Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Vickey1211]

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[anandsngh12]

Sorry Friends, Raat me Naag mani, Saand aur phir Chamatkar ka update likhte likhte kab ankh lag gayi pata hi nahi chala aur update adhura hi rah gaya.....Complete kar ke 10 to 11 pm tak post karta hu.

 

[Rohan008]

Sorry Friends, Raat me Naag mani, Saand aur phir Chamatkar ka update likhte likhte kab ankh lag gayi pata hi nahi chala aur update adhura hi rah gaya.....Complete kar ke 10 to 11 pm tak post karta hu.

Koi nhi bhai
Intzaar rhega

 

[Naina]

Sorry Friends, Raat me Naag mani, Saand aur phir Chamatkar ka update likhte likhte kab ankh lag gayi pata hi nahi chala aur update adhura hi rah gaya.....Complete kar ke 10 to 11 pm tak post karta hu.

Koi baat nahi, baise bhi apne story line ko khichdi bana diya hai...

 

[King Aryan]

Waiting For Next Update

 

[Raguhalkal]

Koi nahi bhai chalta hai pls aaj de dena

 

[anandsngh12]

UPDATE—83 ​

Rajnandini ek ped ke niche baith kar uss ped ko bade dhyan se dekhe ja rahi thi….ye ped rishi aur rajnandini ke pratham milan ka yaadgar tha, jaha dono aksar ghanto ek dusre ki baho me samaye huye baate karte rahte the.

Unka dono ka adhiktar samay iss ped ki panah me hi gujar jata tha….uss ped par dono ne ek dusre ka naam likh rakha tha…aaj bhi rajnandini uss ped me rishi ke hatho se likha hua apna naam dekh kar uski yaad me tadap uthati thi….Yaha aane ke baad uske dil ko bahut sukun milta tha.

Kuch pal ke liye hi sahi vo apne sabhi dukh dard bhulkar rishi ki yaado me kho jati thi…aaj bhi vo iss samay rishi ke hi khyalo me poori tarah se samarpit ho chuki thi.

Rajnandini (ped me likhe rishi ke naam ko chumte huye)—Rishi akhir tum kab aaoge….? Ye judai ab mujhse sahan nahi hoti hai….kaise samjhau iss pagal dil ko, tum hi aa kar isko kuch samjhao na…..? Ye dil meri koi bhi baat nahi manta hai…..isko aaj bhi apne ussi rishi ka intazar hai jiski agosh me isse teeno loko ka sukh milta tha.

Phir Uski Yaad, Phir Uski Aas, Phir Uski Baatein,
Ae Dil Lagta Hai Tujhe Tadapne Ka Bahut Shauk Hai

Tujhe Bhoolne Ki Koshishen Kabhi Kamyaab Na Ho Saki,
Teri Yaad Shaakh-E-Gulab Hai, Jo Hawa Chali To Mahak Gayi.
​

Rajnandini ki ankho me kab nami utar aayi usko khud bhi iska abhas nahi hua….vo to bas apne rishi ki baho me yaado ke jariye samayi huyi usse baate kiye ja rahi thi.

Agar vaha se gujarne wala koi raahgir usko iss avashtha me dekh leta to nishchit hi usse pagal samajh leta jo aise veeran jagah me khud se hi baate kiye ja rahi hai.

Tabhi vaha se akash marg se devarshi narad gujarte huye unki nazar rajnandini par chali gayi…vo koutuhal vash kuch der vahi ruk kar uska premalaap dekhne lage.

Antatah unse jab raha nahi gaya to vo rajnandini ke paas pahuch gaye…kintu usko pata nahi chala…vo to apne priytam ke prem dhun me bawri hokar yu hi badbadaye ja rahi thi.

Narad—narayan….narayan..! kya hua putri, kis ki yaado me khoyi huyi ho….?

Rajnandini (chounk kar)—hmmmm…kkkkk…koun…..? pranam mahatman.

Narad—kalyanamastu..! iss sunsan jagah par kya kar rahi ho putri…?

