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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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Rohan

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रात बीत गई भाई।


Bhai kal tabiyat sahi nahi thi

Abhi lunch kar raha hu
Lunch karne ke baad 12 baje se update type karna shuru karuga
Shayad 2 ya 3 baje tak update apke samne hoga...
 

anandsngh12

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Excellent update
Jaha sabhi apas me rahul ko lekar tu tu main main kar rahi hain
Vahi Rahul sonam se mafi maag leta hai
Sonam ka ye sahi nirnay hai abhi sach na batane ka
Vaise sonam ne rahul se vada to le liya hai
Kahani interesting hai
Halanki abhi maine poore updates nahi padhe hain
But ab lagta hai, padhna padega, story achchi lagi
Bas kahi kahi spelling mistakes hain jo dhire dhire routine me aa jayengi
Let's see what happens next
 

Jitu kumar

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Update 28

Prerna : yeh bhi samay ane par pata chalega.

Sonam : kamse kam yeh to bta do ki rahul ki kitni bhan hai.

Prerna ( mushkurate hue ) : rahul ki 8 sisters hai sunaina ko milakar.

Sonam....

Ab aageee...

Sonam : kya rahul sabke sath sex karega or vo sab iske liye tyaar hogi.

Prerna : haa rahul ko sex to sabke sath karna padega magar abhi usme bohot time hai.
Or rahul ki saari bhan rahul se khud se bhi jyada pyar karti hai.
Jaise tum karti thi.
Jabki tumko bhi pata nahi tha ki tum rahul se itna pyaar kiu karti ho. Or rahul ki taraf kiu khechi chali jati hai.

Magar yeh ek dusare ko accept karegi ya nahi uske bareme to mujhe nahi pata
Or is chakkar mein kitne dhamake hoge vo bhi nahi pata.

Or rahul par kya guzar ne wali hai is dhamake mein usne khud kya sapne me bhi nahi socha hoga.

Sonam : acha

Prerna : kya tum accept karogi rahul ki saari bhano ko.

Ab sonam bhi nakre karte hue.

Sonam : vo bhi samay ane par pata chal jaega.

Prerna : kyaaa
Meri pyari bhan kamse kam mere bare mein to soch
Mein bhi rahul se pyaar karti hue. ( Thoda utsukta se )

Sonam ( aakhe gol gol ghumate hue ) : prerna didi apne itna kuch samay par chor diya hai yeh bhi samay par chor do.

Sonam prerna ke shoulder par hath rakhte hue bolti hai.

Sonam : prerna didi aap tension mat lo hum aapke bareme jarur sochege.

Prerna ( mann me ) : mein sab ko accept karne ko tyaar hu.
Magar yeh mere ko accept karne ko tyaar nahi hai.
Or yeh sonam mere bareme sochegi.
Badi aaye mere bare me sochne wali.

Mera or sunaina didi ka hii roop hokar humse dusmani inko bohot bhari padegi.

Pehle hii us phussi bomb ( nisha & ruchi ) ne dimak kharab kar rakha hai.
Mere upar dhamaka karke or ab yeh hydrogen bomb ( sonam ) bhi lagta hai uske hii taraf ho jaegi.
Or rahul ki baki bhan bhi ek taraf ho gai to yeh logh mere hii khilaf world war 3 na cher dee.
Kuch soch prerna kuch soch.
Hai koi baat nahi mere paas bhi sabse khatarnak nuclear bomb ( sunaina ) hai.

In sab ko aisa maza chakaugi ki agli bar mere se panga nahi legi.

Fir prerna tezz tezz hasne lag jati hai or vaha se gayab ho jati hai.

Sonam ( mann mein ) : rahul mera bhai kese ho sakta hai vo bhi saga bhai.
Ab mein kese accept karugi rahul ko apne pyaar ke roop mein.

Tabi bike ki awaaz aati hai.

Or
Rahul kamre mein aa jata hai.

Sonam bed par baithi ( sit ) hoti hai.

