan me hilaaya. Yaha vaastav me usne Veer ki chori pakdi thi, par lag aisa raha tha jese woh khud Veer ke changul me phassi ho.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Aabha ki chin ko haath me leke usne uska chehra upar kiya aur unn gulabi hontho ko apni giraft me le liya. Woh kasmasa ke reh gayi.

“Nnnnnn~”

Jab tak Veer ka mann na bhar gaya tab tak usne unn raseele hontho ka acche se rasspaan kiya.

Aabha ko chorr woh fresh up hoke jab neeche aaya, toh sab saath baithe chai pee rahe the. Woh bhi apni jagah par baith chai peene laga aur apni soch me pad gaya.

[Kya aapne decide kar liya hai?]

‘Hmm!’

[Aap ye waali skill lena chaahte ho na?]

‘Yes Pari!’

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[5000 points have been used.]

[Kaafi mehngi hai par useful hai.]

‘Thanks!’

[Ab aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?]

‘Tum jaanti toh ho. Fir kyu puch rahi ho?’

[Kyuki mein bina aapki permission ke aapke mann me nahi jhaakna chaahti. Physically toh mein jaanti hu aap theek ho ab. But mentally? Uska jawaab aap hi mujhe dijiye.]

‘Mein theek hu Pari!’

[Ek legendary skill hamesha ek keemat ke saath hi aati hai Master.]

‘I know!’

[Aapko yaad hai na? Pitcher ko maarte samay bhi aapne legendary skill use kii thi.]

‘Woh legendary skill thi?’

[Of course Master! Sylvia’s venom cure!! Ek legendary skill hi toh thi. Farq sirf itna hai ki tab aap asaani se legendary skill ko purchase kar sakte the kyuki tab system meharban tha. Par ab sirf mission ke zariye hi ye mil sakti hai.]

‘I see!’

[Aur aapko yaad hai na Sylvia’s venom cure ko istemaal karne ke baad aapke saath kya hua tha?]

‘Yeah! I remember! White blood cells zyada maatra me badh gaye the aur poison ko baahar kiye the. I suffered a lot of pain. Mujhe acche se yaad hai. Haha! Divya ka chehra tab dekhne laayak tha. And- Miss Suhana too!’

Suhana ki ek chhavi uske dimaag me aayi.

[Yes! Toh ab yaad rakhiyega kisi bhi legendary skill ko istemaal karne se pehle. Kuch na kuch side-effects hote hi hai inke. Kyuki ye aapke planet ke laws ke against jaati hai. They are too powerful. Aap dekh hi chuke ho.]

‘Laws ke against toh tum bhi ho Pari!’

[Well! Yes!]

Veer muskuraya,

‘Mein dhyaan rakhunga Pari!’

[Good thing!]

3 din guzar gaye. Aur Veer apne uss ek kaam me laga raha. Aur ant me woh Kaera ke paas gaya aur usse diary thama aaya.

2 din aur guzre. Kaera ke mission ki last date khatam ho chuki thi. Par system ki taraf se koi bhi message nahi aaya tha mission ke liye. Jo aaya tha woh tha ek notification.

Jisse padh Veer aur chinta me doob chuka tha. Kaera ki favorability ghat ke 50 par aa chuki thi. Ye sab ho kya raha tha?

Notification kyu nahi aa raha tha.

‘Pari? What the hell is going on?’

[Mein bhi confused hu Master. Notification aa jaana chahiye tha.]

‘Agar woh mujhe hate karne lagi hai toh mujhe chalega Pari par unke saath kuch galat nahi hona chahiye. I cannot see her fall like this.’

[Shayad-]

‘Shayad kya Pari please bolo. Mein bechain hu yaha. Woh theek hai na?’

[Master! Aapne apna kaam kar diya hai. Don’t worry!]

‘Don’t worry? Karan ka message aaya hai mujhe Pari ki Miss Kaera ne khud ko 2 din tak andar room me band kar ke rakha tha. Aur fir achanak se unki favorability kam ho jaana. Ye sab kya hai? Keh do ki woh mujhe hate kar rahi hai. Na ki unke emotions hamesha hamesha ke liye chale gaye hai.’

[Master aisa ho sakta hai ki-]

‘K-Kya?’

[Shayad wo cheezo ko process kar rahi hai. Aur abhi tak kisi decision par nahi pohuchi hai. Shayad unhone kuch socha hai par abhi uss par poori tarah se atal nahi hai. Aur isliye mission clear ka notification hume nahi mila hai.]