Rajnandini—aap to mahatma hain..aap sab jante hain ki mera dukh kya hai…?

Narad (kuch der ankhe band kar ke dekhne ke baad)—hhhmmm….iss samay tumhare gaon ko tumhari nitant avashyakta hai…tumhe yatha shighra vaha jana chahiye…..

Rajnandini—munivar…mera rishi kab milega mujhe….?

Narad—sabhi loko ka bhraman karo .musibat me phanse .logo ki sahayta karo….shayad kahi tumhari mulaqat ho jaye

Rajnandini—apka koti koti dhanyawad munivar..pranam

Narad—tumhara kalyan ho..‼

Rajnandini devarshi narad ke vaha se jate hi turant ek baar phir se uss ped par rishi ke naam ke upar apne hotho ki mohar laga kar gaon ke liye nikal gayi.

Gaon me iss samay har taraf hahakar macha hua tha….azgar ke khooni darinde aaj mukhiya ki eklouti ladki ko jabran ghasit kar le ja rahe the.

Mukhiya—meri ladki ko chhod do…bhagwan se daro…arey papiyo uss masum ne tum logo ka kya bigada hai.

Ek Pishach—hahahaha…..hamara koi kuch nahi bigad sakta….yaha ka bhagwan Azgar hai…shaitan zindabad

2nd Pishach—iski ladki ko bhi nagn kar ke rath me nath do…tab pata chalega azgar se bagawat ka anzam

Vo abhi mukhiya ki ladki ke kapne phadne ke liye hath aage badhaye hi the ki vaha achanak tez hawaye chalne lagi aur in hawao ne kuch hi pal me bhayanak chakrawat ka roop dharan kar liya jisne azgar ke aadhe se adhik Pishach sainiko ko apne toofani bhanwar jaal me lapet liya…..,kisi ko bhi kuch dekhne samajhne ka mouka hi nahi mila.

Ye sab itna akasmat hua ki sab hairan rah gaye…kintu mukhiya aur baki gaon walo ke chehro me jaise rounak lout aayi thi.

Ek Pishach—kkkk…koun hai…? Kise apne prano ka bhay nahi hai….?

Rajnandini ka naam sun kar bache kuche sainik uss taraf dekhne lage…..samne rajnandini behad kroadh me ankhe kisi doobte sooraj ke jaisi ekdam lal kiye khadi thi…uske mukh ke andar se nikal rahi fufkar ki vajah se vaha chakrawat ka nirman ho raha tha…uske khule huye kesh aur gusse se bhara hua ye roop dekh kar sabhi ko vo bilkul ranchandi lag rahi thi.

“Raaaajjjjj…Nandiniiiiii” Sabhi gaon wale ek swar me khushi se chilla uthe.

2nd Pishach—ohh…Rajnandinii…akhir tu bill me se bahar nikal hi aayi…hahahaha…jaoooo pakad lo isseee

Sabhi khooni pishach tezi se rajnandini ko pakadne ke liye doude..kintu jaise hi uske najdik pahuche…Rajnandini ne jor se kroadhavesh me apne khule huye kesho ko jhatak diya.

Aur agle hi kshan uske in khule kesho ne asankhya atyant vishdhar naago ka roop le liya…aur uske sharir se niche utar kar unn sainiko ki taraf tedi medhi chaal se tezi se chalne lage….

Kuch hi samay me vaha par saanpo ki jaise baadh si aa gayi…sabhi sainik charo taraf se naago se ghir gaye.. rajnandini ka aisa vikral roop dekh kar sabhi buri tarah se bhaybheet hokar idhar udhar bhagne ki koshish karne lage…kintu jis taraf bhi mudte saanpo ka jhund unke upar toot padta.

Charo taraf azgar ke unn pishach sainiko ki dardnak cheekhe hawao me goonje lagi….



Udhar swarg lok me ek nayi subah ke sath adii ne jaise hi ankhe kholi to apne samne munish ko baithe huye paya jisne ardh mishrit mushkan ke sath adii ka swagat kiya.

