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Update - 97 ~ Jim the Slippery
Ab tak...
Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!
Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?
Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!
Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?
Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.
Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-
Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!
Purvi : H-Huh???
Ab aage...
*BANG*
"Moooommm!!!"
*BANG* *BANG*
"Mom darwaza kholiyeee!!! Aap mujhe andar band nahi kar sakti. Mein jaanti hu aap baahar hi hai. Open the door mom!!!"
Darwaaze ko peetate hue Tej kamre ke andar se zorr se chillaayi.
Uski Maa, Bhavna ne usse room ke andar hi band kar diya tha. Usse sach jaan'na ka poora haq tha ki akhir ye sab chal kya raha tha?
"Thodi der... Mein thodi derr ke liye hotel se baahar jaa rahi hu. Tab tak tum chup chaap andar hi rahogi Tej. No questions asked."
Bhavna ne kamre ke baahar se awaaz lagaate hue kaha aur fir waha se nikal gayi. Tej vyarth hi andar chillaati reh gayi.
Par eka-ek uske andar khayaal aaya,
'Mom achanak se Mumbai mujhe leke aayi hai. Aur ab kahi jaa rahi hai? Mujhe bata bhi nahi rahi? Aisa kya reason akhir-- Huh???'
Aur ek tezz sansani macha dene waala vichaar uske mann se hoke guzra.
'K-Kahi... Is it because of him??? Haan!!! Yahi! Yahi reason hai. There's absolutely no way ki Mom mujhe yaha befaaltu me lekar aayi hai. It must be because of him!! My... My brother!!!!!! Oh God!!!! Mene pehle kyu nahi iss baare me socha? I have to see him...!!!'
'Mein Mom ko akele nahi karne de sakti kuch bhi. Warna mein apna chance uss se milne ka kho dungi. Mom jaan bujh ke mujhse chhipa rahi hai baatein. I cannot-- I absolutely cannot let her go alone.'
Chinta me doobte hue wo kamre me idhar se udhar tehelne lagi,
'Kya karu? Kya karu? Shit!!! I'm trapped inside. Service call! Right!! I can call them!'
Apna huiya theek kar wo fatafat wahi rakhe landline me ek call bhidaayi jo hotel ki room service ke liye tha.
Tej ne bataaya ki uski Mom usse galti se band kar ke chali gayi hai.
Hotel waalo ne fauran hi Tej ki request suni aur extra spare card se uske room ko unlock kiya.
Room ke liye key card lagta tha. Jisse scan kar room ka door unlock hota tha. Dikkat ye rehti thi ki yadi aap bina card liye baahar nikle aur door band hua toh door poori tarah se lock ho jaata tha.
Isliye hamesha key card ko saath me leke hi nikalna padta tha. Bhavna to key card leke baahar nikal gayi thi. Aur Tej ne issi baat ko ek bahaane me tabdeel kar diya.
Ki wo galti se andar trapped ho gayi hai. Jabki aisa nahi tha. Uski Maa jaan boojh ke usse band kar ke gayi thi. Kherr! Hotel waalo ko kaun sa kuch pata chalne waala tha.
Baahar aate hi Tej ne jese hi door band kiya. Door firse lock ho gaya. Ab wo bina key card ke nahi khulne waala tha. Jo ki accha hi tha. Andar unka samaan maujood tha.
Aur Tej Bhavna ko dhundne jo nikal rahi thi. Toh dikkat wali koi baat hi nahi thi.
Wo tezz qadmo ke saath waha se lift me gayi aur foran hi neeche reception area me pohuchi.
Tej : Excuse me??? Aapne abhi kisi lady ko baahar jaate dekha? Arre! Abhi just thodi derr pehle aapne mujhe unke saath check-in karte dekha hoga.
Receptionist : Yes ma'am! She went outside.
Tej : O-Okay! Thanks!
Tej hadbadi me bhaagte hue baahar nikli. Na jaane uski Mom kaha chali gayi thi.
'Akhir kaha gayi hongi wo? Unhone kaha tha thodi derr me aa jaengi. Baahar nikal aas paas dhundti hu. Ho sakta hai aas paas hi kahi ho?'
Ye soch wo hotel se baahar nikal aayi.. Daudate bhaagte hue wo haaf haaf kar ek jagah se dusri jagah apni nazre daudaane lagi. Par Bhavna kahi nazar nahi aa rahi thi.
'Kahi wo dur nikal gayi kya? Shit! Yadi aisa hai toh mein nahi jaan paungi wo kya karne gayi hai.'
Wo haar maan hi chuki thi jab achanak se uski nazar road ke uss paar ek cafe ki orr gayi.
'Huh?'
Aur beshaq, andar uski Maa Bhavna baithi hui thi. Par wo akeli nahi thi. Uske saamne waali seat par ek aur mahila viraajmaan thi.
'Y-Ye? Ye kiske saath Mom baithi hai? I must listen to them...!'
Tej unn dono ki nazro se bachte hue cafe me andar aayi aur unke hi aas paas ki table par menu card utha ke apna chehra chhipaate hue baith gayi.
Cafe ki seating iss prakaar ki thi ki Tej aur Bhavna ke beech ek seperation tha. Aur keval thoda uth ke hi uss paar ke nazaare ko dekha jaa sakta tha.
Tej ko dekhne ki zaroorat hi nahi thi. Usse toh bas dono ki baatein sunn'ni thi.
Aur Bhavna Purvi iss baat se anjaan ki Tej unke uss paar baithi hui hai, apni baato me lagi hui thi.
Purvi : Bhavna tum achanak se yaha? Kahi kuch...!?
Bhavna : Haan Purvi haan! Chinta waali hi baat hai. Mene dekha Purvi... Mene dekha...
Kehte hue usne Purvi ka haath apne dono haatho me thaam liya.
Purvi : K-Kya dekha tumne Bhavna? Aisi kya baat ho gayi? Batao mujhe!
Bhavna : Pendant!!!! Mene apni aankho se dekha Purvi. Apni aankho se. Wo wahi pendant tha. Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti...
Ye baat sunn uss paar baithi Tej ke kaan khade ho gaye.
'Pendant? Kesa pendant? Mom kya baat kar rahi hai?'
Par tabhi uske paas waiter aa gaya, "Your order ma'am?"
Tej : Ughh!!! J-Just a coffee.
Waiter : Okay ma'am!!
Uske jaate hi Tej ne punah apne kaan unki baato ko sunn'ne me lagaaye,
Purvi : P-Pendant? Ek... Ek minute Bhavna. Tum kya keh rahi ho meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha.
Bhavna ki aankho me ab aasu aa chuke the.
Bhavna : Purviiiiii~ Pendant!!!!! Wahi Pendant!!! Mene dekha...
Purvi koi bewakoof insaan nahi thi. Jab usne Bhavna ke aasu dekhe aur baar baar pendant shabd uske muh se suna, toh usse ye andaaza lagaane me derr na lagi ki Bhavna kis Pendant ki baat kar rahi thi.
Purvi : T-Tumhara matlab hai ki...
Bhavna (nods) : Haan! Haan Purvi!!! Haan!!! Wahi pendant. Mene dekha... Apni aankho se... Wo wahi Pendant tha.
Purvi : Ek... Ek minute!!! Kaha? Mera matlab tumne kaha dekh liya wo Pendant? Ruko!!! Wo Pendant to uske paas hona chahiye tha na? Toh tumne kaha aur kese...!?
Bhavna : Purvi!!!!! Meri Egypt ki investigation ke dauraan meri mulaqaat ek ladke se hui thi.
Purvi : Ladka?
Bhavna : Haan!!! Kareeb 20-22 saal ki umr ka tha. Lamba, sundar, kaali aankhein... Madhur awaaz...
Bataate bataate Bhavna apne aap hi Veer ko yaad kar uski chhavi me kho gayi.
Bhavna : Wo bhi Mumbai se tha. Usne apna naam Vikram bataaya tha. Wo investigation me keval apni skills ke kaaran hi liya gaya tha. Achanak se hi wo hamaare campaign me shaamil ho gaya tha. Raato raat wo aaya tha ekdum se...
Purvi : That's...
Bhavna : Aur jab wo jaane laga toh mein usse airport tak chorrne gayi thi. Tab... Mene tab hi wo Pendant dekha... Uske gale me Purvi... Uske gale me *sniff*
Purvi : Kyyyaaaaa??? Iska matlab...!!
Bhavna : Iske do hi matlab ho sakte hai Purvi...
Purvi : ???
Bhavna : Ya toh wo pendant uss ladke ne kahi se churraya ho, ya kahi se khareeda ho. Ya fir usse kahi se mila ho... Ye ho sakta hai.
Purvi : Aur dusra matlab hai ki...
Bhavna (cries) : Haan!!! *sniff* haan Purvi!!! Dusra matlab yahi hai ki... *sniff* Wo mera apna kaleja hai. Mera laal Purvi *sniff* Mera baccha!!!!
Purvi ko toh jhatka laga hi tha ye sunke par uss se bhi zyaada bada jhatka laga tha unn dono ke uss paar baithi uss naujavan ladki ko...
Tej!!! Usse aisa laga jese uski saasein pal bhar ke liye atak gayi thi. Usse kuch sunaayi nahi de raha tha. Jese uske senses shan bhar ke liye kaam karna band ho chuke the.
'W-What???'
Veer ka chehra usse yaad aane laga. Wo pal, jab wo kese uss se ladd bhid rahi thi. Wo shan jab Veer ne usse underground site me girne se bachaaya tha. Kese wo uski baaho me thi. Uske wo mazboot haath jo uski kamar par bandhe the.
Wo saare pal jab jab usne Veer se baatein kii thi. Usse ab sab yaad aa raha tha. Saalo se usse apne bhai ki talaash thi. Aur bhagwaan ne unn dono ko milaaya bhi. Par bechaari apne bhai ke itne qareeb hone ke bawajood bhi wo usse jaan na paayi.
'Wo... Mera bhai tha? Mera bhai!? M-My brother? M-Mera apna chota bhai!?? I...'
Tej ko seene me andar se ek tezz dard utha ki usne apne top ko zorr se bheench liya.
Uski aankhein paani paani ho chali. Itne qareeb thi woh uske. Andar uske glaani ka baandh bhi toot gaya.
'H-He... He was my little brother!!??? W-Wo mere itne paas tha... So close... I couldn't even... Oh God...'
Aas paas ke log usse rota dekh rahe the. Par Tej ko koi hosh nahi tha. Hatheliyo se wo apne aasu pochti jaa rahi thi, lekin aasu the jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the.
Purvi : N-Nahiiii! Aisa kese ho sakta hai? Kya naam bataaya tha usne tumhe?
Bhavna : V-Vikram... *sniff*
Purvi : Kya tumne uski ID check kii?
Bhavna : Haan! ID toh sahi hi lag rahi thi.
Purvi : P-Par aisa kese ho sakta hai? Mera matlab hai... Toh mera laadle ka naam Vikram hai? Par... Wo bhala Egypt kyu jaega? Aur itni kam umr me bhala woh ye sab kese??? Ek minute... Kahi...
Bhavna : ???
Purvi : Kahi wo tumhe yaani ki apni Maa ko dhundne toh nahi aaya tha?
Bhavna : Ahhh!!!!
Purvi : Haan! Aisa ho sakta hai...
Bhavna : N-Nahi! Ye sambhav nahi. *sniff* Uss ghar ke logo ne mere baare me usse kuch bhi nahi bataaya hoga. Aur itni jankaari usse itni asaani se nahi mil sakti. Par mera mann baar baar keh raha hai... Wo mera lalla tha... Mera khoon... *sniff*
Purvi : Ohhh God!!! Mera toh sarr chakra gaya. Pehle ye batao, Tej kaha hai? Kya usse saath me nahi laayi? School me thi jab tab mene usse dekha tha. Uske baad se tum ek baar bhi usse lekar nahi aayi.
