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UPDATE- 259 (B)
Langda Admi
Sheetal ne turant darwaje ke handle se apna hath ghabra kar piche khich liya…aur vapis bistar ki taraf palat gayi..magar tabhi phir se bathroom ke bhitar se kuch aahat ke sath sath kuch ajib si awaze sun kar uske royen khade ho gaye…aur ek bar phir se apne kampte hath darwaje ke handle par laga diye…usne akhir ankhe band kar ke himmat bator kar ek jhatke me hi bathroom ka darwaja khol diya….
Aur phir darwaja jaise hi khula vaise hi....
‘’Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....nahiiiiiiiiiiii.’’
Ab aage......
Sheetal ne jaise hi darwaja khola vaise hi koi tezi se use chhute huye bathroom se bahar nikla jisse sheetal ekdam se ghabra gayi aur jor se cheekh padi..kuch der tak ankhe khol kar dekhne ki uski himmat hi nahi huyi..kisi ke kamre ke andar moujud hone ka uska shaq ab yakin me badal chuka tha ....phir dhire se ankhe khol kar usne darte huye revolver majbuti se pakad kar kamre ki taraf palat gayi.
Sheetal (kampte hath)—(ladkhadati awaz)..kkk...koun hai yaha.... ? dekho, tum..jo.bhi ho..chhupne se koi fayda nahi hai.. sidhi tarah se..samne aa jao..warna main goli maar dungi…
Sheetal ke bar bar dohrane ke baad bhi jab koi samne nahi aaya to uska darr aur bhi jyada gahra ho gaya…vo ab kaale kamre me jane ke apne faisle par pachhta rahi thi…magar tabhi use raj ki halat ka khyal aaya to uske hath pair me achanak hi furti aa gayi jaise ki usko koi sanjivani jadi buti mil gayi aur uss buti ne uske kamjor sharir me phir se jaan daal di ho…?
Sheetal ne jaise hi kamre me aa kar main light on ki to use vaha kuch dikhayi nahi diya…magar agle hi pal use parde ke piche se kuch phadphadane jaisi aahat sunayi padi to usne turant hi uss disha me fire kar diya.
Sheetal ke fire karte hi parde ke piche se phadphadate huye ek ullu bahar nikal aaya..ullu ko dekhte hi sheetal chounk gayi..vo kuch der kamre me hi udte huye chakkar lagata raha aur phir tezi se deewar me bani exhaust wali khali jagah se bahar nikal gaya.
Sheetal (hairan)—ye ullu kaha se ghus aaya kamre me…? Pahle hi uss admi ne mujhe daraane me koi kasar baki chhodi thi jo ab ye ullu bhi meri jaan lene yaha chala aaya…? Shukra hai ki bhag gaya..warna main to darr darr ke hi raat bhar me mar jati..
Ullu ke kamre se bahar nikal jane par usne kuch rahat ki saans li…aur sone ke liye bistar me let gayi..magar uska letna hi tha ki tabhi phir se chounk kar uth gayi…bahar se ajib ajib si bhayanak awaze aati, phir thodi der me band ho jati…kabhi kutte bhonke lagte..to kabhi billiyo ke ladne ki awaz aane lagti…kabhi ullu bol rahe hote…kabhi geedro ki awaz sunayi dene lag jati..ye awaze kabhi halki ho jati to kabhi achanak hi itni tez ki dil dahal uthe.
Kabhi kabhi kisi ke jor se cheekhne ki awaz sunayi deti…to kabhi aisa mahsoos hota jaise ki koi bahar deck par sound track baj raha ho aur uski dhun par koi chham..chham karte huye naach raha ho..
Sheetal ajib uljhan me phans chuki thi..na to vah so pa rahi thi aur jagne par ye awaze use pareshan kiye ja rahi thi..bas aise hi ankho me sari raat gujar gayi..phir subah huyi aur ye awaze aani band ho gayi to neend ne use aa dabocha.
Sheetal uss samay gahri neend me thi jab koi nirantar darwaje par dastak de raha tha…darwaja knock karne ki lagatar awaz aane par sheetal ki ankh mushkil se khuli…usne mobile par time dekha, subah ke saat baj rahe the…vo fauran uth kar khadi ho gayi.
Sheetal (mann me)—vahi admi aaya hoga…?
Sheetal ne ja kar darwaja khola kyon ki usne andar se lock kar diya tha raat me….sheetal ka andaza sahi tha, vahi kal wala hi admi tha…apne vade ke anusar vo din nikalte hi aa pahucha tha…uske hath me ek trey bhi tha, shayad vo sath me nasta bhi le kar aa gaya tha.
Sheetal ki ankhe neend se bojhil ho rahi thi…ankho me laal dore pade huye the, jo uski ankho ko aur bhi jyada aakarsak aur nasheeli bana rahe the..vo admi sheetal ki inn nasheeli ankho me jhankte huye jaise kho sa gaya tha…sheetal ne use apni taraf aise ek tak dekhte dekh kar apna chehra thoda ghuma liya.
Sheetal (jamhayi le kar)—raat me ek pal bhi so nahi payi hu..
