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UPDATE*29


Shree—kya naam bataya tumne apna abhi...... ?



Mai—adi……aditya rajvansh



Shree (jor se )—kyaaaa….aditya …..rajvansh……adi…



Ab aage……..



Mai—kya hua….aise kyo chilla rahi ho….mere naam me koi kharabi hai kya….?



Shree (jor se saans lete huye)—pahle meri baat ka jawab do….



Mai—koun si baat….?



Shree—tumhara naam…adi…matlab aditya rajvansh hai



Mai—ha…bata to chuka hu….



Shree—papa ka naam….anand rajvansh



Mai (shocked)—haaaannnnnn



Shree—aur mummy ka naam…urmila rajvansh…..right



Mai (full shocked)—hnnnnnn….lekin tumhe kaise malum….?



Shree (jor se chillakar)—ooo…adiiiiiiii



Shree doud ke mere gale se lag gayi….mai to pahle hi uski bato se shock me tha ab aise gale lagne se poori tarah hairan rah gaya..



Mai—chhodo….ye kya hai..dur raho…mujhe phir se pitna nahi hai…samjhi



Shree ke aise jor se chillane se uski mummy bahar aa gayi aur jab unhone use mere gale se lage dekha to...gussa ho gayi



Megha—(chilla kar)..shreeeeeee....ye kya hai sab....chalo jao andar....aur tum ...tumhe to mai bahut sharif ladka samajhti thi....chale jao yaha se...aur dubara mat aana



Mai shree ko alag kar ke jane laga to usne mera hath pakad liya....



Shree—mummy….ye adi hai…adi….apna adi



Megha—koun adi….



Shree—ufff…..apni mousi aur apki bahan urmila ka beta aditya rajvansh…



Megha (jor se)—kyaaaaa…..ye apna….adiiii..hai



Shree ki baat sun kar mujhe bahut tagda jhatka laga…..ye meri mousi hai….par mujhe to kisi ne kabhi kuch nahi bataya….na mom ne aur na hi dad ne…



Megha akar mujhe apne gale se chipka liya…..unke gale se lagte hi mujhe aisa ehsaas hone laga jaise ki mai apni mummy ke gale laga hu….bilkul vaisi hi feelings aa rahi thi mann me…



Megha—pagle tune bataya kyo nahi ki tu mera adi hai….



Shree—abhi to mujhe chilla rahi thi ab khud chipki khadi hain



Megha—aa andar beta….chal andar



Mai hairan tha…mai to shree ki pareshani dur karne yaha aaya tha lekin ye ek nayi hi baat samne aa gayi mere jiska mujhe aaj tak pata hi nahi tha…



Mai ab poori tarah sab kuch janna chahta tha sath hi shree ki pareshani bhi to main mousi ke sath andar aa gaya…



Megha—pahle bata itne din kaha tha…? Didi aur jija ji kaise hain….?



Mai—sab theek hain....mai england se yaha ghumne aaya hu



Shree—kya sach me tum england se aaye ho... ?



Mai—hnnnn



Megha—mai teri sagi mousi bhi hu aur teri chachi bhi…



Ye ek naya bomb phoota mere upar....



Mai—mai samjha nahi…



Shree—kyo ki meri aur teri mummy sagi bahan hain….vaise hi mere aur tere papa cousin brother hain…bachpan me mai tere sath bahut khelti thi



Mai—par mujhe to kuch yaad nahi hai



Megha—tab tum do mahine ke bhi nahi the…uske baad didi aur jija ji achanak yaha se kahi chale gaye bina kuch bataye….hamne bahut khoja unhe par kuch malum nahi chala…ek din yaha ki company me guard se pata chala ki ab vo videsh me settle ho gaye hain



Mai—mai ab chalta hu mousi…kal phir aunga..



Shree—chup chap baith ja yahi par....ab tujhe kahi na jane dungi..



Mai (mann me)—mom dad ne akhirye baat kabhi kyo nahi batayi....kyo chhupaya mujhse...kya vajah ho sakti hai.... ? mai aaj dhyan me pata karunga ye...



