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Update - 162 ~ Garofano​

Ab tak...

Bade se bada aadmi uss pal waha stabdh reh gaya.

Veer ne apna sarr upar kiya. Wine ke aankhon me padne se use dhundhla dikhaayi de raha tha.

'Wh-Who!!?'

Ek khubsoorat si lady uski aankhon ke samaksh thi.

Par jhatka toh tab laga jab-

'Check!'

*Ding*

[No information available!]

'I-It can't be-!'

Ab aage...

Hotel Casa Belle
Night ~ 9:04 PM

*Chitter* *Chatter*

“Huh!??”

“Y-Ye kaun hai?”

Banquet hall me achanak hi kisi ki awaaz sunayi padi aur uss awaaz ke baad logo ke beech khusur pusur shuru ho gayi.

Sabhi ka dhyaan darwaaze ki orr tha. Ek shaksiyat ke aane se hi waha ka poora mahaul badal chuka tha.

“W-Wait! Shayad maine kahi dekha hai inhe. Y-Ye-”

“Huh??? No wayyy!!!!”

“Is she-?”

“My goddd!! She is- from Garofano cosmetics??!!!”




Ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki hotel ki first floor par apne qadam rakh andar aayi. Uski nigaahein saamne khade sabhi logo par tiki hui thi.

Kintu, agle hi pal woh thoda aage badhi aur mudte hue sirf ek shaks ki orr dekhi.




Veer!!

‘So, this is you!! Veer!’

Usko dekh woh apne mann me sochi. Aur turant hi,

‘Check!!!’

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Veer ki koi bhi information saamne na aate hi uske hontho par muskaan sajj gayi. Woh confirm kar chuki thi ki yahi Veer hai.




Jo log use jaante the, woh turant hi apni seat se khade ho chuke the. Aur jo nahi bhi jaante the, woh dusro ko dekh apne aap khade ho gaye. Kaera, Sonia. Gaurav jaise bade bade raees log sabhi iss lady se waaqif the.

Garofano!!




Uske naam pe hi uski company thi. Log aapas me baat karte rahe tab jaake baaki logo ko andaza hua ki ye ladki akhir kaun thi.

“T-Tumhe pata hai ye kaun hai?”

“Tum inhe nahi jaante? Inki company hai - Garofano. Saari fashion industry me bahut bada naam hai inka.”

“H-Haan! Woh South Korea se hai. Aur tum toh jaanti ho na ki waha beauty ko lekar kitna sensitive hai log? Plastic surgeries waha aam baat hai. Aur K-Pop se toh tum familiar ho hi na?”

“Ahh! H-Haan!”

“Garofano cosmetics bahut bada naam hai poore fashion world me. Saare cosmetics inke hi use hote hai. Perfumes se leke, make-up materials, aur wigs tak. It’s a complete package company.”

“Itna hi nahi, Garofano ka export trade bhi bahut zyada hai. USA se leke Europe, UAE harr bade bade desho me unke products bahut popular ho rahe hai.”

“O-Ohh!”

Kaera ki bauhe sikudi hui thi. Yahi haal Sonia ka bhi tha. Dono hi Garofano ke products se waaqif thi. Yaha tak ki Kaera ki personal make-up kit me khud Garofano Cosmetics ke do products maujood the.

Quality me uska koi jawaab hi nahi tha. Par aisi shaksiyat yaha Mumbai me iss hotel me kya kar rahi thi? Aur kuch derr pehle boli gayi woh baat?

Ladki muskuraayi aur thodi teevr awaaz me boli,

“Release him, this instant.”

Casa Belle ke jo bodyguards the woh pehle ladki ko dekhe, fir apne boss Aadesh ko jisne ishara karte hue turant hi Veer ko chorrne ka kaha. Baat ko samajhte hi unn sabhi ne Veer ko chorr diya.

Peeche khadi Kavya, Arohi, bhi utna hi hairaan thi. Tej aur Karan jo chalte hue seedha Veer ki orr hi aa rahe the, unke qadam bhi beech raaste me hi rukk gaye.

*Click* *Clack*

Ladki aage badhi. Uski high heels ki awaaz waha saaf saaf goonj rahi thi. Ab logo ka shor samapt ho chuka tha. Sab ki nazre issi par tiki hui thi ki iss ladki ka agla daav kya hone waala tha?

Veer ke chehre se wine uske gaalo se fisalte hue neeche boond-boond kar ke gir rahi thi. Apni daayi aankh ko mal usne apne qareeb aati ladki ko dekha jo atyadahik sundar prateet ho rahi thi.

‘Huh?’

Woh security ke pakde jaane ki wajah se thoda sa jhuka hua tha. Ladki uske qareeb aayi, apna ek haath badi hi inaayat se Veer ki orr aage badhaya. Uski chin ko thaama aur use upar uthaaya.

Veer ko sahi tareeqe se khade karte hi, usne apni nigaahein upar kar Veer ke chehre ko dekha. Uski aankhein harr jagah uski soorat par firr rahi thi.

Veer uss se kadd me lamba tha. Uski chin ko chorrte hi woh apne haath ki pehli ungli ke nakhoon ko badi hi komalta se Veer ke gaal par firaate hue neeche laayi.

Poore samay uske honth par woh muskaan ab bhi barkaraar thi. Fir ahista se uski orr jhukte hue woh boli,

“Such beautiful proportions. Your face is clearly the greatest asset. Wouldn’t it be bad if I cut it down? Hmm?”

Veer : Huh??

Veer uski baat ka matlab samajh na paaya. Magar, usne apna guard iss ladki ke prati badha diya. Uski kalaayi ko turant hi kass ke thaam Veer ne apni nazre uss par gadaayi.

Veer (glares) : Who are you?

Ladki Veer ko fir muskura ke dekhi aur boli,

“Shouldn’t you first release my hand?”

Veer ne kuch derr uske gore haath ko thaam ke rakha. Ek aam aadmi agar uss haath ko thaamta toh yahi sochta ki akhir kitna naazuk haath hai. Magar, Veer jaanta tha ki inn haatho me kitne raaz chhipe hue the.

She was a system owner, after all!

Veer ne ek gehri saans lete hue uska haath chorra toh ladki ne haath aage badhaate hue uski orr haath milaane ka prastaav rakha.

*Clasp*

Veer ne uska haath milaaya. Tab jaake ladki ne apna parichay diya.

Ladki (smiles) : I'm Garofano!!!

Veer : Garofano? Strange name!!

Uske muh se aisa jawaab sunn Garofano ke honth ek orr se upar uthe aur woh achanak se aage badh uske seene se chipak gayi.

Veer (surprised) : W-Whaaattt???

Garofano apna haath upar le jaate hue uske blazer ki breast pocket me lage hue ek artificial phool ki taraf le gayi.

Garofano : Tumhe pata hai ye flower kaun sa hai?

Iss baar woh Hindi me uske kaan ki taraf aate hue puchi.

Veer : Huh???

Garofano (smiles) : Ise hi Garofano kehte hai. Jo mard aksar apne coat ki pocket me lagaate hai.

Veer : That's-

[She's right!]

Pari ne uske mann me hi haami bharte hue jawaab diya.

Garofano : However, the one you are wearing right now is artificial. But not me!! *smiles*

Idhar Garofano jab Veer ke gale se lagi, toh tamaam janta ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Tejal samet Veer ki sabhi behno ke yahi haal the. Unhe vishvaas nahi ho raha tha. Utsukta bhi thi, hairani bhi lekin kahi na kahi ek dard bhi. Koi gerr ladki Veer se chipak ke khadi thi. Pata nahi kyu par iss waqt unhe ye bilkul bhi accha nahi lag raha tha.

Bhumika ko chorr Tej, Arohi, Kavya teeno hi iss anubhuti ko mehsoos kar paa rahi thi.

Toh wahi,

*Thud*

Kaera ki round table par zorr se ek water bottle giri.

'Huh?'

Julia ne fauran hi mud ke apni Miss ko dekha toh paaya ki Kaera behad hi zorr se table ko pakde hue thi. Kass ke bheechne ke kaaran table par rakhi woh bottle gir gayi thi.

Kaera : Julia!!!

Uske honth thar-thara rahe the. Aankhon me woh ladki Veer se chipke hue khadi pratibimb ho rahi thi. Dekh paa rahi thi woh ki kaise uss ladki ke haath kaha kaha jaa rahe the.

Julia harr baat samajhti thi. Apna sarr naraazgi me usne hilaaya. Naraaz woh Veer se nahi thi, balki apni Miss se hi thi.

Julia : This will happen, if you won't give Young Master Veer any signal, Miss.

Kaera (glances) : S-Signal?

Julia (nods) : Look at him!

Kaera ne Julia ki nazro ka peecha kiya aur punaah Veer aur Garofano ko ek saath dekha.

Julia : Young Master Veer is totally clueless with your current behaviour.

Kaera : Clueless? L-Lekin kyu? I-

Julia : Shhh!

Kaera : Huh??

Julia : You are not giving him any chance Miss. He has no clue.

Kaera : L-Lekin-! He should be the one to take the responsibility. H-He- He did it with me. And he-

Julia (gasps) : Ahhh!

Kaera ke muh se akhir nikal hi gaya. Veer aur uske beech uss pehli raat akhir kya hua tha. Julia ye nahi jaanti thi ki Kaera aur Veer ke beech jismaani sambandh pehle hi bann chuke hai. Par aaj Kaera ke muh se sach baahar aa chuka tha.

Ye toh shukr tha jo Karan, Ruchika, Jassi ya Raghu me se koi bhi uske aas paas nahi tha, siwae Julia ke. Warna ye baat sabhi ko sunaayi de jaani thi.

Julia : M-Miss? Y-You!!! Did it with-!??

Kaera jab use mudte hue ghoori toh Julia shaant ho gayi. Magar, uske hontho par muskurahat thi.

'Never knew Miss was this fast! Fufu~'

Julia : Anyways!! If you want to make him take the responsibility. Then, give him a sign Miss.

Kaera : Sign? Kaisa sign?

Julia (smiles) : That you're approachable. Show him that he can claim you.

Kaera ka sarr jaise kuch ehsaas hote hue neeche jhuk gaya. Julia ki baat sahi thi. Agar woh aise hi gussa karti rahi, toh bhala Veer kaise kuch samajh payega.

Wahi yaha, Sonia Autoshield ke maalik Tanishq ke saath deal karne ke liye majboor thi aur yahi fasa ke reh gayi thi.

Woh chaahti thi aage badhana, nahi dekh paa rahi thi woh ye sab. Lekin, kuch tha jo uske qadmo ko aage badhne nahi diya.

Veer ek behad accha ladka tha. Uska accha dost bhi. Ek alag sa ladka jiske prati woh pehli baar iss tarah approach kar baat kiya karti thi. Fir, kyu jab aaj woh mushqil me tha toh uske perr nahi badhe?

Woh kaaran nahi jaanti thi. Par, uska dimaag jaanta tha. Jo abhi batane se mana kar raha tha. Unn dono ke beech kabhi bhi nazdeekiya nahi bann paayi. Dono bas dost hi the. Kam vartalaap ke chalte dono bas isi rishte me bandh ke reh chuke the.

Agar unke beech kuch lamhaat kabhi bane hote toh Sonia iss deal ko kab ka thukra ke Veer ki orr bhaag chuki hoti. Par ye kamiyaa hi use rok rahi thi. Woh nahi jaanti thi. Woh bas wahi kar rahi thi, jo uska dimaag uss se iss waqt karwa raha tha. Aur, woh tha ye deal ko haath se na jaane dena.

Par taajub use bhi hua tha. Garofano ko iss qadar Veer ke ird gird lipte hue dekh ke ek ajeeb si peeda, uske dil me uthi. Kisi kaaran, Garofano ka uss tarah Veer ke seene par haath rakhna use zara bhi raas nahi aaya.

Magar idhar deen duniya ko bhulaaye Veer aur Garofano ek dusre ke prati hi focused the.

Veer : Toh tum nahi bataane waali ki tum kaun ho?

Garofano (smiles) : Didn't I tell you? I'm Garofano. I run the most popular cosmetics company in the whole South Korea. Is that enough for an introduction?

Veer ne kuch na kaha. Woh bas dekhta raha. Aadesh ki iss waqt haalat kaafi kharab thi. Veer ke saath uski assistant iss tarah pesh aayi thi. Use pata hi nahi tha ki itni badi shaksiyat Veer se parichit thi.

Zaahir hai Veer aur Garofano ke beech jo bhi baate ho rahi thi woh logo ko sunaayi nahi de rahi thi.

Garofano Veer ko chorr Aadesh ki orr mudi aur use ghoorte hi,

Garofano : Is that how you treat the one who represented your nation abroad?

Uske prashn uthaane par waha khada tamaam aadmi uski baat se pehle glaani mehsoos kiya aur fir sehmat bhi hua. Abhi kuch derr pehle hi unhone Veer ka sammaan kar taaliyaan bajaayi thi. Aur ab jab uske saath aisa ho raha tha toh woh sab khamosh the?

Ek baahri ladki ko aake unke beech hastakshep karna pad raha tha? Kya chhavi reh jaane waali thi unke nation ki aise me? Aur, fir bilkul wahi hua jaisa Garofano umeed kar rahi thi.

“Haan Haan! Ye sarasar galat hai!!!”

“Bilkul! Veer, hamare desh ki shaan hai. Unhone hamare desh ka naam baahar raushan kiya hai.”

“Haan! Sahi kaha! Unhone iss baat ka sandesh diya hai ki ek bhaarteeya desh videsh nahi dekhta, woh sirf jaan bachaane ki sochta hai.”

“Bilkul! Aur aaj hum sab aisa hote kaise dekh sakte hai? Just because he doesn’t have any C-Suite profile? Sirf isliye?”

“Right! Aise me toh iss card ko koi matlab hi nahi na. Jab Veer jaise desh ke liye khade hone waale log ke saath iss tarah ka vyavhaar kiya jaa raha hai. Toh kya matlab?”

Aadesh ki assistant, iss akasmaat aaye badlaav se ghabra uthi. Ye achanak se itna parivartan kaise aa gaya? Garofano chup chaap mann hi mann muskuraate hue sab kuch dekh rahi thi.

Garofano : Mister? Where are your manners?

Aadesh : H-Huhh!?

Aadesh turant kiye gaye iss sawaal se sakpaka gaya. Uska plan backfire kar raha tha. Agar Unicard logo ne nahi liya toh uska bhaari nuksaan ho jaane waala tha.

Garofano : Hmm?

Aadesh : Ahahahaha!

Woh apni farzi hassi lete hue apne haath jod aage badha, Garofano se haath milaate hue usne turant hi palat ke apni assistant ko gusse se dekha.

Aadesh : Aage aao aur maafi maango!!

Assistant : Ah!! P-Par-

Aadesh : Sunayi nahi diya maine kya kaha?

Assistant ghabraate hue Garofano ke saamne aayi aur jhukte hue boli,

Assistant : I-I’m sorry!!!

Garofano (smirks) : Why are you apologizing to me?

Assistant : Huh???

Garofano : Apologize to him!

Uska ishara Veer ki orr tha. Assistant ne apne daant meese, aur aage hote hue woh Veer ke samaksh jhuki,

Assistant : I’m sorry!

Jis assistant ne uss par wine feki thi wahi ab apna sarr jhukaaye khade hue uss se maafi maang rahi thi. Veer ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Woh bas adhkhuli aankhon se use dekh raha tha.

