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Incest SAAND

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Dmahi19

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Xfan said:
Story to faddooo hai bhai...
Lekin kuchh jagah mistakes bhi hai...
Jaise ki jyoti ko pahle apne inspector bataya baadme ACP...
Sapna mami ko sabere-sabere pela khair wo adhe mai chhod ke gai to raat mi usse aise pela jaise uski paheli chudai ho...
Rashmi ko pahle madam dikhaya lekin baad mai aise dikhaya jaise wo gaav ki ek chhori haii bas kucch nahi...
Uske audhe ke hisab se to kamse kam ye character rakhana chahiye tha...

Ravi mar ke jinda ho gaya lekin kisiko pata nahi...
Sirf wo update hame hi pata hai (ho sakata hai ussse age jakar pata chale uske sath kya hua tha yumpiri mai)...
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Bhai tu jaada aachi yeh story likh sakta hai .... Agar perfection ki taraf jao to bahot kam story milegi .... Agar moderators perfection ki taraf gaye no story on this forum ....

Mujhe lagta hai writers ko bhi thoda space dena chaiye ..... Mein defend nahi kar raha par hakikat bata raha hoon ....

Story may contains some flaws par hum sab usko enjoyments ke liye padhtey aur follow kartey hai examiner ki tarah nahi .... Then while reading the story it's feel you r watchdogs not readers ....


Waiting for next update


Till then keep reading my story ....

https://xforum.live/threads/incest-angrakshak-parvivar-ka-mahi.3758/page-86





Neelam ??


So relaxed
 
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anandsngh12

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Dmahi19 said:
I read your last update 79 just now .... It's long and super define , saand seems on mission to hit the target bull's-eye .... Yeah it's match his name also "saand" which fully defines the story ....

Jyoti and Raj sex encounter was superb rather than indu Thakur .... But as a Thakur I think Raj Should not trust her ....


Sheetal as Raj sister fully controlled him but how long it's big gamble ....

Sometimes I think Raj as black star but most of times i thinks Raj own real father is black star???? Let's wait for that ...



Raj and indu Thakur



Superb update waiting for next....

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Thanks for Reading & Supporting.
Thanks bro for such a very nice encouraging review.
Black Star is the main character in this story after hero...
Vo koun hai ye baad me pata chalega.
Thakurain ka dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai..
Stay with us.
Today's update is on....667
 
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aka3829 said:
Bahut hi gajab ka update. Ek hi update me thakurain aur jyoti 2no ko nipta diya. Pehle to mera kathan sahi mikla ki thakurain neelam ko thukwane ke liye raj ko bula rahi he. Dusre pata nahi mujhe ye ek chaal lagti he.
Waiting 4 next update
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Thanks for Reading & Supporting.
Dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai...next update me malum ho jayega.
Stay with us.
Today's update is on....667
 
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