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Bhag - 6
Ghar ke dahleej par mera paav kaise na rookta, andar mera dost, mera jigri yaar ne kaha hi kuchh aisa tha jise sunkar meri aankhe naam hoon gaya tha aur andar hi andar main khush bhi ho gaya tha. Bhagvan ne maan baap chheen'kar heere jaisa ek dost diya jo mere liye anmol tha. Andar dadi se Rishi kah raha tha.
Rishi... Amma bana diya na mere dost ko jimmedaar ab to aap khush ho na!
Dadi... Beṭa khush to hoon par us waqt tumhari vajah se mujhe kitni takleef huwa tha tum nahi janate hoon. dil par patthar rakh'kar use taane deta tha. Mera bola ek ek shabd nikalta to mere munh se tha lekin wapas aakar mere hi hriday chhanni kar deta tha. Jab use din bhar ki thakan se thaka hara besud sa soya hua dekhta tha to khud ko hi doṣi maankar khud ko hi koshta rahta tha.
Rishi…aapko kya lagta hai sirf aapko hi takleef hota tha nahi mujhe bhi takleef hota tha jab vo mujhse milkar batata tha ki aaj dadi ne aisa kaha vaisa kaha man to karta tha ki aapko mana kar doon phir kisi tarah khud ko rok leta tha. Vaise amma bhagavan jo bhi karta hai achchhe ke liye karta hain aapki ṭaang na ṭooṭi hoti to ye baat mere dimaag me kabhi na aata. Aagar ham us waqt aisa nahi karte to aaj ki ye khushi na uske naseeb hota na hi mere aur aapke naseeb hota.
Dadi... Sirf ham hi kyu is khushi me seṭh ji bhi saamil hai unhe kyu bhul rahe hoon.
"hye re dosti bhaṭke huye dost ko rah par lane ke liye dusre dost ne kya faitar nikala saanp bhi mar gaya aur laṭhi bhi nahi ṭooṭa tum dono ki dosti bada hi anmol hain."
meri baton ko kaṭkar shalini beech me boli to main uska jawab dete hue bola... Sahi kaha rishi aur meri dosti anmol hain jiski keemat nahi lagaya ja sakta hain.
Shalini... Haan haan tumhare liye tumhara dost aur dosti hi anmol hain. Main to kuchh hoon hi nahi jao ji mujhe aapse baat nahi karna.
Itna bolkar shalini rooṭhane ka dikhava karke mujhse alag hoon gayi aur palaṭkar khadi hoon gayi. Main jaan gaya tha shalini dikhava kar rahi hain phir bhi use manana zaroori tha. Isliye main uṭhakar khaḍa hua aur shalini ko ghumakar uske sir ko dono haathon se thamkar uski aankho me dekhte hue bola...Shalini rishi aur uski dosti mere liye jitna anmol hain tum bhi mere liye utna hi anmol hoon mere berng jindagi me rang bharne wali tum hi hoon aise men tum ve-mol kaise hoon sakti hoon mere liye tum bhi anmol hoon ab ye dikhawe ki rooṭhna chhod do.
Mere itna kahna tha ki shalini ki lavon par muskaan tair gayi aur rahi sahi kasar uske lavon ko choomkar maine pura kar diya. Kuchh waqt tak ham ek dusre ko jakde kiss karte rahe phir shalini khud se hi mujhe dhakka dekar alag kiya aur boli...Achchha achchha ṭheek hai baki ka baad me aage kya kya hua pahle vo sunao.
Dadi se seṭh ji ke saath dene ki baat sunkar rishi muskura diya phir dadi ke gale lag gaya. Bahaar khaḍa main aansoo bahakar rishi aur uske baap ke saath hi dadi ko dhanyavad de raha tha.
Ushi din dadi ke prati mere man me jitna mail jama tha vo bate aansuo ke saath dhool gaya. Main dave paav bahar aaya aur dukaan ke paas lage nalke se munh dhoya taaki mere aankhon se bahte aansoo ke daag dhool jaye. Kyonki main unhe agaah nahi karna chahta tha ki jo bhi dadi ne kiya vo sab rishi ka racha hua tha jiska pata mujhe chal chuka hai. Barhal main bheetar gaya aur dono ko khushi khushi miṭhai bhi khilaya aur bahut dino baad dadi ke gale lagkar bola... Meri achchhi dadi aap bahut achchhi hoon.
Mujhse aisi bate sunkar dadi hairan to hui par muskurakar chhupa liya kyonki ek lambe arse baad main dadi se gale mila tha aur unse aisi bate kaha tha. Khair hamare ṭop karne ki khabar pure gaanv me aag ki tarah fail gayi aur badhai dene walo ka tata lag gaya.
Aise hi waqt beetta gaya ab hamen aage ki paḍhai ke liye gaanv se bahaar nikalna tha jiska intezam seṭh ji ne kar diya. Intermediate me edmition lene se pahle hi hamne apna apna kṣetr chun liya tha use shuru se hi doctor banne ki chaha thi to vo usi kṣetr se vasta rakhane wale subject aur section chuna aur mera ruchi doctor me kabhi tha hi nahi isliye maine bizness ko chuna.
