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agyant

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Pratigya ko chuda liya Agyant ne...., Par ab lagta hai trikal aur p'asur direct Agyant ko hi target karenge... Ab kya karega trikal.....?

Idhar Mitali bhi apni behen ke liye pareshan hai.... Hope wo safe ho....

Payal ki raj ke liye pyar bahut hi special hai jo raj ke ahat ko bina dekhe pehchan jati hai...., Ab sayad gharwalon ki halat me sudhar aaye kyonki raj wapas agaya hai....
Story ab bahut hi interesting situation me hai dear...
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Hi anandsngh12 bhai main xp ka silent reader tha aur aapki story ko 1st update se padhate aa raha hoon story bahot best hai can't define in words he mera pahela review hai sirf aapke liye main yaha aaj hi reg. huwa hu
 
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Payal (bhagte rote huye)—mera raj aa raha hai….mera raj aa raha hai

Sab uthkar uske piche bhagne lage...lekin vo kisi ke rokne se kaha rukne wali thi..vo kisi na kisi se takrakar niche girti phir uth ke bhagne lagti....

injection ka asar uspar havi hone laga tha jiske chalte uski ankhe baar baar band ho rahi thi aur uski chal me bhi ladkhadahat aa gayi thi

Tabhi bhagte bhagte vo kisi se takra kar uski oor bina dekhe hi "Tu aa gaya Raj" kah kar behosh hoke us shakhs ki baho me jhul gayi

Ab aage..................

Payal ke pichhe pichhe sabhi bhagte huye aa gaye.....aur us shakhs ka chehra dekhte hi unke badhte kadam jaha ke taha ruk gaye jiski baho ke ghere me payal is samay behosh ho chuki thi

Unki ankhe hairat aur apaar khushi se khuli rah gayi...palko ne bhi jhapakne par alpa viram laga diya

Jab unki tandra bhang huyi to sab jor se chilla uthe... ‘’Rajjjjj’’...aur unki ankho me khushiyo ki ashrudhara bahne lagi...sab bhag kar jake usse lipat gaye

Ye shakhs aur koi nahi un sabka ladla Raj hi tha jiski agosh me payal ja simti thi...kahte hain jiske dil me sachcha payar ho kisi ke liye to uska dil kisi ke bina kuch kahe hi uske kadmo ki padchap ki awaz dur se hi pahchan leta hai...Payal ne is baat ko aaj sahi sabit kar diya tha

Is samay vaha moujud har shakhs ki ankhe bheegi huyi thi kintu inme khushi ki jhalak thi....

Raj ne payal ko apni god me uthakar le jake uske bistar par lita diya...uski aisi halat dekh kar khud raj ki ankho se bhi pani bahne laga

Raj (nam ankho se)—aap ko kya hua hai didi....ankhe kholo na...dekho apka raj apke pass lout aaya hai....itna pyar karti ho mujhe....chachi kya hua hai meri didi ko..

Neha (sisakte huye)—ab tu aa gaya hai to shayad vo theek ho jaye..beta..bechari.. teri judayi ka sadma usse bardast nahi hua aur vo apni dimagi santulan kho baithi

Nani—sabse jyada raj ko pyar bhi to vahi karti thi akhir

Mai—doctor....kab tak theek ho jayegi meri didi...aap kuch bhi karo....jitna paisa chahiye le lo....bas meri didi ko theek kar do...meri payal didi ke bina to meri jindagi ka koi vajood hi nahi hai

Doctor—ab aap aa gaye hain to hame bhi ummid hone lagi hai…agar upar wale ne chaha to apki bahan jaldi hi theek ho jayegi

Mai—aap log kuch dhyan nahi dete the kya…dekhiye kaise gande kapde pahne hain didi ne…chachi..kam se kam aapko to dhyan dena chahiye tha na

Nani—beta isme kisi ka koi kasoor nahi hai…..vo kisi ko apne paas aane hi nahi deti thi…..

Mai—kya hua tha mere jane ke baad…mujhe sab sach sach batao

Phir neha chachi ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya jo bhi hua tha mere jane ke baad yaha par…..halanki saloni ne mujhe pahle hi sab bata diya tha lekin main abhi ye show nahi karna chahta tha

Maa aur ruchi didi ki halat sunkar mujhe vakayi me bahut dukh hua….

Mai—maa kaha hai….?

Neha—beta vo didi dusre VIP ward me hain…abhi tak vo coma me hi hain

Mai—mujhe maa ke paas le chalo aur chachi aap didi ke kapde manga lo ya purchase karwa lo kisi se

Kavita—mai le aati hu didi ke kapde

Neha—uske kapde yaha rakhe hain...

Mai doctor ke sath maa ke pass aa gaya….jaha vo bilkul shant leti huyi thi..koi halchal nahi thi sharir me

Mai jakar maa ke pairo ke pass baith gaya…..aur unke pairo me apna sar rakh diya..meri ankho se nikalte anshoo unke pairo ko bhigone lage

Mai—maa…ankhe kholo maa…dekho apka beta aa gaya…ab kahi nahi jaunga apko chhod kar…Jindagi mein agar maa na ho to jindagi mein kuch nahi bachta kyonki sari duniya ka pyar maa ke pyar ke barabar nahi ho sakta wo bahut khusnasib hote hain jinke pass maa hoti hai….

