Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Rihanna]

Aapki update ki timing Sir nani yaad dila deti h...
Mne to socha tha firse bed par baithe lappy apni thighs par rakh bagal me snacks khaate khaate update padhungi. Par update bohut hi late aaya. Mne to expect bhi ni kiya tha...

Subah dekha to pata chala ki update aa bhi gaya baba...

Aur majboori me mujhe turant update padhna padha. (Bina padhe main raat tak kese rehti? )

1) Update me jaha jaha aapne jo jo pics use kii h... Unke liye taaliyaa... Ekdum to the point images. Aur Divya to sach me hot nikli... Mujhe laga tha shayad first appearance me aisa lag raha h par nahi jii... She's really hot. Considering she's 35...
Yahi baat to mujhe pasand aati h... Aap peeche nahi hatate, kisi bhi kaam k liye... Chaahe pics dalne ki baat hi kyu na ho. Aap wo bhi karte ho. Jo ki mere khyaal se upyog hona hi chahiye.

Mne yaha bohut writers dekhe h jinhone kabhi apni kahaniyo me ek pic nahi daali. Aur sach kahu to ye unki choice h aur mere hisaab se ek aalas ka reason bhi. Bachpan me school ki jab main hindi text books padhti thi. To mujhe yaad h main unn text books ki taraf zyada aakarshit hoti thi jinme story se related kuch drawings hua karti thi. Wesa hi yaha bhi h..

2) Story to ekdum hi naye turn par le aaye ho aap Sir. Murder mystery? Detectives? Story me kitne elements aaenge??? Har cheez to dedi aapne isme. Bacha kya ab?

3) Aur wo riddle to mere sarr k upar se nikal gayi thi. Lekin thanks to some readers. Jinhone spoiler pehle hi gira diya. Hum jese riddle me kamzor logo ka beda paar hua...

4) Hmmm... To aap iss pal ka intezar kar rahe the haa???? Ki yaha aap Veer ko Vegas bheje aur waha se Tej aur Bhavna Mumbai aaye. Timing baitha k chal rahe the pehle se hi haa???? Not bad Not bad...
Na jaane kya kya soch rakha hoga. Aur na jaane iss house of killers me kya hone wala h... But I can tell. Next update will be too awesome.

5) Aur ye update aapne fever me likha h? Full potential me nahi likha? To full potential me kya karte ho? Main bol hi rahi thi pehle hi... Meri kisi ne suni hi nahi. Ye Werewolf Sir jaadu tona karte h guys. Inka roz raat ko alag kuch chalta h... Offerings dete h ye... Hum jese maasoom readers ki feelings ko offer kar dete h. Badle me inhe inke god of writing jo bhi h wo inko apnni shaktiyo se bless karte h... Tabhi to dekho kitne readers jama kar liye h...

6) Iss samay main sabse zyada excited hu to wo h kuch scenes k liye. Ye to chal hi raha h. Par main Arohi ka scene dekhna chahungi. Jisme wo realize karti h ki uske andar ek nayi feeling ne janm le liya h...
Pari ke kuch secrets. Wo abhi bhi sabse badi mystery h... Veer k past se bhi badi.
Tej Bhavna aur Veer ka firse milna. Par iss baar ye jaante hue hi Veer hi uska asli bhai aur beta h...
Kaera ki full glory kab dekhne ko milegi hume? Bechari wo aur Sonia kabse scenes me nahi aayi.
Kam se kam unke ek do scenes hi dikha do Sir. Kya kar rahi h wo, kaha par h?

7) Kaera ki maid Julia, secretary Ruchika ka bhi koi scene nahi aaya h... Foreshadowing kar rahe ho kya aap? Aur Priya aur wo Madhuri bhi gayab h... Bhayankar dimag me kuch paka rahe ho lagta...

At the end, derr aaye durust aaye. Next update ka wait h Sir. Par araam leke dijiye. Ye wala aapne fever me likha h... Aur aap abhi bhi fully healed nahi h...
Toh rest kariye. Aur taro taaza hoke next update dena.
Keep writing!

 

[Raj]

Mega Update
Update - 95 ~ Las Vegas ~ It Begins.​

Ab tak...

Suhana : Then get ready...

[Ohh no~ Here it comes!!!!]

Veer : Huh???

Suhana : You and me!!!!! We are going...

Veer : Whaaatttt??? K-Kaha????

Suhana kuch derr tak shaant rahi. Uske baad woh Veer ki taraf dekhte hue boli,

Suhana : Las Vegas!!!!

Veer : WHAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT??????

Ab aage...

“Ladies and gentlemen, the Captain has turned on the Fasten Seat Belt sign. If you haven’t already done so, please stow your carry-on luggage underneath the seat in front of you or in an overhead bin."

"Please take your seat and fasten your seat belt. And also make sure your seat back and folding trays are in their full upright position."

"If you are seated next to an emergency exit, please read..."

Blah Blah Blah...

Instructions samjhaane waali ye thi ek flight attendant, jo apna kaam kar logo ko flight ke niyam samjhaane me lagi hui thi. Aur dekhte hi dekhte...

*Whoooooooooooossshhhhh*

Flight take off kar gayi. Iss flight ki hi ek window seat par ek behad handsome naujavaan bhi baitha hua tha. Beshaq!! Veer!!!

Hawa me uthata airplane, jab zameen se kaafi upar aa gaya toh Veer window ke baahar neele akaash aur safed baadlo ko aur qareeb se dekh apne vichaaro me kho gaya.

Wo Mumbai chorr nikal chuka tha, Las Vegas ki orr. Kese woh sab kuch achanak aur jaldbaazi me chorr ke aaya tha. Usse kayi baate sata rahi thi.

Akhir uski kya zaroorat thi Las Vegas me? Kahi ye system ki hi chali gayi koi chaal toh nahi thi? Kya usko aur missions milne waale the? Kesa rahega ye safar? Kya woh kahi kisi musibat me toh nahi fass jaega? Aneko sawaal the.

Woh yeh sab soch hi raha tha jab,

"Getting bored already!?"

Ek pyaari madhur awaaz uske bagal se aayi jisse sunn Veer ne apna chehra uss orr kiya. Uske bagal me Suhana baithi hui thi.

Veer : Boriyat ko side me rakhe toh, mujhe abhi bhi ye samajh nahi aa raha ki aapke itne chote se suitcase me kya hi samaan aaya hoga? Not to mention ki aap hi thi jisne kaha tha ki tour lamba bhi ho sakta hai.

Wo sarcasm me bola.

Baat sach thi. Suhana ne Veer ko pehle hi ye kehke inform kar diya tha ki tour lamba bhi ho sakta hai toh woh apni poori preparing ke sath chale. Par yaha jab Veer airport pohucha toh usne dekha ki Suhana maatr ek chote se red suitcase ke sang aayi hui thi. Aur kuch bhi nahi tha, bas uska purse.

Suhana : Hmm? What do you mean by chote se suitcase? Aur kya leke chalu? I have my purse and suitcase. What else do I need?

Wo usse sawaaliya nazro se dekhte hue puchi.

Wo ek black colour ki long dress me thi. Kandho par bas patli sii doriya jo uski poori dress ke bhaar ko sambhaal rahi thi. Aur wo khud selfie lene me busy thi.




Aur iss qadar paas se Suhana ko dekh Veer shaant pad gaya. Suhana waqai khubsoorat thi. Uski khubsoorti thodi alag thi. Sonia aur Kaera jesi nahi. Usme uska alag ek charm tha. Kuch alag baat toh zaroor thi usme.

Veer : Toh bas inse aapka kaam chal jaega?

Suhana : Why not? Mujhe rakhna hi kya hai? Just my essentials. Aur suitcase? Usme bas ek jodi kapde and some other essentials.

Veer : Ek jodi kapde? Really? Ek jodi kapdo me kya hoga?

Suhana : Huh?? Mujhe waha jaake bas wahi toh pehen'na hai then I will buy new ones.

Usne badi hi saralta se uttar de diya. Aur Veer ko fir khayaal aaya.

'Fuuuccckkkk!!! I almost forgot!! Miss Suhana! Well, of course she's rich.'

[Don't worry Maaaassteeerrr~ We will be rich too!!! Very soon!! I'm here for you~ You know I love you right?]

'Yeah I know Pari~ I know!!'

Veer ne ek aah chorr raahat ki saans lii. Usko iss level par pohuchne ke liye kaafi kuch karna baaki tha.

Wo ye kese bhul sakta tha ki Suhana ek rich family se belong karti thi. Paisa uske haath ka mel tha. Woh keval ek jodi hi kapde leke aayi thi kyuki woh waha jaake naye kapde khareedne waali thi.

Suhana : It's called smart thinking Veer. It saves a lot of time. Jitna samay tumne bag pack karne me lagaaya hoga, utne samay me I earned crores.

Veer khamosh tha. Suhana ek behad smart aurat thi. Par Veer ne bhi ab financially grow karna shuru kar diya tha. Aur bhi bade pemaane par ab. Na keval woh food truck balki ab shares par bhi woh dhyaan de raha tha.

