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haan, bhai likh hi raha hu, jitna bhi poora hoga 7 am tak post kar dunga, baki ka 11 am tak.bhai update likh rahe ho kya
haan, bhai likh hi raha hu, jitna bhi poora hoga 7 am tak post kar dunga, baki ka 11 am tak.bhai update likh rahe ho kya
Jabardast update hai bhai...... Jitu richa ko akhir bacha liya or richa ke maan me bhi ab jitu ke liye bhavnay aane lagi......dekhte hai kaise richa jitu ko aoni man ki baat batati hai.....Nice updates waiting for complete
Intejar haihaan, bhai likh hi raha hu, jitna bhi poora hoga 7 am tak post kar dunga, baki ka 11 am tak.
Superb Anand bhai......SAAND
UPDATE- 268 (A)
Richa & Jitu Special
Thakurain gusse me doctor ko maarne ke liye uthi to dard ki vajah se uth nahi payi aur bistar me gir gayi…phir se uthne ko huyi to nurses ne usko pakad liya darte darte..
Doctor—thakurain, aap ke bachche ko hamne nahi mara balki aap ko yaha lane se pahle hi uski mout to pet me goli lagne se ho chuki thi..
Thakurain (chillate huye)—chale jao yaha se….mujhe akeli chhod do…jao yaha se sab….mujhe akeli chhod do…
Udhar dusri taraf jitu registan me aur chodu gang jungle ki khak chhante huye bhatak rahe the…
Ab aage……
Jitu registan me richa ko talash karte huye bhatak raha tha..lekin vaha to door door tak ret ke siwa kuch nazar hi nahi aa raha tha…har gujarte pal ke sath uski vyagrata teevra hoti ja rahi thi..mann aur mastisk tanaav se vyakul ho raha tha.. use samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo akhir itne vishal registan me apni richa didi ko kaha dhonde…? Iss chinta aur vyakulta ne uski ankho me nami ka roop le liya tha…jo ki uski aantarik manodasha ka bhali bhanti chitran kar rahi thi.
Jitu (tension)—ek hi ghanta bacha hai…na jane meri richa didi kaha aur kis haal me hongi…? Vo ummid kar rahi hongi ki main unhe bachane jarur aaunga, lekin main kya karu... ? kaha talash karu unko... ? uss langde baba ne to yahi bataya tha ki vo log richa didi ko registan ki taraf le kar gaye hain lekin yaha to ret ke alawa kuch nazar hi nahi aa raha hai...hey bhagwan, meri madad kar.
Jitu yahi sab sochte huye vichlit ho kar registan ki garam ret me dar dar bhatak raha tha. Black star ne samayavadhi poori hone par jo karne ko kaha tha, uske vishay me soch kar hi uska dil kaamp uthta tha.
Viyog me hriday jalta hai aur ankhe barasti hain. Inn ankho ko bhi barasna chahiye, kyon ki inhone hi to richa ki sundar chhavi ko hriday tak pahuchaya. Hriday ka isme kya dosh..?
Pahle jo ankhe richa ki sundar chhavi ko dekh dekh kar prasann hoti thi, tript hoti thi, vahi ankhe aaj ashru bahati phir rahi thi. Iss sansar me sachcha prem karne wale log bahut kam dikhte hain. Jaise hi do premiyo ke beech ke prem ki sugandh, aabhaas logo ko milta hai, sab unke vipreet ho jate hain. Mata-Pita, Bhai-Bandhu, Naate-Rishtedar, koi sath nahi deta. Yeh samaaj to sada se hi prem virodhi raha hai par shayad vidhata ko bhi sachche premiyo se chidh hai, tabhi to vah viyog ki sena saja kar premi yuglo par toot padta hai.
Richa ne beshak jitu se vaisa prem na kiya ho kintu jitu ne to use apne dil ki gaharaiyo se chaha hai. Vah richa ke ab taj na milne par vichlit jarur hai kintu uske mann me nirasha ke liye koi sthan nahi hai, har haal me asha bani huyi hai. Use apne antarman ki pukar aur prem par bharosa hai ki kabhi to vah richa tak pahuch hi jayega.
Ret me chalte chalte jitu ko kafi samay ho chuka tha. Kintu abhi tak richa tak pahuchne ka koi marg nazar nahi aaya tha. Samay dekhne ke liye usne mobile par nazar dali to uske dil ki dhadkane kisi ashanka se tezi se dhadakne lagi kyon ki samay ka pahiya to apni hi gati se nirantar chalta rahta hai jo kisi ke liye nahi rukta, aur vahi samay ka pahiya nirdharit samayavadhi ke bahut karib pahuch chuka tha. Richa tak na pahuch pane ki pida ne uski ankho se bahte ashru dhara ke pravah ko bhi tez kar diya tha.
Jitu (tension)—ohh no..ye time bhi kitni tezi se bhag raha hai…? Richa didi tak pahuchna to door, mujhe abhi tak ye bhi pata nahi chal paya ki vo hain kaha…? Lekin vo log didi ko yaha registan me le kar kyo ayenge…? Aisa to nahi ki vo log kahi dusri jagah le gaye ho aur main yaha time barbad kar raha hu…?
Ye soch kar vo registan se bahar ki taraf chal pada..registan se bahar nikalte hi usne ek bar phir se time dekhne ke liye mobile nikala to usme ek massage aane ka alert tone baja..jo ki kisi unknown number se bheja gaya tha..usne massage khol kar dekha to dekhte hi chounk gaya aur phir tezi se gadi le kar ek taraf chala gaya.
Jitu (tension)—ohh shitt..ye massage to 2 ghante pahle ka bheja hua hai, shayad registan me network na milne ke karan mujhe mila nahi.
Speed me gadi chalate huye uske mann me kuch din pahle ki vo tasveer ubharne lagi jab vo raj ke birthday me shamil hone ke baad richa ko le kar vapis ghar louta tha aur raj ke bataye idea par amal karne ka faisla kiya tha. Usne sabse pahle apni maa nirmala ko mangal sutra pahna kar apni taraf karne ka socha tha lekin richa ke aa jane se vo aisa nahi kar paya.
Agli subah usne kuch soch kar richa ko raj ke bataye rarike se hi neckless ke sath me mangal sutra pahnane hi wala tha ki ussi samay richa ke pair me cockroch chadh gaya aur uski ankhe khul gayi.
Ankhe khulte hi uski nazar neckless ke sath me lipte mangal sutra par chali gayi jisse uska gussa bhadak gaya. Gussa bhadakte hi usne jitu ki jamkar pitayi kar di. Jitu apne bachav me jhuth bolta gaya lekin richa aaj uski iss harkat se bahut jyada gusse me aa gayi thi, uske upar jitu ki kisi baat ka asar nahi hua. Pitayi ke sath sath usne jitu ko khoob sunaya bhi. Yaha tak ki uski maa nirmala ko bhi pata chal gaya aur usne bhi jitu ko bonus me do char thappad ka inam de diya.
Jitu ka dil buri tarah se toot chuka tha, iss baat se nahi ki richa ne use thappad mara, balki uski kadwi baato ne uske dil ke armano ko chaknachur kar ke rakh diya tha. Ab vaha ek pal bhi rukna uske liye mushkil ho raha tha isliye usne apna samaan pack kar ke vapis amilpur lout jane ka faisla kar liya.
Jane se pahle vo ek bar phir se richa se milne uske room me gaya lekin use dekhte hi richa ek bar phir uss par baras padi aur use apne room se bhagane me lag gayi.