"Jee mei aata hai, waqt se kuch palon ko mei chura lun…

Maa teri god mei sar rakhkar, kuch pal sukoon ke bita lun.

Duniya ke sang bhaagte bhaagte thak gaya hun maa…

Teri mamta ki chhaon tale thodi neerasta ko mita lun…

Teri murat ko in aankhon mei sada ke liye basa lun…

Tujhse kiye har ek waade ko mei zinda rehte nibha lu…

Teri charno ki dhool ko zara maathe pe mei laga lun…

Apni khushiyon ke phoolon se teri raahon ko mei saja dun."


Tabhi Maa ke pairo me mujhe kuch halchal si mahsus huyi….maine turant doctor ko kaha..

Mai—doctor…abhi maine maa ke pairo me kuch halchal mahsus ki hai…pls check

Doctor—mai abhi check karta hu..

Doctor maa ka check up karne laga…magar use koi halchal hoti huyi samajh me nahi aayi

Doctor—lagta hai apke sparsh ko inki mamta ne pahchan liya hoga..tabhi kuch halchal huyi hogi…kintu phir se vaisa hi hai…but mujhe ummid hai ki jaldi hi ye theek ho jayengi…bas apko jyada waqt inke paas bitana hoga…apki baate aur apke sparsh se inke bejan sharir me phir se jaan aa sakti hai

Mai—mai aaj se yahi hospital me rahunga jab tak maa aur didi theek nahi ho jati

Neha—jarur rahna beta...hum bhi rahenge....lekin koi aur bhi hai jise is waqt tere sahare ki jarurat hai

Mai—koun...Ruchi didi.... ?..kaha hain vo... ?..vo nahi aayi yaha... ?

Geeta—vo bechari to miss devdas ban gayi hai ..jab dekho kamre me hi band rahti hai…. Bas teri tasveer ke sahare hi jinda hai…magar jinda lash ki tarah

Mai—doctor..payal didi ko kab tak hosh ayega..... ?

Doctor—lagbhag char ghante baad

Mai—ok, thanks doctor…..chachi mai ghar ja raha hu tab tak aap log yaha dhyan rakhna aur didi ko hosh aate hi mujhe call kar dena vaise main uske pahle hi aa jaunga

Rupaly—beta vo mahak kahi dikhayi nahi de rahi hai... ? kaha hai vo... ?

Mai—vo bhi theek hai....bas abhi usko hosh nahi aaya hai

Neha—ha raj...tum itne din tak kaha the... ?..mahak koun se hospital me hai..?

Mai—baad me batata hu…chachi

Neha—theek hai beta

Mai—dono chacha aur chhoti chachi kaha hain…?

Nani—beta..vo mitali ki bahan kal se lapta hai..to awadhesh usko hi yaha waha talash kar raha hai..sath me uske veer bhi hai...

Mai—itna sab kuch ho gaya...in kuch dino me hi....anyway mai dekhta hu...pahle ek baar ghar me didi se mil lu

Mai hospital se sidhe ghar nikal gaya....door bell bajane ke thodi der baad gate diksha ne open kiya....

Gate kholne ke baad jaise hi uske nazar mere upar gayi to vo dekhte hi use shock laga lekin jab hosh aaya to bhaiya kah ke cheekh kar mere gale lag gayi….uski cheekhne ki awaz sunkar mitali chachi apne room se bahar aayi

Mitali—kya hua diksha..tum cheekhi kkkkk………Raajjjjj ?

Mujhe samne sahi salamat khade dekh kar unhe apni ankho par kuch samay tak bharosa hi nahi hua…par jab unhe yakin ho gaya ki main hi hu to vo bhi jor se rote huye mujhse lipat gayi

Mitali (rote huye)—kaha chala gaya tha…hame besahara chhodkar….?..tujhe pata hai in chand dino me hum hazaro mout mar chuke hain

Mai—shant ho jao..dono..ab to aa gaya na

Diksha—bhaiya aap hame baar baar kyo chhod kar chale jate ho..tadap tadap kar jeene ke liye…?

Mai—ab kahi nahi jaunga..

Mitali—ab tujhe ghar ke bahar hi nahi jane dungi main

Mai—ruchi didi kaha hain... ?

Diksha—apne room me...aaj nasta bhi nahi kiya unhone..

Mai—khana la kar do mujhe...mai dekhta hu

Idhar Ruchi ke room me.....

Ruchi raj ki tasveer ko dono hatho me liye bistar me baithkar usse kuch shikayat kar rahi hai…

Ruchi—tumne apna vada tod diya betu…mere sath hi aisa kyo kiya tumne….mere hisse ki khushiyo ko kyo grahan lag gaya…mai to soch rahi thi ki tere sath akele ghumne jaungi to apne mann ki vyatha tujhe sunaungi…lekin kabhi tujhse kuch kah hi nahi…badi mushkil se khud ko apna haal-e-dil kahne ki himmat jutayi thi maine par tu beech me hi mera sath chhod gaya

"Tum yaad nahi karte.. ham tumhe bhula nahi sakte,

Tumhara aur hamara rishta itna khubsurat hai,

Tum soch nahi sakte.. ham bata nahi sakte!"