Bhavna : Ab aa gayi hu na. Jee bhar ke mil lena apni laadli se... Mein usse hotel me hi room me chorr kar aayi hu.
Purvi : Hmm~ aur ye charcha hume mere ghar par baith ke vistaar se karni hogi.
Bhavna : Bilkul!!!
Purvi : Tumne Tej ko ab tak nahi bataaya?
Bhavna : Nahi Purvi! Mein majboor hu. Tum jaanti hi ho. Yadi Tej ko pata chala ki uska bhai bhi hai yahi iss sheher me toh...
Purvi : Wo bhaagti hui waha jaane ki koshish karegi.
Bhavna : Bilkul! Bas isliye... Mene uss se ab tak chhipa ke rakhi hai baat.
Purvi (chinta me) : Kab tak chhipaogi Bhavna? Kab tak? Kya usse apne bhai ke baare me jaan'ne ka haq nahi?
Bhavna : Haq hai! Par yadi usse pata lagna hoga. Toh sahi samay aane par bhagwaan raasta dikha denge. Mein nahi bata sakti usse kuch. Ye sab kuch sab ki bhalaayi ke liye hai...
Purvi (sighs) : Anyways! Tum ek kaam karo. Ya toh Tej ko leke mere ghar chalo. Ya tum mere saath chalo aur Tej ko baad me wahi bula lenge.
Bhavna : Hmm! Mein tumhaare saath chalti hu. Tej ko phone kar mein bula lungi. Arre nahi...!!!
Purvi : Kya hua?
Bhavna : Mein toh key card leke aa gayi hu. Baahar se lock karke. Wo baahar kese aaegi?
Purvi : Toh usse jaake key card deke aao. Aur fir mere saath mere ghar chalo.
Bhavna : Haan! Yahi karti hu. Kyuki uske saamne baatein nahi ho paengi.
Purvi : Hmm~ baad me usse bula lena. Mera ghar zyaada dur bhi nahi hai yaha se. Wo araam se aa jaegi. Apni muh boli maasi se issi bahaane mil bhi legi acche se.
Bhavna : Haan! Purvi tum yahi ruko. Mein abhi aati hu. Aur...
Purvi : ??
Bhavna : Shukriya Purvi! Mere ek call par yaha aane ke liye. Mein...
Purvi : Kar diya na parayaa? Bhavna! Jese ye maamla tumhaare liye gambheer hai wese hi mere liye bhi hai. Tumhara lalla mera lalla bhi hai. Tumhaari gerr haazri me doodh pilaaya hai mene bhi usse apna ye baat bhulo nahi... Jese wo tumhara beta hai. Wese hi mera bhi. Toh uski maasi hote hue mein kese nahi aati?
Bhavna (smiles) : Tumne sahi kaha. Jitna haq mera uss pe hai. Utna hi haq tumhara bhi hai uspe...
Purvi (smiles) : Ab tum jao aur card deke jaldi se waapas aao. Fir hum nikle yaha se...
Bhavna : Haan!!!!
Jab Tej ko pata chala ki uski Maa waapas se hotel jaane waali hai toh woh hadbada ke uthi aur bhaagte hue cafe se baahar nikli.
"Ma'am aapki coffee!??" Peeche se waiter awaaz lagaata hi reh gaya. Par Tej toh tab tak rafu chakkar ho chuki thi.
Yaha wo hotel pohuch neeche hi rukk gayi. Aur jese hi Bhavna aayi toh Tej ko baahar dekh hairaan reh gayi,
Bhavna : Tum yaha neeche?
Tej : Aap mujhe lock jo kar aayi thi. Call karke mene room khulwaya fir. Kaha gayi thi aap.
Bhavna : Ek zaroori kaam tha. Ussi ke liye.
Tej : Kaun sa zaroori kaam?
Bhavna : Wo...... tha ek kaam.
Tej : Mein wahi puch rahi hu. Kaun sa zaroori kaam? Mumbai me aapko kaun sa kaam aan pada achanak se?
Bhavna : Tumhaari muh boli maasi rehti hai idhar. Tum unse bachpan me school time me mili thi. Mein unhi se milne gayi thi. Unke ghar jaa rahi hu. Kuch baat karni hai. Mein tumhe baad me call karungi toh tum wahi aa jana. Ye card rakh lo...
Bhavna ne Tej ko card thamaaya aur wo nikal gayi.
Kam se kam iss baar usne koi jhooth nahi bola tha. Iss baat ki Tej ko khushi thi.
Ho na ho, wo kese bhi kar ke apne bhai ka pata lagaane hi wali thi.
***
Las Vegas
Night ~ 9:54 PM
Raat ke andhere me aur Las Vegas ki 24 ghante chaalu sadko par jagmagaati city lights ke beech, police ki 3 cars ek ke peeche ek nikalti jaa rahi thi.
Aur unn police cars ke theek peeche hi kuch private cars chal rahi thi.
Jinme se ek me maujood the...
Veer, Divya, Nik aur Suhana.
Kuch derr pehle hui meeting me ek boht bada sach saame jo aaya tha. Aisa sach jisse jaan kar poore crime department me sansani mach gayi thi.
Aur wo sach tha~ Daniel ka akhiri message.
Jisse Divya ne decode kar liya tha.
Message me likhi gayi wo baat ek hint thi. Hint ek bade raaz kii.
Daniel ne jo likha tha badi hi chalaaki se likha tha. Message ke Capital letters ko yadi alag se dekha jaaye toh uttar bann raha tha ~ House of Killers.
Jab Divya ne iss message ko decode kiya toh wo bhauchakii toh thi hi par uss se bhi zyaada bada jhatka usse tab laga jab usne message ko aur dhyaan se padha.
Daniel ka likha gaya secret code sirf ye bataane ke liye nahi tha. Balki wo poora message uski sthiti ko darsha raha tha.
Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.
Iss line ka matlab tha, bure vichaar mann ko nasht karte hai. Jiske chalte, aksar hamaari khushiya niraasha me tabdeel ho jaati hai.
Matlab? Matlab saaf tha. Daniel ke mann me uss shan koi bura vichaar aaya tha. Par kyaaa??? Wo aisa kya soch raha tha uss waqt?
Party me jaana? Iske alawa aur kya hi ho sakta tha?
Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.
Iss doosri line ka matlab tha~ Dukh toh bana rahega par usse bhoolne ka prayaas karn chahiye. Tabhi, ek nayi shuruaat janm leti hai.
Teesri line ~ Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more. Fend off the fiend this time.
Jiska arth tha ~ Acche khayaal mann me punah aaenge. Par iss baar mann ke mel ko haawi hone na dena.
Shayad Daniel aagah karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Chauthi line ~ Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.
Jiska matlab tha ~ Apne andar ki aag ko jalaao. Bhadkao. Aur uss shaitaan ko baahar nikaalo. Bhrastacharan shaitaan ko maar feko.
Shaitaan!!! Daniel kis shaitaan ki baat kar raha tha?
Paachvi line ~ Escape if you realize you cannot handle it. Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...
Jiska arth tha ~ Yadi sambhaal nahi paa rahe ho, toh bhaag jaana. Yaad rakhna! Veh ek nahi hai. Yadi pakde gaye toh...
Aur akhiri line ~ Soul shall burn.
Jiska matlab tha ~ Maut!!!!
Yadi pakde gaye, toh seedha maut. Aur Daniel ke saath kya hua tha?
Bas isliye... Isliye Divya ghabraayi hui thi.
Nik car drive kar raha tha, par uska mann kahi aur hi bhatka hua tha. Uske bagal se Suhana front seat par baithi hui thi. Toh wahi peeche Veer ke saath Divya virajmaan thi.
Divya : Yadi mein galat nahi hu, toh yahi baat honi chahiye.
Suhana : Mujhe nahi laga tha, maamla itna serious hoga.
Unki manzil thi, roadside alleys. Wo sakri kuliyaa jidhar raat ke andhere me kaarnaame hote the.
Daniel ke message se ye pata lag chuka tha ki koi gang thi. Aisi wesi gang nahi. Boht badi gang. Aur wo ek saath apne kaamo ko anjaam de rahi thi.
Khushkismati se ye bhi pata lag gaya tha ki gang me ek shaks tha~
Jim!!!!
Unka aaj ka pehla target.
Jim the Slippery ke naam se wo pehle hi Vegas me baar baar police ke changulo se nikal jaane ke liye mashoor tha.
Jiske chalte uska ye naam pada ~ Jim the Slippery.
Par unn sabhi ne ye nahi socha tha ki Jim House of Killers se juda hua tha.
Divya : Jim!!! Jim booze, girls aur drug dealing ke liye famous hai. Tonight we must catch him.
Suhana : Kya wo aaj bhi unn alleys me drug dealing karne waala hai?
Divya : Yadi hamaare detectives ki info sahi hai. Toh haan! Aaj raat dealing unhi kisi alleys ke andhere me hoegi.
Suhana : Toh range haatho pakadne ka mauka hai hume.
Divya : Yes!!!!
Ye dono baato me lagi hui thi. Toh wahi Veer peeche ki seat par chup chaap baitha hua tha.
Wo soch me dooba hua tha. Kyuki Basic Enemy Tracker kaam nahi kiya. Aisa pehli baar hua tha.
[Master! Iska ek hi matlab ho sakta hai.]
'What?'
[Yahi ki jisse hum track karna chaahte hai wo apne kisi worker ko apna nahi maanta. Ya wo uske apne nahi hai. Yadi Jim ke lackeys uske apne hai toh hi Basic Enemy Tracker kaam karegi.]
'So that means...'
[Yes! Jim ne kisi unknown logo ko kaam ke liye rakha hai. Aise me Basic Enemy Tracker uske saathiyo ko track nahi karegi. Because they are not related to each other. This guy is definitely smart.]
'I see... In that case... Mujhe kuch aur hi approach lagaani padegi.'
Aur tabhi....
*Ding*
[Mission : Capture Jim the Slippery.
Rewards : 1) ???? Points.
2) Divya's change of view.
3) ??? Fame Points
Venue : Roadside Alleys.
Time limit : 1 hour.]
'Issi ka toh intezaar tha.'
*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*
Car ke brakes lage aur car unn alleys se kuch duri par rukk gayi.
Baari baari wo sabhi car se utre. Police bhi maujood thi. Unki safety ke liye. Kyuki yaha kuch bhi ho sakta tha.
Nik : We will start from here. The network of alleys expands as we go deeper. Take your connection devices. If you see anything suspicious, send out your location. Keep checking your mobile phones for other's locations as well.
Nik ne unhe suchit karte hue kaha. Usne sabhi ko devices pakdaaye hue the. Kaan me unhe laga ke wo ek dusre se sampark kar sakte the. Aur mobile me hi GPS active tha. Jiske zariye unn sabhi ko ek dusre ki locations nazar aa rahi thi.
Nik : You two ladies!!! Are you coming with me?
Divya (smiles) : No!!! I'll be with Suhana.
Nik : Alright! Be careful. I'll go first.
Kehte hue wo andar unn kuliyo ke raasto me chala gaya.
Toh wahi Suhana aur Divya bhi Veer ko akhiri baar ishaara kar waha se andar ki orr chali gayi. Aur Veer akela bacha tha toh woh bhi ek raasta pakad andar chal diya.
Sakri alleys me andhera hi andhera tha. Kahi dust bins pade hue the toh kahi jungli billiyaa idhar se udhar raasta kaat rahi thi.
'Pari!!!'
[Mein samajh gayi Master.]
*Ding*
[Path Tracker has been activated.]
Aaj ki raat patrolling ki raat thi. Veer samet wo sabhi drug dealers ko pakadne nikle the. Par niraasha waali baat ye thi, ki abhi tak kuch bhi unke haath nahi laga tha.
