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Bro 16 days gone still no update, it's to much. But we are waiting, please update as soon as possible 
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Aaram se time lo Bhai lekin update dhamakedar hona full jitna wait Kiya time wasool ho jaye aisa
din main 4 baar check kar raha hu update.. kyuki aane ki umeed hai
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Page to 3000 ke par pahuch gya pr incest ke naam pr ghanta kuchh hua hai ,ye story hi apne track se ht gyi hai,hero ko world tour karwaya ja rha hai,1 mahine me ekk update aata hai,humko to lgta hai ye story complete nhi hongi,main event kuchh nhi hua isme
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Mega Update
Update - 157 ~ Awkward but hot
Update - 157 ~ Awkward but hot
Ab tak...
Kaera : That's because- *sniff*
Julia : !!????
Aur Kaera fir achanak hi khidki se uski orr palti. Julia ne jab uska chehra dekha toh bechari ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Itne aasu usne aaj tak apni Miss Kaera ke chehre par nahi dekhe the.
Uske hontho par ek majboori waali muskaan feli aur woh ahista se boli,
Kaera : because I want him to claim me!!!
Julia : Ahhn!!!
Aur Julia ka badan woh sunte hi hairat ke maare sihar utha.
Ab aage...
"Jaisa bataya hai, wesa hi karna. Samajh gayi na?"
Veer ne halki awaaz me Sonali se kaha. Dono ghar ke bahar khade hue the. Hotel me rang-reliya mana ke aane ke baad, ghar me ghusna hi unki agli pareeksha thi.
Kyuki, Veer ne jo haalat Sonali ki kari thi, uske baad se woh theek se chal bhi nahi paa rahi thi. Use apne gupt-ang me kaafi dard mehsoos ho raha tha.
Veer ke sawaal par muh fulaate hue woh use dekh boli,
Sonali : Haan na! Mujhe baccha samajh rakha hai kya? Sab tumhari galti hai. Itni zorr se kiya ki-
Veer : ki?
Sonali (blushes) : Theek se chala bhi nahi jaa raha.
Veer : Accha? Kisne manzoori di thi?
Sonali (blushes) : H-Haan toh- toh mujhe thodi pata tha ki tum iss tarah karoge.
Veer : Mein iss tarah hi karta hu.
Sonali : Haan! Jaan lelo tum!
Veer : Theek hai na! Ab chalo andar!
Raat ka samay ho chuka tha. Veer uske sang andar ghar me jab pravesh kiya, toh hall me kuch log pehle se hi baithe hue the.
Tej laptop par lagi kuch dekh rahi thi, toh wahi Bhavna ek kitaab khole kuch padh rahi thi. Shayad archeology se hi sambandhit koi kitaab thi.
Dinner samaapt ho chuka tha. Veer ne pehle hi call karke ghar par khabar de di thi ki woh khana baahar se hi kha ke aayega. Accha khaasa samay usne Sonali ke khet me hal jotne me bitaya tha.
Ragini dining table se saari dishes ko utha ke andar kitchen me le jaa rahi thi, jisme uska haath bataane waali Shweta uska saath de rahi thi.
Bhumika aur Aabha hi thi jo waha maujood nahi thi. Dono pehle hi upar apne apne kamro me jaa chuki thi. Aur Suman, sabke liye andar kitchen me kuch meetha serve karne ke liye plates laga rahi thi.
Veer aur Sonali jaise hi andar aaye toh Ragini ne hi unn dono ko sabse pehle dekha.
Ragini : Arre? Aa gaye tum dono? Dinner kar hi liya na ya fir abhi thali lagau?
Veer : Nahi bhabhi! Hum dono dinner kar ke hi aaye hai. Mene bata toh diya tha pehle.
Bhavna aur Tej dono ki nazre upar uthi aur Veer par gayi,
Tej : V-Veer!!!? Tum aa gaye? Idhar aao na! Mujhe kuch baat karni hai.
Veer : Sorry Teju di! Mein thak gaya hu. Kya hum kal baat kar sakte hai?
Tej : O-Ohh! M-Mujhe bas woh-
Veer (smiles) : Shyam ji ke bheje gaye kisano ka kaam dikhana chahti hai aap. Yahi na?
Tej (nods) : H-Haan!
Veer : Aap aur mein! Hum dono kal hi chalenge! Okay?
Tej (smiles) : Okay!
Itna bol Veer aage badha hi tha ki Bhavna ke shabdo ne uske kadam wahi rok diye,
Bhavna : Ab mujhse baat karne ka samay hai abhi ya nahi?
Veer (rukte hue) : Kahiye na!
Bhavna : Nahi! Aise kaise keh du? Agar mera beta mujhse abhi baat nahi karna chaahta ho toh?
Veer : Aap keh rahi ho. Toh zaroor koi important baat hi hogi. Kahiye!
Tej : What? Iska kya matlab? Mom baat kare toh important. Matlab meri baat tumhe fizool lag rahi thi Veer?
Veer (sighs) : Aisa nahi hai Teju di! Mein jaanta tha aap kya baat karna chaahti thi. Isliye aisa kaha. Par Maa ke baare me nahi janta ki woh kya kehne waali hai. Isliye unse kehne ke liye kaha. Naraz mat hoiye!
Tej : Hmm!
Bhavna kuch shan shaant rahi. Fir apni goad me rakhi kitab ko band karte hue boli,
Bhavna : Mujhe ab jaana hoga.
Veer : Huh??
Tej : ???
Veer : Kya matlab?
Bhavna (sighs) : Mene kaha ki mujhe ab jaana hoga. Mein ghar par nahi baithi reh sakti itne din. Letter aa gaya hai.
Veer : Letter?
Bhavna : Hmm! South region me kuch mandiro ke architecture ko leke research karni hai. Hum sab waha ghumenge, ateet ko jaanane ki koshish karenge.
Veer : Kidhar jaa rahi ho aap?
Bhavna : Karnataka!
Veer : Nahi! Kahi nahi jaogi aap. Yahi mere paas rahogi.
Bhavna : Veer-
Veer : Mene kaha na ki aap kahi nahi jaane waali. Resign kar do aisi naukri fir. 20 saal se aapse dur raha hu aur ab fir aap jaa rahi ho?
Bhavna : Hamesha ke liye thodi hi jaa rahi hu nadaan ladke. Jitne din waha thehraav rahega, bas utne din waha rahungi. Fir laut ke aa jaungi.
Veer : Haan haan! Fir baad me fir koi letter aa jayega.
Bhavna : Letter me spasht hai beta. Mera naam bhi likha hua hai baaki colleagues ke sang. Mujhe waha upasthiti deni hi hogi. Aur mein wese bhi south region me kab se jaana chahti thi.
Veer : Nahi! Mene keh diya na, aap kahi nahi jaogi.
Tej : I-Iska matlab mera bhi naam-!?
Bhavna : Nahi! Mene tumhari recommendation nahi di thi. Tumhe bachane ka try kiya tha. Toh tumhara naam nahi hai. Tumhara yaha Veer ke paas rukna zaroori hai. Mein tumhe fir kabhi leke chalungi. Okay?
Tej (sighs) : Thank God! Mein wese bhi nahi jaana chaahti thi. Khaas kar abhi! V-Veer ko aise *blushes* akele chhorr kar...
Veer : Mene keh diya matlab keh diya. Bhaad me jaaye aisi naukri jiske chalte aap baar baar mujhse dur jao. Aap ko easily koi aur naukri mil jayegi yahi. Aap resign dedo aur-
Bhavna (frowns) : Agar mein tumse kahu ki kaam dhandha chhorr ke ghar par baitho toh-!?
Bhavna ke itna bolte hi Veer ekdum maun hoke reh gaya. Baat sahi thi. Woh apni maa ko kaam karne se mana kar raha tha par agar use hi koi aise kaam karne se mana kare toh? Kaise lagega? Shayad woh jaan gaya tha.
Veer : I-
Apne bete ke chehre par asmanjas dekh, Bhavna ka dil paseej utha. Woh apni jagah se uth, aage badh uske paas aayi aur uske sarr ko apne haatho me pakad use jhuka ke apne seene se laga lii.
Bhavna : Kabhi kisi ko kaam karne se iss tarah mana nahi kiya jaata beta. Karm hi toh shreshth hai. Tum jaante ho. Hai na?
Veer (nods) : Hmm!
Bhavna : Aaj tum itne businesses par dhyaan de rahe ho, kyu?? Iska jawab tumhe pata hai. Aur, ye baat mein bhi jaanti hu mere bacche ki 20 saal se tum mujhse bichhade hue the.
Veer : ...
Bhavna : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Mujhe tumhari yaad nahi aayi? Ek baat sun lo aaj. Jitna tumne mujhe yaad nahi kiya hoga na, uss se zyada mein tumhe harr din yaad karti thi. Jitni khushi mujhe Tej ke aas-paas hone se hoti thi, utna hi dukh tumhare bicchadne ka sataata tha.
Veer bas ekdum shaant ho chala. Sab sunta jaa raha tha.
Bhavna : Mere bacche! Tab mujhe sahara dene ke liye yeh kaam hi tha jo mujhe 20 saal tak himmat nahi haarne diya. Yahi woh kaam tha jiski wajah se Tej ko mene padhaya, likhaya, aur iss qabil banaya. Ye sirf paiso ke liye nahi hai. Ye mera junoon hai. Zameen ke neeche ateet ka kya chhupa hai, imaaraton ne ateet ke kaun se woh lamhe dekhe hai, yahi sab jaanana hi mujhe pasand hai.
Veer : Mein samajh gaya maa!! I'm sorry.
Bhavna (smiles) : Mein jaanti thi tum samajh jaoge. Sorry ki koi zaroorat nahi. Toh ab bolo? Mujhe jaane doge ya nahi? Mein jald hi laut aaungi.
Veer : Hmm! Kab jaana hai aapko?
Bhavna : Parso.
Veer : I-Itni jaldi!!?
Bhavna (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Veer : Ab jab aapne mann bana hi liya hai toh-
Bhavna : Maarungi ek thappad! Mann bana liya nahi. Yeh mera kaam hai.
