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Part - 27
Manik ne Pari ki salah ko gambhirta se liya. Usne Pari ki madad se apni ek acchi profile banayi, jisme usne apni padhai ke saath-saath apne shaukon (jaise, raat mein taare dekhna aur purani Hindi filmein dekhna) ka bhi zikr kiya.
Agle kuch ghanton tak, Manik, jo aamtour par ghanton jatil sameekaranon (complex equations) ko hal karne mein bitata tha, ab savdhani se alag-alag profiles ko 'swipe' kar raha tha. Yeh uske liye ek bilkul nayi duniya thi.
Shaam hote-hote, jab Manik apne kamre mein baitha apni chemistry ki kitab kholne hi wala tha, tabhi uske phone par ek notification aaya.
"Congratulations! You've got a new Match!"
Manik ka dil zor se dhadka. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya. Uska pehla match!
Pari kamre mein chai lekar aayi aur usne Manik ko lagbhag jame hue dekha.
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kya hua? Kya koi naya gravity formula mil gaya?
Manik ne bina kuch kahe, Pari ki taraf phone ghuma diya.
Pari: (Khushi se chillate hue) Oh my God! Match! Badhai ho bhai! Meri salah kaam kar gayi!
Profile par ek ladki ki tasveer thi, jiska naam Aastha tha. Wah ek graphic designer thi aur usne apne bio mein likha tha ki use kala aur vigyan ke beech santulan pasand hai.
Pari: (Manik ko ut उत्साहित karte hue) Wah bahut acchi lag rahi hai! Ab der kis baat ki? Jaldi se message karo!
Manik: (Ghabrate hue) Message? Kya likhoon? Main kya baat karoon? Mujhe nahi aata! Yeh koi prayogshala (lab) ki report nahi hai!
Pari: (Aankhein ghumate hue) Bas wahi likho jo tum sochte ho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Hi Aastha! Aapki profile acchi lagi. Khaaskar kala aur vigyan wala point. Ek vaigyanik hone ke naate, main aksar santulan khojne ki koshish karta hoon. Aapki design ki duniya kaisi hai?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Chinta se) Tumne bhej diya! Kya yeh zyada 'kitabi' nahi hai?
Pari: Yeh 'Manik' jaisa hai, jo sahi hai! Wah jaanti hai ki wah ek scientist se baat kar rahi hai. Ab zyada mat socho.
Manik ko abhi bhi asahajta mehsoos ho rahi thi, lekin ek halki si uttejna bhi thi. Use ehsas hua ki yeh rasta, jo Pari ne dikhaya, akele kamre mein machalne se kahin zyada swasth aur sahi tha. Ab uski saari nirasha ek nayi ummeed mein badal rahi thi.
Manik: Accha, ab kya? Kya tum mujhe aage bhi salah deti rahogi?
Pari: (Muskurate hue) Zaroor, bhai. Main tumhein 'dating guru' bankar guide karti rahungi. Par yaad rakhna, asli khel tumhein khud hi khelna hai. Ab yeh phone rakho aur chai piyo. Aur haan, agar uska reply aaye to seedhe mere paas aana!
Manik ne chai ka cup pakda, par uski aankhein baar-baar phone par ja rahi thin. Uska mann ab chemistry ki kitab mein nahi, balki Aastha ke reply ka intezar kar raha tha. Ek naya, anjana safar shuru ho chuka tha.


Manik aur Pari, dono hi betabi se phone ki screen ghoor rahe the. Kuch der ki chuppi ke baad, jaise hi Manik ne himmat haarkar chai ka aakhri ghoont liya, phone ki ghanti baji.
Pari: (Khushi se uchhal-kar) Aa gaya! Reply aa gaya!
Manik ne lagbhag jhapatkar phone pakda. Uska dil zoron se dhadak raha tha.
Aastha ka message:
"Hi Manik! :) Thanks! Mujhe bhi tumhari profile padhkar accha laga. Santulan to har jagah zaroori hai, khaaskar design mein! Mere liye design ki duniya science se zyada art hai... par haan, bina logic ke kuch nahi chalta. Accha batao, stargazing ke liye tumhari pasandida jagah kaun si hai?"
Manik ne message ko kam se kam teen baar padha. Wah muskuraya.
Manik: Usne jawab diya! Aur usne sawal bhi pucha hai!
Pari: (Khushi se) Haan! Yeh bahut accha sanket hai! Wah tummein dilchaspi le rahi hai. Ab zyada 'vaigyanik' mat ban jaana, thoda romantic aur casual jawab do.
Manik: Romantic? Main kya likhoon? Ki mujhe uske saath stargazing karni hai?
Pari: (Manik ko ek halka-sa dhakka dete hue) Nahi! Abhi nahi! Thodi mystery rakho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Mere liye sabse acchi jagah wah hai jahan aasman saaf ho, lekin agar aap saath hon to shayad koi bhi jagah perfect hogi! 😉 Meri pasandida jagah mere sheher se thodi door ek pahadi hai. Par mujhe lagta hai ki main aapki duniya (design) ke baare mein aur jaanna chahunga. Aap kahan se hain?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Aankhein choudi karte hue) Tumne smiley aur aankh maarne wala emoji kyun bheja?
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kyunki tum ek boring scientist nahi ho! Tum ek handsome ladka ho jo flirt kar sakta hai! Yeh zaroori hai, bhai.
Manik ko apni behen ki yeh 'dating expert' wali bhoomika bahut mazedaar lag rahi thi. Use lag raha tha jaise wah koi naya, romanchak project shuru kar raha ho. Kuch der mein Aastha ka phir se jawab aaya.
Aastha ka message:
"Haha! Mujhe yeh pasand aaya. Aur main is sheher ke paas hi rehti hoon. Design ki duniya to kamal hai, yahan har roz kuch naya hota hai. Main aapko apni kuch websites dikha sakti hoon. 😉"
Pari: (Winning smile ke saath) Ab! Ab mouka aa gaya hai! Ab tum use seedhe call ya milne ka pucho!
Manik: (Thoda hichkichate hue) Call... ya milna?
Pari: Milna! Coffee par. Aur ab yeh tumhara kaam hai! Mere paas mere khud ke projects hain. Jao, bhai. Apni kismat aazmao!
Manik ne Pari ki taraf dekha, jisne use himmat aur ek sahi raah dikhayi thi. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Wah ab nirasha ke andhere mein nahi tha, balki ummeed ki roshni mein ek naya kadam uthane ko taiyar tha.


