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so guys me yaha pe ek story likh raha hun, jisne padhi hogi unko pata hoga mene story hiatus pe rakhi hai kuch time se jo ke kuch personal reason and thoda mental health pe dhayan dena ka socha tha isliye but ab me story firse suru karna chahta hun jo ke mene try bhi kia but likh nahi pa raha hun kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha kya karu, mene story aese end tak soch rakhi hai so story ke progress ka problem nahi hai par characters ka problem ho raha hai. in sort characters me ghush hi nahi pa raha or nahi unke hisab se dialogue likh pa raha hun, mene story firse padhne ka bhi socha sayad usse characters me ghus pavu but mene itna bekar tarike se likha hai sab ki kuch updates se jyada padh hi nahi paya so jiske sath pehle aesa kuch hua ho to help kardo ya kuch tips de do aage kya karu.
aur dusri baat yaha pe koi editor hai kya jo story ko thoda acche se likh paye ya update ko edit kar paye kyun ke me khud hi apne updates nahi padh pa raha hun bakiyon ke liye muskil hi hota hoga so yaha pe koi hai to dm karna ya comment karna, paid hoga fir bhi chalega bas accha hona chahiye.
aur dusri baat yaha pe koi editor hai kya jo story ko thoda acche se likh paye ya update ko edit kar paye kyun ke me khud hi apne updates nahi padh pa raha hun bakiyon ke liye muskil hi hota hoga so yaha pe koi hai to dm karna ya comment karna, paid hoga fir bhi chalega bas accha hona chahiye.