Veer : Yeah yeah!
Bhavna : Hmm!
Veer : Akele jaa rahi ho aap?
Bhavna : Haan!
Veer : What? Akele kaise jaa sakti ho? Kisi ko saath me bhejunga mein aapke. Akele toh hargiz nahi-
Bhavna (smiles) : Mazak kar rahi hu. Chinta mat karo! Mein akeli nahi hu. Meri ek saheli hai woh mujhe station se hi join kar legi. Woh bhi yahi rehti hai.
Veer : Pakka?
Bhavna : Haan! Tum jab mujhe drop karoge toh khud dekh lena. Theek hai?
Veer : Hmm!
Unn dono ko aapas me gale lag dekh yaha sabhi mann hi mann prasann the. Siwae ek ke.
Shweta!
Jo bas vichlit thi.
Woh jalan ke maare vichlit nahi thi. Use bas ye bhay sata raha tha ki kya Veer uski bhi isi tarah parvah karta hai? Kya kabhi wo kahi aise akele baahar jaane ke liye bolegi toh kya tab Veer uske liye bhi aisi hi baat kahega?
Yahi chinta use khaaye jaa rahi thi.
Ragini ke fir agle shabdo ne iss khamoshi ko bhang kiya,
Ragini : Arre Sonali? Upar nahi jaane kya kamre me? Jao fresh up ho lo.
Sonali : H-Haan! W-Woh mein bas j-jaa hi rahi thi!
Ragini : Accha ruko! Rasgulle kha ke jao. Suman ji sabke liye laga ke laa rahi hai.
Sonali : N-Nahi woh mujhe abhi bilkul bhook nahi hai.
Ragini : Arre par-
Veer : Rehne dijiye bhabhi! Isne aaj bohut pel ke khaya hai. Ab agar kuch khaayi, toh pait fattne ko ho jayega.
Ragini (smiles) : Accha? Aisa kya? Mujhe bhi le chalte tum dono. Mein bhi kar aati dinner.
[Hooo~ She wants a threesome!! ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ Haha!]
'Shut up!!!'
Veer (smiles) : Jii! Zaroor bhabhi!
Idhar Sonali Veer ki baat sunn use aankhon se ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi thi. Magar kar bhi kya sakti thi bechari?
Khud ko sambhal woh ahista ahista upar jaane ke liye hui. Veer uske sang hi chal raha tha. Sabhi sadasyo ka dhyaan kuch pal ke liye unn dono par se hatt gaya.
Idhar Suman tray par sabhi ke liye kitchen me katori me rasgulle rakh unhe baahar dene hi jaane waali thi jab kitchen ke saamne se hi Veer aur Sonali nikle.
Kitchen ke theek saamne se hi upar ki orr jaane ke liye seedhiya thi. Suman ne nazre ferr jab dono ko dekha toh pehle toh woh muskurayi.
Par idhar chalte chalte Sonali ko jab zyada dard hua toh woh sisakte hue girne ko hui magar Veer ke mazboot haatho ne use thaam liya.
Suman ki aankhon se ye bachke nahi jaa paaya. Usne sab dekh liya. Kuch shan ke liye uski bauhe chinta me kass gayi. Aisi kya chot lag gayi uski beti ko?
Magar, jaise use akasmaat kuch bodh hua. Aur, fir unhi aankhon me achanak hi ek chamak aa gayi.
Woh tray utha ke bahar nikli aur unn dono ke paas aate hue Sonali se boli,
Suman : Upar kamre me pahucho. Mein aati hu.
Sonali (nods) : Hmm!
Veer maa beti ko chhor apne kamre me chala gaya. Sonali bhi upar apne kamre me aa gayi.
Andar aate hi use dard ka bodh aur acche se hua.
"Sssss~ Kaise kiya hai iss pagal ne bilkul."
Woh apne aap se boli. Lekin, ye kehte waqt uske chehre par dard se kahi zyada hayaa bikhri hui thi.
Aur thodi derr ke liye woh chand minto pehle guzaare kuch meethe palo ko yaad kar unme kho gayi.
Jab woh uss hotel ke kamre me nagn awastha me Veer ke saamne laiti hui thi. Kitna khubsurat pal tha woh~
"Ab sharma kyu rahi ho? Khol bhi do ab taangein."
Veer ne uski taango ko jab aapas me kholne ka prayas kiya, toh lajja ke maare Sonali ne apne perr aapas me band kar liye.
Jab Veer ne use Ragini bhabhi se seekhne ki hidayat di, toh uski sharm ka toh jaise koi thikana hi nahi raha.
Woh ye tak puchna bhool gayi thi ki akhir Veer ko kaise pata ki Ragini Bhabhi apne gupt ang ko saaf suthra kaise rakhna hai, ye sab jaanti hai!?
Sharm ke maare uska dhyan iss orr gaya hi nahi. Upar se Veer ne uski choot par muh laga ke use aur bhi lajjit kar diya tha. Apne chehre ko apni hatheliyo se chhipaaye woh Veer se nazre nahi milana chahti thi.
Kintu, Veer toh thehra Veer. Bas thodi si taaqat ka prayog aur Sonali ke perr apne aap khul gaye. Woh bechari zorr laga ke bhi band na rakh paayi.
Sonali : O-Oye-!!! N-Nahi! A-Aise nahi- Ahhhhhhhnnnnnnn!!!!!????
Kuch keh hi rahi thi woh jab akasmat hi uska poora jism fir hil ke reh gaya. Veer ka muh seedhe uski kuwari choot par dobara jo bhid chuka tha.
*slurp* *slurp*
"Mmm~"
*kiss* *slurp*
Sonali ka badan jhatke par jhatke khaane laga. Aur zyada derr nahi lagi jab uski choot ne fafkaar maarte hue apna paani chhor diya.
*huff* *huff*
Woh lambi lambi saansein lene lagi. Ceiling par nazre gadaaye bas yahi soch rahi thi ki ye kya hua abhi abhi.
Veer fauran hi dur hatt gaya tha toh choot se fawaar maarta paani saara farsh par jaa gira.
Veer : Poora floor geela kar diya tumne.
Sonali (blushes) : Chup raho.
Use tabhi ye dhyaan aaya ki uski Maa Suman seva karte samay Veer ke auzaar ko muh me leti hai shayad.
Yahi soch Veer ko lajjit karne ke liye iss baar woh uthi aur Veer ke lund ke paas aayi.
Sonali : A-Ab tum dekho mein kya karti hu.
Veer : Ohh? Kya karogi?
Sonali (blushes) : B-Bas dekhte jao.
Veer bas muskurate hue uski harqato ko dekhne laga.
Sonali ghabrate hue uske lund ke nazdeek aayi aur usne apne haatho se use pakda.
Woh soch me pad gayi ki akhir uski Maa iss bhayanak dikhne waale ang ko apne muh me kaise bharti hongi?
Lekin karna toh tha ab.
Sada sa muh banaate hue woh Veer ko dekhi,
Sonali : Tum- Tum bas dekho! Kya karti hu!
Veer : Dekh hi raha hu. Bahut hi bakaar shaqal bann rahi hai.
Sonali : Tum-!!
Gusse me aake usne ek jhatke me Veer ke lund ko apne muh me gapp se bhar liya.
Veer : Ughh!
Supaad ko muh me bhare Sonali use dekhi. Aur jeebh firaate hue woh swaad ko chakhne lagi. Kya ye bakaar lagega use ya fir-!?
'Hmm?'
Kuch derr tak jeebh firaane ke baad use swaad aaya. Swaad ajeeb sa tha. Halka sa namkeen sa swaad.
Itna kam ki zyada samajh me na aaye. Par itna kam bhi nahi ki bilkul hi swaad na aaye.
Woh supaade ko chooste hue acche se swaad leni ki koshish kari,
Veer : Urghh!
Aur dheere dheere, use ye swaad accha lagne laga. Kya isliye aurte mardo ke ling ko choosa karti hai? Use ye vichaar aaya.
Jaha pehle woh ghabra rahi thi, wahi use ab kaafi accha lag raha tha apna muh chalaane me.
*Slurp* *Slurp*
Thoda aur muh ke andar lund bharte hue woh acche se choosne lagi. Aur idhar Veer ka haath apne aap uske sarr par chala gaya. Aankhein band hone lagi.
Veer : D-Damn it!!
*gwak* *gwak* *gwak*
Sonali lund ko zyada toh andar nahi le paa rahi thi lekin jitna kar rahi thi woh ek nauseekhiya hone ke naate kaafi behtar tha.
Uske komal se chote se muh me lund dene me ek alag hi maza aa raha tha Veer ko. Lund chusaayi ke kuch derr baad Veer ne use apne se alag kiya.
Veer : Ready ho jao!
Sonali bas haami bhari. Darr kaafi lag raha tha use. Bahut suna hua tha usne ki pehli baar me jaan nikal jaati hai.
Pata nahi kya hoga uske saath. Soch soch ke bechari ki haalat kharab thi.
Veer ne taangein felaayi aur choot ke darshan liye. Paniyaayi choot lund lene ke liye utsuk thi.
Haath par thook lagate hue usne choot par mala,
Sonali : Nnnghhhh~
Choot paani se bheegi hone ke chalte behad hi kamuk awaazein utpann kar rahi thi.
Lund ko Veer ne uski choot ke muh pe set kiya aur use dekha,
Sonali kisi bheegi billi ki tarah use dekh rahi thi.
Sonali (blushes) : A-Araam se karna!
Veer ne haan kaha aur agle hi pal-
*Khach*
Ek zordaar dhakka laga diya.
Sonali ko aisa laga jaise kisi ne uski choot me koi garam lohe ki moti si rod ghused di ho.
Veer : Shit!!!
Uski choot itni tight aur garam thi ki aisa lag raha tha jaise woh uske lund ko pighla ke apne andar hi ghol legi.
Bedsheet ko bheenche Sonali ki kamar dard ke chalte upar ko uth gayi.
