Thriller Mastermind... (Completed)

[Adirshi]

kaha tak pada yaad bhi nai h

ab firse padnga

jaldi padh ke batao kahani kaisi hai review ka intajar hai

 

[ajay reddy]

Laalach buri bala hai!

Hum sab ne yeh bachpan main padha hai sab mante bhi hai ke ye sahi hai par koi is baat ko apanata nai hai....aur fir jo harsh hota hai wo bura hi hota hai

Yeh kahani hai kuch laalchi logo ki jinhe sirf apna matlab dikhai deta hai bas paisa dikhai deta hai jo paiso ke laalach main itne andhe ho jate hai ke paiso ke saamne unhe kisi ki jaan ki bhi koi parwah nahi rehti hai aur wo kuch bhi karne ko utaru ho jate hai.....

Good starting description maza aayega padh kar

 

[ajay reddy]

◆ Update 1 ◆

Ghani andheri raat thi sunsaan road.... Aise main mumbai se nikli huyi us private bus ka driver sakharam ne highway par door ek car ke paas hath hilate huye ek bande ko dekha aur us khade insan ko dekh kar usne apni gadi ki raftar kam ki aur gadi ek side main roki.....waise to sakharam raat beraat ko kisi ke liye gadi nahi rokta tha lekin band padi huyi car aur ache khase kapde pehne huye us aadmi ko dekh kar usne man main koi doubt nahi aaya aur usne bus roki....

"boss...gadi band pad gayi hai age ke kisi gaon tak lift milegi kya waha ke garage se kisi macanic ko le aaunga.."
us insan ne sakharam se kaha.....

sakharam- ha..ha thik hai chalo chod deta hu dekho ander baithne ki jagah hai kya to nati to yaha cabin main hi baithna padega...

skharam ki baat sun kar us aadmi ko thodi rahat mili usne bus main ander chad kar dekha to uska naseeb acha tha use waha ek seat khali mil gayi..

apne bagal ki seat par kon baitha hai ye usne bus ke light ki mand ujale main dekhne ki koshish ki....uske bagal main kareb 25-26 sal ki ek ladki aankhen band kar ke so rahi thi...usne apne handbag main se shawl bahar nikali aur apne uper lapet kar wo waha baith gaya bahar ki thand ke hisab se gadi main thodi garmi thi......

kuch hi samay main gadi ne fir se raftaar pakar ki....khidkiyo ain se bayanak thandi hawa ander aane lagi...us ladki ye baal us hawa main us ladke ke chehre ke as paas ud rahe the aur us bande ko wo hawa ki thandi sahan nahi ho rahi thi akhir kaar usne majburi main us ladki se kaha...

"aap please wo khidki band kar dengi bohot thand lag rahi hai....."

us ladki ne uski or dkhe bagair ki khidki band ki aur fir se so gayi.....

gadi main ke sabhi lights ab band ho chuke the shayad sabhi passengers so chuke the....bus ka awaj...beech beech main se jane wale truck ka awaz uske lights ki roshni...kahi to bhi thodi si khuli khidki ki gap e aane wali hawa ka awaz sab kuch ek taal main chal raha tha...gadi main ab achi khasi garmi nirman ho gayi thi wo ladka bhi us shawl ko apne sharir ke ird gird majbuti se lapet kar so chuka tha....

kuch teen char ghante beete honge use neend lage huye itne main achanak uski neend tuti...uske hath ko kisi ke thandegaar hath ka sparsh hua tha....uske hath par uske baju main baithi huyi ladki ka hath tha.....

usne ek baar us ladki ki or dekhawo ab bhi neend main hi thi thand ki wajah se uske hath thande pad chuke the...

usne halke se us ladki ka hath utha kar baju main rakh diya..kuch samay baad fir se uski ungliyo ko uske thande hato ka sparsh hua usne aankhen khol kar uski or dekha to wo ab bhi so rahi thi is baar usne apna hath baju main sarka liya....

kuch samay baad fir se uski ungliyo ko us ladki ke hath ka sparsh hua usne fir se uski or dekha to to bagal se jane wale ek truck ke headlight us ladki ke chehre par padi to ek pal ko to wo ladka seham gaya......