Jitu ne jate jate ek bar phir se richa ke samne apne pyar ka izhar kiya aur saaf shabdo me kah diya ki uske jeevan me richa ke alawa koi dusri ladki kabhi nahi ayegi. Lekin richa ne uski baat poori sune bina hi use bahar nikal ke room ka darwaja band kar liya aur jitu udas mann se ghar se chupchap nikal gaya.
Jitu ne apne mobile par google ki help se massage wali location dekhte huye tezi se chala ja raha tha aur lagbhag 3 ghante ka safar usne ek ghante me hi tay kar liya.
Vaha pahuchte hi usne gadi khadi kar ke tezi se daudne laga. Ye vahi jagah thi jaha par uski mulaqat uss langde admi se huyi thi. Use uss langde admi par bahut gussa aa raha tha. Manzil ke itne karib hone par bhi uss langde ne use manzil se bahut door bhej diya tha.
Vo tezi se jungle ke bhitar ghus gaya aur bhagne ki koshish karne laga. Halanki iss prayas me kaante wali jhadiyo ki vajah se use kayi jagah kharoch bhi aa gayi kintu use inn sab ki parwah nahi thi.
Daudte huye jab vo jungle ke kafi andar pahuch gaya to ek bar phir se confusion me pad gaya ki ab vo yaha se kidhar jaye.. ? kintu tabhi uske kano me kisi ke cheekhne ki awaz ke sath goli chalne ki awaz bhi sunayi padi to vah turant uss disha me daud pada. Kuch door bhagne par use ek gufa jaisi jagah dikhayi padi. Chillane ki awaz abhi bhi lagatar udhar se hi aa rahi thi.
Jab vo vaha pahucha to gufa ke bahar kuch log aapas me ladte huye firing karne me lage huye the. Do logo ki laash niche padi huyi thi. Jitu ko dekhte hi unhone uss par bhi firing shuru kar di. Jitu unse ulajh gaya lekin tabhi ek bar phir se gufa ke bhitar se cheekhne ki awaz aayi. Iss awaz ko jitu bhali bhanti pahchanta tha.vo gunde jitu ki taraf ek sath badhe lekin tabhi do logo ne kahi se aa kar unke upar goli chalani start kar di.
Jitu iss mouke ka fayda utha kar turant hi uss gufa me ghus gaya. Gufa kafi lambi thi aur andar bahut ghana andhera bhi tha. Raste me vah kayi jagah kisi patthar jaisi cheez se takra kar gira aur uth kar phir bhagne laga kintu kuch aur aage jane par use roshni nazar aane lagi.
Vaha pahuchte hi jitu ki ankho ne jo dekha use dekhte hi uski ankhe chhalak uthi aur agle hi pal uski ankho se bahte inn anshuo ne sailab ka roop le liya.
Uski ankho ke samne do darinde richa se lipte huye the. Richa ka poora chehra anshuo se bhiga hua tha, uske kapde kayi jagah se phat chuke the aur vo rote huye jor jor se chillaye ja rahi thi. Uske hotho ke kinaro se khoon ki patli lakir bah rahi thi.
Jitu (chillate huye)—madarchoddddd…
Ye dekhte hi jitu ne tezi se aage badh kar ek admi ko pakad kar richa ke upar se door phenk diya. Jabki dusra admi kuch samajh pata ki usse pahle hi jitu ne ek laat uske muh par maar ke use bhi richa ke upar se hata diya. Jitu ko dekhte hi richa bilakh padi. Jitu ne jaise hi uska hath pakad kar uthaya, vo jor se uske seene se lipat kar rone lagi.
Richa (rote huye)—jituuuuu..
Jitu (sir me hath pherte huye)—aap ro mat ..main aa gaya hu..
Jitu sir me hath pherte huye richa ko samjha raha tha, tab tak vo dono gunde bhi sambhal chuke the. Unme se ek ne richa ka hath pakad kar use apni taraf khichne laga to jitu ne ek mukka uske muh par maar diya jisse vo niche gir gaya.
Jitu (gusse me)—madarchoddd….tune hath kaise lagaya…?
Jitu uss par laat ghunso ki barish karne laga ..uske ek hath pakad kar tod diya lekin iss chakkar me uska dhyan pahle wale gunde ki taraf se hat gaya, iska fayda utha kar usne apni jagah lete lete hi jitu ke upar chaku phenk kar maar diya jo ki ja kar jitu ke hath me ghus gaya. Ye dekh kar richa ki cheekh nikal gayi.
Richa (chilla kar)—jituuuu
Hath me chaku ghuste hi jitu ka dhyan gundo ki taraf se kuch seconds ke liye hat gaya, itne me jisne chaku mara tha, usne ek bar phir richa ko daboch liya aur uska kurta piche se phad diya.
Richa—aaaaaaa…jituuuuu..
Richa ke chillane se jitu ka dhyan uski taraf gaya to usne bina mouka ganwaye apne hath me laga chaku nikal kar uss gunde ki taraf phenk kar maar diya jo uske maathe me ja ghusa aur vo dard me chillate huye bejaan laash ki tarah niche gir gaya.
Uske niche girte hi jitu dusre gunde se bhid gaya. Kabhi jitu usko patakta to kabhi vah jitu ko. Gufa pattharo ki thi jisse dono ko chot lag rahi thi lekin jitu ka ek hath jakhmi ho chuka tha pahle hi jisme se khoon bah raha tha phir bhi usne iski parwah na karte huye uss gunde ka sir pakad kar deewar me jor se maar diya jisse uska sir phat gaya aur vo vahi dher ho gaya.
Uske girte hi richa ek bar phir daud kar jitu se lipat gayi rote huye. Richa ne jaldi se apna phata hua kurta nikal kar jitu ke hath me baandh diya. Jitu ne use apni shirt utar kar pahna di.
Jitu (hotho se khoon saaf karte huye)—mere hote huye aap ko kuch nahi hoga didi..
Jitu apne dard ko bhul kar richa ka hath pakad kar use bahar le jane laga, richa bar bar jitu ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi. Bahar nikala to vaha gundo ki laashe padi huyi thi. Jitu ye dekh kar chounk gaya ki akhir inhe kisne mara…? Akhir koun hai jisne uski madad ki ..? usne apne charo taraf dekha lekin vaha koi nazar nahi aaya to vah richa ko le kar jungle se bahar nikal gaya.
Richa use le kar sabse pahle doctor ke paas gayi jaha patti karwane ke baad dono vapis ghar ke liye chal pade. Richa ektak jitu ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi.
Richa—dard jyada ho raha hai…?
Jitu—nahi
Richa—jitu, tujhe kaise malum pada ki main yaha hu... ?
Jitu—bas pata chal gaya..lekin aap inke hath kaise lag gayi... ?
Richa—maine ek private school me teaching start kar di hai..vahi jane ke liye ghar se nikli hi thi tabhi kuch gunde aa gaye aur mujhe jabardasti pakad kar yaha le aaye. Agar aaj tu nahi aata to...main kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi rahti..
Jitu—apne jeete jee main aap ke sath kuch bhi galat nahi hone dunga..
Iske baad raste me jitu ne uske liye naye kapde kharide aur phir ek bade hotel me khana khane le gaya. Richa ne ghar me phone kar ke apni maa ko sab bata diya.
Richa ko aaj apne andar kuch alag hi feelings mahsoos ho rahi thi. Pahli bar uska dil uske swabhav ke vipreet soch raha tha. Jitu ki kahi huyi har baat aaj use yaad aa rahi thi kintu vo sab yaad aane par aaj richa ko gussa nahi aa raha tha.
