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anandsngh12

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Gajab ka update diya he bhai. Mrinal ne to pet hi dard karwa diya hasa 2 kar. Vidhya ke samne yamraj aa gya yani ki vidhya ka antim din aa gya. Mrinal ko kya dikha ki wo veer ko bachane ke liye daud gayi. Ye to usi sher ki parchayi he jise agyan ne divya aur usaki bahen ke sath dekhi thi jungle me. Kya mrinal veer ko bacha legi. Nehi ke pass saloni pahuchi he ya fir koi aur ye to agle update me hi pata chalega. Sayad raj ko tilism ke todne ka raz pata chal gya he.
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Mast update bhai akhirkar raj tilism tod dene ki last position me hai.... Veer khatre me hai mrinal sayad veer ko bachane ke liye shakti use karega mata rani mana kya tha shakti use karne ko sayad iske bad veer aur mrinal ki chemistry suru hogi.... Vidya ko kya yamraj mar degi... Ek sath veer aur vidya ke upar khatra mandra raha hai... Ae sayad bad man ka kam hoga
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Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Mrinal kamal kar deti h .
Is baar bhi wahi hua or Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Or ye tilism ka jo tamasha dikha rahe h n vo ekdam kabil-e-tarif H aap or aapki lekhni.
Jay ho bhai jay ho .

Or ab ,
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Doctor ke agal bagal ruchi aur veer khade the..veer ke baju me mrinal khadi thi….usne ek baar sab ki taraf dekha aur phir piche se hath le ja kar chatttt se doctor ke sir me maar diya.

Mrinal (mann me)—hmmmmm…..bajta hai….maza aa gaya….ek baar aur baja kar dekhti hu.

Iss achanak maar se doctor chakra gaya aur usne charo taraf dekha lekin sabhi ka dhyan mamta ki oor tha….usne ek baar veer ko ghur kar dekha aur phir se ilaz karne me lag gaya apne sir me hath ferte huye.

Jaise hi usne sir se hath hataya vaise hi mrinal ne ek baar phir se uske takle par chatt se maar diya lekin ab ki baar jara jor se hath pad gaya…jiski awaz bhi sab ko sunayi de gayi.

Doctor apne takle ko sahlate huye baukhla kar khada ho gaya aur veer ko gusse se dekhne laga…

Ab Aage……..

Hua ye tha ki jaise hi doctor ke takle par phali baar mrinal ne tabla bajaya to doctor ghabra kar iss akasmat huye apne takle par hamle se idhar udhar sab ko dekhne laga ki ye kis ki harkat hai….? Sabhi ka dhyan mamta ki taraf tha unhe pata hi nahi chala ki abhi kya hua hai.

Tabhi mrinal ne jab dekha ki doctor uski taraf dekh raha hai to usne apni ungli se veer ki taraf ishara karne lagi… bas phir kya tha, doctor veer ko ghurte huye phir se ilaz me vyast ho gaya.

Lekin mrinal ke hath ki khujli to abhi miti hi nahi thi, balki usko to doctor ke takle par tabla bajane se jo awaz uttapann huyi usse sun kar bahut maza aaya.

Doctor ke phir se ilaz me vyast hote hi mrinal ne sab ki nazar bacha kar dhire se apne hath ko veer ke piche se le ja kar phir se doctor ke takle par chatt se maar diya, kintu iss baar hath jara jor se pad gaya jiski awaz ki goonj lagbhag sabhi ko sunayi de gayi.

Doctor ka to poora dimag hi ghoom gaya aur chakkar aane lag gaya….vo baukhla kar chair se uth khada hua…aur apne takle ko hatho se sahlate huye veer ko gusse se ghurne lag gaya.

Doctor (gusse se)—Ye kya badatzmizi hai mr. veer…..? apko sharm aani chahiye aisi ghatiya harkat karte huye.

Ruchi—lekin hua kya doctor….? Kya kiya hai veer ne….?

Doctor—ye to aap inse hi puchiye ki kya harkat ki hai inhone mere sath…….raj sahab ka dost aur aisi harkate….? Maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha.

Veer—dekhiye doctor, shayad apko koi galat fahmi huyi hai

Doctor—ji nahi, mujhe koi galat fahmi nahi huyi hai…..main ab aur yaha nahi ruk sakta…sorry main kisi dusre doctor ko bhejta hu.

Sab usko samjhane ki koshish karte rahe lekin vo nahi mana aur bahar jane ke liye darwaje tak pahucha hi tha ki chakkar kha kar niche gir gaya….ye to hona hi tha, akhir ek yaksh kanya ka hath jo pad gaya tha sir me.

Jaldi se staff ke log aa kar uss doctor ko uth le gaye…..doctor ke jate hi sab mrinal ki oor ghur ghur ke dekhne lage kyon ki sab samajh gaye the ki ye harkat iske siwa koi nahi kar sakta.

Mrinal—meri taraf sab aise mat dekho…..aap logo ne suna nahi ki uss takle dok dhar ne kya kaha tha…? Ki sab kuch iss balatkari ne kiya hai.

Veer—chup kar…..iss pagal ko yaha lane ki kya jarurat thi…..? aur tu meri maa, mere piche kyo shani ban kar piche pad gayi hai…..?

Ruchi—ab maa ka ilaz koun karega….? Main baat karti hu head doctor se.

Veer—apko pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai didi…main baat karta hu.

Veer doctor’s se baat karne chala gaya….idhar priyadarshini ne mrinal ka mamla handle kar liya…..kuch der baad dusri ladies doctor aa gayi aur mamta ka check up karne lagi..

Mitaly—doctor….iss ladki (mrinal) ke liye bhi kuch dimag theek karne ki koi dawayi likh dena.

Doctor—ok…..ye lijiye ja kar counter se le lo ye dawayi.

Mrinal—theek hai.

Mrinal dawayi lene ke liye….vo jhumte huye apni mastani chaal me chalte huye beech me kisi nurse se takra gayi…mrinal ka to kuch nahi hua par uss nurse ki kamar ki haddi toot gayi takra kar girte hi…mrinal ne usko chaar baate suna kar aage badh gayi aur vo bechari nurse dard se chillane lagi.