Munish—nayi subah mubarak ho dost.

Adii—tumhe bhi dost…lekin itni subah tum yaha kaise…?

Munish (mann me)—apni hi karni ka phal bhog raha hu….na tujhe vardan deta na meri aisi halat hoti…patni ke hote huye bhi usko chhod kar sari raat teri nigarani karni pad rahi hai….aaj isko din me hi kisi apsara ke paas le jata hu..uske sath sambhog kar lega to raat me chinta nahi rahegi mujhe.

Adii—kin khayalo me kho gaye dost….?

Munish—tum jaldi se taiyyar ho jao..phir main tumhe asli sukh ke darshan karata hu aaj swarg me.

Adii (jamhayi lete huye)—aaj nahi phir kabhi..aaj main aram karna chahta hu..tum ghum aao thodi der.

Munish (mann me)—haan beta…main yaha ghumne jau aur tu idhar mera kalyan kar de...aisi galti hargij nahi karunga main ab

Munish—nahi..alasya karna achchi baat nahi hai…tumhe aaj chalna hi hoga..agar mujhe apna dost mante ho to

Adii—theek hai bhai….teri dosti ke liye ye bhi sahi

Adii ke snan dhyan ke pashchat dono taiyyar ho gaye bahar jane ke liye…lekin adii ki ankhe bar bar madhvi ko talash kar rahi thi jo abhi tak nazar nahi aayi thi…adii ke mann ki ye halat munish samajh gaya.

Munish (mann me)—achcha hua ki maine aaj subah hi madhvi ko apni maa se milne bhej diya…lagta hai usko kuch din vahi rukne ko bol du aur maa ko yaha bula leta hu…adii jab madhvi ko nahi dekhega to shayad sudhar jaye.

Adii—madhvi bhabhi nahi dikh rahi hain…main unhe bata kar aata hu…nahi to vo bevajah pareshan hongi

Munish—maine usko bata diya hai…chalo ab jaldi yaha se

Adii (beman se)—achcha....theekkkk hai...phir


Munish usko lekar ek apsara ke paas le gaya jaha dono ne maze kiye…iss douran munish ne telepathy ke jariye madhvi ko kuch din vahi rukne ka bol diya….tab tak munish ne apni maa ko yaha aane ko kah diya.

Din bhar ghum phir kar dono shaam hone se pahle hi lout aaye…munish adii ko ghar pahucha kar bahar chala gaya..adii jaise hi andar aaya to usse madhvi ke kamre me kisi ke sabhi vastra pade huye the sath hi bathroom me kisi ke nahane ki awaz aa rahi thi.

Adii (mann me)—lagta hai madhvi bhabhi andar naha rahi hain…badhiya mouka hai ye chutiya bhi nahi hai.

Ye soch kar usne phataphat apne kapde utare aur ghus gaya bathroom ke andar…..

Idhar dharti me sabhi Ganpat pat rai ki party me shareek hone ke liye nikal pade the..magar shree iss samay gadi me baithe baithe kahi khoyi huyi thi…

Shree (mann me)—adii ne bhi mujhe khatra ke bare me bataya tha….mujhe adii par vishwash karna chahiye tha.. kam se kam aaj itna tadapna to nahi padta…hey bhagwan adii jinda ho..meri vinti sun lo…phir aap se kabhi kuch nahi magugi….

Raat ke Andhere Mein Sara Jahan Sota Hai
Lekin Kisi Ki Yaad Mein Ye Dil Rota Hai
Khuda Kare Ki Kisi Par Koi Fida Na Ho
Agar Ho To Mout Se Pahle Juda Na Ho​

Vaha pahuchte hi Ganpat Rai ne sabhi ka bahut swagat kiya...lekin sabhi ki nigahe to khatra ko talash kar rahi thi.... inke piche piche charo dost bhi vaha pahuch gaye aur bahar se hi shree par nigrani rakhne lage.