Manik aur Pari ko khud bhi andaza nahi hua ki kab dating app par Aastha se baat karne ke bahane, ve dono ek-doosre ke aur qareeb aa gaye. Har naya message, har naya 'chatting session', dono bhai-behen ke beech ek ankaha taalmel ban gaya tha.
Baat-cheet ka yeh silsila roz shaam ko shuru hota tha, jab Manik apne kamre mein hota era. Pari, Manik ke bed par baith jati thi, aur dono phone ki screen par jhuke hote the. Jab Pari tezi se Aastha ke liye koi mazedaar ya flirty message type kar rahi hoti thi, to Manik uske kandhe par jhuk jata tha. Uska ek haath aksar anjane mein Pari ke kandhe par tika hota tha, aur unke shareer sate hue hote the.
Manik ki nazrein Pari ki ungliyon ki harqat par hoti thin, lekin uska dhyan Pari ki maujoodgi ke taap aur nazdiki par bhi hota tha. Pari ko bhi yeh nazdiki acchi lagti thi. Use Manik ke shareer ka sahara, uski garm saanson ka ehsas, ek ajeeb si suraksha aur antarangta (intimacy) deta tha.
Dono, is sab mein itne sahaj ho gaye the ki unhone kabhi is baat par dhyan hi nahi diya ki unke beech ki sharirik doori lagbhag khatm ho chuki thi. Ve is nazdiki ko keval 'message type karne mein madad' ka hissa maante the, jabki yeh unke beech ka naya, ankaha aur sahaj sneh ban chuka tha.
Kareeb do hafton ki lagatar chatting, virtual dates aur lambi baat-cheet ke baad, Aastha aakhirkar pehli mulakaat ke liye taiyar ho gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Manik, mujhe lagta hai ki humne ek-doosre ko phone par kaafi jaan liya hai. Agar tum kal shaam free ho to main coffee ke liye milna chahungi. Ek khaas cafe hai, wahan milte hain."
Manik yeh message dekhkar khushi se uchhal pada.
Manik: (Pari ko jhakjhorte hue) Pari! Usne haan kar diya! Usne haan kar diya!
Pari: (Khush hote hue) Haan! Maine kaha tha na, meri salah kabhi galat nahi hoti! Ab tum khud hi reply karo!
Manik ne turant jawab dene ke liye phone pakda. Tabhi Aastha ka ek aur message aaya—yeh ek chetavni thi, jo Manik ko thodi asahaj kar gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Par Manik, ek shart hai. Main jaanti hoon ki tum bahut intense ho sakte ho, aur tumhari profile mein likha hai ki tum zindagi mein 'romance' dhoond rahe ho. Lekin pehli mulakaat mein tumhein 'limit' mein rehna hoga. Mera matlab hai... koi haath pakadna nahi, koi khaas nazdiki nahi. Bas baat karenge, ek-doosre ko vyaktigat roop se jaanenge. Agar tum yeh vada kar sakte ho, tabhi haan kehna. Theek hai?"
Manik ne yeh message zor se padha. Uska utsahit chehra achanak gambhir ho gaya.
Manik: Limit? Iska kya matlab hai? Kya wah darr rahi hai?
Pari: (Aaraam se samjhate hue, Manik ke kandhe par haath pherte hue) Nahi, bhai. Wah darr nahi rahi hai. Wah sirf yeh jaanna chahti hai ki tum kitne Respectful ho. Iska matlab hai ki tumhein gentleman bankar rehna hai. Koi jaldi nahi. Wah tumhari pareeksha le rahi hai.
Pari ne message type kiya:
Manik: "Shart manzoor hai, Aastha. Main 'limit' ka poora samman karunga. Main tumhein pareshan karne ke liye nahi, balki tumhein jaanne ke liye mil raha hoon. Kal shaam 5 baje, main wahin milunga."
Message bhejkar Pari ne Manik ki taraf dekha.
Pari: Dekho, Manik. Yeh accha hai. Yeh tumhein sikhayega ki apni icchayon ko kaise kaabu mein rakha jata hai. Ab jao aur apne liye acche kapde nikalo. Yeh tumhara pehla official date hai!
Manik ne ab muskurate hue, ek gehri saans li. Wah jaanta tha ki yeh pehli mulakaat uske liye ek badi pareeksha thi, lekin wah is naye safar ke liye ab poori tarah taiyar tha.


 

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Part - 27
Manik ne Pari ki salah ko gambhirta se liya. Usne Pari ki madad se apni ek acchi profile banayi, jisme usne apni padhai ke saath-saath apne shaukon (jaise, raat mein taare dekhna aur purani Hindi filmein dekhna) ka bhi zikr kiya.
Agle kuch ghanton tak, Manik, jo aamtour par ghanton jatil sameekaranon (complex equations) ko hal karne mein bitata tha, ab savdhani se alag-alag profiles ko 'swipe' kar raha tha. Yeh uske liye ek bilkul nayi duniya thi.
Shaam hote-hote, jab Manik apne kamre mein baitha apni chemistry ki kitab kholne hi wala tha, tabhi uske phone par ek notification aaya.
"Congratulations! You've got a new Match!"
Manik ka dil zor se dhadka. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya. Uska pehla match!
Pari kamre mein chai lekar aayi aur usne Manik ko lagbhag jame hue dekha.
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kya hua? Kya koi naya gravity formula mil gaya?
Manik ne bina kuch kahe, Pari ki taraf phone ghuma diya.
Pari: (Khushi se chillate hue) Oh my God! Match! Badhai ho bhai! Meri salah kaam kar gayi!
Profile par ek ladki ki tasveer thi, jiska naam Aastha tha. Wah ek graphic designer thi aur usne apne bio mein likha tha ki use kala aur vigyan ke beech santulan pasand hai.
Pari: (Manik ko ut उत्साहित karte hue) Wah bahut acchi lag rahi hai! Ab der kis baat ki? Jaldi se message karo!
Manik: (Ghabrate hue) Message? Kya likhoon? Main kya baat karoon? Mujhe nahi aata! Yeh koi prayogshala (lab) ki report nahi hai!
Pari: (Aankhein ghumate hue) Bas wahi likho jo tum sochte ho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Hi Aastha! Aapki profile acchi lagi. Khaaskar kala aur vigyan wala point. Ek vaigyanik hone ke naate, main aksar santulan khojne ki koshish karta hoon. Aapki design ki duniya kaisi hai?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Chinta se) Tumne bhej diya! Kya yeh zyada 'kitabi' nahi hai?
Pari: Yeh 'Manik' jaisa hai, jo sahi hai! Wah jaanti hai ki wah ek scientist se baat kar rahi hai. Ab zyada mat socho.
Manik ko abhi bhi asahajta mehsoos ho rahi thi, lekin ek halki si uttejna bhi thi. Use ehsas hua ki yeh rasta, jo Pari ne dikhaya, akele kamre mein machalne se kahin zyada swasth aur sahi tha. Ab uski saari nirasha ek nayi ummeed mein badal rahi thi.
Manik: Accha, ab kya? Kya tum mujhe aage bhi salah deti rahogi?
Pari: (Muskurate hue) Zaroor, bhai. Main tumhein 'dating guru' bankar guide karti rahungi. Par yaad rakhna, asli khel tumhein khud hi khelna hai. Ab yeh phone rakho aur chai piyo. Aur haan, agar uska reply aaye to seedhe mere paas aana!
Manik ne chai ka cup pakda, par uski aankhein baar-baar phone par ja rahi thin. Uska mann ab chemistry ki kitab mein nahi, balki Aastha ke reply ka intezar kar raha tha. Ek naya, anjana safar shuru ho chuka tha.


Manik aur Pari, dono hi betabi se phone ki screen ghoor rahe the. Kuch der ki chuppi ke baad, jaise hi Manik ne himmat haarkar chai ka aakhri ghoont liya, phone ki ghanti baji.
Pari: (Khushi se uchhal-kar) Aa gaya! Reply aa gaya!
Manik ne lagbhag jhapatkar phone pakda. Uska dil zoron se dhadak raha tha.
Aastha ka message:
"Hi Manik! :) Thanks! Mujhe bhi tumhari profile padhkar accha laga. Santulan to har jagah zaroori hai, khaaskar design mein! Mere liye design ki duniya science se zyada art hai... par haan, bina logic ke kuch nahi chalta. Accha batao, stargazing ke liye tumhari pasandida jagah kaun si hai?"
Manik ne message ko kam se kam teen baar padha. Wah muskuraya.
Manik: Usne jawab diya! Aur usne sawal bhi pucha hai!
Pari: (Khushi se) Haan! Yeh bahut accha sanket hai! Wah tummein dilchaspi le rahi hai. Ab zyada 'vaigyanik' mat ban jaana, thoda romantic aur casual jawab do.
Manik: Romantic? Main kya likhoon? Ki mujhe uske saath stargazing karni hai?
Pari: (Manik ko ek halka-sa dhakka dete hue) Nahi! Abhi nahi! Thodi mystery rakho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Mere liye sabse acchi jagah wah hai jahan aasman saaf ho, lekin agar aap saath hon to shayad koi bhi jagah perfect hogi! 😉 Meri pasandida jagah mere sheher se thodi door ek pahadi hai. Par mujhe lagta hai ki main aapki duniya (design) ke baare mein aur jaanna chahunga. Aap kahan se hain?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Aankhein choudi karte hue) Tumne smiley aur aankh maarne wala emoji kyun bheja?
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kyunki tum ek boring scientist nahi ho! Tum ek handsome ladka ho jo flirt kar sakta hai! Yeh zaroori hai, bhai.
Manik ko apni behen ki yeh 'dating expert' wali bhoomika bahut mazedaar lag rahi thi. Use lag raha tha jaise wah koi naya, romanchak project shuru kar raha ho. Kuch der mein Aastha ka phir se jawab aaya.
Aastha ka message:
"Haha! Mujhe yeh pasand aaya. Aur main is sheher ke paas hi rehti hoon. Design ki duniya to kamal hai, yahan har roz kuch naya hota hai. Main aapko apni kuch websites dikha sakti hoon. 😉"
Pari: (Winning smile ke saath) Ab! Ab mouka aa gaya hai! Ab tum use seedhe call ya milne ka pucho!
Manik: (Thoda hichkichate hue) Call... ya milna?
Pari: Milna! Coffee par. Aur ab yeh tumhara kaam hai! Mere paas mere khud ke projects hain. Jao, bhai. Apni kismat aazmao!
Manik ne Pari ki taraf dekha, jisne use himmat aur ek sahi raah dikhayi thi. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Wah ab nirasha ke andhere mein nahi tha, balki ummeed ki roshni mein ek naya kadam uthane ko taiyar tha.


