Incest Obsession

[manikmittalme07]

update - 4
divit ko paani me gaye hue 20 minute ho chuke the. 20 minute hone ke baad bhi jab pani me koi hulchul nahi hui tab waha par maujood sab ke cheharo par pareshani najar aane lagi. even divit ke friends bhi ab tension me aane lage the. aur wahi in sab se door upar mandir me ek saya khada muskura raha tha.jaise usko pata ho ki pani ke andar kya ho raha hoga..

saya - not bad divit...timing bad gayi hai aapki. fir milte hai aapse.

aur wahi paani me neeche divit aaram se aakh band kar ke leta tha. upar chand bhi badalo me chup gaya tha. jisse jo kuch najar aa raha tha. wo bhi ab aana band ho gaya.

theek kuch der baad jab chand wapas se najar aaya tab sabne dekha ki kaise divit aaram se pani me leta hua hai..usi time divit ne apni aankhe kholi aur aaram se uth kar pani ke bahar aa gaya.

thand ke wajah se uski gori body halki nei dikhne lagi thi. wahi aankho ka rang kuch gahra ho chala tha.

idhar divit ke friends jo trans se bahar aaye wo ek dum se waha se bhaag kar neeche gaye jaha divit aaram se walk karta hua aa raha tha. usko dekh kar lag raha tha ki id thand ka uspar kuch khas asar nahi hua.

rudra - chutiya pagal ho gaya hai. pahle upar se kud gaya fir pani me let gaya..

adhitva - apne nahi to humare baare me to socha kar yaar kuch ho jata to.

kiyan - bhai teri ye dareing kisi din humara heart fail karwayegi.

ziyan - le pahle apne ko sukha..aur tum sab bhi kya bole jaa rahe ho isko le ke andar room me chalo.

ruhan - bhai socha to kar kam se kam humari nahi to apni family ke baare me.

ruhan ke itna kahte hi divit ek look ruhan ko dekhta hai..jisse ruhan ko apni galti ka andaja ho gaya ki usko kya nahi bolna chahiye wahi baki sab bhi chup ho gaye.

divit waha se seedha chalte hue abhik ke paas aaya. aur bola

divit - ab bol..

abhik - kya chahiye tujhe.

divit - time aane par le lunga. itna kah ke wo waha se seedha apne kamre ki aur chal diya udhar chand bhi badlo ke beech chup gaya. aur party to end tabhi ho gayi thi. jab inke beech tashan dikha logo ko..aur baki sab bhi apne apne room me chale gaye.

Great updates. Naye characters add ho rahe hain story build up ho rahi hai. Likhne ka andaaz to aapka top class hai. Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai.

 

[Kratos]

Radioactive nhi bhai antidote tha unke pass...

Yes.. radioactive jimmy ki bidy me hai.

 

[Kratos]

To un 5 ladko me yah Samband hai vo sabhi chaddhi baddhi yaar hai or ab to baichalar bhi sath me ho gye hai, ye 5cho alag alag stream me ingenaring kr rhe hai Monali se, Ghar se dur isliye hai kyoki divit ko short temper hai pr ab sudhar gya hai thoda sa, vahi vo saya Lagta hai trainer hai divit ka marsal arts ka, Dekhte hai aage kya kya pta chalta hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Divit aur uske friends ki schooling manali se hui hai..abhi college ka jikra nahi aaya hai.
aur wo sudhra hai ya nahi ye aage pata chalega. aur jaruri nahi ki wo saya trainer ho.

 

[Kratos]

Great updates. Naye characters add ho rahe hain story build up ho rahi hai. Likhne ka andaaz to aapka top class hai. Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai.

Thanks

 

[Kratos]

To un 5 ladko me yah Samband hai vo sabhi chaddhi baddhi yaar hai or ab to baichalar bhi sath me ho gye hai, ye 5cho alag alag stream me ingenaring kr rhe hai Monali se, Ghar se dur isliye hai kyoki divit ko short temper hai pr ab sudhar gya hai thoda sa, vahi vo saya Lagta hai trainer hai divit ka marsal arts ka, Dekhte hai aage kya kya pta chalta hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

bhai..story thoda dhyan se padho.

 

[Kratos]

Great updates. Naye characters add ho rahe hain story build up ho rahi hai. Likhne ka andaaz to aapka top class hai. Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai.

Likhne ka andaaz kaisa itna bhi accha nahi hai. story build up ho rahi ho rahi ye sahi hai. Aage character jaise jaise add honge waise waise unka intro hoga.

