Incest SAAJAN

[anandsngh12]

First of all very very sorry for the belated review... Kuch din busy tha to xf se dur raha... Now review time....
Update 137
Best part of update was divya aur sajan ka pyar... Donon ka pyar itna gehra hai ki dono dur se hi ek dushre ki taklif ko mehsus kar lete hain.... Divya ki tyag aur samarpan ke badolat hi Agyant jivit wapas aa paya.......
Wahin Trikal bhi bahut shaktishali maya jal bichhaya tha jse akele Agyant ke liye todna mushkil tha.... Par divya ke pyar aur mata rani ki kripa ke prakop se Agyant ne trikal ko haraya aur ratna aur meenakshi ko sakushal wapas laya..... Trikal ko apahij bana kar accha sabak bhi sikhaya.... Par agar Agyant trikal ko mar nahi sakta to trikal ka mot kaise hoga....?

Mujhe pehle se hi sadhu maharaj par doubt tha.... Par jo bhi ho Yamraj, sher ki parchhai, aur Sadhu maharaj apas men linked jarur hai..
Par kuchh baten samajh me nehi aya specially saitan ki murti ka nast hona.... Aisi konsi bat yad a gaya Agyant ko ki wo dhyan lagakar murti ko nasht kar diya....
Ye kam to pehle bhi kar sakta tha...

Present..
Jahan ek aur chanchal ka nafrat pyar men badalti ja rahi hai, wahin sandhya ka pyar nafrat me badal raha hai.....

Excellent fight between veer and Ninja group...... Present mai first time Sher wala prchayi dikhai diya.... Parchhai ne to fad ke rakh diya bechare ninjas ki, wahin veer ka bhi halat kharab ho gaya hai...

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Stay tuned with us
Thanks agyant bhai is nayab guldaste se saje khubsurat review ke liye
Jaldi hi Trikal ka samna Raj se hoga
Shaitan ki murti ko agyant ne us par apni ankho ko concentrate karke agni ka prayog kiya tha
Ye kaam pahle nahi kar sakta tha vo...bcoz uske upar Trikal ka maya jaal phaila hua tha use tode bina vaha tak entry possible nahi thi.....ha..kaid khane me rahte huye jarur kar sakta tha...par uske dimag me tab ye baat aayi nahi
Chanchal aur sandhya ek hi route ke do opposite track hain...ek up to dusri down
Sher ki parchhayi ka raaz khulne me abhi bahut samay hai
Thanks for this wonderful review

 

[anandsngh12]

Update 138
Excellent update...

Ratna aur minakshi sakushal ghar pahunch gaye..... Ratna to divya ko dekhkar hi sara majra samajh gai... Wahin meenakshi aur vaishali ke dil men bhi Agyant ke liye pyar ka ankur phut raha hai... Aur charon deewani chali gai Agyant se milne uske kamre me ... Par wahan to...


Superb narration.. Mujhe to do bar padhna padha ki kya likh diya aapne..... Khair jo bhi ho par Agyant aur divya ko ek sath dekh kar pratigya ki pari mode active ho gaya aur usne to lagbhag attack kar hi diya tha....
Present..
Chandini ko sahi salamat dekhkar uday to shock hi ho gaya.... Par apni feelings dikhaye bhi to kisko..
Chandni ko bhi raj ke upar bharosa nahi hai... Hoga bhi kaise... Uske jagah koi aur hota to usko bhi bharosa nahi hota..

Wahin veer ki phati padi hai asali yamraj ko dekhkar Par lagta hai Uday ka ab time up hone wala hai.....

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Stay tuned with us
Pratigya apne aap ko baki char ke beech me alag mahsus karne lagi thi
Dusra vision ka effect bhi ho raha tha us par...present aur past ki condition me matching banti ja rahi thi uske mann me jo baad me nafrat ka roop le liya
Uday ka kya hoga..upcoming update me

 

[anandsngh12]

Update 139
Like your other readers i am also bit disappointed with this update.... Disappointed in the sense ki aapka jo natutal style hai cheejon ko bariki se likhne ki wo dekhne ko nahi mila ..... Par aap apane stance already clear kar chuke ho so no issues with that....