'wo uski or hi dekh rahi thi......

matlab ye sare sparsh jaan-bujh kar the.....

is baar wo bhi piche hatne wala nahi tha usne apna hath uske hath ke niche sarka diya.....us ladki ke hato ki ungliya us ladke ke gaam hath se chipak gayi.....

wo thanda spash us ladke ke sharir par ek thandi laat faila raha tha..uska hath na chahte huye bhi apne sharir ki garmi uske hath ko dene ki koshish kar raha tha....

kuch samay ke baad uske apne hath ki pakad dheeli ki...usne uska hath chod kiya...ab uski ungliya uske manga se lekar khande tak najukta se ghoom rahi thi ....aur wo sparsh us ladke se sharir par kate la raha tha....uske kaan garam ho gaye the..itne garam ki usne apna dusra garam hath kaan par rakha to wo bhi use thanda laga.....

wo is sukh ke adhin ho gaya tha bus ko lagne wale jhatke khadkhadahat use kuch bhi mehsoos nahi ho raha tha....us ladki ke bas ungliyo se sparsh se hi us ladkle ke sharir ka har ek snayu uttejit ho gaya tha.......

achanak gadi ko kisi cheej ka jordar dhakkar baith aur wo ek side khadi ho gayi....bus ka xcel toot gaya tha....jab gadi main ki lights jali tab us ladke ki tandri tooti aur usne apna hath baju main kiya....

Cleaner ne gadi main aa ke ghoshna ki ke gadi ko thik hone main thoda waqt lagega...uski baat sun kar adhe log to wapis so gaye aur baki ke log guthka cigarette ke liye niche utar gaye.....

Maza aa gaya bhai padh kar update ko start acha hai safar toh star huwa hai dekho aage aage kya hota hau



Lekin jo banda bus driver ko mila hai woh bole mujhe aage ke gaon tak chod do main waha mechanic laa luga toh kya gaon 200km dur hai jo abhi rak gaon nahi aaya hai

 

[Rahul]

Update 25

pawar aur chavhan ne aage badhkar shashank aur dolly ko arrest kiya band ghar main unke bhagne ka koi chance nahi tha..................
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Mister kumar aur mister parera ekdusre ke business partner....dolly aur shashank undono ki eklauti santane...bigdi huyi....business ke liye hone wali parties main baar baar mulakat hone se dono mai ek duse ke sath sambandh ban gaye...lekin aage kumar ne shashank ko apni jindagi se nikal diya aur shashank achanak kahi chala gaya......

akeli, sharir suck ko bhuki dolly ko jhon ke roop main ek naya partner mila to sahi lekin bagair mahatvakansha wale jhon se use sharir sukh ke alawa aur kuch nahi milta tha aur achanak uski mulakat shashank se hui....

tab tak shashank ne suman naam ki machli ko apne jaal main fasa liya tha ab bas raah thi wo machli khane ki. dolly aur shashank ek baar fir sath aa gaye...

unki aankhon ke samne dikhne wala paisa yani suman. uske naam par nanasahab ki bharpoor sampatti thi...nanasahab ko khatam kar diya to sari sampatti suman ki..aur fir suman se shadi kar ke wo kata nikala to sari property shashank ki....simple sa idea tha lekin fir bhaiyasahab?? unko bhi maar diya jaye to?? kyu nahi??

bhaiyasahab ka koi waris nahi tha unke baar unki sari property nanasahab ki hne wali thiaur fir pehle bhaiyasahab fir nanasahab ka kata nikala to shashank ke liye jackpot tayar tha.....

