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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 13.1%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,440

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Update - 112 ~ External Affairs
Ab tak...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'


Ab aage...

"Toh? Kaha the tum itne din? Mein tumhare ghar pe bhi ek din gaya tha. Bhabhi jii ne bataya tha ki tum Las Vegas me ho? Really? Ghoomna tha toh ek baar puch toh lete mujhse? Maybe I would have joined you!? Ya mein kuch aur interesting places suggest kar deta. Seriously tum-"

Awaaz thi Karan kii, jo apni car drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha Veer.

Veer : Tum jesa soch rahe ho wesa kuch bhi nahi hai. Bas kaam se gaya tha.

Karan : Ohh really now? Kesa kaam? Wait! Tumhe Las Vegas me kya kaam pad gaya?

Veer (sighs) : Miss Suhana ke saath tha mein. Unhe kaam tha. Aur woh mujhe business related tour par leke gayi thi. Taaki mein business ke baare me aur jaan saku. Ab khush?

Veer ne Suhana ke injured state ki baat ko chhipaate hue kaha.

Karan : Whaaatttt? Miss Suhana? Sonia dii ki badi behan? Huh!!? W-Wait!! Veer!? Are you... Are you into older girls?

Veer : Shut up! Keep driving!

Karan : Ahem! Well, tum koi bhi baat share kar sakte ho, you know. I'm good at keeping secrets and-

Veer : Keep driving!!!

Karan : Ugh! Fine! Nahi batana toh mat batao. Although, koi bhi believe nahi karega ki tum Miss Suhana ke saath business tour par gaye the. Woh aur tumhe leke jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Given her personality, she won't even let-

Veer : KARAN!!??

Karan : F-Fine...! Fine! Chala raha hu. I won't talk now. Wese!?

Veer : Firse!?

Karan : Nahi woh baat nahi kar raha mein. Mein bas curious tha uss din ko lekar. I mean... You know... Tumne uss steel industries par stock investment kii. Mene tumhe roka tha par baad me shares ke rate ussi ke sabse upar gaye. Kese!?

Veer (smiles) : Just my hunch!?

Karan : Oh come on! Pehli hi baar me itna accha tukka nahi lagta. Tell me! Tumhe kese pata chala tha ki woh company dubegi nahi? You saw it coming right?

Veer (smiles) : Well! Ye ek secret hai!

Karan (sighs) : Aur jo tum kabhi nahi bataoge!

Veer (smiles) : Exactly!

Karan : Mujhe laga hi tha. Kherr! Here we are!

Gaadi se utarte hue dono ek badi sii building ke andar pravesh kiye.

Karan : Tum jo bhi chaahte ho yaha sab ho jayega. Don't worry! Yaha sab mujhe acche se jaante hai. Aur tumhara kaam boht acche se kar denge woh. Iski guarantee meri.

Veer : Hmm!

Karan ne Veer ki mulaqaat ek aadmi se karaayi. Veer jaha tha sirf wahi nahi reh sakta tha zindagi bhar. Usse kam samay me jald se jald aage badhna tha.

Aur paisa, ek aham bhumika nibhaata hai samaaj me. Ye baat Veer bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Chef on wheels ke liye usne kuch naye changes kiye the. Usse aur upar uthaane ke liye, Veer ne total 8 food trucks ka ek set up taiyaar kiya tha.

Ye jagah jagah Mumbai me apni ek chain chala ke naam banaane ke liye tha. Uske paas abhi karodo rupaye the. Investment me usne koi kami nahi jaane dii.

Food serving ke dauraan usne choti se choti cheezo par dhyaan diya. Chef on wheels ke naam se hi napkins, plates, spoons ho ya kuch aur, sabhi me uske food truck ki Branding logo ke saath kari gayi.

Aur inn sab ke production ke liye hi Karan usse yaha iss aadmi ke paas laaya tha. Deal pakki ho jaane ke baad dono hi waha se chal diye. Manorath ki taraf se jo flats usse mile the, Veer ne unhe bhi rent par daal diye the. Woh ek hi saath alag alag jagah par focus rakhe hue tha. Earnings jaha se jitni bhi aa sake abhi, wahi boht tha.

Karan : Toh!? Isse tum aage aur bada banaana chaahte ho?

Veer : Of course! Ek baar ye enough popular ho jaaye toh hotel ke baare me socha hai. Funding boht lagegi.

Karan : Yeah! Wese mujhe gin sakte ho. I can be an invester too.

Veer : Hmm? Really?

Karan : Of course! Thoda boht mein invest kar hi dunga. But... Mere khyaal se tumhe dii se baat karni chahiye. Kyuki woh tumhe zyada investment provide kar sakti hai. She controls much bigger deals than me.

Veer : Toh kya abhi baat ho sakti hai?

Karan : Sure! Wese bhi woh mujhse kuch din pehle keh rahi thi.

Veer : Kya!?

Karan : She told me that... "Veer should let me know always where he's going. He should text me and call me."

Veer : Ahem! Well!! Let's go! Mein khud hi unse baat karta hu.

Abhi woh dono jaa hi rahe the ki Veer ke phone par Kavya ka call aa dhamka,

Veer : Bolo Kavya!

Kavya : Aap laut aaye!?? Aap laut aaye aur aapne bataaya bhi nahi bhaiya?? Mujhe abhi abhi bhabhi se pata chala.

Veer : Kal hi aaya hu meri maa! Saas toh lene de. Wese tum kaha ho?

Kavya : Obviously college me houngi na! Par woh sab chorriye. Aap bataiye aap kaha hai?

Veer : Mein filhaal kaam se ba--

Kavya : Wonderful! Toh mein aur Arohi dii! Oye Kritika? Tu jaldi leave lekar chal rahi hai kya? Chal na pagli! Veer bhaiya rahenge yaar aur kya...! Ek toh free ka thoosne mil raha hai aur nakhre kar rahi ho. Haan kuch nahi bolengi aunty. Unhe bataega hi kaun? Chal rahi hai na? Arohi dii bhi hai na yaar! Okay! Haan na baba! Hmm~ Hello? Hello?? Haan bhaiya! Mein, Arohi dii, aur Kritika, hum teeno hi yaha se nikal ke xxxxxxx cafe par jaa rahe hai. Aur aap wahi mil rahe ho hume. Okay!?

Veer : H-Hey! Kaavvyaaa!! W-Wait! Kavya mene kaha ki mein baahar--

Kavya : Thank you so much Bhaiya! B-Bye Mmmuuaaah~

*Call ends*

Kavya ne Veer ki baat sune bina hi apni baat poori rakh ke meeting bhi set kar lii. Veer bechara bas apna phone hi dekhta reh gaya. Kuch kaamo me ladkiya kitni aage hua karti thi.

Veer (smiles) : Ye ladki bhi poori cartoon hai!

Karan : Toh? Ab kaha chalna hai?

Veer : xxxxxxx Square lelo!

Karan : Huh!? Waha kyu? Waha kya hai?

Veer : Sonali!

Karan : Ohh!

Aur bina kuch sawaal kiye Karan ne gaadi ghuma ke uss chauraahe par laga dii.

Chef on wheels ka ek shandaar red truck wahi chauraahe ke paas ek jagah khada hua tha. Baahar kuch 2-3 customers the jo fast food ka lutf le rahe the.

Veer jese hi car se utar food truck ke paas pohucha, andar se hi Sonali ne usse aate hue dekh liya,

Sonali : Aaiye! Aaiye! Padhaariye! Maharaaj! Aaj kese yaad aa gayi aapko apni iss gaadi ki?? Kisi ne khabar dii kya ki aapka ek business bhi hai? Jisse poora ek sadhaaran sii ladki kasht utha utha ke sambhaal rahi hai?

Karan : Okay! She looks pissed!

Veer halke se muskuraaya. Woh jaanta tha Sonali kuch aisa hi react karne waali thi.

Veer : Ek kaam hai.

Sonali : Mein bataati hu kya hoga. Ek aur naya truck! Hai na?

Veer (smiles) : Total 8 rahenge. Isko aur baakiyo ko include kar ke!

Sonali : Kya kaha? Mere kaan toh nahi bajj rahe na? Oye! Kya tum logo ne bhi wahi suna jo mein sunn rahi hu?

Woh truck me maujood kaam kar rahe waale apne sehkarmiyo se boli, uska ye andaaz Veer ko pata nahi kyu bada lubha raha tha. Yahi ek ladki thi jo uss se iss andaaz me baat karti thi. Aur asal me kitna hi kyu na woh Veer ko bura bhala keh le. Veer ko iss par kabhi gussa aata hi nahi tha. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ki andar se Sonali ke mann me uske prati koi mel nahi tha.

Woh bas muskuraate hue uski harr adaao ko dekh raha tha.

Sonali : Dekh rahe ho tumlog? Ye jo khada hai tumhaare saamne itna sajj dhaj ke. Haan haan yahi ladka. Arre yahi hai saare trucko ka maalik. Ye sab issi ki tarqeebe hai. Aur mujh jesi jawaan sundar ladki ko dekho toh kin kaamo me lagaaya hua hai.

Karan (smiles) : Haha~

Peeche khade workers bhi Veer ko sharmindagi se dekhne lage. Woh ye baat kese bhul sakte the ki Veer hi food truck aur chef on wheels ka owner tha.

Veer : Ye kya baat hui!? Mein toh tumhare liye khushkhabri leke aaya tha. Aur tum ho ki sunn'na hi nahi chaahti.

Sonali : Mein jaanti hu kya khushkhabri hogi. Na baba na! Tum jao yaha se. Wese hi mere upar itni badi zimmedaari thop ke rakhe ho. Subah se shaam isme sarr khapao, aur fir ghar jaa ke Maa se daant khao. Nahi nahi! Tum abhi ke abhi jao. Mujhe koi baat nahi sunn'ni hai. Harr mahine ki tarah iss mahine bhi saare kamaaye paise ki lambi parchi mil jayegi tumhe. Ab jao! Aur mujhe apna kaam karne do!

Veer bina kuch kahe truck ke andar aaya aur usne ishaara kiya, toh andar maujood workers uski baat fauran samajh ke baahar nikal gaye.

Woh ahista se chalte hue Sonali ke qareeb aaya toh woh fir bhadak uthi,

Sonali : Mene kaha na tum jao. Mein kaam kar rahi hu aur-

Veer : Tumhe ab ye kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi!

Uske itna kehte hi Sonali ka muh band ho gaya.

Sonali : !!??

Veer (smiles) : Mene kaha ki tumhe ab kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi! Tum padhna chaahti thi na? Mein tumhe iss kaam se azaad karta hu. Nidhi ma'am se baat karke tumhaare liye mein padhaayi ka kuch prabandh karta hu. Ab se tumhe ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!

Veer ne keh toh diya tha. Aur Sonali bhi kab se yahi chaahti thi. Par...

Ab jab achanak se usse ye praapt hua. Bechaari kuch keh na paayi. Ab kahi na kahi usse itne din iss kaam me lage hone se ek lagaav sa ho gaya tha. Logo ko apne haatho se bana kuch khila ke unke chehre par jab woh khushi dekhti thi, ya jab koi uske paas aake business ki tareef karta tha, toh Sonali ka dil khush ho jaata tha.

Bhale hi business Veer ka tha. Par usse aisa mehsoos hota tha ki woh bhi ek hissa hi hai inn sab ka.

Lekin ab jab jo usse chaahiye tha woh usse pesh kiya gaya toh,

Woh maun pad gayi.

Sonali: Mein...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : Hahaha~ Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha ki mein kya karu. Mein-

Veer ne aage badh uske kandhe par haath rakha,

Veer : Chinta mat karo. Jo tum chaahti thi. Woh ab tumhare saamne hai. Aage badho aur sweekaar karo. Business ki chinta chorr do. Workers kaafi hai.

Sonali : Fir bhi... Kya woh mere bagerr sab..

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Tension mat lo. Sab sahi ho jayega. Toh mein padhayi ke liye haan samjhu na?

Sonali : Mujhe sach me kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Mein padhna chaahti hu. Waqai! P-Par...

Veer : Toh bas fir! Aaj se tum padhogi!

Woh itna bol waha se palta ki itne me peeche se Sonali ki badi dheemi aur kamzor sii awaaz uske kaano me padi,

Sonali : S-Suno...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : T-Tum... Tum itne bure bhi nahi ho.

Veer muskuraaya,

Sonali : Th-Thank you!

Aur bas ek haami bhar woh waha se ravaana ho gaya. Sonali ka path decide ho chuka tha.

Car me baithe baithe hi uski baate Pari se bhi hoti jaa rahi thi.

[Master! Rajat se hi pehle deal karna better hoga.]

'Aisa kyu Pari? Mein ye daave ke saath keh sakta hu ki mera pyaara aasteen ka saanp bhai bhi abhi kahi na kahi koi saazish rach hi raha hoga mere khilaaf.'

[Hmm! See! Rajat ko ek baar deal karne se aap Nidhi ma'am ke liye saare potential dangers ko dur kar denge. Hume uss ghar me kisi khatre ke hone ki fiqr karne ki zaroorat nahi fir.]

'And!?'

[And I believe ki Pranjal ke saath deal karne ke baad bhi, koi aur bhi hamaare haath se chooth raha hai.]

'Tumhara matlab hai koi usse back-up de raha hai?'

[Exactly Master! Mujhe nahi lagta uss ghochu ne hi sab kuch akele kiya hai. There's something else going on here too. I have this feeling. Something much bigger is lurking in the shadows. I bet woh kisi ke back up ki wajah se hi itna ucchal raha hai. And we have only one task. And that is-]

'To destroy that back up!!!!'

[YES!]

'I see!'

[Aur isliye hum uss se baad me deal karenge. Because he isn't alone. Let's start with the easiest one Master! Rajat is the best choice to launch our attack.]

'Indeed! Rajat se deal karna asaan hoga.'

[Also, uski abhi ke harqat ke baad aap usse kese jaane de sakte ho?]

'Yeah! Suman ko bhi mujhe punishment deni hai.'

[Aur aap Rajat ko diye apne 50 lakh kese bhul sakte ho?]

'Ohh! Don't worry! Vasoolna, mujhe boht acche se aata hai Pari!'

[Yes! So let's focus on Rajat first.]

'Hmm!'

Karan : H-Hey!

Veer : Haan?

Karan : Mein keh raha tha ki ab toh kaam khatam hai na? So? Ab? Tumhe ghar drop karna hai ya tum dii se miloge?

Veer : Gaadi xxxxxx square laga lo.

Karan : Ehh? Woh toh ulti side hai. Waha kyu?

Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh aur Arohi dii milna chaahti hai.

Karan : Okay! Dusre shabdo me, mera waha koi kaam nahi hai. Hai na? Toh mein tumhe drop kar ke waha se nikal-

Veer : Kritika bhi aa rahi hai.

Karan : -Niklunga nahi. Mene kaha ki mein drop karke waha se niklunga nahi. You heard me!? Just for you okay!?

Woh bina Veer se nazre milaaye bola. Aur Veer uski ye harqat par mand mand muskuraaya.

Jab dono uss cafe me pohuche, toh cafe ke andar maujood log sab unhi ko ghoorne me lage hue the.

Ek toh Karan ki limited edition ki Mercedes, upar se dono ke high class kapde. Cafe me maujood adhiktar couples ki nazre Veer aur Karan par hi tiki hui thi.

Aur unhi me se ek table ke ird gird baithi hui thi Kavya, Arohi aur Kritika jo wahi se unhe haath hilaate hue bula rahi thi.

Karan ki nazre ek pal me hi Kritika par jaa kar tiki aur usse dekhte hi ek jhurjhuri sii uske shareer me daud gayi. Yahi haal Kritika ka bhi tha.

Veer se toh woh thi hi attracted. Par jese woh jaanti thi ki Veer ke saath uska kaata bhidna mushqil tha. Jis kaaran se uska rujhaan dheere dheere Karan ki orr hona shuru hua.

Aur ab Karan uski nazro me ek ideal ladko me se ek bann chuka tha.

Kayi baar toh woh khud ki kismat par hi hairaan reh jaati thi. Karan jesa ladka, uss se baat karne ke liye aatur ho raha tha. Kya hi kahe iss baare me ab toh.

Wahi veer ki nigaaho ne bhi apni dono behno ko dhundh liya tha.

Jese hi Veer unke paas aaya, Kavya apni kursi se uth jhatt se Veer ke gale lag gayi.

Arohi ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhi khud ka na rok paayi aur Veer se gale mil woh apni seat par baith gayi. Halaki uski hug ki time limit Kavya ke muqaable behad hi kam thi. Probably 1 se 2 second ki hi thi uski hug.

Kavya : Aap bhi aaye ho haan? Kese yaad aa gayi aaj?

Karan : Ab please yaar firse taang kheechna mat shuru kar dena.

Arohi : *smiles*

Kritika : M-Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap bhi aa rahe ho.

Karan : Haan! Woh actually mein haha~ Woh-

Veer : Aa nahi raha tha. Par tumhara naam sunn ke bhaaga chala aaya.

Kritika : !!!?????

Karan : Wh-What? Ahahaha~ Arre ni ni! M-Mein toh bas-

Kritika (blushes) : Wese, accha kiya aap aa gaye.

Karan : O-Ohh!

Kavya : Huh!? Ye aap dono ke beech kya chal raha hai?

Kritika (blushes) : Order do na tum! Mujhe le aayi zabardasti. Ab kuch khilwaogi nahi kya?

Kavya : Aaj Veer bhaiya denge na party. Kyu? Bhaiya? Aap khilwa rahe ho na hume?

Veer : Of course! Of course! Meri choti behan jo khaana chaahegi woh milega usse. Aaj party meri orr se.

Kavya ne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal noche aur boli,

Kavya : Hehehe~ Ye hui na baat! I love you~

Arohi : Tum itne din kyu the baahar Veer?

Veer : Work dii! Work! Samajh lijiye business related tour tha. Yaha se waha hote rahe bas.

Arohi : Okay!

Veer : Aap teeno seedhe college se yaha!?

Arohi : Mmm~ Kavya ko jab pata chala ki tum kal hi laut chuke ho toh woh tumse milne ke liye zidd karne lagi. Aur mujhe bhi shaamil kar liya.

Veer : Kya aapko nahi milna tha mujhse?

Arohi : Ah! O-Of course! *blushes* Mujhe bhi milna tha. Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai? Aur tum college kyu nahi aate?

Veer : Sirf exams dene jaunga!

Arohi : Aisa karoge toh dikkat jaengi. Internal marks teachers ke haath me hote hai Veer. Agar unse acchi bana ke nahi rakhoge toh woh low marks de denge.

Veer (smiles) : Meri class teacher hi Nidhi ma'am hai.

Arohi : Ahhn! That's... Par fir bhi Veer. College aaya karo. At least thodi derr ke liye hi aao. Par aaya karo.

Veer : I'll try!

Kavya aur Kritika menu pakad wahi order karne me lag gayi. Idhar beech beech me Kritika aur Karan ke nain matakka chal rahe the. Toh wahi saamne baithi Kavya Veer ko pal pal uski aankho me dekhti.

Baatein toh woh Kritika se kar rahi thi par table ke neeche uska perr Veer ki jaangh par tha. Aur Veer bina koi aapatti jataaye Kavya ke makhmali perro par apne haath ahista ahista ferrne laga. Toh kabhi unhe halke haath se dabaata. Jiske badle me Kavya ke labo par ek muskaan sajj jaati.

Khaana peena jese hi hua, Kavya ne apna naya plan patak diya,

Kavya : Okay! Toh ab hum chal rahe hai movie!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mujhe ek zaroori kaam hai. Mein nahi rahunga!

Kavya : Whaaaatttt!?? Noooooooooo! Bhaiyaaaaa! Aap se toh sabse zyada umeed thi aur aapne...

Veer : Kavyaaaa!

Kavya : Jao nahi baat karni aap se. Jab dekho tab kaam kaam kaam! Kabhi humaare saath ek night out bhi nahi kiya hoga aapne. Kabhi ghume bhi nahi hoge hamare saath raat me. Jao! Hmph~

Arohi : You go! I'll handle her!

Veer (smiles) : Thank god! Aap na ho, toh mera kya ho!

Arohi (blushes) : Dumbo! Go now!

Kavya : Hmph! Jao jao! Mujhe aap se ab baat nahi karni!

Veer : What about you?

Karan : Yeah! Well sure! Mein tumhe drop kar deta hu.

Veer : Nahi! Tum carry on karo. Mein chala jaunga. Don't worry!

Aur unhe wahi chorr veer waha se nikal aaya.

Karan ki baatein Kritika se acchi khaasi ho rahi thi. Aise me Veer usse disturb nahi karna chaahta tha. Aur Kavya ka kya tha? Aaj woh I hate you bol rahi thi. Kal sabse pehla call ussi ka aane wala tha Veer ko.

Veer jab ghar pohucha toh hall me ghuste hi Ragini bhaagti hui uske paas aayi,

Woh abhi awaaz lagaane hi waala tha ki Ragini ne aake uske hontho par ungli rakh usse rok diya.

Ragini : Ssshhhhhhh!!!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Ragini : Mene Suman jii aur Tai jii ko bhej diya hai baahar.

Veer : Kaha?

Ragini (smiles) : Shopping pe. Aur kaha!?

Veer : Aap behad excited lag rahi ho.

Ragini : Ohh of course! Kyu nahi rahungi? After all... Saath me tum rahoge!

Usne aankho me aankhein daalte hue kaha,

Veer : Ahem! So?

Ragini : Bas! Mein ready hi hu. Tum jaldi se change kar lo. Mene Aabha ko upar TV me movie laga ke dii hai. Ghar par wahi rahegi. Aur tum aur mein-

Veer (smiles) : Mein aata hu change kar ke.

