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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

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  • Kuch nahi bann paega

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Update - 105 ~ The Pitcher (1)
Ab tak...

Kuch derr ke intezaar ke baad hi unhe andar jaane ke kiye allowed kar diya gaya.

Aur jese hi woh andar pohuche...

Natalia wahi baithi hui thi. Ek table ke paas ek seat par. Dinner yahi hona tha.

Usne teeno ko aate hue dekha aur bas ek halki sii muskaan ke saath boli,

"Welcome!!! Have a seat!!!"


Ab aage...

Golden Nugget Hotel & Casino,
Downtown, Las Vegas.
Night ~ 11:38 PM

Ye thi Downtown ki kaafi mashoor hotel me se ek, Golden Nugget Hotel.



Best-Casinos-Las-Vegas

Jidhar casinos ka bhi prabandh tha. Andar ka nazaara bhi ekdum khubsoorat tha. Hotel cheekh cheekh ke ye batlaa rahi thi ki kitna paisa laga hua tha usme.

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Aur issi aalishaan hotel ke VIP area me, food court me baithi hui thi Natalia. Concert ke baad dinner ka plan tha jo ki usne Divya ke sang rakha hua tha. Downtown me hi uska concert hua tha. Aur udhar par hi ye hotel bhi maujood thi. Toh samay ki bachat aur nazdeeki ke liye Natalia ne apna reservation iss hotel me karwa liya tha.

Divya, Suhana aur Veer ko jab baahar se permission mili tab jaa kar woh andar VIP area me pravesh kiye.

Aur andar aate hi, Natalia ne unhe baithne ke liye kaha. Uski nazre saamne khade teeno log par gadi hui thi.




"Welcome! Have a seat!"

Ek halki muskaan ke saath woh boli. Par apni jagah se woh tass se mass nahi hui. Suhana ki bauhe upar chadh uthi Natalia ke iss ravaiyye ko dekh. Toh uska andaaza sahi tha matlab.

Natalia uss muqaam par aa chuki thi jaha ab woh Suhana aur baaki sab ke liye khade hokar unka swaagat bhi nahi karne waali thi.

'What changed you so much?' Mann me Suhana ne khud se sawaal kiya.

Parantu, usne kuch bola nahi. Teeno Natalia ke saamne maujood chairs par virajmaan ho gaye.

Divya : So? What's the matter?

Divya ne seedhe seedhe hi puch liya. Akhir aisi kya baat ho gayi thi jo itni badi star Natalia ne khud usse call kar ke usse bulaaya? Saaf tha ki kisi investigation se sambandhit hi kaam tha. Par kya?

Natalia : Let's have our dinner first. You guys must be starving too. Order anything you want.

Divya : Ohhh!

Natalia ne pehle dinner karne ka faisla liya. Aur waqai iss baat se Divya bhi sehmat thi. Concert me baithe baithe bhook toh unn sabhi ko lag aayi thi. Pehle pait pooja fir kaam dooja waali baat unhe sahi lagi.

Aur sabhi waha lazeez khaane par toot pade.

Natalia khaate samay kisi se baat nahi kar rahi thi. Uska poora dhyaan apne khaane par tha. Jis kaaran se Divya aur Suhana ne bhi apni bolti band kar lii. Wahi Veer pal pal apni nazre utha ke Natalia ko dekhta. Paas se toh aur bhi qayamat lag rahi thi woh. Natalia ne bas ek hi nazar daali thi Veer pe, uske baad se usne Veer ko nahi dekha jese maano woh usme ekdum uninterested thi.

Toh wahi Suhana bhi pal do pal Natalia ko chori chhipe dekhti, mann me uske dherr saare sawaal uth rahe the. Natalia uske saath aisa behave kyu kar rahi thi? Kahi aisa toh nahi ki woh usse bhul gayi ho? Suhana ek bhaari chinta me doobi hui thi.

Aur ant me akhir waali kursi par Divya ke maathe par bhi silvatein chhayi hui thi. Khaana toh woh kha rahi thi, par uska dhyaan khaane par kam aur Natalia ne usse kyu bulaaya uss par zyada tha.

Natalia aur Divya ek dusre ko jaante the. Natalia jaanti thi ki Divya Suhana ki dost hai aur ek private detective hai Vegas me. Balki, Sonia aur Kaera bhi ye baat jaanti thi. Yaha tak ki bachpan me hi woh sabhi Divya se mili chuki thi. Akhir Divya aur Suhana school, college se hi ek saath the.

Jab sabhi ka khaana peena ho gaya toh Divya se aur raha na gaya.

Apne baalo ke bun ko khol, usne hawa me apni kaali zulfe lehraayi aur kursi par adab ke saath baithate hue boli,

Divya : Dinner is done. What's the deal now?



Suhana : Right? Such a big celebrity Miss Natalia Martin. Why did you call us poor souls here?

Suhana ne ek taunt maara. Bhala hum jese gareeb logo ki kya zaroorat pad gayi inn maharani sahiba ko? Woh nakli muskaan ke saath Natalia ko chidhaane ke liye boli.



Natalia : Call me Nat!

Suhana : Ohhh! I thought 'Ava' would be much preferred by you!? Hmm?

Uske muh se 'Ava' shabd nikalte hi Natalia ke maathe par lakeerein chhaa gayi aur uski aankhein Suhana ko ghoor kar dekhne lagi.

Natalia : Nat! I prefer Nat!!! Your mood is off! Looks like you didn't enjoy my show.

Aur iss baar ek waar yaha se Natalia ne kiya. Uska kehna tha ki Suhana ne lagta hai uska show enjoy nahi kiya isliye kaafi bekaar mood me thi.

Suhana : Huh?

Iske pehle ki dono ke beech koi yuddh shuru hota...

Veer : Ahem...!

Veer ke beech me awaaz karte hi sabhi ki nazre uss par tik gayi. Aur Divya ko tabhi dhyaan aaya,

Woh Veer ke daayi orr baithi hui thi. Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh Natalia ko samjhaate hue woh boli,

Divya : Right! This is Veer. Veer! She's Natalia. Sonia's childhood friend.

Veer ne nod karte hue haath aage badhaaya toh Natalia ne bhi haath aage kar uska haath thaama aur handshake kiya.

Haath aapas me sparsh hote hi...

'Soft...!'

[Hehe~ :heh: ]

Natalia : Nice to meet you!

Veer : It's a pleasure!

Divya : Also... You know what?

Natalia : Hmm?

Divya (smiles) : He's a mutual friend of Sonia and Kaera.

*Silence*

Divya ki baat sunte hi Nat ki aankho me pal bhar ke liye jese ek chamak sii aayi. Usne Veer ko punaah ghoora aur ek halki muskaan uske hontho par sajj gayi.

Veer : Umm... About concert. The way you started...

Natalia (smiles) : Hindi aati hai mujhe! Hum Hindi me baat kar sakte hai. Just because I'm half white doesn't mean I have forgotten my native language. In fact, I prefer Hindi more than English.

Veer : Ah!! I see!

Veer ye nahi bhul sakta tha. Thodi derr pehle hi usne Nat ko check kiya tha. Concert ke dauraan. Tab usne dekha tha...

*Ding*

[Name : Ava Martin
Stage/Alias Name : Natalia Martin
Age : 26
Status : Singer/ Businesswoman/ Celebrity

Bio : Ava Martin! Jayesh aur Grace Martin ki eklauti beti. Aur Sonia, Kaera ki childhood friend. Pita hindustani the. Par dedh saal pehle hi unka dehaant ho gaya. Grace Martin head injury ke chalte coma me hai. Maa ke prati Ava ka sabse zyaada jhukaav raha hai. Aur isliye woh apna naam apni maa ke surname ke saath poora karti hai. Unhi ke liye woh gaati hai, Grace hi uska sab kuch hai ab. Pita ki maut ke baad usne singing ki duniya me qadam rakha. Aur dedh saal me hi usne khud ka label 'Blue' records khada kar liya hai.

Favourability : 7
Relationship : Strangers.]

Veer ye jaanta tha ki Ava ka janm India me hi hua tha. Yadi woh bachpan me India me thi aur uske pita India me hi kaam karte the toh zaahir hai ki woh India me hi paida hui thi. Ek anumaan toh laga hi sakte the.

Shayad yahi ek kaaran tha jo usse Hindi, English dono hi badi acche se aati thi.

Veer taajub tha ye jaan ke ki baahar jaane ke bawajood, Ava apni native language bhooli nahi thi.

Veer : Toh... Aapke show ki starting ke kuch pal... Jab aapne bina kisi instruments ke woh chand panktiya gaayi thi. Khaas kar antim panktiya... And letting go, I no longer need that vile past. Jis tarah aapne dheere dheere shabdo ko uthaa ke high notes par pohchaaya. Woh mera sabse favourite part tha.

Veer ne dil se muskuraate hue kaha. Nat ne usse jab iss tarah dekha toh woh jese kuch kehna hi bhool gayi. Shan bhar ke liye Veer ko dekhi aur fir usne giggle karte hue Veer par se nazre ferr lii,

Nat (giggles) : Ohkay! Thank you...!




Idhar Suhana aur Divya kabhi Nat ko dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko. Unhe aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese woh faaltu me yaha baithi hui thi. Haan bhai. Aapas me hi mauj kar lo. Hum toh jese chutiye hai yaha. Kuch aise hi thoughts unke mann me aa rahe the.

Nat : You have a keen perception!

Veer : No! Not as much as yours.

Nat (stares) : Ohh! *smiles*

Par tabhi...

Veer : Fuuucccckkkkkkk!!!!

Nat : ??

Veer ko jaangh me ek halka dard mehsoos hua. Usne nazre neeche kar dekha toh uski baayi jaangh par... Suhana chikoti kaat rahi thi.

'Huh?'

Suhana usse table ki neeche se zorr se chimti kaatne me lagi hui thi aur uski aankhein? Uski aankhein jese Veer ko khaa jaane waali nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Boht flirting soojh rahi hai haan? Ye le ab!
Mann me yahi soch rahi thi woh.

'Shiiitttt!'

Divya : Ahem!!! So? Introductions ho gaye! Kya ab hum jaan sakte hai? Kya matter hai?

Divya ne main topic ko firse uthaaya. Uske bagal se Veer aur Suhana khuspusaate hue ek dusre se jhagad rahe the par Divya ne Nat ki orr focus rakhna chaaha.

Nat : Right!

Ek haami bhar Nat ne apne aas paas baithe staff ko waha se baahar jaane ka ishaara kiya. Aur ab waha par keval wahi 4 log maujood the.

Ek lambi saans lete hue Nat ne unn teeno ko dekha aur fir boli,

Nat : I need your help!

Divya : Hmm? Woh toh main samajh gayi thi jab tumne call kiya tha. Say openly.

Nat (fir ek lambi saas lete hue) : I'm being threatened.

Veer : Huh?

Divya : Kya?

Suhana : ....!!!?

Nat : Yes!!! I'm being threatened.

Kehte hue usne ek card table par haatho se sarkaate hue aage kar diya.

Divya ne usse thaamte hue padha,

Divya : Hmm? You are being invited to the Royal Klink? Toh isme bura kya hai? Ye toh invitation hai.

Nat : Invitation hai. Par maut ka.

Veer : Kya matlab?

Nat : Matlab ye ki... Look! You guys must have heard about Charlotte?

Divya : Charlotte? Wait! Ye toh wahi emerging pop singer hai na? Jiski abhi recent me death ho gayi? Suicide kar liya tha usne?

Nat : Yes and no!

Suhana : What do you mean?

Nat : Charlotte aur mein contact me the. Wo ek emerging singer zaroor thi. And a very promising one at that. Par usne suicide nahi kiya tha. Jitna mein usse jaanti hu. Woh aisa kabhi kar hi nahi sakti. Never! Usne khud mujhe message kiya tha ki woh ek new album release karne wali hai. Par uske pehle hi woh...

Divya : So you are suggesting ki ye ek murder hai? Ek conspiracy?

Nat : Yes!!!

Suhana : How? Tum itni yakeen ke saath kese keh sakti ho? Mene article padha tha newspaper me Charlotte ka. Investigation hui thi uski suicide ko lekar. Lekin forensic reports me saaf saaf saamne aaya tha ki usne poison leke suicide kiya hai. Toxins se hi uski maut hui hai.

Nat : Aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai ki kisi ne usse poison diya ho? Woh kabhi aisa nahi kar sakti. I believe ki police ne uske case ko death by suicide ka naam deke band kar diya hai.

Veer taajub me sab kuch dekh sunn raha tha. Hairaan woh isliye tha ki Suhana ko inn sab baato ki bhi khabar thi. Flight ke dauraan toh woh magazine padhne me lagi hui thi. Ye sab padhne ka samay kab mila usse?

Toh wahi woh Nat ki baato se bhi achambhav me tha. Shayad maamla gambheer aur boht hi uljha hua tha.

Divya : Woh sab chorro. Ava... I mean Nat! Mujhe ye batao ki ye invitation tumhe kese mila aur tum ye kyu keh rahi ho ki ye maut ka invitation hai? Kya matlab hai tumhara iss baat se?

Nat : It's just as it sounds. Do you want to know why?

Divya : ???

Nat : Kyuki death ke pehle... Charlotte ko bhi ye invitation aaya tha.

Suhana : Huh? How did you kn--!?

Nat : Because she showed me a photo. Usse bhi same invitation aaya tha.

Suhana : So what? Iss se ye prove nahi hota ki Charlotte ki maut se iska koi connection hai. Right?

Suhana ki baat par Nat ek mazaakiya muskaan me usse dekhte hue sarr hilaayi jese maano Suhana ki investigation skills ki khilli udaa rahi ho.


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Suhana : Wh-Whaaatttt? Y-You think mein bakwaas kar rahi hu? Huhhh? I can read gestures well okay? Are you mocking me? Huhh?

Iss se pehle ki woh aur bhadakti, achanak hi usse apni daayi jaangh par ek haath ka sparsh hua.

'????'

Dekha toh paaya ki Veer ka haath tha. Jese woh console kar raha tha usse shaant rehne ke liye. Hairaani ki baat ye thi ki ye tareeqa kaam bhi kar gaya. Suhana ekdum shaant ho gayi. Kahi na kahi, usse ye ehsaas accha lag raha tha. Veer ka usse aise support karna. Woh khush thi ki Nat jesi khubsoorat ladki ko dekhne ke baad bhi Veer ne apni team nahi badli thi. Woh abhi bhi uski team me tha. Nahi toh aksar aise mauke par ladke palti maar ke sundar ladkiyo ki chaatne lag jaate hai.

Par Veer alag tha.

Woh bagal se Veer ke chehre ko nihaarne lagi.




Aur idhar Veer ki nigaahein tiki zaroor Nat par thi par andar hi andar woh mann me,

'Pari!!!'

[Got it!]

*Ding*

[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use...]

[Tracking...]

*Ding*

[No enemies were found.]

'Hmmm!!! I see!'

Divya : Abhi bhi dots ko connect karne me mujhe problem ho rahi hai. Tum kehna kya chaahti ho?

Nat : What I mean to say is... Charlotte ko ye invitation aaya tha. She took a photo of it and then sent me. Lekin uske next din hi uski death ho gayi. Police searched for the details. But end me ek suicide case bana ke usse end kar diya. Ab same invitation mujhe aaya hai.

Divya : Toh tumhara matlab hai ki ye ek death trap hai?

Nat : Exactly!!!!

Suhana : Bakwaas! Hmph~ I'm sorry to say. But tumhari baato ka koi sense nahi bann raha hai.

Divya (frowns) : Kya tum iss Royal Klink ke baare me aur bata sakti ho kuch?

Nat : Mene jaan'ne ki koshish kii. I have some connections too. Par mujhe bas ek hi detail mil paayi hai.

Divya : I'm all ears. Fill me up!

Nat : Ek tarah ki party hoti hai. Usse hi Royal Klink ka naam diya gaya hai. You know? Wine glasses ko aapas me cheers karte hue... That kind of party... Log masks pehente hai idhar. Apni identity hide karne ke liye. That's it. Bas itna hi mujhe pata hai.

Divya : Hmm!!! Wine party... Royal... Huh!???? Wait!!!! Kya kaha tumne??

Nat : ???

Divya : Wine party???

Divya achanak hi hadbadaate hue Veer ko dekhi. Aur beshaq, Veer ki aankhein bhi hairaani ke maare feli hui thi.

Divya : V-Veeerrrr!!!!! Kya tum bhi wahi soch rahe ho jo mein soch rahi hu?

Veer (nods) : The thir-

Divya : Yessssssss!!!! The third one!!!! The third one!!!! Veeeerrrrr!!!!

Suhana : Huh? Ye tum dono...!?

Divya : Third criminal Suhana!!!! Third fucking criminal....!!! Jim, Nightwalker and now this.... Fuckkkk!!!

Suhana : Ahhh!!!?

Divya ne jese kuch bhaanp liya tha. Aur uska andaaza galat nahi tha. Kyuki Veer ne bhi ye bhaanp liya tha.

Wine!!! Royal!!! Inn do shabdo se hi Veer ko ek andaaza lag gaya tha.

Nightwalker kya karta tha? Drugs bech ke mehngi mehngi wines ka business. Aur woh wines woh kisi aur jagah bhejta tha.

Mehngi wines... Aur ab ye Royal Klink...

Kuch na kuch connection toh zaroor tha. Shayad paheli ki do dots ka yahi judaav tha.

Lekin tabhi,

Divya : No no no no noooooo!!! Noooooo!!!!

Divya sarr hilaate hue tension me aa gayi.

Nat : What is it?

Divya : Agar aisa hai toh... Shitttt!!!! Iska matlab ye seedha house of the killers se juda hua hai.

Nat : Wha-!? House of the killers?

Divya : Haan!!! Damn ittt!!! Fir ab ye ek private case nahi raha. Nat!! Hum pehle se hi ek boht badi gang of serial killers ke peeche investigation me lage hue hai. Aur jis hisaab se tumne details dii hai. I'm pretty sure ye house of the killers ka koi third member hi hai. What do you think Veer?

Veer (nods) : Hmm! I agree! Nightwalker wines kisi ko sell karta tha. Not to mention ki unme sabse mehngi se mehngi wines maujood thi. Aur royal klink ke naam se toh yahi maalum pad raha hai ki... Third member idhar se ho sakta hai.