lekin gaon main achanak to bade logo ke khoon hona yani 'property ke liye khoon' is or police ka dhayan jana lazmi tha isiliye shashank ne naya plan banaya serial khoono ka...usi hetu se wo bus main chadha..ab uska naseeb kahe ya us ladki ka badnaseeb shashank ne naseeb ne sath diya aur shweta khud maut ko bulawa dete huye use lodge mai le gayi

anitatai ko marne ke piche bhi koi khas maksad nahi tha unki jagah koi or bhi ho sakta tha lekin andhere main ghat lagaye bauthe shashank ke liye anitatai aasan shikar thi..

uske baad inhi serial khuno main bhaiyasahab aur fir nanasahab mare gaye aisa bharam paida karna tha aur fir is sab main kisi or ko fasa kar apan alag hat jana aisa sab plan tha........

dolly ne jhon ko is case main fasane ka decision liya....ek career ending par aaye huye detective ajent ko naye se surwat karne ke liye jarurat thi to popularity ki, logo ki juba pe apna naam karne ki usi liye jhon ne ye khoon kiye aur kuch jhoote saboot se ye sabit karna ki ye jhon ne hi kiya hai

police jyada na sochte huye aankhon dekha saboot keh kar 'popularity' ke liye khoon karne wale jhon ko arrest karengi.....dheere dheere nanasahab aur bhaiyasahab ke maut se dukhi suman apne ki ghar main aatmyahatya kar legi aur fir uska pati yani shashank is sari property ka malik ban jayega aisa plan tha

dolly ke kuch karne se pehle hi jhon khud tarwade gaon main dakhil ho gaya fir baad main uspar najar rakhne ke liye dolly bhi shamil ho gayi.....aage jo socha tha wohi hua sirf jhon ko pakadwane main ek galti ho gayi us chure ke dono side alag alag bani huyi kalakari aur yahi plan fas gaya kyuki isise lefty khuni ki pehchan huyi

bhaiyasahab ne marte huye jhon ko dolly ki or ishara karte huye kuch connection hone ka ishara kiya tha....lekin suman ko bhaiyasahab pyaar se dolly bulate the ye baat kisi ke dhayan main nahi aayi

chavhan ki layi huyi info, dolly ka achanak jhon ke against jana aur polici sixth sense iski madad se pawar khuni tak pahuche.....kuch choti ghatnao se pawar ne tark banaya aur shashank aur dolly pakde gaye..........

MASTERMIND..........har criminal apne aap ko yani samajhta hai...lekin 'SADRAKSHANAY KHALNIGRAHANAYA' aisi shapath lene wale maharashtra police ko kam samajhne main wo galti kar baithta hai yahi inspector pawar ne yaha sabit kar ke batayi............

THE END

wonderfull story khatam hui ab koi dusri story soncho

 

[Sofia sweetu]

Bahut hi acchi story hai ye maine padhi thi as guest member aur likho aisi kahaniya

 

[Adirshi]

Bahut hi acchi story hai ye maine padhi thi as guest member aur likho aisi kahaniya

Hotel royal palace padho wo running hai abhi

 

[Nevil singh]

◆ Update 1 ◆

Ghani andheri raat thi sunsaan road.... Aise main mumbai se nikli huyi us private bus ka driver sakharam ne highway par door ek car ke paas hath hilate huye ek bande ko dekha aur us khade insan ko dekh kar usne apni gadi ki raftar kam ki aur gadi ek side main roki.....waise to sakharam raat beraat ko kisi ke liye gadi nahi rokta tha lekin band padi huyi car aur ache khase kapde pehne huye us aadmi ko dekh kar usne man main koi doubt nahi aaya aur usne bus roki....

"boss...gadi band pad gayi hai age ke kisi gaon tak lift milegi kya waha ke garage se kisi macanic ko le aaunga.."
us insan ne sakharam se kaha.....

sakharam- ha..ha thik hai chalo chod deta hu dekho ander baithne ki jagah hai kya to nati to yaha cabin main hi baithna padega...

skharam ki baat sun kar us aadmi ko thodi rahat mili usne bus main ander chad kar dekha to uska naseeb acha tha use waha ek seat khali mil gayi..