Kuch chand minute hi bache the Patrol khatam hone ke liye. Raat ke andhere me alleys me khamoshi bikhri hui thi. Aur harr ek alag alag alleys me Veer, Suhana - Divya aur anya team members bikhar kar chhaan been me lage hue the.
Veer idhar ek alley me tehel raha tha. Aankhein uski kuch zyaada hi laal thi, uske senses kayi guna badh chuke the. Beowulf's Blessings ON tha.
Ek mod se jese hi wo muda, achanak hui harqat se woh chaukanna ho gaya jab ekdum se ek figure andhere me se uski taraf aake ruka. Aur usse dekhte hi Veer thoda chakit reh gaya,
Veer : Aap??
Saamne Divya khadi hui thi.
Divya ko dekhte hi, Pari ne forun hi card ko OFF kar diya. Veer ki aankhein waapas se normal ho gayi.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]
Yadi Divya uski aisi aankhein dekh leti, toh zaroor Veer sawaalo ke ghero me pad jaata.
Divya : Ohhh!! Tum ho. I thought mujhe koi clue mil gaya.
Veer : Miss Suhana kaha hai?
Divya : Well! Wo chalte chalte thak gayi thi toh mene usse car ke paas tak chorr diya hai aur mein khud hi investigate kar rahi hu.
Veer : I see!!
Divya : Par tum usse 'Miss' kehke bulaate ho, ye waqai ajeeb baat hai. Haha~
Veer : Isme ajeeb kya hai?
Divya : Nothing! Aaj kal naujavaan hot-headed hote hai. Ya toh naam se hi bulaate hai, ya didi kehkar!? ya fir kuch aur? Par tum kuch zyaada hi respectful waale bande ho.
Veer ne badle me koi jawaab na diya. Jesa ki Suhana ne kaha tha, Stay away from her. Veer wahi kar raha tha.
Divya : Hmm~ That's strange!
Veer : What?
Divya : Yahi ki ek khubsoorat lady akeli hai tumhaare saamne and you are not attacking. Ab tak toh tumhe mere upar haath saaf kar lene chaahiye the right?
[What the hell??? Isne samajh ke kya rakha hai apne aap ko? Maaasteeerr!! I want to slap her so bad!!! Fucking bitchhhh!!!]
Veer shaant tha. Jab Veer ki taraf se Divya ko koi response na mila toh woh chalte chalte hi beech me rukk gayi aur peeche mud ke Veer ki orr dekhi, jidhar Veer sarr jhukaaye hue khada tha. Uske chehre par kya expressions the woh dekh nahi paa rahi thi. Aur fir...
Veer : Detective!!!!
Divya : Huh????
Veer : Don't try to be oversmart!!!
Divya : Wh-What!?
Veer : My eyes can see all your tricks. Airport par mujhe jaan bujh ke Vegas ki dirty nightlife ke baare me bataana. Wo bhi Miss Suhana ke saamne, just to observe her reaction. Samay samay par unke saamne mujhe flirty looks dena. Even in front of your own husband. Baat baat par bahaane se mujhe touch karna. You think I'm stupid? I was observing all your tricks. Yadi mere baare me jaan'ne ka itna hi shauk hai toh seedhe muh se puch lo. Ye bachkaani harqate karne ki zaroorat nahi. Also, you should stay away from me. If you'll come too close to me, then...
Kehte hue wo Divya ke nazdeek aaya aur iss baar uske kaan ki orr jhukte aur bola,
Veer : You might get BURN!!!
Aur pal bhar ke liye, Divya ke badan me ek zordaar sihran daud gayi. Uska dil jese usse ahaat kiya... Ki uske saamne khada ye insaan, woh nahi tha jo baahar se dikh raha tha. Aur iss se ulajhna theek nahi tha.
Divya : T-Tummm....!!!
Veer toh itna bol Divya ko ignore kar aage nikal gaya. Usse zara bhi pasand nahi tha jab koi oversmart bann ke usse taunt maare. Aur usne ek namoona de hi diya tha abhi Divya ko. Yadi ab bhi woh silent nahi hui, toh Veer ke paas aur bhi tareeqe the.
Wahi peeche khadi Divya ki pride par jese keechad uchhla tha aaj. Veer koi pehla banda nahi tha jiske saath woh flirt kar rahi thi. There were countless men she had conversed with. Aur aaj tak kabhi kisi ne iss tarah uska palat ke jawaab nahi diya tha. Fir ye Veer kaun hota tha uske saath iss tarah behave karne waala?
Par jese gusse ke saath hi saath uski curiousity uske gusse par haawi ho gayi.
'I see!! Interesting!! Very interesting!! Tumhaare saath waqai mazaa aane waala hai iss investigation me... Veer!!!'
Antatah, wo bhi Veer ke peech peeche chal padi.
Aur abhi wo kuch kadam hi aage badhi thi jab...
*Rustle* *Rustle*
'Huh!?'
Unhe kuch awaazein sunaayi padi. Divya agle hi pal apne detective mode me waapas se aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam usse lekar dheere dheere aage badhne lagi.
"Take these away. C'mon Quick! Quick!!!"
Ek awaaz unhe sunaayi dii. Ye awaaz ek mod se aayi thi.
Unn dono ne deewaar se satt ke mod me jab jhaank ke dekha. Toh jiski unhe talaash thi, wo unke saamne tha.
Badi badi gaadiyo me drugs thailiyo me bhare jaa rahe the. Aur unko manage karne waala banda... Wahi baitha hua tha ~ Jim!!!
Divya ke haath ye dekhte hi apni kamar par gaye aur usne apni handgun unholster kii.
Usne baakiyo ko message bhi bhej diya aur apni location bhi.
Aur fir...
"Hands up!!!! You guys have been surrounded."
Wo ekdum se aage badh unpe aim laga ke khadi ho gayi.
Waha khade log ekdum se iss halchal se ghabra gaye par jab dekha ki unke saamne ek amla naari akeli khadi hui thi. Toh sab relaxed ho gaye.
Jim : Huh? A beautiful lady? What are you doing here Miss???
Kehte hue usne apni jeebh se nichla honth geela kiya. Jese wo Divya ko upar se neeche dekh parakh raha tha.
Jim (mann me) : She'll fetch a good price. I must capture her here.
Jim : Take her!!!
Aur uske ek ishaare par waha maujood kuch aadmi aage badhne lage. Toh wahi kuch apni gun nikaal uski orr taan ke khade ho gaye.
"Run!!!!"
Veer ne mauka dekh Divya ko thaama aur usse kheech ke lekar bhaagne laga.
Jim : Catch them!!! Quick!!!
Aur unke peeche baaki aadmi bhaag ke aane lage.
Veer (daudate hue) : What were you doing???
Divya : Whaaaattttt??? Unhe pakad rahi thi. Tumne waha se mujhe bhagaaya kyu? I had the gun.
Veer : Guns unke paas bhi thi. We got outnumbered.
Divya : Damnnn ittt!!!!! But still...
Alleys se Divya aur Veer familiar nahi the. Jiska nateeja? Wo aadmi log ghoom ke unke saamne ke raaste se aa gaye aur unhe gher liye.
Veer : Stay behind me. Time to fight!!!!
Divya : Huh!!??
Aur bas... Ab koi chaara nahi tha.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
*Whoooooooooosssshhhhhh*
Divya : Wh-Whaaattttt???
Veer apni jagah se itni tezzi me move kiya ki waha khade log ye dekh wahi jamm ke reh gaye.
*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*
Veer ko jaha jaha move hota hua unhone dekha unn sabhi ne fire kar diya...
Par bullets toh Veer ki afterimages se jaa guzri. He was too fast.
Divya ek support liye khud ko defend kar peeche se phati aankho se sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Aur usse ab samajh aa chuka tha ki iss bande ne Aatish aur Slogan ko kese maara tha.
'This... This guy...!!!!'
Uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.
*Thud* *Bang*
Ek ke baad ek aadmi waha dherr hota jaa raha tha aur bechaari Divya saamne ghatit ho rahe scene ko stabdh nigaaho se dekh rahi thi.
Jab almost sabhi pitne ke baad neeche girne waale the tab hi peeche se...
"You bitch!!!!!"
Jim ne Divya ko thaam liya.
"Urrrgghhh!!!!!"
Unn dono ke beech hathapaayi me Jim ne jaha knife se Divya ka haath chotil kiya toh wahi Divya ne apni taang se Jim ke antolo ko nasht kar diya.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrghhh!!!"
Dekhte hi dekhte Jim ki toli par Veer aur Divya bhaari pad chuke the.
Jim apni gun nikaal Divya ko udaane hi waala tha jab ek lohe ki rod tezz raftaar me hawa me udti hui uski orr aayi aur uske kandhe par zorr se lagi,
Haatho se gun choothi, wo zameen par gira aur Divya uss par toot padi.
Maar maar ke jab tak wo sabhi adhmari haalat me na aa gaye, tab tak Veer aur Divya ruke nahi.
Aur uske baad hi waha sab kuch shaant hua. Veer ka hona Jim ke poore plan par paani ferr chuka tha. Aisa kuch bhi hone ki unhe umeed nahi thi.
Itni asaani se wo police ke haatho me phass jaega? Keval aur keval iss ek naye ladke ke kaaran.
Veer ne aage aa kar komalta se apna haath aage badhaaya, uske haath ko thaam ke Divya ahista se khadi hui. Chaahe kitna bhi kyu na bhaag le woh, jab young men ke attractions ki baat aati thi toh woh aksar unse flirt karne lag jaati thi. Uski personality hi aisi thi. Aur Veer bhi uske liye unme se ek tha. Par Veer ke dil ki parat ko Divya apne charm se tod ke andar pravesh nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aur yahi challenge usse gussa bhi dila raha tha par saath hi saath usse excite bhi kar raha tha.
Wo kehte hai na, shikaar jitna mushqil ho, usse pakadne me utna hi mazaa aata hai. Divya ko bhi abhi Veer ko pakadne ke challenge me aisa hi mehsoos ho raha tha.
Veer ne idhar apne jeb se emergency ke liye rakhi hui ek bandage nikaali aur Divya ke haath par badi hi savdhaani se woh usse baandhne laga. Khoon fauran hi bandage par absorb hona shuru ho gaya. Par iss waqt, na hi khoon aur na hi bandage thi jo Divya ka dhyaan kheeche hue thi. Divya ki pulse nirantar badhti jaa rahi thi, jese jese Veer ki ungliyo ki chhuvan uske haath par pad rahi thi. Kayi ladke dekhe the usne par Veer jesa aaj tak koi na dekha. Kuch alag hi baat thi usme.
Wo saumya sparsh hi kaafi tha Divya ke dil ki dhadkano ko tezz karne ke liye. Jab Veer ne bandage baandh dii toh usne apna sarr upar kar Divya ko dekha jo usse hi chup chaap nihaar rahi thi.
Veer : Filhaal ye khoon ko thoda rok ke rakhegi. You will get stitches. Mein team ko call kar raha hu. You cannot continue now.
Divya : Thank you~
Divya ne iss baar apne dil se kaha. Aur uski aankho me jhaakti rahi jab tak Veer khud uski aankho me dekh raha tha. Veer ne abhi bhi uska haath thaama hua tha, jiske baare me soch Divya ke hontho par apne aap ek muskaan sajj gayi. Aur beparvaahi se, bina kuch soche samjhe hi, Divya ne apna angutha Veer ke haath par komalta se mal diya.
Attraction waqai boht hi shaktishaali hathiyaaro me se ek tha. Divya ye baat kese bhool sakti thi!?
'Ohhh noooooo~ Ye mene kya kiya? Shikaari mein hu. Woh nahi. How can I lose myself in his charm?'