Pyar,Ishq aur Mohabbat, khuda ki ibadat ki tarah hai..pyar ka ehsaas hi itna khas hota hai ki vah patjhad ke mousam me bhi baharo si thandak deta hai, aur garmi ki tapan bhi barish ki boondo si lagti hai. Bure halaat bhi bure nahi lagte aur har pal uske sath hone ka ehsaas aapko akela nahi chhodta. Lekin agar aap iss pyar ko mahsoos hi na kar paye to ye aapke liye jarur nuksan ki baat hai. Pyar agar hai to use mahsoos kar ke dekhiye, kyon ki duniya me pyar se behtar koi ehsaas nahi.
Yahi ehsaas aaj pahli bar richa ko ho raha tha. Vah bar bar jitu ke khyalo me doob ja rahi thi. Aaj uske baare me sochna use achcha lag raha tha. Kahi bhi jati to uski nazre anayas hi jitu ko dhoondne lagti. Richa ko bhi ye ehsaas ho chuka tha ki shayad vo jitu ko chahne lagi hai. Uska dil har pal jitu ka sath chah raha tha.
Vahi hotel me..
Tanu—ye to sach me mujhse naraz ho gaya..ab kya karu…? (kuch soch kar kaan me)…mere sath me susu karega…?
Raj—kyaaa…?
Tanu (dhire se)—vahi jo tune suna…bata na, mere sath susu karega…?
Raj—tum sach kah rahi ho na... ? kya tum sach me mere sath susu karogi…?
Tanu—agar tera mann hoga to jarur karungi…lekin tujhe bhi vada karna hoga ki meri har baat manega..
Raj (khush)—manunga, tumhari har baat manunga…chalo jaldi se susu karte hain..
Tanu (ankho me dekhte huye)—raj, tum mujhe aise hi hamesha pyar karoge na…?
Raj—haan karunga na..ab jaldi chalo susu karne..
Tanu—raj, pls, ye baat kisi ko batana mat ki maine tere samne susu ki hai..
Raj—kisi ko nahi bataunga..pakka nahi bataunga..ab chalo bhi jaldi..
Main tanu didi ka hath pakad kar bathroom me le gaya…aur jaldi se apna pant niche khiska diya..tanu abhi bhi niche sir kiye huye poore kapde pahne khadi thi.
Raj—ye kya didi, jaldi se mootne baitho na…
Tanu—mujhe sharam aati hai raj, tere samne main kaise mootne baith jaau... ?
Raj—pahle meri taraf dekho..
Tanu ne jaise hi ankhe kholi to uski ankho ke samne qutub minar aa gaya, jise dekhte hi uski ankhe choudi ho gayi aur uski saans gale me hi atak kar rah gayi, vo hairani se kabhi mere chehre ko to kabhi mere lund ko dekhne lagi.
Tanu (shocked)—omg..ye kya hai…? Itna bada aur mota..! ye kisi ke chote se chhed me kaise ghusega... ? agar jor jabardasti kar ke isne ye hathiyar kisi ke chhed me ghused bhi diya to vah bechari to aadha ghuste hi mar jayegi. Meri to iska topa ghuste hi phat jayegi.
Raj—ohh didi, kya sochne lagi ab... ? dekho didi, agar tum chahti ho ki main tumhe maaf kar du to meri har baat manni hogi..
Tanu (tension)—lekin raj...
Raj—samajh gaya..tum mujhe phir se bewaqoof banaya..jao ab main tumse kabhi baat nahi karunga..main bhavna aur kshama ke paas ja raha hu..
Tanu (hath pakad kar)—ek minute ruk na...achcha baba baithti hu..lekin tu pahle dusri taraf muh kar le.
Raj—kyo.. ? sath me susu karne ki baat huyi thi, vo bhi aamne samne baith kar..(mann me)..teri maa ko chodu, ruk bhosdi, aaj teri bur ko bhosda banata hu main...
Tanu—mujhe sharam aati hai na raj, pls dusri taraf muh kar le na...baad me chahe to idhar kar lena..pls..
Raj--ok
Maine apna muh ghuma liya dusri taraf..Tanu apni jeans utarne hi wali thi ki tabhi darwaje par dastak hone lagi..tanu ghabra kar jaldi se bathroom se bahar nikal gayi..tanu ne ja kar darwaja khola to samne uski hone wali bhabhi aditi khadi thi.
Raj (mann me)—ye madarchod, beech me kaha se aa gayi.. ? itna achcha khasa tanu ki bur dekhne milne wali thi..lagta hai ki iski bur me bhi lund pelna padega.
Aditi—tanu, meri mummy tujhse thodi baat karna chahti hain..chal na..
Tanu—theek hai..raj, main abhi aati hu..
Tanu vaha se aditi ke sath uske room me chali gayi. Uske jate hi main bhi bahar nikal aaya. Bahar niklate hi mera phone bajne laga, jo ki maine aaj hi naya kharida tha kyon ki purana wala to khayi me hi gir gaya tha. Abhi mobile me kisi ke number save nahi kiye the isliye jaldi hi pick kar liya.
Raj—hello..koun..
Caller—STAR,,,,BLACK STAR
Shabd badlte rahe per aapki shabdkala ka mohak sawroop ek pal me hi parfullit kar deta hai.SAAND
UPDATE- 268 (A)
Richa & Jitu Special
Thakurain gusse me doctor ko maarne ke liye uthi to dard ki vajah se uth nahi payi aur bistar me gir gayi…phir se uthne ko huyi to nurses ne usko pakad liya darte darte..
Doctor—thakurain, aap ke bachche ko hamne nahi mara balki aap ko yaha lane se pahle hi uski mout to pet me goli lagne se ho chuki thi..
Thakurain (chillate huye)—chale jao yaha se….mujhe akeli chhod do…jao yaha se sab….mujhe akeli chhod do…
Udhar dusri taraf jitu registan me aur chodu gang jungle ki khak chhante huye bhatak rahe the…
Ab aage……
Jitu registan me richa ko talash karte huye bhatak raha tha..lekin vaha to door door tak ret ke siwa kuch nazar hi nahi aa raha tha…har gujarte pal ke sath uski vyagrata teevra hoti ja rahi thi..mann aur mastisk tanaav se vyakul ho raha tha.. use samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo akhir itne vishal registan me apni richa didi ko kaha dhonde…? Iss chinta aur vyakulta ne uski ankho me nami ka roop le liya tha…jo ki uski aantarik manodasha ka bhali bhanti chitran kar rahi thi.
Jitu (tension)—ek hi ghanta bacha hai…na jane meri richa didi kaha aur kis haal me hongi…? Vo ummid kar rahi hongi ki main unhe bachane jarur aaunga, lekin main kya karu... ? kaha talash karu unko... ? uss langde baba ne to yahi bataya tha ki vo log richa didi ko registan ki taraf le kar gaye hain lekin yaha to ret ke alawa kuch nazar hi nahi aa raha hai...hey bhagwan, meri madad kar.
Jitu yahi sab sochte huye vichlit ho kar registan ki garam ret me dar dar bhatak raha tha. Black star ne samayavadhi poori hone par jo karne ko kaha tha, uske vishay me soch kar hi uska dil kaamp uthta tha.
Viyog me hriday jalta hai aur ankhe barasti hain. Inn ankho ko bhi barasna chahiye, kyon ki inhone hi to richa ki sundar chhavi ko hriday tak pahuchaya. Hriday ka isme kya dosh..?
Pahle jo ankhe richa ki sundar chhavi ko dekh dekh kar prasann hoti thi, tript hoti thi, vahi ankhe aaj ashru bahati phir rahi thi. Iss sansar me sachcha prem karne wale log bahut kam dikhte hain. Jaise hi do premiyo ke beech ke prem ki sugandh, aabhaas logo ko milta hai, sab unke vipreet ho jate hain. Mata-Pita, Bhai-Bandhu, Naate-Rishtedar, koi sath nahi deta. Yeh samaaj to sada se hi prem virodhi raha hai par shayad vidhata ko bhi sachche premiyo se chidh hai, tabhi to vah viyog ki sena saja kar premi yuglo par toot padta hai.