Admi—janwaro ki awazo se darti rahi hogi….?
Sheetal—janwaro ki awazo se utna nahi jitna ki uss ullu se....upar se vo light ne alag pareshan kiya..
Admi—kya matlab... ?
Sheetal—vo raat me jab main so gayi thi to ...(phir raat ki poori ghatna batate huye.)
Admi (apna sir pakad ke)—ohhh…vastav me galti mujhse ho gayi…mujhe iss baat ka khyal hi nahi raha.
Sheetal (nasamajhte huye)—main kuch samjhi nahi…kaisi galti….? Kaisa khyal…?
Admi—bas ho gayi ek galti..khair, tum tension mat lo…aaj raat sab theek ho jayega..
Sheetal—aaj raat sab theek ho jayega..ka kya matlab hai…? Main yaha rahne nahi aayi hu…mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab do jaldi se jaldi…mujhe abhi uss poison aur virus ka ilaz bhi dhoondna hai..
Admi—ab tum ja kar hath muh dho lo…main tumhare liye nasta le kar aaya hu..phir itminan se baat karenge..
Sheetal—theek hai..
Sheetal bathroom me ghus kar fresh hone lagi…uske baad bahar aa kar chair par baith gayi…uss admi ne trey utha kar uske samne rakh diya…sheetal ne ek nazar samne rakhi trey par dali jo ki naste ke vyanjano se bhari huyi thi.
Sheetal—mujhe bahut sharmindgi mahsoos hoti hai ki tum mere liye trey uthate ho..kya itne bade iss mahalnuma bhawan me koi bhi naukar nahi hai…?
Admi—yaha bahut se log hain lekin aisa koi nahi hai jo ye kaam kar sake..tumhe sharminda hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai.. tum nasta karo..
Usne gol mol sa jawab diya jo ki sheetal ki samajh me nahi aaya…vo bhi jyada bahas nahi karna chahti thi..bas jaldi se jaldi sari baate clear kar ke aage badh jana chah rahi thi.
Sheetal—tum na, samajh me na aane wali baate bahut karte ho…kya tumhe dusro ko uljha kar bahut maza aata hai…?
Admi—main kisi ko kya uljhaunga..? main to swayam hi ek lambe samay se uljha hua hu..
Sheetal—tumhe kisne uljhaya…?
Admi—hai koi jis par main marta hu, magar afsos ki vo kisi aur par marti hai..
Sheetal ne nasta karte huye plate me aaj phir se ganga mousi ka naam likha hua dekh liya...lekin ye baat uss admi par jahir nahi hone di ..nasta kar ke usne hath dhoye aur phir vapis chair par baith gayi.
Sheetal—ab mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab do...aur mujhe ye batao ki tum mere baare me itna kuch kaise jante ho…? Raj aur uski bimari ke baare me kaise jante ho…? Ab ye mat kahna ki ye bhi pujari dada ne bataya tha kyon ki unko mare huye bahut samay ho chuka hai..
Admi—tumhe kuch bhi jawab dene se pahle main tumhe kisi se milwana chahta hu..
Sheetal—kisse milwana chahte ho... ? mujhe kisi se nahi milna..mujhe to bas apne sawalo ke jawab chahiye…
Admi—unse tum apne har sawal ka jawab pa sakti ho…main tumhare aur raj ke baare me itna kuch kaise janta hu, ye bhi unse milne ke baad samajh jaogi..
Sheetal—koun hai aur kaha hai... ? aur tum mujhe usse kyo milwana chahte ho... ?
Admi—maine kaha na ki tum unse milte hi samajh jaogi...main unhe le kar aata hu...
Sheetal—nahi, tum kal ki tarah aaj bhi gayab ho jaoge...
Admi—main bas abhi gaya aur abhi aaya....
Itna kah kar vo bahar nikal gaya..jate jate aaj bhi darwaja bahar se band kar diya tha....sheetal ko kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha, jab se vo kale kamre me gayi hai tab se uska dimag bilkul hi jaam sa ho gaya hai...sheetal uski kahi gayi baato par hi soch soch kar pareshan huyi ja rahi thi.
Sheetal (mann me)—ye kis ko lene gaya hai... ? kis se milwana chahta hai mujhse…aur kyo…?
Sheetal abhi apni inhi uljhano me uljhi huyi thi ki tabhi darwaje par dastak huyi….darwaja jaise hi khula aur phir jo chehra sheetal ki nazro ke samne aaya use dekhte hi vo uchhal kar kursi se ek jhatke me khadi ho gayi….uski ankho ke samne ek langda admi khada hua tha..jiske kapde jagah se phate huye the..dadhi aur sir ke baal badhe huye the…vo ek tak sheetal ko dekhe ja raha tha hairani se jabki sheetal to kisi sadme jaisi halat me khadi thi.
Langda—aise kya dekh rahi ho sheetal beti…? Kya apne papa ko nahi pahchanti…?
Sheetal (shocked)—papa.. ‼
Langda—haan, beti..main hi tera badnasib baap hu...
Sheetal (bhavuk)—papa..
