Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

[Werewolf]

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Latest Update - Update 201 ​

 

[Sphinx]

Where is the Trinity?
When they are coming together?
It will be great to see the jealous side of them, now including Suhani.

 

[Alok]

Waiting for next update bhai

 

[Werewolf]

Finally, I am back in forum after some hectic weeks of life. I admit that I had read all the updates one or two days later when they were released but I wasn't able to give a reply but today I would love to give my thoughts on the story updates from 150.

Welcome back!

Veer always goes with the unexpected plans . He planted the diary as a gift from kaera's mom. This move would have helped veer to get both mental as well as emotional consciousness from kaera when reading the diary and finally, after that, the queen is really back. The exciting part is what will be her perspective towards Sonia,Suhana etc and how would she react when she will someday introspect her life.

She is changed. The question is...
How will she behave now in the society? Because, many things depends on this little action. The way her colleagues will see her now to her family members. They will start to view her differently.

A question Is there anything missing in concept of favourability?

Nope! Concept of favourability is very simple. Once anyone starts loving Veer without restraining their emotions, it increases. The great example is ~ Suman's favourability. She doesn't think anything else when she's with Veer. Her only focus remains on him entirely. She's the true slave that any man would want.

Tej is getting more tez. She wants to know everything about veer, who is an enigma in himself and that's why bhavna told her beta go slow .

Haha! Tej has this insecurity that if she'll act slow, her relationship with Veer won't be able to develop the way she wants. Veer's relationship with other sisters is already way too good. She doesn't want to lack behind. And that's why, this urgency...!

Arohi is just amazing. Everybody is in tension due to media but she knew what to do and how to do it. She just pops out with a surprise in this story in evey new update showing her unknown behavioural traits in bits and pieces.

That's how I have made her. In the initial stage, when Arohi was introduced. She didn't have anything to impress the readers. So, what should have been done to make an introvert girl likeable to the readers? Since she speaks less, I made her do actions which ignited the sparks within the readers. Those little actions are the reason why everyone is in love with her.

Questions were asked yet many questions were ignored that saved veer from tez and arohi.

Yes. They will ask Veer whenever they'll get some time alone for themselves.

Nidhi is a strong point to break and then expose her to the feelings and due to Veer's excitement,she as a teacher taught veer with a slap that slow and steady wins the race .

Haha!

Now business and boss , veer is slowly creating a boss image. They are all going to face the real boss who is just composed of everything and the rest is up to you what u want to extract from him.

Business arc is all about love, jealousy, schemes and profits.

Sonali and her stupidity had reached the optimum level and so the consequences were faced by her later on and now veer's ignorance is making it more brutal .

She has learned her lesson.

Now the best change Pari a new personality. Oh my god she is just a whole new version and what a flip from a active minded pari to a seductive minded pari (Wordplay).

Haha! Yes! She's much more than it seems actually. Just wait for a few more updates.

I think the personality change of system always favours veer , crimson arc - sharp pari, now this cool family and self time -a seductive one .

You can say that.
Well, thanks a lot man! Thanks for this wonderful revo.
And, keep supporting as usual.

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai me aapki story par pahli bar comment kar rha hu to sorry and
Apki story ke pure update me 4 baar padh chuka hu !
Aaj Tak ki sabse favourite story h

Damn bro! 4 baar padh liye? Gazab!

Ab to mere ko aapki story Puri yaad ho gyi h
Kya hi writing skills h aapki
And or to kya hi khu yaar aapki tarif me sabad hi nhi mil rahe
Thanks for story
And waiting for update........

Thanks a lot Bhai. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka aur revos dete rehne ka.
Aur Naya update padhne ka, agar padha na ho toh.

Bhae men hiroin kon he story me

Main heroine ek nahi hai. Kayi hai. Ab unme se kaun kaun hai ye guess karna readers ke upar hai.

Superbb Updatee

Mujhe laga tha Veer ko koi mission milega. Phir laga ke Kaushik itna koi khaash nhi jiske liye System ek mission dede.

Upar se Veer ko Prachi ne pehle hi bata diya tha. Isliye mission nahi mila.

Bhala ho prachi ka jisne sahi time pe Veer ko call karke Sonali ke baare mein bata diya aur woh sahi time pe waha aagaya.

Idher Sonali ab phir se Veer se baat karne ke liye mauke dhundh rahi hai par Veer thehra stud launda itni aasani se kaise maanega.

Haha! Veer use bas sabak sikhana chaah raha tha. Jo woh seekh chuki hai.

Ab dekhte hai Sonali ka yeh plan kamyaab hota hai yaa phir se uske liye musibat le aata hai.

Everything is sorted now. Thanks a lot Bhai! Keep supporting. Ju ki story par wapas se active hona hai. Hota hu jald hi. Ye waali to poori padhunga. Aur fir baad me woh jo adhuri reh gayi thi.

Bhaiya ji mai sonch raha hun na abhi ki nidhi mam na swabhimani hain to jinna karja veer bhai shahab ne unpar chadha diya I think jinna unki income hai unna to interest banta hai upar se unka do bachchon ke sath kharcha alag se to aise ma wo karja kaise chukayegi mere bhai

Chukaane ki koshish jaari hai bhai. Already wo ikhatta kar rahi hai. Kuch Bank me FDs bhi daali hai. Sirf wahi nahi hai. Shreya bhi uski madad kar rahi hai. Ab dekhte hai kya reaction hoga Veer ka jab sach me Nidhi uske paise lautaane ke liye aayegi.

I've been reading this amazing story from past few days.... Brother you are really awesome.... Each and every update was mind blowing.. I can't describe how much I like this story... Brother you have extraordinary writing skill just keep it up.. And try to give us amazing updates in future also..... Waiting desperately for next update bro...

Thanks a lot man!
It means a lot. Truly! Keep reading and keep supporting just like this. New update is already posted btw.

 

[Werewolf]

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इतना अजीब शख़्स हूँ कि मेरे साथ रहकर
बिगड़े हुए सुधर गए सुधरे हुए बिगड़ गए...​

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हाँ... बस एक बात अच्छी रही.... जो ये कथा चलती रही...
"मलाल" दिल मे कहीं.. रहेगा ही... की साथ क्यों न चल सका...
जिंदगी की मोह से कभी, साला ये मन... क्यों नही मचल सका... ​

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जाने कहाँ पे था मै... भैंचो याद भी तो न रहा...
शायद... पैरिस, लास वेगास, और क्रिमसन पे था मै पड़ा...​

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चलो... अच्छा ही है... एकबार मे इतने सारे अंश पढ़ने को मिलेंगे...
बाकी...
कहानी के इस अपार सफलता पर ढेरों सुभकामनाएँ वोल्फी Werewolf भाई...
नई नई जॉब लगी, इस वजह से समय नही निकाल पा रहा...
लेकिन, आपकी इस रचना की एक सुनहरी कल्पना मेरी मश्तिस्क मे ऐसे बन चुकी है की... वो मुझे हमेशा कहानी के भविष्य की दृश्य बनाने पर मजबूर कर दिया करती है...
अब इतने समय मे मेरे दिमाग मे जाने क्या क्या दृश्य बना दिये... देखते है... कौन कौन सा दृश्य मेल खाता है।​

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✳धन्यवाद✳​

काम को लेके आज कल हर कोई ही व्यस्त हो रहा हैं। जॉब लगने की ढेरों बधाइयां। मेरा क्या हैं...