Commig to the update part.....
Pura update sar ke upar se nikal gaya.... Aap to bullet train ke speed se sare incidents explain kar diye....
Update ke first part... Agyant aur divya ke pyar bhare pal... Donon hi ek dusre ke paripurak hain... Meenakshi aur Vaishali bhi apni Izhar e mohabbat kar diye... Ratna ki chir yauvana hone ka raz bhi pata chal gaya..., Wahin in sabke bich pratigya agyant se dur hoti chali gai...

Bich men to shocking twist dal diya ki divya aur agyant sage bhai bahan nikle.... Aur sushant anuj ka beta aur pratigya uski behan..... par janm ke samay aisa kya shadyantra hua tha ki ye sab aise bichhad gaye ye pata nahi chala...

Bahut sari baten ankahi rah gayi.... Jaise ki Trikal ne aisa kya mayajal racha tha ki sab uske lapet me agaye..... Pratigya kaise apni palne wale mata pita ke pas pahunchi.... Vaishali ke mata pita kon hai....
Alexander ka chota bhai to pura suspense me rah gaya.....
Vidya ki bhi koi ata pata nahi..
Neel mani bhi us aurat ke pas kaise pahunci ye pata nahi chal paya.... Aur agyant ke marne ke bad trikal ka kya hua....?
Aur ratna ki story abhi end nahi hui hai.... Raj aur ratna ki punah milan kaise hoga dekhna dilchasp hoga....

Par is update ke bad pari ke nafrat wali feelings a raha hai... Aur pratigya.. bhale hi sajan kisi janm me uske sath kuchh bhi kiya ho..... Par iss janm me to agyant ne uski jan aur ijjat dono bachayi hai na to wo agyant se itni nafrat kaise kar sakti hai ki uski jan hi le liya.... Ye to ehsan faramosh, viswas ghat wali bat hai...
Itni bhi kya nafrat....
Anyway excellent update....

Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Stay tuned with us
Aapne sahi kaha is update se to main khud bhi satisfied nahi tha,but majburi ho gayi thi
Ek hi update me main itni sari pending bate clear kar pana possible nahi tha mere liye
Maine story ka plot hi banaya tha har janam ke minimum 150-200 updates ka..usi ke mutabik kahani bhi chuni
Lekin kisi ko nirash hone ki jarurat nahi hai
bcoz mai ab har janam ka alag hi thread rakhunga jisme detailed story hogi
Isme me kuch update me hi short me nipta dunga
Ye kahani hi nafrat aur pyar ke beech hai...
Yaha Pari aur saajan dono hi galat hain aur dono hi sahi bhi
Ab dekhte hain kiski jeet hoti hai

 

[anandsngh12]

waiting for the next update

posting

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai waiting for next

posting

 

[Nkmahakal]

Waiting

 

[anandsngh12]

SAAJAN

UPDATE*141

Mai jab mall vapis aaya to dekha ki Payal aur Ruchi didi ko chhod kar baki sabhi dher sari shopping karne me busy thi...mai divya ko lekar un dono ke paass aa gaya

Ruchi—wow...meri gudiya to ekdam achchi bhi ho gayi

Payal—ise kyo le aaya…iski to tabiyat kharab thi na abhi

Divya—mai ab theek hu didi

Mai—kya aap dono kuch le nahi rahi ho... ? shopping nahi karni kya... ?

Payal—karni to hai par teri pasand ki kewal

Mai—aur apko…?

Ruchi—mujhe bhi..

Mai—theek hai chalo....aa jao...