Magar iss chakkar me vo dawazi ka kagaz vahi gir gaya…..counter par pahuch kar vo kagaz dekhne lagi ki kaha gaya par vo nahi mila.

Mrinal (mann me)—vo kagaz kaha gaya jo uss dok dhar ne likha tha….? Chalo koi baat nahi….dawayi to dawayi hoti hai….koi bhi le le lungi.

Asal me mrinal ko dawayi ka matlab hi malum nahi tha kyon ki dev lok me dawayi ko ausadhi ke naam se jana jata hai....usne ye shabd hi pahli baar suna tha....counter par ek ladka tha.

Mrinal—Ye kabutar.......mujhe dawayi chahiye.....jaldi se de.....

Ladka—koun si dawayi chahiye..... ?

Mrinal (ankhe dikhate huye)—koun si matlabbbb...... ? achchi wali dawayi chahiye.....

Ladka—arey madam....vahi to puch raha hu ki koun si dawayi chahiye..... ?

Mrinal (dukan ko dekhte huye)—hmmmm…..jo khoob meethi ho…..aur jisse taqat khoob aati ho.

Ladka—ye lo...ye goli le lo.

Mrinal—kyaaaa tu mujhe goli (ullu banana) de raha hai.... ? ruk tujhe abhi batati hu....main dawayi maang rahi hu aur tu .mujhe goli de raha hai......thahar.

Bas phir kya tha....mrinal ne samjha ki vo ladka usko bewkoof banne ki koi cheez de raha hai dawayi ke badle me to usne counter ko jump kar ke dukan me ghus gayi aur uss ladke ki jam kar pitayi kar di...bechara vo dukan chhod kar kisi tarah apni jaan bacha kar bhaga vaha se.

Tab tak shor sharaba ki awaz sun kar achchi khasi bheed jama ho gayi thi vaha par.....veer bhi pahuch gaya aur mrinal ko vaha dekhte hi apna sir peet liya.

Guard aur public police ko bulane ki baat karne lage...magar veer ne jaise hi bataya ki ye pagal hai to poori bheed turant titar bitar ho gayi....sab ye soch kar bhag liye ki ek pagal ka kya bharosa...kisko thok de.... ?

Veer—tu yaha kya kar rahi hai.... ? chal yaha se jaldi.... ?

Mrinal—ruk main dawayi to le lu.

Mrinal fatafat do polythene me 30-40 dawayi ki shishi bhar ke vahi sab ke paas aa gayi….itni dawayi dekh kar sab ke sath doctor bhi chakra gayi.

Vahi dusri taraf meri jab ankh khuli to unhi drishyo ke baare me hi sochne laga…..phir mujhe baki sab ka khyal aaya to maine apne aas paas kisi ko na pakar soch me pad gaya….maine sab ka naam lekar pukara par koi jawab na milne par maine ankhe band kar li.

Maine apni kundalini shakti jagrit kar ke jab apni ankhe kholi to khud ko qile ke bahar leta hua paya….tabhi mujhe behosh hone se pahle ki ghatna dhyan aate hi maine apne charo taraf nazar ghuma kar dekha to vaha koi maidan nahi dikhayi de raha tha…..isko tilism ka ek khel samajh kar main turant uth kar khada hua aur andar ghus gaya qile ke.

Kundalini shakti ke jagrit ho jane se mujhe ab raat me bhi din ke saman hi dikhayi de raha tha….mujhe bakiyo ki chinta hone lagi thi…isliye maine sidhe uss kamre me vahi khidki ke jariye jaldi pahuchna sahi samjha.

Main bahar ke raste se hi vaha khidki tak pahucha to vaha vahi shisha laga hua tha….maine andar jhank kar dekhne ki koshish ki sab kya kar rahe hain….to vaha mujhe koi nahi dikhayi di….? Ab to meri chinta aur bhi badh gayi.

Raj—kaha gayi ye sab…..? mere behosh hone ke baad kahi kuch hua to nahi inke sath…..?

Aur tabhi maine jaise hi uss shisha ko todne ke liye hath uthaya to ye dekh kar dang rah gaya ki ab kamre ke andar sabhi moujud thi aur main behosh pada tha…..

Uske baad vaha jo kuch hua tha vo sab drishya ek ek kar ke mujhe dikhayi dene lage…maine turant uss shisha ko dhakka dekar niche gira diya aur kamre ghus gaya…maine uss khidki ki oor palat kar dekha to vo shisha phir se khidki par fit ho chuka tha.

Uss shishe ke uss paar phir se mujhe ek scene dikhayi dene laga jisko dekh kar main bhi chounk gaya….aur iska sara rahasya bhi shayad meri samajh me ab aa gaya tha.

Philhal ke liye abhi maine uss baat ko dar kinar karte huye uss kamre se andar ja kar sab ko talash karne laga… naam se awaz lagate huye.

Vahi neha kisi andheri jagah me idhar se udhar rajj aur baki sab ka naam chillate huye darte darte bhatak rahi thi ki achanak vaha roshni jhil milane lagi.

Roshni ke aise achanak aane se vo aur bhi ghabra gayi aur cheekhne hi wali thi ki uska muh khula ka khula rah gaya…cheekh bhi nahi payi vo kyon ki uske samne koi aurat uski taraf pith kiye khadi thi.

Jaise hi vo aurat palti to uska chehra samne aa gaya….chehra dekhte hi neha ki ruh kaamp gayi…darr aur khauf se uska poora sharir thar thar kampne laga.

Kyon ki uska aurat ka chehra bahut hi bhayanak tha…..aadha jala hua chehra jispe khoon riste huye niche gir raha tha aur dekhte hi dekhte vo jali huyi parat chehre se utarti huyi niche gir gayi.aur usme se khoon ki dhara bahne lagi.

