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Viraj Raj

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Wah Bhai Superb , Fantastic or Lajavab Update...
● Kya kya ho gya sbi ko Ye to pariksha ka samaye hai...
● Lekin kya kre sab payaar k mare h..
● Aapne to humse dil b dokhi kr diye..
● Kya rachna ki h Yamraj ki or kya darshaya h Hatts of...
● Payaar ki laaj & Vishvas ka maan rakh liya .... ..... "God Tushi Great Ho"
● Pari ne bahut bdi galti kr di Ab saja to bhogatni padegi....
● kyoki pura sach jaane Baker koye fesla lena galt ...
● Mana pari ko mata ne vardan diya tha Pr Raj b mata k Aashirwad se hoaa tha or ek vardan kabhi Aashiwad ka roop nhi le sakta....
● Pari es ek karte se hi bahut or kye paap kr diye Or Vardan dena Bhagwan ka dharm h pr vardan ka upyog or uska karm lenewali pr har karm ka fal hota hai.
● Or pari k pita b to usi ka fal bhog rhe hai...
Waiting......
 

agyant

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Sorry for late review..
Review for update 113
I am speechless.....sach me mai nishabd ho gaya ye update padh kar..
Dukh, dard imotions se bhara update... Kuch anhoni hone ki sanka to tha hi pehle se hi, par itna jyada dardnak hoga ye nehi socha tha, payal to sadme me chali gai.......sach me payal ki pyar dekhkar aankhen chalak uthe...
Veer bhi ek sacche dost ka farz bakhubi nibha raha hai.... akhir vidya ke upar veer ke gusse ka pahad tut hi pada....ab dekhna hai vidya apni papon ke prayashchit ke liye kya karti hai.....
 

agyant

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Update 114
Lajawab update..... emotions ko shabdon me pirona koi aap se sikhe....

Raj ke bina pura parivar ki hal badatar ho gai hai....sukar hai Ruchi bach gayi par Payal aur mamta ki halat abhi bhi kharab hai...
Chanchal ki is bar galti nehi thi, wo to khud dukhi hai........ Par hadse ke bad sandhya ki mansik sthiti kya hai ye aap nehi dikhaye...
Par sabse badi shock dene wali bat ye hai ki in sab ke pichhe Pari ka hath hona....
Pari ne pyar ka natak karke itna bada dhokha diya...... Mana ki uske sath galat hua lekin usne nafrat me andhi hokar apne pati ko hi dhoke se mar dala...
Usne to raj ko saja de bhi chuki thi, aur kisi ko bhi uske bhul ke liye barbar saja nehi diya jata...
Aur ek bat, agar pari khud Raj ko saja de sakti thi to usne dobara janm kyun liya?...... aur sandhya ko sab yad aate hi pari ka astitv bhi mit jana tha, to mugdal ne ye kyun kaha ki wo ab hamesha ke liye jangal me bhatakti rahegi?


Aur yamraj ne p'asur ki achhi khasi durgati kiya... par yamraj pas supernatural power hai ye confirm ho gaya..
Ab
Agle update ka intezar..
 

agyant

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Aur abhi tak raj aur divya ki koi ata pata nahi hai........ye to almost confirm hai ki yahin se 6th janm ki safr ki surwat hogi,. .aur 6th janm ratna se hi judi hui hai,...... Par Dharti se kisi dusre grah ki safr kaisi hogi ye dekhna hoga....
Par agar pari ki takat khatm ho gai to neel mani ka kya hoga, jisse pari ki takat control hoti hai..
Aur akram ki nani kahan rah gai..... Ye clear nahi hua...
Aur ek request hai ki parivar me kisi ko kuchh na ho, aur raj ko jyada der family se dur mat rakhna..
 

anandsngh12

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UPDATE—115

Yamraj ne jane se pahle Ratna ko janjeero se mukt kar diya.....uske jane ke baad ek budhi aurat ne use sahara dekar uthaya...


Aurat—uth beti...chal mere sath


Ratna—aap koun hain…?