Gangu—hame andar chalna chahiye....itni bheed me koi chinta ki baat nahi hai

Nangu—ha chalo

Jaise hi charo andar jane ko huye ki kisi ne bari bari se charo ko utha kar patak diya...ab sabhi ghabra gaye..lekin koi tha jisne kisi ko inn charo ko patakte huye dekh liya tha.

 

[Jon123]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

 

[Sajid111]

Superb bro

Fantastic update


Rajnandani wala seen jabardsht tha...


Idhar to bechara Aadi ji wardan deke pachchta raha h.. din ka sukoon raat ki chaun chura liya


Great bro

Fantastic update

 

[RAAZ]

UPDATE—83 ​

Rajnandini ek ped ke niche baith kar uss ped ko bade dhyan se dekhe ja rahi thi….ye ped rishi aur rajnandini ke pratham milan ka yaadgar tha, jaha dono aksar ghanto ek dusre ki baho me samaye huye baate karte rahte the.

Unka dono ka adhiktar samay iss ped ki panah me hi gujar jata tha….uss ped par dono ne ek dusre ka naam likh rakha tha…aaj bhi rajnandini uss ped me rishi ke hatho se likha hua apna naam dekh kar uski yaad me tadap uthati thi….Yaha aane ke baad uske dil ko bahut sukun milta tha.

Kuch pal ke liye hi sahi vo apne sabhi dukh dard bhulkar rishi ki yaado me kho jati thi…aaj bhi vo iss samay rishi ke hi khyalo me poori tarah se samarpit ho chuki thi.

Rajnandini (ped me likhe rishi ke naam ko chumte huye)—Rishi akhir tum kab aaoge….? Ye judai ab mujhse sahan nahi hoti hai….kaise samjhau iss pagal dil ko, tum hi aa kar isko kuch samjhao na…..? Ye dil meri koi bhi baat nahi manta hai…..isko aaj bhi apne ussi rishi ka intazar hai jiski agosh me isse teeno loko ka sukh milta tha.

Phir Uski Yaad, Phir Uski Aas, Phir Uski Baatein,
Ae Dil Lagta Hai Tujhe Tadapne Ka Bahut Shauk Hai

Tujhe Bhoolne Ki Koshishen Kabhi Kamyaab Na Ho Saki,
Teri Yaad Shaakh-E-Gulab Hai, Jo Hawa Chali To Mahak Gayi.
​

Rajnandini ki ankho me kab nami utar aayi usko khud bhi iska abhas nahi hua….vo to bas apne rishi ki baho me yaado ke jariye samayi huyi usse baate kiye ja rahi thi.

Agar vaha se gujarne wala koi raahgir usko iss avashtha me dekh leta to nishchit hi usse pagal samajh leta jo aise veeran jagah me khud se hi baate kiye ja rahi hai.

Tabhi vaha se akash marg se devarshi narad gujarte huye unki nazar rajnandini par chali gayi…vo koutuhal vash kuch der vahi ruk kar uska premalaap dekhne lage.

Antatah unse jab raha nahi gaya to vo rajnandini ke paas pahuch gaye…kintu usko pata nahi chala…vo to apne priytam ke prem dhun me bawri hokar yu hi badbadaye ja rahi thi.

Narad—narayan….narayan..! kya hua putri, kis ki yaado me khoyi huyi ho….?

Rajnandini (chounk kar)—hmmmm…kkkkk…koun…..? pranam mahatman.

Narad—kalyanamastu..! iss sunsan jagah par kya kar rahi ho putri…?

Rajnandini—aap to mahatma hain..aap sab jante hain ki mera dukh kya hai…?

Narad (kuch der ankhe band kar ke dekhne ke baad)—hhhmmm….iss samay tumhare gaon ko tumhari nitant avashyakta hai…tumhe yatha shighra vaha jana chahiye…..

Rajnandini—munivar…mera rishi kab milega mujhe….?

Narad—sabhi loko ka bhraman karo .musibat me phanse .logo ki sahayta karo….shayad kahi tumhari mulaqat ho jaye

Rajnandini—apka koti koti dhanyawad munivar..pranam

Narad—tumhara kalyan ho..‼

Rajnandini devarshi narad ke vaha se jate hi turant ek baar phir se uss ped par rishi ke naam ke upar apne hotho ki mohar laga kar gaon ke liye nikal gayi.