जैसे जैसे मुझे समय मिलता जाएगा, मैं अपडेट्स देता जाऊंगा। और कहानी अपनी मंज़िल की ओर बढ़ती जाएगी। वो समय भी आएगा जब ये सफर खत्म हो जाएगा। आशा हैं कि जू इस सफर के अंत तक चलोगे और इस कहानी को पूरा पढ़ोगे। क्योंकि जो चीज़ें मैने सोच रखी हैं इस कहानी के अंत की वो बेहद बेहतरीन हैं। मेरे खुद के पास शब्द नहीं हैं बस। इस से समझ लो।

लेकिन, हर अंत के बाद एक नई शुरुआत भी होती हैं। नई कहानियां आने के लिए तत्पर हैं। इस सफर के बाद फिर एक नया सफर शुरू होगा। उम्मीद हैं जू तब भी साथ रहोगे। आशा तो यही हैं। अच्छे रीडर्स बड़े ही नसीब से मिलते हैं। मैं नसीब वाला ही हूं।

बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई। यू ही अपनी समीक्षा रखते रहना जब जब समय मिले।

 

[RaghuveerPrasadSrivastava]

Update - 156 ~ Rapture​

Ab tak...

Prachi : Arre!?? Arre par-!! Ohh God!!! Ch-Chef... I mean Sir ko call karna padega.

Idhar uske iss tarah jaate hi Prachi ne ghabrahat me Veer ko saari ghatna ke baare me jataya jise sunn Veer khud pareshan ho utha.

Aur yaha Sonali araam se tehelte hue sadko par jaati jaa rahi thi. Mann me ek hi sawaal tha.

'Kya woh aayega!?'

Ab aage...

'Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!!!!!'

*Vrooom*

Veer ko ek kheej uthi. Thoda gussa aur thodi chinta me woh apni bike sadak par bhagaaye jaa raha tha.

'Ye ladki-!!!'

[Such care for that little lamb huh?]

Pari ki ek sultry awaaz uske mann me goonji.

'Stop!!! Abhi tumse baat karne ka time nahi hai mere paas.'

[Ahh! You broke my heart~ Am I not good enough? Kya tumhe pichli Pari itni pasand aa gayi ki tumhe meri qadar nahi?]

'Her personality was the best.'

[Oh my! It hurts, you know! Such rude behaviour! Why don't you submit to me?? Ek baar kaho! I love you Mommy! Please help me! Tumhare qadmo me poori duniya biccha dungi.]

'Heh~'

[You don't trust me? Agar yakeen nahi toh aazma ke dekh lo. I can tell you everything you need to know!]

'Everthing?'

[Yes! EVERYTHING!! Including-]

'Including?'

[My secret as well!!!]

Pari ke shabd sunte hi Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Kya woh sach keh rahi thi? Kya woh apna raaz bata sakti thi use?

'I don't believe it.'

[Yakeen nahi ho raha? Then call me 'Mommy'. Fir dekho, kaise yakeen karwati hu. You just have to submit yourself to me dear ♡ ~]

'Shut up!'

[Hmph~ Sooner or later you'll be mine~ ♡]

'Dekh lenge kaun baazi maarta hai.'

[I haven't lost a single time in my lifetime. You think you can beat me?]

'Yes! Fair and square!'

[Then, I'll wait! Fufufu~ It's getting more interesting. I'll drag you down to the world of ecstasy and pleasure that you'll never be able to escape from my clutches.]

'Haan haan! Sure! Filhaal ke liye, mujhe mera full status dikhao.'

Pari ne iss baar bina Veer ki baat kaate hi full status show kar diya. Woh ab ekdum maun ho chuki thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki sher apne shikaar par jhapatne ke liye kuch derr shaant baitha hua tha.

*Ding*

Veer ke saamne status ki pehli window jhalak uthi.




Do nayi skills ab uske arsenal me thi. Aquatic Breathing jo use Crimson ko maarne par mili thi.

Aur dusri, Tracer. Jo usne Sonali aur Kaushik ke liye khareedi thi.

Prachi ne jab use bataya tha ki Kaushik theek ladka nahi hai. Toh bhala Veer aisi baat ko nazar-andaaz kaise kar sakta tha?

Skill 2000 points ki thi. Aur uska kaam tha~

*Ding*

[Skill : Tracer
Description : Allows the user to mark any object and then trace it. As long as the object is within the city's boundaries. Host will be able to trace it.
Note : Non-upgradable. Works only on non living things.]

Ye kaam tha Tracer ka. Nirjeev cheezo ko Veer trace kar sakta tha jab tak woh sheher ki boundaries me ho.

Uss din jaate jaate, Veer ne Tracer Food Truck par laga diya tha. Yahi kaaran tha jo woh Sonali ko bachane sahi samay par pohuch saka tha.

'Legendary Skill none huh!?'

[Seer Vision tum kho chuke ho. One time use skill thi.]

'Yeah! I know!'

[Tracer ab kaam nahi karega. That little lamb ran by herself~]

'Yeah!'

[But there's a hack you know fufu~]

'Huh?'

[Just mark the tracer on her clothes or any accessories. That way, you can trace a living being. Thank me later for this hack~ ♡]

Ek adhbhut tarqeeb. Tracer sirf nirjeev cheezon ko hi trace kar paata tha. Toh kya jeevit logo ke pehne gaye kapde nirjeev nahi the? Bilkul the. Aise me Tracer ko insaano ko trace karne ke liye bhi upyog kiya jaa sakta tha. Pari ne use ye ek chota sa par kamaal ka hack bataya tha.

Kya waqai ye Pari sab jaanti thi? System ka raaz bhi?

Veer ne inn vichaaro ko mann se nikaala aur apni status window pe dhyaan diya. Woh jab dusri window pe aaya toh usne dekha ki ab uske Legendary Cards me aur 2 cards shaamil ho chuke the.




Probability Manipulation aur Limb Substitution. Dono Crimson ke Brahamastra the. Usne apne points par nazar daali jo 7192 bache hue the.

Ye kaafi the filhaal kisi bhi emergency se nipatne ke liye. 2000 points usne Tracer par laga diye the. Warna ye 9192 hote. Toh wahi Fame Points bhi acche khaase 3000 ho rakhe the.

Jis cheez ne Veer ko achambhav me daala woh thi favourability list.

'What the-!?'

Usko sabse bada jhatka laga dusra naam padh ke.

Sonali ki favourability 125??? Ye itni kaise badh gayi?? Aur wo bhi aise samay? Woh toh uss se berukhi se pesh aa raha tha. Fir ye itni kaise pahuch gayi?

Aur ye question mark aage kya darshana chaah raha tha? Kaera ke me bhi aisa hi tha. Yaha tak ki Tej aur Suhana ke me bhi.

'What the hell is going on?'

[Fufufu~]

Pari uske upar pyaar se hasi. Jaise woh sab kuch jaanti thi ki inn sab ke peeche kaaran kya tha. Magar woh bataane waalo me se nahi thi. Jab tak Veer use 'Mommy' pukaar ke uske prati khud ko samarpit nahi kar deta tab tak toh bilkul bhi nahi.

Ek aah bharte hue Veer ne sadak par dhyaan diya. Inke jawab woh baad me dhoondh sakta tha. Kintu, filhaal-

Sonali ko dhoondhna zyada zaroori tha.

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Wahi idhar Sonali, deen duniya ki jhanjhato se pare apne aap me mast magan sadak par chalti jaa rahi thi.

Neeche pade kankado ko laat se idhar udhar tatol kinhi vichaaro me ghum thi.

'K-Kahi mein zyada dur toh nahi aa gayi na? Woh mujhe dhoondh toh lega na?'

'Saari galti uski hai. Hmph~ N-Nahi!! M-Meri hi galti hai saari. Mein uss chhuchundar Kaushik ko samajh nahi paayi aur-'

'Agar woh uss raat waha nahi aata toh-!! Mein to apna sab kuch gawa chuki hoti. Haan! Ab ye maharaj muh toh fulayenge hi. Pehli baar itni badi meri galti jo haath lag gayi hai. Kya karu-!?'