Jab usse apni harqat ki bhanak lagi toh woh apna sarr na me hilaate hue khud ki tezz saaso ko thaamne ki koshish karne lagi. Veer ne turant hi team ko call kar apni nayi location bhej dii aur beshaq, kuch derr baad hi...
"Divvvyyyaaaaaaa!!!!"
Achanak aayi Suhana ki awaaz ne unn dono ko sachet kar diya. Dono hi ek dusre se thoda dur khade ho gaye. Dekha toh paaya ki Suhana ke sang Nik aur do aur team members bhi aa rahe the. Saath hi peeche hi car bhi maujood thi.
Nik (paas aate hue) : What the hell happened here?
Sabhi ki nazre Divya ke bandaged haath ki taraf gayi toh Divya ne apna sarr jhuka liya. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.
Divya : We found all the guys. I got injured by Jim. But thanks to Veer. Not only he handled them well, he also protected me. He provided me with the first aid. I'm in a much better state compared to how I would have ended up without him.
Nik : You are fine? What the hell you are talking about? Look at your hand. Quick! We need Medical help.
Aur wo Divya ko thaam ke le jaane laga. Par jaane se pehle usne ek baar peeche mud Veer ko zaroor dekha aur bola,
"Thanks!!"
Aur woh usse lekar aage badh gaya. Divya ne bhi ek jhalak peeche mud ke dono hi Suhana aur Veer ko dekha. Veer ko khaas kar aur fir woh car ke andar baith gayi. Aur idhar,
Suhana : Thanks~
Veer : Hmm??
Suhana : Thanks for saving her. You know, Woh jesi bhi hai. Meri boht hi khaas dost hai. Sabse khaas. She has supported me in my darkest times. Toh uska tumhaari taraf rude behaviour hone ke baad bhi tumne uski help kii. Really!! Thanks!!
Veer : Alright!!
Suhana : And...
Veer : !!???
Suhana : Are you okay?
Puchte hue woh Veer ki taraf aage badhi aur uske badan ko bareeki se dekhne lagi ki kahi Veer toh chotil nahi hua.
Veer : I'm fine!!!
Veer ke kehne par Suhana ki nazar fir peeche alley me gayi jidhar kayi saare aadmi pade hue the. Aur unhe uss haalat me dekhte hi uske badan me ek kampan fel gaya. Aur woh ek soch me pad gayi.
'Just how much strength is needed to handle all those guys alone?? Veer... Tum... Kitne sach chhipaoge mujhse?'
Veer : We should move as well.
Suhana : Ahh!! Right~
Aur kuch issi prakaar se, 'Jim the Slippery' unke haath laga. First Criminal was captured. Issi ke saath, mission bhi clear ho chuka tha.
*Ding*
[Mission : 'Capture ~ Jim the Slippery' has been completed.]
*Ding*
[You have been rewarded 3000 Points.]
[Divya now has a fixed favourability of 50. Her thinking has been changed towards you. No matter what actions you take, Divya's favourability won't drop below 50.]
[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]
'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'
[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]
Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.
Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update almost 6k words ka hai. Ek prakaar se Mega update hai ye. Toh likes thokne ka aur apne revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
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Behtreen update
Fantastic Update
awesome update hai Jabardast update.. Bhai..
Jabardast update bhai
Superb update bhai even though you're not healthy you gave the update for us thank you very much Bhaiand get well soon
Btw superb update bhai
U kidding me right...really bro aapne ye full potential ke sath ni likha...no way... Bhai kyu dusre writers ki job kha re... BTW much love n jldi se recover ho jao then come back with ur full potential
This update take many mystery with it but but I don't want to say this update as mysterious no no never this is riduculous to say this mysterious,I just want to say this update is completely engimatic this is insanity of writing that you write that type of riddle but I thinkthat riddle can be easy but but you man you wander that riddle into the emotion and that thing make this riddle hard aas stuff and one thing I noticed in your riddle that is that your riddle is showing some justice related but not at all I am not sure........but may be possible that I find the riddle main point of view, btw this update is just marvellous I say.......
Superb update
me thinking about veer and ragini upcoming romance
If I remember correctly, the updates when Suhana took Veer with her for a party in Delhi, so that he can accompany Sonia... Right after that Update, somehow it started looking like Suhana was hiding something... Suhana, beshak wo ek bohot badi company ki member hai ya kahun ki maalkin hai, afterall usi ke pita ki company hai wo... But apart from that, it seemed to be like Suhana was something bigger and more different than that... Slogan ke case mein jis tarah usne Veer ki help ki, she seemed to be familiar with using guns, she handled the police too... It was clear that Suhana had connections & apart from that she had a deep past too, past which was dark maybe...
Aur is update ke baad wo doubt kaafi pukhta ho gaya hai... Suhana, Divya ki ek call par hi Las Vegas jaane ko taiyar ho gayi thi and now we know ki wo Veer ko apne saath, Divya ke hi kehne par lekar gayi hai... The reason is a favour Divya did on Suhana in the past... Suhana ko pata tha ki yadi Divya ne use itni urgently bulaya hai to problem bohot badi hogi, means it would be risky to go there... Still, wo gayi, ye kewal ek hi baat ki taraf ishara karta hai ki Suhana par Divya dwara ki gayi wo favour, mamooli nahi thi...
Well, kaafi pehle se ye point clear tha ki Suhana has definitely killed someone in her past... I guess, jab wo teddy ke saath masti kar rahi thi, aur Veer use dekhkar ghabra gaya tha (), usi update ke aas – paas Veer ne Suhana se seedhe ye baat kahi thi, that he has understood that Suhana has killed someone earlier... And abhi tak ki kahani se main yahi samjha hoon, ki wo shakhs Pushkar tha, Sonia ka childhood friend... Is baare mein shayad pehle kabhi maine apne review mein kaafi baatein likhi bhi thi... And, now I think ki jo favour Divya ne Suhana par kiya tha, wo use Pushkar waale maamle mein help karne se juda hoga (assuming she killed Pushkar)... Means, Divya, being a skilled and experienced detective would've helped Suhana get out of that matter, by removing all the proofs & clues out there, and finally they would've made Pushkar 's murder look like a suicide, as Sonia mentioned...
Khair, ye raaz to aage chalkar hi khulega, par mera yahi maan na hai ki ya to Pushkar ka intention Sonia ko harm karne ka raha hoga, ya fir Suhana ne unintentionally use maar diya hoga, other than these two I don't think there could've been any other reason for the same...Iske atirikt mujhe aur koyi bada maamla nahi dikhta jiske liye ki gayi favour ke badle Suhana wahaan jaane ko taiyaar ho gayi ho... Chahe Divya aur Suhana langotiya saheliyan
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Beharhal, Divya ka character bhi dheere – dheere behtar tareeke se samajh aane laga hai... Usko check karte waqt hi samajh aa gaya tha ki Veer jaise ladkon ke liye uske dil mein kitna prem, kitna apnapan hai... But after reading this update, it's clear that she is seriously intelligent & smart... Her antics & words points towards this only... Veer ko wahaan bulaane ke pichhe Divya ki kya mansha thi, ye to aage hi pata chalega... But I think, Slogan ki maut aur us se pehle Aatish ka safaya (If Divya knows about Aatish's incident, I think she knows), ye do mukhya kaaran ho sakte hain Divya ke use wahaan buland ke liye... Plus, I think Suhana se baat cheet ke dauraan usne Suhana ki Veer se closeness ko bhi observe kar liya hoga, aur isiliye uska sach jaan ne ke liye usne donon ko saath mein wahaan bulaya ho... Abhi tak to wo, isi prakar ki praani lagi hai, typical 30-35 year old woman with a more notorious brain (no disrespect though)
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Idhar, saamne aa gaya hai ki asal mein Divya ke saath wahaan ho kya raha hai... Divya aur Nicholas ke teen investigators ki maut ho chuki hai & the latest one is Daniel... Daniel ne party mein kuchh aisa suna aur dekha jiski keemat use apni jaan dekar chukani padi... A really really important & big planning, I think... Kuchh bada hone waala hai, aur uski jaankari Daniel ko mil gayi, aur nateeja hamare saamne hai... Kya seedha target Divya-Nicholas hain, un murderer/murderers ka? Ya fir unke raaste ki rukavat bani huyi hai in donon ki agency, and isi liye donon unke nishane par hain..?Btw. Jo note usne evidence ke taur par chhoda tha...
Kya hai ye House Of Killers!!?? Koyi sangathan? Kisi operation/plan ka naam? Par jo kuchh bhi hai, Divya ko us baare mein jaankari hai... She cracked the puzzle I think, aur uske baad jo shabd usne kahe, wo isi aur ishara karte hain ki nischit hi khatra bohot bada hai... Lagta yahi hai ke abhi to bas laashein girna shuru hi huyin hain, abhi bohot sa raktpaat hona baaki hai... And most importantly, the brain behind all this.. I guess, we're really not ready for what's coming, as you said...
Nicholas ka Suhana ko Sonny kehkar pukarna aur uspar uska reaction, saaf hai ki teenon ek – doosre ko kaafi pehle se jaante hain... Kuchh hi der ke liye padha hai abhi humne Nicholas ke baare mein, and it's too early to make an opinion about him... Par fir bhi, lag to wo so and so hi raha hai, it's possible ki wo black sheep nikle, aage chalkar...
Beharhal, Veer ne apne stats increase kar liye hain... 20 points in the appearance, another reason for Divya to do what she loves to do... Suhana ka reaction bhi dekhne laayak hoga next day... Intelligence mein 10 aur points add karna ek smart move hai filhal ki situation mein... Lagbhag 4,000 points baaki hain Veer ke paas, looks like ke is trip par ek aadhi nayi skill bhi purchase karni pad sakti hai use... Status mein Shweta aur Bhumika ki favourability mein aaya rise highlight raha... Ragini ka aankda bhi 90 ko paar kar chuka hai & finally, Nidhi's number is on a constant rise too...
Pari ak behaviour is update mein, I hope uska koyi human form na ho... Anyatha..Veer!! Har 5 minute mein personality badalne waali ladki ko kaise sambhalega Veer, ye sabse bada sawaal hai, yadi Pari ki human form huyi to... Ek aur personality bhi thi shayad Pari ki jo is waali ke similar thi... Par uske comparison mein ye waali thodi aur intensify ho gayi hai... So, I guess ki Pari ki personalities Intensify hokar repeat hoti hain, kuchh particular level ups ke baad..?
Bhavana & Tejal are back in Mumbai, Bhavana ke mann mein jo doubt chhodkar aaya tha Veer, wo doubt use waapis Mumbai kheench hi laaya... Kya hoga, jab Bhavana ka shakh yakeen mein badal jaayega, taking into note ki possible hai us realisation ke waqt Veer Vegas mein hi ho... Brijesh and Family ka koyi sadsya yadi Bhavana se takraya, tab kya hoga... And important one is Tejal, use Mumbai ki hawa familiar lag rahi hai, aur lage bhi kyon na... She knows that she has a brother but jab use pata chalega ki Egypt mein aaya Vikram hi uska bhai Veer tha, jab use pata chalega ki uski Maa ke Mumbai aane ki wajah wahi hai,tab uski pratikriya dekhne laayak rahegi... As you mentioned in the end, a bunch of exciting things are waiting for the readers in the coming updates... Btw. Who's that Purvi..? Bhavna's good old friend...
Again, it was a wonderful update, exactly what we're used to... The lines, in the form of a riddle by Daniel, you did a great job there, definitely, except that House Of Killers, acronym, there's some other meaning too hidden in the lines... As far as I've understood the lines, maybe Daniel was pointing towards a black sheep too... Nicholas!!?? Maybe I'm wrong but I think, The lines meant that happiness might turn into sorrow but one should get rid of that sorrow and move ahead {Related to Divya & Nicholas (
Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Oh my GOD
How are you able to write such
Omg!!!! Update aa bhi gaya!? Aur wo bhi itna accha? Fever ke bawajood????