Divya : That's right!!!! Nat! Ab ye case private nahi raha. Public ho chuka hai. So, you'll have to co-operate wi--

Nat : Not at all!!!!

Divya : Huh?

Nat : Mujhe apna naam criminal cases me nahi laana hai. That's the whole reason why I called you. Warna mein cops ko hi inform nahi kar deti seedha? I called you so that you could deal with it in private.

Divya : B-But... This matter is huge Nat... Aise me...

Nat : I can give you a hefty amount!

Nat ne ek taq jawaab diya. Amount shabd sunte hi Divya bhi chup reh gayi.

Divya : How much?

Nat : An amount which won't disappoint you!

*Silence*

Aur ek minute tak bas sannaata saa chha gaya.

Nat : Just don't involve my name in any of it. That's the only condition. So? Deal or not?

Suhana Divya ko hi ghoor ke dekh rahi thi. Idhar Divya ne ek lambi saans lii aur boli,

Divya : Done then! It's a deal!!!

Aur usne itna bola hi tha ki...

"You Bitcccchhhhhhhh!!!!"

Suhana zorr se bagal se chillaayi,

Divya : Wh-What???

Suhana : Fayda dikha nahi ki...

Divya : Shut up Suhana! Hmph! Dekho toh kaun bol raha hai? Khud toh harr samay profit hote hi apni gaa-- I mean... Apni jebo me thoos leti ho paise. Aur ab mujhe keh rahi ho? Hmph!

Suhana : Y-Youuuu!!!! Kya kaha tumne?? M-Mein iss tarah kisi ke kehne par...

Divya : What? Ab mirchi lag gayi haan?

Suhana : Fuck off bitchhhh!!!

Divya : Ohh shut the fuck up...!!!

Inn dono ki behas jese hi shuru hui toh Veer dono ke beech baithe jese chakki me gehu ki tarah pis raha tha. Usne ek lambi aah chorri,

'Pari!!!'

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Aur ye equip hote hi,

Veer : THAT'S ENOUGH!!!!!!!

Veer ne zorr se buland awaaz me kaha.

*Silence*

Ek ghanghor khamoshi chhaa gayi. Dono Suhana aur Divya sann hoke reh gayi. Intimidating Presence! Jesa naam wesa kaam. Veer ki Presence aisi ho gayi thi jese maano woh sabhi ek Raja ke saamne baithe ho.

Aankho me tej, baithne ka dhang, uske chehre ke bhaav, buland awaaz aur uska aura.

Sab jese unhe hairat me daal diya. Uska courage, wisdom, willpower, aur confidence sab 200% badh chuka tha.

Suhana : I... I...

Suhana ke muh se kuch nikal hi na paaya. Woh ekdum bakri ki tarah seedhi bann ke baith gayi.

Veer : Agar sab kuch ho gaya hai toh hume ab chalna chahiye.

Divya : R-Right!!!

Divya bhi thodi sehmi hui haan me gardan hilaayi aur Nat se deal final kar woh sabhi waha se uth ke baahar ke liye jaane lage.

Nat khud hairat me sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Ye hua kya tha abhi abhi?

Kherr! Jo bhi tha, bada hi vichitr tha.

Teeno hotel ke baahar aa chuke the. Aur Suhana Divya dono hi Veer ko chori chhipe dekh rahi thi baar baar.

Unhe andar se aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese Veer me achanak hi koi naya shaks ghus aaya tha. Jese koi ek Raja ka... Ya ek badhshah ka... Ek supreme king ki personality jese...

Par harr fayde ke saath saath uske nuksaan bhi the.

Intimidating Presence Off nahi ho sakta tha. Ek baar lagaya toh iska effect poore samay rehta tha. Aur saath hi ab Veer 24 ghante ke liye Beowulf's Blessings equip nahi kar sakta tha. Ye ek duwidha zaroor thi.

Veer : What now?

Divya : R-Right!!! Nat ne invitation card mujhe diya hai. Address diya hua hai yaha. Mujhe abhi hi ek kaam karna padega.

Suhana : Ab kya??

Divya : Kisi se milne jaana hai. You can leave if you want. Take my car.

Suhana : Fine then!!! Main jaa rahi hu ghar. Mujhe wese hi neend aa rahi hai. It was too tiring for me. I'm leaving...!

Divya : Hmm! Ye lo keys! Veer!! Come with me! Hume ek jagah aur chalna hai.

Suhana : K-Kyaaa??? V-Veer?? Veer ko kyu? Kaha jaa rahi ho tum.

Divya : Kya hua? Mene kaha na ek kaam hai. Usse abhi hi karna hai.

Suhana : Haan! P-Par Veer ko kyu...!?

Divya : Arre? Veer rahega saath me toh accha rahega na. Wese bhi... A young hot woman... Strolling alone in Las Vegas... Yadi mujhe kuch ho gaya toh? Haan? Kaun jawaab daar rahega?

Suhana : Y-Youuuu!!!! Bitch...!!!!

Divya : Hmph! Go away now bitch! Nik bhi department se laut hi raha hoga. Ghar par koi rehna chahiye darwaza kholne ke liye. C'mon! Let's go veer!

Kehte hue Divya apni gaand matkaate hue mud ke chali gayi. Aur idhar Suhana apna muh fula ke usse bas gusse me dekhti reh gayi.

Jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bas uske nazdeek aayi aur uske kaano me dheere se boli,
"Don't let her eat you up!!!"

Aur bas, itna bol woh Divya ki car leke waha se ravaana ho gayi.

Veer muskuraate hue waha se mud Divya ke paas aaya aur dono cab kar kisi jagah chal diye.

Veer : So?

Divya : Kya?

Veer : Aapne Miss Natalia ki deal accept kar lii hai. Toh ab Investigation department se inn baato ko kese chhipaogi aap?

Divya : Mujhe karna kya hai? I can say anything! Keh dungi ki mujhe third criminal ke baare me pata lag gaya hai. Aur mene action bhi lena shuru kar diya hai.

Veer : Agar woh puche kese aur kaha se pata laga toh?

Divya : Keh dungi ki mujhe kisi ne bataaya tha. Gawaahi dene ke liye mere paas boht se log hai. Tum aur Suhana bhi toh ho unme se. Haha~

Veer : You...!!

Divya : Ab tum bhi uss nakchidi Suhana ki tarah bitch bolne waale the kya mujhe?

Veer : No!!! I was just... Surprised a bit.

Divya (smiles) : Mujhe bas department me itna hi batana hai ki third criminal ki khabar mil chuki hai. Detectives investigation me lag jayenge. Mere paas unhe ghumaane ke liye kayi tareeqe hai. At the same time, hum Natalia ki problem bhi solve kar denge. Mujhe mera fayda bhi ho jayega. Department ki taraf se fir alag paisa. That's what we call hitting two birds with one stone.

Veer uski harr baat sunn bas muskura raha tha. Toh aise inn mohtarma ne itna bada ghar banaaya tha. Waqai! Dimaag toh tha Divya me boht.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ruki, aur dono Veer aur Divya baahar nikle.

Ek bar tha ye. Koi zyaada bada nahi tha. Lekin slot machines ek ke baad ek lagi hui thi. Aur kuch log abhi bhi lottery nikaalne me lage hue the.

Divya : Tum yaha mera intezar karo. Mein abhi aati hu.

Veer : You sure you don't want me in there?

Divya (winks) : I do want you inside! Hahaha~

Veer ko cherrte hue woh andar chali gayi. Double meaning jokes toh koi Divya se karwa le.

Andar jaate hi Divya ki nazar ek ladke par padi. Kareeb 28-29 ki umr ka prateet ho raha tha.

Divya uske sameep gayi aur usne uske kandhe par thap thapaate hue usse uthaaya. Shayad thodi beer pee rakhi thi usne.

Woh ladka utha aur Divya ko saamne dekh woh muskuraaya,

"Ohhh!!! Look who's here? Hahahaha!!! M-My dear Divi!!! Hehehe~"

Divya : Don't fuck with me Fred!!! I have a job for you! Are you interested or not?

Fred : Interested? Of course!! O-Of course I'm interested! Heh~

Usne Divya ko upar se neeche taulti hui nazro se dekha. Divya ki bauhe sikudi, par woh boli kuch nahi.

Uske baad Divya ne poori baatein bataayi aur pucha,

Divya : Now tell me? Can you do it?

Fred : How much Divi? Hehehe~ You know I charge a lot!!!

Divya : Much better than the last time. Now say?

Fred (surprised) : Ohhhh!!! Alright! You got me! Hehe~

Divya : Good!

Abhi wo palatne hi waali thi ki tabhi Fred ne uske gore gore kandhe par apne haath rakh diye.

Divya : What are you doiiinnnggg????

Fred : Heh~ Let's have some fun baby!

Divya : YOU FUCKER!!!! GET AWAY YOU BASTARD!!!! *kicks*

Fred : Arrghh!

Aur ek taang Fred ke perr par maar woh waha se palat ke baahar nikal aayi.

Divya : Fucking Moron... Bastard...!!! Dickhead...!!! Hmph!!!

Woh badbadaate hue baahar nikli toh Veer usse sawaliya nazro se dekha,

Veer : Kya hua?

Divya : Umm... N-Nothing!

Dono tahalte hue cab ka wait karne lage. Aur chalte chalte hi,

Divya achanak hi apni peeth Veer ke aage kar khadi hui,

Divya : Can you... Can you fix this?

Uski gori makhmali peeth Veer ke saamne thi. Woh apne gale me pehni hui chain ko fix karne ki baat kar rahi thi.

Veer ne apne haath aage badhaaye. Par jese hi uske haath Divya ki peeth se sparsh hue,

*Ding*

[Mystic Touch has been triggered.]

'Ehhh!?'

"Nnnnhhhhhhhggghhhh!!!!"

Ek loud moan Divya ke muh se nikli.

"Ahhhh!!!!" Ekdum bhauchakii sii hote hue usne apne muh par dono haath rakh apni awaaz roki. Par Veer ne sab kuch sunn liya tha.

'Ohhh!!! Fuckkk!!! Mystic touch? Iss samay? Fuuuckkkk!!! Why now?'

[Enjoy! Hahaha~ :laughing: ]

Iss baar Divya ke gaal surkh laal ho rakhe the. Upar se Veer ne Intimidating Presence bhi equip kar rakha tha.

Woh Veer se alag hone ke liye palti, par usse dhakelte samay jese hi uska haath Veer ke seene par pada...

"Nnnnghhhhhh!!!!!"

Seene ki garmaahat usse madhosh kar baithi. Uska haath Veer ke seene se alag hi na hua.

Divya : What's... What's happening to me?

Uski aankhein ekdum nasheeli ho rakhi thi. Aur woh jhukte jhukte Veer ke chehre ke qareeb aati jaa rahi thi.

Divya : N-Nooo! I... I can't... I can't let this happen... V-Veeeerrr!!!

Woh uske gaal se lag gayi.



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Aur agle hi pal,

"Mmmmmphhhhhhhhh!!!!!!?!!"

Divya ke gulaabi raseele honth Veer ke hontho se jaa lage. Labo ka labo se sparsh hote hi Divya ka poora jism thitur utha.



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Veer ne bhi fir ek pal na gawaaya, uski patli kamar ko apne haatho me jakad usne Divya ko poori tarah se apni baaho me jakad liya.

*Slurp* *slllurrrrppppp*

"Mmmmmmm~ Nnnnghhhh!!!! Aaaaaahhhhhhh!!! Ssssssss~"

Aur dono iss meethe aur thode geele chumban me kho gaye. Haath me jab Divya jesi maal aa rahi ho toh Veer kese peeche reh sakta tha?

Uske haath bhi Divya ke badan ki mashoor jagaho ko khojne me nikal pade.

Par tabhi,

*Ding*

[Mission : Assassinate the Pitcher.
Rewards : 1) ???? points.
2) ??? Fame Points.
3) 1 Random scroll.

Time Limit : 2 days.
Mission Failure Penalty : 1) ??? Points deduction.
2) Mystic Touch will be removed.]

Aur Veer ke mann se bas yahi nikla,

'Ah!!! Shittttt!!! Here wo go again!!!!'
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Update - 106 ~ The Pitcher (2)

Ab tak...

Uske haath bhi Divya ke badan ki mashoor jagaho ko khojne me nikal pade.

Par tabhi,

*Ding*

[Mission : Assassinate the Pitcher.
Rewards : 1) ???? points.
2) ??? Fame Points.
3) 1 Random scroll.

Time Limit : 2 days.
Mission Failure Penalty : 1) ??? Points deduction.
2) Mystic Touch will be removed.]

Aur Veer ke mann se bas yahi nikla,

'Ah!!! Shittttt!!! Here wo go again!!!!'


Ab aage...

Subah ke 6:48 ho rahe the. Divya ka ghar subah ki surya ki kirno me roshan ho raha tha.

Aur woh ek kaala satin ka wrap odhe chinta me ghar ke lawn me khadi hui thi.


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Mann ekdum vichlit tha uska. Kal jo kuch bhi hua, woh nahi hona chaahiye tha.

Sochte hue uska haath apne aap khud ke gulaabi hontho par chala gaya. Usse kal derr raat ka manzar yaad aaya,

Kese Veer uske honth choos raha tha. Aur woh khud kese uss se lipti hui thi. Ye jaante hue bhi ki woh ek shadi shuda aurat hai. Ab jese usse pachhtava ho raha tha. Par na jaane kyu, kal pata nahi Veer me aisa kya tha jo woh khud ko rok hi na paayi.

Veer ka harr sparsh usse madhosh kar raha tha. Ye kya ho gaya tha usse kal?

'Ye kya kar diya mene? Mein kese Veer ke saath? Ugh! Divya! Ye kya kar diya tumne? Shadi shuda aurat ho tum ek. Aur fir bhi tumne? Ek 21 saal ke ladke ke saath? Chhii!!! Lekin... Lekin kal... Just what was it? Mein aisa kese kar baithi?'

Woh soch hi rahi thi jab achanak hi,

"Ohhh!! Subah subah aap yaha!?"

Awaaz sunte hi Divya ka tann thitur utha. Jhatt se woh palti, dekha toh Veer pillar se tike hue haath baandh ke khada tha.

Uske badan pe sirf ek white shirt thi jiski saari buttons khuli hui thi. Aur uski sudol chaathi Divya ki aankho ke saamne thi.

Woh kasse hue six packs, aur shredded muscles. Divya ne dekhte hi apne gale me thook ka nivaala gatka.

*Dhak* *Dhak*

Uska dil zorro se dhadak raha tha.

Woh punaah palti aur ek lambi saas lete hue boli,

Divya : T-Tum yaha? Itni subah?


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Veer (smiles) : Ye mera sawaal tha. Kyuki mein toh roz hi subah exercise karne aata hu yaha. Aur mujhe itne dino me koi bhi subah nazar nahi aaya. Fir aaj...!?

Divya : W-Woh... Woh... Meri neend aaj jaldi khul gayi.

Baat toh sach thi. Divya ki neend jaldi khul gayi thi. Par kyu? Kyuki raat bhar usse sone me dikkat gayi. Raat bhar Veer ke saath woh chumban usse theek se sona na dii.

Divya ne keh toh diya. Par Veer ka koi jawaab nahi aaya. Kuch seconda aur guzar gaye. Khamoshi abhi bhi chhaayi hui thi.

'Hmm?'

Aur jaan'ne ke liye abhi Divya mudne hi waali thi ki tabhi ek haath uski patli kamar par peeche se aaya aur usse zorr se jakad liya,

"Aaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!"

Woh hadbadaayi!

Veer ne usse kass ke apni baaho me bhara hua tha.

Divya : Veeeeerrrrrrrr???? Ye kya kar rahe ho? Paagal ho kya??? Ch-Chorro mujhe!!!

Apne naazuk haatho se woh Veer ke haath apni kamar pe se hataane ki koshish karne lagi. Lekin Veer toh Veer tha. Bhala uski pakad ko dheela karna, Divya ke bas ki baat kaha thi?

Woh toh sirf kasmasaati hui Veer ki baaho me uska virodh karti rahi, uska chehra sharm ke maare poora laal ho raha tha.

Ek baar fir, Mystic Touch trigger ho chuka tha.

Veer ne uski ye haalat dekh hassi udaayi. Hawa me udti chidiya kese uske panjo me aake phass chuki thi ab.

Uske mazboot haath, kisi zanzeer ki tarah Divya ke badan ko jakde hue the. Woh jitna hi bhaagne ki koshish karti, Veer ke haatho ki pakad utni hi uske jism par mazboot ho jaati.

Ek taaza phul ke samaan khushboo Divya ke badan se aa rahi thi, jo Veer ke dil-o-dimaag me halchal machaaye hue thi. Abhi abhi naha ke jo aayi thi Divya. Halke halke baal bhi uske geele the. Aur nahaane ke baad uska gora badan Surya-uday ki kirno me jo chamak raha tha, woh kisi bhi mard ko apna aapa khone par majboor karne ke liye kaafi tha.

Aaj usne jaldi naha liya tha.

"Ch-Chorro Veer....!" Uski patli sii awaaz Veer ke kaano me padi.

Veer : Well? Aap hi thi jo baar baar sher ke muh me apna haath de rahi thi. Kaha tha na mene uss raat? Don't get too close to me. Or you'll get burned. Look what you made me do now.

Woh hasste hue bola, uske haath Divya ki kamar ko zorr se jakad ke apni orr kheeche. Divya ki peeth poori tarah se Veer ki chaathi se jaa chipki. Yaha tak ki Veer ka hathiyaar bhi ab uski chuttado me dakhal dene laga tha.

Divya : Ahhh!!! Y-Youuuu!!!! Mene kab... Mene kab kuch kiya? Tumhi toh mere paas aaye na abhi? Haan? L-Leave me now!!! Iss se pehle ki koi hume dekh le. Ugh!!!

Veer muskuraate hue uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur bola,

Veer : Kal Miss Natalia ke saath dinner se aate waqt. Jab aap mere peeche chal rahi thi. Kaun tha woh jo apne hontho ko daato se daba ke meri orr dekh apne breasts ko masalne me laga hua tha haan?

Uske muh se woh sab sunte hi Divya ke chehre ka achanak hi rang udd gaya. Par sharm ab bhi barkaraar thi.

Divya : Ahhhhh!!!! T-Tumne kab...!?

Veer (smiles) : Mene kab dekha? Humph! Galti aapki, jo aapne bagal me lage sheesho par dhyaan nahi diya. Saari harqat aapki mein side me lage sheesho me dekh raha tha. You were thirsting for me. Right?