apne bagal ki seat par kon baitha hai ye usne bus ke light ki mand ujale main dekhne ki koshish ki....uske bagal main kareb 25-26 sal ki ek ladki aankhen band kar ke so rahi thi...usne apne handbag main se shawl bahar nikali aur apne uper lapet kar wo waha baith gaya bahar ki thand ke hisab se gadi main thodi garmi thi......

kuch hi samay main gadi ne fir se raftaar pakar ki....khidkiyo ain se bayanak thandi hawa ander aane lagi...us ladki ye baal us hawa main us ladke ke chehre ke as paas ud rahe the aur us bande ko wo hawa ki thandi sahan nahi ho rahi thi akhir kaar usne majburi main us ladki se kaha...

"aap please wo khidki band kar dengi bohot thand lag rahi hai....."

us ladki ne uski or dkhe bagair ki khidki band ki aur fir se so gayi.....

gadi main ke sabhi lights ab band ho chuke the shayad sabhi passengers so chuke the....bus ka awaj...beech beech main se jane wale truck ka awaz uske lights ki roshni...kahi to bhi thodi si khuli khidki ki gap e aane wali hawa ka awaz sab kuch ek taal main chal raha tha...gadi main ab achi khasi garmi nirman ho gayi thi wo ladka bhi us shawl ko apne sharir ke ird gird majbuti se lapet kar so chuka tha....

kuch teen char ghante beete honge use neend lage huye itne main achanak uski neend tuti...uske hath ko kisi ke thandegaar hath ka sparsh hua tha....uske hath par uske baju main baithi huyi ladki ka hath tha.....

usne ek baar us ladki ki or dekhawo ab bhi neend main hi thi thand ki wajah se uske hath thande pad chuke the...

usne halke se us ladki ka hath utha kar baju main rakh diya..kuch samay baad fir se uski ungliyo ko uske thande hato ka sparsh hua usne aankhen khol kar uski or dekha to wo ab bhi so rahi thi is baar usne apna hath baju main sarka liya....

kuch samay baad fir se uski ungliyo ko us ladki ke hath ka sparsh hua usne fir se uski or dekha to to bagal se jane wale ek truck ke headlight us ladki ke chehre par padi to ek pal ko to wo ladka seham gaya......

'wo uski or hi dekh rahi thi......

matlab ye sare sparsh jaan-bujh kar the.....

is baar wo bhi piche hatne wala nahi tha usne apna hath uske hath ke niche sarka diya.....us ladki ke hato ki ungliya us ladke ke gaam hath se chipak gayi.....

wo thanda spash us ladke ke sharir par ek thandi laat faila raha tha..uska hath na chahte huye bhi apne sharir ki garmi uske hath ko dene ki koshish kar raha tha....

kuch samay ke baad uske apne hath ki pakad dheeli ki...usne uska hath chod kiya...ab uski ungliya uske manga se lekar khande tak najukta se ghoom rahi thi ....aur wo sparsh us ladke se sharir par kate la raha tha....uske kaan garam ho gaye the..itne garam ki usne apna dusra garam hath kaan par rakha to wo bhi use thanda laga.....

wo is sukh ke adhin ho gaya tha bus ko lagne wale jhatke khadkhadahat use kuch bhi mehsoos nahi ho raha tha....us ladki ke bas ungliyo se sparsh se hi us ladkle ke sharir ka har ek snayu uttejit ho gaya tha.......

achanak gadi ko kisi cheej ka jordar dhakkar baith aur wo ek side khadi ho gayi....bus ka xcel toot gaya tha....jab gadi main ki lights jali tab us ladke ki tandri tooti aur usne apna hath baju main kiya....

Cleaner ne gadi main aa ke ghoshna ki ke gadi ko thik hone main thoda waqt lagega...uski baat sun kar adhe log to wapis so gaye aur baki ke log guthka cigarette ke liye niche utar gaye.....

Bemishaal shabd samuh sang ek aur nayi soch se bharpur kahni shuru ki hai bhai ne naye update sang. Shaandaar.