Gaon me iss samay har taraf hahakar macha hua tha….azgar ke khooni darinde aaj mukhiya ki eklouti ladki ko jabran ghasit kar le ja rahe the.

Mukhiya—meri ladki ko chhod do…bhagwan se daro…arey papiyo uss masum ne tum logo ka kya bigada hai.

Ek Pishach—hahahaha…..hamara koi kuch nahi bigad sakta….yaha ka bhagwan Azgar hai…shaitan zindabad

2nd Pishach—iski ladki ko bhi nagn kar ke rath me nath do…tab pata chalega azgar se bagawat ka anzam

Vo abhi mukhiya ki ladki ke kapne phadne ke liye hath aage badhaye hi the ki vaha achanak tez hawaye chalne lagi aur in hawao ne kuch hi pal me bhayanak chakrawat ka roop dharan kar liya jisne azgar ke aadhe se adhik Pishach sainiko ko apne toofani bhanwar jaal me lapet liya…..,kisi ko bhi kuch dekhne samajhne ka mouka hi nahi mila.

Ye sab itna akasmat hua ki sab hairan rah gaye…kintu mukhiya aur baki gaon walo ke chehro me jaise rounak lout aayi thi.

Ek Pishach—kkkk…koun hai…? Kise apne prano ka bhay nahi hai….?

Rajnandini ka naam sun kar bache kuche sainik uss taraf dekhne lage…..samne rajnandini behad kroadh me ankhe kisi doobte sooraj ke jaisi ekdam lal kiye khadi thi…uske mukh ke andar se nikal rahi fufkar ki vajah se vaha chakrawat ka nirman ho raha tha…uske khule huye kesh aur gusse se bhara hua ye roop dekh kar sabhi ko vo bilkul ranchandi lag rahi thi.

“Raaaajjjjj…Nandiniiiiii” Sabhi gaon wale ek swar me khushi se chilla uthe.

2nd Pishach—ohh…Rajnandinii…akhir tu bill me se bahar nikal hi aayi…hahahaha…jaoooo pakad lo isseee

Sabhi khooni pishach tezi se rajnandini ko pakadne ke liye doude..kintu jaise hi uske najdik pahuche…Rajnandini ne jor se kroadhavesh me apne khule huye kesho ko jhatak diya.

Aur agle hi kshan uske in khule kesho ne asankhya atyant vishdhar naago ka roop le liya…aur uske sharir se niche utar kar unn sainiko ki taraf tedi medhi chaal se tezi se chalne lage….

Kuch hi samay me vaha par saanpo ki jaise baadh si aa gayi…sabhi sainik charo taraf se naago se ghir gaye.. rajnandini ka aisa vikral roop dekh kar sabhi buri tarah se bhaybheet hokar idhar udhar bhagne ki koshish karne lage…kintu jis taraf bhi mudte saanpo ka jhund unke upar toot padta.

Charo taraf azgar ke unn pishach sainiko ki dardnak cheekhe hawao me goonje lagi….



Udhar swarg lok me ek nayi subah ke sath adii ne jaise hi ankhe kholi to apne samne munish ko baithe huye paya jisne ardh mishrit mushkan ke sath adii ka swagat kiya.

Munish—nayi subah mubarak ho dost.

Adii—tumhe bhi dost…lekin itni subah tum yaha kaise…?

Munish (mann me)—apni hi karni ka phal bhog raha hu….na tujhe vardan deta na meri aisi halat hoti…patni ke hote huye bhi usko chhod kar sari raat teri nigarani karni pad rahi hai….aaj isko din me hi kisi apsara ke paas le jata hu..uske sath sambhog kar lega to raat me chinta nahi rahegi mujhe.

Adii—kin khayalo me kho gaye dost….?

Munish—tum jaldi se taiyyar ho jao..phir main tumhe asli sukh ke darshan karata hu aaj swarg me.