Manik aur Pari ko khud bhi andaza nahi hua ki kab dating app par Aastha se baat karne ke bahane, ve dono ek-doosre ke aur qareeb aa gaye. Har naya message, har naya 'chatting session', dono bhai-behen ke beech ek ankaha taalmel ban gaya tha.
Baat-cheet ka yeh silsila roz shaam ko shuru hota tha, jab Manik apne kamre mein hota era. Pari, Manik ke bed par baith jati thi, aur dono phone ki screen par jhuke hote the. Jab Pari tezi se Aastha ke liye koi mazedaar ya flirty message type kar rahi hoti thi, to Manik uske kandhe par jhuk jata tha. Uska ek haath aksar anjane mein Pari ke kandhe par tika hota tha, aur unke shareer sate hue hote the.
Manik ki nazrein Pari ki ungliyon ki harqat par hoti thin, lekin uska dhyan Pari ki maujoodgi ke taap aur nazdiki par bhi hota tha. Pari ko bhi yeh nazdiki acchi lagti thi. Use Manik ke shareer ka sahara, uski garm saanson ka ehsas, ek ajeeb si suraksha aur antarangta (intimacy) deta tha.
Dono, is sab mein itne sahaj ho gaye the ki unhone kabhi is baat par dhyan hi nahi diya ki unke beech ki sharirik doori lagbhag khatm ho chuki thi. Ve is nazdiki ko keval 'message type karne mein madad' ka hissa maante the, jabki yeh unke beech ka naya, ankaha aur sahaj sneh ban chuka tha.
Kareeb do hafton ki lagatar chatting, virtual dates aur lambi baat-cheet ke baad, Aastha aakhirkar pehli mulakaat ke liye taiyar ho gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Manik, mujhe lagta hai ki humne ek-doosre ko phone par kaafi jaan liya hai. Agar tum kal shaam free ho to main coffee ke liye milna chahungi. Ek khaas cafe hai, wahan milte hain."
Manik yeh message dekhkar khushi se uchhal pada.
Manik: (Pari ko jhakjhorte hue) Pari! Usne haan kar diya! Usne haan kar diya!
Pari: (Khush hote hue) Haan! Maine kaha tha na, meri salah kabhi galat nahi hoti! Ab tum khud hi reply karo!
Manik ne turant jawab dene ke liye phone pakda. Tabhi Aastha ka ek aur message aaya—yeh ek chetavni thi, jo Manik ko thodi asahaj kar gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Par Manik, ek shart hai. Main jaanti hoon ki tum bahut intense ho sakte ho, aur tumhari profile mein likha hai ki tum zindagi mein 'romance' dhoond rahe ho. Lekin pehli mulakaat mein tumhein 'limit' mein rehna hoga. Mera matlab hai... koi haath pakadna nahi, koi khaas nazdiki nahi. Bas baat karenge, ek-doosre ko vyaktigat roop se jaanenge. Agar tum yeh vada kar sakte ho, tabhi haan kehna. Theek hai?"
Manik ne yeh message zor se padha. Uska utsahit chehra achanak gambhir ho gaya.
Manik: Limit? Iska kya matlab hai? Kya wah darr rahi hai?
Pari: (Aaraam se samjhate hue, Manik ke kandhe par haath pherte hue) Nahi, bhai. Wah darr nahi rahi hai. Wah sirf yeh jaanna chahti hai ki tum kitne Respectful ho. Iska matlab hai ki tumhein gentleman bankar rehna hai. Koi jaldi nahi. Wah tumhari pareeksha le rahi hai.
Pari ne message type kiya:
Manik: "Shart manzoor hai, Aastha. Main 'limit' ka poora samman karunga. Main tumhein pareshan karne ke liye nahi, balki tumhein jaanne ke liye mil raha hoon. Kal shaam 5 baje, main wahin milunga."
Message bhejkar Pari ne Manik ki taraf dekha.
Pari: Dekho, Manik. Yeh accha hai. Yeh tumhein sikhayega ki apni icchayon ko kaise kaabu mein rakha jata hai. Ab jao aur apne liye acche kapde nikalo. Yeh tumhara pehla official date hai!
Manik ne ab muskurate hue, ek gehri saans li. Wah jaanta tha ki yeh pehli mulakaat uske liye ek badi pareeksha thi, lekin wah is naye safar ke liye ab poori tarah taiyar tha.


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Manik ne Pari ki salah ko gambhirta se liya. Usne Pari ki madad se apni ek acchi profile banayi, jisme usne apni padhai ke saath-saath apne shaukon (jaise, raat mein taare dekhna aur purani Hindi filmein dekhna) ka bhi zikr kiya.
Agle kuch ghanton tak, Manik, jo aamtour par ghanton jatil sameekaranon (complex equations) ko hal karne mein bitata tha, ab savdhani se alag-alag profiles ko 'swipe' kar raha tha. Yeh uske liye ek bilkul nayi duniya thi.
Shaam hote-hote, jab Manik apne kamre mein baitha apni chemistry ki kitab kholne hi wala tha, tabhi uske phone par ek notification aaya.
"Congratulations! You've got a new Match!"
Manik ka dil zor se dhadka. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya. Uska pehla match!
Pari kamre mein chai lekar aayi aur usne Manik ko lagbhag jame hue dekha.
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kya hua? Kya koi naya gravity formula mil gaya?
Manik ne bina kuch kahe, Pari ki taraf phone ghuma diya.
Pari: (Khushi se chillate hue) Oh my God! Match! Badhai ho bhai! Meri salah kaam kar gayi!
Profile par ek ladki ki tasveer thi, jiska naam Aastha tha. Wah ek graphic designer thi aur usne apne bio mein likha tha ki use kala aur vigyan ke beech santulan pasand hai.
Pari: (Manik ko ut उत्साहित karte hue) Wah bahut acchi lag rahi hai! Ab der kis baat ki? Jaldi se message karo!
Manik: (Ghabrate hue) Message? Kya likhoon? Main kya baat karoon? Mujhe nahi aata! Yeh koi prayogshala (lab) ki report nahi hai!
Pari: (Aankhein ghumate hue) Bas wahi likho jo tum sochte ho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Hi Aastha! Aapki profile acchi lagi. Khaaskar kala aur vigyan wala point. Ek vaigyanik hone ke naate, main aksar santulan khojne ki koshish karta hoon. Aapki design ki duniya kaisi hai?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Chinta se) Tumne bhej diya! Kya yeh zyada 'kitabi' nahi hai?
Pari: Yeh 'Manik' jaisa hai, jo sahi hai! Wah jaanti hai ki wah ek scientist se baat kar rahi hai. Ab zyada mat socho.
Manik ko abhi bhi asahajta mehsoos ho rahi thi, lekin ek halki si uttejna bhi thi. Use ehsas hua ki yeh rasta, jo Pari ne dikhaya, akele kamre mein machalne se kahin zyada swasth aur sahi tha. Ab uski saari nirasha ek nayi ummeed mein badal rahi thi.
Manik: Accha, ab kya? Kya tum mujhe aage bhi salah deti rahogi?
Pari: (Muskurate hue) Zaroor, bhai. Main tumhein 'dating guru' bankar guide karti rahungi. Par yaad rakhna, asli khel tumhein khud hi khelna hai. Ab yeh phone rakho aur chai piyo. Aur haan, agar uska reply aaye to seedhe mere paas aana!
Manik ne chai ka cup pakda, par uski aankhein baar-baar phone par ja rahi thin. Uska mann ab chemistry ki kitab mein nahi, balki Aastha ke reply ka intezar kar raha tha. Ek naya, anjana safar shuru ho chuka tha.