Ye sunte hi ki vo uske papa hain, sheetal behad bhavuk ho gayi, uski ankhe bhar aayi aur vo daudte huye uske seene se ja lipti aur phir uski rulayi phut padi.
Sheetal (rote huye)—papa..aap hame chhod kar kaha chale gaye the…?
Langda—bas beti main phans gaya tha…kahi par…
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—papa, Aap nahi jante ki aap ke jane ke baad hamare sath kya kya hua…? Unhone hamare raj ko maarne ke liye kitni ghatiya sazish rachi…? (phir sheetal ne ek ke baad ek sabhi ghatnaye batati gayi rote rote.)
Langda—mat ro meri beti..mat ro…main sab janta hu sheetal beti..sab janta hu..(kuch soch kar)..sheetal beti, tumhari yaad dast vapis aa gayi kya…?
Sheetal (rote huye)—papa, main sheetal nahi balki sadhana hu…vahi sadhana jise aap sheetal bana kar ghar bhej diye the..
Langda (shocked)—kyaaaaa….? Tum sadhana ho…?
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—haan papa..main sadhana hu, ..main sab jaan chuki hu papa ki aapne kaise apni beti ko apne dost ki jholi me daal diya tha..
Langda (shocked)—lekin tumhe ye kisne bataya ki tum meri beti ho…?
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—agar main uss din aap dono dosto ki baat nahi sunti to ye raaz, raaz hi rah jata ..aapne mujhe apne se door kyo kar diya tha papa…?
Langda—ohh to ye baat hai…ab jab tum jaan hi gayi ho to apne paap ko maaf bhi kar do beti…akash mera bahut achcha dost tha…usne tumhari maa ki izzat thakur se bachane ke liye bahut badi qurbani di…log uski biwi ko baanjh kah kar taane maarte the, ye mujhse bardast nahi ho raha tha, isliye maine tujhe unki god me sounp diya tha beti..mujhe maaf kar dena beti, main tumhara mujrim hu..
Sheetal—aap hamse milne kyo nahi aaye papa…? Aap ke hote huye hame anatho jaisa jeevan bitana pada..anaaj ke ek ek daane ke liye hum taras gaye the papa
Langda—main majbur tha beti..apni ek taang kho chuka tha…upar se tum sab pahle hi garibi se tang the…main apahiz tum sab par apna bojh nahi dalna chahta tha..isliye apne aap ko mara hua hi rahne diya sab ki nazro me..lekin main phir bhi chhup chhup kar tum sab ki khabar leta rahta tha….mere mann me abhay se badla lene ki bhavna aa gayi thi to main uss par nazar rakhne laga….main kisi bhi tarah se vo vasiyat hasil kar ke abhay se apni aur tum sab ke sath kiye gaye zulm ka badla lena chahta tha…tab se bas main uss vasiyat ki talash me bhatak raha hu…
Sheetal—papa, vo to maine dekha hai papa…jab thakur ke admi raj ko jalane wale the tab aapne hi raj ko bachaya tha na..?
Langda—haan beti…jab raj ko goli lagi thi tab sanyog se main vaha pahucha hi tha lekin tab tak use goli lag chuki thi.. phir bhi maine mouka milte hi raj ko unke changul se bacha liya....black star bhi uss vasiyat ko hasil karna chahta hai.. jane kaise usne mujhe pahchan liya aur dhokhe se kidnap karwa kar mujhe yaha le aaya…lekin beti tum yaha kaise phans gayi …? Aur agar tum sadhana ho to phir sheetal kaha hai….?
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UPDATE- 259 (B)
Langda Admi
Sheetal ne turant darwaje ke handle se apna hath ghabra kar piche khich liya…aur vapis bistar ki taraf palat gayi..magar tabhi phir se bathroom ke bhitar se kuch aahat ke sath sath kuch ajib si awaze sun kar uske royen khade ho gaye…aur ek bar phir se apne kampte hath darwaje ke handle par laga diye…usne akhir ankhe band kar ke himmat bator kar ek jhatke me hi bathroom ka darwaja khol diya….
Aur phir darwaja jaise hi khula vaise hi....
‘’Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....nahiiiiiiiiiiii.’’
Ab aage......
Sheetal ne jaise hi darwaja khola vaise hi koi tezi se use chhute huye bathroom se bahar nikla jisse sheetal ekdam se ghabra gayi aur jor se cheekh padi..kuch der tak ankhe khol kar dekhne ki uski himmat hi nahi huyi..kisi ke kamre ke andar moujud hone ka uska shaq ab yakin me badal chuka tha ....phir dhire se ankhe khol kar usne darte huye revolver majbuti se pakad kar kamre ki taraf palat gayi.
Sheetal (kampte hath)—(ladkhadati awaz)..kkk...koun hai yaha.... ? dekho, tum..jo.bhi ho..chhupne se koi fayda nahi hai.. sidhi tarah se..samne aa jao..warna main goli maar dungi…
Sheetal ke bar bar dohrane ke baad bhi jab koi samne nahi aaya to uska darr aur bhi jyada gahra ho gaya…vo ab kaale kamre me jane ke apne faisle par pachhta rahi thi…magar tabhi use raj ki halat ka khyal aaya to uske hath pair me achanak hi furti aa gayi jaise ki usko koi sanjivani jadi buti mil gayi aur uss buti ne uske kamjor sharir me phir se jaan daal di ho…?