Ragini : Jaldi aana!! I'm waiting ~

Veer jab ready hoke aaya toh Ragini uske sameep aake uski t shirt par jhatkaarte hue usse check karne lagi. Sab kuch sahi tha ya nahi! Woh muskuraayi aur aage aake usne ek chumban Veer ke gaal par de diya.

Ragini : Chalo! Iss se pehle ki koi aa jaaye. Tum nahi jaante mene kal raat kese kaati hai Veer!

Veer ne apni bike nikaali toh Ragini kisi bel ki tarah peeche baith ke uss se lipat gayi. Usne saree hi pehni hui thi.

Veer : Aapko saree me dekh accha laga bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi nahi Veer! Bhabhi nahi! Mein Vivek ki patni nahi hu ab. Ragini bulao! K-Kaho na Veer! Ragini! Mera naam lo! Lo na naam Veer!

Veer asmanjas me pad gaya tha. Ragini uss se lagbhag 8 saal badi thi. Kherr jab ab woh Suman ko naam se bulaata tha toh Ragini ko bulaane me koi samasya nahi jaani chahiye thi.

Veer : Ragini!

Uske muh se nikla hi tha ki Ragini ka poora badan kaanp utha. Uski ungliya zorr se Veer ke kandhe par kass gayi.

Ragini : Ek baar aur...! P-Please!

Veer : Ragini!!!

Ragini : Ohh Veer!!!!

Woh zorr se apne stano ko uski peeth par gaadte hue uss se chipak gayi.

*Vrroooommmmmm*

Dono ghar se nikle apne iss Suhaane safar ke liye. Kitne dino baad aaj dono akele the. Hastakshep karne wala ab koi nahi tha. Chenn se dono ek dusre ko mehsoos ksr sakte the.

Mumbai ke beaches me bheed na ho aisa kese ho sakta tha? Ye Goa nahi tha.

Veer aur Ragini haatho me haath thaame samundar kinaare ret par chal rahe the. Samudr ka thanda paani harr lehar ke saath aake unke perro ko bhigota aur waapas chala jaata.

Dono yu hi chalte rahe. Dono me se koi kuch nahi keh raha tha. Aas paas ke jitne bhi log unhe dekh rahe the, woh unn dono ko newly married couple hi samajh rahe the.

Kaafi derr ki iss shaanti ko Ragini ne hi fir bhang kiya,

Ragini : Veer!?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : I love you~

Veer : ...

Woh kuch na bola. Bas maun raha!

Ragini : Mein sirf tumhe ye batana chaahti hu aaj. Apna dil khol ke. Kya hum!? Kya hum kahi shaant jagah par chal sakte hai?

Veer ne haami bharte hue apne kadam aage badhaaye aur woh beach me kinare ki orr chalte chalte ek behad hi sunsaan se spot par pohuch gaye.

Chattaane aur patthar hi patthar the aas pas aur saamne vishaalkaay neel samundar.

Dono hi ek bade se patthar par baith gaye. Unke haath abhi bhi aapas me bandhe hue the.

Ragini Veer ke kandhe par jhuki aur sarr rakh bolna shuru kii,

Ragini : Mein tumhe batana chaahti hu ki, mere divorce ke baad se, mujhe aisa kabhi kisi aur ke liye mehsoos nahi hua hai Veer!

Veer : ....

Ragini : Yes! I have fallen for you Veer! Tumne mujhe apne dil me panaah dii, mujhe maaf kiya, meri tumne harr baat maani. Aur tumhare bade bhai ki talakshuda biwi hone ke naate, mere mann tumhare prati aisa kuch bhi nahi aana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Ye hua!

Veer : Mein-

Ragini : Nahi! Pehle mujhe keh lene do Veer! Samaaj ki nazro se ye apraadh hai. Mein tumhare baare me aisa soch bhi nahi sakti thi. Lekin fir bhi ye sab hua. Bura mat maan'na par... Shuruaati dino me mene Vivek ko chorr ke dusri shadi lene ka faisla pehle hi le liya tha aur uske liye mene ek do hum umr ke ladko se bhi baat cheet kii thi. Dad ke kehne par mene baat kii thi. Par mujhe unme interest nahi aaya. Aur fir tumhaare saath waqt bitaane lagi.

Veer : !!?

Ragini : Jese jese samay guzar raha tha. Mujhe tumhare baare me jaan'ne ki aur iccha hone lagi. Tumhari pasand, na pasand, tumhari baatein, tumhari personality. Aur mein anjaane me hi inn sabhi ki taraf aakarshit hoti jaa rahi thi. Jab divorce hua, tab mujhe ehsaas ho chuka tha Veer ki...

Veer : ??

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai.

Veer : Bhabh-

Ragini : Ragini Veer! Aaj se mein tumhare liye Ragini hu. Bhabhi nahi! Sabke saamne tum mujhe bhabhi bula sakte ho. Par akele me!? Mein tumhare muh se apna sirf naam sunn'na pasand karungi.

Veer : J-Jii!!

Ragini : Jii nahi! Haan! Treat me like an equal person Veer!

Veer : I'll try!

Usne apna sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha. Khaas kar uske hontho ko. Aur Ragini ki saasein tez ho uthi.

Ragini : Kya inn hontho ko thodi derr ke liye choom sakti hu?

Veer jo ab tak khud ko control kiye hue tha, aise shabdo ko sunn apna aapa akhir kho hi diya.

Ragini ki patli gori makhmali kamar me haath daal Veer ne usse jakda aur apne seene se kass ke laga ke pal bhar me unn rassbhare hontho ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Nnnnggghhhhhh~"

*Smooch* *Slurp* *Slurp*

Kuch shan bhi nahi guzre the jab dono ki jeebh aapas me kushti ladd ek dusre ke muh me ghus dabaav banaane ki koshish karne lagi.

Veer ki jeebh Ragini ke muh ke andar gayi aur andhruni muh ko tatol ke unka swaad lene lagi, toh wahi Ragini bhi yahi karne me lagi thi.

"Mmmmmmmmnnnnnn~"

Veer ke haath unn mulaayam aamo ko nichodne me bhi lag gaye. Blouse ke upar se unhe zorr zorr se masalne ka maza hi alag tha.

Ragini desperation me Veer ki goad me aake baithi aur Veer ke sharaarti haath turant hi uski gaand par chale gaye.

"Mmmmmnnnnn~" "Aaaahnnnnnnn~"

*Slurp* *Slurp*

Ragini : Aise nahi Veer... Saree uthao...

Woh uttejna bhari awaaz me boli. Veer ne jese hi uski saree peech uske kulho par le jaa kar uthaayi toh woh aashcharya me reh gaya.

Neeche koi petticoat nahi tha. Bas Ragini ki doodh jesi gori jaanghe.

"Ohh Veer!"

"Claim me!!! Cherish me Veer! Let Vivek know how you should cherish an elder brother's wife. Nnnghhhh~ I love you baby!!!!"

Woh paagalo ki tarah Veer par toot padi.

Aur dono ki siskiya samundar ki lehro ke shor me ghul gayi.

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Mumbai~
Nidhi's Apartment ~
Evening ~ 8:12 PM

Nidhi ahaar ke dabbo me naye packet khol unme samaan bharne me lagi hui thi.

Juhi roz ki hi tarah TV me apna favourite cartoon dekh rahi thi. Aur Shreya abhi job se laut rahi thi jab achanak hi,

*Ding* *Dong*

Uske ghar ki door bell baji aur woh ye soch ke uthi ki Shreya aa gayi hai.

Nidhi ne abhi Darwaza khola hi tha ki usne dekha ki saamne Shreya nahi thi. Balki, ek uske hi jitne umr ki ladki khadi hui thi.

Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,

"Miss Nidhi!?"

Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!

Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,

"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"

Nidhi : Huh!!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of 4.6k words. As usual likes thok ke jaane ke bhaiyo aur revos rakhne ka. Unke replies mein kal dena shuru karunga. Saath bane rahiyega!

Dhanyavaad! ✨
 

Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
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Kya baat Hai Bhai

Nice update

Jhakkas brother

Superb update

Ncy update

Super thrilling update bhai

beautiful update

Ding pari ka jyada kuch samajh nahi aaya does she knew about another systems matalab ek se jyada.village arc mein real family intro hoga questions about satta and power woh tho 10-15 update mein he pata chalega

कितना ज्यादा इंतजार कराया दोस्त
खैर देर आए दुरुस्त आए, बवाल अपडेट था

अब जब उस unknown आदमी ने veer को time दे दिया है तो वीर का भी फर्ज़ बनता है की इस time का सही से use करे, अपने बाकी के लफड़े निपटाए और अपना stats और भी ज्यादा improve करे
क्योंकि enemy इस बार उसके टक्कर का होगा


रही बात veer के घर की तो मैं personally चाहूंगा की इस arc में emotion को थोड़ा ज्यादा फोकस करना rather than action
क्योंकि action तो पीछे लगभग सभी arc में आया है इसमें भी थोड़ा बहुत आएगा ही but veer का family background और past भी उतना ही improtant होगा।
जितना अच्छे से veer का past portrait होगा उतना ही अच्छे से veer की कहानी समझ में भी आएगा


तेज की बात करे तो, वीर इस कहानी में जितना दुख सहा है अपने मां और बहन से दूर रह के तो तेजल भी उतना ही दुख झेली है
आखिर family का प्यार तो उसे भी नही मिला


भावना से मिलने से ज्यादा curiosity इस बात की रहेगी की दोनो भाई बहन एक दूसरे से कैसे मिलेंगे, क्योंकि दोनो का दुख एक जैसा है

देखते है जब वीर अपनी पूर्वी मौसी से मिलेगा तो क्या होगा, वैसे वीर विक्रम नाम सुन कर समझ गया होगा की ये भावना के side से फोन था

फिर से धन्यवाद अपडेट के लिए, आगे के अपडेट की प्रतीक्षा में


i know की अच्छा अपडेट देने का pressure रहता होगा की readers disappointed ना हो पर दोस्त कोशिश करना की
week में 2 अपडेट मंगलवार और शुक्रवार को देने की या जो भी दिन आपको ठीक लगे but 2 update देना

आगे के लिए ऑल द बेस्ट

to kya ab blowjob de ...?

Maja aa gya aaj Ka update padkr to

Superb update

Awesome and fantastic update bhai

Awesome as always 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Superb update bhai

one word

awesome bhai

😲 Wow ek bahut hi sandaar Update ma him logo ko. Aakhir suhana kaise bachi wo scene aapne dikha diya. Ar uske baad kya hua wo sub bhi.
Veer ka pari par starting me gussa hona bhi bilkul natural aur human nature ke according thik tha. Lakin ye bhi acha hua ki veer ne jldi hi patchup kar liya.
Lakin mujhe pari ki baato se aisa lagta hai ki ye System ka jo bawal hai ye venom movie ke tarah hi hai. Ha sayad isme kuch changes ho skte hai ki system aaya kaha se nd all. Lakin ye to fix hai ki jaise hame venom movie me dekhne ko milta hai ki 3 chije Earth par aati hai. Aur unme se jo sbse weak wala rahta hai vo movie ke main character ko milta hai. Aur baki ke sare jo the wo bahut hi jyada strong the main character wale ke hisab se.
Nd jaisa ki pari ne kaha wo meri hi dusri personality hogi. Ye bhi same movie ki tarah hai jisme dusri personality evil rahti hai. Quki hmari pari to evil hai nahi ye to apne hero ko save krtihai sath me usase judel ogo ko bure logo ko hi marne me help ki hai pati ne. But us unknown person ka system definitely evil aur bahut jyada Strong hai. Naki end me sayad baat system ke user par bhi depend kregi.
Aur is Update se hme ragini ka next romentic scene ka time bhi mil gaya dekhte hai usme kya hota hai beach par.
Aur ye bhi acha laga mujhe ki aapne india aate hi apne hero ki maa aur sister ka scene dikhaya aur unke bich bhi ab story aage badhne lagi hai. Ye bhi dekh kr maja aaye. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Lakin ye tej ko College me ab kon kon milta hai ye bhi dekhne wali baat hogi. Nidhi to definately milegi aur kya hoga waha ye bhi dekhne me maja aayega.
Kul mila kar ek bahut hi awsm update tha Werewolf bhai.

Beautiful update sir

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

Excellent update bhai..

Nice update

Super update hai Bhai

Jabardasti update ,,,,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ and waiting for next update

Jabardast update

Fantastic update :claps:

Superb update. Bhai

Zabardast update


Werewolf सिस्टम मित्र 2186 पृष्ठों का अद्भुत समागम 111 अध्याय अर्थात 20 से 21 पृष्ठों की पाठकों की प्रतिक्रिया 55 लाख व्यू 1 साल 1 महिना 14 दिन से चलती हुई अद्भुत कहानी जो कल्पनाओं की परिकथा पराकाष्ठा है..
हर अध्याय एक नए लोक की परिकल्पना के साथ नया अनुभव
विलेज अर्क की इन्तेज़ार में 😊 💕

Mast update h bro...👌🏻

Mind blowing update bro

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update

Awesome update 😍

Superb.....

Jabardast update bhai 👏👏

Lajabab......💝

Fantastic update


Awesome👍👏, beautiful❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤✨✨✨✨✨❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤✨

Super update

I’m liking Tej more n more...
She is so desperate to meet her bro!

Aur wo guilt free bhi hai poori tarah se...

Uski maa to chah kar bhi akele saamne nahi aa payegi.
kyu ki Veer ko abandon karne ke reason vo peheli meeting mei to batane se rahi, aur ye reason Jaane bina veer koi bhi baat karne se raha....!

But Tej to khud bhi ek tarah se victim hi hai, agar vo pehele mil le veer se to apni maa ke liye gussa thoda manageable kar sakti hai...

Kya dhansu update rahega yaar!!!

But Veer bahaut common name hai.

bina kuch aur details ke social media mein keval veer name daal ke uska profile Khulna aisa hi hai jaise bas naam se bande ko City mein physically dhoondhna!!

Alga episode mera favourite hone wala hai kyu ki Rahani akele mei milegi veer se...
Beaches... bikinis... romance !!😍

System agar unique nahi hai to Pari ko iske baare mei pata hona chahiye!!!
Ye kya jhol hai!

And it also means ki Pari can lie to veer...
To system ka purpose aur objectives kya hain
aur iska end game aim kya hai...

For example system kisi aisi space faring civilisation ka Banya hua ho sakta hai Jise kisi inter-galactic war ke liye special agents /soldiers chahiye aur vo unhe aise recruit aur train karta hai...

Pari be jab itni basic bat bhi chupai ki vo unique nahi hai to na jaane aur kya kya chupaya hoga !! 🤔

Eagerness aur badha di yaar..
Ab aise hi dimag ghoomta rahega!!

Shweta aur Bhawan ko itni jaldi Maaf nahi karna!!

Looking forward to meet Kavya and Nidhi..

Really missed these characters!!!

Aur ek baat, keval 12 points baad veer ka level up hoga -

To Pari ki personality phir change ho jaayegi...
Dekho ab Kaun si aati hai??
Par current wali best thi Abhi tak!!

Jaldi jaldi girlfriends badalne Wala experience jaisa lagta hai ye..
Jab tak ek ke moods aur personality se familiar hovo, vo chalo jaati hai aur doosri unknown aa jaati hai!!🤣

Ya Multiple-split personalities wali girlfriend...🤣

Ab dekhna hai Alpha trait kis ki gaand tudwaata hai veer se...

Looking forward to next chapter...
Hats off 🎩

Bhai wo suhana Wale scene me g@#d phat gayi thi ki ye suhana kya gandu kismat payi hai jo dobara mout k muh me aa gyi hai
aage padke pata laga ki wo past tha las vegas ka or wo sonali k liye sayad uski study se related kuchh to sochh rakha hoga veer ne
Par itna Chhota update kahe diye ye sirf mujhe laga ki koi or bndhuo ko bhi aisa laga ?
Oor ye veer kya aane wale update me apne aap ko improve karega ya pahle in chhote issue jaise rajat *pranjal or ye niharika etc k issue pahle suljhayega ? Thoda bataye Werewolf bhaya or thoda spoiler mila jata to or achchha ho jata:tease3:

This was emotional kind of update. Veer ka flashback ke kaise usne Suhana ko bachya, kaise Pari se lada, kaise apni frustration Pari par nikali. Fir Suhana ko khatre se bachane ke liye wahan se wapas aaya.

Ab yahan do sawaal uthte hai
1. Kya wo shakhs waakai Veer ko maarna chahta tha ?
2. Yaa fir wo Veer ko Dara kar use USA se wapas bhejna chahta tha taaki Veer aur kisi criminal ko naa maar sake ?
Kyonki wo shakhs chahta to Veer ko maar sakta tha jab Veer goli lagne baad Suhana ke paas tha

Aaj Balhaar ke dimaag mein kuch chutiyapa aaya tha magar Veer ki us baat ne Balhaar ko bata diya ki who is his daddy?

Bhavna kuch to bahut bada raaj chupa ke baithi hai kyonki jis tarah wo ab Veer ko lekar tadap rahi hai aur jis tarah Tej be bataya tha ki Bhavana hamesha Veer ko lekar sochti rahti thi iska matlab sirf ek hi matlab ho sakta hai ki usne Veer se alag hone ka faisla Veer aur Tej ki jaan bachane ke liye hi kiya hoga kyon ki koi bhi Maa sirf apne bachcho ki jaan ki khatir hi unko apni zindgi se alag kar sakti hai.

Ab jab baat ho gayi hai aur Tej ko Veer ka asli naam aur uski details pata chal gayi hai to ab to chup nahi baithne waali aur Purvi aur Veer ki mulakaat se pahle hi wo Veer se milne jayegi.

Bahut hi shaandaar update Werewolf bro

Superb update bro really superb 👌👌👌👌👌👌

Yaar story mast hai mast bas update bahut kam aate hai time bahut lete ho aap update dene me
Please update time de diya karo

Superb fantabulous update Werewolf bhai....

Ab dekhna maazedar hoga ki tez kaise veer ko approach karti hai aur veer kaise react karega jab pari usse batayegi ki tez uski sagi behan hai....

Hmm to aakhir kaar ab pata chala ki aakhir vegas main kya chudampatti machi huyi thi veer ka gussa bahut danger tha but isme pari ki bhi koi galti nahi thi uski bhi dusri porsonality ki wajah se ye jamela huva well abhi to wo delhi door hai

Bhumika ne veer se baat shuru ki bur veer ne use uski aoukaat dikhadi ki wo kitne pani main thi well shweta akeli nahi hai veer ko manane main

And now blhaar ne ke dimaag main betrayal ka kida paida huva par veer ne use ugne. Se pehle hi maar diya

Or ab lagta hai ragini ke sath gaadi thodi aage badegi accha hai bro mujhe to lagta hai veer or ragini ko aise dekh shweta ki khub jalne wali hai bhumika ka kuch keh nahi sakte

Bhavna bhavna bhavna aakhir kya hai bhavna ka raaz is raaz ki wajah se bheje ka bhajiya ban gaya mere or jab se were wolf bhai ne kaha hai ki is wale arc main razz khulenge tab se to kya hi dimaag ki dahi huyi hai well bhavna bechari ki is baar galti hai wo bhi dekh rahi thi ki tej kitni mehnat kar rahi hai apne bhai ko dhundhne keliye. But wo har baar nakam huyi

Or purvi ne use uske nakam hone raaz bhi pata lagte hi bataya aakhir uska naam veer tha vikram nahi ab intezaar hai veer or purvi ki meeting ka pata nahi uske liye kitna wait karna padega shayad 1 week ya 2 ya 3 din jyada

Baki out standing update yaar maza aagya padh ke well update thoda or long hota to maza aata bro

भावना का चरित्र भी अब तक किसी पहेली से कम नही रहा है।
उन्होंने अपने हसबैंड से नाता क्यों तोड़ा ? अपने मायके का परित्याग क्यों किया ? और सबसे इम्पोरटेंट अपने दुध पीते बच्चे को खुद से दूर क्यो किया ?
घर छोड़ने के वक्त वो अपने साथ तेजल को साथ ले जा सकती थी तो फिर वीर क्यो नही ! वीर तो उस वक्त शायद गोद मे ही पल पोस रहा होगा। कोई मां अपने नन्हे बच्चे को किसी के भी भरोसे नही छोड़ती।

खैर ससुराल से नाता तोड़ा सो तोड़ा.....अपने जिगर के टुकड़े को अपने कलेजे से निकाल फेंका सो फेंका पर एक बार के लिए भी अपने पुत्र से मिलने की इच्छा क्यो नही हुई ?
घर परिवार छोड़कर कैसे अपना और अपनी बेटी का खर्चा निकाल पाई...दूसरी शादी की या सिंगल मम्मी की तरह ही जीवन काट गई....फाइनेंशियल स्थिती कैसी रही-----किसी को नही मालूम।
उनकी बातो से ऐसा आभास होता है कि एक वक्त ऐसा जरूर आया था जब उनके पास पावर भी था और सामर्थ्य भी। शायद यह सब खोने के बाद उन्होने पुरातत्व को अपना पेशा बना लिया।

शायद अठारह-बीस साल के बाद उनकी मुलाकात वीर से हुई थी। वीर उन्हे तलाश करते करते मिश्र तक जा पहुंचा और अपने पहचान के बारे मे एक क्लू भी दे गया। अपना मोबाईल नम्बर भी दे दिया। खुशी की बात यह थी कि भावना को भी शक हो गया कि वीर/ विक्रम कहीं उसी का पुत्र तो नही !
लेकिन दुख की बात कि उन्होंने ना तो कभी वीर से बात करने की कोशिश की और ना ही अपनी बेटी को वीर के बारे मे जरा भी हिंट लगने दिया।

अब तक इनका चरित्र एक आदर्श मां के विरूद्ध ही रहा है। श्वेता इनसे तो अच्छी ही कही जायेगी।
तेजल का उतावलापन और आँसू एक बहन की बेवशी उजागर कर रहा है। भाई से मिलन की तड़प दिखा रहा है।
मुझे विश्वास है वो अपने प्रयत्न मे सफल होगी।


सोनाली-------इस लड़की की बातें और इसका बेबाक अंदाज मुझे बहुत पसंद है।
भूमिका-------वीर की जो पर्सनालिटी हो चुकी है तो उसे छोटी छोटी बातें एवं चीजे इग्नोर कर देनी चाहिए । जब सम्बन्ध सही नही होते है तो ऐसी छोटी मोटी चीजे अक्सर होते ही रहती है। उसे भूमिका को माफ कर देना चाहिए और उसकी मम्मी श्वेता को भी।

खुबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
Outstanding & Amazing & brilliant

Hope We Can See Next Update Soon.