Bina kisi disha ka chayan kiye woh bas yuhi chalti jaa rahi thi, jab achanak se uske bagal se ek bike aake khadi hui aur ek horn baji.

Horn ki awaaz sunte hi Sonali samajh gayi thi ki ye kaun tha.

Veer!!

Jo bina koi chehre par bhaav liye use ghoor raha tha.

Veer : Baitho peeche!

Usne rukhe swar me kaha. Magar, Sonali use ansuna kar aage badh gayi. Aise dikhaya jaise woh use jaanti hi nahi thi.

Veer ke maathe ki nass ek baar punah phatne ko hui. Gaadi ko halka sa aage badhaate hue woh uske firse bagal se aaya aur dobaara bola,

Veer : Tumne suna nahi? Baitho peeche!

Sonali kuch shan use dekhi. Andar se toh woh bhi lapak ke baithna chaahti thi uske peeche. Par, Veer ki berukhi ke chalte uska bhi maatha thanka hua tha. Isliye ek look deke woh fir aage badh gayi.

Veer (frowns) : Y-You-!!!

Veer ne gaadi wahi stand par lagaayi aur Sonali ke paas jaake uske haath ko kass ke pakad ke use ghuma diya.

Sonali : Ahhn!!??

Veer : Tumhari samajh me nahi aa raha?

Sonali : Kya kar rahe ho ye? Pagal ho kya?

Veer : Mene tumse kaha ki baitho peeche toh tumhari samajh me nahi aaya kya? Saamne se do baar keh raha hu fir bhi bewakoof ki tarah ansuna kar aage jaate jaa rahi ho?

Sonali : Bewakoof kise kaha? Tum ho bewakoof!! Ek number ke nalayak!!! Nahi karni mujhe tumse koi baat! Jao yaha se! Hmph! Kyu aa rahe ho mere peeche peeche?

Veer (frowns) : Sonali! Iss se pehle ki mein apna aapa kho du. Chup chaap seedhe tareeqe se chal do. Okay?

Iss baar Veer ke chehre par gambheerta dekh Sonali thoda andar se darr gayi. Magar, aaj toh woh thaan ke hi nikli thi ki kaise bhi kar ke dono ke beech paida hue inn shikwo ko dur karke hi rahegi.

Sonali : Nahi jaungi! Mera jaha mann karega mein wahi jaungi! Tumse matlab?

Veer : T-Tum-!!! Suman ko batau?

Sonali : Haan haan kyu nahi!

Apni maa ka naam direct uske muh se sunn pata nahi kyu, par Sonali ka bheja aur garam ho gaya. Woh Veer ko ungli dikhaate hue boli,

Sonali (uchi awaaz me) : Meri maa ka naam leke mujhe mat darana samajh gaye? Mein bol rahi hu na mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni matlab nahi karni. Akela chhodh do mujhe.

Aur usne Veer ke changul se apna haath zabardasti chhudha ke palat ke waha se nikalne ki koshish ki,

Kintu, itne me hi waha aas paas ki bheed jama ho chuki thi. Ladki ki tezz awaaz sunn waha se guzar raha harr aadmi Veer ko achanak hi gher liya.

"Kyu bey? Kya chal raha hai haan?"

"Ladki chhed raha hai?"

"Saale itni aukaat aa gayi ab ki raaste chalte ladki ko public me chhedega?"

Veer : N-Nahi! Suniye! Baat darasal-

"Aao bhai log. Bataaye isko zara."

"Dum toh dekho! Raaste chalte din-dahaade. Koi darr hi nahi matlab."

Veer : Shit-!!!

Apne qadmo ko peeche lete hue Veer deewar se jaa bhida. Logo ne use gher liya tha. Ye log uski nazro me cheeti samaan the. Parantu, Veer apni taqat inn aam insaano ke khilaaf istemal karne ke liye nahi rakhe hue tha.

Sonali ne jab shor gul suna, toh woh palat ke dekhi. Tab tak Veer bheed me kahi ghum ho chuka tha. Shor sharaabe se use pata laga ki uski oonchi awaaz me baat karne se kitna bada bakheda khada ho gaya tha.

'Ahhhnnn! Y-Ye mene kya kar diya?'

Ghabraate hue woh turant hi bheed me ghusi. Jab usne dekha ki ek aadmi Veer ki collor pakde uss par bas haath uthaane hi jaa raha hai toh woh zorr se chillaa uthi,

"Rukoooooo!!!!!"

Uski awaaz sunn tamaam janta ki nigaahein uss par tik gayi. Woh bheed ke ghere se hote hue hadbadi me andar ghusi.

Sonali : Nahhhhiiiiiii!!!!

Aas paas ke log sawaliya nazro se use ghoorne lage. Woh Veer ke paas aayi aur apne dono haatho ko felaate hue use chhek ke khadi ho gayi.

Sonali : Y-Ye mere saath hai! K-Koi anjaan nahi!

"Madam pakka na? Ye aapke saath hai?"

Sonal (nods) : J-Jii!

Uska jawab sunte hi public aur bhadak gayi. Saala jise woh anjaan samajh rahe the woh toh pehchaan ka hi nikla.

"Kya madam! Pehle batana chahiye na. Khud hi awaaz lagati ho aur fir khud hi kehti ho ki pehchaan ka hai."

"Aur nahi toh kya-! Khamakha time waste karwa diya."

"Arre ye sab ladayi jhagde band kamre me kiya karo na. Ye beech sadak hi mili thi kya?"

"Chalo bhai log!"

Ek ek kar...! Harr aadmi waha se unn dono ko bas ghoor ke jaane laga. Aur, bechari Sonali bas sarr jhukaye maafi maangti rahi. Sharm, naraazgi, atpata-pann sab ek saath mehsoos kar paa rahi thi woh.

Veer ka gussa bhi saatve aasmaan par jaa chuka tha. Bina Sonali ko koi jawab diye woh palta aur mud ke jaane laga.

Iss bewakoof ladki ke liye yaha tak aaya tha woh? Ye ladki toh yaha maze se tehelne me lagi hui thi. Jab aapki madad ki koi parvah na kare, toh behtar hai ki uski madad hi na ki jaaye.

Yahi kuch soch, Veer gusse me palat ke wapas apni bike ki orr jaane laga. Jise dekh Sonali ghabra gayi. Ye sab usne plan nahi kiya tha. Fir aisa kyu ho gaya? Kyu harr baar uski karni ulti pad jaati thi?

Sonali : R-Rukooo!!!

Woh bhaagte hue Veer ke paas aayi aur uski baah pakadte hue zidd karne lagi,

Sonali : Thehro!!! S-Suno-! Meri baat suno-!!! M-Mujhe maaf kar do na!! Ye sab jaan boojh ke nahi kiya mene. O-Oye! Tum sunn rahe ho na?

Veer ka mann toh kar raha tha ki kisi pe abhi apne haath saaf kar le. Kintu, ek gehri saans chhodhte hue woh bola,

Veer : Kya hai? Chhodh toh diya hai tumhe ab akele. Jao jaha jaana hai. Karo apne mann ki. Nahi rokunga tumhe. Nahi tokunga. Ghar me koi kuch nahi bolega. Aana araam se. Jab tumhara mann kare.

Na jaane kyu, par Sonali ko ye baatein aur kasht pahucha gayi. Pehle kam se kam Veer uski chinta kar raha tha aur isliye use dhoondhne aaya. Magar ab-

Ab toh dheere dheere jaise woh bhi tang aa chuka tha. Woh toh chaah hi rahi thi ki Veer uski parvaah kare. Lekin-

Sonali (sarr jhuka ke) : Ch-Chalo!