Sheetal ne jaise hi kamre me aa kar main light on ki to use vaha kuch dikhayi nahi diya…magar agle hi pal use parde ke piche se kuch phadphadane jaisi aahat sunayi padi to usne turant hi uss disha me fire kar diya.
Sheetal ke fire karte hi parde ke piche se phadphadate huye ek ullu bahar nikal aaya..ullu ko dekhte hi sheetal chounk gayi..vo kuch der kamre me hi udte huye chakkar lagata raha aur phir tezi se deewar me bani exhaust wali khali jagah se bahar nikal gaya.
Sheetal (hairan)—ye ullu kaha se ghus aaya kamre me…? Pahle hi uss admi ne mujhe daraane me koi kasar baki chhodi thi jo ab ye ullu bhi meri jaan lene yaha chala aaya…? Shukra hai ki bhag gaya..warna main to darr darr ke hi raat bhar me mar jati..
Ullu ke kamre se bahar nikal jane par usne kuch rahat ki saans li…aur sone ke liye bistar me let gayi..magar uska letna hi tha ki tabhi phir se chounk kar uth gayi…bahar se ajib ajib si bhayanak awaze aati, phir thodi der me band ho jati…kabhi kutte bhonke lagte..to kabhi billiyo ke ladne ki awaz aane lagti…kabhi ullu bol rahe hote…kabhi geedro ki awaz sunayi dene lag jati..ye awaze kabhi halki ho jati to kabhi achanak hi itni tez ki dil dahal uthe.
Kabhi kabhi kisi ke jor se cheekhne ki awaz sunayi deti…to kabhi aisa mahsoos hota jaise ki koi bahar deck par sound track baj raha ho aur uski dhun par koi chham..chham karte huye naach raha ho..
Sheetal ajib uljhan me phans chuki thi..na to vah so pa rahi thi aur jagne par ye awaze use pareshan kiye ja rahi thi..bas aise hi ankho me sari raat gujar gayi..phir subah huyi aur ye awaze aani band ho gayi to neend ne use aa dabocha.
Sheetal uss samay gahri neend me thi jab koi nirantar darwaje par dastak de raha tha…darwaja knock karne ki lagatar awaz aane par sheetal ki ankh mushkil se khuli…usne mobile par time dekha, subah ke saat baj rahe the…vo fauran uth kar khadi ho gayi.
Sheetal (mann me)—vahi admi aaya hoga…?
Sheetal ne ja kar darwaja khola kyon ki usne andar se lock kar diya tha raat me….sheetal ka andaza sahi tha, vahi kal wala hi admi tha…apne vade ke anusar vo din nikalte hi aa pahucha tha…uske hath me ek trey bhi tha, shayad vo sath me nasta bhi le kar aa gaya tha.
Sheetal ki ankhe neend se bojhil ho rahi thi…ankho me laal dore pade huye the, jo uski ankho ko aur bhi jyada aakarsak aur nasheeli bana rahe the..vo admi sheetal ki inn nasheeli ankho me jhankte huye jaise kho sa gaya tha…sheetal ne use apni taraf aise ek tak dekhte dekh kar apna chehra thoda ghuma liya.
Sheetal (jamhayi le kar)—raat me ek pal bhi so nahi payi hu..
Admi—janwaro ki awazo se darti rahi hogi….?
Sheetal—janwaro ki awazo se utna nahi jitna ki uss ullu se....upar se vo light ne alag pareshan kiya..
Admi—kya matlab... ?
Sheetal—vo raat me jab main so gayi thi to ...(phir raat ki poori ghatna batate huye.)
Admi (apna sir pakad ke)—ohhh…vastav me galti mujhse ho gayi…mujhe iss baat ka khyal hi nahi raha.
Sheetal (nasamajhte huye)—main kuch samjhi nahi…kaisi galti….? Kaisa khyal…?
Admi—bas ho gayi ek galti..khair, tum tension mat lo…aaj raat sab theek ho jayega..
Sheetal—aaj raat sab theek ho jayega..ka kya matlab hai…? Main yaha rahne nahi aayi hu…mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab do jaldi se jaldi…mujhe abhi uss poison aur virus ka ilaz bhi dhoondna hai..
Admi—ab tum ja kar hath muh dho lo…main tumhare liye nasta le kar aaya hu..phir itminan se baat karenge..
Sheetal—theek hai..
Sheetal bathroom me ghus kar fresh hone lagi…uske baad bahar aa kar chair par baith gayi…uss admi ne trey utha kar uske samne rakh diya…sheetal ne ek nazar samne rakhi trey par dali jo ki naste ke vyanjano se bhari huyi thi.
Sheetal—mujhe bahut sharmindgi mahsoos hoti hai ki tum mere liye trey uthate ho..kya itne bade iss mahalnuma bhawan me koi bhi naukar nahi hai…?
Admi—yaha bahut se log hain lekin aisa koi nahi hai jo ye kaam kar sake..tumhe sharminda hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai.. tum nasta karo..