Ek baar phir se ham dono me jng chhid gaya. Miḍ ṭarm ke dauran hi hame pata chala ki ek bade aur naami college ki aur se scholarship ka offer hain paḍhai aur rahne khane peene ka sara kharcha unka hoga bas shart ye thi ki 85% se jyaada maark lana tha. Bas phir kiya rishi ek baar phir mere pichhe lag gaya kasme wade khilaya dosti todne ki dhamki dekar scholarship hatiyane ka jimma bhi mere kndhe maḍh diya.
Duniya chahe idhar ki udhar hoon jaye magar mujhe rishi ki aṭooṭ dosti hamesha hamesha ke liye chahiye tha. Uske liye main kuchh bhi karne ko taiyar tha. Ek baar phir se main mehnat karne me juṭ gaya dheere dheere din bitta gaya aur pareekṣa ke din nazdeek aa gaya. Ek ek karke pepar diya aur ham dono dosto ki kismat ka faisla kagaj ke panno me kaid hoon gaya.
Mujhe ummeed tha ki mera paasing maark 85% se upar aayega phir bhi ek anjana sa ḍaar mere man me ghar kar gaya tha kyonki daav pe hamari dosti lagi huyi thi shayad kuchh or daav pe laga hota to mujhe itna ḍaar nahi lagta. Barahaal ham gaanv lauṭ gaye. Lekin mere andar ḍaar ab bhi bana hua tha jise bhap kar rishi mujhe samjhata rahta tha ki too ḍaar kyu raha hai mujhe khud se jyaada mere dost par bharosa hai. Main janta hoon kuchh bhi hoon jaye mera dost kabhi hamari dosti nahi ṭooṭane dega.
Uski ye bate mere antar man ko bal to deta tha lekin kuchh waqt ke liye barhaal dadi bhi meri manosthiti se anjaan na thi magar vo samjhane aur dilasa dene ke alava kuchh nahi kar sakti thi. Ek ek din mujhe khadi pahadi chaḍhne jaisa lag raha tha. Waqt kaṭe se nahi kaṭ raha tha. Main bechain sa rehne lag gaya tha. Tab Rishi mujhe yahan vahan ghoomne le jaya karta tha. Bas aisa hi ghoomne firne me waqt beetne lag gaya ab main utna bechain nahi rahta tha karaṇ rishi tha jo ek ek pal mere saath rahne lag gaya tha.
Din beette beette vo din bhi aa gaya jis din result niklne wala tha. Us din main had se jyaada bechain hoon gaya tha. itna bechain ki pura ghar aur aangan anginat baar naap liya. Mujhe itni bechaini me chahal kadami karta hua dekhkar dadi boli... Munna itna bechain hone ki jarurat nahi hain mujhe mere pote par bhaarosh hai vo kuchh bhi hoon jaye par apni dosti nahi tutne dega.
Main janta tha dadi dilasa de rahi hain aur kahi na kahi sach bhi bol rahe hain par main mere bechain man ko kaise samjha pata use to bas yahi ḍaar khaye ja raha tha ki agar main paas nahi ho paya to rishi aur meri aṭooṭ aur anmol dosti hamesha hamesha ke liye ṭooṭ jayega. Dopahar baad result aane ka waqt tay hua tha aur main subah se bina kuchh khaye pie bas bechain sa phir raha tha dadi khana lekar mere pichhe pichhe ghoomta raha baar baar rokkar baiṭha diya phir khane ko kahne lagi magar mera man na khane ko karta na hi baiṭhne ko kar raha tha. Kuchh pal baiṭh jata phir uṭhakar kabhi ghar se bahar to kabhi ghar ke andar bas yahi kar raha tha.
Waqt kitna hua time kya hoon raha hain? Iska bhi mujhe dhyaan na raha. Achanak rishi ghar aaya. Uske chehre ka bhaav darsha raha tha kuchh to anhoni hua hain. Jiske baare me sochkar mere andar uthal puthal mach gaya tha. Nirasha mere andar ghar karne lag gaya isliye main jaldi se uske paas pahuncha aur bola... Rishi toone result dekha hain. Jaldi se bata na result me kya aaya main paas hua ki nahi hamari dosti aṭooṭ rahega ki aaj hi ṭooṭ jayega.
Rriṣi... Dekha to hain (phir munh laṭka liya aur rook rook kar aage bola) too na, raghav too na…..
Usakaa munh laṭka hua dekhkar aur aṭak aṭak kar bolne se mere man me shnka hone lag gaya ki is baar pakka meri mehnat rang nahi laya aur aaj ke baad hamari dosti jo aaj tak aṭooṭ thi vo hamesha hamesha ke liye ṭooṭ jaayega isliye main roovasa hokar bola...rishi bol na kya hua tera laṭka hua munh aur yoon aṭak aṭak kar bolna mujhe agaah kar raha hain ki mera kiya wada ṭooṭ chuka hain aagar aisa hua to kya too sach me mujhse dosti tod dega bata na (main kuchh der rooka lekin rishi kuchh nahi bola tab main phir se bola) kya hua rishi too chup kyu hain bol na, too bolta kyu nahi!