Veer : Huh??

Sonali (shirt pakadte hue) : Mene kaha ch-chalo!!!

Veer : Kyu ab mann nahi hai ghoomne ka?

Veer ki daant sunn usne naa me sarr hila diya. Woh shaanti se bike par baith gayi. Veer ne bhi bina kuch kahe apni bike uthayi aur woh Sonali ko leke waha se chal diya.

Woh dono abhi thodi hi dur aaye the ki Sonali ne uski shirt punah kheechte hue uss se kuch kehna chaaha.

Veer : ???

Sonali : W-Woh-! Waha chalo na!

Veer : Kaha?

Sonali : Woh hotel hai na! Waha chalo!

Veer : Kyu? Kya hua?

Sonali : M-Mujhe pait me dard ho raha hai bohut zyada!!

Veer : Huhh?? Toh doctor ke paas le chalta hu. Hotel me kyu jaana hai?

Sonali : N-Nahi!! Mujhe bas laitna hai thodi derr. P-Please!! Ah!! Dard badh raha hai!

Veer (frowns) : Abhi 5 minute pehle tak toh tum bilkul theek thi!?

Sonali : Ahn!!! Dard ho raha hai khoob.

Veer : Doctor ke yaha chalte hai.

Sonali : N-Nahiii!!! Aisa mujhe hote rehta hai. Doctor ne dawayi batayi hai mujhe. Ch-Chalo na!!!

Veer (frowns) : Kahi tum firse koi natak toh nahi kar rahi!?

Sonali : Nahi naaaa!!! Pagal!! Jaldi chalo!!

Veer ne uski baat sunn gaadi seedhe hotel ki taraf mod di. Ek room kuch derr ke liye usne book karwaya aur woh Sonali ko leke upar apne room me aa gaya.

Sonali ne use dawayi ka naam bhi bata diya tha. Abhi woh jaa hi raha tha dawayi lene jab usne dekha ki Sonali ekdum nishchint hoke room me matak rahi hai. Na hi koi dard na koi kasht badhiya maze se woh bistar par baithi hui thi.

Matlab ye jhooth tha? Kya uske saath firse ek baar chhal kiya gaya?

Jawab tha haan!

Sonali : Arre waha khade khade ab muh kya taaq rahe ho? Idhar aao! Kitna narm bistar hai.

Veer ke chehre se agle hi pal saare bhaav gayab ho gaye.

Veer : Toh tumne jhooth bola? Tumhare pait me koi dard nahi?

Sonali : Haan toh!? Kitne paagal ho tum! Hahahaha! Arre buddhu aise achanak se mujhe kabhi koi pait dard hua hai kya?

Veer : Aur ye food truck se achanak bhaag ke jaana bhi-!?

Sonali : Haan! Hahahahahaha! Sab nakli tha. Mein bhala kyu bhaag ke jaane lagi. Tumhari tarah pagal thodi hu hehe!

Veer ki mutthi achanak hi ye sunn kass uthi. Sonali ka koi maqsad nahi tha Veer ko thes pahuchaane ka. Woh toh bas mood ko light karne ki apni taraf se ek koshish kar rahi thi. Magar, shayad woh nahi jaanti thi ki uski ye harqate Veer ko kitna gussa dila chuki thi.

Usne badi mushqil se khud ke gusse ko niyantrit kiya. Aur jab woh palat ke jaane ke liye hua tab Sonali ek baar fir uski taraf daud ke aayi aur use pakad li,

Sonali : O-Oye kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Haath chhodho!

Sonali : Nahi chhodhungi! Hehe! Pehle jawaab do!!

Veer : Mene kaha haath chhodho!!!

Sonali : Haha! Kaha na...! Nahi chhodhungi!

Veer : Sonaaaaaaliiiii!!!

*Bam*

Veer ne agle hi shan apna haath uski pakad se itni zorr se chhinaya ki Sonali ko ek dhakka lag gaya. Force itna zyada tha ki bechari Sonali peeche jaa ke deewar se jaa takrayi.

"Ahhhhnnn!!!"

Sarr uska deewar se thoda sa bhida aur woh apne ghutno par gir padi. Veer apni khud ki harqat se hairan aankhein faade apne haath ko ghoorne laga.

Ye pehli baar tha! Jab usne kisi apne par na chaahte hue bhi apni shaktiyo ka istemal kiya tha. Woh koi aam ladka nahi tha. Uska zara sa dhakka dena hi tez raftaar ki kisi gaadi se bhidne jaisa tha.

Uska haath kaanp raha tha. Ye kaise ho gaya uss se? Toh wahi Sonali peeche haath lagaaye apna sarr sehlaate hue use dekhi. Aur turant hi-

Uski aankhon me aasu panap uthe. Gaalo se rekhaaye kheechte hue mote mote aasu zameen par girne lage.

Veer : I-

Woh uthi aur sisak sisak ke rone lagi.

Sonali : T-Tum *sniff*

Veer chaahta tha uske paas jaaye. Magar, Sonali ki pichli harqato ne jaise uske kadam rok liye. Woh na hi kamre se jaa paa raha tha aur na hi Sonali ki orr badh paa raha tha.

Sonali : T-Tum bohut bure ho- *sniff* *sniff* bohut bure!!

Ek peeda Veer ke andar uthi. Khud ko doshi maan woh ek gehre chintan me chala gaya. Ye kya kar diya usne? Apne hi parivar ke sadasya ke upar apni shaktiyo ka istemal??? Kya ho raha tha use?

Sonali : Kyu ho tum aise-!?? *sniff*

Veer : ???

Sonali : Kyu karte ho mere saath aisa? *sniff* Uss din ki bh-bhool ka aise badla loge? *sniff*

Veer : N-Nahi! Mein-

Sonali : *sniff* K-Kitni baar baat karna chaah rahi thi mein tumse. *sniff* Par tum the ki- *sniff* *hic* Dekhe tak nahi mujhe. Mujhse dur bhaagte rahe. *sniff*

Veer : ...

Sonali : Maza aata hai tumhe ye karne me? *hic* Haan? Bolo???? *sniff*

Veer : N-Nahi aisa nahi-

Sonali (cheekhte hue) : Toh fir baat kyu nahi karte ho mujhse!!!!!????

Veer : Huh!!?

Sonali (screams) : Kyu nahi kar rahe the mujhse baat??? *sniff* Mein- Mein kitna koshish karti rahi. *hic* Par tum har baar muh ferr ke mujhe nazar-andaaz karke nikal jaate!! *sniff* Kyuuuuu??? Mujhse gussa ho isliye???

Veer : ...!!!

Sonali : Toh suno!!! *sniff* Sorrryyyyy!!!!

Aur woh aur zorr zorr se rone lagi!!

Sonali : Sorrryyyyy!!! *sniff* Sorrryyyy!!! Sorrryyyy!! Mujhe maaf kar do!!! *hic* Par mujhse baatein karo!! *sniff* Mujhse ye tumhari berukhi nahi sahi jaati!!!

Veer : !!!!

Sonali : N-Nahi toh mein marr jaungi!!! *sniff*

Sonali ke shabd sunn, Veer ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi.

Veer : Wh-What!?

Sonali : *sniff* Mein marr jaungi!!! *sniff* Mujhse nahi sehen hota ye sab-! *hic* W-Wese hi meri ab tak ki zindagi bekar rahi hai. *sniff* Yaha aane ke baad khushiyaan shuru hui. Magar, ab tum baat nahi kar rahe. Firse gaav ki ghutan mehsoos hone lagi mujhe- *sniff*

Veer : ??