Nice update...

Fantastic update bro 💗💗

Waiting for next update bro.....this story is mine favourite one.

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Nice update

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai
Waiting for next update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Superb fantastic update sir ab veer jald purane jhamelo se nikalna Hoga or apne status ko update krna Hoga pta nhi wo unknown person Kiya planing kr ke betha hy veer k liye waiting for next update

Super update

Super se upar


Awesome update bro

Nice mast update bro

Nice update bro

Bhai iss baar maine sabse pehle reaction diya! Aapke post karne ke 8 min ke under!! :) :) winner:)

Ex

Marvelous awesome fabulous update bro

Jabardasttt Updateee


Toh ab veer apni sagi maa aur behen se milegaa. Dekhte hai kaise hota hai sab kuch

Aapki mehnat to har update me dikhti hai.

Awesome update to an amazing story.

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update jo EKdam se badal gaya suspense me....
Waah Bhai waah....

Nice update bro waiting for nex

Zabardast update

Fantastic update

Nice update sir amazing
Waiting for the next update

Update soon sir


Pata nhi or kitne boom fhodoge master 🙄 veer ki locat ka Boom abhi bhi fhotna baaki hai

Finest nd interestingly full of suspense n thrilled hope next amazing update coming soon as this or previous keep it up buddy 😉😉👌👌👍

Badhiya update tha majaa aagaya jldi naya wala laao bhai ❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍

New turn…superb update…👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Nice update bro lagta family reunion hoga jaldi hi or Ragini ka account bhi khulega

Jabardast update

Nice update

Bhai mera pura pura mood tha ki Ise Saam ko padhu pr upar ki ek line padhi uske baad mai ruk hi nhi paya ya kahe ki khud ko rok nhi saka...

Bhavnatmak update bhai jabarjast superb amazing wonderful or bhavnatmak update beautifully described very well written

Or kya likhu Mai bhai :applause: :applause: :bow:

Sab kuchh jag mag jag mag tha bhaya

Bada revo bhi Sayad aaye, Yadi matter yaad rha to, abhi to chla Mai Sone...

Good night all :goodnight:

sala ye Chandra classes vale raat bhar Sone na dete, Kabhi iski video bnao Kabhi Uski... Btao 3 bje se lga hua tha vo to thodi thodi der me break mil jata hai Varna mushkil pad jaye ye sab karna...

Mast update... story ka direction change karne wala update

शानदार अपडेट था ज़नाब,
प्रारंभ मे ही आपने दिखाया की सुहाना को बचाने के लिए वीर ने अपना जितना हो सकता था उतना दिया । इसी बीच उसका गुस्सा परी के ऊपर निकला उस अंजान शख़्स के मौजूदगी को लेकर । आखिर परी ने वीर से ये झूठ बोला था की उसके अलावा धरती पर कोई भी, किसी के पास भी सिस्टम नही है ।
वेगास मे जो उसे मिला था, उसके व्यक्तित्व और व्यवहार से ये मालूम चल रहा था की उसका सिस्टम बहुत ज्यादा अपडेटेड होगा । आखिर वो बस अपनी मौजूदगी से वीर जैसे सुपर ह्युमन के पसीने निकाल दिया था, उस वक़्त । उस अंज़ान शख़्स ने वीर को समय दिया है, कमाल है न ।
इससे ये बात साबित हो जाती है की हर शेर से बढ़कर एक सवा शेर होता है ।

यहाँ एक संभावना और देखने को मिलता है, संभव है की वो अंज़ान शख़्स वीर का स्टेट्स देख लिया हो अपने सिस्टम के मदद से, और उसे ये लगा हो की अभी वीर उसपर भारी भी पड़ सकता है, इसीलिए उसने वीर को समय दिया हो ताकि वही समय उसे भी मिले अपने स्टेट्स बढ़ाने के लिए ।


खैर, वीर के पास पहले से ही कई परेशानिया थोक मे पड़ी हुई है, जब तक उस अंज़ान शख़्स का समय नही आता तब तक वीर को इन समस्याओं पर ध्यान देना चाहिए । साथ ही साथ अपने स्टेट्स को भी बढ़ाने के लिए कड़ी मेहनत करनी होगी ।

तेज़, इस लड़की से सब कुछ छुपाया गया है, सब कुछ...
हमेशा से इससे झूठ ही बोला गया है, जब भी ये अपने भाई की तलाश मे बेचैन रहती थी, तब भी उसकी माँ सब जानते हुए भी मौन रहती थी ।

भावना, इसकी क्या मजबूरियाँ रही होगी की इसने अपने बेटे को खुद से अलग कर दिया, तेज़ को उसके भाई से अलग कर दिया ।

ऐसा क्या हुआ था बीते दिनों मे जो भावना को इतने बड़े कदम उठाने पड़े ।

सुमन कभी तो अपने बातो मे ये ज़िक्र की थी की वो भावना के यहाँ गुलाम थी । या कुछ ऐसा ही मुझे याद नही आरहा है । ये तब की बात है जब वीर अपनी माँ को ढूंढने वहाँ गया था जहाँ उसे सुमन मिली थी ।

इससे साफ़ पता लगता है की भावना की जड़े ज़रूर किसी बड़े घराने से जुड़ी हुई होगी । पर सवाल तो ये भी है की आखिर ऐसा क्या हुआ होगा जो भावना को वहाँ से भी निकलना पड़ा ।

वैसे तेज़ शांत रहने बालों मे से तो है नही, आखिर उसके अंदर भी तो वही खून है जो वीर भाई साहब के अंदर है, चुल तो मचेगी ही अपने भाई को जानने की, और अब तो वीर का असली पहचान भी उसे पता है ।

बस डर इस बात की है की, जानकारी निकालते निकालते कहीं तेज़ किसी मुसीबत मे न फस जाए, आखिर वीर के दुश्मन भी थोक मे पड़े है बाज़ार मे ।

खैर, अब इंतज़ार है वीर और रागिनी के उन पलो को पढ़ने की जिनमे दोनो समुंद्र के किनारों पर गुलू - गुलू करते दिखेंगे ।
बाकी शानदार अंश था, आगे के लिए शुभकामनाएं ।


Jabardast update


shandar update bro

Nice update

Nice super update 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Update 112 Kb tak Aayega.....

Abhi tak ye pta nhi Chala h ki vo konsi ladki h jiski bajah se pranjal veer se nafrat krta h

Ek aur dhasu update.
Story ke mahaul ke dekhte lag rha Veer ke aane wala type bahut busy hone wala hai. Uske hatho me samay kum aur kaam bahut jyada hai.

Waise Jo kuch bhi Las Vegas me huva uske baad Suhana aur Veer ki agli mulakat dekhne wali rhegi. Sath hi divya aur Veer ka bichadna mano do premiyo ke juda hone jaisa laga.

Ab aate hai Bhumika par mujhe ye character sabse kum explored lagta hai. Wo mujhe confused si lagti hai shayad uski parvarish aisi hui hai I hope to see more interation b/w Veer and Bhumika and how their relation evolve.

Idhar Ragini ne Veer ke aate hi apne liye date fix kr liya hai lagta hai Ragini ne pehle se hi sab kuch plan krke rkha hai. Sham ke beach me mahol bada romantice hota hai dekhna hoga inke bich kaisa romance pakne wala hai.

Ab aate hai filhal ke main focus me Veer ke biomother aur sister pe. Dekhna hoga inka arc kaisa pan out hota hai. Aur wo konsa raaz hai jo Bhavna aur Purvi chhupa ke rkhe hai. Aage ki story kafi exciting hone wali hai aisa lag rha.

Dekhte hai agle update me kya hota hai.

बहुत सुंदर अनुच्छेद मित्र। शुरू मे ही आप दिखा दिये की सुहाना को कैसे बचा पाया वीर ने। लेकिन तब तक उस खतरनाक आदमी का उतना ही खतरनाक संदेश आ गया था की वो वीर को मार डालेगा कोई एक उत्सव के समय पर। लौटने के बाद वीर का मानसिक द्वंद बहुत अच्छी तरह से दर्शाये है मित्र। एक और बात अभी तक जीतने भी मुलाक़ात हुआ है सब अपने ही के थे जो वीर को पसंद करते है या साथ देते है। अभी तक रजत या निहारिका या सबसे बदमाश प्रांजल से मुलाकात नहीं हुआ। ये लोग तो जरूर कुछ न कुछ गुल खिला रहे होंगे जिसका इलाज हमे अगले कुछ अनुच्छेद मे देखने मे मिलेंगे। इंतज़ार रहेगा एक दिन बाद का सागर तट पर रागिनी और वीर की मुलाकात का। इस बीच मे आप ने फिर से मिस्र की याद दिला दिये। वो था बिक्रम का नाम। बिक्रम- ये नाम से वाकिफ है मिस्र के माँ बेटी के जोड़ी, बलहर और केरा। इस एक फोन से ही आपने वीर को समझा दिया की ये मदाम जरूर अपनी माँ की साथ की है। अगला अनुच्छेद के इंतज़ार रहेगा मित्र।

Wah bhi wah kya bat hi aaj tak maine kabhi kisi ke kahani ka replay nahi diya hei karib karib 3 sal se padh raha hu lekin aapki kahani ne majbur kar diya hei replay dene ko yaha tak ki meine apna account bhi nahi banaya tha lekin aapke vajah se replay karne ke liye account banane par majbur kar diya hei ....
That's awesome broooo.....
Eak silent raider ko aapne samne aane par majbur kar diya hei....
Mere pass aapki tarif ke liye alfaj nahi hei...
Aisa karta hu ki aapke tarif me sabhi jagah se achhe achhe savd dhundhte hu pir aapki tarif karunga........
Bas itna hi kahunga ki aise hi aap likhte jaye.......

Extraordinary update bro

Werewolf yo update me image kayeko show na horahi bhayi

Behtreen update

इमेजेस मे वही दो थे ना, जिसमे वीर के स्टेट्स को दिखाया गया है ?

Werewolf ek sawal sabse pahle ki Suman ka kya story me kuch jyada hi ahem role hai.....

Khair aate hai unn scenes par jo ju ne hamare samne laaya wo jaruri bhi tha ektrah se khair pari aur veer ke bich jo scene hua wo ektrah se hona bhi tha lekin ektrah se pari bhi sahi hi thi akhir uski wo dusri personality ne hi to wo baate uss samay boli thi khair ab dono ke bich patchup hogaya aur wo ab pahle nidhi ke problem par focus krne wale hai Rajat par haa aur bhi problems hai jinhe veer ek ek kr ke clearout krega aur abhi khaskar pahle nidhi ke ekmaatr problem Rajat ka to ilaz ke de wo jo ab Pranjal se mil chuka hai jo ab uske liye bhi problem khadi kr sakte hai .

Khair ab aate hai bhumika par jo veer se ab lagaav sa rakhne lagi hai jo veer se milne aayi thi uske kamre me obviously wo bhi veer se milne ke liye utawli hogi hi :D lekin apna veer fir se alpha male bana firne laga are matlab sukr manao ki uske aage kuch na bola veer ne na to ro deti.

Ab aate shweta par to bechari ne kya kya smjh ke rakhi ussne khair iski bhi galti na hai bechari apne bete yani veer bete ke :Dmoh me najaane kya kya soch aur smjh rahi hai. Khair usne jo harkat ki veer ke samne wo saaf saaf jhlak raha tha I mean ulta na socho mera matlab hai ki wo apne veer ke liye sahi me bohot jyada serious akhir hai aur wo ab usse apne beta hai manne lagi hai khair najane uss din kya smjh ke dudh pilane baith gayi thi veer ko :D.

Khaskar yo suhana wali favouriblity par to jo nhi pata kitni hai mer pe show hi na kr rahi image sayad kal padha tha to 80 se uppar thi yaa jo bhi thi haa lekin Yo mate wala tag pale par gaya akhir ab wo veer ki best friend hai sayad uss se bhi uppar :D haa lekin yaha sonia,Kaera,divya par sirf comrade aur Suhana par mate chalo ho sakta hai ye ittefaq ho mere soch ka lekin haa ab ju yahi bologe ki suhana best friend to uspe mate ka tag aur sonia,Kaera,divya dost to unpar comrade ka tag.....par ye jara smjha diyo meko bhayi :shy:.

Ab aate hai balhar par to fatte bhosde ki aheemm-ahemm I mean ye bhosdika matlab veer ko udane ka soch raha tha haa yo to lajmi hi thi akhir itte bade state ka don hai aur ek ladke ke niche kaam kr rela hai Khair lekin iski soch veer ne bhanp li I mean obviously wo smjh hi jayega aur jistrah usse smjhaya usne ab to nhi lagta ki aage kuch gadbad krega lekin yo jo naya system wala banda aila hai ho sakta hai kuch....

Aur jo balhar ne baat batayi kahi wo Pranjal aur Rajat ke mil jane ki hi to baat nhi batayi lekin veer pareshan hogaya tha uski baat ko sunke to hosakta hai koi aur hi baat ho yaa Pranjal ke baap ki isssab me milne wali baat.

Ab aate hai yo alpha male par to jiski charecteristics bohot si hai aur kuch alag hi hai matlab ki wo ab veer ki soch se hai to lajmi hai ki veer jo chahta hai agar wo na pura ho to wo bhadke ga hi aur isme jaise veer ka ego bhi increase ka koi locha lag raha hai aur ye alpha male ka disadvantages bhi hai advantages bhi hai.

Ab aate hai bhavna ke scenes par to sabse pahla yo sawal utha ki yo Satta...sashan ka kiyo mamla hai to...may be ki Bhavna kisi rajsahi pariwar se ho aur ussi ka satta sashan I mean sinhashan aur ye baat sahi bhi ho sakti hai kyu ki Suman jab pahli baar veer se mili thi Rajasthan me tab ussne to veer ko bataya bhi tha uske maa ke pariwar ke baare me aur wo locket ke baare me bhi bataya tha....lekin wo puri jankari na de payi thi apni kasam ke karan Khair ab village Arc agaya hai to isme to raj khulenge hi saare Khair dekhte hai aage ke hota hai.

Tejal to shant baithn se rahi yo to pata lagawegi hi lagawegi veer ki pyri jankari yaa kaho to sidha jaakr mil hi le uss se lekin ek aur baat ye Purvi aur bhavna ka jo baaat thi ki veer se sidhe nhi milenge matlab ki Purvi jayegi milne uss se ye kuch ajib laga haa yo bhi ho sake ki wo jo baat chupa rahi hai satta sashan wali baate uss se related hi kuch ho aur agar veer ko unn dono ne pahle hi yo saari baate bata di to veer ke liye khatra ho sakta hai khair dekhte hai aage ke hota hai.

Bohot jabardast tha yo update padh ke saare jo sawal man me uthe the suhana aur uss mysterious admi ko lekr wo clearout se ho gaye....ab dekhna yo hai ki ab kya kya hota hai iss CRIMSON AUR VILLAGE ARC me.


Take care.......

Lazwaab behtreen update

Waiting for next update

Fantastic update Werewolf bhai

Veer se milne ke liye tezal bahut excited hai wo ab kuch kar ke hi rahegi veer se mulakat ke like...

Awesome update bro maza hi aa gaya to wo unknown veer ko marne ane wala hai to us se bachne ke liye veer ko Sabse Pehle Apne levels Jaldi 2 badhane honge Or idhar Ab tej Apne khurafaati dimaag ke chalte kuch na kuch to hansil jaroor kr legi ya to puri details ya fir koi nayi musibat Or veer sabka kat rha tha pr itne problems ke chalte Truecaller se apna original naam hatana bhool gya jiske chalte uski pol patti khul hi gayi aakhirkaar ab Dekhte hai uski massi use kaise deal krti hai or ragini ka bhopu kab bajta hai taki sigma trait badh kr alpha ke equal ho ske taki or ache se balance bna kr rakh ske or dekhte hai ab veer konsi skill ya feature upgrade krta hai ya new leta hai or missions kab ayenge or kaise unko pass krke pari ka lvl increase krke power bdha payega or balhaar ki gand se dhya nikaal diya ate ate lol maza aa gaya update padh kr.

Bhai ye village arc kiske upar based ya focus rahega thoda hint milega kya

Bhawna maa ke liye mere dil me Apaar Prem ubhar rha hai.. Devki maa se toh kisi ka compare bnta nahi fir example ke taur pr diya... Kaun maa apne jigar ke tukde ko khud se alg krna chahegi uss bache ko jisko 9mahine apne khoon se sincha hai usse kaun alag hona chahegi... Zrur koi kaaran hoga... Jese devki maa ne apne dil pr patthar rkh kr apne bache ko isliye dur kiya ki dusht paapi Bhai se uski raksha kr sake.. Same bhawna maa ke sath bhi aisa hi hua hoga.. Maine pehle bhi kaha tha shayad bhawna maa kisi raaj gharaane se taalukaat rkhti hai.. Koi jaydaad wagairh ka panga hoga jisse veer ki jaan ko khatra hoga... isliye veer ko khud se alag krke tejal ko sath le gai hogi... Tejal ko bhi isliye sachaai se avagat nahi kraayi hogi qki woh jawaan khoon hai Bhai ke baare me jante hi dhundhne nikal pdegi.. Jaisa ki abhi bhi dekhne ko mil rha hai woh kitna utawali Ho rhi hai.. Isi wajah se bhawana maa nahi bta rhi hogi ki kahin koi musibat me phans na jaye... Khairr, mujhe lgta hai ab tejal ko veer ki reality pta chal chuki hai toh woh shaant toh baithne se rhi zrur woh veer se milne jayegi toh shayad kuch tejal veer ko kuch smjha sake bhawna maa ki mantvya ko smjha sake ke kyo mata shri veer se dur hui thi.. jisse veer bhawna ke halaat ko smjh sake... Bhawna maa ke liye fir shayad easy Ho jayega... Dekhte hai tejal or veer ka milna kyaa rang lata hai.. Shayad college me kavya or nidhi ji bhi Mil skti hai..
Bhumika ke liye sympathy hi dil se niklta hai woh kuch na krke bhi bhot kuch kr chuki hai veer ko neecha dikhane me woh bhi sirf apni maa ke ishaaro pr naadan ldki, maa ki glti ki saza faaltu me hi bhumika bhugat rhi hai... Shweta ke liye toh abhi mere dil me maafi nahi hai... Bechari Kya -2 ishare krne pr utar aai hai jbki usme doodh bhi nahi hai putra Moh me acha nahi lag rha ek Mann krta hai maaf kr du lekin fir woh past yaad ata hai... Khairr, har chiz ka ek samay hota hai.. Mafi bhi mil hi jayegi... Werewolf bhaiya humare bhawnao ke acha khel khel rhe Ho aise aise scene dikhaa kr...
Uss unknown person ke mutabik crimson festival tak ka samay hai veer ke paas.. Iss bich veer ke paas mauka hai jldi jldi apne stats badhaaye or system ko high level pr upgrade Kare.. Koi achi si skill wagairh le... Qki woh banda shayad veer ke power ko parakh chuka hoga toh woh bhi apne stats badhane me lga hoga wese crimson festival me kitna wqt hoga?.. Wese Maine kaha tha ki agr system alian technology hai toh earth pr shayad exist krti hogi? Or shayad koi usko operate bhi krta hoga... Qki pari Ki baaton se saaf jhalakta hai Usne kaha woh jhuth nahi boli woh zrur uski dusri personality hogi.. Veer ke bhawnao ke sath shayad khela ja rha Ho.. Aur iska dusra udaharan ye bhi hai ki jab veer gussa krne lga toh system palla jhaad kr sleep mode me chala gya.. Pari wahi bolti hai jo system bolwata hai bole toh jo usko operate krta hoga... Khairrr,
Veer ke india ate hi pari reactivate Ho gai or dono me patch up bhi hogya... Crimson festival tak veer apne paariwarik maslon pr hi dhyaan lgayega... Jiski shuruaat woh Rajat se krega... Uske baad niharika ki hi fielding lgayega... Uske baad hi fox bole toh pranjal ki baari ayegi.. Lekin mujhe lgta hai Rajat se bhidne me hi pranjal ka saamna krna pad skta hai...
Ragini ne apni Dream Day veer ke sath fixed kr liya hai.. Jo humen beach pr hi dono ka romance dekhne ko milega... Mujhe lgta hai inko puri ek night ke liye kahin chale jana chahiye qki ghar me toh ye sab sambhav hi nhi... Or agr wahi vivek mil gya toh sone pe suhaga.. Saale ki sulag jayegi... Intzaar rhega indono ka milan ka, Mann toh mil hi chuka hai bss tann ka milna baki hai...
Sonali ke liye veer ne kya socha hai dekhte hai... Suman ji toh apne naam ko sarthak kr hi rhi hai... Acha lgta hai suman ke pyar ko dekh kr... Ek baat OR kyaa suman bhawna maa ko janti hogi? Agr haa toh jab dono ka saamna hoga Tab kya hoga dekhte hai.... Qki suman ab uske bete veer ki slave hai...
Mujhe toh meri nidhi ji ka intzaar hai kab unka deedar hoga... Or sath me arohi ki bhi wese bade bhaiya arohi ke favourability me koi badlaw nhi aya qki dono ke bich kuch ache moments bhi bane fir favourability jese ke tese hi hai..
Kaera, kavya Shreya or sbse pyari juhi se milne ko dil betaab hai chocolates bhi dene hai usi bahaane nidhi ji bhi....