‘....’

[Yes! Yahi kaaran hai Master! Ab aap ready rahiyega!]

‘Huh?’

[Woh aapko hate bhi kar sakti hai. Ya pyaar bhi. Hume jald pata lag jayega.]

‘I hope wo theek ho jaaye!’

***

Agli subaah Veer ki aankh jab khuli toh Bhumika uske seene se zorr se lagi hui thi. Aur usne khud ne Bhumika ko apne seene me kass ke bheencha hua tha. Uske doodh veer ki chaathi me dhasse hue the.

Veer maan’na toh nahi chaahta tha par ye ehsaas alaukik tha.

Uske bagal se Tej bhi laiti thi par woh ghode bech ke odhne wali chaadar ke upar hi so rahi thi.

Veer ne alag hone ka prayaas kiya ki itne me hi,

Bhumika ki aankhein khul gayi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Aur jab kuch derr baad unhe dhyaan aaya, toh fir toota unpe sharm ka pahaad.

Veer (blushes) : I-I’m sorry! Mein wo neend me-

Bhumika (blushes) : I-It’s okay! Y-You can hold me i-if you want.

Veer : Eh?

Veer hakka bakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna? Veer ne uski baat maan usse jakde rakha.

Veer : Aap mujhse kuch- akele me baat karna chaahti thi?

Bhumika : Hmm? H-Haan! Mene kuch decide kiya hai. Kya hum raat me baat kar sakte hai?

Veer : S-Sure!

Aur uske baad uski haya firse laut aayi. Surkh laal gaal liye woh chhat-pataati palko ko upar kar kabhi Veer ko dekhti toh kabhi kahi orr. Par dono kuch derr tak yu hi ek dusre ki baaho me bane rahe jab tak neeche shorgul na machne laga.

Kya kabhi aisi subaah Veer ke ghar me ho sakti hai jab chehel pehel na ho?

Aaj ki subah Sonali behek chuki thi.

Dining table par baithe Veer ko woh jhunjhlaaye jaa rahi thi.

Sonali : O-Oye!! Tum sunn rahe ho na meri baat?

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Sonali : Fir bhi tumhaare kaano me juu nahi reng rahi? Arree! Mein keh rahi hu hamare truck ke karmchaari kaam chodh bhaag rahe hai. Unka aatmvishvaas gir raha hai. A-Aur- Aur aaj koi aane waala hai. Koi badi hasti. Mujhe Prachi ne bataya hai. Oyeeee!

Prachi Veer ke food truck me kaam karne waali ek ladki thi. Woh sonali ki madad karwaati thi. Aur kuch kuch recipes bhi bana leti thi.

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Veer ke lagatar iss ignorant attitude ko dekh Sonali ka maatha aur thanak utha.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!! Jao! Bhaad me jao! Hmph! Mera kaam tha bataana, mene bata diya. Aage tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane.

Aur agle hi pal woh muh fula ke baith bad-badaane lagi,

“Ek toh madad karo, upar se mahashay ko koi parvaah nahi hai. Mein koi kaam waali bai hu? Jo itna kaam thopte hi jaa rahe ho. Agar kisi din ye kaam ka bojh meri jaan le liya toh bhi mujhe aashcharya nahi hoga. Koi naazuk sii ladki ko itna kaam deta hai bhala? Itni badi zimmedaari koi khud bhi akele nahi uthaata, par yaha dekho. Mein hu! Jo-”

Uske non-stop radio ko sunn Veer ne uski orr dekha,

Veer : Tumhara naashta thanda ho raha hai!

Sonali : H-Huh? *blushes* h-haan toh khaa rahi hu. Naashta yahi hai, kahi udd ke nahi chala jayega.

Veer mand mand muskuraate hue uske iss chulbule-pann ka lutf leta gaya.

Aur naashta khatam karte hi woh utha.

Veer : Chalo!

Sonali : Huh?? Kaha?

Veer : Food truck ke liye, aur kaha? Abhi thodi derr pehle tum hi toh chillaa rahi thi na?

Sonali : O-Oohh!

Tej : Veer kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Business time Teju dii! Aap waha bore ho jaogi. Mein aapke liye laut ke kuch launga na. *smiles*

Tej (blushes) : Theek hai! Mein wait karungi!

Ragini : A-Aur mere liye Veer?