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Bhag - 7
Mere poochhane par bhi rishi kuchh nahi bola vaise hi munh laṭkaye khaḍa raha. Rishi ka is kadar chuppi sad lena mere andar panpi shnka ko yakin me badal diya. Rishi aur meri dosti ṭooṭne ki baat mere jehan me aate hi main fooṭfooṭ kar ro diya. Rona kaise na aata ek vahi to tha jisne mujhe bhaṭke huye rah se wapas laya dosti ki kasam dekar asambhav sa kaam jo shayad hi kabhi main sambhav kar pata use sambhav karwaya aur aaj ek pal me hamari anmol dosti ṭooṭne ke kagar par aa gayi. Magar rishi bhi ek number ka nauṭnki baaj nikla.
Mujhe rota hua dekhkar khilkhilakar hans diya phir mujhse lipatkar bola... Are too ro kyu raha hain hamari anmol dosti nahi ṭooṭa na tera mujhse kiya wada ṭooṭa hain. Too paas hoon gaya aur mujhse bhi jyaada numbars se paas hua hai sirf paas hi nahi hua balki scholarship pane ki sabhi sharton ko bhi pura kiya.
Uski ye baten aur khushi ne mujhe jatla diya, hamari anmol dosti aṭooṭ hi raha. Kuchh pal uske gale laga raha phir usse alag hokar uske peṭ me mukka marte huye bola...Bata toone itna nauṭnki kyu kiya teri nauṭnki ne meri jaan halak me haṭka diya tha.
Rishi bas muskurata hua mujhe dekha aur phir se mere gale lag gaya. Usse alag hokar dadi se khushi khushi gale mila phir rishi bola... Chal yaar hamari dosti na ṭooṭne ki khushi manate hain.
Itna bolte hi ham dono ghar se bahar ki or chal diya tab dadi rokte huye boli... Rishi beṭa munna ne subah se ann ka ek dana nahi khaya pahle use kuchh kha to lene de.
Rishi... Amma mere dost ne kuchh nahi khaya to maine bhi kaun sa khaya hain. Maan ne aaj ham dono ke liye special taiyari kar rakha hain. Main ise ghar le ja raha hoon baad me sahi salamat aapke pote ko aapke paas lauṭa jaunga.
Itna bolkar ham dono khilkhilati huye chal diye. Sabse pahle apne apne paise se miṭhai liya aur ek doosre ke paas hone ki baat logo ko batate huye miṭhai banṭi phir rishi ke ghar ko chal diya. Amma aur seṭh ji ne ham dono ka bade garm joshi se swagat kiya aur khana paroskar amma ne ham dono ko ek saath biṭhakar khaud se khilaya. Khana peena hone ke baad main ghar pnhucha to dadi mujhe khaaṭ par biṭhakar mere paas baiṭh gayi aur boli…munna main bahut dino se tujhse kuchh kehna chahti thi par himmat juṭa nahi payi lekin aaj badi mushkil se himmat juṭa payi hoon.
Itna bolkar dadi chup hoon gayi aur main dimaagi ghoda daudne lag gaya ki aisi kaun si baat hain jise kahne ke liye dadi kai dinon se himmat juṭa rahi thi. Magar juṭa nahi paye, sochte sochte ekaek mere lavon par hansi chha gaya aur main dadi se bola... Yahi na, aap rishi ke kahne par hi mujhe tane diya karti thi.
Main itna bolkar chup hoon gaya aur mand mand muskaan lavon par liye dadi ko dekhne lag gaya. Dadi ki rookhi aankhen jo beṭe aur bahu ki ek saath maut ke baad ro ro kar sukh chuka tha. Meri bate sunte hi kuchh boonde neer ka baha diya. Jise pochhte huye main bolaa... Dadi aap ro kyu rahi hoon aap ne aur rishi ne jo kuchh bhi kiya mere bhale ke liye kiya tha aagar aap dono aisa nahi karte to shayad main aaj rasta bhaṭakkar kisi or disha me nikal chuka hota. Ab aap chup kare meri achchhi dadi rote huye bhaddi dikhti hain.
Ant me majakiya lahaje me bolne se bhi fayada nahi hua balki dadi mujhse lipaṭkar tez lay me rone lag gayi. Ek pal me main samajh gaya. Mujhe tane dete waqt unko jitni takleef hua tha. Use aaj mujhse lipaṭkar aansoo bahakar kam kar rahi hain. Isliye maine unhe kuchh der tak rone diya phir khud se alag kar unke na maatr ke bahte huye aansuo ko pochhkar bola...Dadi ab bas bhi kijiye aur kitna roengi, pahle hi aap bahut ro chuke ho ab or nahi.
Ek do baar mana karne ke baad dadi ka rona band hua. Rona band hote hi, kab jana kaise jana sawal dagane shuroo kar diya. Mujhe laga jab poochh hi rahi hain to bata dena hi ṭheek hoga. Isliye maine us din kaise jana sab bata diya. Sabhi bate batane ke baad main dadi se bola...Dadi aap kabhi bhi rishi ko ye na kahna ki mujhe pata chal chuka hai ki uske khane par hi aap mujhe tane diya karti thi. Main sahi samay dekhkar use bhi bata doonga.