Suhana : Safar lamba hai toh araam karo jitna karna hai.

Veer : Kitna samay bataaya tha aapne flight duration ka?

Suhana : Around 30 hours.

Veer : Fuckkkk!!!

Suhana : Hmm~ I know it sucks. Par kya kare? Vegas dur hai kaafi. First stop hamara Abu dhabi hai aur uske baad New York, then at last Las Vegas.

Usne flight ki details usse samjhaate hue kaha.

Veer : Wow~

Suhana toh fashion magazines me kuch padhne lag gayi par idhar Veer ko unme koi interest nahi tha. Woh dekh raha tha apne bagal me baithi iss jawaan aurat ko jo dikhne me ek cultured lady prateet ho rahi thi.

Par keval Veer hi jaanta tha ki Suhana apne andar kin do tarah ki personalities ko chhupaaye hue thi. Ek jo normal dikhaayi padti thi, jo ki abhi maujood thi. Aur dusri jisme aate hi woh paagalo ki tarah hassne lagti thi aur teddy ko pakad, usse maar maar ke uska bharta banaane par aa jaati thi. Bhayaanak ekdum!!

Veer ne notice kiya ki Suhana sach me kaafi modern thi. Uska fashion sense bhi boht accha tha. Shayad Sonia ke saath reh reh ke aisa hua ho? Ya Sonia thi jo Suhana se influenced thi? Kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta tha.

Usne ek akhiri sawaal pucha,

Veer : Ummm... So this is business class? It sure is luxurious. Hum dono ki tickets ke around kitne lage honge?

Suhana : Hmm??? Somewhere around 5 lakhs.

Amount sunte hi Veer ko andaaza lag chuka tha,

'Fuccckkkkk!!! 5 Lakhs? Just like that...? She spent that much on tickets?'

Aur kyu nahi hoega shocked Veer? Baat hi alag thi business class ki.




Luxury seats, badi sii screen movies dekhne ke liye, swaadisht khaana, aur kya kuch nahi tha. Andar ka nazaara hi alag tha. Toh Veer samajh chuka tha.

[Master, this is nothing. 5 Lakh is nothing. Hume boht aage jaana hai Master. Don't worry, we will climb the stairs of success together. I will be with you. Always~]

'Thanks Pari~ Motivation ke liye. You are the best.'

[Ehehehe~ Of course I'm the best.]

Veer muskura ke baahar dekh ek baar fir apne ateet me kho gaya. Uski ungliya apne aap hi apne hontho par chali gayi. Kal kuch hua tha. Kuch naya... Kuch alag... Kuch aisa jisse Veer rok na paaya... Kal...

Jese hi usne ghar par ye khabar dii thi ki woh Las Vegas jaa raha hai kuch dino ke liye. Ragini ne uss par sawaalo ke hamle shuru kar diye the,

"Kyu jaana hai tumhe Veer? Kyuuuuu!!?? Tum kyu sheher se baahar jaate rehte ho? Pichli baar tum bina bataaye gaye the. Par tum apni asal Maa se mile the. Iss baar? Iss baar kaha jaa rahe ho Veer? Kya firse kahi unhi se milne...?"

"Nahi Bhabhi!! Suhana jii ne mujh par 3 favours kiye the. Jab mein musibat me tha. She told me she will ask for the repayment in the future. Aur woh din aaj aa hi gaya. Apne pehle favour ke badle me unhone mujhe apne saath Las Vegas chalne ko kaha hai. Kuch zaroori kaam hai shayad. Aur aap jaanti hi ho na Bhabhi? Mein apni zubaan se peeche nahi hatata..."

"P-Par..."

"Bhabhi...!!! Mana mat kijiye. Aur balki unke saath shayad mujhe business se related kayi saari baatein seekhne ko mil jaaye?"

Ragini kuch derr tak shaant rahi par fir usne ek aah bhari aur Veer ko dekh boli,

"Thik hai Veer. Tum jaa sakte ho. Mein tumhe mana nahi karungi."

"K-Kya? Haha~ Sach me? Aap iske khilaaf nahi ho na!?"

"Nahi! Par meri ek shart hai."

"Kaisi shart?"

"Tum mujhe aaj shopping par leke jaoge. Aur abhi issi samay se raat tak tum mere saath rahoge. Bolo manzoor hai?"

Ragini ke bol ne Veer ko asmanjas me daal diya tha. Uski Bhabhi ye kesi demand kar rahi thi? Shopping par jaana koi galat baat nahi thi. Lekin Veer ko jo baat sata rahi thi woh thi Ragini ka ye kehna ki woh uske saath raat tak rahegi.

"Mein..."

Woh kuch bol paata ki iss se pehle hi Ragini waha se palat kar andar apne kamre ki orr jaane lagi, "Decision tumhara hai Veer. Mein taiyaar hone jaa rahi hu. Yadi mein baahar aayi aur tum mujhe ready nahi mile toh mein samajh jaungi tum mere saath jaana nahi chaahte."

Kehte hue woh andar chali gayi.

'Shitttttt!!!!' Veer ab phass chuka tha. Usse Nidhi ma'am, Shreya, Karan, Balhaar se bhi toh milne jaana tha. Lekin ab ye possible nahi tha.

'Mein kal subah jaldi uth ke unn sab se mil aaunga.'

[Yes master. Yahi sahi rahega. Aur aapko ab Ragini ko ignore nahi karna chahiye. I think she has reached a certain point.]

'Hmm...!'

Aur kuch samay ke baad hi, Veer ready tha. Naye kapdo me woh behad hi handsome lag raha tha. Usne ek black shirt aur neeche blue jeans pehni hui thi. Ragini khud ek hot college student ki tarah prateet ho rahi thi. Usne ek dashing sa fashionable white top aur ek black jeans daali hui thi. Saath hi white sneakers. Koi keh sakta tha ki woh ek married aur divorced lady thi? Bilkul bhi nahi.

Jab woh iss qadar Veer ke saamne aayi toh shan bhar ke liye Veer ki bolti hi band ho gayi. Hontho pe wo ek light pink colour ki glossy lipstick jo shayad kisi flavour ki thi. Ye toh uske hontho ko choomne ke baad hi pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha.

Idhar Veer ka muh khula dekh Ragini mann hi mann khil khila uthi aur apne youvan ko saraahne lagi. Usse fakr ho raha tha apni khubsoorti par aaj.

"Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?" Woh gol ghoomte hue khud ke figure ko dikhaate hue puchi.

"Boht khubsoorat!!!" Veer ke muh se apne aap hi nikal aaya.

Ragini ke gaal ye sunte hi halke laal ho chale, "Good! Now you know how to compliment a woman."

Veer khamosh tha. Usse chup dekh Ragini uska haath pakdi aur room ke baahar hall me le aayi.

Par hall me aate hi usne Veer ka haath chorr diya. Saamne do log maujood the. Aabha aur Shweta.

Suman NSS ki ab ek sadasya thi toh wo ghar par nahi rehti thi. Usse apna yogdaan dene jana padta hi tha. Sonali food truck me lagi hui thi. Wo bhi ghar par nahi thi. Aur Bhumika hotel ke liye ravaana ho chuki thi.

Isliye Shweta aur Aabha hi bas thi.

"Tai jii! Mein Veer ke saath thodi shopping par jaa rahi hu. Aur waha se ek friend ke yaha bhi jaana hai. Veer aur mujhe aate aate raat ho jaegi."

Usne bataate hue kaha. Par Shweta ke toh hosh ude hue the, Ragini ko iss tarah se dekh ke. Usne aaj se iss se pehle kabhi bhi Ragini ko top aur jeans me nahi dekha tha. Kabhi nahi. Aur aaj Ragini top aur jeans me thi? Wo bhi Veer ke saath jaane ke liye? Wo bhi dono ekdum akele?

Shweta ki chhati indri turant kaam me lag gayi. Aur usse baar baar kuch sanket dene lagi.

'Hey Bhagwaan! Ye Ragini... Ye Ragini mere bacche ke saath iss tarah inn kapdo me kese jaa sakti hai? Kahi kuch gadbad hai kya? Kahi Ragini mere bete ke peeche toh...'

Wo mann me sochne lagi. Aur thodi derr baad usne apna muh khola,

"Ragini! T-Tum... Aise... Veer ke saath?"

"Hmm? Jii!! Mene iss tarah ke kapde kaafi samay se nahi pehne the isliye aaj mann hua. Kyu? Koi dikkat hai kya?"

Ragini Shweta ki nigaahein parakh chuki thi.

'Aap ya koi bhi ho. Kitna hi mujhe kyu na rok le. Aaj mein Veer ke saath apna samay guzaar ke hi rahungi. Mere aur uske beech koi nahi aa sakta...'

Wo mann me thaan pehle se hi taiyaar khadi thi.

"N-Nahiii!!! Kuch nahi! Jaldi aa jaana beta."

"Jii! Chalo Veer."