Richa ne beshak jitu se vaisa prem na kiya ho kintu jitu ne to use apne dil ki gaharaiyo se chaha hai. Vah richa ke ab taj na milne par vichlit jarur hai kintu uske mann me nirasha ke liye koi sthan nahi hai, har haal me asha bani huyi hai. Use apne antarman ki pukar aur prem par bharosa hai ki kabhi to vah richa tak pahuch hi jayega.
Ret me chalte chalte jitu ko kafi samay ho chuka tha. Kintu abhi tak richa tak pahuchne ka koi marg nazar nahi aaya tha. Samay dekhne ke liye usne mobile par nazar dali to uske dil ki dhadkane kisi ashanka se tezi se dhadakne lagi kyon ki samay ka pahiya to apni hi gati se nirantar chalta rahta hai jo kisi ke liye nahi rukta, aur vahi samay ka pahiya nirdharit samayavadhi ke bahut karib pahuch chuka tha. Richa tak na pahuch pane ki pida ne uski ankho se bahte ashru dhara ke pravah ko bhi tez kar diya tha.
Jitu (tension)—ohh no..ye time bhi kitni tezi se bhag raha hai…? Richa didi tak pahuchna to door, mujhe abhi tak ye bhi pata nahi chal paya ki vo hain kaha…? Lekin vo log didi ko yaha registan me le kar kyo ayenge…? Aisa to nahi ki vo log kahi dusri jagah le gaye ho aur main yaha time barbad kar raha hu…?
Ye soch kar vo registan se bahar ki taraf chal pada..registan se bahar nikalte hi usne ek bar phir se time dekhne ke liye mobile nikala to usme ek massage aane ka alert tone baja..jo ki kisi unknown number se bheja gaya tha..usne massage khol kar dekha to dekhte hi chounk gaya aur phir tezi se gadi le kar ek taraf chala gaya.
Jitu (tension)—ohh shitt..ye massage to 2 ghante pahle ka bheja hua hai, shayad registan me network na milne ke karan mujhe mila nahi.
Speed me gadi chalate huye uske mann me kuch din pahle ki vo tasveer ubharne lagi jab vo raj ke birthday me shamil hone ke baad richa ko le kar vapis ghar louta tha aur raj ke bataye idea par amal karne ka faisla kiya tha. Usne sabse pahle apni maa nirmala ko mangal sutra pahna kar apni taraf karne ka socha tha lekin richa ke aa jane se vo aisa nahi kar paya.
Agli subah usne kuch soch kar richa ko raj ke bataye rarike se hi neckless ke sath me mangal sutra pahnane hi wala tha ki ussi samay richa ke pair me cockroch chadh gaya aur uski ankhe khul gayi.
Ankhe khulte hi uski nazar neckless ke sath me lipte mangal sutra par chali gayi jisse uska gussa bhadak gaya. Gussa bhadakte hi usne jitu ki jamkar pitayi kar di. Jitu apne bachav me jhuth bolta gaya lekin richa aaj uski iss harkat se bahut jyada gusse me aa gayi thi, uske upar jitu ki kisi baat ka asar nahi hua. Pitayi ke sath sath usne jitu ko khoob sunaya bhi. Yaha tak ki uski maa nirmala ko bhi pata chal gaya aur usne bhi jitu ko bonus me do char thappad ka inam de diya.
Jitu ka dil buri tarah se toot chuka tha, iss baat se nahi ki richa ne use thappad mara, balki uski kadwi baato ne uske dil ke armano ko chaknachur kar ke rakh diya tha. Ab vaha ek pal bhi rukna uske liye mushkil ho raha tha isliye usne apna samaan pack kar ke vapis amilpur lout jane ka faisla kar liya.
Jane se pahle vo ek bar phir se richa se milne uske room me gaya lekin use dekhte hi richa ek bar phir uss par baras padi aur use apne room se bhagane me lag gayi.
Jitu ne jate jate ek bar phir se richa ke samne apne pyar ka izhar kiya aur saaf shabdo me kah diya ki uske jeevan me richa ke alawa koi dusri ladki kabhi nahi ayegi. Lekin richa ne uski baat poori sune bina hi use bahar nikal ke room ka darwaja band kar liya aur jitu udas mann se ghar se chupchap nikal gaya.
Jitu ne apne mobile par google ki help se massage wali location dekhte huye tezi se chala ja raha tha aur lagbhag 3 ghante ka safar usne ek ghante me hi tay kar liya.
Vaha pahuchte hi usne gadi khadi kar ke tezi se daudne laga. Ye vahi jagah thi jaha par uski mulaqat uss langde admi se huyi thi. Use uss langde admi par bahut gussa aa raha tha. Manzil ke itne karib hone par bhi uss langde ne use manzil se bahut door bhej diya tha.
Vo tezi se jungle ke bhitar ghus gaya aur bhagne ki koshish karne laga. Halanki iss prayas me kaante wali jhadiyo ki vajah se use kayi jagah kharoch bhi aa gayi kintu use inn sab ki parwah nahi thi.
Daudte huye jab vo jungle ke kafi andar pahuch gaya to ek bar phir se confusion me pad gaya ki ab vo yaha se kidhar jaye.. ? kintu tabhi uske kano me kisi ke cheekhne ki awaz ke sath goli chalne ki awaz bhi sunayi padi to vah turant uss disha me daud pada. Kuch door bhagne par use ek gufa jaisi jagah dikhayi padi. Chillane ki awaz abhi bhi lagatar udhar se hi aa rahi thi.
Jab vo vaha pahucha to gufa ke bahar kuch log aapas me ladte huye firing karne me lage huye the. Do logo ki laash niche padi huyi thi. Jitu ko dekhte hi unhone uss par bhi firing shuru kar di. Jitu unse ulajh gaya lekin tabhi ek bar phir se gufa ke bhitar se cheekhne ki awaz aayi. Iss awaz ko jitu bhali bhanti pahchanta tha.vo gunde jitu ki taraf ek sath badhe lekin tabhi do logo ne kahi se aa kar unke upar goli chalani start kar di.
Jitu iss mouke ka fayda utha kar turant hi uss gufa me ghus gaya. Gufa kafi lambi thi aur andar bahut ghana andhera bhi tha. Raste me vah kayi jagah kisi patthar jaisi cheez se takra kar gira aur uth kar phir bhagne laga kintu kuch aur aage jane par use roshni nazar aane lagi.
Vaha pahuchte hi jitu ki ankho ne jo dekha use dekhte hi uski ankhe chhalak uthi aur agle hi pal uski ankho se bahte inn anshuo ne sailab ka roop le liya.
Uski ankho ke samne do darinde richa se lipte huye the. Richa ka poora chehra anshuo se bhiga hua tha, uske kapde kayi jagah se phat chuke the aur vo rote huye jor jor se chillaye ja rahi thi. Uske hotho ke kinaro se khoon ki patli lakir bah rahi thi.
Jitu (chillate huye)—madarchoddddd…
Ye dekhte hi jitu ne tezi se aage badh kar ek admi ko pakad kar richa ke upar se door phenk diya. Jabki dusra admi kuch samajh pata ki usse pahle hi jitu ne ek laat uske muh par maar ke use bhi richa ke upar se hata diya. Jitu ko dekhte hi richa bilakh padi. Jitu ne jaise hi uska hath pakad kar uthaya, vo jor se uske seene se lipat kar rone lagi.