Dadi mera kahna maan nahi rahi thi. Isliye mujhe unhe tarah tarah ke tark aur vasta dekar chup karvana pada. Aise hi ghoomate firte aur mauj masti karte huye waqt beet gaya aur vo waqt bhi aa gaya jab ham dono dost ko apne apne manjil ki or chalna tha. Rishi doctor ki paḍhai karne Delhi chala gaya aur main business management ki paḍhai karne Mumbai aa gaya.
Phir se ham dono doston men jang chhid gaya. Jee jaan se ham paḍhai karne lag gaye. Shuru shuru me man nahi lagta tha kyonki mera dost mere paas nahi tha magar dheere dheere aadat ban gaya. Jab jab college me kai dinon ki chhuṭṭi padti tab tab main aur rishi ek dusre se milne gaanv pahunch jate the. Aise hi waqt bitane lag gaya aur paḍhai ka result bhi ummeed se behtar aane laga.
Ek varṣ ka samay or sheṣh tha usi waqt college ki taraf se plesamenṭ ke liye badi badi companies ko bulaya gaya. Plesamenṭ ki sabhi karavai poori hone ke baad ek company ko meri certificate aur dusri jaroori ṭesṭ lene ke baad mujhse prabhavit hokar achchhi tankha ki peshagi karke mujhe unki company join karne ki peshkash kar diya.
Mujhe or chahiye hi kiya tha. Bina bhaga daudi ke achchhi tankha ke saath naukri mil raha tha to maine bhi haan kar diya. Ye baat maine phone karke rishi, dadi aur seṭh jee ko bata diya sabhi bahut khush huye. Magar rishi khush hone ke saath saath wada karavane se baaj nahi aaya use ḍaar tha kahi main naukari milne ke karaṇ laparvahi na karne lag jaoon.
Khair sab kuchh achchha raha achchhe numbaro se paas hua. Ab mujhe bas company join karna tha. Main chahta tha naukari join karne se pehle ek baar rishi aur baaki sabse mil aaoon isliye rishi ko phone karke gaon jane ki baat kaha to rishi ne us waqt gaon ane ko mana kar diya uska kahna tha ki vo abhi gaon nahi aa sakta isliye jab tak vo na kahe main gaon na jaoon, main maan nahi raha tha to ek baar phir se hamari dosti ki duhai aur kasam dekar mujhe uski baat manne par majbur kar diya.
Agale din se main naukari join kar liya rahne ke liye ek apartment me company ki taraf se ek flat mila tha to rahne ki samasya bhi hal ho gaya rahi baat khana banane ki vo koi badi baat nahi thi dadi ke tanon ne mujhe pehle se hi khana banana sikha chuka tha. Din par din beetne laga main baar baar rishi se gaon jane ki baat poochhta tha vo har baar mana kar deta tha. Iss beech lagbhag chha saat mahine beet gaya. Ek din achanak rishi mumbai aa pnhucha uska yoon achanak mumbai aana saath me dadi ko bhi lekar aana mujhe hairan kar diya. Magar hairani se jyaada main khush tha kyonki bahut dinon baad main apne dost se mil raha tha.
Donon ko flat pe lekar gaya. Flat dekhkar rishi se jyaada dadi khush hui. Unka khush hona bhi jayaj tha. Poori jindgi unhone jhopdi me beeta diya aur umr ke akhari padav par unhe itne bade flat me rahne ko mil raha tha. Beete chha mahine se maine ek bhi din chhuṭṭi nahi liya tha to chhuṭṭi ki arji ḍalte hi chhuṭṭi mil gayi.
Ek hafte ki chhuṭṭi liya tha ye pura hafta dost aur dadi ke saath bitaya. Inhi dinon mujhe laga rishi khush to hain magar kisi baat ko lekar andar hi andar uljha hua hain. Agar koi uljhan hain to dost hone ke naate use suljhana mera pharz banta hain. Isliye uske ulaljhan ka karaṇ janna chaha, tab rishi kuchh na batakar saaf mukar gaya. Kai baar poochha lekin jawab ek hee mila "kuchh nahi main bilkul ṭheek hoon" baar baar mana karne par main dadi se bhi poochha unhone bhi kuchh nahi bataya tab mujhe laga shaayad mera bharm hoga islye maine bhi ye sochkar ṭal diya agar koi baat hota to rishi mujhe bata deta.
Ek hafte ka waqt beet gaya aur rishi ke lauṭne ka waqt bhi aa gaya. Jis din rishi wapas lauṭ raha tha us din rishi ne kuchh aisa kaha jise sunkar main achambhit hoon gaya.
Shalini... Aisa kya kaha ki tum achambhit hoon gaye.
Shalini ne meri baton ko beech me kaṭkar poochha to maine jab dete hue bola... Usne kaha raghav too aaj ke baad tab tak gaon nahi aayega jab tak too apne dam par kuchh kar nahi leta.
Uski bate sunte hai mujhe laga kisi ne mere pairon tale se jameen hi kheench liya hoon aur mujhe hava me latka diya hoon. Kuchh waqt laga mujhe khud ko sambhalne me, khud ko sambhalkar main bola...rishi too kya kah raha hain kuchh soch samajhkar kah raha hain ya yoon hi hava me teer chala raha hain. Kya tujhe lagta hai? Maine apne dam par kuchh bhi nahi kiya.