"H-Hmm~"

Aur dono Ragini aur Veer ghar se baahar nikal gaye. Baahar aate hi Veer ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Andar ka mahaul kuch garam sa hone laga tha. Aisa lag raha tha do billiyaa aapas me jhapat kar ladne waali thi.

Veer jab car ka door kholne laga toh Ragini ne usse fir tok diya, "Car nahi Veer. Bike! Bike nikaalo."

"Ugh... Okay!"

Veer ke sang bike par sawaar woh peeche baith gayi. Aur Ragini ne ek bhi mauka nahi gawaaya. Baithate saath hi usne apni sudol chaathi Veer ki peeth par poori tika dii. Apne urojo ko Veer ki peeth par masal ke wo usse kass ke pakad ke baith gayi.

'God damn it...!!!' Aur uska asar seedhe Veer ke lund par hua.

Dono hi shopping mall pohuche aur jee bhar ke Ragini ne shopping kii. Woh kabhi apne liye kuch khareedti toh kahi Veer ke liye. Toh kahi ghar ki zaroorat mando ka samaan leti.

Dono ek couple ke jese prateet ho rahe the. Kahi dono food zone me snacks khaate toh kahi ice cream, aur bas ek dusre ke saath issi tarah pal guzaarne lage.

Ragini harr wo prayaas kar rahi thi jo ek ladki karti hai ek ladke ko apni taraf aakarshit karne ke liye. Aur ye kehna galat nahi tha ki Veer uss aakarshan me phassta jaa raha tha.

Jab raat hone ka samay hone laga toh dono kuch derr ke liye ek behad hi khubsoorat se spot ke paas bike ko rok ke wahi agal bagal baithe hue the.

Sooraj dhal raha tha, akaash me pakshiyo ka jhund idhar se udhar udta jaa raha tha. Mand mand thandi hawaayein chal rahi thi. Vataavaran me ek shaanti thi.

Veer aur Ragini bhi khamosh the. Par unke dil ki dhadkane nahi. Ragini jitna chaahti thi ki woh apni desires ko control me rakhe wo utni hi zorr se baahar aane ka prayaas karti.

Aur fir usne shuruaat kii, "Veer!"

"H-Hmm?"

"Kya tumne jawaab ke baare me socha?"

Veer jaanta tha Ragini kis jawaab ki baat kar rahi thi. Apne pyaar ka izhaar wo kar chuki thi. Aur ab usse Jawaab chaahiye tha.

"Bhabhi mein..."

"Mein kya Veer!?"

"Mujhe shayad thode din aur..."

"Shut up!"

"Huh?"

"I had enough Veer. Boht bardaasht kar liya mene. Ab aur nahi."

Wo mud ke Veer ki orr dekhi. Aisa lag raha tha jese usne Veer ki aankho me kuch gira diya tha aur ab uski aankho me usse dhundne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Uski saasein boht tezz ho chuki thi. Seena zorro se upar neeche ho raha tha.

Wo aage badhi aur usne apne dono haatho se uske chehre ko thaam liya.

"Just how much more time it will take for you to kiss these damn lips? Huh!??", Wo madhoshi me usse dekh uchi awaaz me boli.

"W-Whattt?" Veer bhauchakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna tha?

Ragini ki garam garam saasein uske chehre aur hontho par pad rahi thi.

"Tumhe jab apne jawaab dena hai tab dena. But I won't stop now."

Aur bas itna bol, usne Veer ko apni orr ek jhatke me kheecha aur apne gulaabi glossy honth ko Veer ke hontho se chipka diya. Veer ki aankhein hairaani ke maare phatati chali gayi. Aur Ragini uske hontho ko ek behad hi bekaraar aurat ke bhaati choosne aur chabaane me lag gayi.

*Sluuuurrrrpppppp* *schliiiicckkkkkk*
*Mmmmmmm~*

Ragini ke badan me ek bijli daud gayi Veer ko choomte hi. Dono ke hontho ka sangam akhir ho hi gaya. Na jaane kabse Ragini iss lamhe ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Ki ek din Veer uske hontho ko apne hontho ki giraft me zorr se lega. Par ant me uss se ab aur sabr na hua. Usne khud hi Veer ke muh ko apne muh se laga liya. Aur thook ka mel milaap shuru ho gaya.

Bhale hi aasmaan saaf tha par Veer ko aisa laga jese aasmaan me aatishbaazi ho rahi thi. Aisa laga ek bomb uske andar bhi phatt chuka tha.

Usne kayi ladkiyo ko kiss kiya hua tha. Par ye... Ye kiss alag thi. Isme ek sharaarti bhaav tha. Ek melapann tha. Jo usse uksaa raha tha. Wo tha...

Apne bade bhai ki talaak shuda biwi ke hontho ko choomna... Usse galat dhang se bheechna aur masalna...

Sochte hi uska lund ek baar fir jhatka maar diya.

Ragini ke honth, itne naram, itne komal, wo Veer ke nichle honth ko kheechne me lage hue the. Uski makhmali sii jeebh Veer ke andhruni muh ko tatol tatol ke khoj rahi thi. Jese ek andheri gufa me ek raahi raasta khojta hai.

Uske badan se aati woh madak khushboo Veer ko nashe me daalne ke liye kaafi thi.

Veer toh kuch pal ke liye wahi baraf ki silli ki tarah jamm ke baitha hua tha. Jo kuch bhi kar rahi thi, woh Ragini hi kar rahi thi.

Aur fir ant me Veer haar gaya. Usne Ragini ko pakad zorr se usse choomna shuru kar diya. Bas waha dono ki choomne ki awaazein hi aane lagi...

Aur ab... Veer ko uss lipstick ka flavour pata chal chuka tha.

'Ohh God... It tastes like... It is... Vanilla... Damnnnn!!!!!!'

9 se 10 minute guzar chuke the dono ko. Aur uske baad hi jaake Ragini uske hontho se alag hui. Wo bhi sirf saans lene ke liye.

*Huff* *Huff*

Uski aankho me poori tarah se khumaari chhayi hui thi. Hawas bhi thi kahi kahi.

"Now you won't stop me Veer. Na jaane kitni raatein mene tadap tadap ke guzaari hai. *Huff* *huff* keval tumhare baare me soch soch ke..." Wo haafte hue boli, "Sirf tumhe soch soch ke mein raat me masturbate karti thi Veer. Imagining you taking me in your arms."

"!!!??" Veer stabdh reh gaya. Ragini apni baate aaj khul ke bata rahi thi.

"I will eat you to my heart's content."

Aur iss baar Veer ke badan me ek kampan fel gaya ye sunte hi. Ragini ek bhooke janvar ki tarah Veer ke hontho par toot padi.

Iss baar jab Veer ne usse zorr se pakda toh kuch hua...

*Ding*

[Mystic touch has been applied.]

'Ohhh Fuccckkkk noooooo!! Abhi nahi...!!!!'

Wo mann me chillaaya. Baat hi aisi thi.

Veer ne Fame Points se Scroll Hunt me Scroll khareeda tha. Aur jo usse waha se mila tha wo tha...

*Ding*

[Scroll ~ Mystic Touch.

Description ~ A technique to make your female partner sway just by your touch. A touch that will leave your women all flustered. It will only be applied by its own during romantic situations. It cannot be turned ON or OFF.

Do you want to consume the scroll?
Yes or No?

Warning : If you don't consume it within 24 hours, the scroll will disappear.]

Majbooran, Veer ko scroll consume karna hi pada. Warna scroll 24 ghanto ke andar gaayab ho jaata. Aur ab uske paas ye Mystic Touch Technique thi, jo apne aap hi romantic situations me active hoti thi.

Nateeja? Nateeja khud hi dekh lo aap...

Veer ke haath Mystic Touch activate hote hi jese hi Ragini ke kamar par gaye. Ragini pagal ho uthi. Wo macchli ki tarah machal uthi. Uski siskiya zorr se waha goonjne lagi.

Veer ke haatho ka harr ek touch usse alag hi charam sukh pohucha raha tha. Aur jab uska haath galti se Ragini ke thano par gaya toh Ragini ki chut ne apna paani chorr diya. Keval itne se touch se hi...

Wo nasheeli aankho se usse haafte hue dekhi, " Tumhaare hatho me jadu hai kya Veer? *huff* You want them. Right? Tumhe mere doodh chaahiye na Veer. Kaho?"

Achanak hi Ragini ne apne upar se woh safed top nikaal ke alag kar diya.

"Bhabhi... Ye aap...!???" Veer kuch keh paata ki iss se pehle hi Ragini ne apne haatho ko peeche le jaake apne badan se woh safed bra bhi alag kar dii.

Veer ke saamne ab behad hi kamaal ke sudol than maujood the. Aur jis tarah se Veer unhe ghoor raha tha, Ragini ka mann khilta hi jaa raha tha.

"Keval dekho nahi inhe Veer... *huff* *huff* Chooso... Chooso inhe... They are all yours. Come suck on them my baby..."

Aur Veer ko baalo se kheech usne apne than uske chehre me ghused diye. Ya yu kahe ki uska chehra apne thano me ghused diya.