 

[urc4me]

Romanchak. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[manikmittalme07]

Likhne ka andaaz kaisa itna bhi accha nahi hai. story build up ho rahi ho rahi ye sahi hai. Aage character jaise jaise add honge waise waise unka intro hoga.

Right sir

 

[Rajdeepchatha]

Nice story

 

[Naik]

update - 5

pichle update me aapne padha ki kaise abhik aur divit me shart lagti hai..aur divit apni shart puri karta hai.

ab aage...

sab apne rooms me high hoke pade the. kal raat jo kand hua tha usse sab ke dimag hile hue the. mujhe chhodhkar aur jab dimag hila ho to ek hi cheej hai jo usko apni jagah wapas la sakti hai aur wo hai daru.

to kal raat takreeban 2 se 2:30 baje tak hum logo ne pee. uske baad ye sab to neend me kho gaye. aur bacha main to kuch time tak to peeta raha fir jab kuch uljhan hui..to is uljhan ko khatam karne bike leke nikal pada manali ki roads par aur wakai me kya najara tha.

chain se sota hua sahar aur jaagte hum. manjil kasam se manali ke pahado par malana cream ke sathjo sukun hai wo aur kahi nahi..aisa unsab ka kahna hai jo is sukun ko paane ke liye himanchal ke taraf apna rukh karte hai. main bhi isiliye aaya tha.

par afsos sab tha sirf sukun ko chhodhkar. aur sukun kaha tha. iska mujhe bhi nahi pata ya yun kahu ki pata hai par kahna nahi chahta.

bas isi kashmkash me kat rahi hai apni..aur rahi baat meri ki main kaun hoon.


to main hoon...Divit Singh Rathore.

aur jo room me pade so rahe hai wo hai mere child hood friends.

Rudra.
Adhitva.
Kiyan.
Ziyan.
Ruhan.

inke alawa mera koi aur dost nahi hai kyonki kabhi jarurat hi nahi padi. hum sab hi ek dusre ke liye kaafi hai. aur hum hi nahi balki humare parents bhi childhood friends hai. humari boarding bhi sath hui thi. aur bechlors me bhi hum sab sath me hai.

jaha Ruhan electrical engineering ka student hai. wahi Rudra mechanical ka Adhitva ki dilchaspi chemistry me thi to wo chemical me gaya. Kiyan ziyan aur main hum IT ke students hai. iske alawa meri knowledge finance me root to fruit tak hai.

aur agar apne baare me kahu to main koi bhi kaam karta hoon to obsession ke sath. ya to karunga nahi aur agar karunga to extreme level pe jaake.

boarding meri manali me hui thi. aur reason sirf itna sa hai mera anger. main short temper tha bachpan me. khair anger issue to abhi bhi hai. par ab itna nahi hai. ab control me hai. mera anger us level ka tha ki dimag satka to main apne samne khade insaan ka lohaj nahi karta tha. fir wo bada ho budha ho baccha ho jawan ho aurat ho ya aadmi ho.

isi wajah se meri kabhi kisi se itni jyada bani nahi. rishtedaro se to bilkul bhi nahi. wajah one and only my anger.

ladai jhagda aam baat thi. baat kisi ki sahan hoti nahi thi aur ye ab bhi hai. gali dena nahi pasand aur na hi sunna. nature me bhi introvert hoon. in pancho ke alawa kisi se kabhi baat nahi ki.

different type ki martial arts aati hai. aur wo kaise to bhaut choti umra me training start kar di thi. reason hai mera driver kyonki use is type ki movies pasand thi. aur jab tak main ghar me tha. wo mera personal driver tha. Dad ne lagwaya tha mere liye. wo roj movie dekhta fir mujhe uske baare me batata pahle mujhe ghanta interest nahi tha martial arts me. fir ek movie dekhi tah martial arts ka obsession aisa chada to ab tak nahi utra pahle bhi sirf study khelne ke naam par sirf practice karta tha. meri martial arts ke baare me mere dosto ke alawa kisi ko nahi pata nahi mere ghar me.

aur un sab ko bhi sirf itna pata hai ki main martial arts janta hoon. baki mere master kaun hai. mujhe kaun kaun si aati hai ye nahi pata unko.



continued...

Devit sahab ko gussa bahot aata h or Martial art m bhi mahir h
Yeh saare dost lagutia yaar h sahi h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai