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[Villain1825]

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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 41
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LOCATION - JHANSI
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FLASHBACK CONTINUE
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Rajesh ne time dekha toh 2 baj rhe the.....



Rajesh - ab mujhe chalna chahiye..... gaadi aane wali hogi.....



Anamika - ok jao.....



Rajesh - byeeee....



Anamika - byeee....



rajesh wahan se hostel aaya aur apna bag uthake bahar aake khada ho gaya
....... thori der main ghadi aa gayi....



rajesh ghadi main aake baith gaya.....aur driver se kehne laga.....



Rajesh - bhai gaadi maal ki taraf lelo.....



Driver - q bhai.... koi kaaam hai kya.....



Rajesh - hnnnn soch rha hun..... thore kapde lelun shadi ke lie.....warna phirse aana parega....



Driver - hnnnn yeh sahi rehega....



Phir driver ne gaadi maal ki taraf doda di...... rajesh ne wahan se shadi ke lie thori bahut shopping krli aur saath main Anamika ke lie bhi ek suit le liya .....unlogon ko jhansi wapas jaane ke lie college ki aur se hi nikalna tha toh rajesh ne socha ki yeh kapde anamika ko deta hua nikal jaunga........



rajesh ne driver se kehke gaadi hostel se thori dooor hi rukwa di thi..... woh nhi chahta tha ki driver use kisi ladki se baat karta hua dekhe.... Hostel pahunch ke usne anamika ko ek ladki dwara bahar bulwa liya......



Anamika - kya hua tumhe jaana nahi hai kya.....



Rajesh - jaana hai yrrrr.....



Anamika - toh wapas q aaye idhar phir se......



Rajesh - woh main shadi ke lie shopping krne gaya tha toh mujhe wahan ek suit acha laga toh maine tumhare liye le liya..... wahi dene aaya hun....



phir Rajesh ne kapde ka packet anamika ko pakda diya.....



Anamika - areee pagal..... jab wapas aate tab de dete...... bilawajah tumhe phir idhar se wapas jaana oaregae......



Rajesh - mujhe wapas isi taraf se jaana hai.....samjhiiiii....



Anamika - hnnn samjh gayi..... ab jao warna bahut raat ho jaegi tumhe ghar pahunchte pahunchte.....



Rajesh - hnnn.... ab main nikalta hun 4 baje rhe hain..... byeeee.....



Anamika - byeeee.....



finally rajesh wahan se nikal gaya jhansi ke liye...... usne gaadi ka music system on kiya...... gaana bhi uske mnnn ke hisaab ka baj rha tha.......



Jise dekh mera dil dhadkaa
Meri jaan tadapti hai
Koi jannat ki wo hoor nahi
Mere college ki ek ladki hai



waise gaane ke hisaab se rajesh ka bhi scene yahi tha....... ghar pahuncte pahunchte raat ke 9 baj gaye the...... woh jaise hi ghar ke andar dakhil hua uski maa ne use gale se laga liya......



Upasna - kaise ho beta.....



Rajesh - theek hun..... maa tum kaisi ho......



Upasna - theeek hun..... aur bahut der kar di aane main.....



Rajesh - hnnn woh main apne lie kapde lene laga tha......



Upasna - acha.....



bahar se baba bhi aate dikhe rajesh ko......jaise hi baba andar aaye usne pairon ko chuke unka ashirwaad liya.....



Rajesh - parnam baba.....



virendra - pranam beta..... kaise ho.....



Rajesh - main thik hun aap kaise ho....



Virendra - main thik hun..... ab andar chal ki darwaze par hi khada rehega.....



Rajesh - hnnnn chaliye..... baba



rajesh abhi haal main pahuncha hi tha ki saamne wale rooom se rajneesh nikal ke bahar aa gaya.....



Rajneesh - aaa gaya chotu.....kaisa hai tu....



Rajesh - hnnnn bhaiya..... main thik hun.... aap kaise ho....



Rajneesh - main thik hun..... chal aaja khana khate hain.....



Rajesh - hnnnn aap baitho main bag rakhke aata hun room se.....



Rajneesh - thik hai.....



Phir rajesh wahan se apne room ki taraf chala gaya..... aur rajneesh aur virendra baith gaye khane ke liye..... thori der baad rajesh bhi aake unke saath baith gaya..... maa use apne haathon se khana paros rhi thi......



Rajesh - bsss kar maaa.....



Upasna - bsss q karun...... jitna diya hai utna kha..... jyada naanukkad mat kar..... kitna dubla ho gaya.....



Rajesh - kahan dubla hua hun maaa.....