Or rahul sonam ko khadi karta hai or khud
Sonam ke samne ghutno par baith jata hai
Or rahul sonam ka hand pakad kar sonam se bolta hai.

Nam akho se.

Rahul : sonam main tumare pyaar ke kabil nahi hu aisi harkat kar kar muze ab apne aap par ghin ane lagi hai.
Maine tumare pyaar ka mazak udaya tume pyaar karne ko kaha.
Tume apne pyaar ko dikane ke bahane tumare sath sex kiya.

Main divya se bohot pyaar karta hu magar usne mujhe apni bhabhi ke sath kiss karte hue dekh liya tha.
Uski bhabhi na mere sath jabardasti kiss kiya tha.
Magar mane divya ko bohot shamjhane ki kosis ki mera vishwas karo.
Magar divya ne mera vishwas nahi kiya.

Sonam ( mann me ) : rahul tume pura sach nahi pata agar pura sach pata chala to pata nahi tum kya kar baithoge.

Rahul : mujhe vaha se nikal diya us time mera dil bohot roya ( carry ) ki jisse mein pyaar karta hue usne mujhpar vishwaas nahi kiya.
Par kiu.

Rahul : jab se mujhe lagne laga ki mein bas havas ke niche daba hua ek ladka hue.

Har ladki ek jaise hoti hai bas pyaar ka dikava karti hai or bad mein chor kar chali jati hai.
Isliye meine dubara pyaar nahi karna chahata tha.

Rahul : mujhe pata tha ki tum muzse pyaar karti ho or mera 5 saal se picha kar rahi ho
Or usse pehle jab mein divya se pyaar karta tha tab bhi tum muze chup chup kar dekha karti thi.

Magar mein ignoor kar deta tha kiuki mein dubara se tutna nahi chahata tha.

Dubara se pyaar nahi karna chahata tha.
Jab tum mujhe hospital mein dikhi

Rahul : tab mera dil bohot joro se dhadhakne laga
Muze lagne laga ki kahi mein tumse pyaar na kar bethu.
Jab tum ro ( carry ) kar rahi thi apne papa ke liye to mera dil bhar aya.
Pata nahi kiu muze kya hua mein apne aap ko rok nahi paya

Sonam ( mann me ) : kiuki mein sunaina ka hii to roop hue.
Or vo bhi humshak

Rahul : tumko vishwas dilane laga ki tumare papa ko kuch nahi hoga
Mera pyaar tume or tumare papa ko kuch nahi hone dega.
Chahe kuch bhi ho.gae.

Uske baad kal tumne muze pyaar ka izhaar kiya.

Sonam ( mann me ) : vo isliye ki tumare dil se nafrat kam ho sake or tum apne ander ka dard bahar nikal sako.
Divya galat nahi thi rahul vo bhi tumse utna hii pyaar karti hai jitna tum divya ko karte ho.

Rahul : to mein apne aap ko shamal nahi paya or muze vo tasveer yaad ane lagi
Jab
Sirf ek kiss ke bajase divya ne mujhe chor diya tha.
Apne pyaar ko chor diya tha.
Kahi tum bhi muze na chor do jiise mein tut jao.
Isliye mein tume bas yeh dikana chahata tha ki mere ander sirf havas hai.
Mein sirf sarir ka bhookha hue.
Jisse tumara pyaar tut gae.

Sonam ( mann mein ) : tum havas ke bhookhe nahi rahul tum pyaar ke bhookhe hai.

Rahul : magar tumara pyaar nahi tuta balki tumne jab muze kaha ki
main tumse kuch magu

Or mane haa kaha
To tumne muzse yeh kaha ki main tumme bas pyaar karu or itna pyaar karu ki jis pyaar ki koi had na ho.
Jisme sarir ki bhukh na ho.
Koi lalach na ho.
Bas pyaar ho.

Rahul : vahi mere ander ki us havas ne dum tor diya.
Mujhe lagne laga ki main havas ka nahi pyaar ka bhookha hue.
Mujhe maaf kar do sonam.
Mujhe maaf kar do.

