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intzaar ho rha h bhaiUpdate Likhna Abhi Start Kiya Hai,
Complete Hote Hi Post Karta Hu.
intzaar ho rha h bhaiUpdate Likhna Abhi Start Kiya Hai,
Complete Hote Hi Post Karta Hu.
Thanks for Reading & SupportingBehad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Mrinal kamal kar deti h .
Is baar bhi wahi hua or Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Or ye tilism ka jo tamasha dikha rahe h n vo ekdam kabil-e-tarif H aap or aapki lekhni.
Jay ho bhai jay ho .
Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar
Thanks for Reading & SupportingAwesome update anand bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
aakhir kar Vidya ko uske karmo ki saja dene ke liye yamraj aa gaya hai,
idhar mrinal ne ek baar phir se apni shararat me veer ka naam fansa diya hai,
Vaise dono ki jodi bahot hi shandaar hai,
Mrinal aane wale khatare se veer ki raksha karne ke liye uske pichhe bhagi hai,
udhar saloni ne neha ko uss pret se bacha liya hai,
Aakhir kar raj ne iss tilism ko todne ka upay dhoondh hi liya hai,
ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Excellent update bhai_____
Keep going_____
Waiting for next update_____
Thanks for Reading & SupportingAwesome update
Thanks for Reading & SupportingSuper fantastic mind-blowing dhashu update
Hmesha ki trh ek shandar update
Minral ke character ki jitni tarif kijaye km mharthiyo ke beech me apni bhasha or hrkto se apna swag kaym rkha h
Doctor ki to bhari bejtti kr di phir se veer ko phsha diya
Veer ke uper bhi khtra h or vidya pr bhi lgta h ymraj ke khel me raj or veer ki trh tbm bhi to nhi h uska roop lene me
Phle hi veer ko mar kr vidya ko raj ke khilaf hathiyar bnane ka socha tha
Khi ye whi chal to nhi
Minral gyi h veer ke piche dekhte h veer ko bcha pati h ya nhi ?
To raj ko tidmil todne ke clu mil gya h
Vo tslmar jo jiti thi wh murti ka hisha h
Saloni ne chudail se naina ko bcha liya h
Lgta h us grh ko dukho se mukti dilayega saajan .
Thanks for Reading & Supportingnice updte anand bro jab b likhty ho dil khush kar dety ho.
vidya ky pas yamraj kia leny a gia hai kahi is k b din to pory nai ho gay q k yamraj kisi ko sedy rasty to nai ly k ata sedha opar ka tickt katata hai.
sher ka saya veer ki gari par cha gia hai to kia ya yamraaj ka saya tha q k pehly b yamraaj ka hulya b asa hi bayaan howa tha .
minral ny had hi kar di is bar doc thor ki to asi ki tesi ho gai or phasa bichara veer hahahha.
ab ya murti sy agy kn sa rasta nikal aya dakhty hai keep writting bro kamal ka likh rahy ho
Thanks for Reading & SupportingNice updates
Thanks for Reading & SupportingAnand ji, aapne to ish update ke har pehlu pe suspense create kar diya..
kya ab vidhya ki jivanleela yehi samapt hoga yamraj ke hatho?
mrinal ne apni divya dristi se veer ke upor mandra rahe ush sher ki chaya roopi khatre ko dekh to liya.. kya boh bacha payegi veer ko ush khatre se? I hope bacha le.. nahi to veer - mrinal ki kahani adhuri hi rah jayegi..
Boh lash hai kiski? Kya yeh bhi tillism ki koi maya hai? kyu neha ko marna chahta hai? neha ko bachane to saloni aa gayi lekin ushe to ush chudail ne le gayi thi ghashit ke... phir? Kya saloni, neha ki tarah hi payal, paridhi, raj aur divya ko dhund payegi...? Kaha hai Divya, payal aur paridhi?
Ohh to ush murti me hi sayed tillism todne ki koi raaz chupi huyi hai.. talwar murti ko thamate hi kya hua... ye baat bhi ek suspense me hi rah gayi...
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update Anand ji... Great going![]()