Upasna - chup baith kar kha..... main kya jhuth bolungi..... tujhe khane ko nahi dete the kya..... aye jiiii.....



Virendra - hnnnn bolo kya hua.....



Upasna - abki brrr ise paise thore jyada de dena.... wahan yeh apni pasand ki cheezein leke khata rehega......



Rajneesh yeh sunke ghoorne laga rajesh ko aur sochne ki raju sahi kehta tha mere maa baap is rajesh ko kuch jyada hi maante hain.....



Virendra - acha.... bhagyawaan......



Rajesh - waise maa bhai ka rishta kahan se kiya hai.......



Upasna - aree beta tu rajan ji ko jaanta hai.... jo apne bhageeche ke peeche wale ghar main rehte hain.......



Rajesh - hnnnnn jaanta hun maa.....



Upasna - unhi ki beti malti banegi teri bhabhi......



Aaj ke lie itna hi.....
Continued.....

flashback mein ek simplicity hai, ek shaadgi.... kayi baar aisa hota hi ki writers kuch extra dikhane koshish mein aise pehlu aur mod add kar dete hai ki kahani ka flashback hi complicated ho jaaye... Jab ki flashback hota hi hai uljhe huye baaton ko suljha dena... well ye flashback aisa nahi hai balki ek flow sath dilchasp tarike se aage badh raha hai.... taaki aage ke saawalo ka jawab mil jaaye...
so judayi ke un palon ke baad aakhir kar ghar lout aaya rajesh....
waise ghar pe ek ghatana ghar gayi jo shayad aage aane wale waqt mein karwahat leke aaye rishto mein ...
rajaneesh ki soch..... uski ye soch ki usse zyada uske bhai ko zyada importance dete hai uske mata pita...
lekin maa baap ka pyar auladon ke liye ek saaman hota hai... are wo to rajesh bahar rehta hai aur itne dino baad ghar aaya hai, isliye laal pyar kar rahe hai usko...
rajneesh nakaratmak soch ke chalte ye nahi pa raha hai ki uske dwara kiye gaye us chori ke baad bhi ushe maaf kar uske liye dukan bhi khol diya uske pita ne... taaki padhayi likhayi na hone ke baad bhi wo apne pero pe khada ho sake...
Khair....
Yahan sabse bada mod aaya hai... wo ye ki jis malti se pichaa chhuda rahi thi rajneesh, jisko laalchi aurat keh ke apni jindgi se rafa dafa kar diya tha ab usi se shaadi karne jaa raha hai rajneesh...
ye shayad sabse badi galti rajneesh ki jo us nageen ko biwi banake ghar leke aa raha hai... wo bhi sab kuch jaan ke bhi....
malti jarur aag laga degi is hanste khelte pariwar mein....
Maybe usike chalte rajesh bhi door ho jaaye apni chaahat anamika se

Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai kahani ke jariye writer ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi thi ..

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

inteaaaaar rehega...

Intezaar khatam.....
SANJU ( V. R. ) aalu waqt mile to is kahani ko padhiyega jarur....

 

[Villain1825]

flashback mein ek simplicity hai, ek shaadgi.... kayi baar aisa hota hi ki writers kuch extra dikhane koshish mein aise pehlu aur mod add kar dete hai ki kahani ka flashback hi complicated ho jaaye... Jab ki flashback hota hi hai uljhe huye baaton ko suljha dena... well ye flashback aisa nahi hai balki ek flow sath dilchasp tarike se aage badh raha hai.... taaki aage ke saawalo ka jawab mil jaaye...
so judayi ke un palon ke baad aakhir kar ghar lout aaya rajesh....
waise ghar pe ek ghatana ghar gayi jo shayad aage aane wale waqt mein karwahat leke aaye rishto mein ...
rajaneesh ki soch..... uski ye soch ki usse zyada uske bhai ko zyada importance dete hai uske mata pita...
lekin maa baap ka pyar auladon ke liye ek saaman hota hai... are wo to rajesh bahar rehta hai aur itne dino baad ghar aaya hai, isliye laal pyar kar rahe hai usko...
rajneesh nakaratmak soch ke chalte ye nahi pa raha hai ki uske dwara kiye gaye us chori ke baad bhi ushe maaf kar uske liye dukan bhi khol diya uske pita ne... taaki padhayi likhayi na hone ke baad bhi wo apne pero pe khada ho sake...
Khair....
Yahan sabse bada mod aaya hai... wo ye ki jis malti se pichaa chhuda rahi thi rajneesh, jisko laalchi aurat keh ke apni jindgi se rafa dafa kar diya tha ab usi se shaadi karne jaa raha hai rajneesh...
ye shayad sabse badi galti rajneesh ki jo us nageen ko biwi banake ghar leke aa raha hai... wo bhi sab kuch jaan ke bhi....
malti jarur aag laga degi is hanste khelte pariwar mein....
Maybe usike chalte rajesh bhi door ho jaaye apni chaahat anamika se

Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai kahani ke jariye writer ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi thi ..