Divya (blushes) : Nnnnnngghhhh~ L-Leave me!!!

Uske gaal gulaabi ho chale aur virodh ke kaaran, uski gol matol gaand Veer ki jaangh aur uske lund par zorro se ghisne lagi, jiske chalte Veer ka mazaa duguna ho gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Let me teach you a few things.

Veer ne agle hi pal, Divya ki kamar pakad usse aur zorr se apni orr kheecha aur jhukte hue uss sugandhit badan ke lambe gore gale me apna muh de diya.

"Nnnnggghhhhhhhh!!!!!"

Ek tezz siski ki awaaz aayi. Divya ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Veer uske gale ko betahasha choomne laga. Uski geeli zubaan uss makhmali twacha par firti rahi.

Aisa lag raha tha jese ek vampire ek amla naari ka shikaar kar raha tha uske gale me apne nukile daant se gadaate hue. Divya ek bhed ki tarah prateet ho rahi thi jisse maano ek bhooke sher ke saamne fek diya gaya ho.

Divya : Dekho! Veer! M-Mujhe chorro... Kal jo kuch bhi hua hamare beech, usse mein nazar-andaaz kar dungi... L-Leave me right now!!!!

Badi himmat kar ke usne kuch shabd nikaale muh se. Seena zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha. Parantu, Veer toh aaj kisi aur hi mood me tha. Aaj jese uske andar ki aag bhi bhadak chuki thi.

Aur agle hi pal,

Divya : Nnnnnnhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Veer ne Divya ki kaali dress ke andar se seedha haath daal uska ek doodh pakad kar baahar kar diya. Divya bhauchakki sii apni haalat ko dekhti rahi bas.

Veer ne jese hi dekha toh woh hairaan reh gaya. Andar koi bhi bra nahi thi Divya ke. Iska matlab...

Uska haath turant hi peeche unn do mulaayam chuttado ke beech me gaya aur jese hi usne waha chhua,

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Sssssssssss~"

Divya uchhal uthi.

'Shit!!!! She's naked inside!?'

[Mujhe ek kaam yaad aaya Master. Mein aati hu thodi derr me.]

*Ding*

[System has entered into the sleep mode.]

*Ding*

[Divya's favourability : 74]

Neeche se bhi Divya nagn haalat me thi. Iska matlab saaf tha. Woh sirf yahi kapda khud par daal ke apne haseen jism ko chhipaaye hue thi.

Veer ne usse zorr se ghumaaya aur iske pehle ki Divya kuch keh paati, uske honth Veer ke hontho ki giraft me jaa chuke the.

"Mmmmmmmmmmmm~"

Woh Divya ko aise man handle kar raha tha jese maano koi choti sii gudiya ho. Uski chuchhiyo ko haath me leke aatte ki tarah goonth raha tha Veer. Unhe naye naye akaar de raha tha.

Aur iss geeli deep kiss se dono hi ekdum garam ho chuke the. Aankho me nasha saaf dikh raha tha.

"Veeerrrr!!!! Jaane do... Jaane do... Dekho!!! Ye sab galat hai. Hum ye nahi kar sakte. We have already crossed a limit. W-We can't now... Mmmmphhhhhhhh~"

Veer ne usse chooma aur usse jhatt se goad me utha liya. Woh pal bhar me hi Divya ko utha ke Divya ke hi personal room me usse le gaya.

*Dhapppp*

Usne zorr se uske queen size bed par patka aur,

*Click*

Door knob andar se ghuma ke door lock kar diya.

Divya : N-Noooo!!!!

Bechaari Divya ki haalat kharab thi. Baal bikhre hue the, hontho par thook saja hua tha, par fir bhi aankho me khumaari thi, uttejna thi aur ek laalsa bhi.

Veer ke jism ko khud par mehsoos karne kii.

Ek javaan aurat aur ek uss se bhi javaan ladka. Dono ek dusre ko khaa jaane wali nazro se dekh rahe the. Dono jaante bhi the ki woh hawas ka shikaar ho rahe hai. Uske bawajood dono woh karna chaah rahe the.

Veer uske upar aaya aur Divya ki dress ki woh dori usne kheech ke khol dii. Aur ek hi jhatke me uske badan se usne woh dress alag kar dii.

Ufffff!!!

Veer ki aankho ke saamne Divya ka pehli baar poora nanga shareer saamne tha. Kya hi taraasha hua jism tha.

Divya ne koi virodh nahi kiya iss baar. Na hi badan ko dhaka aur na hi woh kuch boli.

Aur uske baad shuru hua dono ka thook se mel milaap. Yaani ki deep kissing. Bhooke jaanvaro ki tarah woh dono ek dusre ke muh ko khaane me jutt gaye.



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Kabhi Veer Divya ke hontho ko kaatata,


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Toh kabhi uske labo ke sang khelta.


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Kabhi woh uske doodh choosta toh kabhi badan ko choomta. Aur Divya bas nihaal sii hui jaa rahi thi. Na koi hosh na koi sharam ab.


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"Now! I'll devour you!!!"

Veer ne ahista se kaha. Lekin, Divya ke raungte khade ho gaye. Woh ab usse khaane aa raha tha.

Apna jogger neeche kar usne poora utaara, underwear me hi uska hathiyaar khatarnak prateet ho raha tha.

Aur jese hi underwear hataayi, jhatke ke sath uska lund uss se baahar aaya. Phati aankho se Divya kabhi uske lund ko dekhti toh kabhi usko..

Uski muniya toh pehle se hi rass chorr rahi thi. Iss se adhik foreplay ki koi zaroorat nahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Siskiyaa kam lena. Warna woh jaag jaenge.

Aur itna bol, Veer ne apna lund Divya ki chut ki siraahne rakh diya.

Divya : Nnnggghh~

Pitcher gaya bhaad me. Veer aaj pehle iss pitch par batting ke liye utarne taiyyaar tha. Aaj toh woh harr shot boundary ke paar maarne waala tha.

Kuch derr tak dono ek dusre ki aankho me dekhte rahe, Veer apna lund liye uski chut ke daane par ghista raha. Jese usse tease kar raha tha. Harr guzarte pal Divya bechain hoti jaa rahi thi. Apna nichla honth daato me liye woh jese intezaar kar rahi thi.

Aur woh ghadi aa hi gayi,

Ek baar me Veer ka aadha lund sansana ke uski chut me ghuss gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhnnnnnnnnnnnnn~"

Khud ki siski ko usne apne haatho se muh ko dhaak ke roka.

"Fuck!!! This feels good! Damn! Mujhe nahi laga tha aap abhi bhi itni tight hogi. Uggghh!!!"

Divya ki santaan nahi thi. Zaahir tha ki ek aam aurat ke muqaable uski chut me abhi bhi tightness barkaraar thi. Nik ke saath sex usne kiya tha kayi baar. Par Nik ka lund bhala Veer ke lund se kese muqaabla kar sakta tha!?

100 ke upar ka appearance tha Veer ka. Zaahir hai kaafi changes uske pappu par bhi kiye the system ne. Uska lund Divya ki chut ko aur phela raha tha. Iske pehle usne itne size ka kabhi nahi liya tha.

Uske haath apne aap Veer ki peeth aur baal par mandraane lage.



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Bagal me stool par rakhi uski aur Nik ki shaadi ki photo frame ko dekh, usne apni siskiyaa roki aur haath aage badha kar photo frame ko gira ke dhak diya.

Taaki, ye drishya photo me maujood Nik bhi na dekh paaye. Sharmindagi!!!

Par uss se bhi zyaada anand. Jo Divya bharpoor utha rahi thi. Na jaane kabse ye frustration bhara hua tha usme. Sex ki behad zaroorat thhi usse. Aur Veer ne uski uttejna ki chingaari ko aag de dii thi.

"Aaahhhnnnn!!!! Mmmmmmm~ Y-Yessss!!!!! H-Haaannnnnnn!!!! Ohhhhhhh veeeerrrrrrrrr!!! Hnnnnnn hnnnn hnnn... Ohhh godddd!!! Ssssssssssss yesssss!!! Y-Yahiii nnnnghhhhh aise hiiiii.... Rrrrrgghhhhhh... "



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Aur kamre me Divya ki awaazein goonjti rahi. Suhana aur Nik apne apne kamre me so rahe the. Divya ne unka khayaal kar apni awaazein dabaayi.

Idhar Veer positions badal badal ke usse bhog raha tha. Kabhi woh usse utha ke chodta, toh kabhi deewar se bhida ke. Dhakke tabadtod itne the ki Divya ki chut me dard shuru ho chuka tha.

Aur jese hi Veer apni seema par pohucha,

"Ohhhh!!! Fuuuckkkkk!!!"

Divya : N-Nahhhhiiiiiii!!!! Veeer nahiiii!!!! Andar nahiiii!!!

Lekin boht derr ho chuki thi,

*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*

Veer ne apna saara veerya divya ki chut me gira diya.

Divya : Nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!

Woh zorr se chillaayi, par uska badan khud jhatke pe jhatke maarta raha. Bechaari khud apna paani chorr chuki thi.

Kuch shan baad,

Divya poori tarah nangi bistar par pait ke bal laiti hui thi, toh wahi uski mulaayam gaand par Veer apna sarr rakh laita hua tha.

Uska haath jese hi Divya ki mulaayam gaand par gaya toh,

*Chataaaaaaakkkk*

Divya ne uske haath par zorr se chapet maar ke haath alag kar diya.

Divya : Udhar ke baare me sochna bhi mat.

Veer (smiles) : I was just testing the grounds.

Divya : Shut up! Aur suno ab meri baat.

Veer : ??

Divya : You idiot, tum ne andar kyu giraaya?? Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na. Tumhe pata bhi hai tumne kya kiya?

Veer (smiles) : Don't worry!! Kuch nahi hoga!

Divya : Kuch nahi hoga? Tum koi vidhaata nahi ho jo keh diya wahi hoga. Idiot!!! Iska risk pata bhi hai? Ohhh god!! Yadi mein pregnant ho gayi toh tumhe pata bhi hai kitni badi dikkat ho jaegi?

Veer : Nahi hoegi. Chill!!!

Divya : Y-Youuuu!!!! Dekh lena. Agar kuch hua na, toh mein poora blame tumpe daalne waali hu.

Veer : Believe me! Kuch nahi hoga.

Divya : T-Tummm! Tumse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai. Tum itne yakeen ke saath kese keh ho sakte ho haan? Yaha meri ye soch soch ke hi phati padi hai aur tum ho ki... Ek minute! Kahi... Kahi tumhare usme koi kuch gadbad toh nahi na...!?

Veer : Ek baar aur refill karu kya?

Divya : N-Nahiii!!! Aur nahi... Bilkul nahi...!!!

Veer (smiles) : Just trust me!

Divya : F-Fine then! Aur ek baat. Hamaare beech aaj kuch bhi nahi hua hai. Hum pehle ki hi tarah hai. Pretend karna ki tumhare aur mere beech kuch bhi aisa nahi chal raha. Ye first and the last time tha. Kisi ko bhi iss baat ki bhanak bhi nahi lagni chahiye. Khaas kar Nik aur Suhana ko. Otherwise dikkat ho jaegi. You get it?

Veer toh bas uske jism ko nihaarne me laga hua tha. Kya khoob badan tha sach me Divya ka. Ekdum chodne laayak.

Woh iss kaan se sunn uss kaan se Divya ki baate nikaal raha tha.

Usne jhatt se Divya ko paltaaya aur ek hi baar me uske rass bhare honth apne muh me bhar liye,

"Mmmmmmmphhhhhhhh~"

Divya bechaari badbadaati rahi par Veer toh usse seriously le hi nahi raha tha. Iss samay Divya ek aisi billi ke samaan prateet ho rahi thi jo gusse me zorr zorr se apne panje chala rahi thi par jese hi uske sarr ko Veer ne thap thapaaya yaani ki usse jakad ke chooma toh apne aap woh purr karne lagi.

Dono ek doosre se lipte nange laite ek dusre ko choomne me lage the. Jeebh se khel rahe the woh ki tabhi itne me,

"Divyyyyaaaaaaaa!!!!!"

Darwaaze ke baahar se Nik ki awaaz aayi. Subah ke 8:05 ho rahe the aur tab se hi Divya aur Veer chudaayi me lage hue the.

Awaaz sunte hi Divya ki sitti pitti gul ho gayi.

Divya : Fuuuuckkkkkk!! Jaldi... Jaldi... Neeche!!!

Hadbada ke woh uthi, usne wahi apni kaali dress fauran hi odh ke pehni aur Veer ko ishaara kiya.

Veer apne kapde lete hue seedha bed ke neeche ghus gaya aur idhar Divya ne darwaaza khol diya,

Nik : Hmm? You were still sleeping?

Divya : Y-Yeah! I woke up just now.

Nik : You look tired. You okay?

Divya (blushes) : I'm... I'm okay! Don't worry!

Nik : Okay! Today is the day. You think he can do the job?

Divya : Who? Ohhh you mean Fred? Y-Yess! He can do it.

Nik : Okay then! Let me remind you, Nolan will be asking you questions. You sure aren't hiding anything right? Otherwise, my reputation will go--

Divya : Don't worry! I'm not hiding anything.

Nik : Hahahaha~ That's like my good girl. Get freshen up. We can't be late today.

Kehte hue woh nikal gaya.

Divya keh rahi thi ki woh koi baat nahi chhipa rahi thi par Nik ko kya pata tha ki uski patni baat toh chorro, itna bada jeeta jaagta insaan apne bed ke neeche chhipaaye hue thi.

*Click*

Idhar Divya ne Nik ke jaate hi darwaza band kar ek raahat ki saans lii, aur neeche se Veer bhi nikal aaya.

Divya : Y-Youuuu!!! Baal baal bache hai hum. Jao yaha se. Jaldi!!!!

Veer ne apne kapde pehne, Divya ki nazre uske harr action pe tiki hui thi. Veer jaane ke liye hua par darwaaze tak aate hi, usne ek baar fir Divya ko deewaar se zorr se sataaya aur....

*Kiss*

Uske raseele hontho ko firse choosne laga. Divya bechari harr baar madhosh sii ho jaati thi. Khud-ba-khud uske haath Veer ke baalo par firne lagte the.

Aur ek antim lambi meethi aur thodi dirty kiss ke baad, Veer bas muskuraaya aur waha se nikal gaya. Aur nikalte hi,

*Ding*

[200 points have been rewarded.]

Idhar darwaaza band kar, uss se tik ke Divya khadi rahi. Apni dress khol usne apne nange badan ko ghoora, jisse abhi abhi ek naujavaan bhog ke gaya tha. Chut par haath ferrte hi uska badan kaanp utha. Ek aisi hi chudaayi ke liye taras rahi thi uski bur. Aur aaj usse woh mil gayi.

'I hope everything will be fine!'

Sochte hue woh firse washroom me ghus gayi.

***

9:26 AM

Naashta ready tha. Aur dining table par baith Veer khaane me laga hua tha. Suhana usse serve kar rahi thi. Nik khaa chuka tha pehle hi aur woh TV pe news dekhne me laga tha.

Tabhi apne kamre se Divya baahar aayi. Aur Veer ke saamne waali chair par baith gayi.

Suhana : Good morning!

Divya : Morning!

Suhana ne usse bhi serve kiya aur Divya coffee ka mug liye naashte me jutt gayi. Woh Veer ko dekh hi nahi rahi thi. Toh wahi veer uski saari harqato pe dhyaan de raha tha.

Suhana ko bhi ajeeb laga. Roz toh kese chipak chipak ke Divya Veer se baate karti thi. Aaj kya hua fir? Huh? Kahi raat me kal kuch?

Ye dhyaan aate hi Suhana ki aankhein fel gayi.

Veer ki taraf woh fauran mudi,

Veer : ??? What?

Suhana (khuspusaate hue) : Kal raat... Tumhare aur Divya ke beech kahi kuch...!?

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Aapne aisa socha bhi kese?

Suhana : You aren't lying right?

Veer : Mein kabhi jhooth bolta hu?

Suhana : *smiles*

Woh andar kitchen me jaane ke liye hui par jaate jaate, palat ke Veer ko zaroor dekhi.



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Kitchen ki entrance par bhi khadi hoke woh Veer ko dekh rahi thi.


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Shayad usne Veer pe bharosa kar liya tha. Aur mann hi mann woh ye jaan ke khush thi ki Divya ke charms par Veer lattu nahi hua.

Par bechaari usko kya pata tha. Ki yaha Veer nahi, balki Divya khud uske charm ke aage lattu ho rakhi thi.

Yaha tak ki abhi uss se baithna bhi mushqil ho raha tha. Chut uski kulbula rahi thi. Dard bhi tha par ek aur ghamasaan chudaayi ke liye jese tadap rahi thi woh.

Kherr! Ye breakfast ka samay aise hi guzra. Department ke liye sabhi ravana ho gaye.

Din bhar toh Divya ka samay yahi samjhaane me nikal gaya ki usse teesre criminal ki jankaari kaha se mili.

Bahane bana bana ke usne jese tese Nolan ko manaaya. Aur shaam hote hi sabki nazre bade se projector par padd gayi.

Suhana, Divya, Veer aur Nik sabhi baithe hue the. Nolan aur Mike athwa baaki sadasya aage virajmaan the.

Veer ke right me Suhana thi aur left me Divya. Toh wahi Divya ke left me Nik.

Divya Veer se baate karne me hichkicha rahi thi aur Veer bas mazze le raha tha.

Aur tabhi, projector par live recording dikhaayi dene lagi.

Veer : Toh ye plan tha aapka? Hmm?

Divya : Haan!

Saamne screen par unhe ek behad hi badi sii hotel ka drishya dikhaayi de raha tha.

Ye Fred hi tha jo apni upar ki jeb me hidden camera lagaaye uss hotel me pravesh kiya tha.

Uska kaam tha bas hotel me ghus ke info lena ki akhir ho kya raha hai waha par. Kya Nat ne jo bataaya wesa hi kuch scene tha yaha? Ya fir kuch aur?

Aur fir dikhaayi diya ek manmohak drishya. Bhaari maatra me log apne apne chehre par masks lagaaye wine pee rahe the aur dheemi sii dhun par naach rahe the. Koi baat kar raha tha toh kahi badi sii dining par log toast kar rahe the. Kahi champagne ki bottles kholi jaa rahi thi toh kahi hassi mazaak chal raha tha.

