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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Update - 130 ~ The Purpose


Ab tak...

*Ring*

Uske phone par ek notification aaya.

'Hmm?'

Screen on kar jaise hi usne message dekha uske raungte khade ho gaye.

Ek Message tha.

Jisme bas teen shabd hi likhe the.

"It has begun!"


Ab aage...

"Subah ki daud ke liye jaa rahe ho?"

Awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo muskura kar hall me baithi akhbaar padh rahi thi. Aur awaaz kendrit thi Veer ki orr jo apna tracksuit pehne upar apne kamre se neeche aa raha tha.

Veer : Itni jaldi uth gayi aap? Subah ke 6 baj rahe hai.

Bhavna (smiles) : Mein jaldi hi uthati hu beta. Toh? Jogging?

Veer : Jogging bhi aur kasrat bhi.

Bhavna dhyaan se apne bete ko dekhti rahi. Kese tracksuit uske gatheele jism se kass ke chipka hua tha.

Bhavna : Tumne gym kiya hai?

Veer : !!? Nahi toh! Kyu?

Bhavna : Toh aisi fitness?

Veer (smiles) : Aapko pasand nahi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Ye sawaal apni girlfriend se karna.

Veer (shrugs) : I don't have one.

Bhavna : Jese ki mein vishvaas karungi.

Veer : I really don't-

Bhavna : Mujhse kya chhipaana? Bata do! Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Nahi! Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. I really don't have-

Bhavna (sighs) : Aaj kal ke bacche! Pata nahi itna sharmaate kyu hai apne parents se baate share karne me.

Veer : No wait-

Bhavna : Theek hai! Jab sahi lage tab bata dena.

Veer ne ek aah bhari aur sarr hila ke woh baahar ko jaane laga. Toh,

Bhavna : Veer!

Veer (turns back) : Hmm?

Bhavna (frowns) : Ek zaroori baat karni hai. Tum hoke aao. Fir saath me baithate hai.

Veer : Alright.

Aur woh baahar nikal gaya.

***

Ek bohut bada toofaan aane waala tha. Aur uska sanket usse uss message ke zariye mil chuka tha.

"IT HAS BEGUN!"

Uss anjaan aadmi ka message jisne Veer ki neend haraam kar ke rakhi hui thi. Crimson Festival shuru ho chuka tha ye bataane ke liye woh message tha. Dusre shabdo me, woh aadmi ye bhi batlaana chaah raha tha ki Veer ki maut ka countdown bhi shuru ho chuka hai.

Aur Veer ek pal bhi barbaad nahi jaane de sakta tha. Apni maa aur unke ateet ka itna bada raaz jaan'ne ke baad ye masla woh suljha chuka tha. Ab samay tha aage aane waali musibat ke liye khud ko taiyaar karne ka. Aur yahi woh kar raha tha.

Subah ka uska routine hi exercise se shuru hota. Na sirf woh running karta balki Intermediate Martial Arts ko perfect karna bhi uska maqsad rehta.

Kyuki jitni jaldi ye perfect hogi utni hi jald woh Advanced Martial Arts khareed payega. Aur woh ye baat jaanta tha ki iss anjaan bande se ladne ke liye sirf Intermediate Martial Arts se kuch nahi hone waala tha.

Din me kabhi woh Balhaar ke aadmiyo ke sang fight leta. Jaha woh khud akela rehta aur saamne 10 se 15 log. Aur dheere dheere woh numbers ko badhaane laga.

Abhi woh park me baithe ek break le hi raha tha jab usse dhyaan aaya ki usne iss scroll ka use aaj tak nahi kiya.

'Pari!'

[Yes Master!]

'Profit Path humne aaj tak use nahi kiya. Hai na?'

[Yes!]

'Toh use karo.'

[It will take 100 Fame Points Master.]

'What? Scroll khareedne ke liye hi kitne points waste karne padte hai. Aur tum keh rahi ho ki ab ussi scroll ko use karne ke liye mujhe aur fame points spend karne padenge?'

[Yes! Par sirf iss scroll ke liye master. Aapko Mystic Touch ke liye toh kabhi bhi kuch spend nahi karna pada na?]

'Yeah! Lekin woh apne aap hi activate hota hai.'

[Kya aap chaahte hai woh harr samay on rahe?]

'Nahi! Fir toh woh samasya ban jayega Pari.'

[Hmm! Isliye ye wala scroll thoda special hai. Aap points use kariye. Aur khud dekhiye.]

'Alright do it then!'

*Ding*

[100 Fame Points have been used in Profit Path.]