Garofano : Mister Aadesh!

Aadesh : Ah!! Yes! Yes!

Aadesh ki kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usne toh itni badi guest ko invite kiya hi nahi tha. Fir bhala ye shaksiyat uski hotel me kya kar rahi thi? Kya Veer se iske connection the? Agar aisa tha, toh woh ye mauka haath se jaane nahi dena chahta tha.

Garofano : My Garofano cosmetics are in need of a new CEO. And, I’m giving the post to him. Do you have any problem with that?

Iss se pehle ki Aadesh uss sawaal ka jawaab de paata. Veer ka jawaab pehle hi aa gaya.

Veer : No need!!!

Garofano (turns) : Hmm?

Veer (stares) : I can build my empire on my own. There is no need.

[Ohhh!?]

Pari ki aankhon me ek chamak aayi Veer ka jawaab sunte hue. Veer itni badi post ko yu hi thukra raha tha. Woh jaanti thi ki Garofano use kaam karne ke liye bhi nahi kahegi. Bas naam se hi CEO banana hai aur free ki salary bhi use milti. Magar Veer ne ek jhatke me iss offer ko reject kar diya.

Garofano uski aankhon me jaise woh jwaala, woh aatm-vishvaas, woh gambheerta dekh paa rahi thi. Woh muskurayi,

Garofano : I see!!

Par Aadesh chaaplusi ke chalte apna daav kaise bhi kar ke aaj khelne waala tha. Uska ek hi uddeshya tha. Kaise bhi karke Garofano jaisi business partner ko Veer ke favour se hata ke apne favour me laana.

Par woh ye nahi jaanta tha ki Garofano aur Veer. Dono hi system owners the. Aur dono hi isliye ek dusre ke liye interest le rahe the bina ek dusre ko jaane.

Chaahe jitni hi koshish woh aaj kyu na kar le, Garofano uski saari chaalo ko samajh rahi thi.

Aadesh : Hahahaha! I think yaha maujood sabhi log iss baat se agree kar rahe hai ki Unicard publicly harr affordable insaan ke liye available hona chahiye.

Logo me firse baatein jaari ho gayi. Khuspusahat se Aadesh samajh paa raha tha ki uska daav ulta padd chuka tha. Uske puraane plan ke khilaaf jaa rahe the log. Toh waqt aa gaya tha ki plan ko badal diya jaaye.

Aadesh : Hahaha! Kyu nahi! Ye hotel, aap sabhi ka hai my dear guests. Mujhe aap sab ne galat saabit kiya uska mein shukr-guzaar hu. Insaan hu. Mein bhi galat faisle le leta hu. Par abhi se mein ye declare karta hu ki Unicard harr uss person ke liye available hoga, jo ise afford kar sakta hai.

*Clap* *Clap*

Uske iss baar bolne se halki fulki taaliyaan uske liye baji. Par ye pehle ke muqaable kaafi kam thi. Ulta usne dekha ki Veer ke paas kayi business waale uske paas aake haath milaane rahe the. Aur toh aur sharmnaak ravaiyye ke liye uss se maafi bhi maang rahe the.

Garofano : Where is the men’s washroom?

Aadesh : Uhh! That side on the right.

Garofano : And for women?

Aadesh : O-On the left.

Garofano : Go and clean up your face Veer!!

Jaanta ke beech se dono hi nikalte hue aage badhe. Unn dono ke upar se logo ka dhyaan kuch palo ke liye hata.

Veer jhund se nikal washroom ki orr daayi taraf muda. Andar aate hi usne dekha ki Aadesh ne paisa kharch karne me koi kasar nahi chorri thi. Public washroom bhi alag hi luxury ka bana hua tha.

Abhi woh wash basin ki taraf jaa ke tap ko kholne hi waala tha ki achanak se use apne peeche kisi ke hone ka abhaas hua aur woh turant hi ek jhatke me mud ke defense leke khada ho gaya.

Usne mud ke dekha toh paaya ki Garofano khadi hui thi.

Veer : What the-?

Uske senses behad tezz the. Toh fir use Garofano ke aane ki aahat aur pehle kyu nahi lagi? Aur toh aur male public washroom me bhala woh yaha kya kar rahi thi?

Veer ne jab neeche nazre daudaayi toh use aur bada jhatka laga. Garofano apni high heels hi pehni hui thi. Woh high heels pehne uske itna qareeb aa gayi aur use pata bhi nahi chala? Paseene ki ek boond uske maathe par jhalak uthi.

[She’s using Dead Silence.]

Par ne use skill ke baare me soochna di.

*Ding*

[Skill : Dead Silence
Description : Allows the host to walk in dead silence. Footwear cannot hinder the skill’s abilities. Use it for stealth.]

Veer samajh chuka tha ki Garofano ke paas Dead Silence, ek skill thi. Magar, woh itni asaani se uske saamne ye skills kyu pradarshit kar rahi thi? Woh dushman thi ya dost?

Garofano (smiles) : I’m impressed. You are quick!!

Veer : Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? And what’s your purpose?

Garofano (smiles) : Would it be fun if I tell you just like that?

Veer : *frowns*

Garofano fir ajeeb si muskaan liye ekdum se uski orr lapki toh Veer ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi.

Uska haath badi hi tezz raftaar se Veer ke seene me uske dil ki orr badha.

[Careful!!!!]

Pari ki gambheer awaaz uske mann me goonji.

*Swoooooooossshhh*

Veer ne khud ko daayi orr jhukaaya aur uska daaya haath ek mazboot mutthi me kasste hi seedha Garofano ki pasli ki taraf badha.

Magar,

'Huh??'

Garafano jaise Veer ka agla waar pehle hi padh chuki thi. Woh bhi daayi orr mudi, Veer ka waar hawa me khaali chala gaya. Garofano ke dono haath uske kandho par kab tikk gaye use andaaza hi nahi laga.

Veer ek ghaatak hamle ke liye apna punch seedha Garofano ke pait me maarne ke liye hua. Parantu,

*Whoooosshhh*

Garofano uske kandho ka istemaal kar hawa me koodi. Woh Veer ke kandhe ke sahaare uske upar se ulte hote hue uske peeche ko jaane ko hui. Sab kuch itni tezzi me ho raha tha magar dono ke liye jaise waqt tham gaya tha.

"You are not going anywhere!"

Veer ki bauhe kass uthi. Hawa me Veer ke kandho par dono haath tikaaye Garofano khud ko ulta kar uske peeche le jaa rahi thi. Veer peeche ki orr mudne laga. Uska haath apne kandhe ki orr jaa raha tha, Garofano ki kalaayi ko thaamne ke liye.

Aur idhar, Garofano ke hontho par muskaan sajj rahi thi.

'I got you!!!!'

Veer muskuraya. Uska haath Garofano ki kalaayi se touch hone hi wala tha. Woh use thaamne hi wala tha jab achanak,

*Release*

'Huhh???'

Garofano ne Veer ke kandhe se apne haath ko hata liya. Woh ulti hawa me ghoomte hue seedhi hui aur Veer ke peeche jaake apne perro par wapas se khadi ho gayi.

Veer tab tak peeche palat chuka tha. Palatate hi use yahi dikha ki Garofano ki woh kaali dress uski nangi jaangh tak upar uthi thi, aur uske neeche zameen par aate hi dress ek jhatke me fisal ke waapas se uski jaanghon ko dhak neeche ho gayi.

Aur tabhi Veer ko apne seene par kuch ehsaas hua.

Usne nazre neeche kar haath seene par le jaate hue dekha toh paaya ki,

Ek chain uske gale me bandhi hui thi.

Garofano (smiles) : Ab chuki tum meri company me work nahi karna chaahte. Take this as a gift.

Veer (frowns) : You!!!

'So she did this to-'

Veer ko ehsaas hua. Woh uske upar se jab peeche gayi. Toh sirf woh bachaav ke liye nahi tha. Na sirf woh uske hamle se bachi, balki use ye chain bhi pehna gayi. Ye sochte hi woh ek chinta me aa gaya.

Just who was this person? Kya maqsad tha iss lady ka? Uske harr ek waar se woh badi hi asaani se bach gayi.

Veer ne Beowulf activate nahi kiya tha. Woh nahi chaahta tha ki woh apne secrets abhi se disclose kare.

Usne chain ko punah dekha. Chain normal si hi thi. Lekin, uss par Garofano company ki ek marking thi.

Garofano saamne khade yu muskura rahi thi. Fir qadam badhaate hue woh aage ko aane lagi.

Veer chaukanna hua. Uska haath apne aap hi peeche ki orr gaya jaise maano woh kuch nikaalne ka prayaas kar raha ho.

Magar, Garofano uske atyant nazdeek aayi aur uske haath ko thaam ke rok li.

Garofano (smiles) : Security ne sabhi ki talaashi acche se li hai. So, I know! You don't have any weapon on you. Don't pretend!!!

Woh sahi thi. Veer use off-guard pakadna chaahta tha. Isliye apne haath ko peeche le gaya tha, use daraane ke liye. Kintu, Garofano jaise uske harr ek move ko khuli kitaab ki tarah padh chuki thi. Security checking ki wajah se Veer ne koi bhi hidden blade ya pocket knife nahi rakhi hui thi.

Veer (frowns) : Just what do you want?

Garofano (sighs) : Don't worry! I'm at your side!!

Veer : Aur mein ye kaise maan lu?

Veer uss se do qadam peeche hua,

Veer : 17 system holders bache hue hai. You are one of us.

Garofano (smirks) : Ohh!?

Veer : Aur tumhara suddenly yaha aana. It doesn't make any sense. I also know ki Garofano tumhara real name nahi!!!

Garofano (smiles) : Interesting! Aur kya kya pata laga liya hai mere baare me?

Veer : You used Dead Silence just now.

Garofano (nods) : Hmm-mmm!

Veer : Mujhe nahi pata tum apni skills showcase kyu kar rahi ho, but I can tell that you are here for something.

Garofano (smiles) : Very interesting!

Veer (frowns) : So just talk!! What's your purpose?

Garofano iss se pehle ki kuch jawaab deti, dur se hi unn dono ko kisi aane ki awaaz sunaayi di,

*Tuck* *Tuck*

Koi washroom ki orr aa raha tha. Yaha se bacha kaise jaaye Veer uske baare me hi soch raha tha jab Garofano ne uski kalaayi pakdi.

'Huh?'

Garofano : Quick!!!

Aur wo use washroom me bane toilets me se ek toilet me leke ghus gayi. Darwaza band kar dono ek hi toilet ke andar fass ke reh gaye. Toilet me space toh kam thi hi upar se roshni bhi kam.

Koi washroom ke andar halka hone aaya tha. Sahi samay par Garofano ne Veer ko kheech liya tha. Magar, dono ek hi cell ke andar the ab.

Garofano ka badan Veer ke badan se chipke hue the. Uske sudol sthan Veer ki chaathi se lage hue the. Aur kass ke chipakne ke kaaran Veer unka ubhaar aur acche se apni aankhon ke saamne dekh paa raha tha. Use apne seene par Garofano ke dono than bhali bhaati mehsoos ho rahe the.

Veer : Y-You-!!!

Garofano : Shhh! I had to do this. *smiles* Warna hum pakde nahi jaate?

Veer : Are you telling me or not?

Garofano : Kitni jaldbazi hai tumhe? Jaldbazi acchi nahi hoti Veer!

Veer (frowns) : Mere baare me tumhe kaise pata chala?

Garofano (smiles) : Hai kuch sources.

Veer (glares) : Talk!!!

Woh apna haath Veer ki kamar se firaate hue ek baar fir uske seene par laayi. Ahista-ahista woh woh uski gardan par jab haath le jaane lagi toh Veer ne uski kalaaayi jakad li.

*Badump* *Badump*

Koi shaq nahi tha isme ki Garofano ki sundarta kis starr ki thi. Veer ka dil na chaahte hue bhi aisi sundari ko apni baaho me liye zorr se dhadak raha tha. Aisi sundarta ek mard ke liye bahut ghaatak thi.

Veer : Jitna puchu! Utna jawaab do!!! Otherwise-

Garofano (smiles) : Otherwise? Otherwise kya Veer?

Veer : I'll have to use force!!

Garofano : Oh really? Hahaha! Aur kya nateeja niklega uska?

Veer ke chehre par chinta ke bhaav jhalak uthe. Thodi derr pehle hi Garofano uske harr move se bach nikli thi. Woh baat alag thi ki Veer apne full potential se nahi ladd raha tha. Lekin, ye baat bhi satya thi ki Garofano bhi bas mazaak me hi uske saath ye sab kar rahi thi. Woh bhi serious nahi thi.

Iska matlab -!?

She was strong!!!

Veer : Are you going to-

Iss se pehle ki Veer apni baat poori karta iss baar Garofano ne seedha seedha jawaab de diya,

Garofano : There's going to be an attack soon!

Veer : Huh? Attack?

Garofano : Yes! This hotel...! Casa Belle! Do mahine baad uda dii jayegi.

Veer : What??

Garofano (nods) : It's the truth!

Veer (eyes) : Aur mein tumhari baat ka kyu yakeen karu?

Garofano : Things are more complicated than it seems Veer.

Veer : What do you mean?

Garofano ki palke baari baari uthi, aur uski aankhein Veer ke chehre par tiki.

Garofano : Koi hai! Jo bahut bada game khel raha hai.

Uske ye kehte hi Veer ke mann me Renshu ki puraani kahi gayi baat goonj uthi.

'Abhi ke liye mein use X keh ke bulaata hu. Koi toh hai, jo ham sab se zyada jaanta hai inn sab ke baare me.'

Veer : X???

Garofano : Huhhhh???

Veer : ...

Garofano : Toh tum jaante ho? I see! Li Renshu ne bataya??

Veer (surprised) : Tum jaanti ho use?

Garofano : Toh Li Renshu ne hi tumhe bataya hai. Hmm! Mein use jaanti hu? Tum aisa keh sakte ho. After all, we both are working for the welfare of the humankind.

Veer : ???

Garofano : Koi hai jo peeth peeche kuch bada plan kar raha hai. Bahut bada!!! Veer!!

Veer : Aur tumhare yaha aane ka maqsad?

Garofano (smiles) : Tumse milna. Aur tumhe savdhaan karna.

Veer (frowns) : ...

Garofano : Li Renshu ne tumhe ek card diya hoga!

Veer ko yaad aaya ki beshaq usne ek card uske haath me thamaya tha. Parantu, Veer ne uss card ko abhi tak khol ke nahi dekha tha.

Garofano : Abhi use kholne ki zaroorat nahi. Next month use kholna. Filhal tumhara focus apni personal problems ko solve karne ke liye hona chahiye.

Veer : Uss se kya hoga?

Garofano : Someone will call you from his side.

Veer : For what?

Garofano (smiles) : You will come to know!

Veer : Aur tumhara-!! Real profession kya hai?

Garofano (smirks) : Tumne ye bhi pata laga liya? You are making me curious now, Veer!

*inches closer*

Veer (blushes) : Stay away!!!

Garofano (smiles) : Why? Batao mujhe! What do you think? Kya ho sakta hai mera profession?

Woh ek baar fir uske gaal par apne nukeele laal rang ki nailpolish se saje nakhoon ko firaayi. Uske nazdeek aayi aur-

Achanak se-

*Lick*

Veer : Huhhh????