Richa (rote huye)—jituuuuu..
Jitu (sir me hath pherte huye)—aap ro mat ..main aa gaya hu..
Jitu sir me hath pherte huye richa ko samjha raha tha, tab tak vo dono gunde bhi sambhal chuke the. Unme se ek ne richa ka hath pakad kar use apni taraf khichne laga to jitu ne ek mukka uske muh par maar diya jisse vo niche gir gaya.
Jitu (gusse me)—madarchoddd….tune hath kaise lagaya…?
Jitu uss par laat ghunso ki barish karne laga ..uske ek hath pakad kar tod diya lekin iss chakkar me uska dhyan pahle wale gunde ki taraf se hat gaya, iska fayda utha kar usne apni jagah lete lete hi jitu ke upar chaku phenk kar maar diya jo ki ja kar jitu ke hath me ghus gaya. Ye dekh kar richa ki cheekh nikal gayi.
Richa (chilla kar)—jituuuu
Hath me chaku ghuste hi jitu ka dhyan gundo ki taraf se kuch seconds ke liye hat gaya, itne me jisne chaku mara tha, usne ek bar phir richa ko daboch liya aur uska kurta piche se phad diya.
Richa—aaaaaaa…jituuuuu..
Richa ke chillane se jitu ka dhyan uski taraf gaya to usne bina mouka ganwaye apne hath me laga chaku nikal kar uss gunde ki taraf phenk kar maar diya jo uske maathe me ja ghusa aur vo dard me chillate huye bejaan laash ki tarah niche gir gaya.
Uske niche girte hi jitu dusre gunde se bhid gaya. Kabhi jitu usko patakta to kabhi vah jitu ko. Gufa pattharo ki thi jisse dono ko chot lag rahi thi lekin jitu ka ek hath jakhmi ho chuka tha pahle hi jisme se khoon bah raha tha phir bhi usne iski parwah na karte huye uss gunde ka sir pakad kar deewar me jor se maar diya jisse uska sir phat gaya aur vo vahi dher ho gaya.
Uske girte hi richa ek bar phir daud kar jitu se lipat gayi rote huye. Richa ne jaldi se apna phata hua kurta nikal kar jitu ke hath me baandh diya. Jitu ne use apni shirt utar kar pahna di.
Jitu (hotho se khoon saaf karte huye)—mere hote huye aap ko kuch nahi hoga didi..
Jitu apne dard ko bhul kar richa ka hath pakad kar use bahar le jane laga, richa bar bar jitu ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi. Bahar nikala to vaha gundo ki laashe padi huyi thi. Jitu ye dekh kar chounk gaya ki akhir inhe kisne mara…? Akhir koun hai jisne uski madad ki ..? usne apne charo taraf dekha lekin vaha koi nazar nahi aaya to vah richa ko le kar jungle se bahar nikal gaya.
Richa use le kar sabse pahle doctor ke paas gayi jaha patti karwane ke baad dono vapis ghar ke liye chal pade. Richa ektak jitu ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi.
Richa—dard jyada ho raha hai…?
Jitu—nahi
Richa—jitu, tujhe kaise malum pada ki main yaha hu... ?
Jitu—bas pata chal gaya..lekin aap inke hath kaise lag gayi... ?
Richa—maine ek private school me teaching start kar di hai..vahi jane ke liye ghar se nikli hi thi tabhi kuch gunde aa gaye aur mujhe jabardasti pakad kar yaha le aaye. Agar aaj tu nahi aata to...main kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi rahti..
Jitu—apne jeete jee main aap ke sath kuch bhi galat nahi hone dunga..
Iske baad raste me jitu ne uske liye naye kapde kharide aur phir ek bade hotel me khana khane le gaya. Richa ne ghar me phone kar ke apni maa ko sab bata diya.
Richa ko aaj apne andar kuch alag hi feelings mahsoos ho rahi thi. Pahli bar uska dil uske swabhav ke vipreet soch raha tha. Jitu ki kahi huyi har baat aaj use yaad aa rahi thi kintu vo sab yaad aane par aaj richa ko gussa nahi aa raha tha.
Pyar,Ishq aur Mohabbat, khuda ki ibadat ki tarah hai..pyar ka ehsaas hi itna khas hota hai ki vah patjhad ke mousam me bhi baharo si thandak deta hai, aur garmi ki tapan bhi barish ki boondo si lagti hai. Bure halaat bhi bure nahi lagte aur har pal uske sath hone ka ehsaas aapko akela nahi chhodta. Lekin agar aap iss pyar ko mahsoos hi na kar paye to ye aapke liye jarur nuksan ki baat hai. Pyar agar hai to use mahsoos kar ke dekhiye, kyon ki duniya me pyar se behtar koi ehsaas nahi.
Yahi ehsaas aaj pahli bar richa ko ho raha tha. Vah bar bar jitu ke khyalo me doob ja rahi thi. Aaj uske baare me sochna use achcha lag raha tha. Kahi bhi jati to uski nazre anayas hi jitu ko dhoondne lagti. Richa ko bhi ye ehsaas ho chuka tha ki shayad vo jitu ko chahne lagi hai. Uska dil har pal jitu ka sath chah raha tha.
Vahi hotel me..
Tanu—ye to sach me mujhse naraz ho gaya..ab kya karu…? (kuch soch kar kaan me)…mere sath me susu karega…?
Raj—kyaaa…?
Tanu (dhire se)—vahi jo tune suna…bata na, mere sath susu karega…?
Raj—tum sach kah rahi ho na... ? kya tum sach me mere sath susu karogi…?
Tanu—agar tera mann hoga to jarur karungi…lekin tujhe bhi vada karna hoga ki meri har baat manega..
Raj (khush)—manunga, tumhari har baat manunga…chalo jaldi se susu karte hain..
Tanu (ankho me dekhte huye)—raj, tum mujhe aise hi hamesha pyar karoge na…?
Raj—haan karunga na..ab jaldi chalo susu karne..
Tanu—raj, pls, ye baat kisi ko batana mat ki maine tere samne susu ki hai..
Raj—kisi ko nahi bataunga..pakka nahi bataunga..ab chalo bhi jaldi..
Main tanu didi ka hath pakad kar bathroom me le gaya…aur jaldi se apna pant niche khiska diya..tanu abhi bhi niche sir kiye huye poore kapde pahne khadi thi.
Raj—ye kya didi, jaldi se mootne baitho na…
Tanu—mujhe sharam aati hai raj, tere samne main kaise mootne baith jaau... ?
Raj—pahle meri taraf dekho..
Tanu ne jaise hi ankhe kholi to uski ankho ke samne qutub minar aa gaya, jise dekhte hi uski ankhe choudi ho gayi aur uski saans gale me hi atak kar rah gayi, vo hairani se kabhi mere chehre ko to kabhi mere lund ko dekhne lagi.
Tanu (shocked)—omg..ye kya hai…? Itna bada aur mota..! ye kisi ke chote se chhed me kaise ghusega... ? agar jor jabardasti kar ke isne ye hathiyar kisi ke chhed me ghused bhi diya to vah bechari to aadha ghuste hi mar jayegi. Meri to iska topa ghuste hi phat jayegi.
Raj—ohh didi, kya sochne lagi ab... ? dekho didi, agar tum chahti ho ki main tumhe maaf kar du to meri har baat manni hogi..
Tanu (tension)—lekin raj...
Raj—samajh gaya..tum mujhe phir se bewaqoof banaya..jao ab main tumse kabhi baat nahi karunga..main bhavna aur kshama ke paas ja raha hu..
Tanu (hath pakad kar)—ek minute ruk na...achcha baba baithti hu..lekin tu pahle dusri taraf muh kar le.