Veer (smiles) : Aapke liye bhi launga bhabhi!

Ragini (blushes) : Mujhe intezaar rahega!

Dur baithi Bhavna iss conversation exchange ko bade hi gaur se sunn rahi thi aur dekh bhi rahi thi.

Idhar Sonali Veer ka peecha karta hue fauran hi baahar aayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost nikaali hui thi. Sonali jab andar baithi toh car ki khubsoorti ko dekhti reh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Woh- Mein pehli baar baith rahi hu isme.

Veer : Ohh!

Jald hi woh dono food truck ke saamne the. Ye Veer ka pehla waala food truck tha jo usne sabse pehle khareeda tha. Aur Sonali bhi issi me kaam karti thi.

Dono utar ke jab truck par pohuche toh Sonali ne chaavi se truck ko khola. Veer fir usse leke city side chal diya.

Daily ki apni jagah par truck ko laga ke set karne ke baad, woh customers ke aane ka intezaar karne lage.

Jab Prachi aur baaki sabhi ne Veer ko dekha toh woh sab hairaan reh gaye. Veer kabhi bhi iss tarah unke truck ke andar nahi aata tha. Aaj aisa kya special tha?

Veer : Toh baat kya hai?

Sonali : Woh-

Prachi : Sir mein batau?

Veer : Sure!

Prachi : Baat ye hai ki ladko me motivation gir raha hai. Woh food truck ki jagah kahi aur bhaag rahe hai. Unhe ye kaam nahi karna. Unka kehna hai ki yaha kaam kiya toh hamesha ke liye yahi fasse reh jayenge. Kuch kar nahi payenge.

Sonali : Dekha jaaye toh unki baat sahi bhi hai. Mujhe hi dekh lo!

Usne taunt maara. Veer ne jab usse ghoor ke dekha toh woh shaant ho gayi.

Veer : Samjha! Kya tum me se kisi ne unhe ye nahi bataaya ki jald hi hamara business bohut badhne wala hai?

Sonali : Ehh?? Ye kya nayi nayi tum fek rahe ho ab?

Veer : Ohh! Iss nadaan ladki ko bhi nahi maalum.

Sonali (bhadakte hue) : Oyeee! Nadaan kisse kaha?

Veer : Anyways! Prachi! Mein tumhe bata du ki jald hi hamara business badhne wala hai.

Prachi : Ye toh acchi baat hai sir! Toh kya mein unhe phone kar ye bata du? Mujhe yakeen hai woh waapas laut aayenge.

Veer (smiles) : Aur yahi toh mein nahi chaahta!

Prachi : Huh?

Veer : Jo log ek acche khaase chalte business se abhi bhaag gaye, zara socho ki jab business sach me kabhi agar manda pad gaya toh kya karenge woh?

Prachi : W-Woh-!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye accha hua ki woh chale gaye. Hume unki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : Par unke jaane se baaki logo me aatmvishvaas gir gaya hai. Aur unka mann machal raha hai kaam chhodhne ke liye.

Veer : Toh uska hal hai unka aatmvishvaas badhaana!

Prachi : W-Woh kaise?

Veer (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh mein aaya hu yaha!

Kehte hue usne apni shirt utaar ke apni kamar par baandh lii, aur bas ek black t-shirt me aa gaya.

Veer : Aaj unhe bataya jayega ki ek chef hona kitni responsibility ka kaam hota hai.

Jab uski aankho me woh Tej Prachi ne dekha toh woh mantra-mugdh hoke reh gayi.

Prachi : S-So cool!

Veer : Sonali! Saare food trucks par call kar unhe yaha bulao.

Sonali ne baat maan sabhi ko waha bula liya. Ladke aur ladkiya sabhi log the. Ye sabhi mil ke Veer ke alag alag food trucks ko sambhaalte the. Prachi inn sab se hisaab liya karti thi aur Sonali ko deti thi. Aur baad me Sonali usse manage kar Veer ko saupti thi.

Kuch iss tarah se ye chain kaam karti thi. Khaas baat ye thi ki Veer ke food trucks bhalayi dikhne me ek jaise the parantu sabhi ke menus alag alag hua karte the.

Koi sirf subaah ko lagta tha aur naashta serve karta tha toh koi din me lag ke thaali system par based tha. Koi fast food serve karta tha toh koi shakes and blends ke liye tha. Uske paas harr tarah ki variety maujood thi.