Veer jaise sakpaka ke reh gaya. Uske gaal par wine ki ek boond behte hue neeche jaa rahi thi jab Garofano uske paas aayi aur uske gaal se gir rahi boond ko apni zubaan se chaatate hue use pee gayi.

Garofano : Mmmm~ Tastes good!!

Veer : ?????

Garofano (smiles) : Not the wine!!! But you~

Veer (blushes) : Ahem!! S-So,

Garofano : Tell me one thing! Mein jaanana chaahti hu.

Veer : Hmm?

Garofano : Tum chaahte toh araam se bahar khade unn namoono ko dhul chata sakte the. Lekin, tum ne khud ko restrict kiya. Why?

Veer ki palke ye sunte hi neeche jhuk gayi. Use uss din ki ghatna yaad aayi. Woh chhavi uske dimag me aayi. Jab usne Sonali ko dhakka de diya tha aur bechari Sonali dur deewar se jaa ke bhid gayi thi. Uss din pehli baar use apni power se darr mehsoos hua tha.

Usne apni hatheli khol dekha.

Veer : Inn haatho par pehle hi khoon chadh chuka hai. Kisi nirdosh ka khoon nahi chadhne dena chaahta mein. Aur isliye-

Garofano : ...

Veer : Ek ghabrahat hoti hai. Ek darr lagta hai. Kahi mein inn sab ke beech reh ke, inhe hi anjaane me chot toh nahi pahucha dunga. Isliye khud ko rokna accha hai.

Garofano uski harr ek baat sunn rahi thi. Dono abhi bhi usi sthiti me ek dusre se lipte hue khade the.

Woh Veer ke aur qareeb aayi, iss baar uski awaaz me vinamrata thi.

Garofano (smiles) : She was right! You are the one who I was yearning for...!

Veer : Sh-She??

Garofano : Mere profession ke baare me tum puch rahe the na?

Usne baat ko badal diya.

Veer : ...

Garofano : Bas itna jaan lo! Tum aur mein-!!! Ab milte rahenge. Aur tumhe mere paas aana hi hoga. *smiles* Such is my profession.

Veer : What?

*Thud*

Veer jawaab sunta ki iske pehle hi Garofano ne cell ka darwaza dhadalle se khola aur woh baahar nikal gayi.

Veer : Waaaiiittttt!!!

Veer ne zorr se kaha. Garofano peeche mud ek baar use dekhi.




Garofano (smiles) : I must leave now, Veer!!

Veer : Renshu ki kya baat thi? Woh card? Kya matlab mujhe tumse milne aana hi hoga? Tum ho kiski taraf? Aur ye hotel ka attack? What is going on???

Garofano : Just stay focused!! Time will tell you everything.

Itna bol woh aage badhi jab Veer ke ek gambheer sawaal ne uske perr wahi rok diye.

Veer (glares) : Are you my enemy??

Woh fir muskurayi aur palat ke use dekhi.

Garofano (smiles) : What do you think?

Veer : ...!?

Aur bina kuch aage kahe, woh washroom se waapas nikal gayi. Iss baar uske qadmo ki awaaz saaf saaf sunaayi de rahi thi.

'Something is missing here!!'

[My my~ She's such a wild one! Hahaha!]

'Pari! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!'

[Oh c'mon! Dekha nahi tumne? She's begging to be pounded by you.]

'Pariii!!!'

[Won't you be satisfied after pounding such a naughty one?]

'Shut up!!!!'

[You are no fun at all. *sigh* Abhi dekh ke mujhe nahi lagta ki woh hamari dushman hai.]

'That's right! Lekin...! Jis tarah usne mere attacks se khud ka bachaav kiya.'

[Uske paas kuch skills hai. There is no doubt.]

'Also, mujhe koi bhi killing intent feel nahi hui. Iska matlab uske saare attacks non lethal the. Woh bas mujhe-'

[Test kar rahi thi.]

'Right!'

[And let me disclose a secret to you. *smiles*]

'What?'

[She might be weaker than you. *smiles*]

'What? Woh? Aur mujhse weak?'

[Right! Ye sirf mera ek hunch hai.]

'Aur tumhe aisa kyu lag raha hai?'

[Because I saw it in her eyes.]

'Kya?'

[Jab tum mud rahe the tab tumhara dhyaan uski kalaayi pakadne par tha. Par mein use dekh rahi thi.]

'And what did you see?'

[Fear!!!]

"Huhhh?"

[Tumhara jab haath uski kalaayi ko pakadne jaa raha tha. Agar tum use pakad lete, toh tumhe woh hara nahi sakti thi.]

'???'

[That time, you had zero opening.]

'You mean-!'

[And that's why she got scared. She knew ki agar tumne use pakda toh uska kya hashr ho sakta tha. Isliye, woh achanak se tumhare kandhe se haath hataayi thi.]

'I see now!'

Veer ke mann me dherro sawaal the. Magar, woh iss waqt dimaag ko thanda rakhna chaahta tha.

Ek aah bharte hue woh wash basin ki orr apna chehra dhone chal diya.

Toh wahi baahar, Garofano washroom se nikal ke aa chuki thi. Sabki nazre ek baar fir uss par bikhar chuki thi.

Aadesh mauka dekh chaaplusi karne uske paas aaya kintu,

Garofano : I'm sorry! I must leave now! I have an urgent meeting with someone. Some other time?

Aadesh : Eh?? Ahahaha! S-Sure sure! Maybe some other time. Okay!!

Woh bina Aadesh ko ghaas daale waha se aage badh gayi. Kaera aur Sonia dono ki nazre Garofano se bhidi magar kisi ne bhi aapas me kuch kehna theek na samjha.

Jis tarah woh aayi thi, wese hi woh ravaana bhi ho gayi. Idhar Aadesh tension me idhar udhar baat kar raha tha. Banquet shuru ho chuka tha, magar Veer ki family se koi bhi khaana nahi khaa raha tha.

Unn sabhi ka jaise mann marr chuka tha. Woh Veer ke sang bas yaha se jald se jald jaana chaahti thi. Sabse zyada toh Kavya. Ek wahi thi jo sabse zyada excited thi inn sab ke liye. Par iss samay wahi thi jo yaha ek shan bhi nahi rukna chahti thi.

Uske mann me aise aise vichaar aa rahe the jo uske glaani ke bhaar ko badhaate hi jaa rahe the.

'Kyu? Maine kyu kiya aisa?'

'Bhaiya ke saath-! Bhaiya ke saath unn sab ne aisa kiya. I hate it!!!'

'Bhaiya mere liye-! Sab kuch sehen kar liye. *sniff* Why am I so stupid??'

'It's always like this. Dii par hamesha bhaiya depend hote hai. B-But-! But mujhse kabhi bhi kuch nahi kehte. *sniff* K-Kyuki woh jaante hai. Mujhse kuch nahi hone waala.'

'And it hurts...! Because it's true! It hurts so much!!!'

Uske alawa Tejal na sirf glaani mehsoos kar rahi thi balki bhayanak gusse me bhi thi. Gussa iss baat pe bhi tha ki uske Bhai ke saath log aise pesh aaye aur saath hi woh uski madad ke liye mauke par pahuch na paayi. Toh wahi iss baat pe bhi thi ki aeri-gairi koi ladki aake uske seene se lag ke chali gayi aur woh dur khadi bas dekhti reh gayi.

Badi behan hone ke naate, use Veer ke bagal se khada hona chahiye tha. Uske stand ke liye uska waha hona zaroori tha. Na ki uss anjaan ladki ka.

Tej : Fucking...! Damn it!

Arohi : Veer abhi tak bahar nahi aaya? Is something wrong?

Tej : Mein dekh ke aati hu. Tum sab-

Kavya : D-Dii!

Tej : Huh?

Kavya : M-Mein dekhne jau? P-Please!

Bhumika : Jaane dete hai Kavya ko.

Kavya ka masoom sa ruwaasi chehra dekh Tej bhi pighal ke reh gayi.

Tejal (nods) : Okay!

Kavya apne nanhe nanhe chote chote qadam se bhaagte hue aage badhi. Woh washroom ke area side gayi.

Jaise hi woh andar aayi usne dekha ki Veer men's washroom se baahar hi aa raha tha.

"Bhaiyaaaa~"

Woh chillaayi aur daudate hue uske paas aake uss se chipak gayi.

Veer : Hmm? Kya hua? Tum yaha? Aa hi toh raha tha mein.

Veer usne apne seene se alag karne hi waala tha jab usne mehsoos kiya ki Kavya ka badan thitur raha tha. Aur woh samajh gaya...! Kavya sisak rahi thi. Woh ro rahi thi. Veer ka dil fir maayus ho utha. Woh samajh gaya tha ki Kavya zaroor khud ko dosh de rahi thi.

Veer : Tumhari galti nahi hai Kavya! Ye sab toh-

Kavya : Sab meri galti hai!!! *sniff* A-Agar mein woh sab na karti toh aisa kuch hota hi nahi. H-Hume yaha aana hi nahi chahiye tha. *sniff*

Veer ne pyaar se use apne seene se alag kiya. Mote mote aasu uske gaal se beh rahe the. Bechaari ka poora chehra laal ho rakha tha. Aasuo ke kaaran, aankhon me dhundhlapan chha raha tha.

Veer ne bade hi prem se uske gaal se uske behte hue aasu apne dono angutho se poche. Uske komal se chehre ko pakad usne upar uthaya aur use dekh muskuraya.

Veer (smiles) : Pagal! Nadaan! Isliye toh bade Bhai hote hai na?

Kavya ki ye sunte hi rulaayi phoot padi.

Kavya : Nahhhiiiii!!!! *sniff*

Veer : Arre?

Kavya : Kyuuuu??? *sniff* Jab daant padti hai toh hamesha bade bhai kyu daant khaaye? J-Jab maar padti hai toh hamesha bada bhai kyu maar khaaye? *sniff* H-Hamesha bada bhai ko hi kyu compromise karna padta hai?

Veer : ...

Kavya : K-Kyu? *sniff* Boliye!! Kyu bade bhai ko hi sabse akhiri me dhyan diya jaata hai? *sniff* Choti behan ko sabse zyada pyaar mile, choti behan ki saari maange poori ho, choti behan ki harr koi parvaah kare, choti behan ko hi sab kuch kyu???? *sniff* K-Kya bade bhai ke andar dil nahi? *sniff*

Veer : Kavy-

Kavya : Mujhe bolne dijiye!!! *sniff* Kyu harr baar saare mushqil aur gande kaam bade bhai ke sarr par thope jaate hai? *sniff* K-Kyu hamesha unke sarr par zimmedari thopi jaati hai? *sniff* Unko bhi toh lagta hoga na ki mujhe bhi koi aise laadh kare, pyaar kare? Huh? *sniff* Unki taraf koi dhyaan kyu nahi deta? *sniff* Boliye!

Veer : Pagal! Bada bhai apni behan ka khayal nahi rakhega toh aur kaun rakhega??

Kavya : Toh bade bhai ka khayaal kaun rakhega?? *sniff*

Veer : !!???

Uske sawaal par Veer maun hoke reh gaya.

Kavya : Bada bhai choti behan ka khayaal rakh lega. Lekin, fir uska khayaal kaun rakhega? *sniff* Wo koi bhagwaan hai? Jo use kabhi dard nahi hota? Kabhi kuch maangta nahi? *sniff*

Veer : Aisa kyu bol rahi hai pagal! Mein toh-

Kavya : Kuch nahi karoge aap!!! *sniff*

Veer : ???

Kavya achanak hi aur zorr se rone lagi. Woh aage badh Veer se itni kass ke chipki ki uski pakad ke chalte Veer ki shirt par bhi silvatein pad gayi.

Kavya : Ab se ek choti behan apne bade bhai ka khayaal rakhegi. *sniff* Bade bhai ko ab choti behan pyaar karegi. *sniff* Aur unki harr choti moti cheezo ka dhyaan rakhegi.

Veer ne uske gaalo ko punah apne haatho se thaama, uske chehre ko apne qareeb laaya aur,

*Kiss*

Kavya : Nhuhhh?

Kavya ke maathe ko usne choom liya. Bechari Kavya jo pehle se hi Veer ke prati aakarshit thi, Veer ki iss harqat se uska taapmaan aur adhik badh gaya.

Maathe par Veer ke labb lagte hi, Kavya ka poora badan kaanp utha. Veer ne fir uske chehre ko halka sa moda aur fir-

*Kiss*

Kavya : Ahhh!!??

Uske gulaabi gaal ko bhi choom liya. Kavya ki aankhon me sitaare chhaa rahe the.

*Badump*

Uska dil zorr se dhadka. Aur, use kuch ehsaas hua. Woh Veer se punah kass ke chipki lekin iss baar mann me kuch aur baatein thi.

'Bhaiya ko mein kahi jaane nahi dungi!! Kahi nahi!!!'

Veer use kuch derr baad yu hi apne se alag kar use waapas baahar leke aaya. Unn dono ke aate hi Tej bhaagte hue unke paas aayi. Aur Veer ke nazdeek aate hi woh uske seene par haath tikaayi.

Uske chehre ki orr dekhi, jagah jagah use tatol ke sunishchit kari ki kahi kuch gadbad toh nahi?

Tej : Theek ho na?

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe kya hua?

Tej : Inn kutto ki himmat kaise hui ki tumhare saath ye sab kare? Abhi ke abhi chalo. Dekho kaise inki vaat lagaati hai. Tum mere peeche khade rehna bas.

Veer : Nahi!

Tej : Whattt? Kyuuu???

Veer : Hum yaha se nikal rahe hai. Bas!

Tej (frowns) : Uss kutiyaa ne tumhare muh pe wine feki!!

Veer : Dii! Language!!!

Tej ne ek shan Kavya ki orr dekha, aur fir Kritika ki orr jo unki taraf hi aa rahi thi. Fir daant meeste hue apni baat ko sudhaari,

Tej : That fucki- That girl poured wine on you. Uski aukaat kya hai Veer? Mere Bhai pe iss tarah wine fekni ki uski himmat kaise hui? Bina use sabak sikhaaye mein nahi jaa sakti.

Veer : But hum yaha se chal rahe hai. Abhi!

Kavya ko ab koi Unicard wagarah nahi chahiye tha. Bhaad me gaya ab Unicard. Jis card ki wajah se uske bade bhai ko neecha dikhaya jaaye, woh Unicard uske liye raddi ke samaan tha ab. Isliye, ab yaha theherne ki koi bhi zaroorat nahi thi.

Baahar Aadesh yaha idhar se udhar tehel jaise kisi ka wait kar raha tha. Aur, tabhi use entrance se shor aata sunayi diya. Uske chehre par ek kapti muskaan sajj gayi.

Ek gang ka leader waha aaya hua tha. Ye usi gang ka leader tha jisme Surya kuch aadmiyo ko sambhaalta tha. Yahi woh gang thi jisne Veer ke food trucks ko tabaah kiya tha. Aur iss gang ka leader tha ~

Sarabhai!!!

Aadesh ne use apni thaath aur wazandari dikhaane ke liye bulaya tha. Taaki bade bade businessmen ye bhi dekh sake ki uski pehchaan kaha tak thi. Bhavishya me wo uske saath dhandha sahi se kare aur koi chaaplusi karne ki na soche isliye usne Sarabhai ko bhi invite kiya tha.

Sarabhai apne kayi saare aadmiyo ke saath aaya hua tha. Sab ke sab hatte katte the. Unhe dekhte hi jaisa Aadesh ne socha tha bilkul wesa hi hua. Sabhi ke andar ye baat baith gayi ki Aadesh Jaisinghani ke connections underworld me bhi the.

