Story to faddooo hai bhai...
Lekin kuchh jagah mistakes bhi hai...
Jaise ki jyoti ko pahle apne inspector bataya baadme ACP...
Sapna mami ko sabere-sabere pela khair wo adhe mai chhod ke gai to raat mi usse aise pela jaise uski paheli chudai ho...
Rashmi ko pahle madam dikhaya lekin baad mai aise dikhaya jaise wo gaav ki ek chhori haii bas kucch nahi...
Uske audhe ke hisab se to kamse kam ye character rakhana chahiye tha...
Ravi mar ke jinda ho gaya lekin kisiko pata nahi...
Sirf wo update hame hi pata hai (ho sakata hai ussse age jakar pata chale uske sath kya hua tha yumpiri mai)...
Thanks for Reading & Supporting.
Shukriya bhai ki aapne meri story padhi aur pasand bhi aayi.
Bhai hum yaha koi professional writer nahi hain balki kuch na kuch sikhne ke liye likhte hain to aise me mistakes hona koi bahut badi baat nahi hai...hum galtiya karte hain..phir unko sudharte hain aise hi anubhav hota jata hai aur ek din hum mature ho jate hain..to main abhi learning period me hu.
Jyoti ke baare me aapne jo kaha vo jarur meri fault hai..avinash ke dhokhe me ho gaya hoga...khair main usko change kar dunga..remind karane ke liye dhanyawad bhai.
Saand to ab saand ki tarah hi pelega na bhai..phir chahe vo sapna mami ho ya phir koi aur isse farak nahi padta., mujhe title ko bhi matching rakhna hai har jagah.
Rashmi gaon ki ladki hai to gaon ke andar gaon ki chhori ban ke hi rahegi na bhai, shahar ki mem nahi ban jayegi...haan ghar ke bahar bilkul uska character vaisa hi dekhne ko milega jaisa aapne kaha hai.
Ravi naam ka koi character meri kahani me marr ke jinda nahi hua hai bhai..balki raj hua hai lekin usko abhi iss bare me khud bhi pata nahi hai.
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