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anandsngh12

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SAAJAN

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6th Janam ki Love Story Continues.......


Mai Pratigya ko Prachandasur ke sainiko dwara utha le jane ki baat sunkar hairan rah gaya...

Mai—lekin kyo... ?

Aurat—Ye to mujhe nahi pata... ?

Mai—aap chinta mat kijiye…mai use vapis lekar aunga….vo use kis disha me lekar gaye hain….?

Aurat—vo bahut hi dushta aur khatarnak hai beta…vo log meri beti ko pashchim disha ki oor le gaye hain

Mai—theek hai…aap himmat rakhiye…upar wale ne chaha to sab kuch theek ho jayega

Main unko dilasa dekar apni nayi manzil ki oor aage badh gaya…..P’asur vaha ka Raja tha isliye uske mahal ka pata dhudne me koi pareshani pesh nahi aayi

Mai jaldi hi uske mahal ke paas pahuch gaya….jaha mahal ke charo oor suraksha ka kada prabandh tha

Mahal ke andar ghusne ka koi rasta nazar nahi aa raha tha aur itne sare sainiko se yuddh karne se deri bhi ho sakti hai…magar lade bina rasta banega nahi

Ye vichar kar ke mai mahal ke piche ki taraf chala gaya…jaha ki deeware jyadi oonchi hone ke karan suraksha me kuch kami thi

Yahi se maine shuruvaat karne ki sochi…magic ki madad se maine uss deewar par chadhna chalu kar diya aur jaldi hi upari sire tak pahuch gaya

Boundry wall ke upar nali type rasta bana hua tha…mai usme let kar sarakte huye aage badhta gaya

Ek jagah mujhe mahal ki khidki nazar aayi….jiske sahare mahal ke andar pravesh kiya ja sakta tha…lekin vaha par char sainiko ka pahra tha

Unse ab muqabla to karna hi padega agar andar jana hai to..ye soch kar maine upar se hi unpar chhalang laga di aur kuch samajhne se pahle hi do logo ko maut ki need sula diya

Apne sathiyo par achanak hamla hone se baki do pahle to sakte me aa gaye lekin phir mere upar jhapat pade…jaldi hi un dono ka bhi kaam tamam kar unme se ek kapde pahan liye aur unki lash ko utha kar boundry se bahar phek diya…aur main khidki ke raste andar ghus gaya

Ye rasoyi ghar tha jisme mai ghusa tha….kamre me har taraf janvaro ka maans rakha hua tha…mai jaldi hi vaha se nikalne se pahle sabhi khane ki cheezo me behoshi ki dawa mila di

Ek baat mere hit me rahi ki rasoyi me koi nahi tha is samay….mai ab mahal ke andar ghumte huye pratigya ki talash karne laga

Maine apna huliya sainiko wala kar rakha tha jisse mujhe andar aane jane me kisi ne rok tok nahi ki

Aise hi ghumte ghumte mujhe ek jagah par do naukaro ke apas me baat karne ki awaz sunayi di jo vaha safayi ka kaam kar rahe the….mai dhyan se unki baate suune ka prayatna karne laga

Naukar 1—bhai suna hai maharaj ke hath ek aur shikar lag gaya hai

Naukar 2—ha yaar..unke hath to roj hi koi na koi shikar hath lagta hi rahta hai

Naukar 1—lekin mujhe lagta hai ki is me jarur koi khas baat hai

Naukar 2—bechari..aaj raat uski jindagi badal jayegi….par khas kaise..?

Naukar 1—tabhi to guru dev Trikal aaj mahal aaye huye hain aur maharaj bhi unke sath uss ladki se milne gaye hain

Mai ye baate sun kar asmanjas aur soch me pad gaya ki inka kya maksad hai..? par ye ladki hai koun…mere mann me use dekhne ki jigyasa jaag uthi ..ab uska pata kaise malum chale ki usko kaha rakha gaya hai

Magar kahte hain na ki agar apka maksad nek ho to upar wala bhi koi na koi rasta dikha hi deta hai

Mai abhi uss ladki ke baare me soch hi raha tha ki vaha se kuch sainik mujhe ek oor jate dikhe….tabhi unme se ek ki nazar mere upar gayi

Sainik—ye sainik tum yaha kya kar rahe ho….?..chalo idhar aao tum bhi

Mai uski baat mankar unke sath hi chal diya….vo sab ek karagrih ke samne aakar ruk gaye aur kisi ko jhuk kar pranam karne lage

Maine bhi halka jhuk kar samne dekha to vaha ek sar me mukut pahne khub hatta katta admi aur uske paas me hi ek nang dhadang admi khada tha jiski dadhi khub lambi thi