Veer jaise hi neeche jhuka, Sonali ne apne dono perro se uski kamar ko jakad liya aur uski peeth par apne naakhuno se aise nocha jaise uski khaal hi ukhaad legi.
Veer ko halka dard toh hua, par usne sehen kar liya. Woh jaanta tha ki iss se kahi zyada dard Sonali ko ho raha tha iss waqt.
Veer ne zabardasti nahi ki. Thoda samay beet jaane ke baad usne apne lund ko aage peeche karna shuru kiya.
Aur fir-
Waqt ke chalte Sonali ki dard bhari karaahe, madhoshi ki siskiyo me badal gayi.
"Ahhhnnn!!! Ngghhhh~ Ahhh ahhh ahhha hhhhaaahhh!! Ohhhh!!! Ssssss~"
*Thapp* *Thapp*
Dekhte hi dekhte dhakke taabad tod hone lage aur Veer use zorr zorr se chodne laga. Dard ho raha tha Sonali ko lekin maza bhi aa raha tha.
Kya ye hota hai sex karna? Kya isliye uski maa aur bhabhi iss yaun sambandh ko itna enjoy karti hai?
Aaj shayad woh thoda bahut jaan gayi thi.
"Ahhhnn ahhhn Ahhhnn uuhhhh ssss~"
*thapp* *thapp* *thapp*
Veer ke hontho ko chooste hue woh ekdum hi pagal ho gayi iss nashe me.
Na jaane woh kitni baar jhari, aur na jaane Veer ne kitni hi baar apna veerya uski bacche daani me giraya.
Dono ke beech ye sex ghanto tak chalta raha, jab tak ki Sonali thak haar ke so nahi gayi.
Tabhi, apne pehle yaun sambandh ki yaadon se woh baahar aayi jab use apne kamre ke darwaze par halchal sunayi di. Usne palat ke waha dekha,
Sonali : Maa!?
Suman andar aa rahi thi aur usne bheetar aa ke kivaad ko band kar diya. Apni beti ke nazdeek aate hue woh palang par uske bagal se baith gayi.
Suman (smiles) : Aaj toh meri bacchi badi ho gayi. Hmm? Aurat jo bann gayi ab!
Sonali : Ahn!?? T-Tumhe pata chal gaya? K-Kaise?
Suman : Maa hu tumhari! Mujhe nahi pata chalega toh aur kise pata chalega?
Sonali : L-Lekin mene toh chhipane ki poori koshish ki thi.
Suman (smiles) : Jab tum kitchen ke paas karahte hue nikli tabhi mujhe shaq ho gaya tha.
Sonali : !!??
Suman : Pehle toh laga tha kahi meri bacchi ko koi chot toh nahi lag gayi? Lekin, fir agle hi pal dimag ki batti bhi jali. Fir saara maajra samajh aa gaya tha mujhe. Maalik ka yu tumhara haath pakad sahara dena. Fir toh jaise mein sab samajh gayi thi.
Sonali (blushes) : O-Ohhh!
Suman : Aur shayad ab samay aa gaya hai ki mein tumhe sab kuch bata du.
Sonali : Huh?
Suman : Tumse ek baat chhipayi hai mene beta!
Sonali : Mein janti hu maa ki tumne mujhse bahut kuch chhipaya hai. Kaho! Mein sunn rahi hu.
Suman : Tum hamesha se yahi sochti aayi ho na ki bhala tumhari maa kyu Veer jii ke prati samarpit hui? Kyu iss khel me tumhari maa ne Aabha ko bhi shamil kar liya? Bolo? Jaanana chaahti ho na?
Sonali (nods) : Hmm!
Suman : Toh aaj sunn lo beta. Aisa isliye hai kyuki yahi sadiyo se chala aa raha hai.
Sonali : Matlab?
Suman : Matlab ye ki hamara parivar maalik ke parivar ki janmo janam tak seva karne ke liye baadhya hai.
Sonali : K-Kyaaaa???
Suman (nods) : Haan!
Sonali : Ye toh bewakoofi-
Suman : Ise mazaak mat samajhna!!!
Sonali : H-Huh!?
Suman : Tumhare asli pita. Jo iss duniya me ab nahi hai. Unhone bhi iss pratha ka mazaak banate hue mujhe seva karne se rokna chaha tha. Aur nateeja!?
Sonali : ...
Suman : Woh iss duniya se chal base.
Sonali : M-Maa! Aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Ye sab dhakochla hai aur-
Suman : Tumhari Nani jii!
Sonali : Huh?
Suman : Yaani ki meri maa! Unhone hi mujhse kaha tha ki chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, kabhi bhi iss raaste se bhatakna mat aur na hi apne kul me kisi aur ko bhatakne dena.
Sonali : Maa ye sab bakwas hai. Agar hum seva nahi karenge toh hum mar jayenge? Ye kisne aisi patti padha di tumhe?
Suman : Sonali!
Sonali (glances) : ...
Suman : Tumhari Maa hu. Accha bura bhali bhaati samajhti hu. Vidhi ke vidhan ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti. Aur sach kahu toh-
Sonali : Hmm?
Suman (smiles) : Ye raasta hamare uddhaar ke liye hi hai.
Sonali : Huh?
Suman : Kya tumne khud se gaur nahi kiya kabhi?
Sonali : K-Kya?
Suman : Yahi ki jab se hum maalik ki chhaav me aaye hai, tab se hum apne jeevan me pragati hi kar rahe hai. Kya tumhe bodh nahi hua iss baat ka?
Sonali (gasps) : Ah!!
Suman (smiles) : Antar samajh aaya na?
Sonali (nods) : Hmm! M-Maa! Mein pehle bhi ye samajh chuki thi. Jab se humne wo gaav chhora hai, tab se hi hamari rehne, khaane, odhne ki sthiti ekdum acchi ho gayi hai. Lekin, mene bas-!!! bas Veer ki madad ko thoda nazar-andaz kar diya tha.
Suman (smiles) : Jo ki tumhari bhool thi.
Sonali : Haan! Mein samajh gayi hu maa! Agar, woh nahi hota toh pata nahi aaj hum sab kaha hote. Aur, isliye mein kabhi bhi uski kisi bhi baat ko taal nahi paati. Uski harr baat maanti hu.
Suman : Ye toh acchi baat hai na?
Sonali : Shayad? Lekin, jo janana tha mujhe woh zaroor pata lag gaya.
Suman ne use pyaar se apne gale lagaya aur fir boli,
Suman : Tumhe pata hai? Shuruat me mujhe bhi thoda sandeh tha.
Sonali : Kispe?
Suman (smiles) : Maalik pe!
Sonali : S-Sach?
Suman : Hmm! Mene vidhi ke vidhan ko sweekar toh kar liya tha. Magar, mere andar seva karni ki poori laalsa nahi thi.
Sonali : Toh fir-!?
Suman (smiles) : Fir jaise jaise samay beetata gaya, maalik ko jaise jaise mein aur jaanane lagi toh-
Sonali : Toh?
Suman (blushes) : Kuch nahi!
Sonali : Arre!! Maa batao na!! Toh-!?
Suman (blushes) : Toh utna hi unse prem hota chala gaya. Magar, mera prem sirf ek daasi ka hai. Tum apna batao? Kya yeh prem daasi ka hi hai na? Ya fir-!?
Sonali (blushes) : M-Mujhe nahi pata! Hmph! M-Mujhe uss se kyu prem hone laga bhala?
Suman : Prem toh hua hai! Ye mujhe dikhayi de raha hai. Aur shayad ye bhi pata lag raha hai ki yeh prem kis prakaar ka hai. Sonali!
Sonali : !!?
Suman (frowns) : Hamari jagah maalik ke jeevan me daasi ki hi hai. Hum unke sang dost, sakha, daasi, banke hi reh sakte hai. Ek premika ya patni ke roop me nahi! Kabhi sochna bhi mat iss baare me.
Suman ke shabd sunte hi Sonali ki aankhein hairani aur thodi peeda me fel gayi. Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Woh nazre churaate hue boli,
Sonali : U-Uski premika? A-Aur mein-!? Hmph! M-Mein kyu banane lagi uski premika?
Apni beti ke saare haav bhaav Suman bhali bhati samajh rahi thi. Woh janti thi ki uski bacchi ko pyaar ka bukhar ho gaya hai. Ab ise jaane me samay lagega.
Suman : Bas ek baat dimag me hamesha baitha lo ki maalik ki seva karni hai. Aur, daasi reh ke hi unse prem karna hai. Unki jeevan-sangini ki jagah khaali zaroor hai. Magar, uss jagah pe hamara haq nahi hai. Samajh gayi?
Sonali (nods weakly) : Mmm!
Suman (smiles) : Ab ye batao ki dard zyada hai kya?
Sonali (nods) : Th-Thoda hai!
Suman : Tum ruko! Mein davayi laati hu. Use kha lena. Toh subah tak bahut araam lag jayega. Aabha ko bhi mene wahi di thi. Theek hai?
Sonali : Hmm!
Itna bol, Suman waha se davayi lene bahar nikal gayi. Idhar Sonali bas, apni maa ki chetavni ko dhyan me rakhi hui apne bistar par gir padi. Shayad daasi ke roop me prem karna-
Uske liye behad hi mushqil hone wala tha.
***
Agla din hua, aur Tej ka aaj ka josh behad bharpoor tha. Aaj woh aur Veer akele kuch samay vyateet karne waale the. Fir bhale hi woh kaam ke silsile me hi kyu na ho.
Veer jab subah subah hi apni car nikaalne ke liye ready hua toh Tej uske nazdeek aate hue boli,
Tej : Kya hum- bike se nahi chal sakte?
Veer : Thoda dur hai. Aap baith logi bike pe itni derr?
Tej : That's what I want!
Veer : Huh!?
Tej (blushes) : I-I mean-! I mean mein adjust kar lungi. Mera mann bike se jaane ka hai. Daily car me hi ghumti hu na isliye bas-! A-Aur mujhe bike chalani aati nahi hai. T-Toh-!
Veer (smiles) : Okay! Bike se chal dete hai.