 

[Nevil singh]

* Update 2 *

achanak gadi ko kisi cheej ka jordar dhakkar baith aur wo ek side khadi ho gayi....bus ka xcel toot gaya tha....jab gadi main ki lights jali tab us ladke ki tandri tooti aur usne apna hath baju main kiya....

Cleaner ne gadi main aa ke ghoshna ki ke gadi ko thik hone main thoda waqt lagega...uski baat sun kar adhe log to wapis so gaye aur baki ke log guthka cigarette ke liye niche utar gaye.....
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waha baithi huyi wo ladki bhi niche utar gayi aur waha se uthe waqt uske sharik ka us ladke ko hua hua sparsh us ladke ke sharir par ek bijli lehar dauda gaya..us ladki ke sharir se aane wali mand khushboo uske sare senses ko uttejit kar rahi thi...

usne khidki main se jhuk kar dekha ki wo ladki kaha ja rahi hai to usne paya ke raste ke dusri or thodi door kuch lights dikh rahi thi usne waha ke tubelight ke ujale main waha ka naam padha..'sujit lodge'

us ladki ne ek baar uski or palat kar dekha aur fir piche na dekhte huye aage chalne lagi...ab us ladke ke man main chal bichal suru ho gayi thi...wo uth kar khada hua aur niche aa kar cleaner ko pucha..

"andajan kitna time lagega boos isse thik hone main??" usne cleaner se pucha..

"kareeb ek dedh ghanta to lagega hi sir.."us cleaner ne jawab diya

"acha thik hai main hu yahi.." aisa bol kar wop us ladki ke piche piche jane laga..

vatavaran main mahol main achi khasi thandi thi lekin tezz hawaye ruk gayi thi sare jhad ab stabdh ho gaye the..usne asmaan main ek najar dali to chand ab badlo ke piche chip gaya tha....asman bhar aaya tha mano kisi bhi pal uske uper gir jayega...

wo ab bhi bagair piche dekhe chal rahi thi..

street lights ki rosni main us ladke ni narah us ladki ke pure sharir par fir rahi thi..sudaul badan...sahi jagah aaya hua sahi aakar...uska dhayan khud ki or kheech raha tha..aur wo uski or khicha ja raha tha..

wo lodge main gayi aur waha ke counter ke paas ja kar khadi ho gayi..

kaan-topi, mufler odha hua counter par ka aadmi use dekh kar bade hi alas ke sath utha

"bhaiya meri bus band ho gayi hai aur ek do ghante thik hogi aisa lagta nahi hai...meri tabiyat bhi thik nahi hai saise main kuch ghanto ke liye room chahiye thi" dur khadi band bus ki or ishara karte huye us ladki ne kaha..

us counter par ke aadmi main drawer main se ek chabi nikali aur us ladki ko di aur uski details likhne ke liye ek ragister uske samne kiya ki tabhi uski najar mand ujale main darwaje ke paas aate huye us ladke par padi to use sara majra samajh main aa gaya usne ragistar band kiya aur chehre par chader odh kar fir se so gaya..

wo ladki ab seedhiyo se uper ja rahi thi aur wo ladka uske piche piche...

'103' room ke samne aake wo ruke us ladki ne apne paas ki chabi se darwaja khola aur dono ander aane ke baad usne darwaja band kar diya..ab wo us ladki ko pure prakash main dekh raha tha uski aankhon main kuch alag hi attraction tha jo us ladke ko apni or kheech raha tha iitna ki use lag raha tha ke kski aatma us ladki se milan ke liye uske sharir se bahar aa jayegi...uska gala sukha pad gaya tha...chati dhadak rahi thi..tab us ladki ne apna hath uski or badhaya...
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"chalo sab....baitho gadi main.....sab aa gaye na?? cleaner ne ek baar charo taraf najar daudayi..ravangi ke pehle usne sare passengers ko moja....to seaqt no D 5-6 khali tha...

