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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,425 82.9%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 231 13.4%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

  • Total voters
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Werewolf

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Samar_Singh

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Orgasm? Ju ko 20k per mera orgasm dikhayi deta hai? Why are you :gay:? :?:
Mujhe dikhta nahi ju ko aata hai.
Kisi din sach me 20k update aa gaya to hila hilakar hi lakwa maar jayega 😏
 

Naik

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Trisha tow slogan or Atish ke murder ki chaan been ke peeche hi pad gayi h ab tow woh mirror gallery tak pahoch gayi h dekhte h kia woh Jo chahti h ker payegi
Tow Dhananjay bhai sahab bhi poori tarah se veer ghoj khaber me lage huwe h JAISE ki woh kia kerta h
Yarina ke launch ki tayyari badi joro shoro se chal Rahi h poora pariwar kadi mehnat ker raha h lekin kia aisa ho payega kyonki apni Dhananjay Babu inki party kharab kerne ke liye tayyar Bethe h
Abhi tak yeh mystery murder case bhi Kuch nahi Mila kia Luna Wala me kuch surag milte h ya nahi
Yeh pagal Banda kon tha kis cheez per research ker raha h Jab safalta nahi mil tow kulhada se kaat dala kaisa drinda h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bhai ab isi tarah ka review Dena aata h isliye aise dia h
 

Neerav

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Nice update bro
Don't be bordered by small comments
I'm one of them who does that
But after reading update it was like hi ab kya hi khu

Words can't define what you write and how you do it
It is always above the mark bro
Don't be disheartened
Next time will take care about the comments
 
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Sushilnkt

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पता ही नही

आगे आने वाले हर एक अपडेट की समरी पेश कर दी आपने,

वैसे घटनाएं बहुत होगी। ओर उनको कैसे क्या मैनेज किया जाएगा। अब ये देखना होगा।

अब यहां से सुरु होगा। आपके मस्तिष्क की जंग का ऐलान
 
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Mrxr

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Dukh bas iss baat ka hai ki author itna kuchh karta hai, par log wahi ghise pite one liners comments kar jaate hai. Samajh me bhi nahi aata ki woh kahani padh bhi rahe hai ya nahi.
you are right , author ko thodi nirasha hoti hai ayse comments padke.
Aur revo dena nahi aata ye toh Totally poori jhoot baat hai. Agar revo dena nahi bhi aata hai toh kam se kam aap apne shabd thode bahut toh badal hi sakte ho na har pratikriya par? Pure cnp chalta hai. Har kahani me, har update par ...!!!
seriously, review Dena nahi aata ,bhai story padhna aata hai koi scene pasand na ay to ushpe lamba sa review chep denge.update padhne ke baad review aapne aap aa jata hai ,aur wolf sir jitna bada update dete hai ush update pe main toh ek chota sa story update like du yaar
Review diya karo yaar writer bhi thoda accha lagta hai
 
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Damha

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20k ka update mangte ho, but ju bhi "Nice update" "Awesome update" wale ho. :naa:
20210930-201004


Galty yahan dinesh ki thi ek sunsaan raaste per aise beech me gaari kon he rokta hai siwaye tab jab gari kharab huwi ho behan chod aise gari roke ga to aur kia ho ga......ye daikhne ke baad to chahe dinesh ko maar bhi do I DON'T CARE Sala itna mand buddhi bhi na ho insaan



Laura BC Glass band karne se baat nahi banti Dimagh ke glass kholne se banti hai

Rohini ke saath hera pheri wala dailouge ulta huwa hai



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overall Update bohat zabardast tha Word limit se abhi bhi main satisfy nahi huw:nana:.....Lekin phir bhi update acha tha Niddhi aur Veer ki chemistry mujhe bohat pasand aa rahi hai saath me pari ke saath veer ki conversation bhi maze ki hoti hai......Kuch jaghao per thora weak lagta hai lekin mujhe yaqeen hai ap un jaghao per khud he pakar bana lo gye ya phir shayad sirf mujhe mehsoos hota hai......Baki ap ki writing skills ke to hum shuru se diwane hai ap ne story ko sirf hero per na rakhte huwe bohat shai andaz se har taraf ghoomaya hai......Aur bohat ache se ghoomaya hai kiu ke bohat c stories me jab storie hero se hat ker dusre scene dikhati hai to bore karti hai lekin ap ki storie me har scene khud se bandh ker rakhta hai.....

Baki acha update tha ache andaz se likha gaya tha iss liye ap ko deta hu 10 me se 1.5 point :roll:


Koshis karta hota hu review se ap ko Support mile baki mujhe review dena nahi ata bus kuch favourite writer ki storie per review dene ki buri si try karta hu hope mera review se ap ko story likhne ki motivation mile aur ap 20k words ka update roz likh sako :D
Longest nahi lekin most points cover karne ki try karta tha main + 2021 se 20K words ka keh raha hu :sigh2:

Werewolf :angry++:
 
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