Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[ʜeisenberg]

kal v bole the aayega aaj v bole ho... waiting bro

 

[anandsngh12]

UPDATE- 112​

Baad me agni ne rajnandini ke bhi pair chhuye...rajnandini ne usko apni choti bahan ki tarah samman diya...urmila ne bhi agni ko sine se lagaya....adi ne margret ka parichay bhi rajnandini se karaya to rajnandini ne khushi se usko accept kar liya....sab khush the milne me hi..magar tabhi...

‘’Vo ladki kaha hai jisko sankarsan ke jariye kisi dusre garbh me sthapit kiya gaya tha... ?’’ sabse piche dusri taraf muh kiye khadi shree ne kaha...shayad iss sawal ki vajah se vo kafi tension me lag rahi thi...

Ab aage....

Abhi tak rajnandini ne shree ko nahi dekha tha, sirf uska naam suna tha....shree ke iss sawal ne sab ke dil me koutuhal paida kar di thi..shayad vo bhi iss uttar janna chahte the...rajnandini ko iss baare me koi jankari nahi thi isliye uske mann me aisa koi bhav nahi tha.

Rajnandini—koun ladki... ? ye koun hai aur kis ladki ki baat kar rahi hai.... ?

Adii—hamari beti ki...

Rajnandini (shocked)—kyaaaa... ? lekin meri aulad to mere garbh me hi khatam ho gayi thi uss dust ne usko mere pet me hi maar diya tha…phir ye kaise sambhav hai…?

Adii—hamari beti jinda hai rajnandini…gurudev ye jante the ki vo dust usko maarne ki avashya koshish karega isliye unhone sankarsan ke madhyam se tumhare garbh ko kisi anya aurat ke garbh se sthanantarit kar diya tha.

Rajnandini (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….? (rote huye)…Itni badi baat aur tumne mujhe kabhi nahi batayi..akhir kyo.. rishi tumne ye baat kyo nahi batayi mujhe…? Main aaj tak iss dukh se dukhi rahi ki main tumhari akhiri nishani ki bhi hifazat nahi kar saki…jab dusro ke bachcho ko khelta dekhti to mujhe barbas hi apne bachche ki yaad aa jati aur main ek kone me muh chhupa ke rone lagti….mere bhagya ki ajeeb vidambana to dekho ki meri beti jinda hai aur main use mari huyi samajh kar aaj tak roti rahi…kyo kiya tumne mere sath aisa rishi..kyo…?

Adii—Jisse kisi ko koi shaq na ho…agar tumhe ye baat malum hoti to tum khud ko usse milne se rok nahi pati aur isse azgar ko shaq ho jata…sari yojna par pani phir jata agar azgar uss ladki ko koi nuksan pahucha deta to..isliye iss baat ko sabhi se gupt rakhne ka gurudev ne nirnay liya.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—kaha hai meri beti…? Mujhe apni beti se milna hai…batao rishi…meri beti kaha hai..? mujhe uske paas le chalo..

Adii (mann me)—tum abhi poora satya nahi janti rajnandini…kya tum apni hi beti ko apni soutan bante huye dekh sakogi…? Kya tum apne pati ko bistar me apni hi beti ke sath baant sakogi….? Ye kadwe tathya ko swikar kar pana itna asaan nahi hai rajnandini….aur iss samay tum isse jyada satya sunne aur samajhne ki halat me nahi ho…mujhe isme gurudev ki hi madad leni padegi samay aane par.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—bolo rishi…chup kyo ho…? Bhagwan ke liye kuch to bolo, rishi…

Adii—Vo ladki aur koi nahi balki khud…… Shree hi hai…..tumhare samne khadi ladki shree hi tumhari beti hai, rajnandini….aur meri to beti ke sath sath bahan bhi hai.

Sab (shocked)—kyaaaaa…..?