Aadesh : Hahahaha! Welcome! Welcome! Kaafi late ho gaye aap?

Sarabhai : Ye waqt dhandhe ka hota hai. Hafta wasooli ke liye kuch aadmi gaye hue the. Unhe aane me time lag gaya. Baaki, hotel toh shandaar banaaye ho tum.

Aadesh : Hahaha! Aapka hi toh hai boss. Aap ko jab aana ho, hotel ke darwaze hamesha aapke liye khule hai.

Sarabhai (nods) : Hmm!

Aadesh : Wese! Ek macchar bahut derr se naak me dum kiye hue hai.

Sarabhai : Kaun hai?

Aadesh (smiles) : Veer naam hai uska.

Sarabhai : Yaha hai?

Aadesh : Hai na! Hai na! Use toh khaas bulaaya hai maine.

Sarabhai : Toh kya karwana hai?

Aadesh : Bas aap thodi use uski aukaat dikha do. Use samajh aa jaana chahiye ki mujhse nahi bhidna hai use.

Sarabhai : Hmm! Kidhar hai?

Aadesh : Wo-! Woh raha!

Aadesh ne ishaare se Veer aur uski behno ki taraf ishaara kiya.

Sarabhai : Hmm! Chalo!

Sarabhai jaise hi aage badha, uske peeche peeche 12-13 hatte katte lambe kadd ke aadmi uske saath chal diye.

Veer, Tejal, Arohi, Bhumika, aur Kavya yaha se nikalne waali thi.

Kritika : Kavya! I'm so sorry! Uncle aise nahi hai. P-Pata nahi kyu. T-Tum kahi-

Kavya : Don't worry, Kritika! Unki wajah se hamari friendship me koi change nahi aayega.

Kritika : Ah! Thank God!!

Woh yaha se nikalne hi waale the jab Sarabhai aur uske aadmi aake theek Veer ke saamne khade ho gaye. Aadesh dur se bas saara tamaasha dekhna chaahta tha.

Sarabhai jaanta tha ki uski gang me Surya aur kuch aadmiyo ko Veer ne hi pitwaya tha. Lekin, woh ye nahi jaanta tha ki Veer ne akele hi unn sab ki dhunaayi ki thi.

Itne saare aadmiyo ko apne paas aate dekh, Kavya darr ke maare Veer ke peeche uska haath thaam khadi ho gayi. Arohi, Kritika aur Bhumika ka bhi yahi haal tha. Woh sab bhi Veer ke peeche the. Lekin, uska saath nahi chorrne waali thi. Toh wahi Tej bhi do qadam peeche hui lekin Veer ke peeche nahi gayi.

Woh uske bagal se khadi uski hatheli ko apne hatheli se bheenchte hue unn aadmiyo ko nazre gadaaye dekhti rahi.

Sarabhai : Tum Veer ho?

Veer : Haan! Toh?

Sarabhai : Tumhe pata hai tumne kya kiya hai?

Veer (smiles) : Bilkul!

Sarabhai ne jaise hi uske chehre par muskaan dekhi uska gussa phoot pada.

Sarabhai : Tumhe pata hai tum kis se baat kar rahe ho?

Veer (smiles) : Sarabhai! Jo choti moti drug dealing karta hai, hafta wasoolta hai, aur chote mote businesses me apna paisa lagaata hai.

Veer ka jawaab sunn, Sarabhai ki aankh gusse se laal ho gayi. Veer ne toh pehle hi use check kar liya tha.

Iske pehle ki Sarabhai aage kuch karta, entrance se punah shor sharaba sunayi diya.

Usne palat ke dekha toh paaya ki kayi saare aadmi ghus rahe the. Aur tabhi, Sarabhai ki nazar ek aadmi par padi.

"Huhhh??"

Jise dekh uske perr pal bhar ke liye kaanp gaye. Usne Veer ko chorra aur tezz qadmo ke saath entrance ki orr bhaaga.

Uske aadmi, yaha tak ki Aadesh bhi ye dekh hairat me reh gaya. Aur, ye naye aadmi log kaun the jo aa rahe the? Aadesh ki kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Sarabhai bhaagte hue uss insaan ke saamne aaya.

Sarabhai : Haha! Bh-Bhau! Aap yaha?

Aadmi : Tum? Umm! Tum kaun?

Sarabhai : M-Mein Sarabhai! Aapke market me bas choti si dukaan kholi hai mene. Akkhha Mumbai toh aapka hai.

Aadmi : Suna hai aaj kal tum kuch zyada ucchal rahe ho.

Sarabhai : A-Aisa kaun bola aapko? Hahahaha! N-Nahi nahi bhau! Sab kuch toh aapka hi hai. Hum sab toh chote mote log hai.

Aadmi : Accha?

Sarabhai : B-Bilkul! Wese aap yaha kaise?

Aadmi : Jis tarah sabhi businessmen yaha aaye hai, mera maqsad bhi wahi hai.

Sarabhai : A-Achha! Future me hotel ka fayda le sake? Hahaha! Ni ni bahut acchi baat hai. Hotel ke owner se mere bahut acche sambandh hai bhau. Aur woh ek ladke se pareshan hai. Agar hum uss ladke ke saamne thodi wazandari patak de, toh waah waah bhi hogi, owner bhi khush ho jayega aur hamara bhi watt padega yaha. Hahaha!

Aadmi : Ohh?

Sarabhai : Aaiye na! Aaiye!

Sarabhai uss aadmi ko leke Veer ki orr le jaane laga. Aadesh ye dekh ke chakit tha. Sarabhai jaisa aadmi, uss aadmi ke saamne jhuk jhuk ke baat kar raha tha.

Toh yaha Veer ke saath uski behno ne jab aur bhi adhik aadmiyo ko apne paas aate dekha toh woh aur chintit ho gayi.

Sarabhai aadmi ko leke Veer ke samaksh aaya. Uss aadmi ke paas tabhi uska ek chela aaya aur uske kaano me kuch kaha. Aadmi ne haan me sarr hilaaya.

Sarabhai ne ishaara kiya ki yahi woh ladka hai jise sabak sikhana hai.

Par agle hi shan jo hua, use waha maujood harr insaan dekh bhauchakka reh gaya.

"Boss!!!!"

Jis aadmi ko Sarabhai leke aaya tha, woh aur uske saare aadmi Veer ke saamne sarr jhuka ke khade ho gaye.

Woh koi aur nahi-

Balhaar tha!

Veer apne jeb me haath daale, chup chaap khada hua tha. Arohi, Tej samet sabki dhadkane uss pal uss drishya ko dekh tez ho uthi.

20-25 aadmi sabhi ke sabhi Veer ke saamne sarr jhuka ke khade hue the. Sarabhai ne jab ye dekha toh jaise uske shareer se uski aatma hi rooh hi nikal gayi. Aadesh ko apni aankhon par vishvaas nahi ho raha tha.

Toh wahi Kaera, Sonia, Gaurav aur Karan bhi dur khade ekdum hairaan the. Ye sab kya tha?

Aaj Veer ne unn sab ko unki aukaat dikha di thi. Kaisi luxury? Kaisa Paisa? Jab jaan hai toh jahaan hai. Veer ke connections kis level ke the, aaj unn sab ko pata lag chuka tha.

Khaas kar Aadesh ko aur Kaera, Sonia ko. Kaera aur Sonia ne nahi socha tha ki Veer inn sab me bhi involved tha. Aaj Kaera ko mehsoos ho raha tha. Kya usne Veer ko jaldi judge kar liya tha?

Par andar se uska dil zorro se dhadak raha tha. Veer ke samaksh woh sab sarr jhukaaye khade hue the. Veer koi bahut bada businessmen nahi tha. Lekin, uske bawajood itna bada aadmi usme saamne sarr jhukaaye khada tha. Kisi bhi businessman ki itni aukaat nahi thi waha ki Balhaar ko sarr jhukaane par majboor kar de.

Magar, bina koi bada businessman hone ke baad bhi Balhaar jaisa aadmi Veer ke saamne jhuka hua tha.

*Silence*

Balhaar : Aap yaha?

Balhaar ke kaan me uske aadmi ne pehle hi bata diya tha ki yaha kuch derr pehle Veer boss ke saath kya hua tha. Aur isliye, Balhaar ne turant hi ye sab kiya.

Veer (smiles) : Kuch kaam tha. Toh yaha aana pada.

Peeche khadi Kavya aur baaki sabhi aaj mann hi mann itni prasann thi ki unke muh se kuch nikal bhi nahi paa raha tha. Tej mud ke bas apne bhai ke mukh ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Uske mann me dherro sawaal fir se paida ho chuke the.

'Akhir inn 20 saalo me, tumne kya kya kiya hai Veer?'

Balhaar : Itni jaldi jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Well, they don't deserve my presence anymore.

Balhaar : Mere aadmi aap sab ko chorr denge.

Veer (smiles) : Don't worry! Mujhe meri hi car chalana pasand hai.

Balhaar (nods) : Jii! Koi aur kaam?

Veer : Thoda aadmiyo ko control me rakha karo.

Veer ka ishaara saaf saaf Sarabhai ki taraf tha. Balhaar ne jaise hi Sarabhai ko palat ke dekha toh Sarabhai ke pant me jaise uska halka sa moot chooth gaya.

Balhaar : Dhyaan rakhunga!

Veer : Hmm! Mein chalta hu!

Balhaar (nods) : Hmm!

Aur Veer waha se nikalne laga. Uske peeche peeche uski behne thi. Kisi ki himmat nahi hui iss baar uss se baat karne ki.

Kaera wahi khadi thi. Jab Veer uske bagal se nikla toh ek shan ke liye uske paas ruka.

Woh use hi dekh rahi thi. Veer ne bas kuch pal use dekha aur bina kuch kahe waha se nikal gaya. Uske jaate hi Kaera ka dil paseej utha.

Kaera : J-Julia!!!

Julia : It's your fault miss! But Young Master Veer is such a gentleman fufu~ So, what if he doesn't have a c-suite profile? He has one thing which none of them here have.

Kaera : Wh-What?

Julia : Power!!

Julia ki baat par Kaera ko firse wahi drishya yaad aa gaya, jab Veer use bachaane aaya tha. Fir chaahe woh mirror gallery me ladna ho ya fir uss hideout me uske liye haath par chaaku khaana. Sab kuch use yaad aaya. Julia sahi thi. Yaha baithe kisi ke me bhi itna dum nahi tha, itne guts nahi the jitne Ve
er ke paas the.

Julia : And remember Miss!

Kaera : Huh?

Julia : Luxury was made, to make you feel poor.

Kaera : Ahh!!!

Ek vaakya me Julia ne uski aankhein khol di thi. Kaera koi weak lady nahi thi. Wo bas confused thi. Aur yahi confusion use best hone se peeche kheech raha tha. Shayad ab, woh inn baato ka dhyaan rakhne waali thi.

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Idhar airport par ek flight aake utri. Andar kayi saare passengers me se ek France ka aadmi utra.

Baahar aate hue woh taxi ko dhoodhne laga. Taxi kar woh seedha ek nazdeeki hotel gaya.

"Fuck!! My god! India is so vibrant! The colour, the lights, the traffic. Everything is chaotic here. But I like it. It's so engaging. My dear friend! One room please~"

Receptionist : Sure sir! Umm! Your name?

Guy : Ohh! Call me Louis, my friend!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 8.6k words. Target apna wahi hai. 150. I won't give any explanation. Already ju logo ko sab bata chuka hu. Agle kuch 6-7 updates hi bache hai shayad. Maybe update 170 ya 171 se Chinatown arc start ho jaayega. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad.

 

[aryanrock]

Bhai bnd hi kr do. Apko payment nhi milti but likes comment to mil rhe hai bhar bhar kr na but apko eski bilkul kadra nhi hai to agr ye soch hai apki to bnd kr do better rahega. Kahte ho update tonight aur fir 4 din tk post nhi krte. Free me likhte hai to eska ye mtlb nhi ki Sare readers faltu hai sb es forum pe baithe time pass krte hai jitne busy ap rahte ho utne hi baki sb bhi agr itni bhi problem hai to likhna hi nhi chahiye tha readers ne to nhi kaha tha ki story suru kro khud hi ki na. Schedule khud hi bnaya tha na apne time ke hisab se. Fir problem ku ho rahi hai

Are bhai Banda Sara din toh story nhi likhne bethega? Job krta hai Alag city me rehta hai ghr se dur tum khud hi Samjh skte ho Job ki life kesi hoti hai ghr walon ko time dena hota hai fir Uska khud k lie time nhi bach rha Wo bhi toh dekho ek story k lie Sab sacrifice kr rha hai toh Sabr rkhen thora Kyun ki story esi to h nhi k jo dimagh m aya likh k post kr dia? So please Demotivate nahi kro sab log Hum bhi toh sbr kr rhe naki writer k piche lag chuke?

 

[Harami manus]

Don't promote your self to other threads bruhhhh.....

Mehnat se daily update dene ka apne aap response milega... Aur woh bhi geniuan fans... Fir tumhare liye bhi aise hi jhagde honge updates ke liye...

Well thank you for the suggestion...chalo fir aisa hi sahi

 

[Werewolf]

Waiting

werewolf bhai ji aaj first like update par mera hua hai

अच्छा जी, साथ में लेखक को बोलो की उसकी तो आदत है हमेशा ऐसा करता है अपडेट का बोलकर अपडेट नही देता है l यही तुम्हारा टाइम पास है यहां पे,,,,, बात तो ऐसी बोलो जो समझ में आए।

Awesome Brilliant update

Veer was so weak, I never thought. He will get C level designation from someone powerful,may be Suhana. But in this part he was more looking like a C-hutiya, not a Veer that we knew. He was a system owner with lots of powers but still he was getting beaten by a lady. Not expected after the case of Ava

Arreyy bencho y hua kya last m
Mujhe lga keara ne bola lkn yha to koi new aa gyi......

Btw awesome update

it's outstanding, mind blowing update bro....

veer ko france jane se pehle kaera ka mission mila tha. kaera ke emotions related, wohh mission to complete ho gya par uske rewards abhi tak nahi mile veer ko...

aj kaa update bahot kuchh suspense deke gya hai......

i think it's miss natalia... jaise veer ki jaan kisi system ne bachayi aise hi ava ki jaan kisi system ne bachayi hai.... aur agar ye koi new charectre hai then it's one of them who has a system....

ab dekhna rahta hai ki veer kaera ke gusse ko kaise sant karta hai... i also eagerly waiting for kaera and veer meeting...

Thank you bro for amazing Update.

Agar ho sake to agla update ab jaldi dene ki koshish kariyega bhai ji is update me hamari ummiden puri na ho payi hai kaun hai jo last me entry kiya hai jisko veer aur system nai janta hai ab to besabri ka aalaam aur bura hoi gawa hai kaise veer is lamhe se bahar niklega now feeling very sad

Suspense Thrill and conspiracy what a mind blowing mixing…superb bro…….awaiting next anxiously….