"ab ye kaha chale gaye" kuch tang hote huye cleaner fir se niche utra lekin dhundne par bhi use wo log nahi mile

"are wo waha us lodge ki or jate huye dikhe the waha dekhlo hai kya to" ek passenger ne kaha..

cleaner us dono ko galiya bakte huye us lodge main gaya counter par ka banda gehri neend main tha..

"maa ki aankh...mar gaya kya ye?" usne us bande ko hila hila ke jagaya

"yaha kareeb 1 ghante pehle koi aaya tha kya" cleaner ne un dono ka discription dete huye pucha

"ha sir yaha do log aaye the ek ladka aur ek ladki waha uper hai room no 103" usne seedhiyo ki or ishara karte huye kaha aur wapis se chader odh li...

"lo hum waha pareshan ho rahe hai aur yaha bhakta hi kuch chal raha hai" cleaner do do seedhiya chadhta hua uper aaya room no 103 ka light chalu tha..

"o sir ho gaya hoga to chalo gadi tayar hai...chalo madem nahi to maro yahi hum nikal rahe hai.."cleaner waha chilla raha tha lekin ander se koi awaz nahi aa raha tha...

"thik hai raho yahi gadi nikal rahi hai" wo jhatpatate huye niche utarne hi waha tha ke usi samay wo counter par ka aadmi uper aaya

"kya hua kyu chilla rahe ho jao na nahi aana hoga unko"

usne halke se darwaje ko kaan laga to ander se koi awaz nai aa raha tha nahi koi halchul ho rahi thi usne bhi do teen baar darwaja khatkhataya lekin koi responce nahi

"iski maa ka kahi bhag to nahi gaye main soya tha tabi"

"are aise kaise bhagenge gadi to yahi hai" cleaner..

"kuch to gadbad hai" itna bol kar wo niche bhaga room ki dusri chabi lane ke liye...

door se bus ke horn ka awaz sunai de raha tha

us aadmi ne apni layi huyi chabi se room ka darwaja khola aur samne ka drishya dekh kar dono ki saanse hi ruk gayi...apan jo dekh rahe hai uspar un dono ka wiswas hi nahi ho raha tha..

samne palang par us ladki ki adhi nangi lash padi thi...uske sharir ki chir fad ki huyi thi mano jaise kisi takiye ko fada ho............

Shaandaar update hai bandhu.

 

[Nevil singh]

◆ Update 3 ◆
Us aadmi ne apni layi huyi chabi se room ka darwaja khola aur samne ka drishya dekh kar dono ki saanse hi ruk gayi...apan jo dekh rahe hai uspar un dono ka wiswas hi nahi ho raha tha..

samne palang par us ladki ki adhi nangi lash padi thi...uske sharir ki chir fad ki huyi thi mano jaise kisi takiye ko fada ho............
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inspector pawar tarwade gaon main head police inspector the..kuch chote mote gunhe chod diye jaye tp tarwade gaon waise shant hi tha isiliye inspector pawar par kaam ka kabhi utna boja nahi aaya tha..

us din bhi wo apne ghar main chicken curry jam ke data kar so gaye the tabhi unhe police station main se is gunah ki information dene wala phone aaya aur hadbadi main hi wo apni vardi pehan kar ghatna stal ki or ravana huye..

us lodge ka pura parisar polico ki gadiya...ambulance...byts lene ke liye aaye huye patrakaro ki gardi is sab se bhar chuka tha..us room main inspector pawar panchnama kar rahe the...15 saal ke unke career main unhone aisi nirghrin aur krur hatya kabhi nahi dekhi thi ye aqisa pehla vakya tha..photographers ne us gunah ki tasvere nikali..

"chavhan, nishan mile kya kuch??" pawar

"sir, lodge hai ye, kai logo ke prints mile hai, usme se us gunahgr ke foot prints konse hai bata pana mushkil hai" chavhan

"hmm thik hai, acha un counter par ke logo ki cheaking aur introgation kar liya hai kya?" pawar

"ha sir, usne room ki chabiya is ladki ke paas hi di thi aur wo neend main hone ki wajah se uske sath wale us aadmi ka discription nahi de paya" chavhan

"hmm acha thik hai, ek baat batao ye crime hone ke baad kisi ne us insan ko bahar jate huye dekha hai kya matlab lodge main ka koi?" pawar

"nahi sir, kisi ne nahi dekha humne yaha pohochte hi lodge seal kar diya tab se to koi bahar nahi gaya to shayad wo prhle hi bhag gaya ho"chavhan

"bus main ke passengers, driver , conductor, kisi ne to dekha hoga use?"