किसकी क्लास ले रहे चंद्रा से ??

very nice update

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC EROTIC AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

SHAANDAAR MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE BHAI


Nyc update bhai

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Waiting for the next update...

What's your update timeline? Waiting for next one.

अगला भाग कब पढ़ने को मिलेगा भाई ?

Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya to lagta hai ab veer or tez Milne Wale hai . Ab age dekhte hai kya hota hai.

Waiting for next

Next update kab tak aayega

Bhai mast majedar lavely update bhai waiting for next update

Awesome updates🎉👍

Ding next mission sex on beach

Waiting for next

Tum to antaryami nikle
To ye bhi bta do update kab aayega

बताओ सम्भोग की बात कौन कर रहा है, जिनकी खुद की एक कहानी मे 102 अनुच्छेद होने के बाद भी एक किस ना देखने को मिला 😁पेलाई भी सिर्फ इंसानो की छोड़ कर सबकी कर रहे हैं 🤔

मेरे हिसाब से तो वीर बाबु को पहले अपना पिछवाडा बचाना चाहिए, जब देखो तब कोई ना कोई मारने की कोशिश मे रहता है 😁

fantastic update

Kal aane wala tha naa

Werewolf Bhai update kab tak aayega

200-1
Hy Werewolf mere dost sabse pehle to bhot bhot aapko Mubarak baad aapki story ke lye waise to mai kafi time se is side me ho but jada jankari nahone ke karan mai mujhe registration option me dhyan ni de paya so bs story ho ya comments ho bs show sb kuch hota tha mujhe....
Kher ab sb smj aagya hai or sath me aapki story mai baki members ki trh read kr rha ho bs ye smj lo aaki fan list 1 or name aad hogya hai
Aage or bi comments kroga mai abi thoda time km or Kam jada hai dost
Milte hai jaldi

Congratulations on 2200 Pages :bounce: :rock1:

Congratulations 2.2k pages

congratulations bro for 2200 page 🥳🥳🥳🥳

Congratulations for 2200 pages

Aaj update aayega kya?

Yaar mai toh aapke jaisa writer nhi hoon..bas itna hai ki aapki story itni achhi hai ki mere paas shabd nhi rahte hain..bas updates ka besabri se intezar karte hain.. aap kalakar hain...kya kahani likh rahe hain..

:congrats: For completed 2.2k pages


Waiting for next one

Congratulations bro for 2200 pages

Waiting for next update

Sach kahu to mughe nahi lagta wo aadmi veer ke pichhe pada hoga ......

Mughe to aisa lag raha pari ki bahan pari ke pichhe padi h.....

Aap bhi busy h navraato me??? 😁😁

Update Bahut slow hai

... hmmm ... mai bata to sakta houn ki Shweta kaise Veer ke dil ki deewar phaand sakti hai ... par usme you will be the rukawat ... pata nahi debauchery ke naam par kya kya ubla anda khila rahe ho ... khair ...

... apart from the much anticipated Veer-Bhavna-Tej milan ... another meeting I am looking forward to is Bhavna-Suman ... if it happens ... its obvious Suman has grown up serving Bhavna's family ... so it will be interesting to see how she reacts to the original owner of the family medallion ... that tied her to Veer ...

... and I think the reason Bhavna "abandoned" Veer was to protect him ... like Krishn was sent to Yashoda to protect him from Kans till he came of age ... Bhavna is from a powerful family and someone in the family must have gone rogue and destroyed it from inside(it has happened in royal families) ... and his last target before achieving full power would be the last male child sharing the family dna ... Bhavna's male child ... Veer ... so she left him before the news reached her enemies ... she assumed that as ther husband's father was a good solid patriach ... the father would also be a good father ... that is why she is still hesitating to contact him as she knows if her enemies find out that Veer is her son .... his life will be in danger ... she does not know as yet that he too has the system now and has progressed quite a bit ... that guy in Vegas could be an agent of the mastermind family villian or is most probably related to Veer in some way ... and the system may be the result of some family boon or ET encounter that passes on to male members who share the dna ... :cowboy2:

... not sure about the system theory ... but pretty sure of the Bhavna story ... that seems to be the only plausible explanation for her abandonment of her newborn baby boy and her present behaviour ... as it is obvious she misses her son but is comitted to wants to protect him ... by sacrificing her maternal instincts ...

... and Ragini will not wear a bikini on the beach ... :ballelaugh:

Tejal veer se do strike se mil Sakti h
Pahle to tej veer ke college jayegi Jha use college m koi students ya teachers milengi jiske jariye Kavya ya arohi se milegi to use veer ke bare m sab pta chal Jayega
Dusri bajah tej Kisi musibat me padegi to veer ki system ki taraf se tej ko bachane Ka mission milega to tab dono mil jayenge

Ye badiya tha guru 🤣🤣

Ye sahi ka xabhi bro

Aap bhi kam nahi hai maine aapka thread suhagrat widhi dekha sach mere kafi sare dobut clear hogyee suhagrat ko lekar

Congratulations for 2200

Writer Bhai
आप उस दूसरे सिस्टम होल्डर के बारे मे स्टोरी में कैसे find Out करने वाले हैं, उस 2nd सिस्टम होल्डर के होने का मतलब है कि 'परी' के जैसे और भी हैं जो कि इंसानों के अंदर आ कर उन्हें स्ट्रॉन्ग बना सकते है
क्या इनके earth पर आने का कोई reason है क्या इनकी भी पास्ट में कोई story रही है जिसे बताकर Pari Veer की कुछ हेल्प कर सके उस 2nd सिस्टम के बारे मे मालूम करने में

Congratulations for completing 2200 pages 🎉🎉

Waiting bro for next update...🤔


Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai...

Bahut hi Shandaar Update diya hai Bhai . Veer Aur Purvi jab milege Tab dekhna Shandaar hoga aur usse bhi shandaar Tej aur Veer ka Aamna Saamna . Ye dekhna bhi Dilchasp hoga ki karunesh kya chaal chalta hai ! Eagerly Waiting !


Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...

Pari or veer k bich hui halki si an band sahi nahi thi dono ko ek dusre ko samaj na chahiye or veer ajj jo kuch bhi h wo sab hasil karne me pari ne uski help ki h or insaan gusse m hota h to wo jo nahi khehna chahta wo bhi bol deta h yahi hua veer ne pari pe kuch questions utha diya pari ko ye baat kharab lagi or usi ka karan h wo us kand k baad sleep mode pe chali gaye thi or jab veer Mumbai arrive hua uske dusre din morning m pari sleep mode se active hue par jab pari sleep mode m thi tab veer ko bhi realize hua ki usne jada h bol diya pari ko or jab pari active hui to veer ne usko sorry bola or pari ne bhi apni galti samaj te hue sorry bola...

Bhumika ko bhi apne past m ki gaye galati ka ehsaas ho gaya h or usi galti ko sudhare m veer se ab ache se baat karne lagi h usko bhi ek bhai ki kami khalti h or ussne jo hotel m kiya uske bawjuud veer ne bohot kuch kiya h dono Maa beti k liye jaha tak mujhe lagta h veer ko jitna Shweta k liye nafrat h usti bhumika ko leke nahi h or Agar bhumika ese hi try karti rahe to veer usse maaf bhi kar dega jaha dusri or ragini veer k Anne se bohot khush h or uske jaane k phele jesa time usne Veer k sath spend kiya tha wesa h time wo phir se veer k sath spend karna chahti h isliye usne Veer se kahi or veer ne usko beech pe le jana ka khaha h ab dekhna h last time to kiss or book pressing hua tha is baar kya hota h jab dono beach pe jayenge wahi jab veer Balhaar se milne gaya to balhaar ne usse kuch information di h jo veer ne h usko karne k liye khaha tha jaha tak mujhe lagta h usne balhaar ki pranjal or nidhi mam k pati k upper nazar rakhne ko khaha hoga kyu ki uske or koye dusman nahi h jo usko problem de sake kar to kuch ye log bhi nahi kar sakte phir bhi alert rehne m koye problem nahi h or isi bich Balhaar k vichaar yaha tha ki wo ab veer k liye kam nahi karega or just tabhi usse veer se javab mil gaya jisee sunte h usske rongte khade ho gaye the k ye koye mamuli ladka nahi h...

Tej bhi sab jaga search kar chuki thi phir bhi usko kuch information nahi mili thi veer k bare m isliye uska sabar ka bandh tut gaya bhavna per or jada hone laga tab bhavana ne uske number k bare m bataya jiske pata chalte h purvi ne call kiya or usse baat k veer n voice sunke teeno k dil Jor se dhadakne lage the jaha bhavna to apne bete ki awaaz suun ki shant thi wahi jo tej itna garam ho rahi thi wo veer ki awaaz sunke shant pad gaye uske muu se kuch sabad h nahi nikle per purvi ne himat karke baat ki or usse milne ka fix kiya or jab cal cut hone k bad truecaller pe veer ka asli naam dikha or tej uska asli naam jane k bad social media se sari detail nikal li lekin dekhne layak tab hoga jab purvi k na khehne k bawjuud wo veer se milegi or tab kya hoga or jab purvi milegi tab veer se milne k bad kya reaction hoga uska ye sab to agge story m pata chalega...

Aise Kahe confuse kr rehe Ho bhai uther ohh pari bhi confusa gayi hogi, apne papa par dout aarha ho GA usko

Mummy ko usne puch puch ke parshan kiya hoyenga usne

Meri behen hey ya nhi, bichari 😔😔😔

Read last update again. Pari's statement was absolutely correct, Veer needs to solve all the problems around him, one after the another. Only then he'll be able to face the “Unknown Man” with his complete focus. But, there are a lot of things that he has too look at, at the same time...

> Pranjal & Rajat.. Pari said that Veer should focus on Rajat first, but I think he'll be able to dismantle both the fools together.
> Pranjal's story, that needs to be explored, means another beautiful & hot girl will enter the story!
> Karunesh.. Veer is unaware that this bastard is also on the same side as of junior bastard ~ Pranjal. What kind of approach Veer will have while handling him.
> Sumitra.. completely unexplored till now. Though I felt that she's a good woman, because of the way she behaved in front of Ragini while convincing her to come back. Her husband + both her sons, would be interesting to see how she'll react.
> Vivek's bastardism is still hidden in front of the family. Ragini's incident has hampered his image in the house as well as in the business, but they all are unaware about the plans he executed alongside the junior bastard. What's cooking in the story for him?
> Niharika, though she just needs a couple of more drilling sessions, but would be interesting to see, what Veer has in store for her.

Alongside these negative prospects, Veer has to deal with his sister & mother too! Bhavna being the most suspicious character right now in the story (excluding the another system guy), might just create chaos when she finally meets Veer. Especially, the face-off of Shweta & Bhavna. I still feel that Bhavna will be having an upper hand in that, not because she did anything better than Shweta, but it's just a gut feeling that Veer might tend towards Bhavna.

Shweta.. she deserves a good life now. Husband being a cheat, her son's incident, being broken, marrying a pig Brijesh, and then being in a family of such fools! She was understandably desperate to secure her daughter's future.. though it's incapable of justifying her behaviour towards Veer but as they say, “andhon ke shehar mein kaana raja”.. what other's did with Veer, keeping that in mind, Shweta's behaviour becomes a tiny thing in front of that. I know that Bhavna will come up with something that might prove her to be a “Balidaani” but thinking practically, a kid whose own mother, left him, how can we expect his stepmom to give a fuck about what he does and what he doesn't..?

Though, Shweta did try to accept Veer as her own child in the start, but some “unknown plans” made sure that Veer has a useless image in front of her. Let's see how Veer is going to treat her especially when the Alpha Trait is soaring high in the sky. On the contrary, Bhumika being a complete puppet, that was controlled by Shweta, has brought herself in such a situation where she just cannot come up and say that, “Okay Veer! Let's forget those dark shades and move to a new source of light, a new relationship”! As far as I've understood her, she might be similar to that “shy” or “timid” version of Arohi. If it is so, then the path ahead, isn't going to be an easy one for her. Yeah! In case Veer somehow just approaches her on his own, then it's a different case, but Bhumika showing the courage on her own, looks like a difficult thing! Though, I don't think “Sigma Veer” would do that..!!

Coming to Ragini.. beaches!? Bikinis!? Jokes apart, I think this beach trip might trigger a new relationship between Ragini & Veer. She kissed him, removed her top in front of him, made her breasts feel comfortable in his hands, but still after that Vegas trip, there must be some ice between them, that needs to be broken! Ragini seems to be the perfect candidate in such a situation, who knows how to show her feelings and thoughts, without hesitating. But would be interesting to see how “Sigma + Stronger Alpha” Veer will react to that teasing this time. The ending scenes to start a new story for them, is close, really – really close!!

Veer's reaction to Suhana being shot, as explained in the flashback scene sums up the place Suhana holds in Veer's life currently. Though,we cannot call it love right now, neither from Veer' side nor Suhana's.. But that too isn't too far away! Veer's conversation with Pari, points towards the fact that he's feeling guilty because of what happened with Suhana.. On the contrary, Suhana kissing him to fulfill the last favour points towards something serious cooking inside her head. Suhana feeling thankful towards Veer for saving her + Veer feeling guilty because she got shot.. quite a strong combination to strengthen that particular future relationship!!

Tej is cute! She hasn't shown her cutesy side till no, still she's cute! Her love and desperation for her brother is unmatched.. She'll find him soon, because of the new inputs and that's where the fun will begin! As you mentioned in one of your comments, that she envies Veer, a bit, because she lived without a complete family... But as soon as she'll know the truth, that's where we'll see the real sister inside her! I expect her to stand up and destroy each and every of those who tortured Veer, only through her words. She might stand up in front of Bhavna too, and ask why she did what she did, but will she answer? That's the real question.

Bhavna, as I said, we'll know the reason for her sacrifice but would be interesting to see how Veer will behave in front of her, taking into consideration, his modified personality. She hails from a royal family, means powerful enemies, means danger for Bhavna as well as her family. But the question is still the same, why she left Veer? In case she thought Veer will be in danger, staying close to her, then why not Tej? She wasn't in danger, is it about the hierarchy? Veer is the last hope of that fallen royal family, and that's why he's on the radar? But again, why Bhavna wants to meet him now? Are the black clouds done & dusted now? Let's see what her clarification and history holds.

Pari holds the damn secret! Won't say much because every assumption will fall badly as soon as this cutesy and loving personality is replaced by the other one. But I'm sure that Pari or Pari's another personality knows every damn thing about that other system. Veer ain't qualified enough to access that information now, i guess..

The update was really beautiful! Seems like a lot of things are going to happen simultaneously in this arc! Especially handling the emotional matters alongside the repair and restoration of negative prospects. The build-up to the main part seems exciting and what's coming next seems to be more exciting! Keep going man, waiting for the opening up of that arc, which seems to remain my favourite throughout the story...

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Flymovers777 bhai story to ready thi late kha ho gyi

Waiting for next one

Waiting for next update

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

2200 pages poore hone par dher sari badhaiyan or shubhkamanaye aapko....

Ding kab aayega werewolf bhai

Waiting for next update sir g

Waiting for next update sir

Jaldi ka bol ke writer sahab khud hi gayab ho gye.....

Waiting for next update bro

Abhi tak nirdharit samay se 12 hours late ho fir bhi hum kaam chala lenge

Rat s subah hogyi ab subah s lgta h fir rat hogi tb update milega

Waiting for your next update bro

Ding kya aaj aayega werewolf bhai intzar rahega

Abhi Tak Apka Update Nahi Ayya
Update Ka Intejaar Hai

Ragini me din ba din hote badlao ne mujhe
mentally bohat disturb kia hai 1 negative
character jo shiro se kuch khas rol ta hi nahi
ab achanak se itni importance kyu?
ye bohat hi weird feeling hain
starting se hi hume Nidhi ko main leading
me dikhaya gaya hai story incest based pe
hai to is bat me koi shak nahi k bohat se characters involve hu ge lakin story ki stability banaye rakhna b utna hi zarori hai
Nidhi k bad bohat se characters introduce
howe like Sonia or uski friends phir sath hi
Suhana&Divya jinhe major rol nibhate dikhaya gaya hai jaise k humen pta hai ye koi simple log nahi hain bare bare nam k sath wasi hi unki pehchan hai to ab point ye hai k
Ragini compare ki bat karen to kisi k sath
b koi match nahi hai we know jis tarah ki
situation me wo thi Veer ka usey protect
kerna it's a good thing for her but the main reason is after that why she is behaving like a teenager? can u explain me.....
Mujhe is bat se koi matlb nahi hai k Ragini
kia kerti hai lakin some times kisi aise
character ko itna highlight ker dena b hazam
nahi hota or specially jab bat aa jai Nidhi ki
to phir to chahe koi b ho Kaera&Sonia chahe
koi b faraq nahi parta kyu humare hath kuch
b nahi hota ye sb writer ka kamal hai
jis tarah se Nidhi ko highlight kia gaya hai
dosre kisi character ko le ker itna craze feel
nahi howa abhi tak she's like a God level
character beyond the imaginations😊
ajtak kisi or story me kisi or writer ko 1 married lady ko itna ziada sarahte howe
nahi dekha ye khud me bohat bari effort hai
Nidhi ki life me kuch b simple nahi ta but still
she never give up or at last Veer ne uske
dukhu ka madawa ker diya jo bohat hi ziada
impressive hai(topis lamba hota ja rha hai to bat ko mukhatiser kerta chalu)
abhi current situation me Nidhi ka filhal koi
rol nahi or zahir c bat hai k aise hi to achanak
se to entry nahi karwa sakte jitna ziada character ki hype utna hi effort
Ragini k mamle me bs thora sa ehteyat ki
zarorat hai chezu ko bohat ache se manage
karne ki zarorat hai i hope k ap meri bat ko
understand karen ge mujhe na to story se koi
issue hai or na hi kisi character se bs jo feel
kia wo bata diya ise koi negative comment
jaisa na lena ye meri thoughts hain jo story ko pharne k bad mere dimagh me chalti rehti to maine unhi batu ko share kia hai
Or 1 akhri bat k Suman ka Sonali ko force
kerna ye bohat hi awkward feel kerwata hai
theak hai Veer ne un logu k liye bohat kuch kia ahai chalo ye maan lia k Sonali uska 10% to choro 1% b nahi lota sakti but yahan bat ho rahi hai Suman k behavior ki Veer se v jitni b loyal rhe per usey ye right nahi milta k wo
Sonali ko kisi b bat k liye force kre she's a human not a Robert k jaisi instructions do ge waisa kerta jai ga bina kisi bat k Suman Veer ki slave hai to rhe us se koi matter nahi
Food truck shiro karne se le ker ab tak Sonali
hi manage kerti aa rhi hai to Veer ko hi ab uske liye kuch kerna chahiye or kaise b ker k Suman pe ye bat wazia ki jai k wo kisi ko is tarah se force nahi ker sakti ye meri personal
request hai sir isme sudhar kia jai.

Overall ab tak k jitne b updates read kiye
sabhi 1 se barh ker 1 te last kitne time se
maine koi b reply nahi diya yad nahi per ye kuch baten thin jo main kerna chah rha ta hope so ap understand karo ge


Ajke liye itna hi.....!


Keep goig......😊

Intaz
Intazar rahega sir ...

Waiting werewolf bhai

Inrezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....


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Update - 112 ~ External Affairs
Ab tak...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'


Ab aage...

"Toh? Kaha the tum itne din? Mein tumhare ghar pe bhi ek din gaya tha. Bhabhi jii ne bataya tha ki tum Las Vegas me ho? Really? Ghoomna tha toh ek baar puch toh lete mujhse? Maybe I would have joined you!? Ya mein kuch aur interesting places suggest kar deta. Seriously tum-"

Awaaz thi Karan kii, jo apni car drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha Veer.

Veer : Tum jesa soch rahe ho wesa kuch bhi nahi hai. Bas kaam se gaya tha.

Karan : Ohh really now? Kesa kaam? Wait! Tumhe Las Vegas me kya kaam pad gaya?

Veer (sighs) : Miss Suhana ke saath tha mein. Unhe kaam tha. Aur woh mujhe business related tour par leke gayi thi. Taaki mein business ke baare me aur jaan saku. Ab khush?

Veer ne Suhana ke injured state ki baat ko chhipaate hue kaha.

Karan : Whaaatttt? Miss Suhana? Sonia dii ki badi behan? Huh!!? W-Wait!! Veer!? Are you... Are you into older girls?

Veer : Shut up! Keep driving!

Karan : Ahem! Well, tum koi bhi baat share kar sakte ho, you know. I'm good at keeping secrets and-

Veer : Keep driving!!!

Karan : Ugh! Fine! Nahi batana toh mat batao. Although, koi bhi believe nahi karega ki tum Miss Suhana ke saath business tour par gaye the. Woh aur tumhe leke jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Given her personality, she won't even let-

Veer : KARAN!!??

Karan : F-Fine...! Fine! Chala raha hu. I won't talk now. Wese!?

Veer : Firse!?

Karan : Nahi woh baat nahi kar raha mein. Mein bas curious tha uss din ko lekar. I mean... You know... Tumne uss steel industries par stock investment kii. Mene tumhe roka tha par baad me shares ke rate ussi ke sabse upar gaye. Kese!?

Veer (smiles) : Just my hunch!?

Karan : Oh come on! Pehli hi baar me itna accha tukka nahi lagta. Tell me! Tumhe kese pata chala tha ki woh company dubegi nahi? You saw it coming right?