Mai samajh gaya ki ye hi P’asur aur trikal hain…..tabhi vaha par ek ladki ko jabran khichte huye laya gaya jo khud ko chhod dene ki vinti karte huye roye ja rahi thi

Mujhe ye awaz jani pahchani lagi to mai jaise hi palat kar udhar dekha to gussa meri ankho se hote huye andar dil tak utarne laga

Kyon ki ye ladi koi aur nahi balki Pratigya hi thi…jiske hatho ko lohe ki chain se baandh kar laya gaya aur le jakar P’asur aur Trikal ke samne khada kar diya

Pratigya (rote huye)—maharaj mujhe chhod dijiye…maine koi apradh nahi kiya hai

P’asur—hum jante hain….tumne koi gunah nahi kiya hai….chinta mat karo hum tumhe chhod denge…agar tum hamari baat manogi to

Pratigya (rote huye)—mai to ek garib ladki hu…maharaj..mai apki kya madad kar sakti hu bhala….?

Trikal—tum chaho to bahut madad kar sakti ho….

Pratigya—mujhe kya karna hoga…?

P’asur—daro mat...koi tumhari izzat nahi lutega....balki hamari madad ke badle me hum tumhe apni maharani banayenge...tum raj karogi yaha

Pratigya—mujhe maharani nahi banna hai maharaj...mai garib hi theek hu

Trikal—dekho ladki....agar hamari baat maan logi to hum tumhe chhod denge aur agar nahi maani to mai tumse jabardasti bhi ki ja sakti hai….madad to tumhe karni hi padegi

Pragiya (rote huye)—mujhe kya karna hoga... ?

Trikal—tumhe kuch nahi karna hai...bas mai jo jo mantra bolne ko kahu tumhe unko dohrana hai kewal

Pratigya—kaise mantra..... ? kya chahte hain aap.. ? main hi kyo... ?

P’asur—kyon ki mujhe Pari ki shaktiya chahiye......uss neel mani tak pahuchne ke liye

Pratigya (sisakte huye)—mai kisi pari ko nahi janti.. ? mera yakin kijiye...aur na hi neel mani ke bare hi kuch janti hu...mujhe jane dijiye

Trikal—bevkoof ladki…vo Pari tum khud ho…uska shakti wala roop..tum ho…tumhare mantra uchcharan karte hi pari ki shaktiya tumhare andar jagrit hone lagegi phir shaitan tumse sambhog karke vo shaktiya tumse chhen lega aur phir shaitan us shakti ko mujhe dega

P’asur—aur phir guru dev vo shaktiya mujhe denge jisski madad se mai neel mani ki adbhut shaktiya bhi hasil kar sakunga….hahahaha

Pratigya—(rote huye) nahi...ye nahi ho sakta.....mujhe jane dijiye...mai kisi ko apna maan chuki hu

Trikal—bevkoof ladki.....tere chahne ya na chahne se kuch nahi hoga....agar tu apni marzi se razi nahi huyi to mai apni sammohan shakti se tujhe vash me karke sab karwa lunga….Mera naam Trikal hai…Trikal

Mai neel mani ka jikra sun kar hairan rah gaya…..ki inhone Neel Mani hasil karne ke liye Pratigya ko pakda hai….

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Awadhesh neha aur madhu ke sath hospital chala gaya….baki pariwar ke log pahle hi vaha ja chuke the….

payal bistar me lete huye kuch gun guna rahi thi…..kamre ki khidki ke paas hi nani…bade mama aur mami baithi use dekh rahi thi

neha log bhi tab tak vaha pahuch gaye….awadhesh andar jane hi wala tha ki neha ne use ishare se rok diya

Awadhesh—kyo rok diya bhabhi….?..use khana khilana hai

Neha (dhire se)—abhi vo raj ki yaado me khoyi hai….agar abhi use disturb karoge to gusse me aakar vo tum par ghatak hamla bhi kar sakti hai ..

Awadhsh—aisa kab tak chalega….?

Neha—pata nahi…?

Awadhesh—ab use koun samjhaye ki jane wale lout kar nahi aate

Payal—malum hai raj…aaj kisi ne mujhse kuch puch liya…batau tujhe…(pillow ko uthakar)

"Aaj Aasman Ke Taaro Ne Mujhe Puch Liya,

Kya Tumhe Abhi Bhi Intejar He Uske Laut Aane ka,

Maine Mushkurakar Kar Kaha,

Tum Laut Aane Ki Bat Karte Ho,

Mujhe To Abhi Yakin Nahi Uske Jaane Ka!"