Abhi padha mene... Review baad me...
Divya ka case kya veer se Judi hui ye
Bhavana or tez dhundne nikle hai veer ko or e purvi he kon dekhte Hain....
Bdw nyc update brother....
Ab toh Veer ka
.. Houseof Killer's ...ke logo se mukabala hoga...
Awesome, fabulous
nice1
Outstanding update
Who wouldn't
Who wouldn't
Super awesome update bro like always and thanks for update bro since you are not well but still giving updates is outstanding
Bai Keya sabd istemal karu.....!!
Keya allfaz kahu......
Your writing skills so so good.....
Love you.....❤
Paheli Doraw Age Baro
Dunte Huye Story Parte RAHO.....
साली दिव्या तो एकदम्मे चूत का खिलाडी लगती है बे, अपने वीर को ऐसे ताड़ रही थी जैसे... एक प्यासी औरत अपने भ्रतार के जोशीले और कठीले जिश्म को निहारती है....
साली उस झांट के बाल को अभी वीर के किस्से के बारे मे पता नही है, वरना एक सांढ को छेड़ने की इतनी बड़ी गलती वो कतयी नही करती । सुहाना भले ही वीर या फ़िर किसी और के सामने ये बाते ज़ाहिर नहीं होने देना चाहती है की उसे भी वीर के कारनामे जानकर बहुत खुशी मिलती है, जैसे की दिव्या ने बताया की सुहाना अक्सर वीर की कसीदे मे तारीफ के पुल बांधा करती थी उसके सामने।
वैसे भले ही सुहाना किसी की सुहागन है, पर जिस तरह से उसकी सुंदरता का वर्णन सुरुआत से ही वोल्फी भाई करते आरहे है, मेरी दिली तमन्ना बढ़ गयी है की मै सुहाना और वीर के मिलन को पढ़ने बाले पाठको मे अपना नाम भी देखू ।
काश वो दिन जल्दी आये जब सुहाना भी वीर को अपना दे देगी.... (मेरे कहने का मतलब हाथ से है ना की चूत से ... हमेशा लोडे से सोचोगे तो यही सब थाउट दिमाग मे
आयेंगे ना... कभी दिमाग भी लगा लिया करो)
भावना और तेज़.... बंबई की व्यस्त धरती पे.... जहाँ भावना को ये पक्का करना है की जो लड़का (veer) उससे एजेप्त मे खोज़ के समय मिला था, वो ही उसका बेटा है या नहीं , क्योंकि वीर के पास वोही चीज़े मौजूद थी जो बचपन मे उसके बेटे के पास था ।
वोही तेज़ को समझ नही आरहा है की आखिर ऐसा क्या हो गया की उसकी माँ ऐसे बिना कोई प्लान बनाये, मुम्बई आगयी थी । और कुछ बता भी नही रहे है,
बेहद ही रोचक और रोमांचक अंश था वोल्फ़ी भाई ।
धन्यवाद
Fabulous update bhai
And for the House Of Killers....
It’s the FINAL COUNT DOWN.....
Bhai ji aisa review padh kar writer’s chest will become breast (with pride)
Astute observation sirji
Aur writer Ji agar bhaisaab ka review kuch aur lamba hota to word count mein update jitna hi ho jaata!!!
Awesome update sir
Waiting for next update sir
Plz update soon
Aapki update ki timing Sir nani yaad dila deti h...
Mne to socha tha firse bed par baithe lappy apni thighs par rakh bagal me snacks khaate khaate update padhungi. Par update bohut hi late aaya. Mne to expect bhi ni kiya tha...
Subah dekha to pata chala ki update aa bhi gaya baba...
Aur majboori me mujhe turant update padhna padha. (Bina padhe main raat tak kese rehti?)
1) Update me jaha jaha aapne jo jo pics use kii h... Unke liye taaliyaa...Ekdum to the point images. Aur Divya to sach me hot nikli...
Yahi baat to mujhe pasand aati h... Aap peeche nahi hatate, kisi bhi kaam k liye... Chaahe pics dalne ki baat hi kyu na ho. Aap wo bhi karte ho. Jo ki mere khyaal se upyog hona hi chahiye.
Mne yaha bohut writers dekhe h jinhone kabhi apni kahaniyo me ek pic nahi daali. Aur sach kahu to ye unki choice h aur mere hisaab se ek aalas ka reason bhi. Bachpan me school ki jab main hindi text books padhti thi. To mujhe yaad h main unn text books ki taraf zyada aakarshit hoti thi jinme story se related kuch drawings hua karti thi. Wesa hi yaha bhi h..
2) Story to ekdum hi naye turn par le aaye ho aap Sir.Murder mystery? Detectives? Story me kitne elements aaenge???
Har cheez to dedi aapne isme. Bacha kya ab?
3) Aur wo riddle to mere sarr k upar se nikal gayi thi. Lekin thanks to some readers. Jinhone spoiler pehle hi gira diya.Hum jese riddle me kamzor logo ka beda paar hua...
4) Hmmm... To aap iss pal ka intezar kar rahe the haa???? Ki yaha aap Veer ko Vegas bheje aur waha se Tej aur Bhavna Mumbai aaye. Timing baitha k chal rahe the pehle se hi haa????Not bad Not bad...
Na jaane kya kya soch rakha hoga. Aur na jaane iss house of killers me kya hone wala h... But I can tell. Next update will be too awesome.
5) Aur ye update aapne fever me likha h?Main bol hi rahi thi pehle hi... Meri kisi ne suni hi nahi. Ye Werewolf Sir jaadu tona karte h guys. Inka roz raat ko alag kuch chalta h... Offerings dete h ye... Hum jese maasoom readers ki feelings ko offer kar dete h. Badle me inhe inke god of writing jo bhi h wo inko apnni shaktiyo se bless karte h... Tabhi to dekho kitne readers jama kar liye h...
6) Iss samay main sabse zyada excited hu to wo h kuch scenes k liye. Ye to chal hi raha h. Par main Arohi ka scene dekhna chahungi. Jisme wo realize karti h ki uske andar ek nayi feeling ne janm le liya h...
Pari ke kuch secrets. Wo abhi bhi sabse badi mystery h... Veer k past se bhi badi.
Tej Bhavna aur Veer ka firse milna. Par iss baar ye jaante hue hi Veer hi uska asli bhai aur beta h...
Kaera ki full glory kab dekhne ko milegi hume? Bechari wo aur Sonia kabse scenes me nahi aayi.
Kam se kam unke ek do scenes hi dikha do Sir. Kya kar rahi h wo, kaha par h?
7) Kaera ki maid Julia, secretary Ruchika ka bhi koi scene nahi aaya h... Foreshadowing kar rahe ho kya aap?Aur Priya aur wo Madhuri bhi gayab h... Bhayankar dimag me kuch paka rahe ho lagta...
At the end, derr aaye durust aaye. Next update ka wait h Sir. Par araam leke dijiye. Ye wala aapne fever me likha h... Aur aap abhi bhi fully healed nahi h...
Toh rest kariye. Aur taro taaza hoke next update dena.
Keep writing!
nice update .investigators ka khoon ho raha hai aur khooni ka koi ata pata nahi isliye divya ne suhana se madad maangi hai .
daniel ne party me jo dekha usko paheli me likh diya .aisa kya ho raha tha waha jisko dekhne se daniel ko apni jaan gawani padi
favour ke badle favour ka idea divya ka hai jisko suhana bhi follow karti hai
suhana ne kuch jyada hi taarif kar di thi veer ki isliye divya ne usko bhi saath laane ko kaha, par kya khud itni badi detective hone ke baad bhi usko suhana ki jarurat pad gayi ,suhana ke paas itna tezz dimaag hai kya
aur yaha bhawna veer ki talash me aayi hai aisa lagta hai aur ab wo apni dost purvi se madad lene ka soch rahi hai .
To akhir kar veer ka las vegas me aane ka reason pata chal hi Gaya. Aur ye kya bhavna veer ko dhundte hue firse Mumbai aa gayi. Only God and writer knows what will happen.
Anyways Update was excellent.
Waiting for next update
Waiting for next thrilling update
Last time Jab yaha zinda tha to update 70 tak padha tha aaj aage padhta hu
Waiting for new update
Plz update soon please
Waiting for next update
Plz update soon please
Waiting for next update brother
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Zabardast updateUpdate - 97 ~ Jim the SlipperyAb tak...
Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!
Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?
Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!
Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?
Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.
Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-
Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!
Purvi : H-Huh???
Ab aage...
*BANG*
"Moooommm!!!"
*BANG* *BANG*
"Mom darwaza kholiyeee!!! Aap mujhe andar band nahi kar sakti. Mein jaanti hu aap baahar hi hai. Open the door mom!!!"
Darwaaze ko peetate hue Tej kamre ke andar se zorr se chillaayi.
Uski Maa, Bhavna ne usse room ke andar hi band kar diya tha. Usse sach jaan'na ka poora haq tha ki akhir ye sab chal kya raha tha?
"Thodi der... Mein thodi derr ke liye hotel se baahar jaa rahi hu. Tab tak tum chup chaap andar hi rahogi Tej. No questions asked."
Bhavna ne kamre ke baahar se awaaz lagaate hue kaha aur fir waha se nikal gayi. Tej vyarth hi andar chillaati reh gayi.
Par eka-ek uske andar khayaal aaya,
'Mom achanak se Mumbai mujhe leke aayi hai. Aur ab kahi jaa rahi hai? Mujhe bata bhi nahi rahi? Aisa kya reason akhir-- Huh???'
Aur ek tezz sansani macha dene waala vichaar uske mann se hoke guzra.
'K-Kahi... Is it because of him??? Haan!!! Yahi! Yahi reason hai. There's absolutely no way ki Mom mujhe yaha befaaltu me lekar aayi hai. It must be because of him!! My... My brother!!!!!! Oh God!!!! Mene pehle kyu nahi iss baare me socha? I have to see him...!!!'
'Mein Mom ko akele nahi karne de sakti kuch bhi. Warna mein apna chance uss se milne ka kho dungi. Mom jaan bujh ke mujhse chhipa rahi hai baatein. I cannot-- I absolutely cannot let her go alone.'
Chinta me doobte hue wo kamre me idhar se udhar tehelne lagi,
'Kya karu? Kya karu? Shit!!! I'm trapped inside. Service call! Right!! I can call them!'
Apna huiya theek kar wo fatafat wahi rakhe landline me ek call bhidaayi jo hotel ki room service ke liye tha.
Tej ne bataaya ki uski Mom usse galti se band kar ke chali gayi hai.
Hotel waalo ne fauran hi Tej ki request suni aur extra spare card se uske room ko unlock kiya.
Room ke liye key card lagta tha. Jisse scan kar room ka door unlock hota tha. Dikkat ye rehti thi ki yadi aap bina card liye baahar nikle aur door band hua toh door poori tarah se lock ho jaata tha.
Isliye hamesha key card ko saath me leke hi nikalna padta tha. Bhavna to key card leke baahar nikal gayi thi. Aur Tej ne issi baat ko ek bahaane me tabdeel kar diya.
Ki wo galti se andar trapped ho gayi hai. Jabki aisa nahi tha. Uski Maa jaan boojh ke usse band kar ke gayi thi. Kherr! Hotel waalo ko kaun sa kuch pata chalne waala tha.
Baahar aate hi Tej ne jese hi door band kiya. Door firse lock ho gaya. Ab wo bina key card ke nahi khulne waala tha. Jo ki accha hi tha. Andar unka samaan maujood tha.