Veer (smiles) : Well! Ye ek secret hai!

Karan (sighs) : Aur jo tum kabhi nahi bataoge!

Veer (smiles) : Exactly!

Karan : Mujhe laga hi tha. Kherr! Here we are!

Gaadi se utarte hue dono ek badi sii building ke andar pravesh kiye.

Karan : Tum jo bhi chaahte ho yaha sab ho jayega. Don't worry! Yaha sab mujhe acche se jaante hai. Aur tumhara kaam boht acche se kar denge woh. Iski guarantee meri.

Veer : Hmm!

Karan ne Veer ki mulaqaat ek aadmi se karaayi. Veer jaha tha sirf wahi nahi reh sakta tha zindagi bhar. Usse kam samay me jald se jald aage badhna tha.

Aur paisa, ek aham bhumika nibhaata hai samaaj me. Ye baat Veer bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Chef on wheels ke liye usne kuch naye changes kiye the. Usse aur upar uthaane ke liye, Veer ne total 8 food trucks ka ek set up taiyaar kiya tha.

Ye jagah jagah Mumbai me apni ek chain chala ke naam banaane ke liye tha. Uske paas abhi karodo rupaye the. Investment me usne koi kami nahi jaane dii.

Food serving ke dauraan usne choti se choti cheezo par dhyaan diya. Chef on wheels ke naam se hi napkins, plates, spoons ho ya kuch aur, sabhi me uske food truck ki Branding logo ke saath kari gayi.

Aur inn sab ke production ke liye hi Karan usse yaha iss aadmi ke paas laaya tha. Deal pakki ho jaane ke baad dono hi waha se chal diye. Manorath ki taraf se jo flats usse mile the, Veer ne unhe bhi rent par daal diye the. Woh ek hi saath alag alag jagah par focus rakhe hue tha. Earnings jaha se jitni bhi aa sake abhi, wahi boht tha.

Karan : Toh!? Isse tum aage aur bada banaana chaahte ho?

Veer : Of course! Ek baar ye enough popular ho jaaye toh hotel ke baare me socha hai. Funding boht lagegi.

Karan : Yeah! Wese mujhe gin sakte ho. I can be an invester too.

Veer : Hmm? Really?

Karan : Of course! Thoda boht mein invest kar hi dunga. But... Mere khyaal se tumhe dii se baat karni chahiye. Kyuki woh tumhe zyada investment provide kar sakti hai. She controls much bigger deals than me.

Veer : Toh kya abhi baat ho sakti hai?

Karan : Sure! Wese bhi woh mujhse kuch din pehle keh rahi thi.

Veer : Kya!?

Karan : She told me that... "Veer should let me know always where he's going. He should text me and call me."

Veer : Ahem! Well!! Let's go! Mein khud hi unse baat karta hu.

Abhi woh dono jaa hi rahe the ki Veer ke phone par Kavya ka call aa dhamka,

Veer : Bolo Kavya!

Kavya : Aap laut aaye!?? Aap laut aaye aur aapne bataaya bhi nahi bhaiya?? Mujhe abhi abhi bhabhi se pata chala.

Veer : Kal hi aaya hu meri maa! Saas toh lene de. Wese tum kaha ho?

Kavya : Obviously college me houngi na! Par woh sab chorriye. Aap bataiye aap kaha hai?

Veer : Mein filhaal kaam se ba--

Kavya : Wonderful! Toh mein aur Arohi dii! Oye Kritika? Tu jaldi leave lekar chal rahi hai kya? Chal na pagli! Veer bhaiya rahenge yaar aur kya...! Ek toh free ka thoosne mil raha hai aur nakhre kar rahi ho. Haan kuch nahi bolengi aunty. Unhe bataega hi kaun? Chal rahi hai na? Arohi dii bhi hai na yaar! Okay! Haan na baba! Hmm~ Hello? Hello?? Haan bhaiya! Mein, Arohi dii, aur Kritika, hum teeno hi yaha se nikal ke xxxxxxx cafe par jaa rahe hai. Aur aap wahi mil rahe ho hume. Okay!?

Veer : H-Hey! Kaavvyaaa!! W-Wait! Kavya mene kaha ki mein baahar--

Kavya : Thank you so much Bhaiya! B-Bye Mmmuuaaah~

*Call ends*

Kavya ne Veer ki baat sune bina hi apni baat poori rakh ke meeting bhi set kar lii. Veer bechara bas apna phone hi dekhta reh gaya. Kuch kaamo me ladkiya kitni aage hua karti thi.

Veer (smiles) : Ye ladki bhi poori cartoon hai!

Karan : Toh? Ab kaha chalna hai?

Veer : xxxxxxx Square lelo!

Karan : Huh!? Waha kyu? Waha kya hai?

Veer : Sonali!

Karan : Ohh!

Aur bina kuch sawaal kiye Karan ne gaadi ghuma ke uss chauraahe par laga dii.

Chef on wheels ka ek shandaar red truck wahi chauraahe ke paas ek jagah khada hua tha. Baahar kuch 2-3 customers the jo fast food ka lutf le rahe the.

Veer jese hi car se utar food truck ke paas pohucha, andar se hi Sonali ne usse aate hue dekh liya,

Sonali : Aaiye! Aaiye! Padhaariye! Maharaaj! Aaj kese yaad aa gayi aapko apni iss gaadi ki?? Kisi ne khabar dii kya ki aapka ek business bhi hai? Jisse poora ek sadhaaran sii ladki kasht utha utha ke sambhaal rahi hai?

Karan : Okay! She looks pissed!

Veer halke se muskuraaya. Woh jaanta tha Sonali kuch aisa hi react karne waali thi.

Veer : Ek kaam hai.

Sonali : Mein bataati hu kya hoga. Ek aur naya truck! Hai na?

Veer (smiles) : Total 8 rahenge. Isko aur baakiyo ko include kar ke!

Sonali : Kya kaha? Mere kaan toh nahi bajj rahe na? Oye! Kya tum logo ne bhi wahi suna jo mein sunn rahi hu?

Woh truck me maujood kaam kar rahe waale apne sehkarmiyo se boli, uska ye andaaz Veer ko pata nahi kyu bada lubha raha tha. Yahi ek ladki thi jo uss se iss andaaz me baat karti thi. Aur asal me kitna hi kyu na woh Veer ko bura bhala keh le. Veer ko iss par kabhi gussa aata hi nahi tha. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ki andar se Sonali ke mann me uske prati koi mel nahi tha.

Woh bas muskuraate hue uski harr adaao ko dekh raha tha.

Sonali : Dekh rahe ho tumlog? Ye jo khada hai tumhaare saamne itna sajj dhaj ke. Haan haan yahi ladka. Arre yahi hai saare trucko ka maalik. Ye sab issi ki tarqeebe hai. Aur mujh jesi jawaan sundar ladki ko dekho toh kin kaamo me lagaaya hua hai.

Karan (smiles) : Haha~

Peeche khade workers bhi Veer ko sharmindagi se dekhne lage. Woh ye baat kese bhul sakte the ki Veer hi food truck aur chef on wheels ka owner tha.

Veer : Ye kya baat hui!? Mein toh tumhare liye khushkhabri leke aaya tha. Aur tum ho ki sunn'na hi nahi chaahti.

Sonali : Mein jaanti hu kya khushkhabri hogi. Na baba na! Tum jao yaha se. Wese hi mere upar itni badi zimmedaari thop ke rakhe ho. Subah se shaam isme sarr khapao, aur fir ghar jaa ke Maa se daant khao. Nahi nahi! Tum abhi ke abhi jao. Mujhe koi baat nahi sunn'ni hai. Harr mahine ki tarah iss mahine bhi saare kamaaye paise ki lambi parchi mil jayegi tumhe. Ab jao! Aur mujhe apna kaam karne do!

Veer bina kuch kahe truck ke andar aaya aur usne ishaara kiya, toh andar maujood workers uski baat fauran samajh ke baahar nikal gaye.

Woh ahista se chalte hue Sonali ke qareeb aaya toh woh fir bhadak uthi,

Sonali : Mene kaha na tum jao. Mein kaam kar rahi hu aur-

Veer : Tumhe ab ye kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi!

Uske itna kehte hi Sonali ka muh band ho gaya.

Sonali : !!??

Veer (smiles) : Mene kaha ki tumhe ab kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi! Tum padhna chaahti thi na? Mein tumhe iss kaam se azaad karta hu. Nidhi ma'am se baat karke tumhaare liye mein padhaayi ka kuch prabandh karta hu. Ab se tumhe ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!

Veer ne keh toh diya tha. Aur Sonali bhi kab se yahi chaahti thi. Par...

Ab jab achanak se usse ye praapt hua. Bechaari kuch keh na paayi. Ab kahi na kahi usse itne din iss kaam me lage hone se ek lagaav sa ho gaya tha. Logo ko apne haatho se bana kuch khila ke unke chehre par jab woh khushi dekhti thi, ya jab koi uske paas aake business ki tareef karta tha, toh Sonali ka dil khush ho jaata tha.

Bhale hi business Veer ka tha. Par usse aisa mehsoos hota tha ki woh bhi ek hissa hi hai inn sab ka.

Lekin ab jab jo usse chaahiye tha woh usse pesh kiya gaya toh,

Woh maun pad gayi.

Sonali: Mein...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : Hahaha~ Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha ki mein kya karu. Mein-

Veer ne aage badh uske kandhe par haath rakha,

Veer : Chinta mat karo. Jo tum chaahti thi. Woh ab tumhare saamne hai. Aage badho aur sweekaar karo. Business ki chinta chorr do. Workers kaafi hai.

Sonali : Fir bhi... Kya woh mere bagerr sab..

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Tension mat lo. Sab sahi ho jayega. Toh mein padhayi ke liye haan samjhu na?

Sonali : Mujhe sach me kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Mein padhna chaahti hu. Waqai! P-Par...

Veer : Toh bas fir! Aaj se tum padhogi!

Woh itna bol waha se palta ki itne me peeche se Sonali ki badi dheemi aur kamzor sii awaaz uske kaano me padi,

Sonali : S-Suno...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : T-Tum... Tum itne bure bhi nahi ho.

Veer muskuraaya,

Sonali : Th-Thank you!

Aur bas ek haami bhar woh waha se ravaana ho gaya. Sonali ka path decide ho chuka tha.

Car me baithe baithe hi uski baate Pari se bhi hoti jaa rahi thi.

[Master! Rajat se hi pehle deal karna better hoga.]

'Aisa kyu Pari? Mein ye daave ke saath keh sakta hu ki mera pyaara aasteen ka saanp bhai bhi abhi kahi na kahi koi saazish rach hi raha hoga mere khilaaf.'

[Hmm! See! Rajat ko ek baar deal karne se aap Nidhi ma'am ke liye saare potential dangers ko dur kar denge. Hume uss ghar me kisi khatre ke hone ki fiqr karne ki zaroorat nahi fir.]

'And!?'

[And I believe ki Pranjal ke saath deal karne ke baad bhi, koi aur bhi hamaare haath se chooth raha hai.]

'Tumhara matlab hai koi usse back-up de raha hai?'

[Exactly Master! Mujhe nahi lagta uss ghochu ne hi sab kuch akele kiya hai. There's something else going on here too. I have this feeling. Something much bigger is lurking in the shadows. I bet woh kisi ke back up ki wajah se hi itna ucchal raha hai. And we have only one task. And that is-]

'To destroy that back up!!!!'

[YES!]

'I see!'

[Aur isliye hum uss se baad me deal karenge. Because he isn't alone. Let's start with the easiest one Master! Rajat is the best choice to launch our attack.]

'Indeed! Rajat se deal karna asaan hoga.'

[Also, uski abhi ke harqat ke baad aap usse kese jaane de sakte ho?]

'Yeah! Suman ko bhi mujhe punishment deni hai.'

[Aur aap Rajat ko diye apne 50 lakh kese bhul sakte ho?]

'Ohh! Don't worry! Vasoolna, mujhe boht acche se aata hai Pari!'

[Yes! So let's focus on Rajat first.]

'Hmm!'

Karan : H-Hey!

Veer : Haan?

Karan : Mein keh raha tha ki ab toh kaam khatam hai na? So? Ab? Tumhe ghar drop karna hai ya tum dii se miloge?

Veer : Gaadi xxxxxx square laga lo.

Karan : Ehh? Woh toh ulti side hai. Waha kyu?

Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh aur Arohi dii milna chaahti hai.

Karan : Okay! Dusre shabdo me, mera waha koi kaam nahi hai. Hai na? Toh mein tumhe drop kar ke waha se nikal-

Veer : Kritika bhi aa rahi hai.

Karan : -Niklunga nahi. Mene kaha ki mein drop karke waha se niklunga nahi. You heard me!? Just for you okay!?

Woh bina Veer se nazre milaaye bola. Aur Veer uski ye harqat par mand mand muskuraaya.

Jab dono uss cafe me pohuche, toh cafe ke andar maujood log sab unhi ko ghoorne me lage hue the.

Ek toh Karan ki limited edition ki Mercedes, upar se dono ke high class kapde. Cafe me maujood adhiktar couples ki nazre Veer aur Karan par hi tiki hui thi.

Aur unhi me se ek table ke ird gird baithi hui thi Kavya, Arohi aur Kritika jo wahi se unhe haath hilaate hue bula rahi thi.

Karan ki nazre ek pal me hi Kritika par jaa kar tiki aur usse dekhte hi ek jhurjhuri sii uske shareer me daud gayi. Yahi haal Kritika ka bhi tha.

Veer se toh woh thi hi attracted. Par jese woh jaanti thi ki Veer ke saath uska kaata bhidna mushqil tha. Jis kaaran se uska rujhaan dheere dheere Karan ki orr hona shuru hua.

Aur ab Karan uski nazro me ek ideal ladko me se ek bann chuka tha.

Kayi baar toh woh khud ki kismat par hi hairaan reh jaati thi. Karan jesa ladka, uss se baat karne ke liye aatur ho raha tha. Kya hi kahe iss baare me ab toh.

Wahi veer ki nigaaho ne bhi apni dono behno ko dhundh liya tha.

Jese hi Veer unke paas aaya, Kavya apni kursi se uth jhatt se Veer ke gale lag gayi.

Arohi ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhi khud ka na rok paayi aur Veer se gale mil woh apni seat par baith gayi. Halaki uski hug ki time limit Kavya ke muqaable behad hi kam thi. Probably 1 se 2 second ki hi thi uski hug.

Kavya : Aap bhi aaye ho haan? Kese yaad aa gayi aaj?

Karan : Ab please yaar firse taang kheechna mat shuru kar dena.

Arohi : *smiles*

Kritika : M-Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap bhi aa rahe ho.

Karan : Haan! Woh actually mein haha~ Woh-

Veer : Aa nahi raha tha. Par tumhara naam sunn ke bhaaga chala aaya.

Kritika : !!!?????

Karan : Wh-What? Ahahaha~ Arre ni ni! M-Mein toh bas-

Kritika (blushes) : Wese, accha kiya aap aa gaye.

Karan : O-Ohh!

Kavya : Huh!? Ye aap dono ke beech kya chal raha hai?

Kritika (blushes) : Order do na tum! Mujhe le aayi zabardasti. Ab kuch khilwaogi nahi kya?

Kavya : Aaj Veer bhaiya denge na party. Kyu? Bhaiya? Aap khilwa rahe ho na hume?

Veer : Of course! Of course! Meri choti behan jo khaana chaahegi woh milega usse. Aaj party meri orr se.

Kavya ne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal noche aur boli,

Kavya : Hehehe~ Ye hui na baat! I love you~

Arohi : Tum itne din kyu the baahar Veer?

Veer : Work dii! Work! Samajh lijiye business related tour tha. Yaha se waha hote rahe bas.

Arohi : Okay!

Veer : Aap teeno seedhe college se yaha!?

Arohi : Mmm~ Kavya ko jab pata chala ki tum kal hi laut chuke ho toh woh tumse milne ke liye zidd karne lagi. Aur mujhe bhi shaamil kar liya.

Veer : Kya aapko nahi milna tha mujhse?

Arohi : Ah! O-Of course! *blushes* Mujhe bhi milna tha. Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai? Aur tum college kyu nahi aate?

Veer : Sirf exams dene jaunga!

Arohi : Aisa karoge toh dikkat jaengi. Internal marks teachers ke haath me hote hai Veer. Agar unse acchi bana ke nahi rakhoge toh woh low marks de denge.

Veer (smiles) : Meri class teacher hi Nidhi ma'am hai.

Arohi : Ahhn! That's... Par fir bhi Veer. College aaya karo. At least thodi derr ke liye hi aao. Par aaya karo.

Veer : I'll try!

Kavya aur Kritika menu pakad wahi order karne me lag gayi. Idhar beech beech me Kritika aur Karan ke nain matakka chal rahe the. Toh wahi saamne baithi Kavya Veer ko pal pal uski aankho me dekhti.

Baatein toh woh Kritika se kar rahi thi par table ke neeche uska perr Veer ki jaangh par tha. Aur Veer bina koi aapatti jataaye Kavya ke makhmali perro par apne haath ahista ahista ferrne laga. Toh kabhi unhe halke haath se dabaata. Jiske badle me Kavya ke labo par ek muskaan sajj jaati.

Khaana peena jese hi hua, Kavya ne apna naya plan patak diya,

Kavya : Okay! Toh ab hum chal rahe hai movie!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mujhe ek zaroori kaam hai. Mein nahi rahunga!

Kavya : Whaaaatttt!?? Noooooooooo! Bhaiyaaaaa! Aap se toh sabse zyada umeed thi aur aapne...

Veer : Kavyaaaa!

Kavya : Jao nahi baat karni aap se. Jab dekho tab kaam kaam kaam! Kabhi humaare saath ek night out bhi nahi kiya hoga aapne. Kabhi ghume bhi nahi hoge hamare saath raat me. Jao! Hmph~

Arohi : You go! I'll handle her!

Veer (smiles) : Thank god! Aap na ho, toh mera kya ho!

Arohi (blushes) : Dumbo! Go now!

Kavya : Hmph! Jao jao! Mujhe aap se ab baat nahi karni!

Veer : What about you?

Karan : Yeah! Well sure! Mein tumhe drop kar deta hu.

Veer : Nahi! Tum carry on karo. Mein chala jaunga. Don't worry!

Aur unhe wahi chorr veer waha se nikal aaya.

Karan ki baatein Kritika se acchi khaasi ho rahi thi. Aise me Veer usse disturb nahi karna chaahta tha. Aur Kavya ka kya tha? Aaj woh I hate you bol rahi thi. Kal sabse pehla call ussi ka aane wala tha Veer ko.

Veer jab ghar pohucha toh hall me ghuste hi Ragini bhaagti hui uske paas aayi,

Woh abhi awaaz lagaane hi waala tha ki Ragini ne aake uske hontho par ungli rakh usse rok diya.

Ragini : Ssshhhhhhh!!!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Ragini : Mene Suman jii aur Tai jii ko bhej diya hai baahar.

Veer : Kaha?

Ragini (smiles) : Shopping pe. Aur kaha!?

Veer : Aap behad excited lag rahi ho.

Ragini : Ohh of course! Kyu nahi rahungi? After all... Saath me tum rahoge!

Usne aankho me aankhein daalte hue kaha,

Veer : Ahem! So?

Ragini : Bas! Mein ready hi hu. Tum jaldi se change kar lo. Mene Aabha ko upar TV me movie laga ke dii hai. Ghar par wahi rahegi. Aur tum aur mein-

Veer (smiles) : Mein aata hu change kar ke.

Ragini : Jaldi aana!! I'm waiting ~

Veer jab ready hoke aaya toh Ragini uske sameep aake uski t shirt par jhatkaarte hue usse check karne lagi. Sab kuch sahi tha ya nahi! Woh muskuraayi aur aage aake usne ek chumban Veer ke gaal par de diya.

Ragini : Chalo! Iss se pehle ki koi aa jaaye. Tum nahi jaante mene kal raat kese kaati hai Veer!

Veer ne apni bike nikaali toh Ragini kisi bel ki tarah peeche baith ke uss se lipat gayi. Usne saree hi pehni hui thi.

Veer : Aapko saree me dekh accha laga bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi nahi Veer! Bhabhi nahi! Mein Vivek ki patni nahi hu ab. Ragini bulao! K-Kaho na Veer! Ragini! Mera naam lo! Lo na naam Veer!

Veer asmanjas me pad gaya tha. Ragini uss se lagbhag 8 saal badi thi. Kherr jab ab woh Suman ko naam se bulaata tha toh Ragini ko bulaane me koi samasya nahi jaani chahiye thi.

Veer : Ragini!

Uske muh se nikla hi tha ki Ragini ka poora badan kaanp utha. Uski ungliya zorr se Veer ke kandhe par kass gayi.

Ragini : Ek baar aur...! P-Please!

Veer : Ragini!!!

Ragini : Ohh Veer!!!!

Woh zorr se apne stano ko uski peeth par gaadte hue uss se chipak gayi.

*Vrroooommmmmm*

Dono ghar se nikle apne iss Suhaane safar ke liye. Kitne dino baad aaj dono akele the. Hastakshep karne wala ab koi nahi tha. Chenn se dono ek dusre ko mehsoos ksr sakte the.

Mumbai ke beaches me bheed na ho aisa kese ho sakta tha? Ye Goa nahi tha.

Veer aur Ragini haatho me haath thaame samundar kinaare ret par chal rahe the. Samudr ka thanda paani harr lehar ke saath aake unke perro ko bhigota aur waapas chala jaata.

Dono yu hi chalte rahe. Dono me se koi kuch nahi keh raha tha. Aas paas ke jitne bhi log unhe dekh rahe the, woh unn dono ko newly married couple hi samajh rahe the.