Nani—na jane upar wala kab meri bachchi par taras khayega…

Chanchal isi soch me dubi huyi thi ki kaise vo us aghori ka pata talash kare.. usne apni ankhe band karke bistar me let gayi…

Thodi hi der me uske khyalo me vo ghatnaye ghumne lagi….vo sapno ki duniya se hote huye apni pichli yaado me khoti gayi……khoti gayi….use saajan ke sath bitaye vo hasin pal yaad aane lage…

Theek usi waqt yahi vision sandhya ko bhi dikhne laga…lekin dono ke sapno me antar tha….jaha chanchal pyar ke bitaye pal dekh rahi thi vahi sandhya ke sapno me raj sabha ka vo dard nak scene chal raha tha …..

Achanak chanchal ke sapne me vo scene bhi aa gaya jisme vo raj ke sine me khanjar maar rahi hai aur raj ka khoon uski maang me ja girta hai…

Kuch pal sapno ki duniya me khoye rahne ke baad uske khatam hote hi dono ke chehro ke bhav bilkul alag the..

Chanchal (shock)—mujhe rajgarh kyo dikhayi de raha tha…. ?...aur vo meri maang me raj ka khoonnn.....ha...meri maang me khoon to laga tha jise maine ghar aane par dhoya tha...iska matlab...raj... omg....mujhe ye aaj tak yaad kyo nahi aaya mai to kab ki uski biwi ban chuki hu.....shayad bhagwan ki yahi marzi thi..

Vahi dusri oor....

Sandhya (gusse me)—tu abki baar phir jinda bach gaya....magar kab tak bachega....tujhe maare bina meri pratigya poori nahi hogi.....tujhe marna hi hoga saajan

Vahi ghar me akeli Mitali apni bahan ke aane ka intazar kar rahi thi...usne kayi baar use phone lagaya kintu mobile switched off ja raha tha..

Tabhi uday aa gaya khali hath…uska chehra utra hua tha
 

anandsngh12

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Bahut hi bemisal update... Ekdam mast update tha...

Sweet romantic moment between Agyant and vidhi....,
Par Agyant ke wade ke mutabik 7th janm me koi punarjanm ya phiir koi presence jarur honi chahiye..
Idhar pratigya ko bhi p'asur ke sainik utha le gaye hai...., Ab to unki khair nahi...

Is update se lagta hai ki TBM all time villain banne wala hai...., Jis ke kuchh jhalak 6th janm me bhi mil gaya hai.... aur agar aisa hua to TBM ka raz end me khulega....., Aur mera andaja sahi hua to TBM ke pas jarur kuchh shaitani talat ho sakta hai..
Aur wo locket aur tattoo kuch saitani takat ka pratik ho....

Uday ko lekar bhi bahut sare suspense khada ho gaya hai......, Agar uday namard hai to to paridhi aur diksha kaise paida hue aur kamini ki ijjat uday kaise luta..? Halanki apane kuch hints diye hai comment ke jariye...., Par abhi ke liye uday ko lekar koi conclusion nehi nikala ja sakta.....

Is ghatna se diksha me bahut bada badalav agayi hai..., Par me purani wali Diksha, jo thodi pagal aur jhalli type ko wapas dekhna pasand karunga...
Kul milakar bahut sare suspense create ho gaye hai
To ab
Next clue opps update ka intezar..
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bhai is khubsurat Review ke Liye
Pratigya ko kidnapinng karne ka reason recent update me mil jayega
TBM ke baare me apka anuman bilkul sahi hai
Uday namard ho sakta hai magar TBM to nahi na...?
Ye Rajgarh se juda Raaz hai jo upcoming chapter me khulega
Abhi tak ke jo pending suspense hain vo ya to rajgarh se attached hain ya phir Raj se
Raj se jude raaz chapter 9 me khulenge
Apka andaza sahi hai TBM ke baare me khulasa end me hi hoga tab tak illusion create hota rahega
Diksha ke character me badlav aaya hai lekin chulbulapan nahi jayega...ha maturity jarur ayegi usme
Thanks for such a very nice update review
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.


To pratigya kaid me h or o bhi prachandasur ke kabje me.
Or wahan Agyant bhi pahunch gya h.
Lekin wahan bada hi ghinauna khel Racha ja Raha h.
Dekhna h ki Agyant kaise in sajisho ko khatm karta h ??
Chanchal ko yaad aa gya sab kuchh.
Or Payal dwara jo shayri dikhayi h aapne ekdam lajwaab rhi.
Uday Khali hath Kyun ??
Hamesha ki tarah yeh update bhi Kamal ka tha.
Aapki writing skill bahut hi achhi h.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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