Adii (jamhayi lete huye)—aaj nahi phir kabhi..aaj main aram karna chahta hu..tum ghum aao thodi der.

Munish (mann me)—haan beta…main yaha ghumne jau aur tu idhar mera kalyan kar de...aisi galti hargij nahi karunga main ab

Munish—nahi..alasya karna achchi baat nahi hai…tumhe aaj chalna hi hoga..agar mujhe apna dost mante ho to

Adii—theek hai bhai….teri dosti ke liye ye bhi sahi

Adii ke snan dhyan ke pashchat dono taiyyar ho gaye bahar jane ke liye…lekin adii ki ankhe bar bar madhvi ko talash kar rahi thi jo abhi tak nazar nahi aayi thi…adii ke mann ki ye halat munish samajh gaya.

Munish (mann me)—achcha hua ki maine aaj subah hi madhvi ko apni maa se milne bhej diya…lagta hai usko kuch din vahi rukne ko bol du aur maa ko yaha bula leta hu…adii jab madhvi ko nahi dekhega to shayad sudhar jaye.

Adii—madhvi bhabhi nahi dikh rahi hain…main unhe bata kar aata hu…nahi to vo bevajah pareshan hongi

Munish—maine usko bata diya hai…chalo ab jaldi yaha se

Adii (beman se)—achcha....theekkkk hai...phir


Munish usko lekar ek apsara ke paas le gaya jaha dono ne maze kiye…iss douran munish ne telepathy ke jariye madhvi ko kuch din vahi rukne ka bol diya….tab tak munish ne apni maa ko yaha aane ko kah diya.

Din bhar ghum phir kar dono shaam hone se pahle hi lout aaye…munish adii ko ghar pahucha kar bahar chala gaya..adii jaise hi andar aaya to usse madhvi ke kamre me kisi ke sabhi vastra pade huye the sath hi bathroom me kisi ke nahane ki awaz aa rahi thi.

Adii (mann me)—lagta hai madhvi bhabhi andar naha rahi hain…badhiya mouka hai ye chutiya bhi nahi hai.

Ye soch kar usne phataphat apne kapde utare aur ghus gaya bathroom ke andar…..

Idhar dharti me sabhi Ganpat pat rai ki party me shareek hone ke liye nikal pade the..magar shree iss samay gadi me baithe baithe kahi khoyi huyi thi…

Shree (mann me)—adii ne bhi mujhe khatra ke bare me bataya tha….mujhe adii par vishwash karna chahiye tha.. kam se kam aaj itna tadapna to nahi padta…hey bhagwan adii jinda ho..meri vinti sun lo…phir aap se kabhi kuch nahi magugi….

Raat ke Andhere Mein Sara Jahan Sota Hai
Lekin Kisi Ki Yaad Mein Ye Dil Rota Hai
Khuda Kare Ki Kisi Par Koi Fida Na Ho
Agar Ho To Mout Se Pahle Juda Na Ho​

Vaha pahuchte hi Ganpat Rai ne sabhi ka bahut swagat kiya...lekin sabhi ki nigahe to khatra ko talash kar rahi thi.... inke piche piche charo dost bhi vaha pahuch gaye aur bahar se hi shree par nigrani rakhne lage.

Gangu—hame andar chalna chahiye....itni bheed me koi chinta ki baat nahi hai

Nangu—ha chalo

Jaise hi charo andar jane ko huye ki kisi ne bari bari se charo ko utha kar patak diya...ab sabhi ghabra gaye..lekin koi tha jisne kisi ko inn charo ko patakte huye dekh liya tha.

Ha ha ha lagta hain Adii ab Munish ki maa ka bhi kalyan kar dega aur do power usko jan kalyan ki magar raat ko to rishi aa jata hain to ab to adii ko jana hoga na coz ab to saanjh ho chuki hain. Idhar kaun hai .jo in charo dosto ko utha utha kar phek raha hai aur kia adii ki family khatra se mil payegi coz aana to usay bhi thaa party me.