Tabhi maine room me aakar unke pichhe se khane ki thali unke samne rakh di

Ruchi—diksha..mai kah chuki hu na mujhe nahi khana hai…thali le jao…dekh nahi rahi mai abhi busy hu


"Bhale hi chale jaao door hamse,

Teri yaadon ko hamnen mahfooz rakha hai,

Lauṭkar aaoge ummeed hai dil ko,

Darwaja is dil ka isiliye khula rakha hai."



Mai--
"Yaadein aksar hoti hai satane ke liye,

Koi rooth jata hai fir maan jane ke liye,

Rishte nibhana koi mushkil to nahi,

Bas dilon mai pyar chahiye use nibhane ke liye."


Ruchi didi turant palat gayi awaz sunte hi.....unke samne mai apni dono bahe phailaye khada tha...vo bas mujhe dekhe ja rahi thi ek tak

Ruchi (dhire se)—lagta hai aaj kal mai khuli ankho se bhi sapna dekhne lagi hu

Unhone apni ankho ko dono hatho se masla aur jab ankhe kholi tab bhi unke samne mai vaise hi khada tha...unki ankho se jhar jhar karke ankhoo bahne lage...hoth kaampne lage..jaise vo kuch kahna chahte ho magar kah nahi pa rahe

Mai—kya hua... ?..didi..meri baho me nahi aaogi... ?

Ruchi (jor se cheekh kar rote huye)—betttuuuuuuuu

Unke hath se meri tasveer vahi niche gir gayi aur vo bhag kar mujhse lipat kar jor jor se rone lagi

Ruchi (rote huye)—tu sach me aa gaya betu.... ?..kahi ye mera sapna to nahi hai.... ?

Mai—na...apka betu..apke paas aa gaya hai didi..ye koi sapna nahi hai

Ruchi (rote huye)—tu kaha chala gaya tha....mujhe chhod ke... ?..ek baar bhi nahi socha mai kaise jinda rahungi tere bin... ?

Mai—aapki yaad hi to mujhe apke paas khich layi hai...didi

Ruchi—ab to mujhe chhod ke nahi jayega na

Mai—kahi nahi jaunga..apni ruchi didi ko chhod ke

Ruchi—ab kahi gaya to mai jinda nahi bachungi betuu

Mai—sssshhh…aisi galat baat nahi karte….aap to meri sabse bahadur didi ho

Ruchi (sisakte huye)—magar mera dil bahut kamjor hai ..betu

Mai—ab mai use majbut bana dunga phir se…aur iske liye sabse pahle apko khana khana hoga..chalo jaldi se khao

Mai unhe lekar bistar par baith gaya….lekin vo mere sine se lipti rahi…maine khud hi apne hatho se unhe khilata gaya vo bas khate huye mujhe hi dekhti rahi

Khana khilane ke baad unke muh ko saf kiya….aur phir unke sath hi bistar me let gaya…vo mujhse apni shikayte karti rahi

Tabhi diksha room me aayi to maine use bhi apne paas bula liya..vo bhi aake ek taraf se mujhse lipat kar let gayi

Kafi der tak hum aise hi baate karte lete rahe…mitali chachi bhi mere paas hi aake baith gayi thi…lekin unke chehre par khushi aur dukh dono ke bhav the

Mai—aap chinta mat karo chachi….mujhe sab malum ho chuka hai…mujh par bharosa rakho…sab theek ho jayega ab

Mitali—ab tera hi to bharosa hai..raj mujhe

Tabhi mera phone bajne laga…maine check kiya to neha chachi ki call thi…unhone bataya ki mai jaldi se hospital aa jau…payal didi ko hosh aa gaya hai aur unhone phir se bawal macha diya hai

Mai sabko sath lekar hospital nikal gaya turant hi…


Friends, kayi log chahte hain ki main jaldi flashback end karu…lekin dosto meri kahani ek janam ki nahi balki saat janam ki hai….har janam ki kahani apne aap me full story hai

Kahte hain Ateet vartaman ka aayina hota hai aur vartaman se bhavishya banta hai…bina itihas jane vartaman ka nirman sambhav nahi hai…mai vaise bhi kewal utna hi flashback me dikha raha hu jitna dikhana bahut jaruri hai

Present me jitne bhi suspense aa rahe hain unke jawab flashback me hi milenge…aur vaha jo ghatnaye huyi unka jawab present hai

Anyway fir bhi aap sab ki khwahish ko dhyan me rakhte huye mai ab se ek din present aur agle din past ka update dunga jo ki ab jyada nahi hai..maine usme se lagbhag 100 update kam kar diye hain


Aap sab ke jo bhi suggessions honge main unpar amal karne ka poora prayas karunga..jaha tak kahani ke hit me possible hoga
 
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