Manik aur Pari, dono hi betabi se phone ki screen ghoor rahe the. Kuch der ki chuppi ke baad, jaise hi Manik ne himmat haarkar chai ka aakhri ghoont liya, phone ki ghanti baji.
Pari: (Khushi se uchhal-kar) Aa gaya! Reply aa gaya!
Manik ne lagbhag jhapatkar phone pakda. Uska dil zoron se dhadak raha tha.
Aastha ka message:
"Hi Manik! :) Thanks! Mujhe bhi tumhari profile padhkar accha laga. Santulan to har jagah zaroori hai, khaaskar design mein! Mere liye design ki duniya science se zyada art hai... par haan, bina logic ke kuch nahi chalta. Accha batao, stargazing ke liye tumhari pasandida jagah kaun si hai?"
Manik ne message ko kam se kam teen baar padha. Wah muskuraya.
Manik: Usne jawab diya! Aur usne sawal bhi pucha hai!
Pari: (Khushi se) Haan! Yeh bahut accha sanket hai! Wah tummein dilchaspi le rahi hai. Ab zyada 'vaigyanik' mat ban jaana, thoda romantic aur casual jawab do.
Manik: Romantic? Main kya likhoon? Ki mujhe uske saath stargazing karni hai?
Pari: (Manik ko ek halka-sa dhakka dete hue) Nahi! Abhi nahi! Thodi mystery rakho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Mere liye sabse acchi jagah wah hai jahan aasman saaf ho, lekin agar aap saath hon to shayad koi bhi jagah perfect hogi! 😉 Meri pasandida jagah mere sheher se thodi door ek pahadi hai. Par mujhe lagta hai ki main aapki duniya (design) ke baare mein aur jaanna chahunga. Aap kahan se hain?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Aankhein choudi karte hue) Tumne smiley aur aankh maarne wala emoji kyun bheja?
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kyunki tum ek boring scientist nahi ho! Tum ek handsome ladka ho jo flirt kar sakta hai! Yeh zaroori hai, bhai.
Manik ko apni behen ki yeh 'dating expert' wali bhoomika bahut mazedaar lag rahi thi. Use lag raha tha jaise wah koi naya, romanchak project shuru kar raha ho. Kuch der mein Aastha ka phir se jawab aaya.
Aastha ka message:
"Haha! Mujhe yeh pasand aaya. Aur main is sheher ke paas hi rehti hoon. Design ki duniya to kamal hai, yahan har roz kuch naya hota hai. Main aapko apni kuch websites dikha sakti hoon. 😉"
Pari: (Winning smile ke saath) Ab! Ab mouka aa gaya hai! Ab tum use seedhe call ya milne ka pucho!
Manik: (Thoda hichkichate hue) Call... ya milna?
Pari: Milna! Coffee par. Aur ab yeh tumhara kaam hai! Mere paas mere khud ke projects hain. Jao, bhai. Apni kismat aazmao!
Manik ne Pari ki taraf dekha, jisne use himmat aur ek sahi raah dikhayi thi. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Wah ab nirasha ke andhere mein nahi tha, balki ummeed ki roshni mein ek naya kadam uthane ko taiyar tha.


Manik aur Pari ko khud bhi andaza nahi hua ki kab dating app par Aastha se baat karne ke bahane, ve dono ek-doosre ke aur qareeb aa gaye. Har naya message, har naya 'chatting session', dono bhai-behen ke beech ek ankaha taalmel ban gaya tha.
Baat-cheet ka yeh silsila roz shaam ko shuru hota tha, jab Manik apne kamre mein hota era. Pari, Manik ke bed par baith jati thi, aur dono phone ki screen par jhuke hote the. Jab Pari tezi se Aastha ke liye koi mazedaar ya flirty message type kar rahi hoti thi, to Manik uske kandhe par jhuk jata tha. Uska ek haath aksar anjane mein Pari ke kandhe par tika hota tha, aur unke shareer sate hue hote the.
Manik ki nazrein Pari ki ungliyon ki harqat par hoti thin, lekin uska dhyan Pari ki maujoodgi ke taap aur nazdiki par bhi hota tha. Pari ko bhi yeh nazdiki acchi lagti thi. Use Manik ke shareer ka sahara, uski garm saanson ka ehsas, ek ajeeb si suraksha aur antarangta (intimacy) deta tha.
Dono, is sab mein itne sahaj ho gaye the ki unhone kabhi is baat par dhyan hi nahi diya ki unke beech ki sharirik doori lagbhag khatm ho chuki thi. Ve is nazdiki ko keval 'message type karne mein madad' ka hissa maante the, jabki yeh unke beech ka naya, ankaha aur sahaj sneh ban chuka tha.
Kareeb do hafton ki lagatar chatting, virtual dates aur lambi baat-cheet ke baad, Aastha aakhirkar pehli mulakaat ke liye taiyar ho gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Manik, mujhe lagta hai ki humne ek-doosre ko phone par kaafi jaan liya hai. Agar tum kal shaam free ho to main coffee ke liye milna chahungi. Ek khaas cafe hai, wahan milte hain."
Manik yeh message dekhkar khushi se uchhal pada.
Manik: (Pari ko jhakjhorte hue) Pari! Usne haan kar diya! Usne haan kar diya!
Pari: (Khush hote hue) Haan! Maine kaha tha na, meri salah kabhi galat nahi hoti! Ab tum khud hi reply karo!
Manik ne turant jawab dene ke liye phone pakda. Tabhi Aastha ka ek aur message aaya—yeh ek chetavni thi, jo Manik ko thodi asahaj kar gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Par Manik, ek shart hai. Main jaanti hoon ki tum bahut intense ho sakte ho, aur tumhari profile mein likha hai ki tum zindagi mein 'romance' dhoond rahe ho. Lekin pehli mulakaat mein tumhein 'limit' mein rehna hoga. Mera matlab hai... koi haath pakadna nahi, koi khaas nazdiki nahi. Bas baat karenge, ek-doosre ko vyaktigat roop se jaanenge. Agar tum yeh vada kar sakte ho, tabhi haan kehna. Theek hai?"
Manik ne yeh message zor se padha. Uska utsahit chehra achanak gambhir ho gaya.
Manik: Limit? Iska kya matlab hai? Kya wah darr rahi hai?
Pari: (Aaraam se samjhate hue, Manik ke kandhe par haath pherte hue) Nahi, bhai. Wah darr nahi rahi hai. Wah sirf yeh jaanna chahti hai ki tum kitne Respectful ho. Iska matlab hai ki tumhein gentleman bankar rehna hai. Koi jaldi nahi. Wah tumhari pareeksha le rahi hai.
Pari ne message type kiya:
Manik: "Shart manzoor hai, Aastha. Main 'limit' ka poora samman karunga. Main tumhein pareshan karne ke liye nahi, balki tumhein jaanne ke liye mil raha hoon. Kal shaam 5 baje, main wahin milunga."
Message bhejkar Pari ne Manik ki taraf dekha.
Pari: Dekho, Manik. Yeh accha hai. Yeh tumhein sikhayega ki apni icchayon ko kaise kaabu mein rakha jata hai. Ab jao aur apne liye acche kapde nikalo. Yeh tumhara pehla official date hai!
Manik ne ab muskurate hue, ek gehri saans li. Wah jaanta tha ki yeh pehli mulakaat uske liye ek badi pareeksha thi, lekin wah is naye safar ke liye ab poori tarah taiyar tha.


