Advice Needed guys advice needed about my story, help !

[Mr. BERLIN]

4 option:

1) chutiya h
2) emotional h
3) uska padhai me man na lagta
4) sex addict h

Berojgar hai , Laundiya baaz hai ye bhi dalne ka

 

[Rocky.]

Berojgar hai , Laundiya baaz hai ye bhi dalne ka

Usko gaali nahi aati.. ye bhi

 

[Mr. BERLIN]

Usko gaali nahi aati.. ye bhi

Na aati hai hum log ki sharam krta warna dede thodo lal hone ka bhi dar rhta isliye na deta wo

 

[Rocky.]

Na aati hai hum log ki sharam krta warna dede thodo lal hone ka bhi dar rhta isliye na deta wo

Mujhe nahi lagta aati hogi. Varna ab tak sample ke taur pe pakka de deta varta.

 

[Batman]

ke mene try bhi kia but likh nahi pa raha hun kuch samaj me hi nahi aaraha kya karu,

start small man, no rush. try to write 200-300 words in one go. it will boost your confidence and you will start to write bigger updates in no time.

mene story aese end tak soch rakhi hai so story ke progress ka problem nahi hai par characters ka problem ho raha hai. in sort characters me ghush hi nahi pa raha or nahi unke hisab se dialogue likh pa raha hun

i know this problem, sometimes i feel the same. but again, it's your story and you know the scene better, try to engage yourself in short scenes and in start dont put too much focus on good dialogues. it will just make it more hard.

Try using different fonts now, editor box has been updated and has good features.

 

[Spiegel]

start small man, no rush. try to write 200-300 words in one go. it will boost your confidence and you will start to write bigger updates in no time.

i know this problem, sometimes i feel the same. but again, it's your story and you know the scene better, try to engage yourself in short scenes and in start dont put too much focus on good dialogues. it will just make it more hard.

Try using different fonts now, editor box has been updated and has good features.

thank bro

 

[Batman]

thank bro

welcome