Raj—kyo.. ? sath me susu karne ki baat huyi thi, vo bhi aamne samne baith kar..(mann me)..teri maa ko chodu, ruk bhosdi, aaj teri bur ko bhosda banata hu main...
Tanu—mujhe sharam aati hai na raj, pls dusri taraf muh kar le na...baad me chahe to idhar kar lena..pls..
Raj--ok
Maine apna muh ghuma liya dusri taraf..Tanu apni jeans utarne hi wali thi ki tabhi darwaje par dastak hone lagi..tanu ghabra kar jaldi se bathroom se bahar nikal gayi..tanu ne ja kar darwaja khola to samne uski hone wali bhabhi aditi khadi thi.
Raj (mann me)—ye madarchod, beech me kaha se aa gayi.. ? itna achcha khasa tanu ki bur dekhne milne wali thi..lagta hai ki iski bur me bhi lund pelna padega.
Aditi—tanu, meri mummy tujhse thodi baat karna chahti hain..chal na..
Tanu—theek hai..raj, main abhi aati hu..
Tanu vaha se aditi ke sath uske room me chali gayi. Uske jate hi main bhi bahar nikal aaya. Bahar niklate hi mera phone bajne laga, jo ki maine aaj hi naya kharida tha kyon ki purana wala to khayi me hi gir gaya tha. Abhi mobile me kisi ke number save nahi kiye the isliye jaldi hi pick kar liya.
Raj—hello..koun..
Caller—STAR,,,,BLACK STAR
ye bahut hi fuuny update rha & ab to Tanu ne bhi accept ke liya hai ki use Raj se pyar ho gya hai & ab dekhna intersting hoga ki Thakurain kya krti hai apne mare hue bacche ke bare mai jankrSAAND
UPDATE-267
Main chillata raha, rota raha lekin sheetal didi bina meri taraf dekhe gusse me gadi start kar ke chali gayi..main vahi apna sir pakad kar baithe huye rota raha…sir ka dard itna adhik ho gaya ki meri bardast ke bahar ho gaya aur main na jane kab behosh ho kar vahi road par ludhak gaya.
Jane kitni der tak main vaha aise hi behosh pada raha…tabhi vaha se ek gadi gujri aur kuch aage ja kar usme achanak hi brake lag gaye…
Ab aage……
Raj ke aise gayab hone se tanu aur uski friends kafi pareshan thi…badi mushkil se ek din unhone apni dost ke yaha bitaya.. dusre din vo ek bar phir se tanu ke jor dene par nalda check point pahuch kar yaha vaha talash karne lagi iss ummid me ki shayad raj raat me vapis aa gaya ho uss manhoos jungle se, kintu uske baare me kuch pata nahi chala..
Akhir nirash ho kar tanu sab ke sath vapis ghar ke liye nikal gayi…tanu drive karte huye gahri soch me doobi huyi thi..kal se hi vah behad udas thi…gadi chalate huye uski nazar achanak hi side mirror ki taraf chali gayi..jisme usne kuch aisa dekha ki turant hi chounk kar brake laga diye.
Gadi rukte hi vo niche utar kar piche ki taraf tezi se daud laga di…uske achanak aise iss sunsan jagah me gadi rokne aur utar kar piche bhagne se sabhi chounk gayi.
Suraj’s gf (aditi)—aaaahhh…sir phod diya iss ladki ne..
Saheli 1 (Kshama)—(chounk kar),,ye aise kaha bhag rahi hai…? Tanuuu,,,rukk jaa..kya huaa…?
Saheli 2 (Bhavna)—(hairan)..aao dekhte hain..
Vastav me hua ye tha ki tanu apne hi dhyan me gadi chalate huye ja rahi thi…tabhi samne se aati huyi gadi ki tez roshni ki vajah se kuch pal ke liye uski nazar bahar ki taraf ghum gayi..nazar ghumte hi apne side mirror me use piche road me koi admi behosh pada hua dikhayi diya…tanu ne uss par koi khas dhyan nahi diya aur vo apni nazre phir se samne karne hi wali thi lekin tabhi samne wali car ke light ka focus uss niche pade huye admi par pada jisse kuch pal ke liye uska chehra dikh gaya…uss admi ke chehre ki ek jhalak dekhte hi vo chounk gayi aur turant brake laga diye.
Tanu (chounkte huye)—raajjjj..!
Bhagte huye tanu uss behosh pade huye admi ke paas pahuch gayi…road me aise bhagte huye vo kayi bar vaha se gujar rahi gadiyo se takrate huye bachi…pahuchte hi tanu ne jaise hi karib se uss ladke ka chehra dekha to akasmat hi uski ankhe dabdaba gayi…niche baith kar tanu ne fauran uska sir apni god me rakh liya.
Tanu (nam ankhe)—rajjj…kya hua..? kya hua tumhe..? ankhe kholo rajj..
Haan, ye koi nahi balki raj hi tha jise sheetal behoshi ki halat me road par chhod kar chali gayi thi…tanu bar bar pukarte huye use hosh me lane ki koshish kar rahi thi…tab tak baki sab bhi gadi se utar kar uske paas pahuch gaye aur raj ko dekhte hi shocked ho kar rah gaye.
Teeno (shocked)—rajj aur yaha vo bhi iss halat me…!
Tanu (nam ankhe)—rajj ankhe kholo..dekho main tanu hu..
Aditi—lagta hai ki behosh hai...kshama jaldi se gadi me se pani ki bottle le kar aao..
Kshama bhagti huyi pani ki bottle utha layi...aur phir raj ke chehre par pani chhidakne lagi...kuch der me uske jism me hulchul hote dekh sabhi ke chehro par chhaye chinta ke ghane badal kuch kam huye.
Raj (hosh me aate huye)—(ankhe band)..aaa...didi..mujhe akele chhod kar mat jaoo...
Tanu (nam ankhe)—(chumte huye)….main yahi hu raj..dekho..tumhari tanu didi tumhare paas hai…mujhe kuch nahi hua..main bilkul theek hu..ankhe kholo raj..
Behoshi me bhi raj ke muh se didi sun kar tanu ka dil khushi se jhum utha..usne yahi samjha ki raj behoshi me bhi use hi yaad kar raha hai..raj ke dil me apne liye itna pyar dekh kar vo bhi uss pyar ke sagar me doob gayi. Aur vo uske poore chehre ko jaldi jaldi chumne lagi.
Raj (ankhe khol kar)—(shocked)..tanu didi..aap…!
Tanu (sisak kar)—haan, rajj..kaha chala gaya tha apni tanu ko chhod kar…? Kitna talash kiya tujhe..ab kahi nahi jane dungi tujhe..
Raj (mann me)—sheetal didi, aap mujhe chhod kar chali gayi..koi baat nahi..aap ko mujh par bharosa nahi hai to na sahi, lekin jis kamine ne aap ko chhune ki koshish ki hai, uss madarchod abhay aur uske bete ki jindagi nark bana dunga main.. black star tu bhi 12 din maze kar le tab tak main iss madarchod abhay ki bahu, beti aur biwi ke bur ke chhed ko apne hathiyar se khod khod kar aur chouda karta hu..uske baad teri gaand ko gubbara banaunga….iske liye mujhe yaad dast jane ka natak karna padega..ab main sab ki bur chodne ka kaam karunga, burchoda ban kar..
Aditi—kya hua raj..? tum kaha chale gaye the…? Hamne bahut dhoonda tumhe…
Bhavna—haan, aur tum yaha kaise pahuche aur behosh kaise ho gaye…?