Waise kahna toh nhi chahiye lekin besharm hun isliya kah rha .... Waiting for next update intejaar nhi nhi hota lone wolf bhaiiii

Ab aapko kya bolun mai sir aapki jitni samjh hai utna hi samjhegen na bekaar me aap mujhe reply par reply dete ja rahe hain.mai yahan aapke liye nahi aata hun werewolf bhai ke liye aata hun mere fev writer hain wo aur ek baat unko aapke saport ki jarurat nai ishiliye ab reply mat kariyega warna fir mujhe reply karna hoga.aur han agar werewolf bhai ne paise mangen to mai wo bhi dunga unko baat khatam kariye mujhe maaf kariye

Bhai mne to last update ke baad hi kha tha ki ye scene ye update me khtm ni ho skta
Apka writing style itna to smjh Aya h ki koi bhi chij Bina mtlb ke ni hotti
Bit ye jo nyi ceo walli baat h ye jyda firmly ni ho gya thoda?
Baki msst update thi mzza Aya
Kavya ko thoda mature hona lde ga ese card churna is not good
Moreover kya kiara se shi kia?
She wants veer to claim her?
Ese to veer ne kr lia claim
Aur Karan ko to ana chaie tha yrr
Upr se Sonia
Khud ni aw ri to parkash uncle ko bhej deti
But agr vo log aw jatte to ye twist kese ata

Nyc nyc mzza Aya

System hi system ho gya h ab to

Baki mzza Aya
Next update ka intezar h abhi se

He was not beaten
It just pari ne bhi veer ko kha ki vo tumse jyda sharp minded h so I think veer was not sure what to do next maybe vo wait kr rha koi moment ki vo kuch kr ske?
Who knows so dekho writer sahib kya likhte h agge
But I also feel ki ye ceo walli baat to jyda hi ho gyi ese

Mast update h yrr.... ae update ka intezar rahega... dekhte h kaun h wo

Right bro
Suhana hotti uski jgah to Esa kuch na hotta
Vo hotel owner ki band bja chuki hotti
Sonia to out krni pdi
Agr Sonia aw jatti agge to yr ye new twist kese atta?
Ye bhi to socho

Mast update diya.....Saath mein ek naya System owner bhi

Fabulous update

nice1

Nice update bro

Bhai maja aa gaya Aaj to sala suspense bhi bahut tagda hai ab agle update Tak dimag ke gode dodte rahenge ki kya hoga ab par ghanta pta nhi lag paayega kyuki age kya hoga vo to aap bataoge.

Bahut hi mazedar update

Wow what entry, Who is she??
1) Suhana
2) Nainital
Aur
3) model of night Walker

Man Man ohh man yrr kya chij ho tum kha se late ho Werewolf bhai itne plot twists, yrr salute you man Shabd nhi mil rahe kaise tarrif karu. Bhai ek webseries ki kahani likhoge funding mai karunga

Waah! Kaafi dhamakedar update tha Bhai . Dekhte hain kaun Veer ko apna CEO banaya, Suhana ya aur koi. Bechari Kavya in sab mein khaamakhaam pas ke reh gayi, afsos ki baat hai . Aadesh ki secretary bahut uchal rahi hai, usko uski aukat dikha na padega Bhai . Ummeed hai aap is baat ka khayal rakhoge . Aur, Aadesh Ko Veer kaise apne style mein handle karta hai is party mein sabke saamne yeh bhi gaur karne ki baat hai . As usual, excitedly anticipating your upcoming explosive(?) update, dear bro

Whi to chij h bhai ki pta ni h vo kon h ?
And kya veer ese hi accept kre ga ceo bn na?
Kya veer ye khud ni earn krna Chae ga?

Whi to bhai

Main point hi yhi tha

Nice update bro

Main bhi aapke vicharon se sehmat hoon, priya mitra . Hamein bhi Werewolf Bhai ka agla update ka besabri se intezaar hai . Dekhte hain aage kya kya hota hai

Jabardast update bhai..

amezing update... mazaa aa gaya

काव्या का व्यवहार नकाबिले बर्दास्त होता जा है दिन प्रतिदिन। और अब उसका साथ कहीं ना कहीं तेजल और भूमिका भी दे रही। ईरिटेसन सी होने लगी हैं अब कहानी में।

Awesome update

Oh gajab ab ye fight interesting hoti Jaa rhi hai
Dekho ye new lady kon hai jo veer ki life me entry le rhi gajab ka suspense hai

Jabardast update bhai

Best story in the form

Shandar update bro

Nice update bro

Mast update Bhai ji

Kahin ye nat to nhi hai kyunki veer ke circle main ek wahi ladki system wali hai or system wali ka hin koi info nhi ata hai
Waise update bhut acha tha Werewolf Bhai maja a gya I guess last update Friday ko Mila tha or update size ko consider Kiya jae to itna late chalega
ya kahin suhana ko bhi to system nhi mila hai but apne kaha tha new system nhi milega
Usko consider Kiya jae to mere according nat hin a rahi hai

Oh...Miss Affordable Chhapri Log Hi Brands Ko Brands Banate Hai Yeh Bhi Yaad Rakhiyega...
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BTW Miss Affordable Hope You Not Tried Copied Versions Yet

Ding Samajh gaya bhai update kyun deri se aayaa New system introduction himself let's see what

Bro mind blowing update bro

Story bhout badiya chal rahi hai

Very nice update

nice update

Bhai ek link system holders ka bhi bana do... Humari yaddasht kamjor hai bhool jaate hain...
Ab yaad hi nhi kitne bache hain aur kitne chale gaye

Nice n fantastic

Shandar update sir ji
Lekin thoda aur action dikha dete to maza aa jata
Waiting for next update sir ji

Amazing update bhai...

Shuhana ke pas to system nahi tha to or kon aayi hai ab.. jiske pas system hai..
Waiting for next update..

Detail comments baad me... Lagta hai Ava ki entry ho gayi...

Ava is back

Maaa ki aankh saala jab nikalne ne hi waala tha tab hi Haath beech me ruk gaya

यदि आप ऐसा चाहते हो तो इसी कहानी पे एक वेब सीरीज बना लो, बस incest को यहां से हटाना पड़ेगा । आपको बाकी सब चल जाएगा और ये नई तरह की वेब सीरीज होगी इंडिया में।

Awesome update

Ahhhhhh......what do I say.
Everytime you expect something to happen... something unexpected happens.

Superbbbbb update.

Sari ladkiya ek sath dekhne ko mil gyi, sivay suhana ke. Tej being a possesive sister, tries to save his brother from girls. Lekin kis kis se aur kahan kahan bachayegi. Agar apne Bhai ke kaand pta chal jaye to chakkar khakar hi na gir pade.

Aadesh badi tedi kheer hai waitress wala pura scene to jarur pre planned tha. Agar akele me yahi hota to laat marke nikal deta waitress ko.

Khair jo plan aadesh ne socha tha veer ko insult karne ka vo to fail ho gya, lekin alag hi kaand ho gya.

Bechari kavya harr baar kuch acha karna chahti hai lekin kuch gadbad ho jati hai.
Aisi situation me koi kavya ko hath lagaye aur veer shant rahe ho hi nahi sakta aur hona bhi nahi chahiye. But ab kavya kahi na kahi apne aapko inn sabka jimmedar manegi. Kavya ki innocence kahani me jaan dalti hai bilkul juhi ki tarah varna baki sare character to itne serious hai. Cute aur innocent hote hue bhi uska character kahi se vo nibbiyo type cringey nahi lagta. Lekin jaisa ki hota hai innocence leads to problems, vahi yahan bhi hua.


Now about Sonia and Kaera

Sonia veer ki madad karne nahi aayi yaa aa nahi payi kyoki vo apni deal lose nahi karna chahti. Iski 2 vajah hai, ki ek to ye aisi situation nahi hai jahan help karna bahut jaruri ho, jahan jindagi aur maut ka sawal ho, and 2nd bhale hi Sonia veer ko apna dost manti hai, lekin abhi uski feelings uss level tak nahi pahuchi ki vo bina kuch soche samjhe veer ki help ko aa jaye.

Kaera iska kya kahu, iske liye to alag se feelings comprehension ka course banana padega tab jake theek hogi.

Sonia ke mamle me to pyar hai nahi, lekin jaisa ki hamne ek update me dekha hai that Kaera is in love with veer. Phir bhi uski help nahi karne aayi, kyoki vo chahti hai ki veer khud iss situation se nikle. But that's not the way you do things in love. Koi fark nahi padta ki aap jisse pyar karte hai vo kitna takatvar hai lekin jab vo kisi musibat me hota hai to aap uski help ke liye aata hai, bhale hi help kar paye ya nahi. Yahan to Kaera aasani se veer ki help kar sakti thi.
Iska ek hi reason hai ki abhi use bahut kuch samjhna hai human emotions ke bare me. Love, hate, anger, sadness, happiness ye koi 2+2 ka formula nahi hai jo ek baar padhkar aa jayega.

Emotions ko samjhna itna hi aasan hota ki ek diary ke kuch panne padhkar unhe samjha jaa sake to phir baat hi kya thi. Simply I'm saying Kaera bhale hi business me genius hai lekin human emotions me abhi nursery me hi aayi hai, abhi use lambi progress ki jarurat hai.

Definitely Suhana agar yahan hoti to situation hi alag hoti, and we all know now that she is deeply in love with veer. Itna ki apni Jaan bhi haste haste de sakti hai uske liye. To yahan vo kya karti.


Aur ye naya character kon aa gya. Everyone expected Suhana here.
Aur no information available iska kya matlab hai. Ye bhi koi system holder hai kya. Well agle update me pta chalega.
So try to give as soon as possible.


Mere liye ye update kavya ke naam raha, card chhinte hue ek punch aadesh ko chipka deti to mast rehta ( just joking, vrna situation aur khrab hoti)

Excellent update
Waiting for next update eagerly.......

Superb awesome update bhai as always

Brilliant outstanding updates

Yar ab next update ka wait kaise karein! Aise mod par laakar end kia hai update ki next ka wait hi nahi hota.

Kavya is becoming my favourite too

detailed review baad me. But once again you showed your class.

what an update... Drama at its peak... Sunday h aaj to review mast baith k likhungi...

I don't go for the copies. I always go for the originals.

rahi baat brands ki... Chhapris kabhi bhi brands nhi banate... Idk what logic you are using...

Kya vo bapas aa gyi h kya meri thi vo system to ek hi ledy ke pass tha Jo Ava ( netaliya) thi

Nice update

Yup brother...

Nice update

अद्वितीय अपडेट भाई....आज का अपडेट पूर्णतः ही आदेश और वीर के इर्द-गिर्द रहा जिसमें कियारा और सोनिया भी शामिल थे।


पूरे अपडेट को पढ़ कर मन खुश हो गया।..... जैसे हर अपडेट में कुछ खास होता ऐसे ही आज के अध्याय में फैमली ड्रामा उच्चतम शिखर पर था।



आदेश का चरित्र पूरी तरह से खुल कर सामने आ रहा है और उसके चरित्र को परी ने भी प्रांजल के सामान्यतर बता कर पूरा स्पष्टीकरण दे दिया .....जो कुछ भी आज के अध्याय में देखा कैसे वीर जैसे शांत और सजग व्यक्ति को भी भ्रमित कर रोष करने पर मजबूर कर दिया उससे पता चलता है कि वीर को सिस्टम द्वारा दिए गए नोट को बिल्कुल भी हल्के में नहीं लेना है। ....वीर ने अपने असली चरित्र का छोटा सा नमुना आदेश को दिखाया जिससे आदेश का डरना स्वाभाविक था।




और इससे आदेश भी जान चुका है कि वीर को जितना नियुन्तम आदेश समझ रहा है उतना वो है नहीं अब देखना यह है कि आदेश किस प्रकार से वीर (हर वीर लिखते वक्त मेरा कीबोर्ड 'वीर्य' सजेस्ट करता है..) से डील करता है।



जो सबसे ज्यादा अलग चीज मुझे लगी वो‌ था वीर से कियारा का ग़ुस्सा होना ।......और हंसने वाली बात है कि कियारा किस किस बात से गुस्सा होगी।...



अब पता नहीं क्यूं सबसे ज्यादा आकर्षक किरदार काव्या लगने लगी है उसकी हरकतें स्वत: ही मुस्कान ले आते हैं। ......और भी बहुत सी चीजें हुईं सोनिया,कियारा की तकरार सोनिया तेजू की तकरार ।



अकेला भेड़िया भाई कतई जहर अपडेट दिया मजा आगया पढ़ कर ...जिस तरह से आगे के अध्यायों के लिए आधार बनाया है आगे अध्यायों के लिए मन आतुर हो उठा है....


धन्यवाद।।

Bro.... is update se to aisa lag raha hai ki kavya immature hai... kyuki woh abhi college me hai.... and she behave like she is in nursery...... itani badi party hai sab badi badi company ke owner ceo present hai.... aur koi college jati ladki aise kaise card khinch sakti hai......

It's very shameful....

No problem brother mein to waise bhi story mein pics ko dil se nhi chahta ... characters ko padh kar man mein unki tasveer banane mein alg hi mja hai or jab kuch chuninda kahani jaise aapki hai in kahani ka poora seen man mein feel karne mein alg hi mja hai ...

Super story nice update bro

Nice update

Super update Bhai

बहुत ही उम्दा,

क्या ही कहने आपकी लेखनी जब भी चलती है। सच कहानी अपने आप ही सासे रोक लेती है।

हर शब्द आप पिरोकर लिखते है।

वीर सोच समझकर अपने कदम रखता है। और ये जो आई है। इनका परिचय क्या होगा।

यहां खड़ी हर शख्स बहुत पावर से है। तो देखना बहुत कुछ है

Awesome beautiful update
162

Outstanding and ek number update

Kya Hi Mind Blowing Update Tha Bhai
Just Wow

Great update

O bhai shaab ye kya hogya kon hai wo lady
Bhai laikin ye paise Wale paiso ke liye apni dosti bhi chor sakte hai ye to samaj aagya veer ko

Mind blowing, marvelous update bro
Kahin ye new girl Ava to nhi ??? Suhana ho skti thi but system says no info available.

Now the next update will be the most awaited episode

Wah... excellent update. Aadesh ki ego to lagta hai use jaldi hi bahut neeche girane wali hai, apne aap ko guest se bhi important samajhna, spotlight apne ooper hi rakhna, yeh to kisi bhi successful businessmen ki qualities nahi hain. Khair ab to Veer se panga le liya hai, narak me hi jayega.

Tej ki insecurity bahut khoobi se dikhai, jara sa Bhumika ne hotel industry ke baare me bataya, weh insecure ho gayi. Arre, kahin agar archaeology se sambandhit baat hoti, to Tej ka koi mukabla nahi hota. Arohi hamesha ki tarah balanced.

Bahut samay baad Pari ke flirting nature se alag uska purana role dekhne ko mila, wahi Veer ki madad karna, usko guide kerna.

Sonia to bejhijhak Veer se milne aa gayi. Tej aur Sonia ka interesting conversation, didi kaho, aur wo handshake, padh ker maza aa gaya. Haan, contract ko bachane ke liye weh Veer ko defend nahi ker payi. Vakai Pari ne theek kaha, agar Suhana hoti, she would have given a hoot to Tanishq. Aur yeh Gaurav, ye bhi kuch bada kerne ki soch raha hai, lekin Pari ne theek kaha, iske bass ki baat nahi hai. Chalo, Niharika bhi naam aa hi gaya.

Aadesh ki invitation card wali chaal to Veer ne vifal ker di, lekin Kavya ke bachpane ke karan c-card ke chakkar me phans gaya. Ye Kavya bhi, ek accha lesson usko mila, kuch to samay ki gambhirta dekhti, per Kavya to Kavya hai. Aur jis tarah se Veer ne usko defend kiya, accha laga.