Aurat—beti mera naam maya hai…mai uss talab ke kinare jhopdi me rahti hu…tu akeli kaha jayegi…chal ke kapde badal le


Ratna—mayi…mai aap par bojh nahi ban sakti


Maya—mujhe maa bhi bolti hai aur bojh bhi kahti hai...chal uth ab


Ratna maya ke sath uske jhopdi me chali jati hai....dard ke karan usse theek se chala bhi nahi ja raha tha....


Maya—le beti ye sari pahan le...aaj isse hi kaam chala le


Ratna—mai apka ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulungi maayi...


Maya—chal ja andar kapde badal ab....tab tak mai kuch khane ka intazam karti hu


Maya bahar khane ka koi prabandh karne chali jati hai....aur ratna pass me rakhe pani me apni sari bhigo kar jhakhm saf karti hai..jaha jaha khoon bahkar jam gaya tha...


Khoon ke dhabbe saf karne aur nahane ke baad vo maya ki di huyi sari pahan leti hai...kuch der me maya bhi hath me kuch liye huye aa jati hai


Maya—le beti ye phal kha le aur ye jadi apne jakhmo par laga lena..tumhe dard se aram milega isse


Ratna—shukriya mayi...


Ratna un phalo ko khakar apni bhukh shant karti hai....phir jadi ka lep apne jakhm par laga kar vahi jamin par let jati hai..


Maya—beti is bistar par let..


Ratna—ji mayi..


Maya—beti…..is dushta ne tumhe kyo kaid kar rakha tha…? Aur ye saajan koun hai jiska naam tum baar baar pukar rahi thi….?


Ratna—mayi vo mujhse us divya mani ka pata janna chahta tha…jo mere saajan ki amanat hai….


Maya—kahi ye saajan vo to nahi…Divya ka saajan….?


Ratna—ji mayi…vahi hai mera saajan....kintu aap kaise janti hain saajan aur divya ko…?

Maya—beti..Divya aur uske saajan ko koun nahi janta….log to unke nishchal prem ki kasme khate hain aaj bhi….


Ratna—kya aapne dekha hai unko... ?


Maya—nahi beti....mai to abhi kuch saal pahle hi yaha aayi hu...lekin un dono ke bare me suna bahut hai....


Ratna—hnnn...to ye baat hai…


Maya—par tum kaise janti ho beti un dono ko....jabki unko mare huye to bahut samay beet chuka hai…


Ratna (jor se)—nahi mar sakta vo mayi….mera saajan nahi mar sakta... use yaha aana hi hoga…mere liye aana hi hoga mayi saajan ko


Maya—beti kya mujhe saajan ke bare me sab kuch bataogi….meri badi ichcha ho rahi hai divya aur saajan ke bare me janne ki….


Ratna—jarur bataungi mayi….apne saajan ke bare me apko…


Hadse wala din……………..


Jis din raj aur divya ke sath ye dukhad ghatna huyi….us din ghar walo ke sath koi aur shakhs bhi vaha moujud tha jiski jankari kisi ko nahi huyi….

Ji ha…ye aur koi nahi balki akram ki maa thi…jo uss pahadi ke niche jidhar raj aur divya gire the uss taraf niche khadi hokar ek tak upar niharne me lagi huyi….


Use vaha khade khade raat ka vo sapna yaad aane laga jisme Raaj photo khichate huye divya ke sath khada hai…


Tabhi vahi pass me khadi sandhya sabki nazar bacha kar pair se divya ke pair me marti hai jisse divya ka balance bigadne lagta hai


Raj divya ko pakad ke uss paththar se niche utar leta hai lekin uska pair us patthar par chala jata hai....


Divya ko patthar se niche utarte dekh sandhya gusse me uss patthar par laat maar deti hai jisse raj ka pair tha uska balance bigad gaya aur vo pahadi se niche gir gaya...


Raj ko niche girte dekh kar sabhi kinare par aa gaye...sabhi ka dhyan raj ki oor tha...sab ghabrahat me the.....