Tanu—abhi use pareshan mat karo…vaise hi uski tabiyat theek nahi hai aur tum log apne sawal shuru kar di..
Kshama—raj se jyada bimar to mujhe tum dikh rahi ho..
Bhavna—haan, raj, pata hai, isne kal se kuch khaya bhi nahi..
Aditi (mushkura kar)—lagta hai ki tanu ko apne hi bhai se pyar ho gaya hai..
Tanu—raj, tum gadi me chalo..inki baato par dhyan mat do..
Main tanu ke sath gadi me aa kar baith gaya…iss bar driving aditi kar rahi thi jabki tanu mere sath piche baithi huyi thi mere kandhe par apna sir rakh kar…
Raj (jhuth)—vo main uss gunde ko maar kar vapis lout raha tha tabhi maine dekha ki vaha ek ladki akeli baith kar susu kar rahi thi, use akeli susu karte dekh kar mujhe uske upar daya aa gayi kyon ki uske sath me mootne wala koi nahi tha, isliye main bhi uske samne khada ho kar mootne laga…mujhe dekh kar vo jor jor se chillane lagi..madarchod, kisi ke sath achcha karne ka jamana hi nahi raha, uski chillane ki awaz sun kar na jane kaha se 100-150 adiwasi hatho me bhala le kar aa gaye aur madarchodo ne mujhe pakad liya…
Sabhi (shocked)—kyaaaa…?
Aditi—phir tum vaha se bahar kaise nikle aur yaha behosh kaise huye…?
Raj—unn madarchodo ne mujhe le kar asli saand se kushti ladwa diya…uss saand ne mujhe bahut mara lekin akhir me maine bhi usko patak patak kar maine maar diya…uske marte hi sab adiwasi mujhe burchoda..burchoda kahte huye mere aage jamin par let gaye..bas main tabhi vaha se bhag nikla…
Kshama (shocked)—kyaa tumne asli saand ko maar diya….? (pith dikhate huye)..ye dekho, uss saand se ladayi ke chot ke nishan..
Raj—aur nahi to kya..main jhuth thodi na bolta hu…bahar nikal kar main tanu didi ko kal raat bhar aur aaj din bhar sab jagah dhoondta raha…phir paidal hi tanu didi ke paas jane ke liye chal pada…lekin chot ke karan dard bahut ho raha tha aur bhukh bhi lagi thi to chalte chalte yaha pahuch kar gir gaya, phir mujhe kuch yaad nahi..
Tanu (bhigi palke)—kya jarurat thi tumhe uss gunde ke piche piche uss jungle me jane ki…? Vo to vaise hi darr kar bhag raha tha….tumne kitni berahmi se ek gunde ke hath ukhad diye..
Raj—uss madarchod ne tumhe hath kaise lagaya…? Unki himmat kaise huyi tumhe chodne ki baat karne ki…? Jo bhi tumhe hath lagayega, main use aise hi dauda dauda ke maarunga..
Tanu—tumne duniya ka theka le rakha hai..? ye gunde mawali hain, inka yahi kaam hai, ladkiyo ko chhedna..tum nahi jante nahi, vo black star ke admi the...jo bahut khatarnak hai..
Raj—black star ki maa ka bhosda...main nahi darta kisi black star se aur na hi kisi se...jo bhi tumhare sath gandi harkat karega, uska main yahi haal karunga..
Tanu (chumte huye)—itna chahta hai apni tanu didi ko... ?
Raj—isse bhi jyada..lekin aap meri koi baat nahi manti ho..
Bhavna—sorry raj, hamne tumhe galat samjha aur na jane kya kya bolti rahi tumhe lekin tumne hamari jaan aur izzat bacha kar hame hamari galti ka ehsaas kara diya..mujhe maaf kar dena..
Kshama—haan raj, mujhe bhi maaf kar do..ye sab iss tanu ki vajah se hua hai..isne hi hame tumhare khilaf bhadkaya tha.
Tanu (nam ankhe)—I’m sorry raj, main tumhe galat samajhti rahi..hamesha sab ke samne tumhe jalil karti rahi…yaha tak ki maine tum par hath bhi uthaya….iske baad bhi tumne apni jaan ki parwah na kar ke meri jaan bachayi…mujhe to mafi mangne ka bhi haq nahi hai phir bhi ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena..
Raj (gale se laga kar)—kaisi baat karti ho didi…? Aap meri didi ho..aap ko poora haq hai, mujhe daantne ka, maarne ka..
Kshama—iska matlab ki tumne hame maaf kar diya...(hath badha kar)..aaj se main tumhari dost hu..
Aditi—main bhi..
Bhavna—main bhi..
Raj—ok, ok, maine sab ko maaf kar diya..lekin dosti nahi karunga...main tum sab se naraz hu..
Kshama—kyo... ?
Raj—kyo kya... ? maine bola tha ki aao sath me susu karenge to koi mere sath susu karne nahi aayi..
Meri baat sun ke sab shocked ho gayi…unki samajh me nahi aaya ki ab kya jawab de…? Bas hairani se ek dusre ka muh dekh rahi thi lekin sab ke samne kuch bolne me hichkicha rahi thi.
Bhavna—theek hai, main tumhare sath susu karne chalungi lekin ek shart par..
Tanu (ghur kar)—bhavna..
Raj—tum mere sath sach me susu karne chalogi…? Vo kya hai na ki mujhe akele akele susu karna achcha nahi lagta..
Bhavna—maine kaha na ki main chalungi tumhare sath susu karne …agar meri shart manoge to..
Raj—kaisi shart…? Jaldi bolo..kyon ki ab mera susu karne ka mann ho raha hai..
Bhavna—tum mujhe apni gf bana lo..phir sath me susu to kya, tum jo bologe, vo karungi..
Kshama—ise nahi, mujhe bana lo apni gf..
Raj—aapas me lado mat…aaj se tum dono meri gf ho..
Tanu (ghur kar)—tum shant nahi baith sakti… ek bf pahle se hi hai, usse mann nahi bhara kya..?…raj ke upar buri nazar dalna bhi mat.. samajh gayi..
Raj—kya didi, aap to mere sath susu karne jati nahi ho..aur dusri koi mere sath susu karne ko taiyar hai to unhe bhi mana kar rahi ho….main tumse sabse jyada naraz hu didi..
Tanu (udas)—mujhe maaf nahi karega….?
Raj—ek shart par ki tumhe bhi meri girl friend banna hoga aur mere sath susu bhi karogi aur mujhe apni…
Main aage kuch kahta ki usse pahle hi tanu didi ne jaldi se apna hath mere muh par rakh diya..shayad vo samajh gayi thi ki main kya kahne wala hu..
Aditi—raj ne to khule aam offer bhi kar diya tanu ko gf banne ka…lekin raj tanu tumhari bahan hai aur dusra, vo tumse badi hai…vo tumhari gf kaise ban sakti hai…?
Raj—Ladki Chahe Jitni Badi Ho Jaye, Mootegi To Baith Kar Hi Na..main tumhe bhi apni gf banane ko taiyar hu, agar tum chaho to..
Aditi—mujhe manzur hai…main bhi aaj se tumhari gf hu..ok..
Tanu—gadi ko kisi bade hotel me le chalo...raj ne kuch khaya bhi nahi hai aur use chot bhi lagi hai...to aaj hum kisi hotel me hi ruk jate hain..
Aditi—ok..
Raj—vo sab to theek hai lekin mujhe abhi tak ye samajh me nahi aaya ki vo adiwasi log mujhe burchoda burchoda kyo bol rahe the... ? didi, ye burchoda ka matlab kya hota hai... ?