"ha sir waise uska thoda thoda discription hai kal subah us par se ek sketch bana lenge lekin use dekihte hi pachan ne wala abhi to bhi koi nahi hai"chavhan

"acha to te ye bus kaha se nikalti hai waha puch tach karo ticket nikalte huye bus main chadhte huye kisi ne to dekha hoga use " pawar

"sir wo beech raste se bus main chadhaa tha" chavhan

"beech raste matlab?" pawar ne dimag par jor dete huye pucha

"beech raste matlab sir driver bata raha tha ke tarapur exit ke paas use ek band car dikhi usi ke paas ye insan khada tha aur isne lift mangi thi"chavhan

"arre chavhan ye pehle batana tha na!! abhi ke abhi kisi ko waja bhejo agar waha wo car mili to usme se koi clue mil sakta hai aur driver se us car ke bare main puchtach karo uska rang konsa tha konse make ki gadi thi sab sari information jama karo" hyper hote huye pawar bole..

"ha sir savant gaye hai gadi lekar us exit ke paas " chavhan

"aas paas kuch ghar hai waha inquiry karo raat beraat ko kisi ko jate huye dekha hai kya aur apne gaon maain aaye huye naye logo se bhi puchtach karo ki wo kaha se aaye hai kiske sath aaye hai kaha se aaye hai sabkuch with proof sari mahiti jama karo"pawar

"ok sir" itna bol kar chavhan baki ke kaam karne waha se chala gaya

"shinde, body postmortem ke liye bhej do aur khoon ke pehle agar mari huyi mahila par balatkare hua hoga to wo bhi panchname main likh lo. panchname ki report..sare papers subah mere pohochne ke pehle mere table par hone chahiye" itna bol kar pawar bhi waha sse bahar aa gaye

bahar do hawaldar reporters ko ander aane se rok rahe the dead body bahar aate hi un reporters ne waha kafi gardi kar di lekin unhe jada information nahi mil payi

raste ke dusri or khet main chip kar khade khade 'wo' bhi ye sabkuch dekh raha tha..poloco ki gadiya, ambulance, jati huyi usne dekhi..do minute usne apne aap se vichar kiya aur fir us andhere khet main se rasta nikalte huye wo bhi chalne laga......

Sammaniye update hai mitr.

 

[Nevil singh]

*Update 4*

raste ke dusri or khet main chip kar khade khade 'wo' bhi ye sabkuch dekh raha tha..poloco ki gadiya, ambulance, jati huyi usne dekhi..do minute usne apne aap se vichar kiya aur fir us andhere khet main se rasta nikalte huye wo bhi chalne laga......
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apne room cum office main ek maili khurchi par detective jhon kuch sochte huye baitha tha..uski dadhi badhi huyi thi aur kapde bhi maile aur silwate bhare huye the..uski or deklh kar detective bol kar kaam lana wala client bhi chalaa jata tha..office puri tahar se uthal puthal hua pada tha..table par aur baki pure room main bhi bijhu huyi used cigaretts padi thi..ek kone main kaam ki information ke liye fade huye newspapers aur magzines ka gattha pada tha kai dino se saaf safayi na hone ki wajah se har tarah dhul aur mitti ka hi samrajya tha...

jhon ki detective company chalu karne ki idea puri tarah se fail ho gayi thi...surwaat main aaye huye kuch cases chod diye jaye to use us hisab ki success nahi mili thi..kuch choti moti cases ab bhi pending thi..lekin dicorce ke liye saboot jama karna, kisi raees baap ki beti par dhayan rakhna..skahi pati ki patni par najar rakhna...is tarah ke boriyat bhare kaam kar kar ke ab jhon thak chuka tha....uski buddhi ko chalna dene wali....uski capacity test karne wali aur sath ki samay ke hisaab se paisa dene wali ek case ki use jarurat thi aur wo use mil nahi rahi thi..