"Ohhh Goddddd!!! Veeeerrrr!!!! My baby.... I wanted this for so long... Suck on my titties Veer... Claim them... Chooso... Yesss dear!!!!"

"Aahhhhhhnnn~ Chooso apni bhabhi ke doodh... Spank them... Masal do inhe Uffffff~ Kisss meee... Suck my lips Veeer..... Ohhh gooooddd... *slurp* Ohhhhh yessss darling... "

Ragini pe khumaar chadh chuka tha. Woh bekaabu ho chuki thi.

"Yesssss I love you... Darling.... Suck me... I love you soooo muchhhhh.... Mmmmm~ Give me hickeys Veerrrr... Suck my neck... My tits... My lips.... Nishaan chorr do Veeer.... Aahhhnnnnn~ Yessss baby... Just like that..."

"Ohhhh goddddd Veeerrr... Your touch... I came twice already... Kya hai inn haatho me? Claim me Veeerrrr!!! Claim me from your elder brother....!!!! Ahhhnnnn~ Yesssss!!! Dikhao apne uss haram khor Vivek bhaiya ko kese uski talak shuda patni ko pyaar dete hai Veeerrr... Aahhnnn maaaaa~"

Veer aur Ragini ke beech ye silsila kareeb 35 minute tak chala. Jab raat ka andhera aur ghana hone laga tab dono ko hosh aaya. Ragini pehle se ab kahi behtar thi. Aur hosh me thi. Ab jaake usse samajh aa raha tha usne kya kiya Veer ke saath aur bechaari ke gaal ab surkh laal the.

Par glaani zara bhi nahi. Woh khush thi usne jo bhi Veer ke saath kiya tha.

'Ohh God!!! Ye mene kesa behave kar diya? I... *blushes* God kya kya keh gayi mein Veer se. But it's not entirely my fault. His touch just... lightened my body up... It was so surreal. I hope Veer mujhe kisi hawas ki bhooki aurat ki tarah nahi samjhega.'

Wo mann me soch sharmaayi jaa rahi thi.

Aaj se unke beech ek nayi shuruaat ho chuki thi. Veer ko jab jawaab dena ho de... Par Ragini toh ab Veer se issi tarah se pyaar karne waali thi. Aaj uske andar ek nayi cheez ne janm le liya tha, Veer ko choomne ke baad. Aisi anubhooti usse pehle kabhi nahi hui thi.

Aur bas, issi tarah Veer aur uske beech ek naya rishta bana. Halaki iske baad unke beech filhaal kuch nahi hua. Veer ko kal Vegas jaana tha jis kaaran wo packing me lag gaya. Aur subah wo Nidhi, Shreya Juhi se milke aaya toh wahi Balhaar se kuch baatein kar ke.

Inhi sab me samay guzar chuka tha. Usse Karan se milne ka koi mauka nahi mila. Na hi Kaera aur Sonia se. Sonia toh wese bhi abhi baahar hi thi.

Aur agle din Veer Vegas ke liye nikal gaya.

"Hey~" Fir ek awaaz usse hosh me laayi.

Apne dhyaan se jab wo baahar aaya toh usne dekha ki bagal me Suhana sone ki taiyaari kar rahi thi.

Usse dhyaan aaya ki woh kal ki hui ghatnao ke baare me soch kho gaya tha. Khaaskar, Ragini ke baare me soch ke.

Ek smile uske hontho par sajj gayi usse yaad karte hi.

Suhana : Hey. Mein sone jaa rahi hu thodi derr. Tumhe kuch bhi chaahiye ho air hostesses ko keh sakte ho. Okay?

Veer : Alright!

Aur wo sone chali gayi. Dekhte hi dekhte inka ye lamba safar bhi jald hi khatam hone ko aa gaya.

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Plane airstrip par land hua. Las Vegas ki zameen par Veer aur Suhana apne kadam rakh chuke the.

Bahar aate hi unhe alag hi nazaara dekhne ko mila.




Jab wo airport ke exit par pohuche toh waha likha hua tha, Welcome to Las Vegas.



Aur airport se baahar aate hi Suhana aur Veer saamne ek luxury black Rolls Royce Ghost khadi hui thi.




Jese hi woh car ke nazdeek aaye.

*Click*

Car ka darwaaza khula aur ek khubsoorat sii lady ek long dress me baahar aayi. Chehre par halka makeup, hontho par lipstick, patle perr, khubsoorat baal aur pyaara sa mukhda.




Veer ne uss aurat ko dekhte hi...

'Check!!'

*Ding*

[Name : Divya
Age : 35
Bio : Divya, ek India aur Las vegas ki citizen hai. Uska pati Las vegas se hai isliye usse bhi yaha ki citizenship asaani se mil gayi. Divya ek bhaarteeya naari hai par usne shaadi ek videshi ladke se kii hai. Koi santaan nahi hai filhaal. Divya aur uska pati dono hi detectives hai. She loves to read people and toy with them. She also flirts a lot with young men. But she never does it seriously. Just to make fun of them. She likes playing with young men's amateur feelings. Beware!

Favourability : 36
Relationship : Strangers.]

Aur Status padhte hi Veer chaukanna ho gaya.

[This woman.... Tch...!!!]

She was a bad news. Yaha tak ki Pari bhi iss aurat ko dekh ke kuch khaas khush nahi thi.

Aur idhar Divya ne jese hi Suhana ko dekha woh aage aake uske gale se lag gayi,

Divya : Ohhhh my... Beautiful darling~ Muaaah~ muaaahh~ I missed you so much Suhana....!!!!

Kehte hue usne Suhana ka gaal choom liye. A typical foreign greeting way.

Suhana (smiles) : Haa haa pata hai mujhe. Tabhi toh iss tarah mujhe bulaayi ho tum.

Divya : Ohhh Trust me dear. Boht serious issue hai.

Suhana : Alright! I will trust you on this one.

Divya : Ohh you naughty one haahaa~ And heyyyyyyy... Who else we got here? Hmm?

Uski nigaahein fir Veer par padi. Aur usse dekhte hi uski aankho me ajeeb sii chamak aake guzri. Jo Veer ki nazro se chhup ke na gayi.

Divya (smiles) : Welcome Veer!!

Veer (surprised) : You know about me??

Veer ki nazre pal bhar ke liye Divya ko ghoor kar scan kari... Favourability 36 thi. Matlab wo usse jaanti thi. Par kese?

Divya (smiles) : Well! Jab tumhaari itni tareefe sunn'ne ko milengi toh ye toh zaahir sii baat hai na? Haha~

Kehte hue Divya usse upar se neeche tak khaa jaane waali nazro se dekhi. Yaha tak ki usne apna nichla honth bhi daato se daba liya. Aur woh ye sab Veer ko jaan bujh ke dikha kar rahi thi.

Idhar Veer hairaan hote hue Divya ki harqato ko dekhne laga.

'Meri tareefe? Huh?'

Fir uski nigaahe Suhana par gayi jo usse apni orr dekhta paa kar hi apna muh ferr lii. Toh wo sab kuch samajh gaya. Aur dheere se bas muskuraaya.

'Toh ye Suhana madam ko meri tareef karna bhi aata hai haan??'

[Suhana is impressed with you master. And who wouldn't be? You are everything a girl wants hehe~]

'Ohh Pari~ You are too sweet.'

[Awww~ Thank you maaassstteerr!!]

Divya : Welcome!!!! Welcome to Vegas!! Ek aisi city jo gambling, fine dining, entertainment, aur apni nightlife ke liye jaani jaati hai. You name it. Vegas has it all.

Divya apne dono haatho ko hawa me felaate hue gol gol ghoomi, Veer ko iss adhbhut city ke darshan karwa rahi thi woh. Ab woh waqai city ke darshan karwa rahi thi ya 360° ghoom ke revealing kapdo me apne, jism ke darshan karwa rahi thi? Ye kehna thoda mushqil tha.

Divya : Jankaari ke liye bata du ki iss city me 24/7 gambling, drinking aur baaki cheeze allowed hai.

Muskuraate hue woh Veer ki taraf aankh maarte hue boli, fir achanak hi uske kaan ke paas aake dheemi awaaz me usne kaha,

"Including male focused entertainment."

'Wha....!?' Veer uske iss tarah paas aane se thoda hichak utha.

[Master ye aurat kuch zyada hi ucchal rahi hai. Hmph~ I don't like her vibes.]

Divya Veer ko ishaara de rahi thi. Ki Vegas me Veer ko sab kuch mil sakta hai. Sex bhi. Wo bhi ayyaashiyo waala. Threesome, foursome, orgy?? Name it all. Yaha sab asaani se uplabdh tha. Aur Divya ka ishaara ussi orr tha.

Divya : But ye sab meri prescence me nahi.

Lekin usne agli baat rakh ke saari misunderstanding dur kar dii. Ek prakaar se woh Veer ko Suhana ki nazro me test karna chaah rahi thi. Wo dekhna chaah rahi thi ki Suhana ko jab pata lagega ki Veer Vegas me sex dhundh raha hai toh uska kya reaction hoga? In other words, she wanted to catch Veer offguard.