Rishi…raghav mere dost too aaj jis mukam pe hai wahan tak too sirf apne dam par hain magar gaon wale ye thodi maan rahe hai unka kahna hain. Too aaj jis mukam par hai yahan tak sirf aur sirf mere vajah se pnhucha hain.
"vo log kah rahe hai to ṭheek hi kah rahe hain kahi na kahi unka kahna bhi ṭheek hain kyonki main aaj jahan par hoon yahan tak pahunchne me tera haath sabse jyaada raha."
Rishi... Chalo achchha hua jo too ye baat man gaya. Ab sun main chahta hoon too yahan se aage ka safar tab tak akela tay kar jab tak too or achchhi mukam tak nahi pahunch jata tab tak na tu mujhse milne ki jidd karega na hi gaon aaega.
"dekh rishi maine teri har baat mana tujhse kiya hua har ek wada pura kiya magar aaj too jo kah raha hai ye main katai nahi manne wala."
Rishi... Tujhe manna to hoga tujhe hamari dosti ka vasta ab too chahe to ye vasta tod de. Aagar toone vasta thoda to hamesha hamesha ke liye hamari anmol dosti khatm hoon jayega. Ab faisla tujhe lena hain. Dosti ka vasta manna hain ya phir hamesha hamesha ke liye apne dost ko khona hain.
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Bhag - 8 (end)
Hamari dosti na ṭooṭe uske liye na jane kitni mehnat kiya magar haath kya laga ek baar phir se dosti ṭooṭne ki baat beech me aa gayi. Isliye majabur hokar mujhe uska kaha manna pada. Us din ham ek dusre se lipaṭ kar bahut roye kyonki ham dono achchhe se jante the. Ab hamari mulakat me bahut waqt lagane wala hai kitna waqt lagega ye na main janta tha na hi rishi, agar koi janta tha to vo hai samay chakr, ek baar phir se meri Jung shuru ho gayi. Is baar ki jung bahut alag tha. Is baar ki jung me mera dost mere saath nahi tha. Vo din aur aaj ka din is beech hamari mulakat nahi hua. Sirf phone par baat karke khud ko tasalli de liya karte the. Vo bhi lagabhag do saal baad band hoon gaya jab bhi phone karta engeg hi ata main is ummeed me call karta kabhi to baat hoon jayega lekin har baar khali haath hi raha. Man karta tha. gaon jakar mil aata hoon magar uska diya wasta mere kadam ko rok leta tha.
Kisi tarh khud ko samjha bhuja kar rakhta raha aur apne kaam par dhyaan deta raha. Lagabhag chhaa saal tak naukari kiya jisse achchhi khasi daulat kama liya jis karaṇ samaj me mera achchha rutba ban gaya. Tab main rishi se milne gaon gaya. Vahan jakar dekha rishi ka ghar khali pada hua tha. Logon se pata kiya par un logo ne rishi ke bare me kuchh bhi batane se mana kar diya. Main baar baar jata raha magar har baar khali haath lauṭa. Baar baar aane jane se mujhe itna to pata chal gaya tha ki rishi ne apna ghar aur zameen kisi ko becha nahi yaha jankar mujhe laga main baar baar aata raha to kabhi na kabhi rishi se mulakat hoon jayega. Is beech meri mulakat tumse hua mel jol bada jo dheere dheere pyaar me badal gaya aur ek waqt baad ham dono ne shaadi kar liya. Dadi ka bhi jane ka samay hoon gaya tha.
Unhone mera haath tumhe sofkar is dhara se vida le liya. Shaadi ke baad tumhare kahne par maine khud ka business shuru kiya. Aaj mere paas sab kuchh hai agar kuchh nahi hain to vo hai mera dost rishi, na jane rishi kab milega. Milega ya nahi main nahi janta....
Shalini... Milega kyo nahi, milega jaroor milega is baar ham dono mila
kar ḍhoonḍhenge.
"kaha ḍhoonḍhoon, main janta hi nahi ki vo kaha hain kis haal me hain."
shalini... Kahi se to shuruvaat karna hoga achchha ye batao gaon kitne waqt se nahi gaye.
"yahi koi chaar panch saal hoon gaya."
shalini... Chalo phir ham tumhare dost ko ḍhoonḍhne ki shuruvat gaon se hi karte hain.
"vahan se, magar rishi to vahan hain nahi."
shalini... Kya pata vo gaon me hi hoon kyonki tum pichhle chaar paanch saal se gaon nahi gaye. Aagar rishi bhai sahab nahi mile to kya hua isi bahane main tumhara gaon hi ghoom loongi.
Itna kahkar shalini muskura diya. Mujhe laga uske muskurane ki vajah kuchh aur hi hain magar maine jyaada dhyaan nahi diya. Do teen din baad gaon jane ka samay tay hua. Niyat din ko main, shalini aur parth gaon ke liye chal diye. Main ja to raha tha magar baar baar ye khyaal mere man me aa raha tha ki is baar phir se mujhe khali haath lauṭna padega.
