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Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)
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Arjun Singh 72
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Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Bade hi Kamal ka likh rahe ho bhai.
E kon si ladki aa gyi khwabon me.
Iska jaroor koi na koi role hoga .
Margaret se pahle uski ma.
Or obhi bindas or lag Raha h ki Inka nb bhi juld hi aayega.
Yeh to apni beti ke liye bhi khush h.
Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
Bahut khoob superb.
Bade hi Kamal ka likh rahe ho bhai.
E kon si ladki aa gyi khwabon me.
Iska jaroor koi na koi role hoga .
Margaret se pahle uski ma.
Or obhi bindas or lag Raha h ki Inka nb bhi juld hi aayega.
Yeh to apni beti ke liye bhi khush h.
Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
Alex123
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Ye Mera pahla comment hai is story pe aap ki story zabardast hai Bhai bus itna kahunga 1st heroine me margaret ko hi rakhna baki AAP ki marzi
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UPDATE*17
M’mom—tu itna pareshan mat ho……agar ye dard tera diya hua hai to mujhe koi aitaraz nahi hai….ja mil le……aur sun abhi kuch mat karne lag jana meri masoom beti ke sath…..
Mai unke pass se margret ke room ki or badh gaya…..
Ab aage……………
Margret apne room me leti huyi thi….mujhe dekhte hi use phir se vo sab yaad aa gaya….
Margret—tum ..yaha kyo aaye ho….mujhe jinda nahi rahne dena chahte na tum…..
Mai—mai tumse mafi mangne aaya hu…..
Margret—badhiya tarika nikala hai....pahle to sab phad phood dala mere najuk ango ko....phir maafi maang lo.....tum jao yaha se....mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni
Mai—dekho jo bhi hua vo sab anjane me hua.....mai bhi to pahli bar hi kar raha tha....ab mujhe kya pata tha ki aisa kuch hota hai pahli bar karne se....
Margret—mai jab tumhe rukne ko bol rahi thi to kyo nahi ruke...mere anshu bhi tumhe nahi dikhe the..hai na adi.....
Mai—mai uss samay hosh me nahi tha.....jo bhi hua mai uski mafi mangta hu....
Margret—tum chale jao mere ghar se....mai tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahti....
Mai—theek hai...aaj se tumhe mai apni shakal nahi dikhaunga....mai apna admission bhi kahi dusri jagah karwa lunga.....ok bye....and again sorry
Mai vaha se nikal ke apne ghar aa gaya....mummy ne mera udas chehra dekh kar mujhse uska karan janne ke pichhe hath pair dhokar pad gayi....
Maine sar dard ka bahana bata diya....to vo jake tablet thama di mere hath me pain killer ki....ab marta kya na karta...khana pad gaya...
Mai apne room me aa gaya…kuch der baad mummy mere kamre me hi lunch le aayi aur apne hatho se khilane lagi….
Mujhe aaj ye ehsaas hua ki jo sukh aur anand maa ke aanchal ki chhanv me milta hai vo teeno lok me kahi nahi mil sakta….
Dad bhi aakar mere pass baith gaye…dono ke jane ke baad mai so gaya….aaj phir mujhe vahi ladki dikhayi di….kal to vo kisi pareshani me uljhi huyi si lag rahi thi magar aaj rote huye dikhaye de rahi thi
Vo apne bistar me baithe dono hath jod kar kuch budbuda rahi thi jo ki mere samajh me nahi aaya…to mai uske hasin chehre ki sundarta me hi mantra mugdh hokar usi me kho gaya…..
Uske is hasin chehre me na jane kaisi ye kashish thi jo mujhe baarambaar apni taraf kisi chumbak ki bhaanti akarshit kar rahi thi…
Mai jitna usse dur jane ki ya phir uspar se apna dhyan hatane ki koshish karta utna hi ek anjana vilakshan lagaav mere mann me uske liye panapta ja raha tha….mai chah kar bhi uss hasin chehre se apni nazar nahi hata paya….
Lekin aaj bhi ye khwab sirf kuch minutes ke liye hi dikha aur phir vo kahi gayab ho gaya…maine uske upar jyada dhyan na dene ka soch so gaya…..
Kal college ki admission list declare honi thi uske kuch din baad college shuru ho jayega….sham ko meri mitra mandli aa dhamki vaha par….lekin unme aaj margret shamil nahi thi…..
Franklin—abhi college start hone me kam se kam 15 din lag jayenge to kyo na kahi ghumne chale tab tak…
Daniel—idea bura nahi hai vaise…..
Kaith—ha adi…tum batao kaha chale…
Maine kaith ki ankho me madhoshi dikhayi de rahi thi…jab maine dhyan diya to uske mann ki baat jaan kar main munish ko mann hi mann gaaliya dene laga…..
Mai (mann me)—ye sab us munish ka kiya dhara hai…..mc muhe poora play boy hi bana kar chhodega …aur upar se bolta hai ki tumhe jan kalyan karna hai….bc ne dost dost bolkar gand maar li meri..ab ek yahi jan kalyan karna bacha hai duniya me mere liye…..sabko nangi pungi dekhu aur un sabko ragadta phiru raat din….aur ye kaith bhi na daniel ke hote huye mujhse chudwane ka soch rahi hai…
Mai (mann me)—bas ek baar sale munish tu mujhe apne ghar le ja …tere ghar se hi ye jan kalyan chalu karunga...
Juliya—adi...bata na kaha chale....
Mai—mujhe mummy jane nahi dengi.......aur phir margret bhi nahi hai abhi yaha...
Daniel—mai abhi jate huye usse bhi puch lunga......
Franklin—arey chhilke....jab adi jayega to margret kabhi yaha rukegi..adi ke bina...uska confirm hai agar ye adi ready ho jaye to...
Idhar margret adi ke jane ke baad se kafi bechaini mahsus kar rahi thi....kabhi uth ke bistar par baith jati to kabhi uth ke kamre me idhar se udhar ghumne lagti...magar ye bechaini kam hi nahi ho rahi thi....
Margret—(apne aap se)..wo idiot kahi sach me hi kahi aur na admission le le......poora pagal hai khud bhi aur mujhe bhi apne jaisa pagal bana dega....vaise uski galti bhi nahi thi...uska bhi to first time tha...mujhe adi ko apne ghar se chale jane ko nahi bolna chahiye tha.....use kitna bura laga hoga...mai abhi jake usse baat karti hu...par haaye ye dard.....idiot ne chalne firne layak bhi to nahi chhoda mujhe...
Margret ready hokar langdi ghodi ki tarah chalte huye adi ke ghar ki or nikal gayi...
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Shukriya Rishabh bhai for such a very nice review