Or isse ke sath sonam bhi ghutne ke bal baith ( sit ) gai or rahul ko gale laga liya dono ke aashu rukhne ka naam hii nahi le rahe the.
Rahul ka yeh dard dekhkar sonam ko bhi apna dard chota lagne laga tha.

Kiuki sonam ko to bas do din hii dard hua tha.
Magar rahul to pata nahi kitne saalo se is dard mein jee raha tha ki uske ander sirf havas hai.
Koi ladki usse pyaar nahi karti.

Or dono apne mann ke dard ko halka karne lage.

Fir

Sonam : ab tume mein kuch nahi hone dugi.
Or kaha chale gae the tum mujhe chor kar pata hai kabse mein tumara intzaar kar rahi rhi.

Rahul ab mazak mein bolta hai.

Rahul : tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum meri biwi ho.

Is baat par sonam sharma jati hai.

Rahul : jyada sharmane ki jarurat nahi hai.
Or ab kisi bhi situation mein mujhe chorkar to nahi jaogi.

Mujh par hamesha vishwas karogi naa.

Sonam ( mann me ) : ab main kya karu kya main rahul ko btau ki wo mera saga bhai hai.
Agar maine bta diya to shayad rahul fir tut jaiga .
Fir shayad mein bhi rahul ko shamal nahi paugi.
Shayad rahul dubara Na sochne lag jae ki usne havas mein apni hii bhan ke sath pyaar kiya.
Ab main kya karu.
Main prerna didi se bhi nahi puch pai.
Nahi nahi abhi mein rahul ko tutne nahi de sakti yeh sab bad mein dekhugi.

Sonam : rahul mein tume kabi bhi chor kar nahi jaugi chahe koi bhi sitiation ho.
Hamesha tum par vishwas karugi.
Acha ab jaldi tyaar ho gao tume mummy or papa se bhi to milna hai.

Rahul : sonam tum muze kitna pyaar karti ho

Sonam : apni jaan se bhi jyada.

Rahul : fir apni aakhe band karo.
Sonam : kiu
Rahul : karo na please.

Or sonam apni aakhe band kar leti hai.
Or rahul sonam ke gale mein vo locket dal deta hai.

Rahul : ab apni aakhe kholo

Or sonam apni aakhe kholti hai.
Or locket ko apne gale mein dekhkar or khuss ho jati hai.

Sonam : yeh locket kis liye mein yeh nahi le sakti.

Rahul : yeh hamare pyaar ki nishani hoga.
Or tum hamare pyaar ki nishani ko alag karna chahati ho.
Isko khol kar dekho.

Or sonam locket ko khol kar dekhti hai.
To usme rahul or sonam ki photo hoti hai
Or locket dil shape ka hota hai.

Sonam : thank you rahul isko mein hamesha shamal kar rakhugi.
Tumari pyaar ki nishani shamaj kar


Rahul : sonam abhi tume meri friend ban kar rehna hoga meri bhan ke samne jab tak mein unko hamare bareme nahi bta deta.

Sonam : mujhe tum mil gae or mujhe kya chahiye
Magar ab tume bhi ek vada karna hoga ki tum mujhe kabhi chor kar nahi jaoge chahe tume koi bhi sachai pata chale.

Rahul sochte hue

Rahul : khonsi sachai ki baat kar rahi ho sonam

Sonam : vada karo na.

Rahul : sonam mein vada karta hue. Ab to bta do

Sonam : vo sab baad mein bataugi ab jaldi tyaar ho gao.

Rahul : thik hai or mujhe jaldi bhi nikal na hai.
Tumare ghar se kiuki mujhe sonali didi ke pass jana hai.

Sonam : I LOVE YOU RAHUL

rahul : I LOVE YOU TOO MERI JAAN.

Or fir dono tyaar hokar nikal jate hai sonam ke ghar ke tarf.......






