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Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

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Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Yeh update Kitna achha Laga ki Mai kya nhi Sakta bhai aapko.
Aapne kya baatein Kahi h
Ma ke bare me .
Or jo bhi kaha % sahi kaha yara.
Jabardast shandaar lajwaab or Kamal kr diya aapne.
Aakhir anumati mil hi gyi or usse pahle margMarg se hui batcheet bhi bdi Manoranjak thi.
Khair

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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anandsngh12

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Naughtyrishabh said:
Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Yeh update Kitna achha Laga ki Mai kya nhi Sakta bhai aapko.
Aapne kya baatein Kahi h
Ma ke bare me .
Or jo bhi kaha % sahi kaha yara.
Jabardast shandaar lajwaab or Kamal kr diya aapne.
Aakhir anumati mil hi gyi or usse pahle margMarg se hui batcheet bhi bdi Manoranjak thi.
Khair

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
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Thanks Rishabh Bhai for Reading and supporting
And for such a very nice encouraging review
 
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UPDATE*20​



Urmila—vo beta need nahi aa rahi thi…tere sath so jau aaj…



Mai—ha mummy…



Phir hum dono maa bete ek dusre ki baho me so gaye…..



Ab aage……..



Subah meri 5 baje need khuli to tab tak mummy bhi uth chuki thi ….mai fresh hone ke baad dhyan lagane ke liye baith gaya…



Thodi bahut mashakkat ke baad akhir kamyabi mil hi gayi…..mai kisi anokhi hi duniya ki sair karne laga tha….jaha har taraf sirf roshni hi roshni thi…



Roshni ke alawa aur kuch nazar hi nahi aa raha tha…mai samajh hi nahi pa raha tha ki mai yaha kaise aa gaya hu aur mujhe jana kaha hai…..



Mai isi udhedbun me khoya hua hi tha ki mere kano me kisi ke Putra kah kar pukarne ki aaz aayi… mai us awaz ki disha me dekhne laga parantu mujhe sivay roshni ke aur kuch bhi nazar nahi aaya…



Mai—aap koun hain…? Kripa kar ke mujhe darshan de…



Tabhi mere samne ek sadhu baba prakat huye.....unka huliya bilkul vaisa hi tha jaisa Munish ne uss Rishi Ashtavakra ka bataya tha.....



Vaise hi tedha medha sharir...kamar aage ko jhuki huyi...lekin chehre me ek adbhut tez ki lalima thi... mai unhe dekh kar unke aise bedoul roop ke vishay me kuch bolne hi ja raha tha ki tabhi mujhe munish ki vo baat dhyan me aa gayi ki usne inke sharir ki kurupta ka kaise parihas udaya tha jiske phal swaroop use ashtavakra ne ullu bana diya tha kroadh me aakar....





Ye dhyan aate hi meri gand phat gayi…aur kuch sochne laga…lekin unki is kurup sharir ko dekh kar hasne ka bhi mann ho raha tha aur darr bhi lag raha tha….



Mai (mann me)—mujhe hasi to aa rahi hai inke aise sharir ko dekh kar...lekin achchha hua ki mujhe us munish ki durdasha samay par yaad gayi nahi to ye munish ko to ullu banaya tha .....magar mujhe pata nahi kya bana kar meri abhi gand maar leta...vo bhi bina tel ke



Ashtavakra (mushkurate huye)—kis dubidha me ho putra... ?meri is kurup kaya par mat jao….ye to bhagwan ki den hai…



Mai (mann me)—Buddha bahut harami hai….mere muh ke andar ki baat bhi sun liya ki uske bare kya soch raha hu….tauba …tauba..ab kuch nahi sochunga…nahi to koi jan kalyan ho na ho…ye meri gand maar ke mera kalyan jarur kar dega…



Mai—mai kshama prathi hu munivar….mere avgun ke karan mann me upji agyanta ko maaf kare…



Ashtavakra—mai janta hu vats…tum dil ke bahut nek ho….mai ye bhi janta hu ki tum mujhe pahchan chuke ho….



Mai—mere liye kya adesh hai maharshi…? Kripya mujhe in shaktiyo se avgat karaye aur inke sanchalan ki vidhi ka gyan dekar mera marg darshan kare ..hey muni shreshtha



Ashtavakra—tumhaare vinamra purn vyavhar se mai atyant prasann hu putra...ataiv mai tumhe nishchit hi vo sari vidhye pradan karunga jo is kaliyug me kisi ke bhi pass nahi hain...



Mai—ye mera saubhagya hoga Maharshi



Ashtavakra—is shiksha ke liye tumhe kuch din ke liye mere pass rahna hoga putra....