*Ding*

Aur agle hi pal Veer ke mann me saamne ek window khul gayi. Veer usse padh ek soch me pad gaya.



'This is-'

[Yahi hai Profit Path Master. Usne Path de diya hai. Usse samajhna aur execute karna aapke upar hai.]

Path ko dekhte hi Veer muskuraaya.

'Awesome! This is awesome! Halaki isme se bohut kuch mene pehle hi soch liya tha. Lekin Perfumes, Farmers, Land aur supply. These are good ideas. I got it. Too good! Toh ye kaam karta hai Profit Path.'

[Yes! Ek aur note master.]

'What is it?'

[Jab tak aap isse execute nahi karte. Aap dusra path nahi draw kar sakte.]

'Ohh!'

[So do execute it please. Kyuki humare paas bilkul time nahi hai Master. Unknown person kabhi bhi kahi se bhi attack kar sakta hai. Mein kehna nahi chaahti. But we are weak.]

'I know!'

[Aur ek baat-]

'Say!'

[Master! We have to move smartly. Sabse pehla sawaal. Uss insaan ka maqsad kya hai? What is his purpose?]

'Purpose huh!'

[Yes! Kya humne usse kisi tarah se provoke kiya hai?]

'Honestly Pari, mujhe waqai nahi pata. Only guess I can make is somehow I may have provoked him by exposing house of the killers. Par kya woh house of the killers se related tha? Kya isliye badle me woh mujhe maarna chaahta hai kyuki mene house of the killers ke bade criminals ka safaaya kar diya?'

[Agar aisa hai toh fir usne aapko uss time maara kyu nahi? Woh asaani se maar sakta tha. We were surrounded. Kya Suhana ko nuksaan bhi ussi ne pohuchaaya tha? We must know every detail.]

'Yahi samajh nahi aa raha Pari. Isliye mein Aatish ya Slogan ke matter se bhi zyada anxious hu. Woh dono mere peeche kyu pade the mein jaanta tha. Par yaha- I have no clue at all. Upar se uske paas bhi system hai.'

[And a stronger one at that.]

'Right!'

[Isliye Master. We have to get strong as soon as possible.]

'Yeah! Anyways, let's go! Maa ko kuch baat karni thi.'

Ghar lautate hi Veer Bhavna ke kamre me gaya.

Jo ki asal me Ragini ka kamra tha jo usne Bhavna ko de diya tha.

'Shayad ab naya ghar lena hi padega.'

*Knock* *Knock*

Darwaaze khat-khataate hi andar se awaaz aayi,

"Aa jao Veer!" Woh ye sunn andar daakhil hua.

Veer : Aapko pata tha mein hu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Aur kaun ho sakta tha?

Veer : Ghar me itne log hai. Koi bhi ho sakta tha.

Bhavna (smiles) : Ragini toh so rahi hogi. Tumhari sauteli maa 7:30 baje ke aas paas uthi thi kal. Toh aaj bhi shayad utne hi samay uthengi!?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Aabha jaldi uthati hai. Aur woh nahane dhone me lag jaati hai. Sonali so rahi hogi. Rahi baat Suman ki toh woh zaroor uth ke naha dho ke ghar ke kaamo me lag gayi hogi.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Tej ki subah ki aadat mein jaanti hu. Aur Bhumika kal hotel ke liye 8 baje uthi thi. Shayad wahi uska time hai? Bache tum! Jis se mene kaha tha kuch derr pehle ki mujhse baat karne aana. Toh? Kya lagta hai? Aur kaun ho sakta hai?

Woh muskuraayi.

Veer : Spot on.

Bhavna (smiles) : Idhar aao. Mere paas baitho.

Usne hatheli se apne bagal ki jagah ko thap-thapa kar usse bulaaya. Veer chup chaap aake apni maa ke bagal se virajmaan ho gaya.

Bhavna : Tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai. Shayad ek nahi. Ek se zyada hongi.

Veer : Kahiye!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kaisi chal rahi hai tumhari college life?

Veer : Huh? Ye puchna tha?

Bhavna : Mm-Hmm!

Veer : Mujhe nahi pata.

Bhavna : Kya matlab?

Veer : Matlab ye ki mein sirf exams dene jaata hu.

Bhavna : Aur baaki ka tumhari Nidhi ma'am sambhaal leti hai.

Veer : Yeah! Ehhh!?? Wait- I mean- I mean aapko kese? Ohh! Teju dii! Yeah! Wo- Wo meri attendance dekh leti hai. Mere sessionals ka dhyaan rakh leti hai.

Bhavna : Mujhe milna hoga unse jald hi.