Sonali : Jab aise ghut ghut ke hi jeena hai-! *sniff* Toh behtar hai ki mein marr jau. *sniff* Tumhe bhi mujhse chidh nahi hogi!!!

Veer akasmat aage badha. Ye pagli ye sab soch rahi thi? Aisa soch bhi kaise sakti thi woh.

Par fir use ye dhyaan aaya. Sonali ka ab tak ka jeevan waqai me bekar hi toh tha. Mumbai me aane ke baad se hi toh usne sahi se jeena shuru kiya tha. Aur aise me uske saath iss tarah pesh aana. Ye kaha ki samajhdari thi?

Woh uss se umr me choti thi. Dekha jaaye toh uska poora bachpan hi rough tha. Dhang ka baap nahi aur na hi koi accha bhai ya behan. Na jaane baap aur bhai milke kitna pratadit karte honge nashe me use.

Veer ka haath apne aap hi uske sarr par gaya. Sparsh mehsoos karte hi Sonali ne sarr utha ke dekha. Veer muskura raha tha. Use dekhte hi-

Woh achanak hi uske seene se kass ke chipak gayi.

Veer : Huh???

Pakad itni mazboot thi ki Veer ko apni kamar pe kasaav acche se mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh uske seene me muh chhipaaye sisakti rahi bas.

Veer ne apna haath uski peeth par rakha aur haule se sehlaya.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe maaf kar do! Pata nahi kya hua ki-

Sonali : Nahiiiii!! *sniff* T-Tumhari galti nahi hai! *sniff* Saari meri galti hai. Mein uss harami Kaushik ki baato me aa gayi thi. Aur tumhare baare me socha tak nahi. *sniff* M-Mein janti hu tum kyu naraaz the mujhse. Aur hona bhi chahiye- lekin-

Veer : ???

Sonali : Lekin fir baat bhi toh karni chahiye. *sniff* Tum...! Tum baat nahi kar rahe the toh aisa lag raha tha jaise-! Mene kuch apna bohut keemti kho diya hai. *sniff* A-Aaj ke baad mein aisa kabhi nahi karungi!

Veer : Ohh!

Sonali : A-Aur waada karo! Ki tum bhi aisa kabhi nahi karoge mere saath. *sniff* Mujhse firse kabhi aise mat roothna. *sniff* Warna mein sach me apni jaan de dungi!

Veer : Pagal ho kya? Itni si baat pe koi jaan deta hai kya bhala?

Sonali : Hmm! Mein de sakti hu!

Veer : Ahinda se aisi baat ki toh bohut kutogi!! Samajh gayi?

Sonali bas muskurayi aur kuch shan tak Veer ke seene se lipti rahi. Uske baad woh apni pakad thodi dheeli kar sarr upar kar use dekhi.

Ahista ahista woh uske chehre ki orr aage badhne lagi. Dil zorro se uska dhadak raha tha. Veer ke qareeb hone se aaj use itna accha kyu mehsoos ho raha tha? Woh nahi janti thi.

Uske hontho ko dekh Veer ki saansein bhi tez ho chali. Raseele hontho ka apni orr aagman paate hue Veer ne khud ko samarpit kar diya.

Aur, unn raseele gulabi hontho ko usne apne hontho ki giraft me bhar liya.

"Mmmmm~"

Zindagi ka apna pehla chumban mehsoos kar, Sonali ka poora jism kaanp utha. Woh moan karte hue Veer ki baaho me mombatti ki tarah pighalne lagi.

"Mmmmmm~"

Dono kuch lamho ke baad alag hue. Unki nigaahein aapas me bhidi hui thi. Sonali jaanti thi ki inn beetein dino use bas ek nazar Veer ki hi talaash thi.

Woh bina kuch kahe do qadam peeche ko hui. Dhadkane shaant hone ka naam nahi le rahi thi. Kya yahi woh waqt tha?

Apne top ko pakad usne dheere dheere use upar karna shuru kiya, baalo ko bikherte hue top uske gale se fauran hi utar gaya.

Aur, Veer ki aankhon ke saamne ek behad hi khubsoorat nazara tha. Sonali ke gaal sharm se laal hone lage the. Kintu, woh peeche nahi hati.

Bas, Veer par se nazre ferr woh apne bagal me dekhne lagi. Jaise apne husn ka deedar karwana chaah rahi thi. Behad khawaisho ko aaj poora karne ka samay aa chuka tha.

Kaale rang ki bra, uski gori doodhiya twacha pe atyant hi jach rahi thi. Unn haath bhar bade aamo ke beech me khichi lakeer, jo bra ke baahar se jhaak rahi thi, woh Veer ko aur bhi zyada uttejit kar rahi thi.

Veer : *gulps*

Sonali, bina Veer se nazre milaaye uske paas aayi aur ek baar punah uske seene se lag gayi.

Iss baar Veer ka haath seedhe uski peeth par gaya. Bra ka strap feel kar, Veer ke ustaad ne bhi salami dena shuru kar diya tha.

Veer : S-Sonali!?

Woh uski baaho me hi maujood thi. Aur bud-budaate hue boli,

Sonali : Itni zorr se koi dhakka deta hai kya? Gumma pad gaya sarr pe.

Veer : Gumma?

Sonali : Gumma maane sarr par soojan aa gayi mere. Dard kar raha hai ab! Itna bhi nahi pata? Buddhu!!

Veer : O-Ohhh! Sorry!

Usne apna haath Sonali ke sarr par ferr jayza lena chaaha,

Sonali (blushes) : I-Itni bhi nahi lagi hai. Theek ho jayega.

Veer : Doctor ke yaha toh nahi chalna?

Sonali (blushes) : N-Nahi buddhu!

Uski shirt ko apni mutthi me bheenche Sonali behad zyada sharma rahi thi.

Veer ne uske mukhde ko pakad punah upar kiya. Kya unn aankhon me wahi mansha thi jo uski aankhon me thi. Veer ko uski aankhein dekhte hi pata lag gaya.

Aur ek baar fir-

"Mmmm~"

Dono ke honth aapas me jud gaye. Hontho ki kushti me jab zubaan shaamil hui, toh Sonali ka poora badan sihar ke reh gaya.

Yeh adhbhut ehsaas! Kya aisa hota tha ek dusre ko choomna? Aaj woh jaan gayi thi.

Peeche jaate hue woh dono hi bistar par gir gaye. Veer Sonali ke upar tha aur chumban abhi bhi jaari tha.

Veer ke haath bhi samay ke saath behekne shuru ho gaye. Sonali ke stano ko pakadte hi usne zorr se uske ek doodh ko nichod diya, jiske chalte woh bechari uske muh me hi moan karke reh gayi.

Veer ka haath bra ke andar gaya aur use halke haath se Sonali ke doodh ko dabaya~

"Nnnnn~"

Aur fir seedhe bra upar karte hue uske nipple ko tatolne laga.

"Ahhnnnn~"

Dher saari chooma chaati ke baad Veer ne saans durust karte hue use dekha aur pucha,

Veer : Kya tum-!?

Sonali : Haan! Aage kuch mat kaho-!!

Usne Veer ki baah pakdi aur use apni orr kheench liya. Veer jawab samajh chuka tha.

Halke haatho se Sonali ne Veer ke kapde utaare. Ye pehli baar tha jab wo kisi mard ke kapde utaar rahi thi. Uski fit and fine body ko dekhte hi uske dil ki dhadkane tez ho chuki thi.

Par jab baari underwear utaarne ki aayi toh woh sehmi hui ek jagah par jamm gayi.

Veer : Kya hua? Darr lag gaya?