Usne gol mol sa jawab diya jo ki sheetal ki samajh me nahi aaya…vo bhi jyada bahas nahi karna chahti thi..bas jaldi se jaldi sari baate clear kar ke aage badh jana chah rahi thi.
Sheetal—tum na, samajh me na aane wali baate bahut karte ho…kya tumhe dusro ko uljha kar bahut maza aata hai…?
Admi—main kisi ko kya uljhaunga..? main to swayam hi ek lambe samay se uljha hua hu..
Sheetal—tumhe kisne uljhaya…?
Admi—hai koi jis par main marta hu, magar afsos ki vo kisi aur par marti hai..
Sheetal ne nasta karte huye plate me aaj phir se ganga mousi ka naam likha hua dekh liya...lekin ye baat uss admi par jahir nahi hone di ..nasta kar ke usne hath dhoye aur phir vapis chair par baith gayi.
Sheetal—ab mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab do...aur mujhe ye batao ki tum mere baare me itna kuch kaise jante ho…? Raj aur uski bimari ke baare me kaise jante ho…? Ab ye mat kahna ki ye bhi pujari dada ne bataya tha kyon ki unko mare huye bahut samay ho chuka hai..
Admi—tumhe kuch bhi jawab dene se pahle main tumhe kisi se milwana chahta hu..
Sheetal—kisse milwana chahte ho... ? mujhe kisi se nahi milna..mujhe to bas apne sawalo ke jawab chahiye…
Admi—unse tum apne har sawal ka jawab pa sakti ho…main tumhare aur raj ke baare me itna kuch kaise janta hu, ye bhi unse milne ke baad samajh jaogi..
Sheetal—koun hai aur kaha hai... ? aur tum mujhe usse kyo milwana chahte ho... ?
Admi—maine kaha na ki tum unse milte hi samajh jaogi...main unhe le kar aata hu...
Sheetal—nahi, tum kal ki tarah aaj bhi gayab ho jaoge...
Admi—main bas abhi gaya aur abhi aaya....
Itna kah kar vo bahar nikal gaya..jate jate aaj bhi darwaja bahar se band kar diya tha....sheetal ko kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha, jab se vo kale kamre me gayi hai tab se uska dimag bilkul hi jaam sa ho gaya hai...sheetal uski kahi gayi baato par hi soch soch kar pareshan huyi ja rahi thi.
Sheetal (mann me)—ye kis ko lene gaya hai... ? kis se milwana chahta hai mujhse…aur kyo…?
Sheetal abhi apni inhi uljhano me uljhi huyi thi ki tabhi darwaje par dastak huyi….darwaja jaise hi khula aur phir jo chehra sheetal ki nazro ke samne aaya use dekhte hi vo uchhal kar kursi se ek jhatke me khadi ho gayi….uski ankho ke samne ek langda admi khada hua tha..jiske kapde jagah se phate huye the..dadhi aur sir ke baal badhe huye the…vo ek tak sheetal ko dekhe ja raha tha hairani se jabki sheetal to kisi sadme jaisi halat me khadi thi.
Langda—aise kya dekh rahi ho sheetal beti…? Kya apne papa ko nahi pahchanti…?
Sheetal (shocked)—papa.. ‼
Langda—haan, beti..main hi tera badnasib baap hu...
Sheetal (bhavuk)—papa..
Ye sunte hi ki vo uske papa hain, sheetal behad bhavuk ho gayi, uski ankhe bhar aayi aur vo daudte huye uske seene se ja lipti aur phir uski rulayi phut padi.
Sheetal (rote huye)—papa..aap hame chhod kar kaha chale gaye the…?
Langda—bas beti main phans gaya tha…kahi par…
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—papa, Aap nahi jante ki aap ke jane ke baad hamare sath kya kya hua…? Unhone hamare raj ko maarne ke liye kitni ghatiya sazish rachi…? (phir sheetal ne ek ke baad ek sabhi ghatnaye batati gayi rote rote.)
Langda—mat ro meri beti..mat ro…main sab janta hu sheetal beti..sab janta hu..(kuch soch kar)..sheetal beti, tumhari yaad dast vapis aa gayi kya…?
Sheetal (rote huye)—papa, main sheetal nahi balki sadhana hu…vahi sadhana jise aap sheetal bana kar ghar bhej diye the..
Langda (shocked)—kyaaaaa….? Tum sadhana ho…?
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—haan papa..main sadhana hu, ..main sab jaan chuki hu papa ki aapne kaise apni beti ko apne dost ki jholi me daal diya tha..
Langda (shocked)—lekin tumhe ye kisne bataya ki tum meri beti ho…?
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—agar main uss din aap dono dosto ki baat nahi sunti to ye raaz, raaz hi rah jata ..aapne mujhe apne se door kyo kar diya tha papa…?
Langda—ohh to ye baat hai…ab jab tum jaan hi gayi ho to apne paap ko maaf bhi kar do beti…akash mera bahut achcha dost tha…usne tumhari maa ki izzat thakur se bachane ke liye bahut badi qurbani di…log uski biwi ko baanjh kah kar taane maarte the, ye mujhse bardast nahi ho raha tha, isliye maine tujhe unki god me sounp diya tha beti..mujhe maaf kar dena beti, main tumhara mujrim hu..