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

thnkq...
keep supporting...

 

[Naina]

thnkq...
keep supporting...

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[rusty blade]

UPDATE - 7
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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venky rocky ka game baja ke apne ghar wapas aa gaya....

time dekha toh 9 baj gaye the raaat ke.....

VENKY - (mnnn main) saala bahut time lag gaya venky ke kaand main.....

khana bahar se khake aaya tha islie khana banane ki koi tension nahi thiiii.....

phir usne apne kapde utare aur chal diya fresh hone...
fresh hoke bahar aaya aur mirror ke saamne khade ho ke apni body ko dekhne laga.....

Venky ki body kaafi kasi hui thi..... uske badan main chest par 3 goliyon ke nishan jaise the.....usne ek nishaan par haath phera aur kehne laga.....

VENKY - ek toh khatm do aur bache hai yeh nishan dene wale.....

dusre ko is mobile se pakdunga phir teesre ka bhi kuch pata chal hi jayega....aur mobile ko dekhne laga.... Bosss i am coming.....

phir venky apne bed pe let gaya aur kuch sochne laga......
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FLASHBACK
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LOCATION - DELHI
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4 saal pehle ki baat hai venky ne apna admission mumbai ke kisi government school main karaya tha aur wahan ke principal se baat kr li thi ki sir main sirf exam dene aaunga....

pehle toh principal ne bahut aanakani ki phir venky ne bahut minnatein ki tab principal sir se use approval de diya....

phir venky mumbai se delhi aa gaya tha... aur din bhar bsss ghoomta rehta tha...

Ek roz venky raat main bahar ghooom raha tha ki tabhi kuch ladke aaye (un ladkon ki age lagbhag 23-24 saal hogiiii)....

Un logon se chaku dikhate hue kaha jitna bhi rokda hai
de de warna jaaan se maara jayega bache.....

venky ne 500 rupaye pocket se nikaal ke de diye.....

LADKA 2 - aur dena be warna abhi maar dunga.....

VENKY - mere paas aur kuch nahi hai.....

LADKA 1 - Yeh jo locket latak raha chain ke saath ise de....

venky ne apna locket pakda aur bhagne laga abhi thori hi door gaya tha ki piche se ladke ne chaku faink kar maara aur woh venky ke pair main ja ke laga....

venky muh ke side road par gira tha..... jiski wajah se uske muh main dard toh ho hi rha tha saath main chaku lagne ki wajah se pair main asehneeey peeda thi....

woh ladke bhi venky ki taraf doud kar aane lage..... venky ne piche mudkar dekha toh woh log kaafi paas aa gaye the....

usne uthne ko try kiya lekin uth hi nahi paaya.... bhaagna toh bahut door ki baat thi....

ek ladka paas aaya aur apna pair chaku pe rakh kar use aur ghusane laga.....

venky dard ki wajah se bahut zor cheenkha......

aaaaahhhhh...... bachooooooooo.... koi...haiiiiii.....helppppp......meee........bachooooooo.......aaaaaaahhhhhhhh.......chorrrrrr.....dooooo.....mujhe...........

itne main hi saamne se ek gaaadi aati hui dikhayi di gaadi main se us admi ne dekha ki kuch ladke ek ladke ko maaar rahe hain....

toh usne gaadi ek kinare roki aur apni revolver le ke bahar nikla...

rovolver dekhte hi woh saare ladke bhaaag gaye.... ab wahan road par pada tha venky woh us ladke ke paaas aaaya aur pooochne laga kaun the yeh log....

VENKY - mujhe nahi pata main bahar tehelne ke liye nikla tha unlogon ne mujhe chaaku dikha kar lootne ki koshish mera locket lene lage toh main bhaga toh un logon ne chaku maar diya mere pair main....

acha mera naam rocky hai chalo hospital chalte hai tmhara bahut khooon nikal raha hai.....

(sahi samjhe yeh wahi rocky hai jisko villain/venky ne maara diya tha last update main......)