Aur Tej Bhavna ko dhundne jo nikal rahi thi. Toh dikkat wali koi baat hi nahi thi.
Wo tezz qadmo ke saath waha se lift me gayi aur foran hi neeche reception area me pohuchi.
Tej : Excuse me??? Aapne abhi kisi lady ko baahar jaate dekha? Arre! Abhi just thodi derr pehle aapne mujhe unke saath check-in karte dekha hoga.
Receptionist : Yes ma'am! She went outside.
Tej : O-Okay! Thanks!
Tej hadbadi me bhaagte hue baahar nikli. Na jaane uski Mom kaha chali gayi thi.
'Akhir kaha gayi hongi wo? Unhone kaha tha thodi derr me aa jaengi. Baahar nikal aas paas dhundti hu. Ho sakta hai aas paas hi kahi ho?'
Ye soch wo hotel se baahar nikal aayi.. Daudate bhaagte hue wo haaf haaf kar ek jagah se dusri jagah apni nazre daudaane lagi. Par Bhavna kahi nazar nahi aa rahi thi.
'Kahi wo dur nikal gayi kya? Shit! Yadi aisa hai toh mein nahi jaan paungi wo kya karne gayi hai.'
Wo haar maan hi chuki thi jab achanak se uski nazar road ke uss paar ek cafe ki orr gayi.
'Huh?'
Aur beshaq, andar uski Maa Bhavna baithi hui thi. Par wo akeli nahi thi. Uske saamne waali seat par ek aur mahila viraajmaan thi.
'Y-Ye? Ye kiske saath Mom baithi hai? I must listen to them...!'
Tej unn dono ki nazro se bachte hue cafe me andar aayi aur unke hi aas paas ki table par menu card utha ke apna chehra chhipaate hue baith gayi.
Cafe ki seating iss prakaar ki thi ki Tej aur Bhavna ke beech ek seperation tha. Aur keval thoda uth ke hi uss paar ke nazaare ko dekha jaa sakta tha.
Tej ko dekhne ki zaroorat hi nahi thi. Usse toh bas dono ki baatein sunn'ni thi.
Aur Bhavna Purvi iss baat se anjaan ki Tej unke uss paar baithi hui hai, apni baato me lagi hui thi.
Purvi : Bhavna tum achanak se yaha? Kahi kuch...!?
Bhavna : Haan Purvi haan! Chinta waali hi baat hai. Mene dekha Purvi... Mene dekha...
Kehte hue usne Purvi ka haath apne dono haatho me thaam liya.
Purvi : K-Kya dekha tumne Bhavna? Aisi kya baat ho gayi? Batao mujhe!
Bhavna : Pendant!!!! Mene apni aankho se dekha Purvi. Apni aankho se. Wo wahi pendant tha. Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti...
Ye baat sunn uss paar baithi Tej ke kaan khade ho gaye.
'Pendant? Kesa pendant? Mom kya baat kar rahi hai?'
Par tabhi uske paas waiter aa gaya, "Your order ma'am?"
Tej : Ughh!!! J-Just a coffee.
Waiter : Okay ma'am!!
Uske jaate hi Tej ne punah apne kaan unki baato ko sunn'ne me lagaaye,
Purvi : P-Pendant? Ek... Ek minute Bhavna. Tum kya keh rahi ho meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha.
Bhavna ki aankho me ab aasu aa chuke the.
Bhavna : Purviiiiii~ Pendant!!!!! Wahi Pendant!!! Mene dekha...
Purvi koi bewakoof insaan nahi thi. Jab usne Bhavna ke aasu dekhe aur baar baar pendant shabd uske muh se suna, toh usse ye andaaza lagaane me derr na lagi ki Bhavna kis Pendant ki baat kar rahi thi.
Purvi : T-Tumhara matlab hai ki...
Bhavna (nods) : Haan! Haan Purvi!!! Haan!!! Wahi pendant. Mene dekha... Apni aankho se... Wo wahi Pendant tha.
Purvi : Ek... Ek minute!!! Kaha? Mera matlab tumne kaha dekh liya wo Pendant? Ruko!!! Wo Pendant to uske paas hona chahiye tha na? Toh tumne kaha aur kese...!?
Bhavna : Purvi!!!!! Meri Egypt ki investigation ke dauraan meri mulaqaat ek ladke se hui thi.
Purvi : Ladka?
Bhavna : Haan!!! Kareeb 20-22 saal ki umr ka tha. Lamba, sundar, kaali aankhein... Madhur awaaz...
Bataate bataate Bhavna apne aap hi Veer ko yaad kar uski chhavi me kho gayi.
Bhavna : Wo bhi Mumbai se tha. Usne apna naam Vikram bataaya tha. Wo investigation me keval apni skills ke kaaran hi liya gaya tha. Achanak se hi wo hamaare campaign me shaamil ho gaya tha. Raato raat wo aaya tha ekdum se...
Purvi : That's...
Bhavna : Aur jab wo jaane laga toh mein usse airport tak chorrne gayi thi. Tab... Mene tab hi wo Pendant dekha... Uske gale me Purvi... Uske gale me *sniff*
Purvi : Kyyyaaaaa??? Iska matlab...!!
Bhavna : Iske do hi matlab ho sakte hai Purvi...
Purvi : ???
Bhavna : Ya toh wo pendant uss ladke ne kahi se churraya ho, ya kahi se khareeda ho. Ya fir usse kahi se mila ho... Ye ho sakta hai.
Purvi : Aur dusra matlab hai ki...
Bhavna (cries) : Haan!!! *sniff* haan Purvi!!! Dusra matlab yahi hai ki... *sniff* Wo mera apna kaleja hai. Mera laal Purvi *sniff* Mera baccha!!!!
Purvi ko toh jhatka laga hi tha ye sunke par uss se bhi zyaada bada jhatka laga tha unn dono ke uss paar baithi uss naujavan ladki ko...
Tej!!! Usse aisa laga jese uski saasein pal bhar ke liye atak gayi thi. Usse kuch sunaayi nahi de raha tha. Jese uske senses shan bhar ke liye kaam karna band ho chuke the.
'W-What???'
Veer ka chehra usse yaad aane laga. Wo pal, jab wo kese uss se ladd bhid rahi thi. Wo shan jab Veer ne usse underground site me girne se bachaaya tha. Kese wo uski baaho me thi. Uske wo mazboot haath jo uski kamar par bandhe the.
Wo saare pal jab jab usne Veer se baatein kii thi. Usse ab sab yaad aa raha tha. Saalo se usse apne bhai ki talaash thi. Aur bhagwaan ne unn dono ko milaaya bhi. Par bechaari apne bhai ke itne qareeb hone ke bawajood bhi wo usse jaan na paayi.
'Wo... Mera bhai tha? Mera bhai!? M-My brother? M-Mera apna chota bhai!?? I...'
Tej ko seene me andar se ek tezz dard utha ki usne apne top ko zorr se bheench liya.
Uski aankhein paani paani ho chali. Itne qareeb thi woh uske. Andar uske glaani ka baandh bhi toot gaya.
'H-He... He was my little brother!!??? W-Wo mere itne paas tha... So close... I couldn't even... Oh God...'
Aas paas ke log usse rota dekh rahe the. Par Tej ko koi hosh nahi tha. Hatheliyo se wo apne aasu pochti jaa rahi thi, lekin aasu the jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the.
Purvi : N-Nahiiii! Aisa kese ho sakta hai? Kya naam bataaya tha usne tumhe?
Bhavna : V-Vikram... *sniff*
Purvi : Kya tumne uski ID check kii?
Bhavna : Haan! ID toh sahi hi lag rahi thi.
Purvi : P-Par aisa kese ho sakta hai? Mera matlab hai... Toh mera laadle ka naam Vikram hai? Par... Wo bhala Egypt kyu jaega? Aur itni kam umr me bhala woh ye sab kese??? Ek minute... Kahi...
Bhavna : ???
Purvi : Kahi wo tumhe yaani ki apni Maa ko dhundne toh nahi aaya tha?
Bhavna : Ahhh!!!!
Purvi : Haan! Aisa ho sakta hai...
Bhavna : N-Nahi! Ye sambhav nahi. *sniff* Uss ghar ke logo ne mere baare me usse kuch bhi nahi bataaya hoga. Aur itni jankaari usse itni asaani se nahi mil sakti. Par mera mann baar baar keh raha hai... Wo mera lalla tha... Mera khoon... *sniff*
Purvi : Ohhh God!!! Mera toh sarr chakra gaya. Pehle ye batao, Tej kaha hai? Kya usse saath me nahi laayi? School me thi jab tab mene usse dekha tha. Uske baad se tum ek baar bhi usse lekar nahi aayi.
Bhavna : Ab aa gayi hu na. Jee bhar ke mil lena apni laadli se... Mein usse hotel me hi room me chorr kar aayi hu.
Purvi : Hmm~ aur ye charcha hume mere ghar par baith ke vistaar se karni hogi.
Bhavna : Bilkul!!!
Purvi : Tumne Tej ko ab tak nahi bataaya?
Bhavna : Nahi Purvi! Mein majboor hu. Tum jaanti hi ho. Yadi Tej ko pata chala ki uska bhai bhi hai yahi iss sheher me toh...
Purvi : Wo bhaagti hui waha jaane ki koshish karegi.
Bhavna : Bilkul! Bas isliye... Mene uss se ab tak chhipa ke rakhi hai baat.
Purvi (chinta me) : Kab tak chhipaogi Bhavna? Kab tak? Kya usse apne bhai ke baare me jaan'ne ka haq nahi?
Bhavna : Haq hai! Par yadi usse pata lagna hoga. Toh sahi samay aane par bhagwaan raasta dikha denge. Mein nahi bata sakti usse kuch. Ye sab kuch sab ki bhalaayi ke liye hai...
Purvi (sighs) : Anyways! Tum ek kaam karo. Ya toh Tej ko leke mere ghar chalo. Ya tum mere saath chalo aur Tej ko baad me wahi bula lenge.
Bhavna : Hmm! Mein tumhaare saath chalti hu. Tej ko phone kar mein bula lungi. Arre nahi...!!!
Purvi : Kya hua?
Bhavna : Mein toh key card leke aa gayi hu. Baahar se lock karke. Wo baahar kese aaegi?
Purvi : Toh usse jaake key card deke aao. Aur fir mere saath mere ghar chalo.
Bhavna : Haan! Yahi karti hu. Kyuki uske saamne baatein nahi ho paengi.
Purvi : Hmm~ baad me usse bula lena. Mera ghar zyaada dur bhi nahi hai yaha se. Wo araam se aa jaegi. Apni muh boli maasi se issi bahaane mil bhi legi acche se.
Bhavna : Haan! Purvi tum yahi ruko. Mein abhi aati hu. Aur...
Purvi : ??
Bhavna : Shukriya Purvi! Mere ek call par yaha aane ke liye. Mein...
Purvi : Kar diya na parayaa? Bhavna! Jese ye maamla tumhaare liye gambheer hai wese hi mere liye bhi hai. Tumhara lalla mera lalla bhi hai. Tumhaari gerr haazri me doodh pilaaya hai mene bhi usse apna ye baat bhulo nahi... Jese wo tumhara beta hai. Wese hi mera bhi. Toh uski maasi hote hue mein kese nahi aati?
Bhavna (smiles) : Tumne sahi kaha. Jitna haq mera uss pe hai. Utna hi haq tumhara bhi hai uspe...
Purvi (smiles) : Ab tum jao aur card deke jaldi se waapas aao. Fir hum nikle yaha se...
Bhavna : Haan!!!!
Jab Tej ko pata chala ki uski Maa waapas se hotel jaane waali hai toh woh hadbada ke uthi aur bhaagte hue cafe se baahar nikli.
