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Sab sahi samay aane par...Sabse pehle is story ke atit yani flashback pe focus karo...
I think flashback kaafi dilchasp hone wala hai.... specially bhaavna & family ke atit....
Skill active hi thi tabhi toh woh ladd paaya...Wesy aik BAAT pochni thi jab veer kavya aur arohi ko bacha raha tha tab golu NY help ki bad me pichey se phir attack hua TB wo defend nahi Ker Saka apny ap ko Lekin us waqt tk veer NY martial arts skills bhi purchase Ker li thi na aur active thi?
Ya us ko upgrade kerna baqi tha?
Thanks bro I m waiting yeh 2 days wala gap bht mushkil sy guzarta hai
Tak taka tak .... aaj update milega 11 pm tak ..hi hi hi hi hiSkill active hi thi tabhi toh woh ladd paaya...
But Veer ke reflexes utne fast nahi hai. Agility bhi kam hai. Agility maane furti. Toh jese jese wo inhe badhaega, fight utne acche se kar paega.
Mene inn sab ke matlab aage likhe hue hai. Aapko pages me dikh jaega aage.Google baba ki madad leni parti hai kabhi kabhi.....yaar itne parhe likhe bande story read na karte kabhi kabhi......Main khud ko anparh nahi keh raha.....shayad,keh bhi raha hu.....shayad dono ker raha
Aj sabit ho gya ke sach me larkiyo ki sixth sense bohat tez hoti hai.....waise you ko bohat pata hai bata do agar Female werewolf ho to you per bhi line maare apun
Khud ki tareef..!?Bete mauj ker di......bohat khoob bhayia ji.....matlab sab ke doubts aik bari me khatam ker diye main kehne he wala tha ke kanhi veer ko lene ke dene na par jaye lekin jis khubsoorati se ye scene create kia hai sach me fan ho gya you deserve a reader like me.......matlab itna acha reader to hona he chahiye.....ooo ye to mai apni tareefo me lag gaya baki main hu he itna acha ke khud ki tareefe khud he shuru ker deta hu
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To ye game hai......main sochne laga tha ke kon sa chutiya chor aise bhaag raha hai to aise chal raha hai sab much kamal bhayia ji baki you know na you deserve a reader like me![]()
Aapki ek baat mujhe bahut acchi lagi ki aap apne readers ko barabar reply dete rehte hain .. jisse readers mein kahani padhne ko josh bana rehta hai .... aur kahani bhi bahut acchi hai..Mene inn sab ke matlab aage likhe hue hai. Aapko pages me dikh jaega aage.
Aisi soch nikaal do.
Khud ki tareef..!?
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