Veer ke raazi hote hi, Tej ka chehra agle hi pal khil utha.
Tej (smiles) : S-Sach?
Veer : Obviously!
Tej : M-Mujhe bhi bike chalana sikhaoge? Mujhe bikes bahut pasand hai! Kya mein aaj chala sakti hu?
Veer (smiles) : Kyu nahi!
Tej (smiles) : Thank you~
Woh achanak se aage aayi aur-
*Puch*
Uske gaal ko halke hontho se choom li. Sharmate hue woh turant hi peeche bhi hatt gayi. Veer ke gaal bhi sharm ke maare laal ho rahe the.
Veer : I-
Tej (blushes) : Chale?
Veer ne use upar se neeche tak dekha. Tej ne kaafi sundar kapde pehne hue the. Use nahi pata tha ye ladkiyo ki dresses kaun se prakaar ki hoti hai. Toh isliye usne-
'Check!'
*Ding*
[A normal black choker top.
Description : A top which has a band that looks like a choker under the neck.]
'Ohh!'
Tej ke top ko check karte hi use andaza lag gaya ki ye kis tarah ka top tha.
[Hooo~ Are you checking out your own sister? ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ]
Pari ne use chhedte hue kaha.
'Shut up!!!'
[Why don't you check out me instead? You have full access to it. Come to me! Surrender to me, my darling~ ♥]
Kintu, Veer ne use full ignore maarna hi behtar samjha.
'Tracer ko Teju di ke top pe laga do!'
[Hmm? Are you scared? Don't worry! Woh tumhari Sonali ki tarah kahi nahi bhaag ke jaane wali.]
'Still! It's better to be safe than sorry! Mark her top!'
[Alright! Alright! As you wish my dear~]
*Ding*
[Tracer has been applied on Tejal's choker top.]
'Good!'
Tej ne idhar jab dekha ki uska bhai use kaafi derr se check out kar raha hai toh woh aur bhi sharma gayi. Baalo ki latt ko apne kaan ke peeche karte hue woh Veer par sarsari nigaah maarte hue puchi,
Tej : K-Kaisi lag rahi hu?
Veer : Uh! A-Are you sure aap yahi pehen ke jaana chahti ho?
Tej : Huh? K-Kya isme kuch buraayi hai?
Veer : Bike aise seekhogi aap?
Usne uski heels par ishara karte hue kaha.
Veer : Gear shift karne hote hai bike me perr se hi. Shoes behtar rahenge.
Tej : Ugh!! Really? Shoes zaroori hai kya?
Veer : Bilkul! Hum hotel nahi jaa rahe. Waha zameen me ghoomenge toh perr bhid jayenge dhool mitti se. Aapne kya soch ke heels pehen li?
Veer ki baat sunte hi bechari Tej ka poora muh latak gaya. Usne toh Veer ke samaksh accha dikhne ke liye ye sab pehna tha. Magar, Veer ki baat bhi sahi thi. Zameen me fasal ko dekhne jab jaana hi hai toh shoes hi behtar hone waale the.
Woh muh latkaaye latkaaye andar gayi aur apne sneakers pehen ke baahar aa gayi.
Tej : Ye toh chalenge na ya fir ye bhi-!?
Veer : Hmm! Ye badhiya rahenge! Chale?
Tej : Hmm!
Woh Veer ke peeche baithi, magar dono ke beech thodi duri thi. Veer ne bike start ki aur dono hi apne ghar se chal diye.
Safar thoda sa lamba tha kyuki Manorath ne jo zameen Veer ko di thi woh sheher ki main city se thode outskirts me padti thi.
Yahi kaaran tha jo Veer car se jaana chaah raha tha. Kintu, apni Teju di ke liye bike hi sahi.
Bike raaste par sarpat bhaag rahi thi. Tezz hawaein unn dono ke baalo ko bikher rahi thi. Tej ka ek haath uske kandhe par maujood tha. Toh dusra woh apni khud ki jaangh par rakhi thi.
'K-Kya karu? Kya wese baith jau?'
Uske antar-mann me ek dwandh chal raha tha.
'K-Kahi use bura lag gaya toh? Kuch sochne na laga fir.'
Bechari chaah rahi thi ki kass ke uss se lipat ke baithe. Par darr bhi lag raha tha ki kahi Veer uss se chidh gaya toh?
After all, iss tarah ek girlfriend ya premika hi apne partner ke saath baithati hai.
Kintu, woh kaha darr ke sehemne waalo me se thi?
'Jo hoga dekha jayega!'
Ye soch woh agle hi pal zorr se uski peeth se chipak ke baith gayi.
Veer : Huhhh!!
Veer ko fauran hi Tej ke gol gol stan apni peeth par mehsoos hue aur woh thoda hichkichate hue bola,
Veer : Y-Ye-! Ahem! Aapne choker top kyu pehen liya?
Tej (blushes) : M-Mera mann tha-! Huhh?? Ek minute!! Tumhe choker top ke baare me pata hai?
Veer : Y-Yeah! I-
Tej : Huh? Aur kehte ho ki meri koi girlfriend nahi hai! Sach sach batao! Kaun hai tumhari girlfriend?
Veer : I really don't-
Tej ne achanak hi uski kamar par zorr se nocha.
Veer : Ouch!!! Kya kar rahi ho?
Tej : Jab tak mujhe bataoge nahi tab tak aise hi nochungi! Bolo! Kaun hai woh?
Veer : Sach me! Trust me dii! Abhi tak koi nahi hai.
Tej : Abhi tak se kya matlab hai?
Veer : I mean aage ka mujhe nahi pata na.
Tej : Ohhh! Toh aage banaane ke iraade hai huh?
Veer : That's-
Tej : Bol lo jhooth. Bol lo!!!
Tej apne shabdo se aisa jaal bunn rahi thi ki bechara Veer badi hi asaani se usme fassta jaa raha tha.
Veer : Trust me!! Aur aapka kya? Kya aapka koi bf nahi hai?
Tej (stammers) : Haah?? N-Nooo! Wh-Why would I have any bf?
Veer : Kyu? Kya kabhi koi pasand nahi aaya?
Tej : N-Nahi! M-Meri life me kabhi koi aisa nahi aaya.
Veer : Hmm! Kaise aayega? Aise mujhse chipki rahogi toh harr ladka yahi sochega ki-
Tej : ki??
Veer : Kuch nahi!
Tej : Bolo aage!!
Veer : Nahi kuch nahi!
Tej : Bolte ho ya firse nochu mein?
Veer : Zidd kyu kar rahi ho dii?
Tej : Bolo jaldi! Agar mein aisi hi tumse chipki rahi toh kya sochenge ladke?
Veer : Aap jaanti ho mein kya kehna chaah raha hu.
Tej : Mujhe tumhare muh se sunnana hai.
Veer (sighs) : Aap ladkiya log bhi na!
Tej : Bahut cute hoti hai. I know! Ab bolo!
Veer : Agar aap aise hi chipki rahi toh woh sochenge ki aap meri gf ho!
Tej ko jo sunana tha, woh sunte hi uske hontho par pyaari si ek muskaan bikhar gayi.
Usne aur zorr se Veer ko kass ke jakda aur komalta se boli,
Tej : Toh sochne do~ ♥
Veer : Whaaaatttt?
Tej (stammers) : I-I mean- jinhe jo sochna hai sochne do. Mein bhala unke baare me kyu sochu? Mein toh wahi karungi jo mera mann chaahega. Bhaad me jaaye woh.
Veer (nods) : Right!
Inhi sab chhoti moti nok jhok ke chalte woh dono hi kuch deri ke baad zameen ke paas pahuch gaye.
Tej : Aao! Tumhe dikhati hu hum sabki mehnat!
Tej uska haath thaame zameen ke paas le gayi. Wahi paas me hi sabhi ke rehne ke liye ek ghar bhi banaya gaya tha. Tej ne sabhi ke sang milke kisaan Bhai log ke liye poori vyavastha karwayi thi.
Khaane peene se leke rehne ki paryapt vyavastha kari gayi thi.
Jab woh dono khet ki orr aage badhe toh Veer ki aankhein hairangi ke chalte fel gayi.
Veer : Ye-!!
Tej (smiles) : Kaisa laga?
Veer : Waqai! It's great!
Kayi saare log waha maujood the. Jinme se ek Varsha bhi thi.
Veer : Varsha?
Varsha (glances) : Ohh! M-Maali- Mera matlab Veer ji! Aap yaha?
Uske muh se maalik nikalne hi wala tha ki usne apni zuban par qaabu kar liya. Inn beetein dino usne Tej ke sang kaam karke ek baat zaroor seekhi thi.
Woh yeh ki Tej ke saamne kabhi bhi Veer ko maalik keh ke nahi bulana hai. Use yaad aaya ki pichli baar usne khet me maalik keh ke jab Veer ko pukara tha toh Tej ka kya reaction tha.
Dobaara aisi bhool nahi karna chaahti thi woh.
Veer : Kaisa chal raha hai sab?
Varsha uddyaan aur ped paudho ki visheshagya thi. Phoolo se kaise sugandh banate hai, unka kaha kaha upyog kiya jaa sakta hai ye sab usne badi hi bareeki se seekha hua tha.
Varsha : Sab badhiya chal raha hai Veer ji. Kheti se alag zameen ka kuch hissa sirf phool waale paudho ke liye banaya hai. Tej ji ne meri kaafi madad ki hai. Paudhe abhi chote hai.
Veer : Ohh? Kya mein dekh sakta hu?
Varsha (smiles) : Kyu nahi? Aaiye na!
Varsha unn dono ko naye naye banaaye gaye bageeche ki taraf le gayi. Veer unke kaam se kaafi prabhavit tha aur khush bhi.
Usne dekha ki tarah tarah ke khushbu-daar phoolo waale paudhe harr jagah lagaage gaye the. Kuch ko toh usne check bhi kiya.
Tej : Kaise hai?
Veer (smiles) : Bahur sundar! Bilkul aap ki tarah!
Tej (smiles) : Pagal!
Bageeche se nikalte hue woh jab kheti waale hisse me pahucha toh waha maujood kisaan Bhai log ne use namaskar kiya.