VENKY - main chal nahi paunga bahut dard hi raha hai...

phir rocky ne use sahara dekar apni car tak laaya aur usme piche wali seat par lita diya...

phir chal diya hospital....

hospital wahan se 5 km par tha jaaate jaaate 20 min lag gaye qki traffic acha khasa tha... qki abhi raaat ke 8 hi baje the....

hospital pahunch ke use emergency ward main le gaya sahara deke....

qki sabhi doctor raaat main jyadatar emergency ward main hi HoTe hainnn....

wahan pahunch ke doctor ko bula ke laya rocky pehle toh doctor ne poocha kaise hua yeh rocky ne bataya ki kuch ladkon ne chaku maar diya.......

toh doctor ne kaha yeh police case hai pehle police ko aa Jane do tabhi treatment hoga.... rocky ne chupke use 5000 hazaar rupaye pakdaye.....

phir doctor poochne laga kahan hai patient..... (paise ke aage bhoot bhaagte hai toh yeh doctor kya cheeez hai) .....

ROCKY - aapke cabin main....

phir doctor ne nurse ko bola samaan lane ko aur khud chal diya cabin main thori der main nurse samaan le ke aa gayi toh lag gaya doctor kaaam pe.......

phir uske ghaaw ko doctor ne cotton se saaaf kiya aur
aur taanke lagane lage qki bahut jyada cut lag gaya tha pair main.....

taanke lagake bandage kr dia ghaaw ko aur dard ki tablet de di....

Venky ne use kha liya..... phir thori der baad.....

ROCKY - chalen ab ghar agar aaram ho toh...

VENKY - hnnn chalo...

Phir venky rocky ke sahare ke saaath car tak aaya aur baith gaya.....

ROCKY gaadi chalane laga phir venky ne apne rooom ka pata bataya.... 25 minute lage pahunchne main....

ROCKY - tum kya karte ho.....

VENKY - kuch nahiiiii...

ROCKY - koi kaaam karoge agar milega....

VENKY - hnnn zarooor.....

ROCKY - yeh lo mera card jab thik ho jaaana achese tabhi aaana.... thik hai....

VENKY - jiii thik haiiii..
bye bro..... nd thanks for the help aaj kal ke zamane koi nahi karta..... thanq so much....

ROCKY - ok ok ab jao..... aur aaram se jaana.....

PHIR rocky bhi chal diya apni manzil par aur venky bhi apne ghar ki taraf......
continued......

aaj ke liye itna hi.....
keep supporting

ViLLaiN

nice update....

Venky has some emotional attachment with the locket that he was willing to risk his life for the locket....

Venky and Rocky's first meeting... Rocky helps him... what went wrong later that resulted into turning of a good relationship to animosity.... lets see...

Good going....

 

[rusty blade]

UPDATE - 8
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LOCATION - DELHI
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PLACE - VENKY's ROOM
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FLASHBACK CONTINUED......
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venky par hue hamle ko aaj 10 din ho gaye the uska ghaaw bhi ab bhar gaya tha aur taanke bhi cut gaye the.....

woh apne rooom main tehel raha tha...

phir use yaad aata hai ki ROCKY ne usko apna card diya tha.... woh use doodne lagta hai.....

par use yddd nahi aa raha tha ki kahan rakha hua hai card....

phir woh chair par baith jaata hai aur sochne lagta hai ki tabhi......

use woh card bed ke niche pada hua dikhayi deta hai woh jhatttt se use utha leta hai...aur uski location dekhta hai.....

phir venky fresh hota hai aur kapde pehen ke ghar se bahar nikalta hai.....

aur main road par aata hai aur auto ko rokta hai.... aur address bata ke bolta hai yahan chaloge.....

auto wala kehta hai chalenge q nahiiii sahab baithiye..... lekin 100 rupaye bhada lagega.....

VENKY - hnnn bhai aaap chalo......

phir auto wala chal deta hai aur ek bade se bunglow ke aage auto rok deta hai....

venky use paise dekar rafuchakkar karta hai.... aur chal deta hai gate ke paasss.....
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PLACE - BOSS's BUNGLOW
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GATEKEEPER - hnnn bhai kisse milna???

VENKY - ROCKY bhai se.....

GATEKEEPER - naam kya hai???

VENKY - Jiii Venky.....

GATEKEEPER - okkk... ruko poooch lun sahab se....

phir gatekeeper rocky ko phone laga deta hai aur kehta hai ki koi venky naaam ka ladka aaya hai kehta hai rocky bhai se milna hai....

saamne se....... bhej do use andar.....

GATEKEEPER - Jiii bhai.....

phir gatekeeper gate kholta hai aur venky andar aata hai....

gatekeeper kehta aap chale jao andar haaal main hi sahab baithe hue hain....

phir venky andar jaane lagta hai ek nazar bunglow ko dekhta hai kaafi badi jagah main bana hua tha white colour se ranga hua tha aur bunglow ke saamne ek bahut bada garden tha....

jisme tarah tarah ke ped-podhe lage hue the..... left side main servant quarters bane hue the....

ek cheez venky ne notice kiya ki wahan security bahut hai gate pe hi 2 gurads khade the aur boundary par kayi guards pehra de rahe the tehelte hue....

