Advice Needed guys advice needed about my story, help !

[Indian Princess]

 

[Spiegel]

Didi nahi bolne kaa usko

badi hai isliye didi bola hai bhosdu

 

[Indian Princess]

badi hai isliye didi bola hai bhosdu

Ju incest reader or writer nahi ho to didi bula sakte ho I dont mind

 

[Spiegel]

Ju incest reader or writer nahi ho to didi bula sakte ho I dont mind

well i dont have fantasies about 15 and 20 inches so you are a pretty safe

 

[Rocky.]

Didi nahi bolne kaa usko

Kyun.. didi word le tumhara copy right hai kya?

 

[Mr. BERLIN]

Didi nahi bolne kaa usko

Har bar apni fajihat kyu krwata hai be just grow up dude
Sari padi lakdi ju ko hi leni hoti hai kya

 

[Mr. BERLIN]

Kyun.. didi word le tumhara copy right hai kya?

Waise didi se yaad aaya aajkal Didi bolne ka trend jyada chal rela hai social site pr kya chakkar hai be

 

[Rocky.]

Waise didi se yaad aaya aajkal Didi bolne ka trend jyada chal rela hai social site pr kya chakkar hai be

Udhar to mostly log troll karne ke liye bolte h. Jaise pahle aunty bolte the.

Vaise, genuinely thoda issue to hota h, hindi walo ke sath. Shrimati bol na sakte sabko. Mahodaya thoda bada ho jata h aur atpata bhi. Naam lene par lagta h, ki samne wala bada na ho.

 

[DREAMBOY40]

Ju incest reader or writer nahi ho to didi bula sakte ho I dont mind

Hiii sister

 

[DREAMBOY40]

so guys me yaha pe ek story likh raha hun, jisne padhi hogi unko pata hoga mene story hiatus pe rakhi hai kuch time se jo ke kuch personal reason and thoda mental health pe dhayan dena ka socha tha isliye but ab me story firse suru karna chahta hun jo ke mene try bhi kia but likh nahi pa raha hun kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha kya karu, mene story aese end tak soch rakhi hai so story ke progress ka problem nahi hai par characters ka problem ho raha hai. in sort characters me ghush hi nahi pa raha or nahi unke hisab se dialogue likh pa raha hun, mene story firse padhne ka bhi socha sayad usse characters me ghus pavu but mene itna bekar tarike se likha hai sab ki kuch updates se jyada padh hi nahi paya so jiske sath pehle aesa kuch hua ho to help kardo ya kuch tips de do aage kya karu.

aur dusri baat yaha pe koi editor hai kya jo story ko thoda acche se likh paye ya update ko edit kar paye kyun ke me khud hi apne updates nahi padh pa raha hun bakiyon ke liye muskil hi hota hoga so yaha pe koi hai to dm karna ya comment karna, paid hoga fir bhi chalega bas accha

Well mai koi acha aur experience writter nhi hu
Yaha to kuch v chhap do usme sexual words h to uske liye tumko comment mil jayenge.
Phle muth**l log hilayenge fr 10 min bad nice update likh kar chale jayenge .


Well moral of the point is that it's only depend on your choice and idea that why should you have to continue this story.
Mai apni story apne hawas se bhari dimag ko khali krne k liye likhta hu . Tu soch le bhai ki tu Kyu likh raha h


Price less advice - NEVER SET YOUR GOAL WITH DEPENDING ON OTHERS THOUGHT OR ADVICE. KEEP SMILE WRITE AND ENJOY LIFE .