Veer : Kaisi chal rahi hai taiyaariyan Kaaka?
Kaaka : Bas bitua! Sab lage hue hai.
Veer : Kya mujhe dikhayenge aap?
Kaaka : Arre kyu nahi! Aaiye!
Kaaka Veer ko faslo ke paas le jaate hue use batana shuru kiye,
Kaaka : Ye soyabean hai bitua! Ye garmi waale hai. Inko lagaaye hai.
Veer : Ohh!
Kaaka : Abhi tractor chalaaye the. Paani abhi isme sprinkler se de rahe hai.
Veer : Ohh!
Kaaka iske pehle aage kuch aur samjhaate, ki itne me Tej aage badhi aur boli,
Tej : Kaaka bas! Baaki, mein samjha dungi! Mujhe bhi toh mauka mile.
Kaaka (smiles) : Theek hai bitiya!
Woh muskurate hue chale gaye aur idhar Tej apne bhai ko apni skills dikhaane ke liye tatpar thi.
Tej : Ye dekho Veer! Ye dekh rahe ho? Ye dhana hai! Kaaka logo ne milke lagaya tha. Woh waha paudhe dekh rahe ho?
Veer (nods) : Hmm!
Tej : Woh nimbu ke paudhe hai. Aam ke bhi lagaye hai. Kuch jaamun ke bhi hai.
Veer : Ohh!
Tej : Aur aao idhar!!
Tej uska haath thaam use kheech kheech ke le jaa rahi thi. Veer se kahi zyada woh utsuk thi use ye sab dikhaane ke liye.
Tej : Ye dekho! Ye fasalo ke paas humne mitti ko halka halka khoda hai. Bhoora banaane ke liye. Aur aisa abhi 1-2 baar aur karenge.
Veer : Kyu?
Tej : Kyuki iss se woh mitti paudho ke aas paas upar ko uth jaati hai aur jab paani denge toh nami ko banaaye rakhegi. Iss se result aur bhi accha milega hume baad me.
Veer : I see!
Tej : Woh dekho! Waha gehu boya gaya hai.
Woh use lekar gehu waali fasal ke paas le gayi.
Tej : Ye dekh rahe ho? Humne mix karke lagaye hai. Mene aur Varsha ji ne hi milke ye sujhaav diya tha.
Veer : Mixing karke?
Tej : Yes! Ye alag alag prakaar ke gehu hai Veer. Teen chaar alag alag varities ko humne ek saath mix kiya hai. Tum dekh rahe ho? Cross breeding hui hai yaha.
Veer : Aisa kyu bhala?
Tej (smiles) : Hume jitne nutrients ek saath mile utna behtar hota hai. Jo nutrients normal gehu se nahi milenge uss se kahi zyada inn waalo se milenge. Samjhe? Sabka dhyaan rakhna hai hume.
Veer : Th-That's-
Veer bas maun reh gaya. Woh Paris gaya tha. Aur yaha ye sab uske liye itni mehnat kar rahe the!? Itne kam samay me akhir inn sab ne itna kuch kar kaise liya. Aaj use apni badi behan pe behad hi garv mehsoos ho raha tha.
Tej ne behad hi kam samay me kheti ka kaafi gyaan arjit kiya tha. Aur, usne poori lagan se apna yogdan diya tha.
Jiska parinaam aaj Veer apni aankhon se dekh paa raha tha.
Woh bhavuk hua aur usne agle hi shan, apni behan ko gale se laga liya.
Tej jaise andar hi andar intezar kar rahi thi. Aur Veer ke aisa karte hi, uski aankhon se aasu nikal chale.
Kab se...
Akhir kab se woh iss pal ki prateeksha kar rahi thi ki kabhi woh din aaye jaha uska bhai uss par nirbhar ho. Woh uski tareef kare, use kaam saunpe.
Aaj shayad wahi din tha.
Veer : Thank you so much dii!
Tej (smiles) : Th-Thanks kisliye?
Veer : For everything. For being here with me. For reaching out to me and for...
Tej : and?
Veer : For loving me this much.
Tej : Apno ko thanks thodi bolte hai.
Veer : Still-
Tej (smiles) : No thanks and no sorry!
Veer (smiles) : Okay!
Jab Tej uske seene se alag hui toh uski nazre Veer ke hontho par gayi. Fir, uski aankhon par-
Punaah hontho pe aur fir woh hadbadaate hue dur ho gayi. Gaalo ka taapmaan badhne laga.
Tej : B-Bas yahi hai jo kuch hai.
Veer : I'm very impressed. Chale ab?
Tej : Itni jaldi?
Veer : Hmm! Woh sabhi kaam kar rahe hai. Hume disturb nahi karna chahiye.
Tej : Ohh! Hmm! Aur bike ka kya? Tum sikhaane waale the.
Veer (smiles) : Aaiye!
Faslo ko dekh lene ke baad Veer Tej ko bike pe leke ghar waapsi ki taiyaari karne laga.
Veer : Ye dekho! Ye clutch hai! Gaadi ko jab start karte hai toh neutral se first gear pe laana hota hai.
Tej : O-Ohh! Kya ye car jaisa system hai?
Veer (smiles) : Exactly! You catch up quick!
Tej (smiles) : I know!
Veer : Bas thoda different hai. Harr gear ko badalne ke liye aapko clutch ko dabana padega aur-
Tej : Aur fir acceleration dena padega gaadi ko aage badhaane ke liye!? Right?
Veer : Yes! Lekin, ek baat aur. Woh ye ki jab abhi aap first gear pe daalne ke baad acceleration dogi toh ekdum se clutch chhodh ke nahi dena. Warna gaadi upar ko uchak jayegi.
Tej (smiles) : You mean fir mein neeche dhadaam se gir jaungi?
Veer (smiles) : Nahi! Kyuki mein aisa hone hi nahi dunga!
*Badump*
Tej (blushes) : H-Huh!?
Veer ka ye jawab Tej ne expect nahi kiya tha. Pal bhar ke liye uska dil zorr se dhadka.
Tej (blushes) : Mere peeche baitho!
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Tej ne gaadi chalani shuru ki. Veer harr ek cheez ke liye use instructions dete jaa raha tha. Kintu, bechari Tej ka dhyaan gaadi par kam aur apne bhai ke nazdeek baithe hone par zyada tha.
Veer ki garm saansein uske kandhe aur gale par pad rahi thi. Woh bechari uski baato par dhyaan tak nahi de paa rahi thi.
Tej : H-Haaah!!!
Veer : Kya hua?
Tej (blushes) : K-Kuch nahi!
Veer : Hmm! Toh mein keh raha tha ki jaise aap agar speed me raho aur aapko ekdum se gaadi rokna ho toh quick succession me gears ko neeche laate jaiyega aur fir brake maariyega. Toh gaadi jaldi ruk jayegi. Okay?
Tej : O-Okay!
Veer : Haan aur-
Tej : T-Tumne-!
Veer : Hmm?
Tej (blushes) : Tumne ye wahi wala perfume lagaya hai kya? J-Jo lagate ho aksar-!?
Veer : Hmm?
Tej : Y-Ye wahi waala hai na jo tumne Jaipur me Shyam uncle ke Ghar pe lagaya tha?
[ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ]
Veer bechara ye bhi nahi jaanta tha ki Pari inn sab baato ko sunn kya kuch pehle hi samajh chuki thi.
Veer : Huh? Waha-! Mujhe itna kaise yaad hoga?
Tej toh bas formality nibha rahi thi. Sugandh se toh woh ek baar me samajh jaati thi ki Veer ne kaun sa perfume kab lagaya hua tha.
Tej : M-Mujhe yaad hai.
Veer : Well, it doesn't matter now. Abhi jo kaam hai woh ye hai ki- Ohhhhh shittttt!!!! Dekh ke-!!!!
Saamne gaay ka ek jhund tha, jisme se ek gaay achanak hi saamne ko aa gayi thi. Veer ne turant hi steering apne haath me liya aur gaadi ko samay par rok diya.
Magar, iss jaldbaazi me uski kalaayi Tej ke stano se bahut zorr se jaa ke bhidi. Uske than upar neeche jhool ke reh gaye.
Veer : I-I am soo sorryyy!!! Woh achanak se-!
Tej (blushes) : I-It's okay! Galti meri hi thi. T-Tumne bataya tha kaise rokna hai bike. So it's fine-!
Veer (blushes) : Still- mera haath-
Tej : K-Kaha na! Koi baat nahi! Ab mein peeche baith jaati hu. Tum chalao!
Veer : Hmm!
Bechari Tej abhi ke liye itna hi handle kar sakti thi. Warna uska dil hi baahar ko aa jaata.
Aur raaste bhar woh bas yu hi uski peeth se chipki rahi. Ye kya ho raha tha use? Ye anubhuti pehle toh kabhi nahi hui. Fir aaj kyu?
Kyu itne saare ladko me use sabse zyada apna bhai hi dikhta tha? Tamaam ladke uske peeche pade hue the. Toh fir use apna bhai hi kyu nazar aata tha hamesha? Shayad ab se use ye sawaal sataane waala tha.
***
Evening ~ 7:08 PM
Aaj din bhar apni behan ke saath samay vyateet karne ke baad, Veer jaanta tha ki use kahi aur bhi apna keemti samay dena bahut zaroori tha.
Aur woh tha~
Uski Purvi maasi ka ghar.
Uski Maa ne jataya tha use ki Purvi maasi se mil ke aa jaana. Woh bahut gusse me hai. Jab se woh France se ghar aaya tha, tab se hi apni Purvi maasi se uski koi mulaqat nahi hui thi.
Agar woh thoda aur ise taalta toh pakka tha ki Purvi khud aake uske kaan kheench leti. Isliye, Tej ke sang lunch kar woh seedha use ghar chhor yaha chala aaya.
Abhi woh door bell bajaane hi wala tha ki usne dekha darwaze par toh taala laga hua tha.
'Maasi ghar par nahi hai!?'