Awesome update bhai,
Sonam aur prerna ki baate kafi lajawab thi,
sonam bhi rahul ki bahan hi hai aur sunaina ki humshakl hai,
sonam ne rahul ko nafrat ki daldal se nikal kar pyar ke phoolo se bhare raah par le aaya hai,
rahul ko pahle se hi pata tha ki sonam uska pichha karti hai lekin usne divya ke kaaran kabhi uss se baat nhi ki,
ab rahul sonali didi ke paas ja raha hai dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
 

Rohan

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Update 29

Sonam : I LOVE YOU RAHUL

rahul : I LOVE YOU TOO MERI JAAN.

Or fir dono tyaar hokar nikal jate hai sonam ke ghar ke tarf.......

Aab aaageeee.....

Or rahul jaise hii sonam ke ghar pohochta hai.
Itna bada ghar dekhkar haairan ho jata hai.
Kiuki sonam ka ghar bohot bada tha.
Bohot saare gaurd or naukar the.
Kiuki sonam ke papa rishabh yaha ke sabse bade business man main se ek the.

Rahul : sonam tum to bohot bade ghar mein rehti ho.
Kafi ameer bhi lagti ho.
Fir tumne mujhse pyaar kiu kiya .
Main to ek middle class family se hue.

Sonam : pyaar kabi middle class family ko dekhkar nahi hota.
Mere lover jii
Pyaar to do atmao se hota hai.
Or yeh pyaar kabi amir ya garib nahi dekhta.

Rahul : fir bhi.

Sonam rahul ke gale mein apne dono hath dalkar.

Sonam : kabi bhi insaan pyaar ko nahi chunta hamesha pyaar insaan ko chunta hai.
Jaise tume chuna pyaar ne mere liye.
Pyaar to vo hota hai.
Jisko tum pyaar karte ho usko tum pyaar ki had tak chahana chahate ho.
Bepanha usko pyaar karna chahate ho.

Isliye to bhagwaan bhi pyaar ke age apne ghutne tek dete hai.
Koi bhi insaan chahe vo kitna bhi shaktishali kiu na ho jae.
Magar pyaar ke age hamesha haar hii jata hai.
Kiuki duniya ka sabse shaktishali agar koi hatyaar hai to vo pyaar hai.
Jo log hazaro saal tapasya karte hai. Us bhakti or us pyaar ke bas mein hii to akar mahadev bhi vardan de dete hai.
Jabki mahadev ko sab pata hota hai ki jai shaks us vardan ko dur upyaog karega magar fir bhi bhagwan usko vardan dete hai pata hai kiu.

Rahul : kiu jab mahadev ko pata hai ki is vardan se vinash hii hoga fir kiu mahadev aisa vardan dete hai.

Sonam ( muskurate hue ) : kiuki pyaar ke bajase
Us shaks ne itne saal jab tak vo tapasya kar raha tha. Utne saal us shaks ne bas apne mahadev ko hii yaad kiya.
Bas apne dil or dimak mein bas mahadev ka hii naam liya.
Yahi to pyaar hota hai.
Yaha bhagwaan bhi us pyaar main mohit hokar vardan de dete hai.

Isliye writer ne bhi hamari kahani ka naam
Pyaar ki had paar rakha hai.

Rahul : kya tum sach mein Mike pyaar ki had paar tak mujhse pyaar karti hi.

Sonam apne face par shikan lake.
Sonam : koi sakh.

Or rahul na mein garden hila deta hai.

Fir
Dono sonam ke ghar mein ghusne lagte hai.

Or guard gate khol deta hai.

Or hum ander chale gaye.
Or ander wala gate aunty ne khola.

Rani : are beta a gaye.

Rahul : namaste aunty.

Rani : namaste beta.
Sonam tum kha gae thi or rahul ko pane papa ke room mein le jao.

Sonam : chalo rahul
Fir sonam rishabh ke kamre mein rahul ko le jati hai.

Sonam : papa yeh rahul hai.

Rishabh : are beta aao betho

Rahul rishabh uncle ke side mein beth jata hai.

Rahul : namaste uncle.
Ab aapki tabiyat kaise hai.

Rishabh : ab toh kaafi thik hoon .
Tum nahi hote to shayad mein jinda nahi hota.