Kya hoga ye to samay hi bata sakta hain. Lamba safar tay karke ham gaon pahunch gaye. Gaon ki dasha ab pahle jaisa nahin raha in chaar paanch saalon me gaon bahut badal gaya. Raste pahle se bahut behtar hoon gaya.
Pahle ekka dukka, pakka makan dekhne ko milta tha ab vaha pratyek ghar pakka makan ban chuka tha. Inhi najaron ka luft lete hue ham teenon ja rahe the ki achanak gaon ke chaupal par mujhe ek jana pahchanaa chehara dikha, car ko rokkar us shaksh ko dhyaan se dekha to mujhe use pahchane me jayaada waqt nahi laga main turant hi car se nikla aur us or bad gaya. Paas jakar "rishi" bas uska naam bola aur usse lipaṭ gaya. "kaun ho bhai" bas itna hi rishi bol paya uske baad uska munh bhi band hoon gaya phir vo bhi mujhse lipaṭ gaya.
Kuchh waqt tak ham dono ek dusre se lipṭe rahe phir alag hokar main bola...rishi kaha chala gaya tha yaar.
Rishi...Pahle ghar chal phir tere sabhi sawalo ka jawab deta hoon. Chal ja apni car me baiṭh aur mere pichhe pichhe chal de.
Itna bolte hi rishi bagal me khadi apne car me baiṭh gaya aur main bhi apna car lekar uske pichhe pichhe chal diya.
Jab ham rishi ke ghar pahunche to uska ghar pehle se bilkul badal hua tha ek aalishan koṭhi najar aa raha tha. Mere dost ne mere saath saath khud bhi bahut achchhi tarakki kar liya tha ye dekh'kar mere dil ko bahut shakun mila.
Kuchh hi waqt me ham us aalishaan koṭhi ke andar the. "sakṣhi kaha hoon dekho kaun aaya hain."
itna bolkar rishi ne kisi mahila ko aawaz diya. Turnt pratiuttar me "jee abhi aayi" ki aawaz sunayi diya. Ek ya do minaṭ ke antaral par ek mahila seeḍhi se utarkar neeche aane lagi. Unko dekhte hi "ye to shalini ki saheli hain." bas itna hi kaha aur palaṭ'kar dekha to shalini parth ko god me uṭhaye muskura rahi thi.
Main achambhit sa shailini ko dekhta raha tab shalini muskurate hue boli... Kya hua pahachan nahi paye, kitni baar usse mil chuke hoon phir bhi bhul gaye.
"sakṣhi ko bhula nahi pehchanta hoon bas tum mujhe itna bata do jab tum janti thi sakṣhi ki shaadi rishi se hoon raha hain to tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi."
vo kya batayegi (sakṣhi paas aate hue boli) use thodi na pata tha tum dono dost hoon vo to shaadi me aane ke baad hi use pata chala rishi aur tum, dono bahut gahre dost hoon. Nimntraṇ to tumhen bhi diya tha aagar us waqt aa jate to nishchit hi do saal pahle hi tumhen tumhara dost mil chuka hota. Jisse milne ke liye kab se tadap rahe hoon.
Darasal sakṣhi ki shaadi ke waqt sakṣhi ne ham dono ko nimntraṇ diya tha magar mujhe business ke silsile me kuchh jaroori kaam tha isliye main nahi aa paya tha, shalini aur parth ko bhej diya tha lekin jab sakṣhi ne kaha shalini shaadi me aakar hi rishi se mila tha. Tab mere mastisk me khalbali mach gaya ki shalini na kabhi rishi se mila na hi kabhi maine use rishi ke baare me bataya to phir shalini rishi ko pehchana kaise, in baaton par mansik khichatani karne ke baad jab koi nateeja nahi nikala to main bola...Shalini tum mujhe bas itna bata do tum rishi ko kaise pahchana jabki maine tumhe na kabhi rishi se milvaya na kabhi rishi ke bare me bataya.
Shalini... Tum study room me rishi bhai sahab ki tasveer dekhkar aasu bahate rahoge aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chalega. darasal hua ye tha ki ek din tum daftar se jaldi ghar aa gaye aur seedha study room me chale gaye main tumse chaay ko poochhne aa rahi thi ki dekha tum ek purani dairy nikal rahe hoon mere aawaz dete hi tumne vo dairy wapas vahi rakh diya jaha se nikala tha phir study room se bahar aa gaye. Kuchh din baad main study room ki safai kar rahi thi tab vo dairy mere haath lag gayi aisa nahi ki us din se pehle kabhi vo dairy maine nahi dekha, kai baar dekha magar na jane us din mujhe kiya sooja ki main us dairy ko kholkar dekha lekin uska har ek panna kora tha. Main panna palaṭta gaya palaṭta gaya tab kahin jake beech ke pannon me mujhe tum dono ki tasveer dikha tumhe dekhkar main pehchaan gayi magar dusre shaksh ko pahchaan nahi payi. kaise pehchanta us din se pehle maine kabhi dekha hai nahi tha. Maine socha tumse poochhoonga, ye shaksh kaun hain par sahi waqt nahi mila isi beech sakṣhi ki shadi me aa gayi. Sakṣhi bhi badi chhupi rustam nikali meri prem kahani ki pal pal khabar leti rahi lekin apni chhupa gayi. Jab shadi me aayi tab isse ladke ke baare me poochha tab isne tumhare dost ki tasveer dikhaya aur bataya kaise ek yaatra ke dauran dono ek dusre se mile aur inki prem kahani chal padi. Jab isne mujhe rishi bhaii sahab ki tasveer dikhaya tab mujhe vo tasveer jana pehchana laga dimaag par jor diya tab samajh aaya ye tumhare paas rakhi tasveer me maujud dusre shaksh ki tasveer hain. Tab ye baat maine sakṣhi ko bataya isne turant rishi bhai saahab ko tumhari ek photo bheja phir phone karke poochha tab unhone tum dono ki dosti ka ek ek kissa bata diya aur shadi wale din inse mil bhi liya phir…..
