Prince sarkash
Active Member
- 790
- 649
- 108
Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)
- Thread starter anandsngh12
- Start date
- 4,476,382
Day by day your grip on the flow of story is improving... Keep it up...
Shekhar...
Shekhar...
Amit rox
Member
- 256
- 320
- 78
Rocky2602
Well-Known Member
- 8,312
- 15,957
- 189
sonukale
Well-Known Member
- 6,081
- 6,710
- 143
- 28,992
- 64,869
- 173
UPDATE*51
Mai lagatar us awaz ka pichha karte huye nikaal gaon me aa gaya....lekin mujhe vo kahi nahi dikhi ...lekin tabhi mujhe aisa laga jaisa koi abhi abhi mere piche se gujra hai
Mai turant palat gaya...lekin vaha koi nahi tha....mai idhar udhar nazar ghuma kar dekhne laga...tabhi mujhe phir se laga ki is baar koi mere karib se gujra hai
Punah us payal ki jhankar aur madhur gane ki awaz sunayi dene lagi...mai udhar hi chalta gaya....us awaz ka pichha karte....aur tabhi
Ab aage.......
Mai us payal bajne ki awaz ka pichha karte huye dono gaon ke beecho beech aa gaya….aur tabhi mere piche se kisi ladki ke hasne ki awaz aane lagi
Mai turant piche palta to vaha kuch nahi...mera to dimag hi kharab ho gaya…..maine adrishya roop me vaha moujud cheezo aur paarloukik jeev ko dekhne ke liye apni divya drishti ki power ko jagrit kar diya
Aur tabhi mere samne ek 23-24 saal ki nav yuvti safed libas me nazar aane lagi bilkul mere samne....mai usse do kadam piche ho gaya..vo ab bhi meri taraf dekh dekh kar hase ja rahi thi
Mai—koun ho tum..... ?
Ladki—hahahaha...to tumne mujhe dekh liya….chalo achcha hai....hihihihi
Mai—mere sawal ka ye jawab nahi hai
Ladki—tum yaha kyo aaye ho.......mai janti hu..adi
Mai (shocked)—tum mera naam kaise janti ho... ?.. koun ho tum... ?
Ladki—ek atma
Mai—vo to mai bhi janta hu….apni pahchan batao
Ladki—mai ek chudail hu….yaha raat me aane ale logo ka shikar karke unka khoon piti hu aur apni bhookh mitati hu
Mai—mujhe yaha kyo bulaya tumne…?
Ladki—khoon pine ke liye
Mai—mera khoon pina tumhare bas me nahi hai
Ladki—vo to abhi malum pad jayega
Ye kahkar usne apna roop ek bhayanak chudail ka bana liya......ek baar to mai bhi uska itna ghinona roop dekh kar darr gaya tha kintu mujhe jaldi hi ye abhas ho gaya ki mere paas shaktiya hain
Vo to achcha hua ki margret mere sath nahi hai…warna vo to ise dekhte hi mar jati….samne ki oor do bade bade daant….hatho ke nakhun kisi chaku jitne lamne jo kisi ka bhi sina chhalni kar de
Usne jaise hi mujhe maarne ke liye apne hath badhaye to mere kawach ne use utha kar door phek diya...vo hairat se meri taraf dekhne lagi
Mai—maine pahle hi kaha tha..mera khoon pina tere bas ka rog nahi hai….ab sidhi tarah se apni asliyat warna
Ladki (chudail)—warna kya kar lega….thodi si tantrik vidhya sikh kar khud ko mujhse jyada taqatwar samajhta hai ye le
Usne ek baar phir se mujh par hamla kiya..natiza vahi ka vahi raha….mere suraksha kawach ke hote huye mai poori tarah se safe tha…apni nakami par vo tilmila gayi
Gusse me is baar usne jor se chillane lagi…meri to kuch samajh me nahi aaya ki ye gala kyo phad rahi hai apna itna jor jor se….lekin kuch der baad sab samajh aa gaya
Kuch der me hi mere aas paas vaha chudailo ka poora jhund ekattha ho gaya……sab ki sab mujhe aise gusse se ghurne lagi jaise maine jabardasti unki gaand mar li ho aur ab vo uska badla lena chahti ho
Ladki—hahahaha….ab kya karega…kaha bach ke jayega mujhse…hahaha…
Mai—mai to yahi hu…mujhe to kahi nahi jana…par tum logo ko jarur aaj yaha se hamesha ke liye nikal dunga
Ladki (gusse me)—jaoooo…sab pakad lo isko…jao
Sab ki sab gusse se meri taraf bhagte huye toot padi aur agle hi pal koi idhar to koi udhar jakar girne lagi…kawach ne unko mere paas aate hi fekna shuru kar diya
Ab to vo ladki bahut hairan ho gayi…ab uski ankho me gusse ki jagah vishmay ke bhav aa gaye the…..uske sath hi baki sab bhi chakit hokar mujhe hi dekh rahi thi…ab unme se kisi me bhi mere najdik aane ki himmat nahi rah gayi thi
Mai—ab bhi kahta hu sidhi tarah se bata do nahi to agli bar nahi puchhunga…sidhe kaid kar lunga tum sab ko
Ladki—mujhe aur kaid…hahahaha…arey ja ja…mujhe kaid karna itna asan nahi hai…abhi tune meri taqat dekhi kaha hai
Mai—theek hai…to ab dikha do…chudail
Ladki (gusse me)—mujhe chudail bolne ki teri himmat kaise huyi…?
Mai—ab chudail ko chudail nahi to kya rajkumari kahu…?
Ladki (jor se)—ha…mai rajkumari hi hu
Mai (mann me)—ye to gusse me sab batane lagi...ise aur gussa dilakar isse sab pata kar leta hu...agar ye sach me yaha ki rajkumari huyi to isse bahut kuch malum chal sakta hai
Mai—tum aur rajkumari.... ?..shmashan ki...hahaha...jise koi bhi kaid kar le
Ladki—nahii....mai is rajya ki rajkumari hu...samjha
Mai—arey ja ja...jhuthi kahi ki....kaisa rajya aur kaisi rajkumari....aaine me kabhi shakal dekhi hai apni...chudail hai tu chudail samjhi...chudail
Ladki (gusse se)—hhhhhhh.....mai tujhe kachcha chaba jaungi.....
Mai—jhuthi.
Ladki—mai jhuthi nahi hu....mai rajkumari hu...rajkumari hu....rajkumari hu
Mai—to baar baar kyo bol rahi hai...mai rajkumari hu...hihihi
Ladki—mai teraaa....teraa..khoon pi jaungi
Mai—akhir ek chudail kar bhi kya sakti hai...khoon chusne ke siwa
Ladki—tujhe samajh nahi aata....mai rajkumari hu...chudail nahi bolna mujhe
Mai—jab rajya hi nahi hai to tu rajkumari kaise ban gayi... ?..tu chudail hai chudail
Ladki (gusse se)—tujhe to ab pakka marungi...
Mai—achcha agar tu rajkumari hai to mere ek sawal ka jawab de to main maan lunga ki tu rajkumari hai
Ladki—puch..jaldi se puch….phir mai tera khoon piyungi
Mai—‘’Mann ki har baat Ekatthi ki, Ek baat banayi Mitti ki’’....is paheli ka arth kya hai... ?...agar tune sahi sahi bata diya to main maan lunga ki tu rajkumari hai
Ladki—iska matlab hai ‘’Samadhi Lena’’....iska yahi sahi matlab hai....ab bol jaldi se ki mai rajkumari hu
Mai—mai aise kaise maan lu ki tu sahi bata rahi hai....tu to vaise bhi jhuthi hai
Ladki (jor se)—maine sach bataya hai...mai jhuth nahi bolti,..samjha
Mai—mai nahi manta ki tu sahi bol rahi hai.....
Ladki (jor se)—mai jhuth nahi bolti...ye paheli mere dada ji ne apne antim samay me tilism baandhne ke liye banayi thi...samjha
Mai (shocked)—(mann me) ye to gajab ho gaya.....ye bade kaam ki cheez hai....ise aur bhadka ke us tilism aur neela patthar ka bhi raaz jaan leta hu.....vaise bhi ladkiyo me jyada dimag to hota nahi hai...gusse me jaldi bata degi
Mai—Tilism naam ki koi cheez hinahi hoti...nujhe bewkoof samjha hai kya... ?..jhuthi kahi ki
Ladki—chal mai tujhe abhi sabit kar ke dikhati hu...tab to manega na
Mai—jab tu sabit hi nahi kar payegi to mere maanne ka sawal hi nahi ayega...chudail..jhuthi chudail
Ladki—tujheee...naaa..mainnnn..hhhh....chal mere sath abhi sabit karti hu..ki tilism hota hai
Mai uske piche piche chalne laga...vo mere aage aage gusse se tilmilate huye jaldi jaldi chal rahi thi...mujhe lekar vo subah wale us ghar me le aayi jaha sona ne margret ki gaand me chimti kati thi
Mai—mujhe yaha kyo layi ho.... ?..khandahar ghar me
Ladki—mai abhi sabit karti hu...tilism hota hai
Mai—is khandhar me tilism..hihihi....chudail ab khandhar me nahi to kya mahal me le ke jayegi
Ladki—ye mere dada ji ka kaksh hua karta tha kabhi..samjha...yahi unhone samadhi li thi
Mai—yaha.... ?..vaise tere dada ji ko samadhi liye huye kitna samay beet chuka hai... ?