Sheetal—aap hamse milne kyo nahi aaye papa…? Aap ke hote huye hame anatho jaisa jeevan bitana pada..anaaj ke ek ek daane ke liye hum taras gaye the papa
Langda—main majbur tha beti..apni ek taang kho chuka tha…upar se tum sab pahle hi garibi se tang the…main apahiz tum sab par apna bojh nahi dalna chahta tha..isliye apne aap ko mara hua hi rahne diya sab ki nazro me..lekin main phir bhi chhup chhup kar tum sab ki khabar leta rahta tha….mere mann me abhay se badla lene ki bhavna aa gayi thi to main uss par nazar rakhne laga….main kisi bhi tarah se vo vasiyat hasil kar ke abhay se apni aur tum sab ke sath kiye gaye zulm ka badla lena chahta tha…tab se bas main uss vasiyat ki talash me bhatak raha hu…
Sheetal—papa, vo to maine dekha hai papa…jab thakur ke admi raj ko jalane wale the tab aapne hi raj ko bachaya tha na..?
Langda—haan beti…jab raj ko goli lagi thi tab sanyog se main vaha pahucha hi tha lekin tab tak use goli lag chuki thi.. phir bhi maine mouka milte hi raj ko unke changul se bacha liya....black star bhi uss vasiyat ko hasil karna chahta hai.. jane kaise usne mujhe pahchan liya aur dhokhe se kidnap karwa kar mujhe yaha le aaya…lekin beti tum yaha kaise phans gayi …? Aur agar tum sadhana ho to phir sheetal kaha hai….?
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Langda Admi
Sheetal ne turant darwaje ke handle se apna hath ghabra kar piche khich liya…aur vapis bistar ki taraf palat gayi..magar tabhi phir se bathroom ke bhitar se kuch aahat ke sath sath kuch ajib si awaze sun kar uske royen khade ho gaye…aur ek bar phir se apne kampte hath darwaje ke handle par laga diye…usne akhir ankhe band kar ke himmat bator kar ek jhatke me hi bathroom ka darwaja khol diya….
Aur phir darwaja jaise hi khula vaise hi....
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Sheetal ne jaise hi darwaja khola vaise hi koi tezi se use chhute huye bathroom se bahar nikla jisse sheetal ekdam se ghabra gayi aur jor se cheekh padi..kuch der tak ankhe khol kar dekhne ki uski himmat hi nahi huyi..kisi ke kamre ke andar moujud hone ka uska shaq ab yakin me badal chuka tha ....phir dhire se ankhe khol kar usne darte huye revolver majbuti se pakad kar kamre ki taraf palat gayi.
Sheetal (kampte hath)—(ladkhadati awaz)..kkk...koun hai yaha.... ? dekho, tum..jo.bhi ho..chhupne se koi fayda nahi hai.. sidhi tarah se..samne aa jao..warna main goli maar dungi…
Sheetal ke bar bar dohrane ke baad bhi jab koi samne nahi aaya to uska darr aur bhi jyada gahra ho gaya…vo ab kaale kamre me jane ke apne faisle par pachhta rahi thi…magar tabhi use raj ki halat ka khyal aaya to uske hath pair me achanak hi furti aa gayi jaise ki usko koi sanjivani jadi buti mil gayi aur uss buti ne uske kamjor sharir me phir se jaan daal di ho…?
Sheetal ne jaise hi kamre me aa kar main light on ki to use vaha kuch dikhayi nahi diya…magar agle hi pal use parde ke piche se kuch phadphadane jaisi aahat sunayi padi to usne turant hi uss disha me fire kar diya.
Sheetal ke fire karte hi parde ke piche se phadphadate huye ek ullu bahar nikal aaya..ullu ko dekhte hi sheetal chounk gayi..vo kuch der kamre me hi udte huye chakkar lagata raha aur phir tezi se deewar me bani exhaust wali khali jagah se bahar nikal gaya.
Sheetal (hairan)—ye ullu kaha se ghus aaya kamre me…? Pahle hi uss admi ne mujhe daraane me koi kasar baki chhodi thi jo ab ye ullu bhi meri jaan lene yaha chala aaya…? Shukra hai ki bhag gaya..warna main to darr darr ke hi raat bhar me mar jati..
Ullu ke kamre se bahar nikal jane par usne kuch rahat ki saans li…aur sone ke liye bistar me let gayi..magar uska letna hi tha ki tabhi phir se chounk kar uth gayi…bahar se ajib ajib si bhayanak awaze aati, phir thodi der me band ho jati…kabhi kutte bhonke lagte..to kabhi billiyo ke ladne ki awaz aane lagti…kabhi ullu bol rahe hote…kabhi geedro ki awaz sunayi dene lag jati..ye awaze kabhi halki ho jati to kabhi achanak hi itni tez ki dil dahal uthe.