table par pending bills pade the..jhon ne ekbaar nirasha se unsab par najar daudayi..apna bhi ekhada posh office ho..apna detection lene ke liye....appointments dne ke liye ekhadi secratary ko...hath ke niche kaam karne wale kuch log ho,..car driver aise uske kai sapne abhi pure nahi huye the...

jhon ne apne pant ki jeb m,ain hath dala apne paas bache huye paise mojne ke liye to usme ek dus rupaye ki note aur kuch chiller bas itna hi tha to "chai ya cigarette..?" jhon ne apne aap se pucha..aur fir ek cigarette lekar baki paise kal ke liye bachaye jaye aisa soch kar wo lakdi ki seedhiyo se niche utra aur nukkad par bane paan ki dukan par cigarette lene chala gaya..

us paan wale ko bhi jhon ke bare main bhari jigyasa thi aur jhon bhi use prabhavit karne ke liye kuch bhi kahaniya bana kar apan kis higfh level ke ditective hai ye batane ki koshish karta rehta tha..

"kya jhon bhai..kaisa chal raha hai aapka kaam?" cigarette dete huye paan wale ne pucha

"thik chal raha hai waise aajkal ek bohot inportant case par kaam kar raha hu...thoda busy hu.."jhon ne aise hi keh diya.

"arre chodiye wo case, aap wo case kyu nahi lete hath main..apna bajuwala gaon hai na tarwade waha ek ladki ka khoon hua hai"

"konsa case" chehre par koi bhi haav bhav na late huye jhon ne pucha

"arre wahi tarwade gaon ka case....ek ladki ka kisi ne lodge main katal kar diya..lagta hai koi sirfira killer hai ye dikhiye.." itna bol kar usne apne paas ke news paper main aayi huyi news jhon ko dikhai

jhon ne apni tikshna najro se fatafat sari news padh dali aur wo news paper us paanwale ko wapas karte huye bola

"arre chodo yaar, kya aise chote mote cases leneka,.main to kuch bade chiz pe kaam karne wala hi" fir se ek baar us paan wale ko hul dete huye jhon wala se nikal gaya

apne office main aane ke baad usne apni cigarette jalayi aur do lambe kash maarne ke baad wo sochne laga..

"kya karna chahiye.? waie to kuch bhi kaam nahi hai aur aise khali baithe baithe buddhi ko jung lag raha hai bas usse acha agar kuch hath lag gaya to thodi fame hum bhi bator lenge" itna baat dimag main aate hi jhon ne apne hath main ki cigarette khatam ki aur offoce ko tala laga kar nikal gaya.

sabse pehle to wo free library main gaya waha usne pichle do dino ke sare akhbaar nikale aur un news papers ke gatthe main se 'tarwade' gaon ke khoon ke bare main mahiti dene wale sare akhbaar ek side kiye aur fir ek kone main shanti se baith kar usne ek ek karke sari news padh dali...uska dimag har chiz ko barkai se padh raha tha..aur hath kuch chuninda bato ko uski note bopok main likh rahe the..

raat ko der tak usne use jo chahiye thi wo sari information jama ki aur wo ghar aaya..ghar pahochte hi usne almari main se apne kuch ache kapde nikal ke ek suitcase main bhare..use kar kar ke ghise huye razor usne apni shave ki aur fir mast naha kar wo aaine ke samne khada raha..

utsah aur atmaviswas se bhara hua ek naya hi jhon us aaine main dikhai de raha tha..' bas yahi ek aakhri mauka hai' usne apne aap se kaha..is baar agar kaam nahi jama to itne utsah se suru ki huyi ye detective company band karne ke alawa uske paas dusra koi rasta nahi bacha tha..

Atulniye update hai bandhu.