Divya ne kinare par aakar jhuk ke rote huye jaise hi ye kaha ki tum nahi to mai bhi nahi....vo abhi iske aage kuch aur bhi bolne wali thi magar tabhi sandhya ne use piche se dhakka mar diya halke se...niche ki taraf jhuki hone ke karan divya turant apni baat poori karne se pahle hi pahad se gir gayi....


Sabhi log kinare se niche ki oor jhank rahe the jisse kisi ne sandhya ke is karname ko nahi dekha.....


Sabhi log achanak huyi is ghatna se sadme me ja chuke the...kisi ko kuch hosh nahi tha......


Lekin sandhya ke chehre par gum ki koi jhalak nahi thi….tabhi sandhya ki ankho me vo scene dikhne laga jisme raj divya ka hath pakde pedse latak raha hai…


Ye scene ankho me ubharte hi usne uss bade se patthar par apni ankhe gada di….uski ankhe ek second ke liye bilkul kaali ho gayi aur agle second me vo patthar niche gir gaya…jo sidha ja ke raj ke sine par laga


Itne me cheekh kar akram ki maa need se uth baithi….sapne ke agli subah hi vo yaha aa gayi….vo sidha ussi point par niche gayi pahle..vaha se usne upar ki oor dekha to raj kinare par hi tha…


Isliye usne pahadi ke upar jakar raj ko rokne ka vichar is khyal se chhod diya ki vo budhi aurat ek to utni upar chadh nahi payegi aur agar kisi tarah chadh bhi gayi to itne me hi use shaam ho jayegi…


Upar pahuchne me der hone ke darr se vo niche se hi uspar nazar rakhne lagi…


Idhar pahadi ke upar se girte hi Raj chattano se takrate huye niche aane laga…tabhi uske kano me divya ki awaz padi to usne girte girte ek ped ki tahni pakad ke latak gaya…..


Raj ke piche hi divya bhi niche ki orr gir rahi thi ye dekh kar Raj ne turant jaise hi divya uske pass se gujri usne uska hath tham liya….


Theek usi waqt upar se ek bada sa patthar aa ke raj ke sine par gira aur phir vahi patthar jakar narmada ji me gira jiski awaz pani me girne ki aayi thi us samay….


Seene par patthar lagne se raj ka hath ped ki tahni se chhut gaya aur vo sidha niche ki oor girne laga...


Raj ko niche girte dekh kar akram ki maa pareshan ho gayi...raj ko bachane ka koi upay na sujhta dekh vo turant raj ki sidh vali chattan par let gayi...idhar raj sidha akram ki maa ke upar patthar par aur divya raj ke upar giri.....


Teeno hi behosh ho chuke the....raj aur divya ...ko chhod kar kafi der baad akram ki maa ko hosh aaya jiski haddiya itni unchayi se raj aur divya ke uske upar girne se toot gayi thi...


Vo apni akhiri saanse le rahi thi....hosh me aate hi usne jor se raj ka naam pukara....tabhi kisi ki awaz se usne badi mushkil se apni ankhe kholi to khud ko hospital me paya....uske samne ek doctor khadi thi...


A’maa—mai...kaha .....huuuu....raajjjj...kahaaa....haiii


Doctor—aap leti rahiye...bas....vo dono bhi yahi hain....mera naam dr. Saloni hai


A’maa—kaiseee...hainnn...voooo...donooooo


Saloni—divya....to behosh hai...use jyada chot nahi hai lekin raj ka bachna bahut mushkil hai....


A’maa—(rote huye) nahii...doctor.....use bachaaa...looo.....agar use...kuch ho gaya...to is duniya me phir koi kisi ki madad nahi karega.....mai apne khuda ko kya muh dikhaungiiiiii


Saloni—dekhiye....raj ke heart par bahut gahri chot aayi hai ....jo badi mushkil se kaam kar raha hai...shayad kuch der baad vo bhi na kare


A’maa—doctor....aap....mera...dil aur kidney use laga do.....mai to marne hi wali hu.....kam se kam dil me koi bojh to nahi rahega mere....


Saloni—mai aisa kaise kar sakti hu.....