Main shalini ko beech me rokar bola... Shalini jab tum rishi se mil chuki thi tab mujhe kyu nahi bataya.
Shalini... Are batane to do tum dono ki milne ki baat inse kahi to na jane kyu ye us waqt manakar diya saath hi tumhari kasam dekar ye kaha ki main tumse ye na kahu ki main tumhare dost ko janati hoon aur meri saheli sakṣhi ka pati hain. Uske baad main mumbai lauṭ aayi. Vahan main tum par nazar rakhne lag gayi isi dauran mujhe tumhare andar tumhare dost se milne ki tadap dikha tum khulkar rona chahte the par nahi ro pate the. Ye dekhkar main rishi bhai sahab ko sab bata diya lekin ye phir bhi nahi milna chahte the. Mujhe in par bahut gussa aaya inka gussa us din tum par nikala main jaan boojh kar tumhe tane diya. Yakeen manna tumhe tane dete waqt mujh par kya beet rahi thi main hai janti hoon mere aankhon se aasu rook nahi rahe the. Raghav us din ke liye mujhe maaf kar dena.
Itna bolkar shalini rook gayi aur fooṭ fooṭ kar rone lagi. Main uske paas gaya samajha bujha kar use chaap karvaya phir rishi ki aur palaṭ kar bola... Rishi toone kya jeevan bhar mujhe tane sunvane ka ṭheka le rakha hain. Pahle dadi se tane sunvaya phir shalini se tane sunvaya, bhai too saaf saaf bata de or kitne taane sunbayega.
Khulasa karte hi rishi chauk gaya aur ek ṭak mujhe dekhne lag gaya. Tab main bola... Aise kya dekh raha hain mujhe bahut pahle hi pata chal gaya tha ki mujhe jimmedari ka ahsas karavane ke liye toone hi dadi se kaha tha ki…..
Maine bas itna hi kaha tha ki rishi mere paas aaya aur mere gale se lagkar bola... Mujhe maaf kar de yaar!
"too kyu mafi mang raha hain toone jo bhi kiya mere bhale ke liye hi kiya tha. Too aagar vaisa na karta to mujhe kabhi jimmedari ka ahsas hi nahi hota. Tere hi karaṇ aaj main farsh se arsh tak pahuch paya. Us baat ke liye tujhe maaf kar diya. Magar toone ab jo kya, kyu kiya, too mujhse milna kyu nahi chahta tha? Kyu tere najar me hamari anmol dosti be-mol hoon gaya? Ye nahi bataya to kah deta hoon tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga."
kuchh der ki chuppi chhaya raha phir rishi bola... Be-mol nahi re aaj bhi hamari dosti anmol hain lekin too hi bata main tujhse kaise milta jabaki main ye janta tha. Gaon wale hamare bare me bate bana rahe hain. Aisa jhooṭh bola tha. Jab tujhe sachchai pata chalta to main tujhe kya jawab deta magar too ye na samajhna ki maine tujhse bina karaṇ jhooṭh kaha tha uska bhi ek karaṇ hain.
"Rishi too mujhse jhooṭh kyu bola bata jaldi bata."
Rishi... Ye baat us waqt ki hain jab teri business management aur mere doctor ki paḍhai pura hone men sirf ek mahine ka waqt rah gaya tha us waqt toone mujhe phone karke ek mahine baad gaon aane ko kaha tha maine bhi haami bhar diya tha magar uske kuchh hi din baad maan babuji mujhse milne Delhi aa rahe the lekin mujh tak pahunch hi nahi paye raste me ek durghaṭna ka shikar hoon gaye aur is duniya me mujhe akela chhod gaye.
Itna sunte hi main kya pratikriya doon bhul chuka tha aur udhar rishi sirf aasu baha raha tha tab sakṣhi ne jakar rishi ko sambhala aasu to mere bhi bah rahe the kyonki mujhe afasos hoon raha tha mere maan baap nahi the. jab rishi aur meri dosti gahrane laga tab seṭh jee aur amma hi mujhe rishi ki tarah maan baap ka pyaar dete the aur main unka antim darshan bhi nahi kar paya kuchh waqt tak main aasu bahata raha phir bola... Rishi jab amma babuji durghaṭna me gujar gaye tab toone mujhe soochna kyu nahi diya bata toone aisa kyon kiya?