Neha ke muh se koi bol hi nahi phoot rahe the…..cheekhna to bahut door ki baat hai….vo apni jagah par khadi khadi buri tarah kaamp rahi thi….badi mushkil se uske muh se cheekh nikal payi.

Neha (cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaaa……..raaaaaaajjjjjjjjjj…….bachaaaaooooooo

Vo jor se chillate cheekhte huye piche ki taraf bhagi lekin darr aur khauf se thar thar kampte uske pair bhagne me uska sath nahi de paye jisse vo piche ki taraf dhadam se gir gayi…..niche girte hi uska sir kisi nukili cheez se takra gaya….ek baar phir se vo dard aur khauf se cheekh uthi.

Neha (dard se cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaa……..marrrrr….. gayiiiiiii ……. raaaajjjjjjj……bachaooooooo

Usne turant apne hath ko sir me dard wali jagah par lagaya….aur dard se phir chilla uthi…..dard se karahte huye usne apna hath aage kiya to uska hath khoon se sana hua tha.

Neha ne dard bhare chehre se darte darte apni nazar ko utha kar samne dekha to chounk gayi...kyon ki kuch der pahle jaha ek bhayanak aurat khadi thi, ab vaha par koi nahi tha.

Idhar main sabhi ko awaz lagata hua har jagah qile me talash karne laga ki tabhi meri ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki main usko dekhte hi chounk gaya.
 

Jitu kumar

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Achanak uski nazar samne rakhe dressing table ke kaanch par gayi to uski dhadkan hi jaise rukne ko ho gayi…kaanch par kuch dhundhla dhundhla sa jhil mila raha tha…..aur bhi achanak uss mirror me ek chehra ubharne laga dhire dhire……..jaise hi vo chehra spast naar aaya jo ki bahut hi bayanak chehra nazar aa raha tha…..usko dekhte hi vidhya ki jor se dahshat ke maare cheekh nikal gayi…..vo jo bhi tha shayad iss samay uske piche khada tha.

Ye ehsaas hote hi uski ruh andar tak kaamp gayi…..vidhya ke poore jism me darr aur khauf se sihran doud gayi…uske hath pair thar tharane lage.

Darte darte usne kisi tarah himmat kar ke apni gardan ko piche ghumane lagi…….

Ab aage......

Vidhya ne jaise hi kampte huye palti to ye dekh kar hairan ho gayi ki vaha koi nahi tha.....uske saanso ki speed rajdhani express ki tarah tez chal rahi thi....poora sharir darr aur khauf ki vajah se pasine se tar batar ho gaya tha.

Vidhya (hairani se)—Yaha to koi nahi hai... ! Lagta hai mera vaham tha...din me bhi baithe baithe sapne dekhne lagi hu main.....omg...kitna darawana aur bhayanak dikhta tha uska chehra....abhi tak darr se mere hath pair kaamp rahe hain. Shukra hai ki ye sirf ek khwab tha warna main to dahshat me hi marr jati aaj.

Vidhya ek lambi saans khich kar sari se chehre par aaye pasine ko pochte huye jaise hi samne ki oor mudi to uske dill ka khauf jo uske khwab samajhne se kuch kam ho gaya tha achanak vo khauf aur darr pahle ki tulna me duguna ho gaya.

Uske samne vahi dressing table tha, vo bhi apni jagah par kintu usme laga hua mirror gayab tha….ek baar phir se uske hath paon phool gaye...

Usne turant piche palat ke dekha to phir chounk gayi..kyon ki vo mirror piche ki deewar par latak raha tha…usne phir se samne palat ke dekha to ab ki bar mirror dressing table me apni jagah par laga dikha.

Usne ye dekh kar jaldi se palat ke deewar ki taraf dekha to vaha ab vo shisha nahi tha….turant samne palti to phir se chounk gayi kyon ki iss baar to vo dressing table hi apni jagah se gayab ho chuka tha…..vidhya ki halat dekhne layak ho gati thi….jis ghatna ko vo kuch der pahle tak apni jeeti jagti ankho ka ek bahut hi bura khwab samajh rahi thi, ab uska vahi khwab haqiqat ka roop le kar phir se uske samne aa kar khada ho gaya tha.

Vidhya ke jism me darr aur dahshat iss kadar haavi ho gaya ki ab uska dimag hi karna band kar diya tha…room ki khidki aur darwaje par lage huye parde jor jor se hilne lage…..jab hamare dil aur dimag ke andar darr apna darr ghar kar leta hai, uss samay hone wali kisi ped ke toote huye patte ki aahat bhi chati huyi dhadkano ko band karne ke liye paryapt hoti hai.

Yahi manodasha iss samay vidhya ki ho chuki thi….darr ki vajah se uska poora jism pasine se bhig chuka tha…ki tabhi vo dressing table apne khisak kar uski taraf aane laga….vidhya turant piche ki taraf gir gayi, mud kar vaha se bhagne ke chakkar me.

Lekin phir jaldi hi khadi ho kar darwaje tak pahuch ke room se bahar nikalne ke liye usko kholne ki koshish karne lagi par jaise aaj vo darwaja bhi uski jaan ka dushman ban gaya tha, usne bhi khulne se inkar kar diya aur lakh koshish karne ke bavjud bhi vo nahi khula to vidhya jor jor se cheekhne aur chillane lagi apni madad ke liye, magar uski madad karne ke liye aata bhi to koun…? Ghar me to uske khud ke akele ke alawa sabhi to hospital gaye huye the.

Vidhya (cheekhte huye)—koi darwaja kholo…….koi bachaooooo……..arey koiii tooooo darwaja khollll doooooo….

Akhir pareshan ho kar usne doudte huye apni pistol utha li aur charo taraf ghum ghum kar jorr jor se chillane lagi shayad vo pistol ko hi iss samay apna asli madadgar samajh rahi thi….ho bhi kyo na, akhir pistol aur khanjar ne hi to aaj tak uske manshubo ko poora karne me uski madad ki thi.

Vidhya (chillate huye)—kkkkkkkk…..kounnnn haiiiii yahaaa…..? dekhoooo tummmm jo bhiii hoooo….samne aa jaoooo, warna main goli chala dungiiii.