Megha—tu ruk mai khana lagati hu tere liye...



Shree—kaha kho gaya hero...



Mai—mai sach kahta hu…maine apko sapne me roj rote huye pareshan dekha hai….jaise aap apni help ke liye mujhe pukar rahi hain…kya pareshani hai apko…?



Shree (jhoothi hasi)—mujheee….nahi to…bhala mai kyo pareshan hone lagi



Mai—phir mai galat jagah baitha hu....sorry...mai chalta hu



Shree—arey kaha chal diya...ruk..ruk



Mai—chhodiye mujhe…mai koun hota hu…jo aap mujhe kuch bataogi…mujhe england se apke liye aana hi nahi chahiye tha..



Shree (udas)—achcha theek hai…..mai tujhe baad me sab bata dungi



Phir mousi ne khana lagaya…..mousa kahu ya chacha pata nahi lekin vo nashe me dhut hoke so gaye the to mujhe akele hi khana pada…



Khane ke baad maine jane ki ijajat mangi..lekin mousi aur shree iske liye ready hi nahi the..



Megha—kaha jaoge….yahi apna saman leke aa ja



Shree—bilkul



Mai—mousi mere friends bhi hain sath me….to ye thoda uchit nahi hoga….but mai kal jarur aunga…



Shree—ruk mai chalti hu tere sath



Mai—ok…(mujhe bhi to uski tension ka reason janna tha)



Thodi der me shree ready ho ke aa gayi to maine gadi aage hotel ki oor badha di…



Mai—ab bataiye kya baat hai….?



Shree—tujhe sach me mera dreams aata tha... ? par mai to bhagwan se prayer karti thi….



Mai—bhagwan khud kuch nahi karte….kisi na kisi ke madhyam se hi vo help karte hain….shayad apki madad ke liye unhone mujhe chuna ho…..aur isiliye apke sapne mujhe dikhe



Shree—pata nahi….but ye kisi chamatkar se kam nahi hai



Mai—ab batao bhi



Shree—adi…you know…ki…pahle mere papa ki bhi ek chhota business tha…..lekin unki ek buri adat thi drink karne ki….pahle to sab theek chal raha tha….lekin tum logo ke jane ke kuch saal baad se business me ghata hone laga…..papa tension me rahne lage….bank se ek bada loan bhi uthaya..jisse haalaat kuch theek ho jaye…lekin yaha bhi kismat ne dhokha diya…..papa tension me daily pine lage dhire dhire unki ye adat lat me badal gayi…..



Isi beech kismat ne hamare sath ek aur mazak kiya…..mera ek bada bhai bhi hai sanjay….jo yaha ke MLA deepak Gawande ke beti se ishq kar baitha….



Hame ye baat malum hone par mummy papa ne bhaiya ko bahut samjhaya lekin vo nahi mane… hame darr tha ki kahi gawande bhaiya ke sath kuch kare na…vo MLA banne ke pahle khatarnak gunda hua karta tha…



Mla ko ye baat ek din malum ho hi gayi…..uske admiyo ne ghar aakar khub tod phod ki….mummy aur papa ko khub mara bhi….mai college gayi thi tab…



Idhar bank walo ne loan vapis karne ka pressure dene lage….jiske chalte business bhi choupat ho gaya…ghar aur mummy ke jewar bechkar kuch paise bank ko return kiye…..



Papa to ab daru me raat din dube rahne lage …aur bhaiya to uss ladki ke pyar me pagal the…vo uske khyalo me hi khoye rahte…ghar chalana mushkil ho gaya…



Maine majburi me ek jagah part time job kar li…..kam se kam do waqt ki roti to milne lagi…ek din kuch police wale aaye aur bhaiya ko jabran utha ke le gaye…tab se aaj tak unka koi pata nahi hai



Maine aur mummy ne gawande ke samne apne hath pair jode ….lekin Gawande ne hamari vinti ke badle me kaha ki mujhe, uske sath sath uske sabhi admiyo aur sab police walo ke sath ek ek raat sona padega