Rishi... Main janta tha jis din tujhe pata chalega us din tu mujhse ye sawal jaroor poochhega. To sun, bina maan baap ke jeene ka dard kya hota hain tujhse behtar shaayad hi koi or janta hoga main yahaan bhi janta tha tujhe pata chalte hi too sab kuchh chhod chhadkar gaon chala aaega aur mujhe akela chhodkar kabhi nahi jayega. Too wapas nahi gaya to tera ujjawal bhaviṣy jo bahen failaye intejaar kar raha tha vo tujhse bahut door chala jata. Tere ujjawal bhaviṣy ko banane ke liye hamari dosti todne ki dhamaki de dekar na jane tujhse kitna mehnat karvaya main nahi chahta tha tera behtar ujjval bhaviṣy jo mere sach kahne par tujhse door bhaag jaye, jise wapas pane me tujhe na jane kitni aur mehnat karna padta sirf isliye maine tujhe gaon aane se mana kar diya. Amma ko bhi mana liya, vo kabhi tujhse sach na bole, main yahaan bhi janta tha kabhi na kabhi too gaon aane ki zid karega aur main tujhe jyaada din rok nahi paunga isliye tere naukri join karne ke chha mahine baad amma ko lekar tere paas gaya. Too bhi kamal ka nikla mere khushnuma chehre ke pichhe ki uljhan ko samajh gaya aur baar baar mere uljhan ka karaṇ poochhane lag gaya. Main tujhe ṭalta raha. Mera man to tha ki kuchh din or tere saath bitaun lekin mujhe ḍaar tha kahi tere baar baar poochhne par main tujhe bata na doon isliye sirf ek hafta ruk'kar tujhse vo jhooṭh aur dosti ka vasta dekar wapas aa gaya. Wapas aa to gaya tha magar main is baat se anjaan bhi nahi tha ki too mere diye dosti ke, wasta ke chalte jee tod mehnat karke khud ko siddh karke kabhi na kabhi wapas jaroor aayega. Isliye maine socha tha jameen jaydad bechakar kahi aur chala jaoon phir gaon walo ke bare me sochkar jameen jaydaad unko bnṭai par de diya aur ye bhi bata diya ki jab bhi too gaon aae mere bare me ya maan babuji ke maut ke bare me kuchh na bataye phir main ye gaon chhod kar delhi chala gaya. Babuji ke maut ke karan final exam nahi de paya tha. Isliye mujhe ek saal aur doctor ki paḍhai karne ke baad final exam dena pada phir practice karne ke liye Jaipur chala gaya. Main vahaan chain se kabhi rah hi nahi paya baar baar tujhse milne ka dil karta rahta tha. Isliye main kai baar tujhse milne mumbai aaya lekin himmat juṭakar kabhi tujhse mil hi nahi paya magar kismat ko shayad kuchh aur hi manzoor tha mumbai aane jaane ke dauran meri mulakat sakṣhi se hua. Hamari mulakate baḍhti gayi aur kab pyaar me badal gaya main samajh hi nahi paya phir aayi shaadi ki bari shaadi se ek din pahle hi mujhe pata chala sakṣhi aur shalini bhabhi dono saheli hain saath hi ye bhi pata chala shalini bhabhi aur too pati patni hain. Yakeen maan mujhe shaadi se kuchh din pahle pata chalta to main shaadi todkar sakṣhi se kahi door chala jata lekin us din mujhe pata chala main ab aur nahi bhaag sakta ek na ek din mujhe tera samana karna hi hoga aur sari sachchai tujhe batana hoga. Isliye shaadi ke kuchh mahine baad ham gaon chale aaye. Ham gaon aa gaye hain ye baat shalini bhabhi ko na bataye aisa sakṣhi se kaha tha. Lekin sakṣhi ne shalini bhabhi ko bina mere pata chale bata diya aur shalini bhabhi tujhe lekar gaon chali aayi.
Rishi jaise jaise batata ja raha tha. Shuru shuru me mujhe gussa aa raha tha. Man kar raha tha use pakdkar ḍhang se kooṭ doon magar kisi tarah khud par kaabu rakh liya aur jaise jaise aage batata ja raha tha mera gussa hairani men badalta ja raha tha phir jab usne kaha ki shaadi se kuchh din pahle aagar use shalini ke baare me pata chalta tab rishi shaadi tod deta. uski inn bate ko sunkar main samajh gaya ki mera jigri yaar kis kadar sharminda hain sirf ek baat chupane ke liye ek aisa jhooṭh bola jo kabhi sach tha hi nahi aur us jhooṭh ko chupane ke liye mujhse bhagta raha .
Mujhse door pahle se hi tha magar jab mujhe pata chala vo us jhooṭh ko chupane ke liye apni shaadi tak ko todne ke liye razi tha. Isliye usse koi aur sawaal jawaab karna sahi nahi samajha jo hona tha hoon chuka ant me khushi is baat ki mili mera jigri dost mujhe wapas mil gaya. Hamari anmol dosti ek baar phir se ṭooṭte ṭooṭte bach gayi jo lagbhag ṭooṭne ke kagar par pahunch chuka tha.
Mai kuch kadam aage badkar rishi ko gale se laga liya aur jo gile sikbe the unhe aansuo ke saath bah jane diya.
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