Mai teeno ko lekar counter par aa gaya ....mujhe vaha dekhte hi manager (jo ek ladki hi thi monica) aur receptionist dono mere paas aakar khadi ho gayi

Mai—monica..ek kaam karna....34’’-28’’-36’’ ki every colour ki salwar suit ke 100 piece pack karke haweli bhijwa dena with same clour and same size undergarments too..ok….bill mere account se clear kar dena

Monica (mushkura kar)—ok sir ho jayega

Teeno ankhe phade mujhe dekh rahi thi….jaise maine kuch galat kah diya ho

Payal—tujhe ham teeno ka perfect size kaise pata….?

Mai—just imagine

Payal—aaj kal tu baki kaam chhod kar apni bahno ka size imagine karne laga hai…?..aur itne piece kyo liye..? sabka size alag hai…?

Mai—to kya hua….isme koun si badi baat hai……mai hu na…sabka ek jaisa kar dunga…..

Teeno—kyaaaaa….?

Mai (jaldi se galti sudhar)—nahii...vo mera matlab hai ki just imagine

Payal (ankh dikhate huye)—tu ghar chal phir batati hu....meri tabiyat kya kharab ho gayi tu itna bigad gaya

Mai—ok mai cancel kar deta..hu

Payal—rahne de ab....

Baki sab bhi mujhe aur divya ko dekh kar vahi aa gaye...sab uska haal chal puchne lage...aur mai un sabko dekhne laga..aaj kafi din baad sabke chehre par khushi ki halak dekh mai bhi khush ho gaya

Mai (kaan me)—tune kya kharida meri rail gadi... ?

Avni (dhire se)—tujhe aaj kal rail gadi chalane ka time kaha hai....

Mai (kaan me)—chinta mat kar....ab daily teri railgadi banaunga

Avni (dhire se)—railgadi to tu pahle hi bana chuka hai meri ab to aeroplane banegi

Mai (dhire se)—na...mai to apni railgadi hi chalaunga

Avni—mai wait karungi

Mai—chalo kuch khate hain ab...

Kavita—chaliye bhaiya

Hum sab mall se nikal kar restaurent aa gaye....sab idhar hi dekh rahe the...tabhi kuch awara manchale ladke vaha aa gaye....itni sari ladkiyo ko dekh kar unke muh se laar tapakne lagi

Magar phir mere upar nazar jate hi chup chap vaha se bina kuch khaye piye khisak gaye......sabne bharpet khana khane ke baad maine ice-cream order ki...tabhi mere mobile par koi massage aaya to mai check karne laga

Sandhya—ab kaha chalna hai raj... ?

Mai—ab tum log ek kaam karo ...sab ke sab jao parlour aur apna huliya theek karao jara....lagna chahiye ki kisi rajkumariyo jaisi

Diksha—mai aise hi theek hu bhaiya...mai nahi jaungi

Mai—mere kahne se bhi nahi

Diksha—ok..

Kiran—diksha aaj kal ghar ka poora kaam karne lagi hai bhaiya...kitchen se lekar bartan jhadu tak

Mai—akhir bahan kiski hai

Phir sab yaha se free hone ke baad mai unhe ek bade se ladies parlour me le gaya....mujhe to ab sara city hi janta tha aur meri family ko bhi..to vaha ki manager dekhte hi fauran aa gayi

Manager—yes sir...mai aapke ke liye kya kar sakti hu

Mai—mujhe apna kuch nahi karwana….bas aap meri sab bahno ko ekdam beauty queen bana do

Manager—sure sir….aur ek baat..face beauty ya full bodykarna hai

Mai—ab ye sawal to unse se hi puch lena…jaisa vo chahe

Manager—ok sir….but usme time lagega

Mai—theek aap karo…mai jab tak ghum kar aata hu

Phir kya tha ..vaha jitni bhi beauticians thi vo sab in sabki beauty nikharne me lag gayi….aur mai un sabko vaha chhod kar bahar nikal gaya…payal didi andar thi..isliye mujhe jane me problem nahi huyi….ruchi aur divya ko thodi der me aane ka bol diya tha

