Thriller Mastermind... (Completed)

[Adirshi]

Update 25

pawar aur chavhan ne aage badhkar shashank aur dolly ko arrest kiya band ghar main unke bhagne ka koi chance nahi tha..................
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Mister kumar aur mister parera ekdusre ke business partner....dolly aur shashank undono ki eklauti santane...bigdi huyi....business ke liye hone wali parties main baar baar mulakat hone se dono mai ek duse ke sath sambandh ban gaye...lekin aage kumar ne shashank ko apni jindagi se nikal diya aur shashank achanak kahi chala gaya......

akeli, sharir suck ko bhuki dolly ko jhon ke roop main ek naya partner mila to sahi lekin bagair mahatvakansha wale jhon se use sharir sukh ke alawa aur kuch nahi milta tha aur achanak uski mulakat shashank se hui....

tab tak shashank ne suman naam ki machli ko apne jaal main fasa liya tha ab bas raah thi wo machli khane ki. dolly aur shashank ek baar fir sath aa gaye...

unki aankhon ke samne dikhne wala paisa yani suman. uske naam par nanasahab ki bharpoor sampatti thi...nanasahab ko khatam kar diya to sari sampatti suman ki..aur fir suman se shadi kar ke wo kata nikala to sari property shashank ki....simple sa idea tha lekin fir bhaiyasahab?? unko bhi maar diya jaye to?? kyu nahi??

bhaiyasahab ka koi waris nahi tha unke baar unki sari property nanasahab ki hne wali thiaur fir pehle bhaiyasahab fir nanasahab ka kata nikala to shashank ke liye jackpot tayar tha.....

lekin gaon main achanak to bade logo ke khoon hona yani 'property ke liye khoon' is or police ka dhayan jana lazmi tha isiliye shashank ne naya plan banaya serial khoono ka...usi hetu se wo bus main chadha..ab uska naseeb kahe ya us ladki ka badnaseeb shashank ne naseeb ne sath diya aur shweta khud maut ko bulawa dete huye use lodge mai le gayi

anitatai ko marne ke piche bhi koi khas maksad nahi tha unki jagah koi or bhi ho sakta tha lekin andhere main ghat lagaye bauthe shashank ke liye anitatai aasan shikar thi..

uske baad inhi serial khuno main bhaiyasahab aur fir nanasahab mare gaye aisa bharam paida karna tha aur fir is sab main kisi or ko fasa kar apan alag hat jana aisa sab plan tha........

dolly ne jhon ko is case main fasane ka decision liya....ek career ending par aaye huye detective ajent ko naye se surwat karne ke liye jarurat thi to popularity ki, logo ki juba pe apna naam karne ki usi liye jhon ne ye khoon kiye aur kuch jhoote saboot se ye sabit karna ki ye jhon ne hi kiya hai

police jyada na sochte huye aankhon dekha saboot keh kar 'popularity' ke liye khoon karne wale jhon ko arrest karengi.....dheere dheere nanasahab aur bhaiyasahab ke maut se dukhi suman apne ki ghar main aatmyahatya kar legi aur fir uska pati yani shashank is sari property ka malik ban jayega aisa plan tha

dolly ke kuch karne se pehle hi jhon khud tarwade gaon main dakhil ho gaya fir baad main uspar najar rakhne ke liye dolly bhi shamil ho gayi.....aage jo socha tha wohi hua sirf jhon ko pakadwane main ek galti ho gayi us chure ke dono side alag alag bani huyi kalakari aur yahi plan fas gaya kyuki isise lefty khuni ki pehchan huyi

bhaiyasahab ne marte huye jhon ko dolly ki or ishara karte huye kuch connection hone ka ishara kiya tha....lekin suman ko bhaiyasahab pyaar se dolly bulate the ye baat kisi ke dhayan main nahi aayi

chavhan ki layi huyi info, dolly ka achanak jhon ke against jana aur polici sixth sense iski madad se pawar khuni tak pahuche.....kuch choti ghatnao se pawar ne tark banaya aur shashank aur dolly pakde gaye..........

MASTERMIND..........har criminal apne aap ko yani samajhta hai...lekin 'SADRAKSHANAY KHALNIGRAHANAYA' aisi shapath lene wale maharashtra police ko kam samajhne main wo galti kar baithta hai yahi inspector pawar ne yaha sabit kar ke batayi............

THE END

 

[Adirshi]

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Naina Rahul Sona syed arshad Avir Assassin Lord Saint pawankamdev123 Ng_TheViper
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[Assassin]

Aaj pure dedh saal baad is kahani ka ant hota hai main aap sabhi readers se mafi chahta hu ke main is kahani ko apna pura samay nahi de papaya iske sath nnay nahi kar paya lekin fir bhi aap sab ne sath diya aur main is kahani ko samapt kar paya isiliye aap sabhi ko

THANK YOU
Naina Rahul Sona syed arshad Avir Assassin Lord Saint pawankamdev123 Ng_TheViper
thank you

Finally, Muze isko ab firse padhna hoga.

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

Awesome story

 

[Naina]

Damn it... Kaafi dur ki sochke planning kiya tha shashank aur dolly ne ... sabhi ko lage ki kisi psycho killer ka kaam hai ya par sab sochi samjhi chal thi... .. aur baad mein jhon ko bali ka bakra bana dete... par sachhai zyada der tak chupti nahin.... ek na ek din samne aani hi thi... upor se dono ne hi kai mistake kar diya... jiske chalte aakhir kar ain mauke par range hatho pakde gaye...
Khair...
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills.... sach mein Kamal ki story thi... pure thrill with suspense combo..

 

[lone_hunterr]

Great story bhai..... Iss story ka basic idea kuch kuch mere ko Tom Cruise ki movie "Jack Reacher" jaisa laga. Par aapka plot bhut hi alag aur umda tha.

Property ke liye bhut door ki sochi Shashank aur Dolly ne. Vo gobar vala scene kya tha? kya vaha sach mein koi tha ya koi ittefaq??
Kaha dolly ek victim lag rahi thi aur achanak hi vo culprit nikli. Great turns and twists

 

[Lord Saint]

kaha tak pada yaad bhi nai h

ab firse padnga

 

[Adirshi]

Awesome story

thank you

 

[Adirshi]

Damn it... Kaafi dur ki sochke planning kiya tha shashank aur dolly ne ... sabhi ko lage ki kisi psycho killer ka kaam hai ya par sab sochi samjhi chal thi... .. aur baad mein jhon ko bali ka bakra bana dete... par sachhai zyada der tak chupti nahin.... ek na ek din samne aani hi thi... upor se dono ne hi kai mistake kar diya... jiske chalte aakhir kar ain mauke par range hatho pakde gaye...
Khair...
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills.... sach mein Kamal ki story thi... pure thrill with suspense combo..

thank you so much

 

[Adirshi]

Great story bhai..... Iss story ka basic idea kuch kuch mere ko Tom Cruise ki movie "Jack Reacher" jaisa laga. Par aapka plot bhut hi alag aur umda tha.

Property ke liye bhut door ki sochi Shashank aur Dolly ne. Vo gobar vala scene kya tha? kya vaha sach mein koi tha ya koi ittefaq??
Kaha dolly ek victim lag rahi thi aur achanak hi vo culprit nikli. Great turns and twists

bohot bohot shukriya bhai acha laga jaan kar ki aapko kahani achi lagi