Ladki—1500 saal pahle unhone yahi samadhi li thi
Mai (full shocked)—omg..matlab ye baat itni purani hai....
Sorry friends, Mere laptop ki battery khatam hone wali hai isliye abhi jitna likh paya utna post kar raha hu
Next update raat me
Mai turant palat gaya...lekin vaha koi nahi tha....mai idhar udhar nazar ghuma kar dekhne laga...tabhi mujhe phir se laga ki is baar koi mere karib se gujra hai
Punah us payal ki jhankar aur madhur gane ki awaz sunayi dene lagi...mai udhar hi chalta gaya....us awaz ka pichha karte....aur tabhi
Ab aage.......
Mai us payal bajne ki awaz ka pichha karte huye dono gaon ke beecho beech aa gaya….aur tabhi mere piche se kisi ladki ke hasne ki awaz aane lagi
Mai turant piche palta to vaha kuch nahi...mera to dimag hi kharab ho gaya…..maine adrishya roop me vaha moujud cheezo aur paarloukik jeev ko dekhne ke liye apni divya drishti ki power ko jagrit kar diya
Aur tabhi mere samne ek 23-24 saal ki nav yuvti safed libas me nazar aane lagi bilkul mere samne....mai usse do kadam piche ho gaya..vo ab bhi meri taraf dekh dekh kar hase ja rahi thi
Mai—koun ho tum..... ?
Ladki—hahahaha...to tumne mujhe dekh liya….chalo achcha hai....hihihihi
Mai—mere sawal ka ye jawab nahi hai
Ladki—tum yaha kyo aaye ho.......mai janti hu..adi
Mai (shocked)—tum mera naam kaise janti ho... ?.. koun ho tum... ?
Ladki—ek atma
Mai—vo to mai bhi janta hu….apni pahchan batao
Ladki—mai ek chudail hu….yaha raat me aane ale logo ka shikar karke unka khoon piti hu aur apni bhookh mitati hu
Mai—mujhe yaha kyo bulaya tumne…?
Ladki—khoon pine ke liye
Mai—mera khoon pina tumhare bas me nahi hai
Ladki—vo to abhi malum pad jayega
Ye kahkar usne apna roop ek bhayanak chudail ka bana liya......ek baar to mai bhi uska itna ghinona roop dekh kar darr gaya tha kintu mujhe jaldi hi ye abhas ho gaya ki mere paas shaktiya hain
Vo to achcha hua ki margret mere sath nahi hai…warna vo to ise dekhte hi mar jati….samne ki oor do bade bade daant….hatho ke nakhun kisi chaku jitne lamne jo kisi ka bhi sina chhalni kar de
Usne jaise hi mujhe maarne ke liye apne hath badhaye to mere kawach ne use utha kar door phek diya...vo hairat se meri taraf dekhne lagi
Mai—maine pahle hi kaha tha..mera khoon pina tere bas ka rog nahi hai….ab sidhi tarah se apni asliyat warna
Ladki (chudail)—warna kya kar lega….thodi si tantrik vidhya sikh kar khud ko mujhse jyada taqatwar samajhta hai ye le
Usne ek baar phir se mujh par hamla kiya..natiza vahi ka vahi raha….mere suraksha kawach ke hote huye mai poori tarah se safe tha…apni nakami par vo tilmila gayi
Gusse me is baar usne jor se chillane lagi…meri to kuch samajh me nahi aaya ki ye gala kyo phad rahi hai apna itna jor jor se….lekin kuch der baad sab samajh aa gaya
Kuch der me hi mere aas paas vaha chudailo ka poora jhund ekattha ho gaya……sab ki sab mujhe aise gusse se ghurne lagi jaise maine jabardasti unki gaand mar li ho aur ab vo uska badla lena chahti ho
Ladki—hahahaha….ab kya karega…kaha bach ke jayega mujhse…hahaha…
Mai—mai to yahi hu…mujhe to kahi nahi jana…par tum logo ko jarur aaj yaha se hamesha ke liye nikal dunga
Ladki (gusse me)—jaoooo…sab pakad lo isko…jao
Sab ki sab gusse se meri taraf bhagte huye toot padi aur agle hi pal koi idhar to koi udhar jakar girne lagi…kawach ne unko mere paas aate hi fekna shuru kar diya
Ab to vo ladki bahut hairan ho gayi…ab uski ankho me gusse ki jagah vishmay ke bhav aa gaye the…..uske sath hi baki sab bhi chakit hokar mujhe hi dekh rahi thi…ab unme se kisi me bhi mere najdik aane ki himmat nahi rah gayi thi
Mai—ab bhi kahta hu sidhi tarah se bata do nahi to agli bar nahi puchhunga…sidhe kaid kar lunga tum sab ko
Ladki—mujhe aur kaid…hahahaha…arey ja ja…mujhe kaid karna itna asan nahi hai…abhi tune meri taqat dekhi kaha hai
Mai—theek hai…to ab dikha do…chudail
Ladki (gusse me)—mujhe chudail bolne ki teri himmat kaise huyi…?