Rahul : are uncle aise kiu bol rahe hai.
Vaise main to sirf aapko hospital lekar gaya tha.
Apko to doctor ne bachaya hai.

Rishabh : lekin tum hospital nahi le jate to doctor kese bachata muje.

Rahul : vo sab choriye uncle.
Ab aap thik hai.
Yahi bohot badi baat hai.

Rishabh : or batao beta tum kya karte ho.

Rahul : uncle abhi maine abc college mein addmission karwaya hai.

Rishabh : is college mein to sonam ne bhi addmission karaya hai.
Rishabh sonam se puchte hue.
Kiu sonam

Or sonam haa mein apni garden hila deti hai.

Rishabh : ab tum dono to ek hii college mein padoge.

Rahul : jii uncle

Fir aise hii 5 minute baat hoti hai.
Fir
Rahul : uncle ab mujhe chalna chahiye abhi mujhe apne gaon ( village ) bhi nikal na hai.

Rishabh : aise kese beta kamse kam dinner to karke jao.

Rahul : uncle mein late ho jaoga agli baar akar jarur dinner karuga.

Rishabh : thik hai beta.

Fir rahul rishabh uncle ke kamre se nikal jata hai.

Or samne do aunty ko dekta hai.
Ek to rani aunty ( sonam ki mom ) hoti hai.
Dusari seema aunty ( yeh vahi aunty thi jisko rahul ne bachaya tha. Jab unke samne truck aa gaya tha or jinke piche vo gunde pade the )

Rahul seema aunty ko dekhte hii shocked ho jata hai.

Rahul ( seema se ) aunty aap yaha or aap thik to hai na.
Pehle to seema aunty rahul ko dekhte hii vo bhi shocked ho jati hai
Fir
Seema aunty : haa beta mein thik hu.
Agar tum nahi ate to vo gunde mujhe mar hii dete.

Rahul : aunty vase vo gunde apke piche kiu pade the.

Tabi

Rani aunty : tum dono ek dusare ko jante ho.

Fir seema aunty rani aunty ko saari baat bta deti hai.
Us accident or un gundo wali bhi.

Rani aunty : beta tum to hamesha sabki madad karte ho.
Bohot ache insaan ho tum.

Rani ( seema se ) : seema pata hai isne hii unki ( rishabh ) ki bhi jaan bachai thi.
Fir rani aunty bhi seema ko saari baat bata deti hai.
Us hospital vali.

Rahul firse

Rahul : aunty vase vo gunde apke piche kiu pade the.

Seema aunty ( rahul se ) : vo sab choro beta tum to bohot nek or ache insaan lagte ho kabhi ana mere ghar bhi
Dinner par.

Rahul : jarur aunty acha ab mein chalta hu.

Rani : beta dinner to karte jao.

Rahul : aunty fir kabi abhi mujhe jana hoga.
Agli baar pakka dinner karuga.

Rani : thik hai beta magar agli baar dinner kiye bina jane nahi dugi.

Rahul : thik hai aunty.

Or fir rahul rani aunty ka aashirwaad leta hai.

Rani : hamesha khuss raho beta.

Fir
Rahul jab seema aunty ke per ( foot ) chukar aashirbad lene lagta hai.
To
Achanak se
Rahul ke shirt ke upar ke button khul jate hai.
Or rahul ka seena ( chest) dikai dene lagta hai.

Or seema aunty ki nazar rahul ke seene ( chest ) par jaise hii padti hai.
Puri tarha shocked ho jati hai.

Seema (shocked hokar bolti hai.) : Yeh tumare chest par mahakaal ki tasveer kese hai.

Rahul : vo aunty pata nahi kabi kawar yeh tasveer dikai dene lagti hai to kabhi kawar gayab ho jati hai.
Mujhe aaj tak shamaj mein nahi aya is tasveer ke bare mein ki yeh achanak kiu dikai dene lagti hai.
Fir kaha gayab ho jati hai.
Rahul ki baat sunkar
Seema aunty ko to jese saap ( snake ) hii sung gaya tha.
Vo ek dum putla ban gayi thi.