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Manik ne Pari ki salah ko gambhirta se liya. Usne Pari ki madad se apni ek acchi profile banayi, jisme usne apni padhai ke saath-saath apne shaukon (jaise, raat mein taare dekhna aur purani Hindi filmein dekhna) ka bhi zikr kiya.
Agle kuch ghanton tak, Manik, jo aamtour par ghanton jatil sameekaranon (complex equations) ko hal karne mein bitata tha, ab savdhani se alag-alag profiles ko 'swipe' kar raha tha. Yeh uske liye ek bilkul nayi duniya thi.
Shaam hote-hote, jab Manik apne kamre mein baitha apni chemistry ki kitab kholne hi wala tha, tabhi uske phone par ek notification aaya.
"Congratulations! You've got a new Match!"
Manik ka dil zor se dhadka. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya. Uska pehla match!
Pari kamre mein chai lekar aayi aur usne Manik ko lagbhag jame hue dekha.
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kya hua? Kya koi naya gravity formula mil gaya?
Manik ne bina kuch kahe, Pari ki taraf phone ghuma diya.
Pari: (Khushi se chillate hue) Oh my God! Match! Badhai ho bhai! Meri salah kaam kar gayi!
Profile par ek ladki ki tasveer thi, jiska naam Aastha tha. Wah ek graphic designer thi aur usne apne bio mein likha tha ki use kala aur vigyan ke beech santulan pasand hai.
Pari: (Manik ko ut उत्साहित karte hue) Wah bahut acchi lag rahi hai! Ab der kis baat ki? Jaldi se message karo!
Manik: (Ghabrate hue) Message? Kya likhoon? Main kya baat karoon? Mujhe nahi aata! Yeh koi prayogshala (lab) ki report nahi hai!
Pari: (Aankhein ghumate hue) Bas wahi likho jo tum sochte ho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Hi Aastha! Aapki profile acchi lagi. Khaaskar kala aur vigyan wala point. Ek vaigyanik hone ke naate, main aksar santulan khojne ki koshish karta hoon. Aapki design ki duniya kaisi hai?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Chinta se) Tumne bhej diya! Kya yeh zyada 'kitabi' nahi hai?
Pari: Yeh 'Manik' jaisa hai, jo sahi hai! Wah jaanti hai ki wah ek scientist se baat kar rahi hai. Ab zyada mat socho.
Manik ko abhi bhi asahajta mehsoos ho rahi thi, lekin ek halki si uttejna bhi thi. Use ehsas hua ki yeh rasta, jo Pari ne dikhaya, akele kamre mein machalne se kahin zyada swasth aur sahi tha. Ab uski saari nirasha ek nayi ummeed mein badal rahi thi.
Manik: Accha, ab kya? Kya tum mujhe aage bhi salah deti rahogi?
Pari: (Muskurate hue) Zaroor, bhai. Main tumhein 'dating guru' bankar guide karti rahungi. Par yaad rakhna, asli khel tumhein khud hi khelna hai. Ab yeh phone rakho aur chai piyo. Aur haan, agar uska reply aaye to seedhe mere paas aana!
Manik ne chai ka cup pakda, par uski aankhein baar-baar phone par ja rahi thin. Uska mann ab chemistry ki kitab mein nahi, balki Aastha ke reply ka intezar kar raha tha. Ek naya, anjana safar shuru ho chuka tha.


Manik aur Pari, dono hi betabi se phone ki screen ghoor rahe the. Kuch der ki chuppi ke baad, jaise hi Manik ne himmat haarkar chai ka aakhri ghoont liya, phone ki ghanti baji.
Pari: (Khushi se uchhal-kar) Aa gaya! Reply aa gaya!
Manik ne lagbhag jhapatkar phone pakda. Uska dil zoron se dhadak raha tha.
Aastha ka message:
"Hi Manik! :) Thanks! Mujhe bhi tumhari profile padhkar accha laga. Santulan to har jagah zaroori hai, khaaskar design mein! Mere liye design ki duniya science se zyada art hai... par haan, bina logic ke kuch nahi chalta. Accha batao, stargazing ke liye tumhari pasandida jagah kaun si hai?"
Manik ne message ko kam se kam teen baar padha. Wah muskuraya.
Manik: Usne jawab diya! Aur usne sawal bhi pucha hai!
Pari: (Khushi se) Haan! Yeh bahut accha sanket hai! Wah tummein dilchaspi le rahi hai. Ab zyada 'vaigyanik' mat ban jaana, thoda romantic aur casual jawab do.
Manik: Romantic? Main kya likhoon? Ki mujhe uske saath stargazing karni hai?
Pari: (Manik ko ek halka-sa dhakka dete hue) Nahi! Abhi nahi! Thodi mystery rakho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Mere liye sabse acchi jagah wah hai jahan aasman saaf ho, lekin agar aap saath hon to shayad koi bhi jagah perfect hogi! 😉 Meri pasandida jagah mere sheher se thodi door ek pahadi hai. Par mujhe lagta hai ki main aapki duniya (design) ke baare mein aur jaanna chahunga. Aap kahan se hain?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Aankhein choudi karte hue) Tumne smiley aur aankh maarne wala emoji kyun bheja?
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kyunki tum ek boring scientist nahi ho! Tum ek handsome ladka ho jo flirt kar sakta hai! Yeh zaroori hai, bhai.
Manik ko apni behen ki yeh 'dating expert' wali bhoomika bahut mazedaar lag rahi thi. Use lag raha tha jaise wah koi naya, romanchak project shuru kar raha ho. Kuch der mein Aastha ka phir se jawab aaya.
Aastha ka message:
"Haha! Mujhe yeh pasand aaya. Aur main is sheher ke paas hi rehti hoon. Design ki duniya to kamal hai, yahan har roz kuch naya hota hai. Main aapko apni kuch websites dikha sakti hoon. 😉"
Pari: (Winning smile ke saath) Ab! Ab mouka aa gaya hai! Ab tum use seedhe call ya milne ka pucho!
Manik: (Thoda hichkichate hue) Call... ya milna?
Pari: Milna! Coffee par. Aur ab yeh tumhara kaam hai! Mere paas mere khud ke projects hain. Jao, bhai. Apni kismat aazmao!
Manik ne Pari ki taraf dekha, jisne use himmat aur ek sahi raah dikhayi thi. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Wah ab nirasha ke andhere mein nahi tha, balki ummeed ki roshni mein ek naya kadam uthane ko taiyar tha.


