Advice Needed guys advice needed about my story, help !

[Spiegel]

so guys me yaha pe ek story likh raha hun, jisne padhi hogi unko pata hoga mene story hiatus pe rakhi hai kuch time se jo ke kuch personal reason and thoda mental health pe dhayan dena ka socha tha isliye but ab me story firse suru karna chahta hun jo ke mene try bhi kia but likh nahi pa raha hun kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha kya karu, mene story aese end tak soch rakhi hai so story ke progress ka problem nahi hai par characters ka problem ho raha hai. in sort characters me ghush hi nahi pa raha or nahi unke hisab se dialogue likh pa raha hun, mene story firse padhne ka bhi socha sayad usse characters me ghus pavu but mene itna bekar tarike se likha hai sab ki kuch updates se jyada padh hi nahi paya so jiske sath pehle aesa kuch hua ho to help kardo ya kuch tips de do aage kya karu.

aur dusri baat yaha pe koi editor hai kya jo story ko thoda acche se likh paye ya update ko edit kar paye kyun ke me khud hi apne updates nahi padh pa raha hun bakiyon ke liye muskil hi hota hoga so yaha pe koi hai to dm karna ya comment karna, paid hoga fir bhi chalega bas accha hona chahiye.

 

[Werewolf]

so guys me yaha pe ek story likh raha hun, jisne padhi hogi unko pata hoga mene story hiatus pe rakhi hai kuch time se jo ke kuch personal reason and thoda mental health pe dhayan dena ka socha tha isliye but ab me story firse suru karna chahta hun jo ke mene try bhi kia but likh nahi pa raha hun kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha kya karu, mene story aese end tak soch rakhi hai so story ke progress ka problem nahi hai par characters ka problem ho raha hai. in sort characters me ghush hi nahi pa raha or nahi unke hisab se dialogue likh pa raha hun, mene story firse padhne ka bhi socha sayad usse characters me ghus pavu but mene itna bekar tarike se likha hai sab ki kuch updates se jyada padh hi nahi paya so jiske sath pehle aesa kuch hua ho to help kardo ya kuch tips de do aage kya karu.

aur dusri baat yaha pe koi editor hai kya jo story ko thoda acche se likh paye ya update ko edit kar paye kyun ke me khud hi apne updates nahi padh pa raha hun bakiyon ke liye muskil hi hota hoga so yaha pe koi hai to dm karna ya comment karna, paid hoga fir bhi chalega bas accha hona chahiye.

Aisa hota hai. Writer ko apni kahani hamesha boring lagti hai. Mein jab likhta hu toh khud sochta hu kabhi ki yaar ye pasand aayega bhi ya nahi logo ko but jab update deta hu toh logo ki pratikriya dekh ke dang reh jaata hu.

Yadi characters me nahi ghus paa rahe ho, toh apne characters ko sabse pehle koi aur characters se relate karo. Maan lo main character kisi film ke koi character se mel khaa raha hai toh fir uss hisaab se approach maaro ki wo film wala character yaha hota toh kya karta.

Mere saath aisi problem aayi nahi kabhi but mein yahi suggest karunga. Characters yadi sahi se na banaaye jaaye toh woh characters nahi rehte bas plot ko chalaane ke liye dialogues bolne waale bots ki tarah ho jaate hai. Logo ka attachment khatam ho jaata hai unse fir.

 

[Sasha!]

so guys me yaha pe ek story likh raha hun, jisne padhi hogi unko pata hoga mene story hiatus pe rakhi hai kuch time se jo ke kuch personal reason and thoda mental health pe dhayan dena ka socha tha isliye but ab me story firse suru karna chahta hun jo ke mene try bhi kia but likh nahi pa raha hun kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha kya karu, mene story aese end tak soch rakhi hai so story ke progress ka problem nahi hai par characters ka problem ho raha hai. in sort characters me ghush hi nahi pa raha or nahi unke hisab se dialogue likh pa raha hun, mene story firse padhne ka bhi socha sayad usse characters me ghus pavu but mene itna bekar tarike se likha hai sab ki kuch updates se jyada padh hi nahi paya so jiske sath pehle aesa kuch hua ho to help kardo ya kuch tips de do aage kya karu.

aur dusri baat yaha pe koi editor hai kya jo story ko thoda acche se likh paye ya update ko edit kar paye kyun ke me khud hi apne updates nahi padh pa raha hun bakiyon ke liye muskil hi hota hoga so yaha pe koi hai to dm karna ya comment karna, paid hoga fir bhi chalega bas accha hona chahiye.

Happens with me all the time,

Agar charecters ki baat hai to try to remember "why" you created them, what was your inspiration, what was the basic idea. That "why" will bring back the connection

Jahan tak baat hai editing ki to wo ap hi kare to sahi rahega, meri pehli story ke sath bhi mera yehi issue hai, par apne paap to khud hi dhone padte hai

 

[Spiegel]

Aisa hota hai. Writer ko apni kahani hamesha boring lagti hai. Mein jab likhta hu toh khud sochta hu kabhi ki yaar ye pasand aayega bhi ya nahi logo ko but jab update deta hu toh logo ki pratikriya dekh ke dang reh jaata hu.

Yadi characters me nahi ghus paa rahe ho, toh apne characters ko sabse pehle koi aur characters se relate karo. Maan lo main character kisi film ke koi character se mel khaa raha hai toh fir uss hisaab se approach maaro ki wo film wala character yaha hota toh kya karta.

Mere saath aisi problem aayi nahi kabhi but mein yahi suggest karunga. Characters yadi sahi se na banaaye jaaye toh woh characters nahi rehte bas plot ko chalaane ke liye dialogues bolne waale bots ki tarah ho jaate hai. Logo ka attachment khatam ho jaata hai unse fir.

ha vro me wahi kehna chahta hun mene try kia to pura update ek dum plain likha hua tha isliye aage likhne ka socha nahi fir and film wala sayad try karu agar aese koi characters mile to and likh saku to btw thanks for advice

 

[Spiegel]

Happens with me all the time,

Agar charecters ki baat hai to try to remember "why" you created them, what was your inspiration, what was the basic idea. That "why" will bring back the connection

Jahan tak baat hai editing ki to wo ap hi kare to sahi rahega, meri pehli story ke sath bhi mera yehi issue hai, par apne paap to khud hi dhone padte hai

ohk sound cool ye try karunga sayad kaam ban jayega and editing thoda muskil hai khud ke liye and time bhi utna milna muskil hai mere liye upar se aage ke sab update edit karne ka soch raha tha so

 

[Sasha!]

ohk sound cool ye try karunga sayad kaam ban jayega and editing thoda muskil hai khud ke liye and time bhi utna milna muskil hai mere liye upar se aage ke sab update edit karne ka soch raha tha so

learning from mistakes and moving forward

 

[Rooted]

Just close the story men, ez.


jk,, take a break for some time.

 

[Spiegel]

Just close the story men, ez.


jk,, take a break for some time.

 

[Aagasthya]

Rick wali story kab start hogi..

 

[Indian Princess]

Story complete kiya bina posting startich nahi karne ka men