Shree ko jis baat ki ashanka ne gher rakha tha, akhir uski vahi ashanka satya ka roop le kar uske samne khadi ho gayi…uske hriday me ek aseem dard tuhne laga aur phir badhte badhte ye dard jab apni sarhad paar kar gaya to shree ki ankho se jhar jhar karte huye anshuo ka roop le kar bahne laga….jinko ki usne badi der se rok kar rakha tha kintu baadh aane par pani ke bahav ko apni disha tay karne se bhala koi baandh rok sakta hai kya…?

Rajnandini (shocked)—kyaa ye meri meti hai….shree meri beti hai….?

Adii—hmmmm

Rajnandini—shreee…betiii

Adii ke mukh se ye sunte hi rajnandini bhag kar shree ko pakad ke apni taraf ghuma liya aur dekhte hi chounk gayi shree bilkul rajnandini ki xerox copy thi…shree bhi behad khubsurat thi bilkul apni maa rajnandini ki hi tarah..haan agar kuch fark tha to ye tha ki rajnandini ke chehre par ek tez tha jo uske soundarya ko char chand laga raha tha warna iss fark ke bina inn dono ko ek sath dekh kar kisi ke liye bhi ye batana behad jatil baat thi ki inme se shree koun hai aur rajnandini koun….?

Shree ke chehre ko dekhte hi rajnandini ke dil se shanka ke saare badal chhat gaye…uske anshuo se tar batar chehre ko dekh kar uske dil me bhi dard umadne laga to usne jaldi se shree ko apni bahupash me jakad liya.. shree bhi apni maa ke sine se lipat gayi aur jor jor se rone lagi.

Megha (nam ankhe)—ye kaisa sanyog hai...kaisa chamatkar hai ye... ? maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki kabhi aisa din bhi dekhne ko mil sakta hai…?

Urmila (nam ankhe)—sach much ye kisi bhi chamatkar se kam nahi hai..ek ladki kisi ki bahan bhi hai aur uski beti bhi..(mann me)—aur kal ko hone wali uski biwi bhi....teen rishte ek hi ladki ke , ek hi ladke ke sath hona chamatkar hi to hai.

Anand—lekin beta ye sab hoga kaise... ? mera matlab hai ki yaha to aisa ho pana sambhav nahi hai.

Adii—hum pari lok vapis jayenge..ye kaam vahi par sambhav ho sakega.

Ajeet—to yaha ke business ka kya hoga…?

Adii—hum beech beech me yaha aate rahenge…jisse azgar ka confusion bhi barkarar rahega aur vo yaha se vaha talashte ghumta phirega.

Murugan (udasi se)—adirishiii….

Adii—matlab ki tum bhi admi ki bhasa bolte ho….?

Murugan (shocked)—tum bhi ka kya matlab hai…kya koi aur bhi meri tarah aisi bhasa bolta hai…?

Adii—bata dunga…par pahle tum apne vishay me mujhe sab kuch vistar se batao…tabhi janne ke baad main tumhari koi madad kar paunga..

Murugan—mera naam murugan hai..main garud lok me apni bahan maina ke sath rahta tha…hum dono ko bahut sari bhasa bolne ka gyan tha…mujhe adhik unchayi me udne ka bahut shouk bhi tha aur ghamand bhi….ek bar main aur maina dono udte udte garud lok se bahut door nikal aaye…maina ke mana karne ke bavjud bhi main ahankarvash aur unchayi par chala gaya…mere iss ahankar ke parinam swaroop surya ki tez kirno ke prabhav se mere pankh jal gaye aur main aas maan se gir kar iss dharti lok me pahuch gaya…achcha hua ki main ek khalihan me rakhi fasal ke dher par gira tha isliye jinda bach gaya…main bina pankh ke ud to sakta nahi tha to ek shikari ne mujhe pakad kar shahar me ek vaishya ko bech diya…..vaha rahte huye dhire dhire meri juban bhi gandi ho gayi.. jab mere pankh phir se nikal aaye to main ek din vaha se bhag nikla lekin yaha bhi ek shikari ke bichhaye jaal me phans gaya aur usse mujhe iss aurat ne kharid liya….bas yahi meri kahani hai….na jane meri bahan kaisi hogi.. kaha hogi vo…?