Manik aur Pari ko khud bhi andaza nahi hua ki kab dating app par Aastha se baat karne ke bahane, ve dono ek-doosre ke aur qareeb aa gaye. Har naya message, har naya 'chatting session', dono bhai-behen ke beech ek ankaha taalmel ban gaya tha.
Baat-cheet ka yeh silsila roz shaam ko shuru hota tha, jab Manik apne kamre mein hota era. Pari, Manik ke bed par baith jati thi, aur dono phone ki screen par jhuke hote the. Jab Pari tezi se Aastha ke liye koi mazedaar ya flirty message type kar rahi hoti thi, to Manik uske kandhe par jhuk jata tha. Uska ek haath aksar anjane mein Pari ke kandhe par tika hota tha, aur unke shareer sate hue hote the.
Manik ki nazrein Pari ki ungliyon ki harqat par hoti thin, lekin uska dhyan Pari ki maujoodgi ke taap aur nazdiki par bhi hota tha. Pari ko bhi yeh nazdiki acchi lagti thi. Use Manik ke shareer ka sahara, uski garm saanson ka ehsas, ek ajeeb si suraksha aur antarangta (intimacy) deta tha.
Dono, is sab mein itne sahaj ho gaye the ki unhone kabhi is baat par dhyan hi nahi diya ki unke beech ki sharirik doori lagbhag khatm ho chuki thi. Ve is nazdiki ko keval 'message type karne mein madad' ka hissa maante the, jabki yeh unke beech ka naya, ankaha aur sahaj sneh ban chuka tha.
Kareeb do hafton ki lagatar chatting, virtual dates aur lambi baat-cheet ke baad, Aastha aakhirkar pehli mulakaat ke liye taiyar ho gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Manik, mujhe lagta hai ki humne ek-doosre ko phone par kaafi jaan liya hai. Agar tum kal shaam free ho to main coffee ke liye milna chahungi. Ek khaas cafe hai, wahan milte hain."
Manik yeh message dekhkar khushi se uchhal pada.
Manik: (Pari ko jhakjhorte hue) Pari! Usne haan kar diya! Usne haan kar diya!
Pari: (Khush hote hue) Haan! Maine kaha tha na, meri salah kabhi galat nahi hoti! Ab tum khud hi reply karo!
Manik ne turant jawab dene ke liye phone pakda. Tabhi Aastha ka ek aur message aaya—yeh ek chetavni thi, jo Manik ko thodi asahaj kar gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Par Manik, ek shart hai. Main jaanti hoon ki tum bahut intense ho sakte ho, aur tumhari profile mein likha hai ki tum zindagi mein 'romance' dhoond rahe ho. Lekin pehli mulakaat mein tumhein 'limit' mein rehna hoga. Mera matlab hai... koi haath pakadna nahi, koi khaas nazdiki nahi. Bas baat karenge, ek-doosre ko vyaktigat roop se jaanenge. Agar tum yeh vada kar sakte ho, tabhi haan kehna. Theek hai?"
Manik ne yeh message zor se padha. Uska utsahit chehra achanak gambhir ho gaya.
Manik: Limit? Iska kya matlab hai? Kya wah darr rahi hai?
Pari: (Aaraam se samjhate hue, Manik ke kandhe par haath pherte hue) Nahi, bhai. Wah darr nahi rahi hai. Wah sirf yeh jaanna chahti hai ki tum kitne Respectful ho. Iska matlab hai ki tumhein gentleman bankar rehna hai. Koi jaldi nahi. Wah tumhari pareeksha le rahi hai.
Pari ne message type kiya:
Manik: "Shart manzoor hai, Aastha. Main 'limit' ka poora samman karunga. Main tumhein pareshan karne ke liye nahi, balki tumhein jaanne ke liye mil raha hoon. Kal shaam 5 baje, main wahin milunga."
Message bhejkar Pari ne Manik ki taraf dekha.
Pari: Dekho, Manik. Yeh accha hai. Yeh tumhein sikhayega ki apni icchayon ko kaise kaabu mein rakha jata hai. Ab jao aur apne liye acche kapde nikalo. Yeh tumhara pehla official date hai!
Manik ne ab muskurate hue, ek gehri saans li. Wah jaanta tha ki yeh pehli mulakaat uske liye ek badi pareeksha thi, lekin wah is naye safar ke liye ab poori tarah taiyar tha.


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**Part - 26**

Agli subah, Pari ne jaan-bujhkar school na jaane ka faisla kiya. Uske mann mein raat bhar ki bechaini thi, jo kal Manik ki harkat se paida hui thi. Woh jaanti thi ki is baat ko andaaza nahi kiya ja sakta. Woh samajh gayi thi ki Manik shayad apni padhai mein itna vyast raha hai ki usne apni swabhavik zarooraton ko nazarandaaz kar diya, aur ab uski kaamottejna (sexual frustration) kisi galat disha mein bhatak rahi hai.

Pari ne subah ka nashta khatam kiya aur intezaar kiya ki ghar ke baaki log nikal jaayein. Jab Anu didi aur Divya apne kaam ke liye nikal gayi, to Pari ne Manik ke kamre ka darwaza khatkhataya.

Manik abhi bhi kal ki sharm aur aatmaglani mein tha. Usne darwaza khola. Pari ko saamne dekhkar woh phir se asahaj ho gaya, khaaskar jab usne dekha ki Pari apne school ki uniform mein nahi thi.

Manik: (jhunjhlahat aur sharmindagi se) Tum school nahi gayi? Kya hai? Mujhe padhna hai.

Pari: (shaant aur gambhir swar mein) Nahi gayi. Aur tumhe ab thodi der ke liye padhna band karna hoga. Mujhe tumse kuch bahut zaroori baat karni hai. Andar chalen?

Manik ko Pari ka yeh shaant, par dridh ravaiya hairaan kar gaya. Woh chupchap kamre mein ghus gaya aur baith gaya. Pari ne darwaza band kiya aur uske saamne aakar baith gayi.

Pari: (seedhe Manik ki aankhon mein dekhte hue) Kal jo kuch hua... uske baare mein baat karni hai. Aur ise taalne ki koshish mat karna.

Manik ki aankhen sharm se jhuk gayi.

Manik: Mujhe pata hai, Pari. Main... main maafi maangta hoon. Main nahi jaanta kya hua tha. Mera mood kharaab tha...

Pari: (baat kaat te hue) Maafi se kuch nahi hoga, bhai. Tum mere bhai ho. Par main tumhari pareshani samajhti hoon. Dekho... tumhe hamesha se padhai ki dhun savaar rahi hai. Tumne kabhi doosri cheezon par dhyan nahi diya. Sach kahoon... tumhari koi girlfriend kyun nahi bani?

Manik ekdum chaunk gaya. Use ummeed nahi thi ki Pari itni seedhi baat karegi.

Manik: Kya...? Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho?

Pari: Main sach keh rahi hoon. Mujhe pata hai ki tum bahut padhte ho, par tum ab bade ho gaye ho, Manik. Aur jab tumhari zindagi mein koi sharirik aur bhaavnatmak partner nahi hota, to yeh cheezein dimaag par haavi hone lagti hain. Yahi wajah hai ki tumhe ab yeh kaamottejna ho rahi hai, aur woh kal galat disha mein chali gayi.

Manik poori tarah se shaant ho gaya. Pari ki baat mein use sachchai lag rahi thi, par sweekaar karna mushkil tha.

Pari: Tumhe apni zarooratein poori karne ke liye ek sahi saathi ki zaroorat hai. Tum akele nahi reh sakte. Agar tum itne vyast ho ki kisi se mil nahi sakte, to theek hai. Par... (woh thoda hichkichaayi) ...par tum dating apps aazma sakte ho. Ya kisi ko dost banao, jo tumhari duniya se baahar ki ho. Yeh bahut zaroori hai. Yeh tumhari maansik shanti aur... tumhare sammaan ke liye zaroori hai.

Manik ne dheere se sir uthaya. Uski aankhen thodi khuli thi.

Manik: Tum... tum mujhe girlfriend banane ki salah de rahi ho?

Pari: (muskurate hue, lekin dridhata se) Main tumhe sahi raasta dikha rahi hoon, bhai. Kal tum jo kar rahe the, woh na to tumhare liye acha hai aur na hi mere liye. Mujhe tumse ghin aa rahi thi... par mujhe tum par daya bhi aa rahi thi. Tumhe apne liye ek partner chahiye, jahaan tum apni saari urja laga sako, aur tumhara dhyan sahi jagah par rahe. Tumhe ab sirf kitaabein nahi, balki duniya dekhni hai.

Pari ne Manik ka haath pakda.

Pari: Manik, main tumhe pyar karti hoon, aur main chahti hoon ki tum khush raho. Par khushi ke liye sirf achhi naukri aur padhai nahi chahiye hoti. Tumhe apni zindagi mein pyar aur sharirik santushti ki bhi zaroorat hai. Jao, kisi ko dhoondho.