Par sadly, Divya keval Veer ki baato se parichit thi, uss se nahi. Warna aisi harqat nahi kari hoti. Veer bas khamosh tha aur
Divya ye dekh thoda aur curious ho gayi.

Wahi Suhana bhi apni sakha ki chaal samajh chuki thi. Aur yadi sach kaha jaaye toh woh apni dost ke iss ravaiyye se bilkul bhi khush nahi thi. Suhana samajh chuki thi ki Divya Veer ke saath kya karna chaah rahi thi. Usse be-izzat karna. Aur kahi na kahi Suhana ko ye pasand nahi aaya, lekin woh khamosh rahi.

Divya : You do have a nice gigolo Suhana, I must say. Haha~ Anyways, let's go.

Wo haasya taur par kehte hue mudi toh,

Veer : Take back what you just said.

Divya : Huh???

Peeche se Veer ki tezz awaaz ne usse palatne par majboor kar diya.

Veer : Take back what you just said... NOW!!!!

Suhana : DIVYYAAAAA!!!!

Jab Suhana bhi uchi awaaz me chillaayi toh Divya ki curiousity Veer ke prati aur bhi zyaada badh gayi. Uski apni dost ek ladke ke liye uss se uchi awaaz me boli? Okay! Now this was strange.

Divya ne seedhe seedhe Veer ko gigolo ka naam de diya tha. Veer ko gussa nahi aaega toh kya aaega? Gigolo darasal uss shaks ko kaha jaata hai jab ek umr me badi aurat apni umr se chote ek naujavaan ladke ko apne saath rakhti hai, uska kharcha uthaati hai taaki badle me woh uske saath bistar par kuch rang reliya mana sake.

Divya ne yahi anumaan lagaaya tha ki Veer Suhana ka koi gigolo tha, par aisa bilkul bhi nahi tha. Veer toh keval Suhana ka favour poora karne aaya tha. Warna woh aata hi nahi. Aur ye aurat usse ek gigolo ki upaadhi de rahi thi? The nerves!!! The audacity...

Divya : Ohhhh!! Interesting! Interesting! Mujhe laga tum Gaurav se ab tak bore ho gayi hogi Suhana. Haha~ I didn't expect you to be so loyal. Anyways, I do apologize. Let's get moving now.

Aur woh palat ke aage jaane lagi. Divya ke aage jaate hi idhar Suhana Veer ke paas aayi aur usse ahaat karte hue boli,

Suhana : Always keep a distance from her. Tumhaare bhale ke liye hi bol rahi hu.

Veer : Mujhe laga tha aap unki acchi dost hogi. Par dekh ke lagta nahi.

Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?

Veer : Alright!

Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.

Veer : Hmm~

Suhana : Let's go now!!

Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.
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Ab tak...

Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?

Veer : Alright!

Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.

Veer : Hmm~

Suhana : Let's go now!!

Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.

Ab aage...

*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*

Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.

Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!




Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,

Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?

Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya : I can gift you one you know?

Suhana : No thanks!!!

Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.

Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,

Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.

Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.

Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?

Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.

Suhana : Umm... I guess...

Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,

Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~

Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.

Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.

Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.

Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.

[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]

'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'

Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?

Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?

Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.

Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.

Suhana : Fine~

Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~

Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?

Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.

Veer : Whaaatttt?

Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?

Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~

Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?

Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.

Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.

Suhana : Stop it Divya...

Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.

Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.

'I see~'

Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~

Veer : Ohh!

Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.

'Ohh! I see now!'

[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]

Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.

Suhana : No! I don't need one.

Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.

Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.

[This bitttttcchhhh~]

Suhana (frowns) : Divya...

Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!

Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...

Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?

Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.

Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.




Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.

Divya : Okay~ Here we are...

Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.




Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.

Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.

Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?

Veer : It's nice...

Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.

Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.




Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?

Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.

Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.

Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.

Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~

Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.

[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]

Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.




Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'

'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'

[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]

'Naah!'

30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?

Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.

'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'

[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]

'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'

[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]

'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'

[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]

'Go ahead!'

*Ding*

[All done Master.]

[Ye raha aapka full status.]






'Good!!'

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Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.

Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.

*Thud*

Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.

Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.

Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...

'Huh!!???'

Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.

'There's something wrong.'

Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.

Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.

Divya : Evidence?

Ladka : Yes ma'am!

Divya : Okay! You can leave now!

Aur wo chala gaya.

Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.

Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...

Suhana : This...

Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.

Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.

Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.

Veer : And what about me?

Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.




Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.

Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!

Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.

Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.

Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.

Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,

"You are not allowed here brat!!!"

Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.

White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.

Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!

Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...

Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...

Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.

'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'

[Yes master!!!]

Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,

Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.

Veer : I see...

Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.

Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.

Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...

Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?

Suhana : Exactly!!!

Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...

Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.

Qatl ki...

Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...

Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.

Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.

Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.

Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.

Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...

"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"

Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.

Khaas kar uss paper ko...

Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,

Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.

Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.

Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.

Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.

Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...

Soul shall burn!!!​

Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.

Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.

Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.

Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...

Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.

Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.

Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...

Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...

Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.

Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.

Aur uske baad...

*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*

Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.

Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.

Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.

Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.

Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.

Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.

Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.

Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.

Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.

Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?

Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.

Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??

Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.

Suhana : Hmm...

Divya : You will help me. Right?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!

Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?

Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..

Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...

Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.

Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.

Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.

Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??

Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...

Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.

"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."

Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?

Suhana : Divya?????

Veer : !!??

Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...

Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"

Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.

***

Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.

Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.

Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.

"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.

"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."

"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"

"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."

"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"

Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.

Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.

"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"

Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,

"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."

Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.

*Thud*

Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.

Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.

Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.

'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'

***

Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.

'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'

Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.

Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.

Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,

"Hello?"

Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!

Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?

Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!

Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?

Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.

Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-

Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!

Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
Baaki, keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!

SHAANDAAR AWESOME EXCELLENT FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

 

[hiakarji]

Werewolf bhai ab health kesi hy apki

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update .investigators ka khoon ho raha hai aur khooni ka koi ata pata nahi isliye divya ne suhana se madad maangi hai .
daniel ne party me jo dekha usko paheli me likh diya .aisa kya ho raha tha waha jisko dekhne se daniel ko apni jaan gawani padi . aur ek detective hote huye bhi uske paseene chhut gaye .

favour ke badle favour ka idea divya ka hai jisko suhana bhi follow karti hai .
suhana ne kuch jyada hi taarif kar di thi veer ki isliye divya ne usko bhi saath laane ko kaha, par kya khud itni badi detective hone ke baad bhi usko suhana ki jarurat pad gayi ,suhana ke paas itna tezz dimaag hai kya .

aur yaha bhawna veer ki talash me aayi hai aisa lagta hai aur ab wo apni dost purvi se madad lene ka soch rahi hai .

 

[Mahakaal]

Great update

 

[Tiger(the unique hero)]

Update - 96 ~ Riddle
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Ab tak...

Suhana : Hum acche dost hi hai. Par woh aisi hi hai. Aur lagta hai woh tum me interested hai. Wo koshish karegi tum se harr baat jaan'ne ki but you better stay silent okay?

Veer : Alright!

Suhana : Aur jitna ho sake uss se duri bana ke rakhna.

Veer : Hmm~

Suhana : Let's go now!!

Aur Divya ke hi peeche peeche Suhana sang Veer bhi chal diye. Apne suitcase ko kheechte hue Veer aage badha, uski nazre paini hokar Divya ki peeth par jam gayi.

Ab aage...

*Vrrrrrooooooooommmm*

Car Las Vegas ki makkhan jesi smooth roads par bhaag rahi thi. Divya car drive kar rahi thi, aur Veer-Suhana dono hi peeche baithe hue the.

Car ka interior dekh, Veer kaafi fascinated tha. Kya hi gazab ka interior tha. Adhbhut!




Suhana ne bhi ye Divya ki car notice kii toh wo puch uthi,

Suhana : Ye kab lii tumne?

Divya (smiles) : Looks nice right? Ye mene kuch mahine pehle hi lii. Ek tough case solve ho chuka tha toh uski khushi me ye mene khareed lii. Do you like it?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya : I can gift you one you know?

Suhana : No thanks!!!

Divya : Awww~ Hamesha ki tarah tumhara jawaab aaj bhi naa hi hai.

Veer surprised tha. Suhana ne ek car ka offer yu hi thukra diya? Kyu? Veer ne Suhana ko dekha toh woh jese samjhi ki Veer uss se kuch puchna chaah raha tha. Fir woh Veer ko samjhaate hue boli,

Suhana : Divya ek detective hai. Kaafi famous yaha par. Aur uske husband bhi. Dono hi popular hai crime studies me.

Par Veer ko toh pehle se hi ye pata tha. Usne Divya ko check jo kar liya tha. Fir bhi usne naatak karte hue haan me sarr hila diya. Divya se zyada Veer ko toh iss car me interest tha.

Veer : Ye kitne ki hogi?

Veer ne wese toh pehle hi system se car ko check kar liya tha. Lekin uske bio me price mentioned nahi tha. Jis kaaran se usse Suhana se ye sawaal puchna pada.

Suhana : Umm... I guess...