Kabhi kabhi kisi ke jor se cheekhne ki awaz sunayi deti…to kabhi aisa mahsoos hota jaise ki koi bahar deck par sound track baj raha ho aur uski dhun par koi chham..chham karte huye naach raha ho..
Sheetal ajib uljhan me phans chuki thi..na to vah so pa rahi thi aur jagne par ye awaze use pareshan kiye ja rahi thi..bas aise hi ankho me sari raat gujar gayi..phir subah huyi aur ye awaze aani band ho gayi to neend ne use aa dabocha.
Sheetal uss samay gahri neend me thi jab koi nirantar darwaje par dastak de raha tha…darwaja knock karne ki lagatar awaz aane par sheetal ki ankh mushkil se khuli…usne mobile par time dekha, subah ke saat baj rahe the…vo fauran uth kar khadi ho gayi.
Sheetal (mann me)—vahi admi aaya hoga…?
Sheetal ne ja kar darwaja khola kyon ki usne andar se lock kar diya tha raat me….sheetal ka andaza sahi tha, vahi kal wala hi admi tha…apne vade ke anusar vo din nikalte hi aa pahucha tha…uske hath me ek trey bhi tha, shayad vo sath me nasta bhi le kar aa gaya tha.
Sheetal ki ankhe neend se bojhil ho rahi thi…ankho me laal dore pade huye the, jo uski ankho ko aur bhi jyada aakarsak aur nasheeli bana rahe the..vo admi sheetal ki inn nasheeli ankho me jhankte huye jaise kho sa gaya tha…sheetal ne use apni taraf aise ek tak dekhte dekh kar apna chehra thoda ghuma liya.
Sheetal (jamhayi le kar)—raat me ek pal bhi so nahi payi hu..
Admi—janwaro ki awazo se darti rahi hogi….?
Sheetal—janwaro ki awazo se utna nahi jitna ki uss ullu se....upar se vo light ne alag pareshan kiya..
Admi—kya matlab... ?
Sheetal—vo raat me jab main so gayi thi to ...(phir raat ki poori ghatna batate huye.)
Admi (apna sir pakad ke)—ohhh…vastav me galti mujhse ho gayi…mujhe iss baat ka khyal hi nahi raha.
Sheetal (nasamajhte huye)—main kuch samjhi nahi…kaisi galti….? Kaisa khyal…?
Admi—bas ho gayi ek galti..khair, tum tension mat lo…aaj raat sab theek ho jayega..
Sheetal—aaj raat sab theek ho jayega..ka kya matlab hai…? Main yaha rahne nahi aayi hu…mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab do jaldi se jaldi…mujhe abhi uss poison aur virus ka ilaz bhi dhoondna hai..
Admi—ab tum ja kar hath muh dho lo…main tumhare liye nasta le kar aaya hu..phir itminan se baat karenge..
Sheetal—theek hai..
Sheetal bathroom me ghus kar fresh hone lagi…uske baad bahar aa kar chair par baith gayi…uss admi ne trey utha kar uske samne rakh diya…sheetal ne ek nazar samne rakhi trey par dali jo ki naste ke vyanjano se bhari huyi thi.
Sheetal—mujhe bahut sharmindgi mahsoos hoti hai ki tum mere liye trey uthate ho..kya itne bade iss mahalnuma bhawan me koi bhi naukar nahi hai…?
Admi—yaha bahut se log hain lekin aisa koi nahi hai jo ye kaam kar sake..tumhe sharminda hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai.. tum nasta karo..
Usne gol mol sa jawab diya jo ki sheetal ki samajh me nahi aaya…vo bhi jyada bahas nahi karna chahti thi..bas jaldi se jaldi sari baate clear kar ke aage badh jana chah rahi thi.
Sheetal—tum na, samajh me na aane wali baate bahut karte ho…kya tumhe dusro ko uljha kar bahut maza aata hai…?
Admi—main kisi ko kya uljhaunga..? main to swayam hi ek lambe samay se uljha hua hu..
Sheetal—tumhe kisne uljhaya…?
Admi—hai koi jis par main marta hu, magar afsos ki vo kisi aur par marti hai..
Sheetal ne nasta karte huye plate me aaj phir se ganga mousi ka naam likha hua dekh liya...lekin ye baat uss admi par jahir nahi hone di ..nasta kar ke usne hath dhoye aur phir vapis chair par baith gayi.
Sheetal—ab mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab do...aur mujhe ye batao ki tum mere baare me itna kuch kaise jante ho…? Raj aur uski bimari ke baare me kaise jante ho…? Ab ye mat kahna ki ye bhi pujari dada ne bataya tha kyon ki unko mare huye bahut samay ho chuka hai..
Admi—tumhe kuch bhi jawab dene se pahle main tumhe kisi se milwana chahta hu..
Sheetal—kisse milwana chahte ho... ? mujhe kisi se nahi milna..mujhe to bas apne sawalo ke jawab chahiye…
Admi—unse tum apne har sawal ka jawab pa sakti ho…main tumhare aur raj ke baare me itna kuch kaise janta hu, ye bhi unse milne ke baad samajh jaogi..
Sheetal—koun hai aur kaha hai... ? aur tum mujhe usse kyo milwana chahte ho... ?