Aur bhi vo hua jiske baad to vidhya ki saanse hi halak me atak gayi…..uska pistol hatho se chhut kar door ja gira… kyon ki uske goli maarne ki dhamki dete hi ek chehra vaha achanak uss mirror se nikal kar bahar aa gaya…poora sharir ekdam kala, sir ke baal charo taraf se jamin tak latak rahe the, ek ek hath jitne lambe hath aur pairo ke nakhun the…aur ankhe bilkul ugte huye suraj ki tarah lal thi.

Ye bhayanak chehra dekhte hi vidhya ka poora sharir kaampne laga…..uski jeevan bhar ki sathi pistol ne uska sath chhod diya…..darr aur khauf ne usko poori tarah se apni giraft me le liya….uske muh se shabd nahi phoot rahe the… uski saanso ki gati rukne lagi aur vo dhammm se niche gir gayi, badi mushkil se uske muh se kuch yhar thare bol nikle aur phir dhire dhire uski ankhe band hoti chali gayi..

Vidhya (kaampte huye)—kkkkkkkkk…kounnnnnn hoooooo tummmmmm……..?

Y…..A…..M…..R…..A…..J

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Udhar hospital me veer, mrinal ka hath pakad kar counter se bahar nikal ke vapis aa gaya sab ke paas…mamta ko bhi hosh aa gaya tha phir se, lekin usne apni ankhe band kar rakhi thi.

Uski dono ankho ki core se ris ris kar aanshu ab bhi bah rahe the….shayad vo abhi bhi apne dil me ho rahi pida ko sahaj nahi kar payi thi…ruchi unke bagal me baith kar bahte un anshuo ko pochh rahi thi halanki ankhe to uski khud ki bhi nam thi.

Veer ne vaha aate hi vo medicines doctor ko check kara kar mrinal ko pakda di….doctor ne unn medicines ko kab aur kaise khana hai, ye bhi bata diya.

Jab doctor usko medicines ke baare me bata rahi thi to mrinal uski chair se bilkul chipak kar khadi ho gayi…aur jaldi se fevi quick uski chair aur sari par gira diya dhakkan nikal ke….choonki doctor samne ki taraf jhuki huyi thi jisse poora fevi stick uski hips me chipak gaya baki jo bacha vo chair par lag gaya.

Doctor jaise hi sidhi huyi to uski hips ki sari chair se chipak gayi…..mrinal ne sab ki oor dekha ki kisi ne usko dekha to nahi aisa karte huye…..aur phir jaldi se fevi stick ko veer ko pakda diya…veer ko to kuch samajh aaya nahi lekin phir bhi usne bina kuch kahe pakad liya….mrinal ne to ye suna hi nahi tha ki doctor ne medicines kab khane ko kaha hai uska dhyan to apni nayi shararat ko anzam dene me laga hua tha….veer ko fevi stick thamane ke baad vo ja ke priyadarshini ke bagal me khadi ho gayi.

Doctor (haste huye)—maine jaisa bataya hai vaise hi medicine khana….kasam se tum bhi na kamal ki ladki ho…..hihihi…?

Mrinal—Jyada hihihihi mat karo….tumhare Jhaant (daant) dikh rahe hain sab ko.

Mrinal ki baat se sab chounk gaye….Doctor to ekdam se sakpaka gayi…..uska hasta hua chehra yakayak sikud kar tension me ho gaya….aur vo turant jhatke se khadi ho gayi….aur tabhi

Charrrrrrrrrrrrr…….ki awaz ke sath hi uske hips ke upar ka kapda bhi phat kar chair me hi chipak kar rah gaya….uska poora pichhwada bina kapdo ke sab ke samne aa gaya…..sabhi ki ankhe shock se aur choudi ho gayi….sab se jyada buri halat to veer ki huyi iss samay kyon ki vo doctor ke theek piche hi khada tha…uski ankho ne to ye scene dikhte hi palak jhapkna hi bhul gayi thi….jabki mrinal tali maar maar ke hasne lagi.

Doctor ne jaldi se apna hath piche le ja kar tatola to abhi kya hua sara mazra uski samajh me aa gaya….vo fatafat turant chair par baith gayi….usne apna coat utar ke kamar me lapet liya aur gusse se sab ko dekhne lagi.

Doctor (gusse se)—ye behuda harkat kis ki hai…..?

Mrinal (haste huye)—arey…veer tumhare hath me kya hai ye…..?

Doctor aur baki sab palat ke veer ko dekhne lage…veer ne chounk kar jab apne hath me fevi stick dekhi to jaldi se phenk diya jise sab ne dekh liya.

Doctor (gusse me)—apko sharam aani chahiye mr. veer, aisi giri huyi harkat karte huye…..agar mujhe raj sir ki izzat ka khyal nahi hota to main police complain karti apke khilaf.

Veer (gusse se mrinal ko ghurte huye)—apko kuch galat fahmi huyi hai doctor…..maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai.

Sab ne mil kar doctor ko kisi tarah samjhaya….vo bhi samajh chuke the ki ye harkat bhi jarur mrinal ne hi ki hogi doctor, kisi aur doctor ko bhejne ko bol kar apne coat hips me lapete vaha se bhag gayi.

Sabne mrinal ko khub sunaya, lekin priyadarshini ne kisi tarah aage aa kar mamla shant kiya….vaise bhi kisi ne raat me dinner tak nahi kiya tha paridhi ki tabiyat jyada kharab ho jane ki vajah se.

Veer—main sab ke liye kuch nasta le kar aata hu.

Ruchi—mere liye mat lana, baki jisko jo khana hai puch lo aur le aao.

Kajal—aise kaise nahi khayegi, veer tu sab ke liye le aa.