Divya ki nazre saamne screen par gadi hui thi.



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Suhana : Filhaal toh kuch bhi aisa unusual nahi dikh raha.

Veer : Right!

Aur tabhi, Fred ki awaaz sunaayi dii.

Fred : Nothing doubtful here.

Divya : Keep checking!!!

Divya ne instruct kiya. Fred aur Divya dono hi ek dusre ki baate sunn paa rahe the. Department ke baaki log bhi Fred ko clearly sunn paa rahe the. Woh communication ke liye ek dusre se connected the.

Thoda aur check karne par bhi Fred ko aisa kuch bhi alag sa nahi laga. Ek normal party hi lag rahi thi usse jab,

Uske peeche khade kuch logo ne usse bulaaya,

Aadmi : Hey!!! Join us!!! Have a toast.

Fred ne unhe dekha aur dheere se khuspusaate hue pucha, "Should I go?"

Divya : You can, if you want. Maybe you'll get a new information there.

Fred : Alright! I'm going.

Aur Fred unhe haath dikhaate hue uss badi sii dining table ki orr chal diya.

Idhar department me sabhi nazre gadaaye baithe the.

Toh waha hotel me dining table par kuch aadmi toh kuch mahilaaye baithi hui thi. Sabhi ke chehro par decorative mask tha jo unke chehre ko chhupaaye hue tha.

Hi hello ke baad Fred bhi ek kursi pakad baith gaya aur baato hi baato me usse ek nayi jankaari haath lag gayi.

Yahi ki yeh party kal aur hone waali thi. Kisi dusri hotel me.

Veer : Agar iss third killer ka aim badi celebrities ko aim karna hai toh shayad inn masked logo me se bhi koi na koi celebrity bhi maujood hoga hi waha. Hai na?

Divya : Hmm! Nat hoshiyaar thi jo pehle hi sachet ho gayi. I don't know waha ab kis par aim lagane waala hai ye killer. Hume clue dhundna hai bas.

Suhana : Ahh! Woh dekho!!!

Suhana ke akasmat bolte hi sabki nigaahein fir screen par gadd gayi.

Fred ke bagal se ek aadmi baith tha. Usne Fred ko dekha aur uss se baat cheet shuru kii aur fir sabhi ki taraf dekh zorr se taali bajaate hue unka attention liya,

"Let's have a toast for our new friend Jack!!!"

Fred ka hi naam Jack tha. Ek fake naam jo usne unn sabhi ko bataya tha. Aur woh log khush hote hue Fred ko cheer up karne lage,

"Yaaaayyyyyy!!!!"

"It's party time Jack. Get drunk, and get laid."

"Hahahahahaha~"

"Hey lovely boi!!! C'mon let's have a toast."

Aakarshak mahilao ki nasheeli baatein sunn Fred bhi pighal gaya.

Fred : Ahaha~ Okay! Okay!!

Aur uske bagal waale vyakti ne wine ki ek bottle kholi, wine uske glass me daali aur fir wahi wine usne apne glass me bhari.

Glass ko muh se lagaate hue woh wine ka lutf lene laga aur usko aisa karte dekh Fred ke andar ka sankoch gaayab ho gaya.

Usne bhi fir wine bade hi chaav se pii. Domain Leroy ki ye bottle 20 dollar se 500 dollar tak bikti thi. One of the costliest wines in the world.

Fred ki toh jese kismat chamak gayi thi yaha aane ke baad. Aisi party aur aise mission agar usse roz roz karne ko mile toh woh toh free me bhi karne taiyaar tha.

"Hahahahaha~"

Hassi mazaak shuru hua aur mahaul ekdum enjoyment se bhar gaya.

Idhar department me sabhi prashn bhari nazro se sab dekh rahe the.

Behanchod ye kya chal raha tha? Ye toh party hi lag rahi thi normal ek. Kaha hai killer? Kaun hai killer? Crime kaha ho raha hai?

Aur unki shaq ki sui aake Divya par hi ruki. Sab usse dekhe...

Kahi Divya se koi galti toh nahi ho gayi? Yadi ye jhooth tha toh iske upar karyavaahi bhi ho sakti thi Divya par galat info share karne ke liye. Befaaltu me department ka waqt zaaya nahi kar sakte the aap.

Nik jo uske bagal me baitha tha woh Divya se duwidha me pucha,

Nik : You told us the right information correct?

Divya : Of course!!!

Nik : You aren't lying, right?

Divya : Youuu!!! What do you think I am? Am I retarded or what? Why would I do such a thing? I'm sure there's something wrong there.

Nik : But an hour has passed and nothing happened.

Divya : This...

Jiska darr tha wahi hua. Udhar kuch hua hi nahi. Fred bade araam se gaya, enjoy kiya aur waapas laut aaya.

Aur Divya ko ab buri tarah lataada jaa raha tha. Itna samay barbaad kiya unhone kiske liye? Ek anjaan chutiye ko party enjoy karte dekhne ke liye.

Woh sabhi ghar laut aaye. Divya apne kamre me chinta me doobi hui thi. Nik so raha tha aur Suhana apne pati se firse teekhe bol kehte hue phone pe baato me lagi thi.

Par Veer...

Veer ki aankhein ekdum pheli hui thi. He saw him. Mission mila tha usse, Assassinate The Pitcher.

Divya aur baaki sabhi ko ye nahi pata tha ki killer Pitcher ke naam se jaana jaata tha.

Sirf Veer ko ye baat pata thi. Kyuki mission ne usse bata diya tha.

Aur jab party me woh aadmi Fred ko wine de raha tha. Wahi tha Pitcher!!!

Pitcher usse kaha jaata hai jo bada sa jug jaisa rehta hai jisme aksar hum sharaab ya beer rakhte hai aur uss se logo ko serve karte hai.

Toh yadi uss aadmi ne Fred ko serve kiya matlab chances boht zyaada the ki...

Wahi pitcher tha.

***

Agli subah hui, aaj ka routine bhi kuch khaas samajh nahi aaya unke.

Jab shaam ho gayi toh dono Suhana aur Veer uske hi kamre me baithe hue the. Divya aur Nik department me the.

Suhana apne kapde teh kar ke rakh rahi thi aur Veer kisi soch me dooba hua tha.

Suhana : Bas boht ho gaya ab. Veer! Ab bas hum ek do din me hi nikal chalenge. Ab yaha aur ruki mein toh mera sarr phat jaega.

Veer : ....

Suhana : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Suhana : Kaha kho gaye?

Veer : Kuch nahi! Kahiye!

Suhana : Mene kaha ki bas ho gaya ab. Hum jald hi yaha se waapas India chal denge.

Veer : Ohh! Okay! No problem!

Suhana : Hmm? Excited nahi ho? Waapas ghar jaane ke liye? Idhar zyaada mann lag raha hai? Vegas pasand aa gaya kya? Ya fir...!? Koi aur...!? Huh!!!

Suhana ki double meaning baat sunn woh bas muskura diya.

Veer : Well!!! Both!

Suhana : Huh???

Abhi woh Veer se sawaal puchne hi waali thi ki itne me,

*THUD*

Zorr se hall ka gate khola aur Divya bhaagte hue andar aayi,

Suhana : Huh?? Tum? Accha hua aa gayi. Mein ye bata rahi hu ki ab hum aur Veer bas jaane waale hai ek do din me.

Divya : N-Nahi!!! Meri baat suno, tum abhi nahi jaa sakte. Something huge happened!!

Suhana : What? Kya matlab nahi jaa sakte?

Divya (tezz saase lete hue) : Haan abhi nahi jaa sakte!!!

Suhana : Whaattt??? Divya tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya bol rahi ho? Itne din se dimaag pakk gaya hai mera yaha reh reh ke. Jab se aayi hui bas maut hi maut dekh rahi hu. Tumhe pata hai na mera haal? Fir kyu tum...

Divya (chillaate hue) : For fuck sake meri baat sunogi Suhana???

Suhana : !!!??

Divya ke zorr se chillaane par ek khamoshi chhaa gayi.

Uski aankho me nami thi. Jisse dekhte hi Suhana shaant ho gayi.



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Kuch baat thi. Kuch zaroor hua tha. Aur Divya fir ladkhadaati awaaz me boli,

"Fred is dead!!!"

*Booooooommmm*

Mann me jaise ek dhamaka hua unke. Veer apni jagah se ucchal ke khada ho gaya.

*Badump* *Badump*

Uska dil zorro se dhadakne laga,

Suhana : Kyaaaa????

Divya : Haan! F-Fred is dead. Tum dono jaldi... Jaldi gaadi me baitho. We have to go. NOWWW!!!!!

Gambheer situation ko dekhte hi...

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Unhone ek pal bhi zaaya nahi kiya. Ye kaise ho gaya behanchod? Wph chutiya kal toh mazze kar raha tha. Fir achanak aaj kese marr gaya?

Divya ki car sarpat raaste me bhaag rahi thi aur sabhi ke chehre lar tension saaf jhalak rahi thi.

Veer : Ye sab kaise hua?

Divya : Nahi pata. Bas itna pata hai ki...

Woh ghabraate hue Veer ko dekhi,

Veer : Kya?

Divya : U-Uski... Uski maut bhi Charlotte ki tarah hui.

Sunte hi Veer aur Suhana ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Suhana : I-Iska matlab....!!?

Divya : Yessss!!!! Poisoning!!!

Suhana : Par kaise???? Fred toh protection me tha na aaj. Department ne uske liye 3 din tak safety rakhi thi. Fir kaise?

Divya : That is why it's important. Body uske ghar par hi mili. Na woh baahar gaya aur na hi andar aaya.

Suhana : P-Par aisa kese ho sakta hai? It's not possible. Wait!!! K-Kahi... Kahi woh wine me toh nahi kuch...!?

Divya : Mene bhi yahi socha tha. Par...

Suhana : Par kya? Definitely wine me hi kuch gadbad thi.

Divya : Pehli baat, wine packed thi. Aur... Aur humne screen me dekha tha ki jo wine Fred ko serve kiya wahi... Usne bhi wahi wine pee thi.

Woh dono hi aapas me joojh rahi thi jab,

"Glass!!!"

Veer ke muh se nikla. Aur Veer ke bol sunte hi Divya ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Bechari ki reedh ki haddi tak ek sihran daud gayi. Usne hairat-angez me Veer ko dekha.

Yadi wine me poison nahi tha. Toh aisa ho sakta tha ki glass par poison laga ho.

Divya : Y-Ye... Iske baare me toh mene socha hi nahi tha. Good job veer. Certainly! Ye possible hai. Well done!!!

Suhana : Ye sab kya chal raha hai. I just want to go back. Can't deal with this anymor.

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi department ke saamne aake zorr se ruki aur,

*THUD* *THUD*

Divya samet sabhi car se utarte hi furti me department me pravesh kiye. Maamla boht gambheer tha. Kal tak jo department Divya ko dosh de raha tha unn sabke aaj muh band ho chuke the.

Na keval Divya ki info sahi thi balki, Divya ki team ka banda bhi maara gaya tha iss info ko paane ke liye. Unke muh par taale lage hue the. Divya beshaq bhayankar gusse me thi.

Fred ke sang 4-5 baar woh kaam kar chuki thi. Aur ab woh Bhagwan ko pyaara ho chuka tha.

*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*

Tezz gati me apni heels pehne chalte hue woh department me ghusi jaha mahaul behad serious maalum pad raha tha. Idhar se udhar log jaldbaazi me bhaag rahe the.

Police bhi involved ho chuki thi ab aur maamla Sheriff tak bhi pohuch gaya tha.

Veer ke andar aate hi Nik ki nazar uss par padi aur woh Veer ko wahi baithe bulaaya,

"Come here Veer! We need to talk!!!"

Divya ne dekha toh paaya ki khud sheriff aaya hua tha.

Divya : Sh-Sheriff???? Shittt!!!

Suhana : Kya hua? Why... Why is he here?

Divya : Matter bada hai Suhana. Much bigger than you can imagine. Veer!?

Veer : Right! Mein hoke aata hu.

Suhana : W-Waaaiiittt!! T-Tumhe kyu bula rahe hai woh?

Usne peeche se Veer ki kalaayi pakadte hue pucha.

Veer (smiles) : Ye toh jaa ke hi pata lagega.

Suhana : Par... Par...

Suhana ko andar se kuch theek nahi lag raha tha. Lekin Veer ne apne haath uss se churraaye aur andar ek cabin ki orr chal diya.

*Click*

Darwaaza band hua aur kareeb aadhe ghante tak koi bhi baahar nahi aaya.

***

Aaddhe ghante ke baad...

Veer jese hi baahar aaya, waha maujood poori ki poori investigation team ki nazar uss par theher gayi.

"Kya kaha Sheriff ne?"

Divya ne Veer ko baahar aata dekh uss se pucha.

Veer : Yahi ki mein jaunga.

Suhana (ghabraate hue) : Jaunga se tumhara kya matlab hai?

Veer : Next hotel me. Fred ki tarah spy ban kar.

Suhana (chillaate hue) : Whattt???? You can't-- !!!

Wo apni chair se achanak se uth ke khadi ho gayi aur usne aage badh Veer ka raasta rok liya.

Suhana : You cannot--!!! Divyaaaa!!!

Divya : R-Right! Ye khatre se khaali nahi.

Suhana (screams) : Tumhe kese bhej sakte hai woh? Fuck them off! Dekhti hu kiski himmat ho rahi hai tumhe bhejne ki. Divya tum Nik se kyu nahi kehti?? Go and fucking talk to him.

Divya : Veer! Nik ne kya kaha andar?

Veer : Well! Meri tareefe kii zaroorat se zyada. Jiske chalte Sheriff ne mujhe bheja hai. Par saath hi police and detectives ki team bhi jaegi jo hotel ke baahar rahegi. In case I need them.

[Hmph~ Master! Mujhe uss Nik par boht zyada gussa aa raha hai. Aaarrghhhh~ I'm so pissed.]

'Usse hum baad me dekh lenge Pari. But ye ladke log mujhse itna kyu chidhte hai?'

[Kyuki woh aapki tarah kabhi bann hi nahi sakte Maaassttteerrrr~]

Suhana : Dekha tumne? Fir se Nik ki kaaristaani hai ye. Ek number ka chutiya husband dhundha hai tumne. Madarchod kahi ka... Kaha hai woh...!??

Divya : S-Suhana...!!

Veer aashcharya me Suhana ko dekh raha tha. Par ho na ho, Suhana ke muh se Nik ke liye aisi gaali sunke usse andar hi andar aanand zaroor aaya tha.

[Dang!!! She's so bold. Hahaha~]

Divya : Suhana! Sheriff ne kaha hai. Mein khud Veer ko bhejna nahi chaahti... Veer! Tum apna naam waapas lelo. Kehdo ki tum vaapas India jaa rahe ho. Iss case se tumhara koi matlab nahi hai. Mein sambhaal lungi sab. Mein aur jokhim me nahi daal sakti tumhe. Suhana is right!!!

Suhana : Mene pehle hi kaha tha. Apne uss gaandu Nik ko samjhao warna kisi din mere haatho bachega nahi woh. Mein bata rahi hu tumhe.... Mein uski...

Woh aur do chaar gandi gaaliya deti usse ki uss se pehle hi ek haath uske gaal par aake tham gaya.

Suhana : !!!???

Veer (smiles) : Don't worry! I'll be fine!!

Suhana (screams) : Whaaatttt??? Bilkul bhi nahi! Mein tumhe yaha apni zimmedaari par leke aayi hu. I cannot let this happen. Veer!! Paagal mat bano!!! Jao andar jao aur muh pe bol ke aao, bhaad me jao. Come! We're leaving right now.

Ek baar fir woh uska haath pakad kheech ke le jaane ke liye hui par tabhi, woh jhatke ke saath waapas mud gayi. Veer wahi khada tha. Kese jaa sakta tha woh? Mission jo mila tha.

Veer (smiles) : Hey~

Suhana : T-Tum....!

Veer (smiles) : Look at me!

Suhana : *glances*

Veer : Trust me!! I'll be fine!! Aur aap jaan'na chaahti ho na? How I finished Aatish and Slogan? Well, Aapke paas ek aur mauka hai ab. You can investigate me later. Haha~

Veer ne uska mann halka karne ke liye kaha par Suhana ek nahi sunn'na chaahti thi.

Suhana : Tumhe iss waqt mazaak soojh raha hai Veer? Are you insane?

Veer : Toh kya karu fir? Chillaau ki 'Hey bhagwaan! Mujhe kuch ho na jaaye. Mujhe bacha lo!' hmm?

Suhana (sobs) : T-Tum... Uggghhhh~ tum... Tumhe appreciate karna aata hi nahi hai Veer. Fuck you!!! Aur mein yaha faaltu me... I hate you!!

Aur wo Veer se tang aate hue perr patakte hue waha se nikal gayi. Par aankho me aasu bhi the. Ek toh woh uski jaan bachaane ki koshish kar rahi thi aur yaha ye Veer tha ki... Kheejte hue woh waha se badbadaate hue nikal gayi. Mann me ye sochte hue, 'Jab khud musibat me waha hoga tab yaad aaegi meri baat usse.'

Bhale hi Suhana Veer se chidhte hue waha se nikli, par uske mann me abhi bhi chinta thi boht. Akhir woh aisa kya kare ki Veer ko waha jaane se rok le. Wo Veer ki identity disclose nahi kar sakti thi. Pehli baat toh usne Divya ko vaada diya tha. Dusri baat aisa karne se Veer expose ho jaata aur uske khilaaf karyavaahi bhi ho sakti thi. Yadi aisa hota toh Veer ke chalte woh bhi lapete me aa jaati aur fir uski bhi chhaan been hoti, aur aise me... Uska ateet saamne aa jaata.

'Ohhh no!!! Ab kya karu?? Ye kis musibat me phass gayi mein?'

Ek prakaar se wo Veer ko maut ke ghaat hi utaar rahe the.

***

Night ~ 11:36 PM

"You ready?"

Driver seat par baithe Mike ne pucha. Uske bagal se Veer baitha hua tha.

Bas haan me sarr hilaate hue Veer car se utar gaya.

*Thud*

Mike : Don't drink anything there. Fred died because of the toxins. Something is wrong there. You can do it champ!!

Veer : *smiles*

Mike (smiles) : Just like we did the last time.