Kaafi derr ki iss shaanti ko Ragini ne hi fir bhang kiya,

Ragini : Veer!?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : I love you~

Veer : ...

Woh kuch na bola. Bas maun raha!

Ragini : Mein sirf tumhe ye batana chaahti hu aaj. Apna dil khol ke. Kya hum!? Kya hum kahi shaant jagah par chal sakte hai?

Veer ne haami bharte hue apne kadam aage badhaaye aur woh beach me kinare ki orr chalte chalte ek behad hi sunsaan se spot par pohuch gaye.

Chattaane aur patthar hi patthar the aas pas aur saamne vishaalkaay neel samundar.


Dono hi ek bade se patthar par baith gaye. Unke haath abhi bhi aapas me bandhe hue the.

Ragini Veer ke kandhe par jhuki aur sarr rakh bolna shuru kii,

Ragini : Mein tumhe batana chaahti hu ki, mere divorce ke baad se, mujhe aisa kabhi kisi aur ke liye mehsoos nahi hua hai Veer!

Veer : ....

Ragini : Yes! I have fallen for you Veer! Tumne mujhe apne dil me panaah dii, mujhe maaf kiya, meri tumne harr baat maani. Aur tumhare bade bhai ki talakshuda biwi hone ke naate, mere mann tumhare prati aisa kuch bhi nahi aana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Ye hua!

Veer : Mein-

Ragini : Nahi! Pehle mujhe keh lene do Veer! Samaaj ki nazro se ye apraadh hai. Mein tumhare baare me aisa soch bhi nahi sakti thi. Lekin fir bhi ye sab hua. Bura mat maan'na par... Shuruaati dino me mene Vivek ko chorr ke dusri shadi lene ka faisla pehle hi le liya tha aur uske liye mene ek do hum umr ke ladko se bhi baat cheet kii thi. Dad ke kehne par mene baat kii thi. Par mujhe unme interest nahi aaya. Aur fir tumhaare saath waqt bitaane lagi.

Veer : !!?

Ragini : Jese jese samay guzar raha tha. Mujhe tumhare baare me jaan'ne ki aur iccha hone lagi. Tumhari pasand, na pasand, tumhari baatein, tumhari personality. Aur mein anjaane me hi inn sabhi ki taraf aakarshit hoti jaa rahi thi. Jab divorce hua, tab mujhe ehsaas ho chuka tha Veer ki...

Veer : ??

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai.

Veer : Bhabh-

Ragini : Ragini Veer! Aaj se mein tumhare liye Ragini hu. Bhabhi nahi! Sabke saamne tum mujhe bhabhi bula sakte ho. Par akele me!? Mein tumhare muh se apna sirf naam sunn'na pasand karungi.

Veer : J-Jii!!

Ragini : Jii nahi! Haan! Treat me like an equal person Veer!

Veer : I'll try!

Usne apna sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha. Khaas kar uske hontho ko. Aur Ragini ki saasein tez ho uthi.

Ragini : Kya inn hontho ko thodi derr ke liye choom sakti hu?

Veer jo ab tak khud ko control kiye hue tha, aise shabdo ko sunn apna aapa akhir kho hi diya.

Ragini ki patli gori makhmali kamar me haath daal Veer ne usse jakda aur apne seene se kass ke laga ke pal bhar me unn rassbhare hontho ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Nnnnggghhhhhh~"

*Smooch* *Slurp* *Slurp*

Kuch shan bhi nahi guzre the jab dono ki jeebh aapas me kushti ladd ek dusre ke muh me ghus dabaav banaane ki koshish karne lagi.

Veer ki jeebh Ragini ke muh ke andar gayi aur andhruni muh ko tatol ke unka swaad lene lagi, toh wahi Ragini bhi yahi karne me lagi thi.

"Mmmmmmmmnnnnnn~"

Veer ke haath unn mulaayam aamo ko nichodne me bhi lag gaye. Blouse ke upar se unhe zorr zorr se masalne ka maza hi alag tha.

Ragini desperation me Veer ki goad me aake baithi aur Veer ke sharaarti haath turant hi uski gaand par chale gaye.

"Mmmmmnnnnn~" "Aaaahnnnnnnn~"

*Slurp* *Slurp*

Ragini : Aise nahi Veer... Saree uthao...

Woh uttejna bhari awaaz me boli. Veer ne jese hi uski saree peech uske kulho par le jaa kar uthaayi toh woh aashcharya me reh gaya.

Neeche koi petticoat nahi tha. Bas Ragini ki doodh jesi gori jaanghe.

"Ohh Veer!"

"Claim me!!! Cherish me Veer! Let Vivek know how you should cherish an elder brother's wife. Nnnghhhh~ I love you baby!!!!"

Woh paagalo ki tarah Veer par toot padi.

Aur dono ki siskiya samundar ki lehro ke shor me ghul gayi.

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Mumbai~
Nidhi's Apartment ~
Evening ~ 8:12 PM

Nidhi ahaar ke dabbo me naye packet khol unme samaan bharne me lagi hui thi.

Juhi roz ki hi tarah TV me apna favourite cartoon dekh rahi thi. Aur Shreya abhi job se laut rahi thi jab achanak hi,

*Ding* *Dong*

Uske ghar ki door bell baji aur woh ye soch ke uthi ki Shreya aa gayi hai.

Nidhi ne abhi Darwaza khola hi tha ki usne dekha ki saamne Shreya nahi thi. Balki, ek uske hi jitne umr ki ladki khadi hui thi.

Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,

"Miss Nidhi!?"

Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!

Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,

"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"

Nidhi : Huh!!?
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Update - 112 ~ External Affairs
Ab tak...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'


Ab aage...

"Toh? Kaha the tum itne din? Mein tumhare ghar pe bhi ek din gaya tha. Bhabhi jii ne bataya tha ki tum Las Vegas me ho? Really? Ghoomna tha toh ek baar puch toh lete mujhse? Maybe I would have joined you!? Ya mein kuch aur interesting places suggest kar deta. Seriously tum-"

Awaaz thi Karan kii, jo apni car drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha Veer.

Veer : Tum jesa soch rahe ho wesa kuch bhi nahi hai. Bas kaam se gaya tha.

Karan : Ohh really now? Kesa kaam? Wait! Tumhe Las Vegas me kya kaam pad gaya?

Veer (sighs) : Miss Suhana ke saath tha mein. Unhe kaam tha. Aur woh mujhe business related tour par leke gayi thi. Taaki mein business ke baare me aur jaan saku. Ab khush?

Veer ne Suhana ke injured state ki baat ko chhipaate hue kaha.

Karan : Whaaatttt? Miss Suhana? Sonia dii ki badi behan? Huh!!? W-Wait!! Veer!? Are you... Are you into older girls?

Veer : Shut up! Keep driving!

Karan : Ahem! Well, tum koi bhi baat share kar sakte ho, you know. I'm good at keeping secrets and-

Veer : Keep driving!!!

Karan : Ugh! Fine! Nahi batana toh mat batao. Although, koi bhi believe nahi karega ki tum Miss Suhana ke saath business tour par gaye the. Woh aur tumhe leke jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Given her personality, she won't even let-

Veer : KARAN!!??

Karan : F-Fine...! Fine! Chala raha hu. I won't talk now. Wese!?

Veer : Firse!?

Karan : Nahi woh baat nahi kar raha mein. Mein bas curious tha uss din ko lekar. I mean... You know... Tumne uss steel industries par stock investment kii. Mene tumhe roka tha par baad me shares ke rate ussi ke sabse upar gaye. Kese!?

Veer (smiles) : Just my hunch!?

Karan : Oh come on! Pehli hi baar me itna accha tukka nahi lagta. Tell me! Tumhe kese pata chala tha ki woh company dubegi nahi? You saw it coming right?

Veer (smiles) : Well! Ye ek secret hai!

Karan (sighs) : Aur jo tum kabhi nahi bataoge!

Veer (smiles) : Exactly!

Karan : Mujhe laga hi tha. Kherr! Here we are!

Gaadi se utarte hue dono ek badi sii building ke andar pravesh kiye.

Karan : Tum jo bhi chaahte ho yaha sab ho jayega. Don't worry! Yaha sab mujhe acche se jaante hai. Aur tumhara kaam boht acche se kar denge woh. Iski guarantee meri.

Veer : Hmm!

Karan ne Veer ki mulaqaat ek aadmi se karaayi. Veer jaha tha sirf wahi nahi reh sakta tha zindagi bhar. Usse kam samay me jald se jald aage badhna tha.

Aur paisa, ek aham bhumika nibhaata hai samaaj me. Ye baat Veer bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Chef on wheels ke liye usne kuch naye changes kiye the. Usse aur upar uthaane ke liye, Veer ne total 8 food trucks ka ek set up taiyaar kiya tha.

Ye jagah jagah Mumbai me apni ek chain chala ke naam banaane ke liye tha. Uske paas abhi karodo rupaye the. Investment me usne koi kami nahi jaane dii.

Food serving ke dauraan usne choti se choti cheezo par dhyaan diya. Chef on wheels ke naam se hi napkins, plates, spoons ho ya kuch aur, sabhi me uske food truck ki Branding logo ke saath kari gayi.

Aur inn sab ke production ke liye hi Karan usse yaha iss aadmi ke paas laaya tha. Deal pakki ho jaane ke baad dono hi waha se chal diye. Manorath ki taraf se jo flats usse mile the, Veer ne unhe bhi rent par daal diye the. Woh ek hi saath alag alag jagah par focus rakhe hue tha. Earnings jaha se jitni bhi aa sake abhi, wahi boht tha.

Karan : Toh!? Isse tum aage aur bada banaana chaahte ho?

Veer : Of course! Ek baar ye enough popular ho jaaye toh hotel ke baare me socha hai. Funding boht lagegi.

Karan : Yeah! Wese mujhe gin sakte ho. I can be an invester too.

Veer : Hmm? Really?

Karan : Of course! Thoda boht mein invest kar hi dunga. But... Mere khyaal se tumhe dii se baat karni chahiye. Kyuki woh tumhe zyada investment provide kar sakti hai. She controls much bigger deals than me.

Veer : Toh kya abhi baat ho sakti hai?

Karan : Sure! Wese bhi woh mujhse kuch din pehle keh rahi thi.

Veer : Kya!?

Karan : She told me that... "Veer should let me know always where he's going. He should text me and call me."

Veer : Ahem! Well!! Let's go! Mein khud hi unse baat karta hu.

Abhi woh dono jaa hi rahe the ki Veer ke phone par Kavya ka call aa dhamka,

Veer : Bolo Kavya!

Kavya : Aap laut aaye!?? Aap laut aaye aur aapne bataaya bhi nahi bhaiya?? Mujhe abhi abhi bhabhi se pata chala.

Veer : Kal hi aaya hu meri maa! Saas toh lene de. Wese tum kaha ho?

Kavya : Obviously college me houngi na! Par woh sab chorriye. Aap bataiye aap kaha hai?

Veer : Mein filhaal kaam se ba--

Kavya : Wonderful! Toh mein aur Arohi dii! Oye Kritika? Tu jaldi leave lekar chal rahi hai kya? Chal na pagli! Veer bhaiya rahenge yaar aur kya...! Ek toh free ka thoosne mil raha hai aur nakhre kar rahi ho. Haan kuch nahi bolengi aunty. Unhe bataega hi kaun? Chal rahi hai na? Arohi dii bhi hai na yaar! Okay! Haan na baba! Hmm~ Hello? Hello?? Haan bhaiya! Mein, Arohi dii, aur Kritika, hum teeno hi yaha se nikal ke xxxxxxx cafe par jaa rahe hai. Aur aap wahi mil rahe ho hume. Okay!?

Veer : H-Hey! Kaavvyaaa!! W-Wait! Kavya mene kaha ki mein baahar--

Kavya : Thank you so much Bhaiya! B-Bye Mmmuuaaah~

*Call ends*

Kavya ne Veer ki baat sune bina hi apni baat poori rakh ke meeting bhi set kar lii. Veer bechara bas apna phone hi dekhta reh gaya. Kuch kaamo me ladkiya kitni aage hua karti thi.

Veer (smiles) : Ye ladki bhi poori cartoon hai!

Karan : Toh? Ab kaha chalna hai?

Veer : xxxxxxx Square lelo!

Karan : Huh!? Waha kyu? Waha kya hai?

Veer : Sonali!

Karan : Ohh!

Aur bina kuch sawaal kiye Karan ne gaadi ghuma ke uss chauraahe par laga dii.

Chef on wheels ka ek shandaar red truck wahi chauraahe ke paas ek jagah khada hua tha. Baahar kuch 2-3 customers the jo fast food ka lutf le rahe the.

Veer jese hi car se utar food truck ke paas pohucha, andar se hi Sonali ne usse aate hue dekh liya,

Sonali : Aaiye! Aaiye! Padhaariye! Maharaaj! Aaj kese yaad aa gayi aapko apni iss gaadi ki?? Kisi ne khabar dii kya ki aapka ek business bhi hai? Jisse poora ek sadhaaran sii ladki kasht utha utha ke sambhaal rahi hai?

Karan : Okay! She looks pissed!

Veer halke se muskuraaya. Woh jaanta tha Sonali kuch aisa hi react karne waali thi.

Veer : Ek kaam hai.

Sonali : Mein bataati hu kya hoga. Ek aur naya truck! Hai na?

Veer (smiles) : Total 8 rahenge. Isko aur baakiyo ko include kar ke!

Sonali : Kya kaha? Mere kaan toh nahi bajj rahe na? Oye! Kya tum logo ne bhi wahi suna jo mein sunn rahi hu?

Woh truck me maujood kaam kar rahe waale apne sehkarmiyo se boli, uska ye andaaz Veer ko pata nahi kyu bada lubha raha tha. Yahi ek ladki thi jo uss se iss andaaz me baat karti thi. Aur asal me kitna hi kyu na woh Veer ko bura bhala keh le. Veer ko iss par kabhi gussa aata hi nahi tha. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ki andar se Sonali ke mann me uske prati koi mel nahi tha.

Woh bas muskuraate hue uski harr adaao ko dekh raha tha.

Sonali : Dekh rahe ho tumlog? Ye jo khada hai tumhaare saamne itna sajj dhaj ke. Haan haan yahi ladka. Arre yahi hai saare trucko ka maalik. Ye sab issi ki tarqeebe hai. Aur mujh jesi jawaan sundar ladki ko dekho toh kin kaamo me lagaaya hua hai.

Karan (smiles) : Haha~

Peeche khade workers bhi Veer ko sharmindagi se dekhne lage. Woh ye baat kese bhul sakte the ki Veer hi food truck aur chef on wheels ka owner tha.

Veer : Ye kya baat hui!? Mein toh tumhare liye khushkhabri leke aaya tha. Aur tum ho ki sunn'na hi nahi chaahti.

Sonali : Mein jaanti hu kya khushkhabri hogi. Na baba na! Tum jao yaha se. Wese hi mere upar itni badi zimmedaari thop ke rakhe ho. Subah se shaam isme sarr khapao, aur fir ghar jaa ke Maa se daant khao. Nahi nahi! Tum abhi ke abhi jao. Mujhe koi baat nahi sunn'ni hai. Harr mahine ki tarah iss mahine bhi saare kamaaye paise ki lambi parchi mil jayegi tumhe. Ab jao! Aur mujhe apna kaam karne do!

Veer bina kuch kahe truck ke andar aaya aur usne ishaara kiya, toh andar maujood workers uski baat fauran samajh ke baahar nikal gaye.

Woh ahista se chalte hue Sonali ke qareeb aaya toh woh fir bhadak uthi,

Sonali : Mene kaha na tum jao. Mein kaam kar rahi hu aur-

Veer : Tumhe ab ye kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi!

Uske itna kehte hi Sonali ka muh band ho gaya.

Sonali : !!??

Veer (smiles) : Mene kaha ki tumhe ab kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi! Tum padhna chaahti thi na? Mein tumhe iss kaam se azaad karta hu. Nidhi ma'am se baat karke tumhaare liye mein padhaayi ka kuch prabandh karta hu. Ab se tumhe ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!

Veer ne keh toh diya tha. Aur Sonali bhi kab se yahi chaahti thi. Par...

Ab jab achanak se usse ye praapt hua. Bechaari kuch keh na paayi. Ab kahi na kahi usse itne din iss kaam me lage hone se ek lagaav sa ho gaya tha. Logo ko apne haatho se bana kuch khila ke unke chehre par jab woh khushi dekhti thi, ya jab koi uske paas aake business ki tareef karta tha, toh Sonali ka dil khush ho jaata tha.

Bhale hi business Veer ka tha. Par usse aisa mehsoos hota tha ki woh bhi ek hissa hi hai inn sab ka.

Lekin ab jab jo usse chaahiye tha woh usse pesh kiya gaya toh,

Woh maun pad gayi.

Sonali: Mein...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : Hahaha~ Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha ki mein kya karu. Mein-

Veer ne aage badh uske kandhe par haath rakha,

Veer : Chinta mat karo. Jo tum chaahti thi. Woh ab tumhare saamne hai. Aage badho aur sweekaar karo. Business ki chinta chorr do. Workers kaafi hai.

Sonali : Fir bhi... Kya woh mere bagerr sab..

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Tension mat lo. Sab sahi ho jayega. Toh mein padhayi ke liye haan samjhu na?

Sonali : Mujhe sach me kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Mein padhna chaahti hu. Waqai! P-Par...

Veer : Toh bas fir! Aaj se tum padhogi!

Woh itna bol waha se palta ki itne me peeche se Sonali ki badi dheemi aur kamzor sii awaaz uske kaano me padi,

Sonali : S-Suno...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : T-Tum... Tum itne bure bhi nahi ho.

Veer muskuraaya,

Sonali : Th-Thank you!

Aur bas ek haami bhar woh waha se ravaana ho gaya. Sonali ka path decide ho chuka tha.

Car me baithe baithe hi uski baate Pari se bhi hoti jaa rahi thi.

[Master! Rajat se hi pehle deal karna better hoga.]

'Aisa kyu Pari? Mein ye daave ke saath keh sakta hu ki mera pyaara aasteen ka saanp bhai bhi abhi kahi na kahi koi saazish rach hi raha hoga mere khilaaf.'

[Hmm! See! Rajat ko ek baar deal karne se aap Nidhi ma'am ke liye saare potential dangers ko dur kar denge. Hume uss ghar me kisi khatre ke hone ki fiqr karne ki zaroorat nahi fir.]

'And!?'

[And I believe ki Pranjal ke saath deal karne ke baad bhi, koi aur bhi hamaare haath se chooth raha hai.]

'Tumhara matlab hai koi usse back-up de raha hai?'

[Exactly Master! Mujhe nahi lagta uss ghochu ne hi sab kuch akele kiya hai. There's something else going on here too. I have this feeling. Something much bigger is lurking in the shadows. I bet woh kisi ke back up ki wajah se hi itna ucchal raha hai. And we have only one task. And that is-]

'To destroy that back up!!!!'

[YES!]

'I see!'

[Aur isliye hum uss se baad me deal karenge. Because he isn't alone. Let's start with the easiest one Master! Rajat is the best choice to launch our attack.]

'Indeed! Rajat se deal karna asaan hoga.'

[Also, uski abhi ke harqat ke baad aap usse kese jaane de sakte ho?]

'Yeah! Suman ko bhi mujhe punishment deni hai.'

[Aur aap Rajat ko diye apne 50 lakh kese bhul sakte ho?]

'Ohh! Don't worry! Vasoolna, mujhe boht acche se aata hai Pari!'

[Yes! So let's focus on Rajat first.]

'Hmm!'

Karan : H-Hey!

Veer : Haan?

Karan : Mein keh raha tha ki ab toh kaam khatam hai na? So? Ab? Tumhe ghar drop karna hai ya tum dii se miloge?

Veer : Gaadi xxxxxx square laga lo.

Karan : Ehh? Woh toh ulti side hai. Waha kyu?

Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh aur Arohi dii milna chaahti hai.

Karan : Okay! Dusre shabdo me, mera waha koi kaam nahi hai. Hai na? Toh mein tumhe drop kar ke waha se nikal-

Veer : Kritika bhi aa rahi hai.

Karan : -Niklunga nahi. Mene kaha ki mein drop karke waha se niklunga nahi. You heard me!? Just for you okay!?

Woh bina Veer se nazre milaaye bola. Aur Veer uski ye harqat par mand mand muskuraaya.

Jab dono uss cafe me pohuche, toh cafe ke andar maujood log sab unhi ko ghoorne me lage hue the.

Ek toh Karan ki limited edition ki Mercedes, upar se dono ke high class kapde. Cafe me maujood adhiktar couples ki nazre Veer aur Karan par hi tiki hui thi.

Aur unhi me se ek table ke ird gird baithi hui thi Kavya, Arohi aur Kritika jo wahi se unhe haath hilaate hue bula rahi thi.

Karan ki nazre ek pal me hi Kritika par jaa kar tiki aur usse dekhte hi ek jhurjhuri sii uske shareer me daud gayi. Yahi haal Kritika ka bhi tha.

Veer se toh woh thi hi attracted. Par jese woh jaanti thi ki Veer ke saath uska kaata bhidna mushqil tha. Jis kaaran se uska rujhaan dheere dheere Karan ki orr hona shuru hua.

Aur ab Karan uski nazro me ek ideal ladko me se ek bann chuka tha.

Kayi baar toh woh khud ki kismat par hi hairaan reh jaati thi. Karan jesa ladka, uss se baat karne ke liye aatur ho raha tha. Kya hi kahe iss baare me ab toh.

Wahi veer ki nigaaho ne bhi apni dono behno ko dhundh liya tha.

Jese hi Veer unke paas aaya, Kavya apni kursi se uth jhatt se Veer ke gale lag gayi.