Kaera aur Sonia ki competitive equation kafi rochak rahi, bekar me uski secretary daant kha gayi. Ab inko phir se paas lana to bahut tedhi kheer jaisa kaam hai. Aur Kaera ka reaction, weh Veer ki madad nahi kerne aayi, keval isliye ki weh Veer ko apne paeron pe khade hote dekhna chahti hai, wo jo usne kaha tha, 'I want him to claim me.'

Kuch bhi kaho, per Aadesh ki seceraty ka is tarah se Veer ke chehre per wine phenkna accha nahi laga. Khair aapne kuch to soch ker hi likha hoga, iska badla jaldi hi lena chahiye.

Ab ye naye system wali kaun aa gayi, mujhe lagta hai yeh Ava hi hogi. Uski bhi to recording ki ek bahut successful industry hai. Per mujhe nahi lagta ki Veer aur Pari ko pata hai ki 'No information avialable.' ka artha hota hai ki dusre jane ke pass bhi system hai.

Khel to ab shuru hua hai, dekhte hain aage kya hota hai. Per mujhe khushi hogi ki agar Veer uska offer thukra de, apne aap successful hone me jo maza hai wo dusre ke sahare seedhi chadhne me nahi. Is tarah se weh Kaera ko bhi jeet lega. Aur abhi to picture baki hai dost, bahar jaker bhi Aadesh ne Veer ke liye underworld ke logon ke saath mil ker kuch intezam kiya hoga. Maza to tab aayega jab Aadesh ko bhi 'kutte ki gaand' jaisi feeling aaye, kuch romanchak fighing bhi ho jaye.

Nice update...

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Har baar ye lgta h ki ab story me mildness ayi h aur aap usi time ek new blast kar dete ho....

This unknown lady at the end... No information available... Pretty sure this is a person with a system... But question ye h ki ab ye h kon???

My guess is... Ya to ye Ava h .. ya fir koi new character... Crimson ki death k baad kitne system Wale log alive h? ye bhul gyi hu main... Ek baar yaad dila Dena plz...

shayad unme se hi ek koi new ho ye... But Ava bhi ho sakti h...

This update was just...
ab aisa koi hype moment nhi tha lekin jo convos aapne itne characters k beech dikhaaye h... They were just the chef's kiss...

what a brilliant pacing of numerous events

Tej ka Sonia ko dekh k reaction, their talk... Sonia ka baaki se milne ka reaction... Their talk... Sonia nd Karan ka milna... Secretaries ka milna... Sonia ka chance lena Ruchika k blunder par...

Mtlb jo jo reactions dekhna chahti thi main wo wo aapne dikhaye h .. meri wishes jese poori ho gyi is update me.. sari... Really incredible...

But can we also taka a moment to describe how beautiful and creative those company logos were??? And to come up with such good names...

globerays, Autoshield, elite motors, Nexacom... Casa Belle, Unicard... Just wow!!!

creativity at its peak...

mommy wali pari bhi silent ho chuki h... She realises the situation... Aadesh is really a bastard... Nd that's why she's not making any jokes with Veer I guess...

kavya is still immature.... Which is hard to swallow... But hm ye bhi ni keh sakte ki duniya me iss age ki har ladki mature h .. I mean we haven' seen all the girls of this universe... So we can't make that claim

but I think ab aage se kavya is baat ko realise karegi... That her immature nature can prove to be sometimes fatal... Wo hurt na hoye bas... That's all I want...

end me ek bada suspense... I wish Suhana yha hoti... Truly .. wo hoti to baat hi kuch aur hoti... Kisi ki majaal nhi hoti ki uske saamne Veer ki insult kar sake... Veer k
iss baar kaafi defensive raha...

is he thinking about something? Is he being restraint? Or what? Ya khud se hi wo shant h Jan boojh k .. we all know ki wo kitna powerful h... Wo chahe to waha khade ek ek ki bolti bnd kar de... Lekin wo khud ko roka hua h... Aisa feel hua end me...

Whats the reason??? kyuki ye normal humans h isliye? Ya sonali k upar us din galti se power ka use karne ki wajah se uske andar wo phobia baitha hua h... So he's not using his powers on normal peeps...

Jo bhi ho... Masala to mast bana hua h... aur ab next update ka wait krna mushkil ho rha h... Aapne bahut acche se iss update ko har way me blend Kia h .. shuru ki hasi mazak se situation ka intense hona aur end me suspense...

there's a reason why ppl are copying u .. best brands ki hi copies bnti h... Keep writing as always just like this... Waiting for new new update... and love ur work always...

vadhiya update werewolf brother

Mazedar update.... Kon aagya beech mein... Woh bhi system dharak...... Ava....!... Kya Ava aayi hai ja koi aur... Aage ka update intresting hoga ...Adesh or Veer ki cold war ab speed pakdegi....

Nice update

super , fantastic update bro

Nhi bhai image show nhi ho Raha Bhai main subha bolne wala tha mind se nikal gya tha bat

Zabardast update

SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Awesome Jabardast update

kya baat hai sirjee. Ye to kamal ka ending hai ya phir shuruwat kahein. Ek aur system dharak.

Superb update

Fantastic update

Definitely Kavya is Immature.

Aur ye achi baat hai kyoki kahani me alag alag personality traits ke character hone chahiye. Vrna baki sare character to itne serious hai ki bas...
Baki ladkiyo ko mauka mile to veer ko kacha hi chaba jaye.

And definitely iss incident ke baad hi usme kuch maturity ka essence dikhna shuru hoga. Kyoki jane anjane hi sahi iski vajah ek tarah se kavya hi hai. But kavya ko ekdum se serious mat bana dena.

Ab show ho Raha hai Bhai

B

bhot hi sàndaar update...jitni tarif ki jaye utni kam

Master stroke!

Very good update Bhai

Super dupper awesome update brother full action pack wala luvd it I think vo ladki nataliya hogi dekhte h next update me eagerly waiting for your next update brother plz plzz plzzz do cont asap take care

Awesome update bhai

Wow another system personality. Baap re baap ab to maza aayega lekin kiya yah veer ki madad karega ya phir crimson ki tarah veer ko khatam karne ki koshish karega.

Update start me thoda chit chat type magar Adesh ki kutta panti aur uske upar VEER ka jawab but Kavya ne sab gadbad kar diya usko thoda dimagh lagana chahiye thaa ki kaha per kaisay behave karna chahiye. Lekin jis trap me Adesh chata thaa ab veer usme phas chuka hai shayad yah humla usko bohat bohat mushkil me daal sakta hai lekin ab yah kon maharathi system Wale aa gayi hai yah phir abhi VEER ko kuch level aur upar uthna hain us lady ki info tak pohachne ke liye same like Kiara time jab uski info inhi mili thee veer ko.

Jo bhi ho ab intezar na ho sakega next update to bhai jo bhi aapki problem ho hame na pata hum ko jaldi say update chahiye ha ha ha. Just kidding bro.

After long time we got a superb update

Bohot hi shandaar or dhamaakedaar tha yrr ye update...

jo setup Aadesh ne kiya tha Veer k liye, he's about to be succeeded in that...
but at the last moment that a happened, a unknown lady came there and declared Veer as the CEO of her company (we didn't know the name of that company)....

everyone is shocked even Veer, and its obvious for all presents there because of that announcement by the lady ...

but Veer have another reason to get the shock, because his check ability didn't found anything about her....

ANd it means that maybe (90%) she's a system holder, and i think she's "AVA" aka "NATALIA MARTIN "....

Cant wait for the next update

Yes you're absolutely right ...
but there's also a perk which that lady have, and that's the audience and media and also she is a lady, so if veer would've strikes back then it might've goes against him...
like a man who didn't have any big designation and don't even have too much money is aiming to beat a lady (people thinks that and it will go against him, his family, his business and everything related to him)...

and also that time Veer was with his family...
i think that time he was just a common guy whose trying to help and rescue his family and taking the revenge of his family's insult....
you are right , he have the system but he behaves like ordinary people...

Kiya update dete ho Sir Ji
agla update aane tak
ye sochne me Nikal jata hai ki aage kiya Hoga or ye kaun aa gayi DHANYAWAD

Nice update

अति उत्तम अपडेट भाई।

अब ये नई महिला कौन आ गई जिसके बारे में वीर भी नहीं कुछ जान सका है।

Waiting for next....!

Yaar tumne phirse jatake dene chalu kar diye , ab yeh kon bala aa gai?
Mujhe toh laga ki suhana hogi lekin nikla koi or hi..!
Kahani mein ek or twist..!
Khurshi thaam ke bethne ka waqt aa gaya hein...!

Keep it Up...!

Mast update h bhai...

Bhai gand faad update

Fantastic update bhai, dil khus ho gaya Aadesh ki thodi pitai hoti to aur maja aata, lekin mujhe lagta he, Kaera ne use uski company ka CEO bana diya ya ho sakta he Suhana aayee hui ho. Agle update me clear ho jayega.

Target achieved now sochiya sir update dene ke bare me

Ajnabi aawaaz matlab naya character hai ya fir
Miss Ava ya Suhani me se koi ek hai.

Ava udhar rahati nahi hai to shayad invite Gaya nahi hoga and
Suhani ke paas to system hai nahin kahin ye baaki bache 11 -12 system holder me se to nahi.

आदेश आज की पूरी स्पॉटलाइट वीर को देने वाला है , अपडेट के शुरुआत से ही इस बात का अंदेशा लग गया था...!

वीर, सोनिया और कायरा से बचना चाह रहा था लेकिन बच नहीं पाया, और भला ऐसी पर्सनेलिटी के साथ और इतना कुछ उन लोगों के लिए करने के बाद भी अगर वीर को कोई ना पहचाने तो ये सब उनकी भूल ही होगी...!!

सभी लोग जो वीर के दोस्त हैं वो वीर से आकर मिलते हैं , कायरा का ये बर्ताव दिखाता है अब उसके इमोशन चरम सीमा पर पहुंच चुके हैं... वो अब सुख दुख को महसूस कर सकती है.. और ये एक अच्छे इंसान की निशानी है उसे अपने अच्छे और बुरे का ज्ञान होना ही चाहिए ।

आदेश की एंट्री होती है, अब सबकी नजर उस पर थी.. अपनी प्रेजेंस को स्क्रिप्टेड तरीके से सबकी नजरों में अच्छी दिखाने की कोशिश करता है और कुछ हद तक कामयाब भी होता है.. कुछ हद तक इसलिए क्योंकि जो लोग वहां हैं वो सभी जानते हैं वो यहां किसलिए हैं जैसा कि करन ने बताया तो फिर उन्हें घंटा फर्क नही पड़ेगा उसके अच्छे पन से...!!!

अब बात आती है वीर को humilate करने की पर आदेश का दाव उल्टा पड़ जाता है और उसे मानने पर मजबूर कर देता है कि वो गलती कर दिया.. थैंक्स टू स्किल.. जिसकी वजह से वीर आज बचा...!!!

मौके कभी खत्म नहीं होते...~ एक गया तो ही दूसरा आएगा..

आदेश के साथ भी यही हुआ.. यूनिकार्ड के नाम पर फिर से वो वीर को सबकी नजरों में गिराने के लिए रेडी था..
पर यहां भी किसी शख्स की एंट्री हुई जो वीर को बचा गई....

आखिर कौन है वो लेडी... जिसकी इनफॉर्मेशन वीर भी नही देख पाया...
वेटिंग फॉर नेक्स्ट अपडेट...

I guess.. New Character..
Qki Us lady ki info nahi dikhi veer ko
Jabki wo Ava aur Suhani se mil chuka hai...

Let's hope for the Best..

Wow just wow Werewolf Bhai you are fabulous writer I can see no one can match your aura like these
I am new here but I am your biggest fan of your writing style and I saw to tell you here is some stuff try to copy your style but the can't match your aura so your are a Creator and others are copy takers so don't focus him you can do your best and you always on top Baki Sab jhingalala

Story mast Jaa rhi hai aur jate rhegy apun ab har Waqt idhar present lagwai ga I'd Jo bana liya ab

Ding Eva nahi hai usko check karane ki jarurat nahi veer ko koi aur system holder

Ding nope renshu mentioned system holder can't check another system holder.Hmmi think new entry of china town arc

Super cool update

Aadesh ne poori planning ke according veer ka logo ke samne insult kiya dekhte hai veer usko kaise sabak sikhata hai

Mast update.
I hope ke Veer na to khud kavya ko dante or na hi kisi ko dantne de. Kyu ke yehi naughty bholi is kavya is kahani ki jaan hai. Parizaad Pakistani drame me ek dialogue tha ke. Khud ko itna powerful bnao ke apki jo kamiyan hain wo bhi style lge. To Veer ko khud ko itna strong bnana pare ga. Ke ksi ki himmat na ho koi uski family ki trf ankh utha k dekh ske. Or yaha Veer kafi kamzor lga.
Or ab Kia Veer ko ksi ki zarurat hai. Itne chote se mamle se nibtne keliye bhi ksi ki help ki zrurat par gyi. To kia Veer ab ksi keliye job kre ga?
Jo ke mere lihaz se to Veer ko kbi bhi accept ni krna chahiye. Or khud deal krna chahiye is mamle se. And Adarsh ko mare nhi. Bus usse barbaad krde. Kutte wali halat krde.
And last me ane wali aurat mje q lg ra Suhana hai. Like jse usne entry ki. Mje lga. Don't know why?
Waiting for next update

Ye last ki unknown entry ke baad update jaldi de dena is baar Bhai, nahi to apun log dharna pradarshan karne baith jaenge idharich!

Wait who the fck that strange lady jo abi ayi or aate hi veer uska itna chaheta ho gya ki seedhe use apni company ka CEO bna dia bc...waah.. Or to or ab ye kya nyi bkchodi h Sala k pari b use phchan ni paa ri... I think crimson ke bad ye phli insan h jise system ni ni pehchana.. Kya iske paas b system h.. Who knows.. May be writer knows .. Of course he does ....well kaafi zda curious huu of sbi honge but let's kya hota h.. Eagerly waiting for the next update

सनातन परम्परा कहती है अतिथि देवो भवः । अतिथि देवता होता है । हमारे दरवाजे पर आया भिखारी भी अतिथि है।
महाभारत के एक प्रसंग मे जिक्र किया गया है कि अगर आप किसी व्यक्ति का अपमान करते है तो वो आपके सारे पुण्य ले जाता है और अपने पाप छोड़ जाता है।
चाणक्य ने भी कहा है आपके घर अगर शत्रु भी आ जाए तो उसका भी सम्मान करना चाहिए ।
आदेश जयसिंघानी ने हदें पार कर दी । इसकी हरकतें काफी अशोभनीय और निंदनीय थी। मगर मुझे सोनिया मैडम के रवैए पर बहुत आश्चर्य हुआ । एक बड़ा बिजनेस डील उनके हाथ से खिसक न जाए इसलिए वो वीर का सपोर्ट न कर सकी । क्या उनके लिए धन दौलत रिश्तों से ज्यादा महत्वपूर्ण है !
यही हाल काइरा मैडम का भी रहा। बड़े आश्चर्य की बात है कि वो वीर के पक्ष मे इसलिए खड़ा नही हुई क्योंकि वीर उनके प्रतिद्वंदी सोनिया के साथ खड़ा हंस कर बात कर रहा था । यह कैसा लगाव वीर के साथ ? उन्हें क्या यह दिखाई नही दिया कि आदेश साहब वीर के साथ साथ उसकी फैमिली का भी इनसल्ट लगातार किए जा रहे थे ।

मुझे उस लड़की पर फख्र है जिसने वीर को भरी महफिल मे जिल्लत होने से बचाया । जिसने वीर को अपनी कम्पनी का हेड बनाया । मुझे पता नही कि वो लड़की कौन है ! शायद वो नतालिया मार्टिन हो सकती है या एक और सिस्टम धारी औरत ! पर यह लड़की जो भी है , वीर की सच्ची हमदर्द है।

बहुत खुबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।
यह अपडेट वास्तव मे बहुत ही बेहतरीन लिखा आपने।

I think this is the best part...this shows that veer is still growing and has a lot to learn about system and his own capabilities...baaki stories ke heroes ke jaise nai ki ek hi baar me invincible ho jaye

Jabardasttt Updateee


Kyaaa thaaa aur kyaaa hogyaaa

Aadesh ne chaal chali thi ek tarah se woh usme kamyaab bhi hua. Usne bhari mehfil mein Veer ki insult ki. Par Veer ka intimidiating Presence ne toh Aadesh ko dikha diya Veer aakhir chiz kyaa hai.