Veer : Sure! Thanks!

Mike : Go now! Make sure camera is recording everything.

Veer : Yep!

Mike : We'll be here only. If anything happens just speed dial us. We'll barge in...

Veer ne haami bhari aur chal diya woh.

Upar se neeche tak woh ek stud lag raha tha. Kaala coat, kaala pant, safed shirt aur kaali bowtie. Ye ek party thi toh party ki tarah hi dress up karna zaroori tha.

[Lets go Master!!!]

'Yeahhh!'

[I'll be on guard as well.]

'Hmm!'

Aur Veer andar daakhil ho gaya. Andar aate hi usse doosre floor par bhej diya gaya.

Luckily, jo Nat ne invitation diya tha woh idhar bhi chal gaya. Uss invitation ki time limit 2 din ki thi. Yadi pehle din celebrity nahi aa paati hai kisi reason se toh dusre din unhe aane ka mauka mile isliye do din ki limit thi.

Pehle din toh Fred maara gaya. Aaj akhiri aur dusra din tha. Yaani ki raat thi. Aur ab ussi invitation ke saath Veer ab iss hotel me tha.

Upar second floor par aate hi jese hi woh entrance se andar aaya. Andar ka nazaara saakshaat aankho ke saamne dekh uske hosh udd gaye.



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Jagah jagah thirakte log, sabhi ke chehro par masks the. Aur ek scary aur creepy vibe de rahe the log usse.

Veer wahi kuch derr khada raha. Uski aankhein baaj ki tarah logo ko ghoor rahi thi. Mask uske chehre par bhi tha.

Gaane ki dhun par log naach rahe the.


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Veer ab Beowulf activate kar sakta tha. Aur usne wahi kiya,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Uski laalam laal aankhein unn logo ke beech se scan karte hue apna target dhundne me vyast ho gayi.

Uss bheed me se hote hue woh aage badha, apna coat nikaal usne ek haath me peeche pakad ke taang liya. Aur mask ke andar se uski aankhein apne kaam me lag gayi,

*Music*



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Par usse nahi pata tha ki issi bheed me kya kuch ho raha tha. Waiter badi sii plate ek haath me pakad ke wine ke glasses laaya, lekin...

Plate neeche karte hi, jis vyakti ne glass uthaaya, plate me glass ke hi bagal se ek photograph rakha hua tha.

Uss vyakti ne photograph uthaaya aur bade hi dheere se sarr hila ke waiter ko nod kiya.

Photo dekhte hi usne woh photo haath ki safaayi se apne bagal waale vyakti ko pass kar di. Usne bhi dekhi aur fir usne apne peeche waale vyakti ko pass kii...

Woh ek photo idhar se udhar pass ho rahi thi aur itni safaayi se pass ho rahi thi ki kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha.

Akhiri vyakti jiske paas photo aake ruki, usne dekha toh woh haan me sarr hilaaya.

Aur usne woh photo apne jeb me rakh lii. Aur Woh photo thi...

Veer kii!!!!

Ye sab kuch upar waali balcony me ho raha tha. Veer neeche sabko scan kiya par usse kuch bhi unusual na mila.

Aur tabhi,

*Clap* *Clap*

Upar ki balcony se ek vyakti nikal ke taaliya bajaate hue aaya,

"Let's have a toast. Everyone!! Come and have a seat."

Uski baat par kuch chuninda log aake neeche ki dining table par baithne lage.

Veer ne jaise hi usse dekha usse pata lag gaya tha. Ye wahi vyakti tha jisne Fred ko wine serve kii thi.

'Check!!!'

*Ding*

[Name : David Robinson.
Alias Name : Pitcher.
Age : 41
Bio : Third member of the House of the killers. Iss shaks ki koi family nahi hai. Ye ek heavy drinker hai. He does some secret practice. Nightwalker se wines leta hai. Ab wines ki supply badal dii gayi hai. Sundar celebrities ko maarna iski fetish hai. Kayi saari hastiyo se juda hua hai. Runs a dark web entertainment community.

Favourability : -40
Relationship : Enemies.]

Aur woh padhte hi,

'Shittttt!!!!!'

[Masterrr!!!!]

'Pari!!! So, it was him!!! Secret practice? Iska kya matlab hua? Kahi kaala jaadu toh nahi karta ye?'

[I don't know master. Secret practice!? Shayad dark web se related toh nahi?]

'Kuch baat toh hai.'

Veer usse ghoor ke dur se dekh hi raha tha jab uske kaano me awaaz aayi,

"You there my friend! Looks like you are interested. Why don't you join us?"

Saamne khade ussi David aka Pitcher ne Veer se kaha.

Veer ne haami bhari aur aage chal diya,

[Noooo masssteeerrr!!!! Ye trap hai. Don't goooo!!!!]

Par Veer na maana,

"Nahhhhiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!"

Idhar department me baithi Suhana bhi bechain ho uthi jesi hi usne screen pe dekha ki Veer Fred ki tarah dining table par jaa raha tha.

Suhana (ghabraate hue) : Y-Ye kya kar raha hai wohhhh??? Divyaaaaa!!!!!

Divya ki bauhe sikudi hui thi. Woh khud duwidha aur chinta me thi.

Divya : Shhhh!!! J-Just watch!!!

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Veer ahista se baitha. Ek nazar usne agal bagal daali. Kuch khaas nazar nahi aaya. Hi hello ho chuki thi.

"Hey handsome!!! Come and join us. Ehehe~"

"Ohhh!!! I can tell you are a hot young lad!!! Let's have a toast. Mmmmm~"

"Let's welcome our new friend, Veer!!!!"

Ye sab kuch pehle jesa hi ho raha tha. Jese Fred ke saath hua tha.

Aur, tabhi David ne Veer ko glaas pakdaaya.

Glass haath me lete hi,

'Check!'

*Ding*

[A normal wine glass.]

[So, it's not poisoned huh?]

Pitcher ne fir wine ki ek bottle kholi, aur glass bharne laga.

Uski aankhein Veer ko ajeeb nigaaho se ghoor rahi thi.

Pitcher : For our new friend, Veer. Hehehehe~ Cheers!!!!!! Everyone!!!

"Chhheeeerrrsss!!!"

Veer ne bhi glass upar utha ke unke saamne nod kiya aur fir usne glass apne hontho se lagaaya.

"Paagal kahi ka... Bewakoof!!!! Stupidd!!!! This bastaardddd!!!!!! Idiot!!!! Itna samjhaaya mene... Buddhu kahi ka... Aaaarrghhhhh!!!"

Aur Suhana idhar screen me Veer ko aise dekhte hi poori tarah se bechain ho uthi.

Andar se itni ghabraayi hui thi woh ki uske muh se gaaliya nikal rahi thi Veer ke liye.

Aur baad me toh uski saanse hi atak gayi jab usne Veer ko gat gat karke wine ko peete hue dekha.

Suhana (shocked) : Ahhhhh!!!!

Divya (shocked) : H-He actually...!!!!

Samay guzra aur kahi kuch gadbad samajh nahi aayi. Jab Achanak hi,

Veer : I have to use the washroom. I'll be right back.

Kehte hue Veer utha aur bhaagte hue washroom me jaane laga.

Suhana : K-Kyaaa hua? Kya hua usse?

Divya : Washroom!!!

Suhana : Nahi! Woh bhaag kyu raha hai? K-Kuch hua toh nahi na?

Aur tabhi,

*Thud*

Veer zorr se washroom ka darwaaza khol andar ghusa.

Divya ne forun mic pe bolna shuru kiya,

Divya : Veeeerrr!!! Veer!!! What's wrong??? Can you hear me?

Lekin tabhi,

*Gwaaaakhhhhhhhhh*

Suhana : Aaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Veer ke muh se khoon ki ulti nikli, uski saasein itni badh gayi ki department me sabhi ko sunaaayi de rahi thi. Aur woh agle hi pal,

Ladkhada ke gir pada. Aur uska camera zameen par focused tha jidhar uske muh se nikla khoon pada hua tha.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!"

Department me Suhana zorr se chillaate hue apni seat se gir gayi. Uska badan kaanp raha tha.

Aur idhar Nolan ne agle hi pal,

Nolan : Team!!!! Go barge inside...!!!

Divya ne jese hi woh dekha, toh woh cheeteh ki tarah bhaagte hue waha se nikli,

Uski aankho me aasu the. Mann me na jaane kya kya badbadaa rahi thi.

Car me ghuste hi usse aisa mehsoos hua jaise usne kuch kho diya tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese uske dil me koi sui chubho raha tha. Peeda!!!

Jaise woh himmat hi haar chuki thi.


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'N-Nooooo!!!!'

Accelerator par perr rakh usne ek jhatke me gaadi aage bhaga dii,

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Abhi abhi...

Ye kya ho gaya tha?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
I know ye late hai. But kal raat mere sarr me kaafi dard tha. Typing band karni padi thi raat me hi. Din me araam se fresh hoke fir baaki ka update complete kiya hai. You can already tell how much time I've given on this one. Toh like thok ke jaane ka guys, aur revos rakhne ka.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
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Update - 108 ~ The Last Two Favours
Ab tak...

Suhana : Ahhh!!! S-Sorry about that...!!

Kehte hue woh dur hatt gayi aur mud gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh waapas se car ki orr chal dii.

Idhar sheetal leher me, halki hawao me Veer ki lehraati zulfein uski aankho ke saamne fir rahi thi aur nazre tiki hui thi Suhana ke naate hue figure par.

'You are hiding something. Aren't you? Miss Suhana?'


Ab aage...

A day before flight...

Aaj woh din tha jab Suhana aur Veer Las Vegas me antim raatri ke liye rukne waale the.
Aur kal hi unki fir waapas apne vatan lautne ki flight thi.

Inn beete dino me na jaane kya kya pareshaniyo ka saamna karna pada tha unhe. Shuruaat hui thi Jim se jaha unhe iss house of the killers gang ka bodh hua, fir Nightwalker ke Mansion ka maut ka woh nanga naach aur antim me Pitcher ka rehesyamayi tareeqe se sundar hastiyo ko maut ki neend sulaana.

Kuch bhi ho, inn sab me sirf Veer hi nahi tha stress me. Suhana aur Divya ka bhi yahi haal tha. Suhana toh ab apni seema par aa chuki thi.

Itne dino ki bhaag daud aur harr taraf maut ki khabre sunn sunn ke hi uska dimaag phata jaa raha tha. Jald se jald ek refreshment chahiye tha usse toh ab.

Aur isliye, Suhana ne Divya ko baaki sab kuch se deal karne ke liye usse apne haal par hi chorr diya.

Pitcher ka raaz khulne ke baad, Divya ke mann me dherr saare sawaal the, khaas kar Veer ko lekar. Par kya karti bechaari? Veer tha, jo kabhi bhi apna asli sach bataane nahi waala tha. Ant me Divya ko wahi baatein sweekaar karni padi jo Veer ne apne muh se bataayi thi.

Aur aaj teeno Divya, Suhana aur Veer jis musibaat se nijaat paaye the uske liye vasooli karne aaye the.

Dusre shabdo me, woh yaha Nat se paise lene aaye the. Nat ne Divya ko hire kar paise dene ki baat ki thi apne concert ke baad.

Aur Divya apne haath me aaya paisa chorr de? Aisa kese ho sakta tha!?

Teeno hi ek baar firse baahar baithe hue the. Aur pichli hi baar ki tarah Suhana ka muh fula hua tha,

Suhana : Fir wahi scene.

Divya : Hahahahaha~ Kya kar sakte hai? Celebrity hai woh. Hume apne hi paise lene ke liye wait karna hoga.

Suhana : Kitni hi badi celebrity ho. Mujhe abhi bhi uska attitude pasand nahi aaya. Humph~

Veer : Well! At least, hume baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai.

Suhana : Huh? Kya matlab baat karne ka mauka mil raha hai? Veer, woh Sonu ke saath bachpan me khela karti thi. Mere ghar aati thi woh ucchal ucchal ke. And look at her now. Sach kehte hai log. Logo ko badalte derr nahi lagti.

Divya : Hahaha~ Ohh! My Sonny is pissed!

Suhana : Shut up! And don't call me with that fucking name.

Divya : Hehe~

Suhana : Mein washroom se hoke aati hu tab tak.

Woh uthi aur apni kamar matkaate hue baahar nikal gayi. Ab udhar sirf aur sirf Veer aur Divya hi bache hue the.

Veer Pari se kuch baatein karne hi waala tha jab achanak hi,

*Ding*

[Profit Path : Kiss Divya now.]

'Ehhh?'

Uske mann me ek message aake pop hua.

[Aapko Divya ko kiss karna hai Master.]

'What the fuccckkkk!!??'

[Ahem!]

Veer ye puchne hi wala tha ki ye naye scroll ka kaam kya hai aur tabhi iss naye scroll ne ek path de diya.

"Ye kya bakchodi hai? Pari??? Kiss? I mean yeah kissing her is good and all but..."

[Pffftttt~ Hahaha~ Toh kariye kiss fir.]

'Par iska kiss se kya lena dena. Wtf is happening?'

[Master~ Iss scroll ko underestimate mat kariye. Jesa naam hai wesa hi kaam hai iska. Time to time ye aapko profit paths show karta rahega. Aur yakeen maaniye, agar aap iske bataaye gaye path ko follow karenge toh aapko ameer bann'ne se koi nahi rok sakta.]

'Hmm! Toh ye business related hai! Right?'

[Jii haan Master! Ye aapki rich life ke liye hi hai. Dusre shabdo me jaha jaha profit hone ki possibility rahegi. Profit Path aapko paths de dega. Ab ye aapke upar hai ki aap uss path ko follow karke kuch earn karna chaahte ho ya nahi?]

'Hmm! I see! Fir bhi, Miss Divya ko kiss karna aur...!'

[Kar ke dekhiye! Tabhi hume pata chalega na.]

'Aisa lag raha hai mein scam ke daldal me doobne jaa raha hu.'

[Hehe~ Nooo! Just trust me!]

'Fine then! Miss Divya! I'm sorry! But I'm about to taste you~'

Agle hi pal uski nigaahein Divya ke husn par tik gayi. Khud ke upar nazre mehsoos karte hi Divya ne Veer ko dekha,

Divya : What?

Veer : Heh~ :heh:

[Let's go~ :heh: ]

Divya (blushes) : Wh-What is it!?

Divya ke badan par goosebumps aa rahe the. Ye Veer achanak se usse ajeeb nigaaho se kyu dekhne laga tha? Uske andar jese khatre ki ghanti baj rahi thi.

Aur tabhi, Veer aage badha aur uske gaalo ko choomne laga,



Divya : V-Veeeerrrr!!! Wh-What are you doing!!!?

Veer (smiles) : Taking my reward!

Divya (blushes) : K-Kaisa reward?

Veer : Of course! Ye waala...!

Aage badhte hi usne pal bhar me Divya ke raseele honth apne muh me bhar liye.

"Mmmmnnnnnnnnn~"

Divya firse virodh karti rahi par ek do baar me hi jese Veer ke honth uske labo ko choosna shuru kiye, Divya ka virodh saara ka saara gaayab hoke reh gaya. Balki, uske haath khud-ba-khud Veer ki collor ko kass liye,

"Nnnnnnnnngggghhhhhhhhh~"

*Slurp* *Slurp*

Uski saasein fulne lagi, aur usne turant hi dhakka deke Veer ko alag kiya. Thook ki ek patli sii lakeer dono ke muh se jud gayi.

Aur tabhi unhe kisi ke aane ki aahat aayi,

Veer ne muskuraate hue apni ungli se uss lakeer ko toda aur woh chup chaap ek seedhe bacche ki tarah hoke baith gaya. Toh wahi, Divya ne sharmaate hue apna muh haatho se pocha aur apni dress dobaara check karne lagi.

Aane waala shaks aur koi nahi, Suhana thi. Washroom se aake woh waapas sofe par baith gayi.

Kuch chand derri ke baad...

Abhi yaha baatein ho hi rahi thi jab ek cabin se nikal ke ek ladki aayi aur unhe dekhte hue boli,
"Miss is coming!"

Bol kar woh waha se nikal gayi. Aur bas kuch derr me hi Nat cabin se nikli aur baahar aayi. Kaali dress me woh harr baar ki tarah behad khubsoorat lag rahi thi.



Jitni baar usse dekho, utni baar mann machal jaaye kisi bhi aadmi ka. Aur Veer bhi unme se hi ek tha.

Nat ko firse dekhte hi uske dil ki ghanti bajne lagi thi.

'So beautiful...!'

[Hmm! Hmm! She is indeed. I will agree here. :approve: ]

Woh aake unke saamne ruki, uske chehre par ek muskaan thi.

Nat (smiles) : Looks like, you did the job!

Divya : Of course!

Nat : Well! Ye raha cheque!

Kehte hue usne Divya ko ek cheque haath me thama diya.

Divya ne jese hi cheque dekha woh hairat me reh gayi. Cheque par keemat million dollar ki thi. Yaani kareeb kareeb 8 crore ke aas paas ki rakam.

Divya : Th-This...!!!

Divya ke haav bhaav dekhte hi Nat ke chehre par ek santushti bhari muskaan sajj gayi,

Nat : Mene pehle hi ye baat boli thi. Right? I will pay you a hefty amount. Toh ye raha! Have it!

Divya : Well...! Iss baar. Saara credit Veer ko jaata hai.

Divya ki baat sunn, Nat ki nazre Veer par tikk gayi aur woh ek chaav ke saath usse ghoorne lagi,

Veer : ...!?

Nat (smiles) : Then, I must thank you too I guess.

Usne apna haath aage badhaaya toh Veer ne apni taraf se zarra sii bhi derri na dikhaayi.

Aur haath milaate hue dono ne hi haami bhar ke ek dusre se mann hi mann baat kar lii.

Suhana ko kuch khaas interest nahi tha. Woh bas haath baandhe apni aankhein ghumaate hue jald se jald yaha se nikalne ka intezaar kar rahi thi.

Nat : I hope we will meet again!

Veer : Maybe!?

Nat (smiles) : Maybe huh!!?

Veer : ...

Nat : I have an appointment. I will take my leave here. Thanks once again Divya! You were a big help!

Divya : That's my job!

Nat ne ek antim baar sarr hilaaya aur waha se woh nikal gayi.

Suhana : Aaarggghhhhh!!! She pisses me so much! Mein jaa rahi hu baahar! Parking me milo tum dono!