Suhana jawab de paati ki uss se pehle hi Divya ne unn dono ko mirror me dekh khud hi jawaab de diya,

Divya : Yadi tumhari Indian currency me convert kare toh, around 7-8 crore kii hai ye car. Veer!! Maybe uss se zyaada bhi haha~

Wo mirror se hi usse aankh maarte hue boli. Khaas kar uske naam ko thoda zorr deke pukaari aur sharaarti dhang se muskuraayi.

Veer unfazed tha. Iss nakli flirt ke aage wo jhuk jaaye aur mantra mugdh ho jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Bhale hi Divya khubsoorat thi par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki Veer harr sundar ladki ke saamne pighal jaaye.

Wo jaanta tha Divya ke status me kya likha hua tha. Jawaan ladko ke saath flirt karna aur unki feelings ke saath khelna uski aadat thi. Ek hobby. Behtar yahi tha ki uski befaaltu ki flirtings par dhyaan na diya jaaye.

Aur Veer ne wahi kiya. Jab usne Divya ki harqato par koi reaction na diya, toh Divya aur curious ho uthi. Uski muskaan aur fel gayi.

[Master~ Hum iss se bhi behtar car lenge future me. Don't worry!]

'Yes Pari!!! Definitely!!'

Suhana : Toh? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?

Divya : Mere ghar of course, aur kaha?

Suhana : Okay! Par tumne toh kaha tha ki serious issue hai.

Divya : Of course dear. Uske liye hume shaam ko nikalna hoga. Meeting hogi aaj. You have to be there. Isliye toh tumhe abhi ghar le jaa rahi hu. Acche se araam karna. Jetlag bhi ho raha hoga abhi.

Suhana : Fine~

Divya : Wese maan'na padega Veer. Waqai tum boht handsome ho. Mujhe laga nahi tha Suhana jab tumhe yaha leke aaegi toh mujhe itna bada surprise milega haha~

Veer : Aapko pata tha ki mein yaha aa raha hu?

Divya : Hahaha~ Pata tha? In fact, I was the one who told her to bring you along.

Veer : Whaaatttt?

Ab ye ek nayi news thi Veer ke liye. Divya ne hi Suhana ko kaha tha ki Veer ko yaha leke aaye?

Divya : Well yes! Suhana ko mera ek purana favour repay karna tha. Toh mene uss se ye karne ko kaha. Tumhe kya laga? Suhana ko ye favours ke saath khelne ki tricks kisne sikhaayi hai? Hahaha~

Veer : Whaaattttt!!!!?

Veer ko ab samajh aaya tha ki Suhana jo itne favours leti thi uss se. Wo asal me Divya ki hi den thi. Usse dekh ke hi Suhana ne ye seekha tha.

Suhana idhar apna muh chhipaaye hue thi. Uske gaal iss baar thode laal the.

Suhana : Stop it Divya...

Divya : Hahahaha~ Why now!? Dekha tumne Veer? She learned it from me. Well! Tumhari kaafi tareefe kari thi Suhana ne toh mene uss se yahi kaha tha ki bring Veer along with you. Mein bhi toh dekho kya khaas baat hai tum me? And you both are here now.

Veer khamosh reh gaya. Toh ye maajra tha. Suhana ke upar ateet me kabhi Divya ne koi favour kiya tha. Aur uske badle me aaj Suhana idhar aayi hui thi. Uss favour ko chukaane. Saath me Veer bhi lapete me tha.

'I see~'

Divya : Toh ab pata chala tumhe wo kyu meri car ka offer nahi le rahi? Hahahahaha~

Veer : Ohh!

Tohh ye baat thi. Yadi Suhana Divya ke haatho dii gayi car le leti, toh kahi na kahi ye bhi ek tarah se favours me hi gina jaata.

'Ohh! I see now!'

[This woman is so crafty Masterrr~]

Divya : Par Suhana dear. Sach me mein koi favour nahi kar rahi. I can gift you a same car like this you know.

Suhana : No! I don't need one.

Divya : Anyways!!! Veer!!! I'm not at all disappointed after seeing you now. You have definitely piqued my interest.

Usne kehte hue ek baar fir aankh maar apna nichla honth daato tale daba liya.

[This bitttttcchhhh~]

Suhana (frowns) : Divya...

Divya : Alright alright!! I won't snatch your Boyfriend Suhana. Calm down!!!

Suhana : Whaaaatttt? He's not my Boyfriend Divya. What are you talking about??? I'm already married. Tum jaanti ho. Don't joke like that...

Divya : Hey hey~ Calm down! Kya hua? I was just kidding okay?

Suhana kuch na boli. Par Veer ne ye zaroor notice kiya tha ki uske gaalo par halki laali chhaayi hui thi.

Aur fir car me ek shaanti chha gayi. Vegas ki uchi uchi buildings, wo tezz raftaar me aati jaati gaadiya, bade bade fly overs dekh Veer uss nazaare me kho gaya.




Aur car kab Divya ke ghar ke baahar aa kar ruk gayi iska pata hi nahi chala. Samay yu beet gaya.

Divya : Okay~ Here we are...

Car se utar kar dekha toh Divya ka ghar kaafi bada aur aalishaan tha.




Ghar ke theek saamne bagal se ek bada sa swimming pool bhi tha. Jagah jagah hare bhare ped paudhe aur sundarta badhaane ke liye kuch anokhe patthar bhi rakhe hue the.

Ek aisa ghar, jo ek baar dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye.

Divya : I hope tumhe pasand aaya hoga? Veer?

Veer : It's nice...

Divya : Well! Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~ Anyways! Come inside.

Andar aate hi Veer aur bhi dang reh gaya. Interior decor toh aur bhi khubsoorat tha.




Veer : Kitne log rehte hai yaha?

Veer ko jawaab pata tha. Lekin fir bhi usse apne aap ko anjaan dikhaana tha.

Divya : Just me and my husband. Make yourselves comfortable. Mein coffee ready karti hu. You guys can take a bath and freshen up. Washroom is right there on the right. Fir lunch ki taiyaari karti hu.

Suhana : Mujhe pata hai already kaha hai washroom.

Divya (smiles) : Ohh! Of course dear~ Tum pehli baar thodi hi aa rahi ho. Mein toh Veer ko bata rahi thi. Fufu~

Uski paini nazar ek baar fir Veer ki aankho se pal bhar ke liye takraayi.

[Maaaastttteerrrr~ Don't look at her!!! Hmph~]

Veer Pari ki baat maan washroom me chal diya. Aur andar aate hi wo ek baar fir ghar ki luxury dekh mugdh reh gaya.




Usse kuch derr pehle ke Divya ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Ye waala badi mushqil se mila hai. Aur thoda mehnga bhi hai. Haha~'

'No wonder ye mehnga mila hoga. Really! Mujhe bhi ek ghar lena hai. Then, Bhabhi mein aur baaki hum sab uss waale me raha karenge.'

[Hmm hmm Master! Definitely!!! Master bathtub me bath loge aap?]

'Naah!'

30 ghante ke safar ke baad, usse zaahir tha ki ek behatreen shower ki zaroorat thi. Body odour aur sweat ko hataane ka sabse behtar upaay aur kya hi tha?

Shower ke neeche wo khade Pari se baato me lag gaya.

'Tumhe kya lagta hai Pari? Divya! Kya woh kuch chhupa rahi hai? Usne mujhe saath me laane ko kyu kaha Suhana se?'

[Don't talk about her Masteeerrr!!! I don't like that bitch. Hmph~ Aur usko aap nahi dekhoge ab. I don't like it.]

'Haha~ Ye tumhe kya ho gaya achanak se? Are you jealous?'

[I... I... Aaargghh!! Mene kaha na Massttteerrr!! Usse mat dekho. Aap mujhse baat kiya karo.]

'Alright Alright! Pari! Suno... Mere stats me intelligence 10 points se badha do aur baaki stats 20 points se.'

[As you wish Master. 900 points aapke use hoenge isme.]

'Go ahead!'

*Ding*

[All done Master.]

[Ye raha aapka full status.]






'Good!!'

***

Shower ke baad, Veer aur Suhana dono ne hi halka fulka khana khaane ke baad araam farmaaya. Jetlag se nijaat paane ke liye.

Aur sooraj dhalte hi wo dobaara se car me baith chal diye.

*Thud*

Car ka door band hua aur tezz kadmo ke saath Suhana, Divya aur Veer crime investigation ke ek office ke andar jaane lage.

Jagah jagah afra tafri ka mahaul tha. Veer ko aisa laga jese woh kisi stationary ki factory me ghus gaya tha, kyuki siwae panno ki gandh ke alawa waha aur koi gandh samajh me hi nahi aa rahi thi.

Chaaro orr nazre ghumaate hue wo peeche peeche hi chalta raha jab achanak se...

'Huh!!???'

Ek ajeeb sii feeling usse mehsoos hui. Badan me rongte khade ho gaye. Usse aisa laga jese usse koi dekh raha tha, ghoor ke.

'There's something wrong.'