Manik kuch der tak chupchap Pari ki taraf dekhta raha. Uski sharmindagi dheere-dheere ek nayi samajh mein badal rahi thi. Pari ke khulepan ne use sochne par majboor kar diya tha.

Manik: (bahut dheemi awaaz mein) Shayad... shayad tum sahi keh rahi ho, Pari.

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Manik ne Pari ki baat par gambhir roop se vichar kiya. Use apni pichhli do niraashayein (Neeru bua ka achaanak jaana aur Jazz ka periods mein hona) yaad aayi, jinhone uski vaasna ko galat disha mein bhatka diya tha. Usne mehsoos kiya ki Pari ne jo kaha, woh sirf behan ki salah nahi, balki ek zaroori haqeeqat thi.

Manik: (gehri saans lete hue) Tum sahi keh rahi ho, Pari. Pichhle kuch dinon se main andar se bahut ashant (restless) mehsoos kar raha hoon. Bua achaanak chali gayi, phir... (woh Jazz ka zikr taal gaya) ...aur mujhe kahin se bhi santushti nahi mili. Isliye shayad mera dimaag bhatak gaya. Main jaanta hoon ki kal maine jo kiya woh bahut bura tha, aur main tumhe phir kabhi aisi sharmindagi nahi doonga.

Pari: (muskurate hue, rahat mehsoos karte hue) Bas yahi sunna chahti thi main. To ab plan kya hai? Sirf kitaabein? Ya kuch aur bhi?

Manik: (thoda muskurate hue, par abhi bhi jhijhak thi) Mujhe nahi pata ki ladkiyon se baat kaise karte hain... tum to jaanti ho, mere dost bhi zyada nahi hain.

Pari: (khushi se Manik ki peeth thapthapate hue) Tension kyun le rahe ho? Tumhari chhoti behan kisliye hai?

Pari turant uthi, apna phone uthaya, aur ek popular dating app ka naam liya.

Pari: Dekho, yeh app bahut sahi hai. Tum pehle ek achhi profile banao. Aisi tasveer lagao jismein tum padh nahi rahe ho, balki jee rahe ho! Aur apne baare mein likho... ki tumhe science aur technology pasand hai, par tum apni zindagi mein ek mazedar partner chahte ho.

Manik ko yeh sab sunkar ajeeb lag raha tha, par woh jaanta tha ki yeh zaroori hai.

Manik: Dating app? Kya yeh sahi rahega? Main... main kisi ko dhokha to nahi de raha hoon?

Pari: (aankhen ghumate hue) Bhai! Tum 21vi sadi mein jee rahe ho! Aur dhokha kaisa? Tum seedhe-seedhe bata rahe ho ki tum kaun ho. Bas apna bio thoda attractive banana. Main tumhari madad kar sakti hoon.

Pari ne Manik ka phone liya aur turant uske liye ek profile banana shuru kar diya.

Pari: Suno, main yahan likhti hoon: "Gambhir (Serious) dikhne wala ladka, jo raat ko stargazing (Stargazing) karta hai aur din mein apni behan ke mazak se pareshan rehta hai. Dimaag Einstein jaisa hai, par dil dhoondh raha hai jo use thoda romantic bana sake." Kaisa rahega?

Manik yeh sunkar hans pada. Yeh pehli baar tha ki kal ki ghatna ke baad woh khulkar hansa tha.

Manik: (haste hue) Tum paagal ho, Pari! Par... theek hai. Jaisa tumhe sahi lage.

Pari ne Manik ko kuch sujhaav diye ki use kis tarah ki ladkiyon se baat karni chahiye, aur use samjhaya ki yeh sab ek prakriya hai. Yeh baatcheet sirf girlfriend banane tak seemit nahi rahi, balki unke bhai-behan ke rishte ko bhi ek naye, khule aur zyada imaandaar star par le aayi.

Pari: (gambhir hote hue) Dekho bhai, main tumhe pyar karti hoon. Aur main tumhari secret-keeping behan nahi banna chahti. Agar tumhe koi pareshani ho, to mujhse baat karna. Par, jo maine kal dekha, woh dobara nahi hona chahiye. Theek hai?

Manik: (pyar se Pari ke sir par haath pherte hue) Waada karta hoon. Dhanyavaad, chhoti behan. Tumne aaj meri aankhen khol di.

Manik ne us din se hi apni profile par kaam karna shuru kar diya, apne liye ek swasth aur sahi raaste ki talaash mein.
बहुत ही सुंदर update...... Pari ne Manik ko samjha दिया.....


Dating profile bhi bna di.... Ab dekho kon milta h manik ko Dating k liye.....
 
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Manik ne Pari ki salah ko gambhirta se liya. Usne Pari ki madad se apni ek acchi profile banayi, jisme usne apni padhai ke saath-saath apne shaukon (jaise, raat mein taare dekhna aur purani Hindi filmein dekhna) ka bhi zikr kiya.
Agle kuch ghanton tak, Manik, jo aamtour par ghanton jatil sameekaranon (complex equations) ko hal karne mein bitata tha, ab savdhani se alag-alag profiles ko 'swipe' kar raha tha. Yeh uske liye ek bilkul nayi duniya thi.
Shaam hote-hote, jab Manik apne kamre mein baitha apni chemistry ki kitab kholne hi wala tha, tabhi uske phone par ek notification aaya.
"Congratulations! You've got a new Match!"
Manik ka dil zor se dhadka. Usne jaldi se phone uthaya. Uska pehla match!
Pari kamre mein chai lekar aayi aur usne Manik ko lagbhag jame hue dekha.
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kya hua? Kya koi naya gravity formula mil gaya?
Manik ne bina kuch kahe, Pari ki taraf phone ghuma diya.
Pari: (Khushi se chillate hue) Oh my God! Match! Badhai ho bhai! Meri salah kaam kar gayi!
Profile par ek ladki ki tasveer thi, jiska naam Aastha tha. Wah ek graphic designer thi aur usne apne bio mein likha tha ki use kala aur vigyan ke beech santulan pasand hai.
Pari: (Manik ko ut उत्साहित karte hue) Wah bahut acchi lag rahi hai! Ab der kis baat ki? Jaldi se message karo!
Manik: (Ghabrate hue) Message? Kya likhoon? Main kya baat karoon? Mujhe nahi aata! Yeh koi prayogshala (lab) ki report nahi hai!
Pari: (Aankhein ghumate hue) Bas wahi likho jo tum sochte ho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Hi Aastha! Aapki profile acchi lagi. Khaaskar kala aur vigyan wala point. Ek vaigyanik hone ke naate, main aksar santulan khojne ki koshish karta hoon. Aapki design ki duniya kaisi hai?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Chinta se) Tumne bhej diya! Kya yeh zyada 'kitabi' nahi hai?
Pari: Yeh 'Manik' jaisa hai, jo sahi hai! Wah jaanti hai ki wah ek scientist se baat kar rahi hai. Ab zyada mat socho.
Manik ko abhi bhi asahajta mehsoos ho rahi thi, lekin ek halki si uttejna bhi thi. Use ehsas hua ki yeh rasta, jo Pari ne dikhaya, akele kamre mein machalne se kahin zyada swasth aur sahi tha. Ab uski saari nirasha ek nayi ummeed mein badal rahi thi.
Manik: Accha, ab kya? Kya tum mujhe aage bhi salah deti rahogi?
Pari: (Muskurate hue) Zaroor, bhai. Main tumhein 'dating guru' bankar guide karti rahungi. Par yaad rakhna, asli khel tumhein khud hi khelna hai. Ab yeh phone rakho aur chai piyo. Aur haan, agar uska reply aaye to seedhe mere paas aana!
Manik ne chai ka cup pakda, par uski aankhein baar-baar phone par ja rahi thin. Uska mann ab chemistry ki kitab mein nahi, balki Aastha ke reply ka intezar kar raha tha. Ek naya, anjana safar shuru ho chuka tha.