Suhana yaha se nikli toh wahi Divya sofe par baith ke apne phone me kisi ka contact dhundh rahi thi.

Aur idhar Veer...! Uski nazre abhi abhi Nat ke jaate hue uss figure par tiki hui thi. Nat ne bhi jese Veer ke mann ki baat sunn lii, woh lift me andar jaane se pehle ek baar palti,

Veer ko dekhi aur,



Muskuraate hue usne ek ishaara kiya. Aur fir muh se 'bye' kehte hue woh lift me ghus gayi.

'Huh!?'

[Uske aur aapke beech kuch pakk raha hai kya Master? Why do I feel weird? Hmm!!! (⁠‘⁠◉⁠⌓⁠◉⁠’⁠) ]

'Naah! You are overthinking!'

Ek lambi saans leke Veer muda ki tabhi Divya uske nazdeek aayi,

Divya : Apna... Apna account number do!

Veer : Hmm?

Divya (blushes) : Idiot! Reward nahi chahiye kya? Abhi itna reward reward kar rahe the. Give me your account number. I'll.. I'll transfer half of the amount to yours.

Veer : Woahhh!

[Dekha! Mene kaha tha na? Profit Path par bharosa rakhiye.]

Divya : Mujhe yaha se ek important kaam se jaana hai. Aaj mein busy rahungi. Tum Suhana ko leke kahi acchi sii jagah jao. Wese bhi kal tum dono ki flight hai. Jaane se pehle ek refreshment zaroori hai. Enjoy kar lo thoda. Itne din frustrate ho gaye hoge. Suhana ko bhi thoda accha feel hoga.

Veer : Are you...!?

Divya : Yeah I'm sure! Ye rahi keys! Go now! Usse wait karna pasand nahi hai.

Divya Veer ko gaadi ki chaavi thama ke waha se ravaana ho gayi.

Aur Veer bhi nirdesh anusaar Suhana ko leke waha se nikal gaya. Profit Path ne toh sach me uska fayda kara diya tha. Upar se tareeqa bhi bada accha tha.

Yadi Veer ne Divya ko kiss kar woh ehsaas na dilaaya hota toh shayad Divya ne paise nahi diye hote. Aur agar deti bhi toh shayad aadhi rakam saath me nahi baatati.

Veer aur Suhana car me baithe hue the jab Veer ne sawaal kiya,

Veer : Toh? Kaha chalna hai?

Suhana : Kaha chalna chaahte ho?



Veer : Mein?

Suhana (smiles) : Haa tum! Kyuki mene sab ghooma hai yaha. Tum hi pehli baar aaye ho.



Veer : I...

Veer confused tha aur uska ye confusion dekh Suhana khil-khila uthi.

Suhana : Mall chalte hai. Sonu ne mujhse kuch accesories laane ko kaha tha. Aaj last day bhi hai hamaara yaha. Hum bhi kuch shopping kar lenge? How about that?

Veer : Ohhh!! Right right!!! Mujhe yaad aaya. Mein ye kese bhul sakta hu?

Suhana : Kya?

Veer (smiles) : Meri Juhi ke liye mujhe chocolates leni hai.

Suhana : Juhi? Ohh that Little kid? I see!

Suhana ek soch me doob gayi. Veer yaha itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi uss choti sii bacchi ki liye chocolates lena nahi bhula? Ek ajeeb sii feeling uske dil me jaagi, jisse woh samajh nahi paayi ki kya thi.

Dono ne dherr saari shoping kii, hassi mazaak toh kahi ek dusre ki taang kheechne me dono ka samay guzra.

Suhana jitna Veer ke sang rehti woh khud ko utna acche se mehsoos kar paati. Usse aisa lag raha tha jese woh bina kisi darr ke Veer ke saamne apni split personality ko bekaabu bhi hone de sakti thi. Jese usse visvaash tha ki agar Veer uske saamne hai. Toh usse koi chinta nahi rahegi.

Dono shopping ke baad street par roadside baithe hue the. Aaj ka din kitna khubsoorti se beeta tha unka.

Suhana : Toh? Raat ka kya plan hai? Kahi aur ghoomna hai?



Veer : Aaj aap dinner ki party kyu nahi deti!?

Suhana : Ab dinner party bhi mein hi du? Abhi itni shopping karwaayi mene!



Veer (smiles) : Toh dijiye! Wese bhi! Aapki dinner party sab ko naseeb kaha hoti hai? Look at Nat. Unhe bhi mauka nahi milne wala.

Suhana pyaar se muh ferrte hue Veer ke joke par muskuraayi,



Suhana : Duh! No way!

Veer : Fine then! Dinner ki party meri taraf se.

Suhana : Yessssss!!!!!



Dono hi behad khush the. Divya ke paas badqismati se samay nahi tha toh sirf Veer aur Suhana hi iss dinner ka hissa the.

Aur keval do logo ke hone ke kaaran, ye dinner kam dinner date zyada lag rahi thi.

Luckily, unn dono ka dinner behad hi acchi tarah se hua. Suhana me jo change aaya tha Veer ke prati woh zameen aasmaan ka tha.

Woh ab Veer ko apne baraabar ke dost ki nigaaho se dekhti thi jo ki ek boht badi baat thi. Saath hi unn aankho me ab kahi bhi nafrat ya chidh nahi thi Veer ke liye. Balki kuch aur hi tha. Kuch aisa... Jis se Suhana abhi anibhigya thi.

Veer iss aalishaan hotel ki first floor ki balcony ke paas khada hua tha, Suhana ka woh wait kar raha tha. Jab tabhi achanak neeche ke ground floor par uski nazar gayi aur usne dekha ki,

Ek suit pehne aadmi usse hi peni nazro se ghoor raha tha.

'Huh? Check!!!'

*Ding*

[No information available.]

Message padhte hi Veer ki aankhein shock ke maare chaudi ho gayi.

'P-Pariiii!???'

Aisa pehle aaj tak nahi hua tha. Ye sab kya tha? Veer ne Kaera ko jab check kiya tha tab usse "you are not eligible to view this person's status." dikhaayi diya tha.

Par ye?

No information available! Yeh kya tha? Woh kuch soch paata ki tabhi woh vyakti chalte hue aage aaya, uske haatho me ek cigarette thi aur Veer ko dekh ek kutil muskaan dete hue woh waha neeche se baayi orr mudd gaya.



Pal bhar me hi Veer ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

'What!?? What is happening!?? Kaun tha wohhh??? Who the fuck he wasss??? Pari?!?'

[Yes master]

*Ding*

[Basic Enemy Tracker is in use.]

*Ding*

[16 enemies were found nearby.]

Ye dekhte hi Veer ki bolti band ho gayi.

'Fucccckkkkkk!!!!!'

Aur agle hi pal woh mud ke turant bhaaga, udhar Suhana apna make-up washroom se check kar ke nikal rahi thi jab Veer ki tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi,

"Miss Suhaaanaaaa!!!!"

Suhana : Hmm? K-Kya h--???

Woh kuch keh paati ki uss se pehle hi Veer ne uski kalaayi thaami aur zorr se usse bhaga ke hotel ke baahar le jaane laga,

Suhana : Ahnn!? V-Veeerrr? Kya hua? Wait!!! What the hell?? Haah... Haah... Tell me!!! Hum bhaag kyu rahe hai!?

Veer : Puchiye mat!!! Jaldi! Car me baithiye!

Usne furti me Suhana ko car ke andar dhakela aur khud driver seat par baith gaya,

Suhana : Veerrr!! Mujhe ye bilkul pasand nahi hai okay? Tell me! Tell me kya hua hai!?

*VRRRRROOOOOOMMMM*

Aur Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi accelerator par perr rakh diya.

Suhana : Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!

Woh cheenkhi.

[I was right!! Master!!! Koi hamaara peecha kar raha hai.]

Veer ki nazar jese hi rear mirror pe gayi, aur Pari ki baat uske kaano me padi, uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana sath me thi. Nahi nahi nahi!!! Ye ladaayi lene ke samay nahi tha.

Veer ne skillfully gaadi ko idhar se udhar nikaala par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche bani hui thi. Aur Veer ka shaq ab yakeen me badal gaya tha.

Suhana (screams) : Veeeeerrrrrrrr!!!

Veer : Humara koi peecha kar raha hai. We are the targets.

Suhana (jhepte hue) : Whaaatttt???

Veer : Yeah!!! Isliye... Aapko leke waha se bhaagna pada.

Suhana : Y-Ye sab chal kya raha hai?

Idhar Suhana ne call kar Divya ko sab kuch bata diya. Aur yaha Veer ne car me hi gps ki madad se sakre raasto me gaadi daalni shuru kar dii thi.

Par woh gaadi ab bhi peeche lagi hui thi.

'Damn it! Damn it! Damnnn ittt!!!!'

Aur fir,

*BAAAANNNGGG*

*CRAAASSHHHHHH*

Suhana : Aaahhhhhhnnnnnn~

Ek goli aake seedha unki car ke left mirror ko ukhaad ke alag kar dii.

Suhana : Veeeeeerrrrr!!!!

Veer : Don't worry!!!

Suhana ghabraate hue kabhi peeche dekhti toh kabhi saamne toh kabhi Veer ko,

Uski dhadkane train ke maafiq tezz ho chuki thi. Ye sab chal kya raha tha?

Veer ne gaadi ko seedha alleys me ghused diya. Ye alleys bilkul wesi hi thi jese Jim ko pakadte waqt veer aur baaki sab gaye the.

Aur usne gaadi ek alley ke mod me rokte hi Suhana ko usme se baahar nikaala.

Veer : Jab tak Miss Divya help leke nahi aa jaati hume yahi chhupna hoga. Car se dur hi rehna chahiye hume. Come!

Suhana : Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Veer? Hum rukk kyu rahe hai?? Hume toh... Hume toh car me hona chahiye... It's risky... We are fucking getting shot... Let's go!!! Hum unse bach ke nikal sakte hai.

Veer ab kese Suhana ko ye bataata ki Basic Enemy Tracker ne pehle hi ye bata diya tha usse ki aage 8 se 10 enemies harr direction me khadi hoke unka intezaar kar rahi thi.

Aage jaana matlab maut ko aamantran dena tha.

Veer : Trust me!!!

Suhana : What trust me Veerrrr??? We will... We will die...!!!

Aur agle hi shan uske aansu chhalak uthe.

Veer ne usse iss haal me dekh uske sarr ko apne dono haath me thaama aur uski aankho me aankhein daalte hue bola,



"Nothing will happen okay? Hum sahi salaamat iss se baahar niklenge. Okay?"

Uske dono haatho ko thaam Veer ne usse aasvaashan diya.



Suhana aaj darr rahi thi. Divya bhi uske saath nahi thi. Uske paas apni handgun bhi nahi thi. Woh dono hi nihatthe the. Aur toh aur apne desh se baahar. Woh sthiti ko bhali bhaati bhaanp chuki thi. Aur isliye uske aasu nikal pade.

Veer : You go in there. Udhar chhup jaaiye! Quick!

Suhana : What about you!?

Veer : Mein dekh ke aata hu woh nikle ya nahi! Now go!!

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki baat maan woh ek choti sii jagah ke paas jaake raat ke uss andhere me chhip gayi.

Par tabhi,

"There he is...!!!'

"Catch him!!!"

"Let's go!!!"

Kuch anjaan awaazein uske kaan me padi, aur Suhana darr ke maare apna muh band kar wahi dubak ke baith gayi. Veer ki safety ki ek aas liye.

Idhar Veer...!

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.
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Aur uske baad, Suhana ko sirf maar dhaad aur na jaane kesi kesi cheekhne chillaane ki awaazein sunaayi dene lagi.

Woh ghabraate hue apni jagah se bahar nikal sarr se baahar jhaakte hue dekhi toh uske hosh udd gaye.

Neeche 7 se 8 log dale hue the. Toh wahi Veer do aur logo se ladne me laga hua tha.

Woh baahar nikli lekin achanak se,

Apne peeche se usse ek gaadi ki awaz sunaayi dii. Aur uski khidki se ek mask pehne aadmi nikla. Uske haath me ek gun thi.

Suhana ne jese hi ye dekha,

"Veeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!!" Woh chillaayi aur bhaagi.

Par tabhi,

*BANG*

"Ahhhhnn...!"

Gunshot ki awaaz sunte hi Veer ke kaan khade ho gaye. Usne fauran apna sarr palat'te hue peeche dekha. Uske dono haath do aadmiyo ke gale ko jakde hue the.

Peeche mudte hi, usne dekha,

Suhana ki aankhein fati ki fati hui thi, woh dheere dheere ek kadam, do kadam aage uski orr badhaate hue aa rahi thi apni ladkhadati chaal me.

Tabhi uska kaanpta hua haath apne peeche gaya aur usne apni peeth par mushqil se ferra. Waapas jab usne apni hatheli dekhi toh,

Darr uske chehre par saaf jhalka aur ek ehsaas hua. Uski hatheli gehre laal rang se sani hui thi.

"V-Veer!"

Thar-tharaate hontho se usne pukaara aur agle hi shan, "Haahhh!"

Uska shareer saamne ki orr gir gaya. Veer ki nazro me tab jaake Suhana ki peeth saamne aayi, jo khoon se lathpat thi aur woh gehra laal rang Suhana ke kapdo me harr guzarte pal felta jaa raha tha.

Khoon!

"N-Noooooooooooooooo!!!!!" Woh chillaaya.

*Thump* *Thump*

Uska dil zorro se dhadka aur usne unn do aadmiyo ko pakad ke kass ke ek dusre ke sarr se bhida diya.

Dono aadmi wahi behosh hoke neeche zameen par gir pade.

*Whoosh*

Woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah sab kuch chorr seedha Suhana ke paas aaya.

"Yooouuuuu!!!!!!!" Usne gurraate hue peeche roads par unn gaadi me baithe logo ki orr dekha jo turant hi goli maar ke rafu chakkar ho gaye waha se.

Ek ghabraahat Veer ke zehen me janm le uthi.
Usne fauran hi Suhana par focus kiya.

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]

Usne apne kaanpte haatho se Suhana ko uthaaya.

"Noooooooo!!!!! Suhanaaa!!! Suhanaaa!!!!"

Ghabraahat me Veer ye bhi bhul chuka tha ki woh Suhana ko uske naam se pukaar raha tha.

Adhkhuli aankho se Suhana Veer ko dekhi. Aur agle hi shan, uske naino se dherr saari aasuo ki boonde nikal ke girne lagi.

Dard!

"Maaa!!!! Maaaaaaaaaaa~"

Veer ki shirt ko kass ke haatho me jakde hue woh dard se bilakhne lagi,

Veer : Suhana!!!!! N-Nothing will happen to you!!! Tumhe kuch nahi hoega. Don't worry! Abhi... I'm taking you to hospital. Hold your strength!!!

Suhana : V-Veer!

Veer : Haan?

Suhana : I-I don't think... I will make it.

Veer : Don't talk nonsense! Shut up! You'll be fine!!!

Veer ne fatafat apni shirt utaari aur sabse pehle Suhana ki chot par usse baandhne laga. Khoon jitna behna kam ho sake utna hi behtar tha. Halaki ye tareeqa bhi zyaada kuch kaam nahi aane waala tha. Par iss se kuch pal ke liye toh khoon ke bahaav ko kam kiya jaa hi sakta tha.

Suhana ke thar tharaate hontho se fir se kuch bol nikle, "V-Veer!"

Veer : Don't talk!!! Didn't I tell you!?? Just breath!!!

Suhana : Y-Your last two favours!

Veer : Suhana shut up!!! Ye samay nahi hai inn baato ka. Let me tie it up first!!

Woh vyaakulta me chillaaya,

Suhana : Noooo! N-Now is the r-right time. Haah... Haah... Second favour! P-Promise me!!!

Veer : ...!!?

Suhana ke hontho par ek pyaari muskaan sajj gayi,

Suhana : You will protect Sonu!

Veer : You dumbass! Ye koi kehne ki baat hai? And shut up! Aise mat kaho ki ye tumhare akhiri bol hai. Don't act like you're gonna die. Shut the hell up!!!!

Veer ke haanth kaanp kaanp kar shirt par gathaan baandhne me lage hue the. Usse ye ehsaas ho chuka tha aaj ki Suhana se bhale hi usse pyaar nahi tha par woh kya maayne rakhti thi uske liye. Ye baat bhali bhaati jaan gaya tha Veer abhi. Suhana ek dard bhari muskaan ke saath Veer ke saare actions par nazar daali hui thi. Dil me ek khushi ki leher thi uske, ye jaan ke ki Veer ke haath kese kaanp rahe the. Ek sanket tha ye ki Veer ko bhi uski parvaah thi andar se. Aur kitni thi, ye toh uske chehre ke haav bhaav hi sab batla rahe the.

Suhana (smiles) : A-And for your third favour.

Veer : All done!!! Now come...! Jaldi! We can't be late!!!

Usne Suhana ko apni goad me uthaaya,

Suhana : .....

Par, Suhana ne behad dheemi awaaz me kuch kaha. Uske itne qareeb hone ke baad bhi Veer ko Suhana ke woh bol dhang se sunaayi na diye.

Usne sunn'ne ke liye apna sarr jese hi uske chehre ke paas laake neeche jhukaaya ki tabhi,

*Kiss*

Veer : !!!??

Suhana ne apne honth Veer ke honth se laga diye. Bas chand seconds ke liye hi tha ye. Unn komal hontho ka sparsh...!

Kyuki, achanak Suhana ko dard ke baad peeth me jo abhi tak numbness mehsoos ho rahi thi woh bhi ab gaayab ho gayi. Aur uski jagah ek atyant peeda dayak jalan mehsoos hone lagi.

"Nnnghhhh!!!!" Apne hontho ko daato tale zorr se dabaaye aur aankho ko meeste hue woh dard ko bardaasht karne ki koshish karne lagi. Usse aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jese kisi ne ekdum garam garam lohe ki rod uski peeth me ghop dii ho. Jalan itni zyaada thi. Uska blood pressure kayi guna badh chuka tha. Heart rate bhi boht high ho chuka tha.

Ye toh dimaagi sanket the. Hamara dimaag aksar hume bachaane ke liye hamaare shareer ko nirdesh deta hai. High blood pressure, heart rate ussi ka kaaran the.