Dusri taraf vo taxi driver chandni ko lekar ghane jungle ke beech bane ek sunsan pade ghar me le gaya…aur vaha uski gadi rukte hi saikdo log apne hatho me gun aur talwar liye taxi ko charo oor se gher liye

Driver ke bahar jate hi chandni ne driver seat par rakha apna mobile jaldi se utha kar usme kuch karne lagi….kintu agle hi pal vo log Taxi ka door khol kar chandni ko jabardasti bahar khich kar ghasit kar andar le jane lage….vo roti rahi gidgidati rahi lekin koi uski is halat par taras khane ko ready nahi tha

Chandni ko ghasit kar unhone andar bane jim khane me jabran lita diya aur uske hath aur pairo ko phaila kar unke upar khoob vajandar weights rakh diye…ab vo chah kar bhi apne hath pair hila tak nahi sakti thi…uske hath pair me lohe ka itna vajan rakha hone se vo dard se rote huye chhat patane lagi…use aisa lagne laga ki hath pair hi haddi is vajan se toot jayengi

Chandni (dard me)—mujhe chhod do….maine tum logo ka kya bigada hai…?..kyo mujhe barbad karne par tule huye ho

"Chhod denge…darling..jarur chhod denge….magar sidhe upar tak chhod denge….pahle adhura kaam to poora kar lu phir"….is awaz ko sunkar chandni ke kaan khade ho gaye….isi awaz se bachne ke liye to vo apni bahan ko bura bhala suna kar vaha se bhagi thi….

Magar uski kismat ne use phir se vahi la kar patak diya…vo is awaz ko kaise bhul sakt thi…ye uday ki awaz thi jise usne turant pahchan liya…apni bebsi aur lachari par use rona aa gaya

Uday—kyo…bahut doudaya tune mujhe….?..sala meri raato ki need haram ho gayi thi tere bach jane se….ab bhag.. bhag na…hahahaha

Chandni (rote huye)—mujhe chhod do…..maine kya bigada hai….?

Uday—agar uss din tu meri baat maan leti to aaj maze me hoti….magar nahi tujhe to apni choot ko bacha kar rakhna hai…? Hnnn..use kya bacha kar kisi exhibition me sajayegi….?…ab to teri choot bhi fategi aur jaan se bhi jayegi

"Arey kahe ko itna bakar bakar kar ke apna time barbad karat hai re budbak….jaldi se ragad de sasuri ko.."… ek baar phir se chandni is awaz se chounk gayi jo usi driver ki thi

Uday—bas ab vahi karne wala hu TBM sahab

Driver (TBM)—to phir koun se muhurat ka intazar karat hai…..ab us sasuri ki choot ka moot piyega ka sasura… jo aisan time barbad karat hai…tu jam ke ragad sasuri ka….ham chalta hu…chal re hariyaaaa

Raste me…

Hariya—boss aapne us loundiya ko kyo nahi ragda…..?..ulta uday ko de diya…

TBM—tu bhi sasura budbak hi hai re…..par hum budbak nahi hu……vo uday sasura aaj marega…ukhra antim time aa gawa hai…tokhra ka laagat ki vo lounda Raj ko malum nahi chala hoga….naahi re hariya….abhi dekhna vo sasur kanati raj aayi ke is bhosdike uday ki gaand phad dega….hum itna pagal nahi hu ki aisan time ma vaha ruku

Hariya—par us lounde ko malum hi kaise chalega…..?

TBM—hum vo loundiya ka mobile taxi me jan bujhkar chhod diya tha…aur tujhe ka laagat hai us randi ne is mouke ka kuch fayda nahi uthaya hoga….?

Hariya—par aapne aisa kiya kyo….?

TBM—ye sab hamri chaal hai.....uday ab hamre koi kaam ka naahi rah gawa hai.....ukhra ab mar jaab theek hai

Hariya—par aap khud bhi to maar sakte the use.... ?