Venky stairs pe chadte hue ghar ke andar dakhil hua.... saamne sofe par use rocky baitha dikh gaya....

aur saaath main koi aur bhi baitha hua tha....

ROCKY - aao venky ab pair kaisa hai tmhara....

VENKY - jiii thik hai ab.... aapne bulaya tha islie aa gaya....
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ROCKY - inse milo yeh hai boss.... main inke liye hi kaaam karta hun....


VENKY - venky boss ko dekhta hai haath jod ke pranaam karta hai....

BOSS - toh kaunsa kaam kar lete ho....

VENKY - sir main hacking main maahir hun....

BOSS - rocky ek kaaam karo isko 2 mahine ki training ke liye uk bhejne ka intezaaam kro...

qki hacking toh ise aaati hi hai saaath main agar fight karna seekh gaya... toh banda bahut kaaam ka hai yeh....

VENKY - lekin aaplog kaam kaunsa karte ho???

BOSS - jab laut kar aaoge tab batayenge....

theek hai ab jao room main rest kro.... aaj se tum yahin rahoge.....

phir rocky use 2nd floor pe le jata hai.... aur uska room dikha ke bolta hai....

thori der rest kr lo abhi paasport banane ke liye thori der main ek aadmi ayega.... toh thori der rest karke apne ghar se documents le aana.....

aur hnnnn driver ko bol dena woh gaadi se leke chala jayega tumhe......

VENKY - OK.....

phir thor der rest karta hai phir uthke fresh hota hai... aur bahar aata hai...

ek driver se kehta hai gaadi nikalo mere ghar chalna hai.... phir driver gaadi nikaalta hai aur venky usme baithta hai phir chal dete hain....

venky ghar pe pahunch ke apne saare documents aur zaroorat ka samaan aur kapde le leta hai aur ek bag main rakhkar bahar aata hai....

aur makaan malik ko keys aur baaki ka rent dekar kehta hai ki ab woh kahin aur shift ho raha hai....

phir gaadi main baithke woh wapas aa jata hai.... haal main dakhil hota hai toh pata chalta hai ki paasport banane wala aa gaya hai....

woh use zaroorat ke hisaab se documents deta hai....

aur phir paasport officer kehta hai 3 din main aapka paasport ready ho jaega visa ke saaath aaap taiyari kro jaane ki....

VENKY - taiyari kya karni hai.. mujhe aap paasport jaise doge... bsss meri taiyaari ho jaegi....

paasport officer - ok..... toh phir main chalta hun....

phir paasport officer uthke jaane lagta hai.....

AFTER 3 DAYS.......

venky airport par baitha hua tha saath main rocky bhi tha.. aur saath main thi ek ladki jo ki venky ke saath ja rhi thi.....

ROCKY - dekho jahan tum ja rhe ho wahan se tum ek undefeatable fighter banne kj koshish karna.... pehle toh woh tumhe sikhayenge fight karna aur uske baad hogi fight.....

yddd rakhna venky death fighting hoti hai wahan pe..... main tmhara intezaar karunga....

ROCKY - Best of luck bro.....

VENKY - thanks bro.... waise main aapko nirash nahi karunga....

ROCKY - Theek hai... tmhare saath nisha ko bhej raha hun yeh tmhare khane pine ka khayal rakhegi.....

ROCKY - bye.....

VENKY - bye....

phir venky aur nisha chal dete hain apni manzil ki taraf......

aaj ke liye itna hi....
continued....

Venky meets Rocky again....
Boss appears to be shady person.... too tight security!!!

Venky reaches UK.... lets see what unfolds....!!!

Writer is maintaining thrill part fairly well.... good going...

review of other updates later!!!!

 

[Villain1825]

Waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting for next update

sham main

 

[Villain1825]

nice update....

Venky has some emotional attachment with the locket that he was willing to risk his life for the locket....

Venky and Rocky's first meeting... Rocky helps him... what went wrong later that resulted into turning of a good relationship to animosity.... lets see...

Good going....

thnkq...
keep supporting...

 

[Villain1825]

Venky meets Rocky again....
Boss appears to be shady person.... too tight security!!!

Venky reaches UK.... lets see what unfolds....!!!

Writer is maintaining thrill part fairly well.... good going...

review of other updates later!!!!

thnkq...
keep supporting...

 

[Vickyabhi]

Wonderful updates