Adii—hmmm…tumhari bahan sakushal hai aur vo bhi tumhare liye utni hi vyakul aur adhir hai jitna ki tum usse milne ke liye utavle ho.

Murugan (khushi se)—kyaaaa sach me…? Meri bahan jivit hai aur sakushal bhi…? Kya tum usse mil chuke ho... ? (phir ankho se neer bahate huye)...batao na meri bahan kaha hai... ? main tumhara ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulunga.

Adii—yahi hai tumhari bahan mere paas me....

Murugan (shocked)—kyaaa....yahi hai…? Lekin vo to mujhe kahi dikhayi nahi de rahi hai..aisa kyo…?

Adii—kyon ki maine usko apni shakti se adrishya kar rakha hai…lo abhi usko tumhare samne le aata hu…

Aur phir mere ankhe band karne ke kuch pal baad hi vaha maina sab ki nazro ke samne aa gayi…jise dekh kar sab chounk gaye …sabse jyada to murugan aur maina hi chounke ek dusre ko dekh kar.

Murugan (chilla kar)—mainaaa….meri bahannnn…

Maina—murugann…bhaiyaaaaaa

Dono tezi se ud kar ek dusre ke paas pahuch kar apni chonch lada lada kar apne gile shikwe door karne lage… jabki dusri taraf rajnandini aur shree apne aap me hi khoyi huyi thi…main uske baad apne sabhi dosto se gale mila..sab pyar se mile…maine unki bhi shikayte door ki…last me chitra ko bhi gale lagaya…vo kafi der se asha bhari nazro se meri taraf nihar rahi thi.

Poora din aise hi milne milane me vyatit ho gaya…murugan aur maina ne bhi hamare sath hi rahne ka faisla kiya.. shree ke dil me pichhli ghatnao ka dukh to tha lekin uske mann me ek khushi bhi thi ki ab vo ek din jarur apne pyar, apne adii ki biwi banegi.

Main bhi aaj behad khush tha ki kayi varsho ke baad aaj rajnandini ke sath sone ko milega…uski komal baho ke ghere me uske madak jism ka sparsh aaj phir se mujhe milega….raat hote hi main iss khushi me jhumte huye apne kamre me ghus gaya…jaha pahle se hi koi leti huyi thi…main bhi khushi se uchhal kar uske upar kood gaya.

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Sare bhed khool gye , raajdar na raha....
Sabne dekh or soon bhi liya Raajnandini or Adrishi ka anootha alaukik prem.
Sabko accept bhi kar liya Raajnandini ne.
Jaroor tote murugan ki bhi dilchasp kahani rahi hogi .
Shree ne jo last me sawal pochha h vo dhamakedar h.
Fantastic or kamal ka update yaara.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

UPDATE—111 ​

Adirishi aur Rajnandini ki prem kahani sunte sunte sabhi ki ankho se aviral jal dhara pravahit hone lagi thi…sadiyo purani iss prem gatha ki samapti ke baad bhi kisi ko kuch josh nahi tha…sabhi chetna shunya ho kar jadwat achetan ki avastha me stabdh ho gaye the…aisa lag raha tha jaise ki unko kisi ne apni sammohan vidhya se sammohit kar liya ho.

Sabhi gahre sadme jaisi halat me the…kisi ne bhi kabhi kalpana tak nahi ki thi ki koi kisi ko itna bhi pyar kar sakta hai….kisi ka sadiyo intazar kar sakta hai…urmila, megha, anand, shree to adii ka sach jaan kar chounk hi gaye the vahi saroj aur deepa ka bhi yahi haal tha…

Anand, urmila, megha, ajeet, agni, saroj, deepa, sabhi dost, khatra, chitra, margret yaha tak ki uss tote murugan tak ki ankhe ashru poorit ho chuki thi….kintu shree ki ankho ka rang kuch alag hi tha…na to unme anshu the aur na hi koi bhav samajh me aa raha tha…na jane kya tha uski ankho me..shayad uski inn ankho me aane wale samay me kisi bhayanak aandhi ki neev pad chuki thi.