Kavya uska bachpana kuch jyaada hi badhta jaaraha hai. Usko ab bachpane se nhi samajdaari se kaam lena hoga. Harbaar har jagah bachpana dikhana achhi baat nhi.

Idher Sonia sirf apni uss deal ke liye Veer ke saath khadi nhi hui. Kyaa usse apni dosti yaad nhi. Kyaa usee ekbaar bhi yeh khayal nhi aaya ke Veer ne hi uski behen ki jaan bachayi thi. Usne apni jagah apni secretary ko bheja yeh chiz achhi nhi lagi. Iss chizz se mujhe aisa lag raha hai Sonia ka Veer ke life mein jyaada koi haq nhi rahega. Jyaada se jyaada woh sirf uski ek dost sirf ek dost bann ke hi reh jaayegi.

Par mujhe shock laga Kaera ka. Woh shant thi aakhir kaise. Maana ki woh chahti hai ke Veer uspe apna haq jamaye par jab aapka ek dost musibat mein ho toh dusre dost ko madad karni chahiye. Woh chahti hai ke Veer khud iss musibat se bahar aaye. Par agar woh khud aage aati toh Aadesh ke saath saath sabhi ke muh humesha ke liye bandh hojaate. Par Kaera ke liye yeh karna shayad iss waqt mumkin nhi ho raha tha. Par agar Veer iss musibat se akele bahar aajaye toh Kaera ke dil mein uske liye jagah aur jyaada khaash aur majboot hojaayegi.

Idher woh ladki kaun aayi hai jisne Veer ko apni company ka CEO bana diya. Aur yeh kyaa Veer usko check nhi kar paaya. Iska matlab ek aur System dhaari saamne aagaya. Kyaa yeh systek dhaari Veer ke liye achha hoga yaa bura hoga yeh toh aane waale waqt mein pata chalega.

Update 161
bahot behtareen zabardast
shaandar update bhai
hotel tow zabardast banayi h sabki aankhe dekh ker chodhiya Rahi h
Sonia tow bahot achche se Mili sabse lekin Tej ko Pasand nahi aayi Sonia lekin
Kaera ka samajh nahi aaya woh aisa behave kyon ker Rahi h
tow adesh n janboojh ker card per galat naam likha tha lekin veer n pehle hi sab check ker lia tha or card per apna naam sahi ker lia tha lekin kapti Insaan sirf ek hi chaal tow chalta nahi uske paas tow bahot saare hathyar hote h or usne chal bhi Chali woh Unicard ka woh Janta tha ki veer k saath jo bhi uske paas C- suit ki upadh dhi nahi h
kavya apne bhai k liye aisa ker Rahi lekin sab gad bad ho gayi or yahi Chahta tha Adesh
lekin yeh lady kon jiski badi zabardast entry huwi h or woh veer ko seedha CEO banane ko bol Rahi h
dekhte h aage kia hota h
behtareen shaandar update bhai

Na na na Suhana to ni hoskti

।।

Next 10 days ka intejaar rahega update to hi jayenge

Zabardast update

Finally update आ ही गया। As expected काफी भसड देखने को मिली, अच्छा भी लगा और बुरा भी, अच्छा इसलिए की शायद Chinatown arc की आने की आहट आनी शुरू हो गई हैऔर बुरा इसलिए की मैं चाहता था की ये फंक्शन वाला part इसी अपडेट में खत्म हो जाए, अब फिर से एक हफ्ते का wait, although मैं समझता हूं की इतने बड़े segment को एक ही अपडेट बिना कांट छांट के दिखा पाना थोड़ा मुश्किल था, but it's ok next update का wait रहेगा।

सबसे पहले उस no information lady की, ज्यादातर लोग बोल रहे है की वो सुहाना हो सकती है but मुझे नही लगता क्योंकि सुहाना की खुद की कोई compney नहीं जिसका ceo वो वीर को बना सके, वो गौरव का काम देखती है जो खुद किसी दूसरी कंपनी का ceo है और दूसरा अपनी बहन की help करती है। So बहुत कम chances हैं की सुहाना होगी
I think ये new lady Chinatown arc से ही connected हैं, and probably next update में Chinatown arc को लेकर कुछ extra information भी मिल जाए।

i hope ये nat भी नहीं होगी, coz उसकी भी कोई compney के बारे में पढ़ने को मिला नहीं था, फिर इतनी बड़ी pop star का एक normal से 5star होटल की पार्टी में आना थोड़ा logical नहीं लगता unless की वो उन्हें personally ना जानती हो, और उसे देख कर लगता तो नही की वो आदेश को जानती होगी

रही बात वीर की तो मुझे शायद ही लगता है की वो इस offer को accept करेगा क्योंकि वीर खुद भी काफी ambitious है, खुद की एक बड़ी compney खोलना चाहता है और ऐसे में वो दूसरे का नौकर बन जाएं ये उसके character को suit नहीं करेगा, अब ceo है भले ही बहुत बड़ी पोस्ट पर दूसरी compney का होना मतलब नौकर होने जैसा ही है।

Plus दूसरी compney में काम करने से वीर बंध जायेगा, फिर उसके mission का क्या होगा, उसकी cloth factory का, उसके food buisness का क्या होगा, जूही की चॉकलेट factory और फिर उसे एक हफ्ते के भीतर आदेश को बर्बाद भी तो करना है।

हालांकि मैं ये देख हैरान था की वीर almost आदेश के trap में फस ही गया था, जबकि वीर जैसे High iq वाले लड़के से ये expectations नहीं करते, even आरोही भी trap को तुरंत भांप गई पर वीर miss हो गया, पर ऐसा reaction suprising नहीं था, may be because काव्या का हाथ मोड़ दिया था इस वजह से spinal cord ने react किया हो

वैसे ये देखने लायक रहेगा की अब वीर आदेश को कैसे बर्बाद करेगा क्योंकि वीर अब मीडिया की limelight में रहेगा और यदि आदेश को कुछ हुआ तो सीधा शक वीर के ऊपर ही जायेगा although वीर को उस से कुछ खास फर्क नहीं पड़ेगा पर फिर भी negetive publicity वीर नहीं चाहेगा

मैं उस पल को पढ़ने के लिए बेताब हूं जब आदेश को पता चलेगा की जिस underworld के अंदर उसके सिर्फ कुछ connection है, वीर मुंबई के उसी underworld की सबसे बड़ी gang का boss है। आदेश की आंखों में वो खौफ पढ़ने में मजा आयेगा। At least उसे जल्दी समझ में आना चाहिए की इस बार उसने गलत आदमी से पंगा ले लिया है।

काव्या का behaviour आप first time पढ़ोगे तो बहुत ही rubbish और irritating लगेगा लेकिन आप काव्या की जगह खुद को रख कर देखोगे तो पाओगे की काव्या की surrounding हमेशा से ऐसी रही है की उसके आस पास रहने वाले लोगो ने उसकी ख्वाइश उसके मुंह के निकलने से पहले पूरी की है इसीलिए काव्या अभी भी अपने alice in wonderland वाले दुनिया के रहती है जहां उसे लगता है की हर आदमी अच्छा होता है but actually अभी वो इस बात से अनभिज्ञ है की दुनिया गोल नही madafaka है, जिस दिन उसे ये बात समझ में आ जाएगी वो अपने आप mature हो जायेगी।

Although उसे ये बात समझानी जानी चाहिए थी की जब उनका खुद का होटल है,और कैसे casse belle उनकी rival है और उनके होटल के chef's को तोड़ने की कोशिश कर रहे है फिर भी उसके एक simple से card के लिए इतना eager होना ठीक नहीं, वीर की बहनों को ये काम करना चाहिए था

हां but मैं तेज से disappointed हूं, ज्यादातर मौकों पर वो काव्या का elder version लगती है, गुस्सैल,जिद्दी over possessive बिना सोचे समझे किसी काम को करने वाली. पर उसकी बाते cute लगती है, so जाने देते हैं।

आरोही वीर की सारी बहनों में coolest और most intelligent है, जल्दी से भावनाओं में नही बहती, अपना दिमाग स्थिर रखती है, तभी तो वीर आदेश के चाल में फस गया पर आरोही ने तुरंत दिमाग लगा लिया की ये आदेश का trap हैं

ज्यादातर का कहना है की सुहाना होती तो वीर का साथ जरूर देती but i doubt it, भले ही सुहाना वीर से प्यार करती है लेकिन ये बात वो भी जानती है की वीर से उसका शादीशुदा होने के बाद भी प्यार करना गलत है, ऐसे में गौरव के मौजूदगी में वो वीर का favour ना लेकर अपने शादीशुदा जीवन में दरार लाने से बचती जो की already बहुत बढ़ चुकी है ऊपर से media को gossip करने का कोई और मौका वो शायद ही देती, ये बस मेरा मानना है क्योंकि

कुछ situations होती है जहा आप predict कर सकते है की सामने वाला कैसे react करेगा और कुछ में नहीं, काव्या का हाथ मोड़ने पर वीर का reaction obvious और reasonable था, दुनिया का कोई भी भाई वैसे ही react करता जैसे वीर ने किया पर सुहाना का reaction कुछ भी हो सकता था दोनो में से
so at the end it depends on wolfie bro की सुहाना कैसे react करती।

Kaira, sometimes i feel pity for him, भले ही उसके emotions आ गए है लेकिन अभी उन emotions के used to होने के लिए समय लगेगा। उसे समझ में आना बाकी है की किस जगह किस तरह react किया जाता है। जैसे kaira सोच रही थी मदद करने के time अगर वीर ने भी वैसा सोचा होता तो शायद slogan कब का उसे मार चुका होता

Btw मुझे अब तक समझ नही आया की actually kaira वीर से किस लिए नाराज है, क्या वो इसलिए नाराज है की वीर ने उसका फायदा उठा कर उसकी virginity ले ली या फिर इसलिए की वीर फ्रांस से आने के बाद उसे वो attention नही दे रहा जैसा वो expect कर रही या फिर इसलिए की वो सोनिया और सुहाना के साथ देखना पसंद नहीं करती, i hope जल्दी ही इसका जवाब मिलेगा।

Kaira ने जो space छोड़ा था सोनिया उस golden opportunity को grab करने में चूक गई, यदि सोनिया ने अभी मदद की होती तो वो kaira की insecurity और बढ़ा देती, और शायद वीर के दिल में अपनी favorability बढ़ा लेती।
But actually मुझे अब तक की कहानी में सोनिया को देख कर यही लगा की वो वीर में intrested love की वजह से नहीं दूसरी वजह से है, शुरुवात में वीर का उसकी गाड़ी से accident हो जाने की sympathy और बाद में उसका intrest इसलिए है क्योंकि kaira जैसी लड़की वीर के intrest रखती है, वो बस कुछ भी करके kaira को हराना चाहती है।

देखते है वीर का नया world tour कब से start होता है, renshu का debt के repay के रूप में क्या मांगेगा और वीर उसे कैसे repay करेगा

उम्दा अपडेट भाई, काफी अच्छे मोड़ पर लाकर छोड़ा है,
उम्मीद है अगला भाग इसके जैसे ही बेहतरीन पढ़ने को मिलेगा।
Stay happy and healthy And as always
Waiting for next update

gajab ka update

Wtf is this man just one word fucking awesome Werewolf kya suspence chorte ho har update ke last me

First of all update boht achi thi ap jis tra story la kar chall raha han wo qabil tareef hay
Dosri baat sonia ko bi kuch saza milni chahiya veer ka sath na dana ki or keara ko bi
Wo ju waitress jis na veer ka chahara par drink phanki thi oss ko bi os ka kiyah ki sazah milni chahiya
Casa bella ka owner ki barbadi tu ab paki ho gai hy

Lots of love from Pakistan

Mast update.....


Lagta hai ava ki entry ho gai hai... Ya fir suhana ka




Next update 10 din baad

maja aya

Muze Werewolf bhai ki ek baat acchi lagti ki vo update bhaut bada dete hai .. chota update padhane me maza nahi aata

Ekdam dhansoo or suspense se paripurn update bhai....

Amazing

just awesome

Superb update

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Super update

Zabardast update

Bhai next update waiting

Ye vo last main lead wali lag rahi hai jiski entry abhi tak hue nahi

Update

Waiting for the next update

Wolfi Bhai next update kab dogy bata den to apka Bhala Hoga Kyu Ke last Mai Jo suspence apny create Kiya wo bardasht nhi ho rha

Last time i checked ig sonali ne veer ko naraj kar diya tha so lets start with that only
I’m partially on both side in this incident. Sonali ko kabhi pyaar jaisa kuch mila nahi aur veer ko out of reach samjha bilkul bhi galat nahi tha but still i feel ki jaise mahool me vo rahi ladko ki naraj ki use jankari honi chahiye thi but still she is a innocent little immature sweet girl to hum usko maaf kar dete hai plus vo sirf veer ko pareshan karna chahti thi hurt nahi so she will get another point for that.
Veer ka behaviour might be my first behaviour in such conditions but mujhe ye bhi lagta hai ki usne thoda extreme kiya. Ab vo bahut intelligent hai, kafi aurato ke sath uske samband bane hai to ladkiyo ki feelings ko behatar janne lag jana chahiye and that ignorance for such long was not necessary.
But in the end all went well. Sonali ne apna pehla milan kara liya and jo uski conversation thi us time was according to me the best among all other jo aisi situation me veer ke sath aaye. Good writing
vaise tej ki najaro se kaise bach gaye sonali? Usko doubt nahi hua ya usne show nahi kiya?
I mean jab suman ko pata chal sakta hai to fir bhawna ya tej ya ragini ko kyu nahi?
Bhawna to chali gaye lekin tej bhi mujhe lagta hai bahut door nikal gaye hai jaha se ab vapas aana to impossible hi lag raha hai. Enjoyed every bit of her conversation with veer. Fir chahe vo bike sikhna ho, apni tareef karvana ya veer ke liye pushy hona. Also that hug… tej ke sath sath hum jaise kae readers ki bhi dilli tamannha puri ho gaye vo dekh kar
Vaise to humesha badi behan hi bolti hai i am proud of you lil one but yaha jo hua maja aa gaya padh kar. Tej ke liye es se important kya hoga jab uska bhai uski tarif kare? Sayad kuch bhi nahi
Purvi mausi ko to pura pani pani kar diya veer ne. Ye touch aur ye wali pari pata nahi kya kya aur karvayegi veer ke sath. Sath me ye bhi clear ho gaya ki purvi mausi bhi veer ke haram ka hissa banegi aaj nahi kal
tamanna bahut uchal rahi hai aur mujhe aise feeling aa rahi hai ki in the end uska haal niharika se jada bura hone wala hai. Aaj kal social media influencer ka kuch jada hi chod chal raha happy you have show that. Also ye influencer wale scene ko kya main juhi ki maasi ke role ke sath jod kar dekh sakta hu?