Sonali (blushes) : A-Aisi baat nahi hai. T-Tum mera mazaak mat udao samjhe na?

Veer (smiles) : Bas itne me hi ghabra gayi?

Sonali (blushes) : Maar dungi, samjhe na!?

Uski hayaa ko dekh Veer ne uska mazak udana band kar diya. Kaapte hue haatho se Sonali ne jab uski underwear neeche ki toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Sonali : Y-Ye-!?

Veer (smiles) : Yahi hai jo hai!

Veer ki baat sunn woh jaise kinhi vichaaro me pad gayi.

'Y-Ye-! Ye kya hai??? Ye andar kaise jayega?'

Fir use apni Maa ka khayal aaya. Uski maa, Suman. Akhir woh bhi toh Veer ke saath sahreerik sambandh rakhti thi. Iska matlab-!!!

Uski Maa iss vishaal hathiyar ko apne andar lene me saksham thi?

Veer : Agar darr lag raha hai toh-

Sonali : N-Nahi!!! K-Kuch darr warr nahi lag raha. *blushes* Samjhe?

Aur usne kehte hue underwear poora neeche kheench diya.

Veer poora nagn awastha me tha. Sonali ki bra jo abhi bhi uske seene par maujood thi, use Veer ne strap kholke turant hi jism se alag kar diya.

Kaali panty ko apne haatho me thaam woh dheere dheere use neeche sarkaane laga. Sonali toh bas Veer ko ghoose maarne ki icchaa jataa rahi thi.

Kya ye ladka ek baar me uske kapde nahi utaar sakta tha? Dheere dheere, ahista ahista unhe utaarte hue use chhidhana zaroori tha kya?

Veer ne uski taango ko jab khola toh use kuwari choot ka adhbhut nazara mila. Choot par beshaq baal bhi maujood the.

Sonali ek aam ladki thi aur use khud ko groom karna itna nahi aata tha. Ya yu kahe ki woh inn cheezon pe zyada dhyaan hi nahi deti thi.

Aur de bhi kyu bhala? Use kaha pata tha ki aaj woh Veer ke sang sex karne waali hai. Veer ne kuch shan dekha aur fir bola,

Veer (smiles) : Tumhe Ragini Bhabhi se classes leni chahiye.

Sonali : Huh? K-Kis cheez ki?

Veer (smiles) : Apne gupt-ang ko saaf suthra kaise rakha jaaye... uski!!

Veer ne jaise hi ye kaha. Sonali ke gaalo ka paara itni tezi se chadha ki uske perr ek jhatke me aapas me band ho gaye aur usne apna sharm se bhara chehra apne dono haatho se chhipa liya.

Sonali (blushes) : Nahiiii!!!!!!

Veer hasa!

Sonali (blushes) : T-Tum-! Tum kitne gande ho yaar!!

Uske haatho ko chehre se hata ke Veer ne jab firse use chooma toh Sonali ki saari sharm dheere dheere khatm hone lagi.

Badan ko lagataar choomte hue, jagah jagah pyaar ke nishaan chhodhte hue jab Veer neeche aaya toh uski choot ko pehle haule se usne sehlaya.

"Nnnggghh~"

Jis se Sonali bed par hi jhatka kha ke reh gayi. Aur Veer ne jab ekdum se apna muh uski choot par lagaya toh woh toh jaise uss duniya se hi uth gayi.

Uski kamar poora arch bana ke bed ke upar ho chali. Kya tha yeh sab? Yeh ehsaas! Kahi use Veer se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya tha? Shayad haan!

Woh iss prem roopi samundar me giri toh giri magar itni gehrayi me jaake giri, ki iska abhaas use abhi khud bhi nahi tha.

Veer ka uski parvah karna. Yahi toh chaah rahi thi woh itne dino se. Yahi toh use sukh pahuchata tha.

Dheere dheere ye chaahat ki lat use lagne lagi thi.

Shayad aaj raat yahi beetne waali thi uski...!

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Mumbai...
Kaera's house...
Evening ~ 7:34 PM

Karan apne gale se tie ko dheeli karte hue apne kamre me aaya.

Ek meeting se woh abhi chhoot ke aaya tha aur ab uski ek aur meeting kuch hi derr me scheduled rakhi hui thi.

Usne AC set kar, TV on kiya aur apne kapde change karne laga.

Pehle uske mann me ek quick bath lene ka idea aaya. Magar, usne woh khayal fauran hi mann se nikaal diya. Deri jo ho jaati aisa karne se. Abhi woh nayi shirt daalne hi wala tha jab achanak hi uske kamre ke khule hue darwaze par ek khat-khat hui,

"May I come in Sir?"

Usne sarr utha ke dekha toh paaya ki, uske ghar ki ekmaatr khubsoorat Russian maid khadi hui thi.

Karan : Julia???

Julia muskurayi aur bina Karan ki permission liye hi kamre ke andar chali aayi.

Julia : Done with the meeting?

Karan : Y-Yeah! That went well! Time for this next one-!

Julia : Sir, don't need to worry.

Karan : Huh?

Julia (smiles) : Young Miss has already dealt with it. You don't have to go.

Karan : Wh-What!!!??

Woh taajub me Julia ko dekha. Kya abhi abhi Julia ne jo kaha, woh sach tha? Kaera ne agli meeting already sort kar di thi? Iska matlab ab use kahi jaane ki zaroorat nahi thi?

Usne ek raahat ki saans li.

Karan (sighs) : Ahhhh! That's a relief!

Tabhi, TV par Veer ki khabar jhalki. Uske France me kiye gaye karnaame. Khabar purani ho chuki thi par abhi bhi kuch channels par barkaraar thi.

Karan : Tch! This guy-! Aise hote hai dost Julia. Itna bada kaand kar ke aaye hai janaab par abhi tak ek call nahi aaya hai. Aur ye log mujhe apna dost kehte hai. Hmph-!

Woh apni shikaayte rakh raha tha. Julia bas muskurayi aur uske kamre se nikal Kaera ke room ki orr chal di jaha Kaera khidki se khadi baahar ki orr dekh shaant khadi hui thi.

Julia : Karan Sir is back home, Miss!

Kaera : Hmm!

Julia : Are you perhaps thinking of young master Veer!?

Kaera (glances) : Huh!!?? Why do you think so?

Julia (smiles) : Call it my intuition. Am I right?

Kaera : Th-That's not it!

Julia : You love him. Don't you-!?

Kaera : N-Noooo-!!!

Uska jawab aaya. Par awaaz me woh aakramakta nahi thi. Awaaz ladkhadayi hui si thi.

Julia : I'm sure that you have feelings for him. Then, why don't you approach him? Young Master Veer is indeed not from a haughty rich family, he's tall and handsome, loyal and protective for you. He doesn't flaunt his money, he loves kids and pets, isn't he a kind hearted gentleman? Basically, he passes all your standards.

Kaera : ...

Julia : Then? Why don't you give any sign to him? Wouldn't it be late if someone else hogs him for themselves?

Kaera : S-Stop!!! *sniff*

Julia : Huhhh!!?

Jab Kaera ki sisakne ki awaaz Julia ke kaano me padi toh woh hairat me reh gayi. Woh ye jaanti thi ki uski Miss Kaera ab pehle jaisi nahi thi. Ya yu kahe ki ekdum hi pehle jaise ho gayi hai. Jo emotions ko feel kar sakti hai.

Aur isliye aaj woh itni baatein keh rahi thi. Woh nahi chaahti thi ki Veer ko koi aur ladki leke jaaye aur uski Miss Kaera haath par haath dhari baithi reh jaaye.

Magar-!