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna (smiles) : Unhe thank you kehne aur kis liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Bhavna : Aur baaki time kya karte ho?

Veer : Bhabhi ne bataya nahi aapko? Food truck shuru kiya hai mene. Sonali aur workers sambhaalte hai.

Bhavna : Bataya tha. Par tumhare muh se sunn'na tha. Jab woh sab sambhaalti hai toh tum kya karte ho?

Veer : I look for other business opportunities.

Nazre ferr Veer ne jawaab diya.

Bhavna : Sach?

Veer : H-Haan!

Bhavna : Kitna paisa kama rahe ho beta?

Veer : Kyu?

Bhavna : Kya nahi puch sakti?

Veer : Itna samajhiye ki abhi laakho me kama raha hu.

Bhavna : Itna paisa sirf food truck se?

Veer : Nahi! Shares khareede hai kuch. Companies me invest karna shuru kiya hai.

Bhavna : Inn sab me madad toh kii hogi kisi ne.

Veer : Hmm!

Bhavna : Kaun hai woh?

Veer : Aapko kyu jaan'na hai?

Bhavna : Mere bete ke shubh-chintak hai. Jaan'na toh hoga hi na?

Veer : Hai kuch log. Badi family se hai. Kaafi badi. Luckily hum familiar hai ek dusre se. Aur ek dusre ki madad karte rehte hai.

Bhavna : Tumhara uddeshya kya hai?

Veer : Huh?

Bhavna : Tumhare jeevan ka uddeshya!? Purpose!? Aim!?

Veer ki haalat abhi aisi thi jese kisi pareeksha me baithe vidyaarthi ke paper me syllabus ke baahar ka prashn aa gaya ho.

Thodi hi derr pehle woh Pari se anjaan aadmi ke purpose ko lekar baat kar raha tha.

Par uska khud ka purpose kya tha? Uski zindagi ka lakshya? Veer ke mann me ek uttar aaya. Par iske pehle ki woh jawaab de paata, Bhavna ne apni baat rakh uski bolti hi band kar dii.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana? Aur adhik paisa kamaana? Fir aur adhik? Acchi patni paana? Sundar baal bacche hona? Naya ghar, nayi gaadi, samaaj me izzat? Yahi sab?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Bolo? Yahi sab na?

Veer : Haan! Bilkul! Toh kya ye galat hai? Harr aadmi toh inhe hi paana chaahta hai na? Fir jeevan ke uddeshya ka matlab hi kya? Paisa hoga toh aap aaj ke sansaar me jee paoge. Acchi patni hogi toh ghar baar ko acche se sambhaal payegi. Baal bacche honge toh aage ki peedhi ko badhayenge. Iske alaawa aur kya uddeshya hai jeevan ka?

Bhavna apne bete ki thodi tezz awaaz sunn haule se muskuraayi aur kuch shan tak bas usse dekhti rahi.

Veer : Boliye!?

Usne nazre neeche kar ahista se fir bolna shuru kiya,

Bhavna : Mujhe ek baat batao Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Sansaar me abaadi kitni hogi abhi?

Veer : Around 8 billion!?

Bhavna : Mujhe batao ki lagbhag harr insaan inhi 5-6 cheezo ke peeche kyu bhaag raha hai? Padhayi! Paisa! Shaadi! Bacche! Ghoomna firna! Khaana peena!?

Veer : Aap aise keh rahi ho jese ye sab galat hai.

Bhavna : Mene toh kaha hi nahi Veer ki ye galat hai.

Veer : Toh fir ye sawaal kyu?

Bhavna : Tumhe kuch ajeeb nahi lagta?

Veer : Ajeeb kya?

Bhavna : Ki duniya ka lagbhag harr insaan bas inn 4-5 chuninda cheezo ke peeche hi bhaag raha hai? Kuch samajh aaya?

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Kyuki samaaj ne insaano ko aaj wesa banaaya hua hai Veer.

Veer : ??

Bhavna : Acchi shiksha nahi hogi toh naukri nahi milegi. Naukri nahi hogi toh shaadi nahi. Shaadi nahi toh fir bacche nahi. Fir kya ghoomna firrna aur kya khaana peena. Zindagi khokli ho jayegi. Yahi na?

Veer : I-

Bhavna : Kabhi iss nazariye se nahi dekha ki yahi samaaj hume majboor karta jaa raha hai. Ek sa raasta apnaane ke liye hume dhakel raha hai.

Veer : Toh aap kya chaahti hai?