TBM—hum khoon se khoon ko marunga re…..us Thakur khandan me har kisi ko us lounde raj se marwaunga hum … aur tu to jaanat hai na hamka khoon kharab bilkul pasand naahi hai…..hum bahut sharif aur ahinsavadi admi hu

Hariya—mai samjha nahi boss…?

TBM—ye sab hamra makad jaal hai...tohri samajh ma naahi aayega budbak......

Hariya—vahi to boss....ki pahle aapne uday ka gate up lekar kamini ki khub choot maari.....phir usi kamini ke jariye rajendra ko phasaya....chanchal ko alag kiya.....dono baap beti ke hatho raj ko marwaya....phir uday ko kamini ki choot ka swad chakha ke use alag kiya ab use bhi marwa rahe ho

TBM—hahahaha...tohri moti khopdi me kachhu nahi ghusega hariya.....hamne kaha na khoon se khoon ko marunga.. hamne alag nahi kiya re balki marwaya bhi uske hi khoon se...

Hariya—par rajendra ko to yamraj ne mara tha na... ?

TBM—hum janta hu sab....Raj hi Yamraj hai...usi sasure ke hatho hamne ukhre baap ko marwa diya...sab samjhat hain ki unke sath jaun kuch huyi raha hai vo sab nasib ka khel hai...naahi re hariya..vo sab nasib ka nahi hamra makadjaal hai....jisme sab log phase gaye hain

Hariya—tab to aapne uday ke gate up me us ghar ki bahut si choot maar li hongi..uday ki biwi ki to jarur

TBM—naahi re hariya….vu ghar ki koi choot maarne ka hamra irada kabhi nahi tha aur na aaj hai kewal ek chhod kar

Hariya—vo koun sarkar ….?..

TBM—Divyaaa

Hariya—phir mari kyo nahi….?

TBM—ab ka bataye re hariya....sasuri bahut tagda currentawa marti hai re

Hariya—boss apki koi personal dushmani lagti hai thakur khandan se... ?

TBM—ha...hai dushmani....lekin thakur khandan se naahi....vu lounde Raj se hai hamri dushmani vo bhi bahut purani..kayi sadiyo purani dushmani hai hamri us lounde se

Udhar TBM ke jate hi uday ne apne kapde kholne shuru kar diye....chappe chappe par uske admi hathiyar ke sath us ghar ki ghera bandi kiye huye the...jisse uday ko apne kaam me koi rukawat na aaye

Chandni (rote huye)—mujhe jane do....aaaaa....mere hath pair ki haddi toot gayi hain....bahut dard ho raha hai...

Uday—hahahaha…..ro…ji bhar ke chilla chilla kar ro…..yaha ki jagah ke bare me koi nahi janta….aaj teri fatne se koi nahi bacha payega…hihihihi

Chandni (rote huye)—meri garib besahara ladki ki izzat loot kar apko kya milega…..

Uday—maza milega….maza….hihihihi

Chandni (jor se)—nahiiiiii….bachaaaooooooooo…….

Tabhi ek gadi tezi se vaha aakar rukti hai…..sab admi turant doud kar us gadi ko gher ke khade ho gaye….car ka gate khulte hi usme se bahar nikalte shakhs ka chehra dekh sab chounk gaye

Sab (shock)—Raaajjjjjj

Ye shakhs raj hi tha jo abhi yaha aaya hai…..Tabhi ek baar phir se chandni ke jor se chillane ki awaz aane lagi…..jise sunte hi mera gussa badhne laga

Mai—chup chap mera rasta chhod do….aur yaha se chale jao.....agar jinda rahna chahte ho to

Leader—hahaha....mout ke muh me khud khada hai aur hame dhamki de raha hai....aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh

Mai—vinash kale vipreet buddhi...... (aur maine apne samne khade us leader ke sine me halka sa dhakka diya jisse vo niche gir ke dard me chillane laga)