Dusri taraf adii aur rajnandini apne aap me hi ek dusre ki baho me lipte khoye huye the…inn sab baato se poori tarah se bekhabar ki unko kayi ankhe dekh bhi rahi hain…vo dono to bas ek dusre ki ankho hi ankho me baate karte huye apne apne gile shikwe mitane me vyast the….bina sawan ke hi unki ankhe varsha ritu ki tarah bah rahi thi.. jaise kah rahi ho ki…

Rok Kar Baithe Hain, Kayi Samandar Ankho Mein…
Dagabaaz Ho Sawan To Kya…..
Hum Khud Hi Baras Lenge….
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Rajnandini (anshu bahate huye mann me)—tumne mujhe kitna intazar karwaya rishi…sab kahte the ki tum ab kabhi nahi aaoge, lekin main to bas tumhare akhiri shabdo par vishwash kar ke jiye ja rahi thi…kaise maine ye samay bitaya hai tumhare bina…tum nahi jante….

Chaha Tha Muqammal Ho, Mere Gum Ki Kahani
Main Likh Na Saki Kuch Bhi, Tere Naam Se Aage.
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Adii (mann me)—mujhe to khud hi hosh nahi tha ki meri zindagi kaha hai…? Main to ab tak mrig trishna me bhatak raha tha….main khud ko hamesha adhura mahsoos karta tha kintu uss adhurepan ki vajah nahi janta tha…bas kisi anjani manzil ki talash me dar dar bhatakta raha…na to kisi ka hua aur na hi kisi ko apne dil ke karib aane diya…aaj tumhe dekhte hi mera vo adhurapan khatam ho gaya….meri uss anjan manzil ki talash bhi tum tak pahuchte hi samapt ho gayi….rishi sirf tumhara tha aur tumhara hi rahega nandini…

Dono ek bar phir se ek ho gaye aur ek dusre ko chumne lage….baki sab kisi mook darshak ki bhanti bina palak jhapkaye dono ki iss prem leela ko dekhne ka anand uthate rahe.

Shree dusri taraf muh kar ke khadi thi, pata nahi vo kya soch me doobi huyi thi…akhir kar iss khamoshi ko toda murugan ne….uski awaz se sabhi chounk kar iss khamoshi bhare vatavaran se bahar nikal aaye.

Murugan (dukhi awaz me)—kitni door door ke do premiyo ko tune mila diya bhagwan….mujhe bhi meri bahan se kyo nahi mila deta…? Na jane kaisi hogi vo…? Mere baad uska kya hua hoga….? Meri vinti bhi sun le bhagwan..sun le

Sab chounk kar udhar dekhne lage ki ye koun bol raha hai….lekin jab unhone ek tote ko admi ki tarah baat karte huye dekha to chakit rah gaye.

Murugan (rote huye)—tum sab mujhe aise mat dekho…adii tum hi meri madad kar do..meri bahan se mila do mujhe…tumhe tumhare pyar ka vasta..meri madad kar do.

Uske iss karun krandan ki pukar ne adii aur rajnandini ke dil tak bhi dastak de gayi aur dono apni yaado ke jharokho se bahar nikal aaye…jab dono ne apne samne sab logo ko khade dekha aur khud ko ek dusre ki baho me lipte hone ka ehsaas hua to dono behad sharminda ho kar alag ho gaye.

Adii—mummy….ye rajnandini…..

Urmila (beech me hi)—kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi hai beta…..main sab sun chuki hu…ye to meri bahu hai..nahi bahu nahi balki meri beti hai….aa ja beti…mere gale lag ja..

Rajnandini ne apne sir par pallu dal ke turant uth kar urmila ke pair chhuye...urmila ne usko utha kar apne gale se laga liya.

Rajnandini—main kshama chahti hu maa ji...mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki aap kab yaha aa gayi.