Kaera ki sisakne ki awaaz ne jaise use achambhav me daal diya.

Woh ro rahi thi? Magar kyu-!? Iska jawab Julia ne nahi jaanana chaaha. Jo sabse pehla kaam tha uske liye iss waqt woh tha maafi maangna.

Julia (kowtows) : I-I'm sorry Young Miss! I spoke too much. I shouldn't have-! I-!! I was just curious why young Miss wasn't approaching young master Veer?

Kaera : That's because- *sniff*

Julia : !!????

Aur Kaera fir achanak hi khidki se uski orr palti. Julia ne jab uska chehra dekha toh bechari ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Itne aasu usne aaj tak apni Miss Kaera ke chehre par nahi dekhe the.

Uske hontho par ek majboori waali muskaan feli aur woh ahista se boli,

Kaera : ...because I want him to claim me!!!

Julia : Ahhn!!!

Aur Julia ka badan woh sunte hi hairat ke maare sihar utha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update late hai. I know. Aur aap bhi jaante ho ki kyu late hai. Veer aur Sonali ka scene abhi khatam nahi hua hai toh ye mat sochna use beech se hi kaat diya gaya hai. Agle update me unke beech kya hua woh sab dikhaya jayega. Agla update ek mega update bhi hoga aur sirf sex based nahi hoga. Kuch unn characters ko bhi dekhenge hum jo story me kaafi time se nazar nahi aaye hai. Anyways, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai guys. 150. And, btw ye update 5.6k words ka hai.
Dhanyavaad.

Fantastic fabulous Mazedaar update sir .
maza aa gya.

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

काइरा के आंसू उसके इमोशनल सेंसिटिवटी को उजागर कर रहे थे। इसका मतलब वह अब लोगों की बात या हरकतों पर स्वभाविक रिएक्शन देना सीख गई है।
ऐसा इसलिए कहा कि वो जब वीर के साथ सेक्सुअल हुई थी और अपनी वर्जिनिटी खोई थी , तब इतने बड़े घटना पर भी उसने किसी भी तरह का रिएक्शन जाहिर नही किया था।
निस्संदेह यह सब वीर का ही देन है। हमारे अंदर मौजूद भावनात्मक सेंसेटिवटी का सम्बन्ध हमारे जीन से होता है। और इस के लिए जरूरी है कि लोग मेडिटेशन अवश्य करें।
मेडिटेशन , खासकर सचेतन मन से किए जाने वाले मेडिटेशन , आपको आप की भावनात्मक प्रतिक्रियाओं को व्यक्त करने और इन्हे मैनेज करने मे मदद तो करता ही है , साथ ही ये ज्यादा तनाव मे आपके मन मे उमड़ने वाली प्रतिक्रियाओं को भी नियंत्रित करता है।
खैर , अच्छी खबर है कि काइरा अब पुरी तरह से अपने बुरे अतीत से उबर चुकी है।

इधर सोनाली का वीर के साथ अंतरंग होना उसके सपनों का पुरा होने के समान था। और यह देखकर बढ़िया लगा कि वो वीर के स्लैव लिस्ट मे शामिल नही है।
लेकिन यह भी नही पता कि वीर की नजरों मे उसकी क्या पहचान और हैसियत है । यही हाल काइरा , सुहाना और तेज के साथ भी है। प्रोफाइल स्टेटस पर इन सभी के साथ ( ? ) निशान बना हुआ है और यह भ्रम की स्थिति पैदा करता है।
क्या ये सभी महिलाए वीर की पत्नी का रुतबा हासिल करने वाली है ?

ऐसा ही कन्फ्यूजन अन्य महिलाओ पर भी है। Buddy , Comrade , Mate , PAL का अर्थ लगभग एक ही है। इसके बारे मे जानकरी दीजिएगा ।
शायद सबसे हल्का भुमिका का स्टेटस है , ऐसा क्यों ?
रागिनी का भी स्टेटस कुछ समझ नही आया।

नेक्स्ट अपडेट मे इस पर खुलासे कीजिएगा वोल्फी भाई !
अपडेट हमेशा की तरह बेहतरीन और शानदार था।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग।

 

[Werewolf]

Bhumika ki compititer thi wah ab tak story main missing hai. Jo bakery ke oder ka scence huva tha .
Wah kab story main entry hogi.
Kya narang our us laddy ka koi scene hai kya kuki ab business ark chalra ha hai.

Bhumika ki competitor? Kaun?
You mean Tamanna??
Haan woh bhi hai isi arc me. Bas aati hi hogi. Agle dusre ya teesre update me nazar aa jayegi. Uska bhi role hai.

Jordaar, Dhamakedaar, Lajwaab, Bejod update bhai....

Shukriya

Werewolf
तो आज की शाम सोनाली के नाम रहीं, हर एक किरदार को पूरे जतन से सहेजते हो.. अतिशयोक्ति नहीं है परंतु घटनाओं का उल्लेख मजेदार ढंग से प्रस्तुत किया है... अति उत्तम

Bahut bahut dhanyavad bhai. Keep supporting.

BEHAD KHUBSURAT LAJAWAAB MARVELOUS EXCELLENT MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Shukriya

Waiting for another exciting update
Suhana ki wapsi b honi chahiye?

Hoyegi jald hi

Update ?

De toh diya

Nice update bhai

to Kaushik ne apni asliyat dikha hi dii jo k hona hi tha...
bss Sonali hi is baat se anjaan thi wrna Veer ki to chodo Prachi ko bhi andaaza tha uski mentality ka...
issi liye to usne Veer ko sab bataya tha or phir jab der rata tak Sonali nhi ayii to ussi ne Veer ko aagaah kiya tha...

Yes! Aur Veer Tracer ki madad se turant hi waha pahuch paaya.

or Veer pohonch gaya sahi time sahi place pr or jis kaam k liye aaya tha woh kiya or khamoshi se Sonali ko le kr ghr aa gaya ....

usne koi baat nhi ki Sonali se, woh bhi kitne hi din tak or Sonali koshish hi krti reh gyii baat krne kii.

Tej Veer ko kisaanon ka kaam dikhaana chaahti hai, ab dekhte hain k kaam kya huwa hai or kitna ....?

Woh segment bhi aane waala hai. Shayad next update me hi dikhne mil jaaye.

Sonali ne ek new trick use ki hai sab bikher kr bhaag gyii woh bhi Prachi k samne, jis se Prachi Veer ko call kr k bataye or huwa bhi aisa hi...
ab to bss yehi umeed lagaye sadkon pr ghoom rhi hai k Veer aa jaye...

ab aapne bataya hai k Sonia bhi jald dikhne waali hai to sabko bss isii chiz k intezaar rhe ga or phir Kaira ka...

Kaera toh already aa chuki hai bhai. Jald hi Sonali bhi nazar aayegi. Bohut jald. Kuch updates dur hi hai bas.
Thanks a lot Bhai for this wonderful revo. And keep supporting as usual.

Bhai log ye bhi to socho agar ye story band ho Gaya to... Writer bhai story chod Diya to tab karte rahna aise reply...

Bhai wait Karo de hi rahe hai update... Jab bhi time milega ... Jo kuch mil Raha hai usme khus raho ... Aisa nahi ho ki kuch mile hi na...

Free hi main to story read karne ko mil Raha hai... To jab aye tab read kar lena

Yahi itni si baat to nahi samajhte log

Abhi update ka thoda problem chal Raha hai... To kya hua mere Bhai log zindegi hamesha same same nahi hota... For example - RIVER me kabhi same same Pani nahi bahta... Kabhi kam to kabhi jyada hota hai...


Ye time writer bhai busy honge to update late ho Raha hai... Kya hua Bhai abhi aise hi chala lete hain kuch din baad fir se pahele ke tarah update aa jayenge...