Andar aate hi Divya ne ek ek jodi gloves fekte hue dono Suhana aur Veer ko diye. Jo dono ne hi pehen liye.

Uske baad ek jawaan sa ladka daudate bhaagte hue aaya, wo haatho me ek plastic ki transparent thaili liye hue tha.

Divya : Evidence?

Ladka : Yes ma'am!

Divya : Okay! You can leave now!

Aur wo chala gaya.

Veer ne notice kiya ki aas paas ke log unhe kuch zyaada hi acchi nazro se nahi dekh rahe the.

Packet ke andar evidence maujood tha. Kisi crime ka...

Suhana : This...

Divya : Issi ke liye tumhe yaha bulaaya hai.

Veer : Yaha pe koi object kyu nahi kar raha? Mein ye mehsoos kar sakta hu ki ye log mujhe yaha paa kar khush nahi hai. Fir bhi koi kuch keh nahi raha.

Divya : Kyuki mein khadi hu tumhare saath. Veer! Suhana ek prakaar se meri assistant hai. Aisa samajh lo ki usse yaha ki thodi boht access mili hui hai.

Veer : And what about me?

Uske sawaal par Divya usse apna sarr upar kar dekhi.




Divya : Kaha na... Tum mere saath khade ho. They won't do anything.

Suhana : Mujhe ye batao baat kya hai!? Jaldi!!!

Aur fir Divya ne evidence ko baahar nikaala.

Andar khoon se sana ek pen tha. Ek kaagaz ka tukda aur uss kaagaz ke tukde par kuch likha hua tha.

Suhana : Mein kuch samjhi nahi.

Divya Suhana ko kuch samjha paati ki tabhi,

"You are not allowed here brat!!!"

Ek kathor awaaz unke peeche se aayi. Palat ke dekha toh Divya ka pati, Nicholas khada hua tha.

White shirt ke upar ek long coat daale, aur sarr par typical detective waali cap pehen wo waha khada unhe ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar Veer ko.

Divya (khade hote hue) : Nik!!!

Nicholas : Tell him to get lost. Only Sonny babe can stay...

Suhana : I told you not to call me by that name ever again...

Pal bhar me teeno ek dusre ke upar chadh pade. Jaha Nicholas Veer ke yaha hone se niraash tha toh wahi Divya uske iss ravaiyye se gussa thi aur wahi Suhana isliye tilmila uthi kyuki Nik ne usse Sonny kehke pukaar diya.

'Lagta hai Suhana ka past inn dono se juda hua hai.'

[Yes master!!!]

Mauka dekh ke Suhana ne confused Veer ki orr jhukte hue usse samjhaaya,

Suhana : Divya ek personal detective hai Veer. Personal detectives general cases me apni hastakshep nahi karte. Inhe paise zyaada milte hai. Well... Ek prakaar se ye dalaal jese hote hai. Isliye Divya ke paas itna paisa hai.

Veer : I see...

Suhana : Nik bhi ek personal detective hai. Aur isliye yaha ki general investigation unit hume acche se nahi leti kabhi. Kyuki harr tough cases ko aksar hum log solve kar dete hai. Jiske chalte GIU haath par haath dhare baithe reh jaate hai.

Veer : Tabhi woh hume ghoor ke dekh rahe the.

Suhana : Haan! Par Nik... Well! He likes to keep some lackeys around. Wo GIU me apne chele bana ke rakha hua hai. Jis kaaran se uska yaha virodh utna nahi hota. Par Divya ka aisa nahi hai. She doesn't like boot licking...

Veer : In other words, Nik paisa fek yaha chele banaaye hue hai toh wahi aapki friend Divya wahi paise liye apni jebo me daal rahi hai!?

Suhana : Exactly!!!

Yaha Divya ne jese tese Nik ko manaaya toh maamla shaant hua aur Veer ke yaha hone se bhi ab koi dikkat nahi thi. Filhaal ke liye...

Nik samet baaki investigators bhi baithe hue the. Screen par ek ke baad ek graphic images aa rahi thi.

Qatl ki...

Aur qatl bhi kiska? Unke apne ek investigator ka...

Saamne khada Nik ne jab bolna shuru kiya, toh sab shaant ho gaya.

Kal!!! Kal hamaare crime investigations ke members me se ek bade hi mehanti investigator ne apni jaan kho dii.

Jaan khoyi nahi, usse bedardi aur badi hi kroorta se maara gaya.

Daniel hamaara khaas tha. Par jaate jaate apne antim palo me usne hamaare liye ek sandesha chorra hai. Hume kuch bataane ke liye.

Aur hum iski teh tak jaake Daniel ke hathiyaare ko saza dilwaa kar hi rahenge...

"YEEEESSSSSSSS!!!"

Sabhi ek saath waha par chillaaye. Nik ne jab kehna band kiya toh usne evidence Divya ke haatho se lete hue saamne sabhi ko dikhaaya.

Khaas kar uss paper ko...

Jisme Daniel ki hi likhawat me likha hua tha,

Heinous thoughts destroys the mind.
Often the glee tuns into, Unhappiness.

Sorrow remains but shall be forgotten. Emergence of a new beginning prevails.

Opulent, rich thoughts fills the mind once more.
Fend off the fiend this time.

Kindle the fire in yourself. Intensify it. Lure the evil out of it. Lecherous demons shall be punished.

Escape if you realize you cannot handle it.
Remember, there ain't a single one, if you do get caught...

Soul shall burn!!!​

Aur uss parche me likhi gayi saari likhaawat peeche badi sii screen par ujaagar ho gayi.

Panne me jagah jagah khoon laga hua tha. Zaahir tha ki kitni hi jaldbaazi me Daniel ne likha hoga isse. Ek paheli thi. Jo kisi orr ishaara kar rahi thi.

Las Vegas ki harr guzarti raat ki tarah kal raat bhi, Daniel keval aur keval ek party me gaya tha apne jeevan ki rozzmarra busy life se thoda relaxation paane ke liye.

Par dikkat tab ho gayi jab woh...

Ussi hotel me ho rahi kisi aur party me ghus gaya. Ek aisi party jidhar usse kabhi nahi ghusna chaahiye tha.

Daniel akela tha. Uske saath koi aur uski pehchaan ka nahi tha. Party me harr vyakti aankho me mask lagaaye anjaan logo se baatein kar rahe the. Daniel ko kya pata tha ki uski itni choti si bhul uski jaan lene waali thi.

Jese hi wo uss party me ghusa...

Na jaane usne aisa kya dekha ya aisa kya suna ki usne forun hi office me team ko call lagaana chaaha. Wo Paseene se tar batar...

Lekin jese uske haatho se phone chhina liya gaya tha. Phone se keval Daniel ka hello hi sunn'ne ko mil paaya.

Shayad koi usse maarne ki koshish kar raha tha. Bhaago!!!!! Yahi khayaal aaya usse. Daniel jese chakma dene me kuch waqt ke liye toh qamyaab bhi ho gaya. Aur ussi beech usne ye likha.

Aur uske baad...

*Sppllluuuurrrtttt*

Subah uski laash hotel ke baahar dustbin me paayi gayi.

Police sahet investigators site ka muaayna lene pohuche par siwae Daniel ke khoon ke alaawa unhe aur kuch bhi haasil nahi hua.

Hotel me puch taach ki toh pata laga ki hotel me party me boht saare log aaye the. Aur jidhar Daniel ko maara gaya, waha koi bhi cctv camera maujood nahi tha.

Yaha tak ki... Footprints bhi saaf saaf ujaagar nahi ho paaye.

Evidence ke taur par kuch bhi nahi chorra tha hatyaare ne. Daniel ki maut chaaku ke vaar se hui thi. Filhaal toh blood ki jaanch aur Daniel ka post mortem hi kuch bata sakte the. Fir bhi eye witnesses ke liye khoj jaari thi.

Aur wo clue... Jisse Daniel ne likha tha. Zaahir hai wo clue hi tha.

Nik ne jab bolna band kiya toh woh baahar chala gaya. Tough cases me Divya aur Nik dono ko hi yaad kiya jaata tha. Bhale hi koi unhe pasand kare ya na kare. Akhir professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti thi.

Assistant Sheriff se khaas pehchaan bhi thi Nik ki. Jis kaaran se usse aur Divya ko aksar ye cases mil jaate the.

Nateeja? Paisa aur tarakki.

Suhana : Toh ye baat hai? Isliye tumne mujhe yaha bulaaya?

Divya : Hmm! Daniel pehla nahi hai Suhana.

Suhana : Tumhara matlab...!??

Divya : Yes! Daniel teesra shikaar hai. Pehle do investigators bhi maare gaye. Aur unke murderers ka pata bhi nahi chala abhi tak. Par iss baar Daniel... Wo khaas tha team ka. Aur ye ussi ki wajah se jo usne hamare liye ek note chorra hai... Mujhe pehle hi pata tha ye saare murders connected hai. Isliye... I called for your help.

Suhana : Hmm...

Divya : You will help me. Right?

Suhana : Hmm~

Divya (smiles) : Thanks!!!

Suhana : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer!?