Mud ke woh jaane hi waala tha jab bagal se hi uske ek awaaz aayi,
"Ab yaad aa rahi hai meri?"
Mud ke dekha toh paaya ki uski Purvi maasi hi khadi hui thi.
Haath me bada sa grocery ka thaila liye woh abhi abhi shopping karke hi lauti thi shayad.
Veer : Maasi!?
Purvi : Bolo? Ab yaad aayi hai apni maasi ki?
Veer : Aapko kabhi bhulta hi nahi hu. Toh yaad kaisi?
Purvi : Hmm hmm! Inn sab baato se tum mera dil nahi jeet loge samjhe?
Veer (smiles) : Toh kya karna hoga mujhe?
Purvi : Socho socho! Kya kar sakte ho? Chalo! Andar aao!
Woh halki muskaan liye darwaza kholne aage aayi. Toh, Veer ne uske haath se grocery ka bag le liya.
Taala khol usne Veer ko ghar ke andar bulaya aur wapas se door ko andar se hi lock kar diya.
Veer : Mausa ji-
Purvi : Woh apne ek friend ke ghar gaye hue hai dur unse milne aur kuch kaam se. Ekdum sahi samay par aaye ho tum!
Veer : Kyu?
Purvi : Kyuki woh kal aayenge! Aur mein yaha akeli baithi baithi bore hone waali thi. Ab aaj raat tum yahi rukne waale ho.
Veer : P-Par-
Purvi : Par var kuch nahi! Aise manaoge mujhe? Huh?
Veer (smiles) : Theek hai!
Purvi : So? Itne din kya kar rahe the? Ek baar bhi socha nahi ki apni Purvi maasi se mil aau jaake.
Veer : Maasi, aap jaanti ho ki jabse mein waha se aaya hu tab se hi meri vyastata kitni badh gayi thi. Aaye din koi na koi news channel se ghar pe hi aa jaata tha.
Purvi iss baar thoda pighal gayi aur uski baat se sehmat hote hue boli,
Purvi : Hmm! Samajh sakti hu. Mein tumhari tarah patthar dil nahi hu. Isliye, mene bhi bakheda khada nahi kiya. Dekho! Koi bhaav nahi bhi de raha hai toh bhi sab kuch akele kar leti hu.
Veer (smiles) : Lagta hai aaj dherr saare taane milne waale hai.
Purvi : Haan toh! Kyu? Abhi se haalat patli ho gayi kya?
Veer : Aap ko khush rakhne ke liye mein harr cheez me raazi hu.
Purvi palat ke use ek shan dekhi, fir wapas mud ke chai banane lagi. Lekin, hontho par halki muskan zaroor saj chuki thi.
Woh chai bana ke use di, dono ne chai peete peete kuch aur gappe ladaaye par garmi dono ko hi behaal kare hue thi.
Veer : Aapne cooler kyu hata diya?
Purvi : Pucho mat! Sab inke kaaran! Accha bhala window cooler laga hua tha. Fir kayi din se baarish hui toh ye kehne lage ki ab cooler hata dete hai, nahi toh macchar aayenge usme wagarah wagarah.
Veer : Itni jaldi bhi kya thi-
Purvi : Arre mene samjhaya tha unhe. Meri sunta kaha hai koi!
Veer : Hmm!
Veer ne mann me hi thaan liya tha woh kal hi apni Purvi maasi ko ek AC gift karega. Na jaane unka kya reaction hone waala tha.
Purvi : AC lena hai Veer. Bas, abhi thoda budget tight hai. Thand me lagwa lungi. Tab prices kam bhi rahenge.
Veer (smiles) : Jii!
Purvi : Bahut chip-chipa raha hai. Nahi?
Veer : Jii! Mein toh din bhar se kheto me fasle dekhne gaya tha toh mujhe toh aur hi garmi lag rahi hai. Ek bath zaroori hai.
Purvi (smiles) : Good idea!!
Veer : Hmm?
Purvi : Ek kaam karo, jao fatak se washroom me aur udhar naha lo. Mein bhi ye waale washroom me naha leti hu. Fir badhiya lagega.
Veer : Par mere paas kapde-
Purvi : Arre inke kapde pehen lena na. T-shirt aur lower nikaale deti hu mein ruko.
Woh fauran hi andar almaari se Arun ki ek t-shirt aur ek black lower nikal ke le aayi.
Purvi : Ye lo. Aur underwear wahi pehen lena. Geeli mat karna.
Veer : Jii!
Purvi : Ye rahi towel. Jao fatak se. Mein bhi naha leti hu. Fir mast gappe ladaenge dinner ke dauran.
Veer (smiles) : Jii!
Woh utha aur bathroom ki orr chal diya. Toh wahi Purvi bhi dusre washroom ki orr chal di.
Dono washroom ke beech bas thodi hi duri thi.
Veer ne washroom ke baahar lagi rod par apne kapde aur tauliya taangi aur woh andar ghus gaya. Purvi ne bhi yahi kiya.
Nahaate hue waqai me use kaafi accha mehsoos hua. Din bhar ka paseena, mel badan se saaf kar ek taazgi bhara ehsaas use hua.
Usne door khol ke haath baahar le jaate hue apni underwear pehni aur fir tauliye se apne badan ko pocha.
Idhar Purvi bhi naha chuki thi. Darwaza khol woh apne kapde lene ke liye haath baahar kari, magar haath me kapda aate hi uske haath se fisal ke neeche gir gaye.
Purvi : Arree-!!!
Usne jhaank ke baayi taraf Veer ke washroom ki orr dekha. Darwaza band tha.
Mauka dekh woh turant hi nagn awastha me hi baahar nikli ki itne me-
*Click*
Veer ke washroom ka darwaza khula aur woh baahar aa gaya.
Purvi : Ahhhnnn!!!!
Veer : Huh!?
Dono ki nazre aapas me mili. Purvi poori upar se neeche tak nangi thi. Woh jhukte hue apne kapde utha rahi thi aur Veer ke nikalte hi woh usi awastha me jam ke reh gayi.
Uske gore mote mote than paani ki boondo se saje hawa me jhool rahe the. Gupt-ang ke paas kaale kaale halke baal nazar aa rahe the.
Veer ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Woh toh apne liye T-shirt lene baahar aaya tha. Ye kya ho gaya?
Magar yaha-
Purvi hadbadayi, apni bra, panty aur kapde ek saath haatho me pakad woh jaldbazi me mudi ki tabhi uska perr fisal gaya.
Uske hi badan se gira paani neeche fel chuka tha. Aur, usi par perr jaldbazi ke rakhne ke chakkar me, woh slip ho gayi.
*Thud*
Zorr ki awaaz ke saath woh farsh par giri.
"Ahhhhhhnnn maaaaaa~"
Veer : Sh-Shittt!!!! Maasiiii!!!
Veer ne aav dekha na taav woh shirtless hi tezz gati me uski orr aaya. Peeth par ek haath rakh use sahara dete hue usne Purvi ko uthaya.
Uski nazro ke saamne poora bheega doodhiya badan nanga saamne rakha hua tha.
Veer ne apne muh ko kasa aur woh sab khayal mann se hataaye.
Veer : Maasi!!!
Veer ka haath thaam Purvi uthi aur hadbadi me usne apne gupt-ang aur doodh ko chhipaya. Kuch kehne ya nazre milaane ki uski himmat tak nahi ho rahi thi.
Veer jaanta tha uski Maasi iss waqt kya feel kar rahi thi. Isliye woh apna dusra haath apni maasi ki jaangh ke neeche le gaya.
Purvi ki saansein hi jaise atak gayi. Ye ladka kya karne jaa raha tha? Uska muh kuch kehne ke liye khula magar tabhi-
Uska badan hawa me uth gaya. Dimag ko jaise samajh aa gaya ki kya ho raha tha isliye uske dimaag ne uska khula muh bhi band kar diya.
Par dil kuch nahi samajh paa raha tha. Woh toh bas dhadakta hi jaa raha tha zorro se.
Apni maasi ko goad me liye Veer bedroom ki orr chal diya.
Purvi ko bed par litaate hue usne kaha,
Veer : Maasi zyada lagi hai kya? Bataiye kaha lagi hai!
Purvi (blushes) : K-Kuch nahi! Tum jao aur mere kapde le aao bas!
Veer : Woh mein le aaunga. Par pehle bataiye ki lagi kaha par hai? Agar abhi waha mala nahi toh swelling aa jayegi. Boliye jaldi!
Purvi (blushes) : Mein th-theek hu na! Tum jao aur-
Veer : Aap bata rahi ho ya mein mausa ji ko call karke bulau?
Purvi : N-Nahiii!! Unhe kuch mat batana! Warna woh mujh par gussa karenge. M-Meri hi galti thi. T-Tum kapde lao fir-
Veer : Aap ye bedsheet odhiye.
Kehte hue usne Purvi ko wahi rakhi ek bedsheet khud hi udha di.
Veer : Aur ab bataiye kaha lagi hai chot. Kyuki aapke girne ki awaaz bahut zorr se aayi thi.
Purvi : Haan! Bas...! *blushes* Peeche bum pe aur kamar ke paas thoda.
Veer : Peeche ghoomiye!
Purvi : Huh?
Veer : Mein oil leke aa raha hu garam kar ke. Thodi derr maalish karunga toh baad me jo swelling aane waali hogi woh nahi aayegi. Wait for me!
Woh use uss haalat me chhor kitchen me chala gaya. Idhar bechari Purvi ka dimag kaam karna hi ab band ho raha tha.
Woh bedsheet odhe andar se poori nagn apne bete samaan ladke se maalish karwane jaa rahi thi?
Pal bhar ke liye toh use bahut gussa aaya. Ye sab kya kar rahi thi woh? Mann kiya ki abhi woh uth ke jaaye apne kapde pehne aur kaam me lag jaaye.
Magar, na jaane kyu uska uthne ka mann nahi kiya. Kuch toh tha jo use roke hue tha. Par kya? Iska uttar woh nahi jaanti thi.
Aur woh thehri rahi. Soch vichaar me hi uska samay zaaya ho gaya jab Veer tel leke uske kamre me padhaar gaya.