Jab Bullet jese hi Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue ghusi thi, chand seconds tak toh usse kuch pata nahi chala tha. Koi anubhooti bhi nahi hui thi. Aisa laga tha jese kisi ne usse chota sa patthar phek ke maara ho.

Parantu aisa nahi tha,

Muzzle se bullet jese hi nikli thi, woh saath me ek air pressure apne ird gird samete hue thi jo ki ghumaavdaar (spiral) tha. Aur ye bullet jab insaan ki chamdi me ghusti hai, toh bullet toh tabaahi machaati hi hai par saath hi woh air pressure poore andhruni ango ki dhajjiya udaa deta hai.

Badqismati yaha ye ki woh bullet ricochet ho gayi.

Ricochet hone ke baad hi bullet ne apni disha badli aur seedha Suhana ki peeth ko cheerte hue andar jaa ghusi.

Aur ye sab hua kyuki Suhana Veer ko ahaat karne ke liye usse bachaane jaa rahi thi.

Jese hi Veer ko iss baat ka bodh hua, uski aankho me peeda saaf jhalakne lagi.

Veer (frowns) : K-Kyu!? Why did you--!?

Suhana (smiles) : I-I don't know!!! M-Mere perr apne aap daud pade...!

Uska bas itna kehna tha ki Veer ki aankhein namm ho chali. Aur ek ashru ki boond tapak ke Suhana ke komal chehre par jaa giri.

Apne seene se laga ke usne Suhana ka maatha chooma aur ek dridhta uske mann me jaag gayi.

Jab akasmaat hi,

*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*

'Huh!!?'

[Maaastttteerrr!!! T-This is bad!!! Run!!!]

Saamne se ek aadmi andhere me se chalte hue aaya. Aur roshni jese hi uske chehre par padi, Veer ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi.

Ye wahi vyakti tha. Wahi jo hotel me usse nazar aaya tha.

Veer : Y-You!!! What do you waaaannnttt???

Veer zorr se gurraaya,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Par uss aadmi ne kuch na kaha. Veer zyada samay waste nahi kar sakta tha. Suhana ki haalat gambheer thi. Jald se jald yaha se nikalna tha usse.

Uss aadmi ne apna haath jeb se nikaalte hue haath par bandhi ghadi par samay dekha aur bola,

"Clock is ticking! Aren't you getting late?"

Veer khamoshi me usse ghoorta raha. Iski koi guarant nahi thi ki Veer agar yaha se mud ke jaane ki koshish kare toh peeche se ye aadmi kuch nahi karega. Upar se Pari ko bhi kuch ehsaaa hua tha iss aadmi ko lekar.

[Maaasterrr!!! Y-Ye insaan mujhe bilkul theek nahi lag raha hai. There's... There's something wrong with him. Be careful!]

Pari ke itna kehte hi,

*Tuck* *Tuck* *Tuck*

Woh insaan dheere dheere chalte hue aage badha. Veer ke maathe par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha. Uska ek perr apne aap peeche ho gaya.

Jaldi se usne Suhana par ek nazar maar ke dekha toh uski chinta aur badh gayi. Suhana behosh ho chuki thi.

'Damnnnn ittttt!!!!!!!'

[Master!!!!]

Woh insaan Veer ke ekdum nazdeek aaya,
"I'm just here to remind you something!"

Veer : ???

Woh Veer ke gaal ko thap-thapaaya jese Veer maano koi baccha ho aur fir uske kaan ki taraf aake sirf ek baat boli.

Jisse sunte hi,

Veer ke hosh udd gaye. Uska badan thanda pad gaya. Wo bhoot ki tarah wahi jamm ke reh gaya. Agar Beowulf active na hota toh shayad uske haatho se Suhana bhi chooth ke gir jaati. Jese ek visfot hua tha uske dimaag me.

Aur agle hi second, woh anjaan shaks Veer ko wahi akela chorr gungunaate hue waha se seedha nikal gaya jese Veer uske liye sirf hawa ke samaan tha.

Aur alley me fir ek baar shaanti chhaa gayi,

Par uske bol abhi bhi Veer ke dimaag me zorr zorr se goonj rahe the....

"YOU ARE JUST ME PREY!"

"Also..."

"System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!"
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Update - 111 ~ Connecting the dots
Ab tak...

Wahi aadmi jisne Veer ke raungte khade kar diye the.

Text simple tha. Par rooh hila dene waala tha.

"Ek antim message tumhare liye Veer. Don't try to track this number. Tumhe kuch haasil nahi hoga. Samay ki barbadi hogi. Enjoy your remaining days with your family. Do whatever you want...! I just want to tell you one thing snd that's...!

I will kill you at the Crimson's Festival"


Ab aage...

*Huff* *Huff* *Huff*

"Goddamn it Suhana!!!! Don't you die on me!!"

Veer ki saase tezz thi. Steering aur gears par uske haath fatafat chal rahe the, aur gaadi raftaar pakad sadak par bhaag rahi thi. Suhana peeche ke seat par khoon se lathpat behosh laiti hui thi.

'WHAT THE HELL IS THIS PARI???'

[M-Master! I-I... M-Mujhe sach me nahi pata abhi abhi kya hua. It's not possible. H-How can it be? Uske paas system kese ho sakta hai?]

'Yahi toh mein tumse puch raha hu Pari!!! Tumne kaha tha ki sansaar ka koi bhi vyakti ye pata nahi laga sakta ki tum mere andar ho. Then what the FUCK was that-!?'

Woh zorr se chillaaya. Clearly, woh Pari par gussa tha. Pari ne uss se jhooth bola? Kyu?

[M-Master-! I-I... ]

'Tell me!!!!!'

[Woh meri dusri personality hogi Master. Trust me Master I-]

'SHUT THE FUCK UP PARI!!! SHUT UP!!!'

[Ahh!! M-Master!!! I really-]

'Just shut up! Ek anjaan aadmi aata hai aur kathputli ki tarah hume nachaate hue hamare hi member ko yu ghaayal karke araam se nikal jaata hai.'

[Th-That's--]

'Aur tumhe kuch pata bhi nahi hai. Aur jo pata hai woh galat hai. What a fucking great end it is to our tour.'

Uske zorr se chillaane par ek khamoshi chhaa gayi. Aur kuch derr baad Pari ki boht hi dheemi sii ruwaasi awaaz uske mann me goonji.

[I'm sorry Master! I'm so sorry! I was a failure! Mujhe aapko aur pehle inform kar dena chahiye tha. I wasn't good enough. I'm sorry.]

Aur iss se pehle ki Veer kuch keh paata,

[I'm sorry Master~]

*Ding*

[System has entered into the sleep mode.]

Pari sleep mode me chali gayi.

'Pari I...!'

Veer kuch keh na paaya. Suhana ko furti me hospital pohuchaate hue usne saari details fill in kii. Divya bhi kuch derr me hi Nik aur baakiyo ke sang pohuchi. Uske chehre ka rang uda hua tha.

Veer ke paas bhaagte hue aake usne usse thaama,

Divya : K-Kya huaaa?? Veeeerr??? How is she???

Veer : Treatment chal raha hai!

Divya chinta me aake wahi haatho me sarr rakh baith gayi.

Toh wahi Veer apne ravaiyye ko lekar niraash tha. Pari ke saath usse aisa behave nahi karna chahiye tha. Usne toh hamesha se hi uska bhala chaaha hai.

Jese hi kuch ghanto ke baad doctor se ye pata chala ki Suhana critical situation se baahar hai. Veer ke phone par tabhi woh text aa gaya. Aur usse dekhte hi, uski chintaaye aur badh gayi.

Ab yaha rukna theek nahi tha. Suhana ko antim baar dur se dekh woh waha se nikalne laga. Subah ho hi chuki thi. Baaki samay woh airport par hi guzaar sakta tha.

Divya : Tum...! Tum jaa rahe ho? Abhi se? Suhana se nahi miloge? How can you-!?

Veer : Nahi! Mera kaam yaha khatam hai.

Divya : Suhana ko aise chorr ke jaa rahe ho Veer?

Veer : I...

Divya : Tum aisa kese kar sakte ho?

Veer : She will be fine! Galti meri hai mein unhe safe nahi rakh saka. I don't want her to see me first. Chalta hu! Good luck with your investigation!

Aur woh apna bag utha ke waha se nikal gaya.

"Veeeeeeeeerrrrr!!!"

Divya hospital ke gate tak aake usse kayi baar pukaari, par Veer na ruka.

Aur dekhte hi dekhte woh uski nazro se ojhal ho gaya.

'Will we meet again? Veer?'

***

Uske baad se hi, Veer aur Pari ke beech poori flight bhar koi bhi baat nahi hui.

Jab Veer India pohucha tab hi Pari reactivate hui aur Veer ne fauran hi apni maafi rakh dii.

"I'm so sorry Pari!! M-Mein..."

[No! I'm sorry master! Galti meri thi. Mujhe aur attentive rehna chahiye tha. Lekin mein-]

'Nahi Pari! Tumse jitna hua tumne apna best diya. Aur wese bhi tum mere andar ho. Baahar ki saari cheezo par control rakhna mere haatho me hai. And I still-'

[It's... It's okay master! Please don't be sad. Chorriye woh sab. Ab hume uss unknown par focus karna hai.]

'Yeah!!!'

Pari se dobaara sulaah hone ke baad, Veer aur uske beech ab rishta aur bhi mazboot ho chuka tha. Jo ki dono ke liye hi accha tha.

***

Par Alpha ke stronger hone ke baad, maamla thoda bigad raha tha.

"Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!!!!!!"

*BAAAMMMMMM*

Veer ne zorr se apna haath diwaar par de maara. Poori diwaar vibrate ho uthi.

"The fucking timing-"

Woh behad gusse me tha. Apne sarr ko haatho me leke woh wahi zameen par baith gaya.

'P-Pari!! Mein sirf ek khush-haal zindagi jeena chaahta tha. Aur dekho kaha aa gaya mein?'

[Master!]

'Suhana waha ghaayal hai. Miss Kaera apni unstable condition me hai, Miss Sonia ko kuch nahi pata hai, Bhabhi aur baaki sabhi khatre se anjaan hai, Pranjal zaroor kuch peeth peeche kar raha hai, Nidhi ma'am aur Juhi uss Rajat ke liye firse ready nahi hai, Niharika... She might be plotting something too. Aur ab ye unknown person..!'

Baat sach thi. Akhir kaha kaha dhyaan de woh?

[One at a time master. One at a time. Ek ek karke hum seedhiya chadhte hai. Theek hai? Agar uss unknown aadmi ne hume abhi freedom dii hai. Then yahi time hai ki hum jald se jald yaha ki problems solve kare. Let's start with Rajat. Usse handle karna hamare liye asaan hi hoga.]

'Yeah! Thank You Pari!'

[Don't mention it master~❤️]

Woh abhi uth hi raha tha jab achanak uske bagal se aake koi wahi zameen par baith gaya.

'Hmm?'

Uske bagal se Bhumika baithi hui thi. Kal raat me theek se baat bhi nahi ho paayi thi uss se Veer kii.

Bhumika (smiles) : H-Hey!

Usne dheere se kaha.

Veer : *nods*

Bhumika : Mujhe laga ki tum pareshan ho isliye mein-

Veer : I'm fine!

Bhumika nazre chura chura ke Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski zyaada himmat nahi hui Veer ko dekhne ki aur uss se directly baat karne ki.

Bhumika : Hamaare beech...!

Veer : !??

Bhumika (sarr jhukaate hue) : Hamaare beech kabhi dhang se baatein hi nahi hui. Hai na!?

Veer (lambi saas lete hue) : Kuch lamhe bane the. Mene koshishe kii thi. Aapne pehchaan'ne se hi inkaar kar diya...!

Bhumika : W-Woh-

Veer ke ek ek shabd seedhe Bhumika ke dil me chhuri ki tarah jaa ke ghup gaye. Shabd uske gale me hi atak ke reh gaye. Veer ne usse woh pal yaad dila diya jab woh hotel me Veer ko pehchaan'ne tak se peeche hatt gayi thi. Aur iske liye glaani toh usme abhi bhi koot kootkar bhari hui thi. Veer ke bol jese zakhm par namak chhidakne ka kaam kar gaye.

Veer : Ab jab thodi fursat mile, toh ye sawaal khud se kariyega.

Iss se pehle ki Bhumika kuch keh paati,

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrr!?? Naashta lag gaya hai. Aa jao! Bhumika tum bhi!!!"

Andar hall se Ragini ki awaaz ne unka dhyaan kheech liya.

Veer agle hi shan utha aur bina kuch kahe ya peeche mude woh Bhumika ko wahi chorr waha se andar chal diya.

Bhumika ki aankho me aasu panap uthe. Agar Veer ek do vaakya aur dil ko ghayal karne wale kehta toh beshaq unn aankho me se aasu chhalak uthate.

Dining table par apni seat par virajmaan hote hue usne naashta shuru kiya. Pal pal Ragini andar se baahar hoti aur usse apni qaatilana nazro se dekhti.

Veer (sonali se) : Tumhare liye mene kuch socha hai.

Sonali : Hmm? Kya?

Veer : Samay aane par pata lag jaega.

Sonali : Ek aur food truck?

Veer (smiles) : Nahi!

Sonali : Toh?

Veer : Mujhe samay do thoda. Jald hi pata lag jaega. Business me koi dikkat toh nahi jaa rahi?

Sonali : Jaa rahi hai na.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Yahi samajh nahi aata ki mein iss jhamele me kyu fassi hui hu.

Veer : Well...

Veer ke kuch kehne se pehle hi Suman ne Sonali ki plate me ek paratha rakha aur saath hi saath uske sarr par ek tapli bhi de maari,

*Bonk*

Sonali : Maaaaaa!!????

Suman : Kahi bhi raha jaata hai toh kaam karna padta hai. Kya tum ab muft me aisho araam ki zindagi jeena chaahti ho? Mene tumhe ye sikhaaya hai? Veer jii ne tum pe itni badi zimmedaari saupi hai bharosa kar ke. Unka bharosa mat todna. Aur lagan se kaam karo. Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki-

Sonali : Maa tum hamesha aisa hi karti ho. Hamesha uska paksh leti ho. Jab dekho tab-

Suman : Haan toh kyu na lu paksh? Gaav ka samay yaad nahi kya? Kese jeete the hum harr roz? Bol! Aaj tu yaha chenn se baith ke iss tarah shaahi bhoj kar paa rahi hai toh woh kiski badaulat hai? Haan? Lungi mein paksh Veer jii ka. Aur tu bhi samajh jaa iss baat ko.

Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Acche se jaanti hu kyu paksh leti ho uska.

Bola toh badi hi dheemi awaaz me tha Sonali me. Par Suman chuki kaafi nazdeek khadi thi, usne sab sunn liya aur palat ke Sonali ko usne apni aankhein dikhaayi. Antatah, Sonali kheejte hue shaant hoke baith gayi. Toh wahi Suman ka poora dhyaan Veer par kendrit ho gaya.

Suman : Ek paratha aur lijiye na!

Veer : Nahi! Ho gaya mera!

Suman (dheere se) : Lijiye na maalik! Sehat ka dhyaan rakhiye. Acche se naashta kariye.

Veer : Pait already bhar gaya hai.

Suman : Ek aur bas! Mere liye!?

Veer (sighs) : Rakh do!

Suman (smiles) : Mein paani laati hu.

Woh gunguna ke andar chali gayi toh wahi Ragini andar se baahar aayi aur Aabha aur Sonali ko sabzi parosne lagi.

Harr baar woh Veer ko dekhne se nahi chookti thi. Unhe serve karne ke baad jab usne dekha ki Shweta aur Suman dono hi andar thi to woh mauka dekha Veer ke nazdeek aayi,

Ragini : M-Mein... Mein chaah rahi thi ki hum kal chale kahi?

Veer (dheere se) : Kidhar?

Ragini : Kahi bhi. Jaga tum le jana chaaho.

Veer : How about beach?

Ragini (smiles) : Ahh! Wonderful! Mujhe kayi mahine ho gaye waha gaye. I'll... I'll be ready! Kal shaam ko. Okay?

Veer ke haath ko thaam halke se daba ke woh muskaan liye waha se andar ho gayi. Kal ki shaam, Ragini ke naam pehle hi booked ho chuki thi.

Jo akhiri sadasya tha ghar ka, akhir kaar woh bhi baahar aaya.

Shweta ek plate me kuch mithaiyaa rakh ke kitchen se baahar aayi. Sabhi ko ek ek piece dene ke baad woh akhir me Veer ke paas aayi. Aur jhuk ke usne ek mithaayi Veer ki plate me rakhi.

Parantu usne apna pallu nahi odha hua tha. Ye maatr ek ittefaaq tha. Aur ittefaaq se hi, Veer ki nigaahein unn do raseele aamo par jaake theher gayi.

Jese hi Shweta ne apni nigaahein upar kari, Veer uske urojo ko ghoorte hue pakda gaya.

Veer ne Shweta ko dekha, usse thoda ajeeb lag raha tha. Galti akhir uski thi. Par aur bhi ajeeb tab laga jab Shweta agle hi pal muskuraane lagi.

'Huh!?'

Woh ajeeb sii muskaan diye, apne than ke upar haath rakh usse pyaar se sehlaayi aur waha se nikal gayi.

'!!!??'

Veer ki kuch bhi palle na pada ki ye abhi abhi kya hua tha.

Shweta andar kitchen me aake abhi bhi apne stan par haath ferr rahi thi dheere dheere. Jese maano unhe kisi cheez ke liye taiyaar kar rahi ho. Uske chehre par ek santushti bhari muskurahat thi.

Agar Veer thodi derr aur yaha ruka toh beshaq tension aur confusion se uska sarr khap jaane wala tha.

Woh naashta karte hi ghar se nikal gaya. Aur raaste me hi uski baatein Pari se hoti rahi,

'Pari! Full status!'

[Right away Master!]

*Ding*


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Veer ne ek nazar apne stats par daali. Aur haami bhari. Itne points hone ke baad bhi usse abhi bhi ye kam maalum pad rahe the.

Usse ab apne stats badhaane ki bhi zaroorat thi aur saath hi ab ek advanced level martial arts skill ki bhi.

Lekin, uske liye bhaari maatra me points ki aavashyakta thi. Filhaal, Veer ne laalach na dikhaate hue apne stats ko jyo ka tyo hi rehne diya. Thode aur points jab ikhatta honge tab woh inhe badha lega. Ye soch woh chal diya Balhaar ke hideout ki orr,

Pehle hi Veer ko uska message aa chuka tha aur Balhaar milna chaah raha tha.