Urmila—achcha hua ki tumhe pata nahi chala warna mujhe pata kaise chalta ki iss sansar me koi mere adii ko itna chahne wali bhi hai....tu ro mat beti...ye aisa hi hai, mujhe bhi aise hi rone ke liye chhod kar chala jata hai...ye pagal ye bhi nahi sochta ki uske bina uski ye budhi maa kaise jee payegi.

Adii—mummy...mujhe bhi gale lagao na

Urmila—nahi... tu mujhe rulata bahut hai...ab to main apni beti ko hi gale lagaungi.

Adii—theek hai to main apni dusri maa ke gale lag jata hu.

Adii (megha ke paas ja kar)—maa

Adii ke muh se maa shabd sunte hi megha ki rulayi phut padi….uske muh se iss ek shabd ko sunne ke liye, na jane uski pyasi mamta kab se tadap aur taras rahi thi….aur kab vo apne bete ko sine se laga kar apna kaleje ko shant karegi…aaj vo shabd jab usne suna to khud ki bhavnao par kabu nahi rakh saki…..ek maa ki ankhe bagawat kar baithi….shayad isliye hi maa ko dharti se bhari kaha gaya hai….usne jaldi se adii ko apne sine se chipka liya aur rote huye uske poore chehre ko chumne lagi.

Megha (rote huye)—bete…mere lal…..tu kaha chala gaya tha…tu nahi janta ki main kaise tere bin jee rahi thi.

Adii—mat ro maa...main sab jaan chuka hu maa....ab se aap ka ye beta apni maa ke paas hi rahega .

Rajnandini ne bhi megha ke pair chhuye to usko bhi usne gale se laga kar bahut pyar kiya...aaj dono maa ki ankhe itni khushi bardast hi nahi kar pa rahe the, unse aviral ganga jamuna ki jal dhara nirantar bahe ja rahi thi...adi aur rajnandini ne anand aur ajeet ka ashirwad liya.

Adii ko dekh kar margret aur agni bhi uske sine se lagne ke liye vyakul thi magar kuch kah nahi pa rahi thi...margret aur shree to lag bhi jati uske gale kintu rajnandini ke samne khud ko bahut asahaj mahsoos kar rahi thi....unhe rajnandini ke pyar ke samne apna pyar behad chota nazar aane laga tha...jabki agni ke mann me aisa kuch bhi nahi tha...unn dono ke milan se vo khush thi...uske bare me to sab jaan hi chuke the.

Adii—maa, ye agni hai...ye bhi apki bahu hai...mujhe maaf kar dena agni, main tumhara apradhi hu...main tumhe vo haq nahi de paya jiski tum haqdar thi.

Megha—hame sab pata chal chuka hai beta...agni ne hame sab bata diya hai.

Agni (adii ke pair chhu kar)—aap aisa kabhi mat sochiyega....mujhe kabhi aap se koi shikayat nahi thi...aapne mujhe swikar kar liya, yahi mere liye bahut badi khushi ki baat hai.

Baad me agni ne rajnandini ke bhi pair chhuye...rajnandini ne usko apni choti bahan ki tarah samman diya...urmila ne bhi agni ko sine se lagaya....adi ne margret ka parichay bhi rajnandini se karaya to rajnandini ne khushi se usko accept kar liya....sab khush the milne me hi..magar tabhi...

‘’Vo ladki kaha hai jisko sankarsan ke jariye kisi dusre garbh me sthapit kiya gaya tha... ?’’ sabse piche dusri taraf muh kiye khadi shree ne kaha...shayad iss sawal ki vajah se vo kafi tension me lag rahi thi...

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[Raj]

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LOVELY EMOTIONAL AND INTERESTING UPDATES BHAI

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[R1h]

adi koodh to gya bina dekhe kahi firse balat kar na krde jaisa margt ki maa le sath hua tha

 

[Raja thakur]

FANTASTIC UPDATES

 

[CG]

Kood to gaya Lekin kiske upar ye to dekhna chahiye tha

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome fabulous update
super excited to see what happens
keep posting

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai ab to rajnandini ki fatkar sunne padegi ye ho na ho shree hii hoga