Bhavna : Mein chaahti hu ki tum apna lakshya dhundho mere bacche. Tum duniya me aaye ho. Kya sirf yahi karne? Jin baato ko mene ginaaya!?

Maa ki baat ka bodh hote hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Ek ek shabd sach tha. Usne ab tak iss nazariye se kyu nahi dekha tha? Kya waqai sirf yahi zindagi hai?

Veer : I see! Samajh gaya. Aap chaahti hai ki mein apne jeevan ka uddeshya dhundhu? Toh mein usse dhundhunga. Aur woh paisa kamaane se alag hoga.

Bhavna : Paisa kamaana buri baat nahi hai Veer. Kamao! Khoob kamao! Par ek lakshya hona zaroori hai.

Veer : Aapka lakshya kya hai?

Bhavna : Mera lakshya? Woh mitt gaya. Ab jo bache kuche uddeshya hai woh hai ek maa ki zimmedari nibhaana. Aur itihaas ke panno ki sachhaayi jaan'na.

Veer : Excavation and Research...!?

Bhavna : Hmm! Ab ek akhiri sawaal. Tum kaun ho?

Veer : What?

Bhavna : Kaun ho tum?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna : Agar ye kehne jaa rahe ho ki mere aur Brijesh ki santaan ho, naam Veer hai, iss iss parivaar se ho toh abhi theher jao Veer. Mein apne bete se better expect karti hu. Toh ab batao. Kaun ho tum?

Veer shaant reh gaya.

Bhavna (smiles) : Tum nahi bata sakte.

Woh sahi thi. Veer ke muh se kuch na nikla. System ke baare me woh bata nahi sakta tha. Aur ye bhi nahi keh sakta tha ki woh Bhavna ka beta hai. Toh kaun tha Veer? Uske muh par jese taala lag gaya. Itna asahaay usne apne aap ko kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya tha. Woh apni hi pehchaan nahi bata paa raha tha?

Bhavna : Tumhe pata hai tum kyu iska jawaab nahi de paa rahe?

Veer : N-No I don't-

Bhavna : Kyuki tumhe tumhara uddeshya hi nahi pata beta. Jis din tum ye pata laga loge ki tumhara uddeshya kya hai. Tum ye bhi pata loge ki tum kaun ho.

Veer : ...

Bhavna : Subah subah inn baato se tumhare dil ko chot pohuchaane ke liye maaf karna mujhe. Par mujhe yahi samay mila akele me tumse baat karne ke liye.

Veer : N-Nahi! Sorry kehne ki aapko zaroorat nahi. Aap sahi ho. I guess I never got time to think about this.

Bhavna (smiles) : You have time now!

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Bhavna : And me too!

Veer ko apne gaal pe ek narm hatheli mehsoos hui.

'Huhhh!!?'

Veer : Th-Thank you!

Aur uski aankhein namm ho gayi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Jab bhi lage ki koi uljhan hai. Toh bin soche samjhe aa jaana. Mein yahi milungi.

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Woh utha aur baahar jaane ko hua toh ek baar fir Bhavna ne usse pukaarte hue roka,

Bhavna : Ek antim baat yaad rakhna Veer!

Veer : !!

Bhavna : Tumhe paisa banaana hai mere bacche. Paisa tumhe banaaye, aisa na bann jaana.

Veer : Mein yaad rakhunga. Maa!

Bol woh nikal gaya.

***

Raat hui aur kal ki tarah jo nahi hona chahiye tha wahi hua. Tej aur Bhumika ki maun ladaayi.

Hotel se aane ke baad, Bhumika Tej se jab pehli baar mili toh aisa laga jese ye ladki usse abhi jaan se maar degi.

Woh usse ghoorti rahi. Par baato ke maamle me dono ke muh se ek chu tak nahi nikla. Aur ye ghar ke baaki sadasyo ko duwidha me daale hue tha.

Jese tese dinner ke baad sab apne apne kamre me pohuche.

Veer apne kamre ko vyavasthit karne me laga tha jab Tej achanak se uske kamre me aa gayi.

Tej : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Tej (smiles) : Hum saath me hi so rahe hai na?

Veer : Huh?

Tej : T-Tum mere saath nahi sona chaahte?

Veer : Umm! Nahi! Baat wo nahi hai-

Tej : Toh?

Veer : Alright! Aaiye!

Tej muskura ke waapas palti aur bhaagti hui apna kuch zaroori samaan lene chali gayi. Uske poore gaal laal ho rakhe the. Itni himmat karke usne ye pucha tha. Directly baat karna asaan dikhta tha. Par tha nahi. Jo sharm-o-hayaa wo mehsoos kar rahi thi ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Idhar Veer uske jaane se confused reh gaya. Tejal dii aa rahi thi ya nahi? Bhaag kyu gayi? Kya unhe ab nahi sona?