Prachi seems a very nice girl. Sonali ke time par bhi usne hi veer ko bataya aur ab jab food truck me tod fod hue tab bhi aur bhai vo veer ke sath chali gaye?? Sayad apne boss ke liye dar tha ki use kahi kuch ho na jaye? Ya fir uske dil me bhi ghantiya bajne lag gaye hai?
Abhi tak aisa kuch dikha to nahi. Vo humesha apne kaam ko lekar bhi serious rahi hai but jab samne veer ho to anything is possible.
Ek baar ache se veer ki laal aankh dikha dete prachi ko to swaad aa jata
Ragini ka behaviour bahut ajeeb laga mujhe. Maybe main unke emotions ko samjh nahi pa raha hu ya samjh nahi sakta hu but still jo vo chah rahi hai vo abhi ki situation ke liye to bilkul mumkeen nahi lag raha
Baad me jab veer ka arohi kavya tej bhumika sab se rishta banega aur family me pata chalega tab to i can imagine but for now?? Galat laga i know uski feelings bahut strong hai but still mujhe lagta hai veer us time bilkul sahi tha aur agar dekha jaye to veer ne to kahi se bhi suruvaat nahi kiya aur agar ragini ne ki hai to uske consequences ke bare me sochna chahiye tha. Agar future ki baat bhi kare to mujhe ragini ka vo jagah dikhae nahi de raha veer ki life me jo vo expect kar rahi hai. Also uska ye bolna ki main divorced hu tab tum mujhe nahi sivkaar rahe bahut galat laga mujhe
Khud ka dil khud hi todne wali baat ho gaye ye to
sweta aur bhawna ki cat fight bhi missing hai. Aur ab jab tak bhawna vapas nahi aa jati missing hi rahegi but jab tak ye nahi hoti bhumika ko hi bahar nikal lo
Uski ek alag hi image bani hue hai dimag me jo baki behano se bilkul alag hai. I hope imagination se jada hi acha ho uske sath jo jo maine soch rakha hai
Arohi ke bare me hum baat nahi karenge. Girl is a diamond
kavya however abhi bachi hai waqt ke sath maturity aa jayegi usme aur jo flavor vo lati hai story me vo bhi jaruri hai na. Baki sab to bade hai samjhdar hai but kavya is like that innocent naughty kid jo kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar deta hai
Mujhe lagta hai ye party ke baad usme thoda badlaav jarur aaega aur may be with a kiss vo veer se maafi bhi maang le? Who knows. Vaise bhi pyaar to ho hi gaya hai use

Adesh seems a very tricky guy. Uske pass system nahi hai but dimag bahut lag raha hai. Vo crimson jaisa to nahi hi hoga but still expecting a very good negative character from her
Ava vapas konse arc me aayegi?
Aur ye wali pari??? Kya hi bola jaye eske baare me. I am loving her. Pehle wali caring thi lekin ye cold bhi lag rahi hai aur dominating bhi. Sayad aage chal kar thoda aur pata chale lekin mujhe ye pehle wali se jada smart lagi abhi tak
Sonniiiiiaaaaa aaa gaye finally. Ab main chain se nashe kar sakta hu. Bhai kitna intezaar karaya esne yaar. Feels like a eternity. Vo uski conversation with veer aur tej ka beech me bolna bahut majedar tha. Sonia ab gayab mat hona. Humse ye judai bardast nahi hoti
Ab ye last wali ladki. Aapne ek baar bola tha ki ek lead character abhi aana baki hai story me so i guess ye vohi hai aur vaise bhi etne badiya timming le sath aaye hai sath me ceo ki post bhi de rahi hai to im assuming ki kaera ki competitor hogi bahut sare cases me
Now all i want is sonia ruling above everyone else, arohi and veers blushing moments, bhumika and veers romance and a conversation with kaera.


Thank you for writing with such excellence. Keep it up. Much love

Locket

Gazab ka Update.
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Waiting for next update bhai

Bhai bilkul napi tuli story chal rhi hai bahut jyada maja aa raha hai... Update ek se Bas kar ek hai bass keep writing

Awesome update

Waiting for update!!

Werewolf Bhai aajkal updates ka schedule kya hai, Agar kisi ko pata ho to batane ka kasht kare

Once in a 2 week... if we are lucky


otherwise whenever he wants to update

Waiting for update

Ye
Yes vo krti
Bcz uske Pati ko pta h veer ke bare me
And jese usne veer ko kha ki durr rha
Us acc un dono ka jhagda bhi Hua higa veer ko lekar

Update Saturday night ya Sunday night ko aayega.

Bhai ne uper hi bta diya h

Intjaar....

Enigma bhai ki PYAR 100 BAR aur CHAURAHA

Agla Update bahut hi jaldi aajae to maja hi aa jae .
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Hum ko intjar hai us night ka

17 mein se 4 hume pata hain, iske baad 13 aur bhi aane waale hain.. uff main to thakk gaya bhai

Waiting for the next update

waiting......

Ye Veer itna defensive kab se ho gaya prabhu? Ik ki wo maybe apni family ke saamne ek dum raudra roop mein nahi aana chahta, but with the mammoth intelligence he has, usko haath chalaane ki zarurat thi kya..? Laga ki is baar Veer kuchh bhi calculative tareeke se nahi kar paaya (uska trademark hi nahi bana rakh paaya wo). Kya kuchh aur plan hai uska? Because if Veer ends up requiring help to deal with that lil doggie Aadesh, then it would be really disappointing. (I miss the previous Pari ).

Sir , agr saturday night ko aa jaye to mza hi aa jayee

Itne bade review ka ittu sa reply.
Not good.

Nice update

Everyone....
Surprise... update Aaj rat ko 11 baje...









Kassss ye msg dekhne ko milta

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Ding

bhai 162 ka update de do

Bht hi amazing story hy ik ہفتہ main mukmal parh li plz ab or intzar na karwaye update dy دیں plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

Sunday night ko bhi nahi aaiga pakka bata rha hun werewolf bhai bhut dealy karte hai

Werewolf Bhai ekmatra lekhak hain jo bataye time pe update dete hain aur kabhi late ho to inform bhi karte hain Wait karna kathin hai par aise quality content ke liye seh lenge thoda

It's all time fav story. Waiting for kavya and veer moment.and love see niharika (veer's stress reliever )handled by veer and Suman.if possible add more filler scene with niharika.

Waiting for the update bhai

Kyu bhai

Main to wait karunga.... Raat bhar

Nind ka kya h apun ke liye 2 hour hi kafi h din ke

Update Kha ha

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पूरे 1 करोड़.... आशिर्वाद जीत चुके हो आप Werewolf । आपको ढेर सारी सुभकामनाएँ...​

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साथ ही ऐसे ही नये उपलबधियाँ हमेशा पाते रहो ऐसी ही शुभकामनाएं रहेगी मेरी उस उपर बाले से...


आप बीतते वक़्त के साथ अपनी लेखन शैली को लेजेंड्स के समरूप ले जा चुके हो....

आशा रहेगी की आपकी लेखनी का ये लाज़ाबाब प्रयोग (बादशाह - The Tales of Debauchery) अपने हर गुजरते वक़्त के साथ एक नये रहश्यो और उनके अजीबोगरीब तथ्यों से हमे मनोरंजित करते रहेगी ।

शुभकानाएं भविष्य के लिए ​

Congratulations on 10,012,705 views

Congrats for 10 M VIEWS

Bhai aj update aye ga na ya so Jaye sab log

Ding suhana is most important character in this script you will see in future

Okay Bro Subha College jane se pehle Update par ke jayon ga
It will be great start of the day

Ye sala Sunday night to chala gya, Monday morning dekhte hain agar aa jae to

Waiting.. waiting.. waiting..

ab to early morning hone wali hai bhai
late night khatam hone wali hai

इंतजार

morning hone ko bhai...

intezar pyaare intezar

Imtehan ho gai intezaar ka...
Aai na koi khabar werewolf bhai ka

Towa Towa Saara Mood Kharab Kar Diya

intezar bhai pyaare

waiting new update dost

Ap election lr rhy ho

Ding take your time

mai aapse sorry bolta hun agar aapko mari kisi v bat se bura laga ho to ,,,

bhai update kab do ge ?

waiting for next update bro

मनमोहक कहानी है नया अपडेट दें

Bhai update kab tak do ge

Bhaie kam sy kam bta tu doo update kb tak aye gi plz

Waiting

Sir aaj update aa jayega ?
Werewolf

Pahle hi jawab de diyo apne, me puchne hi wala tha, " update dene ki mana kar rahe ho ya delay hoga".

Update

Still waiting!

Dear wolf were hum t0 Apki Raah Daikhty Reh Gaye nD Apny update v delay kar di

Pa g bindas lgy rho hm bhi jb free hoty hn to visit kr k nikl lety hn

Aaj bhi update nahi aaega kya?

Nice

Waiting

Aayegaa


Aayegaa

Aayegaa update denewala aayegaa.

I am habbitual to check this thread once in a month because of the writer....
I am sorry about it but writer is not punctual so better to be silent and wait....
We are readers not writer, we have to go through his plan nothing else we can do....
May be he will have some issues....

Lagta hei aaj Veer ki sare girlfriends, who are most close to him,ek hi jagah par milne walla hei,maja aayega.waiting for the BLAST.

Bhai Mera upsc CSE ka main exam chal raha hai ... next 23-24 ko hai... me to 1 month se apke story read nahi kar paya... par dekha sirf 2 hi update hain... read karun ya nahi ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata... next interview ke liye bhi prepare hona hai...

Apko bura lagega esliye nahi bhai sach bolunga... apko ek lambi break le lena chahiye... 2-3 month k ya jyada bhi le sakte ho... par jab bhi ana wahi apna purana wala schedule rakh k ana...


Upsc aspirants ho kar ye sab read kar Raha hun bahat log sochenge... par unke liye bata dun yahan pe bhi sikhne ke liye bahat kuch hain... hamesha achhai kam nahi ata kabhi kabhi burai bhi situation me kam ata hai...


Jyada bore nahi karunga bhai... me jitna bhi busy kyun na hun ye story read karna nahi chodunga par bhai... life m kuch zaruri kam bhi hote hain so... ek lambi break le lo...


Aise hi story chalta raha to... aise kuch log negative likhte rahenge aur apko jab galat lagega story hi band ho jayega... so smile please... and sabke taraf se sorry...

Agreed....
Werewolf agar update late aane wala hai to aap please mat mention karana ki aaj aayega night ko aayega ye din aayega etc. We are eagerly waiting for your update but aap har time aapane bat se mukhar jate ho aur hum bechare wait karTe hai and then suddenly aapaka reply Aata hai update nahi aayega and hamara mood kharab ho jata hai.

I know you are busy person Mai bas request kar Rahi hun ki aap update ki date mat commit karana .

Btw story bahut acchi chal Rahi hai and suspense badhata ja Raha hai keep it and thanks

Werewolf It means update will come on 20sept .. I will wait ...

Last Upadte Review -
Once again , Your writing skills always shows why you are the best writer ....

In the Last update i have small doubt , it will be a new character or an old one ... .... & One request to you pls give us the update early if you can ...

Bhai aapki story ka new update kab aayega

B
Bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai

Update 162 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

Remaining comments ke replies samay milte hi diye jayenge.

 

[Yasasvi3]

I have told you guys so many times.
I'm bad at giving dates. Agar mere punctual na hone se dikkat hai toh date aur time ka mat pucha karo.
Because I'm bad at giving dates.

I have sacrificed my social entertainment life. Na hi mein movies dekh paata hu, na hi koi web series, kyuki mere paas time hi nahi rehta inn sab ke liye kabhi. Ye sab maine story ke liye band kar diya hai.

Also, don't compare previous schedule with present. Pehle mein apne sheher me hua karta tha, story ki starting me mein job ki preparation kar raha tha. Toh update twice a week aate the. Then work from home mila toh schedule usme bhi theek tha kyuki mujhe job ke liye travel nahi karna hota tha.

Lekin, ab wahi scenario nahi hai. Mein dusre sheher me hu. Mujhe subah jaldi uthna padta hai, ready hona padta hai, fir job ke liye nikalna padta hai. Aate aate mujhe 7-8 baj jaate hai jaha fir dinner ka bhi mujhe dekhna padta hai. Fir dinner se jab fursat hota hu tab ghar lautate hue mujhe 9 - 9:30 ke approx ho jaata hai.

Uske baad kuch time leta hu, family se baat karne ke liye, premika se baat karne ke liye, friends se baat karne ke liye. Mene social media tak band kar ke rakha hai. Aur uske baad turant story pe lag jaata hu. Just for the story, I have sacrificed so many things which I could have done for my entertainment.

Mujhe ek update complete karne me 6 to 7 days lagte hai. Aur woh bhi tab jab daily mujhe acche khaase at least 2 hours mile tab. None of the writer gives you more than 8k words per update at present. I'm doing this to compensate the timely delay.

I'm also doing my job, also focusing on the elections, also trying to write and keep the story ongoing, and also managing my personal life.

You can not comprehend the mental fatigue which I go through each day. Abhi toh chal raha hai. But if one day I did feel ki mera mental well-being destroy ho raha hai, uss din story band ho jayegi. Although, mein aisa nahi chaahta. And I will try me best to manage each and everything. Writer hu toh bina likhe mann nahi maanta.

Update kaisa hai ye wo acche se samajh payenge jo pehle koi story likh chuke hai. Jab ek hi jagah pe aap 10-15 characters ko ek saath leke aate ho toh unhe kaise manage karna hota hai, ye baat wahi jaante hai. So, if you can keep patience, then everything is alright. If you cannot, then I can't do anything in it.

Dada(boss) dekho aap senior ho me aapko bhot phala se dekhti aa rahi hu
You are the biggest story writer in replies...bhot jald bhagwan ki dua se no 1 bhi ban jaoge and u are also in top 7 in counting of views..


To me ye bol rahi thi ki aapse bhi or logo se bhi ki dekho yrr ye hamesha update dete h or jesa inhone kha ye dates me bure h koi ni ....dosto dete to hana so kuch nahi se thoda intazaar or sahi.....apn log normally bhi to wait karte hana to is baar if wo busy ha to thoda compro apni trf se banata ha kuki in ne kara ha.....mne khud ne pichli id se shyad 5 6 stories suru kari per unka end nahi kar pai jabki mujha khud is chij se dikkat ha but bhot demotivation face karna padata ha ....

Or ye to Werewolf ji ki himmat ki daat dijiya itna creative or utni enragy ke sath likhte ha bina kisi sawarth ke sirf is liye ki kuch ham jese log khani ko aage badba sake so guys think about it.....
And WEREWOLF ji apse in sab ki trf se me maffi mangti hu ....aap apne kaam se farig (free) hoke jab aapka man kare tab update dijiyaga


Danywaad ram ram​