A’maa—mai to intazar hi is din ka kar rahi thi doctor....aaj mujhe uske ehsaan se mukt ho jane doooo……mera dil lagte hi vo sab samajh jayega khud hi….


Aur phir saloni ne akram ki maa ka dil aur kidney nikal kar raj ko transplant kar diya......


Akram ki maa ke dil ko raj ke dil se jodte hi raj ka sharir neeli roshni se chamakne laga.....ye dekh kar saloni ke adhro par ek mushkan phail gayi


Saloni (mushkate huye)—to ye hai neel mani ka raaz......


Uss roshni ke prabhav se raj ko jaldi hi hosh aa gaya….uske jakhma apne aap kuch hi seconds me bhar gaye…..


Raj ne jaise hi ankhe kholi uski ankho ke samne vo manzar dikhayi dene laga jisme P’asur Ratna ki sari nikal raha tha….aur ratna saajan ko rote huye pukar rahi thi


Ye scene dekhte hi uski ankhe achanak normal se bilkul lal ho gayi….un ankho me aag ki lapte saf dekhi ja sakti thi….


Gusse me vo jor se chilla utha….


Raj (gusse me jor se)—Ratnaaaaaaaaaaaa.............


Idhar Ratna maya ko Saajan aur Divya ki kahani sunane ja rahi thi....



Flashback Start (6th Janam ki Saajan aur Divya ki Amar Prem Kahani)


Ratna—mayi...ye kahani aaj se 100 saal pahle ki hai....hamare rajya ka naam Olioan hua karta tha….


Yaha ke King Alexandar bahut hi kabil raja the…..unke rajya me praja bahut sukhi thi….unki Patni Queen Jenifer bahut hi sushil aur khubsurat thi….


Maharaj aur maharani ki teen santane thi…do ladki aur ek ladka.. Ladke ka naam Sushant tha…jabki usse ek saal choti ladki ka naam Ratna aur sabse chhoti beti ka naam Divya tha….


Mai bahut khubsurat thi magar divya ki baat hi kuch aur thi….usme natkhat pan ke sath sath sundarta koot koot kar bhari huyi thi….


Divya aur main agar kabhi mahal se bahar nikal jate ghumne to log chhup chhup kar hame dekha karte….


Divya sabse chhoti hone ke karan sabki ladli thi…..maa pita sri aur bhaiya to jaan chhidakte the us par…


Hum dono hi bahno ki jawani hamare ang ang se chhalakti thi…khas kar ke divya…mujhse chhoti hone ke bavjud uska badan kisi ko bhi ek nazar dekhne bhar me hi kamandh kar dene me saksham tha…


Hamare rajya me har saal veer purusho ka samman kiya jata tha….jisme ek prati yogita rakhi jati thi jo behad kathin thi…


Har saal ki tarah uss varsh bhi divya ke purna yuvati (adult) hone par is pratiyogita ka ayojan kiya gaya…
 

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Wah Bhai Superb , Fantastic or Lajavab Update...
● Kya kya ho gya sbi ko Ye to pariksha ka samaye hai...
● Lekin kya kre sab payaar k mare h..
● Aapne to humse dil b dokhi kr diye..
● Kya rachna ki h Yamraj ki or kya darshaya h Hatts of...
● Payaar ki laaj & Vishvas ka maan rakh liya .... ..... "God Tushi Great Ho"
● Pari ne bahut bdi galti kr di Ab saja to bhogatni padegi....
● kyoki pura sach jaane Baker koye fesla lena galt ...
● Mana pari ko mata ne vardan diya tha Pr Raj b mata k Aashirwad se hoaa tha or ek vardan kabhi Aashiwad ka roop nhi le sakta....
● Pari es ek karte se hi bahut or kye paap kr diye Or Vardan dena Bhagwan ka dharm h pr vardan ka upyog or uska karm lenewali pr har karm ka fal hota hai.
● Or pari k pita b to usi ka fal bhog rhe hai...
Waiting......
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bhai is behtareen review ke liye
Bhai pyar ka dastur hi yahi hai ki jo pyar karta hai pagal ban jata hai
Shukriya bhai ki apko update pasand aaya
 
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