Arohi ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhi khud ka na rok paayi aur Veer se gale mil woh apni seat par baith gayi. Halaki uski hug ki time limit Kavya ke muqaable behad hi kam thi. Probably 1 se 2 second ki hi thi uski hug.

Kavya : Aap bhi aaye ho haan? Kese yaad aa gayi aaj?

Karan : Ab please yaar firse taang kheechna mat shuru kar dena.

Arohi : *smiles*

Kritika : M-Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap bhi aa rahe ho.

Karan : Haan! Woh actually mein haha~ Woh-

Veer : Aa nahi raha tha. Par tumhara naam sunn ke bhaaga chala aaya.

Kritika : !!!?????

Karan : Wh-What? Ahahaha~ Arre ni ni! M-Mein toh bas-

Kritika (blushes) : Wese, accha kiya aap aa gaye.

Karan : O-Ohh!

Kavya : Huh!? Ye aap dono ke beech kya chal raha hai?

Kritika (blushes) : Order do na tum! Mujhe le aayi zabardasti. Ab kuch khilwaogi nahi kya?

Kavya : Aaj Veer bhaiya denge na party. Kyu? Bhaiya? Aap khilwa rahe ho na hume?

Veer : Of course! Of course! Meri choti behan jo khaana chaahegi woh milega usse. Aaj party meri orr se.

Kavya ne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal noche aur boli,

Kavya : Hehehe~ Ye hui na baat! I love you~

Arohi : Tum itne din kyu the baahar Veer?

Veer : Work dii! Work! Samajh lijiye business related tour tha. Yaha se waha hote rahe bas.

Arohi : Okay!

Veer : Aap teeno seedhe college se yaha!?

Arohi : Mmm~ Kavya ko jab pata chala ki tum kal hi laut chuke ho toh woh tumse milne ke liye zidd karne lagi. Aur mujhe bhi shaamil kar liya.

Veer : Kya aapko nahi milna tha mujhse?

Arohi : Ah! O-Of course! *blushes* Mujhe bhi milna tha. Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai? Aur tum college kyu nahi aate?

Veer : Sirf exams dene jaunga!

Arohi : Aisa karoge toh dikkat jaengi. Internal marks teachers ke haath me hote hai Veer. Agar unse acchi bana ke nahi rakhoge toh woh low marks de denge.

Veer (smiles) : Meri class teacher hi Nidhi ma'am hai.

Arohi : Ahhn! That's... Par fir bhi Veer. College aaya karo. At least thodi derr ke liye hi aao. Par aaya karo.

Veer : I'll try!

Kavya aur Kritika menu pakad wahi order karne me lag gayi. Idhar beech beech me Kritika aur Karan ke nain matakka chal rahe the. Toh wahi saamne baithi Kavya Veer ko pal pal uski aankho me dekhti.

Baatein toh woh Kritika se kar rahi thi par table ke neeche uska perr Veer ki jaangh par tha. Aur Veer bina koi aapatti jataaye Kavya ke makhmali perro par apne haath ahista ahista ferrne laga. Toh kabhi unhe halke haath se dabaata. Jiske badle me Kavya ke labo par ek muskaan sajj jaati.

Khaana peena jese hi hua, Kavya ne apna naya plan patak diya,

Kavya : Okay! Toh ab hum chal rahe hai movie!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mujhe ek zaroori kaam hai. Mein nahi rahunga!

Kavya : Whaaaatttt!?? Noooooooooo! Bhaiyaaaaa! Aap se toh sabse zyada umeed thi aur aapne...

Veer : Kavyaaaa!

Kavya : Jao nahi baat karni aap se. Jab dekho tab kaam kaam kaam! Kabhi humaare saath ek night out bhi nahi kiya hoga aapne. Kabhi ghume bhi nahi hoge hamare saath raat me. Jao! Hmph~

Arohi : You go! I'll handle her!

Veer (smiles) : Thank god! Aap na ho, toh mera kya ho!

Arohi (blushes) : Dumbo! Go now!

Kavya : Hmph! Jao jao! Mujhe aap se ab baat nahi karni!

Veer : What about you?

Karan : Yeah! Well sure! Mein tumhe drop kar deta hu.

Veer : Nahi! Tum carry on karo. Mein chala jaunga. Don't worry!

Aur unhe wahi chorr veer waha se nikal aaya.

Karan ki baatein Kritika se acchi khaasi ho rahi thi. Aise me Veer usse disturb nahi karna chaahta tha. Aur Kavya ka kya tha? Aaj woh I hate you bol rahi thi. Kal sabse pehla call ussi ka aane wala tha Veer ko.

Veer jab ghar pohucha toh hall me ghuste hi Ragini bhaagti hui uske paas aayi,

Woh abhi awaaz lagaane hi waala tha ki Ragini ne aake uske hontho par ungli rakh usse rok diya.

Ragini : Ssshhhhhhh!!!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Ragini : Mene Suman jii aur Tai jii ko bhej diya hai baahar.

Veer : Kaha?

Ragini (smiles) : Shopping pe. Aur kaha!?

Veer : Aap behad excited lag rahi ho.

Ragini : Ohh of course! Kyu nahi rahungi? After all... Saath me tum rahoge!

Usne aankho me aankhein daalte hue kaha,

Veer : Ahem! So?

Ragini : Bas! Mein ready hi hu. Tum jaldi se change kar lo. Mene Aabha ko upar TV me movie laga ke dii hai. Ghar par wahi rahegi. Aur tum aur mein-

Veer (smiles) : Mein aata hu change kar ke.

Ragini : Jaldi aana!! I'm waiting ~

Veer jab ready hoke aaya toh Ragini uske sameep aake uski t shirt par jhatkaarte hue usse check karne lagi. Sab kuch sahi tha ya nahi! Woh muskuraayi aur aage aake usne ek chumban Veer ke gaal par de diya.

Ragini : Chalo! Iss se pehle ki koi aa jaaye. Tum nahi jaante mene kal raat kese kaati hai Veer!

Veer ne apni bike nikaali toh Ragini kisi bel ki tarah peeche baith ke uss se lipat gayi. Usne saree hi pehni hui thi.

Veer : Aapko saree me dekh accha laga bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi nahi Veer! Bhabhi nahi! Mein Vivek ki patni nahi hu ab. Ragini bulao! K-Kaho na Veer! Ragini! Mera naam lo! Lo na naam Veer!

Veer asmanjas me pad gaya tha. Ragini uss se lagbhag 8 saal badi thi. Kherr jab ab woh Suman ko naam se bulaata tha toh Ragini ko bulaane me koi samasya nahi jaani chahiye thi.

Veer : Ragini!

Uske muh se nikla hi tha ki Ragini ka poora badan kaanp utha. Uski ungliya zorr se Veer ke kandhe par kass gayi.

Ragini : Ek baar aur...! P-Please!

Veer : Ragini!!!

Ragini : Ohh Veer!!!!

Woh zorr se apne stano ko uski peeth par gaadte hue uss se chipak gayi.

*Vrroooommmmmm*

Dono ghar se nikle apne iss Suhaane safar ke liye. Kitne dino baad aaj dono akele the. Hastakshep karne wala ab koi nahi tha. Chenn se dono ek dusre ko mehsoos ksr sakte the.

Mumbai ke beaches me bheed na ho aisa kese ho sakta tha? Ye Goa nahi tha.

Veer aur Ragini haatho me haath thaame samundar kinaare ret par chal rahe the. Samudr ka thanda paani harr lehar ke saath aake unke perro ko bhigota aur waapas chala jaata.

Dono yu hi chalte rahe. Dono me se koi kuch nahi keh raha tha. Aas paas ke jitne bhi log unhe dekh rahe the, woh unn dono ko newly married couple hi samajh rahe the.

Kaafi derr ki iss shaanti ko Ragini ne hi fir bhang kiya,

Ragini : Veer!?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : I love you~

Veer : ...

Woh kuch na bola. Bas maun raha!

Ragini : Mein sirf tumhe ye batana chaahti hu aaj. Apna dil khol ke. Kya hum!? Kya hum kahi shaant jagah par chal sakte hai?

Veer ne haami bharte hue apne kadam aage badhaaye aur woh beach me kinare ki orr chalte chalte ek behad hi sunsaan se spot par pohuch gaye.

Chattaane aur patthar hi patthar the aas pas aur saamne vishaalkaay neel samundar.


Dono hi ek bade se patthar par baith gaye. Unke haath abhi bhi aapas me bandhe hue the.

Ragini Veer ke kandhe par jhuki aur sarr rakh bolna shuru kii,

Ragini : Mein tumhe batana chaahti hu ki, mere divorce ke baad se, mujhe aisa kabhi kisi aur ke liye mehsoos nahi hua hai Veer!

Veer : ....

Ragini : Yes! I have fallen for you Veer! Tumne mujhe apne dil me panaah dii, mujhe maaf kiya, meri tumne harr baat maani. Aur tumhare bade bhai ki talakshuda biwi hone ke naate, mere mann tumhare prati aisa kuch bhi nahi aana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Ye hua!

Veer : Mein-

Ragini : Nahi! Pehle mujhe keh lene do Veer! Samaaj ki nazro se ye apraadh hai. Mein tumhare baare me aisa soch bhi nahi sakti thi. Lekin fir bhi ye sab hua. Bura mat maan'na par... Shuruaati dino me mene Vivek ko chorr ke dusri shadi lene ka faisla pehle hi le liya tha aur uske liye mene ek do hum umr ke ladko se bhi baat cheet kii thi. Dad ke kehne par mene baat kii thi. Par mujhe unme interest nahi aaya. Aur fir tumhaare saath waqt bitaane lagi.

Veer : !!?

Ragini : Jese jese samay guzar raha tha. Mujhe tumhare baare me jaan'ne ki aur iccha hone lagi. Tumhari pasand, na pasand, tumhari baatein, tumhari personality. Aur mein anjaane me hi inn sabhi ki taraf aakarshit hoti jaa rahi thi. Jab divorce hua, tab mujhe ehsaas ho chuka tha Veer ki...

Veer : ??

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai.

Veer : Bhabh-

Ragini : Ragini Veer! Aaj se mein tumhare liye Ragini hu. Bhabhi nahi! Sabke saamne tum mujhe bhabhi bula sakte ho. Par akele me!? Mein tumhare muh se apna sirf naam sunn'na pasand karungi.

Veer : J-Jii!!

Ragini : Jii nahi! Haan! Treat me like an equal person Veer!

Veer : I'll try!

Usne apna sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha. Khaas kar uske hontho ko. Aur Ragini ki saasein tez ho uthi.

Ragini : Kya inn hontho ko thodi derr ke liye choom sakti hu?

Veer jo ab tak khud ko control kiye hue tha, aise shabdo ko sunn apna aapa akhir kho hi diya.

Ragini ki patli gori makhmali kamar me haath daal Veer ne usse jakda aur apne seene se kass ke laga ke pal bhar me unn rassbhare hontho ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Nnnnggghhhhhh~"

*Smooch* *Slurp* *Slurp*

Kuch shan bhi nahi guzre the jab dono ki jeebh aapas me kushti ladd ek dusre ke muh me ghus dabaav banaane ki koshish karne lagi.

Veer ki jeebh Ragini ke muh ke andar gayi aur andhruni muh ko tatol ke unka swaad lene lagi, toh wahi Ragini bhi yahi karne me lagi thi.

"Mmmmmmmmnnnnnn~"

Veer ke haath unn mulaayam aamo ko nichodne me bhi lag gaye. Blouse ke upar se unhe zorr zorr se masalne ka maza hi alag tha.

Ragini desperation me Veer ki goad me aake baithi aur Veer ke sharaarti haath turant hi uski gaand par chale gaye.

"Mmmmmnnnnn~" "Aaaahnnnnnnn~"

*Slurp* *Slurp*

Ragini : Aise nahi Veer... Saree uthao...

Woh uttejna bhari awaaz me boli. Veer ne jese hi uski saree peech uske kulho par le jaa kar uthaayi toh woh aashcharya me reh gaya.

Neeche koi petticoat nahi tha. Bas Ragini ki doodh jesi gori jaanghe.

"Ohh Veer!"

"Claim me!!! Cherish me Veer! Let Vivek know how you should cherish an elder brother's wife. Nnnghhhh~ I love you baby!!!!"

Woh paagalo ki tarah Veer par toot padi.

Aur dono ki siskiya samundar ki lehro ke shor me ghul gayi.

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Mumbai~
Nidhi's Apartment ~
Evening ~ 8:12 PM

Nidhi ahaar ke dabbo me naye packet khol unme samaan bharne me lagi hui thi.

Juhi roz ki hi tarah TV me apna favourite cartoon dekh rahi thi. Aur Shreya abhi job se laut rahi thi jab achanak hi,

*Ding* *Dong*

Uske ghar ki door bell baji aur woh ye soch ke uthi ki Shreya aa gayi hai.

Nidhi ne abhi Darwaza khola hi tha ki usne dekha ki saamne Shreya nahi thi. Balki, ek uske hi jitne umr ki ladki khadi hui thi.

Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,

"Miss Nidhi!?"

Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!

Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,

"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"

Nidhi : Huh!!?
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Dhanyavaad! ✨
Kafi acha update tha Werewolf bhai. Matlb abhi tak is story me veer ka sbse milna chal hi rahe hai. Aur sayad se aage ke kuch Updates me aur bhi ye chalta rahe.
H lakin ye bhi hai ki sbse milne ke sath sath yaha story bhi apne pace se aage badhati kar rahi hai. Jaise pari kaRajeev ko choose karna aur sath me uska valid reason bhi dena. Fir veer ka kavya aur arohi se milna. Uske baad veer aur Ragini ka encounter batao baat sari ko uthane tak pahuch cuki hai. Aur ending to kamak ki hi thi aakhirkar update me sbko jisbaat ka intejar tha wo last line me aapne dikha hi diya.
Veer ka apne business keliye future planbhi aapne dikha diya. Sath me sonali ke liye veer ka sochna bhi aapne sahi dikhaya.
Ye baat bhi confirm hai agar veer hotal chain open krega to sweta aur bhumika hi use sambhalengi. Sath me sayad sonali ko bhi study puri hone ke baad kisi chij me laga skta hai veer.
Dekhte hai aakhir veer ke baree me tej kya kya pata kar pati hai. Aur nidhi ko bhi kya kuch pata chlta hai.
 

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Update - 112 ~ External Affairs
Ab tak...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'


Ab aage...

"Toh? Kaha the tum itne din? Mein tumhare ghar pe bhi ek din gaya tha. Bhabhi jii ne bataya tha ki tum Las Vegas me ho? Really? Ghoomna tha toh ek baar puch toh lete mujhse? Maybe I would have joined you!? Ya mein kuch aur interesting places suggest kar deta. Seriously tum-"

Awaaz thi Karan kii, jo apni car drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha Veer.

Veer : Tum jesa soch rahe ho wesa kuch bhi nahi hai. Bas kaam se gaya tha.

Karan : Ohh really now? Kesa kaam? Wait! Tumhe Las Vegas me kya kaam pad gaya?

Veer (sighs) : Miss Suhana ke saath tha mein. Unhe kaam tha. Aur woh mujhe business related tour par leke gayi thi. Taaki mein business ke baare me aur jaan saku. Ab khush?

Veer ne Suhana ke injured state ki baat ko chhipaate hue kaha.

Karan : Whaaatttt? Miss Suhana? Sonia dii ki badi behan? Huh!!? W-Wait!! Veer!? Are you... Are you into older girls?

Veer : Shut up! Keep driving!

Karan : Ahem! Well, tum koi bhi baat share kar sakte ho, you know. I'm good at keeping secrets and-

Veer : Keep driving!!!

Karan : Ugh! Fine! Nahi batana toh mat batao. Although, koi bhi believe nahi karega ki tum Miss Suhana ke saath business tour par gaye the. Woh aur tumhe leke jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Given her personality, she won't even let-

Veer : KARAN!!??

Karan : F-Fine...! Fine! Chala raha hu. I won't talk now. Wese!?

Veer : Firse!?

Karan : Nahi woh baat nahi kar raha mein. Mein bas curious tha uss din ko lekar. I mean... You know... Tumne uss steel industries par stock investment kii. Mene tumhe roka tha par baad me shares ke rate ussi ke sabse upar gaye. Kese!?

Veer (smiles) : Just my hunch!?

Karan : Oh come on! Pehli hi baar me itna accha tukka nahi lagta. Tell me! Tumhe kese pata chala tha ki woh company dubegi nahi? You saw it coming right?

Veer (smiles) : Well! Ye ek secret hai!

Karan (sighs) : Aur jo tum kabhi nahi bataoge!

Veer (smiles) : Exactly!

Karan : Mujhe laga hi tha. Kherr! Here we are!

Gaadi se utarte hue dono ek badi sii building ke andar pravesh kiye.

Karan : Tum jo bhi chaahte ho yaha sab ho jayega. Don't worry! Yaha sab mujhe acche se jaante hai. Aur tumhara kaam boht acche se kar denge woh. Iski guarantee meri.

Veer : Hmm!

Karan ne Veer ki mulaqaat ek aadmi se karaayi. Veer jaha tha sirf wahi nahi reh sakta tha zindagi bhar. Usse kam samay me jald se jald aage badhna tha.

Aur paisa, ek aham bhumika nibhaata hai samaaj me. Ye baat Veer bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Chef on wheels ke liye usne kuch naye changes kiye the. Usse aur upar uthaane ke liye, Veer ne total 8 food trucks ka ek set up taiyaar kiya tha.

Ye jagah jagah Mumbai me apni ek chain chala ke naam banaane ke liye tha. Uske paas abhi karodo rupaye the. Investment me usne koi kami nahi jaane dii.

Food serving ke dauraan usne choti se choti cheezo par dhyaan diya. Chef on wheels ke naam se hi napkins, plates, spoons ho ya kuch aur, sabhi me uske food truck ki Branding logo ke saath kari gayi.

Aur inn sab ke production ke liye hi Karan usse yaha iss aadmi ke paas laaya tha. Deal pakki ho jaane ke baad dono hi waha se chal diye. Manorath ki taraf se jo flats usse mile the, Veer ne unhe bhi rent par daal diye the. Woh ek hi saath alag alag jagah par focus rakhe hue tha. Earnings jaha se jitni bhi aa sake abhi, wahi boht tha.

Karan : Toh!? Isse tum aage aur bada banaana chaahte ho?

Veer : Of course! Ek baar ye enough popular ho jaaye toh hotel ke baare me socha hai. Funding boht lagegi.

Karan : Yeah! Wese mujhe gin sakte ho. I can be an invester too.

Veer : Hmm? Really?

Karan : Of course! Thoda boht mein invest kar hi dunga. But... Mere khyaal se tumhe dii se baat karni chahiye. Kyuki woh tumhe zyada investment provide kar sakti hai. She controls much bigger deals than me.

Veer : Toh kya abhi baat ho sakti hai?

Karan : Sure! Wese bhi woh mujhse kuch din pehle keh rahi thi.

Veer : Kya!?

Karan : She told me that... "Veer should let me know always where he's going. He should text me and call me."

Veer : Ahem! Well!! Let's go! Mein khud hi unse baat karta hu.

Abhi woh dono jaa hi rahe the ki Veer ke phone par Kavya ka call aa dhamka,

Veer : Bolo Kavya!

Kavya : Aap laut aaye!?? Aap laut aaye aur aapne bataaya bhi nahi bhaiya?? Mujhe abhi abhi bhabhi se pata chala.

Veer : Kal hi aaya hu meri maa! Saas toh lene de. Wese tum kaha ho?

Kavya : Obviously college me houngi na! Par woh sab chorriye. Aap bataiye aap kaha hai?

Veer : Mein filhaal kaam se ba--

Kavya : Wonderful! Toh mein aur Arohi dii! Oye Kritika? Tu jaldi leave lekar chal rahi hai kya? Chal na pagli! Veer bhaiya rahenge yaar aur kya...! Ek toh free ka thoosne mil raha hai aur nakhre kar rahi ho. Haan kuch nahi bolengi aunty. Unhe bataega hi kaun? Chal rahi hai na? Arohi dii bhi hai na yaar! Okay! Haan na baba! Hmm~ Hello? Hello?? Haan bhaiya! Mein, Arohi dii, aur Kritika, hum teeno hi yaha se nikal ke xxxxxxx cafe par jaa rahe hai. Aur aap wahi mil rahe ho hume. Okay!?

Veer : H-Hey! Kaavvyaaa!! W-Wait! Kavya mene kaha ki mein baahar--

Kavya : Thank you so much Bhaiya! B-Bye Mmmuuaaah~

*Call ends*

Kavya ne Veer ki baat sune bina hi apni baat poori rakh ke meeting bhi set kar lii. Veer bechara bas apna phone hi dekhta reh gaya. Kuch kaamo me ladkiya kitni aage hua karti thi.

Veer (smiles) : Ye ladki bhi poori cartoon hai!

Karan : Toh? Ab kaha chalna hai?

Veer : xxxxxxx Square lelo!

Karan : Huh!? Waha kyu? Waha kya hai?

Veer : Sonali!

Karan : Ohh!

Aur bina kuch sawaal kiye Karan ne gaadi ghuma ke uss chauraahe par laga dii.

Chef on wheels ka ek shandaar red truck wahi chauraahe ke paas ek jagah khada hua tha. Baahar kuch 2-3 customers the jo fast food ka lutf le rahe the.

Veer jese hi car se utar food truck ke paas pohucha, andar se hi Sonali ne usse aate hue dekh liya,

Sonali : Aaiye! Aaiye! Padhaariye! Maharaaj! Aaj kese yaad aa gayi aapko apni iss gaadi ki?? Kisi ne khabar dii kya ki aapka ek business bhi hai? Jisse poora ek sadhaaran sii ladki kasht utha utha ke sambhaal rahi hai?