Aditi (mann me)—iski sach much me yaad dast chali gayi hai ya natak kar raha hai... ? jis tarah se raj ne unn gundo ko mara, use dekh kar to nahi lagta ki yaad dast gayi hogi..magar phir iski aisi baate sun kar lagta hai ki sach hi ho..pata nahi kya hai..? lekin jo bhi ho, hai ekdam mast..
Tanu (dhire se)—vo..vo..mujhe nahi malum..bhul jao use..hoga kuch..kya karna hai..
Uske baad aditi ne gadi ko city ke ek aalishan hotel ki taraf turn kar diya...vaha pahuch kar tanu ne do rooms book kiye.. ek me main aur tanu to dusre me baki teeno..halanki tanu ke iss faisle se teeno khush nahi thi, vo sath me rahna chahti thi lekin tanu ne mana kar diya.
Room me pahuch kar sabse pahle hamne khana khaya…tanu mujhe khila rahi thi…aaj pahli bar tanu ne apne hatho se kisi ko khana khilaya tha, to maine bhi use khila diya…khana khane ke baad sabhi vahi baith kar TV dekhte huye baate karne lage….main kshama, bhavna aur aditi se has has ke baate kar raha tha, sath me vo bhi, ye dekh kar tanu ko achcha nahi lag raha tha..vo mann hi mann me unn teeno ko gaaliya de rahi thi.
Tanu (mann me)—Sali randiya kahi ki…teeno ke paas bf hain phir bhi mere raj par dore daal rahi hain..badi aayi raj jo bf banane wali…raj ko inke paas bhi nahi aane dungi ab se...inki gaand me bade bade kide pade..ye raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai, dekho kaise inn kutiyo se hans ke baat kar raha hai..
Tanu (daant kar)—tum teeno ko sona nahi hai kya..? raj thaka hua hai aur uski tabiyat bhi theek nahi hai..kam se kam use to sone do..jao apne room me..mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai..
Raj—khana ho gaya, ab susu time….koun chal rahi hai mere sath susu karne…?
Charo ek bar phir se ek dusre ka muh dekhne lagi…unhe asmanjas me phansi dekh kar mere hotho par mushkurahat aa gayi..
Raj—aise sochne ki jarurat nahi hai..ek kaam karo..aaj sab ek sath susu karenge…chalo utho..
Sab (chounk kar)—kyaaa..sab ek sathhh…?
Tanu—raj, ye gandi baat hai..aisa nahi bolte…tum kar ke aa jao..
Raj—sab apni baat se palat gayi...main bhi ab kisi se baat nahi karunga..
Main muh bana kar bathroom chala gaya...mere jane ke baad bhavna uth kar bathroom ki taraf jane lagi to ye dekh kar tanu ki jhaante sulag gayi.
Tanu—kaha ja rahi hai... ?
Bhavna—uss bechare ka dil toot jayega...usne hamare liye itna kiya to kya main uski ek choti si khwahish bhi poori nahi kar sakti…? Main to ja rahi hu bathroom..
Tanu (gusse me)—mujhe pata hai ki tujhe uska kitna khyal hai.. ? ye kyo nahi kahti ki tere bhosde me khujli ho rahi hai… raj ke sath aisa kuch karne ki sochna bhi mat, chupchap apni jagah baith ja..Choot Hai Na Choochi, Baate Oonchi Oonchi…
Bhavna—tera to vo bhai hai, lekin teri kyo sulag rahi hai niche se…? main to uski gf hu, itna to chalta hi hai..(mann me).. kuch bhi ho main raj ko pata ke rahungi…jisko jalna hai jale..
Kshama—Ye sakhi, tujhse kya chori…Tere se jyada to aaj, Farkat mori….maine to soch liya hai ki raj se hi shadi karungi..
Tanu—raj ke sath kuch ulta sidha karne ki sochna bhi mat nahi to main bhul jaungi ki tum meri saheli ho..(mann me).. kamini sab ki sab raj ko phansane me padi hain…mujhe raj ko inse door rakhna hoga..lekin kaise..?
Aditi—lagta hai ki tanu ka bhi mann ho raha hai raj ke sath kuch kuch karne ka..hihihihi
Tanu (ankh dikha kar)—chalo jao ab…use araam karne do…vaise bhi use chot lagi hai aur tumhe matargasti sujh rahi hai aise me bhi..
Bhavna—theek hai, abhi to chhod deti hu…lekin yaad rakhna, raj ko main pata ke hi rahungi…hihihi
Kshama—tera number hi nahi ayega, usse pahle raj mera deewana ho chuka hoga..
Tanu ne teeno ko hath pakad kar room se bahar nikal diya..main bathroom se aaya tab tak teeno vaha se ja chuki thi… main aa kar bistar me let gaya dusri taraf muh kar ke..
Tanu—raj, kya hua…idhar muh karo na…? naraz hai apni tanu didi se…?
Raj—haan, main tumse bahut naraz hu..mujhse baat mat karo..
Tanu—kyo, ab maine kya kar diya... ?
Raj—vo mere sath susu karne ja rahi thi, to tumne use jane kyo nahi diya... ?
Tanu—raj, ladka aur ladki ek sath susu nahi karte hain..ye gandi baat hoti hai..
Raj—lekin mera to ladkiyo ke sath hi susu karne ko mann karta hai..
Tanu—vo achchi ladki nahi hain raj..vo dono tumhe phansana chahti hain..
Raj—(no response)
Tanu—ye to sach me mujhse naraz ho gaya..ab kya karu…? (kuch soch kar kaan me)…mere sath me susu karega…?
Raj—kyaaa…?
Vahi hospital me jab thakurain ko hosh aaya to vo sabse pahle radha ka naam lene lagi..aur ankhe khol kar jab usne khud ko hospital me dekha to use radha ki chinta hone lagi…usne jaldi se uthna chaha to pet me dard ke sath sath halkapan mahsoos hua jisse vo chounk gayi..
Thakurain (hosh me aate huye)—main yaha hospital me…! radha..radha kaha hai…? Radha, main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi..aaaaaa (chounk kar)..ye mere pet ko kya hua…? Ye itna halka kyo lag raha hai…? (pet me hath pherte huye)..Mera bachcha..mera bachcha kaha hai…? Sisterr…doctorrr…
Thakurain ke chillane ki awaz sun kar nurse daudti huyi aayi..thakurain ko hosh me aati dekh kar vo jaldi se doctor ko bula layi kyon ki thakurain ke sawalo ke jawab dene me vo bhi darti thi.
Thakurain—doctor, mere sath me jo ladki thi, vo kaha hai…? Aur mere pet ko kya hua hai..? tum bolte kyo nahi doctor..? main yaha kaise pahuchi…?
Doctor—sab log bahar hi baithe huye hain…aa ko goli lagi thi pet me..I’m sorry thakurain ji, hum aap ke bachche ko nahi bacha sake..
Thakurain (cheekh kar)—nahiiiiiii..ye nahi ho sakta..kah do ki ye jhuth hai…
Doctor—I am sorry…lekin yahi sach hai..
Thakurain (rote huye gusse me jor se)—nahiii….main tumhe jaan se maar dungi..tune mere bachche ko mara hai…. kamine..aaaaaaa….
Thakurain gusse me doctor ko maarne ke liye uthi to dard ki vajah se uth nahi payi aur bistar me gir gayi…phir se uthne ko huyi to nurses ne usko pakad liya darte darte..
Doctor—thakurain, aap ke bachche ko hamne nahi mara balki aap ko yaha lane se pahle hi uski mout to pet me goli lagne se ho chuki thi..
Thakurain (chillate huye)—chale jao yaha se….mujhe akeli chhod do…jao yaha se sab….mujhe akeli chhod do…
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