Mrinal—ruk...ruk..main bhi chalti hu sath me, teri madad ke liye

Veer—tu kaisi madad karti hai...vo main achchi tarah se dekh chuka hu....jab se aayi hai tab se meri izzat do koudi ki kar di hai tune....tujhe fasane ke liye main hi milta hu hamesha.....main tere aage hath jodta hu, mujhe baksh de... pata nahi raj ne africa ke kis jungle se tujhe yaha pakad laya hai.

Veer ne usko mana kar ke bahar nikal gaya….mrinal bhi uske piche piche bhagi….lekin tab tak veer gadi le kar chal diya tha….mrinal nirash ho kar loutne hi wali thi ki tabhi uski ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki vo chounk gayi…vo tezi se bhagne lagi veer ki taraf….shayad usne kuch apratyashit bahut bada khatra bhamp liya tha.

Mrinal (chillate huye)—nahii…veerrrrr…vapis lout aaoooo…..matttt jaooooooo

Lekin veer to uski pahuch se door nikal chuka tha….akhir me mrinal adrishya ho kar tezi se veer ki taraf badhne lagi…. Idhar veer iss baat se anjan tha ki ek bahut bada khatra badi tezi se uski taraf badh raha hai.

Veer apni hi dhun me gadi chala raha tha ki tabhi uss road ko ek bahut bade sher ki parchhayi ne gher liya…

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Vahi dusri taraf uss grah me uss rajya ke rajguru dhyan mudra me baith kar apne guru ka dhyan laga rahe the kuch der baad hi unke guru samne prakat ho gaye aur yaad karne ka karan pucha.

Guru—kaho vats, kaise yaad kiya mujhe….?

Rajguru (RG)—gurudev….mere mann me ek shanka uttapann ho rahi thi, jiske nivaran hetu main apka marg darshan chahta hu.

Guru—kaisi shanka putra….?

RG—gurudev, jaisa ki aapne kaha tha ki uss talwar ko vahi hasil kar sakta hai jiski vo talwar hai ya phir koi maha parakrami yoddha….aaj huyi uss khooni prati yogita me maine aise hi ek maha parakrami yoddha ko dekha hai..usne na kewal uss pratiyogita ko jita hai balki uss taqatwar jeev ko parajit kar ke uss talwar ko bhi hasil kar liya.

Guru—ye to bahut hi achchi baat hai….phir tumhe shanka kis baat se hai…?

RG—meri shanka ka karan hai vahi ladka….na jane kyo mujhe uski veerta dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaise ki vo saajan ho aapne mujhe jaisi veerta saajan ke vishay me batayi thi, vaise hi gun mujhe uss ladke raj ke andar nazar aaye hain to kya raj hi saajan hai…..? aap ne ek baar kaha bhi tha ki vo phir se janam lega aur yaha jarur ayega, usko abhi yaha ke bahut se adhure kaam poore karne hain.

Guru—tumhari shanka niradhar nahi hai vats, saajan hi raj hai.

RG—iska matlab ab iss rajya me chhaye dukh aur taklif ke badal hat jayenge….har oor khushi aur ullas ka vatavaran hoga…..kya vrihadpur aur uska qila bhi shrap aur tilism se azad ho payega gurudev….? Akhir kya raaz hai vrihadpur aur uske qile ka….? Maine jab bhi raj ke baare me janne ke liye dhyan me baitha to kamyabi nahi mili, aisa kyo…?

Guru—tumhare sawal ka jawab to mere paas bhi nahi hai putra….isko samay ke upar chhod do….raj ke vishay me ya to khud raj janta hai ya phir uski guru maa….isliye kitna bhi dhyan lagaoge uske vishay me janne ke liye, kamyabi nahi milegi…ataiv uss baare me mat socho.

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Idhar qile me vo laash ek pair ke sahare kud kud kar neha ke piche bhagne lagi….bechari ki halat adhmari jaisi ho chuki thi darr ki vajah se…uski saanse phool chuki thi aur sharir me itni bhi jaan nahi bachi thi ki vo chilla bhi sake, bhaga tak nahi ja raha tha usse.

Akhir me thak haar kar vo baith gayi aur rone lagi…uske sir se khoon bhi nikal raha tha jisse dard ho raha tha… neha lagbhag behosh hone ki kagar par pahuch chuki thi….tab tak vo laash bhi uske paas pahuch ke khadi ho gayi aur uski halat par usko hasi aane lagi….uss laash ne vahi pada hua ek bada sa patthar hawa me utha liya aur uska nishana neha ke sir ki oor mod diya.

Vo patthar neha ke sir se takrata ki uske pahle hi achanak uski disha badal gayi aur vo vapis tezi se palat kar uss laash se ja takraya….laash uchhal kar door ja giri…lekin turant khadi ho kar usne udhar dekha to use apne samne saloni khadi dikhi.

Ye saloni hi thi jisne uss patthar ki disha ko mod diya tha aur neha ki jaan jate jate bach gayi thi….idhar main yaha se vaha ghumte huye akhir me phir se ussi kamre me pahuch gaya jaha vo shisha ki khidki lagi thi.

Raj—ye kaisa chakra vyuh hai….? Kahi se bhi jata hu lekin ghum phir kar issi kamre me pahuch jata hu…aise kaam nahi banega…..ab mujhe pahle iss tilism ko todne ki koshish karni padegi…isko tode bina kuch bhi maqsad poora nahi hone wala

Main vahi khade ho kar uss murti ko dhyan se dekhne laga aur phir uss kamre se nikal kar aage badhne ke liye kadam uthaya hi tha ki jaise mujhe kuch yaad aaya aur main vapis uss kamre me aa gaya.

Maine ek baar phir se dhyan de kar uss murti ko dekhna chalu kiya…..aur achanak ek jagah par ja kar meri nazar tham gayi aur main kuch sochne par vivash ho gaya.

Maine dekha ki uss murti ke baki sabhi saat hatho me koi na koi hathiyar avashya tha sirf ek hath aisa tha jo ki bilkul khali tha…lekin uss hath ki ungliya mudi huyi thi.