Veer ki aankhein projector par hi jami hui thi. Uss likhawat par... Daniel ne jo likha tha..

Uska saral shabdo me matlab ye tha ki...

Daniel aagah kar raha tha. Mann ke bhre vichaaro se dur raho. Ye waha le jaate hai jaha kabhi nahi jaana chahiye. Aur baad me ye musibat me daal dete hai. Aisi musibat jis se aap baahar nahi aa sakte.

Aur jab aapko pata lag jaaye ki aap baahar nahi aa sakte. Toh bhaagiye iss se. Bhaagiye!!! Warna... Ye maut ka kaaran bante hai.

Kuch aisa hi likha hua tha ghuma fira ke Daniel ne.

Par inn sab ka uske murder se kya lena dena??

Divya khud zorr dete hue dekhne lagi jab kuch derr baad hi...

Uske poore badan ke ruye khade ho gaye aur wo apni jagah se chillaate hue uth khadi hui hai.

"Aaaaaaaaaaahh....."

Nik : Whaaatttt!!!?

Suhana : Divya?????

Veer : !!??

Ek ek ki nazar uske upar jamm gayi...

Aur wo haklaate hue fir boli,
"I-I got it... It was so easy!! But nooooo!!!!! Noo no no no no.... This is huge!!!!! It's a big problem... Ohhhhh goooodddd!!!!"

Divya jese paagal ho chali thi. Na jaane usne aisa kya dhundh liya tha Daniel ki likhawat me.

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Mumbai...
Evening ~ 6 : 24 PM

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Aasmaan se ek vimaan neeche utar airstrip par land kiya.

Andar se ek aurat aur ek naujavaan khubsoorat ladki baahar nikli.

Aur wo ek cab me sawaar ho gayi.

"Hum kidhar jaa rahe hai? Kuch toh kahiye!" Wo ladki kheejte hue puchi.

"Mene kaha na! Tum ek bhi sawaal nahi karogi."

"Par mujhe jaan'ne ka haq hai. Hum yaha kis se milne aaye hai? Aur kya karne?"

"Mein abhi nahi bata sakti."

"Par kyuuuuu? Aap aisa kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse!?"

Lekin uss aurat ne ek na suni. Cab ek hotel ke saamne ruki aur dono hi mahilaaye andar chali gayi.

Uss aurat ne receptionist ko kuch diya aur badle me kamre ki chaavi thaam wo ladki ke saath upar kamre ki orr chali gayi.

"Akhir kab tak aap mujhse chhupaogi?"

Ek baar fir ladki uchi awaaz me puchi,

"Ek baar me samajh me nahi aati kya Tej??? Mene kaha hai na. Mein nahi bata sakti abhi."

Jii haan! Ye Tej aur Bhavna hi thi.

*Thud*

Aur kamre ke hi andar Tej ko lock kar Bhavna baahar chal dii.

Gusse me aa kar Tej ne apna bag yu hi bistar par patka aur woh window khol kisi soch me doob gayi.

Mumbai ki ye mand mand hawa pata nahi kyu par... Usse ek apnepann ka ehsaas de rahi thi.

'I feel strange... Somewhat... Familiar!!'

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Wahi baahar idhar Bhavna ghanghor chinta me thi. Uske haath mobile ko thaame hue the aur zorr zorr se kaanp rahe the.

'That was it.... Yes!!! That was it... Mein galat ho hi nahi sakti. Meri aankhein chakma khaa hi nahi sakti. I definitely saw it. Aur yadi wo chori ka nahi hai then he is none other than...'

Sochte sochte ek sihran uske badan me machal gayi.

Aankh band kar ke bhi wo pendant ko maatr chhu kar pehchaan sakti thi. Toh dekhna to dur ki baat thi.

Usne fatafat ek call bhidaaya,

"Hello?"

Bhavna : Hello! Purvi!!!!!

Purvi : Haan? Bhavna? Kya tum ho?

Bhavna : Haan! Mein hi hu, Purvi! Bhavna!

Purvi : Oh my god!! Kaha se bol rahi ho tum? Kaha thi itne din? Ab yaad kiya mujhe?

Bhavna : Purvi! I'm sorry... Par unn sab ka samay nahi hai.

Purvi : H-Hey calm down you know-

Bhavna : I need you!!!!! Right NOW!!!!

Purvi : H-Huh???
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
I'm still not fuly recovered yet. Toh full potential se nahi likh paaya hu iss update ko. But like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Thodi paheliya, thodi mysteries, thoda romance aur dherr saara action aana shuru hoega ab. Sorry for the late update too.
Baaki, keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!

To akhir kar veer ka las vegas me aane ka reason pata chal hi Gaya. Aur ye kya bhavna veer ko dhundte hue firse Mumbai aa gayi. Only God and writer knows what will happen.
Anyways Update was excellent.
Waiting for next update

 

[hiakarji]

Waiting for next thrilling update

 

[Hiran]

Aapki update ki timing Sir nani yaad dila deti h...
Mne to socha tha firse bed par baithe lappy apni thighs par rakh bagal me snacks khaate khaate update padhungi. Par update bohut hi late aaya. Mne to expect bhi ni kiya tha...

Subah dekha to pata chala ki update aa bhi gaya baba...

Aur majboori me mujhe turant update padhna padha. (Bina padhe main raat tak kese rehti? )

1) Update me jaha jaha aapne jo jo pics use kii h... Unke liye taaliyaa... Ekdum to the point images. Aur Divya to sach me hot nikli... Mujhe laga tha shayad first appearance me aisa lag raha h par nahi jii... She's really hot. Considering she's 35...
Yahi baat to mujhe pasand aati h... Aap peeche nahi hatate, kisi bhi kaam k liye... Chaahe pics dalne ki baat hi kyu na ho. Aap wo bhi karte ho. Jo ki mere khyaal se upyog hona hi chahiye.

Mne yaha bohut writers dekhe h jinhone kabhi apni kahaniyo me ek pic nahi daali. Aur sach kahu to ye unki choice h aur mere hisaab se ek aalas ka reason bhi. Bachpan me school ki jab main hindi text books padhti thi. To mujhe yaad h main unn text books ki taraf zyada aakarshit hoti thi jinme story se related kuch drawings hua karti thi. Wesa hi yaha bhi h..

2) Story to ekdum hi naye turn par le aaye ho aap Sir. Murder mystery? Detectives? Story me kitne elements aaenge??? Har cheez to dedi aapne isme. Bacha kya ab?

3) Aur wo riddle to mere sarr k upar se nikal gayi thi. Lekin thanks to some readers. Jinhone spoiler pehle hi gira diya. Hum jese riddle me kamzor logo ka beda paar hua...

4) Hmmm... To aap iss pal ka intezar kar rahe the haa???? Ki yaha aap Veer ko Vegas bheje aur waha se Tej aur Bhavna Mumbai aaye. Timing baitha k chal rahe the pehle se hi haa???? Not bad Not bad...
Na jaane kya kya soch rakha hoga. Aur na jaane iss house of killers me kya hone wala h... But I can tell. Next update will be too awesome.

5) Aur ye update aapne fever me likha h? Full potential me nahi likha? To full potential me kya karte ho? Main bol hi rahi thi pehle hi... Meri kisi ne suni hi nahi. Ye Werewolf Sir jaadu tona karte h guys. Inka roz raat ko alag kuch chalta h... Offerings dete h ye... Hum jese maasoom readers ki feelings ko offer kar dete h. Badle me inhe inke god of writing jo bhi h wo inko apnni shaktiyo se bless karte h... Tabhi to dekho kitne readers jama kar liye h...

6) Iss samay main sabse zyada excited hu to wo h kuch scenes k liye. Ye to chal hi raha h. Par main Arohi ka scene dekhna chahungi. Jisme wo realize karti h ki uske andar ek nayi feeling ne janm le liya h...
Pari ke kuch secrets. Wo abhi bhi sabse badi mystery h... Veer k past se bhi badi.
Tej Bhavna aur Veer ka firse milna. Par iss baar ye jaante hue hi Veer hi uska asli bhai aur beta h...
Kaera ki full glory kab dekhne ko milegi hume? Bechari wo aur Sonia kabse scenes me nahi aayi.
Kam se kam unke ek do scenes hi dikha do Sir. Kya kar rahi h wo, kaha par h?

7) Kaera ki maid Julia, secretary Ruchika ka bhi koi scene nahi aaya h... Foreshadowing kar rahe ho kya aap? Aur Priya aur wo Madhuri bhi gayab h... Bhayankar dimag me kuch paka rahe ho lagta...

At the end, derr aaye durust aaye. Next update ka wait h Sir. Par araam leke dijiye. Ye wala aapne fever me likha h... Aur aap abhi bhi fully healed nahi h...
Toh rest kariye. Aur taro taaza hoke next update dena.
Keep writing!

Rihanna ji aapka comment dekh ke mereko
lagtha update phirse aagay kya..

 

[Rihanna]

Rihanna ji aapka comment dekh ke mereko
lagtha update phirse aagay kya..