Veer : Aap abhi tak aise hi baitho ho?
Purvi kuch nahi boli. Woh bas Veer ke chehre par haav bhaav dekh rahi thi. Parakh rahi thi. Aur jab usne thodi derr aaklan kiya toh use pata chala,
Veer sach me uski parvah kar raha tha. Uske chehre par chinta saaf jhalak rahi thi. Kahi na kahi uski bhaavnao ko jaanane ke baad Purvi ka mann halka ho gaya.
Purvi (smiles) : Tumhe maalish karni aati bhi hai?
Veer : Hmm! Aati hai! Ab jaldi se pait ke bal letiye.
Purvi kuch sochi aur fir bas haami bharti hue woh apne pait ke bal let gayi.
Bedsheet ko Veer ne uski kamar tak neeche kiya toh doodhiya chikni peeth uske saamne aayi.
Thook ka niwala gatakte hue usne apne mann aur mehmaan dono ko shaant kiya.
*Badump* *Badump*
Idhar, Purvi ka dil zorro shorro se dhadak raha tha. Jaise jaise bedsheet uski nangi peeth se gharshan khaa ke neeche jaa rahi thi, uska seena saans lete hue utna hi upar ho raha tha.
Aur kamar ke end point par aake bedsheet ruk gayi. Purvi ne ek rahat ki saans li. Ye bhala woh kis haalat me fass gayi?
Par agle hi shan-
Veer ka garm tel se sana haath uski peeth par pada.
"Nnnnnghh~"
Aur uske muh se awaaz nikal gayi. Aankhein band ho chali. Woh soch vichaar me pad gayi.
'Sh-Shayad maalish karwana itna bura bhi nahi tha jitna mein soch rahi thi.'
Veer dard ko dur karne ke liye acche se jagah jagah maalish karne laga.
Magar woh nahi jaanta tha ki uske pass ek aisa hathiyaar tha jo kabhi bhi chaalu ho jaata tha.
*Ding*
[Mystic Touch has been activated.]
'Wh-Whaaaaatttttt???'
Veer ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.
'P-Pari!!???'
[Hooo~ What is it? ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ]
'What the fuck is this?'
Iss baar jaise hi uska haath Purvi ki kamar par pada,
"Ahhhhhnnnnn~"
Woh bechari hil ke reh gayi. Apni moaning ko khud rokne ke liye usne apne muh par haath rakh awaaz roki. Sharm ke maare uska poora chehra laal ho raha tha.
'Sh-Shittttt!!!'
Purvi ka badan khichaav le le ke angdayi le raha tha.
'I- I can't do this. Mujhse ye nahi hoga!'
[Do it!]
'Wh-What!!?'
[I said keep doing it!!!]
'Pagal ho gayi ho kya? Woh meri maasi hai! Aur ye chutiya Mystic Touch abhi kyu activate hua? Tamaam mauko par ise sirf abhi hi activate hona tha. Damn ittt!!!!'
[Don't you want to give her relief? ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ]
'I do but-'
[Toh sawal mat karo. Jitna keh rahi hu utna karo. Put your hands on her waist.]
'Like this?'
Purvi : Nnnghhhhhh~!!!
'Shitttt!!! Ye kya karwa rahi ho tum? N-No! This is so wrong!'
[Bakwas karna band karo! Aur karo!]
Veer ne jaise hi haath kamar ke thoda aur neeche lagaya toh Purvi ek jhatka kha ke reh gayi.
Woh itni zorr se moan kari ki apni awaaz ko dabaane ke liye usne apne nichle honth ko daato se daba liya. Bedsheet ko zorr se bheenche woh fafkaar maar maar ke jhatke le rahi thi.
Veer ka harr ek touch use sisakne pe majboor kar raha tha. Itna lajjit woh apne jeevan me aaj tak nahi hui thi. Yaha tak ki itni sharam use Arun ke sang pehli baar sambhog karne me bhi nahi aayi thi.
Par aaj ye sab uske liye behad hi sharmnaak tha.
Veer continuously uski kamar par malte jaa raha tha aur woh bas siskiyaan bhar rahi thi.
Ye kab ek anand me badal gaya, iss baat ka use bodh hi nahi hua.
Harr ek sparsh use madhosh kar raha tha. Ye anubhooti aaj tak usne kabhi mehsoos nahi ki thi.
Aur tabhi ek woh pal aaya jab-
"Aaaaahhhnnnnnnnnn!!!"
Jhatke maarte maarte achanak hi Purvi ke gupt-ang se kuch beh ke nikla.
Veer : !!!??
Veer ne nazre neeche ki toh paaya ki safed bedsheet turant hi geeli hoti jaa rahi thi.
Veer : That's -!!!
Purvi kaanpte hue jhar rahi thi. Uski choot jawab de chuki thi. Ye parmanand woh bardasht na kar paayi aur paani chhor di.
Jab choot se paani fuwwaare ki tarah behna band hua toh usne raahat ki saans li. Magar, agle hi pal saari kartooto ka bodh use ek saath hone laga.
Abhi abhi jo uss se hua, thodi derr pehle jo chal raha tha. Aur uske pehle jo hua. Sab kuch uske dimag me mandraane laga.
Aur aankhon me se aansu behne lage. Ye sab kya kar diya usne?
Veer : M-Maasi-! I-
Veer ko behad bura lag raha tha! Pari ke chalte usne akhir ye kyu kiya?
Purvi akasmat hi uthi aur palat ke uska haath zorr se Veer ke gaal ki orr aaya. Kintu-
*Whooosshhh*
Purvi : !!??
Veer ne achanak hi jhuk ke uss thappad se khud ko bacha liya.
'Shit!!!'
Woh chaahta tha ki woh yeh thappad khaaye. Jis ke chalte uski maasi ka gussa thoda kam ho jaata. Magar woh kya karta!?
Uski body ke reflexes itne tez the ki na chaahte hue bhi uska shareer apne aap hi thappad ko dodge kar liya.
Purvi ro rahi thi.
Veer : M-Maasi! I'm- I'm so sorry! Mein woh-
Purvi (cries) : Leaaaveee!!!
Veer : Maasi please suniye toh-
Purvi (shouts) : Veer!! Mene kaha jao yaha se!!! Leave!!
Veer : I-
Purvi (shouts) : LEAVEEE!!!!
Veer (sighs) : I understand! I'm really sorry maasi!
Woh utha aur bina Purvi ko dekhe waha se mud ke chala gaya.
Uske jaate hi Purvi foot foot ke royi. Ye kya ho gaya uss se? Woh apni kheej utaarne ke chakkar me Veer ko thappad maar rahi thi. Jabki woh jaanti thi ki isme uski koi galti nahi thi.
'Ye sab mere se kaise ho gaya?'
Woh taajub thi ki itne saalo me use yaun sambandh ki koi shikayat nahi thi apne pati Arun se. Fir, aaj uski muniya ne iss qadar sirf thode hi sparsh se paani kaise chhor diya?
Ye baat lajjit kar dene waali nahi thi toh kya thi?
Woh nagn hi uthate hui aayi aur gate ko andar se lock kar, ghisatate hue neeche farsh par baith gayi.
Sisak sisak ke bas roti jaa rahi thi. Kya dasha dikha di usne apni Veer ko.
Punah Veer pe gussa aaya use. Bed par bichhi chaadar ko dekha usne jaha uski kartoot ka suraag saamne pada hua tha.
Woh choot ke paani se sani geeli bedsheet.
Usne turant hi mobile se Bhavna ko phone lagaya.
Woh sab kuch bataane waali thi. Ye sab chhipa ke woh chenn se nahi reh sakti thi. Woh uthi aur apne kapde lene ke liye washroom ke paas gayi.
Call connect hua aur Bhavna ne turant hi pick kar liya,
Bhavna : Hello? Kaho! Kya ho gaya? Mera beta tang kar raha hai kya?
Purvi (frowns) : Bhavna!!!
Bhavna : Hmm?
Purvi (frowns) : Tumhara beta-!!!
Kehte hue woh kapde lene jhuki tabhi use kuch ehsaas hua.
'Huh!!?'
Bhavna : Mera beta? Kya hua?
Purvi achambhav me khadi hui.
Bhavna : Hello? Kya hua? Purvi?
Aur Purvi ne agle hi shan idhar se phone cut kar diya aur fir switched off bhi.
Woh hairat me apne nagn shareer ko aayeene me dekh rahi thi.
Uske chehre par hairaangi thi.
Apni kamar par usne haath ferra-!! Dard gaayab tha.
'Huh!?'
Usne idhar udhar mud ke dekha, jhuk ke dekha par dard waqai me poori tarah se gaayab tha.
'Y-Ye-!??'
Aur fir use Veer ki baat yaad aayi.
'Mein oil leke aa raha hu garam kar ke. Thodi derr maalish karunga toh baad me jo swelling aane waali hogi woh nahi aayegi. Wait for me!'
Use sab kuch yaad aaya ki kaise Veer ne use iss awastha me utha ke use bed tak pahuchaya tha. Uski maalish uske hit ke liye hi kari thi usne.
Aur yaha woh use hi-
'H-Hey bhagwan!!!'
Hontho ko daant se kutarte hue woh wahi deewaar se tike khud ko dosh deti reh gayi.
Raat me iss tarah usne usko apne ghar se bhaga diya. Khana tak nahi khilaya. Kya sochega woh? Mann toh kar raha tha abhi use call kar wapas bula le. Par uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi.
Bhavna ko woh kehne waali thi ki tumhara beta ek number ka badtameez ho chuka hai aur na jaane kya kya.
Magar ab-
Jaise uske woh bol kahi gayab hi ho gaye.
'Tumhara beta-!!! Akhir woh kya hai? Bhavna!?'
Ek lambi saans chhodte hue woh apne kapde liye bedroom me chali gayi.