Writer bhai aap apne hisab se update de sakte hain... Apna life bhi to enjoy karna hai... Aise nahi ki ghar se office aur office se ghar fir update likhna suru... Kabhi kabhi enjoy bhi kar liya Karo aur time mile to likh Lena

Thanks a lot man.
It means a lot.

Bhai... Writer's ki bhi apni personal life hoti...use kabhi kuch kaam aa sakta ...kuch pareshani ho sakti...bimaar ho saktaa...wo bhi insaan hai... writer agar koi date bata bhi deta hai aur update nahi deta hai..toh iska yah matlab nahi ki aap use writer ko dosh Dena shuru kar do..wah toh apni Marzi se app ke liye likh raha.. use kya jarurat hai ki wo aapko update ke date bataye ya update de ...aapne use kaam pe thode rakha hai...wo har waqt sirf story pe hi dhyan de... Werewolf Bhai...aap jab Puri tarah se free ho jao.... uske baad hi update ...par dhyan dena ...yah to Aisa chalta rahta..aaj update de bhi doge toh kal phir update magane lagege...

Kaash aise hi sab log samajh jaate
Thanks man!

I hope everything will be fine and nothing terrible happens. Take your time and resolve your problems if there are any. After that give us a mega update

Mega update next hoga bhai. Keep supporting.

Kya werewolf bhai aapka update kabhi bhi diye huye samay par nahi aata...aapki baato ka koi guarantee nahi hota hai bhai...

156 updates aise hi Diya hu kya? Pichli story hawa me likh di kya?

Kya werewolf sir aapka update kabhi bhi diye huye samay par nahi aata...aapki baato ka koi guarantee nahi hota hai sir...

Ab de diya hai toh padhna nahi hai

Bro everything is fine??..even if your updates get late sometimes..but it doesn't take that long, I have become silent reader for sometimes so i don't comments on ur updates had to do it today, take care of yourself... and reply soon

Yes man. I'm good now. Fully recovered thankfully. Exhaustion restricts me to write any further. Hence, the delay in the updates.

Issue time ka nahin hai..issue credibility ka hai.. everyone understands the time n effort in good story writing. Most of writers don't have even half the writing skills, imagination or language control like Werewolf Bhai.
Maine to kitni baar request Kiya tha ki when not sure, don't commit to time of next update. Is better than never adhering to any commitment made w.r.t every update.Pahle week mein do updates aate rehte..fir week mein ek..ab 10+ din mein ek update aa rahe hain. Just leads to lowered interest of readers. Writer ka to.interest kam ho hi gaya hai.
So Bhai log..just chill and wait. Am sure is weekend Tak you shall have a dhamakedar update. Cheerios.

Interest kam nahi hua hai bhai. Interest jab writer ka apni story me kam hota hai toh woh uske update ke narration se pata chal jaata hai. Reader fir utna vividly cheezon ko feel nahi kar payega kyuki writer ne bina mann me update likha hoga.

Par kya abhi tak aisa hua hai tumlogo ke saath? Itne dino baad Naya update diya fir bhi logo ki pasand dekho uss update ki. Kitna pasand aaya hai sabko. Mera interest kabhi apni story se khatam nahi hota. Mein banaata hi aisa plot hu jo mujhe khud ko bore hone nahi deta.

Take care of your health and visit the doctor....
Take medicine regularly and get well soon

Take care you health....
Get well soon....
Intezaar rahega next update ka Werewolf bhai...

Take Care your health
Get Well Soon
God Bless You

Get Well Soon Brother.
Season Kharab chal hi raha hai please take care yourself.
God Bless You .

Get Well Soon Brother

Warewolf bhai take care of yourself. Get wel soon after all Health is wealth. Take a good rest with timely Medicines and after that you can continue your story. But before everything get wel soon

Take care bhai..
Get well soon

Thank you guys. Keep supporting just like this.

 

[Werewolf]

Koi na buddy hota hai jab theek ho jao tab update de dena health se badhkar stpry thodi hai

Wese bro itna to bata hi sakte ho kahase ho tum Wese aaj raat se hi humare jamnagar mai bhi continues baris ho rahi hai or barish bhi aise ki rook hi nahi rahi hai barish bhi bahut tej agar 2 min bahar khade raho na to bhigade aisi ho rahi hai

I'm from MP.

Yaha ke adpas ke gaao main to jese khusiyo ki lahar doud gayi hai sab ke khet main fasal ugni shurur ho gayi hai aaj meri chutti hai to aaj nikla hu barish main ghumne bhai kasam se kya hi view hai shar ka or highway ke aaspads ke kheto ka jese maza aagya dekh ke hehe sorry ha firse thoda flow hogya kyu ki ilove barish ka mousam

Get well soon wolfi buddy

Ju bhi jaldi se fursat ho kaamo se fir yaha revos dena. Waiting for your revos. :wait

Jaldi se changa ho jao bhai.... Ye cold to dam tod deti h....

Haan Bhai. Shukriya. Theek hu ab.

Get Well soon bro....
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Bhai ye story itni niche chli gyi thi....mujhe lga khi delete to nhi kr diya na story ko.....,

Aise thodi delete hoti hai bhai. Story thread kabhi delete nahi hota. Neeche Jaa sakta hai, band ho sakta hai par delete kabhi nahi hota.

Waiting
umeed hai aap thek hoon gy
story tu ab peak pa hai aur umeed hai aap isy ending ki taraf ly k jain gy?

Ending me bhi samay hai abhi. Abhi to Chinatown arc hi nahi aaya. Fir disembowlers arc hai. Aur agar beech me koi aur arc na aaya tab finale arc hai.

Good to hear that you're doing good and recovering. We are with you and hopefully that next update will come soon dear Werewolf.

Thanks man. Keep supporting.

werewolf bhai...writer ke saamne kitni chunautiyan hoti hain..ye koi chutiya nahi samajh sakta...main bhi kahani likhta hoon..kahani likhne ke alawa aur bhi bahot kaam hote hain...aap bimaar hain magar kuch logon ko bimaari nazar nahi aati..isiko bolte hai swarthi aadmi..jo sirf apne swarth ke liye kahani padhne aate hain..writer bimaar hai usko kya taqleef hai isse unko koi matlab nahi hota....

Sahi kaha man. Shukriya!

Yes bro i am also understand me bhi job and studies ke sath stories likh raha hu har din kitni chunnautiya hoti hai us wajah se kabhi kabar delay ho jata hai aur ek acha update dene ke liye dimag man aur tan sabhi fresh hona jaroori hai jo har waqt possible nahi hai

Exactly!

bhai aap kabhi bhi update de dena but story stop mat karna kiyoki ek aapki aur ek nirwana bhai ki do story hi interesting hay

Story jab tak finish nahi hogi tab tak thread band nahi hoga bhai. In fact thread kabhi band hi nahi karwaunga. Taaki log jab chaahe aake ise padh sake aur comment kar sake.

Kya hi kahu bhai..

Yaha haddi tudvakar hospital me 9 din ruk kar aa gaye ghar par 1 mahine adhik sidhe lete bed rest ke liye or aap ek update nhi diya...

1 mahina, 9 din se update nahi aaya? Ye kaunsi duniya me jee rahe ho bhai?

Kya ho gaya tha ? Whether changes ki wajah se kahi tabiyat to nahi bigad gayi thi ?

Wahi hua tha. Do baar bheeg gaya tha baarish me jamm ke lambe samay ke liye. Cold pakad liya. Ab theek hu.

 

[ASH@7]

Shaandaar update bhai. Hope you are okay now. Waiting for next.....