Uske aage vo kuch bol hii nahi payi.

Or rahul seema aunty ka aashirwaad lekar rahul nikal jata hai .
Ghar ke bahar
Or bike par bethkar apne ghar ki taraf nikal jata hai.

Tabi
Seema aunty achanak se uttati hai.
Or bhagte hue
Rohaan rohan chillane lagti hai.

Or jab tak seema bahar ati hai

Jab tak rahul nikal jata hai.

Yeh dekhkar rani aunty bhi shocked ho jati hai.

Ki seema ne achanak rohan ka naam kiu liya.
Or rani aunty bhi seema aunty ke piche bhagti hai.
Or seema aunty vahi baith kar bas rohan rohan chillati rehti hai.
Or rani aunty unko shamlate hue pehle sofe par baith ti hai.

Fir rani aunty seema aunty se bolti hai

Rani : seema tune rohan ka naam kiu liya itne saalo baad or rohan kha hai.

Seema ( rote hue ) : rani yeh rahul hii mera rohan hai.
Mera bhanja
Meri bhan reema ka beta.

Rani puri tarha shocked hokar.

Rani : kyaa

Seema : main to pehle hii shamaj gai thi jab rahul ne muhje bachaya tha.
Kiuki uski speed itni tezz thi ki vo sirf rohan ke alawa kisi ki nahi ho sakti
Magar muje puri tarha se vishwas nahi tha.
Magar jab abhi muje rahul ki chest par mahakaal ki tasveer dekhi to mujhe puri tarha vishwaas ho gaya ki yahi rohan hai .
Kiuki vo koi maluli tasveer nahi hai vo ..............................

Rani ( khuss hokar ) : yeh apne thakur sahab ka pota ( grand son ) hai.

Seema haa mein garden hila deti hai.

Tabi
Rani sonam ko jor jor se awaz lagati hai.

Rani : sonam sonam sonam.

Or sonam bhagte hue bahar aati hai.

Sonam : kyaa hue maa.

Rani : beta abhi rahul ko phone kar usko bol ki abhi jaldi se yaha aae.

Sonam : kyu maa or kya hua hai.
Aap itna pareshan kiu lag rahi ho.

Rani : jitna bola hai utna kar or jaldi jaa.

Or sonam jaise hii murti hai

Tabi
Seema ko sonam ke gale mein vo locket dikai deta hai.

Seema : sonam tere gale mein yeh locket kese aya.

Sonam thoda ghabra jati hai.
Or harbarakar bolti hai.

Sonam ( harbarate hue ) : kuch nahi aunty yeh to maine bhar se kharida tha.

Or jaldi se kamre ki taraf jane lagti hai.
Or rani bhi us locket ko dekhti hai to bolti hai.

Rani : rukh sonam idhar aa.

Sonam : maa mein rahul ko call karti hu.

Rani : tuze yaha ane ko bola hai na

Or sonam ghabrate hue apni maa ke pass aati hai.

Sonam : jii maa

Rani : jhuth mat bol sonam jaldi bta.

Sonam ( garden niche karte hue ) : maa mein sach bol rahi hue.

Seema : beta sach bta de hum tum ko kuch nahi bolege or yeh locket hamara khandani locket hai.
Or yeh locket kisi ke pass nahi ho sakta kiuki...........
Or vahi seema chup ho jati hai.

Sonam : nahi aunty sach me mein jhooth nahi bol rahi.

Seema sonam ke pass jakar.
Sonam se bade pyaar se bolti hai.

Seema : sonam beta dekh mein vada karti hue.
Ki koi tuze kuch nahi kahega .
Koi baat hai to bta de.

Sonam : aunty aap muze se yeh locket to nahi logi na.
Or aap vada karti ho jo mein apse magugi vo aap muze dogi
Khao meri kasam.

Seema : teri kasam beta.

Sonam : maa se bhi kaho.

Rani : teri kasam.

Sonam.....



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