Wahi Shweta apne kamre me apni beti Bhumika ko jhatke pe jhatke dene me lagi hui thi.

Shweta : Ye lo!!! Jao ab jaldi se!

Usne Bhumika ke haatho me uska takiya pakdaate hue kaha.

Bhumika : W-What? Mom?

Wo bechaari asmanjas me reh gayi. Ye uski maa ko achanak se aaj ho kya gaya tha?

Shweta : Aise muh faad ke mat dekho mujhe. Jao jaldi! Kya tumhe apne bhai ke saath nahi sona? Sharm aati hai?

Bhumika : Mom! A-Aapko ye kya ho gaya hai? Achanak se aap-

Shweta : Chup kar! Wo Tejal apne bhai ke saath chipakne me lagi hui hai. Agar tumne ab pahal nahi kari na toh woh Veer ko apni mutthi me kar legi. Chalo ab jaldi! Tum bhi uski behan ho. Unke beech jao! Wese hi tumhari baat Veer se naa ke barabar hi hoti hai. Apne gile shikwe dur karo. Yahi sahi mauka hai. Jao!

Bhumika : M-Mom par-

Par Shweta kaha maan'ne waali thi? Usne Bhumika ko peeth par dhakka deke apne kamre se baahar nikaal diya.

Shweta (smiles) : Good Luck! Khoob chipak ke sona!

Bhumika : E-Ehhhh? Wh-What? Mom?? Mom wait-

*Thud*

Aur darwaaza peeche se band ho gaya.

Bhumika bechain hoti hui Veer ke kamre ke paas pohuchi. Aur darwaaze ki dehleez par aa kar wo khadi Veer ko dekhi jo apne bistar par saaf bedsheet bichhaane me laga hua tha.

Bhumika : V-Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Palat ke Veer ne dekha toh paaya ki uski wo behan uske saamne thi jisne kabhi usse pehchaan'ne se hi mana kar diya tha.

Veer : Ohh!? Aap yaha? Ghar me hi kahi raasta to nahi bhatak gayi?

Bhumika : Mein- woh...!

Sharmindagi se Bhumika ne apna sarr jhuka liya. Veer waapas se bedsheet vyavasthit karne me lag gaya.

Veer : Unless you have some matter, you wouldn't be here, right?

Uski baat sunn woh apne takiye ko kass ke apne seene me daba lii.

Yahi wo pal hote the jinse Bhumika hamesha dur rehna prefer karti thi. Kyuki wo glaani ke bhaar ko sambhaalne me behad hi kacchi thi. Ek naazuk eet ki tarah thi woh jispar glaani ki poori imaarat dabaav daale hue thi.

Na jaane... Kab toot ke bikhar jaaye.

Shayad Veer se zyada baat na hona hi ek kaaran tha jo ab tak usse tootne se bachaaye hue tha.

Uski aankhein apne aap dhundhli ho chali.

Bhumika : M-Mein kuch kehna chaahti hu.

Veer : Hmm?

Bhumika : M-Mera iraada kabhi bhi tumhare dil ko thes pohuchana nahi tha Veer. Meri baato ka... I... I know tum meri baat ka vishvaas nahi karoge. Jo kuch bhi mene kiya. Wo jaan boojh ke nahi kiya tha. Aur agar majboori me bhi tha. Toh- Toh uski zimmedar hamesha mein khud hi rahungi.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : Tumne jo kuch bhi mere aur Mom ke liye kiya uske liye 'thank you' shabd bhi ab mazaak jesa lagta hai. Koi bhi insaan itna hone ke baad aisa nahi kar sakta jo tumne kiya hai. And I acknowledge it.

Veer : ...

Bhumika : But apart from regret, I don't know what to do. Sh-Shayad... Yahi meri destiny hai? Jeevan bhar repent karna. Ehsaas karte rehna ki kitni zyaadti ki hai hum maa beti ne tumhare upar. Aur-

Veer : Come in!

Bhumika : Huh!???

Achanak Veer ke shabd sunn, Bhumika bhauchakki reh gayi. Uska badan hil gaya.

Veer apni peeth uski orr kiye tha toh uske chehre par iss waqt kya haav bhaav the ye woh dekh na saki.

Veer (turns) : I said come in!

Bhumika ne ek gehri lambi saans lii. Dil uska zorro se dhadak raha tha. Kya uska bhai gusse me tha? Kya woh kuch usse sunaane waala tha? Aise tamaam vichaar uske mann me ek shan me aake guzar gaye.