Manik aur Pari, dono hi betabi se phone ki screen ghoor rahe the. Kuch der ki chuppi ke baad, jaise hi Manik ne himmat haarkar chai ka aakhri ghoont liya, phone ki ghanti baji.
Pari: (Khushi se uchhal-kar) Aa gaya! Reply aa gaya!
Manik ne lagbhag jhapatkar phone pakda. Uska dil zoron se dhadak raha tha.
Aastha ka message:
"Hi Manik! :) Thanks! Mujhe bhi tumhari profile padhkar accha laga. Santulan to har jagah zaroori hai, khaaskar design mein! Mere liye design ki duniya science se zyada art hai... par haan, bina logic ke kuch nahi chalta. Accha batao, stargazing ke liye tumhari pasandida jagah kaun si hai?"
Manik ne message ko kam se kam teen baar padha. Wah muskuraya.
Manik: Usne jawab diya! Aur usne sawal bhi pucha hai!
Pari: (Khushi se) Haan! Yeh bahut accha sanket hai! Wah tummein dilchaspi le rahi hai. Ab zyada 'vaigyanik' mat ban jaana, thoda romantic aur casual jawab do.
Manik: Romantic? Main kya likhoon? Ki mujhe uske saath stargazing karni hai?
Pari: (Manik ko ek halka-sa dhakka dete hue) Nahi! Abhi nahi! Thodi mystery rakho! Chalo, main batati hoon.
Pari ne phone liya aur type kiya:
Pari (Manik): "Mere liye sabse acchi jagah wah hai jahan aasman saaf ho, lekin agar aap saath hon to shayad koi bhi jagah perfect hogi! 😉 Meri pasandida jagah mere sheher se thodi door ek pahadi hai. Par mujhe lagta hai ki main aapki duniya (design) ke baare mein aur jaanna chahunga. Aap kahan se hain?"
Pari ne message bhej diya.
Manik: (Aankhein choudi karte hue) Tumne smiley aur aankh maarne wala emoji kyun bheja?
Pari: (Hanste hue) Kyunki tum ek boring scientist nahi ho! Tum ek handsome ladka ho jo flirt kar sakta hai! Yeh zaroori hai, bhai.
Manik ko apni behen ki yeh 'dating expert' wali bhoomika bahut mazedaar lag rahi thi. Use lag raha tha jaise wah koi naya, romanchak project shuru kar raha ho. Kuch der mein Aastha ka phir se jawab aaya.
Aastha ka message:
"Haha! Mujhe yeh pasand aaya. Aur main is sheher ke paas hi rehti hoon. Design ki duniya to kamal hai, yahan har roz kuch naya hota hai. Main aapko apni kuch websites dikha sakti hoon. 😉"
Pari: (Winning smile ke saath) Ab! Ab mouka aa gaya hai! Ab tum use seedhe call ya milne ka pucho!
Manik: (Thoda hichkichate hue) Call... ya milna?
Pari: Milna! Coffee par. Aur ab yeh tumhara kaam hai! Mere paas mere khud ke projects hain. Jao, bhai. Apni kismat aazmao!
Manik ne Pari ki taraf dekha, jisne use himmat aur ek sahi raah dikhayi thi. Uske dil mein ek ajeeb si shanti thi. Wah ab nirasha ke andhere mein nahi tha, balki ummeed ki roshni mein ek naya kadam uthane ko taiyar tha.


Manik aur Pari ko khud bhi andaza nahi hua ki kab dating app par Aastha se baat karne ke bahane, ve dono ek-doosre ke aur qareeb aa gaye. Har naya message, har naya 'chatting session', dono bhai-behen ke beech ek ankaha taalmel ban gaya tha.
Baat-cheet ka yeh silsila roz shaam ko shuru hota tha, jab Manik apne kamre mein hota era. Pari, Manik ke bed par baith jati thi, aur dono phone ki screen par jhuke hote the. Jab Pari tezi se Aastha ke liye koi mazedaar ya flirty message type kar rahi hoti thi, to Manik uske kandhe par jhuk jata tha. Uska ek haath aksar anjane mein Pari ke kandhe par tika hota tha, aur unke shareer sate hue hote the.
Manik ki nazrein Pari ki ungliyon ki harqat par hoti thin, lekin uska dhyan Pari ki maujoodgi ke taap aur nazdiki par bhi hota tha. Pari ko bhi yeh nazdiki acchi lagti thi. Use Manik ke shareer ka sahara, uski garm saanson ka ehsas, ek ajeeb si suraksha aur antarangta (intimacy) deta tha.
Dono, is sab mein itne sahaj ho gaye the ki unhone kabhi is baat par dhyan hi nahi diya ki unke beech ki sharirik doori lagbhag khatm ho chuki thi. Ve is nazdiki ko keval 'message type karne mein madad' ka hissa maante the, jabki yeh unke beech ka naya, ankaha aur sahaj sneh ban chuka tha.
Kareeb do hafton ki lagatar chatting, virtual dates aur lambi baat-cheet ke baad, Aastha aakhirkar pehli mulakaat ke liye taiyar ho gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Manik, mujhe lagta hai ki humne ek-doosre ko phone par kaafi jaan liya hai. Agar tum kal shaam free ho to main coffee ke liye milna chahungi. Ek khaas cafe hai, wahan milte hain."
Manik yeh message dekhkar khushi se uchhal pada.
Manik: (Pari ko jhakjhorte hue) Pari! Usne haan kar diya! Usne haan kar diya!
Pari: (Khush hote hue) Haan! Maine kaha tha na, meri salah kabhi galat nahi hoti! Ab tum khud hi reply karo!
Manik ne turant jawab dene ke liye phone pakda. Tabhi Aastha ka ek aur message aaya—yeh ek chetavni thi, jo Manik ko thodi asahaj kar gayi.
Aastha ka message:
"Par Manik, ek shart hai. Main jaanti hoon ki tum bahut intense ho sakte ho, aur tumhari profile mein likha hai ki tum zindagi mein 'romance' dhoond rahe ho. Lekin pehli mulakaat mein tumhein 'limit' mein rehna hoga. Mera matlab hai... koi haath pakadna nahi, koi khaas nazdiki nahi. Bas baat karenge, ek-doosre ko vyaktigat roop se jaanenge. Agar tum yeh vada kar sakte ho, tabhi haan kehna. Theek hai?"
Manik ne yeh message zor se padha. Uska utsahit chehra achanak gambhir ho gaya.
Manik: Limit? Iska kya matlab hai? Kya wah darr rahi hai?
Pari: (Aaraam se samjhate hue, Manik ke kandhe par haath pherte hue) Nahi, bhai. Wah darr nahi rahi hai. Wah sirf yeh jaanna chahti hai ki tum kitne Respectful ho. Iska matlab hai ki tumhein gentleman bankar rehna hai. Koi jaldi nahi. Wah tumhari pareeksha le rahi hai.
Pari ne message type kiya:
Manik: "Shart manzoor hai, Aastha. Main 'limit' ka poora samman karunga. Main tumhein pareshan karne ke liye nahi, balki tumhein jaanne ke liye mil raha hoon. Kal shaam 5 baje, main wahin milunga."
Message bhejkar Pari ne Manik ki taraf dekha.
Pari: Dekho, Manik. Yeh accha hai. Yeh tumhein sikhayega ki apni icchayon ko kaise kaabu mein rakha jata hai. Ab jao aur apne liye acche kapde nikalo. Yeh tumhara pehla official date hai!
Manik ne ab muskurate hue, ek gehri saans li. Wah jaanta tha ki yeh pehli mulakaat uske liye ek badi pareeksha thi, lekin wah is naye safar ke liye ab poori tarah taiyar tha.


Bhut shandaar update
... lo ji mil gyi chori... date bhi final ho gyi....

Ab dekho kya hota h Manik ka.....


Aur Pari ka kya reaction hota hai.. Uski gf milne k बाद...
 
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