"Ma'am aapki coffee!??" Peeche se waiter awaaz lagaata hi reh gaya. Par Tej toh tab tak rafu chakkar ho chuki thi.
Yaha wo hotel pohuch neeche hi rukk gayi. Aur jese hi Bhavna aayi toh Tej ko baahar dekh hairaan reh gayi,
Bhavna : Tum yaha neeche?
Tej : Aap mujhe lock jo kar aayi thi. Call karke mene room khulwaya fir. Kaha gayi thi aap.
Bhavna : Ek zaroori kaam tha. Ussi ke liye.
Tej : Kaun sa zaroori kaam?
Bhavna : Wo...... tha ek kaam.
Tej : Mein wahi puch rahi hu. Kaun sa zaroori kaam? Mumbai me aapko kaun sa kaam aan pada achanak se?
Bhavna : Tumhaari muh boli maasi rehti hai idhar. Tum unse bachpan me school time me mili thi. Mein unhi se milne gayi thi. Unke ghar jaa rahi hu. Kuch baat karni hai. Mein tumhe baad me call karungi toh tum wahi aa jana. Ye card rakh lo...
Bhavna ne Tej ko card thamaaya aur wo nikal gayi.
Kam se kam iss baar usne koi jhooth nahi bola tha. Iss baat ki Tej ko khushi thi.
Ho na ho, wo kese bhi kar ke apne bhai ka pata lagaane hi wali thi.
***
Las Vegas
Night ~ 9:54 PM
Raat ke andhere me aur Las Vegas ki 24 ghante chaalu sadko par jagmagaati city lights ke beech, police ki 3 cars ek ke peeche ek nikalti jaa rahi thi.
Aur unn police cars ke theek peeche hi kuch private cars chal rahi thi.
Jinme se ek me maujood the...
Veer, Divya, Nik aur Suhana.
Kuch derr pehle hui meeting me ek boht bada sach saame jo aaya tha. Aisa sach jisse jaan kar poore crime department me sansani mach gayi thi.
Aur wo sach tha~ Daniel ka akhiri message.
Jisse Divya ne decode kar liya tha.
Message me likhi gayi wo baat ek hint thi. Hint ek bade raaz kii.
Daniel ne jo likha tha badi hi chalaaki se likha tha. Message ke Capital letters ko yadi alag se dekha jaaye toh uttar bann raha tha ~ House of Killers.
Jab Divya ne iss message ko decode kiya toh wo bhauchakii toh thi hi par uss se bhi zyaada bada jhatka usse tab laga jab usne message ko aur dhyaan se padha.
Daniel ka likha gaya secret code sirf ye bataane ke liye nahi tha. Balki wo poora message uski sthiti ko darsha raha tha.
Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.
Iss line ka matlab tha, bure vichaar mann ko nasht karte hai. Jiske chalte, aksar hamaari khushiya niraasha me tabdeel ho jaati hai.
Matlab? Matlab saaf tha. Daniel ke mann me uss shan koi bura vichaar aaya tha. Par kyaaa??? Wo aisa kya soch raha tha uss waqt?
Party me jaana? Iske alawa aur kya hi ho sakta tha?
Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.
Iss doosri line ka matlab tha~ Dukh toh bana rahega par usse bhoolne ka prayaas karn chahiye. Tabhi, ek nayi shuruaat janm leti hai.
Teesri line ~ Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more. Fend off the fiend this time.
Jiska arth tha ~ Acche khayaal mann me punah aaenge. Par iss baar mann ke mel ko haawi hone na dena.
Shayad Daniel aagah karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Chauthi line ~ Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.
Jiska matlab tha ~ Apne andar ki aag ko jalaao. Bhadkao. Aur uss shaitaan ko baahar nikaalo. Bhrastacharan shaitaan ko maar feko.
Shaitaan!!! Daniel kis shaitaan ki baat kar raha tha?
Paachvi line ~ Escape if you realize you cannot handle it. Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...
Jiska arth tha ~ Yadi sambhaal nahi paa rahe ho, toh bhaag jaana. Yaad rakhna! Veh ek nahi hai. Yadi pakde gaye toh...
Aur akhiri line ~ Soul shall burn.
Jiska matlab tha ~ Maut!!!!
Yadi pakde gaye, toh seedha maut. Aur Daniel ke saath kya hua tha?
Bas isliye... Isliye Divya ghabraayi hui thi.
Nik car drive kar raha tha, par uska mann kahi aur hi bhatka hua tha. Uske bagal se Suhana front seat par baithi hui thi. Toh wahi peeche Veer ke saath Divya virajmaan thi.
Divya : Yadi mein galat nahi hu, toh yahi baat honi chahiye.
Suhana : Mujhe nahi laga tha, maamla itna serious hoga.
Unki manzil thi, roadside alleys. Wo sakri kuliyaa jidhar raat ke andhere me kaarnaame hote the.
Daniel ke message se ye pata lag chuka tha ki koi gang thi. Aisi wesi gang nahi. Boht badi gang. Aur wo ek saath apne kaamo ko anjaam de rahi thi.
Khushkismati se ye bhi pata lag gaya tha ki gang me ek shaks tha~
Jim!!!!
Unka aaj ka pehla target.
Jim the Slippery ke naam se wo pehle hi Vegas me baar baar police ke changulo se nikal jaane ke liye mashoor tha.
Jiske chalte uska ye naam pada ~ Jim the Slippery.
Par unn sabhi ne ye nahi socha tha ki Jim House of Killers se juda hua tha.
Divya : Jim!!! Jim booze, girls aur drug dealing ke liye famous hai. Tonight we must catch him.
Suhana : Kya wo aaj bhi unn alleys me drug dealing karne waala hai?
Divya : Yadi hamaare detectives ki info sahi hai. Toh haan! Aaj raat dealing unhi kisi alleys ke andhere me hoegi.
Suhana : Toh range haatho pakadne ka mauka hai hume.
Divya : Yes!!!!
Ye dono baato me lagi hui thi. Toh wahi Veer peeche ki seat par chup chaap baitha hua tha.
Wo soch me dooba hua tha. Kyuki Basic Enemy Tracker kaam nahi kiya. Aisa pehli baar hua tha.
[Master! Iska ek hi matlab ho sakta hai.]
'What?'
[Yahi ki jisse hum track karna chaahte hai wo apne kisi worker ko apna nahi maanta. Ya wo uske apne nahi hai. Yadi Jim ke lackeys uske apne hai toh hi Basic Enemy Tracker kaam karegi.]
'So that means...'
[Yes! Jim ne kisi unknown logo ko kaam ke liye rakha hai. Aise me Basic Enemy Tracker uske saathiyo ko track nahi karegi. Because they are not related to each other. This guy is definitely smart.]
'I see... In that case... Mujhe kuch aur hi approach lagaani padegi.'
Aur tabhi....
*Ding*
[Mission : Capture Jim the Slippery.
Rewards : 1) ???? Points.
2) Divya's change of view.
3) ??? Fame Points
Venue : Roadside Alleys.
Time limit : 1 hour.]
'Issi ka toh intezaar tha.'
*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*
Car ke brakes lage aur car unn alleys se kuch duri par rukk gayi.
Baari baari wo sabhi car se utre. Police bhi maujood thi. Unki safety ke liye. Kyuki yaha kuch bhi ho sakta tha.
Nik : We will start from here. The network of alleys expands as we go deeper. Take your connection devices. If you see anything suspicious, send out your location. Keep checking your mobile phones for other's locations as well.
Nik ne unhe suchit karte hue kaha. Usne sabhi ko devices pakdaaye hue the. Kaan me unhe laga ke wo ek dusre se sampark kar sakte the. Aur mobile me hi GPS active tha. Jiske zariye unn sabhi ko ek dusre ki locations nazar aa rahi thi.
Nik : You two ladies!!! Are you coming with me?
Divya (smiles) : No!!! I'll be with Suhana.
Nik : Alright! Be careful. I'll go first.
Kehte hue wo andar unn kuliyo ke raasto me chala gaya.
Toh wahi Suhana aur Divya bhi Veer ko akhiri baar ishaara kar waha se andar ki orr chali gayi. Aur Veer akela bacha tha toh woh bhi ek raasta pakad andar chal diya.
Sakri alleys me andhera hi andhera tha. Kahi dust bins pade hue the toh kahi jungli billiyaa idhar se udhar raasta kaat rahi thi.
'Pari!!!'
[Mein samajh gayi Master.]
*Ding*
[Path Tracker has been activated.]
Aaj ki raat patrolling ki raat thi. Veer samet wo sabhi drug dealers ko pakadne nikle the. Par niraasha waali baat ye thi, ki abhi tak kuch bhi unke haath nahi laga tha.
Kuch chand minute hi bache the Patrol khatam hone ke liye. Raat ke andhere me alleys me khamoshi bikhri hui thi. Aur harr ek alag alag alleys me Veer, Suhana - Divya aur anya team members bikhar kar chhaan been me lage hue the.
Veer idhar ek alley me tehel raha tha. Aankhein uski kuch zyaada hi laal thi, uske senses kayi guna badh chuke the. Beowulf's Blessings ON tha.
Ek mod se jese hi wo muda, achanak hui harqat se woh chaukanna ho gaya jab ekdum se ek figure andhere me se uski taraf aake ruka. Aur usse dekhte hi Veer thoda chakit reh gaya,
Veer : Aap??
Saamne Divya khadi hui thi.
Divya ko dekhte hi, Pari ne forun hi card ko OFF kar diya. Veer ki aankhein waapas se normal ho gayi.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]
Yadi Divya uski aisi aankhein dekh leti, toh zaroor Veer sawaalo ke ghero me pad jaata.
Divya : Ohhh!! Tum ho. I thought mujhe koi clue mil gaya.
Veer : Miss Suhana kaha hai?
Divya : Well! Wo chalte chalte thak gayi thi toh mene usse car ke paas tak chorr diya hai aur mein khud hi investigate kar rahi hu.
Veer : I see!!
Divya : Par tum usse 'Miss' kehke bulaate ho, ye waqai ajeeb baat hai. Haha~
Veer : Isme ajeeb kya hai?
Divya : Nothing! Aaj kal naujavaan hot-headed hote hai. Ya toh naam se hi bulaate hai, ya didi kehkar!? ya fir kuch aur? Par tum kuch zyaada hi respectful waale bande ho.
Veer ne badle me koi jawaab na diya. Jesa ki Suhana ne kaha tha, Stay away from her. Veer wahi kar raha tha.
Divya : Hmm~ That's strange!
Veer : What?
Divya : Yahi ki ek khubsoorat lady akeli hai tumhaare saamne and you are not attacking. Ab tak toh tumhe mere upar haath saaf kar lene chaahiye the right?
[What the hell??? Isne samajh ke kya rakha hai apne aap ko? Maaasteeerr!! I want to slap her so bad!!! Fucking bitchhhh!!!]
Veer shaant tha. Jab Veer ki taraf se Divya ko koi response na mila toh woh chalte chalte hi beech me rukk gayi aur peeche mud ke Veer ki orr dekhi, jidhar Veer sarr jhukaaye hue khada tha. Uske chehre par kya expressions the woh dekh nahi paa rahi thi. Aur fir...
Veer : Detective!!!!
Divya : Huh????
Veer : Don't try to be oversmart!!!
Divya : Wh-What!?
Veer : My eyes can see all your tricks. Airport par mujhe jaan bujh ke Vegas ki dirty nightlife ke baare me bataana. Wo bhi Miss Suhana ke saamne, just to observe her reaction. Samay samay par unke saamne mujhe flirty looks dena. Even in front of your own husband. Baat baat par bahaane se mujhe touch karna. You think I'm stupid? I was observing all your tricks. Yadi mere baare me jaan'ne ka itna hi shauk hai toh seedhe muh se puch lo. Ye bachkaani harqate karne ki zaroorat nahi. Also, you should stay away from me. If you'll come too close to me, then...