Ghabrahat ko saath liye woh aage badhi. Ye soch ke ki Veer jo kuch bhi karega woh uska virodh nahi karegi. Kyuki galti hamesha se uski hi rahi hai.

Par Veer ne aisa kuch bhi na kiya,

Veer : Now say! Kyu aayi ho aap yaha?

Sawaal sunn Bhumika ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Woh jo soch rahi thi wesa kuch bhi nahi tha.

Bhumika : Mein-

Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm!

Bhumika : C-Can-

Veer : Yeah!?

Bhumika (blushes) : C-Can I sleep with you?

Usne tapaak se bol diya. Par fauran hi waapas se niraasha uske chehre par jhalki,

Bhumika : N-No! Forget what I just said. Mein... Mein chalti hu.

Mudke ek qadam hi aage badhaya tha ki,

Veer : Wait!

Bhumika (turns) : ??

Veer : Aaj achanak se kyu aapko mere saath sona hai?

Kaash koi bil hota, jisme Bhumika apna sarr de paati. Jo hayaa woh abhi mehsoos kar rahi thi woh aseem thi.

Bhumika : W-Woh... Woh Ragini bhabhi ne apna room tumhari mom ko diya hai. Aur Suman aunty meri mom ke kamre me soyengi unke saath. Toh isliye shayad unhone mujhe yaha-

Ye Bhumika ka logic tha. Par asal baat toh kuch aur hi thi.

Veer ka khayaal turant hi iss ghatna ko anjaam dene waali mahila par gaya.

'I knew it. It was her indeed!'

Shweta!!!

Bhumika : I'm- I'm sorry! Mein chalti hu.

Veer : Aap so sakti ho.

Bhumika : Huhhh!!!???

Veer : Mene kaha aap so sakti ho.

Usne nazre ferrte hue jawaab diya. Pehle wo mana karne wala tha par uski Teju dii bina koi confirmation diye bhaag gayi thi toh mana karne ka koi reason hi nahi tha Veer ke paas.

Veer ki qismat aksar uske mazze liya karti thi. Aaj bhi wahi hua. Yaha usne Bhumika ko manzoori dii aur waha se Tej apna zaroori samaan haatho me liye daudti hui uske kamre me aa dhamki.

Tej : Aa gayi mein... Hmm!!!??

Ab manzar kuch aisa tha ki teeno ek dusre ko hairaani me dekh rahe the.

*Silence*

'Shit!!!'

Jab se Bhumika aur Tej aapas me mili thi. Tab se hi dono ke beech ek adrishya takraav janm le chuka tha. Tej ne Bhumika ke saath wesa bartaav toh nahi kiya jesa usne Shweta ke sang kiya tha par dono me dosti bhi nahi thi. Nazro se nazre hi takraati thi bas aur ek khamoshi fel jaati thi.

Tej (frowns) : Why is she here?

Kamaal ki baat ye thi ki Bhumika Tej se umr me badi thi. Uske baad bhi Tej kahi se bhi kamzor prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Ulta woh Bhumika par haavi hi nazar aati thi.

Veer : Mujhe laga aap chali gayi. Aur inhe bhi mere saath sona tha toh-

Tej (suprised) : Aur tumne haan keh diya?

Veer : Why won't I?

Tej : That-

Woh maun reh gayi. Haan keh diya toh usme kya? Tej ye baat bhul rahi thi ki Bhumika Veer ke sang kayi mahino se reh rahi thi. Wahi usse toh abhi kuch hi din hue the apne bhai ke aas paas rehte hue.

Tej (smiles) : Theek hai! Toh mein beech me soungi.

Woh muskuraayi. Jo asal me ek muskuraahat nahi thi. Tarqeeb lagayi thi usne. Zaahir hai aisa karne se Veer fir Bhumika ke bagal se nahi so payega.

Bhumika : N-No! V-Veer ko beech me sona chahiye.

Veer : Of course I will. Warna na jaane kya hoyega aap dono ke beech.

Tej : You-!!!!

Be-mann se Tej Veer ke daayi orr laiti toh wahi Bhumika uske baayi orr. Ek ajeeb sa sannaata chhaaya hua tha. Kamra awkwardness se bhar gaya.

Dono behno ke bagal se laite Veer unke badan ki mehak ko soongh paa raha tha. Usne apni aankhein band kar lii.