Gawande kahta hai ki sanjay ne meri beti ke sath jo kiya hai uski keemat meri izzat hai….uske baad hi vo bhaiya ko chhodega…sath me bank ka loan bhi bhar dega



Idhar college me uska ladka rocky aaye din mere sath badazmizi karta rahta hai…mai chah kar bhi kuch bol nahi pati…bhaiya ke karan



Un logo ne warning di hai ki agar mai parso tak uski baat nahi maani to vo bhaiya ko maar denge… bas mai isiliye pareshan thi aur bhagwan se madad mangti thi… mummy bhi pareshan hai isi karan



Vo police wale roj ghar akar gandi gandi galiya dekar jate hain….jindaginarak se bhi badtar ho gayi hai hamari …ab tu hi bata mai rou nahi to kya karu…



Shree ki baat sun kar mujhe bahut dukh hua…kitni taklif jhel rahi hai ye ladki….phir bhi bahar se hasti mushkurati rahti hai…



Mai—tumhe ab rone ki koi jarurat nahi hai….mai aa gaya hu na…sab theek ho jayega



Shree (ankho me pani)—kuch theek nahi hoga adi….jyada se jyada tum paiso ka intazam kar ke loan pay kar doge….magar bhaiya….vo gawande bahut kamina aur khatarnak hai….ab to lagta hai ek hi rasta hai …uski baat manne ke baad mai khud kusi kar lu..



Mai—chatttaaak…….dubara ye pagalpan ki baat mere samne mat karna ….samjhi….jab kah diya na ki mai aa gaya hu….ab tumko nahi balki un sabko rona padega….



Shree (rote huye)—mai kya karu adi….andar se toot chuki hu mai…mujhe maf kar de….tu jaisa kahega mai vaisa hi karungi



Mai—to kal aap mere sath college chalogi....mai bhi to dekhu ye rocky me kitna dam hai



Tab tak hum hotel pahuch gaye bate karte huye…..shree ko mai apne room me le aaya…jaha margret julia ke muh par pair rakhe so rahi thi hath me mobile liye jisme screen par mera naam display ho raha tha…



Shree—ye sab ladkiya teri dost hain….?



Mai—ha kyo…?



Tabhi sonalika bathroom se bahar aayi..dono ek dusre ko dekh kar chounk gaye…



Sonalika—adi lagta hai tumne phir vahi kaam chalu kar diya..tharkipan



Mai—aisa kuch nahi hai



Shree—ek aur ladki….kitni ladkiyo ko dost bana ke laya hai…itni hi hain ki abhi koi aur bhi baki hai



Sonalika—ek aur hai…baju wale room me padi hai



Shree (shocked)—omg….adiiiii….tu ye sab karta hai…yahi seekha tune vaha jake….chhiii



Mai—meri maa ye sab dost hain…meri biwi ya girl friend nahi



Sonalika—mujhe chhod kar…..mai aur adi jaldi hi shadi karne wale hain



Mai—just shut up sona.....ye sab jhuth hai



Shree—mujhe mat samjha adi….ladkiyo se dosti ka matlb janti hu mai…itni akal hai mujhme



Mai—hamare beech kuch nahi hai….we are only good friends..aur ham sab yaha ghumne aaye hain



Sonalika—to iska matlab ye vahi ladki hai tumhare sapno wali



Mai—ji haa…..ab samajh me aaya ki nahi



Sonalika—samajh gayi...



Margret ke uthne ke baad maine sab ko aaj ki sari baat bata di jo shree ne batayi thi....sab ko dukh aur gussa dono aaye....



Maine mummy ko call karke unse aur dad se normally bate ki...phir hotel me hi dinner kar ke so gaye..shree mere sath soyi...jabki dono jani dushman ek sath (soutan)



Agle din mai shree ko lekar uske ghar aa gaya….mere sath mere friends bhi aaye….sab ka introduction mousi aur ajit se karaya…shayad meri detail unhe mousi ne de di thi..



Baki sab ko hotel chhod kar mai shree ke sath college chala gaya….
 

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