Kehte hue wo Divya ke nazdeek aaya aur iss baar uske kaan ki orr jhukte aur bola,
Veer : You might get BURN!!!
Aur pal bhar ke liye, Divya ke badan me ek zordaar sihran daud gayi. Uska dil jese usse ahaat kiya... Ki uske saamne khada ye insaan, woh nahi tha jo baahar se dikh raha tha. Aur iss se ulajhna theek nahi tha.
Divya : T-Tummm....!!!
Veer toh itna bol Divya ko ignore kar aage nikal gaya. Usse zara bhi pasand nahi tha jab koi oversmart bann ke usse taunt maare. Aur usne ek namoona de hi diya tha abhi Divya ko. Yadi ab bhi woh silent nahi hui, toh Veer ke paas aur bhi tareeqe the.
Wahi peeche khadi Divya ki pride par jese keechad uchhla tha aaj. Veer koi pehla banda nahi tha jiske saath woh flirt kar rahi thi. There were countless men she had conversed with. Aur aaj tak kabhi kisi ne iss tarah uska palat ke jawaab nahi diya tha. Fir ye Veer kaun hota tha uske saath iss tarah behave karne waala?
Par jese gusse ke saath hi saath uski curiousity uske gusse par haawi ho gayi.
'I see!! Interesting!! Very interesting!! Tumhaare saath waqai mazaa aane waala hai iss investigation me... Veer!!!'
Antatah, wo bhi Veer ke peech peeche chal padi.
Aur abhi wo kuch kadam hi aage badhi thi jab...
*Rustle* *Rustle*
'Huh!?'
Unhe kuch awaazein sunaayi padi. Divya agle hi pal apne detective mode me waapas se aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam usse lekar dheere dheere aage badhne lagi.
"Take these away. C'mon Quick! Quick!!!"
Ek awaaz unhe sunaayi dii. Ye awaaz ek mod se aayi thi.
Unn dono ne deewaar se satt ke mod me jab jhaank ke dekha. Toh jiski unhe talaash thi, wo unke saamne tha.
Badi badi gaadiyo me drugs thailiyo me bhare jaa rahe the. Aur unko manage karne waala banda... Wahi baitha hua tha ~ Jim!!!
Divya ke haath ye dekhte hi apni kamar par gaye aur usne apni handgun unholster kii.
Usne baakiyo ko message bhi bhej diya aur apni location bhi.
Aur fir...
"Hands up!!!! You guys have been surrounded."
Wo ekdum se aage badh unpe aim laga ke khadi ho gayi.
Waha khade log ekdum se iss halchal se ghabra gaye par jab dekha ki unke saamne ek amla naari akeli khadi hui thi. Toh sab relaxed ho gaye.
Jim : Huh? A beautiful lady? What are you doing here Miss???
Kehte hue usne apni jeebh se nichla honth geela kiya. Jese wo Divya ko upar se neeche dekh parakh raha tha.
Jim (mann me) : She'll fetch a good price. I must capture her here.
Jim : Take her!!!
Aur uske ek ishaare par waha maujood kuch aadmi aage badhne lage. Toh wahi kuch apni gun nikaal uski orr taan ke khade ho gaye.
"Run!!!!"
Veer ne mauka dekh Divya ko thaama aur usse kheech ke lekar bhaagne laga.
Jim : Catch them!!! Quick!!!
Aur unke peeche baaki aadmi bhaag ke aane lage.
Veer (daudate hue) : What were you doing???
Divya : Whaaaattttt??? Unhe pakad rahi thi. Tumne waha se mujhe bhagaaya kyu? I had the gun.
Veer : Guns unke paas bhi thi. We got outnumbered.
Divya : Damnnn ittt!!!!! But still...
Alleys se Divya aur Veer familiar nahi the. Jiska nateeja? Wo aadmi log ghoom ke unke saamne ke raaste se aa gaye aur unhe gher liye.
Veer : Stay behind me. Time to fight!!!!
Divya : Huh!!??
Aur bas... Ab koi chaara nahi tha.
*Ding*
[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]
*Whoooooooooosssshhhhhh*
Divya : Wh-Whaaattttt???
Veer apni jagah se itni tezzi me move kiya ki waha khade log ye dekh wahi jamm ke reh gaye.
*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*
Veer ko jaha jaha move hota hua unhone dekha unn sabhi ne fire kar diya...
Par bullets toh Veer ki afterimages se jaa guzri. He was too fast.
Divya ek support liye khud ko defend kar peeche se phati aankho se sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Aur usse ab samajh aa chuka tha ki iss bande ne Aatish aur Slogan ko kese maara tha.
'This... This guy...!!!!'
Uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya.
*Thud* *Bang*
Ek ke baad ek aadmi waha dherr hota jaa raha tha aur bechaari Divya saamne ghatit ho rahe scene ko stabdh nigaaho se dekh rahi thi.
Jab almost sabhi pitne ke baad neeche girne waale the tab hi peeche se...
"You bitch!!!!!"
Jim ne Divya ko thaam liya.
"Urrrgghhh!!!!!"
Unn dono ke beech hathapaayi me Jim ne jaha knife se Divya ka haath chotil kiya toh wahi Divya ne apni taang se Jim ke antolo ko nasht kar diya.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrghhh!!!"
Dekhte hi dekhte Jim ki toli par Veer aur Divya bhaari pad chuke the.
Jim apni gun nikaal Divya ko udaane hi waala tha jab ek lohe ki rod tezz raftaar me hawa me udti hui uski orr aayi aur uske kandhe par zorr se lagi,
Haatho se gun choothi, wo zameen par gira aur Divya uss par toot padi.
Maar maar ke jab tak wo sabhi adhmari haalat me na aa gaye, tab tak Veer aur Divya ruke nahi.
Aur uske baad hi waha sab kuch shaant hua. Veer ka hona Jim ke poore plan par paani ferr chuka tha. Aisa kuch bhi hone ki unhe umeed nahi thi.
Itni asaani se wo police ke haatho me phass jaega? Keval aur keval iss ek naye ladke ke kaaran.
Veer ne aage aa kar komalta se apna haath aage badhaaya, uske haath ko thaam ke Divya ahista se khadi hui. Chaahe kitna bhi kyu na bhaag le woh, jab young men ke attractions ki baat aati thi toh woh aksar unse flirt karne lag jaati thi. Uski personality hi aisi thi. Aur Veer bhi uske liye unme se ek tha. Par Veer ke dil ki parat ko Divya apne charm se tod ke andar pravesh nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aur yahi challenge usse gussa bhi dila raha tha par saath hi saath usse excite bhi kar raha tha.
Wo kehte hai na, shikaar jitna mushqil ho, usse pakadne me utna hi mazaa aata hai. Divya ko bhi abhi Veer ko pakadne ke challenge me aisa hi mehsoos ho raha tha.
Veer ne idhar apne jeb se emergency ke liye rakhi hui ek bandage nikaali aur Divya ke haath par badi hi savdhaani se woh usse baandhne laga. Khoon fauran hi bandage par absorb hona shuru ho gaya. Par iss waqt, na hi khoon aur na hi bandage thi jo Divya ka dhyaan kheeche hue thi. Divya ki pulse nirantar badhti jaa rahi thi, jese jese Veer ki ungliyo ki chhuvan uske haath par pad rahi thi. Kayi ladke dekhe the usne par Veer jesa aaj tak koi na dekha. Kuch alag hi baat thi usme.
Wo saumya sparsh hi kaafi tha Divya ke dil ki dhadkano ko tezz karne ke liye. Jab Veer ne bandage baandh dii toh usne apna sarr upar kar Divya ko dekha jo usse hi chup chaap nihaar rahi thi.
Veer : Filhaal ye khoon ko thoda rok ke rakhegi. You will get stitches. Mein team ko call kar raha hu. You cannot continue now.
Divya : Thank you~
Divya ne iss baar apne dil se kaha. Aur uski aankho me jhaakti rahi jab tak Veer khud uski aankho me dekh raha tha. Veer ne abhi bhi uska haath thaama hua tha, jiske baare me soch Divya ke hontho par apne aap ek muskaan sajj gayi. Aur beparvaahi se, bina kuch soche samjhe hi, Divya ne apna angutha Veer ke haath par komalta se mal diya.
Attraction waqai boht hi shaktishaali hathiyaaro me se ek tha. Divya ye baat kese bhool sakti thi!?
'Ohhh noooooo~ Ye mene kya kiya? Shikaari mein hu. Woh nahi. How can I lose myself in his charm?'
Jab usse apni harqat ki bhanak lagi toh woh apna sarr na me hilaate hue khud ki tezz saaso ko thaamne ki koshish karne lagi. Veer ne turant hi team ko call kar apni nayi location bhej dii aur beshaq, kuch derr baad hi...
"Divvvyyyaaaaaaa!!!!"
Achanak aayi Suhana ki awaaz ne unn dono ko sachet kar diya. Dono hi ek dusre se thoda dur khade ho gaye. Dekha toh paaya ki Suhana ke sang Nik aur do aur team members bhi aa rahe the. Saath hi peeche hi car bhi maujood thi.
Nik (paas aate hue) : What the hell happened here?
Sabhi ki nazre Divya ke bandaged haath ki taraf gayi toh Divya ne apna sarr jhuka liya. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.
Divya : We found all the guys. I got injured by Jim. But thanks to Veer. Not only he handled them well, he also protected me. He provided me with the first aid. I'm in a much better state compared to how I would have ended up without him.
Nik : You are fine? What the hell you are talking about? Look at your hand. Quick! We need Medical help.
Aur wo Divya ko thaam ke le jaane laga. Par jaane se pehle usne ek baar peeche mud Veer ko zaroor dekha aur bola,
"Thanks!!"
Aur woh usse lekar aage badh gaya. Divya ne bhi ek jhalak peeche mud ke dono hi Suhana aur Veer ko dekha. Veer ko khaas kar aur fir woh car ke andar baith gayi. Aur idhar,
Suhana : Thanks~
Veer : Hmm??
Suhana : Thanks for saving her. You know, Woh jesi bhi hai. Meri boht hi khaas dost hai. Sabse khaas. She has supported me in my darkest times. Toh uska tumhaari taraf rude behaviour hone ke baad bhi tumne uski help kii. Really!! Thanks!!
Veer : Alright!!
Suhana : And...
Veer : !!???
Suhana : Are you okay?
Puchte hue woh Veer ki taraf aage badhi aur uske badan ko bareeki se dekhne lagi ki kahi Veer toh chotil nahi hua.
Veer : I'm fine!!!
Veer ke kehne par Suhana ki nazar fir peeche alley me gayi jidhar kayi saare aadmi pade hue the. Aur unhe uss haalat me dekhte hi uske badan me ek kampan fel gaya. Aur woh ek soch me pad gayi.
'Just how much strength is needed to handle all those guys alone?? Veer... Tum... Kitne sach chhipaoge mujhse?'
Veer : We should move as well.
Suhana : Ahh!! Right~
Aur kuch issi prakaar se, 'Jim the Slippery' unke haath laga. First Criminal was captured. Issi ke saath, mission bhi clear ho chuka tha.
*Ding*
[Mission : 'Capture ~ Jim the Slippery' has been completed.]
*Ding*
[You have been rewarded 3000 Points.]
[Divya now has a fixed favourability of 50. Her thinking has been changed towards you. No matter what actions you take, Divya's favourability won't drop below 50.]
[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]
'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'
[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]
Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.
Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update almost 6k words ka hai. Ek prakaar se Mega update hai ye. Toh likes thokne ka aur apne revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
Superb fantabulous update Werewolf bhai....
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Awesome update bhai keep posting