Tej apni chot ka bahaana kar Veer ki taraf mudi aur uske seene par apna haath rakh dii. Kitni mazboot chhaathi thi. Usse mehsoos ho raha tha. Woh pal yaad aaya jab usne pehli baar Veer ko bina shirt ke dekha tha. Fir woh pal jab Shyaam ke ghar me woh washroom se nikla tha.

'Kya abhi bhi wahi khusbhu-!?'

Mann me ek vichaar aaya uske. Aage badh usne Veer ki gardan ke sameep apna chehra kiya aur,

*sniff*

'Ahhh!!!'

Ye wahi khushbu thi. Tej ko na jaane andar se kya hua par uski pakad Veer ki chaathi par mazboot ho gayi.

Usne apni ek taang utha ke Veer ki tango par chadhaayi. Aur chipke chipke wo uss khushboo ko punaah sunghne me lag gayi.

'What- What is this fragrance? *sniff* It's so good!!!'

Idhar Bhumika bhi badi himmat karke veer ke seene par haath rakhi. Par Tej jo lagataar haath firaaye jaa rahi thi, uska haath Bhumika ke haath se takra gaya.

Dono behno ko ek jhatka laga aur dono hi ek dusre ko dekhi.

Gusse me aake Tej ne Bhumika ka haath pakad seedha Veer ke seene se alag kar diya. Aur khud chipak gayi.

Bhumika : !!??

Ek kheecha taani shuru hui. Bhumika lagataar koshish kar kar ke apne haath perr Veer par jamaati aur Tej baar baar Bhumika ke haath aur perr ko pakad ke unhe hata deti. Ye bin awaaz ki ladaayi kayi minto tak chalti gayi.

Aam taur par Veer ko aankh kholne par upar ki ceiling nazar aani chahiye thi. Parantu usse abhi do haath aapas me ladte hue dikhaayi de rahe the jo kisi billiyo ki haathapaayi se kam nahi tha.

Aur agle hi shan,

*Thucccccckkkkkkkk*

*Thuuuuccckkkkkk*

"Ahhhhhnnnn!"

"Nnnn~"

Usne uth ke apne takiye se dono ke sarr par tapli de maari.

Tej : K-Kyu?

Veer : Ab agar aap dono chup chaap soyi nahi na. Toh dono room ke baahar hongi.

Tej apne honth daato tale dabaaye chaadar ke andar dubak ke ghus gayi. Toh wahi Bhumika ne apne perr sikod aankhein band kar lii.

Ek raahat ki saas lete hue Veer fir soya.

Lekin raat ke 2 baje ye uski gardan ko kaun chaba raha tha?

'Huhhh!?'

Neend khuli toh nazara dekh wo hakka bakka reh gaya. Uske upar Bhumika laiti hui thi. Usse kass ke jakde wo uski gardan hontho se chabaane me lagi hui thi.

Uski laar behke Veer ke seene tak behti chali gayi. Jis vajah se Veer ki neend khul gayi.

'What the fuck!!!?'

Bhumika poori tarah se neend me thi. Uske sudol uroj Veer ki seene se kass ke dabe hue the.

'Wait! Ye toh... Ye toh neend me hai completely.'

Veer : Hey!!! Hey!! Bhumika dii!?

Par uske jhunjhlaane par bhi Bhumika na uthi. Na jaane kya bad-badaaye jaa rahi thi.

Usse side me waapas lita ke jab Veer dobaara apni position pe aaya toh Bhumika fir chipak gayi.

'Ek minute! Don't tell me... Inko... Inko bimaari hai iski. Neend me idhar udhar hone ki aadat!? Toh Shweta ne isliye...!? Shit!!!! What is she trying to achieve?'

Par achanak se,

"Mamma mat karo na... Veer ko..."

Veer chuppi saadhe Bhumika me chehre ko dekhta raha. Kya woh sapne me bhi glaani ki neeche dabi hui thi?

Paas se dekhne par usse ek ye bhi ehsaas hua ki Bhumika sach me kitni sundar thi.

Dono Tej aur Bhumika ko apne se laga ke woh so gaya.

Agar wo anjaan shaks usse maarne aa raha tha toh aaye. Apne parivaar ko wo kuch nahi hone dega. Wo taiyaar rahega.

'Come at me then!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Crimson arc shuru ho gaya hai. 2-3 updates aise slow jayenge aur uske baad arc ka main plot pace pakdega. Meri tabiyat abhi kharaab hi hai. Toh schedule upar neeche ho sakta hai uska dhyaan rakhiyega. Baaki likes thok ke jaane ka aur apne revos rakhne ka. Pata hai na!?

