Incest SAAJAN

[DBadshah8787]

Wah Bhai Maza a gia

 

[anandsngh12]

https://xforum.live/threads/warrior-of-the-7-state-incest-thriller-magic.97/unread



Bhai anand ap k review ka intazar hai...

Aaj deta hu bhai
baki update to padh liye hain
last ke 2 bache hain unko padh ke
ek sath aaj review deta hu
vaise mast likh rahe ho

 

[agyant]

Update 83 me Raj aur Divya ke bich romantic moments sach mai dil ko chhu gaya. Incest romance ka aisa sangam sirf kuch hi story mai dekhne ko milta hai. Aap ki lekhni ka jitana bhi tarif kiya jaye kam hoga.

Uske bad Pari ki entry, sach mai pari ke sath jo bhi hua galat hua hai. Par mujhe lagata hai Pari ne jo kaha wo adha sach hai, kyonki usme Raj aur Divya ke version to tha hi nahi. Jo bhi ho us update ke bad mujhe thoda thoda realize hua ki raj story ka hero aur villain Kyun hai.
Ab pari ka character bhi bahut ajib hai, usme raj ke liye nafrat aur pyar dono hi hai. Dekhna dilchasp hoga ki ant men jeet kiski hoti hai? Uski pyar ki ya phiir nafrat ki..

Ab aate hain story mai mere pasandida charachar mai se ek Payal ki aur. Aakhir kar Payal ne apani pyar ka Izhar kar hi diya raj ko. So romantic and erotic moment!! Kuch logon ka manna hai ki payal raj ke liye extra possessive hai, but story mai Payal ki charitr ki jaise varnan kiya gaya hai usme Payal ka possessive hona lazimi hai. Ek maa apne bete ke liye possessive nehi hogi to kon hogi? Payal mai ek maa aur preyasi donon ka roop hai, jo ki apane aap men ek rare combination hai. Mai to chahunga ki payal aur ruchi ke character mai kabhi bhi change na ho.

Aakhir mai kali rat ka aant hote hote aapane ek aur suspense chod hi gaye ki Raj aur narpati ke bich kya bat hui? Aur Divya ki konsi amanat narpati ke pas hai....

 

[agyant]

Aab ata hun the most burning questions of the story ki akhir Pari hai kon.... Mere khayal se payal aur ruchi nehi ho sakti kyonki ye pehle hi bataya gaya hai ki payal Raj ki dusri maa hai, chahen jo bhi ho jaye ek ma apane bete ko kabhi nahi mar sakti.

Pehle mujhe lagata tha ki chanchal hi pari ho sakti hai, par ab lagata hai chanchal pari nehi ho sakti hai, halanki use saq ke dayre se bahar nehi rakha ja sakta hai. Mujhe sabse jyada teen logon par doubt hai. .....
Avni, Sandhya aur chanchal. Agar jo mai soch raha hun sahi hua to sabse jyada saq sandhya par hai.
Par jo bhi pari ki punarjanm hai use apane atit ke bare mai sayad abhi tak pata nahi.

 

[agyant]

Last update mai aapne ek aur jabardast twist dal diya, Raj ko marne mai Vidya mousi ka hath!!!!!! Sach mai ye kisi shocker se kam nahi hai. Ab Vidya mousi bhi rahasyamayi hoti ja rahi hai, pehle kisi ko ye tak pata na hona ki koi mosi bhi hai,
aur aab raj ko marne mai mosi ka hath
Aur chanchal ke sath mousi ka kya relation?
In sab ke bich ek aur bat khatak rahi hai ghar ki ladies logon ki kuwari rehna. Pehle Kajal aur Meera bua aur ab Vidya mousi, chalo Meera bua ka to phir bhi thik hai, but kajal aur vidya ka kuch hajam nehi hua. Aur to aur Sandhya aur Avni kiski beti hai phiir?
Chalo veer ka matter kuch had tak clear hua, kahin yamraj veer ka hi to roop nahi....
Bro you are writing such a fabulous story, jisme thrill, horror, romance, emotions, incest sab kuchh balanced hai...aur apna original writing skill kisike bhi dabav me change mat karna....

 

[anandsngh12]

Very nice and fantastic update

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[anandsngh12]

Ye kya bomb par bomb fode jaa rahe ho bhai. Raj ko mausi ne mara lekin use to sab ne milkar hi mara tha na aur usake baad use khai me bhi fek diya thA.
Waiting 4 next update

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Un sab ke sath maarne walo me ek anjan shakhs bhi tha...bhai

 

[anandsngh12]

lajawaab tha bhai superb

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[anandsngh12]

Bhai ye tho shock ka diwali ho raha hai....
Very nice keep going...
Waiting for next...

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[anandsngh12]

Superb update bro
Is update se toh yahi lagta hai ki veer hi yamraj hae mere hisaab se

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