Karan : Okay! She looks pissed!

Veer halke se muskuraaya. Woh jaanta tha Sonali kuch aisa hi react karne waali thi.

Veer : Ek kaam hai.

Sonali : Mein bataati hu kya hoga. Ek aur naya truck! Hai na?

Veer (smiles) : Total 8 rahenge. Isko aur baakiyo ko include kar ke!

Sonali : Kya kaha? Mere kaan toh nahi bajj rahe na? Oye! Kya tum logo ne bhi wahi suna jo mein sunn rahi hu?

Woh truck me maujood kaam kar rahe waale apne sehkarmiyo se boli, uska ye andaaz Veer ko pata nahi kyu bada lubha raha tha. Yahi ek ladki thi jo uss se iss andaaz me baat karti thi. Aur asal me kitna hi kyu na woh Veer ko bura bhala keh le. Veer ko iss par kabhi gussa aata hi nahi tha. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ki andar se Sonali ke mann me uske prati koi mel nahi tha.

Woh bas muskuraate hue uski harr adaao ko dekh raha tha.

Sonali : Dekh rahe ho tumlog? Ye jo khada hai tumhaare saamne itna sajj dhaj ke. Haan haan yahi ladka. Arre yahi hai saare trucko ka maalik. Ye sab issi ki tarqeebe hai. Aur mujh jesi jawaan sundar ladki ko dekho toh kin kaamo me lagaaya hua hai.

Karan (smiles) : Haha~

Peeche khade workers bhi Veer ko sharmindagi se dekhne lage. Woh ye baat kese bhul sakte the ki Veer hi food truck aur chef on wheels ka owner tha.

Veer : Ye kya baat hui!? Mein toh tumhare liye khushkhabri leke aaya tha. Aur tum ho ki sunn'na hi nahi chaahti.

Sonali : Mein jaanti hu kya khushkhabri hogi. Na baba na! Tum jao yaha se. Wese hi mere upar itni badi zimmedaari thop ke rakhe ho. Subah se shaam isme sarr khapao, aur fir ghar jaa ke Maa se daant khao. Nahi nahi! Tum abhi ke abhi jao. Mujhe koi baat nahi sunn'ni hai. Harr mahine ki tarah iss mahine bhi saare kamaaye paise ki lambi parchi mil jayegi tumhe. Ab jao! Aur mujhe apna kaam karne do!

Veer bina kuch kahe truck ke andar aaya aur usne ishaara kiya, toh andar maujood workers uski baat fauran samajh ke baahar nikal gaye.

Woh ahista se chalte hue Sonali ke qareeb aaya toh woh fir bhadak uthi,

Sonali : Mene kaha na tum jao. Mein kaam kar rahi hu aur-

Veer : Tumhe ab ye kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi!

Uske itna kehte hi Sonali ka muh band ho gaya.

Sonali : !!??

Veer (smiles) : Mene kaha ki tumhe ab kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi! Tum padhna chaahti thi na? Mein tumhe iss kaam se azaad karta hu. Nidhi ma'am se baat karke tumhaare liye mein padhaayi ka kuch prabandh karta hu. Ab se tumhe ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!

Veer ne keh toh diya tha. Aur Sonali bhi kab se yahi chaahti thi. Par...

Ab jab achanak se usse ye praapt hua. Bechaari kuch keh na paayi. Ab kahi na kahi usse itne din iss kaam me lage hone se ek lagaav sa ho gaya tha. Logo ko apne haatho se bana kuch khila ke unke chehre par jab woh khushi dekhti thi, ya jab koi uske paas aake business ki tareef karta tha, toh Sonali ka dil khush ho jaata tha.

Bhale hi business Veer ka tha. Par usse aisa mehsoos hota tha ki woh bhi ek hissa hi hai inn sab ka.

Lekin ab jab jo usse chaahiye tha woh usse pesh kiya gaya toh,

Woh maun pad gayi.

Sonali: Mein...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : Hahaha~ Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha ki mein kya karu. Mein-

Veer ne aage badh uske kandhe par haath rakha,

Veer : Chinta mat karo. Jo tum chaahti thi. Woh ab tumhare saamne hai. Aage badho aur sweekaar karo. Business ki chinta chorr do. Workers kaafi hai.

Sonali : Fir bhi... Kya woh mere bagerr sab..

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Tension mat lo. Sab sahi ho jayega. Toh mein padhayi ke liye haan samjhu na?

Sonali : Mujhe sach me kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Mein padhna chaahti hu. Waqai! P-Par...

Veer : Toh bas fir! Aaj se tum padhogi!

Woh itna bol waha se palta ki itne me peeche se Sonali ki badi dheemi aur kamzor sii awaaz uske kaano me padi,

Sonali : S-Suno...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : T-Tum... Tum itne bure bhi nahi ho.

Veer muskuraaya,

Sonali : Th-Thank you!

Aur bas ek haami bhar woh waha se ravaana ho gaya. Sonali ka path decide ho chuka tha.

Car me baithe baithe hi uski baate Pari se bhi hoti jaa rahi thi.

[Master! Rajat se hi pehle deal karna better hoga.]

'Aisa kyu Pari? Mein ye daave ke saath keh sakta hu ki mera pyaara aasteen ka saanp bhai bhi abhi kahi na kahi koi saazish rach hi raha hoga mere khilaaf.'

[Hmm! See! Rajat ko ek baar deal karne se aap Nidhi ma'am ke liye saare potential dangers ko dur kar denge. Hume uss ghar me kisi khatre ke hone ki fiqr karne ki zaroorat nahi fir.]

'And!?'

[And I believe ki Pranjal ke saath deal karne ke baad bhi, koi aur bhi hamaare haath se chooth raha hai.]

'Tumhara matlab hai koi usse back-up de raha hai?'

[Exactly Master! Mujhe nahi lagta uss ghochu ne hi sab kuch akele kiya hai. There's something else going on here too. I have this feeling. Something much bigger is lurking in the shadows. I bet woh kisi ke back up ki wajah se hi itna ucchal raha hai. And we have only one task. And that is-]

'To destroy that back up!!!!'

[YES!]

'I see!'

[Aur isliye hum uss se baad me deal karenge. Because he isn't alone. Let's start with the easiest one Master! Rajat is the best choice to launch our attack.]

'Indeed! Rajat se deal karna asaan hoga.'

[Also, uski abhi ke harqat ke baad aap usse kese jaane de sakte ho?]

'Yeah! Suman ko bhi mujhe punishment deni hai.'

[Aur aap Rajat ko diye apne 50 lakh kese bhul sakte ho?]

'Ohh! Don't worry! Vasoolna, mujhe boht acche se aata hai Pari!'

[Yes! So let's focus on Rajat first.]

'Hmm!'

Karan : H-Hey!

Veer : Haan?

Karan : Mein keh raha tha ki ab toh kaam khatam hai na? So? Ab? Tumhe ghar drop karna hai ya tum dii se miloge?

Veer : Gaadi xxxxxx square laga lo.

Karan : Ehh? Woh toh ulti side hai. Waha kyu?

Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh aur Arohi dii milna chaahti hai.

Karan : Okay! Dusre shabdo me, mera waha koi kaam nahi hai. Hai na? Toh mein tumhe drop kar ke waha se nikal-

Veer : Kritika bhi aa rahi hai.

Karan : -Niklunga nahi. Mene kaha ki mein drop karke waha se niklunga nahi. You heard me!? Just for you okay!?

Woh bina Veer se nazre milaaye bola. Aur Veer uski ye harqat par mand mand muskuraaya.

Jab dono uss cafe me pohuche, toh cafe ke andar maujood log sab unhi ko ghoorne me lage hue the.

Ek toh Karan ki limited edition ki Mercedes, upar se dono ke high class kapde. Cafe me maujood adhiktar couples ki nazre Veer aur Karan par hi tiki hui thi.

Aur unhi me se ek table ke ird gird baithi hui thi Kavya, Arohi aur Kritika jo wahi se unhe haath hilaate hue bula rahi thi.

Karan ki nazre ek pal me hi Kritika par jaa kar tiki aur usse dekhte hi ek jhurjhuri sii uske shareer me daud gayi. Yahi haal Kritika ka bhi tha.

Veer se toh woh thi hi attracted. Par jese woh jaanti thi ki Veer ke saath uska kaata bhidna mushqil tha. Jis kaaran se uska rujhaan dheere dheere Karan ki orr hona shuru hua.

Aur ab Karan uski nazro me ek ideal ladko me se ek bann chuka tha.

Kayi baar toh woh khud ki kismat par hi hairaan reh jaati thi. Karan jesa ladka, uss se baat karne ke liye aatur ho raha tha. Kya hi kahe iss baare me ab toh.

Wahi veer ki nigaaho ne bhi apni dono behno ko dhundh liya tha.

Jese hi Veer unke paas aaya, Kavya apni kursi se uth jhatt se Veer ke gale lag gayi.

Arohi ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhi khud ka na rok paayi aur Veer se gale mil woh apni seat par baith gayi. Halaki uski hug ki time limit Kavya ke muqaable behad hi kam thi. Probably 1 se 2 second ki hi thi uski hug.

Kavya : Aap bhi aaye ho haan? Kese yaad aa gayi aaj?

Karan : Ab please yaar firse taang kheechna mat shuru kar dena.

Arohi : *smiles*

Kritika : M-Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap bhi aa rahe ho.

Karan : Haan! Woh actually mein haha~ Woh-

Veer : Aa nahi raha tha. Par tumhara naam sunn ke bhaaga chala aaya.

Kritika : !!!?????

Karan : Wh-What? Ahahaha~ Arre ni ni! M-Mein toh bas-

Kritika (blushes) : Wese, accha kiya aap aa gaye.

Karan : O-Ohh!

Kavya : Huh!? Ye aap dono ke beech kya chal raha hai?

Kritika (blushes) : Order do na tum! Mujhe le aayi zabardasti. Ab kuch khilwaogi nahi kya?

Kavya : Aaj Veer bhaiya denge na party. Kyu? Bhaiya? Aap khilwa rahe ho na hume?

Veer : Of course! Of course! Meri choti behan jo khaana chaahegi woh milega usse. Aaj party meri orr se.

Kavya ne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal noche aur boli,

Kavya : Hehehe~ Ye hui na baat! I love you~

Arohi : Tum itne din kyu the baahar Veer?

Veer : Work dii! Work! Samajh lijiye business related tour tha. Yaha se waha hote rahe bas.

Arohi : Okay!

Veer : Aap teeno seedhe college se yaha!?

Arohi : Mmm~ Kavya ko jab pata chala ki tum kal hi laut chuke ho toh woh tumse milne ke liye zidd karne lagi. Aur mujhe bhi shaamil kar liya.

Veer : Kya aapko nahi milna tha mujhse?

Arohi : Ah! O-Of course! *blushes* Mujhe bhi milna tha. Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai? Aur tum college kyu nahi aate?

Veer : Sirf exams dene jaunga!

Arohi : Aisa karoge toh dikkat jaengi. Internal marks teachers ke haath me hote hai Veer. Agar unse acchi bana ke nahi rakhoge toh woh low marks de denge.

Veer (smiles) : Meri class teacher hi Nidhi ma'am hai.

Arohi : Ahhn! That's... Par fir bhi Veer. College aaya karo. At least thodi derr ke liye hi aao. Par aaya karo.

Veer : I'll try!

Kavya aur Kritika menu pakad wahi order karne me lag gayi. Idhar beech beech me Kritika aur Karan ke nain matakka chal rahe the. Toh wahi saamne baithi Kavya Veer ko pal pal uski aankho me dekhti.

Baatein toh woh Kritika se kar rahi thi par table ke neeche uska perr Veer ki jaangh par tha. Aur Veer bina koi aapatti jataaye Kavya ke makhmali perro par apne haath ahista ahista ferrne laga. Toh kabhi unhe halke haath se dabaata. Jiske badle me Kavya ke labo par ek muskaan sajj jaati.

Khaana peena jese hi hua, Kavya ne apna naya plan patak diya,

Kavya : Okay! Toh ab hum chal rahe hai movie!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mujhe ek zaroori kaam hai. Mein nahi rahunga!

Kavya : Whaaaatttt!?? Noooooooooo! Bhaiyaaaaa! Aap se toh sabse zyada umeed thi aur aapne...

Veer : Kavyaaaa!

Kavya : Jao nahi baat karni aap se. Jab dekho tab kaam kaam kaam! Kabhi humaare saath ek night out bhi nahi kiya hoga aapne. Kabhi ghume bhi nahi hoge hamare saath raat me. Jao! Hmph~

Arohi : You go! I'll handle her!

Veer (smiles) : Thank god! Aap na ho, toh mera kya ho!

Arohi (blushes) : Dumbo! Go now!

Kavya : Hmph! Jao jao! Mujhe aap se ab baat nahi karni!

Veer : What about you?

Karan : Yeah! Well sure! Mein tumhe drop kar deta hu.

Veer : Nahi! Tum carry on karo. Mein chala jaunga. Don't worry!

Aur unhe wahi chorr veer waha se nikal aaya.

Karan ki baatein Kritika se acchi khaasi ho rahi thi. Aise me Veer usse disturb nahi karna chaahta tha. Aur Kavya ka kya tha? Aaj woh I hate you bol rahi thi. Kal sabse pehla call ussi ka aane wala tha Veer ko.

Veer jab ghar pohucha toh hall me ghuste hi Ragini bhaagti hui uske paas aayi,

Woh abhi awaaz lagaane hi waala tha ki Ragini ne aake uske hontho par ungli rakh usse rok diya.

Ragini : Ssshhhhhhh!!!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Ragini : Mene Suman jii aur Tai jii ko bhej diya hai baahar.

Veer : Kaha?

Ragini (smiles) : Shopping pe. Aur kaha!?

Veer : Aap behad excited lag rahi ho.

Ragini : Ohh of course! Kyu nahi rahungi? After all... Saath me tum rahoge!

Usne aankho me aankhein daalte hue kaha,

Veer : Ahem! So?

Ragini : Bas! Mein ready hi hu. Tum jaldi se change kar lo. Mene Aabha ko upar TV me movie laga ke dii hai. Ghar par wahi rahegi. Aur tum aur mein-

Veer (smiles) : Mein aata hu change kar ke.

Ragini : Jaldi aana!! I'm waiting ~

Veer jab ready hoke aaya toh Ragini uske sameep aake uski t shirt par jhatkaarte hue usse check karne lagi. Sab kuch sahi tha ya nahi! Woh muskuraayi aur aage aake usne ek chumban Veer ke gaal par de diya.

Ragini : Chalo! Iss se pehle ki koi aa jaaye. Tum nahi jaante mene kal raat kese kaati hai Veer!

Veer ne apni bike nikaali toh Ragini kisi bel ki tarah peeche baith ke uss se lipat gayi. Usne saree hi pehni hui thi.

Veer : Aapko saree me dekh accha laga bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi nahi Veer! Bhabhi nahi! Mein Vivek ki patni nahi hu ab. Ragini bulao! K-Kaho na Veer! Ragini! Mera naam lo! Lo na naam Veer!

Veer asmanjas me pad gaya tha. Ragini uss se lagbhag 8 saal badi thi. Kherr jab ab woh Suman ko naam se bulaata tha toh Ragini ko bulaane me koi samasya nahi jaani chahiye thi.

Veer : Ragini!

Uske muh se nikla hi tha ki Ragini ka poora badan kaanp utha. Uski ungliya zorr se Veer ke kandhe par kass gayi.

Ragini : Ek baar aur...! P-Please!

Veer : Ragini!!!

Ragini : Ohh Veer!!!!

Woh zorr se apne stano ko uski peeth par gaadte hue uss se chipak gayi.

*Vrroooommmmmm*

Dono ghar se nikle apne iss Suhaane safar ke liye. Kitne dino baad aaj dono akele the. Hastakshep karne wala ab koi nahi tha. Chenn se dono ek dusre ko mehsoos ksr sakte the.

Mumbai ke beaches me bheed na ho aisa kese ho sakta tha? Ye Goa nahi tha.

Veer aur Ragini haatho me haath thaame samundar kinaare ret par chal rahe the. Samudr ka thanda paani harr lehar ke saath aake unke perro ko bhigota aur waapas chala jaata.

Dono yu hi chalte rahe. Dono me se koi kuch nahi keh raha tha. Aas paas ke jitne bhi log unhe dekh rahe the, woh unn dono ko newly married couple hi samajh rahe the.

Kaafi derr ki iss shaanti ko Ragini ne hi fir bhang kiya,

Ragini : Veer!?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : I love you~

Veer : ...

Woh kuch na bola. Bas maun raha!

Ragini : Mein sirf tumhe ye batana chaahti hu aaj. Apna dil khol ke. Kya hum!? Kya hum kahi shaant jagah par chal sakte hai?

Veer ne haami bharte hue apne kadam aage badhaaye aur woh beach me kinare ki orr chalte chalte ek behad hi sunsaan se spot par pohuch gaye.

Chattaane aur patthar hi patthar the aas pas aur saamne vishaalkaay neel samundar.

Dono hi ek bade se patthar par baith gaye. Unke haath abhi bhi aapas me bandhe hue the.

Ragini Veer ke kandhe par jhuki aur sarr rakh bolna shuru kii,

Ragini : Mein tumhe batana chaahti hu ki, mere divorce ke baad se, mujhe aisa kabhi kisi aur ke liye mehsoos nahi hua hai Veer!

Veer : ....

Ragini : Yes! I have fallen for you Veer! Tumne mujhe apne dil me panaah dii, mujhe maaf kiya, meri tumne harr baat maani. Aur tumhare bade bhai ki talakshuda biwi hone ke naate, mere mann tumhare prati aisa kuch bhi nahi aana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Ye hua!

Veer : Mein-

Ragini : Nahi! Pehle mujhe keh lene do Veer! Samaaj ki nazro se ye apraadh hai. Mein tumhare baare me aisa soch bhi nahi sakti thi. Lekin fir bhi ye sab hua. Bura mat maan'na par... Shuruaati dino me mene Vivek ko chorr ke dusri shadi lene ka faisla pehle hi le liya tha aur uske liye mene ek do hum umr ke ladko se bhi baat cheet kii thi. Dad ke kehne par mene baat kii thi. Par mujhe unme interest nahi aaya. Aur fir tumhaare saath waqt bitaane lagi.

Veer : !!?

Ragini : Jese jese samay guzar raha tha. Mujhe tumhare baare me jaan'ne ki aur iccha hone lagi. Tumhari pasand, na pasand, tumhari baatein, tumhari personality. Aur mein anjaane me hi inn sabhi ki taraf aakarshit hoti jaa rahi thi. Jab divorce hua, tab mujhe ehsaas ho chuka tha Veer ki...

Veer : ??

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai.

Veer : Bhabh-

Ragini : Ragini Veer! Aaj se mein tumhare liye Ragini hu. Bhabhi nahi! Sabke saamne tum mujhe bhabhi bula sakte ho. Par akele me!? Mein tumhare muh se apna sirf naam sunn'na pasand karungi.

Veer : J-Jii!!

Ragini : Jii nahi! Haan! Treat me like an equal person Veer!

Veer : I'll try!

Usne apna sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha. Khaas kar uske hontho ko. Aur Ragini ki saasein tez ho uthi.

Ragini : Kya inn hontho ko thodi derr ke liye choom sakti hu?

Veer jo ab tak khud ko control kiye hue tha, aise shabdo ko sunn apna aapa akhir kho hi diya.

Ragini ki patli gori makhmali kamar me haath daal Veer ne usse jakda aur apne seene se kass ke laga ke pal bhar me unn rassbhare hontho ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Nnnnggghhhhhh~"

*Smooch* *Slurp* *Slurp*

Kuch shan bhi nahi guzre the jab dono ki jeebh aapas me kushti ladd ek dusre ke muh me ghus dabaav banaane ki koshish karne lagi.

Veer ki jeebh Ragini ke muh ke andar gayi aur andhruni muh ko tatol ke unka swaad lene lagi, toh wahi Ragini bhi yahi karne me lagi thi.

"Mmmmmmmmnnnnnn~"

Veer ke haath unn mulaayam aamo ko nichodne me bhi lag gaye. Blouse ke upar se unhe zorr zorr se masalne ka maza hi alag tha.

Ragini desperation me Veer ki goad me aake baithi aur Veer ke sharaarti haath turant hi uski gaand par chale gaye.

"Mmmmmnnnnn~" "Aaaahnnnnnnn~"

*Slurp* *Slurp*

Ragini : Aise nahi Veer... Saree uthao...

Woh uttejna bhari awaaz me boli. Veer ne jese hi uski saree peech uske kulho par le jaa kar uthaayi toh woh aashcharya me reh gaya.

Neeche koi petticoat nahi tha. Bas Ragini ki doodh jesi gori jaanghe.

"Ohh Veer!"

"Claim me!!! Cherish me Veer! Let Vivek know how you should cherish an elder brother's wife. Nnnghhhh~ I love you baby!!!!"

Woh paagalo ki tarah Veer par toot padi.

Aur dono ki siskiya samundar ki lehro ke shor me ghul gayi.

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Mumbai~
Nidhi's Apartment ~
Evening ~ 8:12 PM

Nidhi ahaar ke dabbo me naye packet khol unme samaan bharne me lagi hui thi.

Juhi roz ki hi tarah TV me apna favourite cartoon dekh rahi thi. Aur Shreya abhi job se laut rahi thi jab achanak hi,

*Ding* *Dong*

Uske ghar ki door bell baji aur woh ye soch ke uthi ki Shreya aa gayi hai.

Nidhi ne abhi Darwaza khola hi tha ki usne dekha ki saamne Shreya nahi thi. Balki, ek uske hi jitne umr ki ladki khadi hui thi.

Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,

"Miss Nidhi!?"

Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!

Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,

"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"

Nidhi : Huh!!?
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