Jab sabhi ekatr hue toh Veer ne unhe ek lecture diya ki chef hona apne aap me kitna zimmedaari waala kaam tha. Aaj woh unn sab ko karke dikhaane waala tha.

Line se sabhi trucks lag gaye.

Shuruaat me toh gine chune log hi aaye par jaise hi logo ki dincharya ke working hours khatam hone ka samay hua, jab sooraj ki kirane ahista ahista chhatati gayi toh ilaake me chehel pehel badh gayi. Mausam bhi thoda sheetal ho utha.

Thaka haara aadmi kaam ke baad apne colleagues ke saath khaane peene ke liye nikalne laga. Aur fir Veer ne shuru kiya apna jaadu.

Jaise hi uske haath kitchen ke samaano par pade woh jaise ek alag hi duniya me chala gaya.

Bohut hi kam mauka milta tha usse apni cooking skills dikhaane ka. Of course! Uske paas wo jo thi!

Absolute Chef!!!!

Prachi (in shock) : S-Sir ko cook karna bhi aata hai??

Sonali : Haan!

Sonali ye maan’na toh nahi chaahti thi par daant peeste hue usse ye maan’na hi pada ki poore ghar me Veer se behtar khaana koi nahi bana paata tha.

Prachi ek student ki tarah Veer ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Wo notes le rahi thi.
Prachi : Ahh? Oil ke saath butter?

Veer : Butter excessive heat me jaldi jal jaata hai Prachi. Toh usse thoda bachaane ke liye ye oil.

Prachi : Ohhhh!

Usne fauran hi apne notepad me usse notedown kar liya. Woh Veer ko prashansa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Itne me do office ki ladkiya aayi aur Veer ko uska pehla order bhi mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

Veer ke bareek se bareek cheez ko dekh aur uski precise culinary skills ko dekh, na sirf waha maujood Prachi aur anya, balki Sonali bhi uski iss adaa par mohit ho gayi.

Woh ab sirf khaana nahi bana raha tha, woh ab ek artist ki tarah tha jiski kalaa ka pradarshan wo sabhi dekh paa rahe the.

Veer ne jab wo order unn ladkiyo ko diya toh dono excited hoke jaake khaane me lag gayi.

“Ohhhh my goddddd!!! Kitna tasty hai~”

“Hmm~ Par tumne usse nahi dekha? Chef ko? Wo to aur tasty hoga.”

“Hehehehehe~ Haan!”

Dekhte hi dekhte bheed jama hone lag gayi aur Veer ke food trucks bhaari vyast ho gaye. Woh idhar se udhar order complete karne me hi lag gaye.

Prachi bhaavuk ho uthi. Aaj tak usne itni bheed kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Harr guzarte pal Veer ke liye uski izzat badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Prachi!! Inhe fryer me daalo!!!

Prachi : Yessss Sirrrr~

Veer : Sonali! Rolls ko wrap karo!

Sonali : Haan! K-Kar rahi hu!

Veer : Ek accha chef apne swaarth ke liye nahi, dusro ke liye cook karta hai. Samjhe???

“Yesssss Sirrrr!!!!!”

Veer ne aate hi apni upasthiti se poori kaaya palat kar dii thi.

Prachi baahar jaake logo se jab feedback lene gayi toh yaha Veer ne mauka dekh achanak se Sonali ko peeche se pakad liya.

Woh fryer se french fries nikaal rahi thi, par Veer uski kamar ko pakde apna chehra uske kandho par jhukaaye khada tha.

Akasmaat iss hamle se Sonali bhauchakki si reh gayi. Iske pehle ki Veer ko woh mana kar paati, Veer ka haath upar chala gaya aur Sonali murti ki tarah jamm ke reh gayi.

Uska haath sonali ke doodh par tha.

Sonali ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jaise maano usse bukhaar aa gaya ho.

Sonali (blushes) : Chorro! Ch-Chorro warna mein- muh tod dungi tumhara.

Par Veer uske urojo ko masalne me laga hua tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab kya kehna hai tumhara? Tum keh rahi thi business me mandi aa rahi hai? Log jaa rahe hai. Hmm? Toh ye bheed kaisi hai?

Sonali (blushes) : Nnnn~ Haaa~ Haaa~ Chhorro! J-Jaldi~ Prachi aati hogi! Chorro!!!

Veer : Nahi chorrunga!