Mai—ab chudail ko chudail nahi to kya rajkumari kahu…?
Ladki (jor se)—ha…mai rajkumari hi hu
Mai (mann me)—ye to gusse me sab batane lagi...ise aur gussa dilakar isse sab pata kar leta hu...agar ye sach me yaha ki rajkumari huyi to isse bahut kuch malum chal sakta hai
Mai—tum aur rajkumari.... ?..shmashan ki...hahaha...jise koi bhi kaid kar le
Ladki—nahii....mai is rajya ki rajkumari hu...samjha
Mai—arey ja ja...jhuthi kahi ki....kaisa rajya aur kaisi rajkumari....aaine me kabhi shakal dekhi hai apni...chudail hai tu chudail samjhi...chudail
Ladki (gusse se)—hhhhhhh.....mai tujhe kachcha chaba jaungi.....
Mai—jhuthi.
Ladki—mai jhuthi nahi hu....mai rajkumari hu...rajkumari hu....rajkumari hu
Mai—to baar baar kyo bol rahi hai...mai rajkumari hu...hihihi
Ladki—mai teraaa....teraa..khoon pi jaungi
Mai—akhir ek chudail kar bhi kya sakti hai...khoon chusne ke siwa
Ladki—tujhe samajh nahi aata....mai rajkumari hu...chudail nahi bolna mujhe
Mai—jab rajya hi nahi hai to tu rajkumari kaise ban gayi... ?..tu chudail hai chudail
Ladki (gusse se)—tujhe to ab pakka marungi...
Mai—achcha agar tu rajkumari hai to mere ek sawal ka jawab de to main maan lunga ki tu rajkumari hai
Ladki—puch..jaldi se puch….phir mai tera khoon piyungi
Mai—‘’Mann ki har baat Ekatthi ki, Ek baat banayi Mitti ki’’....is paheli ka arth kya hai... ?...agar tune sahi sahi bata diya to main maan lunga ki tu rajkumari hai
Ladki—iska matlab hai ‘’Samadhi Lena’’....iska yahi sahi matlab hai....ab bol jaldi se ki mai rajkumari hu
Mai—mai aise kaise maan lu ki tu sahi bata rahi hai....tu to vaise bhi jhuthi hai
Ladki (jor se)—maine sach bataya hai...mai jhuth nahi bolti,..samjha
Mai—mai nahi manta ki tu sahi bol rahi hai.....
Ladki (jor se)—mai jhuth nahi bolti...ye paheli mere dada ji ne apne antim samay me tilism baandhne ke liye banayi thi...samjha
Mai (shocked)—(mann me) ye to gajab ho gaya.....ye bade kaam ki cheez hai....ise aur bhadka ke us tilism aur neela patthar ka bhi raaz jaan leta hu.....vaise bhi ladkiyo me jyada dimag to hota nahi hai...gusse me jaldi bata degi
Mai—Tilism naam ki koi cheez hinahi hoti...nujhe bewkoof samjha hai kya... ?..jhuthi kahi ki
Ladki—chal mai tujhe abhi sabit kar ke dikhati hu...tab to manega na
Mai—jab tu sabit hi nahi kar payegi to mere maanne ka sawal hi nahi ayega...chudail..jhuthi chudail
Ladki—tujheee...naaa..mainnnn..hhhh....chal mere sath abhi sabit karti hu..ki tilism hota hai
Mai uske piche piche chalne laga...vo mere aage aage gusse se tilmilate huye jaldi jaldi chal rahi thi...mujhe lekar vo subah wale us ghar me le aayi jaha sona ne margret ki gaand me chimti kati thi
Mai—mujhe yaha kyo layi ho.... ?..khandahar ghar me
Ladki—mai abhi sabit karti hu...tilism hota hai
Mai—is khandhar me tilism..hihihi....chudail ab khandhar me nahi to kya mahal me le ke jayegi
Ladki—ye mere dada ji ka kaksh hua karta tha kabhi..samjha...yahi unhone samadhi li thi
Mai—yaha.... ?..vaise tere dada ji ko samadhi liye huye kitna samay beet chuka hai... ?
Ladki—1500 saal pahle unhone yahi samadhi li thi
Mai (full shocked)—omg..matlab ye baat itni purani hai....
Sorry friends, Mere laptop ki battery khatam hone wali hai isliye abhi jitna likh paya utna post kar raha hu
Next update raat me