Ye dekh kar sab mujhe pakadne ke liye aa gaye....jo bhi mere paas aata use mai apne samne se dhakka dekar girate huye aage badhne laga

Is baar sab ke sab ek sath mere upar toot pade...maine khade hokar unko jhatak diya…..sab idhar udhar chhitra gaye aur turant firing chalu kar di

Bahar shor sharabe ki awaz sun kar uday bhi chaukanna ho gaya....aur turant apni revolver nikal ke bahar darwaje ke key hole se jhankne laga...vaha se jhankne par use kewal apne admi idhar se udhar udte girte dikh rahe the....uska to dimag hi chakra gaya


Sab lagatar mere upar goliya barsane lage.....lekin ek bhi goli mere sharir ke aar par nahi ho saki...vo mujhse takrate hi apna dum tod deti thi

Sab hairan ho chuke the..ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai.....unhone phir bhi yahi anuman lagaya ki maine shayad bullet proof kuch pahna hai andar jiski vajah se unki fring ma koi asar mujh par nahi ho raha hai

Maine speed se bhagte huye jump laga di aur sidha darwaja tod kar andar ja gira......uday darwaje se chipka hua tha mujhse takrakar darwaja tootne par uday uchhalte huye dur samne ki deewar se takrakar niche dhadam se gira aur dard me chillane laga

Jabki mujhe vaha dekh kar chandni ko apni izzat lutne se bachne ki kuch ummid jagne lagi....tab tak bahar ke sabhi gunde andar aakar mere sar par guns laga ke khade ho gaye aur chandni ko apni bachne ki asha phir se dhumil ho gayi

Uday (baith kar hairan)—raaajjjj tummmm....yahannnn....kaiseeee... ?

Mai (dard me)—akhir kyo aap ne aisa kiya….?..kya kami thi hamare pyar me... ?..jo itna niche gir gaye aap ki ek majbur ladi ki izzat tak taar taar karne par utaru ho gaye…..kyo….?

Uday—ab jab tum itna jaan hi chuke ho to sach bhi sun lo….shadi ho jane ke baad bhi mai aaj tak teri chachi ke sath sambandh nahi bana paya….janta hai kyo…?..kyon ki use hath lagate hi mera hathiyar hi gayab ho jata hai….maine shadi ke baad do teen baar usse sambandh banane ki koshish ki har bar yahi hua

Uday—har bar to usse dur hote hi vo vapis jaisa ka taisa ho jata tha lekin teesri baar try karne ke baad vo vapis to hua magar uska size moong phali jitna ho gaya….mai usse itna darr gaya ki phir videsh chala gaya aur phir kabhi neha ko touch tak nahi kiya….

Uday—kitna badnasib hu mai ki bina sambhog kiye hi sperm donate aur operation se do do ladkiyo ka baap bana neha do ladkiyo ki maa bani kintu aaj bhi kuwari hai….videsh me rahkar maine bahut treatment karaya kintu koi fayda nahi hua….tab maine surgery se nakli guptang lagwaya ab mai sambhog karne kaha jau…..is nakli guptang ki vajah se mujhe har samay sambhog karne ka mann hota hai

Uday—isiliye mai bahar karne laga….chandni ko dekhte hi mera dil ispe aa gaya….ye meri Sali hai…..yani aadhi gharwali….ek baar mujhe khush kar deti to kya bigad jata iska…?..ab to ise marna hi hoga aur tujhe bhi..kyon ki dono hi mera raaz jaan chuke ho….

Mai (mann me)—ye sab mere hi papo ka phal hai….jiska dand sab bhog rahe hain….