Shayad aaj poori raat use neend nahi aane waali thi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Yeh update 10.2k words ka hai. It's a huge update I know. Shayad ye sabse bada update hai kahani ka. Wese mein ek baar aur 10k wala update de chuka hai. Anyways, mene schedule me apne kaafi changes kiye hai. Aur, ab se unn times par mein story ke liye updates likhunga. I hope updates jald se jald taiyaar hote rahenge. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhna ka. Target apna wahi hai. 150. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad!
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Nice
amazing update
Very nice update.....
Sonali aur Veer ke beech ka scene bohot hot tha....
Superb written that scenes....
Pehli baar Kaera ka emotions Veer ke liye Samne aaya hai...
for the update
Ding werewolf bhaiparijan ghar ki bhi sudh lo thodi bohot
Ab pata chala kaera ka favouribility kyu Kum heveer beta ka high expectations he dekte he kya hoga
Superb update Bhai looking forward for unexpected next update and take care of your health too. It's more important then anything
Amazing update
Jabardast update bhai
The best part of your story is what's next. The clause going in mind from your current update to next update is the crux of your narration. Unlike your previous update again it's obvious from mind and heart that the next update is going to be greatly awesome like the previous one. Thank you for such an extravaganza. Take care of your health. I will wait for your next. Thanks
Etne dino baad kuch mitha khaya hai... Means etne dino baad kuch interesting read Kiya... Ye update ke liye bahat wait karna pada par update padhte hi bahat maza aya...
Sonali aur veer ka jo scene tha ... Wo bike PE na baithne wala scene aur public ka reaction wo Dil ko chhu gaya kyun ki ... Aise incident mere sath bhi hua hai
Bhai apka writings skills etna jabardast hai ki read karte time imagination Aisa hota hai ki read nahi kar Raha hun TV pe ye sab dekh Raha hun ..
Me to story ke start se hi disco night kaera aur veer ke sex scene se Aaj Tak wait kar Raha tha kab ye dono ek dusre se pyar karen... Par ye update read karke aab Aisa lag raha hai dono ko bich love start ho jayega... Love to pehele bhi tha par interesting wala love aab hone wala hoga
Aur bhai mere ek request hai...
Veer aur kaera ka relationship lengthy rakhna tab hi jyada maza ayega... Ho sake to
Sirf veer aur kaera nahi Sonia aur natal... Ke bhi...
Life me sabhi din same nahi hote kabhi bhi same situation nahi ata ... To bhai agar koi problem ho to kuch din ya mahine gayab ho jao to bhi chalega ... Update na aye to bhi chalega par story pe active rahiyega aur story complete karna ... Aise story adhura rah Gaya to hum bhi adhura rah jayenge
After waited so many days updates is here but its started of blasted update sonali didn't realized yet in time she'll definitely realized it that she loves veer........Fffiiinnnnnaallllyyyy kaera got her emotions back... thats the veer wanted inside her desperately...but whyy her favourability is still 50...isss something cooking up her mind...she wants veer claim her...but when she will be realized there is so much competition...what will she do then. she is strogest candidate as compare to among all the girls in veers life maybe we'll see cats fight.............Hope u well now....so whats the schedule now 3,4 days...
Bhai kya krte ho yr itna bada update bhi chota lagta h bs padhte hi raho rukne ka Mann nhi krta thanks for xforum k aap jese writer Hume mile
Nice update
Once again a good update you've delivered
So finally Sonali aur Veer ka milan hone wala hai, is update mein kafi drama rha in k bich. And now Sonali ka character kafi khul kr show ho rha hai, like pehly wo ek character ek ziddi aur nasamjh bache ki tarah lag rha tha. par ab sonali ki feelings express hone ki wajah se us character ko samjhne ka moka mila, k she is cute and lil bold character, I thought Veer would approach first jesa k us ko kafi experiance hai lekin yahan Sonali ne pehly kadam barhaya
veer ki taraf, Now I have a feeling that Sonali is a strong character jo future mein Veer ki strong side pe aa sakti hai. But who knows, only writer sir
Kaera k roney waley scene se ek baat ki khushi bhi hui k now she has feelings.
ab is ka claim me se kya mtlb tha ye smj mein nai aya mere
Keep
waiting for the next update
Zabardast update
Mast update h bhai...
Update Padhne Ke Baad Dil Ko Sukoon Mila
Bahut din baad aapka dwarka diye update padhke accha laga ab ummid karta hoon next week se regularly rahega
Late se lekin aapne update thoda thik hi diya bhai......
Fantastic update Bhai
Awesome update bro
nice 1
Bhai next update ke liye 1 week wait Krna padega
Itna umda likhte ho maja aa jata hai bhai
kash tumre pas time hi time rhe or bas story likte rho
Jabardast update bhai...
Beautiful
Update 157
Zabardast update
Superb fabulous update maza ayega
Overall kaafi smooth update tha...
first Veer or Sonali ka interaction...
But the thing jo sabhi readers ko achi lagi hogi woh thi Kaera ki reentry....
but in the end jo usne kaha " I want him to Claim me"
iska kya matlab huwa, kya woh sach m aisa chaahti hai k Veer saamne se aye or us pr directly apna Haq jataye...
ya woh chaahti hai k Veer uska dill jeete or phir woh uski ho jaye...
sawaal to bohot hain pr jawab to updates k saath hi milen ge...
to krte hain intezaar agle update ka.
A brilliant and a long awaited return,sir.
As always the update was fabulous.
So, from now sonali's behaviour may slightly deviate and what is she going to be - 'a slave' or anything else. Sonali's plan was childish that is why, at times Veer got angry. Now some reward time for Veer.
Now, return of my favourite character "Kaera"
One question
Till now, we didn't got any reason of why the favourability of kaera got dropped. From the present scene, we can see that kaera is in 'love' may be less than it. So the reason is still uncertain.
By the way, i didn't got any reply on my previous review.
'Silly me'
Take care of your health, sir.
'a selfish advice'
Strange
Bhai mujhe to pari ki tension ho Rahi hai. Chahti kya hai. Kahi system me koi Virus to nahi ghus gaya.
Fantastic fabulous Mazedaar update sir
maza aa gya.
Superb update…
Bhai kya krein intezaar lamba lagne lag jata h update ka abhi to last update dekha h zyada time nhi hua aapki bhi personal life h but aap kuch writers ki stories padh kr lagta h bs thoda aur manushya to vese hi lalchi pravarti ka h hum bhi tuch manushya ki prajaati mein se h isliye lalch rakte h aap bhut bdia kr rhe hein Dil se respect aap jese writers k liye jitna zaruri utna suspense,masala,drama har chiz mil rha h barabar har update k baad aap jese writers ki tarif krne ka man hota h isliye likh dete hein ese
waiting for your new update
Nice update
BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING HOTAND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI
Ding waiting for your mega update
Congratulations for completing 3300 pages
Congratulations on 3300 pages
Congratulations for completing 3300 pages
Sab sy pehly to bhai congratulations for 3300 pages, magar yaar plz update jaldi de diya karain
3300 pages poore hone ke liye ..
For completing 3300 pages bro
Congratulations for completing 3300 pages Bhai
Ding congratulations for 3300 pages
Congratulations for 3000 pages bhai keep going waiting for next update
Bhai samaj sakte hain
Sabse zeyaada to theme jaan kr lagen ge...
If sister in law comes to knw, then you will not be able to write anything bro....my gf came to knw about the story and then what she did, I can't even tell here
Ads itne aa rhe the.. 2 min bhi xf chalaya nahi ja rha tha..
Abhi Temporary Elite use Kiya hai to thoda shukun hai,
Rahi baat update ki to mujhe nahi lagta Werewolf kisi ki sunne walo me se hain...+ Jab update ready hoga to wo khud hi post karne se na katraye...
Bro aap acche lekhak hai..
Apki kadra karta hun
Par Haq to sach mein nahi hai!
Ulta seedha Bolne ka to bilkul nahi hai..
Common sense hai jab koi bhi writer story shuru karta hai to ek plot line taiyaar hoti hai uske pass. Is liye jyada sochna nahi padta aur jaldi jaldi timely updates aate hain..
But jaise story is plot line tak likh Di jaati hai writer ko aage soch soch kar likhna padta hai aur isme time aur effort to lagta hi hai..
To us time aur effort ko appreciate karo, bewajah ka chutiyapa karne ki kya wajah hai?
Doosri baat
Yahan jyadatar stories be sir-pair ki illogical mainly Chudai based hi hain..
Lund 1 in pussy1, then pussy2, then pussy3 and so on..
Bole to limited menu wali item jaise Bhandare ka khana. ek ya do item hi hoti hain menu mei!!
Ye Banda ek nayaab cheez likh raha hai..
Thrill, action, romance, comedy Sab kuch..
Bole to restaurant wali multi course meal..
Use Pakne mei time lagta hi hai!!
Aur ek baat
Log to ghisi Piti story bhi poori nahi kar paate ye Banda itni convoluted aur layered story ke saath justice kar raha hai bhai..
Appreciate karo..
Aur jo aise bande ko ungli Kare vo chutiya nahi to aur kya hai??
buri Lagane ko bas kisi ek ki baat bahaut hoti hai..
Aur vo apna time yahan free main Daan hi to kar raha hai…
Free seva…
Ye daan haq kab se ban Gaya ?
Ye mei aur nahi sambjha sakta
Jo nahi samajh sakte in ko ab chutiya nahi to aur kya kahun ?
Chill yarr bhai mujhe bhi meri story main aise bolte hai
Bhai har jagah aadmi chunotiyon se nhi chutiyon se preshan h to aap likhte rho jab bhi time mile koi pressure nhi h we are with you ek ache reader ki nishani uska sabr
Bhot khoob Guru ji Mnnn prasann hogya aapki baatooo se
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Waise ab ho kha aap bhot he km aate ho aap vrna aapke comments aksarr dikhte hai jada tr story pe
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Bhot acha lgi bat aapki khas kar shudh HINDI LAJWAAABBB hai
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Waise BHABHI se mujhe yaad aaya aapko ky lgta hai Werewolf bhai ne aapki BHABHI ko apni is story ka btaya hoga
Bro 16 days gone still no update, it's to much. But we are waiting, please update as soon as possible
Update 157 has been posted.