Admi—maine kaha na ki tum unse milte hi samajh jaogi...main unhe le kar aata hu...
Sheetal—nahi, tum kal ki tarah aaj bhi gayab ho jaoge...
Admi—main bas abhi gaya aur abhi aaya....
Itna kah kar vo bahar nikal gaya..jate jate aaj bhi darwaja bahar se band kar diya tha....sheetal ko kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha, jab se vo kale kamre me gayi hai tab se uska dimag bilkul hi jaam sa ho gaya hai...sheetal uski kahi gayi baato par hi soch soch kar pareshan huyi ja rahi thi.
Sheetal (mann me)—ye kis ko lene gaya hai... ? kis se milwana chahta hai mujhse…aur kyo…?
Sheetal abhi apni inhi uljhano me uljhi huyi thi ki tabhi darwaje par dastak huyi….darwaja jaise hi khula aur phir jo chehra sheetal ki nazro ke samne aaya use dekhte hi vo uchhal kar kursi se ek jhatke me khadi ho gayi….uski ankho ke samne ek langda admi khada hua tha..jiske kapde jagah se phate huye the..dadhi aur sir ke baal badhe huye the…vo ek tak sheetal ko dekhe ja raha tha hairani se jabki sheetal to kisi sadme jaisi halat me khadi thi.
Langda—aise kya dekh rahi ho sheetal beti…? Kya apne papa ko nahi pahchanti…?
Sheetal (shocked)—papa.. ‼
Langda—haan, beti..main hi tera badnasib baap hu...
Sheetal (bhavuk)—papa..
Ye sunte hi ki vo uske papa hain, sheetal behad bhavuk ho gayi, uski ankhe bhar aayi aur vo daudte huye uske seene se ja lipti aur phir uski rulayi phut padi.
Sheetal (rote huye)—papa..aap hame chhod kar kaha chale gaye the…?
Langda—bas beti main phans gaya tha…kahi par…
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—papa, Aap nahi jante ki aap ke jane ke baad hamare sath kya kya hua…? Unhone hamare raj ko maarne ke liye kitni ghatiya sazish rachi…? (phir sheetal ne ek ke baad ek sabhi ghatnaye batati gayi rote rote.)
Langda—mat ro meri beti..mat ro…main sab janta hu sheetal beti..sab janta hu..(kuch soch kar)..sheetal beti, tumhari yaad dast vapis aa gayi kya…?
Sheetal (rote huye)—papa, main sheetal nahi balki sadhana hu…vahi sadhana jise aap sheetal bana kar ghar bhej diye the..
Langda (shocked)—kyaaaaa….? Tum sadhana ho…?
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—haan papa..main sadhana hu, ..main sab jaan chuki hu papa ki aapne kaise apni beti ko apne dost ki jholi me daal diya tha..
Langda (shocked)—lekin tumhe ye kisne bataya ki tum meri beti ho…?
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—agar main uss din aap dono dosto ki baat nahi sunti to ye raaz, raaz hi rah jata ..aapne mujhe apne se door kyo kar diya tha papa…?
Langda—ohh to ye baat hai…ab jab tum jaan hi gayi ho to apne paap ko maaf bhi kar do beti…akash mera bahut achcha dost tha…usne tumhari maa ki izzat thakur se bachane ke liye bahut badi qurbani di…log uski biwi ko baanjh kah kar taane maarte the, ye mujhse bardast nahi ho raha tha, isliye maine tujhe unki god me sounp diya tha beti..mujhe maaf kar dena beti, main tumhara mujrim hu..
Sheetal—aap hamse milne kyo nahi aaye papa…? Aap ke hote huye hame anatho jaisa jeevan bitana pada..anaaj ke ek ek daane ke liye hum taras gaye the papa
Langda—main majbur tha beti..apni ek taang kho chuka tha…upar se tum sab pahle hi garibi se tang the…main apahiz tum sab par apna bojh nahi dalna chahta tha..isliye apne aap ko mara hua hi rahne diya sab ki nazro me..lekin main phir bhi chhup chhup kar tum sab ki khabar leta rahta tha….mere mann me abhay se badla lene ki bhavna aa gayi thi to main uss par nazar rakhne laga….main kisi bhi tarah se vo vasiyat hasil kar ke abhay se apni aur tum sab ke sath kiye gaye zulm ka badla lena chahta tha…tab se bas main uss vasiyat ki talash me bhatak raha hu…
Sheetal—papa, vo to maine dekha hai papa…jab thakur ke admi raj ko jalane wale the tab aapne hi raj ko bachaya tha na..?
Langda—haan beti…jab raj ko goli lagi thi tab sanyog se main vaha pahucha hi tha lekin tab tak use goli lag chuki thi.. phir bhi maine mouka milte hi raj ko unke changul se bacha liya....black star bhi uss vasiyat ko hasil karna chahta hai.. jane kaise usne mujhe pahchan liya aur dhokhe se kidnap karwa kar mujhe yaha le aaya…lekin beti tum yaha kaise phans gayi …? Aur agar tum sadhana ho to phir sheetal kaha hai….?
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