Sonali : Kutte kameene!!!! Chorrr!! Ahhnnn~ Nnnnn~

Veer poori lagan se unn thano ko masalne laga. Usne Sonali ko pehli baar chhua tha aur wo zara bhi naraaz nahi tha.

Par usse jald hi Sonali ko chorrna pada kyuki Prachi aa rahi thi.

Prachi : S-Sir! Buri khabar! Woh famous hasti aa chuki hai aur aapse milna chaahti hai.

Veer jab baahar aaya toh uske saamne ek business suit me lady car ke paas khadi hui thi.

Uske paas aate hi usne khud hi haath aage badhaaya,

“Mister Veer?”

Veer : Yes! Aur aap?

Wese toh usne pehle hi check kar liya tha par formality karna toh zaroori tha.

“Mein tamanna!”

Woh boli aur apne haath mod khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?

Tamanna : Do you know who I am?

Veer : No!

Veer ke knowledge par hasste hue woh guroor me boli,

Tamanna : Mein ek food critic hu.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tamanna : Mera kaam hai famous hotels, restaurants me jaake waha ka khaana taste karna aur uske baare me likhna. Apne reviews dena. Mera ek review acche khaase chalte firrte hotel ko sadak par laa sakta hai.

Veer shaant tha. Kyuki wo sach keh rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein khud Mumbai se hu. Abhi tak baahar thi, kuch hafte pehle hi lauti hu. Mein aksar travel karti rehti hu. Iss food truck ko mene pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. I guess ye abhi haal hi me khula hai!?

Veer : Jii!

Tamanna : Kal mein yaha se guzri toh by chance yaha aayi. Menu par ek signature dish dekh mene uski demand ki toh pata laga ki wo dish sirf truck ke owner ko hi banaani aati hai. Worker ne kaha tha ki mein kal aau toh isliye yaha aayi hu.

Veer : Then come, please!

Tamanna : Uss se pehle, ek walk ho jaaye?

Veer : Kyu nahi!

Veer jaanta tha woh kya karna chaah rahi thi. Woh owner se pehle baate karti thi, unke ravaiyye ko notice karti, unhe jaan boojh ke gussa bhi dilaati thi taaki wo uske jaal me phass jaaye aur fir wo unke baare me sab kuch likh sake. Veer ke saath bhi wo wahi karne waali thi.

Tamanna : Tum jaante ho mein number 1 food kis desh ka maanti hu?

[Huh? What the hell? Master? Hume iski bakwaas kyu sunn’na pad raha hai?]

‘Shaant Pari!’

Veer : Kis desh ka ma’am?

Tamanna (smiles) : Of course, Italy! Italian food best hai!

Veer : Aur second pe?

Tamanna : Mexican food!

Veer : Third?

Tamanna : Of course! It’s French food and spanish food!

Veer : Aur hamara Indian food?

Tamanna : Fourth!

Veer : Fourth kyu?

Tamanna : Apne saamne dekho!

Chalte chalte woh dono hi ek chaupaati ke nazdeek pohuch chuke the.

Tamanna : Dekho logo ko! Kaise thoos rahe hai! Hygiene dekho! Saaf safaayi dekho!

Veer : Par kuch log toh gloves pehne hai. Unke stalls bhi saaf hai.

Tamanna : Yahi to dikkat hai na. Sirf kuch log Mister Veer! Pata nahi logo ko sense kab aayega. Pata nahi ye sab kab sudhrenge. Food ko kachre ki tarah treat nahi kiya jaata. It should be handled delicately with hygiene.

Woh kareeb 15 minute tak bad-badaati rahi. Jab Veer ne usse achanak se rok diya,

Veer : One day!

Tamanna : Huh?

Veer : I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry.

Tamanna : What?????

Veer palta aur apne jeb me haath daal chal diya,

Veer : Come! I’ll show you what the real food is!

Veer ne Tamanna ko fir apni ek signature dish bana ke dii. Jo ki kuch nahi ek roll tha.

Tamanna disappoint hote hue wo roll uthaayi aur apne muh me daali. Jaise hi swaad, woh flavour uske taste buds ko hit kiye, wo wahi jamm gayi.

Veer : Tamanna ma’am??

Par koi jawaab nahi aaya. Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~


“I need you! ASAP!”
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update 5.3k words ka hai. Toh mujhe bolna na pade. Daba ke likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Agle update se crimson arc ka main plot shuru ho jayega. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad! :shakehands:
Sandar update hai bhai
 
Top