Uday—sorry raj….khatam kar ise…ab mai is randi ki tarike se tere samne hi choot phadunga

Mai—dur hato mujhse…warna mujhe vo karne par majbur mat karo jo main nahi karna chahta

Leader—bullet proof jacket pahan kar hero giri dikhata hai....ye bheja uda do iska.....aur is loundiya ko to ham sab ragdenge…ye vaise hi mar jayegi

Uday jakar chandni ke upar let gaya aur jabardasti use kiss karne ki koshish karne laga…vo baar baar apna muh idhar udhar ghuma kar khud ko bachane lagi

Chandni (rote huye)—nahiii…..pls chhod do…..nahiii…raajjjj..bachaaoooooo

Uday—tujhe kaise chhod du bina ragde…..ab raj ke marne ke baad Ruchi, Payal aur Mahak ki choot phadunga roj…unhe apni rakhail banaunga..hihihi

Ye dekh aur uday ki aisi meri bahno ke bare me anargal baate kar mera kroadh meri had se bahar ho gaya aur mai jo nahi karna chahta tha wo kar gaya….gusse me maine apne dono hath jor se ghuma diye jisse mere paas jitne bhi khade the sab dur ja gire

Uday ne turant chandni ke upar se uth kar mere upar dana dan fire karne laga…..maine apna ek hath sine me rakha aur dusra hath upar ki taraf mod kar ankhe band kar li

Agle pal vo hua jise dekh kar sabhi ki ankhe bahar nikal aayi….unke hatho se hathiyar chhut kar niche gir gaye sab ke sab apni jagah par khade khade thar thar kaampne lage



Uday aur chandni ko apni ankho par yakin karna mushkil ho gaya ki jo vo is samay apni khuli ankho se dekh rahe hain kya vo sach hai…?

Uday aur chandni ashcharya chakit hokar apalak mujhe dekhe ja rahe the aur baki sabhi log darr se piche hatne hatne lage apni apni jagah se

Maine jaise hi apne sine par hath rakh ke ankhe band ki vaha ek tez roshni ke sath mere dusre hath ki ungli par ek chakra full speed me ghumta hua nazar aane laga

Ye dekh kar sabhi ekdam shocked ho gaye….unke sharir ko jaise lakwa lag gaya ho aisi paristhiti nirmit ho gayi.. uday aur chandni ankhe phade mujhe dekhne lage

Us chakra ki taraf kisi ki nazar hi nahi tik rahi thi….usme se itni roshni nikal rahi thi ki udhar dekhna sambhav nahi tha….maine ankhe khol kar jaise hi chakra ki oor dekha….usne meri ungli se nikal kar vaha moujud poore 100 logo ki gardan unke sharir se alag karke 1 sec me vapis apni jagah meri ungli me aa gaya

Chandni aur uday ko kaato to khoon nahi vali sadme ki haalat me ho gaye…unhe samajh me hi nahi aaya ki ye kab hua….kab vo chakra meri ungli se nikla aur kab vapis aa gaya….agar kuch dikh raha tha to vaha 100 logo ki kati huyi gardan aur bina dhad ke utne hi sharir

Maine ab apna rukh jaise hi uday ki oor kiya…. Vo thar thar kaampte huye dono hath jod kar jindagi ki bhikh maangne laga

Uday (darr se gidgidate)—mujhe maf kar do…..mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi…..mujhe maf kar do…mai tumhara chacha hu beta…maf kar de mujhe….main tere pair pakadta hu….maf kar de

Chandni to darr se kampte huye kisi bahut bade gahre sadme me doob gayi thi….maine ek nazar chakra ki oor dekha aur agle hi pal vaha uday ki sar kati lash padi nazar aane lagi….use dard me cheekhne ka bhi samay nahi mila

Mai--"Meri Dictionary Me Mafi Jaisa Koi Shabd Hi Nahi Hai"


( Current Update Size : 3068 Words )


Next Upcoming Updates Highlight : Entry of 2nd Main Lead Heroine of the Story after Divya​

 

[anandsngh12]

Waiting

Posted

 

[John Cena]

Superb yar

 

[Aryan s.]

Nice update....
Yeh TBM to full proof planned wala hai....
Dekhte hain Raj woh plan ko kaise todta hai....
Uday ka bhi kam tamam ho gaya....
Superb update....
for the update