- 11,490
- 89,500
- 259
Last edited:
Thanks a lot. Thread me aapka swaagat hai.Wow gosh your talented.so atleast puri story padh li maine and what a rollercoaster ride it has been.
Jis tarah se veer ka character grow hua h it's been amazing and Kudos to the pic you have added it's make more connected.
Uss se uske emotions chheen liye gaye hai. Veer apni taraf se prayaas kar raha hai. Dekhte hai hum kya Kaera apne emotions waapas paa payegi ya nahi.Yr mai bahot bura feel karti hu when I see keara the girl with such a talented but still she doesn't have a clue what is life it's really sucks.
Sonia limelight me aayegi. Usse alag se samay diya jayega. Trinity jab saamne aayengi toh woh khud shine karegi.Now about soina i think usko thoda aur focus me Lana chahiye tha but jitna bhi padhi hu she is very interesting especially her inferiority complex i want se her more
Veer toh apna le. Par Nidhi ne poori tarah accept nahi kiya hai. Kuch physical hoga ya emotional, tab jaa ke shayad woh haar jaaye apne aap se.Now Nidhi ma'am my god (yea my favourite character) she has been so much i literally got tear in my ear jb she usne paper par sign kiye and when she held her son
Yes mai chahti hu nidhi should accept him they must be look great together
Yes! Thank you! Initially, mene Suhana ke baare me utna nahi socha tha. Par house of the killers arc me uske upar kaafi focus tha. Aise me sense banta hi hai ki uski personality develop hoye. Wahi kiya bhi mene fir.Suhana that women deserve some love she has been through a lot the growth of her character is amazing ek rich arrogant se cute caring suhana love your writing skill sir
Bohut jald!Especial mention to our cute si jhuhi ek din chocolate ki factory jarur hogi hehe
Ragini is like a perfect wife to begin with.Raghni(yea she is in my top three) the most focused female character i guess she does has her charms and jis tarah se she care, love and adore veer make me smile
Bahut bahut dhanyavad.Kavya she is such a doll i totally adore her
Lol kuch jadha hi likh diya hehe once again i loved your story aur most importantly those characters feels relatable that make your story the best
Thank you dear. Keep supporting just like that. Aur revo likhte samay size thodi dekha jaata hai. Jitna mann me aaye. Likh do.Paaka ye last line h mai ek baar especial mention karna chati thi bhavna,tajak and shweta
And thanks a lot for this amazing and wonderful story huge respect for you sir.
Mission fail ka koi notification nahi aaya hai bhai. Toh hum ye nahi keh sakte.Again amazing and lovely update
Buhat sare suspense create hogye bhaya is update me 1 us dairy me kiya he, 2nd veer ne jo skill us ki wo kis trha ki skill he, 3rd veer ka behosh hona, 4th mission fail kese hogya, 5th kaera ki favorability drop hui he us ka kiya raaz he, and last agr mission fail hua he to ab veer kiya kare ka kiya kaera ko hamesha ke liye kho dega ya kuch aur dekhne ko mile ga,
Yes, ye 133 update ke baad hum crimson festival ki orr badh jayenge.Jo bhi he aage hume sare jawab mil jaye ge to me aap se poch ke suspense kharb nhi karu ga kyu ke i know aap ne aage kuch bariya hi socha hoga,
Baqi tej aur bhumika ki cat fight amazing thi aur suhana ko bhi aap ne dekha ke vegas me kiya chal raha he sonia wapis india arhi he to maybe aage hume wo bhi dekhe aur prakash ne suhana ke kaan me kiya kaha he us ki bhi curiosity he aab aage dekhte he kiya hota he aur finally 1 aur update ke bad crimson finally shuru hojaye ga to intezar rahe ga shiddat se,
Bahut bahut dhayavaad bhai. Keep supporting as usual.Amazing work bro aap time lete ho but update bhi phir aisa aata he ke kuch kehne layak hi nhi rehte,
Shandar update tha maza agya.