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Wonderful update 💐💐💐👍
 

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yaha kisi writer ko kisi prakar ki koi dhanrashi nahi milti or way apne kaam se Samy nikalkar story likhte hai unka bhi koi life hota hai jis prakar tum yaha story padne aayi ho usi prakar mere jaise vele ka bhi hal hai kam se kam update to aata hi hai na dusre writer ki tarah bich me close to nahi karte na
update de diya karo Werewolf bhaya is lakdi k jaisa humara bhi yahi hal hai
itna Gyan pel diya aaj ka quota pura hua
Comment krne se pehle mene jo likha he agr wo aapne apne hosh me rehte huye pdha hota to ye likhne ki jrurt hi ni pdhti apko....
 
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Wait a bit at least!!

Update abhi tak isliye nahi aaya hai kyuki ek scene mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha usse best way me dikhaaya kaise jaaye. Harr writers updates likhte samay kisi na kisi waqt ye problem face karte hi hai. Jab ek stoppage sa lag jaata hai. Samajh nahi aata ki uss drishya ko dikhaaya kaise jaaye. Mere saath bhi hota hai aur wahi hua bhi hai. Writers inn baato ko bataate nahi hai kyuki woh aksar inhe hide karke rakhte hai. Par harr writer iss hurdle se kabhi na kabhi guzarta hi hai. Mein nahi chaahta plot ke baahar kahani bhatak jaaye. Aur isliye samay leta hu.

Ussi cheez par kaam chal raha hai. Jald hi update aa jayega.
Agree 👍


Intezar rehega agle update ka
 
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Bilkul shi....me newly is story ko read kr rhi hu...bt last kucj update me.dekha h k jb b tomorrow update ka btaya jata h usk nxt day hi ata h...agr busy schedule h to long break le lo....chahe week me 1 update do..bt jis din de skte ho us din ka bta diya kro...taki hm usi din visit kre...bich m mag kr k apko preshan n kre...n hi hm preshan ho...


Apki story kafi achi h...isliye sbko update ka besbri se intjar rehta h...i know daily life, job, family me likhne k liye time ni milta...na hi yha koi paiso mr koi payment ki jati h....bt ek scche writer ki real payment money ni uske readers ka uski story, uski lekhni k prti judav, pyar ho hota h....jo yha is story ko sb readers ki trf se dil khol k pyar mil rha h...

So readers and writers dono ko ek dusre ki feeling ka khayal rkhna chahiye.... readers update k piche jyada n pde...writer ko time de...to whi writer b jis din de skta h update usi din ka time btayae...
Satya Vachan Shree mati ji
 

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चल ना बे गवार,
पहले अच्छे से पढ़ना सीख, फिर पूरा कमेंट पढ़ना सीख उसके बाद कहानी पढ़ना
और अच्छे से दिख रहा है की बिना बात के कौन ज्ञान पेल रहा है
Ab is ❤️day ko suddh vachno ka prayog Karuga to xforum wale mere account k loude lagayenge ab kya bolun sale ko pahle bhi to likha tha jo ho gya so ho gya
Ab aund gand brambhand ka gyan na de. yaha padne aaya hai na ki research karne lodu apne kam se kam rakh. Or is font colour ko koi to ban karo yar har dura londa yahi use kar raha hai ab dark mode me nahi dikhta kuchh
 
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Ab is ❤️day ko suddh vachno ka prayog Karuga to xforum wale mere account k loude lagayenge ab kya bolun sale ko pahle bhi to likha tha jo ho gya so ho gya
Ab aund gand brambhand ka gyan na de. yaha padne aaya hai na ki research karne lodu apne kam se kam rakh. Or is font colour ko koi to ban karo yar har dura londa yahi use kar raha hai ab dark mode me nahi dikhta kuchh
घनश्याम मरवाले बाबू तुम xforum छोड़ो पहले आंख का इलाज कराओ, ना तो तुमको पढ़ने आता है और ना तुमको दिखाई दे रहा लेकिन ज्ञान पूरा पेल रहे हो की किसको क्या comment करना है कैसे करना है
अगर तु अपने काम से काम रखते तो इतना सुनना ही नही पड़ता,

इसलिए पढ़ और स्टोरी अच्छी लगी तो revo दे और चुपचाप निकल, दूसरे रीडर्स क्या कर रहे क्या लिख रहे है उस से तेरा कोई लेना देना नही क्योंकि न तो तू इस कहानी का writer है ना ही xforum का एडमिन

और अंधा है क्या बहन के ❣️डे , खुद को दिखाई नही दे रहा है और ऊपर से कलर को ही ban करने को बोल रहा है,
अपने आंख का इलाज करवा
 
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