Andar aate hi Balhaar ke right hand aadmi athwa gang ke logo ne ek jhalak me hi Veer ko pehchaan liya aur usse andar aane ke liye raasta diya. Sabhi jaante the ye javaan ladke ki ahamiyat kya thi.

Ek acchi sii luxury seat par Veer ko baithaya gaya. Aur waha khade log usse chai coffee ke liye puchne lage.

Balhaar bhi fauran hi haazir ho gaya aur uske saamne baith usne apne logo ko baahar jaane ke liye ishaara kar diya.

Veer : I guess kuch hua hai meri gerr-maujoodagi me. Am I right!?

Balhaar : Jii boss! Aapka andaaza sahi tha. Jesa aap keh ke gaye the. Mere aadmi unn jagaho par poori nigraani rakhe hue the.

Veer : Hmm! Toh? Kya hua fir...!?

Balhaar : Darasal baat ye hai ki...

Usne saari baat samjhaayi toh Veer ke maathe par shikan aa gayi.

Veer : Thik hai! Mein dekhta hu! Tum khabar bas dete rehna. Aur kuch filhaal karne ki zaroorat nahi. Agar mujhe zaroorat hogi toh mein khud bataunga.

Balhaar : J-Jii!

Veer utha aur jaane ke liye hua. Peeche Balhaar usse ajeeb nazro se ghoor raha tha.
Uske mann me alag alag vichaar aa rahe the.

'Isse boss maan'ne ki kya zaroorat hai mujhe? Slogan marr chuka hai. Mumbai ka don mein hu. Fir bhi ek bacche ke neeche kaam kyu kar raha hu mein? Hai toh ye ek 21-22 saal ka ladka hi. Kya bigaad lega mera? Itni saari gangs hai mere paas. Saale ko ek baar me bhoon denge. Karodo ka karobaar hai mera. Mere neeche bade se bade aadmi bhi kaam karte hai. Roz mera auhda badhta jaa raha hai. Sirf haath hi toh moda tha isne. Fir iss ladke ke peeche kyu-'

Veer : Ohh by the way~

Balhaar (jhepte hue) : H-Huhh?

Veer ahista se uske kaan ke paas aaya aur dheemi par behad buland awaaz me uske bol Balhaar ke kaano me goonj gaye, jisse sunte hi Balhaar ke perr kamzor padd gaye.

"Betrayal ke baare me sochna bhi mat! Agli baar haath marodunga nahi. Seedha ukhaad ke shareer se alag kar dunga."

Aur itna bol, woh waha se nikal gaya.

Balhaar ka chehra dekhne laayak tha. Uski saari hekdi utar chuki thi. Jo thode boht bhi uske mann me Veer ko daga dene ke vichaar aaye the, unki jagah ab Veer ko baap maan'ne ke vichaar paida ho chuke the.

Usse samajh aa chuka tha ki bhale hi ye ladka 21-22 saal ka hi tha. Par isme kuch aisi baat thi jo usse galti karne se baar baar rok deti thi. Uske andar ek khatre ki ghanti baja deti thi. Ki agar woh iss ladke ke khilaaf gaya, toh uska sab kuch khatam ho jayega.

*Gulp*

Chehre par se paseena poch, Balhaar baahar nikal apne kaamo me lag gaya.

***

Mumbai ke hi ek shetr me ek medium sized ghar me teen log aapas me behas karne me lage hue the.

Ye aur koi nahi, Bhavna Tejal aur Purvi hi thi.

"Itni badi baat chhipaayi aapne mujhse? Kyuuuuu? Kyu kiya aapne aisa???"

Awaaz thi Tejal ki jo Bhavna par bhadak rahi thi.

Uski aankho me nami bhi thi. Uski maa aisa kese kar sakti thi bhala?

Bhavna : M-Mein-

Tej : Aap chaahti kya hai Mom?? Kya chaahti hai aap? Bata dijiye aaj mujhe!

Bhavna : Meri baat suno Tej-

Tej : Itne dino se mein paagalo ki tarah dar-dar bhatak ke jankaari batorne ki koshish kar rahi hu ki kahi se mere bhai ke baare me mujhe kuch pata chal jaaye aur aap itni badi info haath me rakhe hue mujhe bas dekh rahi thi? Ek bhi baar aapke mann me ye nahi aaya ki mein apni beti ko kam se kam bata toh du ye. Aap jaanti bhi hai mera haal? Kis haalat se guzar rahi hu mein apne bhai ko dhundne ke liye?

Bhavna : Sab samajhti hu Tej! Mein sab samajhti hu meri bacchi! Aur woh tumhara bhai hai par mere liye toh mera beta hai. Tum samajhti kyu nahi ki-

Tej : Bas!!! Boht ho gaya. Dijiye mujhe!! Aapse nahi ho payega! Mein khud hi karungi.

Bhavna : N-Nahi! Mujhe karne do mein-

Tej : Itne dino se toh aapse hua nahi mom. Ab kya karogi aap?

Purvi jo ab tak shaant thi, akhir kaar usse maa beti ke jhagde ke beech me aana hi pada.

Purvi : Tum dono! Ye kya laga rakha hai? Aur Bhavna tum!!! Tum aisa kese kar sakti ho? Apni hi beti se baate chhipaogi toh aise kese chalega haan? Yahi toh parivaar hai tumhara! Itni badi baat chhipaane ki kya zaroorat thi? Hum dono hi dekh rahe hai ki kese bechaari Tej roz roz baahar nikal Vikram ke liye jankari dhundhne jaati hai. Par bechari lautati khaali haath hi hai. Aur tum aise me...!

Bhavna : Aisa nahi hai Purvi! Agar mene ye kiya hai toh kuch soch ke hi kiya hoga na? Tum hi batao, kya mein kuch bhi kisi ko kasht dene ke liye jaan boojh ke karungi?

Purvi (sighs) : Bhavna! Tumhe ab samajhna hoga ki tumhari beti ab bacchi nahi rahi. Ab apne baccho se baatein chhipana matlab unn par bharosa na karna jesa hai.

Tej : Exactly!!!! Maasi! Meri baato se toh inhe farq tak nahi padta hai. Aap hi samjhaiye please!

Purvi uth ke Bhavna ke bagal se aake baithi jo sofe par viraajmaan thi aur uske kandhe par haath rakh usne Bhavna ko hausla diya.

Purvi : Ab zyada mat socho aur karo. Warna derri na ho jaaye Bhavna.

Bhavna : P-Par... Agar kuch hua toh!? Purvi mere haatho me ab woh bal nahi raha. Tum jaanti hi ho... Woh satta, woh shaasan... Tum sab jaanti ho kya hua tha. Agar kuch ho gaya toh? Mein kabhi apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paungi Purvi! Mein uspe aanch bhi nahi aane de sakti.

Iss baar apni maa ki baat Tej badi hi dhyaan se sunn rahi thi. Ye kya baatein ho rahi thi?

Tej : Kesa bal? Kesi satta? Aap kya keh rahi hai?

Bhavna : Huh!!? K-Kuch nahi!

Tej : Aap firse kuch chhipa rahi hai na? Dekha! Maasi!? Dekha na aapne? Ye firse mujhse kuch chhipa rahi hai.

Purvi : Ab tum karti ho ya nahi Bhavna?

Bhavna : Hmm! M-Mein... Karti hu!

Kehte hue usne apni mutthi khol ek parchi nikaali aur usse khola.

Saari behas issi ke liye hi toh ho rahi thi. Uss parchi me ek hi cheez thi...

Aur woh tha...

Veer ka phone number!

Wahi number jo Veer ne khud Bhavna ko diya tha jab woh Egypt se laut raha tha.

Aur ab tak, Bhavna usse sambhaal ke rakhi hui thi. Roz roz Tej baahar nikal ke kisi na kisi tareeqe se Veer ke baare me info nikaalne ki koshish karti thi. Par bechaari harr baar nakaam ho jaati thi.

Aur kyu na hoti? Mumbai itna bada sheher tha. Veer ko waha dhundna khet me sui dhundne jesa tha. Upar se bechaari ko naam bhi galat pata tha. Vikram toh naam hi nahi tha Veer ka. Saath hi jo photo Tej ke paas thi, woh ek side view photo thi. Toh Veer ko pehchaan'na aur bhi mushqil tha usme.

Lekin Tej ne ek bhi din zaaya nahi jaane diya. Harr roz woh nikalti, apne bhai ko dhundne ke liye. Colleges me jaati, jitni info milti utni paa ke waapas aa jaati.

Aur Bhavna ye ab tak chhipaaye hue thi ki uske paas Veer ka number maujood tha. Uska jee ghabra raha tha ki agar Veer se mulaqaat hui toh kya hoga? Ek darr tha, jo sirf wahi jaanti thi. Aur Purvi. Tejal toh kayi saari baato se anibhigya thi.

Aur itni mehnat karne ke baad usse pata chala ki uski apni hi maa pehle se hi jankaari dabaaye baithi hui thi.

Zaahir hai ki woh boht zyada gussa thi. Aur ab behas ho rahi thi Veer ko call lagane ki.

Purvi ke hausla dene ke baad akhir kaar Bhavna ne mann bana hi liya aur usne apna phone utha ke uss number par call lagaaya,

Tej : Loudspeaker par rakhiyega!

Bhavna : Hmm!

Waha maujood sabhi ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi.

Tej apne bicchde bhai ki awaaz sunn'ne waali thi. Toh wahi Bhavna apne bete kii. Aur Purvi pehli baar Veer ki awaaz se rubaru hone waali thi.

*Ring* *Ring*

*Ring* *Ring*

Ghanti gayi aur kuch rings ke baad hi,

"Hello?"

Ek awaaz aayi. Jisse sunn Bhavna ka dil zorr se dhadak utha. Awaaz wahi thi. Wahi same awaaz. Number ussi ka tha matlab.

Tej ka khud ka muh khula hua tha.

Bhavna ke honth thar-thara rahe the. Bechari ke muh se shabd hi nahi nikal paaye.

"Hello?"

Punaah awaaz aate hi Purvi ne Bhavna ke haatho se phone chhinaaya aur khud baat karna shuru kii,

Purvi : H-Hello!?

"Jii kahiye! Aap kaun?"

Bhavna aur Tejal dono ki hi himmat nahi ho rahi thi ab baat karne ki. Tejal toh hazaaro baatein kehna chaahti thi uss se. Par ab jab mauka aaya toh pata nahi kyu, uski himmat nahi hui. Baat ko shuru kese kare, uski ab kuch samajh me nahi aaya. Shayad ye sab kuch ekdum se zyaada hi ho gaya tha uske liye.

Purvi : Kya mein Vikram se baat kar rahi hu?

"Hmm!? Ohh! Yeah!! Jii haan! Aap Vikram se hi baat kar rahi hai. Kahiye!"

Purvi : B-Beta mein... Ahem! Mujhe aapse kuch zaroori kaam hai.

"Hmm? Par aap hai kaun?"

Purvi : Bas yu samajh lo ki mein aapki... Aapki koi apni hi hu.

"Aur mein kese maan lu?"

Purvi : Trust me beta! Mein aapko jaanti hu. K-Kya aap mujhse kal mil sakte ho?

"Well! Actually nahi! Kal mein kahi busy rahunga."

Purvi : T-Toh parso? Parso theek rahega?

"Fine! Parso! Kab aur kaha?"

Purvi : Parso xxxxxxx hotel me. Shaam ko theek rahega?

"Okay! That sounds fine."

Purvi (smiles) : G-Good!

"Aur mein aapko pehchanunga kese?"

Purvi : Don't worry! Mein tumhe call kar dungi. Par number different rahega. Ye nahi! Mein bata dungi mein kaha par baithi houngi. Okay?

"Alright!"

Purvi : Th-Thank you! Vikram! I'll see you day after tomorrow! Bye!

"Jii!"

*Call ends*

Call cut hote hi Purvi ne ek lambi saas lii. Uski khud ki dhadkane poore vartalaap ke dauraan tezz thi.

Bhavna : Thank God tumne usse kuch nahi bataya abhi.

Purvi : Mein jaanti hu sab. Of course mein usse abhi se kuch nahi bataungi!

Tej : Kyuuuu? Kyu nahi bataaya? Arre aapko kehna chahiye tha na ki uski sagi maa aur behan yaha par hai. Aap uski maasi ho. Kyu nahi kaha aapne? Hum abhi ke abhi mil sakte the. Kyu kiya aapne aisa?

Purvi : Kyuki tum woh baatein nahi jaanti jo hum jaante hai Tej.

Tej : Toh bataaiye na mujhe!!!!

Purvi (sighs) : Itna asaan nahi hai. Anyways! Woh agree ho gaya hai. Agar parso kuch nahi hua, iska matlab hum aage proceed kar sakte hai.

Bhavna : Hmm! Aur Purvi-

Purvi (smiles) : Pata hai mujhe! Uss se milne sirf mein jaungi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!!

Tej : Whaaaaaatttttt? Kya matlab? Kya matlab sirf aap jaogi? Aur hum?

Purvi : Tum dono yahi par rahogi!

Tej : PAR KYUUUUUU????

Purvi : Baad me tumhe sab pata lag jaega. Kuch din ka intezaar karo.

Tej : A-Aap log... Aap log boht bure ho.

Purvi (smiles) : Ahh! Toh ye baat thi. Tej! Tumhare nakaam hone ka raaz pata lag gaya.

Bolte hue Purvi ne mobile ki screen jese hi saamne kii, toh screen par ek naam likha hua tha.

Veer ka poora naam!

Truecaller par Veer ka original name hi registered tha. Purvi ne jese hi woh dikhaaya toh saara maajra samajh me aa gaya ki kyu Tejal Veer ko dhundh nahi paa rahi thi.

Tej : V-Veer!!!!

Bhavna : Veer! Kitna... pyara naam hai.

Woh apne khayalaato me ghum ho gayi.

'Zaroor Veer ki dadi jii ne hi ye naam rakha hoga. Aapki ab bhi yaad aati hai mujhe, Maa jii! Kaash aap ab bhi hamare beech hoti!'

Purvi : Decide ho gaya hai fir. Parso! Mein jaa ke uss se mil ke aaungi. Agar sab kuch sahi raha toh... Toh hum sab milenge uss se fir.

Purvi aur Bhavna apni baato me lag gayi.

Par idhar, Tej ke mann me kuch aur hi baatein ghoom rahi thi. Kuch aur hi tarqeebe...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Full status ko edit karne me boht samay lagta hai guys. Mujhe pichle poore 15-16 updates ko thoroughly dekhna pada taaki pata lag sake ki kaha kaha points me antar aaya hai. Kon sii new cheeze unlocked hui hai. Uske baad jaake mujhe edit karna padta hai. It takes a lot of time. Village arc pace pakadta jaa raha hai. Taiyaar rahiyega!
Dhanyavaad! ✨


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Ding pari ka jyada kuch samajh nahi aaya does she knew about another systems matalab ek se jyada.village arc mein real family intro hoga questions about satta and power woh tho 10-15 update mein he pata chalega
Pari ne toh yahi kaha hai ki jo kuch bhi Veer ko bataya gaya tha woh uski dusri personality ke dwaara bataya gaya tha. Aur filhaal uska kehna hai ki usse iss baare me koi bhi jankaari nahi thi. Woh khud hairat me hai. Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
कितना ज्यादा इंतजार कराया दोस्त
खैर देर आए दुरुस्त आए, बवाल अपडेट था

अब जब उस unknown आदमी ने veer को time दे दिया है तो वीर का भी फर्ज़ बनता है की इस time का सही से use करे, अपने बाकी के लफड़े निपटाए और अपना stats और भी ज्यादा improve करे
क्योंकि enemy इस बार उसके टक्कर का होगा
Beshaq! Veer ka focus filhaal inhi cheezo par hai. :approve:
रही बात veer के घर की तो मैं personally चाहूंगा की इस arc में emotion को थोड़ा ज्यादा फोकस करना rather than action
क्योंकि action तो पीछे लगभग सभी arc में आया है इसमें भी थोड़ा बहुत आएगा ही but veer का family background और past भी उतना ही improtant होगा।
जितना अच्छे से veer का past portrait होगा उतना ही अच्छे से veer की कहानी समझ में भी आएगा
Ye toh pehle hi bata diya gaya hai bhaaya. Ye arc hardcore action par focused nahi rahega. Rahega but behad mild rahega. Arc ka main focus Tej, Bhavna aur Veer par hoga. Toh zaahir hai ki emotional scenes aane waale hai.
तेज की बात करे तो, वीर इस कहानी में जितना दुख सहा है अपने मां और बहन से दूर रह के तो तेजल भी उतना ही दुख झेली है
आखिर family का प्यार तो उसे भी नही मिला


भावना से मिलने से ज्यादा curiosity इस बात की रहेगी की दोनो भाई बहन एक दूसरे से कैसे मिलेंगे, क्योंकि दोनो का दुख एक जैसा है
Dono ka milan dekhne laayak hoga.
देखते है जब वीर अपनी पूर्वी मौसी से मिलेगा तो क्या होगा, वैसे वीर विक्रम नाम सुन कर समझ गया होगा की ये भावना के side से फोन था
Bilkul! veer janta hai ki Vikram naam usne kisse diya tha. Toh zaahir hai ki woh Purvi se baat kar samajh gaya tha ki koi Bhavna ki orr se hi baat kar raha hai. :smartm:
फिर से धन्यवाद अपडेट के लिए, आगे के अपडेट की प्रतीक्षा में

i know की अच्छा अपडेट देने का pressure रहता होगा की readers disappointed ना हो पर दोस्त कोशिश करना की
week में 2 अपडेट मंगलवार और शुक्रवार को देने की या जो भी दिन आपको ठीक लगे but 2 update देना

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Dhanyavaad bhai! Koshish poori rehti hai bhai. Ju bhi jaante ho ki abhi tyohaar chal raha hai. Samay kaafi kam milta hai. Aur tyohaar me aadmi ka mann baahar nikal ke thoda enjoy karne ka hota hi hai. :shy: Thanks btw!
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Kher ab sb smj aagya hai or sath me aapki story mai baki members ki trh read kr rha ho bs ye smj lo aaki fan list 1 or name aad hogya hai
Aage or bi comments kroga mai abi thoda time km or Kam jada hai dost
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