Raj (mann me)—ye murti khandit kyo hai….? Baki sabhi hatho me kuch na kuch hathiyar hain to ye khali kyo hai…? Koun sa hathiyar hona chahiye iss hath me…..? chakra bhi hai, trishul, gada, dhanush, chabuk, khopdi, khappar, ye sabhi hain…..haan talwar nahi hai……

Maine turant uss talwar ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal vo mere hatho me aa gayi…..maine mata rani ko pranam kar ke vo talwar unke uss khali hath me pakda di……aur phir tabhi….
Awesome update anand bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
aakhir kar Vidya ko uske karmo ki saja dene ke liye yamraj aa gaya hai,
idhar mrinal ne ek baar phir se apni shararat me veer ka naam fansa diya hai,
Vaise dono ki jodi bahot hi shandaar hai,
Mrinal aane wale khatare se veer ki raksha karne ke liye uske pichhe bhagi hai,
udhar saloni ne neha ko uss pret se bacha liya hai,
Aakhir kar raj ne iss tilism ko todne ka upay dhoondh hi liya hai,
ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai,
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Achanak uski nazar samne rakhe dressing table ke kaanch par gayi to uski dhadkan hi jaise rukne ko ho gayi…kaanch par kuch dhundhla dhundhla sa jhil mila raha tha…..aur bhi achanak uss mirror me ek chehra ubharne laga dhire dhire……..jaise hi vo chehra spast naar aaya jo ki bahut hi bayanak chehra nazar aa raha tha…..usko dekhte hi vidhya ki jor se dahshat ke maare cheekh nikal gayi…..vo jo bhi tha shayad iss samay uske piche khada tha.

Ye ehsaas hote hi uski ruh andar tak kaamp gayi…..vidhya ke poore jism me darr aur khauf se sihran doud gayi…uske hath pair thar tharane lage.

Darte darte usne kisi tarah himmat kar ke apni gardan ko piche ghumane lagi…….

Ab aage......

Vidhya ne jaise hi kampte huye palti to ye dekh kar hairan ho gayi ki vaha koi nahi tha.....uske saanso ki speed rajdhani express ki tarah tez chal rahi thi....poora sharir darr aur khauf ki vajah se pasine se tar batar ho gaya tha.

Vidhya (hairani se)—Yaha to koi nahi hai... ! Lagta hai mera vaham tha...din me bhi baithe baithe sapne dekhne lagi hu main.....omg...kitna darawana aur bhayanak dikhta tha uska chehra....abhi tak darr se mere hath pair kaamp rahe hain. Shukra hai ki ye sirf ek khwab tha warna main to dahshat me hi marr jati aaj.

Vidhya ek lambi saans khich kar sari se chehre par aaye pasine ko pochte huye jaise hi samne ki oor mudi to uske dill ka khauf jo uske khwab samajhne se kuch kam ho gaya tha achanak vo khauf aur darr pahle ki tulna me duguna ho gaya.

Uske samne vahi dressing table tha, vo bhi apni jagah par kintu usme laga hua mirror gayab tha….ek baar phir se uske hath paon phool gaye...

Usne turant piche palat ke dekha to phir chounk gayi..kyon ki vo mirror piche ki deewar par latak raha tha…usne phir se samne palat ke dekha to ab ki bar mirror dressing table me apni jagah par laga dikha.

Usne ye dekh kar jaldi se palat ke deewar ki taraf dekha to vaha ab vo shisha nahi tha….turant samne palti to phir se chounk gayi kyon ki iss baar to vo dressing table hi apni jagah se gayab ho chuka tha…..vidhya ki halat dekhne layak ho gati thi….jis ghatna ko vo kuch der pahle tak apni jeeti jagti ankho ka ek bahut hi bura khwab samajh rahi thi, ab uska vahi khwab haqiqat ka roop le kar phir se uske samne aa kar khada ho gaya tha.

Vidhya ke jism me darr aur dahshat iss kadar haavi ho gaya ki ab uska dimag hi karna band kar diya tha…room ki khidki aur darwaje par lage huye parde jor jor se hilne lage…..jab hamare dil aur dimag ke andar darr apna darr ghar kar leta hai, uss samay hone wali kisi ped ke toote huye patte ki aahat bhi chati huyi dhadkano ko band karne ke liye paryapt hoti hai.

Yahi manodasha iss samay vidhya ki ho chuki thi….darr ki vajah se uska poora jism pasine se bhig chuka tha…ki tabhi vo dressing table apne khisak kar uski taraf aane laga….vidhya turant piche ki taraf gir gayi, mud kar vaha se bhagne ke chakkar me.

Lekin phir jaldi hi khadi ho kar darwaje tak pahuch ke room se bahar nikalne ke liye usko kholne ki koshish karne lagi par jaise aaj vo darwaja bhi uski jaan ka dushman ban gaya tha, usne bhi khulne se inkar kar diya aur lakh koshish karne ke bavjud bhi vo nahi khula to vidhya jor jor se cheekhne aur chillane lagi apni madad ke liye, magar uski madad karne ke liye aata bhi to koun…? Ghar me to uske khud ke akele ke alawa sabhi to hospital gaye huye the.

Vidhya (cheekhte huye)—koi darwaja kholo…….koi bachaooooo……..arey koiii tooooo darwaja khollll doooooo….

Akhir pareshan ho kar usne doudte huye apni pistol utha li aur charo taraf ghum ghum kar jorr jor se chillane lagi shayad vo pistol ko hi iss samay apna asli madadgar samajh rahi thi….ho bhi kyo na, akhir pistol aur khanjar ne hi to aaj tak uske manshubo ko poora karne me uski madad ki thi.

Vidhya (chillate huye)—kkkkkkkk…..kounnnn haiiiii yahaaa…..? dekhoooo tummmm jo bhiii hoooo….samne aa jaoooo, warna main goli chala dungiiii.

Aur bhi vo hua jiske baad to vidhya ki saanse hi halak me atak gayi…..uska pistol hatho se chhut kar door ja gira… kyon ki uske goli maarne ki dhamki dete hi ek chehra vaha achanak uss mirror se nikal kar bahar aa gaya…poora sharir ekdam kala, sir ke baal charo taraf se jamin tak latak rahe the, ek ek hath jitne lambe hath aur pairo ke nakhun the…aur ankhe bilkul ugte huye suraj ki tarah lal thi.