Mai—mai kshama chahta hu munivar….kintu mai apni maa se jyada din dur rahkar unhe dukhi nahi kar sakta…mai asmarth hu



Ashtavakra—tum dhanya ho putra....dharti lok me to log apne swarth purti ke liye mata pita ko kuda karkat samajh kar unka tyag kar dete hain...parantu tumhare vichar jankar mai ab nishchint ho gaya hu ki maine sahi hatho me apni tapasya se arjit shaktiyo ko dene ka faisla kiya hai...



Mai—ab aap hi koi marg bataye....



Ashtavakra—mere pass aao putra.....



Mai darte darte hath jode unke pass chala gaya….unhone apna ek hath mere mathe par laga kar apni ankhe band kar ke mann hi mann koi mantra ka uchcharan karne lage….



Unke mantrochaaran karne ke kuch pal pashchat hi unke hatho se roshni ki kirne nikalne lagi to dar ke mare maine bhi apni ankhe band kar hanuman chalisa padhna chalu kar diya mann me…



Unke hatho se kayi tarah ki roshni ki tarange nikalti rahi aur mere mathe se hokar mere hriday patal par pravesh karti gay…….jab roshni nikalna band huyi to unhone mujhe ankhe kholne ko kaha…



Ashtavakra—maine tumhari sabhi shaktiyo ko jagrut kar diya hai….ab tumhe kewal in par niyantran aur unka prayog karna sikhna hai….



Mai—mujhe iske liye kya karna hoga……



Ashtavakra—tumhe kewal prati din dev kaal me inka dhyan lagana hoga....in shaktiyo se tum kuch bhi kar sakte ho....kintu inka prayog kisi galat kaam ya phir kisi nirdosh ko pratadit karne ke liye mat karna...



Mai—in shaktiyo ko mai pahchanuga kaise ki ye koun koun si hain.... ?



Ashtravakra—jab tum dhyan me baithoge to sabhi shaktiya khud hi tumhe apni prayog vidhi aur pahchan se avgat kara dengi....



Mai—jaisi apki agya maharshi....



Ashtavakra—tumhara kalyan ho vats.....mujhe jab bhi apne mann me yaad karoge mai hajir ho jaunga ab tum jao putra......



Phir main dhyan se utha gaya.....aur apna pichhwada check karne laga hath se ....



Mai—sahi salamat hai.....bach gayi……aaj baal baal gand bachi....



Maine apni body dekhi jo ab pahle se bhi majbut aur akarshak ho gayi thi…mujhe apne andar taqat ka ek samundar sa mahsus ho raha tha……mai lagbhag do ghante dhyan me raha…



Mummy coffee lekar aayi aur mere pass baith kar pine lagi aur mai bhi…vo baar baar mujhe dekh bhi rahi thi…



Urmila—teri body aaj pahle se bhi jyada phooli huyi hai…..jyada goliya mat khana…..aur kab jana hai tujhe



Mai—pahle sab intazam to ho jaye jane ka….



Urmila—vo sab tere dad kar denge..tu fikar mat kar…..nahi karenge to unko mai ghar me ghusne bhi nahi dungi……ek hi to beta hai mera……uski khushi me hi hamari khushi hai…..bas tu aise hi khush raha kar….



Mai—aur aap bhi



Phir maine apne sabhi friends aur margret ko jane ka confirm kar diya……dad ne sab intazm kar diye the…agle din jane ka final ho gaya…mummy us raat bhi mere hi sath soyi….



Subah maine apna dhyan lagaya aur kuch shaktiyo se parichit hua.....dophar baad sabhi mere ghar aa gaye.....dad hame airport drop karne ja rahe the...lekin mummy ki ankhe nam thi jo vo mujhse chhupane ki nakam koshish kar rahi thi....



Urmila—dekh apna dhyan rakhna aur margret ka bhi…time par khana …time par sona aur roj mujhe phone karna….aur jaldi aana..tere bina ye kaatne ko doudega…..



Itne me hi vida karte karte na chahte huye bhi ye dhoke baaz anshu unki ankho se bahar nikal hi aaye…maine bhi gale lagkar unse nam ankho se jane ki ijajat lekar airport ke liye nikal gaye..



Do ghante baad ki flight thi….to tab tak dad bhi mere pass hi rahe…unki ankho me bhi nami thi.. lekin baap to apne anshoo rok sakta hai….. ha maa jarur nahi rok pati



Flight ka announcement hote hi mai dad se gale mil kar unke pair chhuye aur ashirwad le hum flight me aa gaye….thodi der baad take over ho gaya…



Mujhe nahi pata tha ki mai jis picnic par ja raha hu….vo picnic meri jindagi hi badal degi …mujhe ek naya maksad aur nayi manzil ki or le jayegi…..
 
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