Ye bhayanak chehra dekhte hi vidhya ka poora sharir kaampne laga…..uski jeevan bhar ki sathi pistol ne uska sath chhod diya…..darr aur khauf ne usko poori tarah se apni giraft me le liya….uske muh se shabd nahi phoot rahe the… uski saanso ki gati rukne lagi aur vo dhammm se niche gir gayi, badi mushkil se uske muh se kuch yhar thare bol nikle aur phir dhire dhire uski ankhe band hoti chali gayi..

Vidhya (kaampte huye)—kkkkkkkkk…kounnnnnn hoooooo tummmmmm……..?

Y…..A…..M…..R…..A…..J

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Udhar hospital me veer, mrinal ka hath pakad kar counter se bahar nikal ke vapis aa gaya sab ke paas…mamta ko bhi hosh aa gaya tha phir se, lekin usne apni ankhe band kar rakhi thi.

Uski dono ankho ki core se ris ris kar aanshu ab bhi bah rahe the….shayad vo abhi bhi apne dil me ho rahi pida ko sahaj nahi kar payi thi…ruchi unke bagal me baith kar bahte un anshuo ko pochh rahi thi halanki ankhe to uski khud ki bhi nam thi.

Veer ne vaha aate hi vo medicines doctor ko check kara kar mrinal ko pakda di….doctor ne unn medicines ko kab aur kaise khana hai, ye bhi bata diya.

Jab doctor usko medicines ke baare me bata rahi thi to mrinal uski chair se bilkul chipak kar khadi ho gayi…aur jaldi se fevi quick uski chair aur sari par gira diya dhakkan nikal ke….choonki doctor samne ki taraf jhuki huyi thi jisse poora fevi stick uski hips me chipak gaya baki jo bacha vo chair par lag gaya.

Doctor jaise hi sidhi huyi to uski hips ki sari chair se chipak gayi…..mrinal ne sab ki oor dekha ki kisi ne usko dekha to nahi aisa karte huye…..aur phir jaldi se fevi stick ko veer ko pakda diya…veer ko to kuch samajh aaya nahi lekin phir bhi usne bina kuch kahe pakad liya….mrinal ne to ye suna hi nahi tha ki doctor ne medicines kab khane ko kaha hai uska dhyan to apni nayi shararat ko anzam dene me laga hua tha….veer ko fevi stick thamane ke baad vo ja ke priyadarshini ke bagal me khadi ho gayi.

Doctor (haste huye)—maine jaisa bataya hai vaise hi medicine khana….kasam se tum bhi na kamal ki ladki ho…..hihihi…?

Mrinal—Jyada hihihihi mat karo….tumhare Jhaant (daant) dikh rahe hain sab ko.

Mrinal ki baat se sab chounk gaye….Doctor to ekdam se sakpaka gayi…..uska hasta hua chehra yakayak sikud kar tension me ho gaya….aur vo turant jhatke se khadi ho gayi….aur tabhi

Charrrrrrrrrrrrr…….ki awaz ke sath hi uske hips ke upar ka kapda bhi phat kar chair me hi chipak kar rah gaya….uska poora pichhwada bina kapdo ke sab ke samne aa gaya…..sabhi ki ankhe shock se aur choudi ho gayi….sab se jyada buri halat to veer ki huyi iss samay kyon ki vo doctor ke theek piche hi khada tha…uski ankho ne to ye scene dikhte hi palak jhapkna hi bhul gayi thi….jabki mrinal tali maar maar ke hasne lagi.

Doctor ne jaldi se apna hath piche le ja kar tatola to abhi kya hua sara mazra uski samajh me aa gaya….vo fatafat turant chair par baith gayi….usne apna coat utar ke kamar me lapet liya aur gusse se sab ko dekhne lagi.

Doctor (gusse se)—ye behuda harkat kis ki hai…..?

Mrinal (haste huye)—arey…veer tumhare hath me kya hai ye…..?

Doctor aur baki sab palat ke veer ko dekhne lage…veer ne chounk kar jab apne hath me fevi stick dekhi to jaldi se phenk diya jise sab ne dekh liya.

Doctor (gusse me)—apko sharam aani chahiye mr. veer, aisi giri huyi harkat karte huye…..agar mujhe raj sir ki izzat ka khyal nahi hota to main police complain karti apke khilaf.

Veer (gusse se mrinal ko ghurte huye)—apko kuch galat fahmi huyi hai doctor…..maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai.

Sab ne mil kar doctor ko kisi tarah samjhaya….vo bhi samajh chuke the ki ye harkat bhi jarur mrinal ne hi ki hogi doctor, kisi aur doctor ko bhejne ko bol kar apne coat hips me lapete vaha se bhag gayi.

Sabne mrinal ko khub sunaya, lekin priyadarshini ne kisi tarah aage aa kar mamla shant kiya….vaise bhi kisi ne raat me dinner tak nahi kiya tha paridhi ki tabiyat jyada kharab ho jane ki vajah se.

Veer—main sab ke liye kuch nasta le kar aata hu.

Ruchi—mere liye mat lana, baki jisko jo khana hai puch lo aur le aao.

Kajal—aise kaise nahi khayegi, veer tu sab ke liye le aa.

Mrinal—ruk...ruk..main bhi chalti hu sath me, teri madad ke liye

Veer—tu kaisi madad karti hai...vo main achchi tarah se dekh chuka hu....jab se aayi hai tab se meri izzat do koudi ki kar di hai tune....tujhe fasane ke liye main hi milta hu hamesha.....main tere aage hath jodta hu, mujhe baksh de... pata nahi raj ne africa ke kis jungle se tujhe yaha pakad laya hai.

Veer ne usko mana kar ke bahar nikal gaya….mrinal bhi uske piche piche bhagi….lekin tab tak veer gadi le kar chal diya tha….mrinal nirash ho kar loutne hi wali thi ki tabhi uski ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki vo chounk gayi…vo tezi se bhagne lagi veer ki taraf….shayad usne kuch apratyashit bahut bada khatra bhamp liya tha.

Mrinal (chillate huye)—nahii…veerrrrr…vapis lout aaoooo…..matttt jaooooooo

Lekin veer to uski pahuch se door nikal chuka tha….akhir me mrinal adrishya ho kar tezi se veer ki taraf badhne lagi…. Idhar veer iss baat se anjan tha ki ek bahut bada khatra badi tezi se uski taraf badh raha hai.

Veer apni hi dhun me gadi chala raha tha ki tabhi uss road ko ek bahut bade sher ki parchhayi ne gher liya…

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Vahi dusri taraf uss grah me uss rajya ke rajguru dhyan mudra me baith kar apne guru ka dhyan laga rahe the kuch der baad hi unke guru samne prakat ho gaye aur yaad karne ka karan pucha.

Guru—kaho vats, kaise yaad kiya mujhe….?

Rajguru (RG)—gurudev….mere mann me ek shanka uttapann ho rahi thi, jiske nivaran hetu main apka marg darshan chahta hu.

Guru—kaisi shanka putra….?

RG—gurudev, jaisa ki aapne kaha tha ki uss talwar ko vahi hasil kar sakta hai jiski vo talwar hai ya phir koi maha parakrami yoddha….aaj huyi uss khooni prati yogita me maine aise hi ek maha parakrami yoddha ko dekha hai..usne na kewal uss pratiyogita ko jita hai balki uss taqatwar jeev ko parajit kar ke uss talwar ko bhi hasil kar liya.

Guru—ye to bahut hi achchi baat hai….phir tumhe shanka kis baat se hai…?

RG—meri shanka ka karan hai vahi ladka….na jane kyo mujhe uski veerta dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaise ki vo saajan ho aapne mujhe jaisi veerta saajan ke vishay me batayi thi, vaise hi gun mujhe uss ladke raj ke andar nazar aaye hain to kya raj hi saajan hai…..? aap ne ek baar kaha bhi tha ki vo phir se janam lega aur yaha jarur ayega, usko abhi yaha ke bahut se adhure kaam poore karne hain.

Guru—tumhari shanka niradhar nahi hai vats, saajan hi raj hai.

RG—iska matlab ab iss rajya me chhaye dukh aur taklif ke badal hat jayenge….har oor khushi aur ullas ka vatavaran hoga…..kya vrihadpur aur uska qila bhi shrap aur tilism se azad ho payega gurudev….? Akhir kya raaz hai vrihadpur aur uske qile ka….? Maine jab bhi raj ke baare me janne ke liye dhyan me baitha to kamyabi nahi mili, aisa kyo…?

Guru—tumhare sawal ka jawab to mere paas bhi nahi hai putra….isko samay ke upar chhod do….raj ke vishay me ya to khud raj janta hai ya phir uski guru maa….isliye kitna bhi dhyan lagaoge uske vishay me janne ke liye, kamyabi nahi milegi…ataiv uss baare me mat socho.

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Idhar qile me vo laash ek pair ke sahare kud kud kar neha ke piche bhagne lagi….bechari ki halat adhmari jaisi ho chuki thi darr ki vajah se…uski saanse phool chuki thi aur sharir me itni bhi jaan nahi bachi thi ki vo chilla bhi sake, bhaga tak nahi ja raha tha usse.

Akhir me thak haar kar vo baith gayi aur rone lagi…uske sir se khoon bhi nikal raha tha jisse dard ho raha tha… neha lagbhag behosh hone ki kagar par pahuch chuki thi….tab tak vo laash bhi uske paas pahuch ke khadi ho gayi aur uski halat par usko hasi aane lagi….uss laash ne vahi pada hua ek bada sa patthar hawa me utha liya aur uska nishana neha ke sir ki oor mod diya.

Vo patthar neha ke sir se takrata ki uske pahle hi achanak uski disha badal gayi aur vo vapis tezi se palat kar uss laash se ja takraya….laash uchhal kar door ja giri…lekin turant khadi ho kar usne udhar dekha to use apne samne saloni khadi dikhi.

Ye saloni hi thi jisne uss patthar ki disha ko mod diya tha aur neha ki jaan jate jate bach gayi thi….idhar main yaha se vaha ghumte huye akhir me phir se ussi kamre me pahuch gaya jaha vo shisha ki khidki lagi thi.

Raj—ye kaisa chakra vyuh hai….? Kahi se bhi jata hu lekin ghum phir kar issi kamre me pahuch jata hu…aise kaam nahi banega…..ab mujhe pahle iss tilism ko todne ki koshish karni padegi…isko tode bina kuch bhi maqsad poora nahi hone wala

Main vahi khade ho kar uss murti ko dhyan se dekhne laga aur phir uss kamre se nikal kar aage badhne ke liye kadam uthaya hi tha ki jaise mujhe kuch yaad aaya aur main vapis uss kamre me aa gaya.

Maine ek baar phir se dhyan de kar uss murti ko dekhna chalu kiya…..aur achanak ek jagah par ja kar meri nazar tham gayi aur main kuch sochne par vivash ho gaya.

Maine dekha ki uss murti ke baki sabhi saat hatho me koi na koi hathiyar avashya tha sirf ek hath aisa tha jo ki bilkul khali tha…lekin uss hath ki ungliya mudi huyi thi.

Raj (mann me)—ye murti khandit kyo hai….? Baki sabhi hatho me kuch na kuch hathiyar hain to ye khali kyo hai…? Koun sa hathiyar hona chahiye iss hath me…..? chakra bhi hai, trishul, gada, dhanush, chabuk, khopdi, khappar, ye sabhi hain…..haan talwar nahi hai……

Maine turant uss talwar ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal vo mere hatho me aa gayi…..maine mata rani ko pranam